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Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 7 – Secrets Revealed]
« on: November 24, 2007, 09:30:01 AM »
Why am I starting a new fic when I have the other thread (not updated for some time) you ask. Well, this idea came to me rather unexpectedly last night and I decided that it might be a good idea to write it down before writer's block pays me another visit. If all goes according to plan, this story should grow to include other H!P members. I hope you enjoy reading this and please comment if you can. Preferably positive ones :P



Chapter 1 - The Sprinter

Perched on a stool in the middle of the department store, I slouched down low in my seat hoping to shrink into a mini me, a midget so tiny that no one could see me without the help of a high index magnifying glass. I could feel the lady’s hand as she draws lines across my lids. I don’t know how I got talked into being the stand-in model for the young makeup artist. The twin effect of her pitiful begging and Kanna’s enthusiasm to help her probably had something to do with it.

“You should put on lip gloss and mascara more often. You could almost be considered a babe. Though the purple eye shadow might be a little too much.”

With my eyes closed, I flailed my arms around wildly to try and smack the ssexy beasting Kanna in the ass. Trust her to relish in my agony so openly when she was the reason why I was stuck here squirming under the assault of brushes and cotton pads in the first place.

Before my long limbs manage to make contact with Kanna, I heard her gasp loudly.

“What was that for?”

I questioned aloud waiting for a reply. Kanna might be noisy and boisterous but she wasn’t one to gasp for no reason. Plucking my right arm from mid air, she used her finger to write some letters on my palm.

“Are you using your middle finger again? You should stop doing that before someone mistakenly thinks you are swearing at him or her. Don’t expect me to stick around when you get beaten up.”

“Shush and concentrate!”

I clamed up at the tone of Kanna’s voice and focused my thoughts onto what my best friend was writing. This sounded serious.

R…..i…..i…..Rii.


“Rii.”

I repeated that audibly as I searched within my memory bank for what it meant. Having code names for things were handy when you wanted to gossip about people. But in our case, Kanna loved coming up with so many creative nicknames that sometimes I had trouble keeping up with all her wild labels.

“Rii, Rii?! OMG, She’s here?”

I was just about to open my eyes until I remembered the make-up artist was still working on them. Not wanting to risk getting blinded by a runaway pencil tip jabbing into my eyeball, I left them tightly shut. In actual fact, I was also too freaked to open them and risk seeing where Risako was. What would I do if she happened to walk towards us?

“She’s over at accessories.”

Kanna whispers, a little too loudly while slapping my arm.

“Is she coming over? Are you done yet lady?”

I stole a peek at the lady with one half lidded eye and asked in a desperate bid to hurry her. I had to get out of here before Risako spotted me in my hideous green tracksuit. It was a funny shade and the pants were too short. The unfortunate result of throwing it into the dryer without reading the tag carefully.

“Yes you’re done. Thank you so m…”

“Yeah whatever.”

I hopped off the stool, scooped my bag pack up from the floor, grabbed Kanna by the wrist and pulled her towards the nearest exit all in one smooth motion.

“Hold it girl, where’s the fire?!”

Ignoring Kanna’s surprised screams, I continued speeding past rows and rows of fragrances when I suddenly catch sight of my reflection in a mirrored wall and screeched to a grinding halt. The numerous freckles that I hated with a vengeance were completely erased, and my normal-sized eyes look like they took up half my face.

“Earth to Superstar Barbie!”

I wasted two whole minutes admiring my new appearance, and this prompted Kanna to take a dig at me.

“If you’re done falling in love with yourself, we have a bus to catch. Practice starts in 30 minutes. “

I nodded absentmindedly, still refusing to tear my gaze away from the new me. When out of the blue, I heard an angelic voice float into my ears.

“Aren’t you in Bio with me?”

Turning towards the direction of the voice, I found myself staring straight at the most gorgeous girl in the entire grade.

“I’m Risako…Sugaya.”

Her teeth were snowy white, smile dazzling, and I fall helplessly into the abyss of her endless black eyes.

Gawd, she is so beautiful.

“Hi, I’m Maimi.”

