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Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated:Sorrows (Mayuki) Going to sleep, nite ^^
« Reply #20 on: October 05, 2013, 09:53:42 PM »
Lol again xD

But wait, how come Mayu didn't noriced it wasn't Yuki dead on the hospital bed? ><

Thanks for the update o/

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Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated:Sorrows (Mayuki) Going to sleep, nite ^^
« Reply #21 on: October 06, 2013, 04:02:09 AM »
I imagined that, I just wanted to make sure ><

Hey Zorx,you did not fail! It was nice :) really. With an unexpected end. Don't be so harsh on yourself ;)

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Hope you enjoy the story, :)

I am tuning in for the night again, sorry for any mistakes, too sleepy to think properly

Next story, an Mayuki story, any request please, PM or comment.

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(Takamina, Acchan, Onoe Matsuya)

(TAM Story)




Acchan laid her emotionally drained body on her cushy pink bed, her conscious was clear, but was projected on her brightly lighten screen of her cell-phone. She has been starring blurry at a certain message, that was sent out 12 days ago, but was never replied

Slowly drained into thoughts, she browsed her mind for a reason as to why her best-friend had started avoiding and ignoring her. As she was about to dig deeper, her train of thoughts collides to a halt, after her boyfriend called from below.

"Acchan, Dinners is ready" Onoe Matsuya shouted over, insisting that she bury some food down her throat.

Adjusting back to reality, Acchan instantly felt agonizing pain, erupting from her growling tummy, begging her intake.

Try her best to please her unsettling tummy, she left bed and went down the flight of stairs, instantly receiving the fragrantly aroma of broth soup.

Being guide by the familiar scent, she end up at the dining-room, finding 2 sizzling hot bowl of noodles, laying neatly on the tables, cutlery and serviette on the side.

"Onoe-chan can't you cook anything else, besides your Signature-Udon" Acchan chuckled, covering her mouth, as Onoe scratched his head, laughing along.

"You know I can't cook anything besides it" He replied, as untied his filthy apron, and set it neatly against the hill of the chair.

Preparing to dine, he dragged out his seat, and motioned for his bump to created contact.

But as he was about to do so, he paused for a second, a bulb popping out from his head, as he revert back to standing, shifting his position to Acchan's side, cupping her ears, and whispered a word of advice.

Hearing his suggestive wisdom, had formed a crescent smile on her face. Unable to hold back her gratitude, she flew to his arms, giving him a bear hug, before planting un-stoppable kisses on his chubby cheeks.

Loosening her grip, she hopped back to ground, zipping back to her room hastily.

Upon entering her confinement, she urgently reached over to her personal stash, pulling out her mobile, texting her friend a message of invitation.

Pushing down the send button, she literally felt a part of her soul, resting in relived, allowing her to properly focus on tending to her pitiful body.

Exiting her room, and leading back to the storey below, she immediately discovered that any presence of living being has vanished, however there was a note of absence, which was newly placed on the table.

Walking over, and unsealing the note, her face flustered, cherry red, as she began connecting the sentences.










Having finished the passage, she placed it back to it customary placement, and rested her body on the chair, patiently yet impatiently awaiting her expected guest.

Being at the placement of her chair, has gradually blurred her vision, dragging her paranoid mind, back to deep thoughts, but immediately vanquish, as she felt bubbling acid, burning her interior.

Ever holding the thread of hope, for her presence, Acchan continued jamming herself to her seat, battling the reckless war that her stomach has declared.

But every opponent has its breaking-point, and 15 minutes of starvation was her limit.

Disappointed in her incapability to endure hunger, she tightly grabbed hold of her chopstick in a defeat pose, sloughing her back, and arms on table for lazy support.

Pinching a string of noodles, she sling her hands towards her opening mouth, and was motioning it to be pushed to her tongue, but as it was in the midst of being completed. A light knocked echoing from the entrance, has ridiculously shocked her body, accidentally making her dropped her good food.

Devastated as she glare at the fallen food, she shed a tear of sadness, before slowly dragging her soon-to-be anorexic body, to attended to the call.

Turning the door-knob to the right, she swings the door slowly, and saw her unexpected guest, whom was busy previewing her lovely garden.

"Hello....Takamina" Acchan blurted as it was the only words that could be uttered, surprised that, she had made the effort of coming, despite avoiding her for nearly half a month.

"Oh.....Hi Atsuko-san" She bluntly replied, looking and sounding depressed, by the fact that she was even present at the place of her depression.

