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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 13. Memory]
« Reply #100 on: May 31, 2008, 12:34:10 AM »
Awww, Reina and Gocchin! So cute! Oshit, but they had sex?!  :shocked: Damn, way to rob the cradle, Gocchin! I'm just kidding but it's sweet that they're all gonna go to her last concert. Poor Gocchin. So is she with Abe? She does seem like the type to put her career over love. Gocchin can do so much better than that! I hope she finds happiness too!
I have confidence that Ai-chan would leave with Reina. I mean, she's probably one of the most devoted workers but it doesn't seem like she could just break someone's heart like that. She's too nice and sensitive towards others.  :yep:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 13. Memory]
« Reply #101 on: May 31, 2008, 01:54:36 AM »
poor maki-san ;3; I feel very bad ;__;
reina and maki <3 were very cute (I was OMG they have SEx o__0 so Reina wasn't so new in that... xD) :)
I will waiting Next chapter~~

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 13. Memory]
« Reply #102 on: May 31, 2008, 06:55:56 AM »
wow cool.
maki and reina..so sth happened..XD
maki and abe..hmm

cnt wait~ :cow:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 13. Memory]
« Reply #103 on: June 01, 2008, 05:31:46 AM »
Whaa!! Maki and Reina, you naughty kids, you! 

Maki:  :pimp:

Reina:  :doh:

...but poor Abe, is it wrong that I feel more sorry for her then for Maki?  After all she was the one who got cheated on... :cry:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 12.Voracious moths come out of the closet]
« Reply #104 on: June 01, 2008, 07:04:49 AM »
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She is late although it takes about 15 minutes to get to this cafe from her house...Ok so, if she doesn’t appear in 15 minutes, I’m leaving...Gosh, she doesn’t even bother to answer her phone. Maybe she has a meeting?...She could call me then...

“Sorry for the wait!” I turn around in my seat to notice as she nimbly passes by each table on her way.

“At last, I was going to leave in a minute.” She gives me a kiss on the cheek.

She still didn’t get rid of that habit...

“Gome, gome. And where is Ai-chan?” She asks, pointing at the empty seat beside me.

“Have you already forgotten? She’s in Korea...”
Well, well, well, just what do we have here now?  Aichan's doing the promo thing in Korea, so who's with Reina (assuming that this is Reina, of course :D).




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“Oh right, I forgot. So, that’s why you look so depressed, huh?” She teasingly pokes my cheek.“But you will come to my concert, right?” I nod assuring her with my smile.
Maki?



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“I was surprised to hear that you are together.” She says and I just sip my water avoiding her gaze. “My Reina-chan has grown up.” She gently squeezes my cheek
Awwwww... :oops:



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“Yeah, so you can stop treating me like a kid.” I state.

“Oh you are so sweet when you are angry.” She strokes my head.

Guess she didn’t understand what I meant...
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“She thinks that your first time was with her, right?” She gives me a sly look. I blush as the memories of that night come back again...

“She hasn’t asked...But she doesn’t have to know... After all, it was just an accident...We were drunk...”

“If you say so...”
EH??? :O



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“Better tell me how are you doing?” I change the subject trying to remind her why actually we’ve met.

“Don’t worry. I’ll find some record company but now I’ll take a break in music. “
Ah, so this IS Maki then, right?




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“I’m not asking about your job...” I give her a suggestive look.

“Oh...you ask about her...” She lowers her voice. “She hasn’t changed her mind. She will stay in H!P...She said it would be better like that...Yeah right...Well, I guess it means the end...”

“What?”

I can’t belive this! She left Upfront for her and she simply gets rid of her like that?
Wait, wait....WHAAAAAAAAAAAT??? :o  (Reina said it best with that last part).

And just who is the "her" that she mentions?  :?




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She forgave her that “accident”... I’m sure she loved Gocchin.

“Well, lately things were a bit tense between us...To tell you the truth, now as I look at this I see how stupid I was, thinking she would leave with me...Gosh... she always was so careful and nobody knew about us in H!P...Besides you of course...”

