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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: chroumia on November 28, 2013, 02:10:07 AM
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Hey… ehh.. so… I’m a new writer … And I’ve been thinking to make a story. But even if I make it, I have nobody to read it. So I thought it was useless… ‘But what if I make it into a fanfic and post it here?’ Is what I’m thinking right now. Of course I will change my original character to become member of the 48 family’s name. But some of their personalities will change. And my story… well it’s rather violence and heart-breaking. But I’ll try to make it not that heart breaking. :nervous
I’m a slow writer, and English isn’t my first language, so I will have many grammar mistakes. Well, here’s the prologue. :)
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In this world, there are 2 types of human being. The normal, and the guardians. Just like it sounds like, the guardians have duty to protect the normal ones. Their appearance isn’t different, but the Guardians have more strength and power. Each Guardian has to guard one normal. But there are also cases were a normal has two or vice versa. To have a Guardian at the age 16 is a mandatory.
I, Watanabe Mayu, 10 years old didn’t have any guardians yet. I am hopeless… I can’t do anything, I’m just waiting for a miracle to happen.
Dor!
I felt pain in my left shoulder. Without looking, I know that blood is flowing down to my left arm. It was an intolerable level of pain. Not only from the wound. But also from my heart. Kami-sama, what should I do? I beg you, please give me guidance. Please!
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Well, that’s enough for the prologue. There will be about 10 couples, but I’m not sure yet. Well tbh my characters are actually based on them. But there would be some genderbends. And maybe I would attach some of my drawings ~
So what do you guys think? Should I continue or try and make a normal fanfic?? :panic: :nervous
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Interest start
What happen to Mayu i wonder
Cant wait for the next ch
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interesting XD
Update soon :on gay:
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There say "Kojiyuu" so if Kojiyuu is here I must to read this fic xD its a good start! C:
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Sounds awesome can't wait to see what happens next :hee:
MaYuki,KojiYuu,WMatsui <3
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Yeay, It seems like I would continue this fanfic :D
For the couples.. MaYuki is main, and there would be WMatsui, Kojiyuu, AtsuMina, YuiParu...
and the most i-don't-know-why-I-made-them-as-a-couple is ... AnRiRe :sweatdrop: :nervous
I actually thought of other couples but... I'm not sure yet .
Well, thanks for the comments , it gave me a boost of courage :D :D
Here's the heart-breaking (?) chapter one
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Dor! I felt pain in my left shoulder. Without looking, I know that blood is flowing down to my left arm. It was an intolerable level of pain. Not only from the wound. But also from my heart. Kami-sama, what should I do? I beg you, please give me guidance. Please!
Tap, tap, tap.
His footstep is getting closer. And suddenly…
Brak!!
I receive a savage blow at my head.
I could feel blood flowing from my head.
I hate him. I really do. Why did everything became like this? Kami-sama … please stop it.
“Quickly choose you nothing-for-good! I’m giving you a choice to get out of this mess!! You hear me?!”
I give him a nod.
“Good, now hold this. It’s easy, just pull the trigger and you’re all done. Do you understand…honey?”
I give him another nod. “Yes… father”
Yes, my father. Since my mom died, he change. He is not the nice father I used to know. He became brutal. He became a mad scientist. He kept me at the experiment room and didn’t care for me. He would sometimes came to do some painful experiments at me. Injecting me with an unknown substituted that had many random kinds of effect.
And now, he is giving me a chance to get out of all these nonsense… To kill myself… or, to kill my innocence little sister who I love. My sister... Miyuki. She isn't a guinea pig like me. She was just… here with me… handcuffed while watching me suffer without able to do anything.
I gripped the pistol harder. My hands were trembling by its own. I’m scared. If I kill her… I could get out. But… but what should I do after that? I can’t even guarantee that my father will really let me out… But if I don’t… he would kill me… worst, he would make me kill myself. Kami-sama…
I aimed the pistol to her face. My hand is trembling harder, really, really uncontrollable. I’m so sorry. I’m sorry! Please! Don’t look at me with those eyes! I don’t want to kill you, but I also don’t want to die as well!
“I’m sorry! I’m sorry! I’m sorry! I’m so sorry! “
I kept on crying those words. Is this… really the right choice? I wish I could just shoot my father… But I can’t. He’s not at this room anymore. He’s over there, watching my movements behind the bulletproof glass. That damn mad scientist!
“Onee-chan… It’s alright. Kill me. ” Her soft voice made me come back to my conscious. Did she just said it’s alright?! The F*ck!? I’m going to kill her! What’s alright with that!?
“Onee-chan… I don’t want you to die”
And I also don’t want you to die, Miyuki.
“I love Onee-chan… I know that you’ve been bearing all those pain… so now, it’s alright to kill me, Onee-chan”
You’re wrong, Miyuki. Killing you would make me feel even worse. Especially now. All these things you’re saying, it’s already killing me. I could see her shoulder trembling. Her face, trying to smile… but I could still see fear in her eyes.
Dorr!!
I could see blood flowing out of Miyuki’s chest.
Did I just… shot her?
“Too bad huh, Mayu… You were too slow, so I gave you a little push” My father smiled while showing me a device that looks like a controller.
Blood was still flowing from Miyuki’s chest. Making a little red puddle around her collapsed body.
“You know, I’ve put some lii~ttle things to your right arm and eye. And this, is a device to control it. Convenience, right?” He smiled.
What? So in the end… I would still be in his control? I would still be his experiment doll? This is… It’s just… so… STUPID!!
I grabbed the pistol with my left hand and aimed it at my father’s head.
Dorr! Dor! Dor!!
The bullets didn’t make a scratch at the bulletproof glass. He just kept on smiling… F*ck! Am I really good-for-nothing!!?
“You know, Mayu… you’re smart for using your left hand that doesn’t have a controller… But still, I’m protected by this beautiful anti bullet glass you know?”
“Just die you old b*stard!!” Despite all the pain, I got up. I punched the glass with all my might. Hurts like hell!
“I’ll kill you!! I swear I will!!!” I cried as I kept on punching the glass with my bleeding right arm.
“Oh, my daughter is being scary. I’m so scared! Hahahha!” Damn b*stard!
Crack
“Eh?”
A crack was made on the glass. I did it! The thing he put inside my right arm made it stronger!
Crack Crack! Crack!!! I kept punching until it break.
“W-wait! Mayu! I’m your father you know!!” He ‘played’ with the controller.
Suddenly I felt a great pain at my right cheeks. Did I just punched myself!? F*ck him and these controllers! Making me looking like a stupid idiot hitting himself!
While I kept on punching myself, I forced my left arm to aim the pistol at him.
“Sayonara… b*stard”
Dorr!!
I shot him while punching myself… haha … I bet I look like a total idiot. At least, this is the last time I punch myself… right?
After all those bullsh*t, I ignored my pain while rushing to a hospital with Miyuki at my arms. She wasn’t heavy at all, of course, it’s because that b*stard rarely gave us any food. With the controller at my pocket, I kept on running. Miyuki… Don’t die… Please! Don’t!
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....... :banghead: well that was weird ... I'll make sure Yukirin will appear at the second chapter.
I'm sorry if it's weird :(
and... should I reduce the word f*ck and b*stard ? :nervous I think she said it too much...
Well the next chapter is about 5 years later . I hope you guys will like the story :grin:
comment please :cathappy:
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Milky died in the first chapter, that's amusing :nervous oh yeah, MaYuki main! :thumbsup
10 couples? whoops, that'll be long XD goodluck to you my comrade! and welcome! :welcome :jphip:
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mayu's father will go to hell :twisted: no!!!!!!!!!!! dont you dare let milky die!! :cry:
thanx for this :cow: :bow:
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imteedee-san : Kya~ Thank you ~ XD XD
mayuki_daisuki: Why of course :twothumbs
Chapter 2... was actually longer than this, so I divided into two and made the other one as chapter three. I hope you like it :D
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-5 YEARS LATER-
“Onee-chan, aren’t you going to school?”
“Un, if I feel like it. You should go now or you’ll be late for your club. Your Guardian is already waiting for you”
“E-Ehh? Why didn’t you tell me earlier??” She said while rushing to the door.
“I’m sorry Sayanii, did you wait long?”
Sayaka, her guardian is a handsome man. Though he’s not my type. At first I didn’t agree with him being Miyuki’s guardian, but from the look of it, he loves her. He already vowed to protect her. And he also knows our past and accepted us, so… good deal right? What I don’t really like is him being her boyfriend. Make her cry and I swear I’m going to kill him!
“No, not at all, darling” he answered with a smile.
I’m not sure if he already saw the scar on her chest but… I hope he will accept Miyuki as how she is. That scar… Was because of me, her own sister. But she didn’t hate me at all. She still love me.
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5 years ago, when I carried her to the hospital… No... Actually I didn’t. Not because I didn’t want to… but I can’t. My feet couldn’t move at all. I collapsed at the I-don’t-know-road with Miyuki at my arms. I don’t remember that much but, I remember seeing somebody coming closer. And then black. Everything went black.
I then opened my eyes. I was in a white room… At first, I thought I was at the experiment room. But after taking a better look, it was a patient room at a hospital.
“A… Hospital?” I tried to remember what happened before I collapsed. But the first thing that came to my mind was the blurry figure who bought me here. I have to thank him… or was it a she?
“I don’t remember at all…” I mumbled to myself. Suddenly, I heard the sound of a door opening.
“It seems like you’re awake, hm?”
Taller than me, with hair as long as her shoulder. She had beautiful eyes… but what made me amazed was her aura. It was like meeting a queen who rules a kingdom. She was gorgeous.
“Feeling better?” She asked gently. “Well, I hope you are, you’ve been sleeping for a couple of days”
“Ah, I’m sorry for all the trouble… My name is… Watanabe Mayu” I answered.
“Atsuko Maeda. It’s nice to meet you, Watanabe-san” She gave me a gentle smile. That smile… it reminded me of Miyuki. Where is she? Is she… alright?
“Maeda-san… H-How… is my… si-sister, Miyuki?” I asked like a scared dog. I could even hear my voice shaking.
“Don’t worry, she’s fine. Thought there would be a scar on her chest. You know, late for another minute and she could die. It was such a miracle, right?” She answered with a gentle smile.
Tears started to roll down my cheeks. “Ah… Thank you… Thank you for saving her…Thank you!” I said while crying happily.
“Mh? It’s not me who saved you”
“Eh?” I looked at her with a puzzled face.
“Yukirin. It was Yukirin who found both of you. She even carried both of you. Ahh, How I hope she would become my guardian” She smiled to herself.
“Y-Yuki…rin?”
“Un! Yukirin. Here, it’s her email and her phone number. She told me to give her contact to you” She smiled while giving me a piece of paper.
“D-do I have to contact her? Eh, where is Yukirin-san right now?”
“Of course, that’s why she gave you her phone number. Yukirin is… Well, you can’t meet her now, she’s not at japan …for now. She promised me she would come back after 2 years, so wait until she comes back, alright?”
That Yukirin-san… I think I’ve become friends with her via email, well, yeah, we are kind of close… We exchange message and mails almost each day. And from the look of it, it seems like she’s as gentle as Maeda-san but more energetic. She usually would ask me how I’m doing, did I already eat and others. But even though it’s been 5 years, I haven’t even met her… Well, I also haven’t met Maeda-san for about 2 years now. I wonder how she’s doing…
“Onee-chan, stop daydreaming!” Miyuki screamed at my right ear.
“Uwa, Miyuki?? Aren’t you going to school?” It seemed like I was remembering about my past for a while.
“There’s no way I could go if I haven’t give my Onee-chan a kiss bye”
Chu~
She kissed me at the cheek.
“Love you sis, I hope you go to school. Bye-bye!” She said while leaving.
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Okay, The next chapter is the 3rd chapter: The Meeting.
Oh.. and.... how do we insert pictures? :? :?
Can anybody tell me? please... :panic: :nervous
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Noooo... I want more :bleed eyes:
I wonder when Mayu and Yuki meet each other
Cant wait for the next ch
Thx for the update
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Wow.... I didn't realize there is two more chapter.... :? Wonder when you post them..
First of all, chapter 1, I felt sad for Mayu and I want punch that dad. :banghead: but he is dead already so don't have to waste anymore energy.
Chapter 2!!!! Finally Yuki came out but didn't really show up only being mentioned...... Yuki where are you?
Update soon!!!! I want them meet.
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If you want to put images just write this "img" Between Square Brackets (without quotes) then the link of the image and close with "/img" between square brackets (again withour quotes)
hope this can help you :nervous
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Kirizoro: I'm in the mood to write, so I think I could update tonight or maybe tomorrow XD XD
Haruto Lee: Sure , I also want them to meet ASAP :lol:
Abcari : Thank you, let me try it :)
(http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/332/f/c/be_careful_sis_by_chroumia-d6w1hng.jpg)
It works, :thumbup :D
That was the first time I draw Milky and Sayaka ... I hope it's good enough :sweatdrop:
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okay so here comes Yukirin saving wWatanabe and flies abroad LIKE A BOSS!
I love Yukirin already XD I see some AtsuMayu service there :inlove: and SayaMilky are together already. I sense FLUFF! :nervous
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TD : lolol :lol: yep, it's going to be full of fluff XD'
cuz I love fluffy cute things...
Chapter 3: The Meeting
Chu~
She kissed me at the cheek.
“Love you sis, I hope you go to school. Bye-bye!” She said while leaving.
Ugh, that Miyuki… Why is she not ashamed to do that in front of her boyfriend? She’s always so energetic and courageous. I envy that. About a year after the abuse ended, she decided to go to school… While I didn’t. I wasn’t ready to face the social. Yet, why is she so brave?
“Huh… Is she really my sister” I sighed.
I have been going to school since last year. Of course I had to redo a year, but that made me the same year as Miyuki. She’s a smart girl, so she skipped a year. I could do that as well, but my absent didn’t allow me. And I think it would be better if I was in the same year as Miyuki. Well, at least my brain allowed me to have scholarship for high school. It’s already the 2nd month of our high school. Maybe I should go to school. I packed my things, tied my hair and not forgetting to wear my cat hoodies.
After checking my books I locked the door and walked to my class. I opened my hand phone.
1 message.
From: Yukirin-san
Mayu-chan~! ^_^)/ Have you ate your breakfast? Are you going to school? Don’t force yourself. :)
I quickly made a reply to her message.
To: Yukirin-san
I have, thank you for always worrying about me :) What about you? When are we able to meet?
From: Yukirin-san
Someday, my love. Be patient, okay? I also want to meet you again*wink ;)
To: Yukirin-san
Eh? What do you mean by love?? >//<; Ugh… You said 'again', even though I’ve never met you… Fine… I’m already near my classroom, where’s my good bye kiss? :(
From: Yukirin-san
Mayu-chan is asking me for a kiss?? ^_^) Kyaa, that’s so cute~ It’s usually me who would force a kiss message. Anyway, Chuu~ :********************************
To: Yukirin-san
That’s too much! Baka!! >///<)/ but thank you anyways… messages from you really increases my courage. Thank you :*
From: Yukirin-san
Kya~ you kissed me?? >///<) It makes me want to see you right now! Be careful on your way, don’t forget to use your hoodies :*
Yes, my hoodies… I don’t really like the sun, it’s shining so brightly. Thanks god this hoodie would always protect me. It was a gift that Maeda-san gave to me… Well, not from Maeda-san, but from Yukirin-san. Maeda-san said that Yukirin-san gave it to me. Hmm… I wonder how Yukirin-san looks like…
Suddenly the wind breezed gently. But it slapped me with a piece of unknown paper.
“Ugh… what is this…?” It seems like there was more than 1 paper that was blown by the wind. The paper seemed like a mathematic homework. It has nice handwriting on it.
“Somebody! Please catch the papers!” A familiar voice shouted.
“Why should I?” I shouted back.
“Eh-Eh?? Onee-chan?” The voice change, it was Miyuki. She was at the second floor. It seems like the papers got blown out of the window…
“Eh? Miyuki?” That means these paper are hers… I hurriedly chase the blown papers. As if the wind was playing with me. It made the paper dance elegantly.
“Got it! One more left!” I said to myself. The last one was stuck on a branch of a tree.
“Ugh, such a pain…” But still, I would do anything for my sister. I tried to throw it with rocks but… My aiming is so bad. But it was better than climbing it, so I kept on throwing rocks to the tree. Suddenly,
“Ouch!”
I think it hit somebody… Wait, why is there someone on top on a tree??
“U-Uwaa!”
Brak!
“Ouch…”
A girl… a senpai fell down the tree. “Ouch, why did you hit me?” she asked with teary eyes.
“I-I’m sorry senpai… I didn’t know you were there, I was trying to get a paper that was stuck over there and-“
“Eh? Paper? Where is it, let me get it for you” She suddenly climbed up the trees again and then jumped down.
“Is this it?” She handed me the paper.
“Y-Yeah… I think it is” I took a glance at her. She was a beauty. Black eyes, wavy hair tied a bit to the left. Beautiful lips…
“Eh? I think I’ve seen you before… Ah! Is your name Watanabe Miyuki?” She asked me while moving forward, pointing to the sheet of paper with Miyuki’s name on it.
“N-No… This is my little sister assignment that got blown by the wind…” I answered while taking a step back.
“Then, are you perhaps… Watanabe Mayu?” She asked me with shining eyes.
“Eh? How do you know my name?” Now this is suspicious. Who is she?
“You’ve grown up so much!” She suddenly gave me a big hug, making me falling down. W-wait?? Who is she???
“We could finally meet! It’s me! Yuki! Kashiwagi Yuki!” She kept on hugging me with a huge smile on her face.
I don’t remember that name at all. But somehow it seemed familiar…
“Kashiwagi Yuki… Yuki… Yuki...rin-san?” No way, this beauty is Yukirin-san? The person who saved my life? The one who sends me messages each day?
“Un! It’s me ~!” She giggled. “I didn’t think we could meet 5 minutes after sending those messages” She hugged me tighter. Her fragrance… She smells so fluffy.
This meeting… I’ve been waiting for 5 years, and she just came from a tree… A weird person who saved Miyuki’s and my life. Then went aboard. The one who sends me message and cares for me. My savior, Is such a beauty.
I… I think… There’s something wrong with my heart. Why is it beating so fast?
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“Ne, Yuko, Isn’t that your friend with Yukirin over there?” Haruna asked while holding Yuko’s hand.
“Eh? Did they finally meet each other? Uwa, look at them! They look so lovey-dovey!!” Yuko said.
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I hugged her back, she was the person I wanted to meet the most!
“Yukirin-san… I’ve been waiting for this day!” I said with a huge smile on my face.
“Un! Me too!” Without a reason, we suddenly laugh together.
(http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/332/4/7/the_happy_ones_by_chroumia-d6w1hz1.jpg)
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Yes, I love fuwa fuwa's. 8)
I think it was actually wierd for them meeting like that... but oh well :nervous
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There say "Kojiyuu" so if Kojiyuu is here I must to read this fic xD its a good start! C:
yep i saw kojiyuu too soooo... TADAA!!! IM LURKING HERE TOO XD :heart:
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ONE DOES NOT SIMPLY COME FROM A TREE...
LIKE A BOSS.
Uwa~! they met! :lol: oh that MaYuki flirty messages :wub: :inlove: :w00t: Love it! XD
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You update really fast. :twothumbs
I thought Yuki was an adult. :nervous
And Mayuki finally met. :heart: I will be looking forward to the fluffiness. See you soon. :lol:
Nice drawing.
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Fast update...
I want to know what happen next..
Update soon, please... :bow:
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waaaaaah! so fluffy *//////////////*
I like it <333333333333
and the best: you update fast :twothumbs
I can't wait for the next chapter :cathappy:
ahh a question... WMatsui will be both girls? ;A; I say this because you made sayaka a boy ;A;
pls! I want them to be girls :cry:
~ Ja!ne ~
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Youre welcome! good you can post images now :'D good drawings! and good chapter! My kojiyuu is there!! is there!!!
Kojiyuu call us, right Tam_atsu san? xD
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Tam_atsu : Don't worry, I already prepared a story for them ;)
TD : Thanks, I was thinking that their relationship escalated quickly.. But it's because I like fluffy things between my fav couple ~
Konoe : Yep, I'm in a great mood to write :D Thank you~
Tupi : My calculation says 12... well, I'm bad at math, so I hope I didn't miscalculate :nervous
olive29 : Sure xD
Koneki : Thank you~ About my fast update, It's because I'm in the mood to write... but next week is my Middle Semester Exam, so I don't think I could update as fast as this ... I'm sorry :( For the WMatsui, your wish is granted~ lol. ;)
abcari : Yep, thank you xD
Of course KojiYuu will be there :D
Well, here's chapter 4: Fuwa Fuwa :D
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I was in my classroom, sitting beside the windows. The wind was breezing gently.
“Ah, it’s such a great day…” I smiled to myself.
“Good Morning, Miyuki-chan” Shimazaki Haruka, aka Paruru, sat beside me.
