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« chrunoi's SS + OS »
« on: September 20, 2014, 05:33:26 AM »
New Note: There are several one shots that I've deleted, sorry about that.

Current status: Semi hiatus.

Ongoing Stories: Hedgehog's Dilemma / Leather Jacket → The Collision Of Stars








This is a comfort fic and has mentions of panic attacks, therefore if you feel like you're uncomfortable with it, please close this fic  :kneelbow:



« Fragments of You and I »

The Takahashi family were foster parents and great ones at that. Though they had one daughter, they still continued being a foster family for orphans once in a while and their daughter, Minami didn't mind at all. In fact she liked it, she liked making new friends though they usually left after year or two but nonetheless she kept contact with most of them so she was still happy.

Minami was 16 when her parents took in another orphan after a year of not fostering any children. This time it was different, usually the orphan was a young child, around the age of 5 to 6, but the orphan this time was the same age as Minami.

Her name was Maeda Atsuko and she was the first foster child that Minami met who had withdrawn into herself. Atsuko, or Acchan as Minami had called her, was an orphan who's parents had died in an accident not long and she had no relatives from what Minami's parents had told her. Acchan never showed much facial expression, she always had that blank face that sometimes annoyed Minami but no matter how hard Minami had tried, Acchan didn't show any emotion. She would only answer in either a nod or just silence and quite frankly, Minami was irritated with her.

Minami understood that losing both her parents was hard on her but it's been a year since Acchan came but she still hasn't made an effort to talk to Minami or her parents, even better, she spends her time just inside her room now, not even bothering to go to school or going downstairs for meals. And it felt like Acchan was just a bothersome presence in the house now.

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Minami was home alone that day, well not exactly since Acchan was holed up in her room as usual but it felt like Minami was alone. Minami was napping downstairs, having fallen asleep on the couch while watching TV when she was woken up by something.

She rubbed her eyes as she heard loud gasping noises and Minami quickly realized that the sounds were coming from Acchan's room and she ran upstairs. Minami opened Acchan's door to find said person huddled in a corner or the room, knees to her chest and head down with shaking hands gripping her hair tightly while gasping loudly for air.

Minami quickly ran over to her, gently prying Acchan's hands from her hair and holding her trembling hands in her own. Acchan looked up, with tears and snot running down her face while still gasping and Minami let go of her hands in favor of hugging the trembling girl and stroked her back in assurance as she felt the girl's heart beating fast. The gasping and shaking subsided after a while and Minami felt hands gripping her back tightly, as if afraid that Minami would just let go and leave.

"I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm so sorry," She heard Acchan mutter into her shirt and she patted her head.

"Shh it's okay, you're okay right now Acchan," Minami whispered to her as she continued to rub her back. Acchan pulled away after a few more minutes, wiping away her tears and held her knees to her chest once again.

"I'm sorry I'm so sorry I can't stop apologizing oh god I'm sorry. I know I haven't been the greatest to your family and I'm so sorry please don't leave me. Please don't throw me out, please," Acchan blabbered out in one breath and Minami saw tears well up in her eyes again as well as her hands starting to tremble. Minami once again reached over to pull the girl into another hug, this time Acchan buried her head in Minami's chest and gripped the front of her shirt.

"I'm just so afraid,I'm afraid of the future where I am alone, where I have nobody. I'm afraid of dying alone, I'm afraid of everyone leaving me just like my parents," Minami heard her whisper out and Minami felt her own tears in her eyes . She had never known that Acchan had these type of thoughts and she even thought of her as bothersome.

Minami felt Acchan tighten her grip on her shirt and let out a hiccup.

Almost as if to say "Please don't leave me too," in a wordless plea.

"You're okay, I won't leave you, I promise." Minami vowed to the girl and Acchan looked up.

"You promise?"

"I promise." Minami assured her.

"No matter what?" Acchan question again, insecurity rising up again.

"No matter what. I will always be by your side, don't worry. I'll never leave you." Minami said firmly and leaned down to place a soft kiss on Acchan's forehead as if to seal her promise to the girl and Minami saw the girl close her eyes and she felt Acchan's heart rate calm down.

After a few more minutes of Acchan not moving, Minami looked down to find her asleep and Minami smiled. She tried to unwrap Acchan's hands from her shirt but all that did was cause Acchan to wrap her arms around Minami's waist.

Minami decided that Acchan was probably not going to let go anytime soon and made herself comfortable on the floor without moving as much as she can. She placed another kiss on her forehead before wrapping her arms around Acchan in return, feeling Acchan snuggling close to Minami, and she closed her eyes and fell asleep.

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Minami's parents came home to a quiet house, with the TV still softly playing but with Minami nowhere in sight.

Mama Takahashi walked quietly upstairs and was surprised to find Acchan's door open so she peeked in.

She let out a smile when she saw Minami laying on the floor with her arms wrapped around Acchan and Acchan resting her head on Minami's shoulder with her arms too around the other.

"I knew you could get her to open up Minami," Mama Takahashi whispered to them as she grabbed Acchan's blanket off of her bed and carefully draped it on them before quietly leaving.

