JPHiP Forum

AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: ZorxCemoon on September 27, 2013, 08:43:50 PM

Title: Zorxie-chan's Storytelling, [My actual love][The fat inside me]
Post by: ZorxCemoon on September 27, 2013, 08:43:50 PM

Hey guys, Zorx here with a brand new story, for this it is a one-shot and don't really have detailed explaination

Simple English vocabulary, easy for understanding.

If you would like a certain couple, and scenario please comment or message me personally.

If there is any mistakes that annoyed you in the story, comment or message me.

The story is also, a little straight-forward, typical for a lazy writer like me:)

Hope you enjoy this story:)

Pairing: Tomotomo
           Mayuki
           Atsumina

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------





Holiday

 
 
(TomoTomo)

The day, that every member in AKB48 and SKE48 has been waiting for, was finally happening, that is right !, the director declared yesterday that we would be granted a relaxing 1 week holiday, away from work, as he thought that the break would release the tension between members, allowing them to reveal their true potential upon finishing a relaxing and stress-relieving break.

So I decided to spend the day with my sweetheart, Tomochin. We came to a conclusion a day before, that visiting Chinatown would be a splendid idea, since neither of us, has ever been or eaten any Chinese cuisine.

The idea was recommend by our friends, Mayu and Yuki, as they express the tenderness and the delightful taste of the famous Chinese delicacy, Chili crab. Since It isn’t too spicy and also not too sweet, it would be just right for my darling, as she isn’t a big fan of any spicy consumption.

We boarded a taxi and left for Chinatown, upon entering the area, the surroundings had brightly lidded lanterns, hanging on strings tied along each lamppost; trishaws were parked on the side of the road, waiting for customers to board, and the lively drumming sounds of the Dragon dance, performing for a certain opening, it was beautiful.

Arriving at the set, destination, we paid for the fee, and took a step out, straight toward a local coffee shop. It was enormous, having millions and millions of variations of food, ranging from Xiao long bao to Home-made char-siew noodles.

As the food court isn’t that crowded, we decided to browse the variety of foods together, before jumping to conclusion on our decided entrée.

We passed through blocks after blocks, but none seems to catch my attention, but as we went by a veteran looking stall, it caught my attention straight away with its 5 star certificate, pasted at the front, Tomochin and I stood waiting near the glass-paneled stand, not wanting to intrude the busy owner, while she was busy chopping meat.

Feeling irresistibly flirty, I place my arm around the shy girl. Upon contact, I felt a strange vibration erecting from her body, she was phenomenally shivering un-controllably, as I felt anxious in a huge amount.

I tried to comfort her “Sweetie, Are you cold?” taking off my jacket, covering the hump of her shoulders, down to her waist.

“Erm…. I am fine” She softly rejects the offer, but her shaking was starting to worsen, after another slam was echoed, coming from inside the store.

“I am really worried, honey, is anything the matter? You haven’t stop shivering, since we stood here waiting” I responded with great concern, staring directly at her direction, but her eyes weren’t onto mine, but instead directed at the store.

*Slams*

She flinched and place her hand over her mouth, “Tomo..mi-love can we orde..r our food in…. may..be another store?... But if you lik..ed it here, I don’t mind staying” Her voice too, was also shuttering, and due to the tone, it was revealed that she had quite a dislikes towards the stall.

I placed my viewpoint on her current concentration.

Realizing the cause, I responded with a slight push of my head “Yes, we can, let’s go over there” pointing at a dumpling shop.

“Thank you” she mumbled under her breath, as I placed a reassuring hand on her waist.

Hence we took off, and the shivering stops, her angelic smile were also regained.

I didn’t knew, Tomochin would reacted strangely towards, ducks being killed........
 
 




 
 
 
(Mayuki)



We are both friends, but just maybe….. Before our holiday’s halts to an end, I would have gained the courage to confess

Yuki and I had a conversation; right after the announcement was made, and planned a trip to Singapore, just the two of us…… Wunderbar.

We made bookings the night before, and got 2 tickets for VIP seating and reservation on the plane, also during the arrangement, we appointed a stay at the Marina Bay Sands, because we were given vouchers from Director-sama.

Feeling as my heart was popping in and out rapidly, due to plundering excitement for our trip, and also alone-time with Oshiri….Yuki.
 
I didn’t get any sleep, I just ended up hopping on bed, and organizing, eye-catching lingerie to woe her in attempts, before resorting to proposal.

Meeting at the airport, on departure date, we handed in our passport and finally reached the 57-metres plane, we took adjoining seats, before the craft blasted its engine, projecting it for flight.

Exhaustion and sleepiness was the only two-words that would fully describe my feeling, as I was carelessly knocked myself to “Fairy-land”, placing my head on her thigh.

During my happy-go-lucky slumber, I felt a warm pair of lips, attached itself to my cheeks, but killed the thought, thinking it was just a dream.

“Mayuyu, would you marry me” Yukirin said, as she placed her left knee on the ground, with a 5 carat-ring on palm, as I dart my eyes around, shyly looking at the starring crowd.

“Of course, I would” I lifted her up, from kneeling and planted a kiss on her… cherry pink lips, and the crowd surrounding us, cheered and clapped.

Shining lights and patting head, brought me back to reality

"Dayum... why must it be a dream"

We arrived at Singapore, the country of great convenience.

We check-out and had lunch on the Airport, before hitting the outside and boarded a cab, driving through the city-life of the tiny-island, we plastered our faces to the window, as we passed by the record-breaking Ferris wheel.

Pointing and accidentally cracking bits of the window, I pulled the hilt of Yuki’s skirt, begging her to accompany me to the 30minutes long-wheel ride tomorrow, at dusk, she agrees with a slight nod, before being disturbed, when the drivers unzips his previously sealed mouth, scolding me for almost drilling a hole at his window.

I apologized with a quirky “Sorwiie”, He just sighed, accepting the cutely-spoken sorry and continued grounding the accelerator.

We arrived at Marina Bay Sands, and were taking our first-steps into the 3 tower-connected hotel, our jaws were separated from the skull, as service staff told us, the top of the hotel stood a ship-looking platform, established with fun resort and swimming pool.

Yippee....

We check-in and took our residences keys, fortunately for me, the voucher, we had, had a typo, instead of having two-separate beds, there will only be a master-bed for sharing.

Hopping from yet again, another heart pounder, we entered the luxurious estate, zipped our luggages wide open, and hang up clothes into the cabinet.

Feeling lazy as jet-lacks strikes, we had the first day lying on bed, watching television programmes, changeling each-other on who could understand the most English lines.

After having a little of SpongeBob and My Little Pony competition, Yuki tucked herself into bed, slipping her legs to the end of the bed, signing out straight to beauty sleep.

I got out of bed, and sat on a red cushy chair, beside her bed, starring at her chubby face,

How cute…….., I couldn’t resisted looking at the rosy lips, without having any dirty thoughts. Coming to my only clean resort, I placed my lips onto hers, before pushing back after eternity.

Woooo I am so brave....

Right after the kiss, a slight tilts of Yuki’s mouth was formed, as I thanks Kami-sama for allowing her to be a heavy-sleeper.

Although I would love to be beside her forever, I formed a better plan of visiting the Fun Resort, before my dirty-mind corrupts my brain, and doing something that would push me further away from the notorious friend-zone.
 

 
(The next day, night)


After having a pleasant breakfast, lunch and dinner, and a wonderful sightseeing trip around town, I finally reached the point-breaker of my heart.

“Yukirin, be quick” I held tightly at her wrist, pulling her faster towards our destination, there is was, a humorously large Ferris-wheel, we quickly purchase tickets and entered an empty cubical.

Just as the doors were soon about to close, a group of boys saw us alone and were approaching it fast, but as they were approaching closer and closer, I just lifted my legs, and took a quick jab onto theirs chest, “Get your own, perverts” I coldly said, before door shuts.

We were launch to air, finally, just the two of us, viewing the city in a lightly romantic aura, surrounding the casing.

Woooo…. How romantic….

Taking a bird’s view at the city, we both sat peacefully sewing out mouths shut, enjoying the view, but the silence was cancelled when Yuki decided to speak.

“Mayuyu, you wanna hear a secret, I have been holding for since, entering AKB?” Yuki suddenly confessed, hiding her visible redden face, with her palms over each cherry cheek.

Feeling curious, but also increasing afraid, I took my chances “What would it be, Yuki?”, crossing my fingers at my back, wishing that she was about to say “I LOVE YOU MAYU”

She placed two fingers on her throat, clearing it with a shrieking sounds, “I really envy Tomochin….” She replied, placing a funny smile, one which would always make me flustered, but not today…..

“What is so good, about her……” I accidentally sprouted, rather rudely, tilting my glare away from her, due to embarrassment. It is not that I hate Tomochin or anything, in-fact I and her, are best friends, but whomever comes between me and my angel, will be forcefully-placed under my list of “Don’t wanna talk to you again”.

Before silence was reached yet again, Yuki placed her smooth fingertips on my cheek, shifting my glare to her beautiful face, which cause me lustful dreams.

“I envy her, for her relation with Tomomi”

“What does that have to do with anything” Watery tears, reached my opening, and was pouring down like waterfall.

“Because……. Although she is shy, I admire her confidence to propose to Tomomi, during our last performance” Yuki said, getting nearer and nearer towards my face.

I shifted my face by insinct, but was pulled back, slightly roughly towards..….. her lips……

My heart felt as if, It was a Charlizard, that just learned Fly. Just as we were getting to the good part, her smooching stops without warning, as she tears away from me.

“I Love You, Mayuyu” Yuki faced the bottom, eyes full of remorse and regrets, “I know that you don’t feel the same, but…..” She wiped her tears with her long sleeves “But…Being just with you, is enough for me...... and now I ruin the chances of even being your friend” Her butt began walking on its own towards the opposite end.

I held her and pulled back, tightly into embrace, as I also declare my actual feelings, “I LOVE YOU TOO YUKIRIN…….”

She widen her eyes from disbelief, but soon erased it, as I shared an improved kiss with her,

THANKS THE LORD!!!

As the capsule was alighting to the bottom, cheering and screaming erupts from the crowd, which included the guys from previously

“MAYUKI!!!! FOREVER!!!!!” The both of us, just winked towards the roaring crowd, making our way back to the hotel.

We entered the room, and laid in bed, both of us facing the ceiling and deeps in thoughts, not believing how a day could change your life so much, before taking a brief lips-exchange.

“Nee….Yuki I know it is quite soon….. But do you wanna “Do” it” I said, feeling my lustful thirst increasing.

“I think it is best for us, to… you know….. slow it down…..” Yuki replied, reaching into her bag, taking the book of laws, and pointing out, the appropriate age for having intercourse.

Darn it, what a waste of seductive lingerie
 
 
 
Yuki gave me yet another quick peck on the cheek, and bid me a night greeting, before sleeping,

Leaving me alone, as I switched on the television, programming it to My Little Pony.

*Ring….Ring…..Ring*

Great! Just when I am getting to the good part…..

I picked the phone up from beside my bed area, messaging a quick “Moshi Moshi?”

“Mayu-darling how are you?” An elderly man, spoke from beyond

“I feel great”

“By the way, how do you like my plan eh…”

“Hahahaa… Thanks to you, grandpa, Yuki and me are finally Juilet and Juilet”

“That’s is nice to hear that, Now she can finally stopped complaining to me on how she envy Tomotomo’s relationship…..I gotta go sweetie, and remember, no sex till 18…..”

“I got it, grandpa, see ya” I lied, as I hang up, before walking over to the cabinet pulling out a pink lingerie.

It is time, to wake her up…..
 
 
 
 
 
 




 
(Atsumina)



“Onsen Onsen Onsen” We both pronounces, as we marched towards the natural hot-spring.

Yups… you got it right, I am having a warmy holiday with my cute little midget, in the famous-amos, Watermelon onsen.

It got its title, for having the smoothest semi-circle bottom.

We arrived at the front of the steaming hot-springs, and was stunned by its natural beautiful, It is sooo natural that animals surrounding the area, would tucked themselves cozily into the water.

The cold drifting snow, swarming from the sky, making us leap into the boiler faster than sound, as we acknowledge the comfortable distilling warm water, surrounding our body. 

“Ahhh…. This is the life” I said, “Honey, could you pass me the newspaper” I motioned for it to be quickly passed over, Takamina then reaches for her purse, pulling out today’s newpaper as she stretches her hand, from over, transferring to mine.

“Thanks darling” I happily replied, reading the newspaper for any juicy-bits, after reading a while, I caught a news that burns my heart with excitement.