“Morning, Paruru”
“Ah, are you doing your mathematic assignment?” she asked.
“Yeah, one more question and I’m do-“
Wush!
Suddenly the wind from the opened window stole my papers.
“Ah!!” I screamed out. “My assignment!!”
It went out of the window, down to the school garden below. This is bad! I have to get it back, but what if the wind bring it further away? Ah, what should I do??
“Somebody! Please catch the papers!” Paruru shouted beside me.
Right, there was somebody down there, playing with her hand phone.
“Why should I?” She shouted back. Ugh, why is she so… wait, is that?
“Eh-Eh?? Onee-chan?” Yes, it was my sister. Did she actually came to school?
“Eh? Miyuki?” After she looked at me she quickly chased after my papers. It was rare to see her run. She never liked sports.
“O-Onee-chan…”
“Such a nice sister…” Paruru suddenly said. “I guess she’s really not like what the rumors said, right?”
Yes, the rumors. They said that my sister was a cold hearted murderer who killed her own father. Well, she did, but it was for our own sake! There are other rumors as well, saying that she was actually stupid and she came to this school by money. Geez, she’s actually a genius you know!!
“They don’t know what they’re talking about!” I shouted at Paruru. “And she’s not cold hearted! She’s just… Shy?? She can’t communicate well… But she’s the best sister ever!”
Paruru then gave me a gentle smile. “Yes, I could see that you really love her”
One-two-three-four, one more sheet to get. Ah, it’s stuck on a tree! There’s no way my sister could get it there!
“I’m going down!”
“Wait, you’re going to be late for homeroom!” Paruru said while holding my arms. “And look! Your sister’s fine-”
“Come on kids, sit down. Homeroom time!” My homeroom teacher, Shinoda-sensei, who came out of nowhere said.
I sit down and hurriedly looked back through the window. Somebody is there talking to my sister. She suddenly climbed up the tree like a ninja, then hopped back with my last assignment sheet.
“Is that… Kashiwagi-senpai?” I whispered to Paruru.
“It seems so… Ah, look at that” She pointed towards them.
Kashiwagi-senpai was hugging my sister. MY. SISTER.
“WH-WHAT??!” I shouted while standing up.
“Watanabe Miyuki, is something wrong?” Shinoda-senpai asked. My classmates were looking at me, while Paruru just facepalm herself.
“A-Ah… not at all, sensei…” I sit down, hiding the embarrassment.
“Ugh, why is the famous Kashiwagi-senpai hugging my sister?? And… OMG why is she hugging her back?? She’s my sister!!” I whispered angrily to Paruru.
“Geez, Miyuki-chan, stop being a sister complex! You have your own boyfriend you know!” She sighed. “I feel sorry for Yamamoto-senpai…”
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“Yukirin-san, if you were her all these time, why didn't you come to see me?” I asked while playing with her slender fingers.
“Mayu… There were many problems… and… I didn't even know you were at this school” She pat me and gave me a dry laugh.
“Anyway, drop the ‘san’, okay?” She said while hugging me from behind.
“Eh… but… you’re a senpai…” She opened my hoodie.
“Who cares about that, Mayuyu~” She then sniffed my hair. “Mm… Just as I though, your hair smells nice~”
“Geez, suddenly giving me a nickname like that… A-and stop sniffing me!” I could feel her breath on my neck. It was warm, and it tickled.
“It can’t be helped~ It’s your fault you know? Being this cute is illegal!” She hugged me tighter and then suddenly kiss my ear.
“Kya!! W-w-what are you doing??” I slapped her arm.
“Hahha, seeing you blushing like that really makes my day” She stand up while laughing, trying to block my hands.
“Oh my, look at the time… It’s already 12!” She said while looking at my watch wrist. It seems like we talked about more than 3 hours… wow, time sure flies quickly.
“Anyway~ let me kiss you” she said with an innocent smile.
“W-w-why should I??” I backed away from her.
“Eeh, what’s wrong with that~ you gave me a kiss this morning. And you should, because you’re too cute~”
“T-that’s via message! A-and I’m not that cute!”
“Oh, yes you are~” She suddenly hold my arms and then
Chu ~
She kissed my forehead.
(http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/333/d/d/kiss_at_the_forhead2_by_chroumia-d6w6c3k.jpg)
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The next chapter: Chapter 5: The Attack
Oh, I hope AnRiRe isn't a wierd couple :nervous
Because It's almost time for the other couple to appear:)
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:luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
This chapter really fuwa fuwa
Update soon
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level of MaYuki fanservice= OVER 9000 XD
I love this chapter :wub: :inlove:
you really update fast, I love it!! :thumbsup come, let me hug you~
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omg, I'm not into Mayuki to much, but this one is so cute!
And good to read that you have prepared the kojiyuu story <3
keep going! and waiting for more! :D
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Yukirin is totally smitten to Mayuyu.
Kyaa!! :nya: :nya: :nya:
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Awww cho kawaii~~
mayuki~
ah me waiting for atsumina~
newbe here, yoroshiku!
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Haruto Lee: Yes, that's why I gave it the title fuwa fuwa xD
TD : Yeay, thank you~ *Hugs xD
abcari : thanks~ I also want to quickly make the KojiYuu stories :3
konoe : she sure is :3
deguchi : I'm also a newbie,, yoroshiku~:)
Chapter 5: The Attack
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Chu ~
She kissed my forehead.
I could feel my face burning. My heart is beating so uncontrollable! There’s definitely something wrong with me!
“Kawaii! You’re so cuuuttteee!” She smiled, then continued to assault me with her kisses.
“W-Why are you still kissing me?? Stop iittt” I struggled from her hug. My heart is beating wildly. Isn’t this bad for my heart?? My forehead, down to my cheeks. Her kisses are getting closer to my lips… I-I’m not ready yet!!
“Yah! Yuki-Chan!!” A voice shouted out of nowhere. It made me and Yukirin-san surprised.
“A-ah… Haruna?” Yukirin-san stopped kissing me. “W-what’s wrong?” She asked groggily with a red face.
“Geez, I’ve been searching for you, and you’re still here flirting with her? It’s been 3 hours you know! You shouldn’t force her like that!” She said angrily, but with a lazy tone.
“Eh? F-forcing?” Yukirin-san looked at me. Her face became redder. “I-I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to make you uneasy and forced it like thi-“
“N-Not at all!” I quickly replied. “I-I was just not… ready… yet…” I said while lowering my voice. I… I said I wasn’t ready… Does that mean I actually want it? This is bad… I think I’m really in… N-no! This is the first time we met! Even though we’ve become friends for 5 years, I can’t fall in love with her yet! Wait, did I said yet?? Aah, this is so frustrating!
“Yaahh! Don’t ignore me! We don’t have time, Yuki-chan! I’m worried about Yuko here!!” Haruna-senpai said with a cute pout.
“A-ah, right… Is there an attack?” Yukirin-san asked.
“Yes, Yuko-chan and the others are trying to block them. We should go as well” She explained.
“I see. Mayuyu, go back to your classroom” Yukirin-san order me.
“…No, I want to go with you”
“Mayu! These attacks are serious you know? It’s not like the small ones you see at the road!”
The attacks… As I’ve said before, there are two type of human beings. The normal and the guardians. The guardian’s duty is to protect the normal, but from what? The Folktales. Yes, the Folktales… those stories of a believing. But in this world. It is more than a believe. It is the reality. Those spirits from the tales are real. And not all of them are good buddies.
As what I learned from my history book, these folktales suddenly appeared and destroyed the world. As they were rampaging, a person stood up, and magically defeated them with his outrageous powers. He was the first guardian on the earth, Akimoto Yasushi-sama. Since then, there have been more guardians that were born. Saving the normal humans from the attack.
“Yuki, did you forgot about my past? I’m not a ‘normal’ normal human” I protested. I don’t know, but I felt like I wanted to go as well.
“M-Mayu …Fine” she sighed.
“I’m just allowing you because you finally called me Yuki, you know? So keep on calling me that” She hold my hand. “Don’t be far away from me, we’re going to the club room first”
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Chu~
I kissed her forehead gently. Ah, she’s blushing… she’s cute! So cute! I’m not regretting the fact that I fell in love with her for 5 years! But… to see that cute blushing face right now… I… can’t handle it. Uugh…
“Kawaii! You’re so cuuttteee!!” I blurted out. Ups, it seems like I can’t stand her cuteness anymore. Well… I should just continue. I kept on kissing her.
“W-Why are you still kissing me?? Stop iittt” She tried to let go. Too bad Mayu, you’re dealing with the great Kashiwagi Yuki here, once loved, always love! I kissed her forehead again, then I started to get lower… to her cheeks… a litte bit lower… and a little bit more… her li-
“Yah! Yuki-Chan!!” A familiar voice shouted out of nowhere. It made me stopped with surprise.
“A-ah… Haruna? W-what’s wrong?” I asked. I could feel my face heating up.
“Geez, I’ve been searching for you, and you’re still here flirting with her? It’s been 3 hours you know! You shouldn’t force her like that!” Ueh, how did she know I was with Mayu for about 3 hours?? But that’s not what I’m supposed to be worried about, right?
“Eh? F-forcing?” I looked at Mayu’s face. It was red. Aah, I think looking at that face made my face redder. Just think of what I did! Forcing my feelings to her. “I-I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to make you uneasy and forced it like thi-“
“N-Not at all!” She suddenly said. “I-I was just not… ready… yet…” N-not ready? Does that mean… she actually allows me?? Eh? W-well… isn’t this… LOVELY!! I should tell her my feelings!
“Yaahh! Don’t ignore me! We don’t have time, Yuki-chan!” Haruna cried out with a pout. Oh, right, I forgot about her…
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“For those who haven’t collected their assignment, stand outside!” My math teacher said strictly.
“Ueeehhh, Onee-chan… I don’t care being punished, but at least don’t be too close with someone I don’t know…” I said to myself
while standing up, getting ready to go outside.
“M-Miyuki-chan… Ganbarre~” Paruru gave me a nervous smile.
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I like to write other character’s point of view :D it makes us know their feelings~
Anyway, chapter 6 is almost done xD
I'll post it tomorrow, or maybe later :D
Next: Chapter 6. Club
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OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH
Another Action and Supernatural Fic...
Gonna put this on my favorite list..... :) :) :)
Waiting for your next update.... :) :) :)
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:luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Another Fuwa fuwa chapter but the real things will come out soon right?
Look like Yuki love Mayu and Mayu still didn't know her feelings..
Waiting for your update!!!!
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Wah finally Mayu and Yuki meet each other
Is Mayu a guardians? And also what Yuki is guardians or normal?
Cant wait for the next ch
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I like miyuki's sister complex xDDDDDDDDDDDD :thumbsup
and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Mayuki lovely lovely :inlove:
I really like this!!!! :cathappy:
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I'm starting to ship Milky with Paruru :shocked :lol:
LOL Yuki seems possessed, head over heels with Mayuyu XD Yes, Yasushi-sensei! :thumbsup Anyway, as always... :inlove: :wub: :oops: :heart:
I love it :deco:
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wiii kawaii mayuki hahaha that sister complex is cute ^_^
plz update asap :w00t:
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so cute~ what is happening in the other place? >w< want to know, waiting for the next chapter!
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:wub: uwaaa this is nice nyannyan shouldnt have
interrupted them
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So Yukirin is really in love with Mayuyu. :shy2:
Haruna why did you interrupt them! They almost kissed!
Milky :lol:
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Minamiyuki: Wow, thanks xD Actually I had this idea since about a year ago~
Haruto Lee: Yep, the story's just about to begin :thumbsup
Kirozoro : Yuki is a gaurdian, while Mayu is a normal. but because of her father's experiments, Mayu has some power. Thats why she said that she's not a 'normal' normal. I'm sorry if it's confusing... :nervous
TD : Lol :lol: And yes, yuki is XD Thank you~ such a boost of encouragement ~! xD
mikaellitsa: I also find it cute, lol. Sure :D
abcari : yep, it's on this chapter :D
FoxKuzan : If she didn't, their relationship would escalated super quick :D
Konoe : Of course~ xD
I thought it would be wierd if Milky-who already has Sayaka- would be Sister Complex, but it seems like it's alright >.< yeay.
Here's chapter 6: Club
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“Excuse my intrusion, my name is Watanabe Mayu” I introduced myself before giving a slight bow.
“… Kojima. What is the meaning of this? I told you to get Yuki, not a new member” A short, but terrifying senpai said. It seems like he’s the captain of this club.
“Yah! Kai-kun don’t be so angry… It’s not me who brought her here, it’s Yuki-chan” Haruna-senpai pouted.
“Yuki-kun… explain this action of yours” He said while closing his eyes, not looking at Yuki at all.
“Kai, she may be a normal. But she’s not ‘normal’” Yuki said with a serious face.
“…Details, Yuki” He opened his eyes.
“… That is… something I can’t explain yet. Just believe in me, Kaichou”
The atmosphere became heavy… Well, of course adding a member to the club is not easy. Especially this club. The schools main defender club, who has a duty to protect the school and the students from getting any damage. The members are kept a secret from the students, but the leader isn’t.
Takahashi Minami, the Kaichou (leader) of this club is well known. He is short, but he has great battlefield combats. He is called Kai because he is said to be a great Kaichou. This is the first time I met him.
“Very well, I appreciate your decision. For then you will be the one to protect her, alright?”
“With honor sir!” Yuki said energetically.
It seems like I’ve been accepted as a member… Actually, I didn’t intend to become one, but if you want to go to the field, you have to be a member. So I, Watanabe Mayu, has become a member of the schools main defender club.
“Let’s quickly deal with the Folktales first. Annin, tell them the situation” Kaichou ordered.
“Yes, Kaichou” A beautiful girl with a princess like aura stand up.
“The Folktales this time are… Hansel and Gretel. Yui, Jurina, and Sakura is handling Gretel, while Yuko, Yagami-san, and Yamamoto-san is handling Hansel. Yuki, we want you to help out Yuko. While Haruna help out Yui. Their location is not that far from each other. And for Watanabe-san… Please be careful”
“We understand”
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After I quickly read the profile of the members -which were only less than 20- we hurriedly ran to the location, the schools garden besides the boy’s dormitory. We were supposed to be there about 5 minutes ago, but we kept on stopping because I had to catch my breath. Damn it, this school is too big!
“Mayuyu are you alright?” Yuki asked me with a concern face.
“Y-yes… just… give me a minute…” I tried to catch my breath.
“Mayu-“
Bang!
A tree was suddenly flying towards our direction. Before I noticed, Yuki was carrying me with a bridal style to avoid it.
“Holy Fuck, she’s so persistence!” A boy shouted. From what I remember, his name is Yokoyama Yui-senpai.
“But, isn't more fun like this?” Another voice answered. A girl with a short hair, and an unbutton uniform. That’s definitely Matsui Jurina.
“Said the kid who kept on getting hit” Yokoyama-senpai replied.
Bang!
Another tree was being thrown by a little girl.
“Yuki… Is that Gretel?” I asked.
“…Yeah” She answered shortly. “…Mayuyu, promise me you won’t do anything reckless” Yuki said seriously while running, still carrying me in her arms.
“…Don’t worry Yuki, I won’t” I promised.
“Ah! Yuki-senpai!” Jurina called happily. “Ooh! I see you’re carrying a beauty! Want me to help?” He dodge some trees while smiling to Yuki.
(http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/334/9/3/jurina_01_by_chroumia-d6w78f7.jpg)
“No Jurina. Don’t you EVER touch Mayu” Yuki answered with a black aura.
“Geez, I was just kidding~ I have my own you know” She smiled.
“Jurina, stop with the talking!” Yui-senpai shouted, but suddenly, he got hit by a flying trashcan.
“Ouch senpai, you should be concentrating more…” Jurina said calmly.
“Hello Yukiiiii??? You’re supposed to help this side right??” Oshima Yuko-senpai shouted. Not far away from Yui’s team, the one who handled Hansel were also dodging some random things.
“Horaa!” Yagami Kumi-senpai gave Hansel an uppercut. He continued the assault with a gun that was on his pocket.
Dor! Dor! Dor!!
Oh shit. Not Good. Not good at all.
“M-Mayu! Are you alright??” Yuki seems to know what made my face pale.
“Y-yeah… don’t worry…” I answered stiffly. I could feel my body shivering as I suddenly remembered my past because of the gun shots.
She gently put me down. “Don’t force yourself…”
As quick as the wind, she was suddenly besides Yagami-senpai, in front of Hansel.
Brak!!
She kicked Hansel with a mighty blow on his stomach.
“Kumi! Stop with the guns!” Yuki shouted while avoiding some hits.
“What?? Why???”
“Just. STOP!!” Yuki suddenly took his hand gun at throw it away.
“Wha-“ Brak!! Yagami-senpai who was about to protest was hit by Hansel.
“You…da..re.. shoot…me?” Hansel said stiffly.
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Wierd? Yes. :nervous :nervous
Sooo... I changed the story abit and made Annin as the secretary or something. :panic: oh well :nervous :peace:
And for Takamina's name... I don't know anymore :sweatdrop:
Oh, Does anybody have an idea for the clubs name? It would be wierd if it was called the Main Defense Club :sweatdrop:
Next Chapter, Chapter 7: Hansel and Gretel
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Do something mayu
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The story is interesting!
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HAHA I saw what you did there Kai....Kai....Kaichou XD
oh I just realized what you meant on 'folktales' you literally meant the villains are the fairytales' protagonists, wow that's cool actually and not weird :thumbsup
why not Supernatural/Paranormal Eradicators Club (SPEC) :lol:
Possessive Yukirin is possessive! :nervous right right...Mayu is all yours :D so many characters I love it! :w00t:
btw, nice fanart there :)
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very interesting o.o and I'm with imteedee SPEC is a good name xD
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ok i satrt to fall in loved with this one
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I've been too lazy to comment, but this is great~ :3
hrm... club name~~ OOOOO Brigade? something like that? (Makes me think of Angel Beats' thing...)
To be blunt~ I love you for putting in Kuuusan~~ <3
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Terragen: She will~
Deguchi : Thank you:)
TD : Sorry if it was confusing... :nervous
Hmm, I like that name :wub:
Thanks for the advise, I'll be sure to use it xD
abcari : Thank's :D , I agree with you. I'll use SPEC as the club name :D
gek geki : why thank you xD
Shinoki : lol, I was actually thinking about that as well, SSS with a super super super something :nervous :lol:
Yeah, I miss Kumi...:(
Okay... another post~~~
Since tomorrow I will have exam until 12-12-13 :cry: :cry:
I'm not sure I would be able to update :cry:
Chapter 7: Hansel and Gretel.
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“Onii-chan… Are we… going to die?”
“Don’t worry. I promise, I’m going to protect you”
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Eh? What was that? I though I saw something blurry. Two kids were hugging each other. But… who? Who was it?
Brak!!
Yagami-senpai was hit by Hansel.
“You…dare shoot me?” Hansel said stiffly.
“Kumiii!!” Sayaka shouted as he was dashing towards them.
“I… promised… to protect.” Hansel continued while clutching his wound.
“You bastard!!” Sayaka leaped on to him. Beating the crap out of him.
“Uwa… As expected from Sayanii~ He looks so cool” Jurina stood beside me. I was able to regain my composure back, as the gunshot stopped.
“You know, every member has their own weapons… There are some weird ones like Sakura, who has a small body but uses a giant axe. But Sayanii and KojiHaru-senpai doesn’t use any. They prefer to use their own power” She suddenly explained to me.
“What about Yuki?” I asked.
“Knifes and Daggers. A whole bunch of them”
“Wow, I actually thought that Yuki would use a rapier”
“Hahha, Yeah, Rapiers sure fit her image huh?” She said agreeing with me. “…But you know, the one I’m scared of is actually Yuko and Kaichou” She looked down, as if the things she wants to say are written at the ground.
“…why?”
“They’re not guardians. They’re normal, just like you. But they have the courage to fight in this battlefield. That’s why, I think I’m also scared of you… I could never be that courageous to go on a battlefield without powers”
“Jurina… I believe they have their own reasons to be as brave as this. Anyway, why are you suddenly telling me this? This is the first time we’ve met, right?”
“I don’t know myself, I just felt interested to you~” She gave me a cheeky smile.
“Matsui Jurina! What did I told you about touching her?!” Yuki shouted from the other side.
“It’s alright Yuki-senpai, I haven’t touch her at all~!” She grinned happily. “Well then, I should go back, catch you later~” She hopped back to the battlefield. Ugh, what does she mean by ‘haven’t’…
I look back at Yuko-senpai’s party, wondering what happened to them. Hansel was already standing up, running towards Gretel. I watched as Yuki shot a knife at Hansel’s eye.
“Aagkh!!” Hansel dropped to his knees, screaming in pain.
“Yuko! Now!!” Yuki screamed as she jumped back.
“Yosshaaa!!” Yuko ran full speed towards Hansel. She raised her hand, then forcefully attached something to Hansel’s shirt. It was a round metal device that had number shining in bright red. The number kept on decreasing by each second. It was a bomb.