And I knew only because of that “accident”...I really wish that never had happened...
Ooooooooooooooooooooh...so when Maki and Reina hooked up Maki was already seeing this other girl. 


...


Smart... :doh:




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Gosh I made her even more depressed...I suck in comforting people...

“Is there anything I can do for you?”

That’s the phrase that people use when they want to comfort someone, right?

“Yeah there is something...” She looks upon me and takes my palm. “Break up with Ai-chan and be with me.”
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“Ee?!” I almost spat water at her.

What the hell?!Is she serious?...

“Gotcha! I was kidding.” I pull out my palm from her hands.
Reina = :mon spit:
Maki =  :mon lmao:



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I let go off her arm as we finally reach her home.

...

She waves at me and enters the building.

Who knows what would have happened after that night if she hadn’t been with Natsumi then...
Oh man...it was Nacchi?
:gmon tears:




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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 12.Voracious moths come out of the closet]
« Reply #105 on: June 03, 2008, 09:28:53 PM »
So it's more than likely Risako's but Risa x Miyabi!!! - The more I think about it the more I'm liking the sound of that pairing *slaps self* (oh hang on...Miyabi and Koharu are the same age. So if the Koharu thing was semi ok, then the Miyabi thing is semi ok too!)

:wahaha:
What's that about? It's your fault that I've started pairing Risa and Miyabi together!!! ><

I enjoyed the latest chapter but I'm very worried. I take it no-one apart from the two involved know about this (or maybe Nacchi knows too. I suppose I should re-read the chapter). I'm just wondering what Ai will think if she finds out.

Gah...I don't want bad stuff to start happening!!!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 13. Memory]
« Reply #106 on: June 04, 2008, 07:33:09 PM »
Oshit, but they had sex?!  :shocked:
(I was OMG they have SEx o__0 so Reina wasn't so new in that... xD) :)

Well...Or maybe...Hmm...just wait for the next chapter  XD

Oh man...it was Nacchi?
:gmon tears:

Yeah...Maki was with Nacchi  :roll:

So it's more than likely Risako's but Risa x Miyabi!!! - The more I think about it the more I'm liking the sound of that pairing *slaps self* (oh hang on...Miyabi and Koharu are the same age. So if the Koharu thing was semi ok, then the Miyabi thing is semi ok too!)

:wahaha:
What's that about? It's your fault that I've started pairing Risa and Miyabi together!!! ><

It was a laugh of a mad writer who messed up reader's brain :twisted: Just kidding...But I really found it amusing  XD Gome... :sweatdrop:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 13. Memory]
« Reply #107 on: June 07, 2008, 10:06:49 AM »
;_; peti~~~~~ i've missed so much ;__________________;

GOOD JOB THOUGH!!!!! Really happy how you've pushed the story so far  :heart:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 13. Memory]
« Reply #108 on: June 11, 2008, 08:42:12 PM »
Thx poets hope you caught up with the story  XD

Last week there was no update cos I was too busy with school but it ended eventually and I'm free now :cow:

Something about the new chap...Remember Ai-chan's dream that caused so much ruckus and everyone was like "wha?why Nakazawa?" Well, nothing happens without a reason in this story.. trust me :twisted: So, now an explanation of that dream and many others explanations  XD


First kiss

I hide my face in hands...Tears don’t want to stop running down my cheeks...Why he is doing this?...Every single night...Arguing with mom...beating her then...coming to my room...It hurts...it hurts so much...

I look upon dark figure above me..and she just entered the room...

“You know you’re useless... just as she is...”

His cold hands...I can’t take this anymore...

“Reina!” I squeal as her body unwarningly lands on my back. “Do you want to damage me or something? You are heavy,you know! ”

“Tell that again and I’ll kill you...” She pokes my cheek puffing out hers but eventually rolls off me. I gather myself up and continue.

I have to do this...Now or never...

I clench my hands at cold metal thing behind my back...

“What are you reading?”

“A novel.” I state shortly.

I wonder how long she will stand this...

“About?”

Hmm...she is doing pretty well. However, if it was Gaki , Eri or Sayu I’m sure she wouldn’t be so nice...