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I don't know what to say ah a I had the fic title in my mind for a while but I couldn't fit an idea to it but then I thought of this and yeah  :on roll:

I thought of this last night and when I woke up I immediately came on to write this  :farofflook:

Anyway I hope you liked it, I'll update chapters of my stories later so I'll run off now  :pen_whirl:
« Last Edit: April 02, 2016, 08:09:33 AM by chrunoi »

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #1 - Fragments of You and I »
« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2014, 05:58:25 PM »
Yeah... atsumina story...

Ah... Minami promised not to ever leave Atsuko....

Poor Atsuko for being orphan... but also scared to be alone...

What's going to happen to Atsumina next?

Would Atsuko be able to be with Minami's family for a long time?

Because normally they are only there until they are 16 or 18 years...

Whichever they thought was the right age for them to be called adult.

can't wait to see more

Thank you

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #1 - Fragments of You and I »
« Reply #2 on: September 20, 2014, 08:05:47 PM »
I have been reading all ur fanfic but this one Really  got me :ding:
Lol I'm a Atsumina shipper and ur stories are all of my otp  :luvluv1:
And this story is very interesting   :farofflook:
Cuz it seems like there could be a back story behind acchan's parents death  :glasses:
So Thx for the fic and hope u continue  :kneelbow:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #1 - Fragments of You and I »
« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2014, 01:35:35 PM »
Warning: Major Angst and character death [ may possibly need tissues ]

Also the song versus aren't meant to be read with the song, it's just that the lyrics fitted it so I placed them in there and I had the idea of putting song lyrics into a fic so yeh. No update for Two years but extra long angsty one-shot makes up for it right?  :nervous

When The Cherry Blossom Petals Blooms



I remember when I transferred in the first year of junior high, you were the only one who was absent. Your seat was next to the window and mine was next to yours. You didn't come to school for a week and when I asked my new classmates about you, thats when I found out.

Your name was Maeda Atsuko and you had leukemia.

You hadn't come to school when I transferred because you were doing treatment at the hospital.

I was expecting to see a frail weak looking girl when you returned to school a few days later, not a cheerful girl.

You were in class before me and you sat at your seat, with a beanie on your head, looking out the window. When you heard the sound of my chair being pulled back, you turned around and smiled at me and introduced yourself.



That was one of the brightest smile I had seen from anyone and it made my heart beat faster for a reason I didn't know back then.



We somehow got closer through the years, I'd write down notes on the days you had to go for treatment and visit you at home and help you with your homework. And then we'd fall asleep together on your bed and your mother would put a blanket over us.

In our third year of junior high, they said you were cured, you were free from leukemia though there was a chance you could have a relapse, but it was low.

Our class had a party in celebration, celebrating that you could grow your hair again and it'd be beautiful. That you wouldn't need to go to the hospitals that often and you wouldn't feel so much pain anymore. That you were a fighter, for not losing to the cancer during your young childhood years.

♫ A spring breeze
Comes from somewhere
Changing the colours
Of this familiar road♫

We were in the same class in high school, and once again, we were seated right next to each other.  Your hair had grown now, though it was short, you still looked beautiful.

And whenever we talked, my heart would beat faster for a reason I still hadn't known.

We had a group of friends, some who had come from another school but still, we were great friends. Having lunch and sometimes going out for little window shopping dates after school became our little thing.

♫This season
Puts the happiness and sadness in the past
And we start walking
A new road♫

A few days after your birthday, I finally couldn't resist asking the one question on my mind.

"Why is my heart beating so fast around you, Atsuko? I asked everybody but they refused to tell me, telling me to ask you instead.." I nervously asked as you stared at me with wide eyes.

A smile slowly spread on your face and you cupped my face to make me look at you.

"When your heart beats fast around someone.. it means you like them, Minami. Like like-like them," You told me with a huge smile on your face. I began blushing hard and you giggled.

"I-I," All I could do was stutter as you continue to stare at me.

"My heart beats fast around you too, Minami. And I really like you a lot, more than best friends. Do you feel the same way?" You asked, knowing my true feelings but still wanted me to say it out loud.

"I do, Atsuko, I do. I like you more in the more than best friends way too." I said shyly and you once again giggled. I will always love that giggle, I decided.

"This means we're girlfriends now right~?" You happily said and before I could answer, planted a quick kiss on my lips.

I nodded shyly, not trusting my voice. My face felt hot and it was probably really red.

You cheered happily before kissing me once more and then immediately getting on your phone to mail the news to our friends. All of whom had said it was about time we got together.

♫Whether it’s a sunny day or a rainy one
Tomorrow will come
So I’ll smile
As I take a step♫

We had been dating for a year, now in our second year of high school. However, a week after your birthday, you didn't come to school and I couldn't contact you.

♫Under the spring-coloured sky
You start walking alone
Down the long road you painted
Like a dream you had one day♫

I had asked everyone what happened to you, including your mother but she was crying when I called her and she couldn't get a word out. That's when I realized something bad had happened to you.

Then you finally called me, but you sounded different.

Your voice sounded weaker than before and you sounded exhausted.

"M-minami, sorry for not contacting you," You said into the phone and your voice brought tears to my eyes. "I..I just didn't know how to tell you," Your voice cracked towards the end of your sentence and you sounded choked up.

"What is it, Atsuko? Tell me, please," I choked out. You let out a sob and a hiccup before you continued.

♫The tear that landed on my cheek
When you looked back uncertainly
And forced a smile
Was a period
To help me grow up♫

"I relasped, Minami. It came back." You cried into the phone. And I cried with you. I immediately went to the hospital, to see you lying the bed, tears and snot running down your face. And your hair was gone.

