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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 19]
« Reply #100 on: August 31, 2007, 01:52:37 AM »
Wow... wordsworth  :oops: :oops: Thank you so much! I'm humbled by everything you said...  :oops: I'm not sure if I deserve it, but thank you for enjoying what I write. :) I've definitely come to enjoy writing myself a lot more lately... though I think I get too attached to the stories.

@ckd: Welcome and thanks for the comment! Why Momo? Because it had to be. :)

@lil_hamz: Mhm, I try to keep my stories beared on reality as much as I can, though it gets to a point where the narrative just has to take over... Basically, the only stuff that's safe is the beginning, which usually involves what's happening at the time I write it. BK is 7 people... 6 is such a lonely number, isn't it? I've noticed that in writing the past two chapters...

@Loser: I'm still waiting for your edited comment. :lol: jk. I'm sorry I didn't respond to your last one too much. I do wonder a bit about your "WTF just happened" moments and whatever else you think about this now though, mainly because you've been very outspoken in what you've thought so far... You know something will happen? A few things have happened, no? But don't worry, there is more to come. :) Poor Miya. Things are only going to get worse for a while...

@Amarghetta: I can't say too much to your post because you seem to be catching on well. You say you haven't figured it out, but I have a feeling from your comments you have some guesses that may not be too far off... As this story is coming together, I'm doing my best to have a reason for everything. As you guys no doubt noticed from this chapter, seemingly random things usually end up not being quite so random, whether it's the next chapter along or way down the road...

@modesta: Glad you enjoy where this is going :D and also glad you enjoyed Saki! She's quite a little spitfire, though that may be caused by her being slightly bipolar too... I wonder if Miya really knows what she's gotten herself into. Well, maybe she'll realize a bit more next chapter.

Speaking of next chapter, I plan to have it up tomorrow night (probably at very nearly 24 hours from now), so any last-minute comments on this chapter, please shoot away!  :bingo: :k-thrilled: You know I love hearing from you all. It's incredibly gratifying to know the products of my imagination are enjoyable to people other than myself.  XD :sweat:

Also, a couple more general things on this. Accidents really are the most shocking things, aren't they? Because they're never expected. Things can be going incredibly wonderfully and everyone has not a care in the world, but in a matter of seconds that can change completely... I hope these girls don't change too much, though you know, anything else would be hardly entertaining. ;)  I'm also surprised to see how much :heart: there is now for MiyaSaki. I could have sworn some of you were diehard Miya-Socko followers, so I'm amazed but very pleased to see that I'm writing them in an appealing way. I hope I can continue to make you love them all. :)

jaa, mata ashita~!  :D




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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 19]
« Reply #101 on: August 31, 2007, 04:16:44 AM »
Okay I did try my best really to edit my comment but it seems a bit too late since you already posted replies Rokun!! >w<
I was out the past day or two so i really couldn't edit it BUT!!

I really do think 100% positively know for sure!!!

My theories (you don't wanna know them then don't read it PLEASE!!)

that Miyabi WILL learn about the fine line between Life and Death and attempt to bring Momoko back from the dead
BUT nothing is without a price, so Something more dramatic I'm sure Really!!


Anyway I guess I'll make it up in the next chapter hee!

UPDATE!!

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #102 on: August 31, 2007, 06:23:46 PM »
Aww, Loser, I'd still really love to hear what you have to say about the last chapter! Maybe I'd even make a special response for you. :grin: Of course, some things may be made pointless by what happens in this one, but eh. :) Anyway, I know it's a bit early but I've been itching to post this chapter. It's a bit shorter than the last few have been, but in reviewing it I think I've expressed exactly what I wanted to and really have absolutely no desire to add anything. The chapter after this will continue the story. :) Anyway, uh-oh, things aren't getting better...

Also, in this chapter is perhaps my favorite paragraph I've ever written. I don't expect anybody to notice it (and read my mind), but it exemplifies an idea Loser had in her long post from a bit back. It made me happy my characters are having some consistency. ^_^ But also some growth... Anyway, onward!


Chapter 20

“No… no…!” Miyabi exclaimed as she sat on a small armchair with her arms wrapped around legs bent up in front of her. “She can’t be gone!” She wasn’t sure exactly who she was saying that to, but the thought had been going through her mind for the past couple hours. She looked over at Saki, who upon returning to their room had gone to the bed and lain on her back, staring at the ceiling, seemingly unblinking and unmoving ever since except for her chest rising and falling slowly with her breath of life. Of life… That was something Momoko would never have again. It was something so simple, something that was no effort for nearly everyone, and yet…

Unfolding her legs to set her feet back on the floor, she rose from the chair and walked over to Saki, looking down at her on the bed. Saki didn’t seem to notice her presence; she still stared blankly at the ceiling. “Saki-chan…?” Miyabi asked. When there was no response, she slid her knees onto the bed and shuffled next to the girl. She hesitated a second before poking her in the side. At the touch, Saki finally shifted her eyes to look at her.

“Are you okay?” Miyabi continued. “I don’t think you’ve said a word since the meeting…”

Saki continued staring at her. Despite herself, Miyabi felt that she became lost in the girl’s eyes. It seemed as if she was being held captive by them. “I’m sorry,” Saki said simply.

“There’s nothing to be sorry about…” Miyabi comforted, and she lay down herself, curling up and trying to snuggle into the other girl, who still didn’t make any further movement. “I’m just worried about you. We’re all of course taking… this… hard… but well, all the other girls are together in the room Risako, Kuma-chan and Maa-chan are supposed to share. I think they wanted all of us to stay together, but you just came in here by yourself. I had to follow, even though they were unhappy with me…”

The other girl didn’t respond, but now that Miyabi was close to her warmth, she felt herself relax a little bit. Everything outside of this bed seemed cold and dark and cruel right now, but as long as she was with her Saki-chan things could never be so bad. Eventually she felt the girl stir and sit up, and she adjusted and rose with her. The other girl still stared straight ahead. Why was she doing that? Miyabi wanted Saki looking at her.

“Miya…” Saki said in a hoarse whisper. The addressed girl kept close, listening intently. “I don’t know what to do…”

“What do you mean?” Miyabi asked curiously. “We were all close to Momo-chan… She’d been wonderful to me lately actually… But if she’s gone, there’s nothing we can do about it. We’ll just remember her…” Miyabi didn’t know if she really believed what she was saying, but right now next to Saki and her comforting warmth, that pain seemed distant.

Saki turned toward her and looked into her eyes. Miyabi’s breath caught at the fulfillment of her current wish. However, those eyes didn’t hold anything at all like what she had imagined in her fantasy. They were full of sorrow… of pain. That, she might have expected, but they were also… dark. She thought the girl was going to say something. She would have given anything for the girl to explain the phantom she saw in her eyes. “Miya…” she began again. “I - I’m sorry, I need to be alone for a while.” And then she shifted away from Miyabi and slid off the bed to walk out the door without looking back.

Miyabi stared after her for a moment until she felt a chill sweep through her, and she wrapped her arms around herself. What kind of thing was this that would make Saki-chan become like that? She’d read so much on death. She embraced dark symbols and ideas often enough herself. She thought she’d understood it when her grandmother died, but she was old, and it seemed the natural thing. She died with a smile on her face. This, though…

Images of the trains from the television arose inside her head. In her vision people milled around them all, some crying out in despair, some just staring blankly as she’d seen both Saki and Risako do in just the last few hours. And there were also apparitions rising from the wreckage. They drifted toward the people who were crying, but weren’t seen. Some of them waved frantically, trying to get the attention of those still living. It didn’t help. Momoko crawled out through a window in the apartment building that had been gutted. Her hands were scratched all over, and she was bleeding. She raised them in a pleading gesture to Miyabi.

“No!” Miyabi yelled. Momoko was young; full of life still. It wasn’t natural for that life to suddenly vanish!

She was broken out of the realm of her imagination by the sound of a girl calling to her. “Miya-chan?” Yurina asked slowly from the doorway. Miyabi turned her attention in the girl’s direction. She could see the other three girls behind her, Maasa peering up with interest while Chinami and Risako cowered behind the taller two. Chinami just looked terrified, but Risako stared at Miyabi as if she’d never seen her before.

Also upon returning to reality, Miyabi realized she had stood up on the bed and was glaring at herself through a mirror on the wall, her fists clenched at her sides. She didn’t immediately change her position, however. The hot emotion of the idea of the desecration she’d discovered was still blazing in her heart.

“Miya-chan,” Yurina repeated. “Are you all right…? Where’s Captain? We caught a glimpse of her going down the hall, but by the time Risako got to the door she was gone.”

Miyabi jumped down from the bed and spun to look at the gathered girls. “I don’t know where she is,” she said bluntly.

“Miya-chan…” Yurina said once more, softly, and this time she walked closer to the girl she was calling out to. Reaching her, she hesitated a moment before reaching out and hugging her, tentatively at first, but then very tightly. Miyabi didn’t respond right away, but with the girl’s embrace the fury bled out of her somewhat, and she hugged her back just as tightly. There was a time for the fury, but that time had passed. It now slowly began to be replaced with cold determination. Feeling the taller girl’s warmth calming it, and even her beating heart, she’d fully realized what she needed to do.

The other girls were now coming up behind Yurina, and in turn each joined in the hug, even Risako. However, Miyabi noticed the youngest girl still couldn’t hide a very frightened look within her eyes.

“Thank you,” Miyabi said in a voice muffled by Yurina’s hair, which was pressing against her face. The girls finally separated, and she smiled at them all. “I guess through it all, Berryz still stick together, huh?” She somewhat hoped rather than believed that would be the case. She didn’t want to do this alone.

However, the other girls except Yurina only exchanged glances. “But Captain…” Chinami said.

“What about me?” an energetic voice rang from the doorway. The girls spun to look at their new arrival, and most broke into smiles at the sight. Saki was smiling herself, seeming as if nothing had ever affected her. Miyabi caught the ruse though. The smile wasn’t copied in her eyes, which were still shrouded in a shadow that now felt impenetrable to Miyabi. Yurina ran up to hug her too, but this time the others didn’t join in. Apparently Maasa and Chinami were satisfied just to see her, though Maasa at least still appeared to have some doubt as to her true recovery. Risako hadn’t even smiled. Miyabi felt saddened noticing that. Her two closest friends… and because of her, now also apparently not far shy of enemies. Well, she’d have to see what she could do about that later. First things were first, and she had a feeling she didn’t have much time.

