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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #80 on: May 04, 2008, 05:32:27 AM »
Aww the Takagaki was love! They are one of my favorite pairings!
But :( Reina and Maki! But at least Maki's trying to make up right? RIGHT!? :cry:
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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #81 on: May 07, 2008, 05:11:16 PM »
Part 8



I’m pretty sure that I’ve permanently turned this shade of pink ever since Sayu had asked me to go on a date. I can’t live my life this colour! What will my parents think? What will Sayu think?!

“Eririn~ what should we eat for lunch?” Sayu cutely asked me and I couldn’t help but smile widely in return.

“Anything you want,” I replied goofily. God, she made me powerless, and she was only asking me a question! I couldn’t even look at her anymore without blushing and feeling all gushy inside. I’ve turned into a big sap!

“Eririn~ stop staring at me like that! You’re embarrassing me!”

“Uh. Right.”

I didn’t even realise that I had just been ogling Sayu in a very strange manner, no doubt with a very strange expression on my face.

This is ridiculous. It feels like I’m in another world. Spending time with Sayu is so much different from spending time with say… Gaki-san. Now there’s something. I blushed again, but for a different reason to why I’ve been blushing all day. I would have to start thinking about that soon. I wanted to be with Sayu… so I would have to stop uh… seeing Gaki-san. I felt my spirits sink a little. I liked spending time with Gaki-san… I didn’t have to worry about looking or sounding stupid… and then there was always times when we would do… stuff. But wait… if I was going to start something with Sayu, doesn’t that mean that Sayu and I would also be doing stuff? I flush very red at this thought and try not to look at the girl. I mean… what if she thinks that I’m –

“Let’s go in here!”

My thoughts are interrupted by Sayu dragging me in to a secluded, dark, and very small alleyway. I hadn’t even noticed we’d come in this direction.

“Sayu, why are we - ”

I’m interrupted by Sayu pressing her body tightly against me. I hear myself gasp, and before I know it, Sayu’s lips are glued to mine.

I blush harder than I have all day.



*****



I should be angry at the girl, yet here she was in my apartment at the dead of night. Why was she here? Why had I let her in? To be honest, I don’t have any answers. I don’t understand what’s what anymore. I feel like I’ve just lost one of the most important people to me, by no fault of said girl’s own nature. It made matters worse the Maki was involved.

Had it been somebody else, I might not have been as angry. She knows how I feel towards Miki. She knows that I’ve been waiting for as long as I remember for something that might not even happen. Regardless, she took it away from me. She took her away from me. Even when she had found her own happiness… she let it happen.

My hands tightened into clenched fists, grabbing handfuls of the cushion I was furiously clutching.

“Maki, why’d you do it? Why’d you let her?” I asked, refusing to look at her. My voice let on more of my misery than I had wanted it to. I heard her sigh shakily.

“I don’t know.”

That was it? She doesn’t know? How can she not know? She was being unfair, and she knows it.

“You have some nerve. Showing up here after all this mess and then telling me that ‘you don’t know’,” I hiss back trough gritted teeth. I turn my head to face her.

“What do you expect me to say? I’m sorry? I stuffed up? Forgive me and let’s get on with our lives? We both know that wouldn’t work.”

“It’s better than ‘I don’t know’!”

“At least you can still work things out with Miki! You’re just pissed off that you didn’t do something about it sooner! Don’t take things like that out on me, Aya,” Maki bites back just as hard and at her words I’m shocked in to silence. Maki tones it down a little. “Look… me and Reina… I really fucked up. But you and Miki… there was nothing between you two when her and I happened. There’s nothing for you to be so mad about…”

Why was she making perfect sense now?


”Maki…”

“Just talk to her, okay?”

”But - ”

“You’ll be fine.”

“. . .”

“Aya - ”

“Just go away.”



*****



It’s hot.

That was the first thought that came to Risa’s mind as she opened her eyes to the very early morning light peeping in through the cracks of the poorly drawn curtains.

And I can’t move?!

That was the second thought that came to Risa’s mind as she realised that there was something weighing her down, greatly restricting her movement.

The young girl took a moment to think about her predicament. She was curled up on her side, facing a bedroom wall. She thought a little harder. The weight was only on certain parts of her body. She felt slight movement behind her. The leg that was on her thigh shifted slightly, and the arm that was on her hip slithered forward and wrapped around the front of her stomach.

Risa felt the butterflies in her chest flutter rapidly. She didn’t dare move.