But you still looked beautiful to me. No matter what.

I walked over, and you tried to speak before I hushed you. I made a motion for you to make some space for me on the bed and you did. I climbed in, intertwined my hand with yours tightly and leaned my head on your chest.

Listening to your heart beating, fighting for you to stay alive.

You tried to say something again but I hushed you.

"Let's stay like this for a while, Atsuko."

♫When I look up at the sky
Its vastness
Showed me how endlessly long
This road is♫

We fell asleep like that, like old times. Not too long later your mother woke me up, careful to keep you asleep, and she pulled me out into the hallway. I asked her how it happened and she started to cry again, causing my own tears to well up.

She said she didn't know how, there wasn't any signs of a relapse until you collapsed at home a day after our one year anniversary.

And apparently, this time the cancer was stronger than before.

She told me how the doctors didn't have much hope for her anymore, that you wouldn't have long to live.

And that's when I broke down further, slowly sliding down to floor and sobbing my eyes out.

♫The cherry blossoms are a future bookmark
I pray that I’ll remember
The dreams I had one day...
The cherry blossoms are a bookmark of hope
Instead of giving up
I’ll open to this page♫

After that you woke up, and called for me. I quickly wiped my tears and calmed myself before walking back in. From the expression on your face, I knew that you knew I had heard the news. However you gave me one your beautiful smiles and instead asked about our friends.

I sat on the chair beside the bed, intertwined our hands once again and then told you what you had missed. You listened enthusiastically, adding in your thoughts here and there.

I continued to talk before realizing you weren't paying attention to me. You were staring out at the window, at the cherry blossom tree.

"Do you think I'll live long enough to see the cherry blossoms bloom, Minami? Do you think that maybe I could graduate school as well?" You whispered and I squeezed your hand at the longing in your voice.

"You'll live long, Atsuko. You'll be able to fight the cancer again. We'll be able to see the cherry blossoms bloom every year." I said, and to be honest, I wasn't sure if I was trying to convince you or myself.

But still you turned back to face me, signaled me to move closer to you and when I did, you planted a kiss on my lips like you always did and gave me a wide grin.

And then you told me to continue talking, because you liked listening to my voice.

♫The area by the classroom window
Is warm and sunny
Not much time left on the spring calendar♫

Now we were third years and we were about to graduate high school in a month. I was worried at first, when you said that no matter what, you still wanted to graduate high school. Though I was worried, you seemed to be doing well with your studies, even better than I was.

Occasionally, I could hear the whispers of our schoolmates, talking about you and I. About how unfortunate we were. But then Yuko would give them a glare and they would shut up and run off. But you still had a smile on your face and ignored them.

♫When I look around in class
All my friends
Wearing the same uniform
Look grown-up♫

You seemed frailer than ever now, but still you were beautiful to me. You were lying in your hospital bed and you were staring out the window again. And I simply studied our held hands, and then I would study your face.

"Hey Minami?" You quietly said, still staring out the window.

"Hm?"

"Whenever the cherry blossom petals bloom, I want you to remember them as me." You turned and looked at me, and I nodded. And then you turned back to the window. After a few more minutes of silence, you asked if we could watch a movie and I let you pick out one and we soon fell asleep, cuddled together in each others arms like old times with the movie still playing softly in the background.

♫We’re all going to set out
To our respective futures
We have
The wings of dreams
On our backs♫

When it was the day before graduation, you insisted that you wanted to go to school and personally receive it. You even started to cry a little when your mother tried to talk you out of it. In the end she agreed.

On the day of our graduation, you put on your uniform with the help of your mother, and then I carried you and gently placed you down on the wheelchair.

"I feel like a princess when Minami carries me like that~" You said with a huge smile and giggled and I blushed. I took the blanket your mother held out to me and placed it over your lap. You protested saying you didn't need it but you let me do it anyway.

We arrived at school late but nobody minded. Yuko and the others met us outside the school hall and opened the doors for you and I.

We had interrupted the principal's speech but nobody said anything as our friends led us over to our seats with our class. I sat beside you and then the principal continued his speech and you rested your head on mine and wove your fingers through mine.

I couldn't pay attention when all I could think about was how thin you had gotten. I quickly shook the thought out of my mind and tried to pay attention to what the principal was talking about.

The only thing I managed to catch from his speech was something about cherry blossoms.

"The cherry blossoms are blooming now. And cherry blossoms are the bookmark in our hearts," He'd said and you repeated it and whispered to me that you liked that sentence.

Soon after, it was time to receive our certificate and our class was up first. We watched as our classmates went up one by one to receive it and you were talking about how proud you were of them and how glad you were that you were in this class.

Then it was your turn and silence suddenly fell upon the hall as the principal called out your name and everyone watched as I got up and wheeled you to the stage.

He was going to bend down and give it to you but you stopped him and told me to help you up and I protested for a moment before you gave me those puppy dog eyes.

I sighed and helped you up, holding onto your arm as you smiled at the principal and received your certificate and then even managed to bow at him and the rest of the students before slowly sitting back down into the wheelchair.

You were breathing hard and I quickly pushed you back to our seats and handed you a bottle of water and you drank it, thanking me.

