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Is It You? - Chapter 8 (AKB48 fanfic)
« on: April 26, 2012, 12:38:15 AM »
This is my first fanfiction, since I was inspired by many stories and their authors, I thought it'll be a good idea to write something and share it to others.

So this is it my first fanfic and please enjoy(hope you'll like it)

~IS IT YOU~:
Prologue(below)
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

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Is It You?
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Prologue
            The moon was full, and it was shining high and bright into the dark sky. The night was quiet and cold, the streets were empty and not a crowd passing by the sidewalks. As a man running up the stairs of an old building, sweating and panting, running for his life as a young man pursues him from behind.
 
As the middle age man reached the rooftop, he leans on the rail trying to catch his breath while looking for a way to escape. He froze as he heard footsteps stopped behind him, he turns around in fear as he came in a distance, face to face with the young man pointing a gun towards him, the young man’s cold eyes were filled with pain, hate and anger.
 
“Please, I’m begging you, have mercy, here you can have all of my money.” The middle age man pleaded as he took out his wallet and threw a bundle of ten thousand yen bill to the young man.
 
“There, you can have it all. Just let me go, okay?” He said nervously, thinking that the young man would take the money and leave him alone.
 
The teenage boy just showed him a smirk and without warning, he shot at the man’s left arm as he lets out a deathly scream while holding onto his shoulder as blood drips down his arm and tears forming in to the poor man’s eyes. The young man moved closer to the older man with an expressionless look on his face, the man tried to take a step back but end up hitting the rail instead. The boy kept coming closer and closer as the man started to panic and didn’t know what to do and can’t help but do nothing. When the teenage boy came in front of him, the boy growled,
 
 “Do you think that I’ll let you live, after what you’ve done to me?!”
 
Taken aback by the question and a bit confuse about what the boy had said. “What are you talking about? What have I ever done to you?” The man said while gritting his teeth in pain as his blood continues to drip down his arm.
 
“I didn’t say you specifically, but your father, I’ve got things to settle with him. I will kill your whole family including your father.” The young man said with anger in his voice as he mentions the man he wanted to kill the most.
 
He put his hand on the man’s left shoulder while inserting his thumb into the gunshot wound; he evilly smirked as he heard another loud scream escaping the man’s mouth, feeling the agony inside his shoulder.
 
“Your time is up, Mono-san.” The boy said coldly while smiling evilly as he pushes the man over the rail and turns around to pick up the money and left without leaving a trace.

TBC


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Well that's it for the prologue.
I hope you like as for the beginning of the story. Hope it's not that bad.
Should I continue?
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Prologue
« Reply #1 on: April 26, 2012, 12:40:05 AM »
continue!! :yep:
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Prologue
« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2012, 09:52:35 AM »
of course..you have to continue..

update please..


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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Prologue
« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2012, 01:02:06 PM »
No Pairing? :smhid Lol, That's okay anyway..
At least, I want you to add some Scenes of Popular Pairing like AtsuMina, KojiYuu or more..
LMAO... Btw, Update soon! And, I kinda like your English...
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Prologue
« Reply #4 on: April 26, 2012, 03:12:15 PM »
The guy with a gun is Sae?
Continue please

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Prologue
« Reply #5 on: April 26, 2012, 11:25:31 PM »
@iloveakb48: I'm glad you like it. I'll try my best to continue.

@yukofan: Thank you, I'll try my best in updating the next chapter as soon as I can. I'm already working on the first chapter and editing it.

@Nakamii: About the pairing, you'll find that out in the next chapter. Thanks for liking my english, but I still got a lot to learn especially when it comes to writing.

@kahem: I think you can figure that out in the next chapter. Right now, I'll make you guess who it is. I'm glad you like it.
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Prologue
« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2012, 11:32:19 PM »
awsome i wanna know who it is

defo continue !!!

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Prologue
« Reply #7 on: April 29, 2012, 06:24:02 PM »
@XxRoByNxX78: Glad you like, hope you'll stay tune for the next chapter.