As Yuko was about to reel back, her arm was gripped by Hansel.
“Not…that…fast” he mumbled. “Fuck-!!”
When I though there was no time left, a gust of wind was felt. It was quick. As if timed stop for a couple of second. I could see somebody passing me, swinging his blade.
Thump.
The hand that was gripping Yuko was cut. Making scarlet stains on Yuko’s face and uniform.
Boom!!
Yuko leapt to the side. She crushed to the ground, barely avoiding the explosion that she made herself.
“Hah! Serves you right, asshole!!” She cried happily.
“Hmph, careless as ever, Yuko. You could at least bring a knife. You know, just in case” Takahashi Minami advised.
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“Ano nee, Onii-chan… I don’t mind dying as long as I’m with you”
“Gretel…”
“Onii-chan, I love you”
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Again, I saw another blurry vision… was that Hansel and Gretel?
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Next Chapter, Chapter 8: Right Eye
I think I will post chapter 8 in about 10 minutes again XD :thumbsup
Thank you for the comments~ :oops:
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Oooh~ Then I shall wait for a few minutes...
And I can already guess what Mayuyu's 'power' thingy is
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Shinoki: Thanks for waiting~ :cathappy:
Chapter 8: Right Eye
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Boom!!
Yuko leapt to the side. She crushed to the ground, barely avoiding the explosion that she made herself.
“Hah! Serves you right, asshole!!” She cried happily.
“Hmph, careless as ever, Yuko. You could at least bring a knife. You know, just in case” Takahashi Minami advised. He swing his blade, making the scarlet stains drop off.
“Sure thing, Minami” Yuko grinned.
Wow, is it true that they aren’t guardians? I understand why Jurina fears them… To be staking their lives to protect this school…
“One more to go” Yagami-senpai reported.
Thwock!
A small, cute little girl from Yui’s team was swinging a giant axe. Each time the chunk of metal hit the ground, a loud bang would be heard. Remembering what Jurina said, that girl must be Miyawaki Sakura.
Swish!
The axe made a cut across Gretel’s skin. She stumbled backwards.
“Sakura-chan, Back off!” Kojima-senpai ordered.
“Understood!”
Bam! Kojima-senpai’s closed fist was pressing on top of Gretel’s stomach. Blood spurted from her mouth.
“Whoa~ Check out my girl, man! She looks so hot!” Yuko-senpai praised her.
Everyone was looking at Kojima-senpai, while I saw something else.
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“Yeah, I love you too Gretel”
“Un! I know that~”
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Damn it! And I thought it was just my imaginations! For the third time I’ve been seeing these weird visions of Hansel and Gretel… There’s no way I’m seeing these vision’s for no reasons. I hold my head as I suddenly become a little bit dizzy.
Curious of why I did that, Yuki came near to me. “What’s wrong, Mayu? Are you hurt?”
“No… Don’t worry, just a little headache” I explained while searching for something at my skirt pocket. “Yuki… There’s something I need to do… Can I?” I hesitantly ask for permission.
“…” No answers from her.
As soon as my skin touched a cold small metal device, I knew it was the thing I’m searching for. I took it out, showing the device to Yuki.
“... Is that the controller you father made?” She asked.
“Yes, and no. Yes it is the controller, and no because I don’t see him as my father anymore”
The controller wasn’t complicated as all. It had an arrow button, showing up, down, left and right. And it also had two more button. One in blue, while the other one was in red.
“Mayu… Just what are you going to do?” Yuki grabbed my hand, making me unable to press the buttons.
“Don’t worry Yuki, I’ve tried this before, so I know what I’m doing” I assured her as I forcefully made way to press the blue button.
“Mayu! What did you-” Her words stopped as she saw my face.
“Y-your right eye…” She said in disbelieve. Her reaction was weirdly funny, but I tried to hold my laugh. If I press the blue button, my right eye would change. It would change it color into yellow. Making me look like a person with a hetechromia disease.
“C-Chill down, Yuki. I won’t lose something by activating this.” I’ve tried to use the controller before, as I was curious with it function. And no, I didn’t lose anything by activating it, but after that I felt super dizzy… Just like an old man who had a too much beer. But no, I won’t be drunk.
“The blue button would activate my observer eye, of course that was a random name I gave to it” I explained to Yuki.
“Observer eye? Does that mean you could detect some things see ghost and others?”
“That’s… actually kind of right”
“Seriously?? Why didn’t you tell be before?” Once again, she showed me a weird shocked face.
“It’s because I wasn’t sure about it yet… by the way, nice reaction you’ve got... pfft! HAHAHHA!!” I said, unable to control my desire to laugh.
“Yah! Don’t laugh at me!” She smacked me playfully.
“Hahha! Sorry~ It’s just because your reaction was so epic~” I kept on laughing.
“Forget about it!!” She kept on slapping my arm in embarrassment.
“Don’t worry Yuki, that adds another reason why I love-” Wait. What did I just said?? Uwaa that was so embarrassing!! Almost blurting my thoughts just like that… Ugh… I wonder if she heard it…
“E-eh… t-thank you” Uwaaa! She definitely heard what I said right?? Uukh, I hope she doesn’t think I’m weird.
“Won’t you look at the newlyweds here, being so lovey dovey in the battlefield” Jurina pointed towards our direction, making the others looking at us.
“Ah~ How I envy them~” She continued.
Before I could react to her teasing, the visions came again. This time, it was way clearer.
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“Onii-chan… It hurts!” A girl cried as she hold onto her wound.
No reply.
“…Onii-chan? Where are you?”
“Oni…chan…” Gretel began to cry.
Far away from that scene, a boy was trapped inside a cage.
“Gretel!!” He shouted.
“No one… makes Gretel suffer!!”
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Shit!! “Every one, back off from-”
BAM!!
Too late. Hansel went berserk.
“No… one… makes Gretel suffer!”
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Andddd yeaayyy~ :lol:
Exams?? Pft who cares about that #IDontWantToKnowAnymore XD
Anyway I like the Sakura I made here . hehhe :wub:
Sorry If it suddenly became a bit wierd :sweatdrop:
Next Chapter, Chapter 9: The Truth
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mayu's power is artificial :shocked
oh no! seems the monsters are 'warm-hearted' in reality :(
wMidgets in action XD good luck on your exam! :D
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Ooh... great chapter
Good luck on your exams.
Lol Sakura... I can imagine it now~
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More~!!! More Action~!!!
I love this fic now...
Waiting for your next update... :) :) :)
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wa.. you updated so fast! Thanks! :kneebow:
:thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup for the fic
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I want to know what happen next
Please update soon
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omg omg omg XD I hate exams time >:c
Hope you can do it right! good luck!
and I'll wait for the next one C:
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yup i know right i fail at exams mayuyu power is cool
pls update again >_<
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Mayu's power is so cooool!! I waaaaaant XD :cathappy:
~Rena-chan~~where are yoooooooooooou? :O
XD
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WOW MAYU SURE HAD SUPER POWER HERE
SHE'S LIKE A CYBORG
CUTE MONSTER
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Interesting~ :twothumbs
Ohmygosh~ Can't wait to see what will happen next..
Hope you update soon...Thanks for your hardwork.. :bow:
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moar!!!
update pls :bow: :bow:
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Sakura, that loli girl with a giant axe. I love it! :hehehe:
More mayuki pls
Update soon! Can't wait! :ding:
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TD : thank you~ :) I was thinking about the fanfic while doing my exam xD
Shinoki : thanks :D
Minamiyuki : thank you xD it was kind of hard making the actions, but I'll make sure there will be more :D
qweakb : Your welcome :D
Kirozoro : sorry for making you wait, here's the new chapters~
abcari : yep, me too... Thank you :D And thank you for waiting~
Koneki : I'm sorry, I changed the story abit so Rena would come later :doh: :(
gek geki : Yes, Mayu the CG. thank you :D
kenjoy12 : thank you, sorry if it became wierd :nervous
MayuxMatsuixMusic : sure :)
Railgun96 : Yeay, I'm happy to know someone else like's her xD Don't worry here's a Mayuki lovey dovey scene~ :cathappy:
I'm finally back~ xD :cathappy:
oh god I feel so happy XD
anyway I'll post 2 chapters, sorry if the story suddenly became wierd,
You know... suddenly continuing something after almost forgetting about it... :nervous
I reread my first chapters and found out that I was supposed to write substance, not substitude :sweatdrop:
uuh, embarassing... it's like answering 10000 when the real answer is actually 10. :bleed eyes:
oh well, what happens happens.
Here's chapter 9: Truth.
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“Every one, back off from-”
BAM!!
Too late. Hansel went berserk.
“No… one… makes Gretel suffer!”
“Shit! I thought he was already dead!” Yagami-senpai leaped to the side, dodging a random obstacle that was blown by the explosion.
“Kojima-senpai, get away from Gretel!” I shouted as I ran towards her.
“M-Mayu?!” Yuki followed me from beside. I bet she can actually run faster…
But it was too late, Hansel had already passed me. Running towards Kojima Haruna who was still on top of Gretel. And there, Hansel was already besides her. Raising his fist, ready to make some broken bones.
“Haruna-senpai!!” Sakura, who was not far away from her was able to block the punch with her axe.
Clang!!
“Sakura!” Yui shouted, worrying about her little kouhai.
“Shit! We need to do something! They just don’t want to die!!” Sayaka shouted.
Yes, we can’t kill them. We need to do something else.
“…Yuki, I need you to do something”
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Swish!
Shit. That was a little miss, if I didn’t leap to the side, my hand must’ve been cut off…
Urgh, maybe I shouldn’t throw knifes at enemies without weapons… He took one and now he’s using it to attack.
Another trio of slashes forced me to roll backwards, the blade came close enough to make a cut on my skin.
“You know Hansel, you better stop this shit right now” Kaichou who was watching our battle suddenly spoke.
“Not until you… leave her alone!” Hansel yelled back.
“Easy boy, we were just self-defensing! It’s you who suddenly attack our school!!” I could see Jurina holding her anger as she could only watch.
“Fuck off. If I didn’t attack first you guys would!”
Swish!
Another cut on my cheek.
“Kaichou, won’t you let me help Yuki?!” Yui asked permission from Kaichou.
“No, Yui. This is her decision after all. I believe she has a plan.”
Right. I asked Kaichou to fight Hansel 1-on-1. Just as Mayu wanted.
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“…Yuki, I need you to do something”
“What is it?”
“Hold on Hansel, but show him that we mean no harm”
“What? We’re on a battlefield, Mayu. It’s a war. If a team stops attacking then the other team would.”
“That’s why I want you to fight him alone, Yuki. I believe you can dodge his attack without attacking back.” Mayu said as she ran towards Gretel. “As for Gretel, leave her to me.”
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Of course I didn’t want Mayu to be facing Gretel, but since she was so determinate and Gretel was still unconscious…
Hansel was ready to stab me as he raised his knife above me, but he stopped because of Mayu’s voice:
“Gretel is such a cute girl, huh.”
Mayu was sitting on top of Gretel’s stomach, with a knife ready on Gretel’s face.
“It’d be a shame if this face is hurt, right?” She said with a mocking voice.
“Get off her!!” Hansel yelled angrily as he was about to dart towards Mayu, but I stopped Hansel before he could. A dagger of mine around his neck.
“You’re not done with me.” I gripped on his arm, making sure to not let him hulk towards Mayu.
“Neh, Hansel. Let’s make a deal. I’ll give her back to you, but after that get out of here.” Mayu smirked. “It’s a good deal, no?”
“...Why should I trust you?”
“No reasons… Well, if you don’t want to Yuki would definitely kill you… And I will definitely kill Gretel” She said as her smile grew wider. “Anyway, you only have one hand, and since Yuki is holding the other one, you have none right now” She continued to give a reason.
“…bitch”
Slash!
Mayu made a cut on Gretel’s face.
“Kh?! You bastard!!!” Hansel shouted. If I didn’t press my knife on his throat, he would’ve been out of my grip. I gave Mayu a why-did-you-do-that face.
“Well, duh. It’s because he hurt you, Yuki.” She answered with a sulking face. Aah, kawaii…
“I won’t forgive you for that!” Hansel cried. But Mayu answered with a smirk on her face.
“Ara, it seems like you don’t want the insulin’s?”
Insulin…? Uwa, don’t tell me Gretel’s actually?
“…You have some?” Hansel suddenly become tame. He didn’t try to get off my grip anymore.
“Duration is about 10 until 16 hours… good enough right?”
“Oi, what are they talking about?” Kumi asked Kaichou.
“Heh… It seems like one of them got Diabetes” Kaichou answered.
“…Deal. Let go off me.” Hansel finally agreed. I glance at Mayu, she gave me a nod.
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CHAPTER 10: Lovers.
“Urgh… where am I?” I felt pain in my head. Yuki was sitting beside the bed where I’m in.
“Mayu, you’re finally awake~” She hugged me. “This is my room”
Eh? Her room? As in Yuki’s room? “Eh?? Why am I in your room??”
“Don’t you remember? We had a sexy night-”
I slapped her arms “Stop joking!!” I said as I felt my face getting warm from embarrassment.
“Buuhh, Mayuyu doesn’t like to play around” She snuggled her head to my neck, tightening her grip around my waist. “I’m glad you woke up” She continued.
… Silence suddenly kicked in. Well, not the awkward type, the sweet one… It’s like, no words are needed to show her feelings… She was worried about me. I hugged her back. Right after Hansel and Gretel went away, I felt exhausted until I black out. And then here I am, waking up in her room.
“H-hey, it’s not like I was asleep for a week, right?” I break the silence.
“Of course not, it was only for a night. Well, almost a day, it’s already noon now.” Damn, one day of fighting, and one day of sleeping. That means two day of not contacting Miyuki!?
“D-did Miyuki, uh my sister. Did she searched for me?? Perhaps?” Knowing how Miyuki, she must’ve been worried.
“Oh, right. That cute little sister of yours slapped me in my face” She explained with a sigh as she loosen the hug.
“S-seriously?” I asked in doubt. I mean, why would she… Ah, she must’ve saw Yuki and I together that time… Urgh, this is insanely so like her. Checking out on whoever talks to me… Smashing whoever suspiciously gets too close with me… I feel guilty, I should apologize to Yuki…
“Don’t worry, she’s a normal. It didn’t really hurt.” Yuki suddenly said before I apologized. It was like she knew I felt guilty about it. But after hearing she said that it really did made me calm down. I answered with a smile. I looked at her to the eyes. She was… beautiful…
She gently scooped up a few locks of my hair with her hands. Smelling it like giving it a small peck of kisses. Damn it, I could feel my cheek burning. This is making me go super doki-doki…
“You’re hair really does smell nice” Yuki compliment me with a smile. I looked down because of embarrassment. She then gently took my hand in her own, gracing it with a light kiss. I felt like my face was going to boil over with the happiness and embarrassment.
For her to do these things does make me happy, but it’s kind of embarrassing… I mean, this is what lovers do right? Our relationship isn’t even close with that…
…ok, maybe it is close.
Yuki suddenly placed her hand on my cheek. She drew her lips close. I felt like I was hypnotized with her beauty… I didn’t resist at all, instead, I was slowly closing my eyes…
But wait, what? I noticed a small cut on Yuki’s lips. I reach to it and press my finger on to the cut.
“Ouch!” she flinched.
“Eh? Is that… because of Miyuki?”
“Uuh… well... yeah… Okay, okay, it does hurt… A little…” she admitted.
“Would you mind telling me the story?” I gave her a concerned look.
“Uuuuuuh did you really have to break our sweet moment because of this?” She wailed like a little kid who lost her candy.
“B-baka! It won’t be sweet if you’d flinch because of kissing! Now hurry up and tell me how it happened!”
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It was already midnight, and I don’t know what room she lives in, so I carried her to mine. As I reach my room, I unlocked it and gently put Mayu on my bed. After that I took a shower and a little walk to the garden.
As I was still gazing at the moon, I heard footsteps behind me. I turned back and found a young girl in her pajama’s looking at me with a cold stare.
“Kashiwagi Yuki” She called my name.
“Is something the matter?” I asked.
“Hey, have you seen my sister?”
“If you could give me some information about what she looks like, I maybe know”
“…Cute, twintails, hoodies with cat ears. And cute.” She answered as she stepped closer.
“Ara, is it Mayu? Then you must be Miyuki” I said with a smile. “Well aren’t you a cute-”
Slap!!
She suddenly slapped me. Seriously? Dude, we just met less than a minutes ago, and you’re suddenly hitting me? This kid is kind of pissing me off.
“…Great powers you have… But not powerful enough for me, of course” I mocked her.
SLAP!!!
Another slap, but this time, it really stings. I think I accidently bit on my lips. I hold on my cheek.
“…Ouch”
“Thank you” She turn away with a smirk and left.
“…The fuck?” I mumbled as I watch her vanishing in the dark.
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“And the end of story, Mayu.” She said to close her tale of being slapped by my little sister.
“I…Uh…. Um…” I was confused to reply. Seriously, Miyuki… did you have to do that? She’s our savior you know…
“It’s alright Mayu, there must’ve been a misunderstanding. Or maybe she had reasons.” She smiled.
“…D-does it still hurts?”
“Mayuyu, I’ve been fighting folktales and I’ve had many injuries. I’m alright, don’t worry about it.” I nod in reply.
I kept silence for a moment, then gave her a kiss in the cheek. “T-thank you….” I whispered.
Another silence grew. And this time, it was an awkward one. Uugh, that was embarrassing…
Yuki, who had a red face, look down. After about 5 minutes of silence, she suddenly mumbled something.
“….thing…me…friend…you…” She mumbled with a really low voice.
“Y-yah, I-I can’t catch on what you’re saying”
“M-Mayu …” She took a deep breath and looked at my eye. I could see her face getting redder, but at the same time, my face was also heating up.
“Y-You’re cheating, s-suddenly kissing me l-l-like that” she stuttered.
“W-whaa?? Y-You’re the one who first k-kissed me! And you were even about to kiss my lips!”
“Me doing the kiss and you doing it is different! A-and that’s because you’re too cute!!”
“B-baka!! You’re also cute you know!”
I quickly look down after realizing what I said. Uuh, this is getting more awkward…
A short moment of silence… then “M-mayu, I-I love you” Yuki suddenly confessed.
“Y-Yah! Where did that come from?? S-suddenly confessing like that…” I looked down, confuse on what to answer. Of course I’m happy, but to be suddenly dating… I took a quick glance, and I saw her still looking towards me. Uuh… Where did she get all those courage...?
“I-it came from my heart, of course” She replied with a soft but firm voice.
“…Baka… I love you too” I admitted as I buried my face to the crook of her neck.
“D-does it mean we’re…?”
“…lovers… you baka… Baka Yuki” I gripped on her shirt as I gave her another kiss on the cheek.
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Sorry if it changed or became wierd :sweatdrop:
And sorry for the sudden MaYuki, I just wanted them to quickly became lovers :D
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hahaha baka mayuki
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Awwww my mayuki heart
Soo goddam cute
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Sweet mayuki moments! :shy2:
I hope you could add some hot moments for mayuki ( if you know what I mean ) :mon misch:
Thanks for the update! Waiting for more! :hee:
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Omg they so cute >///<!!
The confession scence -die-
Please updatesoon and more sweet scence
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So does it mean Mayuyu is an actual cyborg since she has that thing on her right eye? >>><<< Can't wait for new update~ MAYUKI ARE DATING???? Happy~
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kyaaaa yuki
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MayuxMatsuixMusic: I thought it would be cuter if Mayu would always call Yuki a baka when she's embarrassed :D
steven_0809: Thank you~ I'm glad that you think it's cute :cathappy:
Railgun96: I hope I could :heart: but I don't think I could make one :banghead: Well, I could try putting some flirts?:)
Kirozoro: Thank you, I thought it was wierd because I don't really know how to express their feelings :D
MaYukiIsLife: .... I actually never thought of that, but I think you're right :shocked :lol: Yes, they are dating XD
Terragen: I like it when Yuki is the one flirting, while Mayu would only blush and keep on being tsundere :cathappy:
Chapter 11: Secret
“M-mayu, I-I love you” Yuki suddenly confessed.
“…Baka… I love you too” I whispered as I buried my face to the crook of her neck.
“D-does it mean we’re…?”
“…lovers… you baka… Baka Yuki” I gripped on her shirt as I gave her another kiss.
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Is what happened yesterday…
Of course it was embarrassing. Confessing my feelings to her… Well, I believe that I’m not regretting and actually, I’m happy about it. I spent another night at her room. Sleeping after making her dinner. It seems like she can’t cook at all. Such an ojou-sama…
It’s already morning, I think I should go back to my room… I’m sure Miyuki would be angry.
“Sunshine, honey.” I inform as I slide open the curtains.
“...What time is it?” Yuki asked with a pillow on top of her face.
“It’s almost 8, Yuki. Get ready.”
“I will… after you give me my good-morning-kiss”
“…Baka. You’ve been asking for it too much” I said as I slowly walked towards her.
