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Author note:  hello everybody. I get an idea so I make the one shoot story into chapters, I'm sorry to giving you trouble , sorry for bad grammar, hope you enjoy it.





Name : oshima yuko

Species : werewolf

Type : former ace

Relationship : Married

Children : one daughter.

Blood color : Dark violet



Name :kojima haruna

Species : vampire

Type : normal

Relationship : married

Children : one daughter

Blood color :  black




Name : meada Atsuko

Species : werewolf

Type : Alpha

Relationship : single

Blood color :  dark green




Name : Takahashi minami

Species : vampire

Type : queen

Relationship : single

Blood color :  midnight blue





Name : yuki

Species : human

Type : normal

Power : mindreader: fast speed

Relationship : single




Name : watanabe mayu

Species : vampire

Type : genius

Relationship : single

Blood color : blue



Name : Matsui rena

Species : unknown

Type : unknown

Relationship : single

Blood color : unknown




Name : Matsui jurina

Species : vampire

Type : Ace

Relationship : single

Blood color : Green

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Chapter one: Stalker



It was cold, night, the snow was falling, all over the city, I'm standing in front of a supermarket, waiting for you.

As the light of supermarket closed, and you came out, you lock the door and start to walk away, I started following you, every days , I follow you like this, You went your home safely, without any trouble, You open the door,with your cold and shivering hand.As the door open, you Went inside and close the door.

Its been three Year since I have been following you like this, I hope that you never notice me,its been three years when I saw you first time.

At Christmas eve. It's was a happy day for everyone, so I can't take any one life, Let them enjoy today, Everyone  were so happy, children were laughing and playing with snow,
As I was walking in silence street...suddenly I saw someone sitting In the dark place, I get closer, my eyes open widely as I saw beautiful girl sitting alone in the cold,

It was you.... first time I saw a very beautiful girl like angel, my heart felt very strange, Suddenly I hear your crying sound.... I get shocked. How came beautiful girl crying in beautiful day, I wanted to ask you and help you, seeing you crying like this, it's broke my heart,

But I can't enter in  human  life....but also I can't sit here seeing you crying like this  I can't stop myself....I started to walk closer you, but I stopped as I saw you standing up and start walking .....I follow you secretly.... Until we reach the old building, you enter and start to climping the stairs.

I also followed you, I don't know why?! I stopped!! as I saw you standing end of the building top.

what the hell are you doing??! I thought, don't tell me you want to jump!!No! you can't, As I saw You closing your eyes ,and getting ready to jump, I can't stop myself seeing you die like this.

"What the hell are you doing"
I shouted...you shocked because this is the oldest building nobody can come here... You looked at me for a moment and then you speak ."Not of your business" saying this you walk away,I walked behind you."why you wanted to die??! "I asked.
But you don't give any answer and continue walking....I grab your hand "hey answer me why you want to die?" "who are you and what you want from me ?"
You shouted.... Who I am that's right, I am nobody "I just want to know why beautiful girl like you want to die.??!"
"none of your business."
Saying this you walk away.

And I also followed you
you stopped and looked at me with angry eyes.and  come closer to me then you kicked my right leg, its hurt I fall down.

damn it!! what a girl,I give up anyway, i don't want to  enter in human life,

do what you want!! but somehow my heart field Strang. Why you wanted to die??! Thinking This i start following you again. until I reached your home. you looked little secred.you opened the door and went inside.to find out what's going on inside, I climb the building. I'm not human so its easy for me. there was some kind of sound coming  out from house.I entered your house from window,
and get close to hear the voice....I get shocked when I saw your parents is Beating you. "You bicth!! Didn't I warned you, from coming home late at night, where were you huh??."

They were beating you badly. The blood were falling from your mouth and nose.
Damn!! what kind of parents are they??! So that's why you wanted to die?? you wanted to end this damn life?? I went out of your house because I can't see you like this.
I started to think, shall I help you or not?? my heart says yes ,but my mind says no.
Then I decided to help you, and it was not a big deal for me.I killed your parent by drinking their blood it was tasty.
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"Are you going to stand there in snow like this??"
I shocked with suddenly voice. I looked at the front, I saw you, standing there, I wanted to run away, but I can't.
Did you find out about me. I thought, what should I do??
No its maybe not true,
I looked left and right, maybe someone else be there. But There was no one, that's mean you are talking to me.

"come in"

Ohh shit !! what should I do??
"A-re you talk-ing to me?" I asked.

You nodded.

