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Offline cisda83

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 7 (13/06/05)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #60 on: June 06, 2013, 10:19:41 AM »
Wah... Ray... was in love with Kai.. the real Kai... But he died...

If only he didn't die... Ray would probably do whatever she could to be with Kai

Poor Ray to lose her fiance like that.... IF ONLY  :cry:

Yeah... Ray and Kai (Minami) kissed each other... to give Ray the closure that she wanted... the only regret Ray had...  :inlove:

Poor Atsuko for needing to see that... She was so heart broken... and she could not even sleep because of it....  :cry:

Kai was teasing Atsuko... about her jealousy... well at least Kai put an end to Atsuko's broken heart...

What was it that made Kai being hugged and kissed by Yuko... even need him to have a date with Yuko?

He would help Yuko to get Haruna by having a date with Yuko....?

Interesting.... I think all his friends will be tailing him around during his date with Yuko?

What's the plan to make Haruna falls in love with Yuko?

What's the next plan about Mono Clan...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 7 (13/06/05)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #61 on: June 06, 2013, 11:21:44 AM »
Thanks for your wonderful fic. I've just read it after all this time, sorry. :nervous

I knew it. Minami is disguising herself as her dead brother. Poor Ray.... :smhid :smhid

LOL can't wait to see what Kai has planned to help Yuko to get Kojiharu.

Anyway, Tomochin seems to move on from Kai quite fast and she looks like she's accepting Kai and Atsuko's prospect of them being together. Hmm... this is just a small request from me, but, could you add Tomo~mi as well, just so that Tomochin wouldn't the forever alone in here?

Again, thank you for the wonderful fic :bow:

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 7 (13/06/05)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #62 on: July 10, 2013, 09:03:35 PM »
@correnereyes: Tell me about it. I'll update my others when I have the time. Thanks for reading and for commenting.

@cisda83: Yeah, I kind of felt for Ray in this chapter :cry:. Kai just want to give a last memory for her, how nice XD. Acchan is opening up more to Kai. Kai was pitying Yuko so giving the chance to advices to her would actually help her to official get her NyanNyan. Thanks for reading and commenting.

@stv-wong: It's okay, new readers are always welcome :lol: Yeah, poor Ray for losing the love of her life but at least she sort of moved one. I'll see what I can do to squeeze Chiyuu in there, I kind of plan the whole story already and I had other plans for Tomochin so I don't know. Let's see what's going to happen.

To everyone: Sorry for the late update again :P. Please forgive me :bow: I've been really busy and was also trying to find a part-time job to earn some money and to pass time during my summer vacation. Thank you for being patient and here's the 8th chapter. I may say this all the time thought most of you say otherwise, it's not a really good chapter but I really do hope you'd like this chapter despite how lame I think it is.

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Chapter 8
   After school, Yuko dragged Kai out of class and out of the school ground wanting to find out everything about her NyanNyan and to hear everything from Kai for advices. They stopped for a while as they looked for a place to talk privately.

“Why don’t we go in that café?” Yuko asked, pointing at a café near them.

They walked into the café and went to a table as they waited for a waitress to take their orders. Once a waitress approached them, they ordered cups of coffee and slices of cakes as they begun to talk.

“So what kind of advices are you going to give me?” Yuko asked while eating her cake as she stared at the boy across her.

“Well, you actually started quite well without me saying a thing in the beginning.” Kai answered as he looked around him recognizing a small group sitting in a secluded spot of the café watching them secretly.

“What do you mean?”

“My first advice was to make her jealous and you already made her jealous.” The boy answered, resting his elbows on the table as her rested his chin on his hands. “Maybe you haven’t noticed it yet but just so you know, our friends are spying on us right now. And just being the both of us alone in here can actually make Kojiharu jealous.” He whispered earning a surprising look from the girl.

“Can you play along with me?”

Yuko nodded in response and smiled cutely and shyly to her new found friend as she continued to eat her cake silently.

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Meanwhile, Mariko, Atsuko, Riku, Kuu, Tomochin and Haruna were sitting in a secluded part of the café as they tried to hear what the two were talking about.

“Just what are they saying?” Tomochin asked as they discreetly watched the two’s every movement.

“I can’t hear anything. Damn it Kai, just what are you playing?” Haruna whispered.

“Shut up! Look! Kai said something to her.” Riku silenced them as they noticed Yuko’s surprising look.

“Is it just me or did Yuko nodded her head and smiled at him cutely? What kind of question did he asked?” Mariko asked as the group noticed a quite angry Haruna puffing her cheeks like an angry child wanting some ice-cream.

“Wow! Kai is in the zone!” Kuu said earning two strong smacks from Haruna and Atsuko. “Ow! Hurtful! Why are you hitting me? Don’t tell me you girls are jealous?” He rubbed both his sore arms with a pout on his face.

“No way you guys are jealous? I never thought you’d actually fall that deep Acchan?” Tomochin whispered into Atsuko’s ear earning a cute blush from the girl.

“Guys they’re leaving!” Mariko stated and they all gasped in shock as they saw the two starting to hold hands and walked out of the café.

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After eating their light snacks, Kai asked for the check and paid for both of their snacks. He got up and held his hand towards Yuko telling her to take it as she did; they entwined their fingers and left the café while Kai smirked discreetly watching the group trying to spy on him and Yuko.

They walked into the street of Tokyo as they entered the arcade. Yuko and Kai were having so much fun playing one games after another. Kai won a stuff toy and gave it to Yuko as they both smiled happily.

Hours had passed and it was getting a bit late. Yuko wanted to pass by the park to rest a little after whole lots of fun in the arcade. She sat on the swings as she begun to swing back and forth.

“Wait here. I’m going to get us some drinks.” Kai announced earning a nod from the girl as her left towards the nearest vending machine.

The group obviously followed them all the way. They watched everything they did and two among them; namely, Haruna and Atsuko were furious with jealousy at every action they did. Hand-holding, clinging against each other like two object glued together.

Suddenly, they saw a bunch of men approaching Yuko with interest seen in their eyes. They begun to hit on her getting her attention.

“Hey you alone?” A man said as he removed his sunglasses from his eyes smirking as he stared at Yuko from head to toe his tongue sticking out a little.

“I’m sorry; I’m with someone right now.” She replied coldly glaring at those men in disgust.

“Why don’t you just leave him and have fun with us? We’ll show you a great time.”

As Kai walked back to the park with two cans of juice in his hands; he noticed that Yuko was surrounded by men. He frowned slightly taking a better look on the men’s faces.

‘Eh? Aren’t they Mono’s men? What are they doing here?’ He thought as he slowly walked closer and closer.

Once arriving near them, Yuko called his name as the men turned towards his direction with a glare.

“Could you be her boyfriend?” The man asked as he grabbed the girl’s arm and pulled her towards him. “If you don’t mind, we’ll take her and play with her a little.”

Kai stood silent. The group were just watching worry apparent. Haruna, Kuu and Riku were gritting their teeth finally realising who were these men were. Since Tomochin, Mariko and Atsuko were here, they didn’t want any of their friends to get involve with their affairs.

“Guys what do we do? We can’t just leave them there and get hurt by these scumbags.” Atsuko asked worried for her friends who were standing in the middle of the gang.

“And what? Get caught later after?” Kuu said also trying to hold his body from going near where his cousin was.

Same went for Haruna and Riku, they didn’t want to appear out there. If those men recognize Kai and they appeared to help him, the men would obviously tell their boss who were behind the killings at his household.

“What’s that suppose to mean, surely you can’t just leave them like that. What if something bad happen to them?” Mariko said about to stand up to help her friends but Riku prevented her from doing so.

“Kai may not look like it but he’s a tough one. He didn’t go to military school in the US for nothing you know.” Riku said and just told them to watch.

Without any warning, Kai advanced towards the man holding the girl and grabbed his wrist tightly gripping on it. His gripped was so tight that the man let go of Yuko’s arm as Kai took her away from the man and let go of his hand. Pulling the girl closer to him, he checked around her body for any injuries.

Kai told her to stay behind him and to stay close to him. The man kept rubbing his wrist as he gritted his teeth in pain and approached the boy ready to punch the lights out of him but to no avail, Kai dodged it and punched the man three times on the face which made him stumbled and fell on the ground.

The other men were trying to attack the boy. One of them wrapped an arm around Kai’s neck attempting to choke him while another was about to punch him but that still didn’t work as Kai punched the man in front of him and pulled the arm around his neck over his head and grabbed the face of the other as he twisted the man’s body and watched him fall with a loud thud.

Another one ran towards him like he was going to tackle him but Kai prevented it as he kicked his guts and kneed his chin. He punched another approaching man and grabbed his arm and slammed his body on the ground. Again, another man ran towards as Kai brought his arm up hit it on the man’s chest really hard while the man body fell on the ground motionless.

The man earlier got back up to punch Kai again but his punch was deflected as he grabbed his hand and kicked him on the shin and fell on his knee. Kai gave the final blow and the man fell unconscious.

Kai stood up straight looking around him as all the men were on the ground groaning in complete agony. Another man approached the scene wondering what was going on. Kai was surprise the man was none other the second son of the Mono clan. Yuko hid behind Kai not knowing what that man was going to do to them. She could tell that that man was leader of the gang.

“That’s impressive kid.” The man commented as he nonchalantly approached the boy.

“Well…I did karate and judo when I was a kid.”

Kai looked nervous. If the man recognized him, this could turn out really bad.

‘Where have I seen that face before?’ The man thought as he frowned slightly. “What did these idiots do this time?”

“Um…” Kai stared at Yuko for a second panic evident in their eyes. “They were trying to hit on my girlfriend here.” He answered as he gulped nervously.

“I see. I apologize for the trouble; I’ll take care of them.” The man bowed.

Kai and Yuko nodded as Kai grabbed Yuko hand and left park immediately. When the man stood up straight, he stared at the boy’s back intently thinking of where he saw his face.

“I definitely saw him before…but where?” The man walked to his men and stopped to one of them knowing that he started the whole thing. “What are you trying to do? You just embarrass my name with your stupidity. I can’t believe it, beaten up by a kid. I don’t need a bunch of weakly like you.” He took out his handgun and shot all of them in the head; he called someone to clean up the dirty mess.

The group ran away from the scene after Kai and Yuko left. Kai walked the girl to her house.

“That was really amazing Kai.” Yuko said earning a thank you from the boy. “Thanks for saving me. Looks like the date didn’t end like we wanted to.”

“Tell me about it. We should continue this some other time; we didn’t finish our mission yet.” Kai sighed and wink at the girl as she giggled knowing what he meant.

“Thanks again. I’ll see you at school.”

Yuko kissed him on the cheek and entered her home leaving Kai alone in his deep thoughts.

‘I wonder if he recognized me’ He thought as he walked away. ‘It doesn’t matter. I have eliminate him as soon as possible.’

TBC

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That's it for the chapter. Hope you guys enjoyed it. :)

Please leave your comments. XD

Until next time...Ciao! :lol:

[EDIT]: God I hate it how short it looks in here than in Word!
I'll say "I love you" to the person I love
Even if these feelings aren't returned, saying "I love you" to the person you love
That is the most beautiful thing in the world

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #63 on: July 11, 2013, 02:05:26 AM »
An update finally. Thank you.

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #64 on: October 18, 2013, 08:25:38 PM »
I'm really looking forward for ur update. .... onegaishimassu  :bow: :banghead:

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #65 on: October 19, 2013, 03:03:36 AM »
Well the plan to make Haruna jealous is working wonderfully

And it also give extra effect on Atsuko...

Throwing one stone for two birds....

But it end quite dangerously for Kai...

Seeing that he was almost recognize by Mono's clan son...

Would Kai able to eliminate the man before he told anyone about his suspicion?

Would Kai be able to stay hidden longer now that there is a chance he was being recognize?

What's going to happen to Atsumina and KojiYuu relationship?

What is the next plan to make Haruna jealous?

Can't wait to see it

Thank you for the update

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #66 on: October 19, 2013, 10:32:16 PM »
The history this great one  :twothumbs, please continues.

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #67 on: October 25, 2013, 05:53:42 AM »
Konnichiwa Author-san..:)
I'm your new reader also new member around here..XD
BTW author-san Your fanfic is Awsome,!! (Y)
It's really fun to read and easy to understad..Sugoi ne~~!!
Really Waiting for your next Update..Ganbatte ne Author-san

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #68 on: October 27, 2013, 01:31:45 AM »
Mm.. I choose "You're The One I love" to be the title for this fanfic ^^

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #69 on: January 29, 2014, 05:18:38 AM »
Your fic was awesome
Hope author san gonna update sooner

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 8 (13/07/10)UPDATE!!!
« Reply #70 on: April 29, 2015, 09:02:26 PM »
This is good story
So sad is not finish  :(


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