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TroubleMaker - Chapter 11 (AtsuMina) 17/02/2015
« on: September 19, 2013, 11:57:49 AM »
Here as I said...I was thinking to make a long version fic of Trouble Maker for those who know the OS...
So i made it...I still don't know the outcomes...so if you like it, I will continue it~ :)
this is just a prologue...hehe I'm trying my best...

Trouble Maker


Prologue


“Minami!!! Give me back my crayon!”
said little Atsuko as she chasing the little girl who took her crayon.

“NO!! Bleekkkkkk!! Hahahahahaha!” little Minami said as she running from mad little Atsuko.
Sometimes she looks back and sticks out her tongue at her.

“*sighed* those kids are really like Tom and Jerry… Minami-Chan!
Give Atsuko-Chan her crayon back!”
 Their kindergarten teacher said shaking her head looking at them.

“NOO!!!” Little Minami said as she keeps running while little Atsuko chasing after her.

Then Atsuko stop chasing her and sit down on the ground.

“*Hisk* Ngeeeeeeeee!!! My crayoonn! *hisk*”
Little Atsuko crying while rubbing her eyes with her arms.

Little Minami also stop running when she heard Atsuko cried.

Then she walks towards her.
“Here” Little Minami said as she stretch her little hand towards Atsuko to give her crayon back.

Atsuko stop crying but still sobbing when she heard Minami’s voice.

She looks up while sobbing and was about to take the crayon from Minami’s hand when…

“Gotcha!!! Hahahahahaha!!!” Little Minami laughing as she running away again with Atsuko’s crayons.


Little Atsuko who got tricked by naughty Minami crying even louder after that.




Then, Atsuko had to moves to somewhere far with her family because of her family’s business.



“Mama~ mama~ where is Atsuko-Chan? I don’t see her at school today.”
Little Minami ask her mother.

“Miichan, Atsuko-Chan had to move to somewhere with her family
because of her family’s business.” Answered her mom.

“Why?” Ask her innocently while sitting on her mom’s lap.

“Well, like I told you, because of their family business.” Her mom said.

“Mou~ I can’t disturb her anymore then~” Said Minami pouting.

Her mom chuckling at her knowing her naughty behavior but she still a kid.

“Don’t worry Miichan, you have many friends at kindergarten right?”
Her mom said smiling while patting her head.



Eventually, Minami and Atsuko forgot about each other.



That’s how they separated…

Do I have to explain? No…



Thanks for...reading.  :kneelbow:
Is it okay? Is it good?
« Last Edit: October 24, 2017, 02:25:09 PM by sophcaro »

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2013, 01:29:40 PM »
eeeh?

btw chiqinna-san, can you give me link of your one shot ?  :?


and, yes its so good  :thumbsup
sasuga  :D

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2013, 02:34:29 PM »
Is it okay? Is it good?
its good as long its atsumina XD
kidding aside..its really good  :D
minami being the trouble maker is so cute.. :oops:
i cant wait to know what will happen when they see each other again  :wub:
chapter 1~ where are u? :on gay:
« Last Edit: September 19, 2013, 03:00:10 PM by Chichay12 »

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2013, 05:56:16 PM »
awww that was sooo cute :D

Tsundere Minami lol, its okay Acchan it just means she loves you  :heart:

Kinda sad that their young lives only last in the prologue. I wonder when the older Minami meets older Atsuko, will she remembers again and will she be a Tsundere towards Acchan again or if nothing will happen...

Please update soon  :kneelbow:
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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2013, 06:19:48 PM »
mmm chapter 1 please

thanks

and update ASAP!!

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2013, 11:29:16 PM »
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btw chiqinna-san, can you give me link of your one shot ?  :?

Me too! I also want!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :frustrated:

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Here as I said...I was thinking to make a long version fic of Trouble Maker for those who know the OS...
So i made it...I still don't know the outcomes...so if you like it, I will continue it~ :)
this is just a prologue...hehe I'm trying my best

I like it.. Please continue!  :kneelbow:

So now finally what do you mean of Trouble Marker when you mention it at You are my sunshine..hehe
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
« Reply #6 on: September 19, 2013, 11:53:17 PM »
Ah... Chiqinna-San...

You're on roll now.. I guess you got your inspiration

Atsumina... Banzai...

Chibi Atsumina... So cute and sweet...

Like this one too... Chibi Minami is so naughty...

I guess... Minami likes Atsuko lots...

Can't wait to see how they met each other again

Would they remember each other?