I  slowly entered in your house, you showed me the way to your living room, I sit on the sofa.. You give me warm cup of tea "here you go"
"Thank you."
I take the sip. The taste was not bad.
I always drink a blood ,its my first time drinking tea.
We just sit salience. Until you broke the salience
"My name is kashwagi Yuki.. What is your name.
I don't give her any answer.... After some time sitting salience, I stand up and begin  to go outside, but my feet stopped,
I looked at you,You give me  beautiful smile.
"M-Mayu.. My name is Watanabe Mayu."

~~~~~~~To be continue ~~~~~~

Sorry for bad grammar.
« Last Edit: October 24, 2017, 02:01:24 PM by sophcaro »

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2015, 10:38:35 AM »
Ah... Mayu saved Yuki from parents abused

Nice prologue...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to see other characters

Thank you for the new supernatural story

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2015, 10:54:06 AM »
Mayu saved Yuki :twothumbs
What a good Nice prologue...
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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2015, 01:02:27 PM »
Nice prologue

 

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2015, 02:47:10 PM »
Interesting interesting. Nicely done, i would say.  :twothumbs
Update soon!  :glasses: :glasses:
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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #5 on: February 12, 2015, 06:21:38 AM »
Mayuki and supernatural  :ding:

update soon!!  :thumbsup

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #6 on: February 12, 2015, 12:04:12 PM »
Hello everyone ҉٩(*´︶`*)۶҉  Thank you for reading my fic . I'm so happy. Here I come with another chapter hope you like it. Sorry for bad grammar.

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Here you go.





Chapter : 2




I woke up from sunlight hitting my face and the sound of birds outside. ‘What a nice dream’ I thought. Wait, where I'm? I looked around, and it was not my room, why am I in stranger’s home? Ah yes, I remember staying in Yukirin’s home last night, and she is not stranger, She is the person I love. I got up from the bed. Took a shower, and walked to the kitchen. I saw Yukirin sitting near the dining table, and drinking coffee.

"Good morning Yukirin." I greeted.

"Good morning Mayuyu." She greeted back

“Ehh mayuyu!” I blushed. I saw Yuki smirk and give me cup of coffee.

"Arigatou." I said, grabbing the cup that she offered   I take the cup and take a sip that makes my eyes open widely. Damn this is not coffee, it's BLOOD. I was shocked and looked at Yuki, how she find out?

" I read your mind!" She exclaimed.

“You read my mind??” I asked obviously shocked. "Yes.” She said
matter of factly.  

“How??” I asked.  

"I have an ability to read a person’s mind." The raven haired girl said.

“Ehh, shit don't you hate me??” I asked a little bewildered.

"Why should I?” She asked pouring herself a cup of coffee.

  "Uh? Is it because I'm vampire?" I shrugged.

"So? What if you are a vampire? You’re not a bad person." she smiled.

I grin to myself her smile is so cute I want to kiss her lips so bad.

  "Thank you. But you can't." She said letting out a small giggle .
Oh shit! I totally forgot that she can read my thoughts. "It's okay." She said as she gave me a small smile.

"Can you please stop reading my mind?" I said.  

"Hmmm? Why not? I happen to like your thoughts. Last night you were dreaming of alpacas.” Yuki giggled.

I didn’t have any answer. “Just don't read my mind,” I sigh

“Some of my thoughts aren’t that great.” I saw her grin. I can't sit here anymore, I fidgeted in my seat. I quickly drink all blood in one gulp. I shot her a look and bolted for the door and out of the house, why is all of this suddenly happening to me? Why did she have that kind of power?

~~~~~
As usual, I wait for her outside the market, and we walked home together. Now I don't have to stalk her. Because she found out about me.

There was an awkward silence between us. I looked around. What a boring life. I sighed.

"You are right." She said nudging me.

"You’re reading my mind Again I might add."

I say to her as we walked back to our home. She gave me an evil smile
"Did you know reading a person’s mind without their permission is not good." I said.

"What about stalking people without their permission is that good?" She said raising a perfectly shaped eyebrow at me. 

Damn, she is a genius. I thought

"Yes, I'm." Yuki replied smugly I sighed again, looks like I can't even think in peace with her.

"You are right." she smiles. I glared at her. An idea came into mind, I looked at her chest. I quickly touched her chest and ran away while laughing. I stopped running and looked around. She was nowhere to be found, didn't she follow me? That’s strange. I felt someone standing beside me. As I move my head slowly, I fell down.  
"Y-yukirin…” I stammered   I can't believe how she could’ve caught me so fast, she leaned close to my face, and poked my cheeks.

" I forgot to tell I also can run faster than normal humans." She shrugged. Wait  how can I forgot that I'm vampire, stupid right? I can fly Instead of running like human which is way cooler than running on ground, and then she can't catch me that easily.

But from now it seems like my great day is coming to an end. .  

"You are right Mayu." she winked and grab my ear and dragged me with her.
Kami-sama please help me.   ~~~~~

As we were walking to home. We saw someone lying on the road, we got nearer to her it was a beautiful girl, it seems someone beat her so badly, and she was groaning in pain.