She walked over to her bag and began digging in it. She’d brought a few things with her in case the subject happened to come up, since she had a suspicion it might with Risako’s new-found knowledge, but she didn’t expect it to be coming up in such this way or quite this quickly. She also didn’t expect to need it for this purpose.

Pushing aside two books she would need later, but not now, she eventually found the large coin she was looking for and sat cross-legged next to her suitcase, holding the coin out in front of her. She glanced back at the other girls, who were still talking with their Captain at the door. Saki gave her a glance from time to time, but nobody made a move toward her. Good, that was all for the best right now.

She looked back to the coin and concentrated hard on it. It wasn’t the designs arrayed on the coin she concentrated on, but rather she stared as if looking through it, beyond it. A vision appeared in her head of her room and her bookshelves within it. She guided herself toward one of them. It wasn’t as if she walked, because she wasn’t really there. It was more that she floated along as some ethereal form. She reached a non-existent hand out toward one of the books sitting there, and when she grabbed at it the vision disappeared, and she found herself sitting once again in the hotel room. She still held the coin out in front of her, though it was now quite hot in her palm. However, her other arm was outstretched as well, and she gripped a book in its hand. It was a plain-covered and solemn-looking volume, meant to look old even though this print was rather new. Calligraphied golden characters on its cover read “死者の書”.

While smiling at her success, she finally noticed several girls standing around her. “Miya…” Chinami said in a voice that seemed terrified again. “What are you doing…?”

She looked up at the girls surrounding her. Most stared down at her with wide eyes, but Risako’s were actually narrowed, and Saki’s seemed cloudier than ever. “What does it look like I’m doing?” she said calmly, rising and curling her fingers tightly around the coin in her hand before stowing it in a pocket of her baggy shorts. “I was getting a book out of my bag.”

“No you weren’t,” Risako said in a sharp voice. Miyabi stared at her. The girl looked like she was becoming angry now.

“We saw you sitting there…” Maasa said slowly. “It looked like something was wrong, so we walked over. On the way, you reached out an empty hand, but by the time we arrived… You were holding that book…” She leaned forward slightly and squinted as if trying to get a better look at it. Miyabi held it close to her chest within both her arms.

“Well then you must have been blinking or something when I pulled it out of my bag. What else would it be?” she asked innocently. The other girls exchanged glances, but Risako kept staring at her.

“Tell them, Miya,” she ordered.

Miyabi furrowed her eyebrows and opened her mouth as if to scold the girl, but she noticed the other girls staring at her expectantly. Saki was now also looking at her. She didn’t at all like what she saw in those eyes. There was the darkness still, but there was also a sense of a burning question… and knowing. It was looking into them that caused Miyabi’s walls to collapse, and she began to get flustered.

“Er…” she began. She tore her eyes away from her girlfriend and looked around from expectant face to expectant face. Apparently the other girls were also more than willing to take any excuse to be distracted from what had happened today. “I… it’s really nothing…” Risako took a step toward her and poked her in the stomach below the book. Hard. Miyabi winced.

“Okay, okay… Um… Well, you see. When I’m at home, I do a lot of reading…”

“Of course,” Maasa said, and then continued challengingly, “Your school is tough.”

Miyabi tilted her head slightly. “Well… actually… it doesn’t have to do with school…”

“Then what?” Chinami asked. For some reason, the girl no longer seemed frightened and instead very interested.

Suddenly Saki broke into a laugh. “Do you think we’re idiots, Miya?” she asked. Miyabi stared at the girl, shocked. “You’re the one that started the fashion of all the skulls and stuff, after all.” The other girls nodded. “I didn’t realize how far it’d gone though…” She stepped closer to Miyabi too, who felt herself break out into a sudden sweat. “So, you’re really a witch?”

The pronouncement was followed by gasps from Yurina and Chinami. Apparently not everyone had put it together. However, Maasa only nodded slowly in understanding, and Risako stared at her as hard as ever.

“Because that was magic, right?” Saki said, and she reached out her hand. Miyabi wanted to dive out of the way, but she couldn’t, and Saki took the book from her and looked down at it. “The Book of the Dead?” she asked, then quickly darted her eyes back to Miyabi. “What are you planning to do with this?” she asked in a low voice.

Miyabi’s fingers itched to reach out and grab the book back from the girl, but returning the look into those eyes she couldn’t bring herself to do it. This was the girl she’d do anything for… give anything for… after all. That had been the final impetus that made her decide to do what she planned. She wanted to make the darkness that had invaded those delicate and beautiful eyes go away. Finally she gave up, and her body sagging, went over to sit at the edge of the bed they were interrupted while making out on what now seemed so long ago.

“Okay…” she said defeatedly. She felt Saki and Yurina join her on the bed, and except for Risako, the other girls sat on the floor to look up at her. Risako leaned back against the wall, watching Miyabi carefully. “Yes, I’ve been studying things recently that might be called witchcraft. Some of it I suppose is. Do you remember Kuromi?”

The girls were quiet for a second as if they were thinking. “That’s the girl who you went to school with but transferred away, isn’t it?” Saki asked. “I remember you talked about her. You were friends, right?”

“Yeah,” Miyabi replied. “Her mother was some kind of Shinto mystic, and tried to train her in ‘communing with nature’, they called it. Kuro-chan had apparently expanded on that idea though and tried to learn western mysticism too. A lot of it was quite similar to what most people think of as witchcraft…”

“Why did you become friends with her?” Chinami asked, frantically astounded. “She doesn’t sound like the type of person to be hanging around with.”

Miyabi stared at her. “You guys know me. When I’m by myself I’m not exactly a normal girl either.”

“Don’t say that!” Yurina exclaimed. “You’re a Berryz!”

“Yeah…” Miyabi replied, looking down into her lap.

“So this Kuromi taught you about witchcraft?” Maasa asked insistently, and the other girls quieted down again.

“She taught me about her communing with nature,” Miyabi corrected half-heartedly. “But she transferred before I could really get to know much, and in my curiosity I started looking up some things on the internet and found some sites and forums…”

“Miya!” Yurina gasped. “You know not to talk to strange people online! They could be some ota stalkers. I mean, you have enough fans now.” She shuddered. “Or they could be worse…”

“Do you think I cared?” Miyabi asked, looking back up toward her. “My best friend had just moved away… Plus, the types of places I went to I doubt were very concerned about Japanese teen idols.” Yurina looked like she was going to say something more, but closed her mouth again before anything came out.

“Anyway,” Miyabi continued, “So on the internet I found western Wiccan and other sites were they talked about things similar to what Kuro-chan told me about, and although it was tough sometimes understanding their languages before they started trying to speak Japanese to me since they found me very interesting for some reason, I suppose I came to be very interested in the idea of energies and spirits and magic, and since then I’ve done my best to learn as much as I can. That book,” she said, nodding her head to what Saki held in her hands, “is one of those I’ve studied from.”

“So…” Saki began, “What are you going to do with it now?”

Miyabi couldn’t help but notice the suspicion in her voice, and she looked adamantly back at her girlfriend. “Nothing special,” she lied easily. “I just felt like it would be a good way to distract myself from today.”

Saki stared back at her, and Miyabi knew that just like she could tell when the girl wasn’t being honest, her own lie rang clear to her as well. The other girls seemed to accept that though – even Risako – and she joined the girls on the floor finally to look up at Miyabi.

“Well now that you’ve told them,” the young girl began impatiently, “The rest of us need our distraction too, you know. I guess we’ll still be here all weekend, so we need something to do while management talks about our futures.” The other girls adopted slightly anxious looks at the reminder, but it only seemed to encourage her friend who somehow always managed to continue making things worse whenever possible. “So show us more of what you can do! Cooler things than you showed me last night before we went to bed. Like whatever you did to make that book appear…”

Miyabi slowly froze at several points during the girl’s command, and at the end barely moved. She didn’t need to look to know that Saki was giving her a very cool stare indeed.

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #103 on: August 31, 2007, 07:03:36 PM »
So that part with saki leaving and re-entering the room was part of her bipolarness?.... ~creepy~

and that was such a bitch move for risako to call out miyabi like that, and make her reveal her secert, since miyabi wanted to do it herself, when the time was right.

and the ending,haha, jealous captain,. waiting for the next chapter
I wasn't able to identify you favorite paragraph too.

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #104 on: August 31, 2007, 07:20:11 PM »
Sorry for not commenting on the last chapter and leaving a crap comment on the chapter before. I doubt this comment will be much better though.

The last few chapters have left me kinda speachless. With Momoko dying I was like :OMG: But now there may be some hope with Miyabi bringing her back from the dead. But is Miya's magical skill that powerful??? Hmmm...

Risako blurting out about sleeping at Miyabi's and making it sound worse then it actually was, was funny. I suppose it was good that she didn't have any reason to say anything about the kiss but...Uh oh!!! Miya's gonna be in trouble. But I really hope her and Saki don't split up (don't be that mean). I will actually probably cry if they do.



By the way. I'm glad you updated this earlier than you were planning to as I was gonna try and stay awake and wait for it but now I don't have to. I'm not sure if I could actually make myself stay up till 2:50am though :sweat: Anyway. keep up the good work. This is the only story that I'm reading at the moment that keeps me wanting more. So.....


UPDATE :D

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #105 on: August 31, 2007, 08:07:13 PM »
wait...Miyabi's actually a witch!? Uh-oh...

Don't tell me she'll try and bring Momo back or Risako will force to make Miya love her instead of Saki later on, right?

I have to say that chapter got me, not knowing Miyabi had a secret all along

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #106 on: September 01, 2007, 01:12:23 AM »
Seriously hooray for the updates! <333

But let's see...Since some of my idea's are wrong and some are right...You never clarified which is right or not so I can't chuck any of them out yet =T

But anyway BIG post >;P

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Saki, who upon returning to their room had gone to the bed and lain on her back, staring at the ceiling, seemingly unblinking and unmoving ever since except for her chest rising and falling slowly with her breath of life.