♫When I look back, both my joy and sadness
Have left a road
I was never
Alone♫

After all the classes have received their certificates, the principal once more congratulating us before letting us go. Our teacher suggested that since the cherry blossoms were blooming, we should take a picture outside with it. Everyone immediately turned to look at the two of us, silently asking if we were okay with it.

"I don't thi-" I started to say but you placed your hand on mine to stop me.

"Sure, let's take our last picture together as a class!" You smiled at them and looked up at me with eyes that told me to go agree with her. I nodded and smiled to assure her I wasn't upset.

Everyone slowly walked out, with our friends beside us and talking about their plans now that they've graduated. You were listening enthusiastically to them, though I could see you were clearly exhausted, you still talked cheerfully with them, even promising to make plans to meet them in the future. At that, I felt tears well up in my eyes.

I wanted to desperately believe that you truly were going to be able to beat the cancer again but I knew, our friends knew, at one look that you were losing the fight.

And no matter how much any of us desperately wished and pleaded to God that you were going to win this fight, we knew that you were losing and we couldn't do anything about it.

We reached the huge cherry blossom tree and watched as the crowd of parents as well as students that were in front of it slowly part to make way for us. We walked towards the tree and you thanking them along with our classmates.

We got into three rows, you and I were in the middle and you laced our hands together and we all smiled as our teacher counted down before taking the picture.

♫I smile
In our graduation photo
I want to watch
The seasons go by
Goodbye♫

A day after that, you fell into worse conditions than you were before and you were always sleeping when I visited at the hospital. Occasionally you woke up when one of our friends visited and you greeted them before you'd let out a ragged breath and fell back asleep.

"I'm always tired and sometimes it hurts, but if Minami is here with me, I can bear with it." You told me during one of the rare times you were awake enough. At that I broke down and sobbed into our held hands and you started to cry as well.

"I'm so sorry Minami, I'm sorry you fell in love with some-" You started to say through your tears and I stopped you.

"No, don't apologize Atsuko. I'm actually glad I fell in love with you, I don't think I'd love someone else as much as I love you. Remember that." I told you and started to hum a tune and you slowly calmed down and fell asleep soon after. I looked out of the window that you liked so much, and found that the sakura tree outside was also blooming, with petals floating in the wind. A few petals even managed to fly in and land by your bedside.

When you woke up after that and saw the petals in the wind, you told me you wanted to go out and see that tree. I protested saying that you shouldn't go out, your body is weak. But you looked me straight in the eyes and said,

"Minami, I can feel it."

My breathing stopped for a moment before I nodded. I went to request for a wheelchair and when the nurse brought it into the room, she gave me a small smile.

I carried you onto the wheelchair and you muttered something about feeling like a princess once again and giggling and I smiled as I placed a blanket over your lap. You pulled along your iv as we went out of the room, we came across your mother but she didn't say anything to stop us instead she smiled and patted you on the head before continuing on to your room.

It was like she knew as well.

When we reached the tree, and you spotted a bench in front of it and pointed towards it and I pushed us over. We admired the petals that were floating in the wind for a minute or two before you spoke again.

"Minami, I want to sit on the bench, please." You turned to look at me and I smiled and nodded before carefully lifting you up and onto the bench. You pulled on my arm and then told me to sit with you and I did.

I wrapped my arms around you and you rested your head on my right shoulder. We sat there for a while just like this, watching the cherry blossom petals float into the sky and then down to the ground.

"Minami, I'll miss you.." It was barely a whisper but I heard it and my breath stopped. "I love you, Minami." You said and looked at me.

"I love you too, Atsuko." I replied, giving you a dimpled smile and you grinned and motioned me to put my face closer with trembling fingers. I did as requested and just like the many times before, you pecked me on the lips, slightly longer than any of the previous times and with much more love in it.

You then turned your attention back to the tree and once again a comfortable silence fell upon us.

"Sing a song, Minami. I want to listen to your voice." You whispered, intertwining our hands and placing them on your lap and then closed your eyes as I started to sing.

And a few moments later, I choked up and started to cry as I felt your grip on my hand loosen and felt you let out your last breath.I immediately hugged your body tighter to me and started to wail and watched through blurry eyes as a few petals floated over and landed on your still body.

"I already miss you Atsuko," I choked out, my tears falling onto your head.

♫Petals of tears fall
Down my cheeks as I walk away
As I look up at the blue sky
And take a big, deep breath
Petals of tears fall
As beautiful as my memories
Let’s wave as we walk up the stairway to adulthood together♫

I placed the bouquet of flowers on top of your grave and brushed away the dirt that had gotten onto the gravestone. And I sang softly, the song that you last heard.

Maeda Atsuko

July 10 1991 - March 24 2009

Beloved daughter, friend and girlfriend

"You're here as well, Minami?" Yuko's voice came from behind and I turned to see her and her girlfriend, Haruna. I smiled and nodded and moved aside as they set down their bouquet of flowers they brought. They bowed and Yuko and squatted down before touching the gravestone with her fingertips and whispering to it.

I watched as the cherry blossom petals that Atsuko loved floated down onto her grave from the tree that her grave was planted beside, some landing on the three of us, as if it was Atsuko saying hello to us.

I smiled and closed my eyes, feeling the wind once again around me.

"I miss you Atsuko," I breathed out in a whisper and then opened my eyes and saw Yuko and Haruna looking away as if to give me some privacy with her.