 
AKB48 Scandal

Witnesses at Singapore said, they spotted Kashiwagi and Watanabe from the famous girl-group, AKB48, kissing, inside one of the capsule in the Singapore Flyer, Although no real evidence was captured, it was confirmed by witnesses around the located area.

We went around the Akibahara and told 1000 fans , on their thoughts on this event

I mean, it is good, isn’t it?

Oh-my-god, they finally confessed, it is about time….

Hulalala….

Finally my fanfiction is coming true….. Okaa-san my wish has finally came true… I can die happy now….

Out of 1000 interview, we had a total amount of 955 negative feedback, complaining about useless photographer that couldn’t get a photo.



“Taka-honey, seems like the princess and the doll has finally patched” I pass the information over, immediately Takamina started, jumping up and down due to gratefulness.

“Taka-sweetie, maybe you wanna take a sit, before anyone sees your Hu-ha.” I chuckled, as she went straight down, peeping from left to right, for any perverts.

Having the clear sign, she swims over to my direction and placed her arm over the shoulder “Acchan, It is just that I am grateful, that god has finally made Mayu confess, for I don’t have to hear her constant over-confident blabbering about…. Takamina-sensei don’t worry I would get the courage tomorrow.....” Takamina sarcastically said, then planted a kiss on the cheek.

"Acchan maybe you would wanna consider applying lotion on your cheeks, it is rather rough" Takamina advised.

“Ermmm darling, You might wanna consider washing your lips” I recommended, As she opened her eyes, to find a female monkey on her left, fluttering her eyes, pressing a smooching signal with her mouth.

Immediately she jumps out, running away from the monkey...

“Acchannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn HELPPPPPPP” She calls for my help, as she ran in circles, running away from the hand-walking creature.

"That is your punishment for cheating on me " I ignored her pledge for help, as I continued reading a new headline "Tomochin's phobia of duck killing". :jphip:

Title: Re: Holiday (Lots of pairing) One-shot~Give it a go,Love ya~ Tuning in for the night
Post by: lezperv on September 27, 2013, 09:30:26 PM

 :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:

ATSUMINA IS SOOO FUNNY!!!

Lol Atsuko is sooo cute getting jealous of the monkey and poor Minami, not getting any help from her girlfriend

thanks for the story :D

Title: Re: Holiday (Lots of pairing) One-shot~Give it a go,Love ya~ Tuning in for the night
Post by: Tam_atsu on September 28, 2013, 02:41:10 AM

make kojiyuu too please  :thumbsup :bow:

Title: Re: Holiday (Lots of pairing) One-shot~Give it a go,Love ya~ Tuning in for the night
Post by: Zita on September 28, 2013, 09:29:40 PM

 :shy2: :mon innocent: Thank you
I look forward to another.
 :on gay: :mon money:

Title: Re: Holiday (Lots of pairing) One-shot~I am going for cycling~See ya^^
Post by: stv_wong on September 29, 2013, 06:41:46 AM

Pffft...  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
This is the first time in a while a fic could crack me up so much... Thank you for writing this fic. Will be waiting for more.

Title: Re: Holiday (Lots of pairing) One-shot~I am going for cycling~See ya^^
Post by: ZorxCemoon on September 29, 2013, 10:06:41 PM

Here are two stories hope you liked it:), This two are not connected to the "Holiday One-Shot" it is just for complete fun:)

Hope you guys like it:)

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------




(Couple Special)



Eloping on a 13 hours journey anywhere would have caused the majorities, headache and exhaustion, but whereas for me, It was blistered with joy and eagerness, Why?.

Because the night before my trip to Tokyo, A date was set through a chatting site, with a cute chubby girl, who was a mixed of Italian and Japanese.

As I reached the designated location, that was addressed, I grabbed my purse pulling out a piece of paper, that I previously noted the address. Confirming that the red roof mansion was the allocated destination.

I got out of my Ferrari, slammed the door shut and pushed the locked button, before walking over to the already opened-gates.

Although the gates presented a welcoming aura, I decided to alarm her to not come off as inconsiderate. As my fingers were lifted to come in contact with the ringer, a shout distracts my motion.

“Mariko… you can just come in. I just dirtied my shirt and had to change to another” Her arms were the only part shown, before disappearing to her appointed task.

Welcoming myself to the house, I went over to the front-door and twisted the knob, peering inside, to find an empty living-room, before making my first leap onto the flooring. Another shout was echoed from the top-storey “You can just a seat at the table; and try some of the cookies. I made them myself”.

Moving over to the well-organized table, I just stood there as my eyes came in contact with the cookies.

Fascinated by the great bakery skills, I shouted over a compliment “The cookies looks great”, before helping myself to a chocolate cookie that was lying on the stand.

Crunching down on the cookie, I could literally taste heaven, but as I was about to take my second bite, a mysterious person suddenly appeared from the door, on my right.

A pale, ebony hair girl with cute pink dress came towards me, with a file on hand “Please take a seat”, She suggested, but there was a slight hint of order.

Due to the straight forward order, I quickly took a seat, and faced her dead serious face.

“What are you doing here?” She questioned, with a horrendous monotone voice.

“Nothing….” I bluntly replied

“Nothing? But for the past few day, you have been up to something” Flipping through the large stack of paper.

“I came..... just to meet her….” I frankly replied, shrugging my legs, due to anxiety.

“And what are you guys going to be doing here?”

“Nothing.....much….maybe watch a movie with her” I replied, pulling out a couple of DVD from beneath my plastic bag.

“And how old are you?”

“20, Madam” giving out a respectable honorific, although she looks rather youthful.

“Soo…..you think it is alright, for a 20 adult, to just come over to a girl home when her parents aren’t around”

“But... We are not going to do anything….. but maybe watch some movie…” Defending myself

“And do you know how old is this young lady, that you are here to meet, today....?” She asked, facing the notes.

Feeling as explosion, erupts in my heart, I tried digging through my brain for excuses.

“Sh..ee. said… she was… 22” I lied

“You do know, that I have the transcript here…” She flunked the paper towards my face.

As anxiety hits my sensitive area, I just come off clean as a whistle.

“She is 14” I faced down, not allowing her to view my guilty face

“Oh….so you were lying just now?” I just nod in reply.

She started flipped through the large stack, before stopping at a certain page.

“Is it appropriate for any adults to send naked pictures of themselves, to a 14 year-old girl” She passed me a paper, filled with erotic photos that I took.

Feeling worse than before, I placed my arm over my head and groaned in sadness “No it isn't”

As soon as I never made eye-contact with her, no sounds of any sort was uttered

As the dead-silence made my hair stand, I reluctantly pushed my face upward, and saw that she is  silently previewing the chat-log.

My heart started beating regularly but shot up again, when she suddenly started reading the chat-log out-loud “We would kiss passionately and I will slowly caress your sexy little body” I just glared at her with puppy eyes, asking for mercy, but she just continues, ignoring my pledges “Working your beautiful body, we would discreetly move to your bedroom, and elope in sexual intercourse ”

“This does not look good Mariko” Tears started finding their way to the opening.

“I know…..” I mumbled softly

“So what do you think, I should do here?”

“I am hoping that you could allow me to go home and I would promise you, that I would take therapy”

“And forgot that this ever happens?”

“No…but take it as a lesson learned” I began wiping my dried tears.

“Mariko” She tapped my shoulders asking for direct attention, in which I responded “Well there is something I gotta tell you” She paced around in circles “I am Matsui Rena from NBC, and we are doing a story on predator that lurked the internet, looking for young teens for sex”

This can't be happening.....

Immediately camera started coming out from every angle, pointing their scopes at me, devastated from the outcome, I burst to tears again, falling to the floor, wiggling my arms like a kid.

“Mariko” Gesturing for me to stand “You are free to walk out of her right now, and if you have anything else to say, now would be a good time”

I muted myself from embarrassing myself any further, as I push up on my feet, and left for the front-door.

Dragging my feet to the exit, was feeling like eternity as I wonder what other surprises would be present, but dismissed the thought, when suddenly the doors flew wide open, with a loud slam, as a cat-like girl was in sight, grinning as she rushes to my direction

“RENA-CHAN!! YOUR 14 YEARS OLD GIRLFRIEND IS HERE!!!!” Instantly I tilted my head, back glaring at her shocked expression

“I can explain” She shouted to me, as the girl embraces her from the side.

I slide over to her, but was distracted when another figure appeared from beside, the very same door, revealing a blonde American man, his hair combed to the side, wearing a blue suit and a familiar sets of notes.

He immediately faces Rena “Do you mind explaining yourself?”


(Couples in the story, will have their segment on another holiday chapter)

(This story includes stuff from "To catch a predator")

















(Kojiyuu)



After hosting the variety show, AKBingo, I was making my way back home, feeling exhausted and drained out of my life.

As I reached my estate, I rang the bell, waiting for my wife to assisted me with the lock. During the wait, I arched my back, producing a cracking sound

I am getting old…….

I tilted straight back up, and tapped my foot impatiently, as I could imagine myself, in-front of the television, beer on hand, cheering and watching an evening game of soccer.

My dreams were soon going to be fulfilled when I saw my wife’s silhouette approaching the gates, as clarity adjusted my sighting, I could feel my Adam’s apple dropping from the top.

She was walking un-lady-like towards me, anger and annoyance was shown through her facial expressions. She unlocked the gates and paused my movement with her palm.

“SATA-SAN” She shouted, mouth widely opened, that I could literally see her uvula dangling dangerously “Do you know what time it is?” She softens, but with a much more sinister tone.

Pushing my eyes to my wrist, I check the time, 6:00 p.m., I just starred and wondered, what plans we would have during this time.

“Have you already forgotten” Smacking my hair, in which I reacted poorly “What are we soon late for?”

“We are supposed to be having dinners at Yukos” Reminding me, as I panicked.

“Dayum, we are going to be late for dinner at 8:30” Most of you might be wondering, why the big fuss for a dinner that would being happening so much later, well… let me explain… My wife and I was awarded with a certificate last year of being champions for being early birds, so for whatever activities we plan, we would have to be at least 30 minutes in advanced.

I dragged her arms, pulling her to the bathroom and we quickly took a shower, before getting into our individual dressing room for presentation.

Getting to the room, I combed my loaf forward, in a twisting motion, trying my absolute best to maintain its stands, fulfilling the target, I went over to my cabinet, got a white collared shirt, with matching blue tie and black pants.

As I was about to looped my leg across the hole, that I have created for my pants, My wife shouted over for help.

I abandoned the plan of wearing my pants, and tend to my needy wife, who would probably be asking me for assistance on perfecting her afro.

As my prediction strikes a bulls-eye, I stood at her back, before scooping up a handful of wax, spreading it across her oil-infested head.

Soon the petty work was done, a perfectly rounded afro was formed. Satisfied by the result, she waved me to get lose, before she went and got changed.

I just gone to the toilet, and did a 5 minutes long wash, which I did thoroughly. I gone back to my dressing room, jumping in to my pants.

“Sata-san could you be quick, we are going to be late” I zipped my pants, and thought angrily, If you wouldn’t have made me, attend to your crappy hair, we would have been ready 20 minutes ago.

I walked over to her at the door, and left together.









We reached the destination, as confirmed by en-graved plates at the front, I moved over to the bell area, but as I was about to pushed it, a memory strikes my head, pushing me to a flash back message.

Yuko: Sata-san, If you arrived early, don't bother ringing or knocking, just enter and make yourselves at home

Acknowledging it, we budged in without alerted, but as soon as air manages to enter the house, a loud conversation would be easily heard from a room, which could be identified as a kitchen.

Feeling as our curious side devour our thoughts, my wife and I decided to ear-dropped the conversation, wondering whether this two idiots are gossiping about us.

But what we heard, wasn’t what was predicted

“NyanNyan, those breast looks great darling…… could I have a quick bite” A voiced identifies to be the little squirrel

What bad timing……, My wife and I fell on our knees, sitting beside the doors of the kitchen

“I don’t think it is that great” A light slapped was heard, “Sure you can, but we better be quick before Sata-san and his wife arrives”

“Sure thing honey” As silence filled the air, but was dispersed, when sucking was heard.

“Ouch, Yuko sweetie, be gentle.... you are going to break it, if you beat it too fast” NyanNyan complained

“Sumimasen”

Utensils and items shifting from the table echoed from the kitchen

“Ahhhhh…… that is good, but remember to cover those naked breast” Yuko suggested

“I will do it later….. and stop sucking it…. We don’t want it dripping into any of our food”

I just starred at my wife, squatting beside the kitchen’s door, in total disbelief, we just closed our eyes, but kept the ears rolling.

