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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 11 The Bet Begins Part 1/2)
« Reply #80 on: March 04, 2008, 02:12:49 AM »
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“Yeah that’s how it is” Kago stated

“How it is…”  Tsuji repeated. They had just explained everything to the elder sister. How Tsuji had found the paper, which didn’t rest well with Yuko, to how they had planned to get all of them together in the conference room.

“I would have never seen you two capable of such a thing” Yuko, slightly pissed, placed the empty flask of alcohol on the table.
It is pretty impressive though that they were able to figure it out. :D



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“We want in” they both said and looked to the side a bit embarrassed about it all.

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All the adults in the room had their jaws hanging unattractively.
TsujiKago =  :sweatdrop:
Other members in the room =  :dizzy:



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“Okay so you two have now been added to the bet. Kei is adding your amount to the pot as we speak” Abe, Yaguchi and Kaori once again had their mouths hanging unattractively.
XD



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“Chotto matte” Kago looked confused “I don’t think Rika-chan or Mako-chan would have a chance in heck with Yocchan”

“WHY?!?” Tsuji, Yaguchi and Kaori chimed in unison. They seemed to be slightly offended by it all. Kago half-smiled to the left as she slightly twitched. She knew she’d hit a nerve and if she wasn’t careful… well, she had a feeling she’d be in pain.
Nono/Kaori/Mari =  :gmon pissed:
Aibon =  :mon sweat:



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“Well, to be honest, Goto was my first option but then I remembered that Yossy knows about Goto’s past relationships and mostly likely would run from her.” Abe felt a slight irk at the sound of that.
Oooooooooh....:O



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“Riiight” Kago continue. “So my second and final choice is Miki” she smiled brightly.

“Good Job” Nakazawa uncharacteristically hi-fived the youngest girl of the room.

“You picked Miki?”  Kago asked.

Nakazawa nodded.

“So did I” Abe chirped up.

“Maji de!?!” Kago said in shock. “So the three of us are rooting for Fujimoto?”
WOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!! GO MIKI-SAMA!!! :rockon:



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“OH!” Kago yelled and caught everyone’s attention. “How could I forget” she placed a hand on Tsuji’s shoulder.

“OH SNAP” it seems the same thing dawned on Tsuji as well.

“Konkon… come out” Kago spoke to the closet door in the conference room.
OHSNAP! KONKON WAS THERE THE WHOLE TIME!!!  :gmon twirl:



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“Sayu” Eri laughed “you are too funny” she practically had a giggle fit.

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“What in the world are you talking about? There is absolutely nothing to admit” She declared.

“Sayu” the tanner of the girls stood up and turned to look at the fair skinned one. “You like Yoshizawa-sempai” a hot wave of blood rushed its way up to Sayu’s cheeks.
EHHH??? :o



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‘oh no!’ Sayu thought ‘I overloaded Eri and she blue screened on me… now she’s probably in a boot loop! Crap! I messed up her hardrive….wait, how did I know all those terms?’ thinking of the devastation that she probably caused to Eri’s brain made Sayu over dramatically raise her fist and shake it.
:on lol:




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“I need to speak to Yossy for a while and in private. Do you mind if I steal her away for today.” Goto walked up and linked her arm around Yossy’s.

Makoto bit her lip in disappointment. She really wanted to go out with Yossy but she didn’t want to stop Goto from talk to her, especially if it is important.
Maki starting to make her move? :?



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“The futsal team finally got made.”

“OH! It did. Awesome. Do you know who’s in it?”

“You… Me… Mako” Goto went down the list of players that she was certain were on. So far every one had caused a smile on Yossy’s face. “Rika” then the smile disappeared “Ayaya” then it turned into a frown.

“Wait… what?!?”

Goto was puzzled by her reaction “Did I say something wrong?”

“Aya’s in it?” Yossy’s mouth gaped open “Damn it” she bawled up her hands.
Oh geez... :gmon blonde:



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“You know Yossy” Goto twirled a strand of her own hair “that’s no excuse to leave the team. Just cause your ex is going to be there. ”

“Hah… you’re one to talk” Yossy sniffed. “When ever you find out Abe is going to be somewhere you try at all costs to avoid going” Goto stopped twirling.
Oh crud.  :doh:



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“Maki” she said in playful voice “come to think about it, you never did tell me what happen between you and Abe”
 
“You were right Yossy” Maki straighten her back “it has been a while a since we’ve sat down and talked” she flashed a reluctant look at Yossy.
Seems fair that Maki should blab. She got Yossi to confess to her about her dating Aya. :yep:



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“Mako-sempai” Reina’s voice was laced with concerned. “Are you okay?” she asked the tear streaked girl in front of her. Reina, who had just recovered from her own teary session, was walking towards the elevator trying evading the cutting thoughts of earlier events involving a specific Natsumi Abe.
:pen_cry:



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“Mako-sempai” the wonky eyed sixth gen turned to look at her superior “the job of a sempai is to help out the newbie when they need help, nee?” Mako nodded “and ultimately the job of the Kohai is to support their senior.” She looked down at her nails and pretend to clean underneath them “If you ever need to vent, remember I’m here to support you” Reina gave a side up-ward glance. It was obvious to Makoto that she was slightly embarrassed by what she said. What ever the reason Mako was feeling down was had now disappeared. It was replaced by a warm feeling she had never really experienced.
Awwwwwwwwwww... :oops:

Reina's right, you know. Sometimes the sempais need just has much help/comfort as the kouhais do.  Providing support is an act that works both ways. :)



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“Honto ni… arigatou” Mako whispered to Reina. The younger girl’s face was slightly redden, she was unsure how to properly react to the emotional Mako. Since she her self was a very reserved person. Reina raised her arms hesitantly before finally deciding to hug the older one tightly.

“It’s the…” the kitten of the Rokkies gulped “least I could do”
:wriggly:



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“I know” Mako released the yankee. Finally the doors of the elevator performed their never ending task of opening. Gaki and Takahashi who were carelessly chatting away were silenced at the sight of the other two girls grinning at each other inside the metal box.

“Did we interrupt something?” Gaki joked. Mako turned and gave Bruce Nii an evil eye.
:hiakhiakhiak:




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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 11 The Bet Begins Part 1/2)
« Reply #81 on: March 04, 2008, 05:32:00 PM »
I've been waiting for this updated for so long but it was worth it :farofflook:

Kago and Tsuji join the bet and Maki finally makes her moves :ding: It's getting more and more interesting  :mon fyeah:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 11 The Bet Begins Part 1/2)
« Reply #82 on: March 05, 2008, 08:27:32 PM »
I spotted THREE typos and grammar errors, I know it's my second language but if even I can spot them that must mean you were 90% sleepy when you re-read it 5 times. :grin:

Great chap! I love Nakazawa here, always the mad and scary onee-san. and what is Kon Kon doing in the closet?? pun intended.   XD

So Yossy opened up, Goto try to seduce her and Mako is slightly heartbroken. Hmmm...I think I like Mako more and more in this story especially this chapter where a certain sentence remind me of a special puppy.  :P

oh...and Eri apparently hasn't realize yet, she has a little crush on Sayumi.  :muffin:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 11 The Bet Begins Part 1/2)
« Reply #83 on: March 06, 2008, 09:10:10 PM »
I really enjoyed this chapter. Where should I start

-THE TWINS STRIKE and they are pulling their repeating act none the less, just like in the gekijou skits.  :shy2:.
-Poor Yuko and her vodka, the flask was empty must make her feel all  :banghead: but makes me all  :lol:
-Kaori and Yaguchi trying to set a better example was funny, Yuko and Kei not giving a crap was priceless.
- and WTF KONKON was there the whole time!  :shock:

-Sayu and Eri, they're really cute here. Sayu liking Yossui was interesting, don't know if to make a big deal about it though. Questions is does Eri like sayu, it would seem so wouldn't it? Sayu talking in computer lingo, Eri and the marble and the cookie reference were LOL.

-oh ARIGATO! POE! Finally some action from the YOMAKI pairing  :hip devil: . Of course Maki would already be making her first move!! B-but why wont Maki tell Yossui about her past with Natsumi   :? .... what the hell did just happen between those two  :-\

-My favorite thing in this whole chapter HAD to be the Makoto and Reina interaction. I'm such a sucker for sempai/kohai interaction. Good girls Reina  :yep:

Again really liked the CH! Can't wait untill the update. O, & BTW, you lied about being quicker with the updates :mon butt:
But It's okay because this chapter was really good. Please due try to update quicker  :'(

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #84 on: March 07, 2008, 10:17:03 PM »
CH: 12 THE BET BEGINS PART 2/2

The race is not always to the swift nor the battle to the strong, but that's the way to bet
-Damon Runyon




“Is there anyone else in here we should be concerned about?” Kei asked slightly annoyed.