“About a girl who is abused by her father.” I replie not taking eyes off the book.

She leans closer to make an eye contact with me. She has a little bit disgusted look on her face...probably trying to hint me that it isn’t normal to read such stories...

“What?” I pretend that I don’t have any idea what she means by this look...

“You are scarying me sometimes...”

The same goes for you...But to tell you the truth...I love your rebel attitude...That’s why I’m doing this...

“Oh come on. It’s interesting.”

Where was I? Oh yeah.

I clench my hands at cold metal thing behind my back...And...I’m not able to finish this sentence as she takes the book from my hands and throws it away...

“Hey!”

I’m also not allowed to fully express my fake displeasure as she effectively silences me with her lips and gently pushes me onto my back...

Not so fast Reina...

Somehow I manage to break away from her lips and firmly grab her shoulders to keep her at safe distance.

“Wait...let me finish the chapter.”

“What?!No freaking way!” She takes my hands and pins them above my head not allowing me to do anything.

My,my she is so easy to provoke...

She proves my thoughts by deepening the kiss like she would want to devour me...

Maybe I overdid a little bit?...However...I always wanted to try how it is when she’s in her Yankee mode...Besides she enjoys taking over control so I just give up myself to her enjoying being under her control....

* * *

That’s it...I’ll never provoke her like that again...I’m totally exhausted even though I wasn’t able to do much...And since now I should also remember one rule...Don’t ignore Reina unless you want to be bitten by her...

I glance upon a few red marks on my chest...They are pale red but I can see them clearly as we didn’t even turn off the lamp beside the bed...Oh and here I can even see the teeth mark...One mark I probably have on my neck but I quickly reminded her not to leave them in visible places which seemed to make her even more angry....She probably thinks that I’m overreacting but I just don’t want to look like a vampire victim as they probably don’t have vampires in Taiwan...Gosh, I constantly have to hold her back or we would find ourselves in big trouble...

“Ai-chan do you love me?” She murmurs and stops brushing my matted hair.I lift my gaze in surprise.

“What’s up with this question? Of course I love you.”

Gosh, maybe I really overdid this time?...

I roll onto my stomach and supporting my weight with my hands I hang above her.

“Really?” She asks seriously.

“Really, really, really.” I tickle her tummy trying to cheer her up and downplay the whole situation.

“Nee, Reina...” I stop abruptly, and lie down next to her. “Tell me something...” I gently run my index finger down her lips. " With whom you’ve had your first kiss?” Suddenly she stops giggling and gets serious again. Sighing she directs her gaze at the ceiling.

“With Gocchin...” She mutters quietly.

“Ee?Really?” I jerk back in surprise and my eyes widen uncontrollably.

I thought they were only friends since Maki already had someone...

“Yeah...”

“When?”

I wonder if this weird feeling that I’m having now is caused by curiosity or jealousy...Well, I hoped she would say that with me...Guess, I was naive to think like that...

“Remember Yossy’s birthday party year ago?”

“Well, to some point yes but then I had to hide before drunk Nakazawa...”

“Huh? Nakazawa-san?”

Oops I shouldn’t have mentioned her name...

“Nevermind. Continue.” She looks suspiciously at me but trails off her story.

“Maki also got drunk...and her sealed playboy side took control over her body... I happened to sit next to her in an empty, dark room so she started picking me up...Not able to resist her charm, which was probably because I also was a little bit tipsy, I found myself at her lap glued to her lips...” She finishes, turns around to face me and awaits my comment. But I’m not able to say a word...Image of her and Maki stands before my eyes...

So after all it is jealousy...

“That’s not all...Abe-san caught us...”

“Nani?!”

Nacchi? And she still is alive? How come?...

“That’s why I don’t really like bringing up this topic...”

“What did she do?” She looks at me with resignation written all over her face.

Seems like I’m also too curious...

“She started crying...shouting at Gocchin...at me...Maki was apologizing to her, begging for her forgivness, crying...and I wished to die...But you know, as I look at that from today’s perspective I realize that Abe-san wasn’t angry at her cause she had kissed me but cause their biggest secret had been revealed...Cause someone had found out about Gocchin’s true nature...about true nature of their relationship...”