"We should help her Mayu." Yuki urged me.

"What? But why, we don't even know her, what if she’s someone dangerous?" I asked pausing to look at her. Yuki glared at me.

"Okay, okay as you wish." I complied She smiled and help me to place  her body on my back, and I carried the unconscious girl home. I felt something strange about this girl.
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Strange, something feels very strange indeed. Who is this stranger? She isn’t human, not a vampire nor werewolf either. I get close to her body and took a whiff of her scent

“Who are you?” I whispered to the sleeping girl. How about I taste her blood, then maybe I can know her! I thought as I dipped my face closer to her, I was about to stink my fangs in her neck.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING??" Yuki yelled and started hitting me with a tray.

"If you’re that hungry, go drink animal blood you moron!” She said as she shoved me off the sleeping girl who was now on the couch.

"Yukirin it's not what it looks like, I just wanted to taste her blood, because I feel something strange about her!" I exclaim from behind the door.

"......." but there was only silence, I kicked the door down cause she won’t open it, what the hell am I supposed to do? Leave her alone with that dangerous lady? No way in hell, Yuki glared at me, she about to say something to me.

when the stranger started to stir in her sleep groaning. Her eyes fluttered open as she looked at Yuki and tries to get up, to get closer to Yuki When she was close enough she started to caress Yuki’s cheek like what lovers would do, except well they aren’t lovers. What the hell is she doing? I thought.

" B-black you co-me ba-ck??" the mysterious girl croaked, cupping Yuki’s cheek She leaned her face closer to Yuki and kiss her lips.

My eyes wide in shock, How dare you kiss my Yukirin!
I shout in my head But I’m rooted in my place too shocked to move.

Did She just stole Yuki’s  FIRST KISS.
~~~~~~
I couldn't sleep at all with the image of that stranger kissing Yuki lips running through my mind.
All night I was just rolling in the bed. Damn that stranger just came in the night and she already kissed Yuki. And me, I've been stalking Yuki for 3 years, but I've never even got the chance to lean my head on her shoulder. Argggghhhhg.

*knock* *knock*
"MAYUUU!!!!!! MAYUUUU!!!!!!!"

Who the hell is disrupting me at this time? I get up and open the door.
A tall, handsome girl came inside and grabbed my shoulders tightly. She looked very scared and scary at the same time.

"We are in trouble." She said in a weak voice.

"What happened??" I asked.

"MAYU, THE CHILD IS GONE!" She yelled while shaking my whole body with her hands.

~~~~~~~
"Hey Acchan wake up, I have good news for you!!" Boyish looking style girl, trying to wake up the sleepy girl.

"Hmm...... What is it Sae?? Leave me alone." Acchan said while pulling the blanket over her face.

"I have very big news for you. The child is GONE." Sae said the last word loudly.

"Child??? What child, I don't have any child." Acchan replied in a lazy voice.

"Argghh.... you leave me no choice, don't blame me later," Sae murmured, then she threw cold water at Acchans face, "Here you go, you lazy ass."

"Kyaaaaaaaaa!! How dare you throw cold water at my face!" Acchan yelled while wiping her face with a blanket.

"I have good news for you. The child is gone."

"Ehhh, when?? And how?? "Acchan asked Shocked.

"I don't have all the information about it. All I know is that the child has been missing for two weeks." Sae replied.

Acchan raised her eyebrows, and started laughing like a crazy person.