“Abe” Nakzawa bellowed “Kaori, Yaguchi” all three looked at Nakazawa expectantly. “Search the room for anymore people” all three robotically nodded and began searching. Nono, konokon and Aibon glanced at one another; they couldn’t understand how Nakazawa could hold so much power over the human beings of this record label.

“Ano” Konkon softly spoke “I can guarantee you there is no one else here” Nakazawa eyed the girl carefully. Refusing to remove her gaze off the gokkie she called the three current human hunters.

“Abe, Kaori, Yaguchi” they stopped in mid activity “sit” she commanded and at once all three did as told.

“I take it you too will be taking part in this bet?” Kei poked her tongue with her pen ready to jot down the new participants name. 

“Ano nee… hai” Konkon shamefully nodded “sou desu”

“Are you sure?” Nakazawa who still starred at the girl asked “It’s not mandatory, I promise I wont hurt you if you don’t but if you do tell anyone about it…” she slammed her hand so hard on the desk that not only did everyone jump but it made Kei screw up what ever she was writing. Konkon nodded profusely.


“No,ofcoursenotNakazawa-san; Iwouldn’ttellanyoneaboutit.” she spoke so quick it was hard to keep track of that she said “I do wish to participate in the bet though” Yaguchi who had successfully kept quiet snorted sarcastically.

“What’s you’re issue?” The Ring Leader of the bet finally stopped staring at the girl and switched on to Yaguchi .

“Nothing… it’s just” Yaguchi hesitated to continue.

“Just what?” Yuko asked a bit more forceful.

“It’s always the quiet ones you know?” The mini moni quickly looked at the now crimsoned Konkon.
   
“Okay, enough chatter” Kei looked at all the girls who had been talking. “You there” she pointed her pen at the three teenagers that stood before her “take a seat” she pointed her pen downward. “We’re going to go over the rules & regulations! I think it would be best if we all run them by again” Nakazawa gave everyone brand new packages.

“If you open to the last page you’ll see the list of rules & regs” Nakazawa took out her reading glasses “I want you all to read them carefully and remember them.”

“Konkon, since you’re our latest entry I believe you should read them out loud” Kei suggested. Konkon looked around the table at the awaiting eyes. She found this all quite silly and weird but she understood that if things weren’t treated in such particular fashion no one would take the bet seriously.

“1: The girls involved within the wager may never know about bet.” she paused and received an approving nod from Nakazawa.

“2: To win this bet, the PIMP must profess her love to one of the wager’s candidates before her graduation date.”
 
“Hold on” Kaori spoke up “what if she graduates and still hasn’t chosen someone?”

“Don’t worry about it, when we reach that bridge we’ll cross it. I already have an idea of what I’ll do” Nakazawa answered. “Continue Konno”

“3: Each candidate will be told a different story as to why she should pursue the PIMP

4: Each girl will have a listener to report back the status of the relationship

5: Better(s) are allowed to encourage the PIMP to pick their candidate. You may use any means desired except for bribery, blackmail, distortion, torture and manipulation.

6: Better(s) are not allowed to sabotage others plans of encouragement.

7: If potential better(s) are found you must inform Nakazawa and appropriate measures will be taken.

8: Should we ever be discovered never answer any of the questions in Japanese. Always answer with these English words “You are mistaken”. Wait until all the betters regroup and necessary actions are decided upon.” Konkon took a deep breath and sat back down.

“Did everyone hear clearly what Konkon had to say?” Kei asked.

“Hai” everyone replied.

"No bribery, blackmail, distortion, torture and manipulation. Yuko, are you going to be able to handle these rules?" Kaori gave Yuko a sly look.

Yuko didn't need words to communicate her discontent. The one look she gave Kaori reminded the MM leader who was HER leader.

“Good” Kei helped the conversation move along.

“Now for some good news” Nakazawa took off her glasses and hung them from the collar of her shirt. “The roster for the futsal team has been made. I added the necessary people in”

“Yuu-chan, may I see the roster?” Abe requested.

“Sure” she passed the sheet of paper over to Abe who quickly started going over it.

“Their first meeting will be in a three days. Their first game should be in a month” Nakazawa continued “I want you all to know that as of tonight the bet has started.” Every ones faces lit up with cynical smiles “that means that those who have betted for the same candidate should probably start coming up with their own strategies and what-not” the twins began to giggle their troublesome giggle and quickly look at each other, suddenly their smile ceased. They came to the shocking realization that it was going to be one of the few times that they would not conspire together.

“Konkon” Kei called out “do you know who you are going to bet for?” 

 “Yes, I actually had decided while in hiding” the girl gave a slight laugh.

“Who’s it gonna be?” Kei awaited the answer. The room grew silent once more.

“Mako-chan” Konkon nodded confidently.

“Yokatta~” Kaori exhaled.

“Okay, the bettings go as such:

Maki: (1) Kei-chan

Mako: (2) Konkon, Kaori

Miki: (3) Kago-chan, Yuu-chan, Nacchi

Rika: (2) Yaguchi, Tusji-chan” Kei declared out loud.

“Yup that’s the current stand” Nakazawa agreed. Suddenly a hand rested upon Nakazawa’s shoulder.

“Ano, Yuu-chan.” The baby faced first gen looked puzzled. “Mikitty’s not on the roster” she pointed towards the names.

“Fujimoto’s not on?!” she ripped the paper from Abe’s grasp. “Crap” she cussed out loud “The moment you two” she glared at the twins “decided to pull off this stunt I was about to go visit Fujimoto-san.”

As the group of betters discussed back and forth little did they know that the wager on its on accord had coincidentally decided to commence that same evening. From the moment that Nakazawa had hung up her phone, the twins and Konkon abduct the elder sisters, Miki deciding to go out with Rika and Goto upset Makoto the wager had begun.


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“With Goto-san?!?” Gaki didn’t hide her shock They were all sitting in the lobby of the large building.

“Those two haven’t really hung out in a while” Ai-chan rubbed Mako’s back.

“So basically, you’re jealous?” Reina had a bored face.

“I told you it was no big deal” Mako shyly smiled.

“No, you’re wrong… it is a big deal” Reina suddenly became passionate. She felt that she could relate to Mako’s feelings. Many times in the past she saw Abe go off with friends with a great smile on her face and she would stand there wishing she could go out with Abe and cause the exact same smile on her love’s face. Sadly, in her case she felt there was really nothing anyone could do to help her but at least in Makoto’s case she might be able to give a hand, at least when it came down to this matter.  “You feel uneasy about their outing and your emotions can’t rest because in your heart you have an unanswered question” a dangerous yet engaging gleam sparked in Reina’s eyes. The gokkies couldn’t help but be drawn to it. They listened to every word that she said. “There’s only one thing that can calm your thoughts” every one leaned in closer for the answer. “Let’s go stalk them and try to eves drop in their conversation. If there is anything to worry about… I’m sure it’ll come up in their conversation”
 
The eldest three quietly thought through what Reina had just proposed. Gaki and Ai gave each other unsure glances.

“Let’s do it!” Mako’s eyes were now similarly gleaming just like Reina’s. Ai and Gaki had to admit to themselves that it was an infectious gleam.

“HAI!” Gaki jumped

“Osu” Ai also stood up.

“IKU ZO!” Reina pointed towards the door that she, Ai, and Gaki were now walking towards.

“Matte” Mako called from behind 

‘What is she waiting for?’ they asked themselves.

“Guys, we don’t even know where they are” Mako pointed out.

“Right” Reina nodded.

“Well we can break up and look for them. Do you have any idea where they went?” Ai asked.


“Yoshizawa-sempai said she was going to stop to eat and then go home”

“Alright, me and Ai will go to the right. You and Gaki will go to the left” Reina slammed her hand in her fist.

“Ch-chotto” Gaki raised her hand in protest. She wanted to go with Ai, not that she minded going with Makoto. She just wanted to use this moment as an opportunity to get closer. Sadly her protest went unnoticed.

“Hai! Iku” Ai-chan grabbed Reina’s hand and started walking towards the door. Gaki felt her heart squeeze when she saw that. ‘Doesn’t she want to go with me?’ were the first thoughts in her mind.

“We’ll call you if we find them… same thing goes for you two” Reina waved at them as they walked out the door.

