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Jane Doe - A little preview UPDATE: ON HOLD



"You're up in 5 minutes, Takamina." A staff member called out to the girl and she nodded as she made sure her make up as well hairpiece were in place.

Takahashi Minami, also known as Takamina, a rising singer in the industry who managed to climb to number 1 on the charts with her debut single, Jane Doe, that she had written and composed herself.

She stood up and patted down her red dress. It used to reach the floor but she disliked it after a few performances and had it altered to be just above the knee.  Takamina quickly walked over to the curtains by the side of the stage, waiting for the hosts to announce her name.

Head peeking out, Takamina gave the crowd a quick scan, a slight smirk tugging at the corner of her lips as she spotted the glimmering jewelry against women's necks as the various studio lights reflected the gems. She scored a big fish tonight, with this prestigious music award show.

As she continued to wait she decided to pick, from memory, who she wanted to steal from.

That's right, steal. Takahashi Minami is a rather famous thief known as Doe. Though the nickname served mainly to unidentified corpses, the media nicknamed her that as she left without a trace along with jewels and money, the name being 'Doe' because nobody knew what gender nor how she looked like. So she adopted the new name, leaving the initial 'D' now as her signature whenever she stole.

Tonight would be no different. She was going to make off with a few of those rich women's precious jewels and then she would read and watch the news the next day of a rather angry police chief that would once again declare that he'll catch the 'low-life thief' once and for all.

Humming her song's tune, she tapped her foot and waited as the hosts continued to drone on and on. However, her humming immediately stopped as she heard a whisper right by her ear. Startled, she looked around with wide eyes, at the mass of people that were staff running around here and there making sure things were perfect. She tried to spot if any girls were leaving but she didn't catch anyone, she was only left with the lingering scent of lavender and roses that was not there before as her only evidence that she had not imagined the soft female voice.

Someone gently pushed her out from the curtains as her cue and Takamina immediately composed herself and plastered a smile on her face and walked out and bowed at the applause.



"Don't get too greedy now, Doe."


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A/N; I haven't written anything in a long time but I'm getting back into the writing mood, a little at least, so have this as I go to work out the rest of the plot and stuff. I also have another 1/4 done fic draft in the makings right now so yup.

Anyway, I hope you like what just spun out of my head from listening to Jane Doe non stop lately. Until I actually get the motivation to finish them, see you~  :gmon hi:
« Last Edit: January 09, 2016, 10:12:39 AM by chrunoi »

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Re: « chrunoi's shots & whatnot : Jane Doe [A Preview] 18.06.2015 »
« Reply #81 on: June 18, 2015, 03:36:46 PM »
AH..!! I want to know more..  :w00t:
Please don't make me wait too long..  :roll:


Thank you for this update!  :)
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« chrunoi's SS : Hedgehog's Dilemma [Prologue / AtsuMina] 15/11/2015 »
« Reply #82 on: November 15, 2015, 03:29:43 AM »
Hedgehog's Dilemma - Prologue [AtsuMina]


"A man who has some heat in himself prefers to remain outside, where he will neither prick other people nor get pricked himself." - Arthur Schopenhauer


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I looked around my new dorm room, satisfied at how I had unpacked and settled most of my things in. Don't be mistaken, I'm not a university student at all. I'm in my second year at high school, actually. My mom decided to send me to this dorm because its closer to my school than my home, and the school that I attends has their own affiliated university which I'm probably going to so might as well start getting used to living away from home.

I headed back outside to get the last of my boxes, checking the contents first to make sure nobody stole anything even though I doubt anyone on this floor would do that. As I stood up with the box ready to head back into my room, I hear footsteps coming my way. I turn and watch as a girl with shoulder length hair in a dark blue sailor uniform walk towards me. Immediately, I straighten my back and smile, hand ready to extend for a handshake. The girl barely spares a glance my way when she stopped in front of the room next to mine.

"Hi I'm-" Before I can even finish introducing myself, the girl had entered her room and closed the door shut. Instantly the smile is replaced with a scowl as I reenter my room and close the door. I lightly placed the box on my desk and huffed. First day here and I'm already brushed off by my neighbor. Maybe it's just a bad day for that girl at her school today. I did move in on a school day afternoon (I know I should've moved in on a weekend but my mom insisted today was the day).

Perhaps tomorrow or another day I would be able to at least introduce myself.




A/N

Hello? It's me. After well months of not posting anything I'm here to present you this~ This story I've had in my head for a loooong time and I've had several drafts of the prologue/chapter 1 but I didn't like the setting I wrote it in so I finally stopped being lazy and wrote this.  I'm done rambling so see you next time hopefully with a chapter 1~  :gmon hi:

 

« Last Edit: November 16, 2015, 04:44:56 AM by chrunoi »

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Re: « chrunoi's dump site : Hedgehog's Dilemma [AtsuMina] 15/11/2015 »
« Reply #83 on: November 15, 2015, 09:09:12 AM »
Erm... about Doe the thief with a girl neighbor?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: « chrunoi's SS : Hedgehog's Dilemma [Prologue / AtsuMina] 15/11/2015 »
« Reply #84 on: November 16, 2015, 09:33:31 AM »
Hmm... yeah..  :hehehe:
Sounds like a mysterial story too..  :roll: ..But if not like that, its still okay.. until it's AtsuMina story..  8)
Waiting for first chapter..  :)
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Re: « chrunoi's SS : Leather Jacket [Prologue / AtsuMina] 09/01/2016 »
« Reply #85 on: January 09, 2016, 10:32:09 AM »
It's ooooookkkkk!!!
Just give me AtsuMina!  :glasses:

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