It's one of those typical 'I can't believe my friend just died' moments but..Considering that Momoko and Captain were closer like best friends..She took it harder than the others even if they were close to Momoko as well..

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At the touch, Saki finally shifted her eyes to look at her.

“Are you okay?” Miyabi continued. “I don’t think you’ve said a word since the meeting…”
The shock of it all is still there but thinking long and hard about it..Captain must be recollecting memories of the past and such and coming back to the future where Momoko is dead and she can't really do anything about it

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The other girl still stared straight ahead. Why was she doing that? Miyabi wanted Saki looking at her.
This...just made me believe Miyabi really is becoming the needy type. Like How Risako wants Miyabi's attention back then, Miyabi wants Saki's attention now. :kekeke:

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“What do you mean?” Miyabi asked curiously. “We were all close to Momo-chan… She’d been wonderful to me lately actually… But if she’s gone, there’s nothing we can do about it. We’ll just remember her…” Miyabi didn’t know if she really believed what she was saying, but right now next to Saki and her comforting warmth, that pain seemed distant.
Miyabi at first is willing to let Momoko go on with her passing here, ready to let go and move on because it's life but that's changes later.. :glasses:

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However, those eyes didn’t hold anything at all like what she had imagined in her fantasy. They were full of sorrow… of pain. That, she might have expected, but they were also… dark.
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When i read this I full heartedly believed that Saki was ready to tell Miyabi off for saying those things because in my head Saki is the Captain and feels it is her fault for letting it happen. :gyaaah:

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Images of the trains from the television arose inside her head. In her vision people milled around them all, some crying out in despair, some just staring blankly as she’d seen both Saki and Risako do in just the last few hours. And there were also apparitions rising from the wreckage. They drifted toward the people who were crying, but weren’t seen. Some of them waved frantically, trying to get the attention of those still living. It didn’t help. Momoko crawled out through a window in the apartment building that had been gutted. Her hands were scratched all over, and she was bleeding. She raised them in a pleading gesture to Miyabi.
This...Confused me slightly. Like Exactly How powerful is Miyabi? To the point that she has the ability to see the dead or not? :smoke:

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Also upon returning to reality, Miyabi realized she had stood up on the bed and was glaring at herself through a mirror on the wall, her fists clenched at her sides.

If Miyabi had the ability to see the dead, seeing Momoko like how you described probably hit some buttons in Miya that just made her realize just how bad the events were  :mon ref:

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“Miya-chan…” Yurina said once more, softly, and this time she walked closer to the girl she was calling out to. Reaching her, she hesitated a moment before reaching out and hugging her, tentatively at first, but then very tightly.

hee, You make Yurina the very supporting type like she's trying extremely hard to keep the Berryz together even when some are just out of it -coughcaptain-  :mon wind:

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“What about me?” an energetic voice rang from the doorway.

FAKE as soon as I read energetic, I knew Saki was faking it  :mon geek:

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She looked back to the coin and concentrated hard on it. It wasn’t the designs arrayed on the coin she concentrated on, but rather she stared as if looking through it, beyond it. A vision appeared in her head of her room and her bookshelves within it. She guided herself toward one of them. It wasn’t as if she walked, because she wasn’t really there. It was more that she floated along as some ethereal form. She reached a non-existent hand out toward one of the books sitting there, and when she grabbed at it the vision disappeared, and she found herself sitting once again in the hotel room. She still held the coin out in front of her, though it was now quite hot in her palm. However, her other arm was outstretched as well, and she gripped a book in its hand. It was a plain-covered and solemn-looking volume, meant to look old even though this print was rather new. Calligraphied golden characters on its cover read “死者の書”
I wonder if the realm Miyabi ventured in to recieve the book was a realm that bordered on the realms of the living and the dead  :mon cweepy:

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“What does it look like I’m doing?” she said calmly, rising and curling her fingers tightly around the coin in her hand before stowing it in a pocket of her baggy shorts. “I was getting a book out of my bag.”

“No you weren’t,” Risako said in a sharp voice. Miyabi stared at her. The girl looked like she was becoming angry now.
Risako could have been a brat for calling out Miyabi for lying like that but the idea that I get is that Risako knows Miyabi should tell what she was doing and lying about it was not the best time..Though I'm not sure if I made sense saying that lol  :mon sweat:

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“Well then you must have been blinking or something when I pulled it out of my bag. What else would it be?” she asked innocently. The other girls exchanged glances, but Risako kept staring at her.

“Tell them, Miya,” she ordered.
It's to me..a whole 'we're a group and we don't keep secrets from one another' kind of thing that Risako is trying to abide by...But thats just IMO  :mon sweat:

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“I… it’s really nothing…” Risako took a step toward her and poked her in the stomach below the book. Hard. Miyabi winced.
Lol, quoted because it's just cute XDXD

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“The Book of the Dead?” she asked, then quickly darted her eyes back to Miyabi. “What are you planning to do with this?” she asked in a low voice.
Obviously IMO bring back the dead or communicate to find a way to bring one back..  :mon angel:

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Miyabi’s fingers itched to reach out and grab the book back from the girl, but returning the look into those eyes she couldn’t bring herself to do it. This was the girl she’d do anything for… give anything for… after all. That had been the final impetus that made her decide to do what she planned. She wanted to make the darkness that had invaded those delicate and beautiful eyes go away.

I can't help thinking though, Miyabi is most likely bringing Momoko back not because she wants her back but..Because Saki wants her back even if Saki doesn't say a thing about it, Miyabi feels Momoko is important to Saki in a way.  :mon determined:

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“So…” Saki began, “What are you going to do with it now?”

Miyabi couldn’t help but notice the suspicion in her voice, and she looked adamantly back at her girlfriend. “Nothing special,” she lied easily. “I just felt like it would be a good way to distract myself from today.”
Liar >;P Miyabi knows The others and Saki would attempt to stop her at any means if they knew what Miyabi was truly planning to do with that book.. :mon determined: :mon geek:

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“So show us more of what you can do! Cooler things than you showed me last night before we went to bed. Like whatever you did to make that book appear…”
Lol that tiny slip up of Risako staying over at Miyabi's is likely to cause a stir between her and Saki :mon sweat:

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Miyabi slowly froze at several points during the girl’s command, and at the end barely moved. She didn’t need to look to know that Saki was giving her a very cool stare indeed.
Yup, issues between her and Saki indeed  :mon uggh:

UPDATE UPDATE  :mon blowhorn: :mon blowhorn: :mon blowhorn:

I need to know what happens next!!  :mon baby:

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #107 on: September 01, 2007, 02:20:12 AM »
@Amarghetta: I can't say too much to your post because you seem to be catching on well. You say you haven't figured it out, but I have a feeling from your comments you have some guesses that may not be too far off... As this story is coming together, I'm doing my best to have a reason for everything. As you guys no doubt noticed from this chapter, seemingly random things usually end up not being quite so random, whether it's the next chapter along or way down the road...

I have some guesses, yes; but I don't think I'm on the right path.  :P   I've imagined Miya trying to do something about Momoko's death, but not exactly bringing her back. I didn't expect her to be so careless about her secret, though. It makes me wonder if that means she'll be careless about some other things, you know.

The girls were pretty calm about Miya's thing, considering the circumstances. Then again, it's probably because of the circumstances that they don't get to grasp the true meaning of it all. Nice trick she pulled, btw. It sorta reminded me a scene of the movie Constantine, although that one was different...

In particular, Saki's reaction to Momoko's death is intriguing and somewhat scary. It makes me think she had some unfinished matters with her or something.  :?

And finally... Risako's totally acting like a jealous (ex)girlfriend!  XD

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #108 on: September 01, 2007, 03:31:14 AM »
Well first of all, applause for rokun!! I was drawn to this because it obviously involves the berryz, and I confess that I haven't read the whole fic, (I seldom ever do) but this is very interesting and addictive! My favourite member is dead  :cry:, but I'm still gonna read it!

It's also (excellent but) scary how you make the characters so genuine. For instance, I like miyabi in this fic. There are many different facets of her personality but they all seem plausibly Miyabi-ish. and is that the Tibetan book of the dead, i wonder? Egyptian? Tsugunagian? all ways are intriguing!

Since Miyabi is one of the protagonists, it's natural that other characters are less developed, but I have to say I really like how Yurina is this big, tall thing that gives miyabi hugs. wery wery dahhlink! reminds me of barney the dinosaur hahhaha

I'm not gonna try to figure out what's going on and to predict what'll happen next (I'm superdumb at that) but I'm definitely awaiting the next chapter! :)


Peeaaaccchhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #109 on: September 01, 2007, 12:11:49 PM »
Love how Risako pushes Miya around like she's her wuss XD

Basing on Saki's reaction on the last paragraph, looks like Miya didn't tell her about the sleepover. Let's see how Miya mellows her down.  :)

Wow, so Miya really knows witchcraft. :O I hope this won't be her first time reviving someone, coz usually the slightest mistakes in resurrection spells/rituals can have disastrous results. But hey, a crazier, spazzzier, faster eye-blinking Momoko would be great, ne? XD

WAR AKARI!!! Infernal Ninjutsu, Hidden Lore...Freedom of Opposites Technique!!! Rest in peace Kyle,Jab,Mom,Tita, ChrNo...

