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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 26: Hello! My Name is Momoko]
« Reply #160 on: December 07, 2007, 06:39:49 AM »
I'm finally caught up. There's so much to comment on. First, I love the MiyaSaki pairing. It's so unusual but I think it might be my new fav BK couple.

Next, witchy Miyabi. So cool.  :inlove: Total love.

Third, undead Momoko. In my opinion, they should have just left her dead, but then there wouldn't be much of a story, huh? Especially since she seems to have a certain dislike of Miya now. I think she remembers more than she's letting on. Maybe she was pulled away from heaven? Or maybe it's simply rivalry over Cap'n, but then again, it can't possibly be that uncomplicated. Can it?

No, not from you.

I think Miyabi should cast that little familiar/soul animal spell on herself. I wonder what she would be? Maybe a horse, with that long face. Oh, nevermind, that's kinda mean.


Anyway UPDATE! Please. Pretty please with sugar on top?

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 26: Hello! My Name is Momoko]
« Reply #161 on: December 07, 2007, 06:52:38 AM »
Oh my...I can't believe my eyes...A NEW CHAPTER!!! *squeals*

I'm pretty sure the new Momo is evil and Miyabi's gonna have her hand's full with whatever's coming her way. What makes you all think she was pulled from heaven? Maybe it was hell? XD Just kidding. But something does seem fishy and she ain't telling. I wanna know what happened next *keeps refreshing pages :P*

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 26: Hello! My Name is Momoko]
« Reply #162 on: December 08, 2007, 05:33:35 PM »
First, Hooray, you finally updated and you should do that more often -coughhinthintcough-
And two, I have my theories to share.

If Momoko came back and there is something wrong with her
Its possible she came back feeling absolutely nothing. That maybe Miyabi brought her back wrong not as in evil but just brought her back where she can't exactly feel properly as she use to. That she wants to feel something and the strongest feeling she had before she died was being in love with captain. Though, she can't exactly see if her strongest feeling will still be there if Miyabi is going out with captain =w=;;

Oh and plus, jealousy can't forget that

That's my two cents on Momoko

Now to Miyabi, I'm going to say she's getting really power hungry
The fact she brought momoko back really boosted her already high ego and she just happens to learn magic a lot faster now
And testing it on people like say Risako with out much consideration on how they would feel

Which by the way major booage on Miyabi's part, it's really making Risako feel like miyabi doesn't see her as a friend and more like 'your annoying so i'm gonna test stuff on you' I feel uber bad for Risako on that =(

But knowing...well not really knowing but..You're gonna make this story long and attempt really hard and well on pulling on our heartstrings in future chapters which I can't wait for because there's gonna be a some-what decent happy ending.

Now as always..

UPDATE or I'll...I'll..well I can't do anything but just prod you and tell you to Update o(=A=ll)o

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 26: Hello! My Name is Momoko]
« Reply #163 on: December 10, 2007, 03:06:50 PM »
Third, undead Momoko. In my opinion, they should have just left her dead, but then there wouldn't be much of a story, huh? Especially since she seems to have a certain dislike of Miya now. I think she remembers more than she's letting on. Maybe she was pulled away from heaven? Or maybe it's simply rivalry over Cap'n, but then again, it can't possibly be that uncomplicated. Can it?

No, not from you.
You have so much faith in me!!!  :oops: :mon sweat: I hope you're satisfied with how things develop. :)

Thanks everyone so much for your thoughtful replies and comments!! :D That kind of thing makes me very happy. :D <--- me happy. XD I'm glad to have gotten you into JPHiP Maize! :oops: Thank you for enjoying my stories so much!

Your theories are all very interesting, and although they all touch on different things and maybe some part of what's really going on, nobody has it right on so far. :) Some of you might be close... there is definitely something going on between Momo and Miya now, but it's bigger than just the two of them, or even their little triangle with Captain. I like all your Buffy theories XD. Hopefully my other story is getting my need for fireworks and crazy magic things out of my system, but there's still going to be a bit of that with Miya. She is getting just a bit addicted to power. Bringing someone back from the dead definitely might do that to you. That is at least, until she learns about the consequences... The problem is, now it's done she's also going to have to find a way to live with it.

Poor Risako... I actually think Miya really might still feel something for her (there was the kiss after all, as well as those random thoughts of Risako's cuteness...), and because she doesn't want to accept that since she's so very happy with Saki, she might be acting out a bit instead. If she's not careful though, she might lose Risako forever. Then again, how observant Risako is at her young age and how loyal a friend she can be might come into play too. She did come to the resurrection, and maybe she's been able to notice something Miyabi hasn't been able to accept herself yet. Miya's always been kind of an idiot despite her elite school, but more and more it's beginning to look like she may really have a problem.

It's finals week this week for me, so hopefully at least I won't be doing much writing :lol:, but everything's done when it's over, so I hope to get back to things... Take it easy in the snow until then, and I'll try not to become like this:  :mon freeze:

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 26: Hello! My Name is Momoko]
« Reply #164 on: December 10, 2007, 04:00:18 PM »
Your theories are all very interesting, and although they all touch on different things and maybe some part of what's really going on, nobody has it right on so far. :) Some of you might be close... there is definitely something going on between Momo and Miya now, but it's bigger than just the two of them, or even their little triangle with Captain. I like all your Buffy theories XD. Hopefully my other story is getting my need for fireworks and crazy magic things out of my system, but there's still going to be a bit of that with Miya. She is getting just a bit addicted to power. Bringing someone back from the dead definitely might do that to you. That is at least, until she learns about the consequences... The problem is, now it's done she's also going to have to find a way to live with it.

Poor Risako... I actually think Miya really might still feel something for her (there was the kiss after all, as well as those random thoughts of Risako's cuteness...), and because she doesn't want to accept that since she's so very happy with Saki, she might be acting out a bit instead. If she's not careful though, she might lose Risako forever. Then again, how observant Risako is at her young age and how loyal a friend she can be might come into play too. She did come to the resurrection, and maybe she's been able to notice something Miyabi hasn't been able to accept herself yet. Miya's always been kind of an idiot despite her elite school, but more and more it's beginning to look like she may really have a problem.

It's finals week this week for me, so hopefully at least I won't be doing much writing :lol:, but everything's done when it's over, so I hope to get back to things... Take it easy in the snow until then, and I'll try not to become like this:  :mon freeze:
Good luck on your finals! :)
well, I think I agree with everyone about miyabi being a little (or a lot) power hungry... she seems like a fast learner, but she's still hurting a lot of people with her new powers (risako being the best example on this)... and omg, miya might still feel something about risako? that's going to mess some things up, if it develops...
well, since nobody's theories are right, I guess we reached the "wait and see" point... I must say I'm sooooo very curious about how things will turn out here...  :grin:
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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #165 on: December 24, 2007, 05:31:27 AM »
Hello again. :) This chapter is shorter than usual, but I think there's quite enough in it for everyone to think of at least a couple things to theorize about or discuss. ;) Plus, it's meant to catch a specific psychological moment, and those things can get difficult to read if extended too long. Plus, like I said, this is only a moment, not a detailed story. Let the frustration commence.  :D


Chapter 27

Miyabi lay quietly in her bed at the hotel late in the evening after their Friday concert. She lay there in the dark, alone.

After the evening performance, many of the Berryz had separated. They were going to celebrate Momoko’s return, but since Miyabi felt she’d gotten enough attention from the audience at the concert she wasn’t crazy about joining in.

In the nearly two days Momoko was missing no official announcement had been made, but some segment of their fans had of course somehow gotten wind of it and the news had spread like wildfire throughout the community. Miyabi herself had even looked at some of the websites talking about it in amazement.

The result of this news leak of course was that everyone chanted “Momo!” throughout the concert, to where they could really do nothing but have Momoko say a few words about it. That of course led them to all go crazy, but Momoko was all smiles. Most of the girls thought it was a wonderful thing for her to experience after what she went through.

Miyabi wasn’t the only one who didn’t feel like continuing the celebration though. Risako had complained she was tired and decided to return to the hotel too while the rest spent their time out. Miyabi wondered if she didn’t have some ulterior motive for not wanting to hang out with everyone, and eventually the two of them came to share an awkward elevator ride once back at the hotel.

At first Risako was quiet, and just looked up at her every few seconds. Then she asked her a question. “Miya…” she began. “Why did you kiss me?”

Miyabi blinked, and didn’t respond right away. The elevator dinged their floor, but neither of them left the carriage. The doors closed again and the two stood in the elevator staring at each other as it hung at their floor.

“I…” Miyabi began, then cleared her throat after going so long without talking. “I was just honored that you wanted your first kiss to be with me, especially since you had your… your boyfriend.”

She had a hard time with that last part. Risako was actually cheerier tonight than she’d been for a long time. Whenever Miyabi wasn’t smiling dumbly at Saki throughout the concert, she normally cast glances over at her as she smiled out at the audience. The younger girl normally focused her eyes on just one spot though, and when Miyabi looked toward it and saw the comparably young face beaming up at her she knew. Her boyfriend had come to the concert.

“Was that all?” Risako asked, peering into her face. She stepped closer to her, and Miyabi began to feel uncomfortable. This would be a perfect time to turn the girl into a mouse again, but she felt as if any words she wanted to speak were frozen in her throat.

“You…” she responded pitifully.

“Yes?” Risako said, coming even closer, bringing her face to within centimeters of Miyabi’s.