She replied with a sweet giggle, then she extended her arms and pulled me for a hug, which I gladly accepted. Having an uncomfortable position, as Yuki was sitting on the bed and I was still standing up, I began to sit on her lap. After a minute of cuddling, she kissed my cheek.
“Hehe, my cute Mayuyu~” She smiled happily. “Can I have a kiss?”
I returned her words with a quick kiss on her cheek. She suddenly let go of the hug and put her arms around my waist. She puffed her cheeks, pouting. “I’m happy with that, but what I meant was a kiss on the lips, Mayu”
“T-that’s too quick!”
“Aish, who cares, Mayu… We’re lovers anyway” She wrapped her arms around my neck, starting to get closer and closer. I shut my eye as I’m too embarrassed for it, but I would be lying if I said I didn’t want it… As I thought it was already time for our lips to connect, the door suddenly swing open.
“Yah! What are you doing in the morning??” Kojima Haruna-senpai shouted.
“H-Haruna?? Why are you always interrupting us???” Yuki yelled angrily like a little kid.
“It’s not my fault, you should’ve remembered that I would always come to your room at 8” She pouted as she looked away.
“I forgot, okay? Anyway Rena would usually knock, before opening you know” Yuki said with an angry tone.
“Yuki, I believe you have something to explain?” I asked with my dark aura. It seems like Kojima Haruna and this Rena girl would check up on Yuki each morning, just… what the heck.
“Yah, Don’t misunderstand, newcomer. I already have Yuko as my love” Kojima-senpai said.
“Each morning, Yuki would always-” “GO LATE TO SCHOOL” Yuki suddenly interrupted.
“You see, I’m actually not a morning person at all, I can’t wake up with alarms~” She laughed dryly. Is it just my feeling or she’s making that up?
“Yup, not able to wake up at all” Yuko suddenly showed up. “Say, r’you both bout to have a sexy time? If that’s it let me take
NyanNyan away”
It was only then that I realized that I was still sitting on Yuki’s lap. “Ah, that’s right, don’t you want to let me kiss you now?” Yuki asked with an innocent face.
“Not in the mood, darling” I flatly rejected while getting off her. “Anyway, what do you mean she can’t wake up herself?”
“At the first year she would usually came late to school, that’s why we’ve been waking her up since then” Yuko answered. “It’s actually annoying you know? How she would take my NyanNyan each morning…”
“Hey, it’s not like I’m the one who asked for you guys to wake me up!” Yuki yelled angrily as she went in then slammed the bathroom door.
“Jeez, being so angry in the morning… Anyway, oha, Oshiriri-chan” Yuko showed me her grin.
“Ohayou, Oshiriko-chan” I replied with a small smile.
“Ah, I forgot that you guys are friend” Kojima-senpai said.
“That’s right, Oshiriri-chan and I met at the street and talked about something’s, and it seems like we liked the same things so we attached so quickly~” Yuko explained excitedly.
“Let me tell you something, NyanNyan. If you meet Oshiriko’s little sister, run. She’s cute but scary…” Yuko shivered as she remember the time she met Miyuki.
“Hey, my sister isn’t that much like a monster. She’s loving, okay? And I need to go now” I walked towards the door.
“Ah, aren’t you waiting for Yuki?” Yuko asked.
“Nah, I’m kind of angry at her, she didn’t tell me that Senpai would come to her room each morning”
“Pfft, yeah right Mayu, you just met yesterday. There’s no way she could tell you everything at a day”
“Yah, At least she shoud’ve told me important things like this!” I yelled as I stormed away from the room.
“Ah, newcomer-chan” Kojima Haruna-senpai shouted, making me look back. It seems like she was following me and leaving Yuko behind with Yuki. “Call me Haruna, okay?”
“…Haruna-senpai” I said softly.
“Un! Nice to meet you, Mayu-chan” She gave me a sweet smile.
“Ne, let me follow you to your room!” She said as she hold my hands, dragging me… towards the wrong direction. Ugh.
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“…Err, Yuki, are you guys dating? I think she’s angry at you” Yuko informed me when I was still at the bathroom.
“Well Yes we are dating… but EH??? Why is she angry??” I quickly got out of the bathroom, finding out that Mayu was already gone.
“It’s because you didn’t told her about us going to your room! ” Yuko closed the door. “And wear your clothes or I’m gonna rape you”
“Very funny, Hentai. Anyway if I told her, she would’ve asked why” I said as I put on my uniform.
“Dude, didn’t you just gave her a reason?”
I heaved a soft sigh from the depths of my heart. “Seriously? Because I get up late? That’s the dumbest reason ever, Yuko. You know I always get up at sunrise”
“Then what? Tell her the truth? You’re just going to hurt her feelings!”
“Ugh, that’s why I’m not telling her. I think keeping this as a secret would be better.”
“Up to you lass. Anyway, here’s your pain killer” Yuko threw me a pack of medicine.
“…Thanks”
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Sorry if it's wierd.
I'm kind of confused on what to write for the next chapter... Well, it's up to the polls result :D
thank you for the comments :wub:
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Dont kill yuki!
Is she sick?
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:D Ummmm~ Yuko is the perverted squirrel we all know and love right???? :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
-“Yup, not able to wake up at all” Yuko suddenly showed up. “Say, r’you both bout to have a sexy time? If that’s it let me take NyanNyan away”- Tells me either Yuko wants a sexy time with NyanNyan or she wants to see it
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Secrets~ Secrets~ Secrets~ One of the best spice in every story!
or not :lol: :banghead:
Ohman~! Can't wait for the next up.. :banghead:
Hope you update soon.. Thanks for your hardwork.. :bow:
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hahaha kawaii nee mayuyu~~~
yey~~~ oshiri sisters sanjou!!!!!!!!!!
oshiriko ans shiriri is the DA BEST!!
thank you for this fan fic :bow: :bow:
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oh well my so obvious vote has been placed, too bad i can't view the pending results? Is it just me or something? Anyway, LOOOL I can't believe what I'm seeing right now! HAHAHA was just out for a day or two from here and there you go...they're dating!! :wub: :inlove: :oops: :deco:
VERY WELL DONE LOL! now for jealousy-mushy taimu!!! XD :nervous
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What's wrong with yuki? Why does she has to take painkillers?
And about poll, I can't seem to see the results.
Anyways, I voted for fluffy mayuki!
Thanks for the update!
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Just've read it and I find your fic very interesting :mon thumb:
Mayuki so lovey-dovey, all the time :mon blood: :mon blood: You make my day now :mon firecrack:
What's Yuki's secret and I'm sure that Milky's slaps didn't that much hurt for Yuki to take a painkiller :mon speechless:
Anyway, waiting for your new update :mon beam:
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kurogumi : that's part of the secret :P
MaYukiIsLife : yep, the hentai we love :heart:
the answer is a. sexy time with NyanNyan~ which will be naturally replied with a slap :smhid
kenjoy12 : hahha, I hope it will be XD thank you
MayuxMatsuixMusic : yeah, I just couldn't leave out the Oshiri sisters :lol:
TD : Sorry, I chose the last option for the poll. so it could only be viewed when it has expired. why did I choose that... I don't know myslef :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
hehe, I had so much idea's for this fic when I was doing my test, and it would be better if they were dating. :cathappy:
Railgun96 : That's something to be explained in the next chapter (which I don't know when...) :nervous
leEwẬy : Thank you~ I'm glad you like it xD
Of course it isn't :nervous I'll try to explain the painkiller after this chapter:)
Yeay, 48 members voted~ :heart: such a holy number :heart: :heart:
Thank you for voting and reading :bow: I'm sorry that it took me a while to update, I was stuck in bed for 3 days because of a fever :catglare:
And the chapter for the poll isn't finished yet :( I was planning to update twice but it seems like I can't. I'm sorry :cry:
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SMALL QUESTION.
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I made 2 options on the poll, because for the next chapter, I wanted to write winner 1 (fluffy mayuki)
and the chapter after that as the second most chosen one... which is more than one.
What do you think? Kojiyuu or Acchan (it would be Atsumina)
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Here's chapter 12: Reaction
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An unconscious sigh slipped from my lips the moment I was in front of my room. Haruna-senpai had already left the dormitory, heading to her class. While I’m still gathering up my courage to meet Miyuki. Uuh, I just hope she’ll understand…
“Miyuki, please understand” I whispered to myself while opening the door slowly. As the door was opened with a small creak sound, I saw Miyuki sitting down on my bed.
“M-Miyuki” I called her.
“Ah” She quickly spun her head as she heard my voice. "Onee-chan! I missed you!!" It was proceeded with a tight embrace.
“Where were you?” She asked me without letting go of the death grip hug.
“Err, I had some things I needed to do”
“Well, isn’t that specific?” Uh… right, my super over protective little sister…
“Um… I-it’s just… I had to-”
Knock Knock!
A sudden knock on the door.
“E-eh? Did you have a promise with Sayaka?” I tried to pull myself from her hug.
“No…” She let off the hug, reaching towards the door. “Yes? Who is it?” She said as she opened the door.
“Ohayou~” There, Yuki stood waving her hands like a little kid not knowing the danger ahead. Screw that, I bet she’s actually doing this on purpose.
“Y-Yuki??” I suddenly felt a thrill shudder throughout my body as I felt an ice glare from Miyuki who didn’t move an inch.
Forget about being angry at Yuki, seeing her beaten by Miyuki would be worse! I have to save her! “Ohayou… W-Wait! What are you doing here?” I hold on to Miyuki’s shoulder, slowly making her move backwards, getting further away from Yuki.
“Of course, to pick you up” She answered with an angel smile. “Let me take you to your class” Yuki continued without hesitate. U-Uaah, she’s actually here to pick me up??
I took a quick glance at Miyuki. Still glaring. Uh, Yuki, why did you worsen the situation?
“Ah, Miyuki-san ohayou” Yuki waved her hand in front of Miyuki.
“Why are you here?” Miyuki asked with a calm –full of anger- tone.
“I told you, I’m here to take Mayu” She answered full of confident... It’s more like she’s challenging Miyuki.
“Onee-chan is my Onee-chan, why would she go with you?” She said with a harsh tone, then she showed Yuki her (evil) smile “And we’re at the same class anyway”
“Is there something wrong with me being with Mayu? I want to be together with her. Just the two of us” Yuki pressed on the last words. Yuki… Is she actually angry at Miyuki’s behavior last night?
“Hah? Why should I let you-”
“Because I love her” Yuki answered before the question was fully asked.
…Oh gosh, why is she so straight forward like that? Declaring her love for me… I found myself grinning with a red face. I-I just can’t stop myself from grinning! I should stop, this isn’t the time for being happy!
“M-Miyuki, I have something to tell you” I called my little sister, making her clench fist relaxed.
Miyuki spun her head “W-what is it, Onee-chan?”
In the end, I believe that I have to be honest. For now, it’s with myself and Miyuki.
“Y-Yuki here… She’s my lover” I said it. I didn’t believe I could actually say that to my sister! I am happy by that but… heck I feel so scared. I could feel my heart beating rapidly.
“Lover…?” She took a quick glance at Yuki, then back to me. After some second of silence –which felt like an hour for me- she disagreed. “So… not contacting me for two days, and now saying that she’s your lover?” Uuh… It’s not like I did that on purpose.
“…Un, she is”
Just saying these made me break out in sweat. As I expected, silence barged in the door. Miyuki haven’t said anything yet. She looked down, making me not able to see her expression.
After about a minute, she made a heavy sigh. Miyuki then stared at me with an unknown feelings that I don’t understand. “I’m going to my class” She took her bag and suddenly leave “Where ever you’re going be careful, Onee-chan” She left me with Yuki.
I was actually surprised because of Miyuki’s reaction. I thought she would either agree or disagree. Rather than none of it… Or maybe she pretend that she didn’t hear it all? Ah, nope. Miyuki must’ve-
“Mayuyu” Yuki called me with her soothing voice, making me awake from my thoughts.
“Y-yes?”
“Want to hold hands?” She reached out her hand, waiting for me to hold on to it.
“…” I took the offer and held hands with here. It was warm, and it made me feel assure.
“…Thank you, Yukirin”
Yuki answered with a beautiful smile “Say, Is there any other place I could hold?” She smiled innocently. Great, she just ruined the sweet moment.
“Never mind, you hentai!” I took my hands away from her.
“A-ah, I was only joking…”
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I'm sorry for making this chapter short...
and once again, thank you for the votes~ and thank you for reading and commenting :cathappy: :heart:
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Miyuki is over protective... Poor Mayu
Cant wait for the next ch
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Naughty mayu... where do you think you want to put your hand at? XD
Possessive miyuki is scary. :sweatdrop:
Nice fluffy mayuki! :twothumbs
As for the choice for next chapter regarding your small question, I would vote for kojiyuu!
Thanks for the update!
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Isn't the title supposed to be like CAN I HOLD YOU FOR A MINUTE? :V :lol: XD
a naughty question answered by naughty thoughts. I see their connection there. :lol:
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i want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more mayuki!!!!!!mayuki!!!
mayuki!!!!!!!
mayukii!!!!!!!!!
mayuki!!!!!!!!!!!
mayuki!!!!!!!!!mayuki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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:smhid I think Yukirin's getting into the squirrel's habits~ :bow: :bow: :bow: Plus if Miyuki does beat Yukirin up I don't think it would hurt (as much~) UPDATES FTW~~~ I'm actually wondering why Yukirin has to take painkillers. Is it because something happened after she saved the 2 Watanabes or something extraordinary happened?
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I'm sorry for not posting the continues of my fanfic :(
I thought of making something else. It was weird because I made it different then I first imagine, but oh well.
I was actually about to post this yesterday, but it seems like I wasn't in time. sorry... :banghead:
I'm sorry for not replying on the comment, I promise I will reply on my next post here...
here's a MaYuki and a little bit wMatsui One-shot :cathappy:
I'm sorry if it's weird... :sweatdrop:
Captivated
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It all started with a small little kiss. It was supposed to land at her cheek, but she turned her head making my lips land to hers. It didn’t fully get her lips, but we sure were surprised…
I quickly apologized and she answered with a smile, saying that it was alright.
“I know it’s an accident. I bet if I told you to do that, you wouldn’t dare”
Did she just… dare on me?
“Oh, bring it on Yuki” I gave her a smirk. Which she answered with a smirk not different as mine.
“I dare you, Watanabe Mayu…” Yuki hold my hands with hers. “Kiss me…” She continued as she made her face get closer to mine.
“…On the lips”
I placed my hand on her cheek before pressing my lips on her.
Her lips were soft, addicting… I want- No… I need more.
As my desires were overflowing, I wrapped my arms behind her. Gripping tightly to her uniform.
She bend forward on top of me, pressing her lips hard against mine.
Doing this at school… It felt uncomfortably comfortable.
Her voice.
Her smile.
Her touch.
Her kiss.
…I was captivated.
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“Ohayou, Mayuyu~” Yuki greeted me as she step out of her house.
“Ohayou… Took you long enough”
“Sorry, I woke up late… Anyway let’s go!” She took my hands and drag me towards school.
My name is Watanabe Mayu, 16 years old. I don’t know since when, but I’ve fall in love with this maiden, Kashiwagi Yuki.
We were best friends since we met at high school. And because of the dare that she made that time, we’re now… dating.
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“Mayu… I love you” She confessed right after the kiss.
“…Me too, Yuki”
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As we kept on talking about various things, we were already at school without us noticing.
“Oh my, that was quick… Anyway, I’ll see you at break” Yuki let go off my hand. Feeling the sudden warm go, I quickly tried to take it back.
“Yuki” I hold on to her hand again. “Let me take you to your class”
“What?” She gave me a confused face. “There’s no need, Mayu” She let out a small giggle from her mouth. “Seriously, it’s alright. Let me go on my own, ok?”
“…fine” I gave her a slight nod before letting go of her hand.
“See you” she said as she gave me a wink.
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I sat down on my chair, my head resting on top of the desk.
“Is something the matter, Watanabe-san?” Matsui Rena, my friend from the same club ask me while licking a lollypop.
“…Give me some” I took her lollypop forcefully from her mouth, and without thinking I put it in mine.
“Ugh!?” I quickly took out the lollypop from my mouth “Uuh, I forgot you have a weird taste of food!” I said after drinking water
that I bought from home.
“It’s your fault for suddenly taking it” She took the lollypop from my hand and continued to taste on it. “So, why the gloomy face, Nabe-san?”
“Stop being so formal, Rena” I tried to change the topic. She does know that I’m dating Yuki since that day, but I don’t want her to know my small little problem here. I mean, worried about a small problem like this is actually stupid, right?
“Alright, Mayu. Stop trying to change the subject” Uh, bull’s eye. She’s so sharp, damn it. “So, what’s wrong? Is it about Yuki?”
I took a deep breath as I knew that I couldn’t hide it from her anymore.
“I-It’s just… I don’t feel any different” I sighed as I let out my feelings out. “We were best friends, so kissing each other cheeks were normal… Holding hand is also normal”
“So you’re happy that you’re dating, but you feel like as if you’re still just best friends?” Rena knew what I was talking about without even having me explain it all.
“Right. I was really super happy when we kissed… Actually I want it again!” I shamefully admitted my desire to her. “But… she doesn’t want to…”
“…Mind telling me why you think so?”
“Last Sunday… I was at her house. Parents gone shopping, no brothers, no sister…” Another sigh slipped out from my mouth. “I kept on trying to kiss her, but she kept avoiding”
“Mayu… did she told you that she didn’t want a kiss?” with a ‘pop’ sound, Rena took the half eaten super spicy lollypop out of her mouth.
“No, she just kept on avoiding me every time I tried to kiss her. I didn’t ask her why.”
Rena then stand up, and gave me a smile. “Don’t worry, Mayu. Yuki loves you.” She walk out with a smile on her face.
“Huh?” I stared at her back as she left my classroom.
Just, why is she suddenly saying that to me? And… she looks so sure about it?
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Rena’s P.O.V
I threw the lollypop stick to the rubbish bin as the candy was already gone.
Bzzz. Bzzz.
A message came in my phone.
From: Yukirin
To: Rena
‘Rena-chan!! Mayu offered me to take me to my class! Isn’t that so cute of her?’
“Very funny guys” I thought as I laughed at my friends who just started dating about a month ago.
The problem is simple. Mayu and Yuki loves each other. Mayu wants more but Yuki’s too scared to do so. It seems like their first kiss was unforgettable…
I write a reply as I opened a melon pan from my pocket.
“Rena-chan!!!” A familiar voice called my name.
“Ugh?!” Jurina appeared out of nowhere, hugging me tightly enough to stifle my surprised gasp. “Jurina…”
“I miss you, Rena-chan~” She gave me a puppy look. “Give me a kiss~?” Jurina tip toed her way to make her lips press on mine.
“J-Jurina not here!!” I shove her away as quickly as I could.
“Hehe, gomen Rena-chan. I missed you so much” She apologized with a cat smile.
“Jurina, we just met this morning” Right, we went to school together.
“But still I miss you after those suffocating 10 minutes without you” She continued to hug me tighter.
“Aright, I get it. Let me answer this first” I went back to focus on the device at my hand. After a moment of writing, I pressed the send button. “Done” I said.
“Great!” Jurina gave me another small quick kiss.
“Stop that!” I tried to make her let go. “The others are watching!” I warned her as I felt stares from other students.
“Don’t worry Rena-chan, we’re the first and third year couple! Many students agree with our relationship!” She answered full of
confidence. That actually explains why some student are taking photo…
“Fine, but we could do that later…” I sighed as I give up on releasing yslef from Jurina’s hug. “Help me with MaYuki couple here” I showed Jurina the message I got earlier from Yuki.
“Offered me to my class…” Jurina repeated what she read. “I heard Mayu didn’t get another kiss. Why’s that?” Jurina asked.
“Yuki is just scared if her desire goes wild” I gave her a short honest answer.
“Wouldn’t that make Mayu have this… what was it? Sexual Furu-something…”
“Sexual frustration?”
“Yep, that”
“Jurina, were did you learn those word from…”
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Mayu P.O.V
‘Bakarin, I miss you…’
Is what I was about to send via message, but never mind… Ugh, this is so frustrating! I let my head fall to the desk, making my forehead become red.
It’s already 11 and Yuki hasn’t send me any message. She usually send some at 9, but I don’t know why she hasn’t. Uuh… I miss her so bad, but my pride doesn’t let me show my real feelings to her.
‘Ting Tong’ The speaker from class suddenly turned on. It meant that the school was about to announce something.
‘X-A, Watanabe Mayu, Please come to the student council room. Repeat, X-A, Watanabe Mayu, Please come to the student council room.’
‘What? Me? What did I do?’ I thought as I stood up, heading towards to council room or you could say: Takahashi Minami senpai’s personal room.
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“Excuse me” I opened the door slowly.
“Ah, Mayu, come in” Takahashi-senpai told me to take a seat. I took a seat and waited for her to say something. But she didn’t.
