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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #20 on: February 28, 2015, 01:32:03 PM »
Ah.. So the stranger is Rena
Glad yuki can remember her past
But now your future (mayu) now in front of you :3

And what child are they talking about ? I don't get it
Sorry for my stupidity author-san
Thanks for an update, looking forward to next chapter^^
Thank you for reading my fic thank you so much For commenting too.


Did you read chapter 2 there you can find information about child
So the child is connected mayu, jurina and sae, acchan. hmm i wonder who is that child..

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #21 on: February 28, 2015, 04:21:14 PM »
I'm back sorry for making you wait.  Here is part 2 hope you enjoy, 



Chapter 4 part 2





"ACCHAN!!!!ACCHAN!!!Wake up!!" sae start knocking Acchan room door hardly.

'Arrrgh!! Why I can't  sleep peacefully in my own room??'Acchan put her hand on the ears.
"SHUT UP!!! You will going to break the door." Acchan yelled.
 
"Vampire Queen, Takamina is waiting you in the living room."sae said as she stopped knocking the door.

'What!!!! Takamina!!' Acchan quickly get up from the bed, and run to the bathroom, she takes a shower in 20 minutes, and wear some nice clothes, and run to the living room.

She saw Takamina is sitting on the sofa waiting for her.

"Good morning."Acchan greeted her nervously and sit beside her.

"Goodnight you mean."Takamina replied.

"Ehhh."

"It's night outside."

"Ah,Well, for us, it's morning, because we wake up in the night and sleep In morning."Acchan start laughing awkwardly.

"So, what make you visit me??"

Takamina looked at Acchan." I want us back,I want us to become friends like before ,trust and help each other, like we used to do before 43 years ago. I want to trust you again."

Acchan smiles."Me too, I want the same thing as you I'm happy that you don't hate me."

"So I take it as yes."

Acchan smiles and hug Takamina." From now take care for me as your childhood friend."

"Let's work together."Takamina replied and hugged Acchan tight.

"Takamina I can't breath."

Outside the room sae who was listening their talk, fainted from Shock.
'What is going on, am I dreaming? Someone help me!! '

~~~~~At Yuki place~~~~~~~
Jurina standing on the building roof, staring beautiful view of the night.
Suddenly she hears beautiful voice coming from somewhere.Jurina shocked and start following the voice, The voice start getting close to her.

" Wanderer, mad with love,"

" What do you search for."

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."

Jurina shocked, ' It can't be.' she thought, and start running toward the sound.

"You roam the streets, end to end,"

"You laugh, you cry,"

"You urge every passerby,"

"Hiding the hurt in your smile"

"That you belong to all the world Yet no one is yours to hold."

"WHO ARE YOU??" Jurina yelled.

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for."

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."

"COME OUT."Jurina yelled and continue running, The sound starts getting weak.

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for??"

"Asking people far and wide, Where the one does reside."

Jurina stopped running and start flying."Show yourself whoever you are!!"

"Wanderer, mad with love, What do you search for??"

Saying this the voice disappears.Jurina stopped at the top of a building and start looking around,but she didn't find anything.

*********

Mayu feeling thirsty, she opens the fridge and takes out blood pack and start drinking.
Suddenly someone hugs Mayu from behind.

"Mayuyu~~."Yuki said as she tight her hug.

Mayu choked the drink. "Yu-ki!!"
Mayu shattered."Wh-at ha-ppe-nd??"

Yuki kiss Mayu hair." Mayuyu!!"

."Y-Yes!! "

"Arigatou, for staying with me all this time and helping me."Yuki hid her face in Mayu neck.

"Eh, it's OK,no need for it." Mayu start getting nervous. Yuki starts kissing Mayu neck gently.Mayu gulped

"Yu-ki!! "

"How about going date tomorrow??" keep kissing.

"Da-te!!!! "

"Let's take Jurina and Rena with us."

"Ah, sound good."

Yuki give last kiss at Mayu cheek" Goodnight Mayuyu." and leaves to her room.
Mayu froze in her spot while  holding the blood pack in her right hand, her blood going up and down.it feels like she is dreaming.
"I'm in heaven."  she giggles.

***********

Rena is sitting near the small pond and munching some melon pan.

"Rena." someone calls her from behind, she shocked as she looked at the owner of the voice.

"Okaasan!!!"

"It's been a long time my daughter." her mom smiles and get close and open her hand to hug her beloved daughter, but Rena stopped her and step backward, her mom shocked from her reaction.

" Rena what happened? Don't you miss your mom??"

" Mom?? You call yourself Mom!! I HATE YOU!!!"Rena yelled

"Re-na!!! Why are you saying this. I came here to take you with me to the home." Rena mom said.

Rena starts laughing , the tears start falling from her eyes.she gets close to her mom and give her a strong punch in the stomach, her mom fall down on her knee and start coughing.

"You bitch, just go and die, never appear front of me again, and don't forget to tell your beloved husband that I will going to kill him with my own hand." saying this Rena leave her mom in pain and fly away.

~~~~~~~to be continue~~~~~~~
« Last Edit: February 28, 2015, 06:02:02 PM by wmatsui fanfic. »

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #22 on: March 01, 2015, 12:02:20 AM »
kyaaa.. Mayuki moment, love it!
And then rena's mom appear it'll be interesting
Thanks for update author-san

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #23 on: March 01, 2015, 04:34:00 AM »
Yuki finally remember her past

W8 i thiugh Yuki and Rena are suppose to be lover why did she said 'like sister'??

What they been fightings for all the years for if there is not fobid the two spiecies dating each other?

Who is that child?!?...was it's Rena?!

Update soon

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #24 on: March 02, 2015, 11:27:31 AM »
What !!?  I'm a little confused!!,
Update soon!

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #25 on: March 02, 2015, 08:12:07 PM »
Hello everyone I'm back with next chapter,  Thank you for reading and commenting at my fic *bow* I'm glad that you enjoy my lam fic


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#mayukishipper : Thanks for reading ,I'm Glad that you enjoy it, and I will make sure to make you see more interesting things in the future xd



#kirozoro:  Thank you for reading my fic,  yes you are right renayuki supposed to be lover, but why yuki call her as sister, we will going to find out later please wait with us.



#Arche1992:  sorry for making you confuse,  here is update hope you enjoy it.



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Thank you everyone sorry for bad grammar hope you enjoy here is update.





Chapter 5 : Date





As the alarm rings, Mayu quickly get up from the bed and run to the bathroom, take a hot shower and wear some beautiful clothes, put on light makeup, and run to the living room while grinning.

