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Title: The real betrayed - s2 chap2 (kojiyuu, Atsumina, mayuki, wmatsui) 23/05/2015
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 11, 2015, 10:11:29 AM
Author note:  hello everybody. I get an idea so I make the one shoot story into chapters, I'm sorry to giving you trouble , sorry for bad grammar, hope you enjoy it.





Name : oshima yuko

Species : werewolf

Type : former ace

Relationship : Married

Children : one daughter.

Blood color : Dark violet



Name :kojima haruna

Species : vampire

Type : normal

Relationship : married

Children : one daughter

Blood color :  black




Name : meada Atsuko

Species : werewolf

Type : Alpha

Relationship : single

Blood color :  dark green




Name : Takahashi minami

Species : vampire

Type : queen

Relationship : single

Blood color :  midnight blue





Name : yuki

Species : human

Type : normal

Power : mindreader: fast speed

Relationship : single




Name : watanabe mayu

Species : vampire

Type : genius

Relationship : single

Blood color : blue



Name : Matsui rena

Species : unknown

Type : unknown

Relationship : single

Blood color : unknown




Name : Matsui jurina

Species : vampire

Type : Ace

Relationship : single

Blood color : Green

~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter one: Stalker



It was cold, night, the snow was falling, all over the city, I'm standing in front of a supermarket, waiting for you.

As the light of supermarket closed, and you came out, you lock the door and start to walk away, I started following you, every days , I follow you like this, You went your home safely, without any trouble, You open the door,with your cold and shivering hand.As the door open, you Went inside and close the door.

Its been three Year since I have been following you like this, I hope that you never notice me,its been three years when I saw you first time.

At Christmas eve. It's was a happy day for everyone, so I can't take any one life, Let them enjoy today, Everyone  were so happy, children were laughing and playing with snow,
As I was walking in silence street...suddenly I saw someone sitting In the dark place, I get closer, my eyes open widely as I saw beautiful girl sitting alone in the cold,

It was you.... first time I saw a very beautiful girl like angel, my heart felt very strange, Suddenly I hear your crying sound.... I get shocked. How came beautiful girl crying in beautiful day, I wanted to ask you and help you, seeing you crying like this, it's broke my heart,

But I can't enter in  human  life....but also I can't sit here seeing you crying like this  I can't stop myself....I started to walk closer you, but I stopped as I saw you standing up and start walking .....I follow you secretly.... Until we reach the old building, you enter and start to climping the stairs.

I also followed you, I don't know why?! I stopped!! as I saw you standing end of the building top.

what the hell are you doing??! I thought, don't tell me you want to jump!!No! you can't, As I saw You closing your eyes ,and getting ready to jump, I can't stop myself seeing you die like this.

"What the hell are you doing"
I shouted...you shocked because this is the oldest building nobody can come here... You looked at me for a moment and then you speak ."Not of your business" saying this you walk away,I walked behind you."why you wanted to die??! "I asked.
But you don't give any answer and continue walking....I grab your hand "hey answer me why you want to die?" "who are you and what you want from me ?"
You shouted.... Who I am that's right, I am nobody "I just want to know why beautiful girl like you want to die.??!"
"none of your business."
Saying this you walk away.

And I also followed you
you stopped and looked at me with angry eyes.and  come closer to me then you kicked my right leg, its hurt I fall down.

damn it!! what a girl,I give up anyway, i don't want to  enter in human life,

do what you want!! but somehow my heart field Strang. Why you wanted to die??! Thinking This i start following you again. until I reached your home. you looked little secred.you opened the door and went inside.to find out what's going on inside, I climb the building. I'm not human so its easy for me. there was some kind of sound coming  out from house.I entered your house from window,
and get close to hear the voice....I get shocked when I saw your parents is Beating you. "You bicth!! Didn't I warned you, from coming home late at night, where were you huh??."

They were beating you badly. The blood were falling from your mouth and nose.
Damn!! what kind of parents are they??! So that's why you wanted to die?? you wanted to end this damn life?? I went out of your house because I can't see you like this.
I started to think, shall I help you or not?? my heart says yes ,but my mind says no.
Then I decided to help you, and it was not a big deal for me.I killed your parent by drinking their blood it was tasty.
~~~~

"Are you going to stand there in snow like this??"
I shocked with suddenly voice. I looked at the front, I saw you, standing there, I wanted to run away, but I can't.
Did you find out about me. I thought, what should I do??
No its maybe not true,
I looked left and right, maybe someone else be there. But There was no one, that's mean you are talking to me.

"come in"

Ohh shit !! what should I do??
"A-re you talk-ing to me?" I asked.

You nodded.

I  slowly entered in your house, you showed me the way to your living room, I sit on the sofa.. You give me warm cup of tea "here you go"
"Thank you."
I take the sip. The taste was not bad.
I always drink a blood ,its my first time drinking tea.
We just sit salience. Until you broke the salience
"My name is kashwagi Yuki.. What is your name.
I don't give her any answer.... After some time sitting salience, I stand up and begin  to go outside, but my feet stopped,
I looked at you,You give me  beautiful smile.
"M-Mayu.. My name is Watanabe Mayu."

~~~~~~~To be continue ~~~~~~

Sorry for bad grammar.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: cisda83 on February 11, 2015, 10:38:35 AM
Ah... Mayu saved Yuki from parents abused

Nice prologue...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to see other characters

Thank you for the new supernatural story

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: crosteks on February 11, 2015, 10:54:06 AM
Mayu saved Yuki :twothumbs
What a good Nice prologue...
 :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Kirozoro on February 11, 2015, 01:02:27 PM
Nice prologue

 
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: JoeYee on February 11, 2015, 02:47:10 PM
Interesting interesting. Nicely done, i would say.  :twothumbs
Update soon!  :glasses: :glasses:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on February 12, 2015, 06:21:38 AM
Mayuki and supernatural  :ding:

update soon!!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 12, 2015, 12:04:12 PM
Hello everyone ҉٩(*´︶`*)۶҉  Thank you for reading my fic . I'm so happy. Here I come with another chapter hope you like it. Sorry for bad grammar.

*nervous * sweat *nervous *


Here you go.





Chapter : 2




I woke up from sunlight hitting my face and the sound of birds outside. ‘What a nice dream’ I thought. Wait, where I'm? I looked around, and it was not my room, why am I in stranger’s home? Ah yes, I remember staying in Yukirin’s home last night, and she is not stranger, She is the person I love. I got up from the bed. Took a shower, and walked to the kitchen. I saw Yukirin sitting near the dining table, and drinking coffee.

"Good morning Yukirin." I greeted.

"Good morning Mayuyu." She greeted back

“Ehh mayuyu!” I blushed. I saw Yuki smirk and give me cup of coffee.

"Arigatou." I said, grabbing the cup that she offered   I take the cup and take a sip that makes my eyes open widely. Damn this is not coffee, it's BLOOD. I was shocked and looked at Yuki, how she find out?

" I read your mind!" She exclaimed.

“You read my mind??” I asked obviously shocked. "Yes.” She said
matter of factly.  

“How??” I asked.  

"I have an ability to read a person’s mind." The raven haired girl said.

“Ehh, shit don't you hate me??” I asked a little bewildered.

"Why should I?” She asked pouring herself a cup of coffee.

  "Uh? Is it because I'm vampire?" I shrugged.

"So? What if you are a vampire? You’re not a bad person." she smiled.

I grin to myself her smile is so cute I want to kiss her lips so bad.

  "Thank you. But you can't." She said letting out a small giggle .
Oh shit! I totally forgot that she can read my thoughts. "It's okay." She said as she gave me a small smile.

"Can you please stop reading my mind?" I said.  

"Hmmm? Why not? I happen to like your thoughts. Last night you were dreaming of alpacas.” Yuki giggled.

I didn’t have any answer. “Just don't read my mind,” I sigh

“Some of my thoughts aren’t that great.” I saw her grin. I can't sit here anymore, I fidgeted in my seat. I quickly drink all blood in one gulp. I shot her a look and bolted for the door and out of the house, why is all of this suddenly happening to me? Why did she have that kind of power?

~~~~~
As usual, I wait for her outside the market, and we walked home together. Now I don't have to stalk her. Because she found out about me.

There was an awkward silence between us. I looked around. What a boring life. I sighed.

"You are right." She said nudging me.

"You’re reading my mind Again I might add."

I say to her as we walked back to our home. She gave me an evil smile
"Did you know reading a person’s mind without their permission is not good." I said.

"What about stalking people without their permission is that good?" She said raising a perfectly shaped eyebrow at me. 

Damn, she is a genius. I thought

"Yes, I'm." Yuki replied smugly I sighed again, looks like I can't even think in peace with her.

"You are right." she smiles. I glared at her. An idea came into mind, I looked at her chest. I quickly touched her chest and ran away while laughing. I stopped running and looked around. She was nowhere to be found, didn't she follow me? That’s strange. I felt someone standing beside me. As I move my head slowly, I fell down.  
"Y-yukirin…” I stammered   I can't believe how she could’ve caught me so fast, she leaned close to my face, and poked my cheeks.

" I forgot to tell I also can run faster than normal humans." She shrugged. Wait  how can I forgot that I'm vampire, stupid right? I can fly Instead of running like human which is way cooler than running on ground, and then she can't catch me that easily.

But from now it seems like my great day is coming to an end. .  

"You are right Mayu." she winked and grab my ear and dragged me with her.
Kami-sama please help me.   ~~~~~

As we were walking to home. We saw someone lying on the road, we got nearer to her it was a beautiful girl, it seems someone beat her so badly, and she was groaning in pain.

"We should help her Mayu." Yuki urged me.

"What? But why, we don't even know her, what if she’s someone dangerous?" I asked pausing to look at her. Yuki glared at me.

"Okay, okay as you wish." I complied She smiled and help me to place  her body on my back, and I carried the unconscious girl home. I felt something strange about this girl.
~~~~~

Strange, something feels very strange indeed. Who is this stranger? She isn’t human, not a vampire nor werewolf either. I get close to her body and took a whiff of her scent

“Who are you?” I whispered to the sleeping girl. How about I taste her blood, then maybe I can know her! I thought as I dipped my face closer to her, I was about to stink my fangs in her neck.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING??" Yuki yelled and started hitting me with a tray.

"If you’re that hungry, go drink animal blood you moron!” She said as she shoved me off the sleeping girl who was now on the couch.

"Yukirin it's not what it looks like, I just wanted to taste her blood, because I feel something strange about her!" I exclaim from behind the door.

"......." but there was only silence, I kicked the door down cause she won’t open it, what the hell am I supposed to do? Leave her alone with that dangerous lady? No way in hell, Yuki glared at me, she about to say something to me.

when the stranger started to stir in her sleep groaning. Her eyes fluttered open as she looked at Yuki and tries to get up, to get closer to Yuki When she was close enough she started to caress Yuki’s cheek like what lovers would do, except well they aren’t lovers. What the hell is she doing? I thought.

" B-black you co-me ba-ck??" the mysterious girl croaked, cupping Yuki’s cheek She leaned her face closer to Yuki and kiss her lips.

My eyes wide in shock, How dare you kiss my Yukirin!
I shout in my head But I’m rooted in my place too shocked to move.

Did She just stole Yuki’s  FIRST KISS.
~~~~~~
I couldn't sleep at all with the image of that stranger kissing Yuki lips running through my mind.
All night I was just rolling in the bed. Damn that stranger just came in the night and she already kissed Yuki. And me, I've been stalking Yuki for 3 years, but I've never even got the chance to lean my head on her shoulder. Argggghhhhg.

*knock* *knock*
"MAYUUU!!!!!! MAYUUUU!!!!!!!"

Who the hell is disrupting me at this time? I get up and open the door.
A tall, handsome girl came inside and grabbed my shoulders tightly. She looked very scared and scary at the same time.

"We are in trouble." She said in a weak voice.

"What happened??" I asked.

"MAYU, THE CHILD IS GONE!" She yelled while shaking my whole body with her hands.

~~~~~~~
"Hey Acchan wake up, I have good news for you!!" Boyish looking style girl, trying to wake up the sleepy girl.

"Hmm...... What is it Sae?? Leave me alone." Acchan said while pulling the blanket over her face.

"I have very big news for you. The child is GONE." Sae said the last word loudly.

"Child??? What child, I don't have any child." Acchan replied in a lazy voice.

"Argghh.... you leave me no choice, don't blame me later," Sae murmured, then she threw cold water at Acchans face, "Here you go, you lazy ass."

"Kyaaaaaaaaa!! How dare you throw cold water at my face!" Acchan yelled while wiping her face with a blanket.

"I have good news for you. The child is gone."

"Ehhh, when?? And how?? "Acchan asked Shocked.

"I don't have all the information about it. All I know is that the child has been missing for two weeks." Sae replied.

Acchan raised her eyebrows, and started laughing like a crazy person.