"Hehehehehehe....You know what this means??" Acchan asked.
Sae nodded, "Yes, the beginning of The War." she whispered in an evil voice.

~~~~To be continue ~~~~~~~


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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2015, 02:27:12 PM »
Wait why is that 'child' call yukirin black?!? And that chikd just kiss Yukirin

War?!?

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #8 on: February 12, 2015, 03:07:32 PM »
Why that child kiss yuki ?

what will happen ? :glasses:

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #9 on: February 12, 2015, 06:25:41 PM »
Is that 'child' is rena? Cause from the introduction only rena's species is unknown.
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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #10 on: February 12, 2015, 07:06:30 PM »
hohohho interesting  8)
I loved it :P
can't wait for the next update x3   :cathappy: :cathappy:

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #11 on: February 12, 2015, 10:37:48 PM »
I'm so curious about rena ~
Can't wait for you to uptdate!
Hwaiting! :cathappy:
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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #12 on: February 13, 2015, 06:02:13 AM »
Okay, soooooo.. uhmmmm......

I'll go this in detail like when I edited this.

I'm still kind of confused with the whole Mayu stalking Yuki in the first place, and I'm like WHY? Did Mayu want to drink Yuki's blood? And I kinda got confused with the whole vampire werewolf thing. If some of the members are vamps, and werewolves, then they must know each other right? Other than that, I feel like you kind of gave away somethings that could've added to the mystery and suspense on the characters part. Although each writer have their own style.

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"Hey Acchan wake up, I have good news for you!!" Boyish looking style girl, trying to wake up the sleepy girl.

"Hmm...... What is it Sae?? Leave me alone." Acchan said while pulling the blanket over her face.

"I have very big news for you. The child is GONE." Sae said the last word loudly.

"Child??? What child, I don't have any child." Acchan replied in a lazy voice.

"Argghh.... you leave me no choice, don't blame me later," Sae murmured, then she threw cold water at Acchans face, "Here you go, you lazy ass."

"Kyaaaaaaaaa!! How dare you throw cold water at my face!" Acchan yelled while wiping her face with a blanket.

"I have good news for you. The child is gone."

"Ehhh, when?? And how?? "Acchan asked Shocked.

"I don't have all the information about it. All I know is that the child has been missing for two weeks." Sae replied.

Acchan raised her eyebrows, and started laughing like a crazy person.

"Hehehehehehe....You know what this means??" Acchan asked.
Sae nodded, "Yes, the beginning of The War." she whispered in an evil voice.



I'm sorry but can you explain how the "child" has been missing FOR TWO WEEKS and they have not noticed? I'm confusedddddd. MOVING ON
Did you add the last part cause I surely didn't read that in the one that you sent me the other day for editing. Oh well.

Also I have a question, the time Mayu was stalking Yukirin.. Yuki just let Mayu into her house? And... wait for it.... MAYU SPENT THE NIGHT OVER? I mean don't take this the wrong way but the character progression is just too fast, and I know that this is now a multi-chaptered instead of it being a one shot which means you have control of the timeline of the story.. Meaning you can have short time jumps, so you know the characters can get to know each other. Cause the first chapter and the second chapter really gave me mixed signals. Its very confusing to me IMO that is.

Also kindly explain this to me cause... uhhhhh.... confusion.....

Quote
I couldn't sleep at all with the image of that stranger kissing Yuki lips running through my mind.
All night I was just rolling in the bed. Damn that stranger just came in the night and she already kissed Yuki. And me, I've been stalking Yuki for 3 years, but I've never even got the chance to lean my head on her shoulder. Argggghhhhg.

*knock* *knock*
"MAYUUU!!!!!! MAYUUUU!!!!!!!"

Who the hell is disrupting me at this time? I get up and open the door.
A tall, handsome girl came inside and grabbed my shoulders tightly. She looked very scared and scary at the same time.

"We are in trouble." She said in a weak voice.

"What happened??" I asked.

"MAYU, THE CHILD IS GONE!" She yelled while shaking my whole body with her hands.

So Mayu is a vampire right? And Acchan is a werewolf, so I'm assuming that Sae is also a werewolf, but WHY would Sae go to Mayu to tell her that the "child" is missing?

As far as I've known and read through out fiction its that there is the constant hate between vamps and wolves. So I'm not quite grasping as to why Sae would even dare go to a vamps house, cause that would be considered as a betrayal to their kind.

So all in all, I'd like to know more of this cause when I did the proofreading and editing I was very confused by the flow of the story. Sorry for that but I want you to improve your writing that's why I'm taking time to review this properly, and give you some pointers in writing, I may not be the best in writing cause heck there are a lot of great writers out there, *cough* adorks people *cough* and a whole lot more. Call me biased but they are good at what they do. OTL I hope you take time to read this and such..

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #13 on: February 13, 2015, 06:03:59 AM »
 its not a :bigdeal: for acchan to have a WAR  :kekeke: :glasses: :glasses:

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #14 on: February 13, 2015, 02:04:52 PM »
Okay, soooooo.. uhmmmm......

I'll go this in detail like when I edited this.

I'm still kind of confused with the whole Mayu stalking Yuki in the first place, and I'm like WHY? Did Mayu want to drink Yuki's blood? And I kinda got confused with the whole vampire werewolf thing. If some of the members are vamps, and werewolves, then they must know each other right? Other than that, I feel like you kind of gave away somethings that could've added to the mystery and suspense on the characters part. Although each writer have their own style.

Quote

"Hey Acchan wake up, I have good news for you!!" Boyish looking style girl, trying to wake up the sleepy girl.

"Hmm...... What is it Sae?? Leave me alone." Acchan said while pulling the blanket over her face.