Rena is sitting in dining table eating melon pan, and Jurina watching TV, Yuki also comes out from her room.

She looked at Rena, her eyes are red, like she was crying all night, 'what happened to her?'Yuki thought.

"Why two of you not get ready yet??"Yuki take remote from Jurina's hand and switch the TV off. "Stop watching the TV and get ready, we are going on a date"

"DATE!!!" Rena chocked and looked at Yuki,

"Didn't Mayu told you we are going on date today, hurry up!"

~~~~~in restaurant~~~~~~

"Na Acchan aren't we supposed to find the child??"Takamina said while watching Acchan who were eating beef stick.

"Yes, why??" putting another piece of stick in her mouth.

"Because it's been a half hour and we are sitting here and eating, aren't you full yet??"

"It's been while when I have eaten beef meat, beside this restaurant have very tasty meat."

'Aren't they supposed to find the child?'Sae said while watching them from the roof of a building.
'Ah, I'm hungry seeing them eating like this I want to eat too, but I can't go down there what if Acchen see me, she will get angry, Acchan please don't fall for her, dating a vampire is not ALOUD.'

•••••••••••••••
Yuki and Mayu walking while holding hands, Jurina and Rena walking behind them.
Yuki looked at them.

"What's with  the long face , come on enjoy the date, see the weather is nice, and the place is beautiful.and Rena, don't you want to see the beautiful World, then why you are not enjoying??"

"Hey Jurina, what happened with you , don't you want to go date with Rena Chan, come on enjoy, you will not going to have a beautiful chance like this to get close to her." Mayu winked at Jurina.

"So guys where are we going first??" Jurina said In Cheerful voice.

"Yes, Jurina this is what I hoped from you." Yuki said while smirking.

"Let's go and buy some clothes." Mayu said.

"Great idea, let's go." Yuki holds Rena and Jurina hand, and drag them to the cloth shop.

************

"Eto, why we are here??"

"To buy some clothes."

"But we supposed to find the child!!"

"Don't worry, We are going to find her, first, let's buy some nice clothes."

'Ehh,now what are they doing in clothe shop,you should find the child Acchan!!'

•••••••••••••
"Wait!!" Rena stopped and looked at the beef restaurant."How about we eat something first, I'm angry!!"

"Sound good, let's eat beef stick, i hear they cook tasty beef in this restaurant." Jurina said.

"OK, let's go!!" Yuki said and drag them to the restaurant.

*********
"Minami what you think which dress looks good on me??" Acchan asked while showing dress's to Takamina.

"I don't know choose anyone you like."

"Come on Minami help me little." Acchan pouted.

•••••••••••••
"Mayuyu, say Ah."

"Eh, I can eat by myself Yuki." blushing.

"You not like eating with my hand!!"

"No, no I don't mean  that."

"Then Say Ah!!"

"Ah."

"Rena Chan, please eat slowly you will going to chock like this."Jurina said worrying as she saw Rena eating like a mad person.

"Mmmmph Mmmmmph Mmmmph!!!"

"What are you saying I can't understand??"

"Mmmmmmph Mmmmmmph."

Yuki looked at Rena and smiles."Don't talk while eating Rena Chan."

"How about going to the Disney island after this??" asked Jurina.

"Eh, Disney island! We aren't child Jurina! Beside it's already night." replied Mayu.

Yuki kiss Mayu lips."Who said that we are older, we are still child Mayuyu."

"Kawaaii." Jurina claps her hand.

'Kawaii!! What is cute about them?Tsk from when Black and nazumi suit each other? Black always suits with gekikara, Blackgeki!!!' from anger Rena forgets to control her power and Yuki heard her mind.

'I'm sorry Rena, I don't have any other choice , you have to forget me.'

********
After buying some clothes Acchan and Takamina standing on the roof of a building, watching the beautiful View of the night .

"We supposed to find the child, but look like we  are on the  date." Takamina sigh.

Atsuko giggle "Don't you like it watching the beautiful city together as we used to do before??"

"Na Atsuko, do you still love him??"

"Who?? "

"That child's father??"

"Talking about child, what is her name??"Acchan trying to change the topic.

Takamina sighed, again, she tries to run away.after a few silent she speak.

"Rena, her name is Oshima Rena."

••••••••••••••
Yuki, Mayu and Jurina looking for clothes,  and Rena  just standing quietly staring at mayuki.
After shopping some nice clothes they head to the night club.
"Yahoo let's drink as much as we want." Yuki order 5 bottle of beer.

"Na, Rena Chan are you going to be OK, I mean do you have ever drank before." Jurina said as she saw Rena start drinking.

"Do I look you a little child who can't drink??" Replied Rena in a cold way as she drinks a second glass of beer.

Rena glared at Mayuyu, 'You will see Mayu, you will see!!'

*********

"Hello madam, how can I help you? "

"I need one room with single bed for one night."Acchan replied.

"Of course, wait a minute,here you go." The reception gives them room key"Have nice day."

"Eh, Acchan why w-we are he-re??"

"To take some rest any problem?"

"But why here??"

"Ehhhh, Now why they in l--l--lo-v e HOTEL??'NOOO ACCHAN ITS WRONG." Faint.

'Eh!!' Sae looked at Rena who were walking with Jurina, Mayu and Yuki,to the night club.
'I found her,' I should leave Acchan and catch her,  wait for me.' sae smirk and walk behind them and enter to the night club.  'What a weird place is this,where they go??'

"Hello handsome." a young lady come close to sae and put her hand on the sae neck.

"Eh, w-what yo-u wa-nt.?? " sae shutter.

"Don't be shy and come with me, let's enjoy our night together." The young lady drags her to the room.

"Ano, I'm n-not th-at  ki-nd of per-son!!"

"Don't worry handsome, everyone like this In the beginning, but they enjoy it In the end." The young lady whispered, as she slowly starts Removing sae shirt.

'Acchan help me, please help me, I don't want this, Sayaka will going to kill me.'

"ple-ase do-n't do th-is!!" sae pleaded.
Without any warning The lady start kissing sae Passionately.

Sae froze in her spot , she starts enjoying it, but suddenly Sayaka angry face come to her mind.
'I can't do this, it's wrong.' Thinking this she quickly push the lady on the floor and run outside in full speed  without looking back.

•••••••••••

Rena grabs Mayu hand and drag her outside, Jurina shocked from her reaction, and quickly run to the bathroom to call Yuki for help.

Rena glared at Mayu "Let's fight, if you win Yuki is yours, and if I win, she is mine!!" Rena challenged her.

"Wa-it  what are you talking about, I think you drink too much ." Mayu get confused

"Why don't you want to fight or you can't fight." Rena start giggling.

"It's not like...."
Without any warning Rena threw a strong punch at Mayu and make her fall on the ground, everyone in the club shocked and the girls start screaming. Rena didn't stop and start kicking Mayu,she holds Mayu from the collar and make her stand up.

"You are so weak." she giggles and gives another strong punch at her face and make her nose and lips bleed, Rena punch was so strong to handle if Mayu was a human she was sure she have died yet.

"Hitting me like this will going to make Yuki hate you more." Mayu said as she quickly stood up. And with all her power, gave Rena a strong punch in the stomach.
Rena start laughing and biting her nails."Is this all you have mice? Your punch was not painful at all."

"RENA STOP IT NOW."Yuki Come running and grab Rena hand and give her flying kick,that make her hit to the wall.
Yuki looked at Mayu and run toward her.

"Mayuyu are you okay ??" She holds Mayu and wipe the blood from her lips with her thumb.
Jurina run toward Rena."Rena Chan are you okay??" she saw tears in her eyes, Jurina hug Rena gently.