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #110 on: September 10, 2007, 10:50:47 PM »
Wow~ I've been JPH!P deprived for too long, I think.
-pants- I had a lot of chapters to catch up on.
Unfortunately I'm terribly exhausted from marching practice, so I'll just have to try and give ya a better comment the next time around (if there is a next time, I'm not sure how long I'll have access to the forum before/if it's taken away from me again).
This story has really grown wonderfully from the last chapter I read.
T___T I was terribly devastated to read about Momoko's death, though. I seriously cried. T~T
And then Miya's being a witch was kind of surprising.
So it'll be interesting to see where this goes. <3
CAPTAIN/MIYA FTW~!!!
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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 20: Kuromi's Gift]
« Reply #111 on: September 13, 2007, 07:55:58 PM »
Eep! I never responded to you guys from the last chapter! I suppose I don't really need to, but I like to let you know I am reading all the wonderful things you have to say. ^_^

Hello Fimmy-chan!  :D Nice to see you. I hope your internet access isn't taken away. :( We all need our JPHiP fix! Thank you for enjoying the new chapters though. :hee:

Wordy - Risako pushes Miya around like she's her wuss? LoL I suppose that's a nice way of putting that. :sweat: You'll find out more about it in coming chapters, but Miyabi really hasn't er... had the chance to practice a lot of what she thinks she can do yet. You can bet it's going to be quite the spectacle...

bot - Welcome to you too! My, so many replies to this one. I feel so special, and I don't think it was even my best chapter. :oops: :shy1: Miyabi is of course the central character, with Risako and Saki kind of also playing major supporting roles, but I've tried my best to develop the other girls as well as I could too. I know some are still rather pigeonholed... But I'm hoping to reveal a bit more depth with them as time goes on. In the next chapter for example you get to see a bit more from one of the other girls.  ;)

Amarghetta - Once again, you've got some pretty good guesses. ;) However, while part of Miyabi's "hobby" being revealed may have been carelessness, I wonder if she might not have really subconsciously wanted them to find out about it... After all, she really didn't try to hard to keep it hidden. Being first-person perspective, Miyabi really is quite an unreliable narrator after all...

Loser: Yay! Long comment!  :D I wonder if anything else will get answered in the coming chapter? :kekeke: As to Miyabi's vision of the train wreck, it was really something that she saw in her mind. Now, whether it was something her imagination created or that was summoned by some type of intuition might be a matter of discussion...

ckd: Sorry for surprising you.  :lol: Although, I did hope some people might not have figured it out by then...

Lolli:  :oops: <-- That's what I'm feeling after reading what you had to say. I'm glad the story's captured your attention that much! Hopefully this is still early enough if you want to read it tonight! Although sorry it's been awhile since the last update. >.>

modesta: I like how you're really keyed into the comments I make. :) I'm trying to make the characters complex, but I don't know if I'm able to keep them consistent all the time...

Also, I shouldn't have even mentioned that about my "favorite paragraph". XD It was kind of silly really. When Saki took Miya's book away from her, I just had this vision that wouldn't go away of Miya staring at nothing but the book in Saki's hands while Saki was looking at it, holding her hands tensely in front of her trying to keep from snatching it back away from her, since of course she couldn't do that to her girlfriend.  :lol: I dunno lol, it was just a very enjoyable picture in my head. There are a few more lines I love in my new chapter too, so I suppose I'll have to get used to it, lol. Speaking of...

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 21: Friends?]
« Reply #112 on: September 13, 2007, 08:14:21 PM »
New chapter! :D I feel much happier about this chapter than the last few I've written (in both my stories), so I hope everyone else loves it too! A lot happens in it, but there's also space for a couple rather intimate conversations... Anyway, once again without further ado...!


Chapter 21

Not especially wanting to follow Risako’s suggestion - at least, especially not after what she’d just revealed in it - Miyabi did her best to convince the other girls she needed some time to think about what had happened today. They grudgingly left her alone, although with strong objections from Yurina who thought they should still stick together. Maasa and Chinami were different stories, though.

Whenever Miyabi caught Chinami’s eye, the girl displayed this spooked look that seemed to imply she was unsure whether Miyabi was going to yell at her or set her hair on fire. Considering the girl’s fears of so many things, Miyabi wasn’t terribly surprised at this reaction, but at least she didn’t run away from her. Apparently witch didn’t quite equal monster in her mind. As ridiculous a thought as that might sound, Miyabi had been quite afraid that was how some of the girls would react.

Maasa on the other hand now always seemed to give her even cooler looks than usual. She was very sharp in asking questions about specifics of what Miyabi did, and when she wasn’t speaking she seemed to be appraising Miyabi as one would a million yen tuna at the market. As much as Miyabi liked expensive tuna, she wasn’t thrilled with the comparison.

Yurina was the only one who didn’t seem to be bugged at all about things that were going on at the moment. Amid Chinami’s and Maasa’s independent reactions, as well as Risako’s and Saki’s level stares which Miyabi thought didn’t necessarily have anything to do with something as insignificant as Miyabi practicing witchcraft, she always looked at her with interest just as she did everyone else. She was the last to leave after Miyabi asked them to go, giving her a long hug that ended only when Saki cleared her throat loudly. None of the other girls so much as touched her.

Distracted in the thought about her friends, she flipped a page in her Book of the Dead as she lay on the bed reading through it. Saki had gone with the others to dinner or something, and although she was expected to return since it was her room also after all, after a couple hours there was still no sign of her.

Despite her distraction, Miyabi was captivated by one passage that spoke of a “Ritual of the Innocent”. It didn’t go into deep detail except to speak of innocence being held highest above all, and that if innocence was despoiled, innocence alone could restore it. The paradox stumped her, but the only other useful information the passage gave was an obscure religious reference that Miyabi couldn’t pinpoint.

Groaning after deciding to give up, she rose into a cross-legged sitting position, closing the book and kneading her forehead. Maybe she needed some sleep… She glanced at the clock, which showed the time nearing 19:30. Saki had to be back soon… Although, if she did return, Miyabi wasn’t sure what exactly she’d even say to the girl. “Hi, I’m sorry I didn’t tell you before, but my ex-girlfriend slept in my room in my house last night. As my current girlfriend and the last one to be in there with me, I thought you should know.” Thinking of that made Miyabi rub her forehead even harder. Why stop there though? “Oh, and before we went to bed, we kissed. She asked me to be her first, and I couldn’t deny her could I? I mean she’s just so cute!” Yeah, Saki would leave it at that all right. Risako herself might not read much into it, but she had a feeling Saki with her indelible maturity would have a slightly different view.

She was on that train of thought until it abruptly crashed when a voice spoke from behind her. An apartment building might have even fallen on it. “Well Miya, that’s quite some dedication. I’ve been watching you read those two pages of that book for the last half hour. Or are you just too tired and stupid to absorb anymore right now?”

Miyabi felt as if she jumped in the air as she twisted to see Saki sitting calmly on a chair before the foot of the bed. She still wore the same gym shorts and light t-shirt she had when they made out before her life was turned upside down. At Miyabi’s look of shock and recognition, Saki launched herself softly from the chair and landed on her knees at the foot of the bed, crawling up past Miyabi to open the book to the first few pages.

“Only in unknowing may one find the illuminated path of righteousness. So is the path, lit by the thousand candles of the One Most High. The Highest summons those who give their lives in pursuit of illumination, and so along the path they trod and in his footsteps they find the Way,” Saki read from the book. “Well, I take the stupid part back…” she said in a voice that didn’t sound so sympathetic. “In fact, I feel a sudden urge to fall asleep after reading just that…” Immediately after she spoke, her head fell to the book, and with her eyes closed she began snoring loudly.

“Stop it!” Miyabi growled softly and half-heartedly, and pulled the book out from under Saki’s face, carefully inspecting it to make sure none of the pages were marred. As she did so, with great fanfare Saki ceased her snoring and yawned, rubbing her eyes as if she’d just been awakened from a terribly deep sleep. Miyabi slammed her book shut. “You’re being so silly…” Even though she meant to be scolding, she couldn’t help her voice sounding simpering and affectionate.

“What?” Saki said through another wide yawn. “I’m the one that feels stupid now for watching you that whole time. While I thought you were reading, you were really sleeping. You know you’re a nerd Miya when even in your sleep you’re turning pages as if you’re still reading a book…”

Miyabi poked her in the side. “You’re mean…” she whined.

Saki stayed quiet when she said that, and Miyabi halted the second poke she was preparing. It would have been much harder than the first. Instead, after a few seconds the girl caught Miyabi’s eyes and studied them closely. “I suppose you expect me to wonder why Risako said she went to bed with you last night? Or about what you’re doing with that book?”

Miyabi felt her breathing slow at the sudden change in tone, and her senses flared into overdrive in an attempt to discern whatever signals the other girl might be letting slip out. She opened her mouth a time or two, but at the shock of the bluntness of both of Saki’s questions, didn’t manage to utter any words.

“Well I’m not,” Saki said dismissively. Miyabi stared at her in amazement. However, that amazement was quickly tempered by what the girl had to say next. “Because I think that if there was anything that was really important, my girlfriend would tell me, especially since she knows me better than probably anyone alive. That I ask nothing more of her than to be honest with me...” Her contemplative look suddenly became a sly grin. “Well, nothing more than a few… favors… that I know she doesn’t at all mind granting…” With that, she crawled up almost into Miyabi’s lap, taking her shoulders and raising her lips ever closer to Miyabi’s own.

Miyabi had felt chills run through her with every word the girl had to say, and right before their lips met she raised her own hands and gripped Saki’s sides, pushing her gently but firmly away. “No…” she breathed, and she almost couldn’t believe the words coming out of her mouth. Saki was so close to doing who knows what wonderful things to her, and she had stopped her because her conscience was now devouring her insides as if trying to find a way, any way, out into the light.

“Hmm…?” Saki questioned. “Is there something wrong?” Her voice nearly appeared innocent, but there was a keen awareness in her eyes Miyabi couldn’t miss.

Miyabi looked away. “I…” she began.

“Yes?” Saki prodded.

“Risako stayed over at my house last night…” she said reluctantly, still looking away and down.

“I see…” Saki said, betraying no surprise in her voice.

“She’d come over because… because things hadn’t been right between us.”

“So you aren’t as over her as you thought you were?” Saki said, a note of resignation now entering her voice.

At that, Miyabi snapped her gaze back to the girl’s. The sadness in the eyes she looked into nearly drove her mad. “No!” she cried. “I was over her. I mean, I am over her. If anything, last night confirmed it.” She now began speaking quickly as if she was in a race to save Saki from the despondency she seemed to be falling into. “When she came over, she… expressed her feelings for me. She knew there was no way we could be together now, and that’s not just because of you and me; she still does have that boyfriend you know, I suppose. But, we just… had to clear the table between us… And we did… And I agreed to her spending the night there as friends. I mean, despite it all we’re still best friends, you know…” She ended with a pleading look at Saki, hoping she’d understand. The girl’s look did change; however, it didn’t become any happier. If anything, it actually became sadder, but when the girl looked away herself, Miyabi realized it might not be because of her.

