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An Intentional Mistake: Ch 6
« on: May 29, 2007, 11:55:00 PM »
Ah, new chapter fic. Wonder where this one's going...?

An Intentional Mistake


"Delivery for a Ms. Takahashi Ai!" Pausing, the delivery man rubbed his brow and knocked on the door. "Ms. Takahashi? Package for you."

Underneath five layers of blankets, Ai grudgingly pushed her body up and stumbled sleepily towards her front door. "Coming..." she murmured, before tripping over her living room sofa. Miraculously enough, her flailing hands managed to grab her apartment door handle and swing it back to reveal a startled man. "Erm...sorry, I..."

"It's alright," he assured her. "Here," he handed her the package: "...and sign here," he tapped the clipboard and the offered pen scribbled across the page. Bowing, the delivery man wished her a good morning and left Ai with the package.

Simple in its packaging, the parcel held only Ai's address with no apparent return address. Takahashi eyed it suspiciously. Who had sent it to her without a return address? Ai shrugged and put it on her sofa while she set breakfast for herself. She liked to savour things.

While munching on her toast, Takahashi flipped through a magazine, all the while excited over the mystery parcel. After rinsing her dishes, she strode over and sat down on her sofa, package in hand. With deliberate stiffness, her right hand slowly unwound the string around the clasp. The envelope lip opened and Ai poured out the contents on her lap. With a simple shake, dozens of photos flew out of the parcel and all across her floor.

"What..?" She randomly picked up a fallen picture to inspect. Kamei. She blinked. Kamei-chan clad in the green hakkan costume straddling a half-naked Risa. Ai's hand jolted and the photo fell unto her lap. Blink.

Gingerly, she reached for another photo. Turned it right side up. This one depicted Risa stripping Eri and licking her stomach...Ai threw the photo from her. She didn't know what to think.

Inhale, exhale...


Takahashi looked about the ground; there must have been at least thirty photos. All with...her jaw tightened and she could feel her ears getting hot.

Why send these photos to me? Blackmail?...But it's not like I'm in any of those photos...
Again, anger swelled inside of Ai but she knew it wasn't because she was angry that someone might be blackmailing her best friend. It pulsated inside of her and she felt her fists clench. Jealously beat inside her veins and infected her blood.

Of course she wouldn't be in any of those photos. Ai's brows knit together as she bit her lip. I've never...with Risa...A single tear rolled down her reddened cheek. She caught it and rubbed furiously at her eyes and cheeks, succeeding only in making them redder and more swollen. Takahashi hated feeling so helpless and betrayed. Even if we're only friends...She didn't know where her mindset was heading. Ai just couldn't accept that Risa had hid this from her, nor could she willingly give her best friend to anyone, even if it was Eri-chan. Again that toxic pulse beat within her veins...

"BRRRRRRING!! "

Startled out of her deep contemplation, Ai whipped her head up at the sound. "BRRRING!" She sprung up and answered her home phone. Thank God for the distraction...

"Takahashi! Where are you?! Usually I'm the one who's late to work..." Miki.

"Sorry, I'm on my way," Ai bowed apologetically, telephone still at her ear. "I was just...distracted."

"Oh...?" Miki purred, coaxing for more information from Ai.

"It's nothing. I'm on my way. Good bye," Ai mumbled, slightly annoyed by Fujimoto's prying in the morning. On the other end, she could hear Miki scoff loudly.

"...Fine. Just get here. *click*" Once the telephone was set back in place, Ai slumped back down on the sofa and stared at the scandalous photos still sprawled across her living room floor. She didn't, couldn't go back to work, knowing that she'd see both Eri and Risa and think only of what they did behind closed doors...and out doors...and anywhere they could do anything, she bet. It made her chest hurt just thinking about it.

She surveyed her living room once again to clear her head. From the corner of her eye, she saw a small piece of paper peeking out of the parcel. Automatically, her hands reached out for it and pulled the folded note from its taped position within the envelope. Pausing to gather her senses, Ai carefully unfolded the paper to read the message:

    Dear Ai,
               I hope these photos have been taken to your liking. How's it like to see your
         object of affection abandoning you? She has something of mine that I'd like for
         you to return. Meet me on top of the H!P dorm roof at midnight on Thursday. If
         you're late I'll forward these pictures to people who are just dying to see them.
             Signed,
            Your Neighbourhood Watch.


Ai crumpled the note. Today is Thursday.



To be continued!


And that concludes Chapter 1! What do you folks think?  XD
« Last Edit: July 31, 2007, 02:39:53 AM by orangesocks »

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2007, 01:15:30 AM »
This... is scary. T___T

Poor Ai, I love the GakiKame duo but I can't take them together! :(

You've hooked me.  I need an update, now.  :tama-mad:

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2007, 01:31:39 AM »
ahh poor ai-chan...but you're going to make it all better right?? must...wait...for...NEXT CHAPTER!!!o and :heart: the story so far..

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2007, 01:54:52 AM »
Eri and Risa!  :sweat: I think Ai chan wouldn't be the only one rolling if the news of the pair breaks out!  :temper: Jealous Ai chan is always really funny to imagine  :angry:  It fits so well XD  Risa must have really ticked off someone...perhaps even one of the members?  Must...wait...also  :heart:

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2007, 02:01:42 AM »
Oh, interesting! And, Your Neighbourhood Watch? I have an idea as to who this person can be...  :hehehe:

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #5 on: May 30, 2007, 02:32:40 AM »
Whee! More please!

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #6 on: May 30, 2007, 03:50:30 AM »
Love Triangle?! I say, Love threesomes :)

Interesting, blackmaili is pretty daring, especially if it's another band mate. Heh, I wonder what Risa will say! Write more~

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #7 on: May 30, 2007, 03:54:12 AM »
YAY! Your writing more stuff.
Mikan happy.
Yes, I would like more. For a first chapter it doesnt completely interest me in the way some stories have (by grabbing me with some thrilling, sexy plot) but your writing style is so enjoyable I want more.

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #8 on: May 30, 2007, 05:37:33 AM »
hmm... interesting, using Ai-chan to blackmail GakiKame huh...
wonder what'll happen next~

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Re: An Intentional Mistake
« Reply #9 on: May 30, 2007, 07:43:53 AM »
YAY! Your writing more stuff.
Mikan happy.
Yes, I would like more. For a first chapter it doesnt completely interest me in the way some stories have (by grabbing me with some thrilling, sexy plot) but your writing style is so enjoyable I want more.

Oh c'mon. It had nude pictures! And blackmail! and crying!  How much sexier do you want it to be?

Well I guess the socks man(woman?) could have included an explosion or something. But thats probably asking for too much.

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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #10 on: May 31, 2007, 12:40:27 AM »
Ah, comments first:

This... is scary. T___T

Poor Ai, I love the GakiKame duo but I can't take them together! :(

You've hooked me.  I need an update, now.  :tama-mad:
Hah, It is a little scary if you think about it. But you know Ai-chan! She will overcome! I rather like the GakiKame duo myself. :) They're so funny together.


ahh poor ai-chan...but you're going to make it all better right?? must...wait...for...NEXT CHAPTER!!!o and :heart: the story so far..
Yes! Ai-chan won't be sad forever. Glad you're liking it.


Eri and Risa!  :sweat: I think Ai chan wouldn't be the only one rolling if the news of the pair breaks out!  :temper: Jealous Ai chan is always really funny to imagine  :angry:  It fits so well XD  Risa must have really ticked off someone...perhaps even one of the members?  Must...wait...also  :heart:
Why battle GakiKame? You know they're good together!  :twisted: (come to the dark side!) Who's blackmailing Risa indeed...


Oh, interesting! And, Your Neighbourhood Watch? I have an idea as to who this person can be...  :hehehe:
heh... :hehehe: back at you.


Whee! More please!
Here it is!  :on lol:


Love Triangle?! I say, Love threesomes :)

Interesting, blackmaili is pretty daring, especially if it's another band mate. Heh, I wonder what Risa will say! Write more~

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Ah yes, a threesome would be nice... :heart:


YAY! Your writing more stuff.
Mikan happy.
Yes, I would like more. For a first chapter it doesnt completely interest me in the way some stories have (by grabbing me with some thrilling, sexy plot) but your writing style is so enjoyable I want more.
Yeah, it's a bit rushed. Sorry about that.  :shy1: And I'd loved to have put more sexiness into it, but I'm saving it, you see!  :kekeke: Your patience shall be rewarded.


YAY! Your writing more stuff.
Mikan happy.
Yes, I would like more. For a first chapter it doesnt completely interest me in the way some stories have (by grabbing me with some thrilling, sexy plot) but your writing style is so enjoyable I want more.

Oh c'mon. It had nude pictures! And blackmail! and crying!  How much sexier do you want it to be?

Well I guess the socks man(woman?) could have included an explosion or something. But thats probably asking for too much.
Haha, thanks, Iacus. Not sure how sexy crying is, though.  XD


And on to the next chapter...
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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #11 on: May 31, 2007, 12:50:16 AM »
Chapter 2


"E-ric~!" Sayu hung tightly onto Eri's left hand as the other hand was currently occupied.

"Good morning, Sayu," Risa greeted, her hand firmly attached to Kamei's.

"Morning~..." replied Sayu, her eyes lingering on Risa and Eri's adjoined hands. It was times like these when she wished she had laser vision so that she could split the two and keep Eric to herself. "Suspicious..." she whispered --rather loudly--to herself. She turned to face Eri when she felt the other seize up at the word.

"What is?" Eri blurted out, her eyes wide. Risa looked curiously over at the two.

"Eheh, nothing!" Sayumi giggled; she couldn't help but notice how Gaki-san's grip tightened on Eri's clammy hand. "Mm, Gaki-san~!" Sayu pouted, intensifying her own grip on Eri's other hand. "This Eric's mine!"

"Oh?" Risa smiled. "I can't borrow him?"

"Eh?!" Eri turned her attention to Niigaki. "Him? I'm a girl--no--a woman!" She shot a cute glare at Risa, who responded only by laughing.

The three continued to squabble playfully until Takahashi rushed in through the double doors, her face red and puffy from a blatant bout of tears.

"Ai-chan?" Risa pulled loose from Eri clutch as she rushed over to her best friend. "Ai-chan? What's wrong?"


*******


Takahashi could feel but she couldn't. It was a strange dilemma. The last thing she remembered was staring at the crumpled note, and then she was here, her face being stroked by the one person who'd unintentionally put her in such an uncomfortable state. And now Risa was killing her with kindness. Ai felt queasy.

"I'm fine," she muttered, brushed Risa's hand away and proceeded to rush off to the changing rooms.

Already her day was terrible and it wasn't even 9 AM. With her fuzzy ears in place and her faux animal tail backpack firmly strapped on, she left the changing rooms to meet up with the other members. Was it one of them who was blackmailing her? She couldn't wait till midnight.


*******


"Ai!" Takahashi whipped her head around. "Why were you so late? You're sub-leader now, so act like it." Miki tapped her foot impatiently while the other members loaded into the van, costumes and all.

"Sorry," Ai mumbled, and took her seat in the middle row next to Tanaka.

"Mornin'," Reina smiled, turning her wonky eyes toward Ai. "Got some extra sleep, huh?"

"Yeah..." Immediately, Reina sensed her senior's dejected aura.

"We'll get through taping this episode!" With one arm around Ai, Reina pumped her other fist in the air and hit the van ceiling. "Ow ow ow ow ow...!" Ai smiled at Tanaka's bumbling attempt at cheering her up. You have to treasure those small comforts, she thought while rubbing Reina's hurt knuckles.

"And we're off to film another exciting episode," Miki said sarcastically.

"Yay!" the van cheered.


******


How long had she been unaware of the two? Ai watched Eri and Miki chatting mindlessly away while Gaki-san walked alongside her, smiling at the two.

"Oi! Ai-chin!" Aka-chan yelled. Takahashi looked down at the carriage. "What's wrong? Are you sleepy?"

"Uhm.." Now was not a good time for her to be questioned. Her mind went blank. Panicking, she looked around at her fellow members, whom in turn looked right back at her, waiting for her to answer. "Uh..."

"Ai-chan hasn't been feeling well, huh, Ai-chan?" Risa smiled at her friend and linked their arms together. All Takahashi could do was nod. She wanted to shout with joy at the physical contact. Turning to face the camera, Ai gave a slight smile and continued to push the baby carriage. Maybe filming today wouldn't be so bad.

The pair walked on, unaware of the watchful person behind them.

*click*


******

After filming:


The rabbit girl pulled insistently on Eri's arm. "Come on, Eric! Come eat sweets with me in my room!" In front of the pair, Niigaki slipped into her own room and shut the door. Eri's eyes lingered on Risa's door for a moment before being shaken out of her reverie by her persistent friend. "We never do anything anymore! Eriiiic!" One more shake and Kamei knew her head would bob right off her shoulders.

"Ah, Sayu, I'm sleepy..." Eri yawned unconvincingly: "...um, later..? Maybe...?" The last bit came out as a squeak when her eyes met Michishige's.

"Iyaan! Eric's blowing me off~!" cried Sayu.

"No, that's not-"

"You've hurt my pure maiden heart!"

"Whu-?!" The turtle gaped at the rabbit.

"Fine! I'll take Kirari and Mitsui-chan instead!" The rabbit raced ahead, grabbed her two juniors, then sped off to her room and shut the door, leaving a confused Kamei in her wake.

Shortly after, Risa poked her head out of her room. "Coast clear?" she whispered cautiously to Eri.

"Clear as glass," she winked, and pulled Risa into her room.


*******


"You know, I'm sure lucky to have you..." Eri mumbled. The couple laid on Eri's bed with the dorm room door locked. "If it was someone else, I'd probably have been kicked out of Morning Musume along with whoever I was with...I would have slipped up and said something stupid..."

"Well, don't you feel privileged," joked Risa as she brushed the stray locks obscuring Kamei's face. "And anyway you're not stupid. Maybe just a little slow..." Eri huffed at the intentional turtle joke. "E-ri-rin," the other chided, pulling on Kamei's nose. "Little mistakes every once in a while don't hurt, so you don't need to beat yourself up over them, ok?"

"Mm," Eri nodded, her pout still in place. She pulled the blankets up over them. "Tired?"

"Yeah, getting to your bed was a chore," Risa chuckled. No doubt about it, Kamei's messy room was a death trap.

"Goodnight."

"Eeeeh?! Eri-chan~!" Risa shook Eri till the other reopened her eyes.

" I need my nap~" Eri whined, shining her large puppy eyes at Gaki-san. "Please?" It was a losing battle to fight the charm of Kamei's adorableness. Risa grudgingly nodded and pulled Eri into a tight embrace. Smiling, Kamei kissed her lover's forehead and drifted quietly off to sleep.


******


Takahashi slumped haphazardly across her dorm bed. Though she was tired, she couldn't sleep since every time she closed her eyes her mind filled with dirty thoughts of what the "secret" couple across the hall were probably doing. I wonder how they'd react if they knew their secret was out?

She craned her neck slightly to look at the clock. 5:24 PM.

******

Risa's fingers brushed over Eri's soft features. Her pouty cheeks, soft black hair. They weren't at all like her's. Niigaki closed her eyes and trailed her fingers through Kamei's hair, now a wavy chestnut brown; cheeks no longer pouty but sharp and smooth; her face now adorned with two large, warm, deer eyes. And her lips...

"Gaki-san?" Eri awoke to find Risa's fingers pressing down on her pale lips. "What are you doing?" Rubbing her sleepy eyes, she cocked her head up to better focus on her lover.

"Uwuh!" Startled, Risa looked guiltily up at Eri's curious face. "N-nothing!"

"Mmm...?" Eri prodded slightly. "You look a bit sad." She immediately frowned to match Risa. "Like this."

"No way! I don't look like that when I frown..!" Propping her head on her hand, Risa stuck her tongue out at Eri. "Bleh!" In turn, Eri tickled Risa until the two were tangled in the sheets, sweaty and totally aware of their close proximity. As their laughter died down, Niigaki turned her half-lidded gaze to Kamei's slightly parted lips.



To Be Continued!

Hummm...I'm surprised at the length of this chapter. It's the longest chapter/story I've written! Anyways...

[EDIT:] ack. I fixed a typo.
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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #12 on: May 31, 2007, 01:08:59 AM »
DIBS!


ETA: Ah, finally I get to do that! ^

I'm glad you're continuing this so soon. It seems interesting, especially after the last part of Eri-Risa interaction. She's settling for the second best, right?  :oops:

Oh, and if you don't pull a trick out of nowhere, I think I'm right about my suspicions on the blackmailer.  :twisted:
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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #13 on: May 31, 2007, 01:19:19 AM »
Haha, I can totally imagine Koharu and Mitsi minding their own business and Sayumi sweeping down on them and dragging the two to her room. XD

I'm glad your a fast updater, and this is so confusing for such a TakaGaki lover!  I normally don't read stuff that isn't either TakaGaki or Rokkie love! D:

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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #14 on: May 31, 2007, 01:56:17 AM »
Ack....I'm hooked....So much suspense and Ai still hasn't even met up with the Watch yet. But then there's GakiKame and that makes me happy, but then there's the situation Ai and Sayu are in and that makes me sorta :cry: Really lookin forward to the next update which I hope will be as quick as this one. But luckily, it's not all angsty suspense. Humor makes the world go round...and updates, but you're doin a good job of both so I'm happy.

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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #15 on: May 31, 2007, 05:27:12 AM »
If only this were true, KameMame being a couple and for once it's Ai pining for Risa and not the other way round.

Gotta feel a little for Sayumi being left out, but she could always hook up with Reina instead XD

I like all of the interaction parts between Eri and Risa. It's sweet and cute at the same time.

Risa's fingers brushed over Eri's soft features. Her pouty cheeks, soft black hair. They weren't at all like her's. Niigaki closed her eyes and trailed her fingers through Kamei's hair, now a wavy chestnut brown; cheeks no longer pouty but sharp and smooth; her face now adorned with two large, warm, deer eyes. And her lips...

When I was reading this, the image of Eri in my mind suddenly turned into Ai!!! Don't tell me....*gasp* Risa's taking Eri as a substitue!! Oh gawd so many thoughts are running in my head right now. I need to read more *pleads* More chapters please.

Oh and kiss, kiss, KISS!!!! They are gonna kiss aren't they? :P
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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #16 on: May 31, 2007, 11:18:25 AM »
I don't know... but I think this is the first fic I read with soooooooooo much GakiKame goodness in it.. But while reading, there was a pretty weird.. feeling? Cuz all this while it was always SayuEri or TakaGaki, I guess I kinda got used to this 2 pairing so maybe thats why..

Not saying it's bad ok! I love GakiKame! So you better write more GakiKame for us to read!!

Risa's fingers brushed over Eri's soft features. Her pouty cheeks, soft black hair. They weren't at all like her's.
Who's the her? Something tells me Risa is not refering to herself...

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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #17 on: May 31, 2007, 06:16:58 PM »
Poor, poor Ai. I'm not ready to make guesses on the plot yet.

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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 2 up.
« Reply #18 on: June 09, 2007, 04:01:10 AM »
Whoo, this took a while to write, so of course, here's TWO CHAPTERS instead of one! And I promise, there will be some TaGaki and KameShige. Please  bear with me.  :)

WARNING: Bits of it are slightly graphic, so, watch out!


Chapter 3

--continued right after Chapter 2--



"My batteries are charged." Eri pronounced, pinning Risa on the bed. Kamei winked at Niigaki. Nobody could cut sexual tension like Kamei Eri.

Laughing, Risa's attention refocused once again on Eri's brown eyes peering inquisitively down at her. Different. Yes. This is Kamei Eri, she thought and smiled. Her Kame-chan. She was here, now; her adorably awkward turtle.

All other thoughts vanished as she pulled Eri in for a kiss. Their mouths connected instantly. In an urgent and perhaps even slightly desperate move, Risa wrapped her arms tightly around Eri's back and deepened the kiss. She needed what Eri was more than willing to give her, and she couldn't help but hate herself a little for it. But no matter now.

She giggled into Eri's mouth when she felt the other nibbling her lips.

"Hungry?"

"I was trying to be sensual..." Eri huffed, unbuttoning Risa's thin shirt. Half-way through she got fed up and simply pulled the shirt over and off of Risa.

"Impatien-?" Niigaki's retort was silenced by Eri's cool touch mapping out her taut body.  Kamei's hands knew all the familiar roads down to the best spots. Illiciting a small gasp, Risa bit her knuckles as Kamei kissed her way down.