She didn’t even look at me! She just kept on reading her work.
“Er… why did you call me, senpai?” I asked as she was not about to start at all.
“…honestly? I didn’t want to do that” Takahashi-senpai then stood up and went to the door. “Remember to clean up, okay?” She said as she leaved me behind alone leaving the unanswered question unanswered.
Click.
A lock sound was heard. What?
“Eh? Senpai??” I tried to open the door. Lock. It was lock from the outside with a key.
“S-Senpai! Yah!” I started to knock on the door with my fist. My arms were starting to get red because of my own action.
“Takahashi Minami-senpai! What do you mean by leaving me here?!”
Bang! Bang!
I knocked the door louder.
Suddenly, I felt something soft at the place I was knocking. A pair of hand was stopping my hand from banging the door.
“Mayu” a familiar voice called my name. Yuki was standing behind me.
“Y-Yukirin?? Why are you here?” I quickly spin around.
“…I’m the one who called you here” Yuki answered without looking straight into my eyes. “A-Ano ne, Mayu… Rena told me about
it…” She held on her own uniform, playing with the button on it. “I love you. I really do! I-I’m just scared if I would do something to
you…” Her voice kept on getting lower at the last part.
“Huh?” I gave her a confused look as I tilted my head to the side. “…Something as in?”
“I-it’s something you won’t like” She answered quickly, still without looking to my eyes.
“I don’t remember you being somebody so unspecific like this?”
“…I-it’s something lewd, Mayu”
I felt my face getting hot as I heard her said the word lewd. Is she… thinking of us doing ‘that’? As in that ‘that’?? I-Isn’t she taking things to fast???
I took a glance at Yuki’s expression. I could see her blushing, making her face totally red. Her hands were gripping her skirt tightly. I then noticed her super worried but also shy expression she’s wearing…
Has she been thinking about this all the time?
I took a small breath before answering “…You’ll never know I’d like it or not if you don’t try”
Silence. She then look at me with a surprised expression. The expression that says: did I hear wrong?
“I’m serious… well, that’s if you want” I reassured her.
She suddenly slipped her arms around my waist, and in a swift movement I could already feel her lips press hardly against mine.
“Mh… Yuki…” I moaned out.
“Mayu… Open your mouth”
“Eh? Mph-” Yuki forced her tongue into my mouth. A great wave of pleasure that I'd never felt before flowed through my whole body.
Yuki ran her tongue around my mouth. My body was trembling for a while as my mind started to go blank from all the sudden pleasure. Just when I thought my knees weren’t strong to hold me up, our lips parted.
“Y-Yuki…” I tried to catch my breath. Is it just me or… it became hot here?
Yuki continued with a kiss on my neck. It felt ticklish, especially when she started to use her tongue to lick.
“Ngh… Yukiii…” I unconsciously moaned out.
Yuki, who was still busy with her mouth replied by lowering her spot of kiss, down to my collarbone. Using her free hand, she unbuttoned my uniform.
“M-Mayu…” She called my name and look to my eyes, asking me for permission.
“Yuki…” I gave her a slight nod. “Ahn…”
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“Konnichiwa, miss sunshine” Rena greeted me as we met at the cafeteria.
“Yah, don’t call me that!” I slapped her arms as she sat down beside me.
“You should look at a mirror, you’re smiling so widely”
“Uuh… Very funny, Rena”
“So, did something good happened?” She asked while unpacking a melon bread.
“…un” I nodded in embarrassment. I just know I can’t hide my happy feelings from her.
“Rena” Yuki, who came back from buying drinks called Rena. “Don’t flirt with my girlfriend” she bluntly said.
I felt blood rushing to my cheeks as she boldly said that. It was actually the first time Yuki called me her girlfriend. And of course, it made me happy.
“Being bold aren’t we?” Rena chuckled. “Well, what if I do this?” She suddenly put her arm around my neck, making me getting closer to her.
As if the surrounding light was suddenly absorbed by the sudden darkness that was coming from Yuki’s back. “Matsui Rena” Yuki called like calling a cursed object. I could feel black evil spirits starting to form behind her back as she looked at Rena with angry eyes.
“Joking~” Rena quickly let go of me while giving Yuki a small smile. “Anyway, glad to know you’re happy, Mayu-chan” She smiled brightly with a bread on her mouth.
Rena’s laugh suddenly faded away as she saw someone “See you later…” She said as she walked towards a certain person who was surrounded by girls.
Without any hesitation, Matsui Jurina was flirting with other girls.
“You have a very soft skin” Jurina caressed the girl’s cheek with love. “I bet your lips are also-”
“MATSUI JURINA!!” Rena screamed right in to Jurina’s ear.
“U-Uwa!!” Jurina fell to the ground. “R-Rena-chan???”
“Pfft” I laughed at the comedy sight happening in front of me.
“Humph, serve’s her right for trying to flirt with my Mayu” Yuki commented.
I kept on laughing at the ‘comedy show’ while Yuki was watching like it was nothing new.
After a while I felt something warm holding on to my hand.
“Y-Yuki…” Yuki was holding my hand as how a lover would. She wasn’t looking at me, but I could see her face blushing. Those
action were enough to make me blush as well.
“…I love you” I whispered as I leaned on her back while tightening the grip of our linking hands. The small, quite whisper was heard by Yuki.
She looked surprised by my sudden action, but then her face softened. She tightly squeezed my hand.
“I love you too, Mayu”
My heart was beating faster than ever before.
Her voice.
Her smile.
Her touch.
I don’t care how people would react. Either disgust or not, I’m ok with it. I smiled before giving her a small kiss on her lips.
I could feel her tense up. I could hear other students around us gasping in shock. I could even hear wMatsui saying ‘wow’. I know they’re going to tease us later, but I don’t care... Because I was totally captivated by this beauty.
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They so sweet ><!!!!
I want more Mayuki!!!
Please update soon
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It is so cute!!! Bwahahah not only :D Bwahahah!!!!!!!!
GJ!!!!!! :twothumbs
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Awww. Mou, this is just too adorable. Just imagining a cute Yuki before she attacked Mayu aggressively. :nya: :nya: :nya:
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Kirozoro : I think I made Miyuki too overprotective... She wasn't suppose to be too protective like that :nervous
Railgun96 : Thanks for answering the small question :D Then KojiYuu it is....
TD : Hahha, I actually gave a random title for this fic :sweatdrop:
MayuxMatsuixMusic : Me too~ :heart:
MaYukiIsLife : She is :D For the painkiller... would be on the future chapter (which I don't exactly know when) :smhid
Chanaline : I'm glad you like it :D
Konoe : Thanks~ Hehe, I could imagine that xD
I'm sorry for the long update, didn't thought holiday would make me more busy :wth
Chapter 13: Four Clover Leaf
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>>>A few minutes ago<<<
Yuko’s POV
“Here’s your pain killer” I threw Yuki a pack of medicine that I took from NyanNyan.
“Thanks” She drank about 3 medicine. Isn’t that actually too much? Actually, what is that? There’s no way Minami gave her an unknown thing…
“Hey, is that really a painkiller?” I asked her out of curiosity.
“To be honest, I don’t know myself?” She answered like it was none of her business. Heh, but that’s really like Yuki.
“Baka, anyway shouldn’t we go? It’s already 8:10” I opened the door, stepping outside of the room.
“Un” Yuki followed me from behind.
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“Yuko, can I ask you a question?” Yuki gave me a serious look as we walked towards our class.
I sighed. “You’re already asking me one”
Honestly? I don’t really like how she’s still being formal in front of me. Well, not only me but other members as well. She kind of change since that day… Well, she would joke around, but I still feel an uneasy feeling from her.
After a while I heard no questions from her… Was I too harsh on her?
“So? What is it?” I asked.
It seems like she hesitated for a moment but after taking a deep breath she finally said something. “…Mayuyu’s little sister… she’s scary” Problems with the little sister huh? I don’t think that’s surprising. But seriously, that is not a question, Bakarin.
I sighed again. “Heck I know what ya mean”
“Eh?” She was clueless. “You’ve met Watanabe Miyuki before?” She tilt her head, making a confused face. Huh? Did Mayu never told her about it?
“Yuki, I’ve been friends with Mayu for a long time. Didn’t she told you?”
“Eh? Seriously??” Great, she doesn’t know. “Wait… If you’re friends with Mayu, why didn’t you told me that she was here?!” She kind of yelled there… But, I’m sorry Yuki. It’s not the right time yet. I can’t tell you the truth… Yet.
“Well… I thought it would be more fun leaving you to find her in a more natural way~” A habit of mine: giving a wry smiling each time I lie…
I could already feel her black aura. Seems like she’s pissed. Anyway I gotta change the subject.
“Ah, about Mayu. You should just go after her. Fight on Miyuki if you wanna get Mayu.” I said confidently.
Right after saying that, her black aura disappeared in a flash.
“…You’re right” She rushed away to the opposite direction. It seemed like she was heading to Mayu’s room.
“…Ganbatte, Yuki” I whispered.
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Mayu’s P.O.V
We walked outside the dorm, holding on each other’s hand.
There were barely any students outside. I believe it’s because Yuki and I decided to skip class together. But of course, it was not only us who skipped. I saw some students reading books, playing their hand phone, there were also some students eating quietly at the corner of the dorm. Such a school…
I kept on looking around. Seeing what kind of activity other students would do when they skip.
At the garden in front of a tree behind a bush, I saw something moving.
At first I thought it was an animal, but as Yuki lead me towards the garden, I could see it more clearly.
Actually, too clearly.
“Let’s take a seat here” Yuki said as she guide me towards a bench.
I sat down without saying a word.
“…” Yuki looked at me with confused eyes. She gripped my hand tighter. “What’s wrong?”
“Nothing…” I answered shortly. It seems like Yuki hasn’t notice it.
I turned my head trying to avoid something that I had accidently saw. Two students… girls. Hiding behind the tree’s shadow and covered by the bush were kissing. Thought their hiding place were good, my sharp eye could get a clear picture of what they were doing. It was shameless… but I can’t hide the fact that I’m actually jealous.
I lifted my head towards Yuki.
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“Because I love her”
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I blushed a little as I suddenly remember how Yuki confessed her feelings toward me in front of Miyuki…
I’m weird… Yesterday, when we start dating, I haven’t said that 3 words to her again. I’ve made her dinner, I’ve slept with her… of course without doing anything weird. And I’ve called her with nicknames that usually lovers use. But I haven’t said that I love her.
Not like Yuki herself. She said it more than hundreds time already… Ok, maybe not that much, but she’s said it dozens of times.
… I should tell Yuki my real feelings. I mean, I know it. The fact that I actually want to kiss her, and how I actually want to be able to confess my feelings like that time again.
“Y-Yuki…” I called her.
“Yes?”
“I-I…” I took a deep breath. “I’m glad the weather is great huh~?” That’s not it, baka myself!!
“Uuh… yeah?” Yuki agreed with a confused face.
“…Yuki” I called her again.
“What’s wrong, Mayu?”
I took another deep breath. “I-Isn’t these flower beautiful??!” Akh! Not again, BAKA!
Uh... Why can't I express my feelings…?
Yuki looked at the place I randomly pointed.
“Y-yeah?” She looked confused. “B-but Mayu, that just a patch of white clover. It’s not that beautiful, it’s something you could find anywhere…”
Facepalm Myslef. I’m such an idiot… Uh, this is embarrassing. I guess I’m just not ready to say it yet…
"Ah!" Yuki took notice of something. "Four clover leaf~"
"E-eh?" Uwa, it really is a four clover leaf! "M-Make a wish, Yuki!"
"Eh?? Un…" She closed her eyes, making a serious expression.
I could see it from her expression. She’s confused. Rather than wishing, I think she’s thinking of a
wish…
"Hmmmm… You know it's you who found it, so why don't you wish for something?" Yuki opened one of her eye, looking at me.
"What? No, you're the one who discovered it!" I insisted. Didn’t the four clover leaf bring happiness to the finder?
"...alright…" She closed her eyes once again. "Hmmn.... Done!" Yuki smiled satisfied.
"So… What did you wish for?"
"Secret~ Anyway, here" She took and gave me the four clover leaf with a grin on her face.
"E-eh? Is it alright?"
"Of course~ I want you to take it~" I kind of blushed a little as I took the plant from her hand.
She then pat my head. "If you could, don't lose it, alright?"
"...yes, Yuki"
I’m going to say it. I’m going to confess my feelings to her, now.
“…Yuki” I called her for the third time.
“Yes?” She tilted her head.
"I like you..." The feeling of a heavy pressure on top of my chest was gone.
I'm happy that I was able to say it.
"..." Yuki didn't reply. Instead she looked at me with surprised and confused eye.
...eh? I guess it is weird if I suddenly say something like that...
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...Uuhh I'm so embarrassed!!!
"T-t-that was only a joke!!!" I tried to make her forget what I said or at least make her change the topic. Uh...
I put both of my hands to cover my red blushing face.
After some second of silence I heard her giggle.
"Hahha~"
"W-what's so funny?! You dummy!!"
"Don't worry Mayu, I know that it's a joke" I didn’t see, but I could somehow sense her smiling. Aah... I really shouldn't have said that. It's so embarrassing...
As seconds keep on passing by, I kept on being silence with hands covering my face.
"Because, Mayu..." She took her hands to mine, gently trying to uncover my red blushing face. "You don't like me, you love me . Just like how I love you"
...Those words... they went right in to my heart. I felt like I was unable to breathe. And for an instant, I could hear nothing at all. My mind kept on rewinding those words that came out from her lips.
I slowly let down my hands, which were still held by Yuki. She was looking at me with a beautiful angle smile.
She made my hand touch her cheek. "I love you, Mayuyu"
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I'm sorry it's not fluffy enough ... There's actually a bonus, but it's still on process... I can't concentrate on it because of Yuko's announcement :bleed eyes:
It's shocking.
I can't believe I feel so ... slap-right-in-the-my-face because of it :wth :panic:
But still, I wish her all the best.
Ok, I shouldn't continue whining. This isn't the place for my feelings :catglare:
I'll keep on trying to continue the bonus, so I hope it'll be finished in one or two day:)
Oh, and sorry if there's something wrong about the four clover leaf thing :nervous
Thank you for reading :heart:
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I really want to know.... My Kami-Oshi is sick and you don't tell me why~ Your evil. I would love to collaborate with you but I know your busy~ :nervous :panic:
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Mayu is so cute, when she try to say she love Yuki :D
Thx for update
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Yeah, you're right :mon hanky: Yuko's announcement totally ruin my New Year Day :mon cry:
She sure now how and when to make an announcement :mon ref:
But it's still her choice after all :mon surr: Wish her best as an actress then :mon speechless:
Back to your fic, Yuki's still mysterious in here :mon POd:
What's Mayu's truth, now :mon headbang: Too curious :mon ghost:
But still, sweet Mayuki momemts :mon inluv:
Anyway, update soon, please :mon cute:
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DAROU?!?!?
i cried the whole night since i watched the announcement
i just cant get over it :(
but hey your fic cheered me up and mayuki :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
more mayuki!! :inlove:
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MaYukiIsLife : Have I ever told you that I love your account name :heart: :lol:
Sorry for being evil, but I think it would be more fun if you were interested :P
Collaborating sounds fun~!! But yeah I'm kind of busy because of school next week :cry:
Maybe we could make some OS. I have many ideas...
That is if you want... :nervous
Kirozoro : Yep, imagining it made me go squealing by myself. :lol:
leEwẬy : It did, it really did. :cry:
but yep, let's keep on wishing her the best:)
Haha, sorry, I guess Yuki is still a little bit too mysterious... :nervous
MayuxMatsuixMusic : I would've cried if my brothers didn't tease me :catglare:
But yeah, crying internally...
I'm glad that my fic cheered you :oops:
Because one of my reason of making this fic was too cheer people up... and making them curious :p
more mayuki coming right away~ :heart:
Thank you for comments :cathappy:
and thank you for reading :heart: :cathappy:
I'm sorry about the bonus, I decided to make it as the next chapter...
Chapter 14: Newlyweds ? Lol
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What happened at the night when Yuki and Mayu became lovers.
Mayu’s P.O.V
“Honey~!!” Yuki hugged me from behind. “Is dinner ready??” She asked excitedly like a little kid.
“No, and don’t suddenly hug me like that, I could ruin the food”
“Hehhe, I guess I’m just too happy Mayu” She gave a light kiss at my ear before whispering “I love you”
My face turned bright light. Yuki continued to put her chin on top of my head. “Nee~ Mayuyu~ I love you” She said again with a childish tone.
“U-un… me too…” I finally decided to answer with a simple ‘me too’.
At first, I thought Yuki would ask me to say ‘I love you’ but she didn’t. She was already happy with my answer: ‘me too’.
“Hehe~” What’s for dinner?” She tighten her arm around my waist. Her hands, slightly about to touch my……………….. Oh god, no. Not yet.
“Y-yah!! Don’t touch me there!” I quickly slapped her arms.
“Eeeh, I didn’t mean to!”
“W-whatever! Just get the plates ready or something!!” I shoved her out of the kitchen.
Yuki puffed her cheeks as she silently obeyed.
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Dinner was finally ready. I served it neatly on top of the small round desk.
“Whoa, it looks so delicious!” Yuki quickly took the knife and fork. “Itadakimasu~~” She said before trying the Hanbaguu I made. “Mmh~ Delicious~” She said
with a happy face.
I smiled as I watch her eat. She’s enjoying it so much, I guess she hasn’t ate home-made since a long time…Her dorm room is the most expensive type.
It has a 3 rooms. A kitchen, Bath and the bedroom.
I guess she really is from a rich family.
Maybe that makes her not knowing how to cook. Haha, such an ojou-sama nee?
But… why is there a bunk bed? Did she usually live with somebody else? And there’s actually two tables to study.
“Mayu? Aren’t you going to eat?”
“Eh? Ah, I will…”
Feeling that my stomach was grumbling, I thought that I should talk about that later.
Well then, I should eat as well.
I clapped my hands together.
“Itadaki Mayuyu” …Shit. I accidently bought a habit of mine, saying my name after the word itadaki…
I felt Yuki staring at me with confused eye. “S-sorry, it’s a habit…” I said embarrassed.
“Hee~” Yuki suddenly showed me her Cheshire smile. “I guess I’ll also say that…” Yuki gently brushed my cheek, then continued with a lower voice“…when I get to eat you” She winked at me seductively.
Puff! I felt my face volcanically blush in red. My wild imagination trigger was almost on.
“Kawaii~!!” Yuki pinch my cheek. “Ne, aren’t we like a newlyweds?” She continued to tease me.
“W-w-w-who are you c-calling n-newlyweds???” I looked at all place except of her eyes. My face was red, as in red-red. (?)
“Us of course~” She simply answered. “Now, why don’t you feed me some? Or maybe I will~” She forked a potato, then bought it in front of my mouth. “Say ‘Aah’, Honey”
With a red face and a bit hesitation, I opened my mouth with a small ‘aah’ sound.
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“Haa~ that was the most delicious dinner I’ve ever had~!” Yuki hold my hand and played with my fingers.
“Arigatou, Mayu… I’d love having a wife that could cook like this” She gave me another angel smile.
Uugh… My heart is racing so fast… I-I guess we really are like newlyweds...
…Newlyweds…
…
Unconsciously, my imagination mode was on…
How I would wake up first, watching her still asleep…
Then I make breakfast…
Then she goes to work…
After doing house chores and a long wait she would come back from work…
After that comes the part ‘Dinner or a bath first?’
And after she does both of it we would go to bed…
And since tomorrow would be Sunday we… w-we would-
“Mayuyu~?” Yuki’s voice slapped me back to reality. “Ne, Mayu, You’re kind of smiling by yourself…” She stared at me in confusion.
“I-I wasn’t! A-anyway you’re teasing me too much!” I blushed as I remembered about what I was imagining.
“Hmm~ your face is red. What were you thinking about??” Yuki pinched my cheek.
“N-nothiingg!”I quickly stack up the plates with a rush as Iwas preparing to do the dishes.
“Uwa, careful honey. It could slip from you’re hand if you rush like that… Anyway let me do the washing” Yuki took the plates from my hand. “You can take a bath first”
“T-thank you…”
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“Hah… Hot baths are really great when you feel tired~” I said to myself as I went to the bathtub.
…
…
…
Wait wait wait!! Isn’t this kind of suspicious!? I mean, she won’t peek at me? R-right??
I took a quick glance at the bathroom door, gladly there was nobody or at all. I guess I’m too paranoid…
Mm… but… Isn’t it normal for somebody to peek when there lover is taking a bath…?
Wait, no. I’m talking like I’m asking her to peek. No, no, no just no. I swear I’ll throw her face with this shampoo container if she does.
But… but what if she… Uhh…
I hid myself in the warm water. I guess… a little peek would be alright?
I took another glance at the foggy glass door. Yuki wasn’t there.
“…”
Haha, what the heck am I thinking about. She came from a rich family, why would she do things like that…
I sighed. “I guess she won’t, huh…”
I looked throughout the room, there was a plastic duck near the shampoo containers.