Affected by the change of honorific and mood, Acchan crushed her chest in hurt, but immediately releases her grip, not wanting to cause any awkwardness.

Inviting her guest graciously, Acchan helped Takamina with carrying her purse and plastic bag, placing both on her accustomed seat, as Takamina pushed out her shoes out, with the help of her toes, entering the estate, with her everlasting face of distress.

Immediately inside, she started looking around for a moment, before changing her frown to her normal expression.

Seeing as Acchan stood at the table, pulling out a chair and gesturing Takamina to be sited.

She obligate with the simple request, and took a seat, thanking Acchan with a light gesture, for her helpful assistance, before Acchan went to the other-side and got into her own seat.

As Acchan rested on her seat, she glared at Takamina, who was closely inspecting the food that was prepared, after clearer observation, she reached over to her plastic bag, taking out a blue plastic box, opened the lid and fed herself with her own made bento.

Knowing that Takamina's knowledge of her cooking was superior, she had came to a conclusion that Takamina might have a hidden grudge against Onoe-chan for reasons, that she didn't know.

Feeling the weird tension building around the diameter, Acchan tried lightening the mood, with her goofy smile, but was ignored as Takamina's concentration, was solely on munching.

Going along with the flow, Acchan took another string of noodles, but release it as Takamina suddenly spoke.

"How is life....Acchan" Hearing her usual nick-name has lighten the mood, and Acchan replied with a simple "It is fine" adding a smile for the heck.

"Erm..." Takamina cleared her throat, seemingly uncomfortable with the question that was about to be announced "How is your relation....progressing with Onoe Matsuya" saying his name, has created a weird twitch.

"It is fine, I guess"

"Do you like him?"

"Erm.....Of course...."

"Okay....." She clenched her fist, thus making it redden.

"Why do you ask?"

"I just wanna know..... nothing else...." Takamina tried looking normal, but her insides were tearing in a puddle of tears.

"Takamina?"

"Hmm?"

"Do you mind, If I ask you a question"

"Ok....."

"Why didn't you reply to my message that I sent out 12 days ago?"

"Oh.....My... phone was in repair for 2 weeks......" She lied, dishonesty was clearing showing on her face.

"I know you are lying, Takamina" Acchan cup her gently her the cheeks, but on instinct Takamina accidentally brushed her hands off

"Why should you care whether I avoid you..... I mean nothing to you" Her eyes started to moisten up, but held tightly to her tears.

"Why would you say that" Acchan felt hurt, wondering why she would have said that.

"Nevermind.....I am sorry..." Takamina continued clenching her fist, her sharp nails digging into her skin.

"What is wrong Takamina!"

"I said it was nothing!" She vent her anger through the volume of speech.

"Takamina! Please tell me what is the matter, I have never seen you this upset before"

Giving up to her crush, Takamina admitted "I am angry.....!"

"Of Who?"

"Myself"

"Why?"

Takamina immediately pushed her seat aside, standing straight up "Because......I was a coward........and ended up having you taken away from me...." she blurted, unable to face Acchan.

"But........." Acchan tried talking, but was cut short, as Takamina continued "I really hope that you would be happy with him, I am leaving now, please don't miss me" she walked straight to the exit, but she felt a urgent grip on her arm, before she was pulled to the other direction.

Following the laws of gravity, the pulled created momentum, thus tripping her onto a pair of strong arm, "Takamina I love you", Acchan suddenly proposed, shifting her face closer to Takamina, gradually pulling closer for a passive kiss, blurring Takamina's vision on reality.

In the midst of smooches, Takamina came back to her senses, forcefully pushing Acchan to the ground "How dare you! cheat on my feelings" she shouted, infuriated that Acchan has the guts of torturing her bruised soul.

"Harr? What did I do?" Acchan replied in high pitch,dumbfounded with the sudden accusation.

"You are dating that guy, and yet have the guts, to steal my first kiss" Takamina angrily thought, knowing that the kisses, meant nothing to her.

"What are you saying? I am not dating anyone......and that was my first kiss too....."

"But......But....the newspaper from 12 days ago, stated that you are dating......that...Onoe Matsuya" She shuttered

Acchan giggled, as she went over to the table, picking up the note that her boyfriend had written, "Read this"


Acchan

Good luck with your date with Takamina, hope that you finally confess your love for her, you big fat coward. hahaha

Anyways I am going out on my fifth blind-date, wish me luck, I just hope I don't get rejected for the fifth time. Touch wood

P.s Takamina can have my Udon, Don't really feel like eating my food cooking....



