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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #180 on: August 28, 2007, 05:50:11 PM »
thanks for the music..I love that song!

@Yuuyami: It's taken me a while to read the story..hopefully I can comment on it soon. BTW, wish I could be a good writer like yourself

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #181 on: August 28, 2007, 06:06:25 PM »
;______; Duel with an Angel (mezame) is my favourite track in this OST, because I'm a Kajiura-sensei fan~ It used to be my lullaby ._.


uhmmm...
comments.. I laughed hard for most parts?
>_>

Okok, sorry.. I forgot. Here, proper comments.

I'd like Kei to be my driving instructor and squirrels to replace cones.  8)

I wonder who Maki's thinking of when Miki kissed her. Someone else other than the man who shamed her? Stubbornness and strong will reminds me of someone...(If some pairings remains the same as the first OCG) hm, but I dunno. Something tells me that it's not the enemy's ancestor because I don't think you'll think of someone you hate while kissing.. o_O;;

Celestial Project?? Why did I not pay attention while watching Ayashi no Ceres... I have not a clue what's happening so I'm not even gonna try coming up with guesses. I'll just wait for the next chapter patiently. Great work though, I really like how you use elements from the anime but it still has a sense of originality. Hell, imagine fan-made anime off the OCG series o.o

Okay... I'll shut up now. Hope to see new characters appearing anyway.

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #182 on: August 30, 2007, 09:49:27 PM »
;______; Duel with an Angel (mezame) is my favourite track in this OST, because I'm a Kajiura-sensei fan~ It used to be my lullaby ._.

ahá! 0.0
Nice call inDeceit!
I knew i had already listen to these songs before! xD
he also made .hack//sign songs!
hum... so that's where maki's theme is from? nice song choices!

[it took me a while to remember the name, but I think is "fake wings"  ....damn! My memory is just hopeless... ¬¬' ]
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #183 on: August 31, 2007, 03:49:34 AM »
HB, dearie, Kajiura-sama is a girl xD She was the back-up vocalist and the keyboardist for See-saw as well (for dot hack) remember? xD

Anywho, there's going to be a slight delay in writing, since I'm going to be busy with family matters and school starts next week too xD;

I'm still considering whether I should convert into drawing a manga of the story, it's just a matter of my commitment xD The reason why I think it should be a manga is 'cause when I write it, I think of it as a manga more than a fictional story, so that's why my writing style is often choppy because I like to think of it like manga xD...

Ten bucks says that I might still write it as a story though, since my lethargy surpasses a lot of things xD;
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #184 on: September 01, 2007, 01:26:23 AM »
HB, dearie, Kajiura-sama is a girl xD She was the back-up vocalist and the keyboardist for See-saw as well (for dot hack) remember? xD

Ya.... Thanks Yuu-sama! had no idea at all that she was a girl...! =^_^=

[hey... don't worry about delays..... we'll be here.... waiting.... in the dark.... alone... crying.... under the table.... just waiting.... and waiting... until yuu-sama come's back to save us.... ._. ]
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #185 on: September 02, 2007, 02:38:26 PM »
First I feel that Maki is holding something back. She never mentioned the sparring partner. I think that she was a true love for her, which is why when she was first fighting Hitomi she reverted back. It wasn't just because she lost the fight, she was also reminded of her love and she couldn't keep her form.

Second, if she wants to kill everyone in the Shibata-Maki bloodline, that would include Rika and Yuko. I personally don't like that.

Sorry I haven't been commenting any better, but I've been pretty distracted lately. :(

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #186 on: September 02, 2007, 04:48:01 PM »
Actually, she just wants to kill the Shibatas, not anyone else, really xD

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #187 on: September 13, 2007, 09:50:53 AM »
coo fanfic just a newbie but i'm really into this story   :otomerika:
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #188 on: September 23, 2007, 10:59:55 PM »
Sorry for the wait!

I felt lazy xD;

-puts on hardhat- >_> <_<.....

Anywho, here's another fun filled chapter for you all~!

Look forward to it :B

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 11 + OST added
« Reply #189 on: September 23, 2007, 11:10:12 PM »
Teehee <3










Chapter 12: Getting Dinner with the Fujimoto Family

Let’s review…


“Alright… I have to do this now or it will drive me crazy…” A certain person said, focusing on the chat box on her computer monitor…

MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “Ri-chan? I’m sorry for disappearing on you yesterday! ;_;”
XxSuperSockoxX: “………………………………….”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “I’m serious! ;_____;”
XxSuperSockoxX: “So what’s your excuse this time?”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “It’s not an excuse D<!”
XxSuperSockoxX: “Yes it is! D<”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “No it ain’t! D<”
XxSuperSockoxX: “I bet you tomorrow’s lunch that it is! D<”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “And I’ll bet you two lunches that it isn’t! D<”
XxSuperSockoxX: “I’ll bet you a week’s worth of lunches! D<”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “O___O! Don’t make me angry!”
XxSuperSockoxX: “LOL! I can just picture you… Doing some pose shouting “HENSHIN” and then going “MIYABI SUPER DUPER CALIFRAGI- EBIRU BEEEAAAAM!” or something like that!”

Miyabi took the moment to reel over laughing at Risako’s imagination. After five minutes of trying to compose herself, she typed again.

MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “ROFL!!!!!!!!”

Miyabi sank back in her chair, giving a sigh of relief after endangering herself with lack of oxygen from laughing so much. Then she straightened up again.

“Alright…” the young teen cracked her knuckles, “I will NOT be kidnapped today… DEFINITELY not kidnapped today… I’ll make sure of it…!”

Now that she was in the vicinity of her room, no one was safe, really. There was one particular reason why her room was incredibly desolate. There was a reason why the bed was against the corner with the door at the foot of it. There was a reason why the computer was at a corner. There was a reason why the low table was pushed more toward the wall instead of the middle of the room. All of those reasons were the same as the reason why no one could be safe on Miyabi’s turf.

She was hiding guns underneath the wooden panel floor.

That was rather inaccurate to say, really. There are certain floor panels which housed certain guns. There was a floor panel dedicated to gun attachments such as scopes and sound suppressors. There was a floor panel dedicated to her various types of ammunition. Of course, her guns were not put together underneath the floor panels. For an extra precaution, all of the guns she owned were in pieces, and she was pretty much the only person in the family who could put them together.

XxSuperSockoxX: “Oh well. Silly Miya…I’ll believe you again. But if it happens again, I won’t forgive you as easily~!”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “Thank goodness. I was worried that my powers as a wishing star didn’t work.”
XxSuperSockoxX: “E-eh?”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “You’re supposed to believe in me, dear.”
XxSuperSockoxX: “M-miyabi? What’s gotten into you?”

Miyabi let a giggle come to her mouth, amused with Risako’s confusion. She knew that the younger was flustered and blushing on her end of the conversation.

MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “You are a very special person, you know that?”
XxSuperSockoxX: “D-don’t be s-so… If you talk like that, it makes me believe you…”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “Heh, I do have my reasons after all…”
XxSuperSockoxX: “What are those reasons?”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: I love

Miyabi blinked. Her computer was blank. She tried turning the computer on again, but it didn’t turn on… She was in the middle of typing her confession too, damn it!

“THE POWER’S OUT!” boomed a familiar lioness roar from the lower floor.