“You’re pretty…” Miyabi said fumblingly, and immediately blushed.

Risako smiled. “Why thank you, Miya. I’d doubted that lately.”

“I don’t know how you could,” Miyabi said without thinking. Risako looked at her questioningly. “I mean, you were gawking at your boyfriend’s face all night. He was completely besotted with you.”

Risako kept that mysterious smile, then leaned closer. Miyabi braced, feeling trapped back against the elevator wall, but Risako’s face brushed past hers until her mouth was at Miyabi’s ear. “He was, wasn’t he?” she whispered. Then, without another word, she stepped away, pushed the button to open the elevator door, and stepped out, paying no more attention to Miyabi as if she’d completely disappeared.

For her part Miyabi stayed pressed back against the wall for another minute, hearing her heart beating rapidly inside of her. What just happened? she asked herself.

As she thought further about it, she felt the elevator lurch to life, and it began going down again. Now quickly trying to regain control of herself, she pulled away from the wall and pushed the button for her floor again, although the elevator kept going down.

When it got to the bottom, a man dressed in a suit and tie walked in as the door opened. He pressed the button for the floor he needed – one that was a couple floors down from Miyabi’s – and seeing the one Miyabi had pressed gave her a strange look. Miyabi smiled a toothy grin back, trying not to show any of her current foolish feeling.

When she managed to set her foot on the green carpet of her floor, she walked down it quickly as if on a mission. In fact, she was on a mission. When she got to a door, she knocked hard on it. “Risako!” she shouted into it. “Open up! I want to talk to you!”

There was no answer.

“Risako!” she shouted again, knocking a bit harder even.

Grumbling at being ignored, she pulled up her purse and looked in it a few seconds before remembering that she hadn’t gotten Risako’s room key for this trip. That struck her in her momentary one-track mood, and she opened her eyes in horror.

What was she doing?! Of course she didn’t have Risako’s room key anymore! The two girls were still friends, or at least she thought so, but Miyabi no longer had thoughts of slipping into the younger girl’s bed on a particularly chilly or lonely night. Now she had another girl to sleep with, one who was with her every night without question… a girlfriend. Whatever she and Risako had been in the past, she could never have called her a girlfriend, and now it definitely wasn’t going to be that way because she had her Saki-chan. Taking slow and heavy steps, she left the door to return to her own room.

Now, several hours later, she still lay awake in that room, listening only to the stillness of the night, feeling colder and lonelier with every passing minute.

They were just having a fun party, she’d told herself. It was your own fault you didn’t join them. But she didn’t want to join them. She couldn’t face girls who thought she was a liar. She couldn’t face Momoko hanging all over Saki like she’d usually been since coming back.

The other girls noticed it too of course. She saw the looks they gave her when Momoko touched their Captain’s hand in playfulness; when Momoko hugged her in excitement. They looked at her as if gauging what her reaction would be.

She hadn’t forgotten how they spoke out against her and Saki’s relationship, and how more serious talk was only halted by Momoko’s arrival. Since then no one had seemed eager to broach that subject again since Momoko always seemed to be around at times that would have been appropriate, and for some reason they didn’t want to talk about it with her around. It had nearly gotten to the point where Miyabi thought to bring up the subject herself, but whenever the fancy struck her she quickly suppressed the urge.

She didn’t know what was going on, but every time she caught Momoko’s eyes she noticed that there wasn’t something right in them. Momoko had told her to come to her for anything, but did the girl really think that way?

They’re just having a fun party… she told herself again, although now it rang more hollow and less convincing than ever. Suddenly, she heard laughter from out in the hall. Someone was returning. Girls’ voices giggled, and she heard doors open and shut. She relaxed. The party was over. All her worrying was completely for naught.

However, as the minutes ticked by after the last closing door shut out the last of the giggling, the specter of worry rose within her again. Where was Saki? Why was she not returning with the others? She knew she heard Chinami return. She thought Maasa did too. However, Saki didn’t come back to their room.

She restrained herself from jumping out of the covers and going to look around the hall for herself; if the girl wasn’t coming in here, she wasn’t back yet. Instead, she decided to use another spell she’d wanted to try out. This seemed like quite an opportune time.

She closed her eyes and cast her thoughts outward. At first, she had a sensation like she was floating above her body. Her eyes were closed fast, but she could still see the room around her, and even better than usual since the darkness was illuminated by an ethereal greenish mist.

She focused her thoughts again, and she floated out from over the bed. Then she floated through her own door as well as on through the door across from hers. She couldn’t see much more than shadowy forms, but could make out enough to tell that Yurina, Maasa and Chinami were gathered together talking on one of the beds. Nothing was unusual about that, except she thought that Chinami was staying in another room…

Floating through a wall, she found that other room, the room that was supposed to belong to Risako, Chinami… and she supposed Momoko was staying there as well since she’d returned. There was nothing in the room but some clothes scattered over the beds and dressers.

She felt like something punched her in the stomach at the revelation of what she had really known already would be true, and she almost lost her grip on the spell. Hurriedly focusing it again, she thought she’d try something more; go a little deeper. She would try to find Saki and see what she was doing right then.

The view of the vacant room vanished from her sight, and instead she found herself occupying a space just over the shoulders of two girls who were sitting next to a wall somewhere; it looked like it was outside. This time she could hear their conversation too.

“So how are things with you and Miya-chan?” one of the voices asked. “After I came back it looked like you two weren’t even talking to each other, but tonight I saw you stealing any free moment you could together in the dressing room backstage. You know if you’re not careful you’re going to get in trouble for that one of these days.” She grinned as she teased.

The other girl blushed. “We’re okay,” she said. “It’s up and down.”

“Is it?” the first one asked rhetorically.

There was silence for a moment, while Miyabi tried to perk up her magical ears to hear anything that might go on. Then Momoko spoke, changing the subject. “You know what I told you that night, it was true.” Miyabi focused as hard as she could to listen closer.

Saki hesitated for a moment. “I believe you,” she said. “You’ve always been a good friend to me, Momo. I couldn’t have asked for anything more. When I thought you were gone…”

“Ah yes…” Momoko replied, as if reminiscing on something. “My being gone. That was something quite courageous Miya did. Going around resurrecting people can’t be easy to do.”

“No,” Saki said. “It didn’t look like it.”

Momoko glanced over at her. “You were there when she did it?” Saki nodded. Momoko looked back toward the ground. “I thought everyone was just going by her word. I thought she might have just been boasting, that maybe she hadn’t really done it and I was just blacked out and hidden for a couple days.” Anger flared within Miyabi, even through her incorporeal self.

“It was horrible, Momo,” Saki responded, staring in front of her at nothing, as if reliving some horrifying experience. “First there was the rain and the storm. That was bad enough, especially since I had a feeling it wasn’t exactly… natural. Then…” She hesitated. “Well, I was nearly scared to death. I’m worried about her, Momo…”

“Oh…” Momoko responded. Listening to Saki’s words just now, Miyabi felt renewed compassion toward the girl. She shouldn’t have put her through that. She thought of Risako too. She shouldn’t have put either of them through that. But then, could she have done it alone? Their support gave her the strength she needed. Or so she thought…

The vision suddenly faded a bit, and she became alert once more, fighting to keep control of it. It fizzled for a few seconds, as if she were peering at the scene through static like on a poorly received television station, but finally she managed to make it clear again. When the two girls came back into view though, her breath caught. They were now holding hands.

“You shouldn’t be made to worry like that…” Momoko said softly, and she seemed to lean closer to Saki, who now looked over at her too. “You deserve more.” Momoko brought their hands up between them and squeezed Saki’s tightly. Miyabi felt like she was going to turn blue from holding her breath.

“It’s just so scary sometimes, Momo-chan…” Saki said, seeming to become a little distraught. “I like her, but…”

“I know…” Momoko said. “I know.” Saki didn’t seem to realize, but Momoko appeared to be moving her face closer and closer to the other girl’s. Saki may not have noticed it, but Miyabi definitely did, and she felt something cold and hard rise within her.

“What should I do, Momo-chan?” Saki asked, raising her face to the girl she pled to.

“Together we’ll find out what to do,” Momoko responded in her softest voice yet. “You just have to trust me.”

Saki nodded that she did, and Momoko smiled. Then Momoko leaned in completely and pressed her lips to her girlfriend’s. Miyabi’s body was already shaking, not believing what she was seeing, but it wasn’t over yet. After Momoko’s initial move, she saw the other girl kiss her back. Miyabi could watch no more.

“No!!!” she screamed, and she sat up in her bed in a cold sweat, breathing heavily, her heart beating the fastest it ever had.

How could she do that! she exclaimed in her mind. How could she go and… how could they go and… Her mind cleared, and whatever rational thought was left regained a foothold. How could they? Because one of them was in love, of course. With that, it only took so much for the other one to feel that way too. Still, she couldn’t believe it. Saki was with her. With her. She lay back down on the bed, her heart slowing quickly. That’s right, she thought. She was…

After a few minutes of lying there and not hardly being able to form another coherent thought, she heard the door open slowly. She stopped her breathing as the silence throbbed around her, and she saw what had to be Saki’s form creep carefully into the room so as not to wake her.

She began breathing normally again, trying to make it into the even rhythm of sleep, but her eyes followed the girl as she tip-toed over to her suitcase and pulled some clothing out. She watched as the dark form changed into her night clothes, and then as she crept over to the bed and slowly pulled back the covers to slip beneath them.

Miyabi closed her eyes and kept careful control over herself to make it seem as if she was sleeping while she felt the girl getting comfortable beside her. She dared a peek out of one eye to see the shadowed face looking over at her quietly.

“Are you awake?” Saki whispered. Hearing no response, she settled down under the covers, and before long Miyabi noticed the girl fall into her own even breathing of sleep.

What was she going to do? She’d just witnessed her girlfriend kissing someone else, someone who was obviously completely in love with her. Then again, she still came back to Miyabi’s bed.

As she lay next to the small, warm and still form beside her, she decided to act like everything was normal again starting tomorrow. After all, she shouldn’t have been able to see what happened, should she? She decided to wait until the girl told her what was going on. If the girl told her.

What if she didn’t? Would she be able to allow her to still be her girlfriend despite it? Would she still be able to kiss her and hug her and sleep beside her? The answers to those questions, no matter how many spells she knew, were things she could never divine.

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #166 on: December 24, 2007, 10:10:12 PM »
Saki! How could you let Momo seduce you? I guess, though, that Miya can't really begrudge one kiss, since she didn't tell Saki about Risako. But then again, that was different circumstances. BTW astral projection for the win.

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #167 on: December 24, 2007, 10:42:17 PM »
Astral projection huh? Well, I think something is definitely wrong during it. I mean sure what she saw might be correct up till thrt where she felt faint and tried to regain the connection by focusing harder but this is where I think something happened. Momo might insert some images during that moment and the kiss scene planted on Miya's head will make her doubt Saki therefore she will pushed her a way before finally question her. It's so evil I'm excited to know where this is going. and What's up with Risako? Did I read that right? Clothes strewn across the room? Risako is doing the dirty with the boyfriend? Ohoho......

MOAR PLEASE!!

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #168 on: December 24, 2007, 11:59:49 PM »
What was she going to do? She’d just witnessed her girlfriend kissing someone else, someone who was obviously completely in love with her. Then again, she still came back to Miyabi’s bed.

As she lay next to the small, warm and still form beside her, she decided to act like everything was normal again starting tomorrow. After all, she shouldn’t have been able to see what happened, should she? She decided to wait until the girl told her what was going on. If the girl told her.

What if she didn’t? Would she be able to allow her to still be her girlfriend despite it? Would she still be able to kiss her and hug her and sleep beside her? The answers to those questions, no matter how many spells she knew, were things she could never divine.
And this comes from someone who kissed another girl, but never told her own girlfriend about it...  :roll:

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #169 on: December 25, 2007, 12:17:49 AM »
Woah, Risako in that elevator!  It really didn't seem like her, maybe she's part of the consequence of bringing Momo back to life.

Astral projection? So that's what its called, cool  :yep:
Clothes strewn across the room? Risako is doing the dirty with the boyfriend? Ohoho......

I overlooked that part, but now that I think about it, I remembered something that Risako said in an earlier chapter :-X....and I lol'd
at the O-->hoho

Poor Miya, I'm pretty sure that kiss was a one time thing for Saki, but Momo definitely wants it to be something more.

Anways, great Christmas present, even if you didn't mean it as one.
« Last Edit: December 25, 2007, 12:20:00 AM by modesta107 »

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #170 on: December 25, 2007, 05:39:26 AM »
AHHHHH!!!

-squeals!!-

Finally an update here! >w<
Keep updating man! I want more! I wanna know more, I need to know more!!
Please o(=W=)o You gotta!

Man, just..Just...update...I..need..
I can't even..put my theories in..Too much shock that theres even an update o(=A=)o~
So...You should update again..Yeah..

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #171 on: December 25, 2007, 12:39:27 PM »
An update on Xmas day! This is a great present for me :)
I love Momo, I do. But I find myself rooting for Miya. The girl has done so much and she deserves Captain all to herself. Still this triangle is keeping me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait to read more.

Why do I get the feeling Risako is playing mind games with Miya? :D Sure, she has a boyfriend now but could she be wanting Miya too? Ah, questions and I will need to read the next chapter to find out more :)

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 27: A Tortured Mind]
« Reply #172 on: December 25, 2007, 11:21:45 PM »
aw, man! if this story wasn't complicated before, it sure is now! I'm still not very sure about the momoko/saki thing, dunno why... and well, looks like miyabi understands the situation, especially considering her kiss with risako...
now, I reaaaally wanna read the next chapter  :yep:

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 28: Enchanted]
« Reply #173 on: December 27, 2007, 01:12:36 AM »
Aww, it makes me so happy how so many of you are demanding an update. :) Well, how would it be Christmastime without a little wish-granting? :D Because what do you know, I happen to have the next chapter right here and all ready for you all... Merry day-after-Christmas! The girls definitely seem to be getting what they want... and hopefully I'll make you feel a little enchanted too. :) And maybe... just maybe... I'll actually get Loser to respond...  ;) :oops:


Chapter 28

Miyabi was awakened the next morning by a bright light invading her sleep. Just after her eyes popped open to the blindness of the lights of her room, she noticed a girl jump onto the foot of the bed below her.

“Good morning, sleepyhead!” Saki said in a voice as bright as the lights, and she crawled up to give Miyabi a good morning kiss. She received it, but didn’t kiss back. Saki crawled back off of her to resume whatever she was doing, apparently just attributing her lack of enthusiasm to having just woken up.

“It’s reasons like this why I’m the Captain,” Saki rambled on, ferreting through her suitcase for appropriate attire for the day. “Even though you were in bed before I was, you’re the one sleeping in too! You haven’t forgotten we have a concert in a few hours, have you?”

“How could I have…” Miyabi grumbled, burying her face in her pillow. She didn’t need the reminder of last night and the girl’s late arrival. Plus, it wasn’t like she’d actually gotten any sleep.

Saki giggled. “That’s my Miya. I wouldn’t love ya the same without that brilliant yankii attitude you have sometimes…”

“You love me?” Miyabi asked in a suddenly quiet voice, turning her head to rest her cheek hard against her pillow as she stared over at the other girl.

Saki froze in her rummaging before looking slowly back at her. “Of course I do, silly. Haven’t I ever said that before?”

“No…” Miyabi responded, still looking at her. “You haven’t.” The girl had to go and do this now? She felt her anger rising slightly, and did her best to suppress it.

“Oh…” Saki said, blushing, and returned to her bag. She seemed to only half-heartedly sort through it now though, and before long she turned back fully to Miyabi.

“What I said just then,” the girl explained. “I was just saying it as a figure of speech. You know, we always say we love things about our friends and such…”

Miyabi continued staring at her. That was true, except… they weren’t just friends. At least they shouldn’t be.

However, instead of leaving it at that, Saki climbed back onto the bed again and slipped under the covers, scooting close to Miyabi and making her feel slightly uncomfortable. Apparently the girl didn’t notice though.

“But…” she said. “You know I’m yours, don’t you? I know I’m… not the best at expressing my emotions…” She avoided Miyabi’s eyes as she said that. “But Miya,” she looked back up into her face. “You know you mean more than anything to me. All you’ve done for me… all we’ve shared… I’m, well, I’m glad to be with you.”

“Are you?” Miyabi asked in a whisper.

Saki nodded, reaching down to take Miyabi’s hand in both of her own. Miyabi didn’t resist. Whatever had happened last night, she really did love this girl so much that she felt like she could forgive anything. However, things still wouldn’t be the same…

Miyabi pulled away slightly, sitting up in the bed. Saki followed her after a moment. “You’re right,” Miyabi stated. Her Captain raised a questioning eyebrow. “We have to get ready for a concert.”

She slid out of the bed and shuffled to her suitcase, pulling some clothes out. She didn’t pay attention to what she took out, but it didn’t really matter. Once she got to the concert she’d be provided with the concert wardrobe as well as what to wear for the rest of the day between concerts and after the last one since they’d still be quite available to the public eye.

Avoiding turning back to the girl on the bed, she pulled off her shirt to begin changing. She didn’t hear any other sound while she went about it, but she still did so calmly under the apparent watchful eyes of her girlfriend. After all, it wasn’t like she had anything to hide from her Captain anymore.

“Miya,” Saki said when she finished, this time in a quietly serious tone much different from the loving one she used when last she spoke. “Are you mad at me for some reason? If so, I’d be grateful if you told me why.”

Miyabi, never being able to resist that tone in Saki’s voice even when she was just her Captain, turned slowly around to her, fully accoutered in a medium-sized pleated black and white striped skirt, tight white turtleneck and red knit vest. “I’m not mad at you,” she stated plainly. “And what are you doing?” She looked at the clock on the bedside table. It was already past nine, and they had to be in the lobby by nine-thirty sharp to gather and head to Nagoya Rainbow Hall to prepare for the day’s concerts. Before long Asako and whoever Saki’s manager was would be knocking on their door to make sure they were up and about. One of these days she’d really have to find out which of the managers was Saki’s.

Becoming exasperated at the girl’s slowness, she stepped toward the bed and lunged forward, grabbing her by her arm and pulling her out of it. Saki stumbled to her feet in front of her, surprised by the gesture.

“Now,” Miyabi said in a voice that brooked no nonsense. “Are you gonna get ready, or am I going to have to dress you too?” She finished with a wicked grin.

Saki blushed and looked down. “You never cease to surprise me, Miya-chan…” she said softly.

“I know,” Miyabi said. “That’s why you love me, isn’t it?”

Saki looked up at her, her eyes shining. “Yes…” she responded. “It is.”

In the next moment Miyabi quickly reached around the smaller girl in front of her and squeezed her butt, making Saki jump. “Well?” she said. “Are you going to stand here pouring your heart out to me or are you going to get ready? My offer still stands.”

Saki blushed slightly again and turned quickly to her suitcase. “No…” she said, and Miyabi could sense the smile on her face as she spoke. “I think I’ll be fine.”

“Good!” Miyabi said, sitting down on the bed intending to watch even if she didn’t participate. The girl had watched her, after all. “I’m not used to dressing people other than myself, so it would have been a rather awkward experience.”

Saki turned to her once more, her hands still in her suitcase, and grinned mischievously. “Well…” she said. “I’ll just have to let you do it sometime then so it won’t be awkward any longer.” Satisfying herself with Miyabi’s wordlessly moving mouth in response to her own offer, she turned back to her suitcase, obviously in a good mood.

Miyabi closed her mouth and watched as the girl proceeded. Unlike Miyabi though, she didn’t stare at the wall the whole time as if the audience didn’t exist. Instead, she almost made a show of it with her glances back from time to time and the deliberate and teasing way she went about it.

Miyabi smiled as if she enjoyed it, and she had to admit to herself that she actually did, but inside she still didn’t at all feel the level of joy Saki seemed to radiate this morning. Why was the girl so happy after cheating on her the night before? At least she’d had the decency to feel incredibly guilty about when she kissed Risako, even if she hadn’t told her girlfriend about it yet. However, in Saki’s case not only did she not seem likely to tell Miyabi about her own affair anytime soon, but the girl didn’t seem like she could be any happier.

She continued pondering on this after they were done in their room. They didn’t meet anyone else in the hall – apparently all the other girls had already gone down; it was virtually nine-thirty now after all – and when entering the elevator on their way to join them in the lobby, Saki grasped her hand tightly. Since this would be the last time they had to themselves until whatever moments they could snatch in a dressing room during the concert, they used it as a last chance to be intimate. Once the elevator doors closed and it jerked to begin its trip downward, Saki stepped around in front of her and pulled her head down her own level. After leaning up to kiss her, they made out in the otherwise empty car, Miyabi into it just as much as her girlfriend this time because, if nothing else, they’d already had a wonderful morning together.

Their lips parted as the elevator neared the ground floor, but Saki still held her close, apparently not wanting to let her go quite yet. “Miya-chan…” she said, looking into her eyes. “I do love you.”

Miyabi smiled, and leaned down to kiss the girl’s nose in response. She wrinkled it and giggled, and as the elevator lurched to a stop fell back to Miyabi’s side, only holding her hand. As they walked out into the lobby, Miyabi loosened her grip in order to let the girl go before they met up with the rest, but Saki held on tightly. Miyabi glanced down at her, but she only looked straight ahead with a smile on her face as she walked on. Miyabi swallowed, and soon they reached the gathering.

The other girls and managers greeted them, and one or two, including Chinami, scolded them for being late. Most of them seemed to notice the two of them holding hands, but the managers apparently just thought it was a normal teenage girl thing to do and thought nothing more of it.

However, some of their Berryz comrades thought otherwise. Momoko in fact seemed to constantly stare at Miyabi with a faint smile from almost the moment they arrived. Looking down to see if Saki noticed anything, Miyabi realized the girl looked anywhere but at Momoko. Trying to be sneaky, was she? Feeling her mood quickly come down after their session in the elevator, she squeezed the girl’s hand tighter, feeling almost violent. Saki only returned the gesture as if she thought Miyabi just wanted to hold onto her more tightly.

“Well, even if you’re late, at least you’re not as bad as Rii-chan,” Chinami said, frowning among Saki and Miyabi and the joined hands between them. “I never even saw her come back to our room last night. Maa-chan and Kuma-chan didn’t see her in theirs either.”

“She was back,” Miyabi said, leveling a heavy gaze at the still-smiling Momoko. “She came back at the same time I did.”

“Then she must have left again,” Chinami said. “Because she wasn’t there when we returned from karaoke or even when Momo and I went to bed.”

The girl’s words finally sunk into Miyabi’s brain, and she tore her eyes away from Momoko’s to look in puzzlement at Chinami. “What?” she asked.

“I’m sorry to keep you waiting!” came a young voice from the direction of the lobby’s outside door, and they all turned to see Risako jogging up to them, her long light faux fur coat hanging open at her sides. She arrived very red-faced, but also smiling.

“Where have you been?” asked one of their staff, a young woman by the name of Haruka, closing in quickly on the beaming new arrival.

“An aunt of mine who lives in the city was at the concert yesterday and asked me to spend the night with them. I couldn’t pass up the chance to see my wonderful cousins.”

She turned to look at the rest of the girls as she spoke, and when her eyes came upon Miyabi’s own suspicious ones, Miyabi thought she caught a deeper flush in her pale features. “You need to tell us if you make different arrangements for the night!” Haruka scolded. “You’ve been around long enough to know that by now!”

Risako dipped her head a few times in apology, but the smile didn’t disappear from her face. “I’m sorry,” she said. “I’ll make sure to do that next time. It just came up so quickly I didn’t have the chance to tell anyone…”

Now the girl was pointedly avoiding Miyabi’s suspicious glare. Well wasn’t this just the perfect morning. It wasn’t just Saki; everyone seemed like they couldn’t be happier! After Risako’s excuse some of the other managers as well as Berryz girls just laughed and rolled their eyes. They were all quite accustomed by now to the babying the baby of their group needed sometimes. Miyabi just sighed and glanced back toward Momoko. This time the girl was just talking animatedly to some of the staff members and ignoring Miyabi as if she was nothing special again.

As the managers quickly shuffled them toward their bus, Miyabi wanted to catch Risako for a word but couldn’t manage to pry herself away from her girlfriend. Not that it was such a bad thing, but it definitely didn’t lend itself to private conversation with anyone else. Saki just chatted with Chinami and Maasa along the way, Chinami seeming to ignore Miyabi on Saki’s other side while Maasa seemed to positively beam at nothing more than seeing the two of them so close. She was going to have to have another talk with her friend later. Hopefully she could manage it by the time they had to leave.

Risako for her part seemed to steer well clear of Miyabi, although that didn’t spare her the girl’s infernal smiles whenever Saki said something to her. The only looks she received though were sideways ones as if she was reveling in the fact that she had a secret that Miyabi couldn’t find out. Once in the bus, the racket and plain chaos that normally went on ceased any more thought of private talks altogether. Still, throughout the whole ride, Saki sat next to her with her hand tightly folded into her own. The ride could definitely have been much worse.

The afternoon concert was quite enjoyable again. Miyabi didn’t know how she did it, but by perhaps some power Saki had on her own as Captain she managed to steal no less than three moments during the nearly two-hour length of it to pull Miyabi into a dressing room. Breathless and exhilarated as she was by the performances, Miyabi had no ability to resist even if she wanted to.

Between concerts all the girls and all the tour staff had dinner together since it would be their last in Nagoya, and there was quite the celebration to be had with all that had gone on since they arrived. After this, since the school year was getting into full swing, it would be weeks before they were all together again.

The evening concert went very similar to the earlier one, except with less dressing room time and the traditional crying at the end since it marked the end of both their stay in the city as well as their tour. All except Miyabi of course; she never cried. Saki as usual could barely hold it together, which even brought a smile to Miyabi’s face at how emotional her girlfriend obviously was, even if she didn’t think she could always show it.

On their way back to the hotel, the topic of another party was broached but by now everyone was completely exhausted, and so nothing formal was planned. Since it was their last night together for so long though, they let their hair hang down considerably until most of them literally couldn’t keep their eyes open any longer.

This resulted in Miyabi finally making it out of Maasa’s and Yurina’s room at nearly midnight to wobble sleepily back to her own, arm-in-arm with Saki. When they arrived though, Saki told her she should go see Risako once more.

She tried to make a point of always checking on the girl before retiring for the night, since she was after all the youngest, although she almost skipped it tonight seeing as Risako had seemed to be on cloud nine all day. Everyone raved about how these were also two of her best concerts in weeks, and marveled at how she seemed to her way out of depression again, with an accusing glance or two spared for Miyabi as well.

Miyabi on the other hand still regarded the girl with suspicion. She didn’t believe for a second she’d spent the night before with her “aunt”. But, then again, what business was it of hers what the girl did anymore? She was Saki’s now, for better or worse. Maybe this was a good chance to take a step back from Risako’s life. Strangely though, she felt like the idea caused a small bubble of emptiness to form within her.

Stumbling into her room after Saki’s parting, Miyabi flopped face-down on the bed, feeling like she could fall asleep right there. She was brought out of her descent into peaceful slumber though by a voice from the door.

“This has been a very tiring day, hasn’t it?”

Miyabi groaned, not wanting to move, but didn’t dare ignore the voice. She rolled over, pulling herself up into a somewhat seated position and hugging her knees to her chest. “Yes it has, Momo. Are you happy you came back from the dead now?”

“Oh yes,” the girl responded, running her fingers down the doorframe and looking at it as if it was made with exquisite craftsmanship. “I couldn’t love performing with everyone and for everyone any more. But then again,” she went on, as Miyabi yawned. “That’s not all that tired you out, was it?’

“What are you talking about?” Miyabi asked in a sleepy voice.

“I saw you and Captain shut yourself in those dressing rooms. I know you were doing more in there than ‘retouching your makeup’.”

Miyabi stared at her. “What’s your point?”

“No point…” Momoko said, coming closer and sitting at the foot of the bed. “But I just hope you guys are being careful. If any of the staff put two and two together, you could be in very big trouble.”

“Well,” Miyabi said, her eyes narrowing. “That’s why we are careful. So they won’t put two and two together. And believe me, if they happen to discover it another way I’ll find out how.”

Momoko stared at her quietly, oddly not seeming hardly tired at all herself. “I just worry for you two, you know? And I wonder if it might not be best if you just came out clean and told everybody what’s going on since you’re so serious about each other.” She looked up at Miyabi questioningly. “You are serious, right?”

“Yes,” Miyabi said in a low voice. “Very.”

“Well then, that’s wonderful!” Momoko crowed, clapping her hands together, as if the declaration was tremendously surprising. Then she reached up to pat Miyabi’s leg lightly. “It was just a thought. I hope you have enjoyable weeks back at school.” At the plain indication that she was going to leave, she rose up and headed for the door. Before she passed through though, she turned her head halfway back to say one more thing.

“Oh, and about your ways of finding things out… I may not know much about this magic of yours, but I don’t know if I’d blindly trust it. Surely it can’t always be perfect. Captain still isn’t too far removed from a horrible relationship, and so I wonder if she’s quite ready for another one that’s obviously as deep as the one you two share. Be sure to give her my best regards, by the way.” Then, with a slight wave and a smile, she passed out and into the hall.

What was that about? Miyabi thought after she left. Well, the girl was definitely right that she didn’t know anything about magic! It had never let Miyabi down before, and she had no reason to think it would now. Still, for some reason, it left doubts in her mind that didn’t seem to be directed at anything she could decipher. Strangely enough as well, the girl’s last words didn’t seem to affect her overmuch either. Perhaps it was due to Saki’s declaration of love this morning… She felt herself flush thinking back to that, in both intense pleasant emotion as well as nervousness.

“Is Captain in hiding someplace?” she heard a voice from the door ask. Turning toward it, she saw Maasa’s sizable shadow filling the doorway. “I couldn’t think of any other reason for you to be blushing like that, Miya.” Then the girl took a couple quick steps and jumped onto the bed before finally coming to a rest next to her and flipping over on her back to stretch wide. Miyabi had to dodge out of the way of one of her fists. The girl definitely didn’t know the meaning of space.

“She’s off tucking Rii-chan in for the night,” Miyabi said with a smirk. “It only takes the thought of her to make me blush anymore it seems…”

Maasa turned on her side to face her, propping her elbow on her bed to hold up her head in her palm. “Man, you’ve really got it bad, dontcha?”

Miyabi nodded, unable to keep from blushing again. She blamed it on her tiredness; she was just unable to control herself any longer! Speaking of… “Maa-chan,” she said, yawning. “It’s great talking to you, but I’m really tired. Do you think you could just let me get some sleep?” Instead of moving, Maasa just kept grinning at her like an idiot. “What?” Miyabi grumbled. “Do I have something on my face?”

“Nothing, nothing…” Maasa said briskly, looking off above them innocently. “So has anything happened the last day or so I should know about? Like… you know…” She poked Miyabi in the stomach.

“Hey…” Miyabi whined, rubbing her poked spot. “Well…” she began while still rubbing. She didn’t know if it was best to tell anyone, but she was almost aching trying to hold it in. Then, remembering Maasa had seemed to become one of her best friends whom she’d told virtually everything lately, she nodded, though still spoke hesitantly in her nervousness. Maasa still peered at her with one eyebrow raised. “She did say she loved me this morning…”

Maasa’s mouth fell open. “She did what!” she exclaimed, and reached over to hug Miyabi tightly, who struggled in vain in an attempt to regain her breath. Finally the girl pulled away, though she now viewed her with what looked like tears in her eyes. Miyabi just tried the best she could to regain her lost oxygen.

“That’s incredible, girl!” she said, sniffing and wiping her eyes in a completely fake way as if she were quite moved by something. “My little Miya is growing up…”

“I’m not that little…” Miyabi pouted. “I’m not even two months younger than you! Besides, what are you talking about anyway?”

Maasa just adopted that idiotic grin again in return. “Oh nothing, nothing…” she said in a very amused voice. Then she turned to the doorway. Miyabi followed her eyes to see a small girl standing within it.

“You’re not stealing my Miya away from me, are you?” Saki said, and Miyabi could literally hear her grin through her words.

“Oh of course not, Captain!” Maasa declared, jumping quickly out of the bed and holding her flattened hand to her forehead in a mock salute. Miyabi felt the bed bounce at the sudden departure of the girl’s weight, but even through the distraction she now only had eyes for her girlfriend.

Saki still wore her short, tight shorts, but her t-shirt now hung out at the sides almost covering it up, making it appear that was all she wore. The t-shirt even had skulls on it. That was the subject of quite some teasing by the rest of the girls since Captain never wore anything as freaky as that, instead usually just dressing herself in something simple and pretty. They were amazed she even owned a shirt like that. Miyabi smiled. They didn’t know that it was really hers. The girl had asked to borrow it upon returning from the nightcap.

“I wouldn’t dare to do such a thing!” Maasa continued with elaborate flourishes. “She’s alllll yours…” Then, with another big grin back at Miyabi, she skipped out of their room and into her own across from them, pulling their door shut behind her.

Saki moved out of the way while the freight train passed, and then quietly closed the door. Miyabi watched her as she smiled over at her and locked it, then crawled onto the bed and sidled up next to her, pulling the blankets up over them both even though they were still in their street clothes.

“Is Risako all right?” Miyabi asked, not really caring about the response but thinking it was polite to ask.

“She’s high as a kite,” Saki said with a broader smile. “I don’t know what happened to her, but her time with her family must have helped her sort out her issues somehow.” Her time with her family… Miyabi thought. Yeah right… “She probably won’t get any sleep in the state she’s in, and I know I’ll be roasted alive for delivering her back to her parents in that condition, but I think Momo and Chii-chan will at least keep her company quite well tonight. They were setting up for some game even as I was leaving. Kuma-chan I think is already asleep. That is, if she’s not woken up by someone,” she finished with a grin.

While she grinned, she also looked into Miyabi’s eyes as if she was trying to hint something with her words, but Miyabi couldn’t guess what it would be. Instead, she just stared back. The girl’s dark eyes were really the softest and most beautiful she’d ever seen. Why did she think Risako’s even compared? The younger girl was pretty enough of course, but it never seemed like much lay behind that outward charm.

Saki was a different story though. She was like a book that only told its story a page at a time, and Miyabi always hungered to turn to the next. Suddenly what she saw between her and Momoko last night didn’t seem to have much meaning at all. She was the one the girl came back to at the end of the night, wasn’t she? And plus, it wasn’t like Miyabi didn’t have secrets of her own…

Saki scooted closer to her, to where she could feel the warmth emanating from her slim frame. “Since who knows when we’ll be able to be together like this again…” she began seductively as well as with a slight tinge of nervousness. She looked down at where she began picking at a button on Miyabi’s shirt. Despite the restrained fidgeting, confidence is what the girl exuded, and that caught Miyabi off-guard more than anything in its anomaly. “And… since you now know I love you…”

Miyabi could feel the girl’s heartbeat increasing swiftly, her own leaping to keep pace. Saki reached up to brush a strand of hair behind her ear. It had been falling into her face while lying in the slightly awkward sideways position she held beside her. Miyabi felt herself blush at the gesture, excitement building as her fancies seemed to take over. This was real, wasn’t it? The girl, her girlfriend, was really…

“I thought I’d like to give you something to remember me by…” Saki finished, and this time her nervousness turned into a full blush while she still picked idly at Miyabi’s button.

Miyabi though, now past the initial stage of disbelief, held the girl’s chin and raised it up so she could look again into her eyes. “I’d like the same,” she said quietly with a smile, and then leaned in to kiss her lips.

As they kissed tenderly, Miyabi felt the hand at her chest move down as it took care of each button in turn. When it was finished Saki moved closer to her, pressing against her and pulling her closer in need. The girl held her with one arm, and her other hand slid down Miyabi’s side. When it tentatively reached her waist, Miyabi felt her excitement rise – showing it in her kiss – and it continued on below her waist and around her thigh. That pushed Miyabi over the edge, and for the next good while she lost herself to the passion and want of her girlfriend… and of her love for her.

Much later, Miyabi lay exhausted in the dark room holding the sleeping older girl in her arms and stroking her matted hair tenderly. Her eyes closed, feeling completely relaxed, and a smile slowly crept its way across her face. Despite her girlfriend’s modest ambitions, Miyabi knew without a doubt that this was a night whose enchantment she’d remember not only until they met again, but for the rest of her life.
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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 28: Enchanted]
« Reply #174 on: December 27, 2007, 03:48:39 AM »
You know How I said I'm an incredibly lazy person and would never post such a long comment until a billion years has passed?
 Well, I'm giving you one helluva' comment because there is so much to say dammit!!


Miyabi was awakened the next morning by a bright light invading her sleep. Just after her eyes popped open to the blindness of the lights of her room, she noticed a girl jump onto the foot of the bed below her.

“Good morning, sleepyhead!” Saki said in a voice as bright as the lights, and she crawled up to give Miyabi a good morning kiss. She received it, but didn’t kiss back. Saki crawled back off of her to resume whatever she was doing, apparently just attributing her lack of enthusiasm to having just woken up.


Saki is either extremely happy for that night with Momoko (Which I'm sure she is in a way) Or she's genuinely happy for that new day, blah,blah,blah good day thingy..

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Saki giggled. “That’s my Miya. I wouldn’t love ya the same without that brilliant yankii attitude you have sometimes…”

“You love me?” Miyabi asked in a suddenly quiet voice, turning her head to rest her cheek hard against her pillow as she stared over at the other girl.

Now, that's a first..A declaration of love out of the blue..
She could really mean it..But in my opinion, it was said to keep up the whole nothing really happened last night facade thing.

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Saki froze in her rummaging before looking slowly back at her. “Of course I do, silly. Haven’t I ever said that before?”

“No…” Miyabi responded, still looking at her. “You haven’t.” The girl had to go and do this now? She felt her anger rising slightly, and did her best to suppress it.

Its only natural for Miyabi to feel angry
She just saw her g/f get kissed and kiss back to a girl who has admitted of being in love with dear old captain..
It's only a matter of what Miyabi is going to do later...
 
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“What I said just then,” the girl explained. “I was just saying it as a figure of speech. You know, we always say we love things about our friends and such…”

Miyabi continued staring at her. That was true, except… they weren’t just friends. At least they shouldn’t be.

Ohoho, taking the proclamation back by saying it's just meant as a friendly thing is she?  :glasses:

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However, instead of leaving it at that, Saki climbed back onto the bed again and slipped under the covers, scooting close to Miyabi and making her feel slightly uncomfortable. Apparently the girl didn’t notice though.

She's way too happy that morning...I get the feeling somewhere in Saki's mind she's really confused over the event of last nights happening with Momoko and the fact that she has Miyabi who is suppose to be her girlfriend...

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“But…” she said. “You know I’m yours, don’t you? I know I’m… not the best at expressing my emotions…” She avoided Miyabi’s eyes as she said that. “But Miya,” she looked back up into her face. “You know you mean more than anything to me. All you’ve done for me… all we’ve shared… I’m, well, I’m glad to be with you.”

“Are you?” Miyabi asked in a whisper.

Does Captain really believe she's in love with Miyabi? Or is she just trying to convince herself that she is?
In my opinion, Captain is only trying to say that to lessen her confusion..
I'm sure kissing Momoko brought up some emotions she never really thought she had for the living dead girl..

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Saki nodded, reaching down to take Miyabi’s hand in both of her own. Miyabi didn’t resist. Whatever had happened last night, she really did love this girl so much that she felt like she could forgive anything. However, things still wouldn’t be the same…

See, I remember a few pages back that you said Miyabi might be/will be getting power hungry?
I suppose this is the first step of it all
My thoughts of why this is the first step is because she's given in to Saki,forgiven her instead of feeling angered fully or outraged at the fact Saki is acting perfectly fine, saying she loves Miyabi...Miyabi is weak-willed that she melts and just lets it happen, going along with it instead of fighting it and try to get reasons behind why and such things like that..

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Avoiding turning back to the girl on the bed, she pulled off her shirt to begin changing. She didn’t hear any other sound while she went about it, but she still did so calmly under the apparent watchful eyes of her girlfriend. After all, it wasn’t like she had anything to hide from her Captain anymore.

........Changing like  that with no embarrassment..But then again, its been said that some of the idols do bathe together and there are public bath housings so w/e..But onto the main point of this quote..
Miyabi did hide something from Captain though, she never told her that she kissed Risako that time..
So, in a way isn't that a contradiction?

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“Miya,” Saki said when she finished, this time in a quietly serious tone much different from the loving one she used when last she spoke. “Are you mad at me for some reason? If so, I’d be grateful if you told me why.”

She was mad but since she's so into captain she's forgiven her already..
I can only imagine how badly things will turn out in later chapters...

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“Now,” Miyabi said in a voice that brooked no nonsense. “Are you gonna get ready, or am I going to have to dress you too?” She finished with a wicked grin.

....Miyabi is...a devilish girl..Really Rokun are you really going to make them all devilish like that?!

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Saki blushed and looked down. “You never cease to surprise me, Miya-chan…” she said softly.

“I know,” Miyabi said. “That’s why you love me, isn’t it?”

Saki looked up at her, her eyes shining. “Yes…” she responded. “It is.”
...Does she love her..It gets confusing for me but I'll stand by my beliefs that Saki is only saying it so she would believe it herself..
when in reality....She really isn't sure.

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Saki turned to her once more, her hands still in her suitcase, and grinned mischievously. “Well…” she said. “I’ll just have to let you do it sometime then so it won’t be awkward any longer.” Satisfying herself with Miyabi’s wordlessly moving mouth in response to her own offer, she turned back to her suitcase, obviously in a good mood.
..Making them all into devil girls... :depressed:

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Miyabi smiled as if she enjoyed it, and she had to admit to herself that she actually did, but inside she still didn’t at all feel the level of joy Saki seemed to radiate this morning. Why was the girl so happy after cheating on her the night before? At least she’d had the decency to feel incredibly guilty about when she kissed Risako, even if she hadn’t told her girlfriend about it yet. However, in Saki’s case not only did she not seem likely to tell Miyabi about her own affair anytime soon, but the girl didn’t seem like she could be any happier.

Maybe because...Saki did enjoy doing what she did with Momoko..She enjoys it but there lies the fact that she is with Miyabi..And Miyabi is her girlfriend..So, maybe its a defense mechanism she has, to make it seem like everything is okay between her and miyabi when in truth kissing momoko must have caused some huge dents in their relationships, Saki just chooses to attempt in ignoring it..

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Once the elevator doors closed and it jerked to begin its trip downward, Saki stepped around in front of her and pulled her head down her own level. After leaning up to kiss her, they made out in the otherwise empty car, Miyabi into it just as much as her girlfriend this time because, if nothing else, they’d already had a wonderful morning together.

Its just strengthening my theories that Saki is being extremely affection to ignore possible conflicts that may be revealed later in the story..

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Their lips parted as the elevator neared the ground floor, but Saki still held her close, apparently not wanting to let her go quite yet. “Miya-chan…” she said, looking into her eyes. “I do love you.”
More fuel to the fire baby, more fuel.. :cool1:

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Miyabi smiled, and leaned down to kiss the girl’s nose in response. She wrinkled it and giggled, and as the elevator lurched to a stop fell back to Miyabi’s side, only holding her hand.
And alas...Miyabi has really emotionally attached herself to Saki, She might have already given her heart to the girl without realizing it...That weak-willed factor, she'll do anything for captain and possibly...do anything to keep her...

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However, some of their Berryz comrades thought otherwise. Momoko in fact seemed to constantly stare at Miyabi with a faint smile from almost the moment they arrived.
Momoko just doesn't like Miyabi at all..In the beginning it might have been rivalry feelings but now it became extremely complicated with her being together with Captain and Momoko IN LOVE with Captain. In truth, yes, she might like Miyabi as an acquaintance but entirely detests Miyabi for being the first to take Captain away.


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Looking down to see if Saki noticed anything, Miyabi realized the girl looked anywhere but at Momoko.

If Captain looked at Momoko, noticed her I am sure it would erupt some feelings she is trying to control..

 
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she squeezed the girl’s hand tighter, feeling almost violent. Saki only returned the gesture as if she thought Miyabi just wanted to hold onto her more tightly.
..I find this as another sign in future chapters of Miyabi's....mmm I don't want to jump the gun so quickly but I'm positive on it...
That this is a sign of Miyabi's own destruction in future chapters..I predict something bad and tragic will happen and Miyabi will be in the center of it.

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“Well, even if you’re late, at least you’re not as bad as Rii-chan,” Chinami said, frowning among Saki and Miyabi and the joined hands between them. “I never even saw her come back to our room last night. Maa-chan and Kuma-chan didn’t see her in theirs either.”

“She was back,” Miyabi said, leveling a heavy gaze at the still-smiling Momoko. “She came back at the same time I did.”

“Then she must have left again,” Chinami said. “Because she wasn’t there when we returned from karaoke or even when Momo and I went to bed.”
When Miyabi explored Risako's room clothes were sprawled everywhere, she was trying to look good..And I bet it was for her boyfriend..And I'm sure she stayed at her boyfriends  :err:

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The girl’s words finally sunk into Miyabi’s brain, and she tore her eyes away from Momoko’s to look in puzzlement at Chinami. “What?” she asked.
Miyabi without knowing it, still likes the girl..After all..that elevator scene from the previous chapter..Whether Miyabi wants to acknowledge it or not she still has feelings for Risako..but thats my belief.

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“An aunt of mine who lives in the city was at the concert yesterday and asked me to spend the night with them. I couldn’t pass up the chance to see my wonderful cousins.”
That is one load of bull.. :mon blowhorn:

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She turned to look at the rest of the girls as she spoke, and when her eyes came upon Miyabi’s own suspicious ones, Miyabi thought she caught a deeper flush in her pale features.

And Miyabi knows Risako is lying through the skin of her teeth..
But that blush Risako made when she looked at Miyabi..I suspect its because she knows that Miyabi knows she's lying...

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Now the girl was pointedly avoiding Miyabi’s suspicious glare.

Liars can tell whose lying..I remember it once being said that Miyabi and Risako are extremely good or just good at lying..
And Risako just doesn't want to go with telling the truth to a girl who seems to have an on and off affection towards her not knowing whats gonna happen..


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As the managers quickly shuffled them toward their bus, Miyabi wanted to catch Risako for a word but couldn’t manage to pry herself away from her girlfriend.

Miyabi is there wanting to know what really happened with Risako but Saki in all her "i love my girlfriend" attitude refuses to let Miyabi go anywhere but be at her side..I see that as way for Captain to reassure herself in that sense of really being in a loved relationship that they don't have problems and always will be together..
Ah, the smell of drama and chaos seems to be so near..I can't wait.. :twisted:

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Chinami seeming to ignore Miyabi on Saki’s other side while Maasa seemed to positively beam at nothing more than seeing the two of them so close.
I find it funny how Maasa is absolutely Smitten at the idea her friends being together and how some people assume Chinami is wigged out by it..Its understandable that Chinami is wigged out but I don't think its mainly because of Saki's and Miyabi's relationship..More like Miyabi's abilities and powers and what she could do..I honestly think Chinami may have some gut feeling something might happen..

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Risako for her part seemed to steer well clear of Miyabi, although that didn’t spare her the girl’s infernal smiles whenever Saki said something to her.

Risako is either teasing Miyabi by torturing her in a sense she has something to hide and has hidden it well or she is doing her best to stay clear from Miyabi and live her life without getting too close..(After all..Risako has said Miyabi is like a drug to her)


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The only looks she received though were sideways ones as if she was reveling in the fact that she had a secret that Miyabi couldn’t find out.

Lol, Or maybe Risako is just being childish and rubbing it in Miyabi's face that she knows something and Miyabi doesn't but knows Miyabi is (kinda') dying to know..

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The afternoon concert was quite enjoyable again. Miyabi didn’t know how she did it, but by perhaps some power Saki had on her own as Captain she managed to steal no less than three moments during the nearly two-hour length of it to pull Miyabi into a dressing room. Breathless and exhilarated as she was by the performances, Miyabi had no ability to resist even if she wanted to.

..Really..Jeebus on a cracker..Its getting quite..-cough-...
but..really these moments are really solidifying my theories..

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The evening concert went very similar to the earlier one, except with less dressing room time and the traditional crying at the end since it marked the end of both their stay in the city as well as their tour. All except Miyabi of course; she never cried. Saki as usual could barely hold it together, which even brought a smile to Miyabi’s face at how emotional her girlfriend obviously was, even if she didn’t think she could always show it.
Miyabi possibly believes she can show emotion but from what I've seen she really can't..She hasn't been able to express anger very well, more like little hints of it, annoyance, irritation but she's never been able to express anger at all..There were several moments where a girl like Risako or Maasa, Chinami or even Momoko would be able to show that they are angry..
But Miyabi seems to repress it in a way, either by giving into forgiveness (Like with captain) or being swept into a different dilemma..She never cries, another sign in this story that...she might have some problems in expressing things and again..it might show up later on in future chapters as a huge delicious problem  :twisted:

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When they arrived though, Saki told her she should go see Risako once more.

She tried to make a point of always checking on the girl before retiring for the night, since she was after all the youngest, although she almost skipped it tonight seeing as Risako had seemed to be on cloud nine all day. Everyone raved about how these were also two of her best concerts in weeks, and marveled at how she seemed to her way out of depression again, with an accusing glance or two spared for Miyabi as well.
Risako had one helluva' night i bet at her boyfriends or had a revelation of sorts..not sure what so I'm going with my boyfriend theory..
But I'm sure Risako and her boyfriend will not go picture perfect and things will go wrong...

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Miyabi on the other hand still regarded the girl with suspicion. She didn’t believe for a second she’d spent the night before with her “aunt”. But, then again, what business was it of hers what the girl did anymore? She was Saki’s now, for better or worse. Maybe this was a good chance to take a step back from Risako’s life. Strangely though, she felt like the idea caused a small bubble of emptiness to form within her.
:mon star: its because she still cares...more like still likes Risako..Even if she doesn't realize it herself.

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“This has been a very tiring day, hasn’t it?”

Miyabi groaned, not wanting to move, but didn’t dare ignore the voice. She rolled over, pulling herself up into a somewhat seated position and hugging her knees to her chest. “Yes it has, Momo. Are you happy you came back from the dead now?”
Snappy and sarcastic I'm sure there will be some..problems or hints of ones at least..

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“Oh yes,” the girl responded, running her fingers down the door frame and looking at it as if it was made with exquisite craftsmanship. “I couldn’t love performing with everyone and for everyone any more. But then again,” she went on, as Miyabi yawned. “That’s not all that tired you out, was it?"
She seems...not that appreciative for being brought back from the dead..Maybe this is one of the signs of Momoko coming back wrong..
She also knows what Saki and Miyabi do, so its probably inflating her dislike for Miyabi and its also probably in a twisted way happy.

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“What are you talking about?” Miyabi asked in a sleepy voice.

“I saw you and Captain shut yourself in those dressing rooms. I know you were doing more in there than ‘retouching your makeup’.”

Miyabi stared at her. “What’s your point?”

“No point…” Momoko said, coming closer and sitting at the foot of the bed. “But I just hope you guys are being careful. If any of the staff put two and two together, you could be in very big trouble.”
Momoko is warning Miyabi to be careful of the staffs catching them like she's going to rat them out but I don't see it as her being the one..I have a guess on who if thats whats going to happen later on..
But back to my theory that Momoko's knowledge of what Miyabi and Saki do in their dressing rooms..
I've said repeatedly that I think Saki is being more affectionate than usual is because of the whole reassurance thing..Well I also think Momoko knows Saki might have felt something during that kiss of theirs..And knows why Saki is so affectionate towards Miyabi more than usual... :smoke:

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“Well,” Miyabi said, her eyes narrowing. “That’s why we are careful. So they won’t put two and two together. And believe me, if they happen to discover it another way I’ll find out how.”
hmm just hmm  :mon suspect:

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Momoko stared at her quietly, oddly not seeming hardly tired at all herself. “I just worry for you two, you know? And I wonder if it might not be best if you just came out clean and told everybody what’s going on since you’re so serious about each other.” She looked up at Miyabi questioningly. “You are serious, right?”

“Yes,” Miyabi said in a low voice. “Very.”
More like Momoko is just worried for Saki..She is in love with her...
I like seeing Momoko questioning Miyabi's and Saki's relationship to see if Miyabi really is serious...Its as if she's challenging Miyabi in a way..

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“Well then, that’s wonderful!” Momoko crowed, clapping her hands together, as if the declaration was tremendously surprising. Then she reached up to pat Miyabi’s leg lightly. “It was just a thought. I hope you have enjoyable weeks back at school.” At the plain indication that she was going to leave,

Momoko obviously doesn't like their relationship, since she wants to be with captain...but she's continuing the whole 'I support you guys' thing..I wonder if theres a reason behind it..

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“Oh, and about your ways of finding things out… I may not know much about this magic of yours, but I don’t know if I’d blindly trust it. Surely it can’t always be perfect.
Oh my Momoko's words hit hard...Magic really can't be all trust worthy, there's always a consequence to it..But Miyabi who is a practitioner, a novice one at that believes she can handle it and is 100% Full proof..And that i'm sure will lead to Miyabi's power hunger thing and some other damaging effects..

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Captain still isn’t too far removed from a horrible relationship, and so I wonder if she’s quite ready for another one that’s obviously as deep as the one you two share. Be sure to give her my best regards, by the way.” Then, with a slight wave and a smile, she passed out and into the hall.
My, oh, My...But I can't help but agree at Momoko's words. Sure she's a girl who in my opinion detests Miyabi but she does speak honesty and truth in a lot of her speeches..After Captains break up with Jun, she was absolutely devastated and Miyabi just happens to be there in her time of need...One can't help but think and believe that Miyabi is Captain's rebound...

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Well, the girl was definitely right that she didn’t know anything about magic! It had never let Miyabi down before, and she had no reason to think it would now.

With confidence like that...there's going to be a problem with Miyabi and her magic..I know it..

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Strangely enough as well, the girl’s last words didn’t seem to affect her overmuch either. Perhaps it was due to Saki’s declaration of love this morning… She felt herself flush thinking back to that, in both intense pleasant emotion as well as nervousness.
She doesn't believe it and absolutely believes in Captain, since Captain is technically Her first real relationship...But she doesn't really know what captain really feels or think and only captain knows that...(I smell another possible cause for major drama~  :twisted:)

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“She’s off tucking Rii-chan in for the night,” Miyabi said with a smirk. “It only takes the thought of her to make me blush anymore it seems…”

Maasa turned on her side to face her, propping her elbow on her bed to hold up her head in her palm. “Man, you’ve really got it bad, dontcha?”
First real relationships are like that isn't it..? :cool2:

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“Hey…” Miyabi whined, rubbing her poked spot. “Well…” she began while still rubbing. She didn’t know if it was best to tell anyone, but she was almost aching trying to hold it in. Then, remembering Maasa had seemed to become one of her best friends whom she’d told virtually everything lately, she nodded, though still spoke hesitantly in her nervousness. Maasa still peered at her with one eyebrow raised. “She did say she loved me this morning…”
Maasa acting as the best friend thing brings back their twisted world into some normalcy lol
Since Maasa is the only girl who doesn't seem to have much problems and is the only girl who is relatively normal and supportive to any of the members choices...

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“That’s incredible, girl!” she said, sniffing and wiping her eyes in a completely fake way as if she were quite moved by something. “My little Miya is growing up…”

“I’m not that little…” Miyabi pouted. “I’m not even two months younger than you! Besides, what are you talking about anyway?”
It brings the reader back that they are still young teenagers...and that is how one would normally act lol  :hee:

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“Is Risako all right?” Miyabi asked, not really caring about the response but thinking it was polite to ask.
Polite to ask but when she hears the response I'm sure she did care a little..

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“She’s high as a kite,” Saki said with a broader smile. “I don’t know what happened to her, but her time with her family must have helped her sort out her issues somehow.” Her time with her family… Miyabi thought. Yeah right…
Like that, she knows Risako didn't spend the night with her family but isn't all that curious to know why at that moment..

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The girl’s dark eyes were really the softest and most beautiful she’d ever seen. Why did she think Risako’s even compared? The younger girl was pretty enough of course, but it never seemed like much lay behind that outward charm.
Miyabi is smitten with Captain of course one..And Maybe the reason why she's questioning If Risako's eyes even compared to Saki is because maybe Risako doesn't want Miyabi to see beyond her eyes...Like things she doesn't want Miyabi to read, making Risako seem in a way a mystery..But we can't be sure since we really don't know Miyabi's and Risako's relationship back then per say..

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Saki was a different story though. She was like a book that only told its story a page at a time, and Miyabi always hungered to turn to the next. Suddenly what she saw between her and Momoko last night didn’t seem to have much meaning at all. She was the one the girl came back to at the end of the night, wasn’t she? And plus, it wasn’t like Miyabi didn’t have secrets of her own…
I think from this, Saki only shows what she wants Miyabi to see but makes it seem like she's easy to read making Miyabi wanna know more..
So in a way Saki is..devious, clever, and a complete mystery..

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Saki scooted closer to her, to where she could feel the warmth emanating from her slim frame. “Since who knows when we’ll be able to be together like this again…” she began seductively as well as with a slight tinge of nervousness. She looked down at where she began picking at a button on Miyabi’s shirt. Despite the restrained fidgeting, confidence is what the girl exuded, and that caught Miyabi off-guard more than anything in its anomaly. “And… since you now know I love you…”
...What?... she really does love her? really?...hnn..i have doubts ;;



-ahem-
I stand by my theories about Saki's actions..
She's absolutely confused..And is reassuring herself that she does love Miyabi when in all honesty she doesn't know what she feels
After being Kissed by Momoko and kissing Momoko back, its hard to say that Saki didn't have feelings back there...
And Earlier with Momoko's message about how soon Miyabi hooked up with Captain right after Captain broke up with jun..
Its hard not to see Miyabi as no more than a rebound to Captain...And In it all, I'm sure it will be problem thats gonna be dealt with later..

With Risako Miyabi too in my opinion confused..
She did kiss Risako but held no feelings that she knows of but Risako was enamored by it
Risako obviously still likes possibly love Miyabi but with recent behaviors of Miyabi acting out against Risako
It makes her feel hurt emotionally to find someone she likes treating her so harshly.. Ex-turning her into a mouse, using her blood, lying to her..
And she's not so sure what to do so much..

But after that elevator scene Miyabi holds some sort of feelings for Risako, it may be dormant or it could already be there just not known to Miyabi herself just yet..

Momoko's feeling is out there in the open between her and Miyabi. Miyabi knows Momoko is in love with Saki and that triangle love is gonna be a pain..

I honestly don't thing Saki/Miyabi will work out well...but that could just be the raving Risako/Miyabi fangirl speaking..

I can only wonder what wonderful drama will happen in future long chapters..
I Really, really, really hope this story gets updated frequently.
I'm dying to know whats to happen
And Waiting for chapters that will push those buttons and pull those heart strings..

Don't disappoint me Rokun~
:heart: this story very much Mr. I would like a very nice drama, tragic, story to happen with a very good happy ending of course  :mon cigar:

I really wonder who will eventually end up being together..Because I'm sure not all the relationships will stay the way they are..

Phew..That was one long comment and it took a long time!
My reasons why I don't do these long comments, I get carried away and I sit and ponder on my theories and what ifs...
I wonder if this is how JFC feels like when he comments lol
Anyway...

UPDATE ROKUN, UPDATE!!!!!
 :mon baby:

P.S. sorry for the really bad grammar and stuff o(=A=)o
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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 28: Enchanted]
« Reply #175 on: December 27, 2007, 05:27:02 AM »
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“Oh, and about your ways of finding things out… I may not know much about this magic of yours, but I don’t know if I’d blindly trust it. Surely it can’t always be perfect. Captain still isn’t too far removed from a horrible relationship, and so I wonder if she’s quite ready for another one that’s obviously as deep as the one you two share. Be sure to give her my best regards, by the way.” Then, with a slight wave and a smile, she passed out and into the hall.
Finally it was mentioned! As the Miya/Saki thing progressed, Saki's previous relationship was in the back of my head. I wondered if it was conveniently forgotten, or just saved for later...  :yep:

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 28: Enchanted]
« Reply #176 on: December 27, 2007, 07:21:58 AM »
Does Captain truly like Miya? Or does she have feelings for Momo too? It's weird that she would kiss Momo back if not.

And Momo's acting really strange as well. It's obvious she wants Captain yet she's warning Miya to be careful about keeping their relationship secret. Argh, and Risako....what's she up to?

I need to know!! :P I'm keeping my feelings crossed that you'll update frequently :)

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 28: Enchanted]
« Reply #177 on: December 27, 2007, 02:48:57 PM »
Wow, that was a fast update, and with that a long chapter  :w00t:

I'm dying for Miyabi to talk with Risako again.  Yeah she probably went to her boyfriend's house, but I feel like there's more to her story...

I really do think Captain has feelings only for Miya, but all those "I love you"s from Captain are from (this is what I think) the guilt
she's feeling from kissing Momo. I mean really, the Captain/Miya relationship is really strong. How the heck is Momo gonna break up/steal Captain away? unless she....kills Miya (too extreme) or gets her into some trap and blackmails her.

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 28: Enchanted]
« Reply #178 on: December 28, 2007, 06:18:03 AM »
Wow, Saki was really confusing in this chapter. Either she's stuck on Momoko and trying to forget, or kissing Momoko made it easier to be with Miyabi. Then again, I don't think her intentions were exactly pure with Miyabi either. Then again again, what they did wasn't a pure act anyway, but whatever. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, and happy holidays!

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Re: Berry Beautiful [Chapter 28: Enchanted]
« Reply #179 on: December 30, 2007, 11:36:27 AM »
:bingo:
Now that I've digested this chapter, I must say that the whole Miya/saki thing seems kinda off. Well, many things seem off, but I won't comment on them just now... 

Someone mentioned that Miya could be Saki's rebound, but I think it goes further than that. A lot has happened since this started, but I'm suddenly thinking so much of the previous chapters, especially about Saki's relationship with Jun. She was very much in love with him, if I remember correctly. But still she claimed she was too young for what he wanted... Yes, she's young, but Miya is younger. 

So, why Miya and not Jun? *shrugs* Maybe because Miya/Saki is cuter, lol. But seriously, there's something intriguing about it. Everything seems so rushed, as if she (Saki) was desperately trying to protect herself from something or someone. Yet I don't think she's even aware of that, hence her confusing behaviour.
:err:

IMO, she probably wasn't in love with Jun. Also, I wouldn't be so sure about her love for Miya. But that doesn't mean she's actually in love with Momo. Actually, I think she doesn't want to take any risk (even if her boldness indicates the opposite). Miya's a safe bet. At least, she's safer than Jun... Whether she cares for her or not comes second, as long as she's in total control of the relationship. It's like she can't be at ease unless she's the one making the decisions. 
:sweat:

Miya, she can't let Risako's rejection go just yet. No matter how happy she seems to be with Saki, the feeling of inadequacy is still there. So, she targets Risako to get rid of it, by getting back at her. It's almost as if she believed she has to be bad, because she wasn't good enough. Therefore, she's Risako's personal and unrepentant bully. 

Saki makes her feel wanted and loved, unlike Risako, who pushed her away without a proper reason (even if it surfaced later). Saki's given her the attention she needs, and she's willing to do whatever it takes to keep the girl by her side. The problem is that she doesn't stop to consider the consequences of her blind trust, and she just goes with the flow. 
:depressed:

However, she's having a hard time dealing with the aforementioned consequences. She brought Momo back because of Saki, yet she doesn't like it when Momo clings onto her. She's been pushing Risako away, but doesn't like it when the younger girl ignores her. Also, she cannot take criticism and prying from the other girls, even if she's been constantly showing off around them. She cannot make her mind. Her need for reassurance will only cause her more pain, but she's overlooking it.   
:badluck:

And then there's Momoko, who seems to be up to some strife. The others don't really notice it, but she's been rather cunning since she came back. Makes sense, though. If being nice and supportive took her nowhere in the past, then she must ditch her amicable ways to succeed. And this time, she's seizing every chance she gets. Berryz beware, Momo's on the prowl! 
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