"Hehehehehehe....You know what this means??" Acchan asked.
Sae nodded, "Yes, the beginning of The War." she whispered in an evil voice.

~~~~To be continue ~~~~~~~


How it is please comment.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Kirozoro on February 12, 2015, 02:27:12 PM
Wait why is that 'child' call yukirin black?!? And that chikd just kiss Yukirin

War?!?

Update soon
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on February 12, 2015, 03:07:32 PM
Why that child kiss yuki ?

what will happen ? :glasses:

update soon!
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: qweakb on February 12, 2015, 06:25:41 PM
Is that 'child' is rena? Cause from the introduction only rena's species is unknown.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Koneki on February 12, 2015, 07:06:30 PM
hohohho interesting  8)
I loved it :P
can't wait for the next update x3   :cathappy: :cathappy:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Foxtchy on February 12, 2015, 10:37:48 PM
I'm so curious about rena ~
Can't wait for you to uptdate!
Hwaiting! :cathappy:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: kahineechan on February 13, 2015, 06:02:13 AM
Okay, soooooo.. uhmmmm......

I'll go this in detail like when I edited this.

I'm still kind of confused with the whole Mayu stalking Yuki in the first place, and I'm like WHY? Did Mayu want to drink Yuki's blood? And I kinda got confused with the whole vampire werewolf thing. If some of the members are vamps, and werewolves, then they must know each other right? Other than that, I feel like you kind of gave away somethings that could've added to the mystery and suspense on the characters part. Although each writer have their own style.

Quote

"Hey Acchan wake up, I have good news for you!!" Boyish looking style girl, trying to wake up the sleepy girl.

"Hmm...... What is it Sae?? Leave me alone." Acchan said while pulling the blanket over her face.

"I have very big news for you. The child is GONE." Sae said the last word loudly.

"Child??? What child, I don't have any child." Acchan replied in a lazy voice.

"Argghh.... you leave me no choice, don't blame me later," Sae murmured, then she threw cold water at Acchans face, "Here you go, you lazy ass."

"Kyaaaaaaaaa!! How dare you throw cold water at my face!" Acchan yelled while wiping her face with a blanket.

"I have good news for you. The child is gone."

"Ehhh, when?? And how?? "Acchan asked Shocked.

"I don't have all the information about it. All I know is that the child has been missing for two weeks." Sae replied.

Acchan raised her eyebrows, and started laughing like a crazy person.

"Hehehehehehe....You know what this means??" Acchan asked.
Sae nodded, "Yes, the beginning of The War." she whispered in an evil voice.



I'm sorry but can you explain how the "child" has been missing FOR TWO WEEKS and they have not noticed? I'm confusedddddd. MOVING ON
Did you add the last part cause I surely didn't read that in the one that you sent me the other day for editing. Oh well.

Also I have a question, the time Mayu was stalking Yukirin.. Yuki just let Mayu into her house? And... wait for it.... MAYU SPENT THE NIGHT OVER? I mean don't take this the wrong way but the character progression is just too fast, and I know that this is now a multi-chaptered instead of it being a one shot which means you have control of the timeline of the story.. Meaning you can have short time jumps, so you know the characters can get to know each other. Cause the first chapter and the second chapter really gave me mixed signals. Its very confusing to me IMO that is.

Also kindly explain this to me cause... uhhhhh.... confusion.....

Quote
I couldn't sleep at all with the image of that stranger kissing Yuki lips running through my mind.
All night I was just rolling in the bed. Damn that stranger just came in the night and she already kissed Yuki. And me, I've been stalking Yuki for 3 years, but I've never even got the chance to lean my head on her shoulder. Argggghhhhg.

*knock* *knock*
"MAYUUU!!!!!! MAYUUUU!!!!!!!"

Who the hell is disrupting me at this time? I get up and open the door.
A tall, handsome girl came inside and grabbed my shoulders tightly. She looked very scared and scary at the same time.

"We are in trouble." She said in a weak voice.

"What happened??" I asked.

"MAYU, THE CHILD IS GONE!" She yelled while shaking my whole body with her hands.

So Mayu is a vampire right? And Acchan is a werewolf, so I'm assuming that Sae is also a werewolf, but WHY would Sae go to Mayu to tell her that the "child" is missing?

As far as I've known and read through out fiction its that there is the constant hate between vamps and wolves. So I'm not quite grasping as to why Sae would even dare go to a vamps house, cause that would be considered as a betrayal to their kind.

So all in all, I'd like to know more of this cause when I did the proofreading and editing I was very confused by the flow of the story. Sorry for that but I want you to improve your writing that's why I'm taking time to review this properly, and give you some pointers in writing, I may not be the best in writing cause heck there are a lot of great writers out there, *cough* adorks people *cough* and a whole lot more. Call me biased but they are good at what they do. OTL I hope you take time to read this and such..

 :shakeit: here have a butt

Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: crosteks on February 13, 2015, 06:03:59 AM
 its not a :bigdeal: for acchan to have a WAR  :kekeke: :glasses: :glasses:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 13, 2015, 02:04:52 PM
Okay, soooooo.. uhmmmm......

I'll go this in detail like when I edited this.

I'm still kind of confused with the whole Mayu stalking Yuki in the first place, and I'm like WHY? Did Mayu want to drink Yuki's blood? And I kinda got confused with the whole vampire werewolf thing. If some of the members are vamps, and werewolves, then they must know each other right? Other than that, I feel like you kind of gave away somethings that could've added to the mystery and suspense on the characters part. Although each writer have their own style.

Quote

"Hey Acchan wake up, I have good news for you!!" Boyish looking style girl, trying to wake up the sleepy girl.

"Hmm...... What is it Sae?? Leave me alone." Acchan said while pulling the blanket over her face.

"I have very big news for you. The child is GONE." Sae said the last word loudly.

"Child??? What child, I don't have any child." Acchan replied in a lazy voice.

"Argghh.... you leave me no choice, don't blame me later," Sae murmured, then she threw cold water at Acchans face, "Here you go, you lazy ass."

"Kyaaaaaaaaa!! How dare you throw cold water at my face!" Acchan yelled while wiping her face with a blanket.

"I have good news for you. The child is gone."

"Ehhh, when?? And how?? "Acchan asked Shocked.

"I don't have all the information about it. All I know is that the child has been missing for two weeks." Sae replied.

Acchan raised her eyebrows, and started laughing like a crazy person.

"Hehehehehehe....You know what this means??" Acchan asked.
Sae nodded, "Yes, the beginning of The War." she whispered in an evil voice.



I'm sorry but can you explain how the "child" has been missing FOR TWO WEEKS and they have not noticed? I'm confusedddddd. MOVING ON
Did you add the last part cause I surely didn't read that in the one that you sent me the other day for editing. Oh well.

Also I have a question, the time Mayu was stalking Yukirin.. Yuki just let Mayu into her house? And... wait for it.... MAYU SPENT THE NIGHT OVER? I mean don't take this the wrong way but the character progression is just too fast, and I know that this is now a multi-chaptered instead of it being a one shot which means you have control of the timeline of the story.. Meaning you can have short time jumps, so you know the characters can get to know each other. Cause the first chapter and the second chapter really gave me mixed signals. Its very confusing to me IMO that is.

Also kindly explain this to me cause... uhhhhh.... confusion.....

Quote
I couldn't sleep at all with the image of that stranger kissing Yuki lips running through my mind.
All night I was just rolling in the bed. Damn that stranger just came in the night and she already kissed Yuki. And me, I've been stalking Yuki for 3 years, but I've never even got the chance to lean my head on her shoulder. Argggghhhhg.

*knock* *knock*
"MAYUUU!!!!!! MAYUUUU!!!!!!!"

Who the hell is disrupting me at this time? I get up and open the door.
A tall, handsome girl came inside and grabbed my shoulders tightly. She looked very scared and scary at the same time.

"We are in trouble." She said in a weak voice.

"What happened??" I asked.

"MAYU, THE CHILD IS GONE!" She yelled while shaking my whole body with her hands.

So Mayu is a vampire right? And Acchan is a werewolf, so I'm assuming that Sae is also a werewolf, but WHY would Sae go to Mayu to tell her that the "child" is missing?

As far as I've known and read through out fiction its that there is the constant hate between vamps and wolves. So I'm not quite grasping as to why Sae would even dare go to a vamps house, cause that would be considered as a betrayal to their kind.

So all in all, I'd like to know more of this cause when I did the proofreading and editing I was very confused by the flow of the story. Sorry for that but I want you to improve your writing that's why I'm taking time to review this properly, and give you some pointers in writing, I may not be the best in writing cause heck there are a lot of great writers out there, *cough* adorks people *cough* and a whole lot more. Call me biased but they are good at what they do. OTL I hope you take time to read this and such..

 :shakeit: here have a butt
First I thank you for reading my fic thank you so much.

I love making my readers confuse. Because I'm also confused. Xd

Lol let's get to the point .

First " how the child gone missing you will going to find it in the nexr chapters .

Second : yuki knew about mayu that she stalk her everyday because she is minder.

Third : The tall handsome looking girl is jurina not sae.

And last may wanted to taste stranger blood not yuki blood.

And again thank you so much for reading my fic. (♡˙︶˙♡)
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 22, 2015, 08:30:54 AM
Minaaaa I'm baaack. Xd

Sorry for making you wait,  here I come with chapter 3. Sorry for bad grammar and mistakes, hope you enjoy it.

*nervous *nervous *



Chapter 3



Mayu and Jurina came at Yuki house to see if that stranger is the missing child, because Mayu was feeling something a strange vibe from said child.
They all sat in the living room staring at stranger who was eating melon pan peacefully in front of them.

  “How dare you eat that peacefully after kissing my yukirin. Whoever you are, just remember one thing I'm not going to leave you alone, I will going to kill you,and then threw your body in the sea, let's shark eats you” Mayu thought
staring at the stranger who was busy savoring her 3rd melon pan.

“KAAWAAAII she is damn soo Cute,like an angel's. The way she eats melon pan, and the way she moves her lips, it's so cute I want to kiss them, I can't hold myself anymore.” Jurina thought clenching the edge of her seat, looking directly at the girl’s lips.

 “Those stupid kids, what are they thinking about?”  Yuki looked at a stranger's face. “Strange why I can't read that stranger’s mind. And why she called me black? And she even kissed me!! Can someone tell me what's going on?”

 "Ano My Name is Mastui Jurina , and she is Mayu & Yuki” Jurina pointed at them. The stranger did not reply anything and just continued eating her melon pan.

Jurina asked again, "Can we be friends?" of course she was not ready to give up anything that easy, after all she was a troublesome child. 

"I don't need any friends." The stranger replied coldly.

"Hmmmm, then how do you feel about me being your girlfriend?" Jurina asked playfully.

Stranger looked at her. "You are not a girl of my type." Said as she got up and went outside.

Yuki and Mayu started to laugh. "Don't be sad Jurina." Yuki said while patting Jurina's head. 

"So Jurina what you think?" mayu asked. "Hmm, I don’t get what you mean, but if you meant if she’s the kid that we’re looking for, then no she is not that child." Jurina shrugged. 

"Are you sure? Because her blood smells strange to me," Mayu raised an eyebrow.

“This is really strange.”  "Yes I'm sure I know that child doesn’t look like her."

"Then why do I feel something strange." Mayu asked while thinking. 

"Because she is trying to steal your girlfriend," Jurina whispered in Mayu’s ear playfully. 
“And I am smitten with that girl that went outside.” "She is not my girlfriend!" Mayu exclaimed and punched jurina’s cheeks playfully.

~~~~~At acchan place ~~~~~
 
“Acchan!" Sae came bounding in the room. "What happened Sae??" Acchan asked putting her book down.

 "I have very bad news. 45 people was killed by a monster!!" She heaved a sigh.

"What? Wait hold up who can do such a horrible thing?" Acchan asked apparent shock on her face.

 "I don't know. And the most horrible thing is that the monster takes the victim’s livers after killing them."

"What the hell? Looks like he started the first move" Acchan said clenching her fist.

 "Wait you know who it is?" Sae asked.
 
"We have to find and kill that monster before things get any worse." Acchan looked at Sae "Get ready we have to meet someone." Acchan said as she stood up.

"OK but who we will going to meet??"Sae raised eyebrow.

"You will know it later." 

~~~~~At Takamina place ~~~~~ "Takamina san someone wants to meet you." Her servant said.

 "Okay, please tell them wait for me in the meeting room." Takamina replied while looking at dresses. 
Who want to meet me at a time like this? She thought.

Takamina arrived at the meeting room after a few minutes.

"Acchan why we are here?" asked sae.

"You will know it soon." Acchan replied calmly.  Takamina opened the door, she shocked as she saw unwanted guests.

"Calm down Takamina San we just want to talk with you, nothing more."Acchan said while trying to calm her. 

Takamina looked at their faces, then sits beside them.

"So what you want??” 

"As you know princess Takamina San I don't like to go left or right, so I will get at the point." Acchan take long breathe.   “let us find that child together and stop the war."

All of them shocked at Acchan’s word’s and start looking at each other face.

"What are you trying to say??"

" Let us become friends like the past, and find that demon who trying to destroy the world and kill him." Acchan replied in a serious voice.

"I still don't understand anything??" Takamina asked.

 "Do you remember the story,that my grandfather used to tell us when we were child??" Takamina nodded. "That was a true story that will going to happen now."

"WHAT!! Stop joking Acchan, I'm not going to fall in your trap." Takamina replied while controlling her anger. 

"There are many things that you should know about this world, And don't forget that I'm not human, I'm a wolf and we never lie.We have to work together Takamina, and stop the war, I can't fight with myself because I'm not that strong I can't stop the war alone I need your help, try to understand me. I'm not joking." Acchan said with anger in her eyes.

Takamina shocked with Acchan words she knew Acchan never lied, even she had a bad feeling too, she wants to find.
kojima San who had disappeared from many years, no one knows if she is alive or not.

" I know Takamina it's may hard for you to believe me, but you have to believe in us, we were friends, and we can't hurt those whom we love."

After thinking some time takamina decide to believe in her.
"OK but I need some time to think."

"OK as you wish, but remember we don't have much time, so please decide soon as possible." Acchan replied with a smile. 

~~~~~At yuki place~~~~~~~
"So jurina what are we going to do know??" mayu asked while not taking her eyes from stranger, who were talking with yuki.

" What you mean what we going to do?We have to find that child before something worse happens."
Jurina replied with serious voice.

Mayu sighed and looked at the sky throw the window." Look like it's time for the war to start."

" Ehh....mayu Chan don't scare me like this. You know I hate the wars." Jurina said while hugging her leg.

"Nobody loves war, all of us hate it, because sometimes we  lose those whom we love most." mayu say in a sad tone.

"You are right nee Chan, I'm curious about something how can that child run away that easily??"jurina asked while thinking.

"Look like someone helped her, and broke the magic spell. I wonder who's that person."
~~~~~~
The stranger comes closer to Yuki and sit close to her. And start looking at her beautiful face. Then slowly she put her hand on Yuki hands.

"Black why you are ignoring me?Why you behaving like you don't know me?? " Stranger asked in a childish voice.

Yuki shocked, first she can't read stranger mind, and second the stranger looks little scary and also crazy to her.
" I don't know what you are talking about, but trust me, I'm not lying to you I really don't remember you, who are you and when did we meet??" Yuki asked nervously.

The tears slowly fall from stranger eyes. Her heart broke into hundred pieces.

"Don't do this to me, you know how hard it was for me to live without you. Black I eat my meal every day at the time and also sleep at the time, I don't fight or hurt anyone, I don't break things,I do everything what they tell me to do. So black don't do this to me." stranger starts shaking Yuki hands." Black I have become a good girl, please don't do this to me please." the stranger pleaded.

Yuki wiped tears from the stranger's face.
"I'm sorry, but I'm not that person that you were thinking, I'm Yuki not black, I'm really sorry." saying this she leave stranger alone.

'No matter what you say I will never going to leave you, I will going to make you mine.' the stranger murmured while sobbing.

~~~~~~At acchan place ~~~~~

"Acchan I'm curious about something, Aren't we supposed to kill that child??" sae asked.

" Are you stupid, why would we kill the innocent child, we have a heart too we are not evil."

"Ehh it's because that child's father is a werewolf, and in our rules dating vampires is not allowed!!" sae asked while blinking her eyes many times.

"We didn't have that kind of rules." Saying this acchan went to her room and close the door.

' Ehhh I'm confused, what is going on ,can anybody tell me. I really don't understand anything. What we were fighting for all these years??'

~~~~~~At Takamina place ~~~~

Takamina looked at the sword who were hanging on the wall.

(Flashback)

"Listen takamina, there is something very important I want to tell you."The old man said."I can see the future, There is something worse going to happen, there will be going a war between werewolf and vampires, but that was all lie, don't trust them, because they were just trying to protect that child whose father is a werewolf and mother is a vampire."

Takamina shocked" What are they trying to protect him from grandfather??"

"You will going to know it later, but now I want to give you something." The old man opens the red box, inside the box there was a sword." give this sword to that child. This is most powerful sword, it will going to protect the world, and be careful don't let wrong hand touch to this sword."
The old man puts sword in Takamina hand." I believe in you, my child." he smile.

"Don't worry grandfather, I promise that I will going to protect that sword and return it to its owner." Takamina bowed her head.

The old man smiles" look like I can die peacefully now."

(End of flash)

'Black looks like the time that we were waiting for has come.' Takamina murmured while looking at the sword.

~~~~~At yuki place ~~~~~~

Jurina sit beside the stranger who were crying alone. She hold stranger hand, and smile.

"You know sometimes in this world we have to accept those things that we don't want to accept it, but we have to accept them because there is no other way without accepting them, don't be sad and don't cry alone, cause it's hurt." saying this jurina hug her. "you can cry in my shoulder. I'm here with you, we are friends right. Everything will be going to fine."
The stranger get shocked, not from jurina words,but from something else,That she saw in her eyes.

After staying some hours like this jurina realize that stranger is fall a sleep. She smiled and kissed her forehead and took her to the room and lay her on the bed.

"Goodnight." saying this she went out and close the door behind.

"Mayu let's go home." jurina said while wearing her shoes.

"Ano if it's OK, can you two stay with us??"Yuki asked in nervous tone.
As jurina trying to say something, mayu put her hand on jurina mouth and give smile to yuki.

"of course, it's our pleasure to stay with you." mayu said while her hand still closing jurina mouth.

" Glad to hear that, I hope if we get well together, it's good to have vampires as friends." she smile. Mayu smiled back and looked at jurina who giving death glare to her.

"We have to find that child mayu." Jurina said glaring at her.

" It's OK jurina we can find her later. Beside you also want to spend more time with that stranger." mayu smile and run toward the room.

~~~~To be continue ~~~~~~

Don't be shy and comments guys xd
 Should I continue or leave the fic.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on February 22, 2015, 01:34:07 PM
Where did kojima go to ? :?

That stranger is Rena right ? It must be her ! :glasses:

what did she saw when jurina talk to her ? :confused:

Anyway , hurry update ! you make me really curious :thumbsup
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 28, 2015, 10:44:16 AM
Hello everybody, I'm sorry for not updating fast and long, please forgive me. And stay with me, I will try hard to make chapters long.

Thank you for everyone who read my fic *bow*

Here is short chapter I will make sure to write long or post fast.


Chapter 4 part 1




~~~~~At Yuki place~~~~~~

Mayu is watching the news,and Jurina is reading  manga, And the stranger quietly staring at Jurina.

"There is not any news about the child." Mayu is getting tired from watching the news.

"Ano..... Is there anything on my face"Jurina asked to stranger nervously.

"...."  She didn't reply and keep staring at her.

"By the way where did Yuki goes." Mayu asked while munching some snacks.

"She said she have something to do." Jurina replied

~~~~~~~~~
*Knock* knock*

The old woman opens the door. "Good morning obaasan."Yuki greeted the old lady.

The old woman looked at the Yuki and then let her come inside,she showed her way to the living room. Yuki sits on the sofa.
The old lady come Inside the room while holding cup of tea, she offered cup to the Yuki.
"So what make you visit me??" The lady asked.

Yuki our her right Hand on the chest and takes a long breath. "I want to know about my past life."

"What you want to know??" lady asked.

"Everything, about myself, my family and friends."

"I see."The old lady nodded and start telling Yuki her past life story. "To make a long story short. Before 100 years ago you were only daughters of king kashiwagi,your name was black.you fall in love with daughter of general Mr.Matsui, Matsui Rena, you two used to love each other so much, at that day when she decides to propose you, the assistance enters in the castle and begin to kill everyone.and Matsui Rena killed while saving you.
The kingdom of your father was been destroyed.
Your father's old friend who was  vampire Mr.Kojima San he took you to his castle,and take care of you as like his own daughter.
Because of death Matsui Rena, you locked yourself in the room, you felt guilty of her death. Then Mr.Kojima San told  you that she will going to come to this world again,you have to wait for her.
Hearing this you asked Mr.kojima San to join in his army, and learn fighting. He Accepted you. You were most powerful fighter at that time, no one can beat you, you trained yourself so hard just because you wanted to protect her." The old lady paused and drink some water.

"Before 40years ago, she born again, as hybrid, her name was Oshima Rena.and she was a most powerful child. Mr.kojima San put her under your care.She grows up as beautiful princess.when she reached to 20 years old something happen and you died while saving her mother."

"if I was human then How can I able to live that many years, without getting old??" Yuki asked.

"You were half human and half vampire, in purpose living long life without getting old, they used to give you vampire blood every year.
Even now you are half vampire and half human, after your parents death in car accident, you were in between  death and life, vampire queen Takahashi Minami finds you and give you her blood, that's why you can hear peoples' minds easily and can move much faster than normal human."

( Author note: After Yuki parent's death in a car accident, her uncle adopts her,and they treat her badly, and then they killed by Mayu.)

As the lady finished talking, she gets up and went out,after a few minutes later she come back while holding an old brown book. She gives  the book to Yuki.

"Everything is written in this book, you can get more information from it."

Yuki takes the book and start reading it, everything was written on it, slowly, slowly Yuki starts to remember everything.