“Yes… I suppose you are,” Saki said softly. “That’s what friends do, isn’t it?” She looked back into Miyabi’s face, this time earnestly amidst the sadness. “You and I can date, and kiss, and maybe even love…” Miyabi felt herself blush slightly at those words. “…But there are others you can love too, aren’t there? That you can spend time with, that you can enjoy the company of… That you can just have fun with…”

Miyabi nodded eagerly, happy for anything that might help lift the shadow she still saw veiling those beautiful eyes. “Yes, that’s right! You and I are… lovers…” she said blushing, “but that doesn’t change our friendships. Those are permanent…”

Unfortunately, Saki only seemed to look more down, and the shadow now nearly obscured her soul from Miyabi. Feeling that the girl was nearly on the verge of tears, Miyabi reached out and pulled her tightly to her.

“Miya…” Saki said to her shoulder. “I’ve made you be truthful with me despite how hard it must have been…” Miyabi stamped out a bit of guilt that flared up again at those words. “But really, they only made me realize I was being a hypocrite and that I need to be just as truthful with you…”

Miyabi felt pressure on her sides, and Saki pushed herself back to look into her eyes again, although she was still basically in Miyabi’s lap. “Last night…” she began, the last word breaking slightly. “Probably while you were talking with Risako and learning all about what she felt, Momo-chan called me…” Miyabi’s breath caught at the mention of that name, and resolve for what she intended to do flared up inside her once again. She had to figure out that book.

“We talked like normal at first, but then…” Saki now focused her eyes on something past Miyabi’s shoulder. “I’d been so stupid, and I hadn’t even realized. She told me she was scared, and that she thought she could ignore it while I was with Jun because she could convince herself I could never understand anyway. But when she realized there was something going on between you and I that illusion shattered, and she began to get obsessed. You know her, her hyper-ness comes from her obsessive compulsiveness, and this was just the type of thing to put her into overdrive…”

Miyabi joined Saki in staring at nothing, thinking about what the girl was telling her. It all made sense: why Momoko paid so much attention to her lately, why she seemed hyper-aware of their relationship, why she was so insistent in talking to both of them… But, Saki surely wasn’t implying…

They locked eyes again as the girl continued. “Last night she explained it all. She said that… she was in love with me…” Saki’s eyes now pled to Miyabi’s own. She wanted to hug the girl as tight as she could, but her arms didn’t seem to be working at the moment for some reason. “I was… so shocked I didn’t know what to say. I didn’t want to try to comprehend it because I was with you, and she knew it, but she wasn’t giving any ground. Eventually I just hung up since I didn’t want to deal with it right then. The last thing she did before that was call my name pleadingly…” Tears were definitely now glistening at the edges of her eyes. “That was the last I’ll ever hear from her…”

At the sight of those tears, Miyabi’s arms finally found life and wrapped around the girl, pulling her into a close and intimate embrace. They held each other for a few minutes, Saki somehow amazingly holding back tears while Miyabi felt some kind of instinct take over and rocked her slowly. During the silence, Miyabi tried to reconcile her own thoughts on the matter. Obviously Saki was devastated by how her last conversation with the girl who was probably her best friend went. However, the content of that conversation was of strong personal concern to Miyabi herself. Saki was her girlfriend. If anyone was going to love her, it should be her. However, this girl whom until lately she’d almost despised expressed her love, and Miyabi could only wonder what Saki’s own feelings were toward her. It wasn’t like the Saki and her had been together for very long – far from it in fact – so there was a very real possibility that with the emotion that had tied her to Momoko for so long, there was a much higher potential for more…

Then again, did that matter anymore? The girl was dead. She was gone. If Saki did love her, it meant nothing because she was no longer there to receive it, or reciprocate it… That is, as long as circumstances didn’t change… Miyabi re-evaluated the plan she’d decided on after seeing Saki earlier that day. As long as the girl was dead, there would be nothing to pry the two of them apart. Why would she want that to change?

The vision of the shadow over Saki’s eyes appeared in her head, and she felt the sadness of the girl she clutched tightly to her chest. Whether there was love or not, Saki would never be the same again. She’d always have that shadow, and Miyabi didn’t know if she could bear to see it another day much less a lifetime. Resolve planted itself deep inside her again.  “While others might not like you two being together I… I’ll support you, and fight for you, as much as I can...” It wasn’t just for Saki that she was doing it.

She squeezed the girl tighter. “It’s okay,” she said firmly. “I won’t let this continue. I’ll bring her back.”

Saki pulled slowly back from her, staring at her from behind blurry eyes. “What are you talking about?” she choked.

“Momoko,” Miyabi stated. “I’m bringing her back.”

Saki stared at her until comprehension flared within her from amidst the grief and sadness. “That book…”

Those books,” Miyabi said.

Saki kept staring. “No…” she said finally. “No, you can’t!”

“Why not?” Miyabi snarled. “The stuff Risako was talking about is child’s play. I’m capable of so much more. It’s time for me to finally do something worthwhile with what I’ve been spending so much time and effort on.”

“That’s not what I mean!” cried Saki. “I mean you just… can’t! Momoko is gone. If you were to b-bring her back, that’s not natural! You’d be defiling her!”

“She’s already been defiled,” Miyabi rebutted. “That train accident? You can’t tell me that was natural! Her innocence was stolen away from her… but I can bring it back!” Suddenly, comprehension dawned within her own mind. She felt her mouth hang open while something she’d read earlier in the week flashed through her brain. Of course!

Saki now completely pried herself out of Miyabi’s grasp, and at the sensation she finally managed to snap her mouth shut as she looked up at the girl, who backed away across the bed. “No…” Saki repeated. “No… it’s just… It’s not right!”

“She’s your best friend!” Miyabi nearly yelled.

Saki just shook her head as she stumbled off the end of the bed. “Yes, she is,” she said. “Miya…” She stopped moving backward, and her voice became pleading again. “You don’t know what you’re doing…”

“Yes I do,” Miyabi replied resolutely.

Saki stared at her a minute. “I… I need to be alone,” she said finally, and headed out the door.

Miyabi stared after her a moment, hurt in her expression, but it was not enough to overcome her determination. “Soon…” she said. “Soon you won’t need to be alone any longer.”

She jumped off the bed and started digging in her bag. Finding the book she’d bought just the week before, she pulled it out and flipped to pages she’d read early in the week. She could have kicked herself for not realizing it sooner. One of the underlying principles of Gaia is that of balance within nature. One thing can’t be created without something similar being destroyed. Now that Momoko’s life and innocence were gone, she needed something of equal value to trade in exchange for it. A passage in Mors Mortis Mortalitasque spoke of innocence and how it transits the line between life and death. She thought she remembered what it implied she needed, but she wasn’t sure. Excitedly, she found the page she was looking for and began scanning down it.

“Miya-chan,” a voice scolded from behind her, and she spun around to see who it was. She thought it might have been Saki returning, but until she saw the face she hadn’t processed that it couldn’t have been her voice.

Maasa stared at her hard, with Risako standing a couple steps behind in the doorway. Miyabi admonished herself. She had to keep a better ear out for when people left and entered rooms… “Hello Maa-chan,” she said politely, trying to pacify the excitement that still welled within her. “Nice to see you here,” she said, a little bitterly.

Maasa walked up to her, though Risako still hung in the doorway. “You and Captain had another fight, didn’t you?” she said sharply.

“What do you mean?” Miyabi replied innocently.

“Don’t play the angel with me, you little witch,” Maasa said, though her voice wasn’t quite as harsh as her words might have implied. “We just saw her running down the hall almost in tears. I wouldn’t have necessarily thought much of it beyond the obvious, except I know something’s been going on between you two lately, and it’s also happened before. The funny thing was I thought you two liked each other more. I thought that if the two of you were alone that you’d be able to console each other… But she obviously hasn’t been consoled very well. That’s why I’m here. So… what happened, Miya?”

Miyabi stared back at her friend, and past her she could also see Risako studying her closely from her perch at the door. She thought about biting back at the girl, but at the last second changed her mind in favor of a… more interesting tactic. “Maa – chan~” she said playfully, pulling herself into a cross-legged position on the floor and looking up at her with a smile. “Do you remember that morning in Saitama when you had the everlasting shower because you were mad at me for not telling you something?” The addressed girl gave a curt nod, but Risako’s lips pursed tighter together.

“You told me that either I just had a wonderful dream or I had a really good time the night before,” Miyabi continued. “Well, you correctly tossed the idea of a dream out right away, but I didn’t actually tell you about the really good time I had.”

“What does this have to do with Captain running down the hall crying?” the girl prodded impatiently.

“Just be patient,” Miyabi said, nodding and smiling as if to a small child. The girl adopted a slightly disgruntled look, but didn’t complain anymore. “Anyway,” Miyabi went on, this time carefully casting her gaze just above Maasa’s shoulder to the younger girl in the doorway. “I did have quite a good time… with Captain.” She adopted a whimsically romantic tone as she went on, still looking Risako in the eyes. “We stayed in each others’ arms all night long… At that time it was just for comfort because of… experiences… we’d both had that night. However, we met up last weekend and, suffice it to say, she’s now my girlfriend.”

Maasa’s eyes widened throughout Miyabi’s speech, which was not the least bit cutting unless you were Risako, who by the end had turned and stormed out the door unnoticed by the girl in front of her. “You and Captain…” she began, and her eyes lit up. “I knew it! I knew something was going on! I didn’t quite imagine… that… though…” Her mouth twisted as if something unpleasant had entered her thoughts, but she composed her face quickly, returning her harsh and impatient focus back on Miyabi. “That still doesn’t tell me what you’re doing with those books though!” she demanded. “Or why Captain ran off crying! If you two really are… dating…”

“Oh, I assure you it’s more than that,” Miyabi said with a grin. She began to believe Maasa’s eyebrows couldn’t rise any farther.