I moved to be in front of the grave again and like Yuko did before, reaching out my hand and letting my fingers stroke the smooth stone.

"I wonder, if Heaven is nice for you right now... I think it's nice isn't it?" I paused for a moment before continuing. "I'll come and visit again next week, okay? I'm going to go now. I love you forever, Atsuko." I finished and stood up and walked over to the couple and I gave a wave to the grave before walking out of the cemetery.

"How are you doing, Minami?" Yuko asked as we walked into a cafe.

"Fine, Miichan gave me a job at her cafe so it's good that I've got money to cover my rent." I answered and I looked at the menu as we sat down.

"What about.. love life?" Yuko cautiously asked and Haruna elbowed her.

"It's okay, Haruna. I have no interest in dating, Yuko. I don't think I'll find anyone more special than Atsuko." I answered with a smile then turned to the waitress and ordered Katsudon.

"Ahh," Yuko simply said before she and Haruna ordered too. Then the couple began to talk and I looked out of the shop's window.

For a moment there, I saw Atsuko standing in front of the glass, holding a few cherry blossom petals in her hand and she smiled at me.

"I love you, Minami." She mouthed before she faded into petals.

I smiled.


♫When the cherry blossom petals bloom
I can hear the bells of hope ringing somewhere
Giving us the freedom and courage
Of tomorrow
When the cherry blossom petals bloom
Someone is surely praying somewhere
To open the door to a new world with their own hands♫



"I love you too, Atsuko."




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HOW WAS THAT ANGST FOR YOU GUYS BC IT WAS HORRIBLE ON ME

I was crying while writing this but I had to get the angst out of my system oh god. :mon runcry:

Also I will write a second part for Fragments of You and I since some people wanted it but it will take a while~

BUT HERE TAKE THIS ANGSTY OS INSTEAD

I'll run before people kill me for this angst  :pen_whirl:
« Last Edit: September 25, 2014, 10:12:57 AM by chrunoi »

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #2 - When The Cherry Blossom Petals Bloom [Angst] »
« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2014, 03:18:35 PM »
sobs...too sad and angsty! are you trying to kill me?! :pleeease: :gyaaah: :bleed eyes:

do update the second part of fragments of you and i! gotta to love it~!! :farofflook:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #2 - When The Cherry Blossom Petals Bloom [Angst] »
« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2014, 07:53:12 PM »
Such a bittersweet love story...

Like how Minami was there all the one for Atsuko

Even after her death...

She just seems to live everyday just to be there for Atsuko even after her death...

Just waiting and live her life until she can join Atsuko later after her death

Minami is so faithful toward Atsuko... by saying not interested in love, 'there is no one other than Atsuko for her'

Well somehow Minami is not moving on with her life just drifting... or going with the flow....

But at least she is not suicidal... just hanging... surviving each day until her time to join Atsuko naturally

Very good OS there... Like it lots...

Thank you for the meaningful story

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #2 - When The Cherry Blossom Petals Bloom [Angst] »
« Reply #6 on: September 26, 2014, 02:12:11 PM »


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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
« Reply #7 on: September 26, 2014, 05:10:04 PM »
hmm, quite a rare pairing to see..

but, the story's interesting though :thumbsup

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
« Reply #8 on: September 29, 2014, 10:32:02 AM »
Hoho... I like this "trash" nyaa~ :cathappy:

crack pairing my favourite :twisted:
don't know why... I just want to laugh like Mariko right now

continue part 2 nyaa~ :cathappy:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
« Reply #9 on: September 29, 2014, 07:29:59 PM »
so good  :lol: can i request atsuyuu?

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
« Reply #10 on: September 29, 2014, 07:40:26 PM »
Can I request YukiMilky? :heart:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #3 - Experiment Q10 [crack pairing I think] »
« Reply #11 on: September 30, 2014, 02:31:27 PM »

Warning: extremely short nonsensical one-shot


° Junai no Crescendo °



Kai looked out of the car into the rainy street.

He didn't know what possessed him to even drive in this rainy weather, much less to Kabukicho.


The red light district


If any of his friends knew he went to Kabukicho, knowingly or not, they were going to tease him until the end of the world.

He looked out once more, slowly driving along, there were certainly many clubs and bars around, the neon signs standing out in the rain. Though it was often called the 'Sleepless Town', the rain had driven almost everyone indoors, with nobody on the streets.

What am I thinking anyway, who would be out here on the streets in the heavy rain? Kai scolded himself as he continued to drive slowly.

The rain was slowly letting up every once in a while but then it'd be heavy again.

Kai sighed once again and drove slightly faster, wanting to get out of Kabukicho before he spotted something.

No, someone.

Her back was facing Kai, her short hair just above her shoulders, and she had a shawl wrapped around her upper body. She also had on a rather short dress and heels and Kai realized why the girl was in the streets.

A prostitute.

Kai slowed down the car's speed and continued to watch the lone girl. She was simply standing on the streets, seemingly not caring about the rain as she was soaked through. She raised her head slightly up to the night sky and Kai watched the street light cast its light onto her face and Kai was surprised to see how beautiful she was.

After few minutes, Kai drove slowly and stopped beside the girl.

The rain had once again became lighter, almost a drizzle now.

The girl turned to look at Kai, before giving a small somewhat bitter smile and walked over to his side of the car and Kai rolled down his window.

"Company or more?" She asked in a soft voice as she bent down to look in.