Gosh...I was so sad when I heard in Korea that Maki is leaving Upfront...She was my senpai...my friend...I cried even in front of the reporters...of what I’m still ashamed not to mention that I’ve worried Gaki and instead of spending her time with Koharu she spent it with me...of course on consoling me...I’m so hopeless...Anyway, I was so shocked when Reina told me that Gocchin and Nacchi had been together...“No way” I thought. I mean I knew they were friends and got along very well but nothing showed that they could be something more than that...I thought that Miki and Yossy had been the only couple in H!P before I started going out with Reina and Eri with Sayu...But what shocked me the most was the true reason of Maki leaving the agency...They were caught by Nacchi’s manager...Reina didn’t tell me many details as she herself didn’t know much but the truth was that Maki left Upfront and thought Natsumi would do the same but she chose to stay instead which meant the end for them...However, I still can’t belive that Nacchi left Gocchin for her career...It had to be something more than that...Nevertheless...

“Poor Gocchin...”

She loved her so much yet it ended up like that...

“Yeah...” Reina agrees with that sad statement. “ You know how often Abe-san was phoning me after that? I had to assure her that I wouldn’t tell anyone...But nevermind...Better tell me about your first kiss.” She grins slyly at me.

“Mmm...Mine first kiss?” I flush.

Gah! I’m so stupid I should have predicted that she also would want to know this...But...Ugg...

“Ano...” I hang down my head.

I don’t want to tell her...It’s soo weird and I already was able to forget about that...

But seems like I won’t get away with this as her eyes so fiercely pierce my body...

“With Nakazawa-san...” I mutter the surname under my breath.

“With whom?”

“With Nakazawa-san!” I scream into her ear. She stares at me. Her eyes probably are wider than mine before...

“With Nakazawa-san?...” She mumbles stunned.

Please don’t ask any questions...

“But how?”

Revange, huh?

“Doesn’t matter. I don’t want to talk about it.” I jump on her forgetting about my tiredness.

“But hey! It’s not fair I’ve told you my story.”

“Oh yeah? So you can add some more red marks and we are quits.” I  take her by the hands to place her on my lap and begin to kiss her neck...

Gocchin, huh?...

* * *

I gaze at her calm sleeping face. She is so adorable like a little angel...Angel? Yeah right....I almost forgot how did it all start... Now as she reminded me of that time I realize that it’s thanks to Yuu-chan that she is lying here next to me...

4 years ago

Let’s see...Today I play drunkard man who wants to go and see Aya's musical with Nakazawa-san...*

I glance from upon my script.

She is still standing there with that Yankee look...

“Hey you! Where is my coffee? Hurry up and bring it to me! I don’t have time!” She shouts at some guy. I giggle under my breath.

Poor staff member... But gosh...she is so cool and confident. I’ll never be like her...First leader of Morning Musume...She is almost a legend...Crap! she looks my way...

I quickly lower my gaze, pretending that I’m reading my script...I hope she didn’t notice that I was gazing at her...

“Lovely.” I slowly lift my eyes putting aside the sheet of paper. She stands in front of me grinning flirtatiously.

“Who are you going to be today?” She lifts my chin to quicken the meeting of our eyes.

Again she is doing this...

“Hi-mi-tsu...” I mumble.

A secret?!What’s wrong with me?

I flush realizing what’ve just done...

“Awww you are so cute~” She giggles and I quickly deny her words by shaking my head. “Modest like always.”

But it’s true I’m nothing special...I can’t compare with Rika for example...

“Don’t look so sad. You make me feel terrible...” She says in concern.

“No I’m not sad.” I grin to persude her that she’s wrong.

“Good cause I wouldn’t forgive myself if I made you sad.” She caresses my cheek gently. I hear the sound of my beating heart.

Why am I feeling like that?...

“I...have to go...Excuse me...” I stutter and quickly walk away.

* * *

Looking at my reflection in the mirror I realize that with this messed up hair and clothes I must have looked like I would be robbed by someone...Can’t I play some kind of historical character?...It would be much more interesting...

