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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 3 – The New Arrival
« Reply #20 on: December 07, 2007, 09:25:44 PM »
So could Miyabi possibly be the girl Kanna prefers?
lol, that's gonna be really awkard if the girl at Risa's house turns out to be the person Eri walked in on. And if Risa finds out, there's definitely be more teasing from her :P
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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 3 – The New Arrival
« Reply #21 on: December 07, 2007, 11:17:59 PM »
Hmmm, my guess for the girl at Risa's house is Miyabi and that's what Airi was gonna tell Kanna :P (man i suck at this, :lol: )

And you did say Kanna will get her chance so it will be interesting to see who it will be and if its Miyabi, even more interesting :)

GakiKame friendship is so cute :wub:
And you're so cruel not revealing Eri's naked friend!

(still hang on to hope for TakaGaki :D)

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 3 – The New Arrival
« Reply #22 on: December 07, 2007, 11:51:38 PM »
The tennis girl, probably Sayumi right?

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 3 – The New Arrival
« Reply #23 on: December 08, 2007, 03:49:18 AM »
Man... I love how you keep making us guess the characters in all your fics!

Tennis Girl is SAYUUUUUUU I hope.. I mean slim, tall, jet black hair, dark eyes, not to mention high pitched scream.. HAS TO BE SAYU!

I love love love Maimi here~ so cuteee.. And I wonder who Kanna likes.. maybe Maimi's guess was actually right but Kanna just faked everything? but then “Of course. Today, Natsuyaki…”
Natsuyaki ??????

Anyways.. will be waiting for upcoming chapters~ btw.. your writting style rawks!

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 3 – The New Arrival
« Reply #24 on: December 23, 2007, 06:05:35 AM »
Chapter 4 – Girl Next Door


“Why don’t I see her?”

Whining and pulling at the ends of her sweater, Eri leaned against the lockers as she waited for Risa to finish up at the water fountain. For the past few days, she had gone around the school, forcing Risa along, in the hopes of “accidentally” bumping into the dark-haired beauty. But no matter how many rounds she made in the cafeteria or hung around the concourse, she never did see her.

“Considering the student population of this school, I’m not surprised. You could though, visit the tennis room and seek her out.”

After suggesting her invaluable advice, Risa returned to quenching her thirst. She didn’t understand why Eri had to choose the long and winding method over the fast one. Since she was definitely related to the tennis club, it was a no brainer that she would turn up at the room within the week.

“I can’t! Don’t you understand Gaki-san? I can’t appear desperate.”

Jumping around and pounding her fists on an invisible table, Eri rested her forehead on Risa’s right shoulder, still mumbling under her breath about why god made it so difficult for her to meet the girl of her dreams again.

“You can get to see her sooner. Isn’t that what you want? I know it’s what I want to get you off my back. I can’t stand having to go around with you anymore.”

Pushing Eri’s head off with a light flick of her wrist, Risa started walking towards the classroom where she had her next class.

“Besides, the janitor has been giving me strange looks. He probably thinks I’m gonna vandalize something and am checking out the area before my evil deed.”

Following Risa, Eri sighed loud enough for her friend to hear. Then pouting cutely, she tugged at Risa’s sleeve and peered into her eyes. This was the sure-fire way to make Risa obey her every whim and fancy.

“Argh! Stop it, STOP it! Don’t look at me like that.”

“Then you’ll come with me after school today?”

“Whatever, but it’s the last time. I’m gonna be busy getting her settled in.”

“Who’s her? Oh, her.”

Stopping outside Risa’s classroom, Eri knelt down to access her locker situated at the bottom level of two rows. As she turned the knob of the lock to input her code, she continued talking to her friend.

“I still don’t understand why your mom took her in. She’s really mean.”

“She wasn’t like this before. She was a good kid.”

Recalling the happenings of the previous afternoon, Eri couldn’t see how the new arrival could have ever been nice. She not only left all her luggage outside to be carried into the house by Risa, she even yelled at the older girl for being late.   

“You can introduce us after she becomes a better person. Otherwise there’s no way I’m having anything to do with her Gaki-san.”

Fingering the beaded bracelet she wore around her wrist, Risa promised herself that she would do whatever it takes to change the young girl back to how she once was. The chirpy and enthusiastic kid who greeted everyone with a bright smile. She had to.

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After Eri managed to locate what she needed from the dark and musty locker that stored a rotten apple, a mess of papers, a pair of rain-soaked socks and two training shorts, she uttered a rushed ‘bye!’ and ran off towards her own class with notebook and assignment in hand. Entering the room, Risa walked along the aisle leading to the back where an empty seat was positioned near the windows. From the corner of her eye, she noticed a pencil fall and roll across the floor. Bending down with the intention of picking it up, she banged heads with another girl who was doing the same. Shooting up one hand to rub at the small bump that was growing, Risa’s line of sight connected with the owner of the pencil sitting in the seat right in front. The girl grinned widely, crinkling her nose in a cute manner and revealing a row of straight teeth underneath her pinkish lips.

“Thanks.”

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The streets were deserted at this time of the day when most people were in school or at work. A lone figure skipped home happily swinging her bag and whistling a tune. It was great not having to engage in a shoving match with people to get on the bus. The added luxury of getting to spend less time on the bus with it making fewer stops along the journey home further enticed the young rebel to skip last period.

You are too smart girl.

Grinning to herself, she didn’t notice the spray of water that was coming her way until she was suddenly drenched from head to toe, water droplets dripping from the ends of her lightly colored hair.

“What the hell?!”

Wearing an irritated expression, she stomped fuming into the garden all ready to give the person responsible for her plight a piece of her very angry mind. There, she came face to face with a girl who was holding onto a green rubber hose and directing the water left and right in short quick motions.

“What the hell are you doing!”

Looking up at the uninvited individual, the girl continued spraying water and replied nonchalantly.
 
“Watering the flowers, what else?”

“Who the hell waters plants while aiming the jet at innocent passersby?”

“Innocent? I don’t think so.”

Sneering at the shorter girl who wore her uniform with sleeves rolled up, skirt way too high above her knees, tube socks and generously accessorized with gold jewelry, she went back to playing with the water.     

Nobody talks to me like that!

Annoyed that some girl younger than herself would be speaking to her in such a tone after causing her to look a drippy mess, the raging fire in the petite sized girl flared up. Stalking over to the teenager still squirting water at the rows of flowers in their little flower beds, she grabbed and pulled hard at the collar area of the other’s round-neck t-shirt.

“Apologize. Now.”

Peering down at the shorter girl, the lanky teen took no heed of her menacing tone and instead made fun of her attacker’s height by talking over the top of her head. 

“Why should I?”

“I said apologize.”

Trying to keep her voice even to conceal how she really felt, the tinted hair girl decided to give the poor clueless child another chance before lashing out and tearing her apart. After all, she did promise someone never to pick a fight again. But every ounce of her willpower shattered when the almost gleeful voice of the youth chimed out like a clear bell. 

“Make me.”

“Argh! You’re really pushing my buttons!”

With a Red Indian like shriek, her fist shot out and she struck the smirking girl on the side of her face that sent her falling to the ground. Not one to take any crap thrown her way either, the young teenager threw down the hose in her hand and seized a handful of her assailant’s hair. This was war.

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Risa was in a fairly good mood today. The last period she had with Eri ended early and allowed them the rare opportunity of heading for home before the evening crowd set in. She had just dropped off Eri at her place and was on her own way home, enjoying the cooling breeze and the breathtaking scenery of the setting sun when she heard shouting voices emerge from the direction of her house. Pedaling furiously, she picked up speed on her trusty bicycle and made the final bend where her double-story split level house stood.

From outside the relatively low white picket fences, she could see two figures rolling on the grass, clawing at faces and tearing away at each other’s hair. The scene was much like two stray female cats caught in a fight for sole possession of a single male cat.   

Running into the compound of the house, Risa groaned when she realized who the two were. She should have known better than to hope the new occupant of her home would not stir up trouble in the few hours that she wasn’t around to keep an eye on her. And when you’re living next door to the notorious toughie of the street, something was bound to happen.

“Tanakacchi! Koharu! Break it up!”

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Holding up the large over-sized sunglasses barely successful at staying balanced on her nose, the slim and petite girl struggled to reach her cell phone in her right skirt pocket. She couldn’t spot her date anywhere in the cozy café filled with loving couples. Not an empty seat in sight, she growled and grumbled at making it out the door later than she had planned. Arriving at this time meant having to contend with the lunchtime crowd. However, spending the greater part of her morning trying to conceal the huge purplish bruise on her face took precedence over being crushed in the human waves of people.

“Over here! Reinaaaaaaaaaaa!”

Turning her head around a couple of times, Reina failed to see where the voice was coming from. Everyone passing by her to get to the counter were annoyingly taller and obstructed her view of the tables. Tiptoeing, she finally saw the familiar face of her friend.

“And so I ended up fighting with this stupid kid, I don’t know what her problem was, it’s like she was picking a fight or something.”

Telling every bit of the story leading up to why she had to slap on nearly 2/3 of her brand new concealer and throw on a pair of out-of-fashion sunglasses for extra measure on a gloomy day made Reina increasingly agitated as she recalled the events of the previous day.

“I still can’t believe I actually fought with a child. A CHILD!”

Rambling on, Reina only realized her friend wasn’t paying her any attention when her head of dark hair bobbed along, nodding at all the wrong times.

“Hey, are you listening to me? I’m speaking here!”

“Reina, have you ever felt your heart beating so fast it could explode?”

“Huh?”

Now Reina was really lost. When did any part of her monologue mention anything about hearts beating at high-speed? Unconsciously fingering at the mark on her cheek that was slowly swelling, her eyes narrowed considerably when it hit her that what her companion was talking about had absolutely nothing to do with her.

“What the hell Sayumi, we’re supposed to be talking about me.”

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Estrea: I still think telling this story out is better than me typing it XD

wordsworth: I finally saw those pics. Gosh the girls are so cute in the all pink ski outfits. I wanna see Momo and Airi in those too :lol:

modesta107: To tell you the truth, I’ve not really decided on who’s going to be paired with Kanna :P

lollipopgirl: KameMame is so cuuuuuuuuute. I think they may be my fave couple after TakaGaki :wub:

glcorps2002: You’ll have to read on to find out :P

stefy: Thanks for the compliment, I'm floating right now :D


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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 4 – Girl Next Door]
« Reply #25 on: December 23, 2007, 12:42:58 PM »
Haha, don't worry, it came out exactly the way you told it to me! So it's all good!

Besides, pissed off Reina = love. XD

Aha, Reina is friends with Sayu. XDD Lemme guess, the person who made Sayu go doki doki is Eri (aka the encounter in the tennis room).

Can't wait to see how you write out the stuff you told me that time. >D

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 4 – Girl Next Door]
« Reply #26 on: December 23, 2007, 01:03:58 PM »
great chapter...
i like the GakiKame interaction and the way you write it..
now it's clear that Sayu is the mysterious naked girl Eri saw XD and Reina knows her.. wait and Gaki knows Reina..how haven't they met before? well there's always a first time for anything  ;)


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After Eri managed to locate what she needed from the dark and musty locker that stored a rotten apple, a mess of papers, a pair of rain-soaked socks and two training shorts, she uttered a rushed ‘bye!’ and ran off towards her own class with notebook and assignment in hand. Entering the room, Risa walked along the aisle leading to the back where an empty seat was positioned near the windows. From the corner of her eye, she noticed a pencil fall and roll across the floor. Bending down with the intention of picking it up, she banged heads with another girl who was doing the same. Shooting up one hand to rub at the small bump that was growing, Risa’s line of sight connected with the owner of the pencil sitting in the seat right in front. The girl grinned widely, crinkling her nose in a cute manner and revealing a row of straight teeth underneath her pinkish lips.

“Thanks.”

do i smell Takagaki :roll:

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 4 – Girl Next Door]
« Reply #27 on: December 23, 2007, 03:47:02 PM »
Damn, I was wondering who in the F was that fight between, but that was already answered. They'll probably run into eachother at school now :lol:
and the grl, who Eri walked in on has to by Sayu, right? right?  :yep:
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“And so I ended up fighting with this stupid kid, I don’t know what her problem was, it’s like she was picking a fight or something.”
Ahh, I really loved that line  XD

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 4 – Girl Next Door]
« Reply #28 on: December 23, 2007, 05:06:38 PM »
I also smell TakaGaki... :D The crinkled nose gives it away... also that you're such a TakaGaki fan!  :yep:

I'm glad you identified most of the unknown characters at the end here. I was starting to get confused keeping track of them all! lol.  You've got quite a few different stories going on here, but they all seem fun. :) A bit of the traditional... (TakaGaki, KameShige...) A bit of the unconventional... (Maimi/Risako?, Kanna/whoever XD) Keep it up! Your stories are very enjoyable reads. :)

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 4 – Girl Next Door]
« Reply #29 on: January 07, 2008, 06:16:44 AM »
 Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class


The bell chimed, signalling the start of first period. Stifling a yawn, Kanna blinked and rubbed her weary eyes.

Monday. Agh I hate it.

Taking out her denim pencil case decorated with colorful iron-ons, Kanna unzipped it and fished out a pencil. Ms Iida was most likely going to step into class any moment now. She was never late and it helped to be prepared just in case she started staring down at students who were not dutifully ready to copy down notes. Those scary eyes of hers gave Kanna the creeps. 

"Didn't sleep well last night?"

Sitting beside her, Maimi asked as she observed another yawn escape her suntanned short friend.

"I was thinking about some things."

"Do you wanna talk about it?"

Mami deduced it had something to do with Kanna's family. Having known her for ages, she knew just about everything that went on in her friend's life. From the death of her father to the moving in of Airi and her mom into their home. Kanna and Airi were cousins, bonded by the marriage of their parents who were siblings. They were a closely knit family and the news of both their father's death in the same freak automobile accident was devastating for the girls. Not to mention they were barely ten when it happened. Throughout it all, Maimi had been there, lending Kanna a shoulder to cry on and a comforting hug when it all became too much.

"I'm probably overreacting, but household expenses seem to be going up."

"I could ask my dad if he needs help at the store. I'm sure things will be busier with the festive season rolling by."

"Really? Thanks Maimi!"

Getting off the high stool she was sitting on, Kanna reached over to give Maimi a big hug. A job at the Yajima grocery store would be fun. And since her dad was an easy-going man, a pay advance would be negotiable should the need arise.

"Ahem."

Breaking apart, the two girls were surprised to see Risako staring at them. Chewing on her lower lip, she hesitated before speaking.

"I'm not interrupting you two I hope?"

"No, no! Not at all."

Shaking her head immediately, Maimi was quick to reassure her angel. Risako could drop by at any moment and she would never find it inconvenient.

Smiling a little and with shining eyes, Risako did a half-pout with her lips. Her little action blew the minds of anyone who was watching. 

"Would you like to be my lab partner for the rest of the year?"

Maimi's eyebrows almost flew off her face when she hear Risako's words. Her ears weren’t playing tricks on her were they? Seeing the pure delight that radiated from the beam on Maimi’s face, Kanna couldn’t match her friend’s smile even if her life depended on it.

"Me?"

"Yes. You are Maimi aren't you."

Risako's teasing accompanied by her soft giggle had an obvious effect on her admirer. Maimi turned crimson and she couldn't stop grinning like a hyena. Skittering to gather her belongings from the table, Maimi couldn't wait to join her dream girl at the bench further up front. The explosion of noise that erupted among the girls in class was no doubt a discussion of what just happened. The face of the cheerleading squad inviting the star of the track team to be lab partners. This was without a doubt going to be the news of the year.
 
"Maimi, aren't we lab partners?"

Pulling Maimi back down such that the lanky girl fell hard sitting down on the stool, an indignant Kanna narrowed her eyes and refused to release her.

"I've had about enough of that Sugaya. Fancy waltzing in and stealing MY partner like this?"

"Kanna, I'm begging you. Anyone will give anything to be near Risako. And now she has asked me, ME!"

Struggling to free herself from Kanna's death grip, Maimi whined and pleaded. This was a once in a lifetime opportunity and she couldn't afford to lose it.

"You're the ace of the track team, future captain and state-wide star. Will you quit acting like a puppy-dog whenever it concerns Sugaya?"

"I don't know why. She has this effect on me. My knees go weak just looking at her Kanna. This is more than a crush. I might have fallen in love with her."

At Maimi's final sentence, Kanna let go if her arm. Then helping to stack the remaining of Maimi's possessions together into a neat bundle, Kanna pushed them into her arms.

"Agh, fine, go. You're grossing me out with the love declaration. You can be her partner. Just make sure I'm the one you save first if both of us fall into the water."

As soon as Maimi bounded happily over to sit obediently next to Risako, someone came up to Kanna.

"Hi, is this seat taken?"

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"All rise! Bow!"

The class obediently carried out the morning ritual of greeting the teacher before settling into their seats and concentrating on class. Airi did the same, or at least she appeared to be listening to the teacher's droning voice. In reality, she was observing the movements of a certain member of her History class.

She has such long lashes.

Her lips are so fine. They kinda look like mine.

She unwittingly wore a sweet smile on her face as her eyes remained enthralled by the object of her fantasies, all other going-ons in the class blocked out by the sheer image of the Liliputian. Scribbling intently in her notebook, the fair-skinned pupil, tiny for her age, was blissfully unaware of how the class monitor was paying particular attention to her.

"Suzuki, how many years did the isolation of the Tokugawa shogunate span?"

Fully enraptured by her classmate, Airi didn't hear the teacher calling her name. Her daydream was only broken when the girl she was watching turned back to look at the monitor who was being totally unresponsive to the teacher's instructions. In fact, most of the class were now staring at her and waiting for some sort of reaction. Finally realizing that all eyes were on her, Airi gulped and blushed a faint shade of pink. It’s a good thing her teacher was a tolerant and kind lady, or else she would surely have been ordered out of the class. Thanking her lucky stars for having a pleasant educator, Airi requested apologetically.

"I'm sorry Ms. Yasuda. Could you please repeat the question?"

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Scrutinizing her make-up from the reflection in the small compact mirror she held in one hand, Reina was careful to make sure there were no smudges. She wasn't going to walk around the halls with less than perfect make-up. She wasn't always so vain. There was a time where she had better things to do than check on her make-up every ten minutes. But those days were long gone. All thanks to her grandmother no less. For making her fulfill a promise which had left her with so much spare time. Before she could find something else to take up, make-up will have to do. Bored, she angled the mirror in different directions to survey what the rest of the class were up to. There was one girl in the last row picking her nose, another tying her shoelaces and one more snacking away. Hers was definitely no model class.

"This semester, we have a new transfer student. Please introduce yourself."

"I am Koharu Kusumi, from Niigata."

The class and teacher waited for more to come but apparently that was all. The new student was no talker. Nor was she respectful and well-mannered. Her self-introduction did not even conclude with the customary “Please take care of me.”

That voice.....where have I heard it before? It sounds like...

A look of distress flashed across Reina's feminine features when she remembered where she had come into contact with such a repulsive voice. Lowering the mirror so she could see in full view the entire front area of the class, Reina's jaw dropped, revealing a lower row of jagged teeth when she saw the familiar smirking face of her nemesis. 

...Risa Niigaki's sister.


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First off, I apologise for such a short and crappy chapter. Still, I hoped you enjoyed reading it. Many thanks to Estrea, AmberSan, modesta107 and rokun for leaving comments. It's good to know there are actually people reading this XD


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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #30 on: January 07, 2008, 07:45:50 AM »
2 words: RISAKO-MAIMI!!!! :farofflook: :luvluv1: :imdead:

Poor Kanna getting ditched like that. But Maimi does have a pretty valid point. Don't know if I should laugh at her misfortune though. Her new seatmate seems to be nice. Time for her to do her moves. :mon misch:

Hmm. Airi's got her eyes on someone too. Clues are:

Long eyelashes: = Chinami or Chisato?
Liliputian = Captain? XD
Small for her age = Captain! XD

Either way, Airi's got pretty good taste.  :mon inluv:

LOL the Reina-Koharu war has reached the school. I smell Turn Dori Chicken Battle  :mon yoyo: :mon yoyo:

WAR AKARI!!! Infernal Ninjutsu, Hidden Lore...Freedom of Opposites Technique!!! Rest in peace Kyle,Jab,Mom,Tita, ChrNo...

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #31 on: January 07, 2008, 08:06:30 AM »
LOL i realy like the Non-Canon-ness of this fic...
like wordsworth said the person Airi was looking at seems to be Captain...
wonder why Reina and Koharu fought.. and what is the story behind Gaki and Koharu's sister relationship(they don't have the same last name).
please continue this fic...
just a little question, is there a chance for Takagaki?..   :roll:

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #32 on: January 07, 2008, 02:08:23 PM »
Lol no kidding about the sharp departure from canon! :lol: Not that a whole lot of kids' pairings are terribly "canon" yet... I guess Miyabi/Risako, uhhh... nothing else really has a whole lot of evidence behind it. But if that's seriously going to be Airi/Captain... XD THAT will be :heart:.

Anyway, I felt bad for Kanna with Maimi ditching her like that, but not so much when she quickly got a new lab partner that I have a feeling will more than make up for it. :yep:

Also... why do I sense a Reina/Koharu coming up...? This fic is so relationship-centric, and those two definitely have got something bad for each other. ;)

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #33 on: January 07, 2008, 02:33:06 PM »
Long eyelashes: = Chinami or Chisato?
Liliputian = Captain? XD
Small for her age = Captain! XD
Eh! Captain...? I was thinking of Momo all the time.  :lol:

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #34 on: January 07, 2008, 05:41:37 PM »
I also think that there's going to be reina/koharu, but I'm not sure... they can be only rivals, though...
all pairings are interesting! maimi should act soon, because risako already acted by asking her to be her partner... also, I'm so curious about the other student that airi was watching... we already know that she's a small girl... so it can be momoko, chisato, captain, nakajima... Aahhh, I don't know!!!
keep it up!  :)

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #35 on: January 08, 2008, 12:41:52 AM »
Risako is a cheerleader in this fic? , ha, I love it XD   wow, Maimi possibly in love with Risako already? It must have been a love at first sight moments  :inlove:

The girl in Airi's class...I gotta go with Momo as my guess

So Koharu is Risa's sister? Or is that just was Reina thinks? I thought Koha was just a troubled grl staying with Risa and her family...I should probably go back and read some parts :lol:

This fic in really climbing up in my top ranked H!P stories that have a school setting :)

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #36 on: January 08, 2008, 01:31:44 AM »
Haha, all the speculation and I can't bring myself to join in because I already know half of what's going to happen next. XD The joys of knowing the author personally, I guess. XD

But yay Risako/Maimi! I love this crack pairing for the sole reason that Maimi is so pitifully head over heels for Risako. XDDD I wonder what kind of complications you will introduce to this couple eventually? XDDD God knows we could use some Maimi-being-jealous (it'd be cute if nothing else). Hehe.

I do so wonder who Airi is looking at. *already knows, but won't say a word* XD

Oooh, Kanna's new seat partner. Looks like the start of a beautiful friendship. :D Now that Maimi's otherwise occupied, I guess Kanna has to find someone else to hang out with at least half the time, hehe.

Can't wait for the next chapter. XD Don't worry about the shortness, we're not expecting you to deliver 10k-wordcount monsters like I do. XDDD Keep it up! Oh and see you later. :P
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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #37 on: January 08, 2008, 02:54:47 AM »
^ "Chinami's new seat partner."  :dunno: Chinami??? Chinami's the one who asked to be Kanna's new lab partner?


Hmmm... Risako, Cheerleader.. Maimi, sports jock.. Kanna, Maimi's low profile best friend.. now why do I get this odd feeling that Risako has some ulterior motives with Maimi, and that the person Kanna like is actually her blinded-by-love best friend? I guess I must have watched too much high school flicks in the past.

Well I'm not gonna guess who Airi's current crush is... only cuz I'm not familiar with any of the kids's trademarks. :D But for some reason I'm kinda hoping it's Nakki~

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #38 on: January 08, 2008, 04:35:41 AM »
^Oops typo. I only just woke up when I typed that! XD

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Re: Please Take Care of My Club [Chapter 5 - Monumental First-Period Class]
« Reply #39 on: January 08, 2008, 08:23:21 PM »
I can't believe I missed this fic o________o;

It'sanadorablehighschoolficOMGthisisgoingtobesocutethatI'mgoingtogetdiabetesandthenI'llprobablydiebecauseofallthesweetnessthatthecouplesandthelovelycrackcouplesemitsoyeahI'mgoingtokeepstalkingthisficanddotdotdotyeahdotdotdotI'llstalkthisficlikeIdidwithTheLinesAreBlurred.

-inhale- X__X;

Going for a more mysterious route to writing huh? I don't remember having to guess and speculate so much from your fics. xD!

This is certainly going to be amusing now that Koharu is going to be Reina's classmaaaate~! That'll certainly liven up the class a bit! ¦D

Maimi and Risako are adorable <3 You'd think Maimi would have a little more self-control since she's older but oh well. xD.

And you better write more uh... insanely cute situations with Gaki-san and Aichan <3 The baka couple must live ooon~ ¦D

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