Kai looked down and thought for a moment.

"Company," He replied just as quietly and she nodded and walked over to the passenger side of the car. Kai unlocked the car and watched as she sat her soaked form in his seat, not minding that she was ruining his seat.

He started to drive, the rain once again becoming heavy. He didn't know why he'd asked her for company, perhaps he was getting tired of being the fifth wheel among his friends who had girlfriends. Or perhaps it was because she was simply standing in the rain and she looked lonely.

They quietly drove back to Kai's apartment and he let her in.

The girl peeled her wet shawl from her body and folded it and placed it on a table before starting to remove her dress.

"W-wait! D-don't undress," Kai stuttered, slightly blushing as she had the top of her dress already pushed down with her bra showing.

"This is what you picked me up for, right? Why are you embarrassed?" The girl said, slightly amused at Kai attempting to shield his eyes.

"I meant it when I said I wanted your company only," He stuttered out and she stared at him for a few moments before nodding but still not making a move to put the top of her dress back up.

"Which is your room?" She asked and he pointed to one of the doors and she walked towards it and opened it and went inside. Kai followed after a few moments and found her looking through his closet and then taking out a shirt and boxers.

And to Kai's embarrassment once again, she pushed her dress down to the ground, leaving her only in her underwear and then she proceeded to put on his oversized shirt and boxers. She then sat down on his bed and removed her heels, setting them aside.

"Are you just going to stand there?" She asked him with a small smile.

"I don't know what to do," He muttered and fidgeted slightly before realizing that he didn't even ask for her name. How stupid! Kai mentally smacked himself. "What's your name by the way? I'm Kai," he asked her and watched as she seemed to think for a moment before answering.

"Atsuko," She finally said and then patted the space beside her on the bed, signaling for Kai to join her. He did as she asked but sat at the head of the bed instead and then motioned for her to join him which she did.

Atsuko then rested her head on his shoulder and the two let a comfortable silence settle between them.

"How come you didn't want more than company? That's what people go to Kabukicho for," She asked him in a soft voice and he thought for a moment.

"Because I don't want to use you in that way. I simply wanted company that's all," Kai answered honestly and Atsuko let out a small chuckle.

"Company? Company from a prostitute?" She sounded bitter and he turned to face her, gently holding her chin to look her directly in the eyes.

"It doesn't matter who I seek company from, right now you're just a normal girl to me," Kai told her and he saw a bit of tears welling up in her eyes and she tried to push him away but Kai just pulled her closer, hugging her to his chest.

"I'm far from normal, Kai." Atsuko whispered, her voice shaky and her grip tightened on his shirt. Kai heard his name from her lips for the first time and he liked how it sounded from her lips.

"You're normal to me, Atsuko. It doesn't matter what you do, if you want, you could just let it all out," Kai whispered into her ear and he heard her let out a breath and then she hiccuped and started to cry.

Kai started to rub her back, whispering soothing words into her ears. And soon enough, her tears subsided into sniffles and she pushed herself away from Kai's chest.

"I had to do it because I was abandoned and living on the streets, it was the only way I had to surive." Atsuko curled into a ball, facing Kai spilling her life story to this stranger who just picked her up and simply wanted her company. "It was the only way I knew how to survive." She whispered.

Kai felt sorry that she had to do such things to survive on the streets, it shouldn't happen to anyone. He pulled her to his chest again but this time they were lying on the bed.

"You don't have to do it anymore, you know. You're an adult now aren't you? You could get a normal job," Kai suggested softly and she shook her head.

"I couldn't get a job, nobody wanted to hire me," Atsuko answered, burying her face into Kai's chest further. Kai in turn stroked her back and head, once again whispering soothing things.

"You could get off the streets, I would let you stay here and get you a job, you know?" Kai suggested and Atsuko looked up at him and let out a small laugh.

"You're willing to let someone stay here even though you just met them an hour ago and you only know their names?" She asked him and he blushed slightly.

"I somehow feel I can trust you," Kai shyly muttered out, feeling embarrassed all of a sudden.

"You shouldn't trust people so easily, Kai, there also bad people in this world." Atsuko said and shifted herself to make herself more comfortable in Kai's arms.

"I don't trust a lot of people easily but you make me feel calm so.." Kai muttered out. Atsuko did really make him feel calm and that was rare. He felt so at peace with her in his arms and he didn't want anything else.

He looked down when he didn't receive an answer and smiled.

Atsuko was asleep, her breathing even and her face looked like she was at peace and free from troubles of having to scrap enough money to get by.

Kai carefully leaned down slightly and kissed her on the forehead before snuggling closer, careful not to wake her up and soon enough he fell asleep listening to rain outside the window.

° °° ° °° °

I don't know what I just wrote  :depressed:

But I was listening to Junai no Crescendo and I wanted to write a lil OS or maybe even a short fic on it but somehow my idea didn't really come together so just have this that somehow popped out of my head  :ptam-glow:

I will work on my part two of both the one-shots soon before I write requests or any OS ideas.... hopefully  :mon sweat:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #4 - Junai no Crescendo »
« Reply #12 on: October 07, 2014, 10:13:34 AM »

Based off of the drama, SPEC though its a OS so it's just really one case because I don't think I'd be able to write a full length fic of this but yep.

