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Dream's Last Chapter // 11
« on: October 17, 2007, 09:10:45 PM »
Chapter 01 : The cycle breaks.

“I swear, it was the strangest dream ever!”

A girl in her early adulthood tried hard to whisper rather than yell, leaning casually against the bookshelf.  She had her arms folded tightly, keeping the cold air from invading her body through her sleeves. She wriggled her frozen nose, taking in the smell of old pages and wood, and then she cringed. As she spoke, her eyes ran through the books’ bindings on a shelf opposite of her, making a mental note on how they’re all really in alphabetical order. Her sights were on everything and anything other than the person whom she was talking to.

“Maybe you’ve been reading too much books lately, or all that Takara...-something got to you.”

Her younger companion replied, and neither was she sparing any moments to look at her friend out of courtesy. She continued on her tiptoes, trying to reach for the books on the top shelf. As her body stretched, her top rolled up as well, revealing her bare stomach. She felt a sudden chill and shuddered, but made no attempt to back down until she gets what she wants. The other huffed, feeling offended for the moment.

“Oh, vampire novels…”

Turning around to keep from idling too much, she spotted something of interest on the category and genre listings hung on the wall beside them. Along with the lack of an attention span, the older of them both straightened up and moved to the other side of the shelf without mentioning so. The struggling other rolled her eyes as she noticed her friend gone. It amazed and irritated her to know how easily someone this talented and professional could be distracted faster than a moth is to light.

“See, that’s why you’re still called <i>Gaki</i>-san up till now, Risa. You never listen! It’s Ta-ka-ra-zu-ka, please remember that.”

The strict voice continued, coming from the other side as a book was slid out of its original place. Through the gap, she faced her friend’s belly and shook her head, feeling embarrassed for the other. She flipped open the novel she found and skimmed through the pages, all this while still going on with the conversation.

“Besides, I don’t think they have anything to do with my dream…”

She mumbled loud enough for the other to hear. Risa, as the younger is now known by, rolled her eyes a second time. Seeing no point in being offended, she ignored her friend and resorted to hopping up and down to get her book. In a way, she managed to retrieve her book after all. There was a loud thud and…

“Ouch!”

The book had fallen through to the other side, and coincidentally, right on her friend. Risa gasped and quickly slapped her hands over her mouth. Soon enough, she broke out into soft giggles, thinking that the other probably deserved it for badmouthing her earlier. Mischief pushed aside, she rushed over to her friend’s aid.

“Ah, Ai-chan! I’m sorry! Are you … uh…?”

Risa trailed off as she sees her friend crouched on the floor with both hands over her head, rubbing furiously. Beside her were two fallen books, both left opened up to random pages. As her friend had been addressed by, Ai paid no attention to Risa’s apologies and silently tended to her aching head, tears of pain brimming by her eyes. Risa quickly bent over and stretched out her hand to help her friend up, but she was interrupted by the sound of heels clicking from behind.

“Ahem!”

Both girls looked up to see a middle age lady glaring sternly at them, her arms folded in annoyance. Her intimidating wrinkled face, generic glasses and a horrible sense of fashion made the girls gulped, Ai’s injured head soon forgotten. Scrambling to their feet, the two girls bowed their head apologetically, at least until the open book suddenly captured Ai’s attention. Curiosity aroused, she knelt back down to inspect the page, leaving Risa alone to deal with the lady.

“Niigaki-san, Takahashi-san! I know you’re idols, but that doesn’t mean you can start a riot in the library! As a librarian, it is my duty to…”

More or less cutting out the librarian’s ramblings, Ai held up the book that Risa had been trying to get her hands on, staring intently at the brown page. She ran her finger over the illustration on the page, a sense of familiarity and detest rushing through her. Just as she was about to read the description, she felt herself being hauled upwards and dragged towards the exit, causing her to drop the book in the process.

“Wha- wait! The book! I haven’t-”

“Forget the book, that woman’s driving me crazy!

Groaning, Risa led Ai out of the building and down the street, both upset that they were now empty handed and bothered. The former more disturbed by the run-in with the old lady than failing to get her book. Meanwhile, Ai was quiet throughout the journey back to TV Tokyo. All this time occupied with that sole page she came across.

“I can’t believe someone that old has so much energy, but then again Nakazawa-san has even more- Tch, and you say <i>I</i> don’t listen. Ai-chan, are you paying attention?”

Risa waved a hand in front of her long time friend. There was little to no response from the older girl, so she snapped her fingers loudly as well as clapped her hands until Ai was done escaping from reality. Jerking her head up, she finally snapped out of it and looked at her friend with a dazed expression.

“Listening? Yeah, you said something about Nakazawa-san being old…”

Risa gapped with a scandalous face and started shaking Ai by the shoulders violently. She then placed a palm on the elder’s forehead, felt her neck and grew confused when there was no indication of a fever.

“Have you gone crazy?! She’ll have what’s left of my innocence if she heard that! … Are you okay? Did that book knock a screw out of your brain? AI-CHAN, SPEAK TO ME!!”

Ai frowned and backed off from Risa’s grip, looking at her friend suspiciously. Having been disturbed out of her very important thoughts more times than one, she’s starting to get annoyed. Sighing, Risa calmed down and grabbed Ai’s wrist, pulling her to the side of the road so as to not obstruct the human traffic.

“I’m sorry, it’s just a natural reaction. You know how I am. Still thinking of your dream?”

“How’d you know?”

Ai jerked with a surprised blink, taken aback by how accurate her friend was, or how attentive she was, or whatever that word is. She looked straight into her friend’s eyes, wanting to know how she knew about her thoughts. How despite the overreactions and screaming and franticness, the younger girl still managed to find a way to spare some analysis on her behavior and is often right about it.

“How could I not know? We’ve been friends for years. You don’t exactly let down thought provoking issues easily.”

“I suppose you’re right. But they’re so real… and you just won’t listen to me about it. What can I do?”