I anticipated myself to feel shy and end up looking like a fool, but instead, I managed to wring out a small smile and introduce myself, without choking on my saliva or collapsing in an embarrassing heap onto the floor due to jelly knees.

Hearing Kanna smack her gum behind me, I suddenly become aware of the time. But being able to breath in the same air as Risako Sugaya at such close proximity is like a dream come through and nothing could make me end it prematurely.

“Maimi Yajima. Sits behind you in Bio. She’s a track star and currently a very late one. 845-3264, Call her if you want but now we gotta run.”

I detect a slight displeasure in Kanna’s announcement as she yanks me off in the direction of the building’s automatic sliding doors. I was still in a daze as she dragged me along like a rag doll. However, I did manage to catch Risako program her silver colored cell before the glass doors slid close, all but an inch away from my thickly powered face.

I can’t believe it, Risako Sugaya knows my name.


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Yes, the inspiration for the chapter title came from the 4th Berryz album :lol:





« Last Edit: May 18, 2008, 06:58:42 AM by lil_hamz »

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2007, 09:43:57 AM »
The word "Sprinter" is the only reason why I click into this fic  :lol:

Maimi + Kanna + Risako :heart: YAY !!!!!!!!



...... I shouldn't read this at night ..... now I'm too hyper XD .......

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #2 on: November 24, 2007, 03:59:42 PM »
I clicked this cuz the title sounds interesting. Does it have anything that deals with a night club? :P

But anways, this story has 3 of my top members out of Berryz/C-ute, how the heck could I not read this

I'm also wondering what a silver colored cell is.

Edit: I'm such a dumbass, cell as in cellphone right? She was putting Maimi's number in there.
« Last Edit: November 25, 2007, 01:35:25 AM by modesta107 »

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #3 on: November 24, 2007, 06:35:22 PM »
The Sprinter title caught my attention, but I didn't think of Maimi instead I was thinking, "Is this going to be a fic version of Pinch Runner?"  :lol: How wrong I was.

Kanna is here  :w00t: That's great, she's my second fav of c-ute.

Interesting start. I didn't know Maimi was linked to Risako in real life. Or was it not based on real life? Anyway, hope you're going to continuously update this one too.

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #4 on: November 24, 2007, 06:49:29 PM »
Cool, two fics come along at once for me to read, and I haven't really satisfied my Risako fix so this should do nicely. xD

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #5 on: November 24, 2007, 09:24:32 PM »
Maimi and Kanna!  My top two kyuto! :w00t:  :rockon:

Regrettably, we don't get to see much of them together, but you evidently want to fix that. Good for you!   :thumbsup
Now, I wonder who else will be involved...  :yep:

Nice start, btw.  ;)


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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #6 on: November 25, 2007, 12:42:04 AM »
First reaction: LOL WHUT? MAIMI AND RISAKO?

But yeah, this is gonna be interesting. O:

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #7 on: November 25, 2007, 01:21:42 AM »
Oh YAY, i like the sound of this one... Maimi is so cute getting nervous about Risako :lol:

Throw Miyabi in the mix and I have my top two girls from C-ute and Berryz so there is no way i would leave this fic :P

oh and others have said that they clicked this fic coz of the title and chapter title... I actually only clicked the thread coz of the author :wub: I wasn't going to read it and then i saw the author and was liek YAY...  I :heart: Your writing  :nya: :-[

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 1 - The Sprinter]
« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2007, 01:40:43 AM »
Very good start, Hammiez.
Maimi and Risako, huh? I'm very interested in seeing where this will go.
As I've never seen a pairing quite like this before.

I really liked the raaaaah, rush rush rush, must get out of here atmosphere you've created and of course, Risako simply taking out her cell and entering Maimi's number without questing where they're running off to, like it was the most normal thing in the world. LOL.

Great job! ^O^

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Chapter 2 – Reminiscences and a Chance Encounter


“This is unacceptable. I expected you two to know better.”