I quickly dress up but notice that still something is wrong...The tie on my head...

“Gosh... ” I sigh.

“Leave it like that, it suites you.” Someone giggles behind my back.

“Nakazawa-san?!” She stands in the entrance. I jerk back in shock.

What is she doing here?...

“When did you...” I stiffen.

Has she seen me when...

“Don’t worry I just came in. I didn’t see you when you were changing.” She assures me but I’m not fully convinced.

“You know, I’ve wanted to talk with you about something lately but I didn’t have an occassion.” She comes up to me and takes the tie off my head to put it around my neck.

Talk with me? Have I messed up something?...What could I have done wrong?...

“I was on your last concert...” She closes the door of the room. I try to overcome my nervousness but it’s useless.

Have I disappointed her with my singing or maybe dancing?...

“Oh’eally an’id yoo enoy it?” I stammer.

“Huh?” Obviously she couldn’t understand my Fukui babble...I take a deep breath and repeat my question.

“Did you enjoy it?”

“Yeah I did but you know what...” She comes closer to me and fiddles with my tie.

“Wha...What?”  My eyes wander around the room persistently avoiding her gaze.

“You are almost 17...It’s time for you to become more mature...You could also try to be more...let’s say... sexy at stage...” Again she forces me to look  at her.

“Me?...Sexy?”

What does she mean by this? I’m not Matsuura Aya...

I slowly begin to step aside but soon my hands bump into something cold and  unmoveable...The wall...

“Yeah you know what I mean, right?” She leans towards me and puts her left hand next to my head. Her face is so close to mine that I can feel her breath against my lips...

No...I don’t know what you mean...

“Nakazawa-san...” I murmur quietly but don’t really know how to finish the sentence.

“Please call me Yuu-chan...” She grabs my tie, tugs it lightly and...

“Yada!” I scream pushing her away.

We can’t...

“What?You don’t like me?” She crosses her arms and puts on more serious tone maybe even a bit angry.

Don’t like you?...

“No it’s not like that...” I shake my head. “But you are a girl and you are...”

“13 years older than you?” She cuts off rising her eyebrow. I look at her with my eyes wide open.

That’s it...I’m dead...

However, instead of chopping me into pieces she just giggles.

“Don’t be so scared I won’t hurt you...” She places her hand on my shoulder.

“So, you do like me?” She asks seducitively. I nod looking down and unwittingly bite my lower lip.

Somehow I can’t lie to her...

“Good...Cause I also like you Lovely...” She winks at me.

Nakazawa-san likes me? No way...However, she often fools around with me...Hugging me from behind...calling me Lovely...making me feel strange...But its only fooling around, right?...She isn’t serious...Why someone like her would take interest in someone like me?...It doesn’t make any sense...

I snap out of my thoughts as she clasps her hands around my waist and pulls me closer to her. She brushes away a strain of my face. I glance upon her lips then into her eyes and become captivated...

I’m not able to do anything...I just completely give up to her as she gently kisses my lips...I don’t really know what I’m doing... I just lose myself in this...Her lips are soft and warm and it feels so amazingly good...

It suddenly got very hot in here....

She takes my hands and places them behind her neck then grabs my tights and lifts me up as I intuitively entwine my legs around her waist. She puts me on the table still not breaking off my lips. I feel as her fingers run down my shirt unbuttoning it....Suddenly, I become aware of the situation...

Why is she doing this? With me? I don’t get this...And I don’t mean that I’m a girl but there are others prettier, cuter...I don’t deserve for her...Besides if someone enters now...I don’t want for her to have troubles because of someone like me....I like her maybe even love her...

I break away from the kiss and stop her hands from reaching my bra.

“Stop...” I whisper gasping, but she leans closer ignoring my refusal. So, I push her away, quickly jump off the table and run out of the room.

Running through the corridor, I feel how tears flow down my face. I stop to wipe them off and realize that I still have an unbottoned shirt.

If someone sees me like that...

I calm down a bit and look behind me.

She isn’t following me...Right, why would she...But why it was so hard for me to stop that?...Why it felt so good?...What is this feeling that I’m having now? Do I regret running away?...