“I just thought it’s another one of your crazy dreams about vampires, knight in shining armor or some other Takazura induced fantasies you have so much. ”

“But it’s not… I know it’s not. Risa…”

“Alright, alright. But let’s get back first, okay? I’ll listen as much as you want later tonight.”

“Thanks, you’re the best.”

“Of course, who else is there to put up with your little ethics?”

“What little ethics?”

“Hm? Nothing. Come on, we’re going to be late!”

Laughing to herself, Risa took a confused Ai’s hand again and rushed back to the studio for filming, pushing through the crowd and racing against time and eventually with each other along the way.

Hours later and still in TV Tokyo, Risa was tired and by herself in the cafeteria with a glass of cola. The sun had long set and she wasn’t quite sure of whom she was waiting for. Her manager? A colleague? A friend? Well, whichever came first, she thought. She took a sip and looked out the window. She was glad that this building had many windows as observing Tokyo’s nightlife was quite an interesting pastime.

“Niigaki-sempai!”

Not sure whether to flinch or smile, Risa turned around with an obligatory ‘Yes?’ coming from her lips. From less than a mile away, she saw her junior literally prancing towards her, seemingly dismissed from her own set of work.

“Sempai! Did you get it?”

“Come again?”

”For my school project, you promised to help…”

Her junior instantly had on an infamous pout. Feeling like a horrible senior right now, Risa bowed her head, palms together above in apology. Knowing exactly what this means, her junior pouted even more, flaring her nose a little.

“I’m sorry Mittsi, but I tried, I really did! But that <i>old hag</i> just wouldn’t let me, said I was cruel to books or something.”

“Is that really true? But… I really need that book on legends and myths!”

Mittsi, or Mitsui Aika to be exact, plopped herself down on the chair opposite of Risa and buried her head in her folded arms on the table. She sighed heavily. Unable to bear seeing her junior depressed because of her fault, Risa perked up with an idea.

”You know, it’s not so bad. You can get it tomorrow, right? Tomorrow’s a free day, and I can go with you.”

“I can’t. I got banned from the library...”

“Are you serious? Do I even want to know what you did to get ban?”

“Fire, books and Koharu. You sure you want to know?”

“No, not anymore. Anyway, I’ll tell you everything I know about myths and legends to make up for it then?”

Risa offered instantly without thinking ahead. And about as quickly as her thoughts had processed, Aika pounced on her senior in delight, hugging the elder around her neck, smiling and bouncing.

“Really? You would? Can you do it tonight?”

“Tonight? I have something on though…”

“Pleeeeeease? It’s urgent! A life or death situation!”

“But-“

Saved by the bell, or more like a second ‘ahem’ of the day, both girls looked up in surprise. Right by the table was one Takahashi Ai looking rather displeased. Her eyes slowly opened after she had calmed down, both arms folded across her chest.

“What’re you two doing?”

“Relax Ai-chan, it’s just a friendly hug.”

Risa pulled away from a startled Aika, who automatically moved to hide behind her sub-leader out of fear.

“Right. I believe we had an arrangement?”

“Oh, right, I was about to get to that. Sorry Aika, seems like I’m taken for the night. Tomorrow, okay? You can come look for me anytime you’re free. I don’t mind.”

“Are you sure?”

“Of course, what harm is there to doing your junior a favor? <i>Besides, tomorrow's safer. You don't want to ignite Ai-chan's wrath now, right?</i>”

Risa whispered before lifting a hand to pat a frightened Aika on the head, ruffling her already untamed hair slightly. After sending the girl on her way with some reassurance, she spent a moment of silence at the table to finish her drink before standing up to adjusting her clothes.

“Shall we go?”

“Finally!”

“Before that, why so stern?”

“Was I?”

“No, duh. You were about as sweet as the bitter gourds I had for dinner.”

“Was that sarcasm?”

Risa slapped her forehead in surrender and pushed Ai out the main entrance of the building before she could say anything else. If she claims to know this woman inside out under the position of a best friend, she would be lying. And trying to measure her density would send the scales into frenzy, if ever possible, because Risa knows, or feels that this friend of hers was more than what meets the eye. More than what was portrayed to the rest of the world, and perhaps even to her very self.

As the girls made their way to either one’s home, which was still in the process of being decided, someone elsewhere had been spending the night panicking. Flinging clothes and newspapers aside, she had been frantically searching through her house in hope of finding something of value. She turned the couches over, she went through the thrash and even wanted to go through thrash from 3 days ago, and she would attempt to do some plumbing if she could find her plunger. Every nook and cranny had been searched a minimum of ten times by now.

Finally giving up, she was sprawled on the floor and trying to catch her breath. She couldn’t get rid of the distress and really wanted to scream, or cry, or just die right there and then. Knowing that all three was not an option, she sat up against the cupboard and sighed. She rubbed her palm roughly against her face in frustration and groaned.

“Two thousand flipping years and it had to be ME?! I’m so sorry, whoever and wherever you are.”


A/N : Ho'shit, this was longer than I thought. Everything mentioned was NOT randomly thrown in for failed humor. 3 characters accounted for, a lot more to go. *Crawls to bed*
« Last Edit: May 14, 2008, 09:10:42 AM by inDeceit »

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Re: To catch a dream 01
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2007, 10:47:48 PM »
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“Maybe you’ve been reading too much books lately, or all that Takara...-something got to you.”
Aichan?



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“Oh, vampires…”
Vampires??? :?



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Risa, as the younger is now known by, rolled her eyes a second time. Seeing no point in being offended, she ignored her friend and resorted to hopping up and down to get her book. In a way, she managed to retrieve her book after all. There was a loud thud and…

“Ouch!”

The book had fallen through to the other side, and coincidentally, right on her friend.
:lol:



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“Ahem!”

Both girls looked up to see a middle age lady glaring sternly at them, her arms folded in annoyance. Her intimidating wrinkled face, generic glasses and a horrible sense of fashion made the girls gulped, Ai’s injured head soon forgotten.
Oshit, busted by the creepy librarian! :O



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More or less cutting out the librarian’s ramblings, Ai held up the book that Risa had been trying to get her hands on, staring intently at the brown page. She ran her finger over the illustration on the page, a sense of familiarity and detest rushing through her. Just as she was about to read the description, she felt herself being hauled upwards and dragged towards the exit, causing her to drop the book in the process.
Aichan recognized something in the book? Assuming that she hasn't read it before and merely forgotten, how is that possible?



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“Niigaki-sempai!”

...

“I’m sorry Mittsi, but I tried, I really did! But that old hag just wouldn’t let me, said I was cruel to books or something.”

“Is that really true? But… I really need that book on legends and myths!”
Ahhhhhh...so Aika was the one who needed the book.  She must not have had the free time during the hours the library was open.



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”You know, it’s not so bad. You can get it tomorrow, right? Tomorrow’s a free day, and I can go with you.”

“I can’t. I got banned from the library...”

“Are you serious? Do I even want to know what you did to get ban?”

“Fire, books and Koharu. You sure you want to know?”

“No, not anymore.
Oh...:O




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someone elsewhere had been spending the night panicking. Flinging clothes and newspapers aside, she had been frantically searching through her house in hope of finding something of value. She turned the couches over, she went through the thrash and even wanted to go through thrash from 3 days ago, and she would attempt to do some plumbing if she could find her plunger. Every nook and cranny had been searched a minimum of ten times by now.

Finally giving up, she was sprawled on the floor and trying to catch her breath. She couldn’t get rid of the distress and really wanted to scream, or cry, or just die right there and then. Knowing that all three was not an option, she sat up against the cupboard and sighed. She rubbed her palm roughly against her face in frustration and groaned.

“Two thousand flipping years and it had to be ME?! I’m so sorry, whoever and wherever you are.”
:o Eh? Well, then...presumably whatever this thing is that this girl is looking for, it's 2000 years old, important, and evidently passed down from generation to generation of caregivers...AND she seems to have misplaced it?

Boy is she gonna get in shit for this. :OMG:

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Re: To catch a dream 01
« Reply #2 on: October 18, 2007, 02:06:24 AM »
Catchy intro chapter, I want More!  :lol: What's this about 2000 year old item missing? Is this fiction involving mythical, supernatural fiction? God, I hope so. I'm in need of something heart thumping  :shocked:

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Re: To catch a dream 01
« Reply #3 on: October 18, 2007, 08:41:00 AM »
A really good long chapter of Ai and Risa. Even some cute lil Aika to boot. I'm liking this. The fantasy bit is a good theme. I wonder if the girl at the ending is from MM too. Does this mean she knows something about the dreams Ai is having?? Hmmmmmmmmm *ponders while waiting for next update*

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Re: To catch a dream 01
« Reply #4 on: October 18, 2007, 08:45:36 AM »
Yay! so the dream guardian is Ai chan afterall  :nya:  I love the AiGakiness!  When they are in futarigoto mode they are simply adorable.  Ai chan is always fun to read when she's slightly crazy, absent minded, angry, and jealous XD

So I guess the 2000 year old spirit had finally awaken and possessed someone?  and could the item she is looking for be ai chan...though she doesn't know that ai chan would be in human form as well?  Can't wait to see who the mystery girl is and what happens next!

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Re: To catch a dream 01
« Reply #5 on: October 19, 2007, 09:44:05 AM »
I still have no idea what the story is about exactly though -vampires? some 20000000 year old legend?- ... but I'm-a liking it so far. I like how you describe almost every single actions the girls make :)
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Re: To catch a dream 02
« Reply #6 on: October 20, 2007, 10:07:47 AM »
Chapter 02

<i>”You know His punishments are not to be trifled with.”

A woman clad in white sheets, looking no less elegant than a fairy listened to the voice speaking to her from an abandoned small Shinto shrine hidden deep within the forests known to house spirits and Gods. Casually, she laid out the offerings that she had brought and responded.

“I know, and I shouldn’t have tried to shirk my duties… but what’s done is done.”

She sighed and sat herself down in a seiza on the dry earth. As she prepared some tea, a small orb started to materialize behind her, and soon morphing into a figure of a human. The new arrival sat with her legs dangling on the fence that surrounded the shrine.

“It is too bad you’re a guardian of dreams, not time nor fate, otherwise you might just be able to escape the consequences that way.”

“Don’t be ridiculous. Would you like some tea?”

The deity offered, not the least surprised at the unusual entrance. Grinning, the new spirit hopped off the fence and sat informally on the opposite of the woman. Dressed loosely in a yukata with her sleeves rolled up, she picked up the tea bowl and drank from it.

“The tea you make never ceases to amaze me.”

“Flattery will get you nowhere, my kindred spirit.”

“Mmhm. Fancy seeing you outside the manor though, even since… you know. I thought that piece of filth made sure that you couldn’t escape?”

“I’m sure you’re familiar with being omnipresent? But I’ll have to return eventually, I’m trapped to a bond with him. One that he so despicably created…”

“Pity. Are you sure you don’t want my help?”

“For the umpteen time, no.”

“Headstrong as always I see. But as a friend, it hurts me to watch you in confinement, and you can’t leave the world to be dreamless for long. He will find out.”

“Until then, right?”

Without another word, both knew that the topic was to end there. They remained seated until nightfall, in silence and observation…</i>

A dream just like any other, but there was no doubt that she did feel the wind caress her skin, the smell of damp earth, the giggles of spirits from deep within the forest, and how she knew her way around the maze of trees and illusions set up by the divine. She remembers the taste of the tea that she had personally brewed – green tea, and when she felt a wave of warmth pass through her upon hearing her confidant’s kind words. She was there, experiencing a memory once again, yet… everything was just a sensation. She had never been into a forest, she had no knowledge of tea brewing, and she did not recognize the ghostly being. Everything felt like a first time for her, but somehow it doesn’t seem to be completely so. It was like living another life whenever her dream involved this mysterious woman.