~~~~~~~
Sae enter into the castle without making any sound, she starts walking slowly into the room.

"Where were you??" sae froze in her place she slowly looked at the voice's owner her body melted like ice cream.

"S-Sayaka!!!"

"Do you enjoy it??" Sayaka come close to her.

"Enj-oy?? I don't know what are you talking about, I was stalking Acchan, nothing more."
Sayaka put her hand on the Sae cheeks.
"OH really?? Then the marks of lipstick on your face are blood??"

"Eh, it has been just an accident, nothing more, Sayaka believe me, I  love you, only you."
Sayaka grab her hand tightly and drag her to the room.

"Say-aka whe-re are you drag-ging me??"

"To the HELL!!! "

**********
Takamina sitting in the bed,her blood is going up and down, she is afraid, she didn't have any idea, what will going to happen with her.
'Atsuko is taking a shower.what should I do? I'm not ready about this thing.' As she hears bathroom door opening voice, Takamina quickly lay on the bed and close her eyes.
She hears footsteps coming close to the bed, Takamina heart starts beating fast, she closes her eyes tightly, The footsteps get closer, Atsuko slowly lay on the bed close to her, and  wrap her hand on Takamina shoulder, and give a quick kiss on her cheek.

"Goodnight Bakamina." Atsuko said while smirking.

•••••••••••••
" Hello, anybody is home.??" Yuko slowly enters to the room she shocked as she saw sae upside down.

"Sae Chan, what happened with you? Who did this to you?? "Yuko said and open sae and put her down.

"This all happened because of Acchan, because of her I stuck in the strange place with a beautiful lady,she tries to kiss and I run from that  strange place, but she lifts her kiss mark on me and Sayaka saw it, and I ended up like this. Wait, what are you DOING HERE??" sae shocked as she saw Yuko in the castle.

" I come to visit my old house, any problem??"

"Eh, how dare you come after betraying us,  do you think we will going to forgive you, never ever dream about it."

"I haven't done anything wrong, so why should I ask for forgiveness??"

"What, you married to  vampire daughter, and have a child from her, and I have found her Acchan will going to kill her soon."

~~~~~~~~~To be continue~~~~~~~~~
« Last Edit: March 02, 2015, 08:30:27 PM by wmatsui fanfic. »

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #26 on: March 03, 2015, 04:42:36 AM »
Hee i though rena love jurina

RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #27 on: March 03, 2015, 10:39:32 AM »
Yes! My guessing is right XD
Hahaha...
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #28 on: March 03, 2015, 02:09:47 PM »
What the..
Rena i beg you please don't hurt mayu
Is yuki kiss mayu just wanna make rena jealous or yuki really love mayu ?
Thanks for update author-san^^

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #29 on: March 05, 2015, 04:38:49 PM »
Hello everyone I'm back with update
I'm glad that you guys enjoy it (♡˙︶˙♡).

First I thanks for silent reader and those who comments. Thank you so much.

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#kurogumi : Hi and thank you for reading, I hope that you read all the chapters then you will understand that Rena loves Yuki ^_^.



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Well I think Yuki live mayu and Rena at same time.@_@  thank you for reading.

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Sorry for bad grammar and mistakes hope you enjoy it. *cathappy*

I decides to write some funny moments before making my readers cry, I'm not good with comedy so I don't know if my fic is lame hope you enjoy (๑♡∀♡๑)

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Chapter 6 part 1




"Ah, please be gentle Yuki, I can't hold anymore,Ah,"Mayu sweating badly.

"Hold on Mayu, just little more."

"I can't, I,m on my limits,Ahhhh."Mayu scream at last time and faint.

"Mayu, Mayu are you okay, Mayu." Yuki shakes Mayu body.
Mayu opened her eyes and looked at Yuki.
"Am, I still alive?? "

"Of course, silly you are alive, how is your arm now??"

Mayu looked at her arm and moved it up and down, left and right, "Waaoo, it's absolutely fine, I didn't feel any pain, you are amazing Yukirin, You are the best."Mayu jump at Yuki and hug her. Yuki  hugged her back and bury her face in Mayu neck, Mayu shocked as she hears sobbing voice.

"Yuki? Yuki what happened, why you are crying??"

"I'm sorry Mayu I'm sorry, please forgive me
I'm sorry!!"

"Don't say like this Yuki it was not your fault, I should be sorry because of my childish act you two never be together again, I'm sorry Yuki it was my mistake."

"If I had realized your feelings at that time, you have not suffered that much, it was my mistake."Yuki said while sobbing.

"It's OK, Yuki it was not your mistake."
Yuki and Mayu continue apologizing until they fall asleep while hugging each other.

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Jurina and Rena sitting outside on the couch quietly,Jurina decide to break the silence.

"Anoo, are you okay."

"Do I look you okay?? "

"No!! "

"Then why are you asking??"

"......."

"Stupid!! "

"What did you say??"

" I say stupid do you have any problem??"

"How dare you say stupid to your senpai??"

"What senpai, hahahah how old are you kiddo??"

"What kiddo!! I'm 28 years old don't dare you mess with me!!"

"So young!!"

"What young, I'm older than you,  how old are you, huh,  20 ,22, or 19 hahahaha!!"

"I'm 40 year old kiddo." Rena smack Jurina head.

"What 40 hahahahahah I can't stop laughing obaachan!!"

"What how dare you call me obaacha!!"

"Why got any problem obaachan??"

" Kiddo."

"Obaacha."

"Kiddo."

"obaacha."

*SILNECE*

"Sing me song kiddo!!"

"Don't want!!"

"Sing me song I want to hear the song."

" I'm not your personal servant."

"SING ME SONG OR ELSA I WILL UPSIDE DOWN THE WHOLE HOUSE,"

*BAM*

"Can you two shut your mouth, we are sleeping here." Mayu yelled.

"It's still midnight, there is still 4hour in sunshine."

"As if we care, we are sleeping here so please don't disturb us."

"LOLALOLALOLALOALALALA.... "

*FLAASH *

"SHUT UP YOU MORONS." This time Yuki throws cold water at Rena.

"Stop sleeping you lazy girls, enjoy the beautiful cold night, don't you know that how  much  expansive is every minutes are in your life is and you are wasting them while sleeping."

"We are tired and  want to REST!!"

"And I will not going to let you rest peacefully ." Rena takes white flour in a big bowl and throws all of the flour at Yuki and Mayu and run.

"RENA YOU BASTARD WAIT HERE. "

Rena starts running around the whole house, and break and throw everything that come in her hand.

"Mayu catches her, she will going to break all the houses."Yuki yelled while catching things that Rena throwing at them.

*Glasses *plates * chairs*Table* spoons * *toothbrush *water tab*

*SMACK *CRASH *SPANCH *SLASH *BOM *DAM*CLASH*

No one can tell if they are fighting or playing.Yuki catches the things and Mayu trying to catch Rena as for Jurina she is sitting on the sofa and laughing  hard like there is no tomorrow.

"Jurina stop laughing and help me!!" Mayu said.

The silent  night turn into earthquake,even the poor neighbour wake up from their fights. In the end Mayu throw a large blanket at Rena and Yuki jump at her, Jurina quickly bring a rope and tie Rena with it. But  this  doesn't help Rena from yelling, she starts laughing nonstop, Yuki can't help and put some melon pan in her mouth to shut her. After a few minutes later everything becomes silent, all of them fall asleep on each other.

This is the life at the same day and same hours, two person sleeping quietly while hugging each other, and at other places one person truns all the home upside down, as three people trying to stop her. And at another poor Sae, she is till hanging upside down because of Acchan, that true Yuko tried to help her, but she refused, because she didn't need help from betrayed, As for another place Yuko San is standing top of a building while watching her child who were turning all the home upside down.