"But....But.... the newspaper?"

"What newspaper?" Acchan question, rather curious as how the newspaper has affected her relationship with the midget.

"This" Takamina unzips her purse, and passed the newspaper over to Acchan.

After moments of speed-reading, Acchan couldn't resist the laughter that she has been holding, for ages, as she was slowly read the papers.

"What are you laughing, Acchan" She pouted, pushing her lower lips in a cutely fashion.

"Read the name of the newspaper" Stretching her arm, transferring the paper over, Takamina gripped the paper tightly, as she squinted her eyes, for greater concentration.

*Morning intake, daily fake rumors to add a ding to your day*

Takamina looked over to Acchan, and let out a small giggle "Sumimasen ne"

"Acchan do.... you really meant it when you said you love me?"

"Of course I do silly, and I will show you how much I crave for you after dinner, just please allow me to finished dinner first" Acchan pouted, as she sadly glare at the cold-uneaten noodles.

"Okie dokie" Takamina happily declared, as she digs through her purse, picking out a nail-clipper, and started clipping her nails ,dropping her nails onto the cursed paper.

"What are you doing....*slurps*...Takamina" Acchan spoke, as she had a mouthful of noodles.

"I am getting prepared for tonight, can't do much with sharp nails"
« Last Edit: October 08, 2013, 12:51:05 PM by ZorxCemoon »
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

Yukirin :heart: Mayuyu
Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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That was um... idk how to say it... but good? I like how it was just a fake rumor and Takamina went berserk cuz of it hahaha

I definitely love the last part  :heart: You have to clip your nails to do stuff, yup, Takamina sure knows it :P

anyway, hope you write more about Atsumina :D
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Re: Short mini fun-story:) UPDATED:TAM Takamina/Acchan/Onoe Matsuya Story
« Reply #25 on: October 08, 2013, 11:55:30 AM »
whoa.. nice  :thumbsup

thanks for healing my heart zorx - san  :grin:

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Re: Short mini fun-story:) Updated: TAM, Takamina Vs Onoe Matsuya = Acchan.
« Reply #26 on: October 09, 2013, 02:06:16 AM »
Aww  I love it the final sentence

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Thanks for the vote guys, so the chosen pairings are: Mayuki and Atsumina.

Pwee that was fast, 1 day, 22 voters^^

How do I do another poll later in the future, cause I don't really know how to reset, PM me, *Kissy*

Would you guys like Onoe Matsuya in the story, or get him out?

Currently, lots of idea, but kinda long.

Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry.

im vote


KICK HIM OUT
 

and i will waiting for atsumina

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yeah, yeah, and make a smut one if you can

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Thanks for the vote guys, so the chosen pairings are: Mayuki and Atsumina.

Pwee that was fast, 1 day, 22 voters^^

How do I do another poll later in the future, cause I don't really know how to reset, PM me, *Kissy*

Would you guys like Onoe Matsuya in the story, or get him out?

Currently, lots of idea, but kinda long.

Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry.

You may include him as the villain :lol: or you may twist the real event round and turn him into a matchmaker like the other fic. Don't be so hard on him, guys.

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Thanks for the vote guys, so the chosen pairings are: Mayuki and Atsumina.

Pwee that was fast, 1 day, 22 voters^^

How do I do another poll later in the future, cause I don't really know how to reset, PM me, *Kissy*

Would you guys like Onoe Matsuya in the story, or get him out?

Currently, lots of idea, but kinda long.

Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry.

I like that you said "Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry"

I feel exactly the same way. The whole point of yuri is girl x girl, I don't understand why there are some people who made one of the girls a guy... Nothing wrong with it and to each their own, but it is seriously annoying to me *shrugs*

Btw, KICK HIM OUT!!! I don't want that kabuki actor to be in the story at all unless he is the villain like Tanchan had mentioned XD anyway Update Soon!!! Waiting for my AtsuMina <3
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KICK HIM OUT!!!

His appearing is just a nuisance!!!

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that comment really broke my heart  :on cloudeye:
sorry  :on cloudeye:

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What comment?