~~~~~~At Yuki place ~~~~~~~

Mayu switch off the TV and start rolling in the floor.
"What should we do, how we are going to find that child." keep rolling.

"Mayu nee chan calm down, don't worry we going to find her as soon as possible." Jurina said while reading manga.

"HOW??" Mayu stopped rolling and start glaring at Jurina.They turned their head to stranger as they heard giggling sound.

"Well, you can't find her while sitting at home or watching the news, do you think she appear on TV and wave at you, and say, Hey try to catch me," Stranger said while giggling.

"You are right,but even we go out and search her for every place, we can't find her that easily,we didn't know where she is." Mayu said.
Suddenly they heard door opening voice.

"I'm back." Yuki comes In and looked at  the stranger with her teary eyes. She slowly comes close to her.

"Rena!! " Yuki said in a weak voice, and hug her tight.

"Rena??" Mayu and Jurina said at the same time.

Yuki starts crying in stranger hug.
"I'm sorry Rena, I can't keep my promise, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, please forgive me."

The stranger lost the word from happiness And hugged Yuki back.
Yuki releases the hug and looked at stranger eyes and kissed her forehead.

Yuki looked at Mayu and Jurina.
"Mayu, Jurina, meets Rena, she is like a little sister to me."

~~~~~~~To be continue~~~~~~

Thank you for reading my boring fic.

Part two will going to update after some hours later.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Mayukishipper on February 28, 2015, 11:39:09 AM
Ah.. So the stranger is Rena
Glad yuki can remember her past
But now your future (mayu) now in front of you :3

And what child are they talking about ? I don't get it
Sorry for my stupidity author-san
Thanks for an update, looking forward to next chapter^^
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 28, 2015, 11:47:47 AM
Ah.. So the stranger is Rena
Glad yuki can remember her past
But now your future (mayu) now in front of you :3

And what child are they talking about ? I don't get it
Sorry for my stupidity author-san
Thanks for an update, looking forward to next chapter^^
Thank you for reading my fic thank you so much For commenting too.


Did you read chapter 2 there you can find information about child
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Mayukishipper on February 28, 2015, 01:32:03 PM
Ah.. So the stranger is Rena
Glad yuki can remember her past
But now your future (mayu) now in front of you :3

And what child are they talking about ? I don't get it
Sorry for my stupidity author-san
Thanks for an update, looking forward to next chapter^^
Thank you for reading my fic thank you so much For commenting too.


Did you read chapter 2 there you can find information about child
So the child is connected mayu, jurina and sae, acchan. hmm i wonder who is that child..
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 28, 2015, 04:21:14 PM
I'm back sorry for making you wait.  Here is part 2 hope you enjoy, 



Chapter 4 part 2





"ACCHAN!!!!ACCHAN!!!Wake up!!" sae start knocking Acchan room door hardly.

'Arrrgh!! Why I can't  sleep peacefully in my own room??'Acchan put her hand on the ears.
"SHUT UP!!! You will going to break the door." Acchan yelled.
 
"Vampire Queen, Takamina is waiting you in the living room."sae said as she stopped knocking the door.

'What!!!! Takamina!!' Acchan quickly get up from the bed, and run to the bathroom, she takes a shower in 20 minutes, and wear some nice clothes, and run to the living room.

She saw Takamina is sitting on the sofa waiting for her.

"Good morning."Acchan greeted her nervously and sit beside her.

"Goodnight you mean."Takamina replied.

"Ehhh."

"It's night outside."

"Ah,Well, for us, it's morning, because we wake up in the night and sleep In morning."Acchan start laughing awkwardly.

"So, what make you visit me??"

Takamina looked at Acchan." I want us back,I want us to become friends like before ,trust and help each other, like we used to do before 43 years ago. I want to trust you again."

Acchan smiles."Me too, I want the same thing as you I'm happy that you don't hate me."

"So I take it as yes."

Acchan smiles and hug Takamina." From now take care for me as your childhood friend."

"Let's work together."Takamina replied and hugged Acchan tight.

"Takamina I can't breath."

Outside the room sae who was listening their talk, fainted from Shock.
'What is going on, am I dreaming? Someone help me!! '

~~~~~At Yuki place~~~~~~~
Jurina standing on the building roof, staring beautiful view of the night.
Suddenly she hears beautiful voice coming from somewhere.Jurina shocked and start following the voice, The voice start getting close to her.

" Wanderer, mad with love,"

" What do you search for."

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."

Jurina shocked, ' It can't be.' she thought, and start running toward the sound.

"You roam the streets, end to end,"

"You laugh, you cry,"

"You urge every passerby,"

"Hiding the hurt in your smile"

"That you belong to all the world Yet no one is yours to hold."

"WHO ARE YOU??" Jurina yelled.

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for."

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."

"COME OUT."Jurina yelled and continue running, The sound starts getting weak.

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for??"

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."

Jurina stopped running and start flying."Show yourself whoever you are!!"

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for??"

Saying this the voice disappears.Jurina stopped at the top of a building and start looking around,but she didn't find anything.

*********

Mayu feeling thirsty, she opens the fridge and takes out blood pack and start drinking.
Suddenly someone hugs Mayu from behind.

"Mayuyu~~."Yuki said as she tight her hug.

Mayu choked the drink. "Yu-ki!!"
Mayu shattered."Wh-at ha-ppe-nd??"

Yuki kiss Mayu hair." Mayuyu!!"

."Y-Yes!! "

"Arigatou, for staying with me all this time and helping me."Yuki hid her face in Mayu neck.

"Eh, it's OK,no need for it." Mayu start getting nervous. Yuki starts kissing Mayu neck gently.Mayu gulped

"Yu-ki!! "

"How about going date tomorrow??" keep kissing.

"Da-te!!!! "

"Let's take Jurina and Rena with us."

"Ah, sound good."

Yuki give last kiss at Mayu cheek" Goodnight Mayuyu." and leaves to her room.
Mayu froze in her spot while  holding the blood pack in her right hand, her blood going up and down.it feels like she is dreaming.
"I'm in heaven."  she giggles.

***********

Rena is sitting near the small pond and munching some melon pan.

"Rena." someone calls her from behind, she shocked as she looked at the owner of the voice.

"Okaasan!!!"

"It's been a long time my daughter." her mom smiles and get close and open her hand to hug her beloved daughter, but Rena stopped her and step backward, her mom shocked from her reaction.

" Rena what happened? Don't you miss your mom??"

" Mom?? You call yourself Mom!! I HATE YOU!!!"Rena yelled

"Re-na!!! Why are you saying this. I came here to take you with me to the home." Rena mom said.

Rena starts laughing , the tears start falling from her eyes.she gets close to her mom and give her a strong punch in the stomach, her mom fall down on her knee and start coughing.

"You bitch, just go and die, never appear front of me again, and don't forget to tell your beloved husband that I will going to kill him with my own hand." saying this Rena leave her mom in pain and fly away.

~~~~~~~to be continue~~~~~~~
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Mayukishipper on March 01, 2015, 12:02:20 AM
kyaaa.. Mayuki moment, love it!
And then rena's mom appear it'll be interesting
Thanks for update author-san
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Kirozoro on March 01, 2015, 04:34:00 AM
Yuki finally remember her past

W8 i thiugh Yuki and Rena are suppose to be lover why did she said 'like sister'??

What they been fightings for all the years for if there is not fobid the two spiecies dating each other?

Who is that child?!?...was it's Rena?!

Update soon
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Archer1992 on March 02, 2015, 11:27:31 AM
What !!?  I'm a little confused!!,
Update soon!
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on March 02, 2015, 08:12:07 PM
Hello everyone I'm back with next chapter,  Thank you for reading and commenting at my fic *bow* I'm glad that you enjoy my lam fic


Replies :


#mayukishipper : Thanks for reading ,I'm Glad that you enjoy it, and I will make sure to make you see more interesting things in the future xd



#kirozoro:  Thank you for reading my fic,  yes you are right renayuki supposed to be lover, but why yuki call her as sister, we will going to find out later please wait with us.



#Arche1992:  sorry for making you confuse,  here is update hope you enjoy it.



•••••••••

Thank you everyone sorry for bad grammar hope you enjoy here is update.





Chapter 5 : Date





As the alarm rings, Mayu quickly get up from the bed and run to the bathroom, take a hot shower and wear some beautiful clothes, put on light makeup, and run to the living room while grinning.

Rena is sitting in dining table eating melon pan, and Jurina watching TV, Yuki also comes out from her room.

She looked at Rena, her eyes are red, like she was crying all night, 'what happened to her?'Yuki thought.

"Why two of you not get ready yet??"Yuki take remote from Jurina's hand and switch the TV off. "Stop watching the TV and get ready, we are going on a date"

"DATE!!!" Rena chocked and looked at Yuki,

"Didn't Mayu told you we are going on date today, hurry up!"

~~~~~in restaurant~~~~~~

"Na Acchan aren't we supposed to find the child??"Takamina said while watching Acchan who were eating beef stick.

"Yes, why??" putting another piece of stick in her mouth.

"Because it's been a half hour and we are sitting here and eating, aren't you full yet??"

"It's been while when I have eaten beef meat, beside this restaurant have very tasty meat."

'Aren't they supposed to find the child?'Sae said while watching them from the roof of a building.
'Ah, I'm hungry seeing them eating like this I want to eat too, but I can't go down there what if Acchen see me, she will get angry, Acchan please don't fall for her, dating a vampire is not ALOUD.'

•••••••••••••••
Yuki and Mayu walking while holding hands, Jurina and Rena walking behind them.
Yuki looked at them.

"What's with  the long face , come on enjoy the date, see the weather is nice, and the place is beautiful.and Rena, don't you want to see the beautiful World, then why you are not enjoying??"

"Hey Jurina, what happened with you , don't you want to go date with Rena Chan, come on enjoy, you will not going to have a beautiful chance like this to get close to her." Mayu winked at Jurina.

"So guys where are we going first??" Jurina said In Cheerful voice.

"Yes, Jurina this is what I hoped from you." Yuki said while smirking.

"Let's go and buy some clothes." Mayu said.

"Great idea, let's go." Yuki holds Rena and Jurina hand, and drag them to the cloth shop.

************

"Eto, why we are here??"

"To buy some clothes."

"But we supposed to find the child!!"

"Don't worry, We are going to find her, first, let's buy some nice clothes."

'Ehh,now what are they doing in clothe shop,you should find the child Acchan!!'

•••••••••••••
"Wait!!" Rena stopped and looked at the beef restaurant."How about we eat something first, I'm angry!!"

"Sound good, let's eat beef stick, i hear they cook tasty beef in this restaurant." Jurina said.

"OK, let's go!!" Yuki said and drag them to the restaurant.

*********
"Minami what you think which dress looks good on me??" Acchan asked while showing dress's to Takamina.

"I don't know choose anyone you like."

"Come on Minami help me little." Acchan pouted.

•••••••••••••
"Mayuyu, say Ah."

"Eh, I can eat by myself Yuki." blushing.

"You not like eating with my hand!!"

"No, no I don't mean  that."

"Then Say Ah!!"

"Ah."

"Rena Chan, please eat slowly you will going to chock like this."Jurina said worrying as she saw Rena eating like a mad person.

"Mmmmph Mmmmmph Mmmmph!!!"

"What are you saying I can't understand??"

"Mmmmmmph Mmmmmmph."

Yuki looked at Rena and smiles."Don't talk while eating Rena Chan."

"How about going to the Disney island after this??" asked Jurina.

"Eh, Disney island! We aren't child Jurina! Beside it's already night." replied Mayu.

Yuki kiss Mayu lips."Who said that we are older, we are still child Mayuyu."

"Kawaaii." Jurina claps her hand.

'Kawaii!! What is cute about them?Tsk from when Black and nazumi suit each other? Black always suits with gekikara, Blackgeki!!!' from anger Rena forgets to control her power and Yuki heard her mind.

'I'm sorry Rena, I don't have any other choice , you have to forget me.'

********
After buying some clothes Acchan and Takamina standing on the roof of a building, watching the beautiful View of the night .

"We supposed to find the child, but look like we  are on the  date." Takamina sigh.

Atsuko giggle "Don't you like it watching the beautiful city together as we used to do before??"

"Na Atsuko, do you still love him??"

"Who?? "

"That child's father??"

"Talking about child, what is her name??"Acchan trying to change the topic.

Takamina sighed, again, she tries to run away.after a few silent she speak.

"Rena, her name is Oshima Rena."

••••••••••••••
Yuki, Mayu and Jurina looking for clothes,  and Rena  just standing quietly staring at mayuki.
After shopping some nice clothes they head to the night club.
"Yahoo let's drink as much as we want." Yuki order 5 bottle of beer.

"Na, Rena Chan are you going to be OK, I mean do you have ever drank before." Jurina said as she saw Rena start drinking.

"Do I look you a little child who can't drink??" Replied Rena in a cold way as she drinks a second glass of beer.

Rena glared at Mayuyu, 'You will see Mayu, you will see!!'

*********

"Hello madam, how can I help you? "

"I need one room with single bed for one night."Acchan replied.

"Of course, wait a minute,here you go." The reception gives them room key"Have nice day."

"Eh, Acchan why w-we are he-re??"

"To take some rest any problem?"

"But why here??"

"Ehhhh, Now why they in l--l--lo-v e HOTEL??'NOOO ACCHAN ITS WRONG." Faint.

'Eh!!' Sae looked at Rena who were walking with Jurina, Mayu and Yuki,to the night club.
'I found her,' I should leave Acchan and catch her,  wait for me.' sae smirk and walk behind them and enter to the night club.  'What a weird place is this,where they go??'

"Hello handsome." a young lady come close to sae and put her hand on the sae neck.

"Eh, w-what yo-u wa-nt.?? " sae shutter.

"Don't be shy and come with me, let's enjoy our night together." The young lady drags her to the room.

"Ano, I'm n-not th-at  ki-nd of per-son!!"

"Don't worry handsome, everyone like this In the beginning, but they enjoy it In the end." The young lady whispered, as she slowly starts Removing sae shirt.

'Acchan help me, please help me, I don't want this, Sayaka will going to kill me.'

"ple-ase do-n't do th-is!!" sae pleaded.
Without any warning The lady start kissing sae Passionately.

Sae froze in her spot , she starts enjoying it, but suddenly Sayaka angry face come to her mind.
'I can't do this, it's wrong.' Thinking this she quickly push the lady on the floor and run outside in full speed  without looking back.

•••••••••••

Rena grabs Mayu hand and drag her outside, Jurina shocked from her reaction, and quickly run to the bathroom to call Yuki for help.

Rena glared at Mayu "Let's fight, if you win Yuki is yours, and if I win, she is mine!!" Rena challenged her.

"Wa-it  what are you talking about, I think you drink too much ." Mayu get confused

"Why don't you want to fight or you can't fight." Rena start giggling.

"It's not like...."
Without any warning Rena threw a strong punch at Mayu and make her fall on the ground, everyone in the club shocked and the girls start screaming. Rena didn't stop and start kicking Mayu,she holds Mayu from the collar and make her stand up.

"You are so weak." she giggles and gives another strong punch at her face and make her nose and lips bleed, Rena punch was so strong to handle if Mayu was a human she was sure she have died yet.

"Hitting me like this will going to make Yuki hate you more." Mayu said as she quickly stood up. And with all her power, gave Rena a strong punch in the stomach.
Rena start laughing and biting her nails."Is this all you have mice? Your punch was not painful at all."

"RENA STOP IT NOW."Yuki Come running and grab Rena hand and give her flying kick,that make her hit to the wall.
Yuki looked at Mayu and run toward her.