“Yuko could you pass me the stick-looking item….” The sounds could make up the scenario, that was happening “Here you are”

“Help me with spreading it, but don’t pull it too hard. We don’t want a repeat from before”

“Okie Dokie”

“Hmmmm…..” NyanNyan moan orgasmically “ Yes…. Stuff it in….. not too deep Yuko, It might hurt”

As the tension builds up from our hearts, we couldn’t take it anymore and stood up, ready to leave.

Just as we were about to reach the doors, my wife accidentally steps on a pencil, that was carelessly misplaced.

*Crack*

“Yuko-darling…. They are here…. Stop what you are doing and tend to our guest” Nyannyan suggested

“Whatever you say, my princess…. And remember to cover it up, you always forget”

We stood stoned on our position, our weak hearts unable to stand the reality we got in.

“Sata-san, please.. make yourself at home”

Turning to her direction, with my eyes sealed, “Yuko…. I know that couples, usually gets… you know…. And it is common to get too into it…. But maybe before inviting guest, you should reconsider the location for the deed”

“What are you  talking about, are you guys blind?” Yuko chuckled in a weird manner “ Don’t tell me the latest trend for old-folks are to have eyes like Brock”

Angered by her abused towards elderly ears, I accidentally opened my eyes, seeing Yuko at my front, lollipop on hand.

We got a clearer image, when Kojima, enters the room with a local American delicacy, Stuffed turkey with black pepper dressing and Chicken breast, coated with egg, with a small bite-mark on it.

As soon as we noticed the food, we laughed at the remembrance of the mistaken,

Sucking Lollipop

Beating eggs

Biting breast

Covering turkey

Yuko and NyanNyan just stood there, dumbfounded to see us laughing our ass off, for no random reason. They just did a twirled finger gesture, indicating we are both mentally challenged

“OI”













(Saeyaka)




Sayaka insisted that Sae, help her take a photo of her, beside the notoriously bad-temper gorilla, Sulu.

Although you are suppose to have a keeper present, before making any contact with it, Sayaka seems to have a weird aura that allows gorillas in particular to feel comfortable, having her around.

"Say cheese" Sae declared, while every other AKB members, giggled as Sayaka poses with her hands intact with the animal.

"Nee....." Yuko smiled "Sayaka, can you try speaking gorilla language?" causing a small fit of laughter among the group.

"I would try...." Sayaka faces the gorilla and ordered "Sit"

The gorilla sat, and the gang started chuckling slight louder.

"Stand"

The gorilla stood, and everyone pointed their fingers at Sayaka, laughing their asses off....

"HAHAHAHHA, Sayaka speaks Gorilla....HAHAHAHA" Yuko laughed the loudest, smacking her thigh as she couldn't take it.

Sayaka face suddenly turns red, from anger, but replaced it with a sinister smirk

"Attack"

"ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

Title: Re: Holiday (Couple Special) Updated~Mystery couple,Kojiyuu and Saeyaka....enjoy....
Post by: Tam_atsu on September 30, 2013, 11:26:01 AM

i thought kojiyuu was having their... hahaha okay my bad.  XD thats so funny xD
and the way they call each other is just too sweet  :inlove: :hip smile:

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:)
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 01, 2013, 01:55:51 PM

@stv_wong Thanks for liking the story^^... :heart:

@lezperv Hehehe^^

@Tam_atsu making it soon:)

I don't know about you guys, but I have been left with a weird feeling after discovering the breaking-new of Acchan's relationship. And feeling particularly dumb that I was the few remaining fans, that just received the news.....

The title has now been changed from "Holiday" to "Short mini fun-story"

Anyways hope you like the story....... (Weird story, i don't know whether it would appeal to anyone, even the dead)

----------------------------------------------------------- :heart:---------------------------------------------------------------



(AKB and SKE members)


On a dark and gloomy day, Yuki is squatting at the front of hundreds of tombstone, soaked and wet from the pouring rain, but she couldn't care less.

Her eyes were swollen from crying, her voice was sore and her spirit torn to pieces, after receiving grave news.

The news of the tragic death of every AKB and SKE members beside Yukirin, had struck the headlines from every media this morning.

They were all found motionless on their bed, white foam leaking from the sides of their mouths.

Cause of their phenomenal deaths was still unknown, Scientist from all around the globe are still on the on-going research.


(Back to Yukirin)


Yuki had since stopped her wailing, after remembering her beloved, hates seeing her cry.

Although she wasn't in tears, she was still squatting at the cemetery, starring at Mayu's tombstone, A bouquet of white lily on hand.

As she was about to placed it down, she felt a hand tapping her shoulder.

Yuki mechanically tilted her head back, facing her intruding guest "Kashiwagi-san....Sorry to disturb you, but would you mind answering a few questions" A young reporter politely asked, trying his best not to further break-down the sadden beauty.

Although she looks annoyed, Yuki just nodded reluctantly, allowing permission.

"Would you mind telling us in details, what happened during yesterday's gathering"

"Mayu...." Yuki took a deep breath as she found it hard to say her beloved name "and I had invited every members from AKB and SKE..... including graduated members, to our house yesterday evening in celebration for my birthday" She hoarse the words, stilling continuing her collections of heavy breath.

Although it seems like a rude thing to say, the reporter had to do what was needed, as his rivals would soon be arriving "Could you please continue" Passing over a tissue, Yuki accepts the tissue and lip sync a word of gratitude.

"We all had a karaoke sing-along and hosted a dance-off shortly after" Wiping away the uncontrollably tears.

"As the time draws nearer to the end....... I made dinner for everyone and soon after they all left......that is all...." Instantly the reporter drifted his attention to the camera crew, doing a cutting signal, before abandoning Yuki to another area, further away from Yuki's listening range.

"Good-evening, This is Zorx reporting for Cemoon news....."

"The cause for the tragic deaths of the famous girl's band, has been revealed....... to be a cause of deadly food-poisoning"

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated, Hope you enjoy....I hope....
Post by: BbSis on October 01, 2013, 06:20:56 PM

Lol

Here I was thinking it was something serious xD poor Yukirin ><

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated, Hope you enjoy....I hope....
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on October 01, 2013, 07:17:29 PM

this is awesome  :farofflook:

please do more

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated, Hope you enjoy....I hope....
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 02, 2013, 09:52:10 AM

LOL

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Soon to UPDATED, 3 pure Mayuki fan-fiction
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 02, 2013, 04:30:24 PM

Yeah I mean that :)

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Soon to UPDATED, 3 pure Mayuki fan-fiction
Post by: Archer1992 on October 02, 2013, 05:20:23 PM

hahahahahahahaha all is too funny

thanks

update soon!!

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Soon to UPDATED, 3 pure Mayuki fan-fiction
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 04, 2013, 02:53:14 PM

Sorry for the late story, I actually written a few times on the reply, but accidentally tapped the back button, therefore, having a need to rewrite and memorize the entire script.

I would be continuing the  Wanted (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36324.0) and  Bloodshed series (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36419.0).

If you did enjoy the story, I would appreciate a "Thanks" or a lovely cute "Comment" or "Suggestion" on which couple you want next.

If you love Mayuki One-shot, please do check it out  Sakura Princess by:Kate (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35928.msg1206077#msg1206077)  This is literally by a far mile, some of my most favourite one-shot, as it grants you a private nail-biting session.

@Archer1992 Thanks Archer-chan Love you, please PM me, if you too have any cute fan-fiction,I would love to read it:)

@Haruto Lee Haha

Please enjoy, love you guys.


----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


Married

(Mayuki)




Yuki is resting comfortably on a bench, in the school’s eco-garden, starring at a sparkling 4-carat ring circling around fourth finger.

Occasionally she would be starring down at her lap, smiling pleasantly at a sleeping beauty.

The person lying on her lap, was nosily sleeping on her skirt, a slight drool leaking down her lips, as she constantly mumbles “Yukirin” softly.

Infatuated by the smoothing words, she gave her a statisfied peck on the cheeks, before dragging her attention again to the ring, flashbacking to the past.




(2 months ago)



Yuki and her fellow friends, had been waiting at the corridor, for a certain late comer, as she wasn’t present on the appointed arriving timing.

Mayuyu where are you……

As their patience shrinks to the size of a louse, they abandoned the plan of waiting, and got into their dorms, starting the games, with or without Mayu.

grouping in circle formation, they began discussing on their chosen game, but none had any idea, since their gathering was hosted by the piggy-tailed girl.

Hence they had to come up with a game, after a moment of silence and squeaking whisper, a voice has interrupted the peace.

“What about Sudoku” Yuki firstly declared, but the group just placed a small glare of boredom, and ignored her “Erm…..Crosswords?”

“Nah” Yuko gestured, before mouthing her own ideas “Hey guys…. Why don’t we play True or Dare” receiving 100% agreement, except one.

“Too risky and definitely isn’t safe” Yuki explained, as everyone just obediently followed her roots.

“Spin the bottle?” Yuko yet again suggested, looking over to a disagreeing Yuki “F**K, Marry, Kill? That sounds fun…..right?”

“YUKO” Yuki angrily stated “You do know that, that is the inappropriate version for it. For sophisticated young teenagers like us, we should go for the Snog, Marry, Avoid version, which would be increasing more acceptable”

“So….That is a yes?”

“I guess so..”

“OK” Yuko happily comply, pumping her fist to air, before she grabbed Mariko’s hand, pulling her towards the end of the room “Mariko and I would be putting down the names, If you don’t mind”

“Sure, No problem Yuko-chan, Please refrain from inserting any indecent candidates” As the words were transferred, the duo sprints off to the corner, pulled out half a dozen papers from the drawer, before inking the names that they have decided on.

Accomplishing their goal, they went back to the group, placed a wooden bowl, filled with crumbled paper in the center, and waited for further instructions.

“Since it wouldn’t be fun to just randomly pick a person, we would decided the candidate with this bottle” Yuki grabbed her apple cider on the left, took her last sip, before placing it flat on the ground, and gave it a strong tug to the right.

Feeling as nervous as the others, she pinched her eyes shut and listened to the spinning bottle as it decreases in volume, coming to a complete halt, but weirdly slides slightly more.

Particularly having an odd feeling like a fur-ball was bursting through her throat; she moderately opened her eyes, peaking at the object.

As predicted by the guts, the bottle’s end has directed its scope towards, Yuki.

I could have sworn it was pointed toward Yuko, a second ago,

“Hehehehe” Yuko randomly chuckled at the confusing looks of Yuki, as she grabbed a handful of crumbled balls, passing it over to Yuki but stopped making eye-contact, when Yuki started glaring at her with accusing eyes.

Ignoring the angered female, she spoke indirectly “Yuki-chan, picked three balls out, and pass it to us for inspection”.

“That isn’t how we play the game” Yuki complaint, immediately having the squirrel objection “It is just for the fun of it, Granny”

“Anything…” She gave up, picking out a red, pink and blue ball, and passed it over to the group.

After looking and having a laugh or two, they passed it over to Yuki, before getting into conversation, on the predicted outcome.

As Yukirin received the papers at hand, she didn’t feel safe to open it all at a go, so she slowly peeled each paper, one at a time.

Deciding on the blue, she slowly slides it from the right “Sim…….on Cowell…..”

YUKO.........

Abandoning the piece of paper, she went for the second, red.

Doing the exact same method of revealing, she slowly peer into it “Miyazawa……Sae”

Hmmm….. not bad..... would definitely snog her

And lastly for the pink paper, as she slowly unravelled the note, begging that it isn’t something odd, otherwise, she would be forced to placed Simon Cowell on snog. But as she thrust it towards the left, she caught a glimpse of the words, and immediately got flustered, heart-rate boosting at turbo speed.

Feeling as if she looked obviously in heart-attack, she covered her face with her shirt, and looked towards the excited crowd.

“Have you come to a conclusion, Yuki?” Yuko asked, pointing towards her papers.

“Must I really say it…..” Genuinely uncomfortable with revealing her answers.

“Of course, you must” Mariko insisted, before pointing towards a table, filled with piles of cash “We even placed bets on the answers”

Surrendering, she hoarse out the first answer “Well....I will start with Avoid before Snog then Marry..., So I would definitely avoid Simon Cowell” Yuko angrily slapped her legs roughly,

“Damn it, I bet 6000 Yen on Simon Cowell” Before being lightly slapped by NyanNyan for no particular reason, feeling rather surprise, she looked at the bottom, and realized a redden leg, but definitely it wasn’t hers “Sumimasen NyanNyan, I didn’t know that was yours”

“Anyways getting on with the game” Yuki shifted to beside, Sae, and whispered “I am sorry Sae-chan, looks like we aren’t getting married” before declaring her answer for Snog “I would definitely snog Sae-chan”

“But..t. I thought you would have chosen me!.... instead of her” Sae looks were covered in great depression “Sorry” Yuki lightly patted her back, before standing up, stretching her arm and gave a tired yawn.