Mako looked over at Gaki who suddenly seemed a bit blue.

“You okay?” Mako asked.

“Yeah… of course” Gaki cleared her throat.

“You sure?”

“Daijou-Daijou” Gaki grinned “Let’s go find Yoshizawa-san, nee?” Mako nodded and they both walked out the doors searching for their sempai.


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“So did you hear…..” a familiar voice floated its way into Rika Ishikawa’s ears. She lifted her head from the straw she was momentarily drinking out of, quickly glancing around in search of the familiar voice. Miki spotted Rika’s gyrating head and unconsciously proceeded to do the same thing. ‘Did something happen?’ she asked herself. Suddenly her investigation was cut short by a giggling Ishikawa.

“I know what I’m looking for” Rika’s laugh settled. “But what are you looking for?” Embarrassed by the situation Miki quickly took a bite of her half eaten cake. It would give her a chance to let it blow over.

“OH! It did, AWESOME…”

Miki stopped chewing in mid-motion and looked upward. She saw that Rika again was restarting her hunt.

“Did you hear that?” Rika asked.

“Some one saying ‘OH! It did, AWESOME’? ” Miki counter questioned.

“Yeah…” Rika nodded standing up from her chair to get a better look at the faces around her. “It almost sounded like – “

“Yossy!” Miki exclaimed.

“Yeah… Like Yossy” Rika nodded.

“No… I mean yes but… no what I meant was that she’s sitting across the room” Miki’s index finger pointed towards the direction. Rika quickly glanced behind and caught sight of Yossy privately conversing with Goto. With the same momentum she turned back around and sat down crouching really low on the table. “What the f…” Miki was quickly cut off as she was pulled by collar and was forced to be crouched down with Rika.

“Shush” Rika had a serious face “Do you want them to see us?”

“Do we want them to not see us?” Miki was uber confused and slightly annoyed. Rika’s eyes danced from side to side as she tried to come up with an explanation for her weird behavior.

“I know you don’t owe me anything” she pleadingly looked into Miki’s eyes “…. But could you please just do me this favor and lay low with me?” she bit her lip. Miki’s brain stunned; it was difficult handling this side of Rika. A frown was now etched on Fujimoto’s face. She crossed her arms glumly slumping down on the table.

“Fine” She said with a resigning attitude “But if we’re going to be looking this stupid you better explain to me why” she stated poking the table with her finger.

“Well” Rika sighed and bit her lip once more.

“And stop looking at me with that face” the exasperation was obvious. Rika’s eyes widened in shock.

“I don’t have any other face” She truthfully stated.

Miki rolled her eyes “Forget it Ishikawa... just explain to me why we’re hiding from Yocchan and Maki?”

“You… you want the truth?” The pink loving fourth gen asked.

“No I want the lie… OFCOURSE I want the truth” The most wild of the three H!P Yankees wiped her forehead with irritation. 

“Fine… but you can’t get mad” Rika demanded.

“A little late for that” Rika winced at Miki’s tone.

“I guess it can’t be helped. I’m hiding from Yossy”

“You’re avoiding Yocchan?” Miki dead panned.

Rika only nodded in embarrassment. An odd noise started to emanate from Miki. It started subtle with a few sniffs, then her vocal chords started to make quick sharp noises, her shoulders began bouncing up and down. Suddenly it started quickening in pace, Rika looked at her in awe. “Miki-chan… are you laughing?”

“Oh my God” the laughing ex-solo clamped her hand on Rika’s shoulder “You… are sooo weird” she said slightly shaking her head from side to side.

Rika, nervous about the whole situation, started a slow giggle but was quickly stopped when Fujimoto shot her a glare. “I’m really sorry” Rika looked down at the table.

“Meh… whatever” Miki too glanced down at the table

“The cakes were good” and attempt was made to smooth things over.

“Yeah they were” Miki nodded.

“Gah… I’m really sorry Miki” Rika bowed her head apologetically and accidentally slammed her forehead on the table.

“Are you ok!?!?” Miki quickly lifted Rika’s face by her chin and rubbed the offended spot.

“Itai” Rika winced. “I’m fine. That was stupid” she frowned.

“Mou, You should really be more careful” Miki scolded.

“Ano… Miki-chan”

“Nani?”

“Um… could you let go of my face?” Rika nicely asked.

“OH! Sorry” She released Rika and slightly flushed.

“It’s okay” Rika smiled as she rubbed her forehead “I should note though, deep down in side you really are a caring person” that comment increased the yankish girl’s embarrassment. “Either way, please don’t apologies. I’m the one who should be apologiesing. I ruined our outing”

“I said whatever, no big deal”

“I know but… I sort of wanted us to bond a little. Maybe then we could start hanging out more and you would stop thinking of me as some freak” Rika frowned “I’m sure this spoiled any chances of that happening”

“You’re right” Miki looked at Rika. “You’ll always be a freak amongst freaks to me” Rika’s eyes were starting to slightly glisten; she knew there was nothing she could say. “But I think I might like to hang out with you again” Rika blinked the teary substance that was starting to swell up in her eyes away. That change of expression caused a smile on the normally cold Fujimoto. “Sometimes I need to escape my normality… who better to call than you Ishikawa” Miki smiled. Rika’s face suddenly seemed torn between a smile, frowning eyes and annoyed eyebrows. A look that amused Fujimoto very much.

“Thanks” she said in a low voice “I think”

“Your welcome” Miki winked. “WHOA look at Maki passing a move on Yocchan” Rika cautiously turned her head just on time to catch Goto’s hand on Yossy’s thighs. Quickly a mixture of anger and jealousy began to boil up in the deepest depths of her mind. An animalistic instinct to shout and throw something at them started flirting its way into Rika’s logic. She glanced away before her mind decided to act upon its uncharacteristic suggestion.

“We should go” Rika said in a low growl. This newly developed attitude surprised Miki.

“Is everything fine?” Rika glanced back at the yomaki pair only to be hit with the slight relief of seeing Maki’s hand withdraw it self from Yossy’s thigh. “Why are you glaring at them?” Miki, who was still completely caught off guard by this side of Ishikawa, asked.

“I’m not glaring” the Princess of the bet snapped her eyes away from the pair.

“Listen, I know a glare when I see one, and you were glaring” A sly expression fixed itself on the short haired girl.

“Maybe we should leave” Rika started packing her stuff when something caught the corner of her eye. She lifted her gaze and looked outside the store window. There, hiding in between two bushes were two faces she knew very well. “Gaki?” She narrowed her eyes to focus better on the other face “MAKO!?!”


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“Didn’t I say we’d find them?” Gaki grinned at her friend.

“Yes you did. As payment I’ll buy you any pastry you want” Mako thanked.

“Yasashii! But damn…” Gaki frowned.

“What?” Mako took out her phone and text the eldest of the gokkies.

“I wish there was away to hear what they were saying”

“Mmm… me too” The Charmer scratched an itchy patch on her face.

“Maybe once Ai-chan gets here she and Reina can go on in and say hello”

“True, Reina does get along very well with Goto”

"I'm sure they'll do it" Gaki nodded.

“Gaki, what bushes are we hiding in again?”

“The ones in front of the left window” 


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“No need to get moody” Yossy slid her chair closer to Goto and shoved her playfully “Here, you can tell me in my ear so no one else can hear” she gave a silly grin to Goto. Unable to ignore the grin on Yossy’s face she smiled back “Good, you’re prettier when you smile” Yossy complimented “Are you finally gonna tell me what happened between you and Abe-san?”

“I’m not sure you’d like me after wards” Goto sadly stated. It was a change of mood Yossy hadn’t expected. Yossy lifted her hand to brush Goto’s head when unexpectedly they were greeted.

“Cheez! Yoshizawa-san, Goto-san” Reina walked in with her hands deep in her pockets. She scanned around and grabbed the nearest chair. She flipped it so that the back rest faced her front side. She straddled the chair and hugged the back rest while resting her chin on top of the table. She had uninvitedly joined Goto and Yossy at the table. Goto angrily looked at Reina but quickly returned to normal. Behind Reina an embarrassed Ai-chan walked up to the table.

“We apologies for the interruption” she slightly bowed. She looked around for a spare chair. Finally caught sight of one across the room, she walked up to the couple who were currently inhabiting the table. “I’m sorry do you mind…if…I…I…I” Ai-chan entered a cycle of stuttering when she realized the couple inhabiting the table were none other than Miki Fujimito and Rika Ishikawa. Miki lifted her index finger to her lips motioning to be quiet. Rika waved her hands giving permission to the stunned Takahashi to take the chair and leave. Deciding that it was more important to speak with Yoshizawa than stare blankly at Miki and Rika she dropped the chair where it was and walked empty handed to the table.

“What happen?” Yossy asked the chair-less Ai.

“They’re waiting for someone” Ai informed.

“Who cares, you can share with me” Reina helpfully suggested.

“Thanks” Reina shifted to side and made space for her senior. Suddenly the room became very very quiet, but everyone’s thoughts were very very noisy. Had a mind reader been in the room at that moment they’d probably leave from a massive head-ache. A girls thoughts, much less those from H!P, were hardly ever coherent.  Everyone’s current thoughts went as such:

Mako’s was ‘Nooo! What are they doing? They weren’t supposed to join them. They were suppose to eve’s drop  :banghead:

Gaki’s was 'Why in the world didn’t she take the spare chair? Why is she sharing that chair with Reina… and why is she smiling while she shares that chair with Reina  :angry:' ?

Rika’s was 'Now I’ll never be able to leave :('

Miki’s was 'I guess it was a good idea to ask Rika to eat here. Something weird is going down and I have front row seats to it  :lol: …. hm man I want meat…. Hmmm Rika has nice meat on her back side. Maybe I’ll grope Ishikawa on the way to her house >:D '

Reina’s was 'Did I hear Abe’s name be mention :mon huh:?… I really need to stop obsessing over her   :sweat:…*silence*…who am I kidding that’s impossible  :wriggly:'

Ai-chan’s was 'k… it’s weird enough to run into Miki and Rika here… but it’s even weirder that they are here together!........ hmm…..hm….hmmm…. so if E = mc squared then what is the decimal of pi?........ Why are Goto-san and Yoshizawa-san looking at me :dunno: ?….. WHAT ARE GOTO-SAN AND YOSHIZAWA-SAN DOING HERE ?!?... OH RIGHT I’m here so I can listen in on their conversation  :hee:. But wait…. How am I suppose to do that if I interrupted it and am now a part of it  :-\ … doesn’t that change the whole dynamic of their conversation?  Great…. Thanks a lot Reina! Wow Goto-san looks really good today'

Yossy’s was 'Oh how nice, Reina and Ai-chan coincidentally and innocently walked in and joined us. What a pleasant surprise :)'

Goto’s was ' Reina… Reina… Reina…. I like you, you’re a nice kid. But under that innocent expression I know what you really are and I know what you really want. What the?! Is Ai-chan checking me out?…. maybe I should…no… I must stay focused, I’m here for Yossy and only Yossy'


Abruptly a cell phone’s chime threw most of them out of their private thoughts.  It was Takahashi’s phone, she had just received a text from Makoto.

“Look at the time” Goto hastily stood up. “It’s time to get going” she turned and looked down at Yossy. “Do you mind walking me home, Yocchan?” She asked.

“I wish I could” Yossy started getting up from the chair “but I really do need to get home.” She shyly declined.

“That’s okay… if you want I can walk you?” Reina happily suggested. It seemed she was full of suggestions that day. Though the underaged yankii had chosen Abe to be her one true love, the person she admired the most and wished to be like them was Maki Goto.

“I don’t think….” Maki stopped in mid sentence. ‘Think this through Goto! It just might be a good idea to have her come with you’ she maliciously thought “….that’s such a bad idea Tanaka-chan” she finished her sentence. “What about you Ai-chan?” Goto asked.

“Oh I live by here… so no problem”

“Well you can at least walk me to the side walk, nee~ Yocchan?” Maki playfully pouted.

“Of course” the Pimp smiled. All four stood up, they were being closely observed by four foreign pairs of eyes.

Yossy opened the door and the other three piled up out side. They all stood in a tight circle where they said their good byes and best wishes before parting. Then, as Yossy turned to leave, a hand grabbed her arm and pulled her backwards. She collided into a warm body and suddenly felt to warm lips lightly peck her cheek. When her eyes finally focused she saw Maki Goto pulling away from the kiss and giving her a quick wink. “Next time, I’ll tell you all about Nacchi and me” she elegantly turned around and started walking towards her house.

“What did you say about Abe-sempai?” one could hear Reina’s questions as she followed Goto close behind.

As Yossy stood there slightly dumbfounded by Maki’s actions, the Charmer and Princess felt something break in them. No it wasn’t their heart… it was their tolerance. It was the drop that over filled the cup, the last straw, the breaking point; they weren’t going to give Yossy up with out fight anymore.

 On the switch side of it all Fujimoto was having a small internal battle. She wasn’t nearly as affected by it as Makoto and Rika, but she did feel a slight hit to her ego. Yossy was beginning to be one of her primary assault targets… would she really just let her go that easily?

“I think we should go” was the phrase used both by Rika and Mako to their respective company.

“Sure, just let me pay for this” Miki stood up and walked up to the cashier. Coincidently, out side in the bushes Gaki said something similar.

“Sure, just let me go get Ai-chan” Gaki stood up walked up to Takahashi.

It was pretty clear…The bet had begun.



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A/N: Alright I have a few things to address.

FIRST OF ALL, GEEEENKI DEEEESU KAAAA!?! *puts hand to ear & awaits response*

I hope you all really liked this chapter. I think it's probably my personal favorite chapter of the story so far and even though I had a lot of fun writing it... it was a lot of hard work too. So with that said I would like to know what you all thought of it! *hopes to see comments*

The last thing i would like to address is an issue that was brought to my attention via P.M. Someone PMed me (you know who you are) asking me why i hardly ever comment back to my comments. I'd like to apologies to anyone else who's asked themselves that b4.... the reason is that i'm not as creative as some of the other authors in this or other forums when it comes down to responding back to comments. Though I'll begin to make an effort to answer back to the comments made.
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #85 on: March 08, 2008, 01:36:08 AM »
A new addition to the betters! I knew Konkon would pick Mako!

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“Let’s go stalk them and try to eves drop in their conversation. If there is anything to worry about… I’m sure it’ll come up in their conversation”
Tsk tsk.. naughty Reina suggesting such a thing...  :twisted:

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“Ch-chotto” Gaki raised her hand in protest. She wanted to go with Ai, not that she minded going with Makoto. She just wanted to use this moment as an opportunity to get closer. Sadly her protest went unnoticed.

“Hai! Iku” Ai-chan grabbed Reina’s hand and started walking towards the door. Gaki felt her heart squeeze when she saw that. ‘Doesn’t she want to go with me?’ were the first thoughts in her mind.
Aww... Poor Risa~ :cry: Ai's just basically clueless..

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“Gah… I’m really sorry Miki” Rika bowed her head apologetically and accidentally slammed her forehead on the table.

“Are you ok!?!?” Miki quickly lifted Rika’s face by her chin and rubbed the offended spot.

“Itai” Rika winced. “I’m fine. That was stupid” she frowned.

“Mou, You should really be more careful” Miki scolded.

“Ano… Miki-chan”

“Nani?”

“Um… could you let go of my face?” Rika nicely asked.

“OH! Sorry” She released Rika and slightly flushed.

“It’s okay” Rika smiled as she rubbed her forehead “I should note though, deep down in side you really are a caring person” that comment increased the yankish girl’s embarrassment. “Either way, please don’t apologies. I’m the one who should be apologiesing. I ruined our outing”
Oooh!! Is there a slight Charmikitty going on?? This could be a great possibility!!!  :k-inlove:

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“Gaki, what bushes are we hiding in again?”

“The ones in front of the left window” 
Ehh... This confused me...  :?


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“No need to get moody” Yossy slid her chair closer to Goto and shoved her playfully “Here, you can tell me in my ear so no one else can hear” she gave a silly grin to Goto. Unable to ignore the grin on Yossy’s face she smiled back “Good, you’re prettier when you smile” Yossy complimented “Are you finally gonna tell me what happened between you and Abe-san?”

“I’m not sure you’d like me after wards” Goto sadly stated. It was a change of mood Yossy hadn’t expected. Yossy lifted her hand to brush Goto’s head when unexpectedly they were greeted.
Maki's gonna say it.......!

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“Cheez! Yoshizawa-san, Goto-san” Reina walked in with her hands deep in her pockets. She scanned around and grabbed the nearest chair. She flipped it so that the back rest faced her front side. She straddled the chair and hugged the back rest while resting her chin on top of the table. She had uninvitedly joined Goto and Yossy at the table. Goto angrily looked at Reina but quickly returned to normal. Behind Reina an embarrassed Ai-chan walked up to the table.

“We apologies for the interruption” she slightly bowed. She looked around for a spare chair. Finally caught sight of one across the room, she walked up to the couple who were currently inhabiting the table. “I’m sorry do you mind…if…I…I…I” Ai-chan entered a cycle of stuttering when she realized the couple inhabiting the table were none other than Miki Fujimito and Rika Ishikawa. Miki lifted her index finger to her lips motioning to be quiet. Rika waved her hands giving permission to the stunned Takahashi to take the chair and leave. Deciding that it was more important to speak with Yoshizawa than stare blankly at Miki and Rika she dropped the chair where it was and walked empty handed to the table.
Noooooo! Interrupteddd!!
Lol.. Ai-chan saw Miki and Rika together. Isn't that an unexpected surprise..

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Miki’s was 'I guess it was a good idea to ask Rika to eat here. Something weird is going down and I have front row seats to it  …. hm man I want meat…. Hmmm Rika has nice meat on her back side. Maybe I’ll grope Ishikawa on the way to her house'
I thought she meant meat like yakiniku!  :lol: and when she said 'I'll grope Ishikawa' I was like Oh that kind of meat.  :w00t:

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Yossy opened the door and the other three piled up out side. They all stood in a tight circle where they said their good byes and best wishes before parting. Then, as Yossy turned to leave, a hand grabbed her arm and pulled her backwards. She collided into a warm body and suddenly felt to warm lips lightly peck her cheek. When her eyes finally focused she saw Maki Goto pulling away from the kiss and giving her a quick wink. “Next time, I’ll tell you all about Nacchi and me” she elegantly turned around and started walking towards her house.

“What did you say about Abe-sempai?” one could hear Reina’s questions as she followed Goto close behind.

As Yossy stood there slightly dumbfounded by Maki’s actions, the Charmer and Princess felt something break in them. No it wasn’t their heart… it was their tolerance. It was the drop that over filled the cup, the last straw, the breaking point; they weren’t going to give Yossy up with out fight anymore.

 On the switch side of it all Fujimoto was having a small internal battle. She wasn’t nearly as affected by it as Makoto and Rika, but she did feel a slight hit to her ego. Yossy was beginning to be one of her primary assault targets… would she really just let her go that easily?

“I think we should go” was the phrase used both by Rika and Mako to their respective company.

“Sure, just let me pay for this” Miki stood up and walked up to the cashier. Coincidently, out side in the bushes Gaki said something similar.

“Sure, just let me go get Ai-chan” Gaki stood up walked up to Takahashi.

It was pretty clear…The bet had begun.
:w00t: Woah! After that kiss you hear cars crashing and windows breaking..
In Mako and Rika's head I'm sure there's World War 3..

a~! This is the best chapter ever! I love it to bits!
oh and 'Genki dayo~~!!'  :vv: Specially since you put this chapter up and i've finished reading it!!
Saikou deshita! Suteki! Sugoi!

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #86 on: March 08, 2008, 02:09:49 AM »
First of all, this is a LONG ass chapter. I'm not complaining, I'll just have to get used to this coming out from you.  :grin:  I like the way Goto grabbed Yossy and kiss her cheek. I was kinda waiting on the kiss to be full on lips, but...I'll take whatever you dish out. MOAR girl girl scene PLEASE!!!  :hip devil: heheheh.... and for the record, I WAS wondering why you never reply on your reader's comments.  :roll:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #87 on: March 08, 2008, 09:14:59 AM »
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“Abe” Nakzawa bellowed “Kaori, Yaguchi” all three looked at Nakazawa expectantly. “Search the room for anymore people” all three robotically nodded and began searching. Nono, konokon and Aibon glanced at one another; they couldn’t understand how Nakazawa could hold so much power over the human beings of this record label.
One should not question why Yuko has the power she has. Just accept the fact that she has it. :yep:



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“I take it you too will be taking part in this bet?” Kei poked her tongue with her pen ready to jot down the new participants name.

“Ano nee… hai” Konkon shamefully nodded “sou desu”
Awwwwwwwww...still cute!  :oops:



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*DA RULEZ*
Well, seems like they've covered most of the bases that they'd need to. :P  Personally I can't wait until someone has to invoke #8. :lol:




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"No bribery, blackmail, distortion, torture and manipulation. Yuko, are you going to be able to handle these rules?" Kaori gave Yuko a sly look.

Yuko didn't need words to communicate her discontent. The one look she gave Kaori reminded the MM leader who was HER leader.
:mon lol:



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“Konkon” Kei called out “do you know who you are going to bet for?”

 “Yes, I actually had decided while in hiding” the girl gave a slight laugh.

“Who’s it gonna be?” Kei awaited the answer. The room grew silent once more.

“Mako-chan” Konkon nodded confidently.

“Yokatta~” Kaori exhaled.
Kaori was worried that she was the only one who had bet on Mako?




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“Let’s go stalk them and try to eves drop in their conversation. If there is anything to worry about… I’m sure it’ll come up in their conversation”
 
The eldest three quietly thought through what Reina had just proposed. Gaki and Ai gave each other unsure glances.

“Let’s do it!” Mako’s eyes were now similarly gleaming just like Reina’s. Ai and Gaki had to admit to themselves that it was an infectious gleam.

“HAI!” Gaki jumped

“Osu” Ai also stood up.

“IKU ZO!” Reina pointed towards the door that she, Ai, and Gaki were now walking towards.
:cool1:



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“Guys, we don’t even know where they are” Mako pointed out.

“Right” Reina nodded.
  :dizzy:



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“Alright, me and Ai will go to the right. You and Gaki will go to the left” Reina slammed her hand in her fist.

“Ch-chotto” Gaki raised her hand in protest. She wanted to go with Ai, not that she minded going with Makoto. She just wanted to use this moment as an opportunity to get closer. Sadly her protest went unnoticed.
My my my...so many raburabu stories, and yet only one bet.  O0



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Miki rolled her eyes “Forget it Ishikawa... just explain to me why we’re hiding from Yocchan and Maki?”

“You… you want the truth?” The pink loving fourth gen asked.
Maybe...:doh:



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“Gah… I’m really sorry Miki” Rika bowed her head apologetically and accidentally slammed her forehead on the table.

...

“Mou, You should really be more careful” Miki scolded.
Aren't they supposed to be trying to keep Yossi and Maki from noticing their presence? :dunno:



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“Ano… Miki-chan”

“Nani?”

“Um… could you let go of my face?” Rika nicely asked.

“OH! Sorry” She released Rika and slightly flushed.
Ooooooooh...if things between the two of them keep going the way I think they'll keep going, it might lead to a potential outcome that none of the betters predicted.  8)



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“Sometimes I need to escape my normality… who better to call than you Ishikawa” Miki smiled. Rika’s face suddenly seemed torn between a smile, frowning eyes and annoyed eyebrows. A look that amused Fujimoto very much.

“Thanks” she said in a low voice “I think”

“Your welcome” Miki winked.
Rika = :?

Miki = ;D



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Rika glanced back at the yomaki pair only to be hit with the slight relief of seeing Maki’s hand withdraw it self from Yossy’s thigh. “Why are you glaring at them?” Miki, who was still completely caught off guard by this side of Ishikawa, asked.

“I’m not glaring” the Princess of the bet snapped her eyes away from the pair.

“Listen, I know a glare when I see one, and you were glaring”
This IS Miki-sama we're talking about here, of course she knows a glare when she sees one.  :mon determined:



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“Maybe we should leave” Rika started packing her stuff when something caught the corner of her eye. She lifted her gaze and looked outside the store window. There, hiding in between two bushes were two faces she knew very well. “Gaki?” She narrowed her eyes to focus better on the other face “MAKO!?!”
:kekeke:




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“Are you finally gonna tell me what happened between you and Abe-san?”

“I’m not sure you’d like me after wards” Goto sadly stated. It was a change of mood Yossy hadn’t expected.
  Uh oh.  :hip blink:



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Behind Reina an embarrassed Ai-chan walked up to the table.

...

She looked around for a spare chair. Finally caught sight of one across the room, she walked up to the couple who were currently inhabiting the table. “I’m sorry do you mind…if…I…I…I” Ai-chan entered a cycle of stuttering when she realized the couple inhabiting the table were none other than Miki Fujimito and Rika Ishikawa. Miki lifted her index finger to her lips motioning to be quiet. Rika waved her hands giving permission to the stunned Takahashi to take the chair and leave.
Eeps.  :scared:

Yossi and Maki still don't know that Miki and Rika are there, right?