Preview of chrunoi's new OS:

UNIT: 48


Takahashi Minami sighed. It's been a week since she was transferred to Unit 48 but it was just a nice way of putting it. The fact was that because she fought and talked back with the chief of her unit, she ended up coming to this new unit that she didn't even know nor want to work in. Though this past week she had learnt bits about the Unit. Such as it was mostly made up of people that were troublemakers in the police department though most of them were geniuses or had a special talent in something.

It was also a unit that most people avoid considering how their "office" is really just in the basement of the police department though thankfully it was huge.

"Oi Takamidget," Yuko called from her desk and Minami grumbled slightly about the nickname but nodded for Yuko to continue. "We've got a new case." At that news, Minami let out a sigh. As much as she liked solving cases, the police department threw cases at them that were usually either from years ago or ones that they can't really solve and just decided to leave the dirty work to them.

"Also, they're assigning someone new to this unit," Yuko added and at that news Minami perked up from making coffee. Someone new? "They're coming right about now." Yuko finished before turning back to her magazine.

Just as she finished, the lift outside the door dinged and everyone in the office looked at the door. A moment later, a short haired girl stepped in. She wore a long sleeve collared shirt, suspender skirt as well as thigh high socks along with floral combat boots. An outfit that certainly did not match this dingy office. Everyone here was dressed in jackets and jeans or something comfortable.

"This is Unit 48's office?" The girl asked and looked around as she took a lollipop and unwrapped it before putting it in her mouth. Minami nodded slowly.

"Great! I'm Maeda Atsuko, the new girl." Maeda said with a smile before walking over to Minami's desk and sat on top of it.

"I look forward to working with you all~" Maeda sang out before placing the lollipop back into her mouth and looking through papers on top of Minami's desk.

'Oh boy' Minami thought. More and more weird people were coming to this Unit and Minami wasn't sure whether it was a good or bad thing.

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #5 - UNIT: 48 [Preview] »
« Reply #13 on: October 07, 2014, 10:29:18 AM »
sounds interesting.. :roll:

will you make it to a proper fic..? :D :bow:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #5 - UNIT: 48 [Preview] »
« Reply #14 on: October 08, 2014, 12:11:04 PM »

@Kairi65: I actually wanted to make this as a normal fic but I can't think up of a plot line and I doubt I'd be able to write action scenes well enough that's why it ended up being a one-shot in the making! However, I may post multiple parts of this perhaps as a second case or something similar? I'm not sure but that's probably what I'll do!  :hee:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #5 - UNIT: 48 [Preview] »
« Reply #15 on: October 14, 2014, 02:34:05 PM »

Warning: Short and not very well written OS I'm very sorry



Cupid's Club                       
                                                           
Where love could sneak up on you


Yuko laughed when she saw the card Minami had given to her. She knew Minami owned a club but she didn't know that she had such a lame tagline for it. But it apparently wasn't lame to the large crowd of people lined up outside the club.

Heck, Yuko knew it was popular but not this popular!

Yuko walked to the front of the line, with several people grumbling about her, and asked to be let in.

"Name?" The security guard asked and she gave it to him. He checked his clipboard and then nodded, and allowed her inside. Before Yuko went in, she stuck her tongue out at the people waiting in line before skipping in and upon hearing them grumble again she let out a laugh.

She squeezed her way through the crowd of dancing people, grimacing a little when her arms touched another person's sweaty skin. Yuko spotted Minami standing next to Atsuko, who was a waiter in Minami's club, waving to her. Yuko smiled and quickly continued to squeeze her out and let out a brief sigh of relief at having her own personal bubble back before skipping over to the two.

"Bakamina! Didn't know your club was this popular!" Yuko said and hugged the two though Minami grumbled about the nickname.

"Come on, let's go meet up with our friends," Atsuko interrupted Minami's grumbling, grabbing Minami's hand and motioned for Yuko to follow her as she walked into the VIP area and headed towards an area at the back that was sectioned off. It seemed like it was an area meant for the owner and friends.

Yuko was officially impressed with Minami's club.

"We're back guys~" Atsuko said as she approached a table in the middle that had several people sitting there. Yuko spotted Mariko and Miichan along with Tomochin and Chiyuu and someone else who she couldn't see.

"The guest finally arrived huh?" Mariko said smiling as she moved to the side to allow the three to sit at table.

"Yup, the star of the night is finally here!" Yuko announced and bowed before sitting. She looked around and stared at the unknown girl who was sitting opposite Yuko for a long time, breaking it to stare at Minami and slightly nod her head towards the girl. Minami let out a 'o' and proceeded to introduce her.

"Yuko! You haven't met KojiHaru before right? Yuko, this is Kojima Haruna and Haruna this is Oshima Yuko. You might know Haruna from some magazines before she does modelling!" Minami finished and gave a wide smile that Yuko nor Haruna seemed to acknowledge. Yuko grinned, she had observed Haruna and found her breast size how she liked it.

Haruna seemed to be spacing out, seeing as their friends started a conversation while Haruna looked up at the ceiling with a rather blank look on her face. Yuko had continued her rather creepy observation for quite a while before Haruna finally realized something.

"You've finally come back to reality huh?" Yuko said with a grin and Haruna tilted her head and Yuko came to a realization.

Shes like a cat. I've got the perfect nickname for her!

"I'm Yuko! Nice to meet you, Nyannyan!" Yuko said with a huge smile, feeling satisfied at her nicknaming skills.