“…Kawaii” I tried to reach it without getting out of the warm water.
Brakk!!!
The bathroom door was opened with force.
“Gomen, Mayu! I just finished doing the dishes!” Yuki shouted.
In reflex I quickly covered my body with both arms and hand. I could feel my face boiling in red as she saw me.
“W-w-w-w-what are you doing here!!!??” I asked with a yelling tone.
“Peeking, of course!” She admitted proudly.
I took the shampoo container and threw it right on her face. “HENTAI!!”
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“Honey, I’m so sorry. I really didn’t see anything…”
Yuki was sitting beside the bed where I was hiding myself with a blanket.I really don’t want to see her for the time being. I-it’s not like I was that angry. I mean…
I did kind of want her to… But how she was opening the door when half of me was out of the tub made me embarrassed. I really regret the fact that I was hoping her to peek…
My face was still red. I guess it was because of the hot water and Yuki herself.
“…liar…” I pulled the pillow above my head, trying to hide as much as possible.
“…I’m not lying… I couldn’t see anything because of the fog…” She gently tried to take the blanket on top off me, but I kept on holding to it tighter.
“Mayu…” She called my name again and again as I kept on hiding.
“Mayu, I’m sorry. I really am…”
“…”
I heard her sigh as the minutes kept on walking.
“It’s already 11 pm Mayu… Are you going to sulk until morning?”
“…”
I didn’t gave her any answer. My brain just kept on rewinding the scene.
“Nee, Mayu…” Without my notice, Yuki slipped her hands under the blanket. She magically found her way to my hand and hold it gently.
“Mayu…” She called my name again. “I’m sorry…”
I stubbornly didn’t answer her.
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An hour had almost passed, and Yuki didn’t say anything anymore. She just kept on holding my hand. Knowing that, I let go of the pillow above my head. It was actually hard to breath.
“…” Yuki was already asleep. She was on the floor, but her body was leaning to the bed.
I tried to let go of her hand, but she didn’t let go. Instead, she hold on it tighter.
I was still embarrassed of what happened, so I was glad that she was asleep.
But… her forehead is red. I think it’s because of the container I threw at her before. It was her fault anyway, barging in to the bathroom like that.
I don’t know why, but I decided to forgive her.
“Yuki… wake up”
“Ngh…”
“Yukirin… If you wake up now I’ll forgive you”
“Mnh... What are you talking bout’ , Acchan… ”
Her voice volume kept on decreasing, making me not hear what she said clearly…
Did she called out someone's name?
... I guess it's just my feeling, huh
Oh well, It’s not like it’s that important, right? She’s just murmuring by herself anyway. Must be because of a dream.
I guess it has come to the part where I have to shake her violently until she wakes up… well, here goes.
“Ng.. Uwa, Mayu??” She looked at me with a puzzled face. “I- eh?? Ah, right! I’m so sorry for what I did!!”
It seems like she’s finally awake.
“…I’m sorry for hitting you as well” I brushed her forehead gently.
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After a while of talking, I finally forgave her. Well, she is my lover.
“Ne, Mayu, let’s go to sleep” Yuki rubbed her eye.
“Ok… but.. ehm, it’s a bunk bed Yuki. One of us should sleep on the top”
“Wha?? Eh… right… b-but…” Yuki was stuttering a little. What’s wrong with the up bed?
“M-Mayu… just don’t use that bed, alright?”
“What? Why?”
“… Let’s just sleep together!” Yuki’s sudden hug made both of us fell to the bed.
“B-but Yuki-“
“Is it wrong for a lover to sleep together?” Her tone suddenly change. She looked at me with a serious stare.
“Nee, Mayu… You know that I love you, right?” It was then that I notice our position. Yuki was on top of me, pinning me to the bed.
“I-I do…” My face was bright red again.
“Great! Then let’s sleep!!” Yuki took the blanket and covered us.
She then proceed to hug me. “Let me hug you while I sleep, ok?”
“… un” I hugged her back.
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2 in the morning.
Yuki’s P.O.V
Mayu was sleeping tightly.
…She’s really cute.
But… I’m sorry Mayu.
It seems like I still don’t want anybody to mess with Acchan’s belongings.
…Hah, damn it.
There’s a cute angel sleeping in front of me, and yet I’m thinking about Acchan? Great.
You really know how to ruins someone’s mind huh. As expected from our ex vice-captain…
I hope you’re not haunting me or something.
…I’m sorry I couldn’t protect you…
Your boyfriend’s also having a hard time without you.
... I guess I failed as a guardian…
But Acchan, I kept on trying to be stronger since that day.
That’s why, I hope I could protect Mayu…
…
I turned my head to the sleeping Mayu.
A little kiss won’t hurt right? I mean, she’s my girlfriend and all…
And… She’s the first person who could make me forget about Acchan…
…
Trying to forget about the past, I quickly discard the gap between me and Mayu. My lips were gently pressing Mayu’s.
… Mhn... Wow, this is super addicting.
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I'm sorry about the part where Yuki murmurs Acchan's name in her dream... the font was supposed to be smaller, but idk how :sweatdrop:
And... sorry if it's wierd.
As I wrote at the beggining, this is the part after the chapter were they became lovers.
And yes, Yuki has already kissed Mayu :lol:
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MaYukiIsLife : Have I ever told you that I love your account name :heart: :lol:
Sorry for being evil, but I think it would be more fun if you were interested :P
Collaborating sounds fun~!! But yeah I'm kind of busy because of school next week :cry:
Maybe we could make some OS. I have many ideas...
That is if you want... :nervous
On one note, thanks for posting on my thread ^_^ Much appreciated~
I don't really mind... I'm busy as well with university next week :cry: We can do that if you want. My threads been a little quiet.... :smhid I know that you love my Username :thumbup MaYuki is love~ As much as I love KojiYuu, MaYuki is better~
“Hah… Hot baths are really great when you feel tired~” I said to myself as I went to the bathtub.
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…
Wait wait wait!! Isn’t this kind of suspicious!? I mean, she won’t peek at me? R-right??
I took a quick glance at the bathroom door, gladly there was nobody or at all. I guess I’m too paranoid…
Mm… but… Isn’t it normal for somebody to peek when there lover is taking a bath…?
Wait, no. I’m talking like I’m asking her to peek. No, no, no just no. I swear I’ll throw her face with this shampoo container if she does.
But… but what if she… Uhh…
I hid myself in the warm water. I guess… a little peek would be alright?
I took another glance at the foggy glass door. Yuki wasn’t there.
“…”
Haha, what the heck am I thinking about. She came from a rich family, why would she do things like that…
I sighed. “I guess she won’t, huh…”
I looked throughout the room, there was a plastic duck near the shampoo containers.
“…Kawaii” I tried to reach it without getting out of the warm water.
Brakk!!!
The bathroom door was opened with force.
“Gomen, Mayu! I just finished doing the dishes!” Yuki shouted.
In reflex I quickly covered my body with both arms and hand. I could feel my face boiling in red as she saw me.
“W-w-w-w-what are you doing here!!!??” I asked with a yelling tone.
“Peeking, of course!” She admitted proudly.
I took the shampoo container and threw it right on her face. “HENTAI!!”
Oh god... Please do a KojiYuu scene like this :inlove: Yukirin please do not be like that squirrel Oshima Yuko.... Please.....
“Itadaki Mayuyu” …Shit. I accidently bought a habit of mine, saying my name after the word itadaki…
This quote is awesome!
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Yuki like Acchan??
Hooe Mayu don't know about it
Please updatesoon
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that itadaki mayuyu~~ was cute :heart: :heart:
look forward to your updates :bow:
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They are so cute and funny, as expected from chroumia. :bigdeal:
Lol Mayu wanted to Yuki to peek at her. Well Yuki did but in a wrong timing. :on lol: Be careful what you wish for Mayu. :D
What's up with Acchan? :?
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A long tiring day with such cute moments of Mayuki can lit up my night :mon inluv:
Ohhh~~~ I smell some AcchanYuki here :mon evillaff:
Mysterious, especially Yuki's past :mon suspect: But I'm also curious about Mayu's :mon ignore:
Mayuki's just exactly like the newlywed :mon lmao: So sweeeeet :mon inluv:
Mayu wished Yuki'd peek her bathing and it was exactly as her wish :mon mischief:
And Yuki, what's so proud about telling Mayu that you were peeking her :mon noprob:
Anyway, waiting for your update :mon baby:
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MaYukiIsLife : Sure:)
Haha, well thanks for liking Mayuki better ? How they really cared about each other is very cute. That's the main reason I love Mayuki~ <3
Sure! I love scenes on KojiYuu's fanfic where Yuko would do some pervy things! :D
Kirozoro : Well, that's still a secret for now~! :p and I'm sorry for the long update...
MayuxMatsuixMusic: I'm sorry for the long update... I'll try and update faster
Konoe : Hehe thanks for saying so~ Oh, somethings really wrong with Acchan in this fic. xD
leEwẬy : Yeah, I kind of made some Acchan scenes with others... Yuki's past is still a secret, sorry xD
oh and I want to say Thank you for Imteedee-san for giving me a name for the club...
and I also want to say sorry for Railgun96, because I can't put in a KojiYuu part yet, because it won't match the storyline yet...
I'm sorry...
Ehmn, I'm sorry for not updating in a long time, I hope you guys still like (?) the story ... :sweatdrop:
Well, if you don't I could actually rush up the story and end it quickly...
Once again, I'm sorry for the long update. And I hope you still remember the story.
Sorry if it's confusing, and this chapter is only an introduction of the club members
And here's chapter 15: Member's
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I slowly let down my hands, which were still held by Yuki. She was looking at me with a beautiful angle smile.
She made my hand touch her cheek. "I love you, Mayuyu"
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Mayu’s P.O.V
*ring ring ring*
Yuki’s cellphone rang.
“Who is it?” I asked.
“Kaichou… Let me answer it, ok?” Yuki gave me a small kiss on the cheek before getting up, answering the phone call in a place I couldn’t hear.
Oh well, it’s her privacy…
But… does she have to go that far?
Yuki had already walk really far away from my spot. She was really focused on the call.
I guess it really is important…
…If I think about it, I don’t know about Yuki at all…
What did she do in the past 5 years?
Uuh…
“Ah, Watanabe-san!”
“Eh?” Somebody called my name. “M-Maeda-san??” I said in disbelieve.
“Un! Long time no see” She smiled.
I really didn’t know that she went to this school as well.
“How’s Miyuki?” She sat down, leaning to the tree besides me.
“Miyuki’s doing great!” I answered with joy.
God, I’m happy to be able to meet her again! After the incident 5 years ago, Maeda-san would usually come to the hospital to check on me.
We would usually have a chat. At first, she was a bit scary, but after knowing her more she turns out to be a really nice person.
“I’m glad to hear that” She patted my head. “Oh, it seems like you’re doing well with Yukirin?”
“Ah… un…” I nodded with a slight blush on my cheeks.
Before answering, Maeda-san gave me a sweet smile. “Promise me that you would take care of her”
“Eh?” Maeda-san suddenly pulled me in a tight embrace. “M-Maeda-san??” of course I was surprised. Why would she suddenly hug me like this?
Warm…
What is this warm feeling?
My head feels a little bit lighter, just… what is this feeling?
“I’ll see you later” she whispered in my ear.
Suddenly, I felt the warm feeling gone. I quickly lift my head, left or right, Maeda-san was nowhere.
She just vanished like thin air…
“Mayu!” Yuki ran towards me. “Sorry for making you wait…”
“Eh? What’s wrong? You look like you’ve seen a ghost?” she waved her hands in front of my face.
“Oy, Mayuyu?”
“Ee.. Aa… I-it’s nothing…”
“Were you talking with somebody?”
“…Nope, I was waiting for you alone”
I lied.
Why?
Why did I lie… there was nothing wrong with telling the truth, but why did I lie?
My heart was aching, it was beating fast.
My head still feels light. Honestly, I felt a little drowsy.
Something was wrong…
I felt like I missed a chance to do something…
But what?
What is it...?
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“Come on, it’s time for you do give a proper introduce” Yuki dragged me inside the school.
In the end, I didn’t tell Yuki about Maeda-san. And now, I’m worried about something else: meeting the other club members.
“Uuh… Are you sure they’re not going to hate me??” Yuki tighten her grip on my trembling hands.
“It’s alright Mayu, they won’t”
As I’ve said before, it’s really hard to get in the school’s defender club. Many of them failed, and only the chosen ones were able to get in. Of course they had to succeed in some test. Unlike me who got accepted in about 5 minutes.
That’s why, I’m scared if some member would hate me.
“We’re here” Yuki informed me as we stop walking.
Yuki and I was standing in front of a big door. It was like the door to a duke’s house, except it had a big note paint right at the door.
‘Members only’
“Uee, Yukirin” I hugged Yuki. “Is it really alright for me to go in?? It says members only”
“Baka, you’re already a member” she wrapped her arms around my neck. “And I promise you, it’ll be alright”
Yuki gave a light kiss on my forehead.
Creak
The sound of a door being opened was heard.
“Ah, Mayu-chan!” Jurina came out from the room.
“J-Jurina-san??”
“Well, come in, we’re waiting for you!” Jurina grabbed my hand and dragged me to the clubroom.
“Minna-san~ Mayu’s already here!!”
Oh my god
This isn’t a club, this is a freakin living room!!
The room was big, and there were about 15 people inside. Some of them were playing and others were sitting, writing or reading something.
It wasn’t this big when I came in before! … Or maybe I wasn’t paying attention at all…? Oops.
The room of the room was simple white.
It had a TV, shelves, a long big desk that’s usually use at a meeting, and another big desk at the end of the long desk…
Air Conditioners were attached and there was a freakin fridge!
“My god, is this really a club?”
Jurina chuckled at my reaction. “Same reaction as mine when I first got into this room!”
“Oi Jurina, let go of her hand!” Yuki was already with her angry tone.
“Oh, it’s rare to see Yuki-senpai like this!” Jurina grinned as she let go of my hand.
“You should stop that, Jurina! Yuki’s a monster if you touch that girl!” Yuko shouted jokingly at the corner of the room.
“Sure thing, Yuko-senpai~” Jurina happily leaped to the room, heading towards a raven hair girl.
I could hear her saying ‘honey~’ as she hugged the girl.
“It seems like you’re already here” Minami-senpai walked in as she came from a door inside the room.
“Mayu, introduce yourself” Minami-senpai said in an ordering voice.
Everyone at the room was already looking at me.
I took a deep breath as I step forward.
“My name is Watanabe Mayu, I hope we can get along” I did a slight bow.
Clap clap clap
I heard someone clapping his hand. Confused, I lift my head up.
It wasn’t someone, but everyone. They all clapped their hands, greeting me warmly.
“So it’s this girl huh, she looks cute~”
“I’m glad she’s recovered”
Some of them started to talk to the others. Of course there were some unfamiliar face, but there were also some people that I recognize.
“Great Job, Mayu” Yuki smiled at me.
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After all the introducing, I could make a conclusion: They were all nice.
They greeted me warmly and none of them seemed to hate me. And I’m really glad for that!
“Alright everyone, since the ‘nice to meet you’ phase is over, I have a warning for you all” Yuki suddenly stood up, making an announcement.
Yuki took a deep breath before exclaiming “This new member, Watanabe Mayu is mine!” She said with a glare. “And I believe you all know what I means”
My face immediately blushed in red as the other member cheered happily. They all congratulate me, and ask how I got her heart.
“Sweet, already declaring your property huh?”
“If you’re able to do that, then you really are something!”
“But hey, she’s really cute!”
Some members were patting my head, pinching my cheeks and saying that I’m cute.
“O-oi!! I told you it’s a warning!!” Yuki pulled me to a hug and made the other members back off.
“Hah, looks like Yuki’s being protective!” Yuko laughed out again “Well now, you’ll understand the feeling of wanting to be lovey-dovey!” she continued.
“Ugh, I get it, I do. I’m sorry for teasing you guys in the past, so please let me go” Yuki admitted sourly.
“Aw, Yuki-chan finally understands our feeling!” Haruna-senpai smiled.
“Mayu-chan, Let me tell you a story" The raven hair girl stop patting my hand.
"At the past, Yuki would usually be angry when couples were being lovey dovey at this room. She would usually tell them to get out” She said while laughing.
“I guess she’ll know our feelings know!” Jurina hugged the girl.
“Uuh, stop it guys!!” Yuki covered my ear. "I told you don't tell Mayu about my past!"
As time passed by, I got to know the people in the club better. It was hard for an introvert for me to suddenly remembering all their names, so Yuki gave me a quick profile that she took from a shelf.
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Profile of SPEC’s (Supernatural/Paranormal Eradicators Club) members
1. Name : Takahashi Minami
Gender : M
Grade : XII A
Type : Normal
Rank : Captain
Guardian: -
2. Name : Maeda Atsuko
Gender : F
Grade : XII A
Type : Normal
Rank : Vice-captain
Guardian: -
3. Name : Iriyama Anna
Gender : F
Grade : XI B
Type : Normal
Rank : Secretary
Guardian: Kawaei Rina, Kato Rena
4. Name : Kashiwagi Yuki
Gender : F
Grade : XII C
Type : Guardian
Vow to : -
5. Name : Kawaei Rina
Gender : F
Grade : XI B
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Iriyama Anna
6. Name : Kato Rena
Gender : F
Grade : XI A
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Iriyama Anna
7. Name : Kizaki Yuria
Gender : F
Grade : X B
Type : Normal
Guardian: Yagami Kumi
8. Name : Kojima Haruna
Gender : F
Grade : XII B
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Oshima Yuko
9. Name : Matsui Jurina
Gender : F
Grade : IX A
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Matsui Rena
10. Name : Matsui Rena
Gender : F
Grade : XI B
Type : Normal
Guardian: Matsui Jurina
11. Name : Miyawaki Sakura
Gender : F
Grade : VII B
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Murashige Anna
12. Name : Murashige Anna
Gender : F
Grade : VII B
Type : Normal
Guardian: Miyawaki Sakura
13. Name : Oshima Yuko
Gender : F
Grade : XII A
Type : Normal
Guardian: Kojima Haruna
14. Name : Ota Aika
Gender : F
Grade : X B
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Sashihara Rino
15. Name : Sashihara Rino
Gender : M
Grade : XII B
Type : Normal
Guardian: Ota Aika
16. Name : Shimazaki Haruka
Gender : F
Grade : X A
Type : Normal
Guardian: -
17. Name : Yagami Kumi
Gender : M
Grade : XI A
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Kizaki Yuria, Kinomoto Kanon
18. Name : Yamamoto Sayaka
Gender : M
Grade : XII C
Type : Guardian
Vow to : Watanabe Miyuki
19. Name : Yokoyama Yui
Gender : M
Grade : XII C
Type : Guardian
Vow to : -
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As I was done reading the profiles, I noticed something that caught my attention.
… Atsuko Maeda?
I’ve never heard that name, but it sounds so familiar… Is it… perhaps, Maeda-san?
I searched out for Maeda-san in the room. But she wasn’t there…
…Maybe she’s busy and she doesn’t have time to come…
Or… Maybe I got the wrong person?
Ugh, why didn’t I ask Maeda-san’s full name…
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Somewhere Else
Atsuko Maeda’s P.O.V
“Acchan, were have you been?” Tomochin was leaning to the door. “I hope you’re not doing anything weird” she continued.
I wanted to answer the truth.
About how I went to meet Watanabe Mayu.
But if I do, I’ll be interrogated, and something bad would happen…
So I can’t tell about it…
But… I don’t want to lie to her.
Tomochin is my precious friend. She cares about me.
That’s why… I couldn’t answer her…
I let out a small dry smile form at my face.
Tomochin looked at me with pain. “You know that if you’re caught, you’ll get in trouble…”
“I do…” I answered briefly. “Tomochin, thank you for always worrying about me”
Tomochin sighed. “…If you need something, just call me”
“Un!”
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Thank you for the Thanks, Comment, and Reading .
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Such a long time since your last update :mon cold: I almost forget the plot :mon ghost:
Why your fic has so many mysteries :mon headbang: It gives me a headache to think about them :mon POd:
But that's what I like about your writing style :mon lovelaff:
As always, Mayuki is so cute and lovey-dovey :mon inluv: Yuki's over-protective towards Mayu :wriggly:
Wonder what happen to the past and why Acchan has to hide herself from the others :mon dunno:
Anyway, update soon, please :mon thumb:
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:O what happen to acchan :cry:
ah btw u got some mistake
15. Name : Sashihara Rino
Gender : M
Grade : XII B
Type : Normal
Guardian: Sashihara Rino
waiting for ur next update
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leEwẬy : yeah, I'm sorry :sweatdrop:
Hehe, I'm not sure it's a great mystery or not, but I hope you'll like it :D
:cathappy: Thank you~ :heart:
blakwhite : somethings~
ah, you're right. I've fixed it now, thank you for reminding me :cathappy:
Chapter 16 ~ !!
more mysteries~ ?? :lol:
Chapter 16: My head hurts
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Maeda’s P.O.V
My name is Atsuko Maeda.
My boyfriend is Takahashi Minami.
I have many friends.
I love them all.
But I can’t be near them.
It’s my fate,
That I don’t want to accept.
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“Watanabe-san!” I greeted the surprised student in front of me.
“M-Maeda-san?? W-why are you here?!” she stuttered.
“Eh? Is it wrong for me to be on my own school?” I giggled.
This girl, Watanabe Mayu, is the only person I could rely on. But right now, she isn’t ready yet. That’s why I’ll keep on meeting her… to make her
remember the real purpose of her father’s experiment on her.
I sat beside her, behind a big tree. And yet Watanabe-san didn’t said anything.
The wind was blowing softly, and the sun was shining gently. Making her look more gorgeous. Even though I know that it’s dangerous, I closed my
eyes. Listening to the bird chirping, the wind blowing, and the sound of tree rustling… It’s such a nice day…
I leaned my back on the tree, tired and sleepy, I almost fell asleep when suddenly…
“Atsuko Maeda-san”
… Did she just called my name? My full name?
I opened my eyes and found her staring at me…
Why is she staring at me like that?
Does she already know about who I am?
But how…? Did Yuki told her…?
“Looking at your expression, I guess it’s true that your name is Atsuko Maeda” Watanabe-san sighed and leaned her back on to the tree, just like what I did. “Why weren’t you at the clubroom?”
…clubroom? Does she mean SPEC? … Ah, thanks god. It seems like she doesn’t know about my past yet. Even I’m not ready if she knows about
my past now…
“You’re the vice-captain of SPEC right? I kept on searching for you, but you weren’t there. Where were you?” Watanabe-san kept on asking.
“Didn’t you ask the other members?” I ask her for secure. It would be bad if she did.
“… I didn’t. I don’t know why but I had a feeling that I should find you myself”
My lips formed a smile of relieve.
“I’m sorry, many things happened…”
“What kind of things?” she asked.
“… I’ll tell you the whole story when it’s the right time” I told her the truth. Right now isn’t the right time. She doesn’t know about me at all, so I
have to use this chance. Well, once she knows me, I’m sure she’s going to hate me…
Watanabe-san frowned. She seemed unsatisfied by my answer.
“For now, can I call you Mayu-chan?” I tried to change the subject.
“… Sure. Then let me call you Atsuko-san”
“Un!” I pulled her for a hug. Just like the first time, she was surprised. But also like the first time, she didn’t try to let go at all.
I could feel her heart beat.
Her confused expression is asking me why I’m hugging her.
While giving her a small smile, I slide my hand on her head, focusing my powers on it. Little by little, I let her memory come back… Slowly, I hope she would remember her role.
Watanabe Mayu, I need you to do your role.
Because you are the main character.
Who will defeat the evil.
And save the others.
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Watanabe Mayu’s P.O.V
Again, she embraces me with a warm feeling.
Why is it that I would always have a weird feeling when she hugs me?
I think… I’m starting to remember something…
Something important…
I have to… do it…
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“Mayu-chan”
Someone called me…
… Is that… Father?
Why… why am I dreaming about him?
Is this… perhaps one of my past …?
“Come here, Mayu-chan” He smiled warmly.
No.
My father isn’t like that.
My father’s an insane scientist.
He’s been doing crazy experiment to me since I was little.
There’s no way… He would have a warm smile like that…
“Papa!”
A little girl run, passing through my body as if I was transparent.
She jump and hug that man…
Is that little girl … me?
… I don’t remember any of this.
Ring
I could hear a bell ringing from inside my head.
My head suddenly hurts.
The bell is ringing so loudly.
It hurts.
Stop.
Stop ringing…
Stop it… I… can’t…
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“Mayu-chan! Mayu-chan!!!” Someone was shaking my shoulder.
“Uuhn…” It seems like I was asleep…
Then … was it all a dream?
… My head hurts…
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Yeay! What'll happen to Mayu and Acchan? And whose the person who woke up Mayu??
I don't know~! :sweatdrop: :panic:
Let's just wait and see what my mind wants to write :nervous
Don't worry, I'll make sure the ending would be good... :thumbsup well, I hope so ...
and, thank you for Reading guys~
I'm happy to know that you still read this wierd fic of mine. :yep:
Thank you :heart: :cathappy:
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Aaahhhh~ My head hurts.. :banghead:
It's just whenever a chapter came up, another mystery that being shown.. :banghead:
But i like it that way :fap It gives me the feel of aniticipation.. :twothumbs
Thanks for the update and your hardwork. :kneelbow:
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Same here ^ :dizzy: Just woke up and you've given me a headache :wahaha:
But it's nothing to sorry :bigdeal: Another mystery pop out again :on kimbo: :shock: :ding:
What's happen to Acchan in the past and also Mayu :grr:
Such a hard questions for me to think of the answer :frustrated:
Who's the call Mayu... Maybe Yuki but I think it's not her since that one call Mayu is Mayu-chan :on ksweat:
Or maybe it's Jurina :depressed: So many possibilities :scared:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
P.S: You update fast :on gay:
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DONT THINK! THE ENDING IS A MUST BE GOOD!!
GOOOOOD ENDING!!
BUT I KIND OF LIKE IF MAYU WAS THE EVIL PERSON PUHAHAHHAAHAHA
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I'm really curious about Acchan. She will contribute a lot to the plot.
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I'm really curious about Acchan. She will contribute a lot to the plot.
I agree with this. If it's Mayuyu wouldn't Yukirin wake her up or is it the teacher? I wonder if Takamina and Yukirin will react with the whole Mayuyu & Acchan situation~
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I'm very happy to know that there are those who reads my fic :yep:
Sorry, I'll reply to you're comments on my next update. :thumbsup
So I was laying around too lazy doing my homework when I suddenly wanted to make an OS
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Mayu and her Seven Friends
“Mirror, Mirror on the wall, won’t you come out, and show me your form?” a young woman wearing a black dress said as she face a mirror.
“As you wish, Rena-sama” the mirror answered.
Suddenly, smoke came out from the mirror, within seconds, the room was filled with smoke. After waiting for the smoke to vanish, a young woman, with a shorter structure was standing in front of Rena.
“Is something the matter, Rena-sama?” the young girl ask.
“Airin, my magic mirror... Who is the fairest in the land?”
“My highness, you are the fairest in the land”
Rena was pleased with the answer, as the mirror had never lied.
“Then I believe that I can take the Princess’s heart, no?”
“… Is it, Princess Jurina?” the mirror ask.
“It is”
“…”
As the mirror herself was in love with Rena, the mirror did not want to state the fact that Princess Jurina would’ve fall in love with Rena from the first sight. Airin did not want her Rena taken away from her.
“My highness, you are the fairest here so true, But Mayu-sama, with her skin as white as snow, her lips as red as blood, and her hair as dark as ebony could make Princess Jurina easily fall in love”
Airin didn’t lie. Jurina was indeed a lady killer who would’ve fall in love with any beautiful women.
“What?! She is more beautiful then I? Then she shall die!”
From that hour, Rena’s heart turns against Mayu, her own sister. With every following day she hates Mayu more and more. Envy, jealous, and worried grow in her heart taller every day, until she has no peace day or night.
After months of holding her jealousy, Rena couldn’t keep it and ordered a huntsman to take Mayu to the deepest woods to be killed.
The huntsman takes Mayu into the forest, but deep in her heart, the huntsman knew that she could not kill Mayu.
“I know that I am a mere huntsman, but I have admire your beauty for since I was little! I cannot find myself to kill you, please run away!”
The huntsman leaved Mayu in the middle of the wood.
After wandering through the forest, Mayu came across a tiny deserted cottage.
“Oh my! What a cute little cottage”
Without thinking twice, Mayu entered the cottage.
Since there was no one at home, Mayu ate some of the meals. After having a full stomache, Mayu test all the beds.
The first and second beds were too small for her, while the fourth was too big. The fifth and sixth bed was cold. The last bed was warm and had a very nice fragrant. Mayu was comfortable enough for to sleep, which she did.
Not long after that, the seven mistress of the house returned.
One of the young mistress immediately notice that someone had sneak in, because everything in their home was disordered.
“Wait! Someone has sneaked in!” Takamina warned the others.
“Are you insane? Our cottage is in the middle of nowhere!” Yuko laugh at her friend.
“I’m sure of it! Something is wrong guys!” Takamina kept on warning the others, were no one didn’t listen… because they didn’t really care.
“Mou… Shut up, Takamina” Miichan said as she sat down.
“Nee, I’m sooo hungry… Why isn’t there any food?” Acchan wailed as she saw nothing but empty plates on top of the dinning table.
“What? Milky and I always bake some bread and make some soup before going to work!” Paruru said in disbelieve.
“That’s right, we made some this morning, but where is it?” Miyuki wondered.
“I told you there’s something weird!!” Takamina shouted angrily.
During the loud discussion about the lost food, how Acchan was hungry, and about who sneaked in, one of the young women discovered Mayu sleeping in her bed!
“Aaah! There’s a beauty sleeping on my bed!” Yuki pointed towards Mayu who was still in dream land.
The others, surprise by the information, immediately stood up and rush to see the ‘beauty’ that Yuki had said.
“Wow! She’s is exactly the kind I like!” Yuko said with gleaming eyes.
“Hey, hey, let me kiss her!” Micchan said before getting slapped by the others.
“She’s so cute!” Paruru poked Mayu’s cheek.
“Stop touching her, she could wake up!” Acchan slapped Paruru’s hand.
“Guys, she’s an intruder! This reaction of yours are wrong!” Takamina shouted again.
The whole ruckus made Mayu open her eyes.
“Nggh…”
“Good morning, beauty~” Miyuki smiled.
“Eh?”
“Why don’t you use my arm as a pillow?” Yuko smiled cheekly.
“E-eh??”
“Do you want to taste the sweets I just made?” Paruru showed a newly bake cake on top of a plate.
“Ah, gimme some!!” Acchan jumped and tried to reach for the cake, which she successfully got.
“No, why don’t we get tipsy with this wine?” Micchan showed Mayu a bottle of wine.
“Uugh, would guys shut up! It’s clear that she has chosen my bed, so this maiden shall sleep by my side!”
Everyone wasn’t able to refuse what Yuki said.
It was true that Mayu had chosen Yuki’s bed, so she has the right to sleep by Mayu’s side.
Meanwhile, Mayu being the naïve maiden, was mute by the sudden women assault. She lay there like a helpless little rabbit, when suddenly someone tugged her shirt.
“I’m sorry for all the ruckus. But anyway, my name is Takahashi Minami. You can call me Takamina” Takamina introduce herself.
“Ah, my name is Watanabe Mayu…”
“… It’s rare for someone to be in the woods, so I assume you have troubles with your family.” Takamina said right in the spot. “It’s alright, you can stay with us as long as you want” she continued.
Mayu smiled at how nice Takamina was. She jumped and hugged the little leader.
“Thank you very much, Takamina!”
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Rena called her mirror once more.
Airin told her the whole story.
“I can’t believe it! And how they shower her with affection… Uh, how nice!”
“I-If you want, I could love you…” Airin said in a whispering voice… but too bad, Rena was busy feeling jealous.
“Did you say something, Airin?”
“N-No! Nothing at all, you’re highness!”
Rena keeps thinking on how to get rid of Mayu. She suddenly remember how her little sister likes to eat sweets.
Rena baked apples candies, cakes, pie, cookies and so on… but all of them was poisoned apple treats.
In disguise, Rena paid a visit in to the cottage where Mayu lived.
“Would you care for an apple?”
“Aah~ It looks so delicious!”
Mayu eagerly takes a bite of the apple, her ruby lips lost their color and her skin was as pale as a paper.
Mayu lay unmoving, causing Rena to triumph.
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“Please wake up!”
Yuki, who found Mayu lying unconscious shake her shoulders.
After hours of trying to wake her up, Mayu still didn’t open her eyes.
The seven young mistress who had already grown so close to Mayu decided to place her in a beautiful glass coffin and pray for her.
Time passes, and yet Mayu was still in a beautiful pale state of not waking up.
A princess traveling through the land sees Mayu inside the coffin. Enchanted by her beauty, the princess, who happens to be a lady killer, Matsui Jurina strides to her coffin.
“How beautiful…”
Looking left and right, there were no signs of someone else around. Princess Jurina carefully opened the coffin.
Pale skin and black raven hair was indeed Jurina’s type of woman. The princess immediately fell in love with Mayu.
“… You’re mine”
The princess leaned, making the gap between them getting shorter.
As Jurina was only less than an inch to kiss Mayu …
“WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE YOU DOING??!”
Yuki did a kamen rider kick on the princess.
The seven young women had return home from their daily labors.
“Don’t you ever touch our beloved Mayu!” Takamina dragged the coffin away from Jurina.
“Get away Hentai!!” Yuko shouted as she spread her arms, showing not to touch Mayu.
“… I don’t think you have the right to say that…” Acchan commented.
The young women were so angry that they started to beat the innocent (?) Jurina.
“O-Oy, stop it!!” Surprise by the sudden assault, Jurina could only shield herself with her arms. “Girls, is it that wrong to kiss someone who I love?!”
“Hah? And who the heck are you?? Do you even know Mayu??”
“Eh… no?”
Jurina regret saying that.
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“Sheez, who are you anyway, trying to take our Mayu like that” Miyuki puffed her cheeks.
“… Hey, if I think about it, doesn’t a kiss usually breaks a curse?” Acchan innocently stated out.
…
…
…
“THE KISS IS MINE!!!”
Everybody started to rush towards the coffin were Mayu was lying down.
Not giving up, Jurina quickly stood up and followed the others.
Yuko and Micchan kissed Mayu’s right arm, while Paruru kissed her left.
Miyuki sneaked and was able to kiss Mayu’s neck from her back.
Acchan kissed Mayu’s right cheek, while Takamina kissed her left.
Jurina kissed Mayu’s ears…
While Yuki, luckily kissed Mayu’s lips.
…
“Fuaah~” Mayu yawned. “E-eh? Why are you guys so close??” Mayu continued, suddenly awaking.
“Mayu!!”
“You’ve wake up!”
“Eh?” Mayu innocently tilt her head to the side.
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Jurina was heartbroken.
The woman she fell in love with, turns out to have many guardians that Jurina couldn’t pass through.
A big sigh escaped from her lips.
After continuing her and finding a small village, Jurina decided to sit down on a bench.
Sigh.
Jurina and a girl besides her sigh at the same time.
“Eh?”
“Ah…??!”
Airin was surprised to find Jurina, her love rival sitting right next to her.
“Y-You’re Jurina, right?! The Princess from the other land?”
“Eh?? Y-yeah…?”
“What in heavens are you doing here! A princess like you should’ve went right to the castle!”
“…Er… well, some things happened” Jurina tried to look at any place except for the strangers eyes.
“… I see, you decided to go away from that cottage and leave that girl alone, huh?”
“Uwa, how did you know that??!”
“I have the ability to see things far away…” Airin scratch her cheek.
“A-anyway…”
She took a deep breath.
Airin didn’t have any choices again. She knew that the only thing that would make her beloved Rena be happy was with meeting her with Jurina.
Airin doesn’t mind getting hurt for the sake of her love.
That’s why, Airin will introduce Jurina to Rena… And make Jurina fall in love with Rena.
It was a promise that Airin made on her heart. “Anything to make Rena smile again” Airin thought.
“J-Jurina…”
“Y-yeah?” Jurina turned her head towards Airin.
“… The Princess of this land… Matsui Rena wants to meet you”
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And so, Mayu lived happily with her seven friends (?), Jurina fell in love with Rena, while Airin was happy to see Rena happy… And Airin was way happier when she met Jurina’s assistance, Churi.
Anyway, Jurina married Rena, while Airin dated Churi.
In the end, everyone lived Happily Ever After.
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ok... lol. I know, it's wierd :lol:
but hey, I had fun writing that... Hmn, I remembered reading a snow white version like that, so it's based on my memory...
But the ending was different... I'm not sure, I don't remember :smhid
Ok, the reason I chose the girls as Mayu's harem (?)
Takamina: Because there's TakaMayu
Yuko : Beloved Oshiri Sisters
Acchan: I find Acchan and Mayu interesting...
Miyuki: WWatanabe
Paruru: Payuyu
Miichan: Cuz Miichan loves everybody and visa versa :peace:
Jurina: JuriMayu
Yuki: Because I LOVE MAYUKI :heart:
the ending was wierd, but I hope you like the story
thanks for reading :cathappy:
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That OS's actually weird :mon sweat: But it's still great :on GJ: :mon thumb:
Snow White and the 7 dwarves ver.chroumia :mon lmao: :wahaha:
I like the reason why you choose those girls as the dwarves :mon misch:
Yuko, Acchan, Takamina, Milky, Paruru, Miichan, Yuki, they all funny and so cute :mon lovelaff:
I just want to kipnap Yuki, Yuko or maybe all of them home :on crazygran:
Mayuki everywhere :mon crazyinlove:
Rena as a witch :on freeze: She sure suit for that :mon spit:
Poor Jurina, cannot stay close to Mayu because her 7 guardians :on lol:
After all, they all live happily ever after :mon firecrack:
Waiting for your update :on drink:
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kenjoy12 : Sorry, hope it's not too confusing...
but, hey, glad you like it XD
gek geki : wow, you just gave me a whole new idea :twisted:
sure, I'll try my best and make the ending good :thumbsup
Konoe : Yep. Kind of like the second Main character~ :cathappy:
MaYukiIsLife : Ah, How I like it when I write down your account name :heart: :lol:
Takamina and Yukirin... and everybody has a complicated relationship with Acchan. that's actually kind of obvious... :catglare:
leEwẬy : lol, is it that mysterious?? :huhuh
the one who woke Mayu up is right on this chapter~
Thanks for reading my OS.
yep, I know, it's wierd, right? :yep: :lol:
I know how you feel, I want to kidnap Mayu :cathappy: But Yuki and the others would kill me if I did that. :nervous
Thank you for the comments guys :heart:
If there's something you don't understand on my story, feel free to ask :yep:
Chapter 17: That Voice
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Ring
I could hear a bell ringing from inside my head.
My head suddenly hurts.
The bell is ringing so loudly.
It hurts.
Stop.
Stop ringing…
Stop it… I… can’t…
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“Mayu-chan! Mayu-chan!!!” Someone was shaking my shoulder.
“Uuhn…” It seems like I was asleep…
Then … was it all a dream?
… My head hurts…
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… I’m sure it was a dream.
It’s just an illusion…
Because my father wasn’t like that. That’s right, I don’t even want to acknowledge him as my father.
“Mayu-chan!!” The blurry figure kept on shaking my shoulder.
“… Yukirin …?” I rubbed my eyes.
“Well, sorry to disappoint you but it’s me! The one and only Matsui Jurina!” Jurina was in front of me.
“Ehmm… ok, Jurina… but isn’t your face too close?” I said as I notice the distance between Jurina and I. Her nose was only centimeters from mine. Making our lips only inches apart.
“Aree? You’re right??” A frown appeared above her eyes, her expression showing that she was confused. “You’re sleeping face was so cute that I thought about kissing you… but I don’t remember getting this close” She scratch her cheek.
… Was she just about to kiss me unconsciously? Wow, she sure is dangerous…
“Akh! That’s not important!!” She suddenly shrieked out.
“Well, personally, I think a kiss is important!” I stood up while holding on to my aching head.
“That’s not it! There’s something more important!!” Jurina gripped my arms.
“Ouch! What are you doing?!”
“There’s an Attack!!”
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“The attack… it’s none other than the Little Red Riding Hood!” Jurina said as we ran towards the clubroom.
“Little Red Riding Hood… Isn’t that, like one of the strongest spirit?! But… wasn’t it eradicated by Akimoto Yasushi?”
“… Folktale’s Spirit… It’s only a title. Once a spirit is eradicated, the spirit is gone, but the title will be given to another spirit. Which then after, the new spirit given the title will start to gain the abilities of the former title handler”
“But what about Hansel and Gretel? We didn’t eradicate them” I asked as I remembered the two spirits I first fought.
“Those aren’t an evil spirit, if they keep their good heart soul, then we won’t need to fight with them again… except if they die and some other spirits takes the Title.”
“Then, as long as the title is being held by a nice hearted spirit, we don’t need to fight them?”
“Bingo”
“And this Little Red is …?”
“… I heard rumors, Mayu-chan. The title Little Red Riding Hood is taken by a dangerous spirit…”
“Dangerous…”
“…It’s the Queen or you could call it the Ace. It’s like the highest rank of all spirit. And… well yeah, every spirits has to obey the Queen’s words”
“…”
We were already in front of the clubroom, Jurina knocked the door.
“Matsui Jurina and Watanabe Mayu-desu!” she gently spin the doors knob.