I have some many questions and I’m afraid that I will never find answers to them...

* * *

And I’ve never found...We’ve never talked with each other about that accident...We acted like it would never happen...Maybe I wanted to talk with her but never had enough courage to bring up that topic...Besides, what would I suppose to tell her?...However, I took her advice about being more sexy during lives...Gradually, I’ve changed myself...I imagined that she was looking at me from the audience, hoping she was proud of me...Yeah, she is definitely responsible for awaking that side of me...A few months later I was walking through studio corriodors when I met her...

* * *

Ahh...Many things have changed during past few weeks....Yasuda-san graduation...new members...now we’re going to record a new singel...huh?

I stop abruptly, redirecting my gaze from the ceiling to the space before me from where a sound of quiet sobbing is reaching me. A small figure squats at the end of the corridor leaning against the wall, hiding her face in arms. I come closer to recognize the person.

It’s...Reina?But why is she crying?

I bend down in front of her.

“Nee, are you ok?” She galnces upon me with her red swollen from crying eyes.

“Leave me alone!” She snaps and again buries her face in arms.

Hey, I just wanted to help no need to be rude...

“Come on, tell me...What’s wrong?” I insist stroking her head.

I’m your senpai. Don’t expect me to give up so easily...

“That bastard from singing lessons says that I’m not taking my job seriously and that I should give up on becoming an idol.”

Bastard?...I’ve heard it somwhere before...Well, he is harsh but he really cares about us...I also went through this...

I want to console her saying she shouldn’t worry so much but she trails off.

“But I’m going to prove him wrong.” She states firmly, stands up and wipes off her eyes. “Reina will become an idol.” I stare at her.

She is so confident even though she was crying like a little kid a second ago.

Stunned I look as she walks away leaving me behind.

What is this strange yet familiar feeling that I’m having now?...

* * *

Since that meeting I began to observe her closely as she stubbornly was carrying out her plan. I met her once on the boot camp for 5th gen members but we’ve never had a chance to talk. She was expelled cause it turned out that she was younger than she stated. Yet she came back...Stubborn and ambitious girl...From all 6th generation members(not considering Miki) she definitely had the best voice. But what really drew my attention was her yankee attitude that she was showing sometimes...She reminded me a little bit of her but she was much more cuter than Yuu-chan...Gosh... if Yuko heard my thoughts now she would kill me...Anyway, I never found courage to tell Reina how I felt...Then I became the leader and it seemed to worsen my situation...The pressure...The responsibility...But thank god she turned out to be more similar to Yuko than I thought she was...Her kiss back then in September reawaken all those feelings which I hid in my heart for so long...I just couldn’t run away again...So, I took the initiative like Yuko did...like leader would do...Maybe I've dreamt about her during the reharasal cause I wanted to thank her for all those things she did for me...for us, not realizing that ...A “thank you” kiss, huh? Maybe...or maybe I’m thinking too much and I should go to sleep...What do you think Reina?

I look at her calm sleeping face again.

That’s what I've thought...

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #109 on: June 11, 2008, 10:43:54 PM »
Great chapter!!! O0 So the beginning part was from the book, right? Cuz I had to go back a few times to reread. I think I like provoked Reina.. :twisted: So Reina and Gocchin only kissed? And Abe saw? So that's why Gocchin's leaving? And the thing with Ai-chan and Nakazawa freaked the crap out of me!! :lol: Man, Nakazawa definitely is shameless! But we love her that way. Reina is so determined! :inlove:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #110 on: June 11, 2008, 10:45:20 PM »
WHOLLY HARD GAY DROPPING PANTS CRAZINESS!!! DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY <3... it's soooo cuuuuuuute <3 <3

I guess we now know see that Ai-chan really has a thing for bad girls.  ;)

Man you had alot of moments here that left me shocked... honorable mentions would these parts:
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“Wait...let me finish the chapter.”

“What?!No freaking way!” She takes my hands and pins them above my head not allowing me to do anything.

Whoooaaa REINA, daaaauuummmm

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That’s it...I’ll never provoke her like that again...I’m totally exhausted even though I wasn’t able to do much...And since now I should also remember one rule...Don’t ignore Reina unless you want to be bitten by her...

ROLLING ON THE FLOOR LAUGHING MY ASS OFF!!!
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It suddenly got very hot in here....

She takes my hands and places them behind her neck then grabs my tights and lifts me up as I intuitively entwine my legs around her waist. She puts me on the table still not breaking off my lips. I feel as her fingers run down my shirt unbuttoning it....Suddenly, I become aware of the situation...

Why is she doing this? With me? I don’t get this...And I don’t mean that I’m a girl but there are others prettier, cuter...I don’t deserve for her...Besides if someone enters now...I don’t want for her to have troubles because of someone like me....I like her maybe even love her...

I break away from the kiss and stop her hands from reaching my bra.

Yuu-chan!! Oh MY  :shocked:.... A kiss is fine but daanng I think Yuu-chan forgot the small itsy bitsy fact of the 13 y/o difference.

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Yeah, she is definitely responsible for awaking that side of me...

Mos Def! You weren't kidding about everything having a reason peti ^^; is sure did!


So IN CONCLUSION!!!! Ai gets it bad for dem bad girls  :twisted:.... must tell you something about her hee hee
Rika <3 So funneh

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #111 on: June 12, 2008, 05:29:35 AM »
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I hide my face in hands...Tears don’t want to stop running down my cheeks...Why he is doing this?...Every single night...Arguing with mom...beating her then...coming to my room...It hurts...it hurts so much...

I look upon dark figure above me..and she just entered the room...

“You know you’re useless... just as she is...”
Eh??
 :gmon blonde:




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I have to do this...Now or never...

I clench my hands at cold metal thing behind my back...
Metal thing? Where exactly is she? And what is that task that is so important?




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“What are you reading?”

“A novel.” I state shortly.

I wonder how long she will stand this...

“About?”

Hmm...she is doing pretty well. However, if it was Gaki , Eri or Sayu I’m sure she wouldn’t be so nice...

“About a girl who is abused by her father.” I replie not taking eyes off the book.
Oh...it was just a book that she was reading. 
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“Wait...let me finish the chapter.”

“What?!No freaking way!” She takes my hands and pins them above my head not allowing me to do anything.

My,my she is so easy to provoke...

She proves my thoughts by deepening the kiss like she would want to devour me...

Maybe I overdid a little bit?...However...I always wanted to try how it is when she’s in her Yankee mode...Besides she enjoys taking over control so I just give up myself to her enjoying being under her control....
Oooooooooooooooo... :twisted:




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That’s it...I’ll never provoke her like that again...I’m totally exhausted even though I wasn’t able to do much...And since now I should also remember one rule...Don’t ignore Reina unless you want to be bitten by her...
Oh c'mon... she'd probably do it again.  :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:



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I glance upon a few red marks on my chest...They are pale red but I can see them clearly as we didn’t even turn off the lamp beside the bed...Oh and here I can even see the teeth mark...One mark I probably have on my neck but I quickly reminded her not to leave them in visible places which seemed to make her even more angry....She probably thinks that I’m overreacting but I just don’t want to look like a vampire victim as they probably don’t have vampires in Taiwan...Gosh, I constantly have to hold her back or we would find ourselves in big trouble...
Meh, just make sure to cover up well and stock up on make-up that matches skin tones. :thumbsup



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“Nee, Reina...” I stop abruptly, and lie down next to her. “Tell me something...” I gently run my index finger down her lips. " With whom you’ve had your first kiss?” Suddenly she stops giggling and gets serious again. Sighing she directs her gaze at the ceiling.

“With Gocchin...” She mutters quietly.

“Ee?Really?” I jerk back in surprise and my eyes widen uncontrollably.

I thought they were only friends since Maki already had someone..
Uh-oh...she asked. :O




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“Remember Yossy’s birthday party year ago?”

“Well, to some point yes but then I had to hide before drunk Nakazawa...”

“Huh? Nakazawa-san?”