"Mayuyu are you okay ??" She holds Mayu and wipe the blood from her lips with her thumb.
Jurina run toward Rena."Rena Chan are you okay??" she saw tears in her eyes, Jurina hug Rena gently.

~~~~~~~
Sae enter into the castle without making any sound, she starts walking slowly into the room.

"Where were you??" sae froze in her place she slowly looked at the voice's owner her body melted like ice cream.

"S-Sayaka!!!"

"Do you enjoy it??" Sayaka come close to her.

"Enj-oy?? I don't know what are you talking about, I was stalking Acchan, nothing more."
Sayaka put her hand on the Sae cheeks.
"OH really?? Then the marks of lipstick on your face are blood??"

"Eh, it has been just an accident, nothing more, Sayaka believe me, I  love you, only you."
Sayaka grab her hand tightly and drag her to the room.

"Say-aka whe-re are you drag-ging me??"

"To the HELL!!! "

**********
Takamina sitting in the bed,her blood is going up and down, she is afraid, she didn't have any idea, what will going to happen with her.
'Atsuko is taking a shower.what should I do? I'm not ready about this thing.' As she hears bathroom door opening voice, Takamina quickly lay on the bed and close her eyes.
She hears footsteps coming close to the bed, Takamina heart starts beating fast, she closes her eyes tightly, The footsteps get closer, Atsuko slowly lay on the bed close to her, and  wrap her hand on Takamina shoulder, and give a quick kiss on her cheek.

"Goodnight Bakamina." Atsuko said while smirking.

•••••••••••••
" Hello, anybody is home.??" Yuko slowly enters to the room she shocked as she saw sae upside down.

"Sae Chan, what happened with you? Who did this to you?? "Yuko said and open sae and put her down.

"This all happened because of Acchan, because of her I stuck in the strange place with a beautiful lady,she tries to kiss and I run from that  strange place, but she lifts her kiss mark on me and Sayaka saw it, and I ended up like this. Wait, what are you DOING HERE??" sae shocked as she saw Yuko in the castle.

" I come to visit my old house, any problem??"

"Eh, how dare you come after betraying us,  do you think we will going to forgive you, never ever dream about it."

"I haven't done anything wrong, so why should I ask for forgiveness??"

"What, you married to  vampire daughter, and have a child from her, and I have found her Acchan will going to kill her soon."

~~~~~~~~~To be continue~~~~~~~~~
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: kurogumi on March 03, 2015, 04:42:36 AM
Hee i though rena love jurina

Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: qweakb on March 03, 2015, 10:39:32 AM
Yes! My guessing is right XD
Hahaha...
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Mayukishipper on March 03, 2015, 02:09:47 PM
What the..
Rena i beg you please don't hurt mayu
Is yuki kiss mayu just wanna make rena jealous or yuki really love mayu ?
Thanks for update author-san^^
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on March 05, 2015, 04:38:49 PM
Hello everyone I'm back with update
I'm glad that you guys enjoy it (♡˙︶˙♡).

First I thanks for silent reader and those who comments. Thank you so much.

Replies :


#kurogumi : Hi and thank you for reading, I hope that you read all the chapters then you will understand that Rena loves Yuki ^_^.



#qweakb: yes your was right you are genuis *high five*



#Mayukishipper: sorry for hurting Mayu *bow*
Well I think Yuki live mayu and Rena at same time.@_@  thank you for reading.

~~~~~~~~

Sorry for bad grammar and mistakes hope you enjoy it. *cathappy*

I decides to write some funny moments before making my readers cry, I'm not good with comedy so I don't know if my fic is lame hope you enjoy (๑♡∀♡๑)

*nervous *sweatdrop*





Chapter 6 part 1




"Ah, please be gentle Yuki, I can't hold anymore,Ah,"Mayu sweating badly.

"Hold on Mayu, just little more."

"I can't, I,m on my limits,Ahhhh."Mayu scream at last time and faint.

"Mayu, Mayu are you okay, Mayu." Yuki shakes Mayu body.
Mayu opened her eyes and looked at Yuki.
"Am, I still alive?? "

"Of course, silly you are alive, how is your arm now??"

Mayu looked at her arm and moved it up and down, left and right, "Waaoo, it's absolutely fine, I didn't feel any pain, you are amazing Yukirin, You are the best."Mayu jump at Yuki and hug her. Yuki  hugged her back and bury her face in Mayu neck, Mayu shocked as she hears sobbing voice.

"Yuki? Yuki what happened, why you are crying??"

"I'm sorry Mayu I'm sorry, please forgive me
I'm sorry!!"

"Don't say like this Yuki it was not your fault, I should be sorry because of my childish act you two never be together again, I'm sorry Yuki it was my mistake."

"If I had realized your feelings at that time, you have not suffered that much, it was my mistake."Yuki said while sobbing.

"It's OK, Yuki it was not your mistake."
Yuki and Mayu continue apologizing until they fall asleep while hugging each other.

••••••••••
Jurina and Rena sitting outside on the couch quietly,Jurina decide to break the silence.

"Anoo, are you okay."

"Do I look you okay?? "

"No!! "

"Then why are you asking??"

"......."

"Stupid!! "

"What did you say??"

" I say stupid do you have any problem??"

"How dare you say stupid to your senpai??"

"What senpai, hahahah how old are you kiddo??"

"What kiddo!! I'm 28 years old don't dare you mess with me!!"

"So young!!"

"What young, I'm older than you,  how old are you, huh,  20 ,22, or 19 hahahaha!!"

"I'm 40 year old kiddo." Rena smack Jurina head.

"What 40 hahahahahah I can't stop laughing obaachan!!"

"What how dare you call me obaacha!!"

"Why got any problem obaachan??"

" Kiddo."

"Obaacha."

"Kiddo."

"obaacha."

*SILNECE*

"Sing me song kiddo!!"

"Don't want!!"

"Sing me song I want to hear the song."

" I'm not your personal servant."

"SING ME SONG OR ELSA I WILL UPSIDE DOWN THE WHOLE HOUSE,"

*BAM*

"Can you two shut your mouth, we are sleeping here." Mayu yelled.

"It's still midnight, there is still 4hour in sunshine."

"As if we care, we are sleeping here so please don't disturb us."

"LOLALOLALOLALOALALALA.... "

*FLAASH *

"SHUT UP YOU MORONS." This time Yuki throws cold water at Rena.

"Stop sleeping you lazy girls, enjoy the beautiful cold night, don't you know that how  much  expansive is every minutes are in your life is and you are wasting them while sleeping."

"We are tired and  want to REST!!"

"And I will not going to let you rest peacefully ." Rena takes white flour in a big bowl and throws all of the flour at Yuki and Mayu and run.

"RENA YOU BASTARD WAIT HERE. "

Rena starts running around the whole house, and break and throw everything that come in her hand.

"Mayu catches her, she will going to break all the houses."Yuki yelled while catching things that Rena throwing at them.

*Glasses *plates * chairs*Table* spoons * *toothbrush *water tab*

*SMACK *CRASH *SPANCH *SLASH *BOM *DAM*CLASH*

No one can tell if they are fighting or playing.Yuki catches the things and Mayu trying to catch Rena as for Jurina she is sitting on the sofa and laughing  hard like there is no tomorrow.

"Jurina stop laughing and help me!!" Mayu said.

The silent  night turn into earthquake,even the poor neighbour wake up from their fights. In the end Mayu throw a large blanket at Rena and Yuki jump at her, Jurina quickly bring a rope and tie Rena with it. But  this  doesn't help Rena from yelling, she starts laughing nonstop, Yuki can't help and put some melon pan in her mouth to shut her. After a few minutes later everything becomes silent, all of them fall asleep on each other.

This is the life at the same day and same hours, two person sleeping quietly while hugging each other, and at other places one person truns all the home upside down, as three people trying to stop her. And at another poor Sae, she is till hanging upside down because of Acchan, that true Yuko tried to help her, but she refused, because she didn't need help from betrayed, As for another place Yuko San is standing top of a building while watching her child who were turning all the home upside down.

~~~~~~~Yuko pov~~~~~~~~

Lololol that child, can anyone believe it that she is 40 years old, she looks like a 4 year old child, what is different just remove 0 from 40. I miss her a lot, after many years later I was   able to see my lovely daughter, I wish if I could see her mother too, I miss her too, I wonder what is she doing now. Goodnight my sweet daughter we will going to meet soon.

~~~~~~~
Mayu opens her lazy eyes,she felt little pain in her head, she sits up while holding her head, she throws her arm up in the air and yaw, her eyes wide In shock as she saw everything is broken like some robbery had happened, but not it was not robbery that happened, something like this happens when un normal human play inside the house, the home is not the place for playing specially for vampires and werewolves. Yuki and Jurina also a wake up and start staring at each other and then they moved trier gaze to the culprit, she slowly opens her eyes and sit up like little children who just wake up from sweet dreams, she looked left and right. And then she looked at three people who staring at her like angry wolf, she quickly makes an innocent face like she hasn't done anything wrong.

"Why all of you staring at me like this, believe me it was not my mistake." she pointed at Jurina. "At that time if Jurina have accepted my request and sing a song for me, all this hasn't happened, Jurina is the real the culprit." She said in child voice.

Yuki takes a long breath and drink her anger."All of you first clean yourself and then clean all the house, NOW!!"

All of them melted from Yuki anger and run to the bathroom same time, they looked at each other,  who will be going to the bathroom first.
"How about we decide with janken." Mayu said as she saw smoke coming out of Yuki ears.

"Well, forget about  that you go first."Jurina replied she didn't want to start fights anymore.

"I will enter first."For Rena she didn't care about fights even after upsideing down all the house she wants more.

"OK, you go first. " Mayu and Jurina said.

***********
"Yahoo what a nice day.I had seen a very beautiful dream." Acchan smiling the sunflowers.

"Oh, really what you see."

"That we are living in one house with small families." Acchan pick up a flower and give to the Minami.

"Don't take life of the beautiful flowers let them alive, because they didn't have a long life like us, their life is too short."

Acchan smiles "You still haven't changed Takamina."

"And I will never going to change."

•••••••••••
" Ah, I'm tired why the heck we have to clean all tons house." Rena complained.

"Rena do you know how much expansive is every minute of our life is, so why we waste our time while sleeping and sitting on a sofa without doing anything, that's why we have to work hard, enjoy the life work hard." Yuki replied as she wiped the sweats from Rena face with a handkerchief.

"The one who upside down the whole house is Rena then why did we have to clean the home too??" Mayu asked as she cleans broken glasses.

"Because you are living in this house."

"OMG,  this chair's leg is broken, and this table glass is broken, and this cupboard is broken too, what should we do with them??" Jurina asked while taking all the broken things.

"Heel them!!"

"Eh, Why didn't we throw them and but the new one??"
Yuki glared at Jurina"If you have money, then buy a new one for me."

Rena looked at Jurina and Yuki and starts giggling, then slowly she starts stepping to the window as she reaches to the window she quickly jump and fly away.

"She runs away." Mayu pointed at the window.
"Rena come back here you troublesome obaachan." Jurina yelled.

"Leave her, in the end she will going to come back here, I will make sure to give her scary punishment."Yuki said and continue cleaning the house.

~~~~~~to be continue ~~~~~~~
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: crosteks on March 06, 2015, 02:17:48 PM
heheh! rena-chan the spoiled brat  :mon huh2: :mon sweat:
poor sae-chan hanging upside down by acchan again :mon hanky: :mon hanky:
Yuki will giving Scary punisment for rena later  :mon evil: :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: gek geki on March 06, 2015, 02:54:08 PM
finally i could open this forum again, kind of busy with work

wow this is great now!! lol (feel like i'm being spoiled because when i opened it i found a lot new chapter kekekeke)
thank you author sama!

i like this yuki, but why mayu and jurina seem weak?? haha

what happen on the next chapter?
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on March 09, 2015, 05:57:38 PM
Replies :

#Crosteks : Thank you  for reading my fic I'm glad that you like it,

Sae upside down by Sayaka not by Acchan.

Here is update hope you like it. ^_^


#geki geki :  Thanks for commenting *bow* you said I post short chapter so decide to post long and fast,

Mayu and Jurina is not weak just Rena is so strong.

Thank you again.



Hello everyone I'm back. *Mon sweat, *

Finally I can finish next part. *nervous *

Thank you for reading my fic and commenting it. *bow*

Here so next chapter hope you like it sorry for late and for mistake and bad grammar


Chapter 6 part 2





After cleaning all the broken house, all of them fall asleep peacefully. But after some hours later suddenly strange voice start coming out from the living room, but all of them were really tired, so none of them can able to wake up and see what's going on, until the night come and Mayu woke up from her sweet dreams, she comes out from the bedroom and as she was about going to the bathroom she stopped as she felt something strange, she looked at the  house, from the shock she can't hold herself and run to the bedroom.

"Yuki,Jurina wakes up something bad happens Wake up." She shakes them hardly.

"Um, what is it Mayu??"

Mayu can't help but throw cold water at them, to wake them.

"Kyaaaaaaa, what they heck."Jurina and Yuki yelled.

"Come out and see what had been happening while we are sleeping!!" Mayu force them and take them out from the bedroom.

As they come out of the room  they forgot to blink their eyes from shock.

"From where these things had come??" Yuki asked.

••••••••••
"Sayaka San, someone send you the letter."
The servant gives white paper to her.
Sayake takes the paper from servant hand and starts reading it.

Good morning Sayaka San.

I'm Rena your niece,*laugh * Eto actually I came at your castle in the morning and first I beat yours  two bodyguards sorry for that,*giggle * and then I took a big TV from the living room and fridge,and dining table and some plates and glasses, and also cupboard.

I know that you are angry at me, but I did this because I didn't want to see black upset and sad, she has worked hard to save money and buy all these things, but because of my childish, I broke them so I didn't have money or anything Elsa so that's why I stole them from your castle please don't hate me,  day I will make sure to return them to you.

I'm sorry and I love you, take care.

Rena.
---------
'Strange she didn't want to see Black upset and she stole from castle*sigh*, This is what we called a love, no matter what it take you,you do anything just to see your crush happy. Good luck if stealing the castle makes you happy then I'm happy, after all, this is your father's house, I wish if I could meet you. ' Sayake smiles and ordered her servant to free Sae who have been upside down from two days.

*********
"Oii Rena, from where the hell did you bring all these things??" Yuki asked angrily to Rena who calmly munching melon pan.

"I buy them." Rena lied.

"And from where you bring the money??"

"I soled my diamond ring." Munching melon pan.

Rena sighs in relief as she saw that Yuki buy her lie, she didn't want to tell her the truth that she stole them, because she knew Yuki will going to make her a sandwich and give to the sharks .

"You didn't have to buy all these."

"Why not I broke them, and I should repay them back." She smiles.

"Waoo the TV is so big." Mayu run toward the TV and  switch it on."Amazing!!"

"And the sofa is so warm it have fur too."Jurina starts jumping on the sofa like a little child.

"Are you happy Black??" giggle.

"Huh, ah, yes Arigatou." Yuki blushed and went to the bathroom to take a shower.

~~~~~Rena pov~~~~~~

So what thing that I haven't done yet, I had meet Black and want to date with her and have very tasty dinner, and even went to the shopping  and have fought with Mayu. I also make her angry and turn all the house upside down, and then buy new things for her even they are stolen, it's doesn't matter at least I bring them to her. Is there anything still that I have to do.

*Thinking *Thinking *Thinking *

Look like no.

Wait, I haven't had my first kiss yet!! I want to have my first kiss.

( Author : "No you also had your first kiss too."

"Rena :" O.o When?? I don't remember!!"

Author : " The day you meet Black and she bring you in her house you kissed her at that night."

"Rena: " I don't remember!! "

Author : " it's not my problem  you had your first kiss."

Rena : " I want to kiss her again, I don't remember my first kiss is not a good thing, I should remember my first kiss, I will going to kiss her again. "

Author :" How?? "

Rena : " I don't know let me think. Now go do your work and let me  do mine."

Author : " OK,   ._. ")

How should I kiss Black? Well, I can't go and capture her lips like this, if I did she will going to make my sandwich and give it to the sharks. So I have to kiss her without getting beaten or eaten from her.

Think stupid brain think.

*Thinking *Thinking *Thinking *

(Author : I got an idea ^_^."

Rena: " Really ⊙_⊙ ?? And what is that idea?? "

Author :" Just do as I told you."

Rena : OK, but dare you tell me something pervert!! *glare *"

Author : " Relax I'm not that kind of person. "

Rena : " OK, let's start.")

Rena opened the room door slowly and looked at the living room. ' OK, let's start, how to kiss your crush without getting beaten or eaten??'

STEP  ONE

Enter into the living room and sit between in your friend and crush, and put some romantic movie or drama on TV, watch it silently don't make any sound wait until the kiss sense come, as they kiss in the TV quickly make an innocent face.

STEP TWO

Look on your friend's face with an innocent face.

"Hey, Jurina!!  How do you feel when you kiss someone on the lips ??"

"Eh!! Umm...Etoo, well, I haven't kissed anyone so I don't know how it's feels." blushing.

"Then how about we kiss!!"

"Eh!!" Jurina eyes wide in shock. "Kiss is not something that you can share with anyone,you should kiss that person whom you love." her face become red.

"I see!!"

STEP THREE

Good you had hit at the point, now wait your crush to enter the empty room.

After a few minutes later, Yuki gets up and enter to the kitchen.

Yes ,Now act like  you are hungry.

"Eh,  where is my melon pan? Jurina did you see my melon pan??"

"No, I hadn't."

Now behave like you are finding your melon pan. Rena gets up from the sofa and start looking for it, first she looks at the bedroom, living room and balcony, then she enter into the kitchen.

STEP FOUR

Rena enter to the kitchen Yuki was drinking water, she slowly walks toward her and pour some water in the glass.

"Na, Black, can I kiss you?? "

Yuki spit her water and looked at Rena with shock.

"Jurina said that you can share your kiss with whom you love and I love you." Don't forget to make innocent face and eyes like a cat.

"Eh!! But I have girlfriend."

" I don't care I want to kiss, I want to know how it feels." make teary eyes.

"But  you can't kiss everyone that you love."

"Please I want to kiss, or else I will upside down all the houses."Rena put her hands on Yuki shoulder and start pushing her backward until she reaches the wall and she pined Yuki to the wall "please let me kiss you!! " Rena whispered in Yuki ears and make herself that she didn't know how to kiss,she will just going to give a quick kiss on the lips.

Slowly Yuki closed her eyes, Rena get closer to her face and capture her lips gently, they are soft and sweet, first she just touched her lips then Slowly start moving her lips then she bit Yuki's upper lips and starts kissing her Passionately  and let her enjoy the feeling then  she starts pushing her tongue to enter Yuki's mouth, as Rena tongue entered in Yuki's mouth her kiss trun into rough, she didn't wanted to waste her time because she didn't have much time they have to break their kiss as they want some air, that's why she trun her kiss into rough, and start  tasting Yuki's Rena felt Yuki lips moving with her, that's mean you successed In Your plan.
~~~~~~Yuki pov~~~~~~

As Jurina and I was sitting and watching some news suddenly Rena come and sit between us and she put some romantic drama, from when she starts like romantic things?? Anyway, we are sitting and watching romantic drama, it's so touching movie that make me cry suddenly the kiss scenes come and the boy kissed her,What a sweet moment.