“Jurina-san…” Iriyama Anna was alone at the room. “Quickly head to the sport grounds. It’s the Little Red, and Oshima-senpai is handling her alone”
“Right away!” Jurina open a window and jumped outside.
Being awkwardly left behind with Annin-san, I gripped my uniform and gathered my courage to ask my job. “W-what about me?”
Iriyama-san stared at me for a couple of seconds.
“Watanabe Mayu-san… I’ve seen your battle before, and it seems like you’re not the battlefield type. So why don’t you try and check out the control room?” She pointed towards a door at the corner of the room.
After hesitating for a while, I gulped my fear and walk towards the door.
Creak
…
The room was dark.
The only thing that light up the whole room was the light from some computer monitors.
Wrong. Not some. It turns out to be many!
I courage myself to go in and close the door, when suddenly I saw something move.
It needed a while for my eyes to adjust with the darkness.
When my eyes were finally able to catch up, it turns out that the moving figure was the raven hair girl, Matsui Rena.
There were 3 computers in front of her, but there were about 40 monitors on the wall.
Each monitor had 4 different video’s… wait, is that from the security camera?
Wow, I guess this is the security camera system room!
“Watanabe Mayu…” she stared at me with a lollypop on her mouth. “Sit down here” Rena tapped on the chair beside her.
“Sorry if it’s a little bit dark, Believe it or not, I think it’s easier to operate things this way” She turned her head back to the monitors.
“Is that from security camera’s?” I sat down right beside her.
“It is…” She squirt her eyes “… Excuse me for a while” Rena hold her headphone and pressed on a button on the control pad.
“Kaichou, I see enemy reinforcement from your west”
“Roger that” Kaichou answered with a robotic voice throughout the radio… or is it a walkie talkie? Anyway whatever it is, it seems like Rena’s job was too keep an eye on the schools land and inform every danger coming.
I kept on darting my eye on the monitor.
Too many monitors… my eyes are already tired…
Wait, is that Yukirin?
She was fighting with some random people… I guess it’s a spirit…
Anyway, my eyes aren’t tired anymore, seeing Yuki sure makes me refreshed~ I’ll just keep on watching Yuki…
As I kept on watching Yuki fight, Rena suddenly called me. “Watanabe-san”
“Just call me Mayu” I kept on watching Yuki fight.
“… Mayu, help me search for Kojima Haruna” Rena said without looking at me.
“Uuh…” I still wanted to watch Yuki, but… oh well.
I tried my best to search for Haruna-senpai. Camera 1, 2, 3… 54, 55, 56… 74, 75... Still no sign of her…
When suddenly I noticed something from camera 102, the school’s sport ground.
“I-Is that Yuko-chan?!” I pointed towards 102.
Yuko was on the ground, beaten by a girl wearing a red hood.
After realizing what happened, Rena quickly pressed the same button as before.
“Kaichou! Oshima Yuko at the sport ground is in danger!”
“Right away!”
“Tck, I didn’t think that Little Red Bastard would’ve really showed up” Rena forced out a rather dry smile.
“…”
That red hoodie… has a cat ear on it…
Wait, isn’t that MINE??!
I mean, it’s exactly the same as the one I left at my room!
“Nee, Mayu, Doesn’t that hoodie looks familiar?” Rena tilted her head.
“Y-Yeah, it sure looks familiar…”
“…”
“…”
“It’s yours, right?” She stared at me with a flat emoticon face.
“I swear, I don’t know anything!”
“Sure… I believe you can’t do a Kagebunshin Justu” she sighed. “But you’re too suspicious, mind explaining the hood?”
“I-I got it from Yuki…”
“Directly?”
“No… Atsuko-san gave it to me”
Crack
Rena’s lollypop fell to the floor and broke to pieces.
Her eyes widen, she looks so surprise.
“A-Atsuko…?” she repeated.
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Yuko’s P.O.V
The girl is on top of me.
I can’t move.
I’m too tired…
My whole body aches…
And there’s this smell of blood...
What’s worst, it’s my blood…
Well, this sucks.
Brak!
Another hit on my cheek. I swear I heard something crack…
Brak!
…Ouch.
Brak!
Isn’t she supposed to be tired punching me rapidly like this?
Brak!
… Why is it… that I can’t fight this girl? This spirit… gives off a familiar aura.
I know this spirit. I know her.
But I’m not sure about it.
Her God damn hood is hiding her face.
And this damn blood on my face is making my vision become red and blurry…
I feel so tired. I’m sick of this.
I want to meet NyanNyan and grab her boobies.
Yeah, that’s a great idea.
…
Suddenly, drips of water fell on my face.
… Is it raining?
“…Hiks”
Ah… It’s not rain…
This spirit… she’s crying?
Why …?
Damn, I’m at my limit…
My vision began growing black, when suddenly…
“Yuko…”
Someone called me.
That voice. I know recognize it.
Why? Why?
Why am I hearing her voice?
The weight on top of me was gone. The spirit was no longer there.
Fuck. I can’t hold it anymore…
The scene around me began to fade…
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Jang Jang Jang!!!
What the heck would happen to Yuko? Who is the one who beat Yuko? Seek out in the next chapter :shakeit:
oh btw, Kagebunshin Justu is Naruto's Kagebunshin no Jutsu... :P
Thank's for all the comments, thanks and reads :cathappy:
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That red hood is atsuko?
Why used the same hood as mayu?
Should mayu keep atsuko as secret?now rena knew it,she kinda shock,
Well i think everyone will shock if they know atsuko often meet with mayu
What mayu should remember?
Ano maybe is a little weird,is mayu are half human cyborg or something?
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What happen next??? :shocked Yuko is beaten up :bleed eyes:, and what's with the red hood? Acchans power??
Will Nyannyan be angry about yuko? Can't wait~ :drool:
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Who is that spirit
Why Rena is surprise when Mayu talk the doll was Maeda give her?
Please updatesoon
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W-WHAAT!??
WHO'S THAT RED HOODIE GIRL????
MAYU WITH HOODIE SHOULD LIKE NEZUMI KEKEKE BUT NEZUMI WAS BAD PERSON,MAYU IS A GOOD GIRL HERE WHO LOVED HER FRIENDS
WHAT MAEDA WANT FROM MAYU??
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So the one waking Mayu is Jurina :mon trudge: The red riding hood appears :shock:
I why she's wearing Mayu's hood :dunno: She has the familiar aura and aslo the recognizable voice :mon dunno:
Maybe Acchan :bigdeal: Mayu told Rena about she met Acchan :mon spit:
Oh no, Yuko's on the edge of passing out :mon oshitwc:
Even though she's gonna faint, she still had that perverted old man's mind :mon duh: To grab Haruna's oppai :grr:
Anyway, update soon, please :on gay:
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Acchan is definitely Little Red Riding Hood but she didn't want to inherit that spirit so now she's battling her friends against her will. :cry: How did that title ended up on her?!
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Acchan is LRRH!? How did that happen in the first place!? Did she beat up Yuko out of her own will!? Will she target MaYuki!?
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Acchan is definitely Little Red Riding Hood but she didn't want to inherit that spirit so now she's battling her friends against her will. :cry: How did that title ended up on her?!
Eh? If that the case,then could it be...
The real LRRH is mayu? Or should be mayu instead acchan
Thats why acchan want mayu to remember that,but it imposible,i coudnt belive this though
Ugh what happen 5 year ago?
If yuki ask atsuko to give those jacket and her email,she should know that mayu and atsuko are friend
And yuko is mayu friend,how can yuki doesnt know it,and why yuko wont tell yuki about mayu
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Eh? If that the case,then could it be...
The real LRRH is mayu? Or should be mayu instead acchan
Thats why acchan want mayu to remember that,but it imposible,i coudnt belive this though
That is possible! Nice one Terragen. :thumbup
Ugh what happen 5 year ago?
If yuki ask atsuko to give those jacket and her email,she should know that mayu and atsuko are friend
And yuko is mayu friend,how can yuki doesnt know it,and why yuko wont tell yuki about mayu
My head hurts. :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
Chroumia your updates never fail to make want more.
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:shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked
omg omg ..... who is really atsuko!! :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
please update soon .... Thanks for this great fic ...
:thumbsup :bow: :twothumbs
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Too much mistery.... :? :? :?
:banghead: ah... my head....
Cant wait the next chapter.... :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Since I'm generally outdated with everything, I'm lost with everyone's comments. XD It seems everyone is playing Detective Conan here :lol: My schedule is at the worst state right now but sure I'll have time for this and join the people here smashing heads :rofl:
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yuu9 : Thank's for the comment xD
Kirozoro : sorry, still a secret guys xD
gek geki : yep, right here, mayu is a girl who loves her friends <3
leEwẬy : yep :cathappy:
honestly, I'm also wondering :sweatdrop:
nah, joking, I have an idea for it :grin:
of course, because it's yuko here <3
Terragen : that's something that would be on some next chapters :p
honestly, if i became mayu i would've told everybody about rena :nervous
Well, because of her fathers experiment, you can say that Mayu's a half human robot... or maybe there's going to be more explanation on the future chapters? :p
Wow, you made some great analyze :D
Konoe : well, that's still a secret for now. I hope you can be patient with me because I'll need time to update...
Thanks for the compliment~ :cathappy:
DKA48 : sorry for the long update :sweatdrop:
achina-chan : Tehe, sorry, I didn't mean to put that much mystery... :p
imteedee : Actually... me too :nervous
Ganbatte TD-san ~
lol, smashing heads huh...
I remembered doing that while reading your fic :yep: :lol:
Sorry for the long update guys, I kind of forgot about what to write down at this chapter :nervous
Chapter 18: No Mercy?
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Takamina’s P.O.V
My blades were stained crimson as I slashed my way from the countless crowd of spirits. It seems like Jurina was right. The Title Little Red Riding Hood is with the Queen. And the Queen can send as many spirits as she wants…
“Kaichou! Oshima Yuko at the sport ground is in danger!” Rena said through the control room.
Yuko? What in the fuck are you doing, making yourself in danger…?
“Right Away!” I answered as I did a double slash to one of the spirits in front of me.
I jumped out from the crowd with some little bruises on my cheeks.
“Yui, Sakura, I’ll leave this field to you!”
After hearing them answer, I dashed towards the sport ground.
My breath was heavy. My uniform was getting wet as it kept on absorbing my sweat.
Damn it, why am I born as a normal…
If I wasn’t a normal, I could’ve saved my girlfriend!!
Fuck, I’m suddenly feeling so pissed off.
I can’t take a rest. I have to quickly go to Yuko-
“!?”
Somebody suddenly lashed out an assault that came like a lighting.I luckily dodged it by a small leap to the back.
I gripped my sword tighter, getting ready for a fight with this spirit who looks different than the others.
“Who are you?” I glared at … her? Him? Well, he looks pretty for a guy. That is if he is a guy.
“You should introduce yourself before asking for someone’s name” He smirked.
Honestly, I don’t think there’s a point for doing so. But since I have my manners, I guess I will.
“Takahashi Minami. Your turn”
“Minegishi Minami… Ara, looks like we have the same name?”
“Huh, fuck you Minami”
“Fuck you as well, Minami”
We exchange smiles before waiting for the right time to attack.
In a speed of light, Minami -uh screw that- Minegishi swirl his dagger before dashing towards me.
Swish!
Shit, he’s too fast!
The sharp metal made a cut on my arm.
I quickly swing my blade up, making him dodge backwards.
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Mayu’s P.O.V
Rena leaned to her chair and closed her eyes. It was confusing, I don’t know if she’s taking a rest or thinking about something.
There was a long awkward pause.
…I think I’ll just continue to search for Haruna-senpai. I turned my head towards the monitors again.
“Rena-san” someone came in and tapped my shoulder. “I’ve knock onHaruna-senpai’s room but there were no answers…Where should I check again?”
“Well I think you should go to her room and check that place again. She might’ve been sleeping under her table or bathroom. If not, check out Yuko’s room. Maybe she had a night there. Oh, by the way I’m not Rena” I turned my head and pointed at Rena with my thumb.“That’s Rena”
“Eh? M-Mayu-san…”
“Ah, Miyuki’s friend… Shimazaki-san, right?”
“U-un…” she nodded timidly. “You can call me Paruru…”
I smiled. “That’s right, we’re on the same class anyway”
Rena suddenly stand up and walk towards the door.
“Do what Mayu said and check her room once more. I’ll call Murashige-san and ask her to check Yuko’s room” she said before leaving the room.
“Murashige…? I memorized the members, and I believe there was no member with the surname of Murashige” I ask Paruru who was still standing beside me.
“Murashige Anna-chan isn’t a member of the club, but she’s Sakura-chan’s best friend. So she usually visits the club and help out”
“I guess the writing written on the club’s door means nothing huh”
“Ahaha…”
“…Na.. Can’t...plea..body…me…”
I heard someone mumbling something.
“Paruru, did you hear that?”
“A-Ah, It’s from Rena-san’s headphone!”
My god, Rena, why did you leave your headphone like that! What if something bad happens to Kaichou?
I quickly took the headphone and wear it.
“Rena, where the heck are you?!” Kaichou was shouting angrily.
“K-Kaichou” I answered Kaichou’s call instead of Rena.
“Mayu? Why are you…Tck, AnywayI’m besides class XII B and I can’t go on. Please send somebody else to go help Yuko”
“I-I Understand!”
I reached my hand to the control panel… when I then I remembered that I DON’T UNDERSTAND ANYTHING.
“P-Paruru what should I do to call somebody??”
“Eh?? I-I don’t know!”
I quickly lift my head towards the camera where Yuki was.
She was still busy fighting a woman with a bow… Long distance huh, Ganbarre, Yuki!
I look at camera 102, Yuko was alone. The girl who had beat her was gone.
Yosh!
“Paruru, I’ll leave this place on you! I’ll go and get Yuko!”
“E-Eeeh??”
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I was near the sport ground, just another turn again and I’m there. When suddenly…
Brak!
“Ouch…”
I ran into someone.
“M-Mayu-chan??”
“Jurina? Why are you here?! You should’ve quickly go and help Yuko!!”
“Wha-?! T-There were so many spirits on the way!”
There was blood on Jurina’s hand and uniform.
“Are you bleeding?” I ask as I quickly checked her.
“N-No… this isn’t… my blood… I-It’s the spirits” she stuttered.
Honestly, I didn’t see Jurina on the monitors… but I wasn’t really paying attention, so I guess she’s saying the truth.
“Whatever”
I left Jurina behind and continued to run to the Sport’s Field. After all that running, I finally could see Yuko.
She was lying unconscious on the ground.
“Yuko!!” I ran faster as I was disturbed by the scene.
Yuko’s uniform was stain in red.
I honestly don’t want to think about it, but she looks… lifeless…
I quickly unbuttoned her blood-soaked uniform.
“It seems like a she was pierced by a sword” Jurina was panting as she stood beside me.
“No shit, captain obvious” I was angry at how Jurina would state out the obvious at a time like this.
I quickly focused back at Yuko and examine the cut on her stomach. It wasn’t that deep, but seeing how blood kept on flowing out, I know that it’s dangerous for her.
Without hesitation, I took of my uniform, fold it, and then put it on top of the injury.
“M-M-M-Mayu-chan???!” Jurina was surprised. “If you need a cloth, why didn’t you ask for mine??” she hurriedly unbutton her uniform and covered me with it.
Jurina was right, she was wearing a shirt under her uniform, while I didn’t wear anything except for my… –ehem- well, undergarments.
I gave Jurina a quick thank you while continuing to aid Yuko.
“M-Mayu-chan, it is dangerous here, let’s take Yuko and bring her to somewhere safe” Jurina kept on complaining.
I didn’t answer her as I was still busy.
“Mayu-chan” Jurina kept on calling me.
I felt stress with my situation; my friend is dying while I have to keep on listing to this little girl complaining behind me.
“Mayu-“
“SHUT UP!!” I yelled at Jurina. “Our friend is dying and you keep on complaining, can’t you just shut up?!”
“…” Jurina was speechless. She was surprised by how angry I was.
Honestly, how Jurina kept silent and didn’t say anything was awkward, but it’s not the time to think about that.
I continued on pressing the cloth on top of Yuko’s bleeding stomach.
When suddenly...
“Mayu-chan!!”
Jurina suddenly grabbed my collar from behind and pulled me away, right at the next second, someone was swinging his dagger at me.
Jurina quickly wield out her sword and pushed me behind her, trying to defend me from this stranger.
“…”
The two stood up, looking down at each other.
Swish!
The stranger with a short hair swing his dagger in front of Jurina.
Jurina was able to defend herself with her sword, but a duo slash forced her to jump backwards,
The blade was able to make a cut across Jurina’s skin, but Jurina was amazingly able to throw her small knife towards the stanger’s eye.
Reflex, the Stranger dodge the knife by ‘catching’ it, even though his hand’s was bleeding, it was better than losing an eye.
As Jurina and the stranger kept on fighting, I was thinking of a way to get to Yuko.
“There’s no way Jurina could protect me while I go away recklessly.” I panicly thought.
Slash!
The stranger’s back was suddenly squirting out blood.
Yuki was looking down behind him as he fell on his knee.
“Ahaha, never thought there would be someone as fast as you…” The stranger praised Yuki with a dry chuckle.
He turned his back and faced Yuki “Hah, I don’t believe that I’m losing because of a girl like you…”
The stranger flinched as Yuki raised her dagger once more.
With Jurina in standby, there was no place for him to run…
He’s the villain, so it’s normal if Yuki would kill him… right?
Then why… Why am I feeling that this is wrong?
“Y-Yuki…” stuttering, I called out for my lover’s name.
Yuki didn’t even glance at me. Her eyes were glued to the person in front of her…
Her eyes… were showing no mercy.
I gulped. “Yuki, let him live. We could interrogate him later” saying that had already made my throat dry. I was scared that Yuki would be angry. But she didn’t.
She didn’t even reply. She just kept on glaring at him…
Slash!!
Drops of blood spattered to the grass.
“?!!” The stranger hold his scream of pain, Yuki’s dagger went right through his hand, making it stick on to the ground.
“Jurina, quickly take Yuko to a save place” Yuki, with the aura of a Captain, gave a command to Jurina.
“U-Understood!” Doing as what she was told, Jurina ran towards Yuko and gently carried her.
I only watch as I needed time to progress on what happened… Yuki… didn’t kill him.
I lifted my head and found Yuki staring at me.
“Don’t worry Mayu, even though I don’t know why you’re trying to save this cockroach, but I’ll do what you said” she smiled and patted my head.
“Sakura is on her way. I told her to accompany you to get back to the headquarter, so leave this guy to me”
I was surprised. By the looks of her eyes minutes ago, it seemed like she was about to kill him right away! I didn’t thought that Yuki will accept my idea.
“T-Thank you, Yuki!” I gave her a surprise hug.
“Whoa, easy girl~” She patted my head again.
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Yuko’s P.O.V
It’s dark.
I looked around, there was nothing but darkness.
I can’t even feel my feet touching the ground.
“Where am I?” I asked myself.
I closed my eyes. Actually nothing changed, it was still dark…
Anyway, let me try to remember what happen-
“Fuck”
I started to remember all that happen before I passed out.
“Does that mean I’m… dead?”
I unbutton my uniform to find out something that looks like a scar on my stomach.
But… there’s no blood coming out from it.
Am I… really dead?
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“I want to meet NyanNyan once more…!!”
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Yuko, wanting to meet NyanNyan again... is there something she wants to tell to her?
Jajang~ I'm still on progress with the next chapter :yep:
like usuall, Thank you for commenting, and reading :thumbsup
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NO I WANT MORE MORE AND MORE
WHY RENA ACT WEIRDLY? SHE LEFT HeR JOBS to MAYU THat so unresponsible!!!!
BUT JURINA more WEIRD SHE HIDE SOMETHING
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WAHH~ so intense! Mii-chan is a guy and a villain??? Yuko's dead?
Oh noes! where's nyannyan???
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nyan nyan~~~~ where are you~~ XD
ahh long time no comment here ~~
yuki is so sweet~~
mayuki saikou!!!!!
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whoaa !! great story !! keep update please !!
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I hope Yuko not die yet
and who is that man with short hair, it sound like Mariko
lol u got me when the both minami said 'Fuck you minami'
please update soon
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OOOH WHEN YOU UPDATE THIS?
I MISSED IT LIKE AGED
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I can't believe I didn't see this story yet this is awesome!!!
Hope yuko didn't die yet.....
I have a gut feeling I know who the little red is...
Hope you can update soon... :prayers:
l'll surely be waiting! :on GJ: :
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Another awesome development...
How are they coping with the attacks?
Would they be able to survive?
How about Yuko?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Whoa~~ :w00t:
It's so interesting :thumbsup
I want to read more :inlove: :inlove: :deco: :deco:
So Please update soon 8) 8)
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oh my gosh. what an exciting fic. (still can't move on 0_0) PLEASE CONTINUE お願いします。
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Whoa~~ :w00t:
It's so interesting :thumbsup
I want to read more :inlove: :inlove: :deco: :deco:
So Please update soon 8) 8)
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