“Well… if you two… are… whatever you’re doing!” the girl resumed, stuttering exasperatedly. “Then there’s even more of an issue of her running away from you like that! I said this about that boy she was dating before, and I guess I should rightfully say it to you too. If you hurt her, I’ll kill you…” She ended with a warning tone. However, it wasn’t too effective since she still seemed to be a little confused as to whether or why she should be warning one of her best friends like this about something like that.

Miyabi’s face darkened. “Don’t compare me to him,” she warned in a tone much more convincing than the girl had just used with her. “I haven’t nearly raped her.” Maasa’s mouth opened once or twice, but no words managed to escape this time. Despite her burgeoning anger, Miyabi felt somewhat satisfied to see this usually unflappable girl so shaken for once. If the girl was going to come into her own room and accuse her of something, she was going to be the one in control of the encounter.

“She’s just devastated at what happened to Momoko,” Miyabi continued. “As I’m sure we all are. But she felt it more than most of us I think because the two of them were… quite close.” She stopped there because she still wasn’t ready to elaborate along that line of thought. “Don’t worry though,” she said with a disarming smile. “I’ll have her all better before long.”

Maasa studied her closely for a minute, finally closing her mouth, and then came to sit in front of her. She looked behind them before talking. “I thought Risako was coming along after me…?” she asked rhetorically before she turned back to Miyabi. “Oh well, best for her not to be here anyway. Miya…” she began, and Miyabi adopted an attentive look. “You’re going to try something witchy on her, aren’t you?”

Miyabi was slightly taken aback by the surprising question. Well, she’d always called Maasa quite intuitive… “Um…” she began. “Not on her, per se…” Suddenly she gave the girl a sharp look. “Also, I prefer the term Neopagan,” she corrected. “Calling it witchcraft, or even Wiccan, isn’t quite…”

“Whatever, you nerd,” Maasa said dismissively, causing Miyabi’s eyes to narrow. “But that’s what you’re planning, right?” she insisted.

“You’re really close to getting a hex put on you right now…” Miyabi muttered. The girl stared impassively back at her. So much for gaining control. She sighed. “Yes, I’m planning to do something… witchy... but I can’t tell you what it is now. You’ll find out what I’m up to soon enough though, all right?”

Maasa continued to stare hard at her, but apparently accepted her conditions as good enough, and finally relaxed. “So…” the girl murmured, “This thing between you and Captain.” She leaned forward again, though this time with interest and not the judgment she portrayed before. “You have got to tell me more about what the two of you have been up to…”

Miyabi dearly wanted to get started on what would probably be her night’s work, but looking back into her friend’s eyes she couldn’t keep a smile from spreading its way across each side of her face.

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 21: Friends?]
« Reply #113 on: September 13, 2007, 09:28:46 PM »
I knew it!! You read my mind, rokun! Hope it won't be like Full Metal Alchemist.

Now that Maasa knows that Miya and Saki are a couple, looks like they'res gonna be a lot of fireworks..and a lot of tears shed on everybody's part

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 21: Friends?]
« Reply #114 on: September 13, 2007, 09:43:04 PM »
Miyabi dearly wanted to get started on what would probably be her night’s work, but looking back into her friend’s eyes she couldn’t keep a smile from spreading its way across each side of her face.

I think that pretty much sums up my face after reading this :D

I'm a bit worried about Saki and Miyabi. Hope things don't go pear shaped between them. Especially with Miya telling Massa about the two of them and also about what happened with Jun. I really don't want them two to seperate :cry:

Glad it was confirmed that Momo was in love with Saki. I re-read the whole story to fill the gap between you posting and it was so obvious. I understand why Miya wants to bring her back but I think it would be better if she stayed, well, ...dead. Better for my sake at least :lol:

Anyway I really missed you updating this last week. I had a crap weekend at work and I kinda blame you!!! I usually read your new chapter the night before I work and then my weekend seems to go really well. But the weekend just gone has to be my worst in a long time. I only worked two nights out of three and it was still hell.

I think I deserve something to make up for it. Like a new chapter before I fly to Japan. Or just don't leave us hanging for over a week then I can read it whilst I'm in Japan.

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 21: Friends?]
« Reply #115 on: September 13, 2007, 09:45:21 PM »
To me, I know Captain really misses Momo, but it also kinda seems that she doesn't want Miya to bring her back.

Was Miya trying to get Risako jealous there? Was she just trying to get her out of the room so that she could talk to Maasa alone? or is there another reason?  man, all these things get me worked up for whats going to be in the later chapters.

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Just like Miyabi, I couldn't help but smile at that part.   :D
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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 21: Friends?]
« Reply #116 on: September 14, 2007, 01:41:54 AM »
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“Yes… I suppose you are,” Saki said softly. “That’s what friends do, isn’t it?” She looked back into Miyabi’s face, this time earnestly amidst the sadness. “You and I can date, and kiss, and maybe even love…” Miyabi felt herself blush slightly at those words. “…But there are others you can love too, aren’t there? That you can spend time with, that you can enjoy the company of… That you can just have fun with…”

I love this part. I love how Saki reacts after learning what happened to Miya and Risako the previous night. So mature. Go Captain! :farofflook::farofflook::farofflook:

However...

I really don't like how she reacted after Momo confessed her feelings. WTF was that?  :scolding: :pleeease: :hee::P

Miya and Saki's developing relationship is really amazing. Lovers shouldn't keep secrets from each other. Even if it will hurt, at least there'll be someone whom you can share your pain with and at the same time, someone who will comfort you throgh the ordeal. And I think that's something friends won't be able to do for you.

I wanna see Chinami's spooky stare!  :mon cweepy: :mon scare:

WAR AKARI!!! Infernal Ninjutsu, Hidden Lore...Freedom of Opposites Technique!!! Rest in peace Kyle,Jab,Mom,Tita, ChrNo...

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 21: Friends?]
« Reply #117 on: September 14, 2007, 02:34:07 AM »
I'll edit this post tomorrow morning lol but I have to say this.. I KNEW THAT MOMOKO WAS IN LOVE WITH CAPTAIN!! >;P

See I want Momoko back for the drama that I know that will come

And Miyabi saying that to Risako is Love because that was obvious 'tear your heart' and 'she still got feelings for me' type of thing

Rokun = <333333333333333333 seriously >;P

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 21: Friends?]
« Reply #118 on: September 14, 2007, 03:53:36 AM »
Woo, ebiru Miya FTW! And kudos for cool, curious Maasa. ;)

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 22: After Hours]
« Reply #119 on: September 17, 2007, 01:53:12 AM »
Here we go again! I didn't expect to post so soon, but I wanted to make sure and satisfy Lolli before going to Japan, and it's what I felt like doing anyway. :lol: Ckd, I've never watched Full Metal Alchemist, but your comment made me look up a short plot summary lol, and it was amazing! I assure you though, since as I mentioned I've never even watched it, any resemblance is coincidental (although freakish XD). And while I may not be following that per se, I am drawing from many different influences, so you might recognize some things... Anyway, I have some things to do tonight, so onward to storytime! :D


Chapter 22

It wasn’t until late in the evening when Saki finally returned. Miyabi lay on the bed, propped up by some pillows and reading one of her books, just as she’d been doing for the past couple hours. A lone lamp was turned on at the side of her bed to give her light as she read, and the darkness surrounding that pool was broken for only seconds when the door swung open and light from the hall spilled into it. Saki closed it quickly and quietly though, and Miyabi watched over the top of her book as she walked to her suitcase and after digging through it, changed her clothes to her normal night attire of only a t-shirt that was a few sizes too large for her. After changing, she crawled up onto the bed without looking toward Miyabi’s face and slid under the covers.

“Welcome back,” Miyabi offered gently.

The girl didn’t respond at first. After covering up, she rolled over with her back toward Miyabi and lay on her side. Miyabi continued to watch her, but didn’t offer any more in the way of a greeting. “I’ve been thinking, Miya…” Saki said finally in a quiet voice. Miyabi had given up and returned to her book, but at the sound of the girl’s voice turned back to her. Even though Saki spoke to her, she still faced away from her. “Don’t you think that if people could just be … raised from the dead… that somebody would have done it by now? And of course we would have heard about it because nobody could keep something like that secret…”

Miyabi just gazed at her for a moment before responding. “Well maybe nobody’s been able to do it yet. I’m doing some things I don’t think anyone else has, after all.”

At that, Saki finally rolled over and looked up into Miyabi’s face, an unreadable look on her own. “Miya, you seriously take being conceited to new levels…”

   Miyabi shrugged, grinning. “What can I say? I’m the Berryz girl you made me.” Saki rolled her eyes before rolling back over and snuggling in as if she was going to try and sleep. “So are you okay with what I’m trying to do now?” she asked hopefully.

“No,” Saki replied without turning again. “It’s still wrong. But I know I’m not going to stop you. If anything bad happens though…” Miyabi could feel the girl’s body tense beside her in her warning.

“I’ll do my best,” Miyabi said.

“I know,” Saki replied. “I hope though…” She never finished her thought, and Miyabi was left wondering what the girl hoped. She continued watching her lie there as her breathing became slower, and eventually it appeared she fell asleep.

Closing her book carefully, Miyabi laid it on the bedside table and sat up slowly, doing her best not to wake the other girl. Once she managed to pull out of the covers, she sat there for a minute and stroked her girlfriend’s hair. The sleeping girl stirred once or twice, but didn’t seem to wake.

“I’ll do my best, Saki-chan…” she whispered again. “Whatever you might think, Momo deserves to be with us now. I might not like that she’s in love with you but… I think I’m in love with you too…”

She couldn’t stop a completely unreasonable blush from coming to her face when she said that, but it caused her to pull her hand away, and she slid slowly off the bed. Walking back around to her bag, she dug through it. Quickly finding what she wanted, she stared at it a moment before tucking it inside her belt.

While Saki was gone, she’d realized what she needed to acquire. She needed something that symbolized innocence to trade for the innocence that was lost when Momoko was killed. However, not just anything would work, and she wanted to get the best possible for her trade. She felt confident, but this was still something she didn’t take lightly. It hadn’t taken her long to decide what she knew of that was purest.

She walked to the bathroom and picked up a small glass from next to the sink, carrying it with her as she stole quietly over to the lamp she was using to read. She turned it off, and with one last look at her girlfriend headed toward the door. She opened and went through it as quietly as possible, but when she turned around to go down the hall she almost jumped at the girl who stood not centimeters in front of her.

“Getting a drink?” Chinami said, her eyes still wide as she stared at Miyabi.

“Um… yes,” Miyabi responded. She looked curiously at the girl. “Have you been watching scary movies again?”

“Me?” Chinami asked. “No.” She glanced to the side as if she saw somebody looking at her. Miyabi looked too, but they were the only two in the quiet hall. “Well, just one. But it wasn’t too bad. I think…” She looked back at Miyabi and hesitated.

“Do you think I’m going to turn you into a toad or something?” Miyabi asked, slightly irritated.

Chinami drew breath and took a step back. “No!” she said. “Of course not! I’m not scared of y-your magic…”

“You’re a horrible liar you know,” Miyabi responded. “You should really just give up trying.”

“Hey!” Chinami whined. “That’s mean!”

“So what are you doing out here?” Miyabi asked.

“Oh you know…” the girl responded. “Just walking randomly down the hallway… I couldn’t sleep,” she explained. “I was supposed to share my room with… with her…” she said, hesitating again. “And I didn’t want to be alone, so Risako decided to move over and join me. That was awfully nice of her… She even picked the movie that we just finished watching…”

“Is Risako asleep now?” Miyabi asked nonchalantly, perking up at this news.

“Yeah,” Chinami replied. “At least, she was when I left. I hope she doesn’t wake up. I left the door unlocked so I didn’t forget the key and lock myself out again, and I doubt she’d be happy if she knew she was sleeping behind an unlocked door…”

“I’m sure she’ll stay asleep,” Miyabi replied quickly. “That girl can sleep through anything, you know.”

“I know,” Chinami said. At least she didn’t look so scared any longer with the casual conversation they were having. “Hey, do you mind if I join you while you get your drink?” she asked.

“Er…” Miyabi responded. “Sure… why not?” And with that Miyabi began walking down the hall, the other girl staying at her side. She didn’t really have any clue where she was going, as she was definitely not going for a “drink”, but she thought she’d better entertain the older girl for the time being. Why would she be walking down the hall with a glass for something to drink anyway? She could get water from her room, and anything she got from vending machines here wouldn’t need a container. She gave Chinami a sideways glance. And people called her strange.

“You know,” Miyabi said, deciding she might as well try to strike up conversation again. “It’s a little strange for you to be walking around vacant hallways at night as scared as you seem to be of everything.”

“Oh?” the girl said, looking around her as if surprised. “I guess I’m used to it. I think I actually like being scared though. That’s probably why I find myself in situations like that all the time.”

Miyabi hadn’t thought of that before, but now that she did it made perfect sense. The other girls were always warning Chinami to stay away from scary movies and things, but thinking about it, Miyabi realized she must watch ten times more of them than anybody else.

After a moment of silence, Chinami shrugged. “I guess it’s my hobby or something, after all. Being scared, you know.” Miyabi nodded her head as if she knew, although she was still a little confused. She wouldn’t have thought being scared could qualify as a hobby.

“I’ll be sure to bring you along to the next haunted house I go to…” she said with a wry grin.

“Really?” Chinami asked hopefully. “That’d be great! Um…” she said as she stopped walking. “Where are we going, by the way?” Miyabi looked ahead of them and saw they’d arrived at the elevator at the end of the hall. “You’re not gonna go down to the bar or something, are you?”

“Yes…” Miyabi said. “That’s exactly where I was planning on going! Why don’t you go ahead of me though and wait there. I’m sure they’ll have music or something playing. I left something in my room and need to go back and get it.”

“Oh it’s okay,” Chinami responded. “I’ll go back to your room with you.”

“Er…” Miyabi said, now just wanting to get rid of the other girl. “Saki-chan’s sleeping in there, and I bet more than one of us going in would wake her. Plus, I’m sure you’ll find plenty to keep you busy down there! It’ll be a lot more fun than waiting for me.”

“All right…” Chinami said, and giving her an odd look pushed the button for the elevator.

Miyabi gave a nod of her head and turned around to head back down the hall. Turning a corner, she looked back to make sure the girl wasn’t following her, and continued on toward their rooms. She knew what she had to do, and with what Chinami had told her it seemed the fates were with her tonight.

Coming to a door, she turned the knob and opened it slowly. Sliding in, she closed it softly again and looked through the darkness toward where the beds would be standing. As her eyes adjusted she made out two, one flat and the other with a small lump rising from it. Risako was not only alone, but the door was unlocked, something else Miyabi was happy about because she hadn’t yet tried a spell to open electronic locks and wasn’t sure it would work. Dealing with electro-magnetism tended to be tricky in any circumstance, much less one as important as this. Whether Chinami was right about how Risako would react to being left alone in an unlocked room, she really should have been more careful. They never knew what kind of creep might try to walk in on one of them. Although, Miyabi didn’t guess they would have imagined they needed to worry about one of their own…

Fumbling around with the lock, she heard it click, and advanced toward the bed with the sleeping girl. The image brought back vivid memories of the last time she did this not long ago. Of course, there was much different motivation this time. As she pulled the ceremonial dagger out of her belt, she thought it was funny that the situations were in fact nearly complete opposites.

Carefully, she leaned over the softly breathing form and pulled the covers down to her waist. Risako lay curled up there almost in a ball, her hands folded just in front of her face. Miyabi smiled. It was the perfect picture of innocence she’d imagined. The sight increased her confidence tremendously, but it also tugged at something inside her. Yes, she was innocent… She was so cute just lying there, and Miyabi recalled times when she laid with her, hugging her from behind as they both slept.

She didn’t realize she’d reached out toward the girl until she almost touched her cheek, but finally came to her senses and satisfied herself with sweeping a few of her hairs behind her ear. “I’m sorry, Rii-chan,” she said. “But we have to help Momo.” Then she became silent as she raised the glass and her dagger toward the sleeping girl.



A short time later, she exited the elevator and walked toward the lounge. Finding the entrance, she walked in to find a group playing some kind of slow hypnotizing music not far from the bar. It wasn’t exactly her style, but she supposed it was perfect for the salarymen she saw sitting at the high stools in front of the counter. She looked around at the people sitting in the spacious “family” area, and found Chinami staring dreamily of all things toward the group.

Miyabi walked toward her, and even when she sat down across the table the girl still didn’t seem to register her presence. There was a drink of some sort in front of her, but it looked half-forgotten. “Hey, Chii-chan,” Miyabi said, and the girl almost jumped, giving her a startled look.

“Oh, hi Miya,” she said, quickly picking up her drink and bowing her head over it.

Miyabi looked over toward the band. The lead singer was a young woman of maybe thirty, but the rest seemed to be composed of young college-aged men. “Don’t tell me you’ve been staring at that cute guitarist this whole time,” she chided the girl across from her.

Even with her face lowered Miyabi still noticed her blush. “Not… the whole time…” she responded in a squeaky voice.

“All we need now is another story about you and some cute band member…” Miyabi said in a mock serious voice.

“Hey!” Chinami said, looking up finally. “That wasn’t my fault!”

“What wasn’t?” Miyabi heard a voice say from behind her, and a tall girl walked up to their table. “Hey you two,” Yurina said. “Couldn’t sleep either?” The question seemed to be directed at Miyabi since Yurina likely guessed the other girl’s reason the same way Miyabi had.

“Nope,” Miyabi said. Well, it was partly true. “Here, have a seat Kuma-chan,” she continued, and slid over so the girl could slide in next to her.

The girl sat down thankfully and looked between the two other girls. “It’s been a long day, huh?” She looked around at the other people in the lounge minding their own business. “Yet everything still goes on as normal…”

“Yeah,” Miyabi said. “There should be some kind of holiday to recognize what happened, shouldn’t there?”

“Nobody cares,” Chinami said, and the other two girls stared at her. However, she stared back just as strongly. “If it doesn’t involve them, they do their best to ignore it.”

Yurina gave an angry look around at the people they were talking about. “That’s not right. They should try to pay attention to other people better!”

“Is that what you think?” Miyabi asked, and the two girls now turned to her with furrowed eyebrows. “Until we heard about Momo, we hardly even noticed anything happened either.”

“But we’re just kids,” Yurina said, and the other two became quiet.

“That’s really convenient… isn’t it?” Miyabi said under her breath after a time.

“What do you suppose we’ll do now?” Chinami asked, adopting an anxious voice after the uncomfortable silence. “With Momo-chan gone it won’t be anywhere near the same.” Her eyes widened again. “I might have to sing more!”

“Oh I’m sure that would be so horrible,” Miyabi retorted sarcastically. “It’s about time you start singing more instead of just always talking.”

“But I like acting better…” Chinami pouted.

“Besides,” Miyabi said, adopting a smug tone. “Maybe I’ll just get all the lines now.”

“Miya!” Yurina scolded. “Now isn’t the time to be so selfish!”

Miyabi stayed quiet. She really didn’t care what they said about “how things would be now that Momo was gone”. After all, by tomorrow night everything would be back to the way it was before. Saki’s face flashed in her head, the shadow gone and only brightness in her soft eyes. Everything.

She was brought out of her reverie by a hard poke at her side. “Ow!” she cried.

“You’re sick you know, smiling at your narcissistic fantasies like that,” Yurina said, though this time Miyabi noticed it only seemed half-hearted.

“Well of course,” Miyabi said. “Some day I’m going to be the most famous singer in the world, you know. I was just thinking about who I’d have for my attendants… Would you like to do my make-up?” She received another poke for that.

“Just because you can sing well and do a little magic doesn’t mean you’re any better than the rest of us,” Yurina said, and her words were met with an uncomfortable silence.

“Hey,” Chinami said. “Do you think maybe if you practice some more you can stop people from dying?”