“Guys I think it is getting late, we better go back to sleep, before Principal Takamina starts inspecting dorms” Yuki quickly ran to the doors, before being pulled back, by her collar “Not so fast, you haven’t yet told us, who you would wanna...AHHHHH” Yuko moaned for drastic measures.

“Well” Yuki rubbed her head “I think you guys, saw the papers, you should have already found out…..hehehe” She awkwardly laughed

“It isn’t fair Yukirin, we got to have to hear it, to believe it” Yuko insisted, forcing her back to her seat.

“But Yuk…” Silencing her with her index finger, Yuko brazenly grabbed her shoulders and said “Be a Hero!”

Yuki just sighed in defeated, as she softly announced, that even eagles would have to debate on the spoken words “I want to marry Watanabe Mayu”

After being said, the group began rioting in anger “Louder Yukirin! We Can’t Hear You”

Tuning it to her normal volume, she yet again released the answer “I want to Marry Watanabe Mayu”

“WE CAN’T HEAR YOU!!!” Banging the floor, with their fist.

Yuki took a deep-breath as deliberately shouted “I WANT TO MARRY…. MAYUY….” Instantly the door slams open, revealing a panting cute-blouse girl.

“I ACCEPT”

“EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Soon to UPDATED, 3 pure Mayuki fan-fiction
Post by: Zita on October 04, 2013, 04:24:01 PM

So this is how it happened :rofl:
Good for you Yuki.

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Soon to UPDATED, 3 pure Mayuki fan-fiction
Post by: BbSis on October 04, 2013, 04:45:05 PM

Nhyaaaaaa kawaii <3

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated:Married (Mayuki) Special, 2 more to go:)
Post by: imteedee on October 04, 2013, 05:12:16 PM

SHUT UP! TAKE MY MONEY AND GO MARRY!!!!  :on voodoo: :on thumbb: (LOL)

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 04, 2013, 02:53:14 PM

Sorry for the late story, I actually written a few times on the reply, but accidentally tapped the back button, therefore, having a need to rewrite and memorize the entire script.

this is uhm.. I suggest you type your story on Word or on a notepad(digital) first and you may copy and paste in here, so it'll be easier for you... in case accidents happen  :)

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 04, 2013, 02:53:14 PM

If you love Mayuki One-shot, please do check it out  Sakura Princess by:Kate (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35928.msg1206077#msg1206077)  This is literally by a far mile, some of my most favourite one-shot, as it grants you a private nail-biting session.

one of my all-time favorites, Kate  :deco:

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Choose Mayuki or Onoe Matsuya story first,
Post by: gek geki on October 05, 2013, 01:29:52 PM

Mayuki


Because atsumina or that onoe make me shock

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Choose Mayuki or Onoe Matsuya story first,
Post by: BbSis on October 05, 2013, 03:59:54 PM

Mayuki! I'm on a mayuki vibe :)

Btw your story was cute :3

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) As request, Mayuki first, hope you enjoy it, still typing
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 05, 2013, 09:04:30 PM

@BbSis Hehehehe^^

@gek geki Yeah, same applies for me


Might be kinda boring, got lots of plans, but couldn't execute it.

I would be making a Onoe Matsuya vs Takamina story, so please stay tune...

New Mayuki story, would be awhile longer, as my mom forces me to an outing again...

Anyways I hope there isn't much mistake, got not much time for reviewing, might changed a little after waking up.

Hope you enjoy the story, Good night...  :heart:



----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------




(Mayuki: Sorrows)

Mayu sat on a chair, crying heavily, as she stares at her crush, whom was covered with white cloth, from head to toe.

The doctor declared her death 5 minutes ago, and strictly informed Mayu, not to mess with the dead body, and was only allowed to hold her hand.

Doing the only task, that could be achieved; she caresses her hand, and mumbled in sadness, as she remembers her urgency.



(10 minutes ago)

Yuki and Yuko have invited her for a shopping spree, at their local mall, but Mayu had to reluctantly rejected it, for an important club pratice that would be held today.

Although Mayu would love to spend time with her secret crush, she couldn’t afford to lose out in Friday’s competition, which would tragically affect her teammates. On the good side of not ditching class, was to fully prepare herself for victorious, that might charmed the single beauty, with her awesome first place trophy

As her training starts, Mayu had to jogged in circles for hours, and was being pushed to her breaking-point, but was fortunately saved, when the coached whistled ending the intensive training, allowing every members permission of having an hour break for lunch

Using the time to located her love, Mayu took out her cell-phone from her purse, and send over an invitation for lunch.

After pushing the send button, she wondered around and found a bench for convenience, resting her straining feet, she stared straight at a hospital that was located, inches away from the school.

As she continued starring, she unconsciously revert to thoughts, and imagine, how life would be like, being Yuki's first lover.

Swimming in her lovely thoughts was perfectly fluffy, until it was rudely interrupted by the beeping phone, indicating a message.

Mayu yet again pulled out her phone, and swipe the activate button, revealing a hidden message from Yuko. Feeling curious, she tapped on it

Sister Yuko: Mayu…Yuki is in the hospital near the school, could you quickly come over, she might not wait for you…

Reading the message has twisted her stomach, as she worried for the worst, but regained her strength, and propelled for the hospital in haste.

Approaching the hospital, she accidentally bumped onto the side of the slow-sliding door, but ignored the pain, remembering the task on hand.

Slamming her hand on the counter she shouted for zipping fast information, before crushing the nurse’s hand, begging for swift answers “Nurse…. Patient…..Yukirin….Room” she panted from the sprint.

The nurse just brushed her hands off and spoke “Please do refrain from shouting, and behave yourself young lady, this is a hospital” She insisted, before turning her view to the computer, punching in codes, and finally got the information needed.

“Patient Yukirin, Room 656, Floor 6...” As words were heard, Mayuki sprinted over to the lift, smashing the button for the 6th floor “Quick……”

Waiting impatiently in the lift, her entire relationship with Yukirin, flashes before her eyes, causing her agonizing pain

Wanting to relived her invaded heart, she vent her frustration on the door, banging it with her swollen fist.

Yukirin....please be safe....

As the lift reaches the 6th storey, she urgently accelerated out, ramping the slow-moving door again.

Not again.......

Yet again, ignoring the bruises that was created, she frantically search for room 656, after she previously passed by 652…. “654…..655……656…..There” She confirmed it with the Yukirin name, imprinted on the patient's list.

Although Mayu would have preferred to budge, she instead carefully twisted the knob and entered, just in-case noises could affect the unknown condition.

As she lifted her footing in, she was stopped by a doctor, whom was probably in-charge of the section.

“May I help you, Miss” The tall beautiful doctor questioned, in a light whisper.

“Erm….Yukirin… Please” After announcing her patient, the doctor’s eyes widen in shock, before calming herself down, with the help of her fanning hands.

She took a deep breath and sighed, calming replying, straight to the point “Miss….I might have bad news for you?”

Feeling the dark aura, that has clouded her eyes, Mayu tried cooling down, hoping that her thoughts were just lies “What is it, Doctor” Mayu heart was beating at 600 BPM.

The doctor just placed her hand on Mayu’s shoulder, still puffing out depressing breath “She met with an accident, and was…..” she continuing fanning her pouring neck “declared dead 5 minutes ago”

Instantly, her heart exploded in tears, as she fell on her knees, sobbing “Yukirin…Arghhh…..Yukrin….”

Stopping her tears were the doctors' comforting pat “Mayu, I am sorry to announced this, but her body would be collected by her family in 10minutes time…. You can see her there, for the last time” She pointed to the curtained bed, at the second row on the right.

“I know you are sad, but please refrain from disturbing the body, but you can hold her hands if you want….” The doctor said, before leaving the piggy tailed girl in silence.





(Present)


As she repelled back to Earth, and realized that her time was soon up, instantly she grab hold of Yukirin’s silky hands, and spoke to her dead body in mumbles “Yukirin……I don’t know whether your spirits is here, but if you are…..I would like to tell you that” Mayu wiped her tears “......I have always love yo…”

*Beep*, her phone sounded, playing a particularly loud beep.

Even though, she wanted to continue her speech, the beeping tone was annoying the resting patients, that forced her to tend to it first.

Digging her phone out, she angrily swipe it open, and found a message from Yuko.

Sister Yuko: Mayu-chan sorry.... I forgot to tell you the name of the restaurant, Fish Fonda, at the second storey of the hospital, Since Yuki's stomach can't handle the growls, she couldn't wait for your arrival....sorry sis..

Dumfounded by the odd message, she swiftly removed the cloth, alerting her to a face, that she hadn't seen before.

Oh.....I should have mention Kashiwagi Yuki, instead of Yukirin....


----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------



My sister deleted my older posts, gotta placed it at the end....



@Zita Hehehe glad you liked it:)

@BbSis Didn't really understand, what or who was the cute one? Anyways Hello Sis :heart:

@imteedee Hahaha typed alot in Microsoft, soo much that I abandoned most T.T Kate is Mine  :heart: Hehehehe



I will be posting another 2 more Mayuki stories, got lots of crazy ideas, but I hate that I always used the same vocabulary words over and over again..........

Need to go back to English school....



Here is a little story of my previous Sunday park trip. If you considered it a story.....

(Sunday Story Zorx)(True Story)

So I was going to a Beach, aka Park, with my family.

As I couldn't ride a bike or swim, I decided to Roller-blade, since I was actually the best in the school, 7 years ago.....

After renting the skates, I got on it and tried standing up.... A success, but my speed of skating, was 3 times slower than an eldery stroll.

Since my sister was rather rebellious, she quickly rode her bic away, thus making my entire family, abandoned me.

Feeling rather confident, I continued skating for roughly 5minutes, before slipping down.

I took my stand again, and rode the skates to the bridge, which would take an average person, 10minutes to reach, by walking.

However my skills weren't as enhance as  before, and therefore making the 10minutes walk, to a 45minutes skate.

Upon reaching and being abandoned, I found my family at the bridge, as they shouted over "Hey Zorx, Go and return the roller blades and come back to the car"

Forgetting that my phone and shoes were handed to my mom, I roller blade over to the stand, with wet pants.

Returning it and I stood there dumbfounded, that I haven't got shoes and contact, So I waited for my family to be worried, and gone in search for me.

As I waited for 10minutes, I fortunately found my High school teacher, thus lending his cell-phone, and called my family over.

After an awkward 25minutes conversation, my family's car arrived, and took me to my cousin's house for dinner.

Upon reaching the home, and taking a shower, I exited the house, readily prepared for a dinner.

But as I was wearing my shoes, my mom said that my pants had a large hole, which was cause by the fall.....

But I luckily got pants from my uncle, before going for dinner...

HOW EMBRASSING.....I just hoped nobody took a photo when I was skating back....

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated:Sorrows (Mayuki) Going to sleep, nite ^^
Post by: BbSis on October 05, 2013, 09:53:42 PM

Lol again xD

But wait, how come Mayu didn't noriced it wasn't Yuki dead on the hospital bed? ><

Thanks for the update o/

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated:Sorrows (Mayuki) Going to sleep, nite ^^
Post by: BbSis on October 06, 2013, 04:02:09 AM

I imagined that, I just wanted to make sure ><

Hey Zorx,you did not fail! It was nice :) really. With an unexpected end. Don't be so harsh on yourself ;)

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) UPDATED, Typing another story, hope you like the rest<3
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 07, 2013, 08:15:56 PM

Hope you enjoy the story, :)

I am tuning in for the night again, sorry for any mistakes, too sleepy to think properly

Next story, an Mayuki story, any request please, PM or comment.

Hoping that this story could make me reached "200" Thanks.

Enjoy:) :heart:

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------





(Takamina, Acchan, Onoe Matsuya)

(TAM Story)




Acchan laid her emotionally drained body on her cushy pink bed, her conscious was clear, but was projected on her brightly lighten screen of her cell-phone. She has been starring blurry at a certain message, that was sent out 12 days ago, but was never replied

Slowly drained into thoughts, she browsed her mind for a reason as to why her best-friend had started avoiding and ignoring her. As she was about to dig deeper, her train of thoughts collides to a halt, after her boyfriend called from below.

"Acchan, Dinners is ready" Onoe Matsuya shouted over, insisting that she bury some food down her throat.

