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“So you can eat me whatever the way you prefer to~” Minami grinned, “Hurry up, blow the candle!”
pfffftttt... Taka giving hint for smut..LOL  :lol: me and my corrupted mind..  XD
At the end.. Acchan's wish lol.. I wish for the same thing for both of them.... :deco: :deco: :deco:

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Re: ツ Maeda Atsuko's Birthday Collab 6/26/2013 Entry#10 and 11 UPDATE
« Reply #61 on: June 26, 2013, 04:53:32 PM »
Kyaaa~  :inlove:
Thank you for this os, Ichi-sama! :mon lovelaff:
Taka has surprise for Acchan  :inlove: I hope it will happen on Acchan's birthday  :w00t: :inlove:
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Re: ツ Maeda Atsuko's Birthday Collab 6/26/2013 Entry#10 and 11 UPDATE
« Reply #62 on: June 26, 2013, 05:04:42 PM »
rolling and squeling in my bed like crazy....
When i read the fireworks...
I think something green XD
Pervert mind on :ding:
kyaaaaaa my atsumina heart i cant take it..... :imdead:

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Re: ツ Maeda Atsuko's Birthday Collab 6/26/2013 Entry#10 and 11 UPDATE
« Reply #63 on: June 27, 2013, 05:50:01 AM »
hiya its me ガルシア  アレックス from FB just like I said I would I did I read this it was really refreshing for me reading this since its the first time ive read a fic with this pairing and I like it you did an awesome job  :twothumbs I like how you had marimii in this loved it!!!  :wub:  hope to read more fics of yours  :D
Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
verdad por eso mary por favor dame tu
mano continuemos siempre asi
despues de todo que mas te puedo
pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
Si un dia me faltas tu que
Dios me ayude a morir ya que
no volvera a hacer en esta vida feliz
sin ti mari...sin ti mari...si estoy
viviendo por ti... 
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English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
My love is Mari, just with her
I live in happiness
I know I will never again
fall in love with nobody, because I
feel a true love Because of that,
Mari, give me your hand we'll
forever continue this way After all,
what can I ask you more if I am happy...
very happy If one day I will miss you,
God help me to die ,
without you Mari...
If i live my life for you...  -----------<@

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Re: ツ Maeda Atsuko's Birthday Collab 6/26/2013 Entry#10 and 11 UPDATE
« Reply #64 on: June 27, 2013, 01:30:24 PM »
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Entry #12. A Thanks to the Rain


*PATA PATA*

*PATA PATA*

*PATA PATA*

"Mou... I hate you, rain!!"

The brown haired girl was sitting in the bus stop, all wet from head to toe, clutching her wet papers in her arms. Actually, she loved rain on any other day. But today...the sun was shinning when she woke up, and it was still brightly up in the sky when she was in the library studying. While the girl was walking home, suddenly it downpour-ed and her important papers were drenched in a matter of seconds. She didn't care becoming wet herself - she loved playing in the rain - but her papers were a different story.

"Of all the times you decided to appear when I don't have an umbrella with me..."

The girl pouted then puffed her cheeks in displeasure. She couldn't be mad for long though.

"But it feels nice, sitting here and enjoying your music."

She smiled and put the papers carefully on the bench then stood up.

"Well, let's use this opportunity, nee?"

The ponytail-ed girl walked from under the bus stop's shelter and let the rain fall on her. She carefully looked around. The streets were surprisingly empty. Well, more like they were always empty, just once in a while a car or a bus would pass. The street was known for its lacking of vitality as only the library and some houses with old people was situated in it. And it was not like you needed this street badly as passing it wouldn't take you anywhere where other streets wouldn't take you. In fact, the street was treated as an out of place street for some years now.

The girl loved the street for two reasons. One of them was that her favorite library was in it. The other was because not many people were walking past it.