Miyabi bashed her head on her keyboard repeatedly.

Miyabi can’t get her girl.

“Shiiiiit. No power? Oh well, I’m good with primitive over-the-fire cooking too…” Miki stroked her imaginary beard.

“Over the fire? Do we have any charcoal?” Rika piped up.

“Nope. We’re going to have to burn something else…” Miki leaned against the cooking counter, resting heavily on her back.

“Hmm…” Rika tapped her fingers in a light staccato, “we could burn something useless…”

“Like?”

“Heheheheheh…” Rika let out a dark giggle, “magazines burn well you know… Especially the erotic kind…”

“You will NOT touch those!” Miki let out a defiant voice.

“Oh, so you DO have that sort of thing…” Rika smirked.

“Oh shit…” Miki’s eyes widened, jumping in front of Rika, “No I don’t!”

“Miki has porn~! Miki has porn~!” Rika sang in a singsong voice, pointing and laughing at the other.

“Shut up~!” the groping demon retorted, punching Rika lightly in the shoulder.

“I order you to sit~!” Rika said in a singsong voice, letting the corners of her mouth grin widely.

“Wha—D’OH!” Miki became twitchy all of a sudden, flipping herself over on her back as if she was a dog trying to play dead. “I…shi…ka…wa…!” Miki growled between shocks, attempting to sit up to complete the command.

“This is fun~!” Rika continued in her singsong voice.

Miki is constantly abused…

The lioness of the mansion let out a frustrated sigh. Yuko leaned against the doorway in the small shed crossing her arms, watching the maid with the best experience with technology hooking up the wires of the traditional home to no avail. If it had anything to do with technology, the dance teacher did not belong. She even hated using phones, no matter what the popular trends were. She prefers her life old school and will use items that are old school.

“Bah, the kids these days do shit that I’m too old for…” the lioness uncrossed her arms and walked out of the tiny shed in the corner of the garden. Thank goodness she was wearing a heavier navy blue kimono this time; the cold was making her face flush slightly. It was also a good thing that she was wearing a … leopard print scarf?

“Yuko-sama… Don’tcha think that the scarf’s a little…?” Kei gulped, hoping that her master would not be angry with her difference of opinion.

“What’s wrong with leopard print, eh? At least it’s fake!” Yuko waved her hand dismissively.

“So when will the power be back?” Kei asked, curly hair bouncing as she hopped after the lady of the mansion.

“I don’t know, I’m thinking of hiring Murata or something…” Yuko walked over the bridge, watching the undisturbed water of the small pond below.

“She likes to charge a lot of yen though…” Kei pressed her index fingers together, lowering her head.

“I don’t blame her, she’s been a great technician for our missions… I wonder how much she’s going to charge for a simple power-out…” Yuko stroked her imaginary beard, “Bah, we can just wait it out…” the lioness continued along the bridge, heading towards the kitchen.

She opened the sliding door by motioning her hand and utilizing her telekinesis. Ignoring the twitching slightly tan (Yuko wondered how Miki became so tan during the cold season) cook on the floor and the giggling charming woman, she headed straight for the refrigerator. Gripping the handlebar lightly, Yuko swung the fridge open, scanning the treasuries within.

But her most precious…

“This can’t be right…” the woman’s eyes opened widely. Everyone in the kitchen looked at the gaping woman.

She was almost petrified at the thought.

She became immobilized by her fear.

It can’t be…

She backed away steadily, her eyes glittering with her tears of sorrow.

This isn’t supposed to happen…

Her trembling hands wanted to scratch her cheeks, attempting to suppress an outburst.

“Yuko-sama…” Kei reached out a hand to her, but refrained from touching her.

The broken lioness simply turned around, her eyes stricken with grief. She bolted past the housekeeper and collapsed onto the garden outside, removing herself from the area which caused her so much pain.

“Why…?” was all she could utter.

A word that was almost inaudible.

A word that was dangerously close to breaking.

Yuko raised her trembling hands onto her head, a few tears escaped her eyes which came close to being classified as insanity.

“WHY IS ALL THE BEER GONE?!”

Yuko is dissatisfied…

“Go get me some beeeeer~!” the lioness complained, sitting on the wooden floor with her feet dangling off the edges onto the stone platform while watching Miki and Rika attempted to start up a fire in the middle of the garden with a gas burner.

“The booze can wait, Nee-san,” Miki grew frustrated, watching the incredibly low fire oozing out of the simple machine.

“Don’t cook anything too extravagant, a simple soup or even fried fish would do,” Rika crossed her arms, staring into the harmless small fire.

“Screw this, we should just eat out at a cheap place or something…” Miki sat down and pouted.

“Cheap place, hm…” Yuko stroked her imaginary beard. “Come to think of it, it IS the second month of the year…”

“Hmm?” Miki and Rika turned their heads to face the oldest.

“Alright, I have a task for you two,” Yuko sat up, brushing her behind as she did.

“What, we’re not going to snatch anything, are we?” the groping demon raised a brow.

“Nah, nothing like that. I just want you to visit two friends of mine is all. Actually, more like wait for them,” Yuko raised a finger into the air, “We don’t have to exchange much money, but it’s a good bargain, considering their food’s great.”

“Greater than my food?” Miki raised a skeptical brow.

“Not really, but it’s still edible and good to eat asides from the exotic foods you tend to bring in.”

“Well excuse me!” Miki turned her head, letting out a snort.

“So who are these friends of your’s?” Rika inquired, turning off the gas burner.

“Hmm… I guess you can describe them as… not of this world…” a grin turned up on the lioness’s jaws. “Never the less, I’ll give them a call and all you have to do is wait in front of the outer gates. They’ve done favors for me before, and no doubt that they are willing to do it again.”

“Who is ‘they’ then? Some people managing a portable restaurant?” Miki stood up, stretching her limbs a bit.

“I guess that’s pretty similar to what they do,” Yuko chuckled, “nevertheless, they seem like they will get along with you two. Since they are closer in age.”

“Are they hot?” the demon smirked, evidently thinking about what things to do when she meets them.

“Actually, they’re both really adorable,” Yuko beamed, “though whenever I think of them, I can’t help but feel like a pedophile…” she went shifty eyed, staring in a different direction.

“So when do we wait out the gates?” Rika asked, ignoring Yuko’s incoherent utterings.

“Hmm, if I call them now, they’ll come in about ten minutes. So you two should head out and wait now.”

“Alright,” the two women said.

Hmm… Who could those people be?

“I’m so sorry!” Miyabi apologized into her cellphone, “the power went out!”

The person on the other line remained silent.

“I’m serious! You know I’d be chatting with you on the computer if there wasn’t one!”

Utter silence.

“Risakoooooo~!” Miyabi let out a whining voice accentuating the last syllable.

“Alright, I’ll believe you this time,” the voice on the other line sighed.

“Thank you!” The sniper let out a sigh of relief.

“I don’t know how long I can keep up with this though… You always seem to come up with excuses…”

“Indeed, I wonder why you keep having faith in me…” Miyabi added a light playful tone to her voice.

“J-Jee… I w-wonder why too…”

“Are you blushing? Your voice is stammering,” The older teen smirked, happy with her effect on her beloved.

Now that she has Risako wrapped tightly with her fingers, this confession DEFINITELY has to succeed… Sure, it was a little awkward confessing on the phone, but everytime she tried to confess elsewhere, they have always been foiled. This phone HAS to be her saving grace…

“N-No I’m not!” the younger retorted. “Why do you like picking on me so much, huh? Are you bullying me?”

“It’s not really bullying…” Miyabi plopped onto her bed, staring at the ceiling of her room with a content smile. “I’d call it affection…”

“Miyabi…-san…?”

Now…

“I—”

Click.

“What?!” Miyabi reacted after hearing that noise. She looked at her cellphone to find that…

…It had died out on her.

“I swear! Fate hates me~!” Miyabi whined in frustration as she outstretched her limbs and rolled around on her bed to let off some steam.

Miyabi still can’t get her girl…

Rika sneezed, clinging to herself tighter as she stood in the cold with the person she wanted to be with the least out of the others. Though, she did not have that much of a reason to fear the demon anymore; the bands that Miki wore had given her a freedom that did not involve excessive groping or kiss. Obviously, she felt relieved that she can rest easily without that tanned woman trying to jump into her pants every second.

“Oh by the way, not sure if you noticed, but I’m wearing your pants since all of my clothes are being washed,” Miki looked at the other.

…Though she can’t exactly rest too easily if Miki could get into her pants… Literally…

“Y’know… If you’re seriously that cold… We could always share warmth…” a mischievous grin appeared on the devil’s lips.

“Let’s not…” Rika chided as she scooted away from Miki a bit.

“Come now, it can’t be that bad,” Miki watched the other in amusement.

“Of course it is…”

“Well, I’m stuck with you whether you like it or not, all thanks to these,” Miki motioned to her collar by tugging her jacket a little lower.

Is that a hickey…? Rika raised a brow, staring at the aforementioned object at the base of Miki’s neck.

“Staring at this?” Miki pointed to her hickey, “I cornered this hot guy down the street and you can guess what happened next.”

“So what are you, a player?” Rika rolled her eyes, “Do you just offer yourself to anyone hot that you meet?”

“It’s not so much as me offering myself to them, it’s usually them who offer themselves to me,” another grin appeared on the demon’s face.

“You won’t find me doing that with you any time,” Rika let out a sigh, tugging on her scarf tighter so none of the cold could get into her skin.

“Oh? Why don’t you try me for once?” the other stood in front of Rika.

“Can you even get to me?” Rika raised a skeptical brow, crossing her arms.

“Maybe I can…” the demon walked closer, causing Rika to walk backwards into the wall of the outer gate. “But what sort of things turn you on, hmm?” both hands of the demon were placed near Rika’s shoulders, trapping her.

“I don’t know. But the first thing would have to be that I prefer people taller than me,” Rika tilted her head with a bored look. “So that just eliminated all chances of you being able to seduce me,” a cat-like smile came on the cursed woman’s lips. “Aaaaand I order you to step away from me by four paces~!” the command was said in a singsong voice.

“Oh what the hell,” Miki grumbled, flinching as she stepped backwards to avoid being electrocuted like what happened earlier.

Rika couldn’t help but give a laugh at the other. Although Miki has her differences that Rika disliked, that still didn’t take away the fact that the demon can be amusingly cute at times. Though, she would never admit that aloud.

Which brought Rika to an interesting thought… If she wasn’t so infatuated with Hitomi, then maybe…

Maybe…? Rika caught herself thinking. There isn’t supposed to be a ‘maybe.’ She and I are too different…Besides, she’s not even commited to relationships… All she does is have her fun with the men and women…There’s no way that she’d go for me anyway…

Or is there?


Rika became afraid.

Despite Miki’s ‘player’ status, Rika knew, in a sense, that the devil was still reliable like her sister had said. Beneath that outer layer, she knew that Miki had a sense of justice and won’t hesitate to save her, as she heard from Yuko from the time she was possessed by that maiden. She wouldn’t say that Miki was noble though. This certain Fujimoto was more of an… Anti-hero.

Rika blinked in her thoughts.

Why was there a rather huge shadow in front of them?

“The hell’s that?”

Evidently, Miki noticed the same.

“WATCH OUT BELOOOOW~!”

CRASH!

Miki was face-flat on the tar road with a foreign object on her back. Or rather, there was a youthful girl straddling her back.

“I told you sooooo~!” the girl bent over, watching Miki groan in pain.

Where the shadow once resided… Was a food cart?

Rika blinked multiple times.

There was a wooden food cart the size of a car in front of them.

“Get off me…” Miki grumbled, trying to lift herself up despite the girl on her back.

“Sorry!” the girl apologized before standing up.

Rika surveyed the girl quickly. She was in a simple informal kimono, well, it was more like a yukata because of the short sleeves. Also, the yukata was cut just above her knees. The girl was taller than Rika, but had a child-like face which made Rika believe that the girl was possible in her early teens. The girl’s hair was black and was tied up in a very loose bun at the top of her head—actually, it didn’t resemble a bun in particular, it just resembled a wild bush at the top of her head. The one thing that stuck out to Rika?

The girl had fox ears.

And bushy fox tail.

“We’re sorry about that!” a voice came from inside the traditional food cart, “She loves to do that! I keep telling her that it’s impolite but she does it for the fun of it!”

Again, the person from the food cart was a fox-eared girl. Though, she looked considerably older than the one who had landed on Miki. She was wearing the same sort of outfit as the younger, only it had a heart-shaped apron over her yukata. Also, her sleeves were brought up and tied to her shoulders, exposing her pale arms. In fact, Rika felt a little envious towards the girl’s face…

“You are so cute!” Rika squealed, frolicking towards the food cart.

“Thank you! But complimenting me has a price! That’ll be 1,000,000 yen please!” the older fox girl stuck her hand out, expecting money to be placed on it.

“I take that back,” Rika’s eyes widened.

“Eh?! Whhhyyyy?” the older fox girl pouted.

“Please, anyone would take that back if they heard the price,” Miki stood up, brushing the dirt from her clothes.

“It’s not that…”

“Eh?” Miki looked at the cursed woman in bemusement.

“Upon closer inspection, I realize that I am the cuter one.”

Miki and the younger fox girl nearly fell over when Rika said that.

“Oh? I’d like a rival,” the older fox girl propped her elbows on the cart and rested her chin on her hands, “it makes life all the funner~! But I’m the number one cutest, don’t you forget!”

“I will forget, because I myself am the number one cutest and won’t remember anyone else!” Rika giggled at the conversation itself, causing the other fox girl to giggle.

“Oh gahh… Two Ishikawas…” Miki slapped her hand to her forehead. “As if one isn’t enough…!”

“Anywho… Who are you two…?” Rika backed up, again surveying the food cart and the girls who happened to fall out of the sky.

“We’re the Rainbow Pink food cart!” the younger and the older fox girl stood together in a cutesy pose.

“I’m Koharu!” said the younger one.

“I’m Sayumi, the number one cutest fox spirit!” said the older one.

“What the hell are you doing here? And why the hell is your ENTIRE cart painted pink?!” Miki waved an accusing finger at the aforementioned object.

“We’re the Rainbow Pink cart! So we have a rainbow pink cart!” Koharu piped up, raising her finger into the air. “We were called here by a Yuko-san!”

“I asked Nee-san for food, not a bunch of jailbait~!” Miki dropped to her knees and pretended to slam the floor repeatedly for emphasis.

“Of course we have food!” Sayumi waved her hand dismissively, “Our specialty is oden!”

“WHY IS THE ODEN PINK TOO?!”

“Actually, it’s cute, AND it tastes good!” Rika looked down at Miki, already helping herself to a cup of oden, chewing on a pink piece of tofu while Sayumi was placing the yen in an oddly modern cash register as opposed to the primitive look of the cart.

“No! You’ll become more of a narcissist than what you are now!” A frantic expression came up on Miki’s face, not wanting Rika to subject her to more cutesy rants than usual.

“Nah, we don’t secretly dose our products with drugs,” Sayumi waved her hand dismissively, “all it takes is one look at me and that’s when the narcissism kicks in! Just like what happened to Maki-sama!” the fox girl pointed at Rika.

“Eh?!” Rika’s eyes widened.

“What?!” Miki’s eyes also became alarmed.

“Everyone in the spirit twilight knows who Maki-sama is! She’s the one who watches over the Twilit Sea!” Koharu was sitting Indian-style, only she was levitating and was upside down.

“Though, right now, you’re not Maki-sama, right?” Sayumi asked.

“No, I’m Ishikawa Rika at the moment…” the woman said slowly.

So the person inside of me… Her name is Maki? She DID tell me that she was in charge of that beach place that time…

“It’s an honor to meet you!” both of the fox spirits bowed their heads towards Rika.

“Uh…” Rika became speechless, unsure of what to say now.

“Ah!” Miki suddenly perked up.

“Hmm?” Sayumi tilted her head in a cute and clueless expression.

“Say, you two travel around a lot, right?”

Koharu nodded her head, despite being upside down.

“Tell me, do you have any idea where the celestial robes are?”

“Ohhhh, you want to help Maki-sama find her robes?” Koharu flipped over so that she was no longer upside down.

“You know about that?” Rika raised a brow at the young fox spirit.

“It’s nothing new really,” Sayumi propped herself on her elbows again, “A lot of maidens lost their hagoromo in the past too, but it’s just Maki-sama who is intent on finding them…”

“Seriously, there are more maidens?” Miki became intrigued now.

“Of course! There’s millions right now,” Koharu nodded her head.

“Yuko-san DID say that the chance of having a maiden’s blood in you is one out of five…” Rika pondered.

“And the ratio for actually being a direct descendant and transforming is one out of one hundred, eh?” Miki pondered as well.

“Hmm… Rumors of a hagaromo…” Sayumi rolled her eyes upwards, attempting to think.

“I guess you can go for rumors of suspicious maiden activity too… Maybe we could ask them about it too…” Rika said as she bit onto another pink tofu piece of her oden.

“Didn’t we see something suspicious a few jobs ago?” Koharu asked Sayumi.

“Yeah… Oh!” a light bulb flicked on in the cute fox girl’s mind, “try checking out Tochigi prefecture, around the Kegon Falls area! I hear some weird people in black gathering the 7 descendants there!”

“Yeah! The local legend there states that the tennyo over there gave birth to seven children! Maybe you can find out something from them~!”

“Thank you for the help!” Rika bowed her head to the two.

“Anything to help Maki-sama!” both of the foxes piped up.

“So… What else do you know about Maki-san?” Rika asked, curious of the spirit within her.

“She’s really cool! But she’s kinda scary because she can be so serious…” Koharu pressed her index fingers together almost shyly, probably because she was afraid that she was being too blunt towards the magnificent person in front of her.

“Also the fact that her element magic of the flesh is scary too…” Sayumi added.

“So a maiden has a special element that she uses?” Rika wanted to know more.

“Yeah… The tennyo from Tochigi has the water element, just to let you know if you two decide to go there,” Koharu levitated in a circle, suddenly retrieving ADD and chasing her own tail.

“Thanks for the information!” Miki and Rika bowed to the two.

“Now for business…” Miki pulled out her wallet, “we need enough oden to feed a hungry family and a LOT of beer…”

Frankly, they should worry how Yuko came to know them in the first place…

Miyabi groaned as she walked down the stairs, stricken with frustration at the day’s events. How many times does this make it? The teen wondered how far fate would go to ensure that Miyabi’s confessions were never successful. Why does fate have to pick on her anyway?

Fate is a big meanie!

Miyabi wanted to find it and shoot the crap out of it!

The sniper isn’t supposed to have bullies! She’d shoot them!

Knowing that shooting fate was impossible, she simply let out a frustrated sigh as she entered the dining room, finding her obligatory cushion on the floor before sitting formally on it.

“Itadakimasu~” Miyabi muttered, before opening her eyes.

Why is all the food pink?

Even the broth was pink!

“Um… Nee-san?” Miyabi looked over to Miki.

“Just eat it,” came a fast reply with a tone of embarrassment to it.

“But why is it pi—”

“Shut up and eat it.”

How will the journey to Tochigi Prefecture fare?












Poor Miki xD The more she sticks with Rika, the more dignity she loses  :lol:

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« Reply #190 on: September 24, 2007, 05:56:34 AM »
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MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “Ri-chan? I’m sorry for disappearing on you yesterday! ;_;”

...

XxSuperSockoxX: “So what’s your excuse this time?”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “It’s not an excuse D<!”

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MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “O___O! Don’t make me angry!”
XxSuperSockoxX: “LOL! I can just picture you… Doing some pose shouting “HENSHIN” and then going “MIYABI SUPER DUPER CALIFRAGI- EBIRU BEEEAAAAM!” or something like that!”

Miyabi took the moment to reel over laughing at Risako’s imagination. After five minutes of trying to compose herself, she typed again.

MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “ROFL!!!!!!!!”
:on lol:
Damn these girls come up with the weirdest names for themselves. XD



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“Alright…” the young teen cracked her knuckles, “I will NOT be kidnapped today… DEFINITELY not kidnapped today… I’ll make sure of it…!”
Wouldn't surprise me in the least, but I think she just jinxed herself. :P



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Now that she was in the vicinity of her room, no one was safe, really.

...

She was hiding guns underneath the wooden panel floor.
Well, she has to keep them SOMEWHERE, after all. Their home is also used as a school, so it's not like she can have an actual "weapons room" that can be discovered by any one of the students.



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XxSuperSockoxX: “Oh well. Silly Miya…I’ll believe you again. But if it happens again, I won’t forgive you as easily~!”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “Thank goodness. I was worried that my powers as a wishing star didn’t work.”
Awwwwwwwwwww... :oops:




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MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “You are a very special person, you know that?”
XxSuperSockoxX: “D-don’t be s-so… If you talk like that, it makes me believe you…”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! :wriggly:



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MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: “Heh, I do have my reasons after all…”
XxSuperSockoxX: “What are those reasons?”
MiYaXoFxDaxNiTe: I love

Miyabi blinked. Her computer was blank. She tried turning the computer on again, but it didn’t turn on… She was in the middle of typing her confession too, damn it!

“THE POWER’S OUT!” boomed a familiar lioness roar from the lower floor
Told you Miyabi jinxed herself.

Socko = :dunno: @ Miyabi's disappearance

Miyabi =  :banghead: :temper:




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“Shiiiiit. No power? Oh well, I’m good with primitive over-the-fire cooking too…” Miki stroked her imaginary beard.
Hope Yuko has fire insurance.  :roll:



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Do we have any charcoal?” Rika piped up.

“Nope. We’re going to have to burn something else…” Miki leaned against the cooking counter, resting heavily on her back.

...

“Heheheheheh…” Rika let out a dark giggle, “magazines burn well you know… Especially the erotic kind…”

“You will NOT touch those!” Miki let out a defiant voice.
Miki has erotic magazines? :O

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.   O0




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“Oh, so you DO have that sort of thing…” Rika smirked.

“Oh shit…” Miki’s eyes widened, jumping in front of Rika, “No I don’t!”

“Miki has porn~! Miki has porn~!” Rika sang in a singsong voice, pointing and laughing at the other.
:wahaha:




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“I order you to sit~!” Rika said in a singsong voice, letting the corners of her mouth grin widely.

“Wha—D’OH!” Miki became twitchy all of a sudden, flipping herself over on her back as if she was a dog trying to play dead. “I…shi…ka…wa…!” Miki growled between shocks, attempting to sit up to complete the command.

“This is fun~!” Rika continued in her singsong voice.
Damn, Rika's gonna have FUN with this.  :kekeke:




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“So when will the power be back?” Kei asked, curly hair bouncing as she hopped after the lady of the mansion.

“I don’t know, I’m thinking of hiring Murata or something…” Yuko walked over the bridge, watching the undisturbed water of the small pond below.

“She likes to charge a lot of yen though…” Kei pressed her index fingers together, lowering her head.
Well think about it. Are you willing to put up with the cold during the night for the possibility of saving a few bucks? There's also probably no guarantee that they'll be able to find someone as good to get the job done as quickly as they probably want it to be done.



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Gripping the handlebar lightly, Yuko swung the fridge open, scanning the treasuries within.

But her most precious…

“This can’t be right…” the woman’s eyes opened widely. Everyone in the kitchen looked at the gaping woman.
WAIT! Don't tell me...lemme guess.

...

Considering this is Yuko we're talking about...they're probably out of beer. :lol:




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Yuko raised her trembling hands onto her head, a few tears escaped her eyes which came close to being classified as insanity.

“WHY IS ALL THE BEER GONE?!”
Oh fuck yeah I'm good.  :hiakhiakhiak:




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Miki grew frustrated, watching the incredibly low fire oozing out of the simple machine.

...

“Screw this, we should just eat out at a cheap place or something…” Miki sat down and pouted.

“Cheap place, hm…” Yuko stroked her imaginary beard. “Come to think of it, it IS the second month of the year…”
Second month of the year...February. Anything special (other than Miki's birthday) happen in that month??? :?



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“So who are these friends of your’s?” Rika inquired, turning off the gas burner.

“Hmm… I guess you can describe them as… not of this world…” a grin turned up on the lioness’s jaws. “Never the less, I’ll give them a call and all you have to do is wait in front of the outer gates. They’ve done favors for me before, and no doubt that they are willing to do it again.”
Not of this world? What, they aliens or something? :-\



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“I’m so sorry!” Miyabi apologized into her cellphone, “the power went out!”

The person on the other line remained silent.

...

“Alright, I’ll believe you this time,” the voice on the other line sighed.
Poor Miyabi. All of her bad luck sure isn't leaving a positive impression with Socko. :(



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“Why do you like picking on me so much, huh? Are you bullying me?”

“It’s not really bullying…” Miyabi plopped onto her bed, staring at the ceiling of her room with a content smile. “I’d call it affection…”

“Miyabi…-san…?”

Now…

“I—”

Click.

“What?!” Miyabi reacted after hearing that noise. She looked at her cellphone to find that…

…It had died out on her.

“I swear! Fate hates me~!” Miyabi whined in frustration
Miyabi =  :frustrated:



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Rika sneezed, clinging to herself tighter as she stood in the cold with the person she wanted to be with the least out of the others.

...

“Y’know… If you’re seriously that cold… We could always share warmth…” a mischievous grin appeared on the devil’s lips.
Miki =  :twisted:

Rika =  :err:



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Rika couldn’t help but give a laugh at the other. Although Miki has her differences that Rika disliked, that still didn’t take away the fact that the demon can be amusingly cute at times. Though, she would never admit that aloud.

Which brought Rika to an interesting thought… If she wasn’t so infatuated with Hitomi, then maybe…
Maybe? MAYBE??? :o

Holy shit, Miki has a chance!!! It might be slim...but it's still a CHANCE!!! :w00t:



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Rika blinked in her thoughts.

Why was there a rather huge shadow in front of them?

“The hell’s that?”

Evidently, Miki noticed the same.

“WATCH OUT BELOOOOW~!”

CRASH!

Miki was face-flat on the tar road with a foreign object on her back.
I pictured this scene like it came out of an anime.  Right now Miki has one of those anger stars hovering above her head while Rika looks on, dumbfounded. :rofl:



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Rika blinked multiple times.

There was a wooden food cart the size of a car in front of them.
Wow, talk about prompt delivery. :P



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“Sorry!” the girl apologized before standing up.

Rika surveyed the girl quickly. She was in a simple informal kimono, well, it was more like a yukata because of the short sleeves. Also, the yukata was cut just above her knees. The girl was taller than Rika, but had a child-like face which made Rika believe that the girl was possible in her early teens. The girl’s hair was black and was tied up in a very loose bun at the top of her head—actually, it didn’t resemble a bun in particular, it just resembled a wild bush at the top of her head. The one thing that stuck out to Rika?

The girl had fox ears.

And bushy fox tail.
The mentioning of the ears and tail made me immediately think of the HM@ costumes. If this is holding to that, then the young "fox girl" should be Koharu?



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“We’re sorry about that!” a voice came from inside the traditional food cart, “She loves to do that! I keep telling her that it’s impolite but she does it for the fun of it!”

Again, the person from the food cart was a fox-eared girl. Though, she looked considerably older than the one who had landed on Miki. She was wearing the same sort of outfit as the younger, only it had a heart-shaped apron over her yukata. Also, her sleeves were brought up and tied to her shoulders, exposing her pale arms. In fact, Rika felt a little envious towards the girl’s face…
That's gotta be Sayu.  :heart:


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“You are so cute!” Rika squealed, frolicking towards the food cart.

“Thank you! But complimenting me has a price! That’ll be 1,000,000 yen please!” the older fox girl stuck her hand out, expecting money to be placed on it.

“I take that back,” Rika’s eyes widened.

“Eh?! Whhhyyyy?” the older fox girl pouted.
Reeeeeeeeeeeeeejected! XD XD XD



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“We’re the Rainbow Pink food cart!” the younger and the older fox girl stood together in a cutesy pose.

“I’m Koharu!” said the younger one.

“I’m Sayumi, the number one cutest fox spirit!” said the older one.
I WANNA SEE THEIR CUTESY POSE!  :inlove:



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Sayumi waved her hand dismissively, “Our specialty is oden!”

“WHY IS THE ODEN PINK TOO?!”
How the hell do you get Oden to be pink anyway?  :mon lol:



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“No! You’ll become more of a narcissist than what you are now!” A frantic expression came up on Miki’s face, not wanting Rika to subject her to more cutesy rants than usual.