"Hey, Jurina!!  How do you feel when you kiss someone on the lips ??" Rena asked to jurina how does kiss feel.

"Eh!! Um...Etoo, well, I haven't kissed anyone so I don't know how it's feel." Jurina replied

"Then how about we kiss!!"

WHAT!!! NOO, JURINA YOU CAN'T KISS HER. I looked  at Jurina she was blushing.

"Eh!!" Jurina eyes wide in shock. "Kiss is not something that you can share with anyone,you should kiss that person whom you love."

"I see!!"

Thank god she rejects her, I sighed in relief . Wait, why I'm feeling like this, I want her to forget me so it doesn't matter if she kiss jurina why I'm feeling jealous.

I should drink some water and relax my brain, I get up from the sofa and went to the kitchen and pour water in the glass, suddenly the view when Rena kissed me in the first night when we bring her home come to my mind, my face becomes red  I touched my lips I still feel her lip's, oh my god what happened to me. As I was thinking about her Rena entered into the kitchen my heart starts beating fast, she comes close to me, I hold the glass of water and start drinking the water.

"Na, Black, can I kiss you?? "

I split the water and looked at her with shock.

"Jurina said that you can share your kiss with whom you love and I love you."
She makes an innocent face and looked at me with cat eyes, my heart melted

"Eh!! But I have a girlfriend." I replied, hoping she will understand.

" I don't care I want to kiss, I want to know how it feels."

She was about to cry, no please don't cry I know how you feel, but this is wrong I don't want to lose you.

"But  you can't kiss everyone that you love."

"Please I want to kiss, or else I will upside down all the house."

She put her hand on my shoulder and pushes me backward and pin me at the wall. "Please let me kiss you!! " She whispered in my ear.

OK, relax, she didn't have kissed anyone so she didn't know how to kiss, she will just going to give me quick kiss on the lips like friends do. It's just friends kiss, nothing more. I closed my eyes and let her do what she wants, suddenly I felt something soft on my lips, she kissed me, slowly she starts moving her lips, Eh,  didn't she going to give me a quick kiss? She bit my upper lip, her kiss turned into Passionately, somehow I start enjoying it, then she starts pushing her tongue in my mouth, what should I do give her permission or no. I didn't realize and give her permission, as her tongue enter in my mouth, her kiss turn n into rough, I have no time to think about anything, all I want is her, I want to taste her, I replied her kiss and start enjoying her lips. I want her more even though I know it's wrong, but I can't stop myself. In the end, we broke the kiss because of air leak, she looked at me then went outside.

What happened now, I will never going to forget it, never, it's become one of my precious memories.

Rena I wish I could let you know that how much I love, but I can't, we can't be together.

~~~~normal pov~~~~~~

Mayu comes in the home flying from the window.

"Hola, aren't you guys bored from TV? There are fireworks in the amuseument  Park."

" Fireworks!!I want to goII want to see firework." Rena start jumping like a little child.

'Seriously, can anybody believe it that she is the same person who were kissing me a few minutes before??'Yuki thought "Let's go."

"yessssss."

Mayu hold Yuki as bride style and then three of them fly in the amuseument Park.

~~~~~~~

Acchan hold Takamina hand and start flying with her to the amuseument Park ." That demon find the child before us, let's hurry up before he kills her."

"What how can he find her that fast??"

"I don't know!!"

~~~~~~
Mayu, Jurina, Yuki and Rena come to the Amuseument Park but there was but not any firework.

"What is this where is fireworks?? " Asked Rena glaring at Mayu.

"Eh, I don't know look like it's finished,"

"Do you play pranks with us?? "

"No Rena I swear there was a firework."

"Then where is it??"

Suddenly they heard clapping sound, all of them turn their head back.

"OH, let's see what we have here."

"Jun Chan!! " Everyone shocked, Black looked at Rena with a worried face, Rena replied her with a smile.

"It's been a long time,  don't you miss me my sweet daughter??" Jun said as he starts walking towards them.
accept Rena all of them were afraid, none of them able to fight with Jun.

"What you want?? " Asked Mayu.

"I want to take my daughter with me to the  home." replied Jun

"Your daughter!! " Mayu and Jurina looked at each other.

"MOVE AWAY!! " Acchan came by flying when she came nearby Rena she remove her sword from the sheath and poke into her stomach

Takamina who was just trying to fight with Jun shocked, she didn't believe what did she saw now, did Acchan now stabbed Rena, she looked at Jun and give him strong flying kick, it was not strong enough for him but it can make him fall on the ground.

Takamina run toward Rena and Acchan, the blood were falling from Rena mouth and she falls on the ground.

"RENA." Yuki yelled and  quickly hold Rena In her hand. "Rena!!opens your eyes, please don't leave me like this RENA!! " The tear start falling from Yuki's eyes.

"Yu-ki sa-ma!! "Rena coughed.

( Flash 100 years back)

Rena didn't want to wake up sleeping princess, so she holds her as bride style and take her out from the castle.The sleeping princess wake up from loud sound that were coming.
"Rena, where are you taking me?? "

" The Assistance attack of the castle we need to get out of here soon as possible." Rena replied and start walking fast to the safe place.

"What about my father? Where is he?? " Asked princess.

"Don't worry, he is fine and fighting with enemies."

"What? How can you leave my father alone there, leave me here and go save him!! " Princess starts moving from Rena hands.

"Calm down, Yuki sama I will going to leave you in a safe place first, then I will go back and help him." Rena entered in safe cave and laid Yuki down and looked at her face last time.

"This is the safest place, no one can find you here, I'm going back I will not going to come back without your father." Rena gives a last kiss on princess forehead, as she about to get out from The cave ,Princess held her hand and looked at her with teary eyes.

"Promise me that you will going to come back??" Princess cupped Rena cheeks with her cold and soft hand and kissed her Passionately.
Rena replied the princess kiss back. They broke the kiss, Rena wipes princess tears and run outside,  as she reaches at the castle, she saw all the castle is on fire, she can't go back without princess's father so she enters the burning castle and start finding him, but she can't find him anywhere, the castle start burning from everywhere there is no way to going out, Rena starts sweating and coughing badly, she can't handle it anymore and fall down on the floor,the smiling face of Yuki comes into her mind she smiles, "Yuki sama I love you." She closed her eyes for forever.

(End of flashback)

"Rena please don't leave me again, don't you know how hard it for me to live without you."

"Yu-ki sa-ma I'm so-rry I love you ." Rena wiped Yuki tears with her shaking hands the  smile appears on her face. Rena body starts turning into blue fireflies.

"I love you too. I LOVE YOU TOO RENA SO PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!!REENAA!!!
Rena turn into blue fireflies and she flew in the sky.

 
~~~~~~~~~~~~
(http://tapatalk.imageshack.com/v2/15/03/09/6f0e23f575ddd0c53914727e66c409bc.jpg)
 
Sorry I can't find any good pic for blue fireflies. ╥﹏╥
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: crosteks on March 10, 2015, 08:16:49 AM
hahah! sorry author-san my mistake hehe! that Time i'm thinking acchan on how she gonna handle rena!!
and no i know T^T you kill her why did you do that to her can she comeback to back to life again
or you something else in your mind like what acchan did to her was just show..pwease dont make rena died again..TT^TT
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on March 10, 2015, 02:23:35 PM
What happen to Rena ?
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: gek geki on March 11, 2015, 02:03:56 AM
what?? but rena sama is alive
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Korisu29 on March 13, 2015, 06:44:17 AM
heeehhh ... already chapter 6.2 ...  :mon XD:
good job author-san!!  :mon thumb:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on March 17, 2015, 06:09:10 PM
Hello everyone I'm back  *sweat drop *

I'm back from bottom of hell .

This time it took me 4days to write this what happens to fast writer lol.

Ok I don't have anything to say.

Thank you for reading it and also for comments .

Arigatou *bow*

Here is the update please don't leave my fic alone xd sorry for mistake and bad grammar.






Chapter 7.






Jurina and Mayu sitting beside the river. Their eyes Locked at the waterfall. The butterfly was flying around them.

"It's been Two weeks." Mayu throw a stone in the river.

"I feel sorry for Takamina-San and Yuki-chan,They locked their self in the room." Jurina put her legs in the water.

(Flashback)

"Rena please don't leave me, I love you Rena please don't go." Yuki yelled.

"Acchan what you did!!" Takamina run toward Atsuko and give her flying kick that make Acchan fly in the sky as she was about to hit the ground quickly Sae come and catch Acchan and fly away. Minami glared at Jun, he smirked and also fly away.

Jurina run toward Yuki, she holds her and give signal to Mayu and fly to the vampire castle.

(End of flashback)

"What should we do now??" Mayu staring at the  butterfly who were sitting on the flowers.

"I never thought that Rena is that child." Jurina moving her leg inside the water.

"I told you before that  I have a strange feeling, but you never believed me!! " Still staring at the butterfly.

"Mayu I have never seen any hybrid with blue fireflies!!" Trying to catch little fish.

Mayu quickly stands up."You are right,how can I don't notice about it! There is something wrong, we have to find out about Rena ability!!" Mayu grab Jurina hand and drag her to the library. "Help me to find books that has information about blue firefly hybrid.

"Haik." Jurina and Mayu start finding the book.

~~~~~~Werewolf castle~~~~~~~

Sayaka, Sae, Acchan sitting in the living room.

"Sae can you please stop crying! It's been two hours and you are crying like baby!"

"What I'm to all of you? I'm living in this house from  23 years, but why all of you treat me like strangers?WHY?? All of these years you are lying to me saying that vampires are our enemies, but in the end all of that  just lie. I hate you I hate all of you!!" Sae run outside.

"SAE!! SAE come back here!!" Sayake yelled.

"Leave her let her be alone for some time." Acchan said and hide her face in the pillow.

"What are you going to do about Takamina? Look like she didn't remember all story that your grandfather used to tell you, did she??"

Acchan shake her head" I thought she remembered!!"

~~~~~~vampire castle~~~~~~

Mayu and Jurina turn all the library upside down, but they didn't find any book that can give them information about Rena ability.

"Strange how come no one have write anything about her?? " Jurina looks at the old books.

"Look like there is not any hybrid like her!" finished finding the book. " Let's ask Shasihara-San."

"Do you think she now about it?? "

"I think so,let's go!!"

~~~~~~
Jurina and Mayu entered at Shashihara Rino office 
 "Hello good evening Master." Mayu and Jurina greeted.

"Evening student!!" Shashi greeted them back.

"Master, we come here to ask you about something!!"

"Yes what it is??" drinking the blood

"We want to know about hybrid who have blue fireflies!! "

Shashi chocked the blood and looked at the with shock. "Why you want to know about it??"

"Because Rena-san turn into blue fireflies!!"

"There is not any kind of hybrid like that."Shashi looked at the sky through the window. "I never know that Rena has black blood."

"Black blood!!" Jurina and Mayu shocked.

"In my all life I have never seen any hybrid with blue fireflies, I just saw hybrid with black fireflies." Shashi said .

"Black fireflies!! I never see black fireflies."

"Before 200 hundred years ago the son of my uncle was hybrid and he has black fireflies, he was a monster he took hundreds of innocent lives and destroy many villages. He was to strong no one can beat him, but in the end he killed by my father. It was a really sad story."Shashi looked at Mayu and Jurina. "Rena has blue fireflies, do you know what that means??" Both of them shake their heads.
"Rena is an innocent child who have very sweet heart she never hurts anyone or ever thought about it, she is still like a child who just come out of her mother's belly even though she will going to be 40 after one month later, but she is still innocent. She saved herself very well, that's why she have blue fireflies,she is an angel."
Shashi gets up from the chair and walk toward the window. "She is the most powerful person whose liver if you eat, you can control all the world with your one hand."

Mayu and Jurina eyes wide with shock, it feels like they are dreaming.

"But she is died. " Jurina said.
~~~~~~~~~
Shashi  stopped walking as she reaches in the holy place she start climbing at one of the mountains, as she reaches at the large cave she stopped and looked at the person who were sitting at the stone and staring her back.

"It's been a long time,I never thought that we will going to meet again." Shashi smiles and walk toward her.

"I also never thought it Shashi-San." That person smiles" So what make a master of vampire meet someone like me??"

"Who said I come here to meet you? I'm here to meet your daughter." Shashi sits beside her.

"My daughter!! I don't have any daughter!!"

"Come on Yuko don't lie, I want to meet her, I know she is here."

Yuko sighed " follow me!!" Saying this Yuko stand up and walk to the cave. They enter into the cave, the candle is shining everywhere inside the cave, it was silent and warm place. They entered in one room that was  Inside the cave. A beautiful girl lying in the bed. Shashi gets close to her and put her hand on the girl's cheek, then she hold her hand it was warm.

"When will she going  to wake up??" Shashi looked at Yuko.

"I don't know!!"

(Flashback)

"But she is died." Jurina said.

"She is not, she is alive, she can't die that easily, even if you cut her throat. She will going to come back in the world."

"Eh, she is alive!!" Mayu shocked."Then how come Takamina-san doesn't know about it??"

"Maybe she forgot it." Shashi looked at Mayu. "Na, Mayu Rena have a weakness and her weakness is love. Not only her, but every hybrid like her have same weakness, if the person they love die, they also die with a heart attack. You know what that means if something happens to black she will going to die and if she died the world can't be safe anymore."

"So what should I do??" asked Mayu.

"She has to forget about her that's all, you can go know I have something to do."

Mayu and Jurina bowed and went outside.

Shashi sits in her chair and take sips of blood.
"If you don't mind, can you stop hiding like this and come out Yuki-San!! " Shashi put the cup on the table.

Yuki, who was hiding behind the door and hearing their talk enter in the office and looked at Shashi.
"Is there any other way to break the curse??"

(Flashback at lady's house)

Yuki started Reading the old book that old lady gives her. She began to remember her past. As she reached at the last page, there was writing. " They two can never be together. "

Yuki shocked and looked at lady, " What does this mean, why we can't be together??"

"Because you two have been cursed by Mayu mother." The lady replied.

"What!!  Cursed how and Why?? " Yuki becomes angry.

"Mayu used to be your best friend in the past, she loves you so much, but you don't know it and she finds out that you love Rena, she becomes so angry and crazy that she locked herself in the room, after many days later when her mother opened the her room door she found her dead. Mayu killed herself with hunger, from 4 days she didn't eat anything. After that her mother becomes angry and she asked to witch to curse two if you. You two can never be together and if you try to be together one of you will going to die."

( End of flashback)

"No, there is not any other way." Shashi replied "I know that you love her, but there is not any way I'm sorry Yuki."

The tears start falling from her eyes, she runs back to the castle.

~~~~~~~~
Jurina and Mayu went to Takamina room to tell her that Rena is alive.

Suddenly Yuki comes from the behind and glared at Mayu.

"Y-Yuki what happened??"Mayu can see anger in her eyes.

"What was my mistake?? "Yuki asked

"What you mean??"

"WHAT WAS MY MISTAKE??"The tears are falling on her cheeks. "What I did to you?had I ever hurt you? Did I ever make you cry?  I cared about you and did everything that can make you happy. And you take away from me,my  most precious thing just because I can't love you and loved her. How am I supposed to know that you loved me?  How can I know when you never tell me. You always behaved in front of me like you don't care, you never showed your love to me, you always hurt me. I used to love you, more than anything, but one day I find out that you have boyfriend and my heart broke Into many pieces and then I meet Rena and I fall in love with her,I heard you died you killed yourself I wanted to know the reason but I don't find any. What was my mistake Mayu??" Yuki falls in the ground and began to cry hard. Mayu tried to hug her, but she refused.

Takamina come from outside and looked at crying Yuki, she holds her and hug her.


"I love her I want to be with her I want to live with her forever." Yuki said while sobbing.

Mayu and Jurina just stand without doing anything they don't know what should they do. Mayu new because of her Yuki had suffered so much, Mayu was so stubborn child at that time, she never knew that Yuki loved her.
Takamkina take Yuki to her room.