She smiled and readied her stance. She hummed the melody while walking around a bit and then started singing.

omoidasu yo ima mo...
koi to kizuita natsu wo...
TOKEISOU no hana ga
hinata ni afureta michi

harewatatta sora ni
nyuudougumo ga mokumoku
atto iu ma ni fuete
naze da ka fuan ni natta no
ima iru basho to mirai

anata no migikata
watashi no atama wo katamukete
chokonto nosetara
sore dake de anshin shita
shiawase yo

umaku ikanakute
tsuraku kanashii toki wa
sonna watashi no guchi wo
kiite kureru dake de ii

yuudachi ni furarete
minka no nokisaki de
sotto yorisotta futari
iroiro aru nette waratta
ame sae tanoshikunaru

anata no migikata
toki ni wa kokoro wo yasumasete
shinpai ga atte mo
itsu datte raku ni nareru
nukumori yo

sorezore no sora no shita de
kagayaiteta ano koro omou no kanaa

ima demo futari wa
issho ni aruiteru mitai ni...
anata no migikata
watashi no atama wo katamukete
chokonto nosetara
sore dake de anshin shita
shiawase yo

natsukashiku setsunakatta
aa ano natsu yo


As if her song was some spell or chant, the rain suddenly stopped and the sun appeared from behind the clouds. The girl smiled and bowed to the sky.

"Thank you."

She was about to turn around when suddenly her eyes spotted a shy girl hiding behind a tree. The girl was blushing while peeking from the sturdy piece of wood.

"Hey...come here~" the chibi girl cooed and the black haired girl shyly walked out of her hiding place. "What's your name?"

"Atsuko..." the voice came out so silent that the brown haired girl was able to hear it only thanks to the street being the infamously quiet one.

"Oh, nice to meet you. My name is Minami, Takahashi Minami." The smaller one smiled and extended her hand.

The shy one took it while blushing even more and her eyes went wide open when she was pulled in a tight hug.

"I saw you all the times you watched me." Takamina whispered and giggled. "Do you have a crush on me?"

Acchan tried to escape the embrace but it was hard and it felt just too nice.

To tell the truth, she didn't want to leave those warm hands so she stopped struggling and sighed.

"I do like you..." the black haired girl mumbled, cursing in her mind for the street's quietness.

"Well, then.." Minami pulled a bit away and stared at the blushing girl. "Let's go on a date."

"EEH?!"

"A friendly one, you silly. I don't have many friends and you seem nice."

"Okay..." Atsuko's face now was really bright red but she shook her head and ignored her own shyness.

"Just let me pick my papers." Minami faillingly skipped to the bus stop - which made the taller girl chuckle - and picked them then extended her hand towards the black haired girl.

Atsuko took it and they started walking. The girl had a question and her curiosity got the best of her.

"All this time...every time you danced and sang here..you did it for me?..."

"Un. The first time I noticed you peeking I was attracted by your cuteness... And so I decided to make you smile. I am happy it worked." Takahashi smiled and held Acchan's hand tighter.

"Arigatou..." The taller one was beet red now and yet really happy.

"It's all thanks to the rain though. If not the rain, I wouldn't have met you as I never go to the bus stop if it doesn't rain." Minami stated.

"Un..." She raised her head to the sky. "Takahashi-san... The rainbow..."

They both looked at the beautiful art of nature and stared at it for awhile. Then continued walking towards their destination, hand in hand.


THE END.


P.S. I know it's not a birthday fic, but we can always pretend that it was Atsuko's birthday on that day and that she got a new friend - her crush - as a present  :nervous XD
« Last Edit: June 27, 2013, 03:11:53 PM by miayaka »
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Re: ツ Maeda Atsuko's Birthday Collab 6/26/2013 Entry#10 and 11 UPDATE
« Reply #65 on: June 27, 2013, 03:12:43 PM »
Took me some time to read it because when I saw the migikata lyric, I play the song and re-read if from the start for the AtsuMina feeling~ LOL :lol: :lol:

I'm really into a simple AtsuMina scene recently.. This one is really nice~  :deco: :deco: :deco:

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yo~  :peace:

What I write it here would have next part which is updated right on Acchan's bday.
Enjoy~  :on lol:

IN YOUR BLANKET
Strange title, I know  :nervous

When the general manager has come back from her unstoppable work;

Minami : Ah~ tsukaretaaa~ *lying on her king size bed* This bed is too big for me, no?

She started pulling the blanket to cover her body.

Minami : Time to sleep and another tiring day will start tomorrow morning.

The general manager can't sleep. Only the sound of the clock could be heard and it was quite distracting her.

Minami : Too many oshiris I saw today! I can't sleep!! *rolling around* Nyan2, Mayuyu, Yukirin, aaaaa!!!