Eventually, she found it in her to slightly turn her head back to look at the sleeping form that had been invading her personal space. Her breath immediately caught as she found her self staring at the peacefully sleeping face of her Leader at such close proximity.

I could get used to this.

Risa warmly smiled to herself as she settled back down, being careful not to wake the older girl. She closed her eyes, trying to fall asleep, albeit failing miserably. Her mind was now racing full of thoughts, all of which revolved around Ai-chan.

Pretty much nothing had amounted after their little moment backstage in the dressing room. Ai had continued to be as distant as always.

Yet here she was now, limbs wrapped around Risa like vines entwined around a tree. Risa dared herself another glance at Ai-chan, and upon laying eyes on her, she immediately felt a warm jolt run through her body. Risa hastily turned her head back around. Ai-chan was sleeping and she was still making her feel all bubbly.

Ai shifted in her slumber again, this time moving even closer to Risa, pressing her body against the girl’s back. Risa’s heart skipped several beats.

It was in this fashion that the two slept for the next hour until their alarm begin it’s shrilly early morning cry. To be more accurate… Ai slept, while Risa stayed awake during the whole process in a mixture of pleasure and sheer torture. And when the alarm finally sounded, she sighed in disappointment as Ai-chan peeled herself away and began her morning routine without a word.


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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #82 on: May 07, 2008, 07:39:30 PM »
Well I loved Kame's thought process  :hiakhiakhiak: ... i loved even more that Sayumi was the aggressor in that pairing  :mon thumb: didnt realy expect it but makes mucho sense.

Loved Maki's tough love with Aya because she needed to hear that step 1 in fixing AyaxMiki YAY  :muffin:

And of course loved the takagaki moment as you can tell from my name hehe im a fan  :shy1:
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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #83 on: May 08, 2008, 01:08:04 AM »
But Kame-chan, you look so cute in that color!  :wub: Damn Maki! How come you can solve everyone else's problems but your own!? :sweatdrop: But Takagaki was absolute  :wub: Love doki doki Gaki!

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #84 on: May 08, 2008, 06:08:31 AM »
OMGASS, SAYU MADE THE FIRST MOVE!!! :wriggly:


I guess I can see Maki's point. Considering that Aya and Miki weren't involved at the time of the incident like Maki was with Reina, they should still be able to be around each other at least on a "best friend" level (that is, after all, what they are, first and foremost).  And right now, Miki could probably use her best friend more than she could use a GF. :yep:



Awwwwwwwwwwwww...Aichan slept over? :oops: The fact that she was latching onto Risa could be a sign that her feelings really do run deeper than she's been able to acknowledge so far. And hey, it's a start. :D

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #85 on: May 08, 2008, 11:41:13 AM »
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww such a cute chapter!

 Firstly (because its how it started) the Turtle Rabbit moment! Sooo cute! Funny how Kame was having those naughty thoughts and feeling guilty for it and Sayu picked up on that or had her own naughty thoughts and ended up making Eri blush some more if you catch my drift! lol

     Then the saaaaaaaaad bit! Maki and Aya. I thought it wasn't that bit anymore and maybe it was Maki at Reina's place. Then as I read on I thought Miki at Aya's place. Then I realised Maki was at Aya's still helping her out a bit. Poor MIki.... at least Aya had a motivational speaker. And she didn't really do anything wrong. I mean, sure she slept with Maki but from her POV that shouldn't affect Aya at all.

   She must think her friend hates her because she is gay or something. She probably thinks Aya hates her for what she did, but little does she know that Aya is angry at who she did it with ;)

     I think they will get together by the end. Afterall they are the biggest drama queens in stories but they are always together when they are supposed to be. I guess what I am trying to say is I am being optimistic about this (shocker, I know) and hoping that they can get back together. Because at that point they weren't going out so she didn't cheat, she didn't do anything to Aya so she should totally be forgiven.

     I hope Miki goes to see her after Maki leaves and does soemthing totally romantic and Aya forgives her and they have the rabu rabu (in other words PERV CHAPTER WOOOHOO! lolXDjks)

     And the last bit! Awww~oh! So sweet. It's so heartwarming to know that Ai thinks of Risa even in her sleep and she wants to be with her. I think there is something holding her back from being with her like fear, and she just holds back to protect Risa from something. It seems like she really wants her and is just trying to protect her or something.

     It was so sweet that Ai was holding her like a baby holds its favourite possession while she slept. I got this mental image that was sooo sweet!~

     I was actually gonna write something like it. It reminds me of one or two of my dreams except they're with diferent people. lol

     Great job once more, I loved it and hope everyone gets together and that you post again soon!
     

     Btw, I also feel sorry for Reina, it seems like while all of this is hapenning she is all alone and no one is helping her recover or consider forgiving maki. But is Maki sorry for what happened? I mean if she does get a second chance (if that is what she wants) will she be faithfull? Will she stand by Reina and come home to her? Or is she just sorry like "Im sorry I did it but I dont wanna be with you anymore" sorry? I wanna know if Reina forgives her, will she do everything in her power to keep her? Will she fight for her? Or will she start the same thing again?

     I hope they all get together.. Looking forward to that and the perv chapters *feeds perv cookies* (why must I always do that? XD Oh well, the perv section has been neglected lately and lets face it, it's not like theres a lot of reading material there.....)
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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #86 on: May 08, 2008, 12:25:24 PM »
wow reading this chapter was like being on a roller coaster.   XD+ :wub:--> :cry:--> :inlove:

lol I love Eri's brain...it's so cute!  I was totally all smiles throughout that whole part!  Sayu +1 million points !  :heart:

after that I had a hard time transitioning to the next section...took a couple of sentences before my smile disappeared but good thing there's a sign of hope!  oh oh and the ending!  I have to really hand it to you, Kameshige are irresistible but you make AiGaki sooo adorable!  :shy1:

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #87 on: May 19, 2008, 08:37:53 PM »
Sorry about the long delay!  :mon whimper: Been busy with work and settling things for moving out.

On to replies to comments!

Well I loved Kame's thought process  :hiakhiakhiak: ... i loved even more that Sayumi was the aggressor in that pairing  :mon thumb: didnt realy expect it but makes mucho sense.

Loved Maki's tough love with Aya because she needed to hear that step 1 in fixing AyaxMiki YAY  :muffin:

And of course loved the takagaki moment as you can tell from my name hehe im a fan  :shy1:
Hehe, I always have fun writing Kame-chan's thoughts. I can just imagine all the random stuff that floats around in her brain!  XD Speaking of Takagaki... I'm starting to love the pair more and more  :wub:


But Kame-chan, you look so cute in that color!  :wub: Damn Maki! How come you can solve everyone else's problems but your own!? :sweatdrop: But Takagaki was absolute  :wub: Love doki doki Gaki!
It just seems like a Maki thing to do... well angsty Maki anyways... or maybe that's just how I see her, hehe  :sweatdrop:


OMGASS, SAYU MADE THE FIRST MOVE!!! :wriggly:


I guess I can see Maki's point. Considering that Aya and Miki weren't involved at the time of the incident like Maki was with Reina, they should still be able to be around each other at least on a "best friend" level (that is, after all, what they are, first and foremost).  And right now, Miki could probably use her best friend more than she could use a GF. :yep:



Awwwwwwwwwwwww...Aichan slept over? :oops: The fact that she was latching onto Risa could be a sign that her feelings really do run deeper than she's been able to acknowledge so far. And hey, it's a start. :D

OMGASS indeed! Nice job on pointing out that Miki could do with a friend more than anything right now :) I think before she can overcome anything else, she needs support to help her through.


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww such a cute chapter!

 Firstly (because its how it started) the Turtle Rabbit moment! Sooo cute! Funny how Kame was having those naughty thoughts and feeling guilty for it and Sayu picked up on that or had her own naughty thoughts and ended up making Eri blush some more if you catch my drift! lol

     Then the saaaaaaaaad bit! Maki and Aya. I thought it wasn't that bit anymore and maybe it was Maki at Reina's place. Then as I read on I thought Miki at Aya's place. Then I realised Maki was at Aya's still helping her out a bit. Poor MIki.... at least Aya had a motivational speaker. And she didn't really do anything wrong. I mean, sure she slept with Maki but from her POV that shouldn't affect Aya at all.

   She must think her friend hates her because she is gay or something. She probably thinks Aya hates her for what she did, but little does she know that Aya is angry at who she did it with ;)

     I think they will get together by the end. Afterall they are the biggest drama queens in stories but they are always together when they are supposed to be. I guess what I am trying to say is I am being optimistic about this (shocker, I know) and hoping that they can get back together. Because at that point they weren't going out so she didn't cheat, she didn't do anything to Aya so she should totally be forgiven.

     I hope Miki goes to see her after Maki leaves and does soemthing totally romantic and Aya forgives her and they have the rabu rabu (in other words PERV CHAPTER WOOOHOO! lolXDjks)

     And the last bit! Awww~oh! So sweet. It's so heartwarming to know that Ai thinks of Risa even in her sleep and she wants to be with her. I think there is something holding her back from being with her like fear, and she just holds back to protect Risa from something. It seems like she really wants her and is just trying to protect her or something.

     It was so sweet that Ai was holding her like a baby holds its favourite possession while she slept. I got this mental image that was sooo sweet!~

     I was actually gonna write something like it. It reminds me of one or two of my dreams except they're with diferent people. lol

     Great job once more, I loved it and hope everyone gets together and that you post again soon!
    

     Btw, I also feel sorry for Reina, it seems like while all of this is hapenning she is all alone and no one is helping her recover or consider forgiving maki. But is Maki sorry for what happened? I mean if she does get a second chance (if that is what she wants) will she be faithfull? Will she stand by Reina and come home to her? Or is she just sorry like "Im sorry I did it but I dont wanna be with you anymore" sorry? I wanna know if Reina forgives her, will she do everything in her power to keep her? Will she fight for her? Or will she start the same thing again?

     I hope they all get together.. Looking forward to that and the perv chapters *feeds perv cookies* (why must I always do that? XD Oh well, the perv section has been neglected lately and lets face it, it's not like theres a lot of reading material there.....)

Don't forget that Reina has Eri to lean on here. Even if Eri is off doing stuff with Sayu, she's always been there when Reina needed her.



wow reading this chapter was like being on a roller coaster.   XD+ :wub:--> :cry:--> :inlove:

lol I love Eri's brain...it's so cute!  I was totally all smiles throughout that whole part!  Sayu +1 million points !  :heart:

after that I had a hard time transitioning to the next section...took a couple of sentences before my smile disappeared but good thing there's a sign of hope!  oh oh and the ending!  I have to really hand it to you, Kameshige are irresistible but you make AiGaki sooo adorable!  :shy1:
Yay for loving Eri's brain!  XD :lol: I think I just have too much fun with what I think she thinks  :P

Thanks for reading again everyone! Next part coming right up!

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #88 on: May 19, 2008, 08:53:47 PM »
Part 9



I never thought that I would be waking up like this… limbs sprawled all over you… latching onto you like a koala does to a tree. It surprised me, to say the least. I didn’t think I was capable of doing something like that while basically unconscious. When the alarm clock went off, I went into a silent panic, fearing having to face you. As I wordlessly moved away and headed to the bathroom, I heard you sigh. It was a sigh of defeat. I wish you hadn’t. It made me desperately want to turn around and throw my arms around you. But I didn’t. I didn’t even greet you… I didn’t even look at you… because I was scared of what I would see.

I don’t know if I’m ready for this. Aren’t I supposed to be the leader? The one that keeps her group in perfect harmony? The one that gets close enough, but not so close as to become too involved? I didn’t know anymore. I want to be close to you. I want to give everything I have to you. You had made it clear on several occasions that that was exactly what you wanted from me.

Then why am I so afraid? What am I afraid of?

I groan in frustration as I slowly turn the shower off. When I finally emerged from the bathroom, I looked up to find you wistfully sitting on the edge of the bed, lost in thought.

Are you thinking about me?

“Morning,” I tried carefully. You snap out of your little world and focus your eyes on me.

“Morning.”

“You should get ready… we have to leave soon,” I said, duty taking over me. I mentally smack myself. Why do I always end up saying things like that?

“Um… yeah, ok.”

You begin heading towards the bathroom, picking up your towel along the way. All I can do is silently observe, the internal battle within me raging viciously. Suddenly you come to a halt. As you turn around I quickly look away, embarrassed about the thought of being caught red handed watching you.

“Do you always have to do that?” you ask me, your voice showing annoyance. I blink. I honestly don’t know what you’re talking about.

“Do what?”

“You always put work before our friendship… before our relationship… before us,” you say quietly, avoiding looking directly at me. The world spins before my eyes. That’s not what I was doing! I was thinking about you the entire time! I just don’t know how to say it…

“Gaki-san…” I begin, trying to come up with something. No further words seemed to want to sprout from my mouth. You looked at me critically a moment longer, the hurt in your eyes evident. Eventually, you turned on your heel and loudly close the bathroom door behind you.

I don’t know what to do. 

But I realise now…

I don’t know how to be with you.




*****



“How are you holding up?”

“I hate her.”

“We both know that’s not true.”

“Who’s side are you on?”

Eri sighed at the sudden defensiveness as she gently laid a hand on Reina’s forearm.

“You know that’s not how I meant it.

The young yankii leaned back, momentarily closing her eyes.

“I know. I’m sorry,” she apoligised, reopening her eyes.

“It’s okay. Just you know… don’t go around getting all yankii on our management… or Miki for that matter,” Eri said, recalling how Miki had viciously twisted her arm backwards in an angry rampage. Miki sure seemed to be around a lot for someone who had resigned Morning Musume in the fashion that she had. It didn’t help that she seemed to be in a bad mood recently, taking it out on anything and anyone in her path. Eri shuddered involuntarily again at the thought.

Reina opened her mouth to reply when she head a door being thrown open nearby. The teenager almost shrugged it off until she heard a very familiar voice.

“…seen Reina, have you? …uhuh… ok thanks!”

She tensed as she heard footsteps approaching her change room. Eri gave her a nervous glance, which Reina returned, holding her breath. Reina prayed with all her might that the owner of the voice wouldn’t come looking for her here. She could feel her insides already churning in protest.

“Eri, what should I do?” Reina asked in a small voice, her vulnerability present in the way her words trembled.

“Maybe…” Eri thought for a moment. “Reina-chan… maybe this is what you really need… both of you.”

No sooner had the words left her mouth, the door violently swung open, causing the girls to jump at the ruckus. Eri had a flash of déjà vu where Miki had been the perpetrator. However this time, one very worn looking, very tired sounding Goto Maki stood in the doorway, leaning on it for support.

“Kame-chan, Sayu wants you.”

Eri blushed at the several innuendoes. Reina, despite her situation, raised an eyebrow at the shy girl.

“I’ll explain later! Anyway… uh… I’ll go see Sayu now. I’ll call you later!”

And with that, Eri had rushed out. Reina’s features were overcome by instant panic, as well as an impending rush of anger. She didn’t want to deal with this, as much as she needed to. She didn’t want to face the girl that stole her heart then broke it. She just wanted to forget about it all, forget all her pain.

Reina was just about ready to run out of the room, when Maki spoke up.

“Just give me a few minutes. Please…” Maki begged, sounding on the verge of a serious breakdown.

The younger idol didn’t want to listen. She was sure that if she did… as infuriated as she was, she would certainly find some way to forgive the soloist. Her chest yanked in different directions, stifling any words that tried to formulate inside her mouth.

“I – I think you should leave,” Reina whispered, unable to meet Maki’s eyes.

“Please Reina, just listen!”

The younger girl could only stare back in response. The rage that had been rapidly increasing until a moment ago seemed to deteriorate at the mere sound of Maki’s voice.

“Reina-chan… you don’t deserve this…”



*****



The Leader of the pack unsmilingly stood tall, her stance was one that demanded complete silence and attention. She calmly made sure to look every single member in the eye, holding their gaze for a second or two communicating hidden messages such as “Try not to injure yourself during rehearsal again” and “I hope to see you performing at top notch this time.” However when her eyes fell upon her second in command, her mind malfunctioned, immediately shutting itself down and going into extreme meltdown. After another second her brain rebooted itself, and the first thought it directed at said Sub Leader was “God, you’re so beautiful!”

Ai struggled to keep her facial expression neutral, despite the immediate rush of colour she felt covering her cheeks. The other members awaited their next orders. Risa coughed and tore her eyes away from her beloved leader.

It had been several weeks since Risa had woken up that morning with Ai’s various body parts draped over her. And since then, it had occurred almost every time they had shared the same bed. It became a cycle that never progressed, both never saying a word to each other upon waking up… both wanting more yet unable to vocalise the desire. By now, both girls urgently wanted to make progress but just ended up becoming awkward when it got anywhere near to making headway.

“Uh… well if that’s all Ai-chan has to say, I think we can start warming up. Right, Ai-chan?”

“What? Um – uh – yeah. Warm up!” Ai made a hasty, yet shoddy recovery.

The girls murmurs began as they broke off into private groups to begin stretching for dance rehearsal. Risa took hold of Ai’s sleeve, pulling her along until they were as far away from the other members as possible.

“You have to stop doing that!”

“What?!”

“Spacing out when you’re supposed to be leading us!”

“I can’t help it…”

“Why not?”

“Um…”

Ai quickly averted her gaze, finding hard to admit the truth. Risa shuffled closer to Ai, curiously peering at her pink tinted cheeks and suddenly realizing what exactly was bothering her Leader. She knew it wasn’t very nice, but she felt an urge to tease the older girl a little.

“Am I too… distracting…?” Risa’s lowered voice beside Ai’s ear made the girl shiver involuntarily. When Risa firmly placed a hand on her waist, giving it a suggestive squeeze, Ai all but jumped out of her skin.

“Gaki-san!” Ai hissed as quietly as she could manage in her state of distress/sensory overload. She was sure that all the flirting that Risa had been subjecting her to would drive her insane… in a very hormonal sense. And they hadn’t even kissed yet. Kiss?

Ai’s eyes immediately focused on Risa’s lips, the gloss shining in the studio light. She watched as they slowly moved closer… But who was doing the moving, herself or Risa? She didn’t care because they sure as hell weren’t getting farther away and that’s all she cared about at that moment.

“Ahem.”

Risa’s lips had become stationary. Ai frowned at this. With difficulty Ai removed her concentrated stare on her best friend’s lips to peer over her shoulder instead. Eri stood with a sly grin thrown across her features.

“As much as you two might enjoy publicly having mental sex with each other, I suggest you save it for later when you can skip the mental part.” Ai and Risa turned deep shades of crimson at the sheer thought of it. “Because Koharu just asked me whether or not you can catch ‘being a lesbian’, as she so kindly put it.” The two girls jaws dropped and hit the floor in an unflattering manner. With that, Eri returned to the other side of the room to continue stretching with Sayu.

“That was… interesting…” Ai finally breathed out, breaking the minute long silence. Risa continued not saying a word as they began their warm ups. Finally, she found it in her to blurt out what was on her mind.

“Hey Ai-chan?”

“Yeah?”

“Maybe we can try that later…”

“Try what?”

“You know…”

“…?”

“Skipping the mental part.”

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« Reply #89 on: May 19, 2008, 09:16:32 PM »
YAY your back :cow:
poor Reina n maki I have a feeling this is headed towards a break up  :mon cute: but once again loved the takagaki :heart:  :heart:  :heart: so YAY to the sexual tension  :cow: and the suggestion for them to "skip the mental part"  :mon lovelaff: .... oh and um koharu's comment on whether or not you can catch being a lesbian priceless :wahaha:
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« Reply #90 on: May 19, 2008, 09:49:52 PM »
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I don’t know what to do.

But I realise now…

I don’t know how to be with you.
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Goto Maki stood in the doorway, leaning on it for support.

“Kame-chan, Sayu wants you.”

Eri blushed at the several innuendoes. Reina, despite her situation, raised an eyebrow at the shy girl.

“I’ll explain later! Anyway… uh… I’ll go see Sayu now. I’ll call you later!”
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It had been several weeks since Risa had woken up that morning with Ai’s various body parts draped over her. And since then, it had occurred almost every time they had shared the same bed. It became a cycle that never progressed, both never saying a word to each other upon waking up… both wanting more yet unable to vocalise the desire. By now, both girls urgently wanted to make progress but just ended up becoming awkward when it got anywhere near to making headway.
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“You have to stop doing that!”

“What?!”

“Spacing out when you’re supposed to be leading us!”

“I can’t help it…”

“Why not?”

“Um…”
BECAUSE SHE RABURABU'S YOU, YOU TWIT!
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“As much as you two might enjoy publicly having mental sex with each other, I suggest you save it for later when you can skip the mental part.” Ai and Risa turned deep shades of crimson at the sheer thought of it.
Hot dayum. :twisted:



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“Because Koharu just asked me whether or not you can catch ‘being a lesbian’, as she so kindly put it.” The two girls jaws dropped and hit the floor in an unflattering manner.
Eri =  :mon psst:
Aichan/Risa =   :shock: :shock:


JFC =  :wahaha:


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“Hey Ai-chan?”

“Yeah?”

“Maybe we can try that later…”

“Try what?”

“You know…”

“…?”

“Skipping the mental part.”
It's about time one of them took the first step. :yep:

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #91 on: May 19, 2008, 10:20:40 PM »
I've just read through everything. Why did I not see this fic before???

Reading it made me really upset at parts. Poor Reina, I feel so sorry for her. Even though Maki was a bitch for doing the dirty on her, I hope they get back together.

Eri and Risa being friends with 'extra's' was funny, but I'm glad that they've gone after the people they want to be with. I'm loving the tension between Ai and Risa too. I can't get enough of TakaGaki at the minute.