Adjusting back to reality, Acchan instantly felt agonizing pain, erupting from her growling tummy, begging her intake.

Try her best to please her unsettling tummy, she left bed and went down the flight of stairs, instantly receiving the fragrantly aroma of broth soup.

Being guide by the familiar scent, she end up at the dining-room, finding 2 sizzling hot bowl of noodles, laying neatly on the tables, cutlery and serviette on the side.

"Onoe-chan can't you cook anything else, besides your Signature-Udon" Acchan chuckled, covering her mouth, as Onoe scratched his head, laughing along.

"You know I can't cook anything besides it" He replied, as untied his filthy apron, and set it neatly against the hill of the chair.

Preparing to dine, he dragged out his seat, and motioned for his bump to created contact.

But as he was about to do so, he paused for a second, a bulb popping out from his head, as he revert back to standing, shifting his position to Acchan's side, cupping her ears, and whispered a word of advice.

Hearing his suggestive wisdom, had formed a crescent smile on her face. Unable to hold back her gratitude, she flew to his arms, giving him a bear hug, before planting un-stoppable kisses on his chubby cheeks.

Loosening her grip, she hopped back to ground, zipping back to her room hastily.

Upon entering her confinement, she urgently reached over to her personal stash, pulling out her mobile, texting her friend a message of invitation.

Pushing down the send button, she literally felt a part of her soul, resting in relived, allowing her to properly focus on tending to her pitiful body.

Exiting her room, and leading back to the storey below, she immediately discovered that any presence of living being has vanished, however there was a note of absence, which was newly placed on the table.

Walking over, and unsealing the note, her face flustered, cherry red, as she began connecting the sentences.










Having finished the passage, she placed it back to it customary placement, and rested her body on the chair, patiently yet impatiently awaiting her expected guest.

Being at the placement of her chair, has gradually blurred her vision, dragging her paranoid mind, back to deep thoughts, but immediately vanquish, as she felt bubbling acid, burning her interior.

Ever holding the thread of hope, for her presence, Acchan continued jamming herself to her seat, battling the reckless war that her stomach has declared.

But every opponent has its breaking-point, and 15 minutes of starvation was her limit.

Disappointed in her incapability to endure hunger, she tightly grabbed hold of her chopstick in a defeat pose, sloughing her back, and arms on table for lazy support.

Pinching a string of noodles, she sling her hands towards her opening mouth, and was motioning it to be pushed to her tongue, but as it was in the midst of being completed. A light knocked echoing from the entrance, has ridiculously shocked her body, accidentally making her dropped her good food.

Devastated as she glare at the fallen food, she shed a tear of sadness, before slowly dragging her soon-to-be anorexic body, to attended to the call.

Turning the door-knob to the right, she swings the door slowly, and saw her unexpected guest, whom was busy previewing her lovely garden.

"Hello....Takamina" Acchan blurted as it was the only words that could be uttered, surprised that, she had made the effort of coming, despite avoiding her for nearly half a month.

"Oh.....Hi Atsuko-san" She bluntly replied, looking and sounding depressed, by the fact that she was even present at the place of her depression.

Affected by the change of honorific and mood, Acchan crushed her chest in hurt, but immediately releases her grip, not wanting to cause any awkwardness.

Inviting her guest graciously, Acchan helped Takamina with carrying her purse and plastic bag, placing both on her accustomed seat, as Takamina pushed out her shoes out, with the help of her toes, entering the estate, with her everlasting face of distress.

Immediately inside, she started looking around for a moment, before changing her frown to her normal expression.

Seeing as Acchan stood at the table, pulling out a chair and gesturing Takamina to be sited.

She obligate with the simple request, and took a seat, thanking Acchan with a light gesture, for her helpful assistance, before Acchan went to the other-side and got into her own seat.

As Acchan rested on her seat, she glared at Takamina, who was closely inspecting the food that was prepared, after clearer observation, she reached over to her plastic bag, taking out a blue plastic box, opened the lid and fed herself with her own made bento.

Knowing that Takamina's knowledge of her cooking was superior, she had came to a conclusion that Takamina might have a hidden grudge against Onoe-chan for reasons, that she didn't know.

Feeling the weird tension building around the diameter, Acchan tried lightening the mood, with her goofy smile, but was ignored as Takamina's concentration, was solely on munching.

Going along with the flow, Acchan took another string of noodles, but release it as Takamina suddenly spoke.

"How is life....Acchan" Hearing her usual nick-name has lighten the mood, and Acchan replied with a simple "It is fine" adding a smile for the heck.

"Erm..." Takamina cleared her throat, seemingly uncomfortable with the question that was about to be announced "How is your relation....progressing with Onoe Matsuya" saying his name, has created a weird twitch.

"It is fine, I guess"

"Do you like him?"

"Erm.....Of course...."

"Okay....." She clenched her fist, thus making it redden.

"Why do you ask?"

"I just wanna know..... nothing else...." Takamina tried looking normal, but her insides were tearing in a puddle of tears.

"Takamina?"

"Hmm?"

"Do you mind, If I ask you a question"

"Ok....."

"Why didn't you reply to my message that I sent out 12 days ago?"

"Oh.....My... phone was in repair for 2 weeks......" She lied, dishonesty was clearing showing on her face.

"I know you are lying, Takamina" Acchan cup her gently her the cheeks, but on instinct Takamina accidentally brushed her hands off

"Why should you care whether I avoid you..... I mean nothing to you" Her eyes started to moisten up, but held tightly to her tears.

"Why would you say that" Acchan felt hurt, wondering why she would have said that.

"Nevermind.....I am sorry..." Takamina continued clenching her fist, her sharp nails digging into her skin.

"What is wrong Takamina!"

"I said it was nothing!" She vent her anger through the volume of speech.

"Takamina! Please tell me what is the matter, I have never seen you this upset before"

Giving up to her crush, Takamina admitted "I am angry.....!"

"Of Who?"

"Myself"

"Why?"

Takamina immediately pushed her seat aside, standing straight up "Because......I was a coward........and ended up having you taken away from me...." she blurted, unable to face Acchan.

"But........." Acchan tried talking, but was cut short, as Takamina continued "I really hope that you would be happy with him, I am leaving now, please don't miss me" she walked straight to the exit, but she felt a urgent grip on her arm, before she was pulled to the other direction.

Following the laws of gravity, the pulled created momentum, thus tripping her onto a pair of strong arm, "Takamina I love you", Acchan suddenly proposed, shifting her face closer to Takamina, gradually pulling closer for a passive kiss, blurring Takamina's vision on reality.

In the midst of smooches, Takamina came back to her senses, forcefully pushing Acchan to the ground "How dare you! cheat on my feelings" she shouted, infuriated that Acchan has the guts of torturing her bruised soul.

"Harr? What did I do?" Acchan replied in high pitch,dumbfounded with the sudden accusation.

"You are dating that guy, and yet have the guts, to steal my first kiss" Takamina angrily thought, knowing that the kisses, meant nothing to her.

"What are you saying? I am not dating anyone......and that was my first kiss too....."

"But......But....the newspaper from 12 days ago, stated that you are dating......that...Onoe Matsuya" She shuttered

Acchan giggled, as she went over to the table, picking up the note that her boyfriend had written, "Read this"


Acchan

Good luck with your date with Takamina, hope that you finally confess your love for her, you big fat coward. hahaha

Anyways I am going out on my fifth blind-date, wish me luck, I just hope I don't get rejected for the fifth time. Touch wood

P.s Takamina can have my Udon, Don't really feel like eating my food cooking....


"But....But.... the newspaper?"

"What newspaper?" Acchan question, rather curious as how the newspaper has affected her relationship with the midget.

"This" Takamina unzips her purse, and passed the newspaper over to Acchan.

After moments of speed-reading, Acchan couldn't resist the laughter that she has been holding, for ages, as she was slowly read the papers.

"What are you laughing, Acchan" She pouted, pushing her lower lips in a cutely fashion.

"Read the name of the newspaper" Stretching her arm, transferring the paper over, Takamina gripped the paper tightly, as she squinted her eyes, for greater concentration.

*Morning intake, daily fake rumors to add a ding to your day*

Takamina looked over to Acchan, and let out a small giggle "Sumimasen ne"

"Acchan do.... you really meant it when you said you love me?"

"Of course I do silly, and I will show you how much I crave for you after dinner, just please allow me to finished dinner first" Acchan pouted, as she sadly glare at the cold-uneaten noodles.

"Okie dokie" Takamina happily declared, as she digs through her purse, picking out a nail-clipper, and started clipping her nails ,dropping her nails onto the cursed paper.

"What are you doing....*slurps*...Takamina" Acchan spoke, as she had a mouthful of noodles.

"I am getting prepared for tonight, can't do much with sharp nails"

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) UPDATED:TAM Takamina/Acchan/Onoe Matsuya story. Enjoy
Post by: lezperv on October 07, 2013, 09:31:32 PM

That was um... idk how to say it... but good? I like how it was just a fake rumor and Takamina went berserk cuz of it hahaha

I definitely love the last part  :heart: You have to clip your nails to do stuff, yup, Takamina sure knows it :P

anyway, hope you write more about Atsumina :D

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) UPDATED:TAM Takamina/Acchan/Onoe Matsuya story. Enjoy
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 07, 2013, 09:32:35 PM

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I like the plot twist, but the sentence in the end made me laugh!!!

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) UPDATED:TAM Takamina/Acchan/Onoe Matsuya Story
Post by: blakwhite on October 08, 2013, 11:55:30 AM

whoa.. nice  :thumbsup

thanks for healing my heart zorx - san  :grin:

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated: TAM, Takamina Vs Onoe Matsuya = Acchan.
Post by: Haruko on October 09, 2013, 02:06:16 AM

Aww  I love it the final sentence

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: blakwhite on October 10, 2013, 04:55:31 PM

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 10, 2013, 04:42:53 PM

Thanks for the vote guys, so the chosen pairings are: Mayuki and Atsumina.

Pwee that was fast, 1 day, 22 voters^^

How do I do another poll later in the future, cause I don't really know how to reset, PM me, *Kissy*

Would you guys like Onoe Matsuya in the story, or get him out?

Currently, lots of idea, but kinda long.

Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry.

im vote


KICK HIM OUT  (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/objection-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)

and i will waiting for atsumina (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/waiting-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: blakwhite on October 10, 2013, 06:12:38 PM

yeah, yeah, and make a smut one if you can (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/evil-smile-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Vote for the couples, that you wish me to write more.....
Post by: Tanchan on October 10, 2013, 08:05:50 PM

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 10, 2013, 04:42:53 PM

Thanks for the vote guys, so the chosen pairings are: Mayuki and Atsumina.

Pwee that was fast, 1 day, 22 voters^^

How do I do another poll later in the future, cause I don't really know how to reset, PM me, *Kissy*

Would you guys like Onoe Matsuya in the story, or get him out?

Currently, lots of idea, but kinda long.

Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry.

You may include him as the villain :lol: or you may twist the real event round and turn him into a matchmaker like the other fic. Don't be so hard on him, guys.

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Vote for the couples, that you wish me to write more.....
Post by: lezperv on October 10, 2013, 11:15:40 PM

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 10, 2013, 04:42:53 PM

Thanks for the vote guys, so the chosen pairings are: Mayuki and Atsumina.

Pwee that was fast, 1 day, 22 voters^^

How do I do another poll later in the future, cause I don't really know how to reset, PM me, *Kissy*

Would you guys like Onoe Matsuya in the story, or get him out?

Currently, lots of idea, but kinda long.

Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry.

I like that you said "Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry"

I feel exactly the same way. The whole point of yuri is girl x girl, I don't understand why there are some people who made one of the girls a guy... Nothing wrong with it and to each their own, but it is seriously annoying to me *shrugs*

Btw, KICK HIM OUT!!! I don't want that kabuki actor to be in the story at all unless he is the villain like Tanchan had mentioned XD anyway Update Soon!!! Waiting for my AtsuMina <3

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: no-chan on October 11, 2013, 12:40:06 AM

KICK HIM OUT!!!

His appearing is just a nuisance!!!

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: blakwhite on October 11, 2013, 03:55:41 AM

that comment really broke my heart  :on cloudeye:
sorry  :on cloudeye:

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: Tanchan on October 11, 2013, 07:25:55 AM

^
What comment?