Oops I shouldn’t have mentioned her name...
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“Maki also got drunk...and her sealed playboy side took control over her body... I happened to sit next to her in an empty, dark room so she started picking me up...Not able to resist her charm, which was probably because I also was a little bit tipsy, I found myself at her lap glued to her lips...” She finishes, turns around to face me and awaits my comment. But I’m not able to say a word...Image of her and Maki stands before my eyes...

So after all it is jealousy...
Yowza...that's pretty hot.



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“That’s not all...Abe-san caught us...”

“Nani?!”

Nacchi? And she still is alive? How come?...
Agreed, the fact that Reina can still talk about it is practically a miracle.  :shocked:



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“She started crying...shouting at Gocchin...at me...Maki was apologizing to her, begging for her forgivness, crying...and I wished to die...But you know, as I look at that from today’s perspective I realize that Abe-san wasn’t angry at her cause she had kissed me but cause their biggest secret had been revealed...Cause someone had found out about Gocchin’s true nature...about true nature of their relationship...”

...

But what shocked me the most was the true reason of Maki leaving the agency...They were caught by Nacchi’s manager...Reina didn’t tell me many details as she herself didn’t know much but the truth was that Maki left Upfront and thought Natsumi would do the same but she chose to stay instead which meant the end for them...However, I still can’t belive that Nacchi left Gocchin for her career...It had to be something more than that...Nevertheless...
Wait, Nacchi's manager was there with her when she walked in and saw them? :o

...

Shit.




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.But nevermind...Better tell me about your first kiss.” She grins slyly at me.

“Mmm...Mine first kiss?” I flush.

Gah! I’m so stupid I should have predicted that she also would want to know this...But...Ugg...

...

“With Nakazawa-san...” I mutter the surname under my breath.

...

“With Nakazawa-san?...” She mumbles stunned.
Reina = :stunned:
Aichan =  :mon whimper:



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*4 YEARS AGO STORY*
Sunnovabitch! :k-crazy:




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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #112 on: June 12, 2008, 11:09:13 AM »
So Reina and Gocchin only kissed? And Abe saw? So that's why Gocchin's leaving?


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“She started crying...shouting at Gocchin...at me...Maki was apologizing to her, begging for her forgivness, crying...and I wished to die...But you know, as I look at that from today’s perspective I realize that Abe-san wasn’t angry at her cause she had kissed me but cause their biggest secret had been revealed...Cause someone had found out about Gocchin’s true nature...about true nature of their relationship...”

...

But what shocked me the most was the true reason of Maki leaving the agency...They were caught by Nacchi’s manager...Reina didn’t tell me many details as she herself didn’t know much but the truth was that Maki left Upfront and thought Natsumi would do the same but she chose to stay instead which meant the end for them...However, I still can’t belive that Nacchi left Gocchin for her career...It had to be something more than that...Nevertheless...
Wait, Nacchi's manager was there with her when she walked in and saw them? :o

...

Shit.

Ehh...I thought it would be pretty obvious... :sweatdrop:

strawb3rrykream: Maki isn't leaving because she kissed Reina and Abe saw that as it happened year ago...

JFC: Ai was doing sort of digression as Reina's story reminded her about Maki and basically it was Abe and Maki who were caught by Abe's manager...

And guess what? I've already written side story about MakixNacchi and everything will come out there as those two are going to play an important role in this story :twisted:

WHOLLY HARD GAY DROPPING PANTS CRAZINESS!!! DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY <3... it's soooo cuuuuuuute <3 <3

:on lol:


I guess we now know see that Ai-chan really has a thing for bad girls.  ;)

Damn right :bingo:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #113 on: June 13, 2008, 11:13:57 PM »
I think I understand now. So Maki is leaving because Abe's manager caught them. They were probably given the choice of staying together and leaving or breaking up and staying in the project. Maki chose to leave, hoping Abe would do the same but instead, Abe broke it off.
Sorry, it was pretty clear, I just wasn't thinking. I'm not the brightest bulb, if I say so myself.

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #114 on: June 14, 2008, 08:47:40 AM »
I think I understand now. So Maki is leