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Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« on: November 23, 2007, 10:21:50 PM »
Hello People of JPHIP I am Poets... all of probably don't know me but hopefully we can get along :)

So it's my frist try at a H!P FanFic, I am a veteran FanFic writer though. I already have a plot set for this and have written three tentative chapters that still need to be beta'd. But I'm not sure if the fic'll be recieved well. This fic will have several pairings... and will most likely have all 4 of the major Yo-pairings in some form or other... including some other favorite and unsual pairings. 

So with out any further wait,

Dozou
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CHP: 1 "The first step to acceptance is admittance"


"To understand the world around you, you always gotta give up a little of yourself"
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Wind began to blow harder and quicker, their hair smacked their face as it jerked all around. Drops of sweat began to mix themselves with the drops of water that had fallen from the sky. They both stood there not knowing how to react to the current situation. One had just blurted something out and the other one was still processing it.

“Are you saying… what I think you are saying?”

“I’m not sure” she blinked in confusion “What do you think I’m saying”

“I see” the younger of the two declared “Well, I’ll just lay it out like this. I know what I feel but I won’t admit my feelings until you do” she stomped on her left heal and turned to walk into the opposite direction. Suddenly she felt a tug on her sleeve. She stopped. Turned around and pulled the other girl close to her. They collided in an embrace. The rain began to fall with less ease now; increasing its intensity with every passing moment. It seemed to mirror the tension between the teens. “You know why you can’t bring yourself to be with me?” the younger girl asked. At that moment lightening briefly illuminated the sky and the earth beneath it. For a brief moment they both could see each other faces clearly, they both could see each others tears clearly. “Because… you’re broken, you’re incomplete. The girl who was given everything out here has never given anything” she placed her hand on the other’s chest “in here”. The girl that had stayed silent couldn’t take it anymore and decided to do the most impacting thing of that night. She grabbed her younger counter part by the collar and pulled her in for the most significant kiss that she would ever give another human being. Both simultaneously wrapped their arms around each other releasing the pent up tension they had walked with for so long and savoring the only proof of their mutual attraction. They didn’t care that their kiss was the mixture of water, salty tears and saliva, to them that had to be the most blissful of all kisses. A truly amazing kiss yet sadly short lived, the older girl released the younger one and took a few steps back till she was out of reach.

“I’m sorry” she gasped through a tear streaked face. The other girls just stood there staring at her through the rain, barely making out the facial features of the other. She proceeded to wipe her tears away and flashed a smile.

“Isn’t funny” she said loudly, the rain had gotten so intense it was difficult to be heard. “We’re here in the middle of an abandoned bridge, soaked to the bone in the middle of some freak storm, I’m the one mostly talking and yet you some how initiate the unforgettable moments.” she shook her head “come to think of it, you should have been Mr. Moonlight” this comment made the other girl laugh. “I realize we have so many reasons to not be together, but just 1 kiss from you makes them all seem irrelevant” she stated. She waited for the other girl to talk, but damn it she just didn’t feel like communicating “Doesn’t… Doesn’t that mean anything to you?” The only response she got were foot steps running away from her presence. For some reason this made her start laughing uncontrollably. Once the giggles had finally settled down she leaned her back up against the railing of the bridge and slid down to the floor. “First you blurt out you love me, then you kiss and then… you run away” Yossy didn’t know then but that would be the night that she cried hardest and longest for any other human being.
« Last Edit: June 14, 2008, 09:41:34 AM by poets »
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2007, 10:34:45 PM »
I've been able to read one fic from the start in the past...then I was away for a while so I couldn't carry on readin it. I know it's nice to get comments so I'm gonna leave one and say that I'm interested in this, hopefully I can continue reading this. :monster:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2007, 11:01:24 PM »
Wow!!! Happy to have a new writer here, that means new fics!!! :w00t:
Ok, So this is going to have a lot of Yo-pairings?!! Great!!!

Now with the story:
It looks interesting, the first I could say is that the other person is not Gotcchin, Mako-chan or Aya-chan or Ai-chan, I include this last two because you said there will be unusual pairings, so maybe is Miki, Rika... I can only think in them xD by the sudden sudden aggressiveness I think is Miki, but when she run then I think is Rika XD

This looks interesting, poor Yossy, why they make her suffer? :cry:
I hope you update a new chapter soon

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #3 on: November 24, 2007, 12:34:57 AM »
Interesting start. Do continue poets. Well....I think I agree with Kreuz here, it might be Miki, but since she runs away, Rika is the likely candidate. But, why mention Mr. Moonlight? Got more suspicious here, so def. Rika...unless Mako is suddenly back for business.  XD 

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #4 on: November 24, 2007, 01:48:29 AM »
I don't think she could be Mako, because poets said Yossy was the younger one, and Mako-chan is younger than Yossy... well, that's what I think XD

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #5 on: November 24, 2007, 02:19:18 AM »
Iiiiiiiinteresting.

The most likely candidates are Miki and Rika, of course, because of the age factor and also the fact that 95% of fics have Yossy with one or the other. ...or both! :otomerika:

My money's on Rika.

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #6 on: November 24, 2007, 03:53:46 AM »
Uhm, at first I thought it could be Maki, because she has enough Mr. Moonlight aura about her. But, she's also younger than Yossy... So, ruled out.  :P

almond is right about most fics pairing Yossy with Rika or Miki, and based on the Mr. Moonlight reference, then I think it could be Rika. But if it happened to be Miki, I wonder how exactly she should have been Mr. Moonlight, since that single was released before her debut...  :?

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #7 on: November 24, 2007, 05:02:00 AM »
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This fic will have several pairings...
Raburabu pairings?  :inlove:



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and will most likely have all 4 of the major Yo-pairings in some form or other
FOUR Yossi pairings??? :stunned:
* JFC thinks...IshiYoshi, YoMiki, YoMaki and...YoMako?
:?

This sounds like it's going to be interesting just for this.  :D



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Wind began to blow harder and quicker, their hair smacked their face as it jerked all around. Drops of sweat began to mix themselves with the drops of water that had fallen from the sky. They both stood there not knowing how to react to the current situation. One had just blurted something out and the other one was still processing it.

“Are you saying… what I think you are saying?”

“I’m not sure” she blinked in confusion “What do you think I’m saying”
Hmmm...so some type of declaration was made...outside while it's raining?  :O



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I know what I feel but I won’t admit my feelings until you do
As far as ultimatums go, that's a new one.



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Suddenly she felt a tug on her sleeve. She stopped. Turned around and pulled the other girl close to her. They collided in an embrace.
Well, guess that should give her an idea of how the other one feels. :yep:



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“You know why you can’t bring yourself to be with me?” the younger girl asked. At that moment lightening briefly illuminated the sky and the earth beneath it. For a brief moment they both could see each other faces clearly, they both could see each others tears clearly. “Because… you’re broken, you’re incomplete. The girl who was given everything out here has never given anything” she placed her hand on the other’s chest “in here”.
If this is true, one big reason for it is probably just simple fear.  She's scared to put herself out there, scared of being hurt if she does.



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A truly amazing kiss yet sadly short lived, the older girl released the younger one and took a few steps back till she was out of reach.

“I’m sorry” she gasped through a tear streaked face.
Sorry? For what?



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“I realize we have so many reasons to not be together, but just 1 kiss from you makes them all seem irrelevant” she stated.
Head VS heart...heart wins out almost every single time. :heart:



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The only response she got were foot steps running away from her presence. For some reason this made her start laughing uncontrollably. Once the giggles had finally settled down she leaned her back up against the railing of the bridge and slid down to the floor. “First you blurt out you love me, then you kiss and then… you run away” Yossy didn’t know then but that would be the night that she cried hardest and longest for any other human being.
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH??? :o

Who would do this to Yossi?!?!? :pleeease:


Kreuz and almond are right. Unless we're about to be hit with one hell of a twist, the other girl can only be Rika or Miki, since amongst the various Yo-pairings that have been circulating, they're the only members who are older than Yossi. 



(Of course, when I say "hell of a twist" I mean something like pairing Yossi up with someone TOTALLY new...like...say...oh...for example...I dunnoooooooooooooooo...Kaori). O_O
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #8 on: November 24, 2007, 05:13:12 AM »
Out of all the readers that exist I get the analytical ones  :lol:, I wasn't aiming for it to be a major surprise but I didn't expect you guys to pick up the trail so quickly. *sigh* I'm not ready to state who it is yet cuz i think it'd mess with my writing right now but most of you are certainly on the right track... the person was in MM and is older than Yossy. Though why stop at Rika guys? can't it be Abe? For those who think there is deeper reason behind the "mr. Moonlight" reference then yes you are correct, but I think some of you might be dissapointed when you find out what it is. Anyhow, glad it had a good reception  :mon exhaust: I'll be posting up Ch. 2 tommorrow.


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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #9 on: November 24, 2007, 05:45:31 AM »
Damn, I KNEW I should have put Nacchi instead of Kaori. :lol:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #10 on: November 24, 2007, 07:50:38 AM »
^ Lol! I thought the same, but then... NAH! XD

But if any MM member who's older than Yossy is game, we cannot forget Yaguchi! Or Kei...  :lol:
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #11 on: November 24, 2007, 03:43:59 PM »
Lessee. A MM. member older than Yossy... I'm assuming ones that were in the group at the same time she was so...
Nakazawa
Iida
Abe
Yasuda
Yaguchi
Ishikawa
Fujimoto

Well, unless you really give us a WTF and make it like... Sayaka.

Rereading it....

Ok, if it's not Rika (which it COULD be and the author's just trying to throw us off... not that I know anything about that), then I'm guessing Nacchi because it kind of sounds like her.

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #12 on: November 24, 2007, 06:22:09 PM »
After reading Poets comment,  I begin to think it was Kaori. She's taller than Ypssie. She was known to be close to Yossie at some point, especially during Mr. Moonlight era and she can act manly with a bit of a gayness.  :lol:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #13 on: November 25, 2007, 04:11:12 AM »
Phew... I was able to post it right before 12 midnight. About who it as in the first CH... well I just want to clear the air on this.. It's definately not Kaori. To me that just looks wrong.... everyone else is a possible candidate. Except for Nakazawa, she wasn't in MM for Mr. Moonlight.

Oh and Sorry for the long ass chapter here. Just wanted to get the ball moving.

For the record, this is not a "fluff" or an "Angst", it's a "Flangst" :). Expect to see both  :'(  :grin:

Anywho....

Dozou!
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CH.2 “Wagering is the only way big kids know how to play”

The race is not always to the swift nor the battle to the strong, but that's the way to bet.  -Damon Runyon

(2 years later)

In some random dressing room within the building that belonged to the ever so well known Hello!Project Record label a couple began to play the way that couples usually do.

“Za-kun!” Aya attempted to push her self away from her lover who was trying to eat her ear alive. She soon found out that they were all tangled up a little to well.

“Shhhh… you know that name is only for private” Za-kun place their index finger on Aya’s lips.

“Look who’s talking about privacy?” Aya gave a playful glare “and you know fun things like this is for private too” Za-kun let out let out a sigh and got off of Aya.

“It’s your fault” Za-kun pointed at the costume Aya was wearing. Then, finally was struck by a revelation. Aya’s lover stood up with a livid face “Come to think of it who’s idea was it to dress you like that?” Za-kun no longer found what Aya’s apparel attractive, truth be told Za-kun was now found it out right offensive and disrespectful.

“Honestly!” Aya stood up and looked at Za-kun straight in the eye. “You know it’s part of the job”. Za-kun shifted uneasily under Aya’s gaze.

“I don’t understand how your manager can be so strict about us but suspiciously lenient about your clothes. Do you know what it is to be walking around in a short tank top, no a bra tank top and jeans. You’re basically naked” bipolarly Za-kun grabbed Aya by the shoulder and laid a big wet one on her. “You are irresistible, even I can’t control my self. I’m going to have a talk with your manager right now” Za-kun began to walk to the door when Aya grabbed the hoodie Za-kun was wearing. She pulled and pushed Za-kun on to the couch. She was giving her “shut up and watch” look as she jumped on her fallen prey.

“So you can’t control yourself? That’s a rare state indeed and I’m sure that you know I must take advantage.” As Aya leaned in to kiss Za-kun they heard someone knock on the door and clear their throat. It was Aya’s manager who was obviously not amused.

“Matsuura-san, you know better than this.” She had bored face pasted on her. “I don’t care what you do in your on time but while you’re on company time you behave.” Aya’s manager stared at Za-kun now “Was there something you wanted to address me about?” Za-kun decided to take the opportunity.

“Yeah… why is sh-” Za-Kun was then interrupted by Aya’s manager.

“She is wearing what she has to wear to fit the theme behind the music video for “Good Bye Natsuo. She is wearing what she must because that is her job. In fact she is right now doing her job” Aya’s maneger placed her hand behind Za-kun’s back and eloquently escorted Za-kun out. “She warned you of this way before you two decided to date, now have nice day and call her after work” with that said Aya’s manager closed door leaving the pissed off Za-kun out side, everything she had said was true and there was nothing that could be said about it.

“Damn it” Za-kun whispered. Then abruptly the door once again opened.

“And one more thing” Aya’s manager poked her head out “your manager just called me and told me to relay this message to you: Please come back to work Yoshizawa-san, we need to finish filming the PV” and as abruptly as the door had been opened it was closed. Yossy stood there for another two minuets to see if any further activity took place but all she could hear was the manager scolding Aya. This in return reminded her of the scolding she was about to hear.

Yossy began to walk back to the studio where they were filming. She had asked for a 5 minuet bathroom break and was now running 40 minuets over. She decided not to make her request a total lie and went to use the bathroom. Interestingly enough as she washed her hands she felt someone poke her arm.

“Found you” a familiar voice spoke. Yossy looked up to see who it was but only saw Ishikawa Rika.

“That wasn’t you, right?” Yossy asked. Rika shook her head to answer no. Yossy looked lower and found the owner of the slap with a very sullen stare peering into her.

“They separated us into search party’s to look for you” Rika finally talked. “You know we have time limit.” And the scolding begins.

“Brrrrr…” Yossy pretended to be cold “I don’t like this Rika-chan, I prefer Charmy. I want Charmy” Yossy began to mockingly cry. “Waaaah… this Rika-chan scares me”

“Yocchan this is no time to play around” Rika scowled, it always annoyed her when Yossy didn’t take her seriously. “Let’s go before my manager starts getting upset as well”. The group was walked out of the bathroom and had already reached the studio door when Yossy felt a tug on her left earlobe. She squinted to see what was causing the pain and found her mentor to be the one applying it.

“Itai yo!” Yossy said loudly “Mari-chan, let go it hurts”

“Yossy, you and I will speak after recording is done” Yaguchi let go of the girl who towerd her and walked straight into the studio. Everyone was getting ready to film the dance shot. One of the few parts everyone had been looking forward too. Yossy instinctively grabbed her ear.

“That looked painful” Rika stated.

“Yes, want me to do it to you?” Yossy smiled.

“No” Rika rolled her eyes “Let me see how bad the damage is” Rika removed Yossy's hand and grabbed a hold of the red earlobe. “Aww you poor thing” Rika said.

“Yeah I know, if they would have told me that my mentor was actually a tormentor I would have never accepted going into Morning Musu- itaitaitaitaitai” Yossy felt the familiar pain of someone pulling on her ear. This time it wasn’t her mentor, it was worse… it was evil Charmy.

"Next time please be less selfish" Rika let go of Yossy and followed Yaguchi into the studio.
 
"Damn women" Yossy breathed.
 
She walked into the studio to find everyone lazing around and talking. The gokkies were in there usual circle chatting away only difference was the site of seeing three more people in it. Apparently Ogawa Makoto had done what she's best at, "networking". She was really making the rokkies feel welcomed. That brought a smile to Yossy's face. The best company to have was Ogawa Makoto. There was just something about the girl that made everyone just feel at ease. Even Fujimoto who is considered difficult to approach liked having Makoto near, as long as she didn't get annoying. Yossy believed that it just had to be the girls smile. It wasn’t as eye catching as Niigaki’s but it certainly was more inviting.

Opposite of the gokkies were the senior members chatting away and reading the newspaper. When they all noticed Yossy finally came they all flashed a look. They were mad and they weren't trying to hide it either. Seeing that she wasn't in the mood to hear nonsense or in the mood to be scolded Yossy went to the table full of food where Nono and Aibon were located.

“Yossy~” Aibon squealed as hugged her favourite hug buddy.

“I see they found you” were the last words Nono spoke before stuffing bread in to her mouth.

“Yeah” Yossy smiled sheepishly and scratched her head. “Hey have any of you seen my manager?”

“Nope” answerd Nono. Aibon’s answer was the opposite.

“Actually, he was here when you went to the bathroom but when you didn't come back he freaked out and ran out looking for you.” Aibon looked up at Yossy and suddenly her eyes shifted and she was staring at something beyond Yossy “Don't look back now but Abe's coming up right behind you”. Yossy's smile chipped off like a noodle stuck to the wall. She suddenly felt a hand lightly rest on her shoulder.

“Guys, they're ready for us” she cheerfully said. “Come on let's go” she turned to look at Yossy. “by the way, your phone just received a text message. I mistook it for mine and read the message.” Yossy's eyes widen in fear. She hoped that it didn't say anything incriminating. “Apparently you left your pink cap with a certain... Ra-kun” the cheerfulness and wideness of Abe's eyes were gone, they had transformed into thin slits of angry suspicion. Yossy felt the fear that she had amplify. Thankfully they heard the director call them in a second time.

Whilst everyone else performed there were two figures that had watched everything take place.

“You think we should just jump out at them and say hi” asked the latest graduate to  the leader of what we call H!P.

“No lets just leave them notes telling them they’re invited”

“Sure sounds like a good idea” nodded Kei-chan.

“Yes it is, so… I’ll meet you at the bar and we’ll then wait for everyone there” Nakazawa slapped her friend in the back “ganbatte”. Kei was stunned; she just got duped into writing and placing the letters. Before she had time react Nakazawa was already in a taxi cab.

“How does this always happen” Kei shook her head as she looked for pieces of paper and a pen.

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They had arrived about two hours ago and had not stopped ordering drinks since then. The only two not drinking heavily were Abe and Yaguchi. They were both known for having sensitive tongues when it came down to drinks.

“So how are the new members turning out” Nakazawa asked.

“So far so good” Kaori answered. She took another swig from her cup.

“Yeah the only one being a bit rebellious is Fujimoto-san” Abe made sure to inform
Nakazawa of this.

“Nacchi, come on. Fujimoto is fine. She just needs to get used to the new idea.” Yaguchi defended Fujimoto. The 2nd gen member was actually quite fond of the new 6th one and sympathized with her situation.

“You only say that because you’re friends” Abe retorted.

“Well at least everything seems seamless” Kei spoke up. “Damn it could you guys stop moving it’s hard to keep up with you”

“Kei-chan” Yaguchi began to giggle her trademark giggle. “We’re sitting down, it’s impossible to move”

“Interesting, I’ve heard of people hallucinating when they drink too much” Kaori teased.

“Well, glad to see the team is still standing” Nakazawa lifted her cup for a toast.

“Kampai” they all said in unison and drank from their drinks.

“There is just one little odd ball I’ve been taking notice of though” Nakazawa spoke again. “What is up with Yoshizawa?” Abe and Kaori both sighed.

“We have a theory” Abe said.

“Oh? And what is it?”

“Well today Abe read one of her text messages and it was from some Ra-kun” Kaori explain.

“I see” Kei-chan lifted her head, there was a look of interest. “How coincidental”

“What do you mean Kei-chan” Yaguchi asked.

“No nothing. I don’t want to say anything until I confirm it.” Nobody else pushed Kei-
Chan to explain they very well that she wouldn’t, not until she had proof. “1 question though… what were you doing looking at her cell Abe?” Abe blushed lightly, she explained what happened but that didn’t seem to convince anyone.

“Returning to the topic, what are you guys planning on doing about this?” Nakazawa asked. Kaori, Abe and Yaguchi looked at each other. “Nothing huh?” the all shook their heads. “You know you have to break them up right?” they all nodded. Nakazawa laughed heartily. “I know we’re all a little” she shook her hand “tipsy, but I’m pretty sure we can still converse meaningful topics.” Kaori, Abe and Yaguchi once again looked at each other but now they were confused.

“Yuuchan, the only one not being able to hold a meaningful conversation here is you” Kei-spoke up.

“No no no, hear me out. Let’s make a little wager” Nakazawa grinned mischievously, right eyebrow became slightly higher than her left.

“Yuu-chan, what are you talking about?” Kei was starting to worry. Maybe Nakazawa was drunk but some how speaking clearly.

“We all know we can’t break her and her boyfriend up but they eventually will. So I was thinking of a way to keep her busy after they brake up. You know… so that she doesn’t have a boyfriend while in Morning Musume” everyone got closer to Nakazawa intrigued by this idea. “let’s put some girls in a competition to see who can steal Mr. Moonlights heart” every ones jaw dropped. They all thought the same thing:
THAT IS WRONG, THAT IS SICK, IT’S INHUMAN…. IT SOUNDS LIKE FUN.
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« Reply #14 on: November 25, 2007, 04:29:59 AM »
THAT IS WRONG, THAT IS SICK, IT’S INHUMAN…. IT SOUNDS LIKE FUN.

*bursts into wild applause*
...can I play?  :lol:

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« Reply #15 on: November 25, 2007, 04:48:21 AM »
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For the record, this is not a "fluff" or an "Angst", it's a "Flangst"  :). Expect to see both   :'(  :grin: 
I do believe we have another term for the H!Ptionary.  :D



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In some random dressing room within the building that belonged to the ever so well known Hello!Project Record label a couple began to play the way that couples usually do.

“Za-kun!” Aya attempted to push her self away from her lover who was trying to eat her ear alive. She soon found out that they were all tangled up a little to well.

“Shhhh… you know that name is only for private” Za-kun place their index finger on Aya’s lips.
"Za-kun"...as in...YoshiZAwa?!?!?  :shocked:  Is this MatsuYoshi???



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Za-kun grabbed Aya by the shoulder and laid a big wet one on her. “You are irresistible, even I can’t control my self. I’m going to have a talk with your manager right now” Za-kun began to walk to the door when Aya grabbed the hoodie Za-kun was wearing. She pulled and pushed Za-kun on to the couch. She was giving her “shut up and watch” look as she jumped on her fallen prey.
Oh my...:drool:



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Aya’s manager poked her head out “your manager just called me and told me to relay this message to you: Please come back to work Yoshizawa-san, we need to finish filming the PV” and as abruptly as the door had been opened it was closed.
IT IS!!! :w00t: IT'S MATSUYOSHI!!! :wriggly:



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Yossy began to walk back to the studio where they were filming. She had asked for a 5 minuet bathroom break and was now running 40 minuets over.
Oh shit Yossi! :lol:



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“Found you” a familiar voice spoke. Yossy looked up to see who it was but only saw Ishikawa Rika.

...

“They separated us into search party’s to look for you” Rika finally talked.
The girls were sent to look for her? :rofl:

 She and Aya must be really doing a good job of keeping their relationship secret. 



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The group was walked out of the bathroom and had already reached the studio door when Yossy felt a tug on her left earlobe. She squinted to see what was causing the pain and found her mentor to be the one applying it.

“Itai yo!” Yossy said loudly “Mari-chan, let go it hurts”

“Yossy, you and I will speak after recording is done” Yaguchi let go of the girl who towerd her and walked straight into the studio.
Mari kowaii~. :scared:



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“That looked painful” Rika stated.

...

“Yeah I know, if they would have told me that my mentor was actually a tormentor I would have never accepted going into Morning Musu- itaitaitaitaitai” Yossy felt the familiar pain of someone pulling on her ear. This time it wasn’t her mentor, it was worse… it was evil Charmy.
Evil Charmy! XD



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The best company to have was Ogawa Makoto. There was just something about the girl that made everyone just feel at ease. Even Fujimoto who is considered difficult to approach liked having Makoto near, as long as she didn't get annoying. Yossy believed that it just had to be the girls smile. It wasn’t as eye catching as Niigaki’s but it certainly was more inviting.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm...interesting. Interesting indeed. :hehehe:



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“Apparently you left your pink cap with a certain... Ra-kun” the cheerfulness and wideness of Abe's eyes were gone, they had transformed into thin slits of angry suspicion. Yossy felt the fear that she had amplify.
Nacchi kowaii~! :mon scare:



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“You think we should just jump out at them and say hi” asked the latest graduate to  the leader of what we call H!P.

“No lets just leave them notes telling them they’re invited”

“Sure sounds like a good idea” nodded Kei-chan.

“Yes it is, so… I’ll meet you at the bar and we’ll then wait for everyone there” Nakazawa slapped her friend in the back “ganbatte”. Kei was stunned; she just got duped into writing and placing the letters. Before she had time react Nakazawa was already in a taxi cab.

“How does this always happen” Kei shook her head as she looked for pieces of paper and a pen.
No use trying to fight it or figure it out. It IS Yuko, after all.  She just has that way about her. :pimp:

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They had arrived about two hours ago and had not stopped ordering drinks since then. The only two not drinking heavily were Abe and Yaguchi. They were both known for having sensitive tongues when it came down to drinks.
Yeah, Nacchi screams like a banshee and Mari just giggles like mad. :lol:



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Nakazawa spoke again. “What is up with Yoshizawa?” Abe and Kaori both sighed.

“We have a theory” Abe said.

“Oh? And what is it?”

“Well today Abe read one of her text messages and it was from some Ra-kun” Kaori explain.
Uh-oh...they suspect Yossi's in a relationship? If they do, it'll be interesting to see what exactly their suspicions are (namely, who they think "Ra-kun" might be).
:hee:



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“I see” Kei-chan lifted her head, there was a look of interest. “How coincidental”

“What do you mean Kei-chan” Yaguchi asked.

“No nothing. I don’t want to say anything until I confirm it.”
Ooooooh...Kei stumble upon something else that the others don't know about? :?



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“Returning to the topic, what are you guys planning on doing about this?” Nakazawa asked. Kaori, Abe and Yaguchi looked at each other. “Nothing huh?” the all shook their heads. “You know you have to break them up right?” they all nodded.
Awwwwwwwwwww...:cry:



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We all know we can’t break her and her boyfriend up but they eventually will.
OHSNAP! THEY BELIEVE YOSSI'S DATING A DUDE! ;D



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I was thinking of a way to keep her busy after they brake up. You know… so that she doesn’t have a boyfriend while in Morning Musume” everyone got closer to Nakazawa intrigued by this idea. “let’s put some girls in a competition to see who can steal Mr. Moonlights heart”
Oh man THIS is going to be interesting! :kekeke: 



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every ones jaw dropped. They all thought the same thing:
THAT IS WRONG, THAT IS SICK, IT’S INHUMAN…. IT SOUNDS LIKE FUN.
:wahaha:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #16 on: November 25, 2007, 05:02:55 AM »
It DOES sounds like fun! Tho' Aya and Yossie? Hmmm...might have to get used to the pair first.

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #17 on: November 25, 2007, 05:25:17 AM »
Good thing I'm already used to the idea of Aya and Yossy. It's not a fave, but I've accepted it's plausible. Also, they seem to be cute together.  :oops:

But hey, Yossy's already a pimp by now.  :O Fun is bound to come!  :yep:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #18 on: November 25, 2007, 11:02:07 PM »
I was kinda confused in ch.1 but ch.2 really cleared it up. :D  I see Aya and Yossy as plausible as well. Almond's story made me think of them a bit more than usual recently. :lol: Because of Aya's background, I can see her with someone like Yossy.  "The Game" just sounds like too much fun for one person. XD Okay maybe not a good idea for Yossy but for the rest who want some entertainment.  I like how all the characters are presented in your story.

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave
« Reply #19 on: November 26, 2007, 04:31:45 PM »
Glad you guys liked it :D, I should be posting up the new CH today. Funny thing about this Matsuyoshi pair, it was actually inspired by "Almonds" Fic 100% Kataomoi. They were never a possibility pairing for me but when i thought about it they would actually be a fun pair... so i decided to let my imagination run wild with how they might look together  :lol:. Yet tis still but the second Ch of the story and things are only starting to look interesting  :twisted:, those of you getting attached to the matsuyoshi idea, don't you never know what might happen. This is the land of falling pants so hold on cuz this story might just blow them off  :lol:.................................. what i just said was so corny :rofl:

BTW, sorry for the grammatical mistakes on the last one. My beta is on vacation and I had to do it myself. Pretty bad when a writer can't write  :cry:
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