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What comment?
well, about make takamina is a boy  :lol:
but, everyone have their own opinion so, its okay :3

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I like that you said "Couples in the story, will never be male, sorry"

I feel exactly the same way. The whole point of yuri is girl x girl, I don't understand why there are some people who made one of the girls a guy... Nothing wrong with it and to each their own, but it is seriously annoying to me *shrugs*

Btw, KICK HIM OUT!!! I don't want that kabuki actor to be in the story at all unless he is the villain like Tanchan had mentioned XD anyway Update Soon!!! Waiting for my AtsuMina <3

Nee~ I agree with you! Why should author turn the girls into guys?! It's sucks yo! At the first thought I also like you~ I hate when people make Takamina into guy, but hey, what's wrong with me that suddenly writing a story titled Messy guy x Aggressive girl? <--- I wanna blame FLEAN coz making me to write this story LOL!! Because I get the inspiration from her! I read one of her stories that Minami as a guy and I start to like it, becoz.....It's so romantic when he's taking care of Acchan when she's pregnant! And I don't really like Girl x Girl sex scene, they must have 'dick' to make their lover satisfied~  :lol: Yeah~ I sound like a pervert now~ But who cares? I enjoy writing Takamina as a Guy and making Acchan satisfied by owning 'his dick' Nyahahahaah!!! :on gay:

I'm not trying to start an argument here, but I feel like you are only saying that to ease in the fact that you prefer dicks over p**sy. You really do not need a dick to satisfied a girl and love scene between 2 girls is really cute and romantic. I agree that it may be boring sometimes when a lot of author uses the same method for sex, but whatever a guy can do to a girl, a girl can also do that, but in a much more gentle and understanding way. If you wanna pull the dick comment again, well let me tell you, the girls could go buy a strap-on. There is never a need for a real dick nor will it ever be needed. If you gonna throw in some baby comments, girls can go to sperm bank for that or asked their friends to be a donor X3

Atsuko can own Minami in many ways or vise-versa even if they are both girls, which they are!



@blakwhite: you mean Ryuuka's comment?

@Tanchan: Hahahaha  :heart:

@Ryuuka: Hahaha, For lesbian, they actually don't like dick-like object to be penetrate into them, their P***y is quite fragile in actuality, and would prefer soft sex.

@no-chan: wow that is harsh, but I approve of it:)

@lezperz: hahaha I completely agree 100%.




I don't really know whether I would produce a comedy or funny skit (Story), reason being.


(Boring Problem, don't read if you want to save precious time, Just some personal problem)
I live in a country, in which, every male individual, who has reached the age of 18, have to commit to a two-years length of National service.
You could actually defer (Postpone) the army, if you have a valid reasoning.
I applied for deferment with a High School exchange program, but got rejected, because they say that the program to Japan for 6months to a waste of time.
But obviously, I am not a person, whom would slip pass my only opportunity in life, for some F**K up, forced service.

Pardon my french, but I am rather infuriated by the outcome.



I am working on a Atsumina story, and might or may not include the "Hated one", some request for him to be villians, for obstacle, or simply a matchmaker.
I meant, he doesn't seem like a bad person, but also not a very good person. I just dislike the fact that the two are so called "Together".
They already stated, he is like a playboy, and people whom are married to Kabuki actors, are supposed to endure the pain, if they discover that their spouse are cheating on them.

I would post soon:), Always procrastinating, got a few manga work, that I have to do first before the story typing :).

Wish me luck for trying to changed the governments mind of my program:)




Onoe Matsuya is like the voldemort of AKB48 hahahaha, Damn I just said the name.....

I hope things goes well for you in the government department. Glad you could "maybe" update soon on Atsumina  :heart:

LOL, I actually like Voldy than the kabuki actor :P
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^ =___= what's with the donor? It's not same yo, it's not came from Takamina's dick!:lol: *jokes* I will stop this now, sorry for my sudden tempered~ This is me after all~ I just throw my thought and yep~ I also don't like argument coz it reminds me back  about 1 year ago....when the first moment I'm being an author in here~ Such a hot issues~ I don't wanna remember back~ besides~ I'm Ryuuka~ Nyaha! XD Sorry for talking nonsense, I will stop in here~

Peace no war~   :jphip:

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By the way, I'm with you, I don't really like when girls turn into guys, but due to some authors successfully change my mind, I'm starting to love gender bend story, and it's not all about sex, but due to I'm the king of pervert before, all of my stories content smut, coz I'm the one who really love when my OTP make love towards each other, yeah, you can say that I'm a pervert, and I don't care, I love romantic stories it doesn't matter if it's the girls x girls or normal one, but I prefer normal one so that they can be married and have children~ Like My Messy Guy story~  I really love romantic stories.  XD

PS: Sorry coz making your thread as discussion, LOL! I will delete or remove this later~  :P

I totally understand what you are saying. I agree, if Atsuko is gonna have a baby, IT WILL BE TAKAMINA'S!!! lol, but since its fanfic you can always create a way for two girls to have a baby with their genes.