Miyabi stared at her. The girl seemed terrified of what she might do most of the time, and now she had the most surprising insight of anyone around her all day. Yurina didn’t seem to catch Miyabi’s reaction, however. “Don’t be silly,” she said offhandedly. “Miya might be able to pull books out of thin air, but she can’t do the same thing with people. Right, Miya-chan?” she asked her, obviously not expecting an answer.

At first Miyabi didn’t give her one. After a while though she couldn’t hold her tongue. “That’s not… entirely true…” she said softly.

Chinami stared at her, though Yurina still didn’t seem to register what she’d just said. “See, Toku-san? What’d I tell you.”

“Um… Kuma~chan…” Chinami chimed slowly.

“Hmm?” the tall girl asked, and she finally looked up at the two she sat with. Chinami was still staring at Miyabi, who was looking down at thumbs she was twiddling.

“What you said,” Miyabi resumed softly again. “I can bring people back.”

Now Yurina joined Chinami in staring at her. “What?” she asked, apparently at a loss. “Have you… done it before?”

Miyabi shook her head. “No,” she responded. “But I can do it.”

Yurina now turned and grabbed her older friend’s shoulders. “Are you crazy?! That’s impossible! You just… just…”

“Just what?” Miyabi asked, giving the girl a heated gaze back. “Just know how to do a little magic?”

Feeling her anger start to rise, she closed her eyes and focused her thoughts. At a squeak from across the table she opened them, but only just to slits. Yurina was slowly sliding away from her on her chair, which began to lift into the air as well. The girl had frozen, and was clutching her chair seat as if for dear life as it rose steadily to nearly a half a meter above the ground.

“Stop it!” Chinami said, and Miyabi looked over to see her pressed to the back of her own chair, staring at Yurina and holding onto it too as if she was the one flying across the room.

Miyabi then heard a clatter, and she turned back to see Yurina on the floor with the chair toppled next to her. She quickly rose to go help the girl, berating herself for losing concentration. That was something that couldn’t happen tomorrow night. “Are you okay?” she asked a slightly shaken-seeming Yurina. Helping her up, she looked around them. A few of the people at the bar and around the room were frowning over at them. They obviously hadn’t noticed Yurina floating, but definitely heard the crashing chair and now likely just thought they were some idiot kids fooling around.

“Excuse us,” Miyabi repeated over and over, bowing at the people looking at them as she helped Yurina carry the chair back to their table. A few of them chuckled, and by the time the girls regained their seats most had turned back to their drinks and conversations.

When she sat down, Miyabi looked over at Chinami, who was still glued to the back of her chair, now staring at her. “Sorry about that,” she offered half-heartedly, but the girl’s expression didn’t change.

Having finally regained her composure and becoming able to relax in her seat, Yurina spoke up, softly at first but with increasing volume. “That... was… so… cool!” Chinami now shifted her disbelieving stare to the taller girl. “Can you make me do that again sometime?”

Miyabi broke into a grin. “Sure, if you’d like. Along with lots of other fun things.”

“You…” she gasped, still apparently excited from her experience. “You can’t really bring Momo back… can you?” Miyabi nodded. “But you said you’ve never done it before. I take it you’ve heard of others doing it though?”

“Well, no,” Miyabi responded hesitantly.

“Then how do you know it can be done?”

“Because it’s gotta be possible!” Miyabi responded vehemently. “In everything I’ve studied about nature, the Earth… the spirits… Gaia, if you will… They like things to maintain a certain order. As we’ve become more modernized we’ve increasingly begun to disrupt that order, and cause things, like that train accident, that should never have occurred.” Feeling she was losing her audience, which consisted of one very interested-seeming girl and another who stared at her as if she was the one with snakes growing out of her head, she tried to explain further. “It’s like everything and everyone is connected in a big web.” Chinami shivered again. Miyabi made a mental note to add spiders to the list of things that creeped her out. Then again, remembering their earlier conversation, maybe the girl could do with having some spiders summoned on her from time to time.

“When things like that train accident happen,” she continued, “That web is snipped in the spots where those lives that were lost existed. Momoko would have been at the center of the web, where kids and others who are most innocent lie. And when parts of the center are cut out, it threatens the integrity of the whole web – of all of nature… Most never get replaced, and so the web has been getting more and more tangled as we’ve moved farther away from our natural states. All I’m looking to do is help restore what little of it I can… at least… what’s important to me…”

She trailed off to the blank staring looks before her. “…Strange things they teach you at that school,” Yurina intoned finally. “But it’s still cool. And if it helps Momo-chan come back…”

“Well I don’t think it’s cool!” Chinami breathed. “I don’t know about all your webs and spiders and things.” She shivered again, and Miyabi sighed inwardly. She hadn’t even mentioned spiders… “But I still think what you’re doing is wrong. You’re messing with things that… obviously shouldn’t be messed with! And now you’re even messing with… with… life and death itself! Those are things that should be just left alone and to themselves! The gods will take care of us like they always have… even Momo…” Her eyes began to tear up slightly by the time she mentioned the girl’s name.

“Why is that?” Miyabi said through gritted teeth. “Is that what your parents told you?”

“Yes…” Chinami said, visibly trying to keep herself from crying. “Momo is gone… Why can’t you just accept that!” And with that, she stood up quickly from her chair and walked away from them, increasing her speed with her distance until she was almost running when she disappeared out of sight through the open lounge doors.

“I suppose you think I should just accept it too…” Miyabi grumbled, not looking at the girl who still sat next to her. Surprisingly though, Yurina draped an arm around her shoulders, causing her to look up into a sincere young face.

“I won’t admit it isn’t a bit… strange…” she said, “But there are a lot of things about the world I don’t know, and maybe… Maybe you’re right. Maybe we’ll be able to see Momo again. It isn’t wrong to have hope at least, is it?” Miyabi stared at her. She thought the girl was younger than her at least. “Excuse me,” she continued, releasing Miyabi’s shoulders and rising from her chair. “I’d better make sure Toku-san’s alright and doesn’t do something stupid.” She hesitated a moment before walking away, though. “You’re really gonna try this?”

Miyabi nodded. “Tomorrow night,” she said. “I’ve… started preparing already.” Her mind drifted to Risako for a second. “At least that’s the plan. Chii-chan’s reaction troubles me a bit… She sounded pretty strong against me trying…”

“I’ll keep her occupied if she tries to stop you,” Yurina insisted. “Anyone else, too.” She looked sincerely into Miyabi’s eyes. “I don’t know if you’re gonna be able to do this…” she said, “But I still want to have hope that we can all be together again…” Miyabi saw her eyes begin to glisten too, but before she could say more the taller girl turned and headed off after Chinami.

“Thank you…” Miyabi whispered to herself. She didn’t know why, since she was set on doing this alone, but it felt nice knowing someone, at least, supported her.

She stayed in the lounge for a while longer listening to the music and thinking about the next day. She even ordered a drink. After taking the last sips, she finally slid out from her table and made her way back up to their rooms. The hallway was quiet, so apparently either Yurina had caught Chinami elsewhere or they both were back in their rooms. Out of pure curiosity, she reached her hand out and turned carefully at the doorknob to the room she had broken into earlier. Finding it locked, she sighed in relief. Chinami must have gone back to sleep.

Leaving the door be, she re-entered her own room and quietly changed into the long shirt and comfortable shorts she normally wore to bed before sliding in under the covers next to her girlfriend. She supposed she was still her girlfriend at least. They may be having a fight now, but the girl still came to bed with her after all… Deciding to be brave, she carefully snuggled up next to the small warm form and lightly draped an arm around her waist.

“You’re back late,” she heard a small voice say just as her arm fell into place around the girl. She froze. Well, at least she didn’t pull away from her embrace.

“…I couldn’t sleep,” Miyabi whispered finally.

“Liar,” came the voice again, and Saki rolled over, careful to stay within Miyabi’s arms. Miyabi wasn’t sure exactly what to make of the girl’s sudden actions. Once she turned, the space that separated their faces could barely even be called a gap. Feeling the girl’s warm breath lightly caressing her skin, Miyabi’s pulse quickened as her body heated.

Saki studied her eyes. “You’re going to try to bring back Momo, aren’t you,” she murmured in a tone that wasn’t the least bit questioning. Miyabi hesitated only a second before nodding slightly. “And nothing I say is going to stop you?” she continued. This time there was a longer pause before Miyabi nodded again.

“I’m doing this for myself, for many reasons…” Miyabi explained, also in a low voice with their intimate position. “But…” she continued, looking into the eyes across from her. “I’m also doing it for you…” Her heart seemed to be racing now. “I don’t… I can’t say I like hearing someone else is in love with you… someone who’s your best friend even… but since she’s been gone you’ve been so sad, and I can’t bear to see you that way. I want to make you happy again…” She felt tears come to her eyes as she finished, and tried to pull the girl closer to her. Strangely, she didn’t meet any resistance.

Saki looked intensely back at her a moment before her expression suddenly changed. “Miya~chan…” she simpered. Miyabi felt her breath catch in anxiety. “You don’t need to raise the dead to win me over…” Then, she leaned forward and laid a short peck on Miyabi’s lips. Miyabi felt herself blush, and she began to think if she got any hotter she’d completely burn up. She hadn’t lost control and set herself on fire or something, had she?

Resisting the urge to look away to find out, she held her eyes on the gentle ones across from her. “Just promise me one thing, okay Miya?” Saki asked.

Miyabi nodded. “S-sure…” she managed. What was wrong with her? There was no reason for her to lose control like this.

“Take me along when you do it,” Saki said, this time in a more serious tone. Miyabi studied her face, emotions conflicting within her. The girl had the right to request that of course, but she still wasn’t looking forward to seeing how she would react when her best friend, who had just declared her love for her, suddenly appeared out of thin air. That thought distracted Miyabi for a second. Would that be how it happened? Or would she just… rise from her grave wherever it was or something?

Those thoughts were lost completely however when she felt Saki reach over and grip her arms. “What’s going on in there…?” she breathed, looking into Miyabi’s face as if by doing so she could read her mind. Finally she settled back on her eyes. “No matter what happens… Remember… You’re the one I chose, Miya.” Miyabi stared back, feeling something very strange inside her, until Saki leaned in to kiss her again. This time it didn’t end as quickly, however. In fact, it seemed to last forever.

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