Would Atsuko want to be with Minami when they meet again?

Would Minami be mature when dealing with Atsuko?

Thank you for the prologue...

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
« Reply #7 on: September 20, 2013, 12:45:24 PM »


thanks for the support minna-san!!!  :bow:
and...here is the one shot hehe~
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1199787#msg1199787



Chapter 1


10 years later…


ShiNoda High School…

All the students are rushing towards the hall because they have an assembly today.
Some of them even walk slowly so that they would sit at the last row.
Except for a few students who are walking like models while the other students
step aside to give a way for the three girls to walk.

“Kyaaa!!! It’s Nyan Nyan!!” a midget said as she squealing over the tall girl who looks like a model.

“And Maeda-sama is soooo pretty with that uniform!” someone said with a sparkling eyes.

They all enter the hall while waiting for the principle to gives words.

“Ehem…Well, Good Morning to all my beloved students and teachers.
I don’t want to give a long speech as I know you all would get bored and
sleepy because of my speech so in this new year, there will be many students
that will entered this school as well as the students who will transfer to this school.
So with this chance I hope all of the students will welcome our new family
member with open arms. And also I hope this year our school reputation would
increase than the past year. Then…blab bla bla bla…”


“Geez…He said it’s not long…I’m already getting bored here…”
one of the students said as she laid her head on her friends shoulder.

Her friend beside her nodded.




Long after, the assembly ended.

The students walking out of the hall. Some having a sleepy face.




In class 3B

“Hey, Acchan, what do you think we should be doing today?” Shinoda Mariko, her friend asks her.

Acchan, leaning her back on her chair as she looks at her two friends who are waiting for her answer.

“Hmmmm…let’s just go shopping.” Acchan said with a boring face.

“Sorry girls, I can’t go with you two, I have a family meeting today.”Kojima Haruna said.

“Family meeting? Do you even have a family meeting?” laughed Acchan and Mariko at her.

“Mou~ Of course we have!! And my mom insisted me to go. She said it’s regarding me.” She added.


“NyanNyan!!!” Someone scream outside the class.

They look outside the glass window to see a squirrel-like girl calling Kojima Haruna

then the midget squirrel giving her a flying kiss while Haruna just ignore her.

Acchan and Mariko smirk at her while Haruna looking away pouting.

“Hey, your fan is calling you there~” Acchan tease her.

“She’s not my friend! She’s a pervert!” Haruna said pouting.

Soon after, the teacher entered the classroom.

“Okay class, stand up.” The teacher said.
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The students keep quiet while still sitting on their own place.

This making the teacher to get confused.

“I said stand up!” the teacher said raising his voice a bit.

“Sensei, you said, class, stand up…we’re not a class sensei.”
A class president said as he fixed his glasses.

The teacher was dumbfounded by his students.

“Then?” the teacher still confused.

“We’re student!”
one of the students said as the other students also agree with her nodding their head.

The teacher face palmed himself.
“*sighed* you’re not a top class, but you have that kind of genius brain aren’t you?
Okay Students, stand up!” The teacher said in defeat.

With that they all stand up and bow to the teacher except for Acchan, Mariko and NyanNyan.

The teacher doesn’t even bother at them.

“Okay, today as being told by the principle, there are some
transfer students to our school and yes, one of them is going to enter your class.”

The students started to mumble each other.

“Sensei, where is that transfer student?” Ask Kuramochi Asuka.

“Err…” The teacher walks towards the door and look outside. Then he walks back to his place.

“I think she’s not arrived yet.” The teacher said making the others to mumble again.

“Tsk…this is boring.” Acchan said looking out of the window.
Her seat is near the window as well as her other friends.


Suddenly,
“Kyaaa!!!!” Acchan scream falling out of her chair when suddenly
the window where she looks at opened then a figure appear from
outside while her head peeking inside the classroom.

All of the students inside the classroom looking at her and also shocked.

The girl is wearing a school uniform and she is looking at Acchan with a clueless face.


“Ano~ is this class 3C?” The small girl ask them smiling while still hanging outside the window.

“N-No…and who might you be?” the teacher asks as he looks at the student confused.

“Owh~ I got it wrong…it must be the next of it”
the girl who looks like a new students said to herself as she ignored
the teacher’s question and she disappeared again.

“Is she crazy? Using windows?” The students in 3B classroom said.

“Acchan, are you okay?” Haruna ask her worried.

“My butt~~ ouch~ that…that…stupid midget!!!”
Acchan gritted her teeth mad because the girl just now made her fall.

Then Acchan pull out a mirror to check on her makeup.


Then they can hear a student screaming same like Acchan in the next classroom.

‘*sighed’ Class 3C? Oh God…why all weird students are in class 3C?!
But it’s good! As long as they are not in my class~’ the teacher thought to himself as he sighed in relief.


*knock* *knock*

“Come in.” the teacher said as the new transfer student entering the classroom.

“Please introduce yourself.” Said him smiling.

“Hai! My name is Kashiwagi Yuki! Please take care of me!” Yuki said as she bowed.

“Hai! Okay Kashiwagi-san…please takes a seat behind Kuramochi Asuka-san there.”

He say then Kuramochi raise her hands so that Kashiwagi knows where she is as she smiling at her.
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Meanwhile in classroom 3C

After some of the students sending their teacher who fainted when she was surprised seeing the student earlier climbing through the window, they all went to their seats as the new transfer student still standing in front of the classroom with a clueless expression.

Soon the other teacher walks inside the classroom.

“Okay, since your classroom teacher is at the infirmary now,
I will be taking her place for the time being. So Takahashi-san, you may introduce yourself now.”
He said as he looking at her.

“Takahashi Minami desu!” she said shortly.

Then the teacher told her to sit in front of Oshima Yuko.

“Ano, Takahashi-san, why are you using the window just now?”
The squirrel-like girl a.k.a Yuko ask her as she moves her body forward.

“Just call me Takamina. Ermm…about that…just for fun…isn’t fun…
it makes you look different from other student!” she said smiling turning her head towards her.

“Call me Yuko then. Really? Hmmm” Yuko said started to daydreaming.

“Not really, it’s troubling…I just do it sometimes.”
Takamina said shrugged her shoulders.

“Hmmmm…maybe I should use windows to stalk on NyanNyan too…”
Yuko said in a low voice as she started to imagining things about her so call NyanNyan.

“NyanNyan?” Takamina ask curious.

“Ahhh…there is so much things you need to know about-“

“Oshima-san, Takahashi-san, please pay attention!”
The teacher said making both of them turn their eyes to him.

“Hai!” they both said.

Not long after them both continue talking with each other again making the teacher mad.

“You two! Stand outside the class until recess!” the teacher yelled at them.





Outside the 3C classroom

“*sighed* first day of school, first time got punished~*sighed*” Takamina said as she leaning at the wall.

“Hehehe…sorry for getting you into trouble.” Yuko said as she standing beside her.

“It’s okay, I got used to this, at my old school I was known as a trouble maker…hehe” Takamina said looking at her.

“Really?”

“Yeah~ and now my parents transfer me to this school because they want me to changes
and I have to stay at the school dormitory since our home is far.” Added her.

“Hey! I was staying in school dormitory too! Let’s live with me in my room then!” Yuko said excited.

“Hm? We can choose any room we want?” Takamina ask confused.

“Err…no…hehehe…” Yuko said laughing awkwardly.

“Don’t tell me-“

“Yeah~” Yuko said giving an evil smile.
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Lunch time

“Takamina, let’s have lunch together! Come on!”
Yuko said as she drags her new friend towards the school canteen.

After buying foods, Yuko brings her to the rooftop and they eat their lunch while
looking at the view of the whole school from above.

“Mmmmm…Oishiii~” Takamina said as she munch her food.

Meanwhile Yuko was giggling by herself looking somewhere with her
small binoculars that’s coming from nowhere at the school garden then she eats again and looking again.

Takamina was looking at her then she looks at where she looks at.

“Hm? Who are they?” Takamina ask looking at the bunch of girls talking
and laughing at the school garden as they also eat their lunch.

“Eh? Ah! They are the school princesses, and that tall girl who looks
like a model is my NyanNyan~~~” Yuko said with a sparkling eyes.

“That skinny one?” Takamina ask again.

“No! That girl who her face looks like a cat~ that’s why I called her NyanNyan~”
Yuko said smiling showing her dimples.

Takamina nodding her head as she looks at them.

“I remember that one who sit besides NyanNyan,
she is the one fall off her sit when I suddenly pops up in their class window…pppuufftttt~ poor her~”
Takamina said pointing at the girl with them.

“Besides NyanNyan? She’s Acchan…and don’t mess with her…she’s dangerous.” Yuko said.

“Dangerous? Why?”

“Hmmm…long story…” Yuko said looking at Acchan.

“Make it short.” Takamina said looking at Yuko.

*Bell rings indicate that lunch time is over!*

“I will tell you later let’s go back to class!” Yuko said as they finish their food.
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After school

At school dormitory…

How Yuko made Takamina to be her roommates?
Well, she told the warden that Takamina has a weird behavior when she sleeps and
Yuko lied to the warden saying she’s been ask by her mother to take care of Takamina.
And yeah the warden is good enough to just let her so now they are on their way to their room.

Yuko is living alone in her room since she’s waiting for new roommates as her old roommates…
both are being kicked out of the school dormitory.

“And here is our room!!!” Yuko said excitedly as she open their room.

They both entered the room.

Takamina’s eyes exploring the whole room as she drags her big luggage inside.

“Why are there three beds? I thought it’s only two…”Takamina said.

“No…all rooms have three beds…means three students shared one room…
means…we have one more roommate~” Yuko said grinning.

Then Takamina prepared all her things as she chooses a bed above Yuko’s.

Then Yuko started to smile and giggling all of a sudden that attracts Takamina’s attention.

“What are you looking at?” Takamina ask her then she saw Yuko is looking at something like an album.

“Nothing~” Yuko said.

Takamina wants to peek at it but Yuko hides it from her making Takamina to get more curious.

“Let me see~~~~” Takamina said as they started to forcing each other.

As a result, they both fall as Takamina fall on top of Yuko.

Suddenly the door open making both of them froze then appeared a girl…

[chapter one ended with this fic’s OST, Always by U-kiss~”]
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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
« Reply #8 on: September 20, 2013, 02:19:46 PM »
LOL
that will be misunderstanding  :rofl:

ah takamina just like a spiderman lol

pls update soon  :thumbsup

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
« Reply #9 on: September 20, 2013, 03:00:49 PM »
Ah... Minami never changed from her childhood...

Always make troubles... even now... unintentionally distrubing Atsuko

Why was Atsuko called as 'dangerous'?

Who is this new roommate?

Yuki, Atsuko or Haruna?

I think is Yuki...

This person that was just coming into Yuko's and Minami's room... would misunderstand thier situation...

So How is she going to react with how she saw them in compromise position...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
« Reply #10 on: September 20, 2013, 10:59:20 PM »
LMAO I really didn't expect Takamina to be the weird girl with the window thing. I really thought she would changed and walk in like Yuki did hahaha

I wonder if they will remember each other X3

Ahhh did Takamina accidentally kiss Yuko  :shocked
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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
« Reply #11 on: September 22, 2013, 07:08:00 PM »
Maybe is Mayuyu ^_^

hahahahahahaha

thanks and update soon!!!

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
« Reply #12 on: September 23, 2013, 04:15:42 AM »
archer san is maybe right... ツ
Sorry guys im busy with my work now.. *taking a break because my right shoulder is hurt again!!* new stuff coming... and im being lazy to arrange them.. this is the hard thing when u work alone... •⌒•
sigh... all by myself!! ♬♬♬ ╰(`⌒╰´)
i stop here to prevent from getting into nonsense talk.
Love u guys! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
« Reply #13 on: September 26, 2013, 12:58:42 PM »
Chapter 2

Both Takamina and Yuko looks at each other then their eyes turn to look
at the girl that was just open the door also looking at them with a blank expression on her face.

When the two midgets realized about their awkward position, they furiously get up.

“It’s not what you think it is!!!” they both said in unison while shaking their hands and head.

The girl just looks at them.

Then she enters the room with her luggage and put it beside the empty single bed across Yuko and Takamina’s.

‘It’s not like I care.’ The girl said in her mind.

Takamina and Yuko look at each other as the girl just ignore them and went to her bed.

Yuko then walks to her but on that time she also looking at the girl’s butt as her back is facing them.
Yuko try to start a conversation.

“Hey, I’m Yuko and you are?” Yuko greeted her while showing off her popular dimples smile.

“Watanabe Mayu” she said coldly.

Yuko was startled by the way she talk.

“Y-you must be new student right? I haven’t seen you here before.
Which class are you from? Yuko ask while sitting on the girl’s bed.

“1A” she answered as she unpacking her things and put them inside her wardrobe.

‘She must be smart girl.’ Yuko thought.

“Then we are your senpai then!” Takamina suddenly said while sitting next to Yuko.

“But you also a new student here Takamina…” mumbled Yuko confuse.

“Who cares? I’m still older than her though” Takamina shrugged her shoulders.

“Whatever~” Yuko said.

“Whatever~ by the way I’m Takamina! What’s your name?”

Yuko face palmed.

“She said her name is Watanabe Mayu just now Takamina.” Yuko said.

“Eh? Really? Hehehe…” Takamina said scratching her head.

Meanwhile the other girl keeps busying herself.



It was dinner time so Takamina went to the cafeteria to have her dinner.

“Hmmm…I wonder where is Yuko…she just disappear after she finish taking a bath.”

Takamina said as she walks towards the counter.

There were many students eating and chatting there.

When she arrived she saw Yuko in front of her with an apron attached on her.

“Hey!” Yuko greeted her new friend.

“You work here?”Takamina ask her.

“I was just helping my Auntie Mai. She owns this cafeteria.” Yuko said.

“Then…can I get a free food??” Takamina said to her grinning.

She tried to wink at Yuko but apparently fail as both her eyes close when she did that.

Yuko laugh at her fail attempt making Takamina pout.

“Of Course. This is how I got free food ya know!” Proudly she said winking at Takamina.

“Yes!!! Then I can eat free food everyday!”
Takamina said as she pumps her fist in the air.

“Hehe…okay…okay…so what is your order Miss?” Yuko as her smiling.

“Do you have katsudon?” Takamina ask hoping there would be katsudon in the menu.

“Oh yes we have it! How many do you want?” Yuko ask writing down the order.

“Hmmmm….5 bowls of KATSUDON!!!” Takamina excitedly said.

“WHAAAATTTT?!!!!”
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After dinner, they both went back together to their room.

“I can’t believe you really eat all 5 bowls of katsudon!” Yuko said impressed.

“It’s no big deals~ besides I’m really hungry.” Takamina rubbing her stomach as a sign that she’s full.

When they enter the room, the other new student is nowhere to be seen.

“Where is she?” Takamina ask.

“She’s at the foyer I guess; they have an orientation for new students.” Yuko explain.

“Oh yeah I forgot. I was supposed to be there too. But it must be boring.” Takamina said climb on her bed.

“It still early Yuko, tell me more about this school and the students. The readers also want to know.”
Takamina said lying on her bed. Her arms are supporting her head as she looks at the ceiling.

“Okay~ hmmm…let’s talk about my NyanNyan first.”

“NyanNyan is a beautiful princess in this school. She from class 3B.
She has a nice oshiri…and she has a big oppai…”

*silent*

Takamina look down confuse to see why Yuko was silent.

It looks like Yuko started to daydreaming about her NyanNyan again
as Takamina can see blood running out of her nose.

Then *smack*!!! “Ouuuchhh!!”

Yuko got smack by a pillow.

“Let’s talk about other things OTHER than your NyanNyan shall we?
Tell me about her friends…what was her name again? Archo? Atcha?”

Yuko pout at her as she wipes her blood on her nose with a tissue.

“Fine~ and her name is Maeda Atsuko. We call her Acchan.
She’s really popular and they call her a goddess of the school because of her princess-like attitude.
But there’s one thing dangerous about her.” Yuko said making Takamina look down on her curious.

“She hates it when people mess with her.” Yuko’s statement making Takamina more curious.

“Why??” Takamina ask.

“From what I heard, she’s been like that since she was kid.
Whenever there are people messing with her or her things, she would do something and the next day,
they stopped disturbing her. And that what happen to my roommates.

“What happen to them?” Takamina was getting more interested.

“They got kicked out of the dormitory. It’s all Acchan’s doing. Just because her father is rich~”

“What did your roommates do to her?”

“Well, they were playing a basketball then the ball flew towards Acchan’s head making her fall then people laugh at her.
My friends did apologize to her but she’s really mad because she’s embarrassed.”

“Luckily they just kicked out of the dormitory, not school.
Tomorrow I will introduce you to them. They are my best friend!” Yuko said smiling.

“But why? It just an accident.” Takamina said.

“Do you think it was an accident when she always got hit by a ball every time she enters the stadium?”

“No.” Takamina answered.

‘I think she’s interesting.’ Thought Takamina having an evil plan in her mind.



Then Mayu come back.
She quickly put her note book on her table and changes her clothes then goes to sleep.

“*yawning* good night Yuko, Good night Mayu.” Takamina said the she closed her eyes.

“Good night” Yuko also started to sleep.

Mayu mumbled a good night but they probably did not hear it due to they were fast asleep.
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Mayu’s pov

This is my first time in high school.
Since my parents are always busy with their business,
I told them that I want to stay in dormitory and they agreed.