I'm also a pervert, a big one too, and I love romantic stories. Though the definition of gender bend for me is that the girl dresses/looks like a guy, but is actually a girl. I believe that is the correct definition of gender bending anyway. I don't mind when Minami were to become Kai or has to dress up as one, but by the end of all that, I want her to be a girl again to be with Atsuko. I don't know why people kept No3b as men in the end or how Minami was against it at first, but agrees to it later for Atsuko. Atsuko never asked you to do that Minami! Idk its just irritating to me. I appreciate them both as girls and I feel like that needs to be respected.

Btw, I think, I will eventually read your Messy x Aggressive stories since i'm running out of Minami girl x Atsuko girl stories to read X3

p.s. Sorry for taking your thread to a different direction ZoraxCemoon
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this conversation is not appropriate in this section... and please have some respect for Onoe, I believe he deserves some as well as Acchan  :) Anyway, they're just dating and not married... don't be too harsh :)
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I am working on a Atsumina story, and might or may not include the "Hated one", some request for him to be villians, for obstacle, or simply a matchmaker.
I meant, he doesn't seem like a bad person, but also not a very good person. I just dislike the fact that the two are so called "Together".
They already stated, he is like a playboy, and people whom are married to Kabuki actors, are supposed to endure the pain, if they discover that their spouse are cheating on them.

I would post soon:), Always procrastinating, got a few manga work, that I have to do first before the story typing :).

Wish me luck for trying to changed the governments mind of my program:)




Onoe Matsuya is like the voldemort of AKB48 hahahaha, Damn I just said the name.....



Oh no you didn't just say it! Voldy's going to come after you now that you outright spoke of his name  :twisted:. JK lol.

I don't really care whether Onoe is included in the story or not because... I don't care about him anyway but I did read an article saying that he's a player and there's a lot of things one has to endure without complaining once married into a kabuki family so I'm just worried for Acchan.

And for me: A love story about two girls with a good plot without any sex scenes > a story without any substantial plot between a guy and a girl making love throughout the whole fic. Anyone mature enough will understand that love isn't about sex or making babies. Takamina is a girl and will always be a girl so bending her gender won't ever change that fact.

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@Tanchan yes hahaha I agree:)
@imteedee Sibling-chan:) Okie dokie
@lezperz Hahaha it is fine lez, no harm done...... I like voldemort too, awesome villian
@lezperz I am very stubborn, so I would fight till I get it, If I get a chance for the 6months trip, I am making a vlog for the school-days:), If I am always rejected, I have already applied for a 3months language school in Japan.

Hello guys, I am sorry about posting a Mayuki story first, before the poll-winning champions, but as I promised the last time, It would be a Mayuki first.

If the title is offensive, please PM me, I would changed it immediately

Still working on Atsumina, but it would soon be released.

Hope you enjoy, if not, no hateful comments hahahahaha.

Getting lunch first before typing another story:)





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French Challenge



I had invited my best-friend, a.k.a my secret-crush, over to my house for a good-old sleepover, but as soon as she enters my pinkish-room, all she did was read her latest obsessed manga, ignoring that my presence was ever invented.

Annoyed and neglected at her constant laughter and smiles, I tried to occupy myself with a bit of distraction.

Firstly, I tried surfing the net, maybe watched a video or two on Youtube, however it was an epic-failure, as I kept passing my attention back to her as she loudly-laughs and jiggled her legs up and down.

Continuing my quest of “ignoring” her, I copied her moves, and read some Shoujo-ai manga, that were lying at my book-shelf, but they were dusty as hell, and for god-knows how long it has been sitting there.

Dusting the books with the back of my hand and coughed as dust enters my nose, before pulling open my favorite novel, flipped to the pages of desire, and started reading from head to bottom.

However as I was progressing with the chapters, I would constantly feel unavoidable presences of concerned glaring eyes starring towards me, which burns my concentration ever so slightly.

Vanquishing the bone-chilling imagination, I resumed my comic and was soon reaching the end.

But when I was reaching to the memorable kissing-scene, I was rudely disturbed, when Mayu slams her Manga down loudly, speaking to me angrily.

“Yukirin!” She increases her volume, with an angry mark pulsating on her forehead “You invited me over to your house, so that you could ignore me and read your…. Whatever ass-manga”

“But…” I tried to objected, by was silenced by her silky index-finger, which covered my moisten-lips.

“No excuses, Lov.....Young lady” She replied, before jumping to my bed, and calmed down, as she declared a proposal “Let’s play a game, Yukirin” Pulling the sleeves of my shirt, with puppy-like eyes, that I couldn't deny whether I liked it or not.

“What game would you like to play, Mayu?” I replied, looking at her, while she insert her finger into her mouth, and smiled in delight.

Didn’t that finger just touch my lips?, I thoughtfully dreamed, but blasted it away, knowing that Mayu would never do something so sinister.

“I don’t really know, any interesting game, Yukirin, why don’t you suggest one?”

We just sat, glaring at each-other, as if the other person had any idea of a reasonable game.

But as I sat to really think, I came up with a devious-game of my own, and declare the thought

“Mayu….” I smirked “Do you want to play an interesting game, which I just created”

Interested in the idea, she shifted her position closer, before curiously replying “What is it, Yukirin”

“Let me ask you a question first, who.....what is your most favorite character in your…..” I starred angrily at the Hetalia manga “That manga” I pointed, unable to say the name.

“Hmmm…… I guess…..Mr.France?”

I sighed in annoyance and maybe a pinch of jealousy “Okay……, Since you like ....France, we would be doing everything French for this activity”

“Like?” She asked.

“Firstly, we could try speaking it” She agreed with a nod "Let's start"

“Bonsoir Madame” I started off, with a simple french saying for, Good evening, which I learned from Mayu’s constant mumbles.

“Bonsoir Madame” She replied, with the literally the exact same words, hence forcing me to come up of another.

Rubbing my inventory for French words in my brain, I remembered another phrase from school.

“Comment allez-vous?” Meaning "How are you".

“Très bien, merci” Repling in affluent tone.

Beating relentlessly around my brain has made me realize that the winner, has already been decided. “Okay, Mayu.... you win”

“So, what is next Yukirin” She grinned, knowing her capability of doing anything so called "French".

“Hmmm…… let's see who can eat the most French-toast and fries in 5 minutes”

“Okay” She agreed, as we departed for the supermarket and purchased the required ingredient, before returning back home, and started cooking.

Finishing the appetizer, we washed our oily hands, and sat down on the table, in preparation for the challenged

Each of us, has around 50 pieces of triangle-shaped French-toast and a bundle of salt-fries. Readily packed for the challenged, we also had 5 glasses of water, for fast-relived.

“Ready” Mayu said, as she set the timer, for 5 minutes “Go”

Chugging the food down my throat, was crazily difficult, but as I progresses on to my tenth piece in seconds, I saw that Mayu, was only at her first.

Laughing in my mind, I quickly munch down the fries along with the toast.

Reaching to my final tenth pieces, I checked the timer, indicating that I have another 10 seconds, before finishing.

“10,9,8,7,6,5” The timer sounded, in a robotic-monotonous voice “4,3,2,1….Beep”

“Yipee” I cheered, looking over to Mayu’s plate, which was suspiciously the same “Mayu, why have you only finished a single french-toast and a handful of fries?”

“Well…… I didn’t want to gained weight, Silly” Mayu giggled as she saw my oil-infested face, widen in shock.

Stupid…Mayu, now I have to exercise intensively for a week….


 



After the previous challenge, I went to the bath-room and washed up, changing into my pajamas on the way, before proceeding back to my bed-room.

“So Mayu, you still want to play the game?” I declared, placing my arms on the door, in a somewhat seductive manner, having my bra-strap loosely dropping on my sides.

“I am sleepy, Yukirin!” Mayu turned her back, pulling a tissue from her purse, and weirdly wiping her nose.

“Come on, Mayu” I hugged her from the back. Starling by the sudden-movement, Mayu ran out of the room, before entering back minutes later.

“Ok Yukirin, just one more” She reluctantly agreed, sitting back on the queen’s size bed, that we were supposed to share.

“French-dancing?” I said, glaring at her redden-nose, with a slight touch of blood.

“Firstly, I don’t think we should be having lots of movement after bloating our stomachs, and secondly it is called “Baroque dance” not french-dancing”

“I don’t know anymore french-stuff, Mayu-chan, you got any idea?”

She shuffled her thighs as it she knew something, but didn’t want to say it.

“Mayu-chan… come on” I inched my face closer, starring at her darting eyes, as sweat dripping can be seen from close-range.

“Ermmm…..” She bit her bottom-lips, and blushed, tomato red “You want to…..French kiss?”
« Last Edit: October 12, 2013, 03:57:11 PM by ZorxCemoon »
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

Yukirin :heart: Mayuyu
Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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