******


"uu don wan any?" Koharu called to Sayumi, her mouth currently crammed with cake.

"It's really good!" Mitsui giggled, dabbing a bit of cream on Kusumi's nose. The two giggled and fussed over the feast of sweets set out in Sayu's room. "Michishige-san...?" Sayumi shook her head and shifted on her bed so that she faced the wall.

Aika and Koharu shared a knowing glance. Their senior was not to be disturbed, but they were obligated as friends to stay and keep her company. It was unpleasant knowing that they couldn't help ease Michishige's unhappiness, but anything they could do for her they would.

However, unbeknownst to the young pair, their presence was totally overlooked by Michishige at the moment. With her back facing her juniors, Sayumi laid perfectly still, her mind focused on only one thing.

"Eric..." her hands clutched at her aching chest as she drifted off into a dreamless slumber.


******


Good God she was tired. Ai laid on her bed, opening and closing her eyes. Open. Nothing. Close. Kamei sucking on Risa's smooth, unblemished neck. Open. Nothing. Close. Risa gasping and pushing Kamei's head to her chest and crying out "Er--Open. Nothing. Close. Eri licking the sweat droplets from around one of Risa's pert--Open. Nothing.

"I'm so tired..." Takahashi groaned, covering her opened eyes with the palm of her hand.

*KNOCK* *KNOCK*

Ai uncovered her eyes.

"Delivery for Takahashi Ai," came a low, feminine voice at her door. No one comes into the dorms to deliver packages. They leave it at the front desk, she thought. Ai sat up on her bed and stared at the closed door. If a killer were to come in, there would be nowhere for me to escape. Takahashi was on the 3rd floor with no balcony. Her hands gripped tightly onto her bed spread. She couldn't help but jump to conclusions, especially since this day had been so screwed up and surreal already. Who's to say that she couldn't possibly get murdered as well? Yet the door handle did not turn and so no one entered. Instead, a small envelope was pushed under the door. "See you tonight," came the voice again.

Ai jumped to her feet, rushed over and swung the door open. But by then, the person was gone. Only the envelope remained as evidence that she wasn't a figment of Ai's imagination. That voice sounded familiar...Ai contemplated, but couldn't place where she'd heard it before.

Deeming the matter pointless to dwell over at the moment, she shifted her focus back on the small, beige envelope. With her heart pounding in her throat, Ai steadied her nervous hand enough to unwind the twine around the clasp. Timidly, she reached her hand and and drew out a single photo.

Two linked arms. She recognized the sleeve of her shirt that she'd worn for the taping earlier in the day. The other arm was obviously Gaki-san's. Takahashi flipped the photo over. 'Nostalgic isn't it? Don't forget. Midnight,' said the note written on the back.

Ai tore the photo in two. Who was doing this?

She couldn't stay here. The photo, and everything it entailed...it was like a poison--one that poisoned her against Kamei Eri. It had reminded her of what she'd lost to Kame-chan. Ai felt repulsed of herself at the thought. After hurriedly slipping on a thin jacket, Ai grabbed her purse and left the dorms, taking care to look at the large clock by the frontdesk.

8:35 P.M.

*

Unconsciously, she had meandered over to a nearby bar. Ai didn't care much for alcohol, but she didn't want to stray too far from the H!P dorms either.

"Hello..." Ai called out as she entered the bar. Taking a moment to survey the place, Takahashi noted that atmosphere was rather low-key and the few patrons were mainly tired-looking businessmen calmly nursing their drinks. Immediately she felt a burden loosening from her shoulders.

"Hello!" the bartender greeted back. "Take a seat." Nodding her thanks, Ai quietly slipped onto a barstool and hung her head low as if to avoid detection.

"Ai-chan?" spoke a familiar voice. Takahashi immediately turned to face the speaker, and was wholly unsurprised at who it was.

"Nakazawa-san..."

"What are you doing here?"

"Same to you," Ai retorted, avoiding the question.

"Off work," came the nonchalant reply. "Come have a seat by me!" Yuko offered genially, patting the spot next to her. "Since when do you come to bars by yourself?" Ai shook her head, her mouth clamped shut. Taking the hint, Nakazawa nodded understandingly and poured Ai a cup of warm sake. "Calms the nerves."

Ai drank it in a gulp and slammed the glass on the bar counter, startling a few patrons. "Another," she demanded.

Yuko obliged and poured her another, then poured one for herself. It was always more fun to get smashed with another person anyway.


******


Eri was once again asleep, except this time they were both naked under the bedsheets. But when Kamei was off dreaming, Risa was left to her own thoughts. Clinging to Eri's slack, sleeping form, Niigaki wished desperately to believe that this was what she wanted. After all, what good was it to abandon all that she had to pursue something uncertain? I'm content. I'm happy because Eri makes me so...but it wasn't the kind of happiness she was looking for and she knew it.

Looking at Eri's face, Risa repeated the mantra inwardly. I'm content. I'm happy. She wiped the trail of drool from the corner of Eri's mouth. In turn, the sleeping Eri brushed her head against Risa's hand and smacked her lips.

Risa placed a gentle kiss on Eri's pink lips and settled back under the sheets. If she closed her eyes, she knew she'd only think of her, and so she remained with her eyes open and stared up at the white ceiling.

"Gak.i..sa...n..." Risa turned her head. As usual, Kame-chan was sleep-talking. So cute, she thought to herself.

"What is it, Kame-chan?" she soothed, softly rubbing Eri's cheek.

"...Do you know who ate my cheese...?" Risa smiled warmly at Eri.

"Ah...I thought you shared it with Koharu-chan yesterday?"

"Oh yeah...thath...righ..." Eri mumbled.

It killed Risa to do this to Eri. She wasn't worthy to be here, lying next to such sweet and gentle girl. And to do this to a close friend...I'm the worst... What one's loneliness was capable of achieving--it frightened Risa.

Shutting her eyes tightly, Risa recited her mantra quietly, pleadingly, "I'm content...I'm happy..."


*******


"Damn...they died down..." Miki whispered disappointedly.

"Miki, get your ear away from the wall," Ayaya warned. "What if they found out that you were listening in on them?"

"Oh please," Miki scoffed. Fujimoto Miki was not afraid of being caught. It's the people who catch her who have anything to fear. "Man Aya-chan, they were wild an hour ago!" Miki whispered loudly, leering at her best friend from her place against the wall. "All 'ah!' and 'oh!'" Ah, the perks of having one's room next to Kamei's, Miki smirked.

"MIKI!" Ayaya shouted angrily. Ayaya pulled her other ear and dragged an unhappy Miki from her dorm room.

"Owowowow!!!"


******


It was bed time. Koharu and Mitsui looked from the bed-side clock to their sempai. They had to get up early the next day to film their Chinese segment.

"Michishige-san..." Koharu nudged the sleeping girl.

"Mmm...Kirari-chan...?"

"It's already 11, so Aika and I are going to bed now. Goodnight!"

"Okay...goodnight," Sayumi murmured, waving at the pair as they exited her room.

After the two left, Sayumi got up and stretched her sore muscles. Sleeping in a ball left her with knotted muscles all over. "Oof..." she groaned, and fell back on her bed. But she couldn't go back to sleep yet.


******


"And...so...*hic* so I said...'Who's yo Mama, bi--otch...?!'"

"HaHAHahHAhA!" Ai screeched.

"Kei don't mess with me," Yuko proclaimed loudly while swinging a large bottle of sake every-which-way.

"Ladies," the bartender interrupted timidly. After hearing Yuko's story of how she nearly blew her friend's home to bits, he wasn't quite sure how to approach the pair. "Ladies, it's nearly twelve. Time to close shop, I'm afraid."

"WHAH?! WHAH YOU SAY TO ME?!" Yuko slurred.

"Whu, I-"

"YOU CALLIN' ME OLD?!"

"No, miss, I sa--Whoa--Wait--! Watch where you swing that bottle-!"

Ai sat laughing at the two, not noticing that she was slipping off the barstool. "Oof!"

"AI-CHAN. ARE YOU OK?" Yuko shouted.

"Ugh...yeah..." rubbing her head, Ai looked at her watch. 11:48. She scrambled to her feet, her head clearing slightly. Slamming some cash down, Takahashi dashed from the bar back to the dorms. Her legs felt weak and her vision was disoriented, but she pushed on, thinking only of the consequences of her tardiness. Both Kamei and Gaki-san would be ruined...

*

Fishing out her ID card, Ai swiped it through the checkpoint and dashed into the dorm building. She glanced at the large clock by the frontdesk as she ran for the stairs.

11:56.

Takahashi dashed up the several flights of stairs to the roof, adrenaline pumping in her veins. If I don't get there in time...she shook her head. There wasn't time to contemplate the consequences now. Level 2...3...she was sprinting now that strength was returning to her legs. Gaki-san!

She pulled open the heavy metal door and was hit by a strong gust of cool air. Shivering slightly, Takahashi haphazardly wiped the sweat from her brow and walked out onto the roof.


******


Miki.

Sayumi.

...And Reina.

...

...Pardon?


******





Chapter 5 & answers to comments below:
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Re: An Intentional Mistake: ch 3 + 4 up
« Reply #19 on: June 09, 2007, 04:13:26 AM »
Continuation:

Chapter 4


"Is being late your new habit?" Miki smirked, holding a large stack of photos. "Good grief, you reek of alcohol," she laughed, playfully swatting the air around her nose. "And just imagine, I was just about to throw these off the roof. But you had to come and ruin my fun! Oh Ai-chan, it's not looking good for you...or for those two." As if to prove her point Fujimoto dangled a small portion of the stack over the ledge.

Sayumi glanced worriedly at Miki's reckless action which didn't go unnoticed by Ai. However, she decided not to pursue it. It was obvious enough what Shige-san was afraid of. Then why..? Takahashi wondered. She edged closer to the trio, suspicious of anything they might be trying to pull.

It was Reina who approached her first. "Ah, sorry. I guess we should introduce ourselves, huh?" she apologized casually. "We're the Neighbourhood Watch. Nice to meet you," she shook Ai's hand. Blackmailer or not, Tanakacchi's friendly regardless of the situation, Ai thought, dazed by the friendly greeting.

"Are you sure there isn't another one of you hiding in the rain barrel or something?" Ai asked, perfectly serious. She had been positive that Neighbourhood Watch had been one person...But three?

Miki chuckled to herself, then focused her intense smokey eyes on Ai's.

*

"Well, shall we get down to business..?" Miki drawled, slowly circling Takahashi. Tell me, do you know what Niigaki has that I don't?"

"Innocence?"

"Don't give me that crap. The walls of the dorms are pretty thin when you press your ears against them," Miki countered, leering at Ai. The other shifted uncomfortably under Miki's knowing gaze. They both knew exactly what Miki was talking about, but seeing as Ai really didn't have a clue as to what Risa had that Miki wanted, Miki graciously chose to help her out. "You make it harder than it is," Miki exclaimed, rather exasperated: "...she has you."

"..."

"Be mine for a month and I'll give you the memory cards with the photos. That's it," Miki  stated matter-of-factly. "Your body, your mind, devoted to me for a whole month."

Takahashi was wholly taken aback at the demand. "And what makes you think I'll do that?" she fought back, furious at the proposition.

"Because I know you won't refuse." Miki laughed. "Why you want to protect them I haven't a clue, especially since they've been screwing around behind your back for months," Miki emphasized. Again Ai noticed Sayumi flinching. What was she doing here?

"Why? Why are you doing this, Miki?" Ai seethed, wiping the sweat from her red face.

"Why not?" Miki answered playfully. After making a full revolution around Ai, Miki leaned in close to her ear. "Well, Ai-chan, what's your answer?"


TO BE CONTINUED!







Armaghetta:
Correct on point one, and I wonder, was this what you had in mind?

Brat-san: Sorry it took a while for me to come up with these two chapters. I hope you enjoyed 'em!

C60533: Ah, I know what you mean about the angst. Sorry about that. But there's gotta be some bad for there to be good.

lil_hamz: Spot on. Glad you caught onto that. XD Now you know who Risa's referring to!

stefy:
  :lol: Here's more GakiKame for you to read. I know what you mean about it feeling weird. It feels weird writing it! But I rather like them, despite being a TaGaki and KameShige fan myself.

rndmnwierd: Guesses now?  :)
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