I hung my head low, refusing to look into our captain’s eyes as she reprimanded us for being fifteen minutes late. The tinge of regret in her voice was evident and I felt even worse than I already did. Whenever coach wasn’t around, captain would be the one leading practice. She was less strict, easy-going, and a really nice person overall. Moreover, she was really pretty. Unlike the typical “beautiful” girl, my young captain didn’t have long flowing hair. Instead, she sported short neat hair, lightly colored with a hint of red. Staring at her lips as she spoke seriously, I signed inwardly. I hated to behave in anyway that disappointed her.

“Start stretching. And next time Yajima, try not to apply make-up when you come for practice.”

Shaking her head, their senior heaved a final sign before turning around and walking off towards the start line where the other girls were already in starting position.

“This wouldn’t have happened if you weren’t so hung up on Sugaya.”

Maimi’s arms were raised high above her head, in mid stretch when Kanna spoke. Cocking her head to the side, she scrutinized her friend’s face warily. Narrowed eyes, check. Pursed lips, check. This was definitely a category three on the ‘How-mad-is-Kanna’ meter.

Just as Maimi was seriously contemplating how to settle the raging fire in Kanna, the younger girl abruptly set off alone, not waiting for her regular jogging partner. Abandoning her remaining arm stretches, Maimi sped to catch up with Kanna.

“Hey, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to make us late. You know how I feel about Risako.”

“Unfortunately I do. That’s why I can’t stay mad at you.”

A huge grin breaking out on her face, Maimi moved closer to the shorter girl and encircled her neck with a thin arm.

“Thanks Kanna, you’re my BFF friend and nothing would change that.”

“Not even Sugaya?”

“Not even Sugaya.”

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“Oi Kame!”

Raising a gun into the air to fire a shot, the captain signaled the start of four consecutive 800 meter rounds when she heard a familiar voice coming from the bleachers. Nevertheless, she remained standing there beneath the hot afternoon sun watching the young runners race around the track for several minutes until she was satisfied. Then jogging to the area filled with long wooden seats, she sat herself heavily down next to the girl who was almost in a sprawl position. Her large black bag stacked upright to prop herself up, the outsider of the track team had her legs stretched out in front of her as she lazily fished cheese rings from a half eaten package to pop into her mouth. Seeing her friend finally appear, she raised the packet towards her in silent offering.

“You sure took a long time to get here. Now I know who not to call in a life and death situation.”

Forming an O-shape with her mouth, Eri pointed to her own awaiting black hole and waited for her best friend to feed her. Though she was a rather sluggish person and slept a lot, the reason for not helping herself to the delicious tidbit was not laziness but health reasons. Having to handle track equipment during practice resulted in her hands being tainted by soil and grime. There was no way she would risk suffering from food poisoning by eating a snack filled with filth and grass residues. She was a turtle, not a cow.

“As usual. But Yajima and Arihara were late.”

Aiming another cheese ring into her mouth, the girl with long brownish hair and a cute nose took a sip of drink from the coke can sitting next to her before speaking again.

“Is Yajima that lanky one?”

Now sitting side by side with each other, Eri nudged her friend softly to signal wanting to eat again.

“Yeah. How did you know Gaki-san?”

“By how she far ahead she is from the rest. Don’t you know there’s a rumor going around that she’ll be the one most likely to take over as the new captain next year?”

“Really?”

Eri’s huge black eyes widened even more as she looked at Risa with genuine surprise. Why didn’t she know about this? It had to be really big news for Risa to hear of it since she wasn’t fond of gossiping. What she knew was generally told to her by others.

“Maybe if you quit falling asleep so often you’ll hear about it too.”

Ignoring Risa’s quip at poking her, which was standard procedure every time they were together, Eri rested her head on Risa’s shoulder and closed her eyes, letting them take respite from the strong glare of the sun as memories came flooding back.


~Flashback~

Monday 8.15 am. The start of a fresh term in a new school and Eri had overslept. No doubt due to the tossing and turning in bed for a good three hours from nervousness the previous night. After hastily getting ready and speeding off in record time, she clean forgot to take along the orange umbrella hanging at the corner of her desk.

Eri Kamei, you just HAD to have that extra 10 minutes of sleep didn’t you. First you missed the bus and now you are probably, no make that DEFINITELY late.