"Nyannyan?" Haruna asked with a small pout and Yuko suddenly felt like the girl in those shoujo mangas when her heart started to speed up a little.

"Yes! It's a nickname I've just come up with for you! Because you remind me of a cat," Yuko explained and Haruna clapped her hands together and smiled.

"Ohhh! That's creative. Nice to meet you too. Ah everyone left us to dance.." Haruna said, realizing only now that she was left alone with Yuko.

"Ah is that so?" Yuko hadn't realized it as well, being caught up in her nicknaming thoughts. "Ah they did. Oh well. This reminds me, are you single?" Yuko supposed she was taking a slight risk by just straight out asking the question on her mind but this was a good way to ask since everyone was dancing with their girlfriends.

"Me? Oh no. I haven't really met anyone special yet," Haruna answered and gave Yuko a dazzling smile and Yuko could feel her face heating up with a blush. "Are you alright? Your face seems really red.." Haruna asked in concern, leaning close to Yuko's face and Yuko blushed even harder.

"I'm f-fine!" Yuko stuttered and in an attempt to lightly push away Haruna, she ended up grabbing one of Haruna's breast. Yuko shrieked slightly in both joy and slight horror before quickly pulling her hand back and standing up.

"I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to do that!" Yuko quickly apologized though inside she was rejoicing at that few moments she had held Haruna's boob. It was as great as I thought it'd be ahhhhh!! Haruna looked at Yuko surprised at her outburst and then let out a smile.

"It's okay! Don't feel so bad. Come sit back down!" Haruna patted the seat beside her and immediately Yuko sat next to her and snuggled up to her. Yuko could not resist the urge anymore. Yuko was worried for a moment that Haruna would push her away but instead she felt a pat on her head and looked up to see Haruna smiling at her.

"OOOO looks like some people have been getting cozy eh?" Mariko's voice came from behind and Yuko turned to see her friends standing behind her with a grin on their faces. Yuko stuck out her tongue and clung to Haruna more but Haruna was somewhat embarrassed now as their friends started to tease the two and she tried to pull away from Yuko.

"Stop pushing me away Nyannyan! Don't deny the attraction!" Yuko declared and everyone laughed as Haruna whacked Yuko on the head though Yuko smiled when she saw a blush forming on Haruna's face as well. After a while more of talking, everyone was starting to get tired and decided to head home.

Though it was in the early morning hours, the club still seemed full and lively and Yuko wondered where did these people get all that energy from. Almost everyone of her friends left, Minami and Atsuko had stayed in the club but moved to Minami's office to do what? Yuko didn't know.

Yuko moved to stand next to Haruna who was grabbing her handbag and then blocked her way as Haruna tried to get up.

"Yuko? What are you doing?" Haruna asked confused.

"Um Nyannyan I was just thinking that we should meet up again and get closer! But I don't have your number to do that.." Yuko was not as subtle as she hoped to be in asking her number but Haruna didn't seem to mind since she clapped her hands and let out a 'ahh!' and reached into her bag for her phone.

"Of course! Here's my number and tell me yours!" And the two exchanged their numbers and then with one last hug from Yuko which resulted in a light smack on the head (she'd tried to grope Haruna's breast again), the two exchanged goodbyes as well.

Yuko watched as Haruna got into a taxi and waved to her from inside which she returned and then reached into her bag for her car keys. She ended up pulling the card of the club that Minami had given to her and she laughed.


'Where love could sneak up on you' huh? Who knew that that would be true.' Yuko thought and then unlocked her car and proceeded to send a goodnight message to Haruna before driving home with a smile on her face.


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Not very romantic of me I know but I've been promising to get up some one-shots so yep  :sweat:

Sorry if it's not good enough for you  :OMG:

I'll hopefully update some better OS soon! :on roll:

I'll maybe edit this tomorrow to make it more interesting ahh  :mon trudge:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
« Reply #16 on: October 14, 2014, 04:03:57 PM »
I LOVE IT~! :mon inluv:

Waifuuuuuu, you should teach me about your writing skills~ :glasses:

Short or not, it's awesome! :mon thumb:


油断した私がハートときめかせたせいねその目に見つめられポーっとしてしまった

君を見つけたらどんな言葉を掛ければいい?その姿 見とれて僕はきっと立ち尽くす人混みと喧噪の隙間愛する人と出逢えたことだけでしあわせになる

スキャンダラスに生きて行こうそれが私たちの生きる道やりたいことやって行こう一度の人生だ

For more gayness and sweetness, visit the FuuMiru Thread and KojiYuu Thread!


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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
« Reply #17 on: October 14, 2014, 06:27:22 PM »
Chrunoi-san, are you sure *cough* this is just *cough* ...an OS? *cough*

Ugh cute KojiYuu!! >w<

More! More! Hhahahaha no offense though. Just keep the great works XD

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
« Reply #18 on: October 16, 2014, 06:18:17 PM »
Short or not, it's awesome! :mon thumb:

fully agreed~!! :onioncheer: :sleep:

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Re: « chrunoi's OS area: #6 - Cupid's Club [Kojiyuu] »
« Reply #19 on: October 17, 2014, 12:01:11 PM »

 author san for the Junai no Crescendo
 hmm...can I have the part 2???
 But if you can't it's okay
 Sorry for my bad grammar  :sweatdrop:

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