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: blakwhite on October 11, 2013, 12:32:45 PM

Quote from: Tanchan on October 11, 2013, 07:25:55 AM

^
What comment?

well, about make takamina is a boy  :lol:
but, everyone have their own opinion so, its okay :3

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Vote for the couples, that you wish me to write more.....
Post by: lezperv on October 11, 2013, 04:17:47 PM

Quote from: Ryuuka on October 11, 2013, 01:01:37 AM

Quote from: lezperv on October 10, 2013, 11:15:40 PM

I like that you said "Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry"

I feel exactly the same way. The whole point of yuri is girl x girl, I don't understand why there are some people who made one of the girls a guy... Nothing wrong with it and to each their own, but it is seriously annoying to me *shrugs*

Btw, KICK HIM OUT!!! I don't want that kabuki actor to be in the story at all unless he is the villain like Tanchan had mentioned XD anyway Update Soon!!! Waiting for my AtsuMina <3

Nee~ I agree with you! Why should author turn the girls into guys?! It's sucks yo! At the first thought I also like you~ I hate when people make Takamina into guy, but hey, what's wrong with me that suddenly writing a story titled Messy guy x Aggressive girl? <--- I wanna blame FLEAN coz making me to write this story LOL!! Because I get the inspiration from her! I read one of her stories that Minami as a guy and I start to like it, becoz.....It's so romantic when he's taking care of Acchan when she's pregnant! And I don't really like Girl x Girl sex scene, they must have 'dick' to make their lover satisfied~  :lol: Yeah~ I sound like a pervert now~ But who cares? I enjoy writing Takamina as a Guy and making Acchan satisfied by owning 'his dick' Nyahahahaah!!! :on gay:

I'm not trying to start an argument here, but I feel like you are only saying that to ease in the fact that you prefer dicks over p**sy. You really do not need a dick to satisfied a girl and love scene between 2 girls is really cute and romantic. I agree that it may be boring sometimes when a lot of author uses the same method for sex, but whatever a guy can do to a girl, a girl can also do that, but in a much more gentle and understanding way. If you wanna pull the dick comment again, well let me tell you, the girls could go buy a strap-on. There is never a need for a real dick nor will it ever be needed. If you gonna throw in some baby comments, girls can go to sperm bank for that or asked their friends to be a donor X3

Atsuko can own Minami in many ways or vise-versa even if they are both girls, which they are!

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 11, 2013, 01:44:02 PM

@blakwhite: you mean Ryuuka's comment?

@Tanchan: Hahahaha  :heart:

@Ryuuka: Hahaha, For lesbian, they actually don't like dick-like object to be penetrate into them, their P***y is quite fragile in actuality, and would prefer soft sex.

@no-chan: wow that is harsh, but I approve of it:)

@lezperz: hahaha I completely agree 100%.




I don't really know whether I would produce a comedy or funny skit (Story), reason being.


(Boring Problem, don't read if you want to save precious time, Just some personal problem)
I live in a country, in which, every male individual, who has reached the age of 18, have to commit to a two-years length of National service.
You could actually defer (Postpone) the army, if you have a valid reasoning.
I applied for deferment with a High School exchange program, but got rejected, because they say that the program to Japan for 6months to a waste of time.
But obviously, I am not a person, whom would slip pass my only opportunity in life, for some F**K up, forced service.

Pardon my french, but I am rather infuriated by the outcome.



I am working on a Atsumina story, and might or may not include the "Hated one", some request for him to be villians, for obstacle, or simply a matchmaker.
I meant, he doesn't seem like a bad person, but also not a very good person. I just dislike the fact that the two are so called "Together".
They already stated, he is like a playboy, and people whom are married to Kabuki actors, are supposed to endure the pain, if they discover that their spouse are cheating on them.

I would post soon:), Always procrastinating, got a few manga work, that I have to do first before the story typing :).

Wish me luck for trying to changed the governments mind of my program:)




Onoe Matsuya is like the voldemort of AKB48 hahahaha, Damn I just said the name.....

I hope things goes well for you in the government department. Glad you could "maybe" update soon on Atsumina  :heart:

LOL, I actually like Voldy than the kabuki actor :P

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: lezperv on October 11, 2013, 04:52:05 PM

Quote from: Ryuuka on October 11, 2013, 04:24:22 PM

^ =___= what's with the donor? It's not same yo, it's not came from Takamina's dick!:lol: *jokes* I will stop this now, sorry for my sudden tempered~ This is me after all~ I just throw my thought and yep~ I also don't like argument coz it reminds me back  about 1 year ago....when the first moment I'm being an author in here~ Such a hot issues~ I don't wanna remember back~ besides~ I'm Ryuuka~ Nyaha! XD Sorry for talking nonsense, I will stop in here~

Peace no war~   :jphip:

edit

By the way, I'm with you, I don't really like when girls turn into guys, but due to some authors successfully change my mind, I'm starting to love gender bend story, and it's not all about sex, but due to I'm the king of pervert before, all of my stories content smut, coz I'm the one who really love when my OTP make love towards each other, yeah, you can say that I'm a pervert, and I don't care, I love romantic stories it doesn't matter if it's the girls x girls or normal one, but I prefer normal one so that they can be married and have children~ Like My Messy Guy story~  I really love romantic stories.  XD

PS: Sorry coz making your thread as discussion, LOL! I will delete or remove this later~  :P

I totally understand what you are saying. I agree, if Atsuko is gonna have a baby, IT WILL BE TAKAMINA'S!!! lol, but since its fanfic you can always create a way for two girls to have a baby with their genes.

I'm also a pervert, a big one too, and I love romantic stories. Though the definition of gender bend for me is that the girl dresses/looks like a guy, but is actually a girl. I believe that is the correct definition of gender bending anyway. I don't mind when Minami were to become Kai or has to dress up as one, but by the end of all that, I want her to be a girl again to be with Atsuko. I don't know why people kept No3b as men in the end or how Minami was against it at first, but agrees to it later for Atsuko. Atsuko never asked you to do that Minami! Idk its just irritating to me. I appreciate them both as girls and I feel like that needs to be respected.

Btw, I think, I will eventually read your Messy x Aggressive stories since i'm running out of Minami girl x Atsuko girl stories to read X3

p.s. Sorry for taking your thread to a different direction ZoraxCemoon

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: imteedee on October 11, 2013, 05:08:19 PM

this conversation is not appropriate in this section... and please have some respect for Onoe, I believe he deserves some as well as Acchan  :) Anyway, they're just dating and not married... don't be too harsh :)

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: Tanchan on October 12, 2013, 06:54:12 AM

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 11, 2013, 01:44:02 PM

I am working on a Atsumina story, and might or may not include the "Hated one", some request for him to be villians, for obstacle, or simply a matchmaker.
I meant, he doesn't seem like a bad person, but also not a very good person. I just dislike the fact that the two are so called "Together".
They already stated, he is like a playboy, and people whom are married to Kabuki actors, are supposed to endure the pain, if they discover that their spouse are cheating on them.

I would post soon:), Always procrastinating, got a few manga work, that I have to do first before the story typing :).

Wish me luck for trying to changed the governments mind of my program:)




Onoe Matsuya is like the voldemort of AKB48 hahahaha, Damn I just said the name.....

Oh no you didn't just say it! Voldy's going to come after you now that you outright spoke of his name  :twisted:. JK lol.

I don't really care whether Onoe is included in the story or not because... I don't care about him anyway but I did read an article saying that he's a player and there's a lot of things one has to endure without complaining once married into a kabuki family so I'm just worried for Acchan.

And for me: A love story about two girls with a good plot without any sex scenes > a story without any substantial plot between a guy and a girl making love throughout the whole fic. Anyone mature enough will understand that love isn't about sex or making babies. Takamina is a girl and will always be a girl so bending her gender won't ever change that fact.

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Pairings chosen on poll: Mayuki OMFG<3/Atsumina Hooray<3
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 12, 2013, 08:10:04 AM

@Tanchan yes hahaha I agree:)
@imteedee Sibling-chan:) Okie dokie
@lezperz Hahaha it is fine lez, no harm done...... I like voldemort too, awesome villian
@lezperz I am very stubborn, so I would fight till I get it, If I get a chance for the 6months trip, I am making a vlog for the school-days:), If I am always rejected, I have already applied for a 3months language school in Japan.

Hello guys, I am sorry about posting a Mayuki story first, before the poll-winning champions, but as I promised the last time, It would be a Mayuki first.

If the title is offensive, please PM me, I would changed it immediately

Still working on Atsumina, but it would soon be released.

Hope you enjoy, if not, no hateful comments hahahahaha.

Getting lunch first before typing another story:)




----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------



French Challenge



I had invited my best-friend, a.k.a my secret-crush, over to my house for a good-old sleepover, but as soon as she enters my pinkish-room, all she did was read her latest obsessed manga, ignoring that my presence was ever invented.

Annoyed and neglected at her constant laughter and smiles, I tried to occupy myself with a bit of distraction.

Firstly, I tried surfing the net, maybe watched a video or two on Youtube, however it was an epic-failure, as I kept passing my attention back to her as she loudly-laughs and jiggled her legs up and down.

Continuing my quest of “ignoring” her, I copied her moves, and read some Shoujo-ai manga, that were lying at my book-shelf, but they were dusty as hell, and for god-knows how long it has been sitting there.

Dusting the books with the back of my hand and coughed as dust enters my nose, before pulling open my favorite novel, flipped to the pages of desire, and started reading from head to bottom.

However as I was progressing with the chapters, I would constantly feel unavoidable presences of concerned glaring eyes starring towards me, which burns my concentration ever so slightly.

Vanquishing the bone-chilling imagination, I resumed my comic and was soon reaching the end.

But when I was reaching to the memorable kissing-scene, I was rudely disturbed, when Mayu slams her Manga down loudly, speaking to me angrily.

“Yukirin!” She increases her volume, with an angry mark pulsating on her forehead “You invited me over to your house, so that you could ignore me and read your…. Whatever ass-manga”

“But…” I tried to objected, by was silenced by her silky index-finger, which covered my moisten-lips.

“No excuses, Lov.....Young lady” She replied, before jumping to my bed, and calmed down, as she declared a proposal “Let’s play a game, Yukirin” Pulling the sleeves of my shirt, with puppy-like eyes, that I couldn't deny whether I liked it or not.

“What game would you like to play, Mayu?” I replied, looking at her, while she insert her finger into her mouth, and smiled in delight.

Didn’t that finger just touch my lips?, I thoughtfully dreamed, but blasted it away, knowing that Mayu would never do something so sinister.

“I don’t really know, any interesting game, Yukirin, why don’t you suggest one?”

We just sat, glaring at each-other, as if the other person had any idea of a reasonable game.

But as I sat to really think, I came up with a devious-game of my own, and declare the thought

“Mayu….” I smirked “Do you want to play an interesting game, which I just created”

Interested in the idea, she shifted her position closer, before curiously replying “What is it, Yukirin”

“Let me ask you a question first, who.....what is your most favorite character in your…..” I starred angrily at the Hetalia manga “That manga” I pointed, unable to say the name.

“Hmmm…… I guess…..Mr.France?”

I sighed in annoyance and maybe a pinch of jealousy “Okay……, Since you like ....France, we would be doing everything French for this activity”

“Like?” She asked.

“Firstly, we could try speaking it” She agreed with a nod "Let's start"

“Bonsoir Madame” I started off, with a simple french saying for, Good evening, which I learned from Mayu’s constant mumbles.

“Bonsoir Madame” She replied, with the literally the exact same words, hence forcing me to come up of another.

Rubbing my inventory for French words in my brain, I remembered another phrase from school.

“Comment allez-vous?” Meaning "How are you".

“Très bien, merci” Repling in affluent tone.

Beating relentlessly around my brain has made me realize that the winner, has already been decided. “Okay, Mayu.... you win”

“So, what is next Yukirin” She grinned, knowing her capability of doing anything so called "French".

“Hmmm…… let's see who can eat the most French-toast and fries in 5 minutes”

“Okay” She agreed, as we departed for the supermarket and purchased the required ingredient, before returning back home, and started cooking.

Finishing the appetizer, we washed our oily hands, and sat down on the table, in preparation for the challenged

Each of us, has around 50 pieces of triangle-shaped French-toast and a bundle of salt-fries. Readily packed for the challenged, we also had 5 glasses of water, for fast-relived.

“Ready” Mayu said, as she set the timer, for 5 minutes “Go”

Chugging the food down my throat, was crazily difficult, but as I progresses on to my tenth piece in seconds, I saw that Mayu, was only at her first.

Laughing in my mind, I quickly munch down the fries along with the toast.

Reaching to my final tenth pieces, I checked the timer, indicating that I have another 10 seconds, before finishing.

“10,9,8,7,6,5” The timer sounded, in a robotic-monotonous voice “4,3,2,1….Beep”

“Yipee” I cheered, looking over to Mayu’s plate, which was suspiciously the same “Mayu, why have you only finished a single french-toast and a handful of fries?”

“Well…… I didn’t want to gained weight, Silly” Mayu giggled as she saw my oil-infested face, widen in shock.

Stupid…Mayu, now I have to exercise intensively for a week….

 



After the previous challenge, I went to the bath-room and washed up, changing into my pajamas on the way, before proceeding back to my bed-room.

“So Mayu, you still want to play the game?” I declared, placing my arms on the door, in a somewhat seductive manner, having my bra-strap loosely dropping on my sides.

“I am sleepy, Yukirin!” Mayu turned her back, pulling a tissue from her purse, and weirdly wiping her nose.

“Come on, Mayu” I hugged her from the back. Starling by the sudden-movement, Mayu ran out of the room, before entering back minutes later.

“Ok Yukirin, just one more” She reluctantly agreed, sitting back on the queen’s size bed, that we were supposed to share.

“French-dancing?” I said, glaring at her redden-nose, with a slight touch of blood.

“Firstly, I don’t think we should be having lots of movement after bloating our stomachs, and secondly it is called “Baroque dance” not french-dancing”

“I don’t know anymore french-stuff, Mayu-chan, you got any idea?”

She shuffled her thighs as it she knew something, but didn’t want to say it.

“Mayu-chan… come on” I inched my face closer, starring at her darting eyes, as sweat dripping can be seen from close-range.

“Ermmm…..” She bit her bottom-lips, and blushed, tomato red “You want to…..French kiss?”

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated: I dislike France-san, but I love France (Mayuki)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on October 12, 2013, 01:35:50 PM

good idea mayuyu XD french kiss :cathappy: :twothumbs
lol yukirin has to do exercise for a whole week :lol:

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) Soon to update, longlonglong Atsumina story in the making
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 15, 2013, 09:11:49 PM

Hello guys, sorry for the long awaiting story, I have recently realized my stories are usually a complete failure.

Although I wanted to post the story as a whole, It would take me days before publishing, so I though I break it to bits.

I have already typed over 13 thousand words, but took a quarter for inspection before release.

Hope you enjoy the story, Going to bed.

I might not update this story after release, might post other couples first.

I hope this story isn't insulting to anyone.

Read my french story ^ !!!!, Lols

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------



(The big inside me)
Chapter 1


I was a loner, never had a friend in my life, except for my best-friend from junior high, everyone else who knew me, never wanted to befriend me nor wanted any involvement that requires my presences.

Life was a wrecking-hell, and living everyday was a torture that could never be repaired.

Students in my academy, were totally different from me, I wanted to be like them.

Although I always try my best to achieve their status, I would fail eventually as I have a compulsive addiction towards intensive exercising.

Anybody whom have gone through what I had, would have given up long before, but I will not, regardless of the challenges or difficulties that lies ahead.

But fortunately my life flipped around, after meeting my first-love.


--------------------------------


It was a particularly normal day, taking my usual route to school, I would definitely pass-by some of the cooler kids, and they would immediately cupped each-other’s ears, possibly whisper a hurtful gossip or a word of disgust, whenever I passed by.

I usually ignore their foul-mouth and went straight to school, passed the thorny gates, and jolted directly to class.

Arriving at class, I narrowly crossed my arrogant classmates, and sat impatiently on my appointed seat, waiting for our English teacher’s arrival

Moments later, after an unbearable loneliness, the teacher suddenly enters the class, clasping onto a large ebony suit-case along with her juicy-turkey burger, which was frequently prepared for her lunch-break.

Making her way to her table, she bumps items from left and right, collapsing tables and chairs.

Finally achieving her journey, she began greeting the class, thrusting her body forward, yet again spreading everything in her path, with her fat obese belly.

Straightening her position and unwrapping her burger, probably she couldn’t wait for lunch!, she announces an important announcement “Students” She roared, taking an enormous bite, barbeque sauce pouring down her clothing “We would be having a new-addition to our class, she is waiting outside, so please do be polite towards her”

“Atsuko-san, please come in” The teacher motioned her flabby arms, signalling for her to enter.

*Boom*

Foot-steps could on be heard, but it grumbled the floor, shaking it earthquake-style.

Walking towards the middle, her fat jiggled from her head to her toes, shocking every students with an awe.

“Did you see those babies” “Goodness gravy” “Mmmm…..I could eat her up with a spoon”

Oh….I forgot to mention this, but in our era, the year 2056, the fatter and oilier you are, the more famous and charismatic you will be considered.

“Good morning” Acchan bowed sumptuously, as I admired her bubbled tummy “I am Atsuko Maeda, Nice to meet you all, please take good care of me” Suddenly the class started banging the tables in rhythm, cheering cheerfully.

Students started suggesting or begging that she took a seat beside them, but unfortunately for them, the teacher appointed her placement, directly beside me.

She is beautiful…., I thought as she watered her way through.

“Hello, Nice to meet you” she welcomed, pushing her hand forward, indicating a hand-shake

“Nice to meet you too, my name is… Minami Takahashi....” I softly squealed in excitement, before returning the favor, by grabbing her palm, as soon as we made contact, I could literally feel my arm breaking, even before the hand-shake

After our short introduction, and a newly broken arm, we sat down silently, except for the screeching sound she produced while sitting down, and attended to our boring topics of English and Japanese



--------------------------------




A moment of sleepiness has sneakily ended the lesson, allowing me a short break.

As I knew my anatomy teacher would be currently making her slow-paced walk over to our class from the cafeteria, I used the opportunity to speak to the girl, that recently captured my heart.

“Atsuko-san” I shook her sleeves, hoping I am not disturbing her talk with the cooler-few “Hmm?” She responded, pulling herself away from them.

“Do you think?, we could” I blushed bright red, thinking why I am suddenly saying this, but my heart prompted me to do so “Have lunch together…” I scratched my head, ignoring darting glances.

“Sure thing, Minami-san, and please do call me Acchan, that is what my friends usually calls me” She replied politely, before being rudely interrupted by bullies.

“Stay away from her” A student named, Onoe Matsuya walks towards me, pushing me roughly to the ground. “You skinny anorexia bitch, don’t you are get near her” I grabbed my injured arm, and blamed myself for being so weak and thin.

Embracing my brain from expected verbal-abuse, as I usually experienced, I covered my ears and squeezed my eyes tightly.

Curling my body into a centipede form, and continued cursed myself for being born with high metabolism.

A bloodcurdling scream was suddenly sounded, finding the unexpected occurrence, I began slowly opening my eyes, although it wasn’t clear, I would depict a person whom was standing strong, his…. Or her hands were covered bright red, from paint…. Or blood!

Another was lying flat-down, red-substances leaking from the head-area.

Ominous feeling drenched my thoughts, I frantically rubbed my pupils for clarity, and immediately saw my saviour, …Acchan.

She stood there, glaring angrily at Onoe, signalling threatening motive through body-language.

Students from around quickly attended to their leader, but he yanked their helping hands, slamming the ground crazily.

Acchan just faced away from my enemy, and gave me a smile of reassurance, clutched my arms as we went back to our respective places, completely ignoring the minor incident.

-----------------------

*Slams*

The door slammed wide open, a panting person stood stationary at the front-entrance, inhaling oxygen with the typical in and out motion.

“Class….Arggg” She breathed in deep “I am sorry….Arggg….I am late” as she urgently went inside, still gasping air.

Before taking out a wad of paper, from her suitcase “Class, flip to page 195”, Everyone quickly flipped to the page “ Today we would be revising on our food pyramid”.

“As you can see” Miss Watanabe, our teacher’s name, took a chalk from the stand, and drew a pyramid, dividing it to 10 segments.

“Shinoda-san could you tell me what food, should be placed at the top” Mariko just chuckled and pointed at me.

“Takahashi-san could tell you the answer” She suggested.

“Well, Miss Takahashi, would you like to tell the class, what fo….item would be placed under the top category”

“Ermm…..” I gulped in embarrassment, feeling apprehensive “Whole-meal rice, noodles….and bread?” I replied, immediately the class started laughing and insulted me “You eat those, don’t you, Miss anorexia”

I covered my shameful face, weeping softly, but I felt warm-fuzzing grasp upon my hand, and I knew I felt secured

“Now class, you can’t just laugh at your classmate, just because she ate food from the unhealthy section” The teacher protested, before asking another “And would anyone like to tell me, what type of food, should we consume the most frequent?”

Everybody raised their hands, high up “Hmm….Akimoto-san, please tell the class your answer” pointing at the eager Class-rep.

“Chips, Burgers, Pizza and etcetera” Sayaka proudly said.

But unfortunately for her, the teacher wasn’t pleased with her answer “Wrong, that would be food at the moderate level!” She slams her book, harshly against the wooden desk “The answer should be, Chips, Burgers, Pizza and etcetera with extra oil and lard…” Miss Watanabe rubbed her temple “Please do study your homework....., Akimoto-san!”

After her little miniature mock-exam, we were quickly dismissed from class.

I packed by bags neatly, to avoid over-cramping, and went over to Acchan, seeing that she was engaged in a conversation with the others.

Although I wanted to gain her attention, somebody stopped me, and frown chili red.

Understanding the message, I decided not to interfere, and made my way out of this hell-hole.

I rushed back home, alone, and as soon as I arrived, I ran up to my bed-room, ignoring my concerned parents, screaming till my lungs burst, venting my anger on my pillow, bashing it with my fragile arms.

Why does everyone hate me.......

Tears made their way out, soaking my bed moist, as I lay motionless on my bed, swimming in thoughts, before slowly drifting my exhausted body to slumber.




--------------------------------------------------




“Arh…..!” I screamed, after dreaming a horrible nightmare.

Perspiring heavy sweats, I brushed it off with my blanket, and looked over to my clock on my right.

*7:15*

Another hour till school, I hastily prepared for school, with a power-shower, and a filling breakfast, which included scrambled eggs and sausages.

Completing the meal, I bid a farewell to my parents, and took a steady stroll to school.

Midway of the journey, I accidentally tripped onto something, falling flat on the ground, but fortunately broke the fall partially with the help of my hands.

“Hey!” Somebody screamed from behind, I tilt my head, and faced the person, I gasped as I recognized the culprit

“Didn't I say to stay the fuck away from her! You made a fool out of me yesterday” He kicked my stomach and my face, as blood started oozing from my nose, after inflicting injuries, he left with his gang, but not before pointing his middle finger at me “Remember, Fuck off…! Or you will regret it”

I rubbed my tummy in agonizing ache, I lay for a few minutes, motionless on the shivering concrete tarmac  “Are you okay? Takamina!” I glared at the incoming voice that was rapidly rushing towards me, realizing it was from my bestie, Oshima Yuko, I cooled off with a sigh “What happened to you?” she voiced her concern, looking around for bruises.

“It is nothing, Yuko, I just….fell down” I lied, covering injured areas.

“You do know that, that was the worst lie that have been ever invented” She smirked at me, pulling me to my feets, allowing her shoulder as support “If you don’t want to tell me, it is fine” She rummaged her pockets and pulled out a name-card “But call me if anything in particular, angers you…. I swear that person would regret ever being born”

“I think it is fine, Yuko, but I would accept the card anyway…” I took hold of the silver intricate card “Thanks”

“Since you are standing fine, I think I would get going” She patted my head “See you kiddo, I am rather late for an important date with Kojima, Bye bye, remember to call me!” waving to me for the last time, disappearing into the side of the corner.

“Good luck with your date” I mumbled to myself, wishing her best of luck.

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) The big inside me (Atsumina) Chapter 1: Updated *Sleepy*
Post by: lezperv on October 15, 2013, 10:37:23 PM

What kind of world did you just created???!!! Being fat is cool? WTF?!!! LOL. hey nothing against fat people since I"m fat myself, but it was just really funny that, that can be the future XP

I figured Minami was thin the moment you talked about exercising. I really cannot, and let me tell you, CANNOT!!! ever imagine Atsuko being fat lmao that is just a really weird image, but other than that... I WANNA BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF ONOE!!! HOW DARE HE INJURED MY MINAMI!!! *runs around looking for him* He better not show up or he's dead!

anyway, I hope you can update soon  :luvluv1:

Title: Re: Short mini fun-story:) The big inside me (Atsumina) Chapter 1: Updated *Sleepy*
Post by: cisda83 on October 16, 2013, 01:09:18 AM

OMG Minami being bullied by the classmates and that 'guy'

Well true... She got Atsuko's initial attention but would that develop into anything?

Well Minami do tell authority about your bully...

Why is she anorexia?