Eri scolded herself as she glanced alternately from her wrist watch to the dark sky that was pouring torrential rain. Being the reputed “rain girl,” the sky never failed to open up whenever she left the house. This time was no exception judging from the monsoon like rainfall. As she neared the metal gates of the school, Niigaki Risa spotted a girl huddled beneath the narrow roof of the empty guard post situated some distance away from the main school building. The unrelenting rain splattered down on her crisp new uniform and her hair stuck to the sides of her face. Wringing her hands and panicking like crazy, Eri was ready to cry. It was bad enough making a grand entrance by entering the class late but being both late and looking like a drowned chicken was way too much.

“Some nasty weather eh.”

Adverting her misty eyes away from the damp muddy ground, Eri looked up at the owner of the umbrella who had miraculously appeared to shelter her from the descending rain. She didn’t have bangs, which was rare for girls their age in Japan, but she did have the most genuine smile Eri had ever seen. In the end, they stepped into class dripping wet and soaked to the skin except that they both had smiles on their faces. Barely ten minutes into the year and Eri made a friend. One that she knew would accompany her through all the good times and bad.

~End of Flashback~


“Oi Kame, they are at the last lap.”

Patting Eri’s head carefully with two unstained fingers, Risa woke her from dreamland. The girl had unwittingly fallen asleep again. It was indeed a rare talent.

“I’ll be done soon. Wait for me while I change?”

It was like ritual that the two go home together everyday since the first day they knew each other. It has been four years and nothing has changed.

“Don’t I always?”

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Humming happily to herself, Eri skipped down the empty hallway. It was Friday, her favorite day of the week as it meant no school for two whole days. Not having to wake up early for lessons equates to being able to sleep in and this made her happy just thinking about it. Friends and relatives have frequently claimed that the perpetual sleepy expression on her face made her look lazy. She didn’t deny it but at least according to Gaki-san, she looked cute sleeping. Turning a sharp corner without looking, she almost crashed into another person coming from the other direction.   

“Ah! Sorry, sorry!”

Bowing profusely, Eri almost fainted when she saw who the person she came close to mowing down was. Trying to regain her sense of balance and keep the papers in her hands steady was Ishikawa sensei.

“Kamei! Just the person I want to see!”

“Huh? I am?”

“Well, you are the first student I recognize, so, yes!”

As chirpy as ever, the tan tennis club teacher stepped closer to Eri and shoved the stack of papers into her arms.

“Please bring these down to the tennis room and pass them to the student there. I have an urgent meeting which I absolutely have to be at right now.”

“Er, okay.”

“I am grateful for your help Kamei. I will be sure to notify Fujimoto sensei that her captain is such a helpful pupil.”

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Volleyball… bowling…. here it is. Tennis.

It didn’t occur to Eri to knock first as she assumed the student she was supposed to hand the documents to would be expecting her. Hence she opened the door and stuck her head in nonchalantly.

Oh my god!

In that instant, Eri found herself staring open-mouthed at the undressed occupant of the tennis club room. A good twenty seconds passed before a high-pitched scream snapped her out of it. Recovering quickly, she scooted out of the room and shut the door with a loud bang. 

The experience was truly worthy of being impressed in Eri’s mind for eternity. The student was tall and slim, had jet-black luscious hair that fell below her fair and creamy shoulders. And shimmering black orbs for eyes that were utterly breathtaking.

“Erm, you can come in now.”

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chokkan 2: If reading this makes you hyper, you can try checking for updates before work or school to keep you awake :D

modesta107: Nope, not night club but more like clubs in school XD

g4rfield: I’m actually not sure if Maimi and Risako are close in real life, but as most of the kids look pretty interchangeable, I thought to give it a try :P

Cookie Holiday: I never tried writing anything based on the kids so I hope this doesn’t disappoint you *crosses fingers*

Amarghetta: Thanks for the nice words : )

Brat-san: Yeah I know! I never thought of these 2 together before this either :lol:

Lollipopgirl: You really made my day with your comment. *HAPPI~~*

Sevii: Haha, yup that is pretty funny, Risako being strangely unflappable character.
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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #10 on: December 04, 2007, 08:02:59 PM »
Who's the "tall and slim, had jet-black luscious hair that fell below her fair and creamy shoulders. And shimmering black orbs for eyes that were utterly breathtaking" student dammit!!! You need to get back here and update fast!  XD

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #11 on: December 04, 2007, 10:16:17 PM »
Junjun? Sayu? Junjun? Sayu?! Oh, I don't know anymore!

Nice Gakikame thurr!

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #12 on: December 05, 2007, 12:10:36 AM »
Ooooh me likeys the style of writing. ^_^ Very good. XD

I concur with Sevii, although the first person I thought of was Sayu. I suppose it could have been Junjun too though. XDDD

Can't wait to see more!

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #13 on: December 05, 2007, 12:36:38 AM »
Lmao at Eri staring at the girl for 20 seconds before she noticed XD That's gonna be a bit of an awkard scene when Eri re-enters the room.
I'm guessing the girl was Sayu? But then there is a chance that it's JunJun. ~Roots for Sayu~ 

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #14 on: December 05, 2007, 01:53:24 AM »
Yay! A new lil_hamz fic! :farofflook:

Moar Gaki-Kame! and RISAKO-MAIMI! Totally unexpected, but they do look good together. :inlove:

Kanna's jealous :mon misch:

Who's that girl Eri walked into? We need to know!!!

Oh yeah. Sorry I'm late :depressed:

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #15 on: December 05, 2007, 02:18:23 AM »
lol!  :mon thumb:
That girl was Mshige I'm sure. She once mentioned being in the tennis club in school so... And the description really fits.

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #16 on: December 05, 2007, 04:37:47 AM »
Yeah it has to be Sayu, not even JunJun fits the description as perfectly as Sayu does... So does that mean a GakiKameSayu love triangle? :P But what about Ai-chan? :(

Poor Kanna, she's always the best friend and never the love interest, lol... And yes, Maimi is a freak of nature when it comes to running, hopefully Risako will come watch her train one day :wriggly:
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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chap 2 - Reminiscences and A Chance Encounter]
« Reply #17 on: December 07, 2007, 09:55:05 AM »
Chapter 3 – The New Arrival


“I don’t understand how you can resist the charms of Risako.”

It was after practice and the two friends were standing at the school gates, waiting for a certain someone.

“Easy, I just don’t think she’s all that great.”

Kanna replied easily, tearing at the wrapper of a new stick of gum. Crushing the now ripped paper in one hand, she tossed the empty wrapper into the trash bin that stood a few feet away.

“Are you serious? She’s beautiful.”

A dreamy look appeared on Maimi’s face as soon as she thought of Risako Sugaya. The earlier meeting at the mall had left her in high spirits and she was nowhere near leaving 7th heaven yet.

“Maybe. But I prefer someone with qualities other than looks. An all-rounder.”

Climbing onto the low boundary wall of the compound, Maimi sat swinging her legs as she pondered over who the mysterious all-rounder could be. Besides herself, the only other person who came into the most contact with Kanna was…

“I’m so sorry! I got held up!”

Bent over and panting loudly, I took in huge breaths of air to recover from running all the way from the changing room. I was glad I had decided to tie my hair in the high-bun style today. Otherwise strands of my hair would definitely be flying about and I didn’t want her to see me in any state other than my best. Forgetting to seek forgiveness for my lateness, I bowed apologetically at my friends as I struggled to catch my breath. Kanna kindly took over the shoe bag in my hand and swung it over her shoulder as she waited for me to stand upright.

“It’s her! She’s the one!”

Jerking my head towards the tall individual who had suddenly hollered, I watched with a confused expression as Maimi jumped off from the wall and pointed at me in an exaggerated manner.

“You look out for her a lot. And you two walk home together practically everyday. I’m sure of it, the person is you!”

Still lost with the conversation that was taking place, I looked to Kanna for answers. But she only shook her head and rolled her eyes. An action that she did whenever she thought someone was doing or saying something ridiculous.

“Maimi, I knew you had problems when you liked Sugaya. I just didn’t know it was so bad.”

“You mean it’s not her?”

The gears that were working in overdrive clicking away at five miles per second in Maimi’s head now slowly whined to a halt. She was so confident of her deduction skills only for them to be swept down by Kanna in one straight-faced statement.

“But….but…she’s an all-rounder! She’s the class monitor, in futsal and is pretty too.”

“I suppose I should thank you for thinking so highly of me?”

Watching Maimi stammer away was a funny sight, and I would have burst out laughing if I wasn’t so interesting in finding out what she was talking about. Standing adjacent to me, Kanna heaved a loud sigh of exasperation before replying.

“Firstly, we walk home together because we live in the same house. Second, it’s natural that I look out for her since I’m older. Lastly…”

Kanna stopped chewing her gum and eyed Maimi with a solemn expression.

“We’re cousins, that’ll never happen.”

Folding her arms, Kanna waited for the words to sink in. Maimi blinked a couple of times at Kanna, turned to gaze at me, and then went back to blinking. I grinned as I waited to see if she could come up with any other reaction other than imitating a fish. Apparently not. After bidding us goodbye Maimi headed for the bus stop in the opposite direction we were taking. Embarrassed at making such a huge boo-boo, she made us promise never to tell anyone the ‘clever’ inference she had come up with today.

“Your friend is hilarious.”

Walking in step, I teased my cousin mercilessly for having such a comical friend. Even though I knew Maimi too from seeing her around, we only started speaking after Kanna introduced us. I always thought she was the cool track star of the junior section. It didn’t occur to me that she could be such a space cadet as well. It did seem that she would make a good replacement for Kamei senpai. The current captain of the track team, also famous for her strange peculiarities. 

“Don’t mind her. Having solely Sugaya on her mind has made her quite mad.”

Nodding silently, I understood what Kanna was going through. It had to be hard having to share your best friend with another person. Especially when that person wasn’t known to be anything other than a pretty face.

“Let me tell you something that will cheer you up.”

As soon as the words left my mouth, Kanna’s eyes lit up and she turned to face me with anticipation.

“Airiin, you know me best!”

“Of course. Today, Natsuyaki…”

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Risa looked at her watch for the umpteen time. Eri was late. Usually she wouldn’t mind waiting for the dawdling turtle except that today she had to be home early. There was something important that she had to see too, and if she didn’t handle it well, it wasn’t going to be a pretty sight.

“Gaki… Gaki-san!”

The tiny speck of the said turtle grew larger as she neared the bicycle park at the back of the school. Unlocking her bicycle, Risa pulled it out of its bay and maneuvered it around to face the exit. Getting on it, she waited for Eri to climb on. As soon as she did, Risa zoomed off immediately, leaving a small puff of dust and sand behind.

“Sorry, sorry! But you wouldn’t believe what happened.”

Risa didn’t need more to be convinced that the matter that thrilled Eri so had to be rather amazing. From the short glance that Risa caught of her reddish face, and how highly excitable her voice is now, it must have been incredible.

“I wish I could be more eager to hear about it Kame. But I’m late.”

“Oh no!”

Slapping her thigh with the hand not wrapped around Risa’s waist, Eri exclaimed loudly. She totally forgot that Risa was expecting someone at her house today and she needed to be there to opened the door. Feeling remorseful for delaying her, Eri tried to make amends.

“Instead of dropping me off first like you always do, let’s go to your house straight. I can walk home from there.”

A smile appeared on Risa’s face when she heard the suggestion. It was a good idea and it would ensure that she wouldn’t be later than she already was. No longer worried about the time, she could pay attention to what Eri wanted to say.

“You can tell me all about what happened now Kame. I’m all ears.”

As the bicycle whizzed down the street towards the neighborhood they lived in, Eri articulated animatedly all about her encounter with the mysterious raven-haired maiden. The pitch of her voice went crescendo when she talked about how she barged into the room and chanced upon a girl changing. 

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…she opened the door and stuck her head in nonchalantly.

Oh my god!

In that instant, Eri found herself staring open-mouthed at the undressed occupant of the tennis club room. A good twenty seconds passed before a high-pitched scream snapped her out of it. Recovering quickly, she scooted out of the room and shut the door with a loud bang. 

The experience was truly worthy of being impressed in Eri’s mind for eternity. The student was tall and slim, had jet-black luscious hair that fell below her fair and creamy shoulders. And shimmering black orbs for eyes that were utterly breathtaking.

“Erm, you can come in now.”

Gingerly pushing open the door, Eri stepped in apprehensively. What should she say to the girl she had violated. She didn’t even dare to look up at her in case their eyes met. The two stood in awkward silence until the taller girl spoke.

“Are you here to pass me something?”

Finally noticing the papers in her hand, Eri gasped and stuck out both arms at 120 degrees to hand them over, still not looking up. In a dramatic twist of fate, she had thrust the papers straight into the girl’s face causing her to step back and lose her balance. Hearing the surprised yelp that escaped her, Eri reacted just in time to drop the papers and rush forward to catch her.

A sudden strong breeze entered the compact room, floating the sheets of paper in a magical whirl of white. Now with the maiden below, snug and safe in the arms of the turtle prince who had so gallantly rescued her from the attack of the monster documents, a slight blush appeared on her milky face. The silky hair tangled in Eri’s fingers caused a strange sensation in her heart and she couldn’t help but gulp, twice.

“Erm, you can let me go now.”

“Ah! Sorry, sorry!”

Eri’s face flushed a deep crimson red and she was so embarrassed she kept bowing and going backwards until she hit the door. With a concluding SORRY! Eri exited the room taking off like a speeding bullet not looking back.   

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“So you basically saw her naked and kissed her?”

Risa’s voice drifted from the front of the bicycle to the back where Eri sat, still distressed that she had left with such a bad impression.

“I didn’t kiss her!”

“You wanted too, admit it.”

Risa’s voice was gleeful. She enjoyed making her turtle friend so flustered. It was their last year at the school and if Eri could find someone she truly liked, it might not be a bad ending to their high school life.

“I….”

“Yikes! She has arrived.”

Straightening her back to peep from behind Risa, Eri saw the outline of a tall girl standing in front of Risa’s house. There were two giant duffel bags at her feet and another smaller one slung across her back. As the bicycle neared her, Eri observed the grim expression she wore.

Living with her can’t be good.


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g4rfield Sevii Estrea modesta107: I might reveal who the girl is in the next chapter. Do keep a look out for the update if you wanna find out :P

wordsworth: That’s a nice pic of Maimi and Risako! Where is it from? I love that pose they did with Maimi’s arm around Risako and her holding Maimi’s hand :wub:

meowz: I’m happy that my descriptive writing can invoked an image of a certain girl :)   

Lollipopgirl: Kanna will have her time XD


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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 3 – The New Arrival
« Reply #18 on: December 07, 2007, 10:14:10 AM »
Lol Maimi's such a dolt here. XDD I do wonder what kind of person Kanna would like. Haha. Airi <3. XDD

GakiKame best friends combi~ <3 Me likes. Haha the turtle prince part made me laugh. Risa teasing Eri was gold too.

I wonder who's that mysterious person in front of Risa's house (and is coming to stay with her). Tall definitely rules out Aichan, that's for sure. Considering how you're making the older musume the teachers (like Rika and Miki), I'm guessing this one can't be one of the older ones. Junjun? Ehhh. Um. Koharu? But "grim expression"...

...this is hard. >_>

Eh whatever, I'll just sit here and wait for developments. XD

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 3 – The New Arrival
« Reply #19 on: December 07, 2007, 10:35:40 AM »
Poor Maimi can't think straight when they talk about Risako!  :rofl:

Hehe, I wonder what Airi's story about Miya is? Caught sleeping in class?  :P

Another mystery person at the end? Is she the same one Eri caught undressing in the tennis club's room? :o

About the pic, they're from mag scans I posted way back in the Risako thread. Maimi and Risako will be in some kind of Ski event but I don't know the details since I haven't seen any news about it yet aside from the scans. :)

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