“Nah, we don’t secretly dose our products with drugs,” Sayumi waved her hand dismissively, “all it takes is one look at me and that’s when the narcissism kicks in! Just like what happened to Maki-sama!” the fox girl pointed at Rika.
What the...Koharu and Sayu know who Maki is???  :shocked:



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“Ah!” Miki suddenly perked up.

...

“Tell me, do you have any idea where the celestial robes are?”

“Ohhhh, you want to help Maki-sama find her robes?”
Hey, nice thinking Miki. Koharu and Sayu have probably been around all of this time while Maki's been "away". They probably have heard SOMETHING about her robes somewhere.



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“A lot of maidens lost their hagoromo in the past too, but it’s just Maki-sama who is intent on finding them…”

“Seriously, there are more maidens?” Miki became intrigued now.

“Of course! There’s millions right now,” Koharu nodded her head.
That's definitely interesting, though how it fits into the story...not quite sure about that yet.



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“Didn’t we see something suspicious a few jobs ago?” Koharu asked Sayumi.

“Yeah… Oh!” a light bulb flicked on in the cute fox girl’s mind, “try checking out Tochigi prefecture, around the Kegon Falls area! I hear some weird people in black gathering the 7 descendants there!”

“Yeah! The local legend there states that the tennyo over there gave birth to seven children! Maybe you can find out something from them~!”
7 descendants? People in black?

Why am I suddenly feeling rather uneasy about this?  :scared:



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“So… What else do you know about Maki-san?” Rika asked, curious of the spirit within her.

“She’s really cool! But she’s kinda scary because she can be so serious…” Koharu pressed her index fingers together almost shyly, probably because she was afraid that she was being too blunt towards the magnificent person in front of her.

“Also the fact that her element magic of the flesh is scary too…” Sayumi added.

“So a maiden has a special element that she uses?” Rika wanted to know more.

“Yeah… The tennyo from Tochigi has the water element, just to let you know if you two decide to go there,”
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm...not quite sure if it's useful information right now, but at this point, any information about Maki is welcome.



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“Um… Nee-san?” Miyabi looked over to Miki.

“Just eat it,” came a fast reply with a tone of embarrassment to it.

“But why is it pi—”

“Shut up and eat it.”
* JFC giggles because the scene is funny and cute.



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How will the journey to Tochigi Prefecture fare?
ROAD TRIP!!! :rockon:

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 12 Added
« Reply #191 on: September 24, 2007, 06:28:03 AM »
Okie dokie, this is my first time commenting for this story (I read the first one, but I never commented there either XD) - It's really great so far! It's really unique and a lot different from any of the other fanfictions I've read. You're a great writer, too. :)

And poor Miyabi! She keeps trying to tell Risako how "she really feels", but something seems to happen at the wrong moment!  :lol:

This was my favorite part. I knew that it was beer immediately Yuko looked into the 'fridge. XD

...

“Why…?” was all she could utter.

A word that was almost inaudible.

A word that was dangerously close to breaking.

Yuko raised her trembling hands onto her head, a few tears escaped her eyes which came close to being classified as insanity.

“WHY IS ALL THE BEER GONE?!”

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« Reply #192 on: September 24, 2007, 08:48:49 AM »
I laughed a lot. The Fujimoto family is a laugh a minute. XD

And the pink oden. Oh the pink oden. XDDD I second JFC's question, how do you get oden to be pink?

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« Reply #193 on: September 24, 2007, 12:45:07 PM »
Yuu sama ur the best!!!! :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
i'd be waiting 4 d next chapters!!!!

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 12 Added
« Reply #194 on: September 24, 2007, 08:42:55 PM »
Oh... this was soooo fun and hilarious  :wahaha: Rika is gonna have so much fun of Miki, and that "maybe"  :mon misch: Miki you still have a chance
Yuko all teary because there wasn't beer was the best part...
ahh....I really enjoyed this chapter!!! I'll be waiting the next one :mon star:

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 12 Added
« Reply #195 on: September 25, 2007, 12:43:43 AM »
Well that was an entertaining chapter~

You almost fooled me with Yoko's over-reaction there. At first I was thinking, oh beer's gone huh. Then the more exaggerated she was with her reactions the more I 'worried', then...
“WHY IS ALL THE BEER GONE?!”
aha~ I knew it.

and Pink Oden? What did they do, add pink coloring or something?

Sorry for the short comment, very very sleepy right now. Though it's morning..
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 12 Added
« Reply #196 on: September 26, 2007, 01:12:22 AM »
Yay! New chap from the amazing Yuu-sama, the #3 narcissist xD

Yuko and the beer spaz. I read that and was like "Osnap, Yuko spaz. Osnap, Yuko spaz" *sees actual beer line* "OSNAP MEGA YUKO SPAZ RUN AWAY!"

Rainbow Pink Oden! Haha, Sayu and Rika vying for the #1 spot and Koha hanging upside down xD. What made that even more funny was that I thought it was going to be Mihoshi and Kiyone from Tenchi xD

Fate hates Miya xD It always has and it always will. I wonder what will happen next? Maybe they'll be talking next to the highway and the noises will censor her out?
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« Reply #197 on: October 06, 2007, 04:29:06 AM »
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 12 Added
« Reply #198 on: October 06, 2007, 04:35:06 AM »
I'm going to get slapped for this xD

Lots of things happen :x















Chapter 13: Triangle

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Ayumi sat up from the chair, pulling a pair of dark blue sunglasses-like objects from her face, careful to not pull it too far since the aforementioned object was attached by cables into the machine she was currently residing in.

Natsumi and other scientists were in a different room, one that was on the upper floor by the looks of it, for they were surveying her from the window at a distance since the machine itself has radiation that was intended only for the patient. Natsumi then placed headphones on her head and talked into the small microphone amongst the complicated button-filled panels.

“Have you recovered anything?”

“All I get are these weird images…” Ayumi said as she stepped out of the pod, stretching like a feline. “All of these were from my perspective, or from my ancestor’s perspective, whatever works for you. Also, the pictures weren’t really clear either, it was like a camera trying to get focused, but it never focused correctly. The first image was of me grabbing someone’s hand, probably Maki-san, very forcefully and seeing her face struck with grief. The second is of a dormant village, probably one that my ancestor resided in. The third image is two girls, one is tall with a narrow face while the other was shorter and had a more… onigiri shaped face, like someone who came out of an anime. The final image I saw was that of a black butterfly. It was resting on a lotus in what seemed to be a pond.”

Natsumi looked around to see that her fellow companions were watching the woman below intently, jotting down everything the progenitor had said.

“Alright, I think that’s enough for today.”

Ayumi could not have felt any happier when the older woman announced it. Ever since Maki intruded the main building, Kagami had been putting her through memory sessions like this for countless hours. The machines did not even do much for Ayumi. It’s almost always those certain images among the static transitions into the next image. Sure, she was impressed that Natsumi’s machine was able to recall SOME things, but it was not bringing up any further memories within her head.

All of a sudden, she felt a headache coming on, but knew she could not take any pain killers, for the injections she had to have before entering machine was there to prevent any brain damage from using the memory technology that the playstation otaku developed. As a result, she could not eat or take other medications in fear that the injections may react negatively to the other substances she might ingest.

Sighing, she looked to the only pair of double doors in the white chamber and walked towards it. When the doors opened, she only continued walking, completely ignoring the presence of Hitomi escorting her back to the residential floor of the building.

I haven’t seen you in almost three weeks, Rika-chan…

Ayumi raised her hand to touch her cheek; the scythe-shaped scar was simply a remnant now, for it was now faded away, though the mark of its existence was still certainly there.

“How did it go?” The guard broke the silence.

“There wasn’t much progress, I only kept seeing the same images in my head,” Ayumi lowered her head, feeling tired from having to sit in that chair for almost four hours.

“I see…” Hitomi placed her hands in the pocket of her black suit.

“It’s amazing what Natsumi-san could do, really… To be able to bring out memories of a past life… I’ve always thought it was impossible…”

“But you know, Rika probably knows all about her past life, she even transforms into her past life.”

“It’s not like thaaat!” Ayumi waved her hand dismissively, “Maki is the curse that was put on my family and Rika just happens to be her randomly chosen body among the million other people who could possibly have Maki’s blood in them!”

“Remember that you were the one who pissed off Maki in your past life, tsk tsk,” Hitomi shrugged, moving her finger in a pendulum motion.

“You don’t have to remind me of that!” Ayumi retorted, “But what sucks is because of this whole stupid ordeal, I can’t see Rika-chan anymore…”

“What’s wrong with you?” Hitomi looked at the other, having an expression similar to an anime face with dots for eyes and a question mark hovering about her.

“Hellloooooo? Were you living in a rock these past days?” Ayumi waved her hand around the taller’s face, “It’s because I haven’t talked or seen Rika (as herself) in forever!”

“Sorry!” the enigma chuckled, “But you know what you remind me of?”

“What?”

“You remind me of a boyfriend who’s very upset because he’s been separated from his girlfriend.”

Ayumi’s eyes widened and blinked, but she continued walking.

There was a very uncomfortable silence that followed after, save for the sounds of the echoing footsteps they produced as they walked.

Indeed, why was it that she thought of Rika more than usual? She was already surprised enough when she thought to herself how this was just a best friend thing, but Hitomi told her otherwise…

I guess I never thought of it that way…

No…We’re not like that…

Not like that at all…

Lovers? Don’t make me laugh.

It’s not supposed to be like that at all.

She’s just…


“It’s not…” She muttered, but then spoke louder, “It’s not like that. Rika-chan is my best friend, I don’t have romantic feelings towards her, that’s just plain weird. She’s more of a sister to me.”

“Mmhmm…” Hitomi acknowledged, pressing the button to the elevator now that they’ve finally reached it after traversing the hallways.

“What about you? You seem to be very familiar with her, calling her by her given name…” Ayumi looked at the other reluctantly. For some reason, the progenitor began to feel particularly uneasy… Is it because it had taken Ayumi months to call Rika by her name as opposed to this guard next to her who called her by name after mere days or a few weeks?

Ayumi ignored the growing discomfort.

“Erm…” Hitomi bit her lip, unsure of how to answer without giving Ayumi the wrong idea or make a bad impression of herself, “We’re not that close. She only let me call her by her first name because I had saved her once…” she lied.

“I see, that’s understandable.”

“Oh and…” Hitomi thought of how to express her words, “I’m only seeing you off to the residential floor, since Kagami told me that I had to go somewhere to monitor something, understand?”

“Eh? Okay,” Ayumi raised a brow, stepping into the elevator which opened for her not too long ago. “Have fun,” the shorter smiled warmly at the other and pressed the button.

“Yup,” the guard smiled, waving at the other as the doors closed. Once it did, Hitomi turned to walk in the opposite direction, her smile becoming a thin straight line.

What is this feeling I’m experiencing right now? Hitomi thought as she walked in silence.

I want to tell her the truth… But I can’t…

I have to keep my… ‘second’ connection to Rika a secret as opposed to my conduct around her when I’m on my job…

But why is this feeling making me feel bad?

Is this what they call ‘guilt?’


This blood called Life…

“It’s pretty!” Rika pointed at the waterfall, leaning over the fencing at the foot of the attraction.

“This is the first time for you too?” Miyabi was resting her arms on the fencing, also with her head on top of her limbs.

“Yeah, I don’t really get out much, haha,” the cursed woman scratched the back of her head.

“Mm, pretty falls…” Miki’s attention seems to have been caught by something other than the falls, for she had her back turned to it, propping her elbows on the red fence.

“With nice, round rocks on the side…” The demon stared at the passing people, searching for women with the aforementioned description. “Mm… I never thought the falls were that long either…” eyes scanned for people not of the female species, generally looking downwards instead of at the faces…

“I command you to bash your head on the fence,” Rika looked at Miki shifty eyed. With that, the demon began twitching involuntarily before bashing her head once onto the fence.

“Don’t do that in public! I have an honor you know!” the demon hissed at the older.

“You should keep doing that until all of it is gone,” Miyabi giggled at her older sister.

“Don’t make me throw you over the fence…” Miki glared at her younger sister.

“Don’t make me order you to jump over the fence…” Rika’s eyes were tainted with mischief, causing Miki to hiss at her yet again before looking up at the famous falls.

“It’s not that special, just a big waterfall, that’s it…”

“A big waterfall that’s pretty!” Miyabi retorted.

“Oh well, at least I’m not skippin’ out on class to be here,” the demon smirked at the other. “Nor was I stuffed in a potato sack and thrown into the trunk in the middle of an apology and confession,” the fighter laughed.

Miyabi wanted to say things, but refrained from saying them out in public. Indeed, what Miki said was true… During lunch time, Risako and Miyabi had decided to eat out in the lawn of the school. When Risako wasn’t looking and when Miyabi was just about to lean forward for a surprise kiss, she had been blinded by darkness (of the potato sack) and hauled off by her sister…

Yet another humiliating confession failure…

Stupid Nee-san.

Stupid Fate.

Stupid Miyabi for not fighting back since she actually carried an extendable needle that she could have jabbed into Miki’s side to release her…

“Odd… I don’t see the men in black that Sayumi-chan said there were…” Rika looked in the area in front of her.

“Disguises?” Miyabi added, eyeing the people who stood with their arms crossed, acting like they were surveying the area instead of waiting for someone…

“Don’t cause a commotion then…” Rika said aside to Miki, only to find that the devil wasn’t there. When she scanned the area, Miki was already putting the moves on a rather pretty woman, dressed rather scandalously despite the cold weather. With a frustrated sigh, the cursed woman trudged over, grabbed Miki by the ear, and walked back to where they were standing amidst the people taking pictures of the waterfall.

“Come on! She was trying to give me her email!” the demon whined

“Is there something the matter?”

Miki nearly died of the horror.

Such an up-close epitome of disaster…

…The disaster of their lead housekeeper putting on too much makeup…

“Kei-san?! What are you doing here?!” Rika’s eyes became as wide as dinner plates.

“I’m here in case you need a getaway car,” the housekeeper waved her hand dismissively, “Besides, since Yuko-sama can’t be here due to her duties of the Dance hall, I’m the logical replacement!” the woman said, pulling out a conspicuous wig that resembled curly lion mane and wearing it.

“You look ridiculous…” Miki’s eyes drooped in a manner that clearly said she was not amused.

“Oh? Maybe I should have gotten the bigger wig…” Kei pondered, putting a finger on her cheek as a form of cute pondering.

“That’s okay,” Rika chuckled, putting out a hand in a stop motion, “You don’t have to make up for Yuko’s presence, just be yourself is all.”

“That’s boring though…” Kei pouted, removing her lion wig and stuffing it into a small bag she was carrying. “Should I carry a sake bottle for show then?”

“I’d rather you not…” If this was an anime, Rika would have those blue, vertical lines underneath her eye.

“What can I do for you then?”

“Nothing that pertains to appearance,” the other three said at once.

Fall into another Fantasy

Miki wasn’t exactly feeling energetic like the other three. After a tiring afternoon, she decided by herself that she would return to the hotel of which the four were staying at.

It wasn’t a cheap hotel.

It wasn’t expensive either.

The hotel had the general conveniences like a pretty breakfast lobby and some vending machines littered throughout the building. The main color scheme for this particular housing was dark green and various shades of white. There was something else common among the building too…

Miki turned the corner to find some men in black discussing something that seemed important, for when she walked into their line of sight, she heard the subject change and then the men started speaking of trivial business topics. Alright suspicious, Miki rounded the corner at the end of the hallway, but kept her back to the wall and attempted to listen to the conversation.

“So the first task has been accomplished? You have reunited the seven direct descendants of the Tochigi prefecture in this building?” one of the men had said.

Miki pressed her back closer to the wall, growing tense now that the objective of the men has been revealed.

“Alright, time for the second task. You all do not need briefing, I assume?”

“No need, sir, we have everything under control.”

That voice was familiar.

It was annoyingly familiar…

What the hell is SHE doing here?! Miki thought to herself, clenching her fists tightly. However, if she lingered for too long, she would be caught eavesdropping on them. So she walked away, trying to find the Fujimotos’ (and Rika’s) hotel room before that androgynous woman catches sight of her.

She’s an enemy…

She’s an enemy…

She didn’t hesitate to fight me that time…

Fuckin’ woman kicked  me out of the window too…

Honestly, I don’t blame Rika for taking a liking to her, considering she’s hot and all and probably like of those bishounen characters…

She’s like whats-her-face from Sailor moon… The hunky blonde one I can’t remember the name of…


Miki began to mumble incoherently as she traversed.

Why does Rika love that woman so much? Just a typical hero…To her that is…

Hitomi’s a weird person… It’s like she’s completely different when she’s on-duty or off-duty… It’s not like her personality changes…

But her morals do…

To be someone who can completely switch morals just because of her job… Does this mean she’s simply fooling around with Rika?

Using her?

I won’t forgive that.

Rika deserves someone better.

Someone who is always at her side.

Me.

I’m better for her.

Even though we have our differences, I’m always going to be the same Fujimoto Miki. Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week.

I won’t change.


“Fancy seeing you here, Fujimoto.”

Shit.

Miki stopped at that woman’s voice. She spun about her foot and stood facing the woman of her hatred, crossing her arms.

“Same to you,” was the only thing said by the demon.

Hitomi let out a smirk at the venomous tone and the icy glare the shorter, tanned woman gave her. “Are you still pissed that I threw you out the window?”

“No, I’m feelin’ absolutely dandy,” Miki let out a sarcastic voice, still giving her infamous glare.

“That’s good to know,” Hitomi retorted in sarcasm as well. “How’s Rika these days?”

“Come now, have you already forgotten?” Miki’s voice became harsher.

“Forgotten what?” Hitomi tilted her head in a twisted smile, interested in how Miki was going to word her answer to something she already knew.

“That you made-out with her around a week ago?” Miki wanted to yell that last statement, but she wanted to keep her cool down.

“Why should you be jealous? Aren’t you the player who would make out with anyone that catches your eye?” Hitomi frowned, “You have no right to speak of jealousy from a situation like that. It makes you a hypocrite, Fujimoto.”

“What about you, Ms. Androgynous butch? Your set of beliefs change depending on your job times. When I first met you at your condo, I thought you were a good person, but apparently, I thought wrong since you threw me out of the window with an injured person on my back. Personally, I find you misfit to be Rika’s love interest because we have no idea what the fuck you’re thinking most of the time.”

“And you think you can fulfill the role of her ideal love interest?” the enigma raised a brow.

“Probably, but I know I could do a better job than you,” Miki walked towards the taller, “I have experience with the emotions of people, that I’ve hurt them before, that I’ve been able to reconcile with them before, that  I’ve known what could make them happy…”

“Where are you going with this?”

“You have amnesia. You don’t remember those experiences. You wouldn’t know what hurts people yet. You wouldn’t know how to reconcile with people yet. You wouldn’t know how to make them happy. When you are alone in this world, what makes you think you have the galls to talk like you know everything?”

“I ask again, where are you going with this?”

“You will see the sense my words make when I do this…” Miki rested her hands on the taller’s shoulders and pulled the other downwards. Before Hitomi could back away, the tanned woman’s lips had already found its destination on her own. The enigma pulled her head back, but Miki’s lips already claimed them again, tongue lashing out as she did so. The enigma shut her mouth and pulled away again, this time, trying to use her hands to push away the other. Unfortunately, Hitomi’s mouth opened slightly as she tried to get away, thus, Miki proved stubborn as her tongue darted into the crevice of the taller’s lips, pulling the guard into an even deeper kiss than before.

Then it stopped.

Hitomi felt her side being shoved, and obviously, Miki too, staggered a bit from the hit which seemed to have carried onto her from the taller. Then Miki stood her ground and smirked at the other, satisfied that she had accomplished her mission. But Hitomi never noticed that.

Instead, she was focused on the fleeting figure, walking—trudging rather, across the hallway.

Why?

Why did it pain her so much to see Rika like that?

“Rika!” The guard called out to the woman walking away. To no avail, the woman did not stop.

She never looked back.

She never flinched.

And eventually, she turned the corner, away from their sight.

Come see this Strife…

“Mm… You’re definitely in trouble now…” Miki licked her lips, satisfied.

“Aren’t you in trouble too?!” Hitomi’s head snapped to the location of Miki. Frankly, she felt surprised that she felt such an angry surge of emotions coming into her head.

“I am but I could get out of it.”

“Don’t be so frivolous!”

“I told you before,” the demon tilted her head with a frown and a glare. “I’ve had experience with people before.”

“That has nothing to do with—”

“Yes it does.”

“What do you—”

“You are filled with anger. You are oblivious to everything. You can’t find the right words. This is the first time you’ve experienced this happening. You don’t understand it at all. You can’t convey your reconciliation into words. You have no idea how to fix it at all.”

Hitomi became silent.

“Have fun trying to make Rika talk to you again,” Miki smiled again, before walking deeper into the hallways, into the direction Rika was going.

Hitomi couldn’t see.

Hitomi couldn’t think.

There was this horrible feeling in her.

It was so painful in her throbbing chest.

There was a name for that horrific feeling.

Devastation.

And she hated it.

…Which shaped our history













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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 13: Triangle
« Reply #199 on: October 06, 2007, 05:30:02 AM »
now im confused! :banghead:
should i go for ishiyossi or fujikawa???????  :?

wow its now shibata,,,hitomi,,,and miki falling for rika :lol:


but anyways nice chapter i liked it soooooo much!!!!! :D  :love::D :love: :D
be waiting 4 ur next GREAT chapters!!!!! :grin: :grin: :grin:
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