~~~~~~~Yuko pov~~~~~~~~

Lololol that child, can anyone believe it that she is 40 years old, she looks like a 4 year old child, what is different just remove 0 from 40. I miss her a lot, after many years later I was   able to see my lovely daughter, I wish if I could see her mother too, I miss her too, I wonder what is she doing now. Goodnight my sweet daughter we will going to meet soon.

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Mayu opens her lazy eyes,she felt little pain in her head, she sits up while holding her head, she throws her arm up in the air and yaw, her eyes wide In shock as she saw everything is broken like some robbery had happened, but not it was not robbery that happened, something like this happens when un normal human play inside the house, the home is not the place for playing specially for vampires and werewolves. Yuki and Jurina also a wake up and start staring at each other and then they moved trier gaze to the culprit, she slowly opens her eyes and sit up like little children who just wake up from sweet dreams, she looked left and right. And then she looked at three people who staring at her like angry wolf, she quickly makes an innocent face like she hasn't done anything wrong.

"Why all of you staring at me like this, believe me it was not my mistake." she pointed at Jurina. "At that time if Jurina have accepted my request and sing a song for me, all this hasn't happened, Jurina is the real the culprit." She said in child voice.

Yuki takes a long breath and drink her anger."All of you first clean yourself and then clean all the house, NOW!!"

All of them melted from Yuki anger and run to the bathroom same time, they looked at each other,  who will be going to the bathroom first.
"How about we decide with janken." Mayu said as she saw smoke coming out of Yuki ears.

"Well, forget about  that you go first."Jurina replied she didn't want to start fights anymore.

"I will enter first."For Rena she didn't care about fights even after upsideing down all the house she wants more.

"OK, you go first. " Mayu and Jurina said.

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"Yahoo what a nice day.I had seen a very beautiful dream." Acchan smiling the sunflowers.

"Oh, really what you see."

"That we are living in one house with small families." Acchan pick up a flower and give to the Minami.

"Don't take life of the beautiful flowers let them alive, because they didn't have a long life like us, their life is too short."

Acchan smiles "You still haven't changed Takamina."

"And I will never going to change."

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" Ah, I'm tired why the heck we have to clean all tons house." Rena complained.

"Rena do you know how much expansive is every minute of our life is, so why we waste our time while sleeping and sitting on a sofa without doing anything, that's why we have to work hard, enjoy the life work hard." Yuki replied as she wiped the sweats from Rena face with a handkerchief.

"The one who upside down the whole house is Rena then why did we have to clean the home too??" Mayu asked as she cleans broken glasses.

"Because you are living in this house."

"OMG,  this chair's leg is broken, and this table glass is broken, and this cupboard is broken too, what should we do with them??" Jurina asked while taking all the broken things.

"Heel them!!"

"Eh, Why didn't we throw them and but the new one??"
Yuki glared at Jurina"If you have money, then buy a new one for me."

Rena looked at Jurina and Yuki and starts giggling, then slowly she starts stepping to the window as she reaches to the window she quickly jump and fly away.

"She runs away." Mayu pointed at the window.
"Rena come back here you troublesome obaachan." Jurina yelled.