To everyone who have been reading the prologue, I promise I'll post the first chapter by tomorrow or two days from now.
And thanks again for those who like it.
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[AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 1 (12/04/30)
« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2012, 12:13:49 AM »
So this is the first chapter guys. hope you'll like it.

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Is It You?


Chapter 1
            Feeling the heat of the sun seeping through my closed blinds to my face, I can hear the loud ringing of my alarm clock resounding in my room, filling my ears with its loud noise waking me up in my deep sleep. I groan as I reluctantly reach my alarm clock on the bedside table and turned it off.

Reluctantly, I sat up and let out a huge yawn as I stretch my body while I get out of my bed and drag myself to the bathroom getting ready for another day.

I neatly put on my uniform and grab my bag as I head out of my room and close the door. As I close the door, I was greeted with a smile by my older sister.

“Good morning, onee-chan.” I greeted her with a small smile.

“Morning Acchan.” She waved at me, keeping the same smile on her face.

My sister is very beautiful and a caring person. With her tall stature, thin body and short hair, she practically looks like a model, though she’s already doing that at school. And with her cool aura, she attracts a lot of attention around her.

My sister is my half-sister; we are both born from the same mother but we have different fathers. My sister’s father died in a car accident after she was born and a few months after, our mother got married with my father and a year after, I was born.

“Mariko! Atsuko! Breakfast is ready!” Hearing our mother’s call, my sister and I went downstairs and head towards the kitchen with our breakfast prepared on the dining table, where my father is already there watching the news.

“Ah, good morning girls.” He greeted us with coffee in hand and his usual smile.

“Morning.” We both greeted our parents as we gave a kiss on their cheek and started eating our breakfast, specially made for us.

Eating and watching attentively the news on the television, until something caught our attention.

“This morning’s topic, a man name Mono Tobita, the third son of the most dangerous mafia boss, was found dead at 2:00am this morning, after being shot and thrown over an old building. The police are now currently investigating the situation…”

“It looks like a fight between the mafia families or something.” My sister said as she finishes her breakfast.

I answer with just a shrug as I also finish every last bits of my breakfast.

After finishing our breakfast, my sister and I thanked for the food as we stood up, rushing towards the front door and slip on our shoes and said our quick good byes. Since if we miss our train, we have to wait at least 20 to 30 minutes and we don’t want to be late for school.

* * * * *

At the train station, we arrived at the right time to catch our train. Inside the train, my sister and I were talking about many things and laughing together, it stopped when I suddenly felt a hand touching my bottom as I let out a little squeak, I look around me finding the person who is touching me but failed since the train is completely pack.

“What’s wrong, Acchan?” My sister stopped laughing when she noticed the little squeak that I let out, and the way I was looking around for something, she was looking at me with worried look in her eyes.

“Nee-chan, someone is touching my behind, but I can’t find who it is.” I look at her pleadingly as tears starting to form in my eyes.

My sister was also looking around for the person angrily and will totally give a piece of her mind and a taste her fists if she finds him. But it seems that someone had already beat her to save me as the hand stopped touching my behind and I heard a loud thud behind me, I turn around with the rest of the crowd to find out what’s going on, and there I find a boy gripping the collar of a man after being slam at the doors of the train, looking like he wants to kill the man.

“Hey! Old man, what do you think you’re doing?” He growled and glaring at the man with eyes shooting daggers at him and fire burning in them. If looks can actually kill, the man would be dead by now through the boy’s eyes.

“What you’re doing right now, is one of the worse thing a man can actually do to a girl, especially those who are extremely younger than they are. You pervert!” The man looked really terrified as cold sweat formed on his forehead, after being caught in the act.

When the doors suddenly opened behind him, the boy pushed him out of the train still glaring at the man while the man tripped and stumbled to the ground, as the doors close in front of him.

“Are you okay?” He asked me as he turned around; his fiery eyes became soft and calm as he looked into mine.

I gave a small nod as my sister and I thank him and he gave me a small nod as he look away, putting back his earphones on as he continues to listen to his music.

I, on the other hand, was staring at him who is right beside me. He’s not as tall as the other boys I’ve seen; he’s really…short, though he’s probably an inch or two taller than me. It seems that he’s going to the same school as I am, with the uniform he’s wearing; his gakuran widely open, his shirt untucked and two top buttons unbuttoned, his pants hanging a little low with a silver chain hanging onto it and paired with black and white high cut Nike shoes. And with his dyed golden blond hair, he successfully looks like a bad boy slash delinquent type of guy.

I’ve never seen him before in school or anywhere, but I have a feeling that I do know the boy from somewhere… but where? And his face…his face looks so familiar.

“Are you sure you’re alright, Acchan?” My sister asked worriedly as I turned towards her, it looks like she seems to notice that I’ve been staring at the guy none stop, I blush slightly in embarrassment.

“Yeah. I’m okay.” I answered as I gave a reassuring smile and she just smiled back.

The doors once again open as we finally reach to our station, we all got out at the same time and the boy gave a small salute and left, going ahead of us towards the school.

* * * * *

“Waifu! Good morning!” When I got inside, I was greeted with a hug by a certain Gachapin, who had called me ‘wife’.

“Hey Kuu.” I greeted him back and pushed his face away from me as he tried to lean forward to give his ‘morning kisses’. I giggled as I found him cute when he pulled away from my hand as he says ‘that hurt’ and pouted at me.

I walk towards my group of friends with Kuu still hugging me but from behind, it’s actually really hard to walk when someone’s clinging onto you from behind.

“Hey guys!” I greeted them with a smile as I wave at them.

“Oh Acchan!” I notice the excited look my best friend; Tomochin has on her face. It’s kind of weird to see her excited like that, because usually when she’s at school; she would always brag about how boring school is and complaining about teachers being annoying and sometimes when she’s really lazy; she would skip school.

“What’s up?” I ask wondering what’s gotten her so excited. Probably the reason why she looks happy. I know Tomochin more than anyone else, besides her parents, of course. I guess.

“Have you heard?” She asked like a ball of energy ready to explode, it’s really rare to see her like this.

“About what?” I ask only to receive an ‘are you serious?’ stare from my best friend, I replied with a ‘what?’ gesture and a confuse look.

“You mean you don’t know?!” She exclaimed as she couldn’t believe what she’s hearing earning a few stares from other students in the class.

“About what?” Next thing I notice, my sister was right beside me with her boyfriend holding hands as she pushes Kuu away from me. Onee-chan is always overprotective of me; she would protect me no matter what.

“Stay away from Acchan, you Gachapin.” Onee-chan glared at Kuu.

“Ooh! Could it be that you’re jealous, Mariko?” Kuu said to my sister with a grin forming on his lips.

“Who’s jealous?!” She protested earning a few winks while being flirted by Kuu.

“Kuu! Stop flirting with my Mari-chan.” My sister’s boyfriend said and glare at him as he wraps his arms possessively around my sister’s slim waist.

“Come on Riku, I’m just playing.” Kuu said in surrender not wanting to go in Riku’s bad side.

Riku and Kuu are cousins; Riku is a pretty looking guy and a real gentleman, he’s a clean and a really nice guy, so many girls fell for his good looks and his niceness. The main reason why onee-chan is head over heels over Riku’s charm. He also has a younger sister name Haruna, they both really look alike and they can pass out as twins at how much they resemble each other. His sister is also pretty like a model and she’s best friends with my sister, though she’s younger than Onee-chan.

Kuu is pretty much a playboy; he would flirt with every cute and pretty girl he sees, just like me. With his cute appearance and filled with energy, again many girls would date a guy like him and surely would have a good time hanging out with.

“Anyways, what were you guys talking about?” My sister said getting back on topic.

“Apparently, we’re having a new transfer student today in our class.” Yuko answered with a smile while clinging onto Haruna, while the other girl tries to push away the squirrel-like girl.

“Yeah so?” I ask wondering what’s the big deal about this transfer student.

“Well, don’t you think it’s weird to have a transfer student in the middle of the school year?” Tomochin said facing towards me as I nodded, urging her to continue.

“This person must be really smart to enter the school in the middle of the year just like that.” She added.

“And your point?” Not getting where this is going, might as well get to the point already. Onee-chan, Riku and I were waiting for her to answer and…

“Well, I want to know and find out if this new student is a guy or a girl.” She said with a bright smile and added. “And if it’s a guy, I wonder if he’s cute or hot, or both.”

I felt brain-dead at her remark; and looking at Mari-neechan and Riku’s expressions, I could tell they were too. What kind of idiot reasoning was that? To have so much excitement driven by looks. Typical Tomochin.

“Oh my god.” My sister said unbelievably as she was the first to recover.

Suddenly, the bell rang and Mari-neechan and Riku waved us a small and a quick good bye, since we’re going to see them again at lunch, as they left our classroom and went to their own.

I went to my seat as the other students did the same, as we waited for the teacher to enter the classroom. Tomochin and I sat at the same area.

When our homeroom teacher came in our class, everybody in the classroom stood up from their seats as we greeted the teacher and bowed and sat back on our seats.

“Good morning class.” Yoshiyaki-sensei greeted us back. “This morning, a new student will be joining this class starting today.” He announced.

Everyone in the classroom were eager to see the new transfer student, and when I turn around to look at Tomochin behind me, she was practically jumping from her seat.

“You can come in.” I can hear the door sliding open and suddenly, sounds of squeals from the girls and disappointments from boys can be heard in the classroom. I curiously turn around back to the front and my eyes widen in shock…No way.


TBC

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That's it for chapter 1, this is mostly the introduction of the charaters. I hope you guys enjoyed it though.
I think you can already guess who is the mystery guy and the main pairing.

Please send me your comments and critics so i can improve on the next chapter.

PS:I won't be posting the next chapter for a while since I have my french exams coming up this week and I need to prepare myself for it.

Well until next time!!!

BTW how to change the title in the umm... how you call it... so i can change the title.
« Last Edit: May 03, 2012, 11:25:06 PM by RJay »
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 1 (12/04/30)
« Reply #9 on: May 01, 2012, 04:09:01 AM »
UWAH! it's interesting!! :D
who's the boy at the prologue? is it the same boy that transferred to the school?
is he KAI? KaiAcchan? :D

and Riku going out with Mariko?! but there's haruna and yuko?
hohoho double win :D

so Kuu is a playboy? LOL


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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 1 (12/04/30)
« Reply #10 on: May 01, 2012, 04:26:42 AM »
Since Riku and Kuu appearance, it should be Kai turn appearance.
Tomochin seem interested into the new student, smell like triangle love soon between Kai x Tomo x Acchan perhaps.
Good luck in your exam too !

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 1 (12/04/30)
« Reply #11 on: May 03, 2012, 08:01:41 PM »
@haru9210: I'm glad you like it and thanks for wishing me luck on my exam, really appreciate it.

@bochang: I'm happy you find it interesting, most of your question will be answered in the next chapter.

@Syndney W: Lol, about Kai's appearance you got it right, but I can't tell you yet the rest of the stuff. And thanks for wishing me luck on my exams too, now I just hope I pass it.

To everyone, thanks for reading my first fic, but I prefer if you guys sent comments and critics so I can improve in my story instead of keeping silent(no offense). Since I had an exam this, I didn't had the chance to work on chapter two, but I'm working on it now. So please be patient with me and stay tune, until then.
« Last Edit: May 03, 2012, 11:21:35 PM by RJay »
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 1 (12/04/30)
« Reply #12 on: May 03, 2012, 08:57:39 PM »
Thanks for the update
please take your time
and good luck on your exam..!!:-)
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 1 (12/04/30)
« Reply #13 on: May 08, 2012, 02:29:18 AM »
@iloveakb48: thanks for wishing me luck and I am also happy that you like my amateur fic.

Well guys this is chapter 2, I apologize for taking so long to put this up and it's probably shorter than it is, I guess.
Anyways, please enjoy.

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Chapter 2
           “No way.” I muttered to myself. I can’t believe it, it’s him; the boy from this morning.
 
Yoshiyaki- sensei started to write the boy’s name on the black board and said to him,
 
“You may introduce yourself, Takahashi-kun.”
 
“I’m Takahashi Kai, yoroshiku onegaishimasu.” With his bag over his shoulder and his hand in his pocket, he introduced himself as he bowed slightly to the class making girls squeal again as they whisper to each other.
 
I noticed that Tomochin was poking my shoulder as she leans over to talk about the new kid, obviously.
 
“He’s pretty cute.” She said as she took another glance at the boy and looked back at me again. Though I have to admit it, Tomochin is right, he is pretty cute.
 
“It’s like he’s a part of a yakuza family or something, with his bad boy look and intimidating aura.” She added with a grin forming on her lips. I think I know where this is going.
 
“He’s totally my type of guy.” She finally said. Oh my god, here we go again.
 
“You always say that every time you see a good-looking guy.” I said with annoyance in my voice.
 
“But this guy is different.” I sigh in exasperation hearing the same reasons over and over again, like someone had press the repeat button and played the same song repeatedly.
 
“Again, you always say that when you see a good-looking guy.” I said again and the teacher said to quiet down as he finds a seat for the transfer student.
 
“You can sit over there, beside Minegishi-kun.” Sensei said as he points the seat beside Kuu while he raises his hand with a wide smile on his face. Seems like Kuu has a new friend.
 
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The bell rang announcing the end of class and the beginning of lunch break. Few seconds after the bell, the new kid was already surrounded by numerous of girls from our class and in others, wondering what’s the fuss all about. I can hear the girls bombarding him with questions like ‘Do you have a girlfriend?’ ‘What’s your type of girl?’ and such while the boy was trying his best to divert most of the questions.
 
Suddenly, Tomochin grabbed my hand and pulled me towards the crowd. Some of the girls notice us heading towards them and made way for us to pass through until no one was around the boy. Knowing Tomochin, no one would dare to get in her way or even stop her to get what she wants.
 
“Thanks.” The new kid said as he sighs in relief.
 
“You’re welcome.” She replied back with a smile as we took a seat and start eating our lunch.
 
“Wow, Kai! You’re really popular with the ladies on your first day.” Kuu said with a wide grin as he place an arm around the boy’s shoulder. I hope he isn’t a player like Kuu.
 
“Shut up! I am not.” The new guy said as he brushes off Kuu’s arm. It seems that they got along really well on his first day too.
 
I notice that he was staring at us, but I think he was staring at me mostly, I wonder if he recognized me.
 
“Your friends?” He asked Kuu as he nodded in delight with his mouth filled with food.
 
“I’m Itano Tomomi, but you can call me Tomochin.” Tomochin introduced herself first.
 
“That’s a cute name, but can I call you Tomo instead?” I can’t tell if he’s flirting with Tomochin or maybe he’s just unaware at the situation; since he looked quite innocent while Tomochin was nodding as a small tint of pink forming on her cheeks, looking away with her chopsticks on her lips.
 
When he turned towards me, Kuu wrapped his arm around my shoulders with the same wide grin he had on and said,
 
“This is my wife.” I can see the boy raising an eyebrow, giving Kuu a weird look.
 
“Don’t listen to his nonsense. My name is Maeda Atsuko.” This time, I introduce myself properly as I continue to eat my lunch.
 
“Well, we meet again, Atsuko. Since you all know my name, you can just call me Kai.” He said with a smile that can make your heart melt. Seriously, this guy is too cute for words; showing his small dimples when he smiles, well you get the point.
 
“You guys know each other?” Tomochin and Kuu both asked at the same time.
 
“Well—” I was about to answer them, but I was cut off by Mari-neechan when she appeared with Riku. My sister was also shock seeing the boy from this morning.
 
“So this is the transfer student you guys have been talking about.” She said as she slightly points her finger towards Kai while taking a seat beside me.
 
“Takahashi Kai, just call me Kai. Nice to meet you.” He introduce himself for the second time again.
 
“Shinoda Mariko, Mariko is fine, Maeda Atsuko’s older sister. Nice to meet you too.” My sister also introduced herself while Kai had his head tilted a little to the side and a question mark over his head. “If you’re asking, Acchan and I have the same mother but different fathers.” She said while Kai formed an ‘o’ with his lips as he nodded in acknowledgement. “Basically, she’s my step sister.” She added.
 
“Wait! You didn’t answer our question.” Tomochin said. “How do you know each other?” She repeated the question.
 
“We met this morning after he saved me by some pervert in the train.” I answered nonchalantly earning a gasp from Kuu.
 
“My wife’s been touch by a pervert!” Kuu said in anger.
 
Just when I was about to protest about being his so-called wife, a scream was heard and when I turn around to find out what’s going on; Haruna was pushing Yuko away who kept saying ‘skinship, skinship!’.
 
“Onii-chan! Help!” Haruna cried out for help, and just like in the anime; Riku appeared behind Yuko in less than a second and lifting her up off the ground by the collar and Yuko, who is now wailing and flailing her arms trying to reach her object of affection.
 
While Riku got a good grip of Yuko’s collar, Haruna quickly ran towards Kai as she sits on his lap while she wraps her arms around his neck— Wait! What?! Am I seeing things or are my eyes playing tricks on me? As I look both my sides where Mari-neechan and Tomochin are, with their mouths agape and chopsticks dropped, I guess I’m not the only one seeing this.
 
“What the hell?!” Tomochin exclaimed feeling confuse at the scene in front of us.
 
“Kai, save me!” Haruna cried again as she tightens her grip around his neck. I find it weird that one of my friends is hugging a transfer student just like that and out of the blue and of course a good-looking one too. I wonder if they know each other.
 
Next thing I notice is that Yuko was running towards the two, it seems like that she got away from Riku’s hold. Kai notice Yuko and quickly stood up from his seat, lifting Haruna bridal style and turned slightly to the side protecting her.
 
“NyanNyan!” As usual, Yuko would call Haruna by the nickname she gave her as she pouts in front of two.
 
“Just stay there, you hentai! Sexual harasser!” Haruna yelled.
 
“It’s skinship! Skin-ship!” Yuko reasoned. Oh my god, again with the skinship thingy and this made Kai frown at the both of them. Kai glared at Yuko intensely making her flinch a little. Seriously, he may look good-looking and cute, but his glare looks so intimidating like he’s ready to strike his prey.
 
“I may not know you, but whatever you’re trying to do to Kojiharu, I want you to stop.” Even his voice sounds dangerous. Wait, did he just called Haruna; Kojiharu? Now I have a feeling that they do know each other.
 
“Kai, you don’t have to act so serious and so worked up, I’m just playing around.” Haruna said, trying to give Yuko a break.
 
Kai just let out a sigh and leans over to whisper over Haruna’s ear. I wonder what he’s whispering to her about. He gently puts her down and Haruna turned to look at Riku and turned to my direction. Since I know that look was not for me, I  look up behind me and I notice that Kuu’s face looks so serious. Okay, what’s going on now? Taking a few glances between the three relatives and it seems that their communicating through their eyes. Kai look both at Riku and Kuu, and walked out of the classroom with the guys following behind. What’s going on?! And where are they going?
 
“Okay…what’s just happen?” Tomochin asked my question that I’ve been thinking about, while Onee-chan and I stood silent as Haruna and Yuko came towards us and took a seat beside my sister.
 
“Why don’t you ask Haruna?” I said as I looked at Haruna’s direction.
 
“Hmm?” Haruna just looked with a questionable look.
 
“You know him?” I asked while Yuko, Tomochin and Mari-neechan were staring at her, waiting for an answer.
 
“Who?” She asked. I face palm myself and I bet the rest of the girls did the same thing. Haruna’s being an airhead again.
 
“Kai!” Onee-chan said almost in a shout.
 
“Oh, him?” She said and she added. “Of course I know him, he’s my boyfriend.”
 
“WHAT!!!”
 
 
TBC

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Well that's it, hope it's not too boring for you.

Please comment and critic.
« Last Edit: May 08, 2012, 04:04:07 AM by RJay »
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 2 (12/05/08)
« Reply #14 on: May 08, 2012, 05:01:09 PM »
I love it!!
and please dont call your fanfics amateur  because you write them like a pro! :thumbsup
i love akb48!!!!

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 2 (12/05/08)
« Reply #15 on: May 08, 2012, 06:13:55 PM »
Hahaha Yuko! Funny as usual!
Hum it seems that the couples are not what I expected hehe I'm sure the next chapter will be interesting

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 2 (12/05/08)
« Reply #16 on: May 09, 2012, 04:17:50 PM »
OH~ Kai, the hero saved Acchan from pervert!!! XD
That old man should be ashame from doing things like that!!!! :angry:
It seems like Tomochin and Acchan is somewhat interested in Kai~
And then I was shocked when Haruna said that Kai is her boyfriend!!! :shocked
What is going to happen next??~~

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 2 (12/05/08)
« Reply #17 on: May 09, 2012, 04:51:14 PM »
Wondering what kind of relationship Haruna and Kai is?
Please update soon. I'm going to stay tuned for this fics onwards.

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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 2 (12/05/08)
« Reply #18 on: May 10, 2012, 01:24:48 AM »
Nice story :)

But hold on nyan nyan is for yuuchan and minami is for acchan

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Fix it now  :angry:

w8ting for ur update :)   :wub:
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Re: [AKB48] Is It You? - Chapter 2 (12/05/08)
« Reply #19 on: May 11, 2012, 09:24:14 PM »
@haru9210: Lol. To me it doesn't matter if you critic or not, as long as you leave a comment or a suggestion. I'm really happy that you call my fic perfect and glad that it had caught your interest. In my opinion, my fic is far from being perfect but I'm happy that you think so.

@iloveakb48: Wow! I never thought that someone would say that I write like a pro. Honestly, when I read you comment I was laughing in happiness(sounds kind of weird, but I guess you know what I mean). Thanks for loving my fic.

@kahem: Sorry for making you somehow confuse. In the future chapters, the couplings will become very clear soon(though Riku and Mariko are quite official). And probably one couple would be very unexpected.

@Yagami.Rai: Yeah. That old man should be ashame of himself, touching defenseless and innocent girls like that. Tsk tsk tsk. Though I was wondering when are you going to update your fics. I really love them.

@Sydney W: You'll just to find out in the next chapter. Wait, does that mean that you haven't been staying tuned this whole time?! Lol. I'm kidding. But seriously, glad to hear that you'll be reading my fic from now on.

@saeyukilover: Thanks. Don't worry about that, I've got it all planned out. I have so many ideas in my head but sometimes I have a really hard time placing and connecting the pieces of the puzzle together. And this is just the beginning of the story, the real story hasn't begun yet. Maybe in  a chapter or two.

To everyone: Thanks for reading and commenting on my fic(I feel like I'm repeating myself a lot). Well, chapter 3 is almost done, I guess, but please be patient with me. I don't know when will I post it, since in here, it's almost the end of the school year and I'm sort of preparing for the provincial exams. I hope you guys will wait until chapter 3 comes out. Don't worry, I will post it before June.
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