It has been about half an hour since she woke up, and she had made no attempt to move out of her bed since then. The sheets were now heated by the sun, and not even the discomfort of having the air conditioner turned off made her flinch. As her mother yelled for her to come out for breakfast, her mind was on the previous night’s conversation.

<i>”You’re wondering if your dreams are related to a story?”

Risa looked up in surprise, nearly choking on her second glass of cola for the evening. The two had earlier decided to stop by a restaurant for dinner rather than at either one’s home. Upon entrance, they were greeted by noise and nothing less. Both staff and customers, causing the tired girls to be slightly bothered, crowded the entire room. They were then led to a booth at the far end when Ai insisted on having some privacy.

“Yeah, I saw a picture that looked exactly like the woman from my dreams in that book you assaulted me with.”

“I said I was sorry! But that myth and legends book Aika wanted? Hmm…”

“So she could have been from a myth? Do you know of any that has to do with dreams?”

“Well, most people know of Baku, the dream eater…”

“But the woman I saw didn’t have body parts of various animals…”

“Wouldn’t be a woman if she did, huh?”

Ai shrugged and Risa made a face, disturbed by the imagery she is currently having.

“What about any other dream related tales? My dream had a guardian of some sort.”

“A dream guardian? None that I know of…”

“Oh… damn.”</i>

Her thoughts ended there, as abruptly as it had the previous night, without any other clue as to what her dreams had meant. She sighed and finally dragged herself out of bed, incredibly unexcited about starting a new day.

Somewhere pretty far away from our troubled idol, a girl in jerseys and shorts was running about the stadium in search of someone. Some of the others she had approached were wondering why she never thought of using the public address system. If she did, she would have found who she was looking for ages ago. As she ran from one end of the court to the other, she felt her collar being grabbed halfway. She felt the hold release immediately when she almost executed one of her many karate moves on whom she considers an assailant.

“Woah, chill Konno. Someone could get hurt here, and what’s the rush?”

“Ah, Satoda-san! I’m sorry, but have you seen Yoshizawa-san?”

“Yoshiko? Yeah, that depressed soul over there. Can’t miss her.”

Satoda Mai pointed back with her thumb, directing the younger girl at the person on a bench who was bent over, face in palms. If life were fictional, an area of a radius of 3 meters from Yoshizawa Hitomi would be visibly dark and extremely gloomy. Konno Asami simply gapped at her futsal captain.

“I swear I’ve already passed by that seat a million times…”

“You know how it is when everyone has their hair dyed the same color.”

“Ah, you’re right. Thanks anyway!”

Konno, polite as ever, bowed to her teammate and rushed off, more or less actually unaware of her captain’s current mood. Stopping in time before she would crash into the benches, Konno called out to her captain.

“Yoshizawa-san!”

No response.

“Yoshizawa…-san…?”

The futsal captain finally reacted by raising her head slowly, and looked at her teammate and ex-musume with big, desperate eyes. In a second, the tall and not-so-manly-anymore woman jumped to her feet and held a tight grip on the younger’s shoulder. In return, the girl froze upon contact, in shock.

“KONKON!! What am I to do?!”

“EH?!”

“Someone’s going to die before they are even supposed to die!”

Konno watched her captain freak out (and not make sense anymore) in front of her, and on the inside, she was also freaking out at this outburst, regretting on ever volunteering to find the elder in the first place. Calling the captain to attend a strategy meeting was one thing, spending an hour finding her was another, but dealing with this wasn’t something she had expected. She wished she were in New Zealand with Ogawa Makoto right now, thus leading to her wondering about what sort of food they had over there. But her ponderings were cut short by her captain shaking her by the shoulders violently.

“I-I don’t know, but oh! I think.. Uhm.. I think I hear Erina-chan calling!”

Turning to the unsuspecting Hello!Pro egg member and also a member of Ongaku Gatas, Konno waved in her direction. Mano Erina couldn’t do anything but look confused, wondering why her teammate was waving at her, let alone why the other girl from a distance looked like she was being forced to smile while being held at gun point.

“I’m coming, Erina-chan! Excuse me Yoshizawa-san, but seems like I’m uh… needed! Yes, and there’s a strategy meeting waiting for you upstairs, so, yeah. Please report soon, later!”

Barely managing to squirm her way out of her captain’s grip, Konno quickly ran towards the reserve Gatas player, who wanted to flee for thinking that the other was now crazy. Hitomi on the other hand, was left alone and upset again, completely forgetting what she had just did. She sat back down on the bench and invited the dark backdrop and depressing atmosphere back. This all lasted for as long as her break was, until training started again, 15 minutes later.

After 2 hours of non-stop drills and practice matches, a paramedic was called in. Everyone but Hitomi crowded to a corner, either curious about what paramedics actually do, or actually in need of one. Hitomi sat back down on her not so comforting corner again. Just as she thought that she could have the next few minutes of privacy to herself, she felt the side of the bench sink slightly.

“Yocchan, what’s with you today?”

A squeaky and girly -then again, maybe not so high pitched anymore, but to her it will always be that way- voice came bursting into Hitomi’s ear. She chose to not respond, however, leaving the owner of the voice to start dishing out her complaints.

“You missed almost every possible goal and injured more than half the players of EACH team! We play futsal, not dodge ball!”

Looking up with a frown, Hitomi looked at her companion. One can count the seconds with a hand when she looked back down on the floor, muttering a half sincere apology.

“You better be sorry, look at what you did to my pretty knee!”

Her friend raised her right leg and pointed at her bruised knee… hard, as if to make a point and in the process forgetting how injuries are supposed to feel. She quickly hugged her leg in agony as pain surged through her body. but that was the least of her problems. Right beside her, the woman that could probably come up with a hundred and fifty reasons as to why her injury isn’t completely a bad thing, is in fact NOT saying a word. Feeling suspicious, she got up and limped her way to stand in front of the other and pointed at the gloomy captain, her other hand resting on her hip. No one ignores Ishikawa Rika and gets away with it, let alone when she has a black and blue knee in need of tender loving care.

“Okay! Who are you and what did you do to my Yocchan?!”

“She got into deep shit and is now too busy trying to save her behind from being fried…”

Rika took a surprise step back. Where’s the ‘Sorry Rika-chan’ or ‘I’m just tired’, or both that she wanted to hear? It would’ve been easier to forgive her friend that way, but of course, it was always easy when things go <i>her</i> way. What disturbed her more was that Hitomi spoke as if it was serious.

“Yocchan? Talk to me, you’re never like this…”

Shedding her spoilt and childish mask, Rika squatted down and places a hand on the other’s knee. Feeling a sense of much needed comfort from that very touch, Hitomi finally lifted her head, appearing a lot more lethargic than the rest of the players and there were visible eye bags. Rika gasped at the horror of what having no make up can actually do.

“Yocchan! You look like a zombie!”

“Urgh…Rika…not now…”

“And sound like one too!”

Hitomi quietly glared at the girl, causing her to clam up. Rubbing out the fatigue from her face, she took a deep breath in hopes of relieving her troubles for now. She managed to regain her composure after some time. By then, Rika’s legs had already gone dead and she had to crawl her way back to sitting on the bench.

“Rika-chan, can I talk to you?”

“Duh, of course.”

“What if… you know, you indirectly place someone’s life in danger?”

“You killed someone?!”

Rika shrieked, shifted two seats away from Hitomi. Being in an enclosed area doesn’t help when her voiced echoed throughout the stadium, catching the attention of everyone. Naturally, players, coaches, and even the security guards outside turned their heads towards the duo, some in surprise and others in fear for unspeakable reason.

“In a game! A video game! I didn’t really kill someone, haha… that’ll be preposterous! Heh…ridiculous…”

The futsal captain flustered, yelling and screaming across the court. Hearing the denial from one of the best players in the team, the crowd swatted their hands in the air and turned back around to continue with whatever they were doing, disappointed with the false alarm. Sighing in relief, Hitomi turned back to Rika in annoyance. Smiling sheepishly, the usually bubbly girl shifted back to her original seat.

“Great, why not tell the world while you’re at it?”

“My bad… but you could’ve been more direct!”

“Or you could be less dense.”

Hitomi muttered the last part, but Rika caught on fast, of all things she could’ve been more sensitive to.

“Anyway, I mean, let’s say a vengeful murderer was let loose and you were the one who released him and now he’s off to kill that person who landed him in jail in the first place.”

“First off, I’m not born to work with criminals. Secondly, are you for real?”

“I’m serious here!”

“Hmm, I don’t know. Track him down before he gets to his victim? Or find the victim first to protect him or her?”

“…”

Logical points. Hitomi was taken aback by this sudden manner of intelligence coming out of her ‘charming’ friend. Fiddling with an imaginary beard, Hitomi was enlightened. She jumped to her feet with a smile for the first time today.

“You know, those are actually pretty good ideas!”

“Of course, I’ve been borrowing some of Fujimoto’s western movies.”

”Good, good. Keep doing that.”

“But she’ll start charging me! They don’t come cheap, you know! Oi, Yocchan!?”

As Rika whined, Hitomi had already made her way towards the exit, ignoring the rest of practice and silently plotting a way to amend for her grave mistakes. Offended by being ignored again, the older girl chased after her friend, leaving behind a group of eggs and two seniors with no idea what to do without their captain. Actually, only one of them was at loss.

“What’re we going to do now, Asami-san?”

Konno jumped at the question, herself not knowing what’s next. Before she got a chance to speak, Mai had already wedged herself between the two girls, putting her arms around their shoulders.

“Ramen for everyone!”

“But I don’t like ramen…”

One of the eggs spoke up, earning a look of utter disbelief from Mai.

“Blasphemy! You will have ramen and you will like it! Let’s go!”

Some cheered and some were uncertain, but by the end of the day when the managers and administrators returned to the stadium for a last minute briefing and observations, the entire place was left empty except for a lone soccer ball...


A/N: OOC? Cameos? Confusion? Next Chapter please? ;P
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« Reply #7 on: October 20, 2007, 10:46:57 AM »
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In a second, the tall and not-so-manly-anymore woman jumped to her feet and held a tight grip on the younger’s shoulder.

Yeah, Yossie is not-so-manly-anymore-but-now-a-sexy woman... haha

I want to read more....

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« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2007, 11:13:13 PM »
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”You know His punishments are not to be trifled with.”

A woman clad in white sheets, looking no less elegant than a fairy listened to the voice speaking to her from an abandoned small Shinto shrine hidden deep within the forests known to house spirits and Gods. Casually, she laid out the offerings that she had brought and responded.

“I know, and I shouldn’t have tried to shirk my duties… but what’s done is done.”
Aye...the important thing now is to figure out how to fix the problem.



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As she prepared some tea, a small orb started to materialize behind her, and soon morphing into a figure of a human. The new arrival sat with her legs dangling on the fence that surrounded the shrine.
Oh...looks like we're dealing with spirit-folk.



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“Mmhm. Fancy seeing you outside the manor though, even since… you know. I thought that piece of filth made sure that you couldn’t escape?”

“I’m sure you’re familiar with being omnipresent? But I’ll have to return eventually, I’m trapped to a bond with him. One that he so despicably created…”
Huh? That's curious to hear. Definitely going to want to get some more details on this.  :yep:



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Satoda Mai pointed back with her thumb, directing the younger girl at the person on a bench who was bent over, face in palms. If life were fictional, an area of a radius of 3 meters from Yoshizawa Hitomi would be visibly dark and extremely gloomy. Konno Asami simply gapped at her futsal captain.
Why's Yossi so down??? :cry:



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“KONKON!! What am I to do?!”

“EH?!”

“Someone’s going to die before they are even supposed to die!”
EHHHHHHHHHHHH??? :OMG:



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“Rika-chan, can I talk to you?”

“Duh, of course.”

“What if… you know, you indirectly place someone’s life in danger?”
Going with the theme of the story...I'm guessing maybe Yossi saw this in a dream?