"I have very big news for you. The child is GONE." Sae said the last word loudly.

"Child??? What child, I don't have any child." Acchan replied in a lazy voice.

"Argghh.... you leave me no choice, don't blame me later," Sae murmured, then she threw cold water at Acchans face, "Here you go, you lazy ass."

"Kyaaaaaaaaa!! How dare you throw cold water at my face!" Acchan yelled while wiping her face with a blanket.

"I have good news for you. The child is gone."

"Ehhh, when?? And how?? "Acchan asked Shocked.

"I don't have all the information about it. All I know is that the child has been missing for two weeks." Sae replied.

Acchan raised her eyebrows, and started laughing like a crazy person.

"Hehehehehehe....You know what this means??" Acchan asked.
Sae nodded, "Yes, the beginning of The War." she whispered in an evil voice.



I'm sorry but can you explain how the "child" has been missing FOR TWO WEEKS and they have not noticed? I'm confusedddddd. MOVING ON
Did you add the last part cause I surely didn't read that in the one that you sent me the other day for editing. Oh well.

Also I have a question, the time Mayu was stalking Yukirin.. Yuki just let Mayu into her house? And... wait for it.... MAYU SPENT THE NIGHT OVER? I mean don't take this the wrong way but the character progression is just too fast, and I know that this is now a multi-chaptered instead of it being a one shot which means you have control of the timeline of the story.. Meaning you can have short time jumps, so you know the characters can get to know each other. Cause the first chapter and the second chapter really gave me mixed signals. Its very confusing to me IMO that is.

Also kindly explain this to me cause... uhhhhh.... confusion.....

Quote
I couldn't sleep at all with the image of that stranger kissing Yuki lips running through my mind.
All night I was just rolling in the bed. Damn that stranger just came in the night and she already kissed Yuki. And me, I've been stalking Yuki for 3 years, but I've never even got the chance to lean my head on her shoulder. Argggghhhhg.

*knock* *knock*
"MAYUUU!!!!!! MAYUUUU!!!!!!!"

Who the hell is disrupting me at this time? I get up and open the door.
A tall, handsome girl came inside and grabbed my shoulders tightly. She looked very scared and scary at the same time.

"We are in trouble." She said in a weak voice.

"What happened??" I asked.

"MAYU, THE CHILD IS GONE!" She yelled while shaking my whole body with her hands.

So Mayu is a vampire right? And Acchan is a werewolf, so I'm assuming that Sae is also a werewolf, but WHY would Sae go to Mayu to tell her that the "child" is missing?

As far as I've known and read through out fiction its that there is the constant hate between vamps and wolves. So I'm not quite grasping as to why Sae would even dare go to a vamps house, cause that would be considered as a betrayal to their kind.

So all in all, I'd like to know more of this cause when I did the proofreading and editing I was very confused by the flow of the story. Sorry for that but I want you to improve your writing that's why I'm taking time to review this properly, and give you some pointers in writing, I may not be the best in writing cause heck there are a lot of great writers out there, *cough* adorks people *cough* and a whole lot more. Call me biased but they are good at what they do. OTL I hope you take time to read this and such..

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First I thank you for reading my fic thank you so much.

I love making my readers confuse. Because I'm also confused. Xd

Lol let's get to the point .

First " how the child gone missing you will going to find it in the nexr chapters .

Second : yuki knew about mayu that she stalk her everyday because she is minder.

Third : The tall handsome looking girl is jurina not sae.

And last may wanted to taste stranger blood not yuki blood.

And again thank you so much for reading my fic. (♡˙︶˙♡)

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #15 on: February 22, 2015, 08:30:54 AM »
Minaaaa I'm baaack. Xd

Sorry for making you wait,  here I come with chapter 3. Sorry for bad grammar and mistakes, hope you enjoy it.

*nervous *nervous *



Chapter 3



Mayu and Jurina came at Yuki house to see if that stranger is the missing child, because Mayu was feeling something a strange vibe from said child.
They all sat in the living room staring at stranger who was eating melon pan peacefully in front of them.

  “How dare you eat that peacefully after kissing my yukirin. Whoever you are, just remember one thing I'm not going to leave you alone, I will going to kill you,and then threw your body in the sea, let's shark eats you” Mayu thought
staring at the stranger who was busy savoring her 3rd melon pan.

“KAAWAAAII she is damn soo Cute,like an angel's. The way she eats melon pan, and the way she moves her lips, it's so cute I want to kiss them, I can't hold myself anymore.” Jurina thought clenching the edge of her seat, looking directly at the girl’s lips.

 “Those stupid kids, what are they thinking about?”  Yuki looked at a stranger's face. “Strange why I can't read that stranger’s mind. And why she called me black? And she even kissed me!! Can someone tell me what's going on?”

 "Ano My Name is Mastui Jurina , and she is Mayu & Yuki” Jurina pointed at them. The stranger did not reply anything and just continued eating her melon pan.

Jurina asked again, "Can we be friends?" of course she was not ready to give up anything that easy, after all she was a troublesome child. 

"I don't need any friends." The stranger replied coldly.

"Hmmmm, then how do you feel about me being your girlfriend?" Jurina asked playfully.

Stranger looked at her. "You are not a girl of my type." Said as she got up and went outside.

Yuki and Mayu started to laugh. "Don't be sad Jurina." Yuki said while patting Jurina's head. 

"So Jurina what you think?" mayu asked. "Hmm, I don’t get what you mean, but if you meant if she’s the kid that we’re looking for, then no she is not that child." Jurina shrugged. 

"Are you sure? Because her blood smells strange to me," Mayu raised an eyebrow.

“This is really strange.”  "Yes I'm sure I know that child doesn’t look like her."

"Then why do I feel something strange." Mayu asked while thinking. 

"Because she is trying to steal your girlfriend," Jurina whispered in Mayu’s ear playfully. 
“And I am smitten with that girl that went outside.” "She is not my girlfriend!" Mayu exclaimed and punched jurina’s cheeks playfully.

~~~~~At acchan place ~~~~~
 
“Acchan!" Sae came bounding in the room. "What happened Sae??" Acchan asked putting her book down.

 "I have very bad news. 45 people was killed by a monster!!" She heaved a sigh.

"What? Wait hold up who can do such a horrible thing?" Acchan asked apparent shock on her face.

 "I don't know. And the most horrible thing is that the monster takes the victim’s livers after killing them."

"What the hell? Looks like he started the first move" Acchan said clenching her fist.

 "Wait you know who it is?" Sae asked.
 
"We have to find and kill that monster before things get any worse." Acchan looked at Sae "Get ready we have to meet someone." Acchan said as she stood up.

"OK but who we will going to meet??"Sae raised eyebrow.

"You will know it later." 

~~~~~At Takamina place ~~~~~ "Takamina san someone wants to meet you." Her servant said.

 "Okay, please tell them wait for me in the meeting room." Takamina replied while looking at dresses. 
Who want to meet me at a time like this? She thought.

Takamina arrived at the meeting room after a few minutes.

"Acchan why we are here?" asked sae.

"You will know it soon." Acchan replied calmly.  Takamina opened the door, she shocked as she saw unwanted guests.

"Calm down Takamina San we just want to talk with you, nothing more."Acchan said while trying to calm her. 

Takamina looked at their faces, then sits beside them.

"So what you want??” 

"As you know princess Takamina San I don't like to go left or right, so I will get at the point." Acchan take long breathe.   “let us find that child together and stop the war."

All of them shocked at Acchan’s word’s and start looking at each other face.

"What are you trying to say??"

" Let us become friends like the past, and find that demon who trying to destroy the world and kill him." Acchan replied in a serious voice.

"I still don't understand anything??" Takamina asked.

 "Do you remember the story,that my grandfather used to tell us when we were child??" Takamina nodded. "That was a true story that will going to happen now."

"WHAT!! Stop joking Acchan, I'm not going to fall in your trap." Takamina replied while controlling her anger. 

"There are many things that you should know about this world, And don't forget that I'm not human, I'm a wolf and we never lie.We have to work together Takamina, and stop the war, I can't fight with myself because I'm not that strong I can't stop the war alone I need your help, try to understand me. I'm not joking." Acchan said with anger in her eyes.

Takamina shocked with Acchan words she knew Acchan never lied, even she had a bad feeling too, she wants to find.
kojima San who had disappeared from many years, no one knows if she is alive or not.

" I know Takamina it's may hard for you to believe me, but you have to believe in us, we were friends, and we can't hurt those whom we love."

After thinking some time takamina decide to believe in her.
"OK but I need some time to think."

"OK as you wish, but remember we don't have much time, so please decide soon as possible." Acchan replied with a smile. 

~~~~~At yuki place~~~~~~~
"So jurina what are we going to do know??" mayu asked while not taking her eyes from stranger, who were talking with yuki.

" What you mean what we going to do?We have to find that child before something worse happens."
Jurina replied with serious voice.

Mayu sighed and looked at the sky throw the window." Look like it's time for the war to start."

" Ehh....mayu Chan don't scare me like this. You know I hate the wars." Jurina said while hugging her leg.

"Nobody loves war, all of us hate it, because sometimes we  lose those whom we love most." mayu say in a sad tone.

"You are right nee Chan, I'm curious about something how can that child run away that easily??"jurina asked while thinking.

"Look like someone helped her, and broke the magic spell. I wonder who's that person."
~~~~~~
The stranger comes closer to Yuki and sit close to her. And start looking at her beautiful face. Then slowly she put her hand on Yuki hands.

"Black why you are ignoring me?Why you behaving like you don't know me?? " Stranger asked in a childish voice.

Yuki shocked, first she can't read stranger mind, and second the stranger looks little scary and also crazy to her.
" I don't know what you are talking about, but trust me, I'm not lying to you I really don't remember you, who are you and when did we meet??" Yuki asked nervously.

The tears slowly fall from stranger eyes. Her heart broke into hundred pieces.

"Don't do this to me, you know how hard it was for me to live without you. Black I eat my meal every day at the time and also sleep at the time, I don't fight or hurt anyone, I don't break things,I do everything what they tell me to do. So black don't do this to me." stranger starts shaking Yuki hands." Black I have become a good girl, please don't do this to me please." the stranger pleaded.

Yuki wiped tears from the stranger's face.
"I'm sorry, but I'm not that person that you were thinking, I'm Yuki not black, I'm really sorry." saying this she leave stranger alone.

'No matter what you say I will never going to leave you, I will going to make you mine.' the stranger murmured while sobbing.

~~~~~~At acchan place ~~~~~

"Acchan I'm curious about something, Aren't we supposed to kill that child??" sae asked.

" Are you stupid, why would we kill the innocent child, we have a heart too we are not evil."

"Ehh it's because that child's father is a werewolf, and in our rules dating vampires is not allowed!!" sae asked while blinking her eyes many times.

"We didn't have that kind of rules." Saying this acchan went to her room and close the door.

' Ehhh I'm confused, what is going on ,can anybody tell me. I really don't understand anything. What we were fighting for all these years??'

~~~~~~At Takamina place ~~~~

Takamina looked at the sword who were hanging on the wall.

(Flashback)

"Listen takamina, there is something very important I want to tell you."The old man said."I can see the future, There is something worse going to happen, there will be going a war between werewolf and vampires, but that was all lie, don't trust them, because they were just trying to protect that child whose father is a werewolf and mother is a vampire."

Takamina shocked" What are they trying to protect him from grandfather??"

"You will going to know it later, but now I want to give you something." The old man opens the red box, inside the box there was a sword." give this sword to that child. This is most powerful sword, it will going to protect the world, and be careful don't let wrong hand touch to this sword."
The old man puts sword in Takamina hand." I believe in you, my child." he smile.

"Don't worry grandfather, I promise that I will going to protect that sword and return it to its owner." Takamina bowed her head.

The old man smiles" look like I can die peacefully now."

(End of flash)

'Black looks like the time that we were waiting for has come.' Takamina murmured while looking at the sword.

~~~~~At yuki place ~~~~~~

Jurina sit beside the stranger who were crying alone. She hold stranger hand, and smile.

"You know sometimes in this world we have to accept those things that we don't want to accept it, but we have to accept them because there is no other way without accepting them, don't be sad and don't cry alone, cause it's hurt." saying this jurina hug her. "you can cry in my shoulder. I'm here with you, we are friends right. Everything will be going to fine."
The stranger get shocked, not from jurina words,but from something else,That she saw in her eyes.

After staying some hours like this jurina realize that stranger is fall a sleep. She smiled and kissed her forehead and took her to the room and lay her on the bed.

"Goodnight." saying this she went out and close the door behind.

"Mayu let's go home." jurina said while wearing her shoes.

"Ano if it's OK, can you two stay with us??"Yuki asked in nervous tone.
As jurina trying to say something, mayu put her hand on jurina mouth and give smile to yuki.

"of course, it's our pleasure to stay with you." mayu said while her hand still closing jurina mouth.

" Glad to hear that, I hope if we get well together, it's good to have vampires as friends." she smile. Mayu smiled back and looked at jurina who giving death glare to her.

"We have to find that child mayu." Jurina said glaring at her.

" It's OK jurina we can find her later. Beside you also want to spend more time with that stranger." mayu smile and run toward the room.

~~~~To be continue ~~~~~~

Don't be shy and comments guys xd
 Should I continue or leave the fic.
« Last Edit: March 02, 2015, 10:01:05 PM by wmatsui fanfic. »

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #16 on: February 22, 2015, 01:34:07 PM »
Where did kojima go to ? :?

That stranger is Rena right ? It must be her ! :glasses:

what did she saw when jurina talk to her ? :confused:

Anyway , hurry update ! you make me really curious :thumbsup

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #17 on: February 28, 2015, 10:44:16 AM »
Hello everybody, I'm sorry for not updating fast and long, please forgive me. And stay with me, I will try hard to make chapters long.

Thank you for everyone who read my fic *bow*

Here is short chapter I will make sure to write long or post fast.


Chapter 4 part 1




~~~~~At Yuki place~~~~~~

Mayu is watching the news,and Jurina is reading  manga, And the stranger quietly staring at Jurina.

"There is not any news about the child." Mayu is getting tired from watching the news.

"Ano..... Is there anything on my face"Jurina asked to stranger nervously.

"...."  She didn't reply and keep staring at her.

"By the way where did Yuki goes." Mayu asked while munching some snacks.

"She said she have something to do." Jurina replied

~~~~~~~~~
*Knock* knock*

The old woman opens the door. "Good morning obaasan."Yuki greeted the old lady.

The old woman looked at the Yuki and then let her come inside,she showed her way to the living room. Yuki sits on the sofa.
The old lady come Inside the room while holding cup of tea, she offered cup to the Yuki.
"So what make you visit me??" The lady asked.

Yuki our her right Hand on the chest and takes a long breath. "I want to know about my past life."

"What you want to know??" lady asked.

"Everything, about myself, my family and friends."

"I see."The old lady nodded and start telling Yuki her past life story. "To make a long story short. Before 100 years ago you were only daughters of king kashiwagi,your name was black.you fall in love with daughter of general Mr.Matsui, Matsui Rena, you two used to love each other so much, at that day when she decides to propose you, the assistance enters in the castle and begin to kill everyone.and Matsui Rena killed while saving you.
The kingdom of your father was been destroyed.
Your father's old friend who was  vampire Mr.Kojima San he took you to his castle,and take care of you as like his own daughter.
Because of death Matsui Rena, you locked yourself in the room, you felt guilty of her death. Then Mr.Kojima San told  you that she will going to come to this world again,you have to wait for her.
Hearing this you asked Mr.kojima San to join in his army, and learn fighting. He Accepted you. You were most powerful fighter at that time, no one can beat you, you trained yourself so hard just because you wanted to protect her." The old lady paused and drink some water.

"Before 40years ago, she born again, as hybrid, her name was Oshima Rena.and she was a most powerful child. Mr.kojima San put her under your care.She grows up as beautiful princess.when she reached to 20 years old something happen and you died while saving her mother."

"if I was human then How can I able to live that many years, without getting old??" Yuki asked.

"You were half human and half vampire, in purpose living long life without getting old, they used to give you vampire blood every year.
Even now you are half vampire and half human, after your parents death in car accident, you were in between  death and life, vampire queen Takahashi Minami finds you and give you her blood, that's why you can hear peoples' minds easily and can move much faster than normal human."

( Author note: After Yuki parent's death in a car accident, her uncle adopts her,and they treat her badly, and then they killed by Mayu.)

As the lady finished talking, she gets up and went out,after a few minutes later she come back while holding an old brown book. She gives  the book to Yuki.

"Everything is written in this book, you can get more information from it."

Yuki takes the book and start reading it, everything was written on it, slowly, slowly Yuki starts to remember everything.

~~~~~~At Yuki place ~~~~~~~

Mayu switch off the TV and start rolling in the floor.
"What should we do, how we are going to find that child." keep rolling.

"Mayu nee chan calm down, don't worry we going to find her as soon as possible." Jurina said while reading manga.

"HOW??" Mayu stopped rolling and start glaring at Jurina.They turned their head to stranger as they heard giggling sound.

"Well, you can't find her while sitting at home or watching the news, do you think she appear on TV and wave at you, and say, Hey try to catch me," Stranger said while giggling.

"You are right,but even we go out and search her for every place, we can't find her that easily,we didn't know where she is." Mayu said.
Suddenly they heard door opening voice.

"I'm back." Yuki comes In and looked at  the stranger with her teary eyes. She slowly comes close to her.

"Rena!! " Yuki said in a weak voice, and hug her tight.

"Rena??" Mayu and Jurina said at the same time.

Yuki starts crying in stranger hug.
"I'm sorry Rena, I can't keep my promise, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, please forgive me."

The stranger lost the word from happiness And hugged Yuki back.
Yuki releases the hug and looked at stranger eyes and kissed her forehead.

Yuki looked at Mayu and Jurina.
"Mayu, Jurina, meets Rena, she is like a little sister to me."

~~~~~~~To be continue~~~~~~

Thank you for reading my boring fic.

Part two will going to update after some hours later.
« Last Edit: February 28, 2015, 01:28:03 PM by wmatsui fanfic. »

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #18 on: February 28, 2015, 11:39:09 AM »
Ah.. So the stranger is Rena
Glad yuki can remember her past
But now your future (mayu) now in front of you :3

And what child are they talking about ? I don't get it
Sorry for my stupidity author-san
Thanks for an update, looking forward to next chapter^^

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #19 on: February 28, 2015, 11:47:47 AM »
Ah.. So the stranger is Rena
Glad yuki can remember her past
But now your future (mayu) now in front of you :3

And what child are they talking about ? I don't get it
Sorry for my stupidity author-san
Thanks for an update, looking forward to next chapter^^
Thank you for reading my fic thank you so much For commenting too.


Did you read chapter 2 there you can find information about child

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