Fortunately, I met my old crazy friends but they are not in the same class with me.

Well, they are not as smart as me.

I’m not bragging about myself. It’s a fact!

After first day of school finish, I took my luggage and carried them towards my room.

I don’t know yet who will be my roommates.

When I open the door I found two girls, in an awkward position.

They are weird.

I just ignore them.
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After having a dinner, I quickly went to the foyer because we have an orientation for new students.

On my way I bump into someone.

She looks…pretty…tall.

I felt déjà vu when I saw her eyes.

Maybe in another fanfics.

And the author never forgets to interrupt my thought.

*Mayu glares at the author*
[Okay I will stop now. I can’t help it! My hand is itchy~ :P]

“Sorry~” She said apologize at me.

I just smile at her.

It just for a second then I went back with my blank face.

Then I continue my walk to the foyer leaving her.




At the foyer

I met my friends, they were lucky because they are in the same class.

They are Matsui Jurina and Oota Aika.

They are in class 1B.

We took a seat at the very behind because we know this night assembly will be as bored as hell.

Then I met her again.

She seat next to me!

“Hey, Kashiwagi Yuki desu!”
She said as she extends her hands to me.

I look at her hands then her face.

“Watanabe Mayu.” I said as my hand slowly reaches hers.

“Which class are you from?” She asks me.

“1A.” She’s friendly.

“I’m in 3B~ nice to meet you!” She said.

“Ano, can you let go now?”
I said as I look at our hands.

“Oh, s-sorry.” She said.

Is she blushing?

Then I heard a giggle.

I knew who it is.
I glare at them.

“Mayuyu, I think you have a fan now!” Jurina said whispering to my ear.

“Wow! You’re fast!” Lovetan added.

I just ignore their nonsense talk as I focused on what the teacher said.




T.B.C



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Offline noah minami

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
« Reply #14 on: September 26, 2013, 08:11:54 PM »
its a good updates...waiting for next ..... XD
hope coming soon.. :thumbsup :cow:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
« Reply #15 on: September 27, 2013, 12:14:37 AM »
Ah... Minami.. Evil thought...

What's she planning to do to Atsuko?

Ah.. Mayuki... Together later right?

Eh.. Mayu quite cold huh...?

Well thought both Mayu and Yuko have perv link with each other?

Or are you making Mayu as a serious person here not perv. like Yuko?

Anyhow can't to see the next update

Thank you for the update

PS: take care of yourself... Take your time in work and in writing fics.

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
« Reply #16 on: September 27, 2013, 02:08:59 AM »
Ah... Minami.. Evil thought...

What's she planning to do to Atsuko?

Ah.. Mayuki... Together later right?

Eh.. Mayu quite cold huh...?

Well thought both Mayu and Yuko have perv link with each other?

Or are you making Mayu as a serious person here not perv. like Yuko?

Anyhow can't to see the next update

Thank you for the update

PS: take care of yourself... Take your time in work and in writing fics.

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YEAH...MAYU WILL GET AFFECTED BY YUKO'S PERVERTNESS SOON OR LATER.. :lol:
I WANT TO MAKE S SERIOUS MAYU FIRST...BUT LET'S JUST SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN SOON.
PS: NOW I FORGOT HOW TO TAKE CARE OF MYSELF ANYMORE.. :lol: I NEED TO DISTRACT MYSELF BY DOING SOMETHING ELSE...LIKE WORKING,WRITING FICS...THAT NEWS HAS REALLY GOTTEN INTO ME.. :cry: I EVEN ALMOST CRY WHEN I WRITE THE UPDATE... :cry: BUT YEAH IT JUST FOR A WHILE...DON'T WORRY CISDA-SAN...

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
« Reply #17 on: September 27, 2013, 02:28:11 AM »
^ HANG IN THERE CHIQINNA-SAN
BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA !
 
btw i got nightmare too after read the article   :lol:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
« Reply #18 on: September 27, 2013, 04:43:26 AM »
Every Atsumina fans out there is having a nightmare

Well Chiqinna San please do take care of yourself..

Since you're by yourself in the shop, you can always take your time...

Do the presentation little by little..

At least the customers would see the new products if there are...

Or if it's extra products just put enough on the display and the rest you can do it later

Which ever it is... Do it in moderation...

Don't over do it... Eat, drink and sleep well...

Take care...

Looking forward to your updates...

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
« Reply #19 on: September 27, 2013, 06:26:14 AM »
hahahahaha is interesting

update soon

thanks!!!

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