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“What happen?” Yossy asked the chair-less Ai.

“They’re waiting for someone” Ai informed.

“Who cares, you can share with me” Reina helpfully suggested.

“Thanks” Reina shifted to side and made space for her senior.
Oh crap, when Gaki sees Aichan and Reina sharing a chair...  :cry:



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*EVERYONE'S THOUGHTS*
:wahaha:  :wahaha:  :wahaha:



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“Look at the time” Goto hastily stood up. “It’s time to get going”

...

if you want I can walk you?” Reina happily suggested. It seemed she was full of suggestions that day. Though the underaged yankii had chosen Abe to be her one true love, the person she admired the most and wished to be like them was Maki Goto.

“I don’t think….” Maki stopped in mid sentence. ‘Think this through Goto! It just might be a good idea to have her come with you’ she maliciously thought “….that’s such a bad idea Tanaka-chan” she finished her sentence.
Why now do I get the feeling that the whole Maki/Nacchi thing is more complicated than originally thought?   :mon dunno:



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as Yossy turned to leave, a hand grabbed her arm and pulled her backwards. She collided into a warm body and suddenly felt to warm lips lightly peck her cheek. When her eyes finally focused she saw Maki Goto pulling away from the kiss and giving her a quick wink. “Next time, I’ll tell you all about Nacchi and me” she elegantly turned around and started walking towards her house.
:mon spit:



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As Yossy stood there slightly dumbfounded by Maki’s actions, the Charmer and Princess felt something break in them. No it wasn’t their heart… it was their tolerance. It was the drop that over filled the cup, the last straw, the breaking point; they weren’t going to give Yossy up with out fight anymore.

 On the switch side of it all Fujimoto was having a small internal battle. She wasn’t nearly as affected by it as Makoto and Rika, but she did feel a slight hit to her ego. Yossy was beginning to be one of her primary assault targets… would she really just let her go that easily?
Rika & Mako =  :OMG: then  :grr:

Miki =  :stunned:


* JFC eagerly awaits the next Chapter.
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JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #88 on: March 08, 2008, 10:54:37 AM »
The part about everyone's thoughts was the best part ever, it totally cracked me up :on lol: Especially Ai-chan's part and Goto's :farofflook: 

I hope that soon we will find out more about Abe and Gocchin past :mon huh: Well, anyway I can't wait for the next chapters!Keep it up!

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #89 on: March 08, 2008, 10:26:41 PM »
yeah the part of Maki and Takitty is fun  :hiakhiakhiak:

yossy have luck, so many beautiful girls for her  :ding:

i bet for miki (i don't think that yossy will stay with her but i love yomiki :kekeke:)

waiting next chapter!!

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #90 on: March 10, 2008, 05:46:49 PM »
I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY!  :w00t:   I had set up a  post just like JFC and Zay but it got deleted and I am really to lazy to re-do it. I'll just do my usual and go point by point.

-KONKON  :heart: she chose Mako  :heart: good choice  :twisted: I just feel sorry Kei and Goto. Only one vote  :'(

-Mari was a little mean here  :-\

-z0mG00dn3s5!!!11!!11!!1!! THE RULES! They're finally told. I had been waiting for that since the second chapter. The rules have a lot loop wholes though. I agree with JFC I can't wait to see rule 8 happen.

-Basically that's how team GATAS has so many players at first and why Miki didn't come in till later. 

-I really like ReinaXAiXGakiXMako team. I would've liked it if Eri and Sayu were there though.

-Rika and Miki, I just need one emoticon to express how i felt:  :rofl:
I'm really liking your Charmikitty here. Not only that, but you are really throwing us readers off. It's well known you are a die-hard ISHIYOSHI shipper but it's also well known that you're into Charmikitty too... I assume you are due to your signature. You are making it hard to decided who Yossui is gonna stay with.

-Reina and Ai's interruption was the best in this Chapter. You just knew something was going to happen. Why didn't Ai take the chair?

-The thoughts were super funny! You even used emoticons to express their faces! I personally liked Yossui's the most. So innocent, naive and dense.


Yup I was wondering why you don't answer back to your comments either. Don't be shy!  :shakeit: 

GENKI DESU!!!
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #91 on: March 12, 2008, 03:49:34 PM »
And let the games begin~.... I'm placing my bet on the Princess for sure!!!

But how is it possible for someone to NOT notice their acquaintance in the same restaurant?! Esp when they look... Like Rika and Miki?!

Well... Reina's in there which is nice and all.. but where's Kame!! Oh and Sayuuu...?

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #92 on: April 01, 2008, 04:14:11 AM »
oho! looks a very interesting fic, poets.  ^^  i only took a glimpse of your fic, i'll read it at home. hehehe

YoAya??? nyahahaha  :wub:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 12 The Bet Begins Part 2/2)
« Reply #93 on: April 17, 2008, 05:58:03 AM »
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A new addition to the betters! I knew Konkon would pick Mako!
Naturally, wouldn’t have it any other way.

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Aww... Poor Risa~  Ai's just basically clueless.
When isn’t she LMAO… Poor Ai… her thoughts betray her sometimes :lol:

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Oooh!! Is there a slight Charmikitty going on?? This could be a great possibility!!!

I just had to add to some of this special ingredient into the mix ;)

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a~! This is the best chapter ever! I love it to bits!
oh and 'Genki dayo~~!!'  Specially since you put this chapter up and i've finished reading it!!
Saikou deshita! Suteki! Sugoi!

SUPER GLAD to hear that Zay ^_^ Thanx for commenting… really appreciate it. Hope you like the next one equally as much.

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Well, seems like they've covered most of the bases that they'd need to.    Personally I can't wait until someone has to invoke #8. 
Me too JFC MEE TOO! *laughs at it already*

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Kaori was worried that she was the only one who had bet on Mako?
Wouldn’t you? :fear:

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My my my...so many raburabu stories, and yet only one bet.
Oh you have no idea JFC…. No idea *smiles ebilly*

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This IS Miki-sama we're talking about here, of course she knows a glare when she sees one. 
Exactly! Why do people forget this fact… shame on them.

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Why now do I get the feeling that the whole Maki/Nacchi thing is more complicated than originally thought?
Yup… it’s prolly the most emo of all my sub-plots here

THANKS COMMENTING JFC! :D

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The part about everyone's thoughts was the best part ever, it totally cracked me up Especially Ai-chan's part and Goto's

I hope that soon we will find out more about Abe and Gocchin past. Well, anyway I can't wait for the next chapters!Keep it up!

Ai’s and Goto’s were one of them ones I laughed while I typed XD. Abe and Gocchin’s past… well you ask and I shall deliver, hope you enjoy this Chapter ;)

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yeah the part of Maki and Takitty is fun 

yossy have luck, so many beautiful girls for her 

i bet for miki (i don't think that yossy will stay with her but i love yomiki

waiting next chapter!!

Yossy is pretty lucky XD and I’ll tell Kei to add you too! I like Yomiki too… maybe I’ll have Yossy end with miki…. Or maybe not
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z0mG00dn3s5!!!11!!11!!1!! THE RULES! They're finally told. I had been waiting for that since the second chapter. The rules have a lot loop wholes though. I agree with JFC I can't wait to see rule 8 happen.

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Basically that's how team GATAS has so many players at first and why Miki didn't come in till later. 
Basically ^_^


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-I really like ReinaXAiXGakiXMako team. I would've liked it if Eri and Sayu were there though.
Daijoubu… they’ll have their spot lights

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-Rika and Miki, I just need one emoticon to express how i felt: 
I'm really liking your Charmikitty here. Not only that, but you are really throwing us readers off. It's well known you are a die-hard ISHIYOSHI shipper but it's also well known that you're into Charmikitty too... I assume you are due to your signature. You are making it hard to decided who Yossui is gonna stay with.
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAH!... who knows who Yossy will end up with… who knows.

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And let the games begin~.... I'm placing my bet on the Princess for sure!!!
I’ll make sure to tell kei to add you in :)

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But how is it possible for someone to NOT notice their acquaintance in the same restaurant?! Esp when they look... Like Rika and Miki?!
Sometimes you don’t spot what you’re not looking for.

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Well... Reina's in there which is nice and all.. but where's Kame!! Oh and Sayuuu...?
Kame and Sayu are in Sayu’s room looking at a marble that looks like turtle from far away. Atleast that’s where I left them in part ½ of chapter 12 XD

39 for reading Stefy!!! Your comments put me on the spot!!! ^^;


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-Reina and Ai's interruption was the best in this Chapter. You just knew something was going to happen. Why didn't Ai take the chair?

Glad you thought so XD



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oho! looks a very interesting fic, poets.  ^^  i only took a glimpse of your fic, i'll read it at home. hehehe

YoAya??? Nyahahaha

Aww thanx for commenting Haidokun :oops: I hope you were able to read it and enjoyed it :D
Rika <3 So funneh

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #94 on: April 17, 2008, 06:05:00 AM »
A/N: I'm pretty sure some of you have gotten used to my long chapters by now but not today. Sorry ^_^ this subject needs it's time in the spot light... and needs it alone
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CH: 13 SLEEP

"Some say sleep is overrated, but I can assure you it's underrated"
-Emily Rose

A shadow cast it self over her eyes but one didn’t need to be very observant to see she was crying. The wet streak left behind by the sorrow filled tears glisten. Making sure I could see her pain, the pain that I was causing. There we stood in agonizing silence, in the middle of a room, my room. The waking sun was giving everything a gold glow. The undone bed, the clothes on the floor, the books of poetry laying everywhere was graced with the warm inviting glow. A glow that normally filled me with joy, but today it was just plain annoying me. The day hadn’t even started and I already wanted it to end.

Finally she broke the silence.

“Do you love them?” she quietly whispered at me. Now was my chance to try and fix everything. Thoughts ran through my mind, from one corner to the other. They were desperately, urgently, frantically trying to find something that could make this whole situation lighten up.

I found something, but wasn’t sure if it was the best option. After realizing I had nothing else to go for me… I went with it. I rushed up to her and hugged her.

“Forgive me” She froze at my touch, her inhaling and exhaling was the only activity taking place. I took the lack of rejection as a good sign. With out letting go I stupidly made a request, as if I were in any position to make a request. I slowly nudged my way to her ear “I love you and only you.” She took a sharp breath “Nacchi… I know I was stupid and I regret it with all of my being. Please forgive me… I know you love me too. Natsumi…” I made sure to call her by her first name “kiss me, nee?” and suddenly, even her breathing stopped. Believing it to be safe I slowly pulled back from the warmth of our embrace, as her face came into view my eyes immediately shot to her lips and made them their way up. Momentarily stopping on her nose but finally resting on her eyes. Anticipating hungry lips and wanting eyes but met with the cold reality of disgusted lips and rebuffing eyes. Then, the defiant glare that I would grow oh too familiar with made its début

“How…dare you?” she pushed out through gritted teeth. My hands that rested on her now shuddering shoulders slid off of her. This was not what I was expecting from predictable Abe. Her eyes hardened with an unchanged look of distain. At that very moment great admiration for her blossomed in me. The amount of self restrain that she was putting into action here was great. I could tell exactly what she gruesomely wanted to do to me and God knows I deserved it. 

“I…I” I stuttered like a fool.

“I walk in here and find you awake. Then you tell me sorry and not one tear makes an appearance. You hug me and then expect a kiss after everything you’ve done” her voice was steady and had a consistent flow. Had anyone been evesdropping they wouldn’t be able to tell just how angry her posture, her stare, her tears were at this moment. She closed her eyes as she inhaled, giving the cells in her body a brand new batch of oxygen. “Why?” she whispered. Her vocal chords, noticeably, having vocal quakes. Once more my brain went into search mode, coming to the sad conclusion that there was absolutely nothing I could do to get out of this mess… I decided to try and turn the tables.

“You know what Abe?” I made sure to say her last name. “FORGET IT!” her expression quickly changed, instincts kicking in. She didn’t want to lose me, she loves me, and when you love something you try to keep it… right?

“What?” a flicker of fear crossed her face and there was my proof. All I had to do was keep her busy enough with the thoughts of loosing me and she would sure put aside what I did.

“I had enough… I begged you for forgiveness. I promised you never to do it again and confessed my love for you in the process and you treat me this way” now it was her turn to look for a response, her eyes quickly jolted back and forth as it mimicked her brain activity. For dramatic effect I turned and walked back to my bed, quickly taking off my pajama bottoms. I reached for the nearest pair of pants and waited for her next move. As I pulled up my jeans and started to zip it up I felt two arms embrace me and like clock work, there was the move. I pretended to be indifferent, finishing the zip up and buttoning them up.

“Maki don’t do this” she finally broke out in a wailing sob. “Please don’t do this” she went on. She unwrapped her arms from my waist and turned me around, immediately making eye contact with me and cupping my face. I could see her pathetic need for me in her eyes. “Maki, just tell me… tell me it’s not true” she stood up on her tippy toes and planted a gentle kiss on my nose. “nee? I’ll believe you” she nervously smiled. An awkward feeling started to rise in me. For the past few weeks I had so easily lied to her, with no remorse, no guilt and no shame. Then again, she had never looked this pitiful in my life. It was there where I realized how true love should be. Finding my self with the inability to lie, I raised my hands up and grabbed her wrists. Detaching her caring fingers from my face and flicking them off my own. The look of hope that was moments a go on her face was now substituted with sheer panic. “Ma-Maki…this whole situation has me so scared and it’s that… I don’t understand” her voice was small and genuine. I guess that’s how it sounds when you’re successfully killing someone, even if they’re not literally dying. “What did I do wrong? What have I done for things to end up like this” unable to continue looking at her, I once again turned my back to her and took off my pajama shirt. She reattempted to somehow get through to me and pounced me. Our bodies fell forward but we were luckily caught by the comfort of my bed. She held on to me tight, as if her life depended on it. As she cried inconsolably I could feel her diaphragm having spasms and her hot tears trickling down my bare back. “Don’t keep hurting me like this, Maki!” she resumed her pleading “Just turn around and hug me, let’s just pretend this never happen.” She paused “Gocchin… you don’t understand. If you go, if you leave me… it’ll be like losing my ability to breath” She tenderly kissed my back “Don’t take my air away Maki”. Losing the battle with my will’s desire to resist, I slowly started to turn in an attempt to embrace her. Maybe things between us could still be salvaged.  Sadly, life was just playing a dirty trick on me.

Out of the blue my house phone rang. After the fifth ring it went straight to voice mail “Hey Goto-chan~” the new soloist’s voice boomed through the tiny speakers of my message recorder. “Fujimoto here, last night was great! Sorry for leaving early… but you know… work” she giggled innocently “Hopefully we can have a repeat of last night. Call me when you can. If not, I’ll see you at work this weekend. Ja nee~” she hung up and just like that my life as I knew it would never be the same again. The tight embrace she had on me as if holding on for dear life was now gone. She lay there on top of me, limp and lifeless. She was no longer sobbing but her tears still slid their way down the side of my back.

“Maki…”she called out “I only have one thing to ask from you” how could I turn her down.

“Anything” I said equally still.

“Please hug me… for five minutes” I felt her get off of me and I slowly rose. When I turned around I met her with a strong embrace. As we were there hugging in silence I suddenly felt her lips capture mine. A kiss that till this day it is indescribable, without breaking it we collapsed on to my bed. The kiss was not aggressive nor was it gentle, the only words that I could fine to somewhat properly depict it were “meaningful” and “deep”. She gave me the deepest and most meaningful kiss I would ever be graced with…


Sound of thunder made sleeping eyes flutter open. She quickly looked at her clock “3:40 in the morning” she groggily voiced.  She slowly sat up and ran her hands through her hair. “That freaking dream again” she unpleasantly stated. She threw her self back on her bed and hoped to God that she could go back to sleep but the image of Abe crying, the sensation of their last kiss and how disturbingly accurate that dream recollected their last encounter wouldn’t grant her such mercy. “Why am I dreaming it again” she pondered, deciding it was worthless in persuading sleep to return she jumped out of the warm embrace her bed offered and slipped into her inviting slippers. It was bum night and she was wearing nothing but the mismatching pajama bottoms and top. She creaked her door opened and dragged herself into her stainless steal kitchen. She yawned as she switched the light on, her eyes quickly adjusting and just as quickly wandered over to a coat that was mysteriously left on her counter. “Whose is this?” she asked out loud. Walking over to it she picked it up, the purple and white skulls left it no doubt that it was Reina’s and that the poor girl most of forgotten it. Suddenly she remembered “That’s true!” she said outloud. “I kissed Yossy on the cheek” She smiled devilishly. The small moment of remembered triumph was quickly shoved to side, realizing why she had the dream didn’t help her forget she had dreamt… much less forget what happen that day with Abe. With a frown tattooed to her face she aggressively opened her refrigerator door, clinks and clanks from it’s collision with the wall could be heard all throughout the house. She pulled out a carton of milk and threw it on the counter, violently closing the door. She walked over to an empty stool picked it up and slammed it on the floor. She sat on and pulled the carton of milk closer. Impatiently opening its flap she took a good chug of it. Sleep, would not grant Maki Goto escape from her thoughts this night. 


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A/N: For the record this is not the whole story between these too... but the rest will come at it's own time XD
Hope you guys liked :D
Rika <3 So funneh

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #95 on: April 17, 2008, 07:17:41 AM »
I should go to school but instead of that I started to read this chapter and I couldn't stop  XD so now I'm late for school but you know what? It was so worth it... :farofflook: It was damn sad but I just love MakixNacchi  :wub:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #96 on: April 17, 2008, 07:18:20 AM »
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"Some say sleep is overrated, but I can assure you it's underrated"
-Emily Rose
Oh HELL yes. :yes:



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Finally she broke the silence.

“Do you love them?” she quietly whispered at me
Them??? :?




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She took a sharp breath “Nacchi… I know I was stupid and I regret it with all of my being. Please forgive me… I know you love me too
Oh crap, it's the NacchiMaki emo break-up story! :o

If it's as serious as I think it is...then, yeah right Maki.   :-\




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“How…dare you?” she pushed out through gritted teeth.

...

I could tell exactly what she gruesomely wanted to do to me and God knows I deserved it.

“I…I” I stuttered like a fool.

“I walk in here and find you awake. Then you tell me sorry and not one tear makes an appearance. You hug me and then expect a kiss after everything you’ve done” her voice was steady and had a consistent flow. Had anyone been evesdropping they wouldn’t be able to tell just how angry her posture, her stare, her tears were at this moment. She closed her eyes as she inhaled, giving the cells in her body a brand new batch of oxygen. “Why?” she whispered. Her vocal chords, noticeably, having vocal quakes.
Damn, Maki must have REALLY done something huge. :dunno:



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Once more my brain went into search mode, coming to the sad conclusion that there was absolutely nothing I could do to get out of this mess… I decided to try and turn the tables.

“You know what Abe?” I made sure to say her last name. “FORGET IT!” her expression quickly changed, instincts kicking in. She didn’t want to lose me, she loves me, and when you love something you try to keep it… right?

“What?” a flicker of fear crossed her face and there was my proof. All I had to do was keep her busy enough with the thoughts of loosing me and she would sure put aside what I did
OI! WATDAFUCK!?!?! :shock:

What's Maki thinking? Trying to make herself look like a victim against "Nacchi's rage"? She's totally sidestepping what you did to Nacchi! That's totally manipulative!  :angry: 




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“I had enough… I begged you for forgiveness. I promised you never to do it again and confessed my love for you in the process and you treat me this way” now it was her turn to look for a response, her eyes quickly jolted back and forth as it mimicked her brain activity. For dramatic effect I turned and walked back to my bed, quickly taking off my pajama bottoms. I reached for the nearest pair of pants and waited for her next move. As I pulled up my jeans and started to zip it up I felt two arms embrace me and like clock work, there was the move. I pretended to be indifferent, finishing the zip up and buttoning them up.
Right now, Maki =  :thumbdown:



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Then again, she had never looked this pitiful in my life.
It's Maki's fault that Nacchi's like this, what with her lying to her so much and all. 



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Out of the blue my house phone rang. After the fifth ring it went straight to voice mail “Hey Goto-chan~” the new soloist’s voice boomed through the tiny speakers of my message recorder. “Fujimoto here, last night was great! Sorry for leaving early… but you know… work” she giggled innocently “Hopefully we can have a repeat of last night. Call me when you can. If not, I’ll see you at work this weekend. Ja nee~” she hung up and just like that my life as I knew it would never be the same again. The tight embrace she had on me as if holding on for dear life was now gone. She lay there on top of me, limp and lifeless. She was no longer sobbing but her tears still slid their way down the side of my back.
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh crap. :scared:




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“Please hug me… for five minutes” I felt her get off of me and I slowly rose. When I turned around I met her with a strong embrace. As we were there hugging in silence I suddenly felt her lips capture mine. A kiss that till this day it is indescribable, without breaking it we collapsed on to my bed. The kiss was not aggressive nor was it gentle, the only words that I could fine to somewhat properly depict it were “meaningful” and “deep”. She gave me the deepest and most meaningful kiss I would ever be graced with…
A kiss goodbye? Nacchi finally realized that she had to break up with her? :cry:




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Sound of thunder made sleeping eyes flutter open. She quickly looked at her clock “3:40 in the morning” she groggily voiced.  She slowly sat up and ran her hands through her hair. “That freaking dream again” she unpleasantly stated. She threw her self back on her bed and hoped to God that she could go back to sleep but the image of Abe crying, the sensation of their last kiss and how disturbingly accurate that dream recollected their last encounter wouldn’t grant her such mercy. “Why am I dreaming it again” she pondered, deciding it was worthless in persuading sleep to return she jumped out of the warm embrace her bed offered and slipped into her inviting slippers.
Because despite what she said earlier (in her dream), she really WAS having guilty feelings about what she did to Nacchi. She did wrong, and now she's suffering emotionally (and rightfully so, if you ask me) for it.




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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #97 on: April 18, 2008, 12:49:41 AM »
I gotta tell you i spent all night reading this fic.... I find it soooooooooooooo interesting. The last chapter was Great! Keep up the good work!

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #98 on: April 18, 2008, 05:50:07 AM »
great chapter!

MakixNacchi break was so... sad  :pleeease: bad maki poor nacchi i could say XD

Reina  :roll:

waiting next chapter!

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #99 on: April 18, 2008, 09:56:29 PM »


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“Do you love them?” she quietly whispered at me. Now was my chance to try and fix everything. Thoughts ran through my mind, from one corner to the other. They were desperately, urgently, frantically trying to find something that could make this whole situation lighten up.

Ok... what's going on? :cry:
 

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“Forgive me” She froze at my touch, her inhaling and exhaling was the only activity taking place. I took the lack of rejection as a good sign. With out letting go I stupidly made a request, as if I were in any position to make a request. I slowly nudged my way to her ear “I love you and only you.” She took a sharp breath “Nacchi… I know I was stupid and I regret it with all of my being. Please forgive me… I know you love me too. Natsumi

OMG THIS IS GOTO AND NACCHI! O.O Is this what happen!?!?!
Poooor Nacchi

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Anticipating hungry lips and wanting eyes but met with the cold reality of disgusted lips and rebuffing eyes. Then, the defiant glare that I would grow oh too familiar with made its début

HAH you were wrong GOTO!


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“Why?” she whispered. Her vocal chords, noticeably, having vocal quakes. Once more my brain went into search mode, coming to the sad conclusion that there was absolutely nothing I could do to get out of this mess… I decided to try and turn the tables.
What the hell??? turn the tables  :-\


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“You know what Abe?” I made sure to say her last name. “FORGET IT!” her expression quickly changed, instincts kicking in.
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 I pretended to be indifferent, finishing the zip up and buttoning them up.

What is ****ed UP! I really really don't like Maki in this story... and it's a shame cause I  love Maki. I love anything Maki in it. But she is such a ***** in this chapter. I don't if to like you anymore Poets  :'(

 
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“Just turn around and hug me, let’s just pretend this never happen.” She paused “Gocchin… you don’t understand. If you go, if you leave me… it’ll be like losing my ability to breath” She tenderly kissed my back “Don’t take my air away Maki”. Losing the battle with my will’s desire to resist, I slowly started to turn in an attempt to embrace her. Maybe things between us could still be salvaged.  Sadly, life was just playing a dirty trick on me.
OH EM GEE.... Nacchi's breaking my heart here :'(

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“Fujimoto here, last night was great! Sorry for leaving early… but you know… work” she giggled innocently “Hopefully we can have a repeat of last night. Call me when you can. If not, I’ll see you at work this weekend. Ja nee~” she hung up and just like that my life as I knew it would never be the same again.
Yeah, cause you screwed it up. Okay, so Miki is one of them who is the other(s)


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“Maki…”she called out “I only have one thing to ask from you” how could I turn her down.
Yeah, how can you.

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Impatiently opening its flap she took a good chug of it. Sleep, would not grant Maki Goto escape from her thoughts this night.
Good, you don't deserve sleep.



Okay... i need the happy times back now plz Y___________________________________Y

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