Was she sick or what?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the interesting 1st chapter

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Zorx's storytelling/The big inside me(Atsumina) Ch1 Updated:15/10/13
Post by: Archer1992 on October 17, 2013, 06:25:16 AM

WTF!!!

hahahahahahahahaha Atsuko Fat that is....X.X

i cant imagine....

continue soon

thanks

Title: Re: Zorx's storytelling/Changed of plan, Tomoyuki tomorrow, Mayuki story today
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 17, 2013, 08:18:51 PM

Hello guys, if there is anyone reading  :cry:, I have finally produce another story after a long while.

Next story is obviously Tomoyuki, so please keep a sharp eye on this couple, reason for the pairing would be included at the end of the story.

The fat inside me, would pause for a while, as I have a schedule for pairings that rotates its shift.

Seems like my stories are getting less funny, and more crude hahahahaha

(Almost all the same)
@lezperz: It   -   for   -   to   -    her   -   simply   -   is   ---------- Thanks
@cisda83: is   -  Acchan's  -  ever   -   being    -   because  -  perfect   --------------- for
@Archer1992:hard -   fans  -  imagine   -   plump    -   she                                    ------------ commenting

Enjoy the story:),


ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo



(Treasure at the sea)


I dived into the dark ocean with a fully-loaded oxygen tank, swimming deep into the core, searching for the lost pyramid of Loza, an ancient mystery, that hasn’t been solved for millenniums.

A handful of dozen groups attempted, but no news of them, were ever heard of again.

Tagging along in this formidable journey was my junior apprentice, Kashiwagi Yuki, a dimmed witted girl, with a passionate heart for puzzling solving. Her duties as an assistant was simple, prepare my bags for adventure and cook my meals, and maybe just for my guilty pleasure of looking under her skirt.

Switching our brightly lidded torchlight, we began looking for the structure, we passed by wrecked boats and ships, and found a few hidden buildings, but not what we were looking for. Since patience wasn’t my strong points, we proceeded wandering in a mindless quest for slightly longer. Tired and feed-up we agreed in signal to rusticate the plan, and surface back to shores, surrendering our on-going 6 months search.

We followed the ropes, back to our boat, but fortunately stumbled upon our objective “Chhh….Watanabe to Piggy…Watanabe to Piggy…do you copy, I repeat, do you copy!” I spoke to the microphone attached to my neck.

“Copy that, what is your report? Over!” Our team leader, Atsuko Maeda questioned

“Objective spotted, unlock the ropes”

“Affirmative” Our ropes increased in length

“Pull us back up, when I signal with a tug, this might be a live and death situation we are facing! so please do remember not to wander about your wants”

“Roger that, Good luck”

Doing our short prayers, we dived straight to the only opening, entering the zone, we were slightly surprised that it wasn’t submerged in water.
 
Knowing that the pyramid has phenomenal power, we ignored our scientific theories and continued our quest for the Delena’s Throat, a faience that was craved in gold, said to contain a form of liquid, which could grant the possessor, immortality.

Yukirin and I removed our helmets and began wandering in amazement.

I flopped my bag down, kneel beside it and unzipped the zipper, stunned by the unexpected occurrence, I spilled the little contents straight to the ground. No food, no water, no weapons.

“Yukirin!” I shouted “Look!” she swapped her attention from the tomb to mine. “Opps” She rubbed her head, smirking “I forgot!”

“You didn’t packed it! because you were watching Sharknado, right?” I accused, wandering why she was obsessed with it “Of..f. Cause not”, guiltiness spreading across her face like butter.

Since there wasn’t a point in fighting, we used the best of the situation, luckily for us, I coincidentally left my detector inside.

"You are lucky I left an essential equipment with us" she just rolled her eyes.

I dragged it out, and started locating with its futuristic scanner, “Beep” It sounded, and a map was created, I just simply followed the route. On our threading journey to the center, we fight ogres and mummies with the help of traps or devious schemes, that involves unfortunate peddles of stone.

We moved faster, as we noticed that we were only inches away from the goal, sprinting around the labyrinth we sudden stopped in our paths, gazing at a huge barricade, which was the last thing standing in our path.

A collection of skeletons laid motionless on the ground, seeing as dust and webs were blanketing them, we came to a conclusion that it had decayed centuries ago, the same time as another group of scavengers who agreed to crossed the path.

There was also a large slab of stone, lying straight up, but its puzzles was engraved in reversed, the words were 1+1=, easily depicted when I slanted my head downwards. A chisel and a stone-hammer were stationary on a stand.

Suspecting it was a trick-question; I rubbed my chin and tried figuring the answer.

Just as I was soon unraveling the brain-teaser, Yukirin pushed me aside, probably unable to hold her temptation. "Yukirin Stop!" I demand, but she ignores my pleaded, took hold of the equipments and knocked a number one.

"RUNNNN!!" I screamed, firmly grabbing her arms, pulling her for escape, as spikes and arrows emerges from every direction, a tunnel too opened, releasing burning hot magma.

We scrambled our way quickly to the entrance with enough time of escape, understanding that the current flowing from the outside, was enough to burst our guts, we took hold of the rope and gave it a strong tugged.

Please be quick, Acchan!......

Nothing......., still positive we tried again, but to no avail, the magma rounded the corner, and was now on its way to our death.

"Pull the ropes, Acchan!" Those were my last few words, as we both disintegrated to ashes.







(In the beach)

Acchan and Takamina rested comfortably on the sands, an umbrella covering their sun-screened skins, "Takamina" she poked her sides.

"Hmm?"

"I can't solved this puzzle, could you help me...." Acchan passed over her magazine to Takamina for inspection, after a moment, Takamina grinned, "You see this" she pointed to the quiz '=1+1', "The answer is 1 + 1, Silly"

"So it is 1+1=1+1" Takamina nodded for confirmation, as Acchan took back her magazine, and flipped to her second challenge.

"Don't you have to look after the ropes and walkie-talkie?" Takamina added, worrying about her friends.

"Don't worry about that, I am pretty confident they are fine, just listen to this" She reached over to her mechanism, switching it on, instantly a shuttering scream echoed "Pull the ropes, Acchan!...... I don't know whether it is a good time to tell you this,... but I have... always love you,Yukirin.......Arghh.....Chh...." we stared at each-other in disbelieve.

"Let's head home" We acted natural

"I agree"



ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo




(Mini-game, answer if you haven't already came across this riddle)

The sphinx, a mythological creature, pushes its claws towards, your throat, but stopped "Answer this riddle, and I would spare your life" Its said

"What creature, walks on four legs in the morning, two at noon, and only one at night?"



-Would appreciate, I would appreciate, a Thanks:) *Greedy face*

Title: Re: Zorx's storytelling/Read! The big of us & Treasures at the sea, Updated
Post by: hikari_043083 on October 19, 2013, 02:31:11 AM

If your question said three legs at night, then the answer is a human. At the beginning of life (the morning), he crawls as a baby on all fours. During the middle of his life, he walks on two legs (noon), and at the end of his life (the night), he walks with a cane (three legs). I think I came across this when playing Chrono Cross. However, your question said one leg at night. Either this is a typo or the sphinx is trolling and/or giving us a hard time. *scratches head*

Title: Re: Zorx's storytelling/Read! The big of us & Treasures at the sea, Updated
Post by: cisda83 on October 19, 2013, 02:35:32 AM

okay so Mayu and Yukirin... died in the water

While Atsuko and Minami having fun on the beach...

And They don't care about whatever happen to Mayuki...

or they misunderstand the last conversation between Mayuki...

Very weird and confusing... ending...

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Zorx's storytelling/Tomorrow update^^, Posted mini stupid story
Post by: cisda83 on October 20, 2013, 01:32:39 AM

Interesting organ room?

Serial killer or medical lab?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Zorx's storytelling/ 2 Stories, Mayuki , Updated, Ch2 for kryptonite coming~
Post by: ZorxCemoon on October 22, 2013, 01:29:45 PM

Gradually my readers are decreasing in numbers, sad  :bleed eyes:
Anyways I wouldn't be able to post anything soon, I got an interview for a job this Friday, if successful I would be working for long hours.
Since nobody was reading the Kryptonite and Unsatisfied fan, both are already deleted.

x

Playful words




[Atsumina]

“Takamina, what do you like about me?”

“Well, nothing at all”

“What!”

“Because I love everything about you!”

“Yuck! Too mushy”




[Mayuki]

“Which cup of noodles would you like, Mayuyu?”

“What flavours are there, Bakarin?”

“Hey!- Erm… Curry and Chicken”

“Hmmm….Can I have your milk cup instead?”

“Ehhh......Pshh come follow me”




[Kojiyuu]

“What powers would you wish to have, Yuko?”

“Hmmm….Time Stopping! That would be so awesome!”

“Why not immortality or teleporting?”

“Cause I want to grope you, 24/7 with you knowing hehehehe….”

“You do know that, you wouldn’t be able to move if you pause time”

“Why not”

“Because air and other gaseous gas would also be stopped, thus making it solid hard”

“Immortality then…”

“That would be a horrible choice!”

“But you recommended it! Besides what is so bad about living forever!”

“Well immortality allows you to live forever without dying, however you are still an ordinary weak human, can could be easily locked up in a dungeon, tortured for eternality”

“You have been hanging out with Mayu for way too long…”




[Saeyaka]

“Sae-chan, do I look like a male?”

“Erm…. A little”

“Hey!”

“A beautiful male?”

“That isn’t any better”

“A male with breast and vagina? Sounds better?”

“Of course not!”

“A male trapped inside a female body?”

“No, it is getting worse every minute!”

“A beautiful male gorilla with breast and vagina, trapped inside a female body?”

“Now we are talking…..Ugh..ha”




[Tomotomo]

“Tomomi!”

“Yes darling?”

“Tomomi!”

“Yes?!”

“Tomomi are you listening to me, or not!”

“Tomochin, I heard you the last time, so what is it?”

“Oh! I wasn’t calling you, I was calling myself, but apparently I wasn’t responding to the call”





[Mariko and Maachan][Does who don't know Manami Oku, check her out in videos, although she was only in AKB for a short time, she is literally some of the cutest thing!, I pair them up because of a few videos of them being together and neat photoshots.][P.s. to all Marimii fans, I don't get the connection between them, rarely saw a photo of them or video.]

“Oku-chan, you want to have sex today?”

“I am still 13!, Mariko”

“Come on, what about a little fingering?”

“No! that is illegal”

“Caressing?”

“No!”

“Who are you calling?”

“Child abuse!”

“Okay! Hmph! No kisses for you then!”

“Mari-chan! Don’t be like that! You know I like your smooches”

“Never! You can continue contacting them”

“Hmmm….I guess…. Caressing is fine…”

“Jackpot!”




[WMatsui]

“Mom! Rena and I are getting married, she proposed to me yesterday!”

“Ohhh- That is bad news!”

“What’s wrong?”

“Take a seat on the stool, Jurina, we got to talk”

“So, What’s is it you want to discuss about?”

“Well….I didn’t have the courage to tell you before, Rena-… is actually.. your long lost sister!”

“That-that can’t be-e true!”

“I am afraid it is honey, we had to place her in the orphanage to survive”

Bu-but…..No-oo!! Thi-is can’t be-be happ-pening!”

“Obviously she isn’t your sister, she is far too pretty”





x

This version of "Playful words" would popped up, as time goes by, It's just mini-fun stories.

Enjoy.

Title: Re: Zorx's fun stories:), Playful words UPDATED 22/10, [Lots of pairings]
Post by: lezperv on October 22, 2013, 04:23:07 PM

lol Zora, I don't read the other ones cuz they are not Atsumina, its not cuz you lost readers, okay?  :heart:

You made the Atsumina one hella short X3 but its super cute and cheesy nonetheless haha  XD

good luck on your interview  :twothumbs

Title: Re: Zorx's storytelling/ 2 Stories, Mayuki , Updated, Ch2 for kryptonite coming~
Post by: imteedee on October 23, 2013, 10:05:50 AM

Quote from: ZorxCemoon on October 22, 2013, 01:29:45 PM

Since nobody was reading the Kryptonite and Unsatisfied fan, both are already deleted.

this practically turned me off in my honest opinion, love your work, we don't write because we're expecting anything from the readers, appreciation may come in the end as consolation, but I write cause I wanted to, in the name of 'sharing'.

and don't ever think no one reads your fics, take a closer look on your 'thread views' Unless you're the one 'refreshing' your page. I don't intend to offend anyone in here. I'm just expressing my opinion, and this goes as well to the future ones who intend deleting their 'work of art'.

more powers, ZorxCemoon

Sincerely,
imteedee :deco: