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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #460 on: December 02, 2009, 07:44:55 AM »
Awwwwww....

Sweet yet sad.... but who was Ai-chan waiting for?! :o *gasp* Gaki?!?!?!?!

*watches the Reinai/Takagaki battle continue*

And this is not fluff!! >:|

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #461 on: December 02, 2009, 08:12:15 AM »
About a quarter into the story I had to ask myself if Ai was dead. And then I was surprised when she was!

Who was she waiting for? Miki, perhaps? Or Yossui?

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #462 on: December 02, 2009, 08:57:23 AM »
I was actually surprised that she was dead, I mean I had a gut feeling but it didn't become obvious until the next couple time she kept meeting with her.

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #463 on: December 02, 2009, 05:26:31 PM »
I knew she was a ghost :fainted: I wonder for whom she waited...Gaki? or maybe her sister?

Anyway, poor Reina to fall in love in a ghost :cry: Yet it still was sweet and cute :heart:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #464 on: December 02, 2009, 05:45:29 PM »
It's really bad to read comments first  :grin: Was Ai waiting for Risa?  :w00t:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #465 on: December 03, 2009, 12:36:41 AM »
OH MY GOD! POOR AI-CHAN! :on polter:
and reina (i_i)
i have a feeling that ai-chan was waiting for risa(i_i) :mon cry:
and i agree with Fenrir ....
THIS ISNT FLUFF! GIMME FLUFF THAT INVOLVES TAKAGAKI PLEASE!!! XD
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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #466 on: December 03, 2009, 01:32:08 AM »
That was such a great read. :heart: It made me a bit teary-eyed as well. Poor Reina... Poor Aichan... :gyaaah:

I seriously wasn't expecting Aichan to be a ghost, so the revelation bit was pretty shocking for me. I know I should've picked up on the clues along the way, but it wasn't until the second reading that I actually noticed them. I know, I'm a turtle, lol.

And I'm also wondering just who Aichan was waiting for. I've a feeling that, whoever it was, stood her up and never returned her feelings, which may be why her spirit never got laid to rest. Then Reina came along...

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #467 on: December 03, 2009, 01:53:48 AM »
Wow, that was unexpected. I actually didn't pick up on Ai-chan being a ghost (my imagination doesn't stretch that far...) but on my second read I guess I saw signs alluding to that shocking revelation.

It's a habit of mine to scroll down and know the ending in advance and scroll back up and read thing whole thing through for stories featuring my favourite pairings, and when I read Ai-chan's message to Reina I thought Ai-chan had died or had chosen someone else over Reina but was aware of Reina's feelings and wanted her to be happy. I wasn't reading properly because I didn't see the 'I can move on now' bit  :nervous
I felt really sad the most about Ai-chan waiting for that someone who never came for her, and how her face lit up everytime Reina approached her but immediately became crestfallen that it was someone else. Was that person indirectly responsible for her accident? Because she was waiting and waiting and couldn't get out in time? I'm also kinda curious who it was Ai-chan was waiting for. Not that it matters much I guess, as she finally moved on. Ghost Ai and human Reina made an interesting read.




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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #468 on: December 06, 2009, 06:22:34 AM »
WTH?!??!? :angry:

The next time I see you, I'm gonna demand you stock me up with loads of tissue. Why did you have to make me cry???? :cry: :cry: :cry:

I know this isn't the main concern of the fic, heck it isn't even a concern XD But why was Ai waiting for her? Why didn't that person appear after all this time? Also, why was she in a dangerous area in the first place? Isn't that a bad place to meet up? :P

Judging from Risa's reactions, I'm tempted to think that she was the person Ai was waiting for. But why didn't she go? Didn't she know about the date? Despite the sadness of it all, KameShige was a nice relief. Added a dash of humor into the story.

Last thing, Ai's message in the note. Did she mean that because of Reina she no longer needed to wait? But why? Questions, questions and more questions :?

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #469 on: December 10, 2009, 01:30:01 PM »
The Other

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She had always liked the subtle scent Ai had on her, a scent unique to the woman.

lol I love this part.  In my mind I'm like, "It's detergent, Reina.  Detergent!" XD

hehe the whole story made me all warm and fuzzy~   :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

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Great I see A LOT of warning signs, in the way of crying icons, for First Love!  lol I think I'll save that for tomorrow night~ XD

I'm gonna happily skip off to bed.  Hopefully I'll dream of pretty cgi and fresh laundry~ :sleep:

*****

Crud...eyes...blurry...eyed...hard to type a response   :gmon tears: :gmon tears: :gmon tears:

*sniffles* I love First Love so much *wipes at eyes some more*   :mon hanky:  so well written!

I didn't read the comments before hand so I didn't know what actually happened...only that it was sad.

while reading...

pretty early on, I felt there was this strange eeriness to the story (I always thought it was weird how Reina could hear the singing for such a distance!)....almost half expected things to end like a horror fic...   Anyways so here I was expecting someone to be dead...and by someone, I was expecting it to be Gaki san.  I felt so bad for Ai chan, waiting for someone that would never be coming because they were already gone...man was I crushed when I learned that it was actually Ai chan   :gmon tears:

and to make it even more sad....Gaki san didn't know all this time!  sooo sad~ :mon runcry:

lol on a separate note, I found it hilarious that in Reina-vision...everyone is plain looking XD

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #470 on: December 21, 2009, 02:30:51 AM »
First Love was so sad, but so wonderfully happy too~  :heart:  :cry:

Only the sweet quiet Ai could rip down the wall of Reina's heart, then Reina finds her true love to be already dead ;_;

I do love the short and sweet note Ai left her in the end, a perfect ending...though it was sad, yet happy.   :love:

It is what I expect from my favorite author :D  :thumbsup

Keep writing~ I want more amazing stories from you ^_^  :heart:  

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #471 on: December 22, 2009, 09:14:09 PM »
A month and some plus days later...
I have finally finished reading your stories! From the first page to the last.

Might I say Estrea, I like the way you write in your stories.  :inlove:
Very descriptive, using high vocabulay (some I had to look up  :lol:) and such.
You have great skills in writing. When I read your one-shot stories, it makes me want to finish writing my own and post my FanFics up.

All about TakaGaki right?  :twothumbs And I'm loving the ReinAi fics too.

Keep up the GREAT WORK. Maybe in time you can read mine.

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #472 on: January 09, 2010, 04:26:08 PM »
Estrea Hellz Yeah xD ~

But yeah... we want TAKAGAKI xD in all the ways >o<!!!!


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #473 on: January 11, 2010, 08:15:58 PM »
ReinAi :heart:
But poor Reina  :cry:
me want more ReinAi  XD
keep writing  :)

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #474 on: February 16, 2010, 09:39:38 AM »
I finally got around to reading all these!!!  :panic:

OMG!! Bawled my eyes out at First Love!!  :cry:
So touching!! I'm absolutely loving ReinAi!!  :heart:

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #475 on: March 24, 2010, 04:43:38 AM »
Estrea's sandbox is an amazing place   :twothumbs

I love all your oneshots, especially the ReinAi ones   :heart:

First love is sad. I wasn't expecting Aichan being ghost. Poor Reina  :cry:

I felt really touched.
Everything very well written  :thumbsup

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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [12/02 - First Love]
« Reply #476 on: March 30, 2010, 10:07:50 PM »
Thanks for all the continual support, peeps. :D I am touched by all the praise. ^_^

Anyway, here's more fluff~ Based on this picture.



And here we go~

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Turtles, Bunnies and a Sneaky Kitty
(featuring a Sleepy Monkey)


So this note rises a half-pitch here...

Ai made a little mark on her notes, reminding herself where she was supposed to modulate her voice. Lying flat on her stomach, she rested her chin on the palm of one hand, her arm sinking slightly into the futon below her. Idly, she twirled her pen between her fingers, frowning slightly when it slipped and rolled off the edge of the futon.

The petite leader of Morning Musume eyed the errant pen lying just out of reach. She was comfortable where she was, and didn't really feel like getting up just to fetch the pen. She was on break, for all that she continued to work even during it.

The room was bright and open, light filtering in through the stained glass windows behind her. It was largely empty and sparsely furnished, given that no one actually lived there for any extended period of time. The only reason she was there, that all the other girls were there, was because of work. The mansion was owned by the company, and there was always one reason or another for them to be there for photoshoots and the like. If not for the unfortunate association with work, it would have been a rather nice place to relax in.

Speaking of relaxing, perhaps she should consider actually taking advantage of her break. Ai peered owlishly at her fallen pen, as if it would magically return to her hand by force of will. She never did like to be roused from a comfortable position if she could help it.

The shuffling sound of footsteps made her tilt her head up, and she instinctively brushed her hair out of her face as she did. What she wouldn't give to cut her hair again! But her manager had nearly had an apoplexy the last time she did, and to this day she was still being scolded for it whenever her manager ran out of things to nag at her about. It seemed as though she would never live it down for the rest of her life.

The door banged open unceremoniously, and an obviously sleepy Kamei Eri wandered in like a lost puppy, rubbing at her eyes and yawning widely. Ai smiled, her eye twitching involuntarily when she noticed that one of the straps on Eri's tank top had slipped dangerously off the girl's shoulder. Did Eri just walk through the hallway half-awake without even noticing that little detail?

Despite noticing that though, Ai did not get up to fix it for Eri. Maybe if they had been out amongst prying eyes, but there was no need when it was just them. Ai waggled her fingers in greeting, too lethargic to give a full wave. Eri yawned wider in response, then almost tripped over Ai's fallen pencil.

"Eh? Is this Ai-chan's?" Eri bent and retrieved the offending object. She placed the pen on the bridge of her nose, balancing it as she wobbled forward in Ai's general direction. Ai looked on with a bemused expression, content to let Eri do as she pleased. Well, as long as it didn't affect her negatively.

Fortunately, it did not. Eri managed to get to the futon without further incident, whilst still balancing the pen on her nose as she carefully sat down by the edge of the futon. "See what I did!" Eri cried out excitedly, puffing up proudly.

Ai laughed and nicked her pen off Eri's nose, but not before rapping Eri smartly on the head with said pen, and with a familiarly affectionate exclamation of "idiot!".

Eri grinned, rubbing at her head without protest. She blinked again, as if her sleepiness had suddenly caught up with her. Barely suppressing a yawn, Eri looked around for a blanket (it was still fairly chilly for the end of March), found two, and tossed one off to Ai as she wriggled into a comfortable cocoon under her blanket.

"Oyasumi~" Eri mumbled, dropping off between one breath and the next. Never let it be said that Eri could not sleep; she can, and definitely will, beat you in a race to Dreamland as and when she liked. So much for being a turtle.

Ai watched the process with something akin to amusement; she was fairly used to Eri's quirks by now. One did not spend 7 years working together in the same group with someone without learning a bit about their habits eventually. The towel Eri tossed at her had actually hit her in the face, but now it lay between her arms as her attention drifted back to her notes.

Pen in hand, her gaze wandered idly over the paper, and she only just managed to stop herself from chewing the end of her pen. Eri's long, slow breaths and peaceful aura was making her sleepy. All that yawning earlier had not helped either.

Perhaps it was time for a nap. Break wasn't over for a while yet, and she had gotten up early for work today. A little rest would recharge her, and she did happen to be on a futon, with a blanket right there with her. How convenient.

With impeccable logic in hand, Ai made her decision, setting her notes aside and laying her pen down. She almost felt a pang of guilt for wasting time on a nap in the middle of the day, but quashed it with a quick glance over at the happily snoozing Eri. Perhaps Eri needed company in Dreamland too? Ai shook her head to clear it of such flights of fancy, throwing one arm over her eyes as she lay on her back, blanket drawn over her body.

Just a few minutes... She promised herself, allowing her body to relax, her breaths evening out into long, smooth cycles. She shifted unconsciously, fidgeting to get a good position. Part of the blanket slipped off her raised knee, but she was barely aware by then.

Her arm slid off her closed eyes, her chest rising and falling in a regular rhythm. Evidently, sleep came easily to turtles and tired people.

~*~*~

Reina was padding down the hallway when she noticed her fellow Rokkie and narcissist lurking suspiciously around the doorway to a room. Her curiosity sparked, the tsundere of the group wandered over to see what so intrigued the dear bunny.

Sayumi had one hand on her cheek, and as Reina drew close, she took her phone out and snapped a quick picture of whatever was in the room, squealing to herself. Reina raised an eyebrow, popping up at Sayumi's shoulder and startling the devil bunny.

"What's so -- oho!"

Leader and resident aho were asleep together on the same futon. Eri slept like a corpse, still and unmoving, almost the picture of elegant repose, if not for the imminent case of bed-head should said turtle wake up in the immediate future.

Reina snorted at Ai's sleeping posture, wondering how on earth Gaki-san ever put up with (and enjoyed!) sleeping next to the woman. Ai slept like a barbarian, blanket half thrown off, all knees and elbows sticking out at awkward angles, and certainly appearing anything but delicate and feminine.

Then again, Reina knew that Ai was anything but delicate and feminine. It was all a pose. With a wry look, she turned to Sayu, who was still squealing over how cute the picture was. Trust the resident narcissist to attach the 'cute' label exclusively to her best friend and the person she idolized. Reina could not imagine Sayu putting anyone else ahead of her...if she ever did...in the race for the ultimate ichiban kawaii of the world.

"What are you gonna do with the picture anyway?" Reina asked in idle curiosity, glancing back into the peaceful room. Ai seemed to be stirring, if only a little. Reina had to wonder if the woman was always such a restless sleeper.

"Keep it, I guess..." Sayumi finally looked up at her fellow Rokkie, who was leaning against the doorframe. Reina met her gaze, and smirked.

"Why don't you blog about it?"

Something lit up in Sayu's eyes; something between the fanatical gleam of a maniac blogger and the devilish twinkle of a born-again schemer. Cackling to herself, Sayu skipped down the hallway, already composing her next blog post on the phone.

Reina watched her go, then looked back at the snoozing pair. Ai was definitely moving around in her sleep now; whether it be natural tossing and turning, or an imminent awakening, Reina could not know. Either way, it was best to vacate the immediate area for the moment, especially after what she had so innocently suggested.

"Ai-chan does read your blog, Sayu..."

Chuckling to herself, Reina slipped off and continued on her way, content to let any explosions erupt as they would in the near future. The things a girl had to do to ensure constant entertainment...

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Can you imagine Ai's reaction when she sees that post on Sayu's blog, complete with picture? XD


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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [31/03 - Turtles, Bunnies and a Sneaky Kitty]
« Reply #477 on: March 30, 2010, 11:38:23 PM »
^ good job Estrea, that was quite amusing how they got up to the point of the picture.

The part where Eri balances the pencil to get to the futon was probably the most interesting part in the whole story, because the rest led up to the picture being taken.  After a closer look at the pic itself, Ai is full of win XD
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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [31/03 - Turtles, Bunnies and a Sneaky Kitty]
« Reply #478 on: March 30, 2010, 11:55:23 PM »
AH~~~ YES~ SAYU'S BLOG STRIKES AGAIN~! XD

lol her blog is full of pure win~ X3

i love how u came up with it too essy~! it was ubber cute X3 that pic just screams idea's doesnt it?? XD

anywho~ i love how reina was the instigator of that XD and i seriously wonder how ai felt when she read that entry and saw the pic XDD pure :thumbup :thumbup and :bow: for u my friend X3
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Re: Estrea's Sandbox [31/03 - Turtles, Bunnies and a Sneaky Kitty]
« Reply #479 on: March 31, 2010, 12:14:48 AM »
!!!111oneoneone111!!!

*shocked by update*

Y'know, that picture STILL makes me squeal, no matter how many times I look at it. I swear, those two dorks look so much like an old married couple in that photo, it's actually pretty amusing, yet so cute at the same time. Your story makes it all the more cuter, especially the bit with Eri balancing the pencil on her nose. I could definitely see it, lol. I could also see the whole thing actually taking place. Heck, I think your story might be pretty close to what really happened behind that picture.

And, I just have to say this -- Sayumi is the greatest blogger evaaar. :D

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