~~~~~~~~

"YUKI-SAMA!! " Rena opened her eyes and get up from the bed, she looked around there was a candle shining everywhere. 'Where I'm??' she thought.
She stand up and start walking.

"You wake up to?? " Rena looked at the owner of the voice. "Yuko-san!!"

"Hey, how dare you call your father with name?bad girl.!!" Yuko offered a cup of blood to Rena.
Rena giggled and take the cup"You are not my father!!"

"I married your mother than I'm your father, accept it or not I'm your father!!"

"OK, Otou-San ,arigatou for helping me." Rena  bowed ."

"Eh, Otou-san you are crying!!"

Yuko wipes her tears, " I have waited 40 years to hear this word, I'm so HAPPY."

Rena hugs Yuko " Don't worry Otou-san no matter what, will going to happen in the future, you will stay as my father you are the best father in the world."

Yuko hugged back her daughter." Arigatou my sweet daughter ,finally I meet you."

Rena release the hug and looked around "Where are we??"

"This is holy place you are safe here no demons can enter here, so we will going to stay here until you turn 40 and able to wake your power, then we will going back and the real fight will begins."

~~~~~~~
Takamina come out from Yuki room and close the door.

"How is she??" Mayu asked.

"She fall asleep." Minami patted Mayu shoulder." Everything will going to be fine."

"Takamina-San where were you??" Jurina said.

"Two of you get ready yourself, we will going on a mission. "Saying this Minami went to her room.

Jurina and Mayu looked at each other and walked to their room.

~~~~~~~
Sae come running and start knocking at Acchan door, Acchan open the door and looked at shocked Sae no word come out from her mouth, she just standing front of her room while pointing outside.

Acchan understand what she means, she walked at the window and looked outside, she saw Takamina standing outside with her strongest fighters.

"Are they come here to fighting with us?? " Sayake asked.

"Maybe let's go down and see what she want!! "
Saying this Acchan went downstairs and open the main door and come outside.

"Oi, Acchan bring your fighters and get ready, we have some work to do." Takamina said.

Jurina and Mayu standing behind her with shock. 'What will going to happen, are we going to fight with them.' Jurina though.
~~~~~~~~

Shall I continue??


Seriously I don't know if I make it wmatsui or yukirena how about if you guys vote. More then three votes will going to win.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: fath107 on March 18, 2015, 01:01:43 AM
MaYuki and WMatsui please  :cry:

It's so sad to hear that mayu killed herself because of yuki :(

But... ah i just want mayuki wmatsui :(

Update soon

Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on March 18, 2015, 08:11:23 AM
i want this one as mayuki and wmatsui :lol:

and hurry update it, i'm really curious about what will happen
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: kuro_black29 on March 18, 2015, 11:52:16 AM
No matter what their past are..
please make it mayuki and wmatsui.
for someone happiness..it is necessary to be hurt in the end
Yuki..whatever mayu mother do..please forget it even it hurt

Thanks for update author san~
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on March 18, 2015, 03:34:21 PM
Hey! Nice to meet you, i'm a silent reader.
but i use to post a reply a long time ago, and because my post is already a hundred at that time,
i decided to become a silent reader again.
But this fic make wanna say someting, so here i am.

I just wanna say that, PLEASE!!!! Maake it YukiRena, because:
1. There's already so many fic 'bout WMatsui or MaYuki.
2. Eventhough WMatsui is my OTP, i also like every pairing that have Rena in it.
3. YukiRena is my second OTP.
4. I really like the plot where Yuki n Rena can't be together 'cause of curse,
    n if they actually overcome it n be together i think it'll be beautiful.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Mayukishipper on March 19, 2015, 03:15:27 PM
Author-san...
This is makes got heart attack
I really sad when yuki told mayu that she loves her but mayu have a boyfriend
Who is mayu's ex boyfriend ?
Thanks for update author san^^
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: kahem on March 20, 2015, 12:50:38 AM
Definitively I want mayuki and WMatsui!
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Ando on March 21, 2015, 01:02:48 PM
aaa..renayuki..maybe...but..huhuhu..i dunno~ :3

(≧∇≦)。
I love this~ keep it up~ XD


Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: gek geki on March 21, 2015, 03:59:03 PM
I dont care as long as is nice
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on March 31, 2015, 01:02:05 PM
Hello~

Yeah  I update two fic in one day Hehehehehe I did goodjop!! don't I??

OK I don't have anything to say even if I have you won't going to read it anyway xd.

Let's go to the point,
Wooow too many wmatsui and mayuki vote.
So that mean this fic will going to be Yukirena and Jurimayu, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.




just joking.



Replies.


@fath107 :  you are sad because  Mayu killed herself because of Yuki, but you aren't sad because of Rena.  ._.




@Blackcold :  yeah I  don't update hurry because I was sick you know it. Xd




@Kuro-black29:  OK I understand and don't worry I will make sure to be happy ending. ^_^

And yes Yuki should forgive Mayu and her mother.



@Rena-chan Daisuki : hi nice to meet you silent reader.

I know how you feel but like I said before more than three vote will going to win, I also wanted it to end as Yukirena, but look like it can't.

I'm really sorry but you can read my other yukirena fic *bow*




@Mayukishipper :  Reader-san  you only got heart attack because of Yuki and Mayu . But what about Rena??

Well I don't know who was Mayu Ex-boyfriend, but we'll he isn't important anyway hehehehe.


@Kahem: OK roger.



@Ando : well if you don't know continues reading it xd hehehehe good luck.


@ geki geki : OK you too continue reading it xd..



Well very strange no matter how much I hurt Rena nobody become sad. Look like i have to hurt her mooooreeee~


Sorry for late update so many things happened in two weeks please forgive me.
Don't leave the fic stay with us and blah blah blah blah.






Chapter 8






"Oi, Acchan Bring all of your strongest fighters, we  have something to do!!" Takamina said.

"Minami I know you are angry...!!"

"Don't you hear me!! I said get ready, we have something to do!! Don't force me to drag all of you!!" Takamina cut her words with a death glare.

Mayu and  Jurina were shivering beside her."Are we going to be ok??"

"Don't worry Jurina, everything will going to be alright." Mayu calmed her.

A few minutes later all of them come out with shock on their face.
"Let's go. " Takamina said and start walking.
All of them looked each other face and followed Takamina.

•••••••
Rena quietly stares at Yuko who were playing with her ring.

"Do you miss her?"
Yuko looked at Rena and give her a weak smile.

"How you married her, even though she doesn't love you??"
Yuko looked at the sky and close her eyes as she remembering the past. Seeing this Rena held Yuko hand and start looking the memory with her.

(Flashback)

Yuko kneeled down "Kojima-San, for the sake of the Jun and your child please marry."

Kojima looked at Yuko then she moved her gaze at her stomach. "Why are you doing this,you know they will going to give you punishment?? "

"I know, but at least Jun, and your child can be saved, they will going to think that I'm the child's father and they going to give punishment to me."

The tears start falling from Kojima eyes. "Do you know Yuko that you are stupid, you destroy all your life at someone who doesn't love you even little."

"It's ok, Kojima-san because I love you and that's enough."

(End of flashback)

"Why are you crying??" Yuko wipe the tears and hug Rena."Don't cry, it was not even your fault!!"

"Love is so hard and hurt." Rena sobbed.

"Who said that, love is not hard or hurt, just sometimes it test us, that's how much stronger we are and when we able to succeed the exam, we live happily with the person we love." Yuko patted Rena back.

"Then what about me and Yuki why  two of us can't be together??" Rena looked at Yuko eyes.Yuko told Rene about her and Yuki curse.

"It's because sometimes we fall in love with the person we should not. Sometimes we have to leave our most precious thing. Who knows, maybe in the future god have a good plan for us." Rena nodded and hug Yuko tighter.

"That means I have to forget her and move on."

"I know it's hard, but believe me there isn't any other way."

"By the way Otou-San, did you break the spell and free me from the castle."Rena asked

"Hmm,ah, yes I did."Yuko giggle.

"Oh, you are amazing Otou-San, how many year take you  knowing the magic spell."

"Eh,etoo....20years!!"
Rena looked at Yuko with 'Are you serious' look and start laughing hardly.
"You are amazing Otou-San." Rena clap her hand.

"Why are you laughing at me, do you think it's easy to break the spell, it's not a computer program that, can we hack in one day, it's magic spell, M.A.G.I.C  S.P.E.L.L!!"

Rena continues laughing and Yuko continues glaring."Bad daughter!!" Saying this Yuko jump in the river.

••••••••••

"Ah what a heart broken father and daughter relationship is!! "

"Even though they have suffered so much pain, they are able to smile again."

"What will going to happen with them??"

"Who knows!!"

"Yeah only god and author know. I hope they find happiness in their life."

•••••••••
"Eto, Takamina where are we going??" Acchan asked.

"To the hell!!" Takamina replied in a cold tone.

"Then why are you taking us." Sae asked.

"Because it's lonely going there Alone."Takamina kick the stone that comes in her way.

"But you have Mayu and Jurina!!" Sayaka said.

"I'm bored with them, I need someone new to play with them." Takamina pick the beautiful flower and put it in her hair.

"You look cute." Acchan giggle.

"I miss Rena."Jurina kick the stone.

"I hope Yukirin will be fine." Mayu looked up at the sky.

"I'm hungry!! Is there any rabbits?"

"They are sleeping its night you know." Sayaka hit Sae shoulder.

"Sayaka I love you." Sae blushing.

"Eh, why all of a sudden!!"

"Because  I don't know what will going to happen to us, so before it's got too late, I should say it to you that I love you and always going to do."Sae start crying.

"Sae, I love you too!!" Sayaka hug Sae and kiss her lips.

"What happen with two of them."Takamina shocked.

"It's because you are taking us without saying anything, of course they will be scared what if something bad happened to them and they can't meet again!!" Acchan said

"OMG, suddenly romantic drama started." Jurina giggle.

"Why they are hugging like  someone going to separate them??" Mayu drink blood from the bottle.

"I want to kiss too~."Jurina said

"I feel sorry for them." Acchan shake her head.

••••••••••••••••••
As Yuko finished swimming she comes out and looked at Rena, she was sitting on the stone while closing her eyes. Yuko sits near to her.

"Why didn't she love me??" Rena asked without opening her eyes.

"Who said that??"

"She comes to me when I was with Yuki,she told me that she comes to take me with her to the home, but when she touched my hand I saw her memory, she doesn't come to me because she miss me, she comes to me because her husband Jun asked her to bring me." Rena opened her eyes and stared at Yuko. "Am I unwanted child??"

The tears fall from Yuko eyes. "WHO SAID THAT, YOU AREN'T UNWANTED CHILD, YOU ARE MY DAUGHTER AND I'M YOUR FATHER."

"Then why she didn't love me? Why she don't want to meet me? Why she didn't want to hug me and tell that how much she miss me? Why she only comes when Jun asked her to bring me? Did her love is more important than her daughter?? "Rena yelled.

"RENA!!"

Yuko and Rena looked back at the voice's owner. "Kojima!!What are you doing here??"

"That's what I wanted to ask, what are you doing with my daughter??" Kojima asked

"What are you doing here?? " Rena asked.

" I come to take you!!" Kojima replied. " Rena let's go, huh, let's back to our home!!"

"You saying this because you want to, or because your husband." Rena asked with teary eyes.

"What are you saying, of course two of us want to you come back!!"

"I'm not coming with you!! "

"What!! Rena opens your eyes, don't fall on their trap that easily, they are using you."

"Rena isn't going anywhere, she is my daughter and I'm not going to let you take her away from me." Yuko glared.

"How dare you say something like this, she is my daughter not yours, I will not going out from here until I take her with me."

"If this what you want then let's fight."Yuko starts turning into a wolf.

"How dare all of you fighting in the holy place!!" an old man comes and glared at them.

"I want my child back, and this devil trying to take away my child!!" Kojima said.

"Otou-San isn't devil you are the devil."Rena yelled.

"Shut up two of you!!" old man yelled and pointed at Kojima." And you get out of here."

"I'm not going anywhere without taking my child away." Kojima yelled.

"I said get out of here, holy place doesn't place where someone devil and sinners can come."

"What! I'm not a devil or sinner!!"

"Yes you are,you are sinner Kojima, you married with Yuko but live with her brother Jun, this is the biggest sin you did in your life, you betrayed your husband." The old man said.

••••••••••••••••
"OK, everyone, we are here get ready!!"Takamina said.

"Where is this place!! " Sae start looking around.

"Why we are here?" Acchan asked.

"Woow the place is so beautiful can we go inside??" Jurina eyes wide with shock.

"So what we are going to do."Mayu asked

"Isn't this is holy place??" Sayaka asked.

"Holy place, why we are here in the first place??" Sae shocked.

"We are here to kidnap someone!!" Takamina said.

"Kidnap!!!"Sae shocked.

"Why??" Jurina asked.

"When??" Mayu take out her sword.

"Who??" Sayaka raised eye brow.

"Don't say....!!" Acchan staring at Takamina.

As they were questioning someone come out of the door and start walking her way.

"Everyone get ready, we have to kidnap that woman without any voice and fight."Takamina stand up.

Mayu take large brown cloth" I will going to throw this at her and all of you jump on her and tie her with the rope."

"Leave this to me, I know how to handle it. " Sayaka said.

"OK, let's go!!" Saying this Acchan fly up and come front of that woman. "Hi, it's been loooooong timee~"

"What you want?? " The woman glared.

"How dare you glare at me after stealing my fiance from me??" Acchan said in an angry tone.
As the woman trying to say something, qukily Mayu throw a brown cloth at her and Sayaka and Jurina jump at her and start tieing her with rope, the woman starts screaming and moving somehow she was so strong two of them can't handle her. Seeing this Acchan also jump on her and hold her tight.

"Damn she is so strong!!" Jurina tight her grip.

"Jurina tie her up."Sayaka yelled.
Jurina take the rope and start tieing  her while Acchan and Sayaka holding her. Suddenly Takamina come and hit the woman hardly and make her faint. Without any problem they tied her and take her to the castle.

~~~~~~~
As Kojima open her eyes, she found herself laying on the bed while her hand and leg were tied with rope. After a few minutes later, Shashihara come inside the room while holding a tray, she put the tray on the table and looked at her.

"You wake up??" Shashi asked.

"Why I'm here? And why you tying me? What's going on?"

"You have turned into devil Kojima and we going to bring you back, it may hurt you so much, but we don't have any other choice."Takamina said.

"What are you talking about! I'm not devil!!" Kojima tried to release herself.

"Calm down Kojima, you have drunk devil blood so you are the devil now." Takamina signaled Shashihara.

"I don't know what are you talking about, but Jun isn't devil!!" Without wasting more time Shashihara take black mark and draw a circle in Kojima stomach. Then she cut her wrist and drop the blood inside the circle.
"NO STOP!! PLEASE STOP, I DON'T WANT IT!!"Kojima start yelling.

Shashihara put her hand in Kojima chest, she close her eyes and start reading some spell. Kojima can't handle the pain and start yelling loudly.

As Shashi finished reading the spell she bring a bird whose eyes are red and have a long neck and legs, his colour is white, Shashi take out the knife, after saying some spell she cut the bird's throat and give his blood to Kojima. "Oh lord please forgive this innocent soul, please forgive her she had done a sin without realizing it, please accept her forgiveness."

"So how is she??" Takamina asked as she saw Shashi coming out from the room.

"I have done my best, we will find out the results when she will wake up, I hope she will be fine." Shashi smile.

"Let us pray for her."Acchan said.

"What will we going to do if Jun comes here in the castle and do something bad?? " Sayake asked.

"Don't worry, we will going to fight with him. After all, there isn't many days left for Rena to wake her power."Acchan said

•••••••••••

Yuki knocks, the door and come inside the room, she looked at Sae and sit beside her.
"Sae I need your help."

"At your service, tell me how can I help you?" Sae said in her genki voice.

"I find out that you can take peoples' memories and make them forget about someone or something, I want you take Rena memory about me." Yuki said.

Sae looked at Yuki painful eyes."Are you sure??"

Yuki nodded "Yes, tomorrow I'm going to meet her, you have to come with me and take her memory about me."

"OK, As you wish."
Yuki bowed her head 90 degrees "Thank you so much. " Saying this she leaves the room.

After some while later Sayaka come and give Sae letter from Rena, Sae open it and start reading.

" Hello Sae-chan it's been a while how are you, I'm fine and hope you are fine too.