When she tried not to think that too much, it was becoming more and more "giving pleasant" to her.

Minami : Thinking that too much and its tickling me. *something is moving in the blanket* Hm? *the thing is crawling now on Minami's chest* Eh, oh, waaa-what is this!!

The general manager started panicking.

Atsuko : *showing her head off blanket*

Minami : A-ATSUKO!!!

Atsuko : Enjoy the oshiri paradise?

Minami : N-no.. j-just..hehe... no-nothing to worry though.. *sweat*

Atsuko : I know you start forgetting about me.

Minami : That is not true, honey~

Atsuko : That won't work.

Minami : .....

Atsuko : I'm going to leave for Tasmania on July, so... we can not celebrate my birthday together.

Minami : W-WHAT?!

Atsuko : I was thinking that we probably could spend time together tonight. but you are actually busy imagining everyone's oshiris.

Minami : Atsukooo, come on, that is not like what you think.

Atsuko : I lost my mood already. I'm going back home~ *crawling out of the blanket*

Minami : A-ATSUNOOSHIRIMOMITAI~

Atsuko : Hah?

Minami : *touching Atsuko's oshiri*

Atsuko : >//////<

Minami : This is the real paradise~

Atsuko : >//////<

Minami : Then, you forgive me?

Atsuko : U-un... >/////<

Minami : Then, can we celebrate your birthday now? *pinch the oshiri*

Atsuko : >//////< ye-yeah...

Minami : But Atsuko.... your oshiri is smaller than Nyan2. You should ask her how to make it look bigger *pinching*

Atsuko : You only care with oshiri! Even you praise Nyan2's!! Minami baka! hentai!! *slap Minami's cheek*

Atsuko ran out from the room crying.

Minami :  :err:


I dont know what I write! LOL gomeeen~ I would write the lovey dovey moment in the  next part! See you~  :on asmo:
« Last Edit: June 28, 2013, 01:37:10 PM by miayaka »

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Ah... very nice and sweet OS there...

Atsumina were so cute together...

Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS

Thank you for the update...

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Minami : A-ATSUNOOSHIRIMOMITAI~

Atsuko : Hah?

Minami : *touching Atsuko's oshiri*

Atsuko : >//////<

Minami : This is the real paradise~

Atsuko : >//////<

Minami : Then, you forgive me?

Atsuko : U-un... >/////<

Minami : Then, can we celebrate your birthday now? *pinch the oshiri
One of the best scenes I ever read!!  :on bleed: :on bleed:
it was nice to be able to read your work again moekare-san!!  :kneelbow:
I'll be waiting for the next part~  :hehehe:

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Troublemaker

Maeda Atsuko a.k.a Acchan
A smart beautiful girl from a rich family.
Always got what she wants.
Being loved by many.
She was really popular in her school.
She even have her own fan club.

"ENOUGH!!!"
"Enough with her so good intro!"
"I already know that! "

Author: err..o-okay takamina-san. I'll skip that part.

But!
Her scary aura comes out from her body  when this someone appeared in front her eyes.
Its non other than...the trouble maker,
Takahashi Minami a.k.a Takamina.

No one dare to messed with the school princess except her.
Once, when the princess ordering food at the canteen, she ordered the right food, but when it already in her mouth, it was really, really spicy. Everyone knows the princess hates spicy foods.  It took the whole day for her to endure the spiciness.
It turned out that takahashi disguised as the canteen worker and put a really spicy sauce into her food before the order comes to her.
Acchan knew it was her. She would chase her around the big school but to no avail...takamina always good at hiding herself.

When it was PE class, it was the best time for takahashi, especially when the teacher let them do whatever they want. Acchan would get the chance to chase her. It should be her advantages, no it is not. Takahashi is having fun being chased by the princess. She would never get caught.
No one can stopped takamina, they dont want to get in trouble. Even takamina have her own fanclub. 2 members only... they are Mocchi and Ray. The president is Ray and the vise president is Mocchi. They don’t have a good relationship, always fighting over the midget. But the midget eyes is only on the princess of the school.
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Its been a week, Acchan having a peaceful life.
'Hmmm...i wonder why she stopped disturbing me. Maybe she's tired already. ' thought acchan shrugged her shoulders.
"Hey Acchan." Greeted Haruna. Acchan's best friend.
“Hey, ah! Nyan Nyan, Are you free this evening?” Asked Acchan to her friend who sit beside her.
“Um yeah why?”
“Let’s go shopping! My birthday is coming soon, I need to buy a beautiful dress for the party.” Tells her.
“Okay! Hmmm…Your birthday is on Wednesday , I haven’t think what present should I buy for you…”said Nyan Nyan making a thinking pose.
“Mou…Nyan Nyan…I hope you don’t give me the same birthday present as last year. It always the same thing every year.” Said Acchan pouting.
“Hehe..okay! By the way, you looks different lately.” Said Haruna looking at her friend.
“Hmmm…maybe I finally got my peace time! Hehe~” said Acchan smiling.
“Acchan! Takahashi is looking for you!” said Mariko who just entered the classroom.
“What?!! No way!” said Acchan furiously looking around.
“Just kidding~” Mariko said with a troll smile.
“Mariko~~!!” whined Acchan.
“It’s weird, usually at this time you would already chase her through the corridor.” Said Mariko laughing.
“It’s not funny okay! That troublemaker~ I would not invite her to my birthday party night. Hmmpph!!” said Acchan crossing her arms.
“Yeah~ yeah~ it’s good that she stopped bothering you though.” Nyan Nyan tells her.
Acchan nodded.

That evening, Acchan, Haruna and Mariko went to shopping.
They goes to every mall searching for the best dress for the party.
Suddenly Acchan stopped and turn her head around looking somewhere.
“What’s wrong Acchan?” Asked Mariko.
“N-nothing.” Said Acchan then started to walk again.
‘I think I saw someone just now…’ thought Acchan.

After a while walking around in the mall, Acchan spotted something that caught her eyes.
It was a beautiful silver necklace with a small sparkling star on it.
Acchan smiles as it was the one she want.
“Mariko, Nyan Nyan!” Call Acchan to her friends.
Did not hearing answer from them, Acchan realize that both her friends is not beside her.
Acchan started to walk around looking for them.
Long after, Acchan saw them walking.
“Nyan Nyan! Mariko! Where did you two go? I was looking for you!” whined Acchan.
“Sorry Acchan, we thought you are with us just now.” Explain Nyan Nyan.
“Come on! I need to show you something.” said Acchan while dragging them to the place.
As they arrived, Acchan started to look for the necklace that she saw a while ago.
Acchan smiles faded when she saw the necklace is not in its place anymore.
“Ano, Miss, where is the necklace that I saw here a while ago?” Asked Acchan to the worker there.
“Ah, someone already bought it just now. I’m sorry.” Said the worker smiling.
“I see…it’s okay.” Said Acchan.
“What is it Acchan.” Asked Mariko seeing her friend looks sad.
“Nothing.” Said Acchan giving a sad smile.
After finish shopping, they just went home.


The next day, the day before Acchan’s birthday.
Acchan was with her friends at the school canteen having lunch.
They were talking and laughing.
Suddenly she saw a short figure walking to the canteen.
Her friends also saw it. They just look at her walking to buy some food.
“Acchan, be careful of your food.” Warned Miichan.
Acchan then look at the food that she ordered and examine it carefully.
“It looks fine. It taste good.” Said Acchan after having a bite of it.
Then she turned her view to the midget again.
Looks like the midget also looking at her…smiling.
‘What is she planning to do now?’ said Acchan to herself.
Suddenly Takahashi wink at her while walking away from the canteen.
‘what was that?’ thought Acchan.
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Acchan birthday party was held at her house.
Many of her family and friends was invited.
She wore a beautiful dress that she bought a days ago.
“Wow! Our birthday girl looks so beautiful tonight!” said her mom hugging her daughter.
“Thank you mom!” Acchan smiles replies the hug.
Then Mariko enters the room to looks for Acchan.
“Hey Acchan!” greeted Mariko.
“Here! My birthday present for you!” said Mariko while give her a present box.
“Thank you Marichan!” Acchan took the present cheerfully.
“And Mariko, Did you saw any suspicious midget outside?” Asked Acchan.
“Who? Takahashi? I don’t see her anywhere. Maybe she really stopped disturbing you since it was your birthday.” Said Mariko.
“Really? I’m just being careful. Who knows she would do something that might ruin my party.” Said Acchan serious.


After that Acchan going out to show herself on front of everyone.
Then a very big cake carred by the waiter comes toward her.
It was just a box that looks like a giant cake actually.
Acchan knew it, maybe someone would come out of the box and give the real cake.
As Acchan already on front of it. Everyone started to sing a Happy Birthday song to her.
As they finish, the cover of the big giant cake box opened revealing a midget with a cake on her hands.
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!” shout her making Acchan surprised.
Acchan’s eyes widen when she saw the one who’s inside the cake.
“You!!!” said Acchan mad.
“E-e-eto…”
“TAKAHASHI MINAMI!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!” shout Acchan again.
“I was just-“ before she could say anything Acchan interrupt her.
“Get out of my house now!” Acchan said while asking the two waiter to bring Takahashi out of the house.
“Ehh??! But…I was…I did not..” Takamina could not say anything as she is being dragged by the two men.
“Calm down Acchan, let’s continue our party!” Said Haruna as Acchan manage to calm herself down.
She doesn’t want to be bothered on her big day.
The party went well.
After the party ended, Acchan started to unwrapped all her birthday present that she got.
She was really thankful that she got many present from her friends and family.
She was really hope that the necklace that she found at the mall was one of the present but, none of the present contain the necklace.
Acchan sighed.
“Whats wrong honey? “ Asked her mom.
“Nothing mom. I’m just…happy.” Said Acchan smile.
“Miss, there is one more present for you.” Said the butler as he give the small red box to Acchan.
Acchan took it and quickly opened the wrap to see what is inside.
Once she saw the content, her eyes widen.
It was the necklace that she wants.
Her smile grew bigger as she took the necklace.
“wow~” said Acchan admiring it.
Her mother just smiles seeing her daughter happy.
‘but, who gives this present?’ thought Acchan curious.
Then she found a note inside the box.
The note saying,
‘meet me at the playground near your house this Saturday at 7 pm.’

“mm? Who might it be?” said Acchan curious.
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Saturday night, 7 pm.
Acchan really goes to the playground near her house as she was really curious about the person who gave the necklace to her.
It might be her secret admire.
Acchan look around the playground to find the person but no one is there.
So she just sat at the swing and wait for the person.
After a while waiting, Acchan felt someone is walking slowly behind her.
Her heart start to beat faster.
Acchan quickly turn around as she could not hold her curiousity anymore.
“You!!!” shout Acchan. The person just froze in her place.
“D-don’t tell me…It’s you??!!” said Acchan pointing her finger to her.
“Yes it’s me.” Said her.
“Why it has to be you Takahashi?” said Acchan mad.
“Why? Is it wrong? Then you can give me back the necklace.” Takamina trying to tease her.
“W-what?!”
“I’m just kidding. Sit!” said Takamina as she sit on the next swing.
“What do you want?” Asked Acchan as she sat down on the swing.
“Do you like the necklace? Don’t worry I’m not doing anything to you.” Asked Takamina smiling.
Somehow, the way she talks to Acchan was soft and sweet. It making Acchan blushed.
“How did you know I want that necklace?” Asked Acchan.
“I saw you at the mall.” Said Takamina looking at her.
“So you were stalking me!” Acchan shout again pointing her finger at Takamina.
“Yeah so what?” Takamina said grinning.
“But…the necklace was expensive…and you’re not rich as I know.” Said Acchan.
“Well, I use my fan club money…” answered her.
Acchan was confused at first but suddenly she remembered that Takamina’s fan club only have 2 members. They are 2 girls from rich family.
Acchan nodded slowly as she understood it.
“Then why are you asking me to come here?” Asked Acchan curious.
“I just want to ask you something? Do you really hate me?” Asked Takahashi directly.
“It’s not that I hate you, I just don’t like you disturbing me all the time.” Answered Acchan.
“So you want me to stop bothering you?”
Acchan nodded.
“Well, I’m going to transfer my school next week. And that’s mean I could not disturb you anymore…” said Takamina sad.
Acchan also suddenly feeling sad when she hears that. After years having a troublemaker in her life, soon her life will be peaceful. It was good right?
“Actually, I like you, that’s why I started to disturb your life to get your attention.” Hearing the confession from her troublemaker, Acchan’s heart suddenly beating faster.
‘She like me?’ thought Acchan.
“I’m sorry if all this years you have been having a hard time because of me. I-I just love teasing you.” Said Takamina looking at the ground.
Suddenly Takamina stand up and walk in front of Acchan.
Acchan look up to see her.
As soon as her head look up, her lips meet with Takamina’s.
Acchan eyes widen shock.
Takamina cupped both of her cheeks.
Before Acchan could replied the kiss, Takamina pulled out then running away from her.
Acchan was still dumbfounded at what just happen.
‘What happen just now?’ thought Acchan.
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4 years later,
Acchan now is more beautiful and gorgeous princess in her college.
Currently, she’s having her birthday party at her house.
The party went well.
When she was talking with Mariko, a midget comes to her looking at her from head to toe.
Acchan was feeling weird at her behavior.
“W-what are you doing?!” said Acchan to her.
Suddenly she got smacked at her head.
“Yuko! Don’t look at Acchan like that!” Said Haruna comes towards them.
“Ouch! Sorry Nyan Nyan~ I just want to see how she looks like…” said Yuko clinging on Nyan Nyan’s arm.
“Ah! Acchan, Mariko I want to introduce you to my…er, girlfriend hehe…Oshima Yuko.” Explain Haruna.
“Hai! I am Oshima Yuko! Hehe~ Btw Acchan, Happy Birthday~” said Yuko showing her dimples smile.
“Before I forgot, someone asked me to give this present to you…” said Yuko while handing her a small red box.
“Thank you…but who gave this?” Asked Acchan.
“Ermmm…you will know soon!” answered Yuko wink at her.
‘Is it her?’ thought Acchan suddenly remembered 4 years ago during her birthday party.
After the party, Acchan quickly opened the small box that Yuko gave her.
But it was nothing inside it except for a note.
‘meet me at the playground near your house tomorrow at 7 pm.’
Acchan started to smile knowing who it was.
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That night Acchan comes earlier to the playground.
It has been 4 years she did not see her face.
Acchan patiently waiting while sitting at the swing.
“You really came!” Suddenly she heard that voice.
Acchan turn around smiling widely.
Without saying anything, Takamina sit on the swing next to her.
“Do you miss me?” The first question she asked to Acchan.
“No.” Answered Acchan shortly.
Takamina frown hearing it.
Takamina stand up while walking in front of her.
Acchan know what was going to happen next as it happen 4 years ago.
Meanwhile at the other side Takamina is smirking while turning her back on Acchan then walk away slowly.
Acchan realized it so she look up and found Takamina walks away from her.
“Where are you going?” Asked Acchan.
“You said you don’t miss me.” Said Takamina without turning her head.
“Don’t turn your back on me!!!” shout Acchan.
“B-besides, you took something from me 4 years ago!” said Acchan. Her face redden.
Takamina was confused.
“What?”
“Y-you kissed me, so I need to take my kiss back!” said her blushing.
Takamina look at Acchan smirking.
“Then,if you want your kiss back, catch me if you can!” said Takamina grinning then started to run.
“Takahashi! Come back here!!!”shout Acchan also started to chase her.
Deep inside, Acchan was really happy…
Her troublemaker is back in her life again.
and they love story started~

 The end.


I know..it's weird right?
Miayaka-san I hope u like it!  :nervous
and hope eveyone like it too...
« Last Edit: December 28, 2014, 11:25:09 AM by chiqinna »

Offline Yuichii

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this is so cute!! :inlove: :inlove: disturbing someone to get their attention! I so can relate!  :lol: :lol:
I always like Atsumina chasing scene, got me squealing imagining them chasing each other  :heart: :heart:

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Troublemaker

Takamina as the troublemaker... and always disturbing Atsuko.. to get her attention...

Yeah... They were so cute together....

Great love drama story there

Can't wait to find more OS

Thank you for the OS

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“Then,if you want your kiss back, catch me if you can!” said Takamina grinning then started to run.
“Takahashi! Come back here!!!”shout Acchan also started to chase her.

how i love when acchan called her like that like a boss!
I love Acchan48     maji ni naranakya katenee yo

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A troublemaker Minami and princess Acchan. Nice fics of your. Update more. Tq

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