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #92 on: May 19, 2008, 11:20:41 PM »
Ai/Risa=  :shocked: :drool:
Eri/Sayumi=  :shy2: :glasses:
Reina/Maki=  :frustrated: :'( :mon waterworks:

nuff said

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #93 on: May 20, 2008, 01:50:41 AM »
Damn it, Ai-chan! You need to man up and take your girl!  XD But Reina and Maki..... :cry: At least it seems like they're making progress. Maki knows what she's doing to Reina is ruining her(Reina) as a person. Now Reina just needs to let her in. I hope they make it through this. if they do, I kinda expect some hot makeup sex.   :mon misch: YESSSS! Gaki-san's being pervy! They're gonna do it!!!!  XD at Eri's mental sex comment. And poor Koharu thinks you can catch lesbianism!!!!  :on lol:

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #94 on: May 20, 2008, 03:32:59 AM »
I just need to say.... I love this fic!!  :cow: :cow:

There are good pairings but your TakaGaki is the most!! Seriously,  :heart: :heart:  . Gaki being perv is hot.  :shocked:


I almost died laughing at Eri's comment haha


I'll be waiting  :wriggly:

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #95 on: May 20, 2008, 04:30:11 AM »
awwwwwwww sweet chapter! I almost cried and rofled in one chapter, that is a great accomplishment!! awww takagaki is so sweet~!
 
 I love how poor Ai realised she wants Risa and that the only thing keeping her back is the fact that she doesn't know how to be with her... poor Ai, if only she knew Risa knows a thing or two about that.

 Eri and Sayu are cute! Poor Eri is the one with experience yet she is the shy one XD Sooo sweet!

 Maki is finally gonna get to talk to Reina but it looks like she wont be asking her back, she will be telling her to move on with her own life... that would suck! I want them to get together, they should! Even though Maki doesn't deserve to be with her (although I think she does) she should be with her for Reina's sake! I mean, Reina was great to her, and never did wrong, so she should get to be with her because she loves her and Maki can make her hapy, and  think she deserves to be happy.

 And Aya and Miki <3 At least they sort of know they have feelings for each other now. I hope they can mend their relationship and be together. I really do. I hope that they get to be together because they really should. They deserve to  be happy and technically they weren't dating in the first pplace, Aya should have just told her she had feelings for her before making her feel like a monster because she thought that Aya hated her for what she did to Maki when she was hurt that she had sexx with Maki and not her......
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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #96 on: May 20, 2008, 12:49:17 PM »
YAY~
<3

lol at eri's MENTAL SEX.. :lol: XD XD
ohh.. gaki-san an ai-chan skipping the mental part..XD

and i cnt wait for reina and maki... :(

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #97 on: May 27, 2008, 12:03:03 PM »
Ooooook... so it looks like I've evolved into an even BIGGER Takagaki fan since this fic has more parts involving them than Reina/Maki  :roll:








Part 10



“I had lots of fun.”

“Yeah, me too.”

“So um, I guess I’ll see you around…”

The young girl sniffed, beginning to get emotional as the strings on her heart tugged.

“You idiot!”

“What?!”

“It’s not like we’ll never see each other again or anything! Save getting emotional for that horny rabbit you managed to snag for yourself!”

“Hey! Just because she likes to do stuff… a lot…”

Risa and Eri glared at each other for half a second before bursting out in heart-warming laughter. The two had avoided discussing their involvement with each other for way too long, and had finally decided to talk it over, drawing that particular chapter of their lives to a close.

“So… how are you and Ai-chan going?” Eri slyly asked, knowing full well that Ai-chan was a little bit of a late bloomer. Risa’s cheeks turned a faint pink shade.

“Well… it’s going along nicely,” Risa replied methodically. She wasn’t really sure what part of her and Ai’s strangely innocent relationship was going along “nicely”, but she had become so… fluffed up by Ai-chan that absolutely everything about it seemed “nice”.

“Okay Gaki-san, wipe that drool off your chin because it’s a little too gross,” Eri smirked at her friend getting lost in her thoughts concerning a certain leader.

“I miss her,” Risa stated blankly. Eri snorted.

“You’re so whipped!”

“So are you!!”

Koharu had chosen this moment to appear out of nowhere, curiously watching her seniors before inserting herself in to the conversation.

“What does whipped mean?”



*****



“Aya, I know that – that I really screwed up. I know that Reina didn’t deserve that. I know it’s my entire fault. But… but…”

But I’m in love with you! Miki’s mind screamed.

She had come to Aya’s apartment in the hopes of clearing everything up. She had been feeling like dirt for a very long time, and had finally decided to do something about it. Aya stood unmoving, showing no emotion towards anything that she had just heard coming out of Miki’s mouth.

“Aya…”

“Do you know why I was so pissed off? Do you know why it upset me so much?”

“Because I hurt someone else in the process…?” Miki tried. She wasn’t so sure about anything anymore. She didn’t understand Aya’s reactions that day… she couldn’t grasp why Aya seemed so hurt.

“Baka.”

“Sorry.”

Miki looked down at her feet. She felt like a little kid getting scolded.

“Do you know how much I love you?”

“But I don’t deserve it.”

“Listen to me – I love you.”

Realisation dawned on Miki’s eyes. She felt a million emotions at once. Anger, because Aya deserved so much more. Happiness, because Aya felt exactly how Miki felt. Fear, because she didn’t know what would happen after this. She came to one final conclusion, finally finding her voice.

“But I can’t be trusted,” Miki barely whispered.

The two girls that shared a uniquely robust bond stared each other down for what seemed like eternity, neither willing to show emotion or thought to the other.

“You can learn to be trustworthy... you were halfway there until recently…” Aya quietly said, breaking the stillness in the air.

“But Aya-chan…” Miki pleaded. She wasn’t really sure what she was pleading about… Miki just couldn’t wrap her head around Aya being so calm and rational through out the entire conversation.

“And… I could learn to trust you…”



*****



“Whatever happens, I’ll still be your best friend!”

“Really?”

“Yep!”

“Do you mean it?”

“Of course I mean it, silly!”



Ai snapped out of her flashback, remembering when she had to call off a day out with Risa because her mother suddenly decided that they needed some “family time” together. That was when they had only been apart of Morning Musume for a mere five months. She remembered how angry and upset Risa had been. They didn’t talk to each other for an entire week. When it all finally blew over, Risa had told her those words.

“I’ll still be your best friend!”

Ai smiled to herself. How could she have been so afraid of losing her best friend when Risa had made that promise with her entire heart? How could she have forgotten about it?

She gazed down at the peacefully sleeping form that lay in her bed. Risa had been exhausted from their intense dance rehearsal, promptly falling asleep upon returning to Ai’s apartment. As the Leader watched Risa, she was filled with warmth. She reached over to brush all the stray hair away from Risa’s face, smiling at how Risa’s brow slightly furrowed at the contact.

Eventually Risa stirred and awoke from her sleep.

“Hey there, sleepy head.”

“Mmph?... Sorry for falling asleep!” Risa immediately became alert due to realizing her situation. Ai could only smile in return at the younger girl’s immediate panic.

“It’s okay. You looked cute when you were sleeping,” Ai said, the words slipping out before she could stop them. Both girls blushed. Ai, gathering her courage moved from her chair and sat closely beside Risa on the bed. Risa couldn’t help but smile fondly at Ai’s impulsive newly found bravery and immediately snuggled her head onto the older girl’s lap.

“You know… you don’t have to wait until you’re asleep to do things like this…” Risa gently told Ai, gazing encouragingly into the Leader’s eyes. The young woman said nothing… to be more accurate, she wasn’t sure how to respond, a troubled look appearing on her features. After a moment Risa sat up and wrapped her arms around Ai’s waist.

“Gaki-san…” Ai breathed, her head swimming with a sort of pleasant dizziness. Risa lay her head on Ai’s shoulder, comfortably leaning her body against Ai’s.

“Ai-chan, you remember, don’t you?”

“Remember what?”

Risa raised her head so that she could look Ai in the eyes. She peered curiously, wondering if Ai still remembered the first time they fought… the first time that Risa had declared herself to eternal “best-friendship” with her beloved Ai-chan.

“Whatever happens, I’ll still be your best friend.”

That was all the encouragement that Ai needed. She knew that she didn’t have to be afraid of showing her affection towards Risa. She wanted with her entire being to be connected in every possible sense to the younger, bubbly girl. A smile full of affection found its way to Ai’s lips, as her eyes glistened with relief. Risa immediately understood and she leaned forward.

As Risa gently claimed the moment, the feeling, that she had been waiting for, she felt her heart dance with indescribable ecstasy as Ai met her perfectly halfway, completing their first real moment of intimacy together.

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #98 on: May 27, 2008, 03:59:23 PM »
Ahhhhhhhh!!! Ai-chan finally gave in and accepted Gaki!  :wub: :wub:  :heart: :heart:
Oh, we don't mind all the extra TakaGaki at all, please write more :D XD :P
Love your fic goosefish! :muffin:

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Re: Ramblings of a goosefish
« Reply #99 on: May 27, 2008, 06:53:44 PM »
Yay. Ai's overcoming her fear.

The more TakaGaki the better I say. I :heart: them two

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