Sae-chan can I ask you for favours! I heard that you can take peoples' memories and make them forget everything.
So can you please do me a favour and take Yuki-chan memory about me away. She had suffered so much and we two can't be together so I want her to forget me and start a new life with Mayu, I know this is not a big deal for you so please do it can you? Thank you so much."

Sae looked at Sayaka with teary eyes."What should I do??"

~~~~~~~~~

"Hello did anyone is here??"
Rena comes out of the cave as she heard someone calling voice." Yuki-chan! What are you doing here?? "

Yuki smile and hug Rena." I come here to meet you, got any problem?? "

Rena hugged her back."Not really, I miss you."

Two of them sit beside the river and start talking about random stuff. After a few minutes later two of them sit silent without saying anything.

Rena looked at the beautiful sky."Ah, shooting star." she pointed at the sky.

" Let's make the wish." Yuki said.

' I wish  happiness for Rena. ' Yuki said in her mind.

'Please god make Yuki happy with Mayu and let her forget about me forever." Rena said in her mind.

Two of them looked at each other eyes and smiled, not a fake or forced, but a real smile from their heart. Yuki puts her hand around Rena shoulder and they share passionately kiss.
It was their third and last kiss. As Yuki broke the kiss, she hugged Rena."Rena I love you and I will always going to love you, you will always going to stay in my heart, be always happy, goodbye my Rena." Yuki give last kiss on her forehead and run outside, she can hear Rena yelled from behind and said." I love you too." The tear started falling from her eyes, Yuki runs at full speed and yelled loudly." RENA I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU RENA."

•••••••••

"Here's a letter from Sae." Yuko hand the letter to Rena.

Rena opens it and start reading.

"Hi Rena I got your letter and glad to hear that you are fine, I'm fine too, I hope long  life for you. I accepted your favour and take Yuki's memory away at yesterday night.
Now she doesn't remember you or know you. You are only stranger to her.
Thanks for asking me help you goodbye."
Rena looked at the sky and smile.

•••••••••••

Sae knock the door and enter into the room, she bowed her head."I took Rena memory yesterday night, now she don't remember anything about you, you are only stranger to her." She bowed her head again and went outside.

"Thank you so much." Yuki said in a weak voice.


~~~~~~~~~~~~

*cry * so sad yukirena 〒_〒


Yeah only two more chapters still and this fic will going to end HAHAHAHAHAHA.


good luck everyone.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: kuro_black29 on March 31, 2015, 01:51:40 PM
Good job author san~
That a pretty exciting update~
Lol..dont hurt rena..please~..jurina will be sad~
So did sae really take their memory??..really??
dont see anything change??? Only to know it in next chapta..well~

only 2 more...??..waitin for it
Thanks for the update~
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on March 31, 2015, 02:41:54 PM
don't hurt rena too much~
are you alright now ? have you take your medicine ?

what a sad love story :fainted:

it's the best for them right ?
ahhh, i'm starting to cry now

looking forward for the ending :on GJ:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 31, 2015, 04:33:19 PM
Wait... so, Sae tricked Rena and Yuki? Made them both think neither of them remember each other... :shocked

WOW this is confusing... it'll be a big shocker when they see each other and realize they remember... :O

Unless... :huhuh OK, now I'm really confused :? Just sad it's ending... :(

Update soon! :bow:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on April 04, 2015, 06:15:14 PM
OMG.


Wait what only two chapters reminds and this fic will going to finish.
Unbelievable, I can't even believe that yesterday I posted first chapter and know I will going to post last one (((o(*>ω<*)o)))

Time pass so fast.


WHAT!! 

Only two chapters OMG you know what that means??

I'm very bad with action I never writed action before ╥﹏╥

*crying in the corner *

What should I do if my actions are bad!! My readers will going to throw tomatoes and banana on me.
╯﹏╰
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: kuro_black29 on April 04, 2015, 10:35:22 PM
Dont worry author san~
'Pat author san head
Ur reader will read them..
dont worry about it bad or not..
it ur story...ur imiginary.. reader support it~
Not gonna throw anything to author san~
Author san has give their best in writing it..so no worries~
Fight~ooooooooooooh~
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: cisda83 on April 06, 2015, 07:29:20 AM
Poor Yuki and Rena not being able to be together even if they love each other...

They knew to ask for Sae help to remove each other's memories from one another

Hoping for happiness of the others even if it was not with themselves

Very romantic and heartbreaking...

What's going to happen to Haruna?

Would she be cured?

Would Yuko and Haruna get back together?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on April 07, 2015, 05:10:01 PM
Hello everyone  *holding umbrella and wearing rain jacket *

As you can see I'm ready for getting any tomatoes and banana, you can throw at me everything that you have.


 Finally I can write action sense *sweat drop * nervous * teary eyes *


Replies :




@ kuro-black : thank you reader-san . You only don't want me to hurt rena just because of Jurina you really don't care about her.you will know it in thus chapter that did sae take their memory or not.


@blackcold : yes I'm fine now thanks *hugs*

Yeah it's sad story. * throw water * don't faint that early you have to read other chapter too.


@Ruka kikuchi : yeah you are correct he tricked them well I don't know what will happen if they know that they remember.

Don't worry everything will going to end one day.


@wmatsui fabric : yeah you are tight time pass so fast.

I can feel you action is so hard but you did your best right.


@Kuro-black : thank you so much I hope so. I did my best please look forward on my fic *bow*

 
@cisda83: yeah really sad story, they can't able to be together in the end.

We all hope happiness for everyone.
Glad that you like it .
You will find  your answer in this chapter.



Ok everyone thank you so much for reading and commenting and for thanking.

This is the last chapter actually I thought it will going to be two chapters but sadly it's last chapter.

And sorry for mistakes and grammar.




Last chapter.




Sae come out of Yuki's room and sit beside Sayaka who were laying on the grass and looking at the sky.

"Do you know what is the most painful thing is??" Sayaka asked. Sae looked at her.
Without waiting for answer Sayaka said."It's when you forget  your most precious thing ."

"Is that why you told me to don't take their memories away??" Sae asked.

"In this world we only have memories that make us smile or cry, and if we forgot them, we  going to feel loneliness."

Sae lay on grass beside Sayaka and put her hand on Sayaka chest and hug her.

"And do you know what is the most happiest thing is??" Sayaka asked again. "It's when you have someone, who love you and care about  you, smile when you smile and cry when you cry."

"You mean like me??" Sae asked.

"No, I mean like Yuki!!" Sayaka giggle.

••••••••Somewhere else•••••••••

"Na, what is your happiest memory is??"

"It's when I meet you first time." she replied without realizing what she said.

"Eh, really, do you like me??" blushing.

"No, I love you!!" She replied dreaming.

"Eh, w-what did you say??" shocked.

'Wait! What did I say OMG, crush my life, all because of their heart touching words.' She said in her mind.

"Nothing, let's go back we have so many things to do."

"She said she loves me~" Giggling.

••••••••••••••••

Rena is standing in the large cross, the candle were shining around her and also blood dripping, beside her Yuko sitting reading magic spell.

After a few hours later, Rena's eyes start turning Into blue and also her fur start coming out of her body. The blue fireflies were flying around her.

'I'm bored!!' Rena said in her mind.

••••••••••••••••

"Jurina, hey Jurina wake up!!"

Jurina opened her eyes and looked around, but there was nobody.
"Hey Jurina,can you hear me??"
Jurina shocked and looked around."Rena-chan where are you??"

"In your mind!!"

"Eh, in my mind!!"

"Yes, we are connected through our minds."

"I see, what are you doing ??"

"Waking up my power.sing me a song!!"

"Eh,I can't sing the song, I never sang before."

"Liar!!"

"I'm not lieing!!"

"......"

"Hello Rena-chan are you here??"

"....." No respond come, so Jurina get up from the bed and went outside, she sits beside the river and put her legs in it.

"Jurina are you happy now, after killing them??"

"What!! What are you talking about Rena-chan??"

"Your parents, you killed them don't you??"

"What are you talking about??"

"They never treated you as their daughter, they always beat you and Leave you alone in the dark room, no one cared about you when you are sick, no one cared about you if you are hungry, you wanted to live like other children, you wanted to have someone who loves you, you want to enjoy like other kids, but you can't, you hated yourself, so that's why you asked Mayu to trun you Into vampires, and you killed your parents."

Jurina shivered."H-How you know all this??"

"Remember when I was crying in Yuki's house and you hugged at that time you were thinking about your parents and when you touched me I saw your memory."

"......"Jurina didn't say anything and sit silent.

"I'm also going to do the same thing, I'm going to kill my father with my own hands, I wonder if I can able to do it, I'm afraid I don't want to kill him but I have no other choice."

After a few minutes later Rena starts singing the song.

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for."

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."

"You roam the streets, end to end,
You laugh, you cry,"

"You urge every passerby,
Hiding the hurt in your smile,

"That you belong to all the world
Yet no one is yours to hold."

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for."

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."
Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for"

"How did you know this song??" Jurina shocked.

"I hear you singing it, every day on the bridge. Jurina no matter what happen tomorrow never give up, believe in yourself OK, I'm going  now, take care."

As Rena voice disappeared suddenly   scream come of Inside the room, Jurina run toward the room, as she entered inside she saw a dark aura coming from Kojima's body, her eyes are red and her nails are getting long and sharp, she starts screaming in pain.

Shashihara and Takamina come running they asked Jurina to wait outside, as the door closed, she can hear screaming voice after a few minutes later, everything become silent.
The door open Takamina and Shashihara come out.

"What happened??" Jurina asked.

"Look like she drunk large amount of blood so we need more power to bring her back." Shashi said.

"So what should we have to do??" Jurina asked.

"Follow me!!" Shashi said

They bring long chain and tied Kojima with it on the wall. Shashi makes a cross on the ground and put Kojima inside it, Takamina bring the blood tab.
They shinned candle In the room.

"OK, everything Is ready now let us go outside and let Shashi do her work." Jurina nodded and went outside.

As they went out, Shashi hold the holy blade in her hand and she put it on the fire, she takes the glass and pour blood in it from the tap and throw it on Kojima, she took the holy blade from the fire and put it in her chest, Kojima starts screaming in pain, after this Shashi start reading magic spell.

"So how it is??" Takamina asked as Shashi comes out.

"Her evil was so strong, but I can able to free her, now she is back." Shashi said. "I'm so tired going to take rest see you guys tomorrow." Saying this she went to her room.

~~~~~~~~~~
Jurina eyes opened from strange noises that were coming of the hall, she jumps off the bed and take her sword and went downstairs.
As she comes down she saw everything was broken, she runs outside and looked Sayaka, Takamina and Acchan fighting with Jun.

"Jurina take Kojima and run!!" Acchan said.

"We will going to take care of him, you take Kojima and run!!" Takamina order her.

Mayu comes while holding swords, she throw one sword to Jurina."Let's go!!"

Jurina, Mayu,Yuki and Sae take Kojima and run. Kojima was still fainted so Sae hold her in her back, four of them continue walking with fear.
Jurina shivering with fear, she hoped all of them will be fine. Suddenly strong storm  pass by, they stopped and looked around.

"He finds us." Sae whispered.

"Give me Kojima and I will not going to hurt you." Jun appears from the forest and smirk.

Yuki clinches her fist ."In your dream Jun!!" Saying this she runs in full speed and give him flying kick at his face, Jun dodged her kick easily and sends a punch at Yuki face and make her fall in the ground.

"Tsk, Tsk, it's been 20 years when we fought last time, I remember clearly that I killed you on that day and I will going to kill you today." He smirks and hold his hand in the air."Good bye Yuki." he throws fireball at Yuki.

"YUKIRIN!!!"

Yuki closed her eyes, waiting for death.'What happened!! ' She thought and opened her eyes, she shocked as she saw familiar back.

"Rena!!"
Rena standing  front of Yuki while controlling Jun fire with her blue fire, she put her all power and throw big blue ball at Jun that send him flying at forest, as he hit on the ground he split the blood out from his mouth."It can't be, how come you become that strong in few days??" He stands up and transformed into black Lycan.
As Rena saw this she smirks and also transformed into blue Lycan.

"Beautiful!!" Jurina jaw dropped "I want to kiss her!!" Mayu smacked Jurina head.

Jun growled and start throwing his punches on Rena, even though his punches was fast, but Rena can easily dodge his punch.

In full speed Rena moved and grab him from his back and throw him on the ground hardly she hold his face and smack his head in the ground, he spit blood out, without giving him time to recover, she hold his body in her hand and fly up at the sky and throw him down hardly, then she lands on the ground while jumping on his stomach.

"Is this all you have??" She starts laughing.

Jun growled and jumps on Rena and start punching her face angrily.

"Rena-chan!!!" Jurina tried to beat him, but Mayu hold her." It's her fight."

"Die you bitch DIE!!!" he punched her face.

"J-Jun what are you doing, she is our daughter!!" While they were fighting Kojima wake up and looked at his lover and daughter fighting.
Jun glared and smirk. "I didn't care who is she! All I need is her liver, I want to become powerful and control all this world in my hand."

"BUT SHE IS OUR DAUGHTER!! " Kojima yelled.

Jun hold Rena of her hair and make her stand up, he gives her strong punch that make her spilt blood on his face.

"RENA!!" Kojima screamed.

Rena qukily stand up and with all her power she start throwing fires on him, Jun become angry and start dodge every fire and punch that coming toward him, he move in full speed and give flying kick to Rena, Rena tried to dodge his kick but his movement was so fast that he throw punches and kick at the same time, Rena realized that Jun movement start getting faster than before, she starts losing her energy. When no idea come into her mind suddenly Yukirin words come into her mind.

"Kill the strong person while making him confused."

She smirks and fly up at the sky and make a big fire ball and break it into many pieces,the fire ball starts falling down like rain, everyone run and hide their self in safety place, Jun tried to dodge every fire ball that comes to him, after a few minutes later everything becomes silent, Jun looked around he didn't find Rena anywhere.
Suddenly a small light show up of the sky and it start getting big, as the light comes close to Jun, and as he tried to dodge it, suddenly he feel a sharp hand enter inside his chest and take his heart out,he looked at his chest he saw a blood coming out of the big hole.

"You bastrad, take this as a present from your daughter!!" Saying this Rena grab him from his neck and smack his head in the ground and hit her leg strongly in his stomach.

"Take this you moron!!" Takamina come flying and cut Jun throat with holy Katana.

••••••••••••••••••

"Then did the devil dead??" The little girl asked.

"No, he didn't die, but he leaves from Jun body and Jun died." The old man said.

"That means the devil is alive and he can possess  to  other bodies ??" Another girl asked.

The old man nodded. "The devil is soul so you can't kill the soul, but you can close him in the holy bottle and throw it in the cell or destroy it with holy light."

And Like this Takamina Close his soul in the holy bottle and throw It in the cell where no one can reach that easily.


~~~~~~~~~~~ The end ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Please wait for next season.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Ando on April 07, 2015, 07:26:24 PM
Is this the last chapter??!!
maji??
Hmmm..ok~

*vanish*

ah..thanks for the update~ :3


Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on April 07, 2015, 07:38:08 PM
Is this the last chapter??!!
maji??
Hmmm..ok~

*vanish*

ah..thanks for the update~ :3
No it's not
Title: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Ando on April 07, 2015, 07:40:50 PM
owh..hv new season~ gomen!! *bow*

too sleepy that i skip things~ *yawn*
oyasumi nasai~
thx again~ lol..shock bfr..
*go to bed*
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 07, 2015, 07:46:12 PM
Alright, season 2! :3

Nice Saeyaka moment, btw. :heart:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Mayukishipper on April 08, 2015, 12:49:12 AM
EEEE ??! Rena as blue lycan ?
I want to see!
Erm btw how about the couple author-san ?
And thanks for update it really makes me happy ^o^
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: cisda83 on April 08, 2015, 11:49:03 PM
Yeah... the good win...

They are able to eliminate the threat...

Well More like Rena able to defeat her evil father

Thank you for the wonderful ending

Can't wait to see more of your future stories

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on April 24, 2015, 02:08:26 PM
he story was a bit confusing but let's see if the season will be happy endingending

Update pls
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on April 25, 2015, 12:16:29 PM
Hello there,I'm back, thanks for waiting.

From now season two stars hope you enjoy it.

Thank you for everyone who leaves thanks and who comments and silent readers




Season 2 part 1 : NEW START





"Kyaaaaaaaaa!!! What a scary world ,I almost hit by a car and died, wait! Wait! I forgot that I can't die that easily, and why the hell did I landed in the middle of the road, don't say she trying to kill me or something, I still didn't have my first kiss yet, well,well who care about first kiss anyway.

Ahhhh, it's been 10 years, so many things happened, anyway, nobody cared about it, forget it, I should move and catch my target first,  heheheheheh, yeah my TARGET!! "

••••••°••••••°••••••

"Nee, Mayuyuuuu ~."

"Quit calling my name!!"

"We are sitting here for 5 hours, but we don't find any food, look like we have to drink animal  blood again, seriously, why there is not any bad person whom blood can we drink??"

"Because you guys are in the wrong time and the wrong place. "

"Kyaaaaaaaaa, who the hell are you and from where you appear in front of us?? "

"Heheheheheh, let me introduce myself to all of you, I'm Micchan and I'm heaven bird, well about you I know that you are Mayu and you are Jurina. "

"Heaven bird?? " Jurina moved close to Micchan and sniffed her.

"What did heaven bird want from bloody vampire like us??" Mayu glared at her.

"What i want from you, that I can't tell you, but I want you two listen to me and do what I tell you. "

"What you want us to become your servant?? " Two of them glared.

"Yeah, something like that. " Micchan smirk.

"OVER MY DEAD BODY!!"

"Oh, calm down, believe me, I will not going to give you a hard time, just you two have to listen what I tell you. "

"And what if we refuse it!! " Mayu said

"Then I will give you punishment?"

"What kind of punishment?? " Jurina asked.

"OK, I accept it. " Mayu said in a sad tone.

"Eh, Mayuyu why did you accept it, I don't want to become her servant!! " Jurina pouted.

"Because I don't want to get punished."

"OK, guys no more questions and let's go. " Micchan smile and fly away.

"To where?? " Two of them asked and follow her.

"Let's go!! " Micchan said flying.

"To where??"

"Let's go!! "

"To where?? "

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
'Ahhhh, boring life! Day pass and night come, night goes and the day comes. One goes second come, second go first come, everyone leaves me, I'm alone here in this big home, why I feel like crying??"

"Tsk, Tsk, Tsk,  as always you didn't change, by the way I'm curious how old are you??"

"You scared me!!  Who are you?? "

"I'm heaven bird. "

"Heaven bird!! What the heck did heaven bird doing in the world?? "

"You ask to much, Yuko!! I'm sado." She smile.

"Oh, you look cute can I kiss your cheeks?? " Yuko giggles.

"Dare if you think something perverts I will twist your body Into ashes. " Sado glared at her.

Yuko gulped." Hehehehe I was just joking why you take it seriously?" Yuko laughed awkwardly.

"Good!! "

"So what you want from me?? "Yuko sits on the chair.

"Nothing much, just do as I tell you."

"Eh, why me?? "

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%

"Ehh, why we are in Japan ?? " Jurina shocked.

"Cause this is our country. " Micchan said proudly.

"As I was able  to forget about what happened here, that stupid Gachapin bring me back here." Mayu sighed.

"OK, guys this is our home take rest and sleep well, also if you are hungry, there is blood in fridge see you guys tomorrow, don't forget to wake up after 6 o,clock in the morning we have so many works to do. " Saying this Micchan fly away.

"What's with her, stupid Gachapin?  And wait, what 6 o,clock in the morning?? " Mayu blinked her eyes many times.

"What kind of work does she want to do with that early in the morning?? "

"I hope she doesn't want us to do something stupid. "

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
Micchan swallowed her saliva and enter Into the building without making any sound, as she passed in the room where she can hear strange noises, she put her hand on her chest and calm her heart down, she enters In the room, her eyes meet to scary hybrid who were drinking human blood happily.

"Hi!! " Micchan greeted with a soft voice. The hybrid looked at her, she leaves her food down on the floor and walked close to Micchan, she moved her face close to her and looked her from up to down.

"You look tasty!! " The hybrid laughed crazily, her laugh sending shivers to Micchan body.

'Why the hell this monster is also my target?? ' Micchan said in her mind.

"So what you want?? " She tilted her head.

Micchan laughed awkwardly. " If you don't mind, will you accompany me back to Japan."

"You want me to become your servant!!' She wipes the blood from her mouth and put her hand around Micchan neck.

"Yeah, something..... Something like this, Hehehehehe."

"Too bad  I don't desire to!!" She laughed and bite Micchan neck.

"Don't you miss her?  Don't you want to see her?  Don't you want to know if she is happy or not? If there is anybody beside her when she is sad or cry?" As she heard Micchan word she held back and stared at her eyes, yes that's true she went to meet her, she misses her

"OK, let's go then."
%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%

'Finally the shooting finished, I'm so tired, but yeah, I had fun too.'

"Having fun alone!!" Sado sit on a chair that was front of the girl.

"Hmm, who are you?wait, the heaven bird!! "

"Well, well, after all you are genius naa!" Sado smile.

"Ah, what you want, look I don't have any interests to become your salve so leave me alone and let me enjoy my life." The girl glared.

"You are really bitch."

"What did you said to me!! "

" I say you are a bitch, you leave your child and husband alone, and enjoying your life here." Sado hit the table with anger.

"Don't speak like you know everything about me, you don't know how does I feel, it's hurting me so much whenever I remember about them, but I can't go back to them, because I don't know from which mouth I ask for forgiveness, from which mouth I Say that I'm sorry and I love you." She starts crying.

"That's why I'm here, I want to help you and bring you back to them, I want to see you happy with your family, that's why I want you to come with me and start a new page of your life." Sado said in a serious tone.

The girl stopped crying and wipe her tears." Do you think they will forgive me?? "

"Of course they will, because they love you. "


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Micchan enter into the church and sit beside a young woman who were reading the bible. She sat there without saying anything, until the girl finished reading the bible and looked at Micchan.

"So, what do you want?? " She asked.

Micchan cleared her throat." Etoo, hehehehe I just want to say, will you come with me, if you don't mind. "

"Come with you! To where? "

"Eto, back to Japan. "

"Why should I go back there??"

"The order come from up, so you have to accept it. "

"I don't want to go there, I don't want to meet them again, after I can able to forget them."

"But you still miss them. "

"You already knew about it, why I don't want to go back."

"You can't live like this forever, you have to find happiness, you have to find the person who loves you, stop living like this."

The young lady sighed."OK, I will do as you say, but if it doesn't work we will go on our way."

"OK, good to hear that. "

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%

'Hmm, why I feel something unusual? Eh, why I'm here? I'm sure this is the correct address, what does she planning to?No way I can't do it, somebody please HELP ME!! '

_____

"What the hell is going on?  Why we are dressed in these clothes? It looks really similar to me,I wonder where I saw these clothes, and why the hell you are grinning like idiot Jurina?? " Mayu glared.

Jurina giggle."Because finally I will have fun that I wanted to have from a long time ago."

"What do you mean by fun?  And wait, where are we?" Mayu Shockley looked around. " Why we are here? Eh, what is going on? "

"Mayuyu this is our new home." Jurina giggle.

"WHAT? This is our new home. No I don't want to go. Let's go back, I don't want to enter in this scary place."

"Mayuyu you have to accept it or other else you will get punished." Jurina giggle.

"Stop giggling you moron, why the hell we are here? Someone please HELP ME!! "

_____

"What the..... What kind of heaven is that?? " Hybrid looked up at the building and back at Micchan."

"Well, good luck!! " Saying this Micchan run away.

"Eh, Hehehehehe majiska? I can't believe I'm going there, look like I will have so much Fuuun." Hybrid enter in the building while jumping. 

_______

"What is this?  I can't believe I'm going here again, I really hate this place most, Arrrrgggghhh I will kill that Gachapin. "

"Oh, hi there, are you too going here."

"Eh, master Shashi? What are you doing here? Don't say you are going here too? "

Shashi laughed. " Well, something like this."

"Eh, you know master this place didn't suit you at all."

"Are you looking down on me?? " Shashi glared.

"No, I'm not, I'm only saying that you are to old for this kind of place."

"I also want to enjoy little, got any problem?? "
"No, well good luck than."

______
"Eh, darling, why we are here? Don't say to hit some cute girl?? "

"Dare if I see you with any cute or sexy girls, I will break your arms and legs and upside down you without giving any food for months, do you UNDERSTAND?? "

"H-Haik H-haik I unders-tand!!"

"Good, now let's go. "

_______

"Eh, Takamina it's been awhile. " Acchan run and jump on Takamina and hug her.

"Acchan I can't breathe, get off me. "

"By the way Takamina what are you doing here? Don't say.. "

"I have some work to do."

"What kind of work?? "

"Just some work, don't ask me about it."

Acchan giggled. " Nee, Takamina how old are you anyway??"

"Why you are asking about my age? Are you looking down on me?? "

"No, No, I'm just curious, that's all."

"Wait, and what are you doing here? Don't say you have the same work as I?? "

"Me! Nothing, I was just passing by that's all."
"Let's see if you are passing by or in!! "

_____

"Eh, Sado-San are you sure it is safe going here?? "

"Why are you scared?? "

"No, just its my first time going here."

"Don't worry, it's safe and fun, let's go. "

"Haik. "


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Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: kuro_black29 on April 25, 2015, 01:09:37 PM
Cooooooooooooooool~
That interesting author san...

Thanks for the update~
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on April 30, 2015, 01:50:51 PM
That's righttttt , its coolllll

what place is that???

hurry update
i can't read if i dun have data
so, hurryyyyy
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: nguyen23 on April 30, 2015, 02:19:31 PM
Wow!! Interesting  :twothumbs
Thank you for your update
Please update soon   
Title: Re: The Real betrayed: Season 2 Chapter 2: Awkward moments.
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on May 23, 2015, 03:37:36 PM
Season 2 Chapter 2 : AWKWARD MOMENTS



'I didn't believe what I'm doing at this age.' Yuko sighed and enter in the class. "Hello everyone, nice to meet you I'm your new homeroom teacher."

________

"I don't believe I have to come here, I hate the school most, and what the hell did Yuko is doing here? What did that stupid Gachapin planning!" Mayu murmured under her breath while watching Yuko who were writing on board.

"Ah, I'm back, I never believed, that I will go school again." Jurina giggled while taking the note.

________

'Hmm..! What all of these things are? Look like I should learn before using them.' Takamina staring at countless medicine.

"Nee Queen, want some help?" Micchan giggled.

Minami throws a cold glare at her. "Get lost you moron before I drink your blood."

"Hehehehehe, if you kill me, you can't be stay alive." Micchan winked at her and fly away.

"Moron bird!" Minami crushed her.

________

Rena keeps playing with her fingers while watching her mother who were teaching the class. There was a time when their eyes meet, but Kojima quickly avoid it, she didn't have courage to look at her, after what she did to them.

'So you decide to come back to your family, not a bad idea, hope you care about us.'

'Why the hell I have to teach in her class! I hope the class finish quickly.'

_________

Yuki sits near the window and staring out through it, she looked at the sky and sighed.

"Are you bored?" Sashi giggled.

"You are having fun!"

"Of course the school is really an amazing thing, you can play and make friends. You too stop being lonely and make friends."

"I miss them." Yuki said in a weak voice.

"Eh, if I'm not mistaken, you are Yuki and Shashi?"

"Eh, Atsuko!!"

"Wow, I never accepted to meet you here." Atsuko giggled.

"Same here. By the way, what are you doing here?" Shashi asked.

"I'm here to find my wife." Atsuko joked.

"Wife! Did Minami also come here?" Yuki shocked.

"I think so." Shashi smiled.

_________

'OMG she is so beautiful and sexy. Her sexy legs and big boobs, want me to touch her.'

"Did she look sexy?" Sayake whispered.

"Yes... N-No, I mean no she doesn't look sexy more than you." Sae gulped.

"Prepare yourself for punishment later."

"B-but I don't do anything!"

==========break time===========

"Yeah, it's break time, Mayuyu let's go and grab the  lunch." Jurina run toward the canteen.

"Ugh, what the hell! I want to leave this place soon as possible." Mayu stretched her arm.

"It won't happen, until you guys meet and get together."

"And who are you miss." Mayu asked. Without giving the answer she smiled and went on her way. "Another heaven bird! How many heaven bird are following us?"

__________

"Hi, it's been a long time!" Yuko approached Kojima, who were standing close to the window. As she saw Yuko, she froze in her place.

"H-Hi!"

"How are you?" Yuko smiles.

"Good! And you?" Kojima asked in a weak voice.

"Not bad, I miss you a lot!" Yuko said in a sad voice. Kojima looked at her with painful eyes, she now, she had hurt Yuko so much, she wants to take all her pain and give her happiness.

*Yawn* what an awkward moment and also so boring, what kind of drama is this? I thought there would be some slap or cry or something other, but it is boring like hell let me go and watch others. *vanish*

________

"Nee, Sayake what if Rena and Yuki find out that I didn't take their memories." Sae asked while munching beef.

"Somehow they will find out in the end, no secret can stay forever, they will understand the reason why did it." Sayaka laid her head on Sae lap.

"I hope so. By the way, that girl who were sitting beside you in the class, what's her name again! Ah Milky she is very sexy." Sae drooled.

"SAE!!"

"Oops, sorry, I just like to see you jealous."

________

Takamina walking all around the school building, while memorizing all the places.

'After all, going school isn't a bad thing.'

"Did vampire Queen forget her way?" Atsuko giggled.

"Shut up! Ah, and what in the world Alpah doing in school?"

"I just miss vampire Queen so I thought how about to meet her in school."

"Wow just meet in the morning of you remember? And why did you wear the uniform are you studying here?" Takamina smirk.

"You know, you can't enter in school without a uniform or else they will kick you out, so that's why I wear a uniform, but believe me I didn't study here."

"Oh, shall we eat lunch?"

"Of course we can."

________

As Rena was walking around the school to find a peaceful place where she can take a rest, her eyes meet someone familiar who were walking toward the classroom.

"OTOU-SAN!!" Rena run toward Yuko and hug her."

"RENA! I MISS YOU MY DAUGHTER." Yuko cried.

"I miss you too papa, I'm sorry for leaving you alone." Rena also cried.

"It's ok, I can understand why did you leave. " Yuko patted her head.

"Awwwh, this is what I wanted to see, why they always make me cry!" Micchan wipe her tears and smile.

"What a heart touching moment naa." Someone appears behind of Micchan and speak.

"Eh, who the hell are you." Micchan raised eyebrow.

"Hello, my name is Aika you can call me love-tan." She waved at Micchan and went away.

"Hmm..! Fox!"

___________

"Hweeeeeee, Jurina I want to go back."Mayu cried.

"Eh, Mayuyu! You cry like a baby?"Jurina said surprised.

"Whatever I want to go back, I can't stand here anymore." Mayuyu pouted.

"By the way Mayuyu, you didn't tell me about heaven birds, what do they do?" Jurina asked.

"Heaven birds! They are part of angles, from millions years, whenever there is a fight between Werewolf, vampire zombies, and other supernatural, they always come into the world to bring peace they make them their servant and make them do what they want, those who didn't listen to them and do what they want, they kill them, heaven birds are most powerful supernatural who are full with holy powers." Mayuyu explained.

"Souka, are they stronger than Rena?" Jurina asked.

"I don't know about it, but maybe they are." As Mayu and Jurina were and walking to their class they bumped into someone.

"Ah, I'm sorry are you..... Yuki?" Mayu shocked.

"Mayuyu!" The word Mayuyu slipped off Yuki mouth.

"Are you studying here too?" Jurina asked. Yuki replied with node and stared at Mayu with a smile.

"It's nice to meet you again Mayuyu." Saying this Yuki walk away.

"If Yuki-san is here that mean Rena would be here too." Jurina said.

__________

"Mariko where were you?" Micchan come running as she saw Mariko.

"What is it?" Asked Mariko.

"I saw a fox in this school and it was not normal Fox but she was demon Fox, I think there is demon and they are planning to do something bad." Micchan said while taking a rest.

"Demon Fox? Mariko shocked. "If they did something bad I wouldn't forgive them." Mariko clinched her fist.
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: Korisu29 on May 23, 2015, 05:42:15 PM
Wow,that's cool Taro!! I like it!!
Pliiiss update soon..hihi
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: blackcold on May 23, 2015, 06:17:46 PM
The Saeyaka part is funny XD
They go back to school~
It's really cool and getting morrrreee interesting
hope you can update fasterr..
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on July 16, 2015, 01:51:13 AM
OMG I reread my all fic again and when I read this one I was like Ehh!!  What the hel? Is this I write? Seriously !! The writing style isn't bad some grammar mistakes here and there but the idea is dan so worst, I can't believe I was that stupid back than,  I wonder what does my reader find in this fic!!  Tell me shall I continue this fic?  I'm not playing to leave it I  just thinking if people still like this fic and want me to continue??
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: qweakb on July 16, 2015, 02:21:09 AM
Yes! I will like u to continue the story XD
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: niineechan on July 16, 2015, 04:04:35 AM
Aaaarrghhh....
Just continue this....
I've been waiting u to update this like, forever..??!!
I've been curious like hell it will end up as YukiRena or Mayuki..
:banghead:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: vickystar on July 19, 2015, 10:54:35 AM
Please continue it :panic: im update my web everyday to see you comeback. Im waiting for you update new chapter.  :bow: please comeback soon. Thank youuui
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: vivinardisa on July 23, 2015, 07:17:27 AM
Just fine it and it's so cool  8)  XD

Please continue this, i really want to now how it Will end  :thumbsup  :?

Please continue and update soon  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
Post by: key17 on July 24, 2015, 05:40:12 AM
you must continue this story :)

i want wmatsui! XD XD
Title: Re: The Real betrayed: Season 2 Chapter 2: Awkward moments.
Post by: TomonagaMio755 on January 18, 2016, 03:31:47 PM
I love this story too much
Please Update This  :deco: