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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter two: Taking care of a pet
« Reply #20 on: May 30, 2012, 07:13:48 AM »
i love interaction between jurina and minami..LOL..

update soon please.i want to know what happen next..


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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter two: Taking care of a pet
« Reply #21 on: May 30, 2012, 12:41:30 PM »
@ Flean: Yeah, Minami is totally loves 'Acchan'  :lol: and thanks for the compliment  :heart: :heart:
@ bochang: Rena indeed have relationship with Minami,  :yep: but what kind of it? Please keep reading~ thank you  :heart: :heart:
@ Haruko:  :nervous kojiyuu will not appear soon... (until some criminal happen) sorry  :banghead:
@ yukofan: thank you for reading  :heart: :heart: Jurina and Minami were completely innocent  XD

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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter two: Taking care of a pet
« Reply #22 on: May 31, 2012, 12:40:54 AM »
When I read it I think of Elften Lied...
But  hopefully this fic will be less scary and more moe  :grin:

LoL Minami can't say Jurina...
I wonder how Rena got into this hrrm...

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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter two: Taking care of a pet
« Reply #23 on: May 31, 2012, 05:59:26 AM »
This story is hilarious! I love it! And too kawaii!  :lol:

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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter two: Taking care of a pet
« Reply #24 on: May 31, 2012, 09:43:09 AM »
I like this! Minami and Jurina are so funny^^
Poor Acchan, being always hurted lol

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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter two: Taking care of a pet
« Reply #25 on: May 31, 2012, 01:05:07 PM »
I Like how the story goes on... I wonder what relationship between Rena and Minami. or That Chief was Rena? LOL. Minami can't spell Jurina's Name. Thanks 4 the Update.
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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter two: Taking care of a cat
« Reply #26 on: May 31, 2012, 02:11:07 PM »
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#Story2# Aidoru Panic - Prologue
« Reply #27 on: June 08, 2012, 04:42:49 PM »
 :banghead: Currently out of idea to continue Black Cat  :sweatdrop:
But flashes another idea for new fic~  XD
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INDEX
Lesson One
Lesson Two
Lesson Three
Lesson Four


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AIDORU PANIC
Prologue


This is Majisuka Gakuen…
An all girl high school…

A mighty school with high class dorms in it
A place where the most famous band staying
A mighty school with fully equipped in all facilities for the band
It looks like a heaven for every single person in this world

But it is a place like hell for me
I have to survive in this school, in this band, in this circle… for a year…
I can’t get out of this place until the graduation day, until we graduate from high school

Click [Door opened]

Just when I opened the door, my roommate (also my oshimen) is standing there… right in front of me… changing her clothes…

PLAKKK

“GET OUT!”

BLAAMM [Door slammed]

Yeah, I got slapped and kicked out from the room again.
Why am I ended up in this school?

Flashback

I am doing a window shopping after watching performance of my favorite band – Baby Blossom. They are soooo cool on the stage, especially my oshimen. She is soooo kawai and soooo kakoi on the stage. Walking around the store, I saw a unique jacket on display. A jacket with many little banana pattern on it. Just when I am approaching it, someone pressed my mouth and dragged me out from the store. They put me in a van and drive it away.

Once the van stopped, I arrived in a beautiful garden~ They guide me to an office… and this is the beginning of nightmare I ever had. A brown short-haired woman is sitting on there behind the desk, looking at me with sharp eyes behind her glasses. The truth is, she is the manager of Baby Blossom and I was blamed on making scandal with one of the member of Baby Blossom. When did I???

She forcefully grabbed my thumb and stamped it on a contract! A contract that change my whole life… a contract which trapped me inside this hell…

Flashback End


Sitting on the floor with my back leaned on the wall, “I guess I’ll sleep in the corridor again…sigh

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Prologue end.

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About the main character (I know you must know already... ahahaha... *laughing sheepishly*)

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Re: #Story2# Aidoru Panic - Prologue
« Reply #28 on: June 08, 2012, 04:50:31 PM »
HUAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! I love the prologue!!  XD  you made excited by just reading prologue..lol.. :lol:

can't wait for the first chapter!!! :cow:

About the main character (I know you must know already... ahahaha... *laughing sheepishly*)
hahaha.. let me continue laughing with you.. hahahaha..  :lol:

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Re: #Story2# Aidoru Panic - Prologue
« Reply #29 on: June 08, 2012, 04:55:55 PM »
Ohoh it smells interesting and funny things ^^

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Re: #Story2# Aidoru Panic - Prologue
« Reply #30 on: June 08, 2012, 05:25:38 PM »
it makes me woah woah woah  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: while reading the prologue

your fic always interesting!! please update soon!! :heart: :heart:
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Re: #Story2# Aidoru Panic - Prologue
« Reply #31 on: June 08, 2012, 07:32:35 PM »
wow... the prologue seems good and looks interesting...

is it about acchan and takamina?

well, lets see for the chapter 1~

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Re: #Story2# Aidoru Panic - Prologue
« Reply #32 on: June 09, 2012, 12:03:51 AM »
Ah! AtsuMina~ LOLL. This is Atsuko's POV, right? Seeing the Jacket with Banana Patterns, somehow remind me of Banana Parka. LOL. But, This fic is Takamina-centered, anyway.
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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Lazy drawing~
« Reply #33 on: June 15, 2012, 01:13:07 PM »
BLACK CAT



Hmm... I've been attached to drawing lately, but still... completely failed to draw something good  :nervous
I've been thinking to draw a picture for each chapter (Black Cat) hope you won't disturbed by my "failed" drawing  :sweatdrop:

Just passing by~

Intro : When Atsuko meet Minami ...


 :nervous failed drawing...

When Minami bite Atsuko's hand


 :nervous still failed...

When Minami getting out from bathroom~


 :nervous hhehehehe... Atsuko seems a bit fat here...

Then... for the next chapter (I haven't update)


What have made Acchan so mad that she throws a ladle to Minami???
I'll update chapter three once it done~


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Re: #Story1# Black Cat -- another nonsense talk by me >.<
« Reply #34 on: June 15, 2012, 01:15:11 PM »
JUJU!! KAWAIII!!! <3

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#Story1# Black Cat - Chapter three: Kiss from a cat
« Reply #35 on: June 17, 2012, 05:12:38 PM »
Thank you for liking my drawing  :heart: :heart:

Here's the chapter three
The young professor and fierce woman revealed here^^
Please enjoy reading^^

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Black Cat
Chapter Three – Kiss From a Cat

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News on TV

Another victim found at the riverside by polices this evening. This is the 48th times happened within this month. One thing that polices assured is this serial killer aiming woman between 18 to 25 years old. Polices haven’t decide what is the motive of this serial killer and make an assumption that maybe the killer is a psychopath. All the victim’s body parts are being ripped apart by bare hands, according to the autopsy result. Warning for all residence, please enhance your alert to prevent this miserable matter happen to you, your family, your friends, or anyone you cherish.

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“Why did you let her out of control?!!” scolded the fierce, tall woman.

“Easy easy, Sayaka” said the young professor.

“Professor Mayu, how can I be calm? Don’t you know how far is No.44 have done? 48 lives in one month! I don’t want to get any attention from polices” complained Sayaka.

“Okay, I get it” Mayu walked away to the exit.

“Where are you going?” asked Sayaka.

“Get No.44 back~~”


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At the same time in Atsuko’s house

“A-c-c-h-a-n~”

“F-I-S-H!”

“ACCHAN!”

Atsuko sighed in desperation. “Minami, this is fish, not Acchan”

They are sitting on the floor, face to face. Minami tilt her head slightly to the right, confused but her eyes keep looking at the fried fish in Atsuko’s hand. “Acchan??” she makes a cute expression which makes Atsuko closed her eyes to avoid any eyes contact with her. Taking this chance, Minami move quietly and opened her mouth to eat the fish.

Ding Dong ♫♪♫ (door’s bell)

Atsuko opened her eyes and saw Minami almost got the fish. She launched her feet at Minami’s stomach to block her from getting any closer, while Minami keeps leaning forward and her hands reaching randomly, still trying to get the fish.

Ding Dong ♫♪♫ (door’s bell)
Ding Dong ♫♪♫ (door’s bell)
Ding Dong ♫♪♫ (door’s bell)
Ding Dong ♫♪♫ (door’s bell)
Ding Dong ♫♪♫ (door’s bell)

“Coming~” Jurina went to open the door.

“Good evening~ my little angel, how are you doing?” a not so tall brunette with shoulder-length brown hair handed Jurina a pack of food and coming inside the house. “Where is your sister?”

“There” Jurina lead the brunette where Atsuko is.

BUUMPPP

Minami managed to get away and jumped on top of Atsuko, grabbing the fish which landed beside Atsuko’s neck with her mouth. Atsuko is now trapped between her hands and Minami doesn’t hesitate in eating the fish in that position. Seeing this scene, the brunette immediately closed Jurina’s eyes with her hands.

“Yuko-chan, why you close my eyes!”Jurina complained.

Hearing Yuko’s name, Atsuko pushed Minami away with her full power. She gets up and fix her clothes, trying to explain what happened, “Yu-Yuuuko, it’s not what you think”

“Hmm? What am I thinking?” Yuko smirked at her and let go of Jurina. “Long time no see, Atsuko. It seems like you have changed a lot.” Yuko said as she keeps looking at Minami.

“What brings you here” Atsuko acts coldly toward her.

“Come on, let’s have a drink first” Yuko took out some beers from her bag and sat on the sofa. “Have you watch TV? News about a serial killer that killed 48 women within a month. That’s crazy, don’t you think?”

“That has nothing with me”

“I got a contract to bring that killer’s head as a gift for ¥ 1,000,000,000,000. Won’t you join?”

“Sorry, my current status is an ordinary teacher. If there’s no other thing, please leave” said Atsuko coldly.

“Nah~ Won’t you be warm and friendly to me? Just like what you did with that girl~” teased Yuko. She changed her attention toward Minami and Jurina. They are playing clay at the balcony. Minami is making many fish-shaped clay with different colors. “She looks innocent and cute, doesn’t she?”

// Yeah maybe she is…// Atsuko smiled a bit. Not long after, she frowned, // But she also dangerous… I have to find out her identity //

Watching Atsuko thinking the question she asked, Yuko form a smile on her face, “Wow, you’re smiling over that girl? Who is she?"

“She’s just someone I met on the street, seems like she lost her memories so I let her stay for a while”

“Hmm… it seems suspicious~ from what you did with here before, it’s hard to believe~” Yuko puts a suspicious face at her, “Is she related with Jurina? She is so close with her, I never see Jurina being so close with someone else”

“Whatever” Atsuko replied shortly, her face becomes gloomy.

She takes a sip of beer and continue, “Did you still feel guilty over Jurina?”

// After all, this is my own consequences… //

“I am the one who killed her parents. I have to take the responsibility” Atsuko said in low volume.

“Mm...mm…” Yuko is shaking her head disagree. “Your secret lover is~ I’m still curious at who is the one that teach you to have feelings. For a member from the honor assassin family to have feelings, is hilarious”

“Whatever you say, I won’t do killing anymore. I won’t go back to my old self again… never…” Atsuko gets up from the sofa and gestured Yuko to leave, politely.

Yuko sighed and gets up from the sofa, “I understand~” She approached Jurina and carried her, “I’m going home now, bye Jurina”

“Bye, Yuko-chan.” Jurina placed a kiss on Yuko’s cheek.

Yuko put Jurina down and walk to the exit, escorted by Atsuko. Meanwhile at the balcony, Minami is pouting her lips and looking at Jurina. She is interested at the action Jurina did to Yuko. Jurina smiled and explaining it to her, “That is kiss, K-I-S-S”

“Kiisss~” Minami repeated.

“Kiss means you like someone. I like Yuko-chan, I kiss her. I like Acchan, I kiss her. I like Minami-chan, I kiss you~” Jurina leaned forward and place a peck on Minami’s cheek. “Muuaacch”

Minami’s face is brighten and forms a big smile. Minami placed a peck on Jurina’s cheek like what she did on her. She went into the kitchen and brought a fish out from the fridge and kisses it. “I like Acchan, I kiss Acchan~”

“Minami-chan, that is fish not Acchan. Put that back, Acchan will get mad”

Jurina starts chasing Minami to get the fish. They begin to running around again inside the house. While running, Minami open her mouth readily to take a bite at the fish. To her bad luck, Atsuko just come back from escorting Yuko. She snatched the fish away before Minami bite it, because the fish is still RAW... Minami pouted and launched her right hand to reach the fish, Atsuko switched to her right hand, then Minami launched the left hand to grab the fish. Atsuko faster her speed to swipe the fish from hand to hand, preventing Minami to get the fish. Jurina stands aside and amazed by the speed of their hands are moving.

PLAAKK

At the last movement, Atsuko accidentally slap Minami’s face with the fish. Minami shows her a sad expression with teary eyes, rubbing her red cheek. Atsuko ignores her and takes the fish back to the fridge. Minami grabbed Atsuko’s sleeve edge and follows her to the kitchen.

“Sourrieee” (Sorry)

Atsuko turned to face her, “When did you learn how to say sorry?”

Minami still pouting while playing the edge of Atsuko’s sleeve with her fingers. “Acchan…” she said while peeking at the fish in Atsuko’s hand.

“Okay, I’ll cook this fish for you. Get out and sit properly” Atsuko sighed in defeated.

“YEAY~Acchan~!” Minami grabs Atsuko’s shoulder and moved forward, giving a kiss on right cheek, left cheek, and the last… on her lips. Minami happily walked out from the kitchen and sat obediently on the sofa, waiting for her fish to be cooked by Atsuko.

// Did she just kissed me…? // Atsuko tighten her fist and trembling. // She kissed me??!!! What do you think you’re doing!! // She gets out from the kitchen, her body surrounds by a killer’s aura. Without hold back, she throws a ladle and hit perfectly at Minami’s forehead.

“Minami-chan?!” Jurina went to check if Minami is okay.



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Atsuko was a killer??
Yuko seems close to Atsuko, who is she??
No. 44 seems to be a dangerous criminal, who is she?? is she after No.36??

To be continue…

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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter three: Kiss from a cat
« Reply #36 on: June 17, 2012, 05:50:28 PM »
oh...poor minami..  :lol:

this getting interesting, can't wait for the next chapter! and btw I really like your AIDORU PANIC fic, please continue it too..:deco:






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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter three: Kiss from a cat
« Reply #37 on: June 17, 2012, 05:52:10 PM »
poor poor minami all she did was kiss her lol

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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter three: Kiss from a cat
« Reply #38 on: June 17, 2012, 06:38:56 PM »
Minami’s face is brighten and forms a big smile. Minami placed a peck on Jurina’s cheek like what she did on her. She went into the kitchen and brought a fish out from the fridge and kisses it. “I like Acchan, I kiss Acchan~”
OMG!! this is so funny..   :rofl: and Minami is a genius.. like Acchan, kiss Acchan.. totally genius..

and I love this.. Minami's innocent love of "Acchan" and Acchan's rough love.. ladle as the prove.. :lol:

jurina just so cute and smart here.. :wub:  sorry to know that Acchan killed her parents.. :doh:

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Re: #Story1# Black Cat - Chapter three: Kiss from a cat
« Reply #39 on: June 17, 2012, 07:01:46 PM »
i wanna know more gaaaahhhhh its killing me.. update soon pls :peace:

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