"Leave her, in the end she will going to come back here, I will make sure to give her scary punishment."Yuki said and continue cleaning the house.

~~~~~~to be continue ~~~~~~~
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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #30 on: March 06, 2015, 02:17:48 PM »
heheh! rena-chan the spoiled brat  :mon huh2: :mon sweat:
poor sae-chan hanging upside down by acchan again :mon hanky: :mon hanky:
Yuki will giving Scary punisment for rena later  :mon evil: :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah:

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« Reply #31 on: March 06, 2015, 02:54:08 PM »
finally i could open this forum again, kind of busy with work

wow this is great now!! lol (feel like i'm being spoiled because when i opened it i found a lot new chapter kekekeke)
thank you author sama!

i like this yuki, but why mayu and jurina seem weak?? haha

what happen on the next chapter?

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« Reply #32 on: March 09, 2015, 05:57:38 PM »
Replies :

#Crosteks : Thank you  for reading my fic I'm glad that you like it,

Sae upside down by Sayaka not by Acchan.

Here is update hope you like it. ^_^


#geki geki :  Thanks for commenting *bow* you said I post short chapter so decide to post long and fast,

Mayu and Jurina is not weak just Rena is so strong.

Thank you again.



Hello everyone I'm back. *Mon sweat, *

Finally I can finish next part. *nervous *

Thank you for reading my fic and commenting it. *bow*

Here so next chapter hope you like it sorry for late and for mistake and bad grammar


Chapter 6 part 2





After cleaning all the broken house, all of them fall asleep peacefully. But after some hours later suddenly strange voice start coming out from the living room, but all of them were really tired, so none of them can able to wake up and see what's going on, until the night come and Mayu woke up from her sweet dreams, she comes out from the bedroom and as she was about going to the bathroom she stopped as she felt something strange, she looked at the  house, from the shock she can't hold herself and run to the bedroom.

"Yuki,Jurina wakes up something bad happens Wake up." She shakes them hardly.

"Um, what is it Mayu??"

Mayu can't help but throw cold water at them, to wake them.

"Kyaaaaaaa, what they heck."Jurina and Yuki yelled.

"Come out and see what had been happening while we are sleeping!!" Mayu force them and take them out from the bedroom.

As they come out of the room  they forgot to blink their eyes from shock.

"From where these things had come??" Yuki asked.

••••••••••
"Sayaka San, someone send you the letter."
The servant gives white paper to her.
Sayake takes the paper from servant hand and starts reading it.

Good morning Sayaka San.

I'm Rena your niece,*laugh * Eto actually I came at your castle in the morning and first I beat yours  two bodyguards sorry for that,*giggle * and then I took a big TV from the living room and fridge,and dining table and some plates and glasses, and also cupboard.

I know that you are angry at me, but I did this because I didn't want to see black upset and sad, she has worked hard to save money and buy all these things, but because of my childish, I broke them so I didn't have money or anything Elsa so that's why I stole them from your castle please don't hate me,  day I will make sure to return them to you.

I'm sorry and I love you, take care.

Rena.
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'Strange she didn't want to see Black upset and she stole from castle*sigh*, This is what we called a love, no matter what it take you,you do anything just to see your crush happy. Good luck if stealing the castle makes you happy then I'm happy, after all, this is your father's house, I wish if I could meet you. ' Sayake smiles and ordered her servant to free Sae who have been upside down from two days.

*********
"Oii Rena, from where the hell did you bring all these things??" Yuki asked angrily to Rena who calmly munching melon pan.

"I buy them." Rena lied.

"And from where you bring the money??"

"I soled my diamond ring." Munching melon pan.

Rena sighs in relief as she saw that Yuki buy her lie, she didn't want to tell her the truth that she stole them, because she knew Yuki will going to make her a sandwich and give to the sharks .

"You didn't have to buy all these."

"Why not I broke them, and I should repay them back." She smiles.

"Waoo the TV is so big." Mayu run toward the TV and  switch it on."Amazing!!"

"And the sofa is so warm it have fur too."Jurina starts jumping on the sofa like a little child.

"Are you happy Black??" giggle.

"Huh, ah, yes Arigatou." Yuki blushed and went to the bathroom to take a shower.

~~~~~Rena pov~~~~~~

So what thing that I haven't done yet, I had meet Black and want to date with her and have very tasty dinner, and even went to the shopping  and have fought with Mayu. I also make her angry and turn all the house upside down, and then buy new things for her even they are stolen, it's doesn't matter at least I bring them to her. Is there anything still that I have to do.

*Thinking *Thinking *Thinking *

Look like no.

Wait, I haven't had my first kiss yet!! I want to have my first kiss.

( Author : "No you also had your first kiss too."

"Rena :" O.o When?? I don't remember!!"

Author : " The day you meet Black and she bring you in her house you kissed her at that night."

"Rena: " I don't remember!! "

Author : " it's not my problem  you had your first kiss."

Rena : " I want to kiss her again, I don't remember my first kiss is not a good thing, I should remember my first kiss, I will going to kiss her again. "

Author :" How?? "

Rena : " I don't know let me think. Now go do your work and let me  do mine."

Author : " OK,   ._. ")

How should I kiss Black? Well, I can't go and capture her lips like this, if I did she will going to make my sandwich and give it to the sharks. So I have to kiss her without getting beaten or eaten from her.

Think stupid brain think.

*Thinking *Thinking *Thinking *

(Author : I got an idea ^_^."

Rena: " Really ⊙_⊙ ?? And what is that idea?? "

Author :" Just do as I told you."

Rena : OK, but dare you tell me something pervert!! *glare *"

Author : " Relax I'm not that kind of person. "

Rena : " OK, let's start.")

Rena opened the room door slowly and looked at the living room. ' OK, let's start, how to kiss your crush without getting beaten or eaten??'

STEP  ONE

Enter into the living room and sit between in your friend and crush, and put some romantic movie or drama on TV, watch it silently don't make any sound wait until the kiss sense come, as they kiss in the TV quickly make an innocent face.

STEP TWO

Look on your friend's face with an innocent face.

"Hey, Jurina!!  How do you feel when you kiss someone on the lips ??"

"Eh!! Umm...Etoo, well, I haven't kissed anyone so I don't know how it's feels." blushing.

"Then how about we kiss!!"

"Eh!!" Jurina eyes wide in shock. "Kiss is not something that you can share with anyone,you should kiss that person whom you love." her face become red.

"I see!!"

STEP THREE

Good you had hit at the point, now wait your crush to enter the empty room.

After a few minutes later, Yuki gets up and enter to the kitchen.

Yes ,Now act like  you are hungry.

"Eh,  where is my melon pan? Jurina did you see my melon pan??"

"No, I hadn't."

Now behave like you are finding your melon pan. Rena gets up from the sofa and start looking for it, first she looks at the bedroom, living room and balcony, then she enter into the kitchen.

STEP FOUR

Rena enter to the kitchen Yuki was drinking water, she slowly walks toward her and pour some water in the glass.

"Na, Black, can I kiss you?? "

Yuki spit her water and looked at Rena with shock.

"Jurina said that you can share your kiss with whom you love and I love you." Don't forget to make innocent face and eyes like a cat.

"Eh!! But I have girlfriend."

" I don't care I want to kiss, I want to know how it feels." make teary eyes.

"But  you can't kiss everyone that you love."

"Please I want to kiss, or else I will upside down all the houses."Rena put her hands on Yuki shoulder and start pushing her backward until she reaches the wall and she pined Yuki to the wall "please let me kiss you!! " Rena whispered in Yuki ears and make herself that she didn't know how to kiss,she will just going to give a quick kiss on the lips.

Slowly Yuki closed her eyes, Rena get closer to her face and capture her lips gently, they are soft and sweet, first she just touched her lips then Slowly start moving her lips then she bit Yuki's upper lips and starts kissing her Passionately  and let her enjoy the feeling then  she starts pushing her tongue to enter Yuki's mouth, as Rena tongue entered in Yuki's mouth her kiss trun into rough, she didn't wanted to waste her time because she didn't have much time they have to break their kiss as they want some air, that's why she trun her kiss into rough, and start  tasting Yuki's Rena felt Yuki lips moving with her, that's mean you successed In Your plan.
~~~~~~Yuki pov~~~~~~

As Jurina and I was sitting and watching some news suddenly Rena come and sit between us and she put some romantic drama, from when she starts like romantic things?? Anyway, we are sitting and watching romantic drama, it's so touching movie that make me cry suddenly the kiss scenes come and the boy kissed her,What a sweet moment.

"Hey, Jurina!!  How do you feel when you kiss someone on the lips ??" Rena asked to jurina how does kiss feel.

"Eh!! Um...Etoo, well, I haven't kissed anyone so I don't know how it's feel." Jurina replied

"Then how about we kiss!!"

WHAT!!! NOO, JURINA YOU CAN'T KISS HER. I looked  at Jurina she was blushing.

"Eh!!" Jurina eyes wide in shock. "Kiss is not something that you can share with anyone,you should kiss that person whom you love."

"I see!!"

Thank god she rejects her, I sighed in relief . Wait, why I'm feeling like this, I want her to forget me so it doesn't matter if she kiss jurina why I'm feeling jealous.

I should drink some water and relax my brain, I get up from the sofa and went to the kitchen and pour water in the glass, suddenly the view when Rena kissed me in the first night when we bring her home come to my mind, my face becomes red  I touched my lips I still feel her lip's, oh my god what happened to me. As I was thinking about her Rena entered into the kitchen my heart starts beating fast, she comes close to me, I hold the glass of water and start drinking the water.

"Na, Black, can I kiss you?? "

I split the water and looked at her with shock.

"Jurina said that you can share your kiss with whom you love and I love you."
She makes an innocent face and looked at me with cat eyes, my heart melted

"Eh!! But I have a girlfriend." I replied, hoping she will understand.

" I don't care I want to kiss, I want to know how it feels."

She was about to cry, no please don't cry I know how you feel, but this is wrong I don't want to lose you.

"But  you can't kiss everyone that you love."

"Please I want to kiss, or else I will upside down all the house."

She put her hand on my shoulder and pushes me backward and pin me at the wall. "Please let me kiss you!! " She whispered in my ear.

OK, relax, she didn't have kissed anyone so she didn't know how to kiss, she will just going to give me quick kiss on the lips like friends do. It's just friends kiss, nothing more. I closed my eyes and let her do what she wants, suddenly I felt something soft on my lips, she kissed me, slowly she starts moving her lips, Eh,  didn't she going to give me a quick kiss? She bit my upper lip, her kiss turned into Passionately, somehow I start enjoying it, then she starts pushing her tongue in my mouth, what should I do give her permission or no. I didn't realize and give her permission, as her tongue enter in my mouth, her kiss turn n into rough, I have no time to think about anything, all I want is her, I want to taste her, I replied her kiss and start enjoying her lips. I want her more even though I know it's wrong, but I can't stop myself. In the end, we broke the kiss because of air leak, she looked at me then went outside.

What happened now, I will never going to forget it, never, it's become one of my precious memories.

Rena I wish I could let you know that how much I love, but I can't, we can't be together.

~~~~normal pov~~~~~~

Mayu comes in the home flying from the window.

"Hola, aren't you guys bored from TV? There are fireworks in the amuseument  Park."

" Fireworks!!I want to goII want to see firework." Rena start jumping like a little child.

'Seriously, can anybody believe it that she is the same person who were kissing me a few minutes before??'Yuki thought "Let's go."

"yessssss."

Mayu hold Yuki as bride style and then three of them fly in the amuseument Park.

~~~~~~~

Acchan hold Takamina hand and start flying with her to the amuseument Park ." That demon find the child before us, let's hurry up before he kills her."

"What how can he find her that fast??"

"I don't know!!"

~~~~~~
Mayu, Jurina, Yuki and Rena come to the Amuseument Park but there was but not any firework.

"What is this where is fireworks?? " Asked Rena glaring at Mayu.

"Eh, I don't know look like it's finished,"

"Do you play pranks with us?? "

"No Rena I swear there was a firework."

"Then where is it??"

Suddenly they heard clapping sound, all of them turn their head back.

"OH, let's see what we have here."

"Jun Chan!! " Everyone shocked, Black looked at Rena with a worried face, Rena replied her with a smile.

"It's been a long time,  don't you miss me my sweet daughter??" Jun said as he starts walking towards them.
accept Rena all of them were afraid, none of them able to fight with Jun.

"What you want?? " Asked Mayu.

"I want to take my daughter with me to the  home." replied Jun

"Your daughter!! " Mayu and Jurina looked at each other.

"MOVE AWAY!! " Acchan came by flying when she came nearby Rena she remove her sword from the sheath and poke into her stomach

Takamina who was just trying to fight with Jun shocked, she didn't believe what did she saw now, did Acchan now stabbed Rena, she looked at Jun and give him strong flying kick, it was not strong enough for him but it can make him fall on the ground.

Takamina run toward Rena and Acchan, the blood were falling from Rena mouth and she falls on the ground.

"RENA." Yuki yelled and  quickly hold Rena In her hand. "Rena!!opens your eyes, please don't leave me like this RENA!! " The tear start falling from Yuki's eyes.

"Yu-ki sa-ma!! "Rena coughed.

( Flash 100 years back)

Rena didn't want to wake up sleeping princess, so she holds her as bride style and take her out from the castle.The sleeping princess wake up from loud sound that were coming.
"Rena, where are you taking me?? "

" The Assistance attack of the castle we need to get out of here soon as possible." Rena replied and start walking fast to the safe place.

"What about my father? Where is he?? " Asked princess.

"Don't worry, he is fine and fighting with enemies."

"What? How can you leave my father alone there, leave me here and go save him!! " Princess starts moving from Rena hands.

"Calm down, Yuki sama I will going to leave you in a safe place first, then I will go back and help him." Rena entered in safe cave and laid Yuki down and looked at her face last time.

"This is the safest place, no one can find you here, I'm going back I will not going to come back without your father." Rena gives a last kiss on princess forehead, as she about to get out from The cave ,Princess held her hand and looked at her with teary eyes.

"Promise me that you will going to come back??" Princess cupped Rena cheeks with her cold and soft hand and kissed her Passionately.
Rena replied the princess kiss back. They broke the kiss, Rena wipes princess tears and run outside,  as she reaches at the castle, she saw all the castle is on fire, she can't go back without princess's father so she enters the burning castle and start finding him, but she can't find him anywhere, the castle start burning from everywhere there is no way to going out, Rena starts sweating and coughing badly, she can't handle it anymore and fall down on the floor,the smiling face of Yuki comes into her mind she smiles, "Yuki sama I love you." She closed her eyes for forever.

(End of flashback)

"Rena please don't leave me again, don't you know how hard it for me to live without you."

"Yu-ki sa-ma I'm so-rry I love you ." Rena wiped Yuki tears with her shaking hands the  smile appears on her face. Rena body starts turning into blue fireflies.

"I love you too. I LOVE YOU TOO RENA SO PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!!REENAA!!!
Rena turn into blue fireflies and she flew in the sky.

 
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Sorry I can't find any good pic for blue fireflies. ╥﹏╥
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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #33 on: March 10, 2015, 08:16:49 AM »
hahah! sorry author-san my mistake hehe! that Time i'm thinking acchan on how she gonna handle rena!!
and no i know T^T you kill her why did you do that to her can she comeback to back to life again
or you something else in your mind like what acchan did to her was just show..pwease dont make rena died again..TT^TT

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #34 on: March 10, 2015, 02:23:35 PM »
What happen to Rena ?

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #35 on: March 11, 2015, 02:03:56 AM »
what?? but rena sama is alive

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« Reply #36 on: March 13, 2015, 06:44:17 AM »
heeehhh ... already chapter 6.2 ...  :mon XD:
good job author-san!!  :mon thumb:

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« Reply #37 on: March 17, 2015, 06:09:10 PM »
Hello everyone I'm back  *sweat drop *

I'm back from bottom of hell .

This time it took me 4days to write this what happens to fast writer lol.

Ok I don't have anything to say.

Thank you for reading it and also for comments .

Arigatou *bow*

Here is the update please don't leave my fic alone xd sorry for mistake and bad grammar.






Chapter 7.






Jurina and Mayu sitting beside the river. Their eyes Locked at the waterfall. The butterfly was flying around them.

"It's been Two weeks." Mayu throw a stone in the river.

"I feel sorry for Takamina-San and Yuki-chan,They locked their self in the room." Jurina put her legs in the water.

(Flashback)

"Rena please don't leave me, I love you Rena please don't go." Yuki yelled.

"Acchan what you did!!" Takamina run toward Atsuko and give her flying kick that make Acchan fly in the sky as she was about to hit the ground quickly Sae come and catch Acchan and fly away. Minami glared at Jun, he smirked and also fly away.

Jurina run toward Yuki, she holds her and give signal to Mayu and fly to the vampire castle.

(End of flashback)

"What should we do now??" Mayu staring at the  butterfly who were sitting on the flowers.

"I never thought that Rena is that child." Jurina moving her leg inside the water.

"I told you before that  I have a strange feeling, but you never believed me!! " Still staring at the butterfly.

"Mayu I have never seen any hybrid with blue fireflies!!" Trying to catch little fish.

Mayu quickly stands up."You are right,how can I don't notice about it! There is something wrong, we have to find out about Rena ability!!" Mayu grab Jurina hand and drag her to the library. "Help me to find books that has information about blue firefly hybrid.

"Haik." Jurina and Mayu start finding the book.

~~~~~~Werewolf castle~~~~~~~

Sayaka, Sae, Acchan sitting in the living room.

"Sae can you please stop crying! It's been two hours and you are crying like baby!"

"What I'm to all of you? I'm living in this house from  23 years, but why all of you treat me like strangers?WHY?? All of these years you are lying to me saying that vampires are our enemies, but in the end all of that  just lie. I hate you I hate all of you!!" Sae run outside.

"SAE!! SAE come back here!!" Sayake yelled.

"Leave her let her be alone for some time." Acchan said and hide her face in the pillow.

"What are you going to do about Takamina? Look like she didn't remember all story that your grandfather used to tell you, did she??"

Acchan shake her head" I thought she remembered!!"

~~~~~~vampire castle~~~~~~

Mayu and Jurina turn all the library upside down, but they didn't find any book that can give them information about Rena ability.

"Strange how come no one have write anything about her?? " Jurina looks at the old books.

"Look like there is not any hybrid like her!" finished finding the book. " Let's ask Shasihara-San."

"Do you think she now about it?? "

"I think so,let's go!!"

~~~~~~
Jurina and Mayu entered at Shashihara Rino office 
 "Hello good evening Master." Mayu and Jurina greeted.

"Evening student!!" Shashi greeted them back.

"Master, we come here to ask you about something!!"

"Yes what it is??" drinking the blood

"We want to know about hybrid who have blue fireflies!! "

Shashi chocked the blood and looked at the with shock. "Why you want to know about it??"

"Because Rena-san turn into blue fireflies!!"

"There is not any kind of hybrid like that."Shashi looked at the sky through the window. "I never know that Rena has black blood."

"Black blood!!" Jurina and Mayu shocked.

"In my all life I have never seen any hybrid with blue fireflies, I just saw hybrid with black fireflies." Shashi said .

"Black fireflies!! I never see black fireflies."

"Before 200 hundred years ago the son of my uncle was hybrid and he has black fireflies, he was a monster he took hundreds of innocent lives and destroy many villages. He was to strong no one can beat him, but in the end he killed by my father. It was a really sad story."Shashi looked at Mayu and Jurina. "Rena has blue fireflies, do you know what that means??" Both of them shake their heads.
"Rena is an innocent child who have very sweet heart she never hurts anyone or ever thought about it, she is still like a child who just come out of her mother's belly even though she will going to be 40 after one month later, but she is still innocent. She saved herself very well, that's why she have blue fireflies,she is an angel."
Shashi gets up from the chair and walk toward the window. "She is the most powerful person whose liver if you eat, you can control all the world with your one hand."

Mayu and Jurina eyes wide with shock, it feels like they are dreaming.

"But she is died. " Jurina said.
~~~~~~~~~
Shashi  stopped walking as she reaches in the holy place she start climbing at one of the mountains, as she reaches at the large cave she stopped and looked at the person who were sitting at the stone and staring her back.

"It's been a long time,I never thought that we will going to meet again." Shashi smiles and walk toward her.

"I also never thought it Shashi-San." That person smiles" So what make a master of vampire meet someone like me??"

"Who said I come here to meet you? I'm here to meet your daughter." Shashi sits beside her.

"My daughter!! I don't have any daughter!!"

"Come on Yuko don't lie, I want to meet her, I know she is here."

Yuko sighed " follow me!!" Saying this Yuko stand up and walk to the cave. They enter into the cave, the candle is shining everywhere inside the cave, it was silent and warm place. They entered in one room that was  Inside the cave. A beautiful girl lying in the bed. Shashi gets close to her and put her hand on the girl's cheek, then she hold her hand it was warm.

"When will she going  to wake up??" Shashi looked at Yuko.

"I don't know!!"

(Flashback)

"But she is died." Jurina said.

"She is not, she is alive, she can't die that easily, even if you cut her throat. She will going to come back in the world."

"Eh, she is alive!!" Mayu shocked."Then how come Takamina-san doesn't know about it??"

"Maybe she forgot it." Shashi looked at Mayu. "Na, Mayu Rena have a weakness and her weakness is love. Not only her, but every hybrid like her have same weakness, if the person they love die, they also die with a heart attack. You know what that means if something happens to black she will going to die and if she died the world can't be safe anymore."

"So what should I do??" asked Mayu.

"She has to forget about her that's all, you can go know I have something to do."

Mayu and Jurina bowed and went outside.

Shashi sits in her chair and take sips of blood.
"If you don't mind, can you stop hiding like this and come out Yuki-San!! " Shashi put the cup on the table.

Yuki, who was hiding behind the door and hearing their talk enter in the office and looked at Shashi.
"Is there any other way to break the curse??"

(Flashback at lady's house)

Yuki started Reading the old book that old lady gives her. She began to remember her past. As she reached at the last page, there was writing. " They two can never be together. "

Yuki shocked and looked at lady, " What does this mean, why we can't be together??"

"Because you two have been cursed by Mayu mother." The lady replied.

"What!!  Cursed how and Why?? " Yuki becomes angry.

"Mayu used to be your best friend in the past, she loves you so much, but you don't know it and she finds out that you love Rena, she becomes so angry and crazy that she locked herself in the room, after many days later when her mother opened the her room door she found her dead. Mayu killed herself with hunger, from 4 days she didn't eat anything. After that her mother becomes angry and she asked to witch to curse two if you. You two can never be together and if you try to be together one of you will going to die."

( End of flashback)

"No, there is not any other way." Shashi replied "I know that you love her, but there is not any way I'm sorry Yuki."

The tears start falling from her eyes, she runs back to the castle.

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Jurina and Mayu went to Takamina room to tell her that Rena is alive.

Suddenly Yuki comes from the behind and glared at Mayu.

"Y-Yuki what happened??"Mayu can see anger in her eyes.

"What was my mistake?? "Yuki asked

"What you mean??"

"WHAT WAS MY MISTAKE??"The tears are falling on her cheeks. "What I did to you?had I ever hurt you? Did I ever make you cry?  I cared about you and did everything that can make you happy. And you take away from me,my  most precious thing just because I can't love you and loved her. How am I supposed to know that you loved me?  How can I know when you never tell me. You always behaved in front of me like you don't care, you never showed your love to me, you always hurt me. I used to love you, more than anything, but one day I find out that you have boyfriend and my heart broke Into many pieces and then I meet Rena and I fall in love with her,I heard you died you killed yourself I wanted to know the reason but I don't find any. What was my mistake Mayu??" Yuki falls in the ground and began to cry hard. Mayu tried to hug her, but she refused.

Takamina come from outside and looked at crying Yuki, she holds her and hug her.


"I love her I want to be with her I want to live with her forever." Yuki said while sobbing.

Mayu and Jurina just stand without doing anything they don't know what should they do. Mayu new because of her Yuki had suffered so much, Mayu was so stubborn child at that time, she never knew that Yuki loved her.
Takamkina take Yuki to her room.

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"YUKI-SAMA!! " Rena opened her eyes and get up from the bed, she looked around there was a candle shining everywhere. 'Where I'm??' she thought.
She stand up and start walking.

"You wake up to?? " Rena looked at the owner of the voice. "Yuko-san!!"

"Hey, how dare you call your father with name?bad girl.!!" Yuko offered a cup of blood to Rena.
Rena giggled and take the cup"You are not my father!!"

"I married your mother than I'm your father, accept it or not I'm your father!!"

"OK, Otou-San ,arigatou for helping me." Rena  bowed ."

"Eh, Otou-san you are crying!!"

Yuko wipes her tears, " I have waited 40 years to hear this word, I'm so HAPPY."

Rena hugs Yuko " Don't worry Otou-san no matter what, will going to happen in the future, you will stay as my father you are the best father in the world."

Yuko hugged back her daughter." Arigatou my sweet daughter ,finally I meet you."

Rena release the hug and looked around "Where are we??"

"This is holy place you are safe here no demons can enter here, so we will going to stay here until you turn 40 and able to wake your power, then we will going back and the real fight will begins."

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Takamina come out from Yuki room and close the door.

"How is she??" Mayu asked.

"She fall asleep." Minami patted Mayu shoulder." Everything will going to be fine."

"Takamina-San where were you??" Jurina said.

"Two of you get ready yourself, we will going on a mission. "Saying this Minami went to her room.

Jurina and Mayu looked at each other and walked to their room.

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Sae come running and start knocking at Acchan door, Acchan open the door and looked at shocked Sae no word come out from her mouth, she just standing front of her room while pointing outside.

Acchan understand what she means, she walked at the window and looked outside, she saw Takamina standing outside with her strongest fighters.

"Are they come here to fighting with us?? " Sayake asked.

"Maybe let's go down and see what she want!! "
Saying this Acchan went downstairs and open the main door and come outside.

"Oi, Acchan bring your fighters and get ready, we have some work to do." Takamina said.

Jurina and Mayu standing behind her with shock. 'What will going to happen, are we going to fight with them.' Jurina though.
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Shall I continue??


Seriously I don't know if I make it wmatsui or yukirena how about if you guys vote. More then three votes will going to win.

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #38 on: March 18, 2015, 01:01:43 AM »
MaYuki and WMatsui please  :cry:

It's so sad to hear that mayu killed herself because of yuki :(

But... ah i just want mayuki wmatsui :(

Update soon

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Re: The real betrayed( kojiyuu: Atsumina : mayuki : wmatsui)
« Reply #39 on: March 18, 2015, 08:11:23 AM »
i want this one as mayuki and wmatsui :lol:

and hurry update it, i'm really curious about what will happen

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