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“Anyway, I mean, let’s say a vengeful murderer was let loose and you were the one who released him and now he’s off to kill that person who landed him in jail in the first place.”
Uh-oh, that's not good.  :O



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“Ramen for everyone!”

“But I don’t like ramen…”

One of the eggs spoke up, earning a look of utter disbelief from Mai.

“Blasphemy! You will have ramen and you will like it! Let’s go!”
I'm with Mai on this one. Don't like ramen??? UNPOSSIBLE!  :shocked:



Gonna be interesting to see exactly what Yossi did to get her all stressed out like this.

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« Reply #9 on: October 21, 2007, 10:10:34 AM »
A/N: OOC? Cameos? Confusion? Next Chapter please? ;P

Why this has to be the easiest question ever~  I pick the last one =D  Next Chapter please~~~~  :wub:

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Re: To catch a dream 02
« Reply #10 on: October 22, 2007, 03:36:40 AM »
Is Yossi's problem related to Ai's dreams?

Kinda confusing but I like it. And Rika's so cute in here~

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« Reply #11 on: October 22, 2007, 09:35:51 AM »
@Stefy : In a way, yes.

I did want to have down most of the plot in a prologue at first, but i tried like a dozen times and everything came out dumb, so I tried writing differently, and I like seeing people try to guess XD Everything would be revealed in due time. I'm only done with like 2 (very short) paragraphs for Chapter 3 and my goal is 6 pages, again .__. plus school just started for me and I'm a nervous wreck for being the only female in the class lol.

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« Reply #12 on: October 22, 2007, 10:47:22 AM »
EH! Your a girl?! haha. I always thought you were a guy.... Ahh just relaxx and slack around with em, hanging out with guys is much more fun then hanging out with girls IMO. But then if you have projects and stuff in school... having girls would be more productive but sad to say less creative, again IMO.

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« Reply #13 on: October 22, 2007, 10:54:19 AM »
Haha, is that so? I come from an all girl's sec school and i know lots of creative and fun girls actually. So hanging with guys... is... kinda different.
Oh well, it's only my first day and second time enrolling in a school this year. I keep dropping out >___>

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« Reply #14 on: October 22, 2007, 02:23:53 PM »
Heh... don't get me wrong, I'm not saying ALL girls aren't creative. Just that for me I prefer to work with guys because their more easier to communicate with. But then it all comes down to how one had been brought up -surrounded by guys or girls or both- My case I've mostly been surrounded by guys ever since I was a kid sooo... thats probably the diff?

*And this is soooooooooo off topic*
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« Reply #15 on: October 22, 2007, 06:54:11 PM »
Naw, Yuki's writing style is very feminine, so I could tell right away that she was a chick xD

I'm still interested in what's going to happen next :] Yossie either has a physical connection with Ai or a conceptual one, but I'm guessing it's more abstract than links. This is still too early to be guessing things though xD So I won't be surprised if I'm way off the mark at this point in time. xD

I think I forgot to do this for your story:

-bestows you with a hardhat that protects from writer's block-

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« Reply #16 on: October 24, 2007, 05:30:27 PM »
Chapter 03

“Well… doesn’t seem to belong to anyone.”

She held the artifact by an attached ribbon and allowed it to spin in midair. It looked just like normal a jade pendant except for some mysterious red lines branching out from the center. She had found it lying on a bench when she sat down to rest in the man-made park outside TV TOKYO and picked it up by the ribbon to take a look. It was a strange object, almost like a museum artifact with its unusual carvings on both sides.

“Though I should probably hand it over to security…”

She made her decision and promptly attempted to hold the pendent itself. Immediately, there was a sudden shock that made her retract her hand and dropping the pendant to the ground. The jade cracked upon impact, causing the red liquid within to leak out, forming a small puddle.

“Shit… they’re going to make me pay for that…”

Quickly inspecting her hand for any sign of injuries and finding none, she hurried to where the artifact landed and bent down to look at it, cursing all the way. She cringed at the foul odor coming from the red substance but still moved to pick it up. No point returning spoilt goods, but she could at least do a favor for the environment and throw it away. As she touched the artifact again, she felt that same shock from before. Though this time, she did not even flinch. Rather, she stood up and pocketed the ruined pendant with a dissatisfied expression, taking her time to examine her body, which was a strange thing to do.

“What is this?! Pathetic! ”

She groaned, disgust in her voice. She kicked and stretched, bewildered by her surroundings and taking curious as well as offensive glares at everyone and anything. It was as though she… wasn’t herself.

Elsewhere, Yoshizawa Hitomi walked the streets while hiding her face under a cap. Unnecessary attention from fans was all right with her, but having them stalk her was simply out of the question, especially for today. She had a task at hand for the afternoon, something personal and confidential, an arrangement that can’t risk being discovered by outsiders. Her tracks stopped in front of a restaurant, which was closed until 5pm. Looking behind her shoulders, she saw no sign of being trailed. Relieved and a little nervous, she slipped under the noren* and disappeared into the dark.

There was a strong liquor smell lingering like mist in the air, and dimmed lights placed under the glass pathway lighted the edges of the room. Music could be heard playing softly, giving a touch of class to the shop. Despite the atmosphere, the staff went about their usual job of cleaning and preparation for the evening. No one looked at Hitomi even though it was clearly stated on the outside that the shop was not accepting business at this time of the day. Clearing her throat to ease the nervousness, she slid open the door and entered the private compartment, greeting the only person inside with a quick nod.

“Yoshizawa! Nice to see you again!”

Hitomi smiled at the older woman and sat down on the opposite of her with her legs crossed. She looked around the room, in awe at the new decorations set up compared to the last time she was here. It may seem like a weak room to be in when discussing private matters, but Hitomi knew that whatever was said in this room, will always stay in. She looked up at her companion, who appeared a little flush. Somehow, she didn’t want to know how long the other had been here for.

“I don’t understand why we can’t discuss this somewhere more appropriate for the situation…”

”Appropriate places are too boring~!”

“Tch…”

The tomboy rolled her eyes and poured herself a cup of tea, not wanting to touch the only other drink in the room and get herself in unnecessary trouble. Cringing at the dull taste, she puts down the cup and sighed. It tasted… dissatisfying.

“So, why are we meeting again?”

“I need to… find somebody. The guardian’s incarnate…”

“I see... The guar-… THE GUARDIANS’ INCARNATE?!”

The older woman shot up, knocking over her wine cup as her hands slammed against the table in anger and shock. Hitomi cowered away from the table.

“You can’t see her.” The elder spoke calmed down quickly, seriousness in her voice.

“I don’t have a choice, I’ve lost the onmyoji’s soul…” Hitomi mumbled, fidgeting with the tatami mat.

“Did you just say you lost…” The woman blinked, taking awhile to absorb the information. “Oh Kami! You lost Sonobe!? Of all things?! ”

She fell back against the wall and pinched the bridge of her nose. She felt lightheaded, which was too much for her age. This wasn’t the same as losing just an accessory, or a missing person. She shook her head; a migraine was starting to develop. She calmed her nerves by emptying what’s left of the sake bottle. Hitomi spoke again.

“I’m going to resolve this, I swear! Just let me find her.”

“What will you do? Have her use her abilities?”

“Well… not real-”

“She has no memories of being a guardian, she has no powers left. She’s just an ordinary human being now, like you and me. You can’t do anything.”

Hitomi grew quiet. She knew this all along, and basically everyone involved knows the story too. What’s the use of finding a mere mortal when there’s an evil sorcerer’s spirit on the loose? But she had to, whether to protect the unknown woman, or destroy the spirit; she had to do them both. It was her responsibility.

“You know, right? Among all other memories I had lost in these last 2000 years, reincarnating over and over, I can’t forget her importance to me. I feel that being able to remember that is significant, some sort of fate that the Gods can’t control.”

“Yoshizawa, some things can’t be solved with just sentimentalism…”

“So? Sonobe IS going to harm her, and I can’t leave her open to danger just like that. She was and still is my friend, even if I don’t know who she is anymore. I’m still going to do this whether you like it or not.”

“What stubbornness…”

Hitomi gritted her teeth, growing impatient. Yet she can’t do anything but seek help from this woman. Resorting to her last solution, she threw away a part of her pride and knelt down directly in front of the other, bending over by her waist in plea.

“Please, I beg of you. You don’t have to worry; I’ll bear all consequences. Just… help me locate her.”

Unable to watch her once junior go on like this, the drunken woman grew sober at the sight. Not wanting to show signs of being soft, she gently swatted the younger over her lowered head, deliberately looking annoyed.

“Fine, fine. I’ll probably never have a day’s rest if I don’t…”

“T-thank you! You won’t regret this, I promise.”

“It’s not <i>my</i> problem if you fail… but you had better not, or you’re paying all my bills.

Anyway, I don’t know much, but it’s been said that the guardian and protector always reincarnate close to each other. If that’s true, she might be someone you know, or someone you’ve once met, who knows. And if I’m not wrong, she would be finishing her 100th reincarnation soon, so if she comes to harm before that… “

“…She’ll… be gone forever… physically and spiritually...”

“To say it badly, yes.”

”Well, that’s not going to happen under my watch!”

“We hope so. It’s almost 5 now, you better leave.”

“So soon? But I’ll see you some other day, I guess.”

“Oh, please don't. Things are never good when you visit. But let me at least send you out.”

The elder led Hitomi out by the shoulders, chatting with her about more casual topics along the way just to brighten the mood. After short-lived laughter and jokes, they reached the exit. The now sober woman pats Hitomi on the back before watching her leave, and then she sighs heavily. She takes a few steps further out the shop, wanting to catch some fresh air but someone decided to interrupt her with a grip on the shoulder. She was startled a little.

“Nakazawa-san! You haven’t paid the bill!”

“Damn, guess you caught me.” She took only a second to think up of something to say, “Don’t worry, I’m not done yet. It’s 5pm now, I would like some dishes served.!”

“Just remember to pay, we’re running out of space to record tabs for you.”

Shrugging nonchalantly, Nakazawa Yuko followed the restaurant manager back into the building, demanding for more of this and that along the way. Secretly, she prays that Hitomi would be successful, for the price to pay for failure is a lot more than just money.

Already 3 blocks down the road after leaving the restaurant, Hitomi repeated her senior’s words in her head, careful to pay attention of where she’s going as well.

<i>’…the guardian and protector always reincarnate close to each other…’</i>

“Could be anyone I know! Holy- no wait, it can’t be Rika… she’s too old. The Berries? Nope, too young. My cousin? Mummy? Argh, your guesses are running wild, Yoshizawa! But… who could it be?”

Probably not one for multitasking, her absentmindedness made her knock into somebody. The other fell back down on her behind, dropping everything in her arms. Hitomi simply stumbled backwards, having a strong footing to boot. Frowning slightly, she bent over to offer a helping hand. However, the fallen girl only whimpered and lifted her head up to see what or whom she had crashed into. Both women’s eyes widened in surprise, but the older broke out in a grin.

“Ai-chan?”


A/N : * = Curtains, lol.
Finally something on the antagonist.
aaaaand, possible Ai/Yossie vibes?! What happens to Risa then? or Rika? D: *shrugs* I haven't thought of that yet :>
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« Reply #17 on: October 24, 2007, 06:50:00 PM »
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“Well… doesn’t seem to belong to anyone.”

...

“Though I should probably hand it over to security…”

She made her decision and promptly attempted to hold the pendent itself. Immediately, there was a sudden shock that made her retract her hand and dropping the pendant to the ground. The jade cracked upon impact, causing the red liquid within to leak out, forming a small puddle.
Somehow, I get the feeling that red liquid is going to be something pretty significant.

And the shock that was felt, if this pendant has some mystical properties, perhaps that could be the first sign(s) of it bonding to the girl? :?



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As she touched the artifact again, she felt that same shock from before. Though this time, she did not even flinch. Rather, she stood up and pocketed the ruined pendant with a dissatisfied expression, taking her time to examine her body, which was a strange thing to do.

“What is this?! Pathetic! ”

She groaned, disgust in her voice. She kicked and stretched, bewildered by her surroundings and taking curious as well as offensive glares at everyone and anything. It was as though she… wasn’t herself.
Not herself? Oshit! The girl has been possessed by another person's spirit/essence (which was probably trapped or imprisoned within the pendant)!  By the sound of it, wouldn't be surprising if it was a male spirit (who would definitely find it weird to suddenly find he has the body of a young girl).



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Elsewhere, Yoshizawa Hitomi walked the streets while hiding her face under a cap. Unnecessary attention from fans was all right with her, but having them stalk her was simply out of the question, especially for today.

...

Clearing her throat to ease the nervousness, she slid open the door and entered the private compartment, greeting the only person inside with a quick nod.

“Yoshizawa! Nice to see you again!”

Hitomi smiled at the older woman and sat down on the opposite of her with her legs crossed. She looked around the room, in awe at the new decorations set up compared to the last time she was here. It may seem like a weak room to be in when discussing private matters, but Hitomi knew that whatever was said in this room, will always stay in.

...

“So, why are we meeting again?”

“I need to… find somebody. The guardian’s incarnate…”
Yossi's going to secret meetings? And who are the "Guardian's Incarnate?" They related to the possible visions/dreams that Yossi had mentioned before? If so, how does she know about them?



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“You can’t see her.” The elder spoke calmed down quickly, seriousness in her voice.

“I don’t have a choice, I’ve lost the onmyoji’s soul…” Hitomi mumbled, fidgeting with the tatami mat.

“Did you just say you lost…” The woman blinked, taking awhile to absorb the information. “Oh Kami! You lost Sonobe!? Of all things?! ”
What the...so YOSSI was the "caregiver" girl at the beginning who was panicking because she "lost it?" :OMG:

In the second chapter she says:
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“Anyway, I mean, let’s say a vengeful murderer was let loose and you were the one who released him and now he’s off to kill that person who landed him in jail in the first place.”
This must be referring this "Sonobe" character that the other person mentioned. If he's indeed as dangerous as they're making him out to be (which right now seems very likely), then they are indeed in DEEP trouble.  :shocked:



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“I’m going to resolve this, I swear! Just let me find her.”

...


“She has no memories of being a guardian, she has no powers left. She’s just an ordinary human being now, like you and me. You can’t do anything.”

Hitomi grew quiet. She knew this all along, and basically everyone involved knows the story too. What’s the use of finding a mere mortal when there’s an evil sorcerer’s spirit on the loose?

...

“You know, right? Among all other memories I had lost in these last 2000 years, reincarnating over and over, I can’t forget her importance to me. I feel that being able to remember that is significant, some sort of fate that the Gods can’t control.”
Ah, so Sonobe is after someone? Probably seeking vengeance against the person who imprisoned him.  With the revelation that Yossi's a 2000-year old immortal spirit, the whole "caregiver" thing sort of makes sense. She was more a "guard" than a "caregiver" in that it would have been her job to see that Sonobe's spirit didn't escape.

But as for the mystery woman that Yossi's wanting to protect, what's she doing on earth anyway? Yossi's presence is more understandable because they needed someone to watch/guard the pendant. But what about this other woman? They're making it sound like she's an immortal spirit similar to Yossi, but slightly different.  Could it be that this mystery spirit now resides in Aichan? It would sort of explain the weird dreams that she's been having lately. 
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it’s been said that the guardian and protector always reincarnate close to each other. If that’s true, she might be someone you know, or someone you’ve once met, who knows.
Whoa, so Yossi doesn't even know where/who the mystery woman is? I guess they don't have any spiritual/psychic link with each other, assuming that they even had one to begin with.



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And if I’m not wrong, she would be finishing her 100th reincarnation soon, so if she comes to harm before that… “

“…She’ll… be gone forever… physically and spiritually...”

“To say it badly, yes.”
100 must be the magic number, and possibly the reason why Sonobe was imprisoned to begin with. It's possible that he wanted a position of power (possibly even one that was held by the mystery spirit herself), but he could only take/claim it before 100 reincarnations had been completed. Once the 100th one was done, he probably would no longer be able to claim it for himself (like a "coming of age" thing).



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“Nakazawa-san! You haven’t paid the bill!”
OSNAP! The other woman was Yuko!!! :lol:



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“Damn, guess you caught me.” She took only a second to think up of something to say, “Don’t worry, I’m not done yet. It’s 5pm now, I would like some dishes served.!”

“Just remember to pay, we’re running out of space to record tabs for you.”
CHICKEN BREASTS!!! :wahaha:



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“Could be anyone I know! Holy- no wait, it can’t be Rika… she’s too old. The Berries? Nope, too young. My cousin? Mummy? Argh, your guesses are running wild, Yoshizawa! But… who could it be?”

Probably not one for multitasking, her absentmindedness made her knock into somebody. The other fell back down on her behind, dropping everything in her arms. Hitomi simply stumbled backwards, having a strong footing to boot. Frowning slightly, she bent over to offer a helping hand. However, the fallen girl only whimpered and lifted her head up to see what or whom she had crashed into. Both women’s eyes widened in surprise, but the older broke out in a grin.

“Ai-chan?”
Is it? :w00t:



Watch it's probably either Rika, Risa or Miki that has gotten possessed by Sonobe. :P
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« Reply #18 on: October 25, 2007, 01:42:25 AM »
This is soo cooll!!

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« Reply #19 on: October 25, 2007, 02:07:12 AM »
*gasp!* Did Ai chan just break the one thing Yossie was looking for?!  and is she now possessed by the evil spirit?!...oh wait..is that even possible?  So many questions, the story is just too intriguing! 

btw I noticed that each chapter has a slightly different feel to it.  Everything about this story has an interesting mix which makes it so addicting  :wub:

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