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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 8. Overactive imagination]
« Reply #60 on: April 15, 2008, 02:54:50 AM »
Oooooooh I wonder who it could be~~

Can't wait for the next chapter =]

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 8. Overactive imagination]
« Reply #61 on: April 15, 2008, 04:03:53 AM »
Damn, I'm behind on this...just read up to Capter 6 and loving it so far...can't stay though...don't wanna read any other comments and ruin what's to come!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 8. Overactive imagination]
« Reply #62 on: April 15, 2008, 03:34:49 PM »
I'm guessing that voice must be Rika's. She was in the hall during this whole conversation.

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 8. Overactive imagination]
« Reply #63 on: April 15, 2008, 06:41:36 PM »
Great short chapter. I'm going to speculate as well and say that its Risa's voice. Could be Rika's because like glcorps2002 said...she was in the hall too. But I reacon maybe Risa followed them out to see what the hell was going on.

Can't wait to find out

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 8. Overactive imagination]
« Reply #64 on: April 15, 2008, 11:55:14 PM »
I'm guessing that voice must be Rika's. She was in the hall during this whole conversation.
i think the same xD well i like your fic a lot *--* it was great n.n

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #65 on: April 17, 2008, 07:26:34 PM »
Here is the new chapter like I promised  :hee: Rika or Risa?...Let's find out from leader's point of view  XD





Secrets


“You...You did what?!”

This high-pitched voice. I’ve heard it so many times that I don’t have any difficulties in recognizing who is the owner of it. However, I still desperately hope that when I’ll turn around I won’t see her face. Please God let it be anyone but not her...

Guess God isn’t on our side, cause she stands there...Stiff, stunned, gaping at us. She looks as if she has just witnessed some terrible crime and unfortunately I and Reina were the culprits.

“Gaki-san?” I ask with a dumb smile on my face.

I glance upon Reina she’s also in total shock.

What now?...

“Ai-chan...Did you and Reina...Did you?” She mumbles avoiding certain words.

“Ano...Gomenasai Gaki-san.”Nothing else comes into my mind. I look down like a scolded puppy.

Why it has to happen to me?....

“Why didn’t you tell me before  when I was asking?” I don’t understand why she sounds so resentful? She supposed to be angry at me yet it feels like she will burst into tears any minute...

“I wasn’t ready...I thought that you...” I hold up my words. “ That you would be angry at me.” I finish quietly.

“Angry at you? Ai-chan wasn’t I supposed to be your friend? Don’t you trust me? I told you everthing today. So why...” She chokes up rising her head trying to stop the tears from falling down.

I did that again to her...Again I screwed up...I’m such a jerk...Now I also feel like crying.

“It’s my fault.” Reina? She places her hand on my shoulder showing me that she’ll take care of this.

“I wanted her not to tell you.”

“Tanakacchin? But why? I am also your friend.” I can’t take my eyes off Reina. I’m amazed by her confidence. Maybe I was wrong about her being bad at lying...

“Yeah, but I thought that you were in love with Ai-chan and that you would be jealous when you'd find out and you'd want to seperate us.”

Now I get it! All that time, Reina wasn’t giving me those creepy looks. They were destined for Risa who is always with me. Gosh Reina I told you we were just friends yet you still were jealous about her...

“I in love with Ai-chan? And what kind of idea is this?” Risa asks halfly confused halfly amused.

Reina crosses her arms and gives her a suggestive look.

“What?” Gaki still doesn’t catch what Reina means.

“Are you making a fool of me? You two always are together. You are following Ai-chan like her shadow.”

“Yeah but that doesn’t prove anything. Ai-chan is such an unreasonable person that she wouldn’t manage to survive without me.” Risa retorts.

“Hey that’s not true!” I object. Oh so you are so smart Risa, huh?“Besides shouldn’t you also explain something to Reina? Like who you really love?” I ask slyly making her blush.

Reina looks at me waiting for an explanation but I wait till Risa reveals her secret.

“Eto...ano...”

“Speak up Gaki, speak up.” I tease her.

“I’m in love with Koharu-chan...” She blurts out avoiding our gazes.

I carefully study Reina’s expression. A small smile slowly spreads across her face, her wonky eye begins to twich uncontrollably and there she goes...Laughing so loud that probably everyone in the building hear her.

“You in love with that hyperactive brat?!” She screams pointing her finger at Risa whose eyes also begin to twich as she clenches her fists. Something is going to happen...

I don’t have to wait long for the situation to develop.

Gaki-san throws herself at Reina clasping her hands around younger’s neck.

“Spit it out you spoiled brat!!!”

Ee?! Has Miki’s spirit possesd Risa?

Right, I shouldn’t be staring...

I seperate the two of them, stepping in between before someone gets hurt.

“Ok calm down you two!”

“I calm down? Tell this to that crazy so-called sub-leader of yours!” 

“How did you call me?! Say it again and both your eyes will be wonky you “wanna be” Yankee!”

“Oh yeah?! Come on try your luck! You poor imitation of a sub-leader! I will show you how Yankee I am!”

They both jerk, trying to reach each other, not paying attention to my presence.

Ok that’s it! I’m fed up with this! We aren’t in a damn kindergarden!

“Shut the hell up!” I push them aside. They mute immediately, gaping at me.

“Ai-chan...” Risa mutters in shock.

What? Surprised that I cursed? It’s your fault. I hope that you are proud of yourselves for making me react that way...

Reina giggles I give her a wary look and she falls silent.

“Now Reina apologize to Gaki for what you’ve said about Koharu.”

“What? But she was the one who tried to strangle me. She should apologize first.” I give her a death glare and she understands that I’m not joking.

“Gomenesai.” She says, reluctantly.

“Now, your turn Gaki-san.” Her victorious grin quickly fades away.

“What but...”

“Niigaki Risa don’t make me repeat myself.” They definitely overdid this time.

“Gomenasai.” She carries out my order as reluctantly as her opponent.

“Good and don’t you ever make me do this again. We are friends get it? Reina don’t make fool of Gaki-san. Gaki act more responsibly. “ I scold them both. Seems like they cooled off a bit.

“Gomenesai Ai-chan.” They say simultaneously. I begin to laugh.They join me after a second throwing themselves at me and hugging me tightly.

And everything gets back to normal...

Gaki-san loosens her grip and steps aside giving me and Reina a suspicious look.

“So are you guys together now? Like you know...”

I look at Reina. She stares at me waiting for an answer. But I don’t know what to say. Everything is happening so fast...Maybe too fast...She told me she loved me but...I don’t know if we are ready for that... I lower my head. She must notice my confusion as she takes my hand and gently sqeezes it. I look upon her...This kind smile makes me feel warm inside.

“We haven’t talked about this yet. But we make sure to inform you as soon as we make things clear.” I’m stunned. Reina sounds so responsible like she herself would be the leader.

“Got it.” Risa winks at us with a wicked grin.” But be sure to TALK this time.”

“Gaki!” I squeal blushing. Reina giggles quietly.

“And what are you laughing at?” I poke her shoulder lightly.”You are the one who initiated the whole situation.”

“I? I just kissed you innocently. You were the one who threw me onto the bed.”

“Ekhem.” Risa coughs.” I’m still here.”

Right she doesn’t need to know all the details...

“Ok so I will excuse myself now. Reina still has to kill Sayu for telling her about that unfortunate “kiss” of yours.” She sets off on her rabbit hunt leaving the two of us laughing.

“Nee, shouldn’t we stop her?”

“Nah, she will be alright...Rabbits are fast.”

“Yeah...”

We look at each other sheepishly not knowing what to say next

“Sooo...” Risa begins. “Our leader is in love with Yankee princess, huh?”

I nod flushing slightly.

“She was cute defending you so firmly.” She says teasingly.

“You figured out?”

“What? That she was lying? Of course she is extremely bad at lying.”

“Yeah she is.” After, all I was right about Reina being a terrible lair....

“Ano...you aren’t angry with me?”

“Nah, I’m not. I was panicing over kissing Koharu so much that probably you had a right to think that I would be angry.” Yeah that’s a good point...” But remember, I’m your best friend and I want you to be happy so just trust in me ok?”

“Arigatou Gaki-san!” I embrance her gently relived that she again forgave me.

“But no more secrets ok?”

I nod assuring her with my smile.

“Ok, ok I understand that you are happy but I don’t  want to become Reina’s next victim.” I let her go giggling.

“Honestly I would never guessed that she could be so jealous.”

“Neither would I.” Reina who is always so confident, someone might even say that she is overconfident, turned out to be jealous about Gaki-san. Funny...

“What?” I ask noticing Risa’s sly smile.

“No nothing but it’s hard to imagine you taking control over Reina.”

“What do you mean by that?” I demand an explanation.

“I always thought that sexy and wicked Ai-chan appears only on stage.”

No comments...But she is right. Even I’m amazed by the effect that Reina has on me...It somehow reminds me of something...

“And I bet it’s because of her you space out so often.”

“Risa!” I feel how my face turns pink. I know I’m not so innocent like everyone would think but she doesn’t have to remind me about this...

“Come on we should go back before your would be girlfriend will be send to prison for abusing animals.”

“Yeah let’s go.”

We walk away hand in hand like always. But probably we will need to get rid of that habit since Reina is so jealous...I’m sure, it will be easier  for me to talk with Reina now since Gaki knows. After all, her opinion it’s the most important to me. I’m happy she is on ours side. I was stupid not trusting her...She opened her heart to me yet I still was scared of telling her the truth... But I will never doubt in her again...
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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #66 on: April 17, 2008, 10:09:10 PM »
YAY! I said I thought it was Risa's voice. I'm glad that she was understanding about it all.  Yeah Ai should've trusted her earlier. Reina's crap at lying LOL ~ I can kinda see that actually.

Great chapter. Keep up the good work :D

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #67 on: April 17, 2008, 10:22:47 PM »
so it was Risa after all? that's good, 'cause now she knows... and Reina knows about her and Koharu too!
great chapter, keep it up!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #68 on: April 18, 2008, 12:07:28 AM »
I knew it was Gaki all along..  XD
It's good that they reconciled.. and everything gets revealed between the three of them.
Sayu better watch.. she's gonna get a big whoop..  :lol:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #69 on: April 18, 2008, 04:25:15 AM »
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“Ai-chan...Did you and Reina...Did you?” She mumbles avoiding certain words.
Eeep.  :sweat:




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“Why didn’t you tell me before  when I was asking?” I don’t understand why she sounds so resentful? She supposed to be angry at me yet it feels like she will burst into tears any minute...

“I wasn’t ready...I thought that you...” I hold up my words. “ That you would be angry at me.” I finish quietly.

“Angry at you? Ai-chan wasn’t I supposed to be your friend? Don’t you trust me? I told you everthing today. So why...” She chokes up rising her head trying to stop the tears from falling down.

I did that again to her...Again I screwed up...I’m such a jerk...Now I also feel like crying.
Risa = :cry:
Aichan = :cry:




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“It’s my fault.” Reina? She places her hand on my shoulder showing me that she’ll take care of this.

“I wanted her not to tell you.”

“Tanakacchin? But why? I am also your friend.” I can’t take my eyes off Reina. I’m amazed by her confidence. Maybe I was wrong about her being bad at lying...

“Yeah, but I thought that you were in love with Ai-chan and that you would be jealous when you'd find out and you'd want to seperate us.”

Now I get it! All that time, Reina wasn’t giving me those creepy looks. They were destined for Risa who is always with me. Gosh Reina I told you we were just friends yet you still were jealous about her...
Aaaaaaaaaaaaand the truth comes out. :O

Man, can't wait to see Reina's reaction when she finds out about Risa and Koharu. :P




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You two always are together. You are following Ai-chan like her shadow.”

“Yeah but that doesn’t prove anything. Ai-chan is such an unreasonable person that she wouldn’t manage to survive without me.” Risa retorts.

“Hey that’s not true!” I object.
Reina = :mon misch:
Risa = :bingo:
Aichan = :shock:




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Besides shouldn’t you also explain something to Reina? Like who you really love?” I ask slyly making her blush.

Reina looks at me waiting for an explanation but I wait till Risa reveals her secret.

“Eto...ano...”

“Speak up Gaki, speak up.” I tease her.
Aichan = :hee:
Reina =  :gmon blonde:
Risa =  :shy1:



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“I’m in love with Koharu-chan...” She blurts out avoiding our gazes.

I carefully study Reina’s expression. A small smile slowly spreads across her face, her wonky eye begins to twich uncontrollably and there she goes...Laughing so loud that probably everyone in the building hear her.

“You in love with that hyperactive brat?!” She screams pointing her finger at Risa whose eyes also begin to twich as she clenches her fists. Something is going to happen...
Risa =  :mon sweat:
Reina =  :pig laugh:
Risa =  :mon mad:




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*RISA/REINA SPAZFEST*
Well, we all know that Risa's the reaction queen. :lol:  Still, seeing her like this just goes to show how much she really DOES raburabu Koharu.  :oops:

Chances are Reina would probably have reacted the same way if someone had said the same thing about her and Aichan. :yep:



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*AUTHORITATIVE AICHAN*
Oh yeah...that's a definite turn-on.  :inlove: :drool:




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“Ok so I will excuse myself now. Reina still has to kill Sayu for telling her about that unfortunate “kiss” of yours.” She sets off on her rabbit hunt leaving the two of us laughing.
Oh this is gonna be good. Can we see it when it happens?  :grin:




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“What?” I ask noticing Risa’s sly smile.

“No nothing but it’s hard to imagine you taking control over Reina.”

“What do you mean by that?” I demand an explanation.

“I always thought that sexy and wicked Ai-chan appears only on stage.”
:twisted:




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“And I bet it’s because of her you space out so often.”

“Risa!” I feel how my face turns pink.
:wahaha:


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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #70 on: April 18, 2008, 09:15:50 PM »
Right on with the GAKI vs REINA.. that would of been a hot cat fight! Super funny!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #71 on: April 19, 2008, 03:45:06 PM »
mahn yer fanfics really osam. :wub:
i love how eveything goes.cant wait for more! :cow:
its so funny yet so sweet. and hot..  :sweatdrop:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #72 on: April 19, 2008, 07:47:28 PM »
Haha how Gaki just like attacked Reina was super hilarious xD

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 9. Secrets]
« Reply #73 on: April 25, 2008, 08:01:40 PM »
I had a very busy week but somehow I manged to find some free time and updated :glasses:

After Ai-chan made things clear with Gaki Reina has to make few things clear with her friends and not only with them... XD



Oyasumi nasai

“Sayu!” I call out to her smiling.

“Oh Reina you came back...Are you alright?” She asks surprised by my friendly attitude.

“Yep, I’m alright. But if I were you I would start to worry about my life.”

“Why?”

“Cause the season for rabbits has just began.” I whisper to her ear. She jerks back.

I think that my devilish grin makes her a littel bit uneasy...

“Stay away from my bunny!” Eri pops out of nowhere and faces me.

Well, well the turtle came out of its shell...

“By the way Kame I’ve heard that the turtle soup tastes delicious. Maybe I should try it?... What do you think?” I lean closer to her. They both move aside.

“Firstly you will have to catch us!” Shige says sticking out her head from behind Eri’s back.

They run away and I start to chase after them. I’m not really mad at them... To be honest I’m happy...Happy and full of energy.I feel like screaming and running and that’s what I am actually doing...Reina doesn’t have to worry anymore....Gaki-san isn’t in love with Ai-chan, Ai-chan isn’t in love with Gaki-san. And even though Ai-chan didn’t know how to answer to Gaki’s question about us being together I’m sure it's because she is a bit freaked out by the quickness of events...And no wonder since we started kind of from the backwards...First bed then a littel crisis caused by a missunderstanding and finally love confession...All this in 24 hours.It’s so unbeliveable...I’m so excited that the smile doesn’t want to come off my face. The butterflies in my tummy seem to feel at home and probably they won’t move out during the next few days or so...

After some time of playing the tag I finally mange to corner them both...I slowly come to them bearing my teeth in an evil grin. They glance upon each other and jerk in two different directions.However, I have no problems with deciding who to catch so after charging at Sayu I land on the floor with her under me...

“Gotcha!” I exclaim straddling Shige.

“Oh yeah? So what are you going to do now?” She asks doubtfuly rising her eyebrow.

“I will tickle you to death...”

It really was my plan but as I am fed up of listening to the high-pitched “Stop it! Stop it!” I eventually decide to...Stop...And do the interrogation instead…

“You knew they weren’t kissing, didn’t you?”

“Of course I knew but it was perfect occasion to show you something.”

“Show me what?”

“Oh come on! How could you have thought that Ai-chan was kissing with Gaki-san just like that in the middle of the stage.”

“Cause you told me that?!”

“And since when do you listen to me?”

Yeah Reina since when?...

“I just showed you an ambiguous image and your deep hidden insecurity and jealousy came up with such a ridiculous idea like Gaki-san and Ai-chan kissing.”

It may sound like an absurd but she...She is right...I really wasn’t sure about Ai-chan’s feelings towards me...That’s why I didn’t even think about the ridiculousness of that situation...

Taking the opportunity of me being in shock Shige frees herself from under my body and crouches beside me.

“But have you never thought that Gaki-san and Ai-chan could be together like you know...” I somehow try to save my face and justify my suspicions.

“Nope, never. And you know why? Cause Risa is simply too innocent to awake the wild and wicked Takahashi. She doesn’t own that power which you possess...“

I have no idea what power she means but...Gaki really is innocent...So maybe that’s why the innocent Gaki has choosen the innocent...Koharu? Gosh it sounds so weird...

“And what is the most important thing...BAKEROO! Ai-chan loves you not Gaki. Who do you think she is? Fujimoto the player or someone?” She pokes my forehead.

Gah! To think that Sayumi has to make me realize such things...How could I doubt in Ai-chan's honesty?...

“Ano Sayu...Why are you doing this?”  It’s not in her style analyzing people like that...Besides why she is helping me after I was so mean to her and Eri?...

“I told you already...We are friends...Rokkies always stick togther, nee?”

I hate to admit this but she really is...Cute...

“Yeah we are like the three musketeers. All for one and one for all!“ Again Eri pops up out of nowhere.

“You were also taking part in this? “

“I told Gaki to look for you...Oh and before that I’ve told her to wake up Ai-chan.” She states proudly.

So that’s how Gaki found herself within the reach of Ai’s hands and were on the corridor at that time...So basically it’s all thanks to them...They planned it so that we could make things clear...

“Eto...Arigatou guys...” I mumble blushing.

“KAWAII~~” They both squeal and hug me.

So what that they enter my room without knocking...So what that Eri is weird and Sayu is a narcissist...So what that they are annoying sometimes...They are my friends and I know I can always count on them...Gah I really do love those two idiots...

 “Ok guys the break is over! Come back at stage and we’ll practice the songs with v-u-den!”

“Yes sir!” I salute to Ai-chan from the audience and wink at her. She shakes her head grinning at me.

I can’t wait for our conversation...

* * *

After an hour we come back to the dressing room. This time I don’t hide behind Ai-chan but stand firmly next to her.

Reina has full right to this place...

I’m changing my pants when someone lightly pushes me by the arm. I lose my balance and since I can’t make the rescue step and the gravity never fails...I land on the floor or rather on Ai-chan...

“Mou~ Reina-chan control yourself, kids are watching.” Sayu’s giggling voice resounds in my ears. I lift my head to notice the shocked faces of Aika and LinLin. I quickly look down and finally become aware of  Ai-chan’s overwhelmed presence.

“Sumimasen.” I quickly get up and help my leader to stand up.

“Are you alright?”

“Yeah.” She nods rubbing the back of her head.

“Reina be more delicate for our leader.”  I show Sayu my clenched  teeth.

Does she want me to again forget about us being friends?...

“Geez Shige-san you are nineteen but you are worse than a ten year-old brat. Stop fooling around and grow up already.” Gaki’s disapproving tone quickly erases Sayu’s smirk.

Wow she sounded like Miki herself. I must admit, I’m impressed. Nice job sub-leader. Guess I was wrong about you.

She winks knowingly at me.

With Gaki-san on our side we don’t have to fear of anything...

* * *

I take a short nap on Ai’s shoulder as we are driven back to the hotel. I’m totally exhausted but at the sound of her words “We arrived.” I’m lively again.

Glued to her arm I walk through the corridor. We stop in front of her room.

“Sure you don’t want to talk about it tomorrow? You seem to be very tired.” She asks lifting my chin.

I try hard not to close my eyes. I’ll have to work on my stamina...

“Nah...I’m fine.” However, it’s really hard to decive your own body. So a yawn comes out of my mouth denying my words.

We both giggle.

“Are you sure?” I nod as enthusiastically as I can in this state.

“If you say so.” She opens the door and swings her hand in an invinting gesture. I throw myself at her bed.

The sheets have the sweet scent of her...At this point I feel like I could fall asleep any second.

“Right, so after all we should have put off this.” She points out.

I languidly roll onto my back and sit up. She sits next to me.

Deja vu...But please Reina, don’t sing anything this time...

We look at each other wondering who should begin.

I would start...If I knew what to say...Should I just simply ask will you be my girlfriend? Nah, that’s stupid...I told her that I loved her and we’ve already slept with each other. Well, it was in an opposite order but who cares...Hey do we even have anything to talk about? Isn’t everything obvious?

“Reina...” Ai-chan begins, saving me all the trouble.

“You know it will be hard sometimes. We have to be careful. Nobody must find out...I’m mean nobody from Upfront, not to mention the paparazzis and people like that.”

Crap I completely forgot about this part...But it’s not like, it’s impossible for us to be together, since we are friends and we are in the same band they won’t be very suspicious. Besides...

“I love you and I really want to be with you no matter what happens.” I state confidently, looking deep into her eyes.

Honestly I would do anything just to be with that person who is sitting in front of me and smiling kindly...

“I love you too Reina.” She leans closer to kiss me.

“Ano...Can I sleep with you tonight?” I mutter sheepishly.

“Let see...We have to be rested tomorrow. But since you are so exhausted and I assume that harmless at the same time I guess I can agree.”

“Yay!” I squeal squeezing her tighter.

“ So I’ll go change and be back in a minute, ok?”

“Ok.” She lets me go and I rush quickly to my room. I dress up with the speed of light and think how naive she is thinking that I am harmless...

“Reina is back...” I step into her room. She is lying on her bed still in her casual clothes snuggeld into the pillow. She is sleeping no doubts about that...

I must quote Eri and Sayu here...KAWAII~~!

I quietly lie down next to her and put my arm around her tummy, hugging her like a huge teddy bear.

“Oyasumi nasai Ai-chan.” I whisper into her ear.

No response.

I snuggle into her and close my eyes...
« Last Edit: April 25, 2008, 08:04:25 PM by peti-chan »

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 10. Oyasumi nasai]
« Reply #74 on: April 25, 2008, 09:17:48 PM »
AWWWW! To quote Sayu Eri (and Reina) KAWAII!!! :mon cute:
Sayu and Eri are such good friends even if their methods are... different. Glad Reina and Ai are working out and I hope Risa and Koharu can figure out their relationship too.

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 10. Oyasumi nasai]
« Reply #75 on: April 25, 2008, 11:02:29 PM »
That was a pure cuteness chapter  :cow:
It was also funny, with the Sayu/Eri plans  :lol:

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« Reply #76 on: April 26, 2008, 01:39:39 AM »
AWWWW~
That was just pure cute!
Especially how Ai was already asleep when Reina got back

*squeal*

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« Reply #77 on: April 26, 2008, 06:49:44 AM »
That was pretty slick by KameShige. :yep:

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« Reply #78 on: April 26, 2008, 11:30:34 AM »
to quote Sayu, Kame, Reina and CrypticShadow8: KAWAII~!
I really really love your ff -^^-
Your Fanfic is so damn cute XD! I loved this part with Sayu Kame and Reina~  lol Sayu and Kame planned this...  :heart:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 10. Oyasumi nasai]
« Reply #79 on: April 27, 2008, 04:58:01 PM »
Aww, Sayumi and Eri helping her out is cute, even if it's by unconventional means. I'm glad that they are all kinda working together in some way. Gaki being so ok with it all is sweet. I lol'd at her shouting at Sayumi.

I'm still a bit 'err...' over the fact that Gaki likes Koharu, but I would like to see how that pans out. Especially as I've not read that pairing before. Although will the Gaki x Koha pairing ever really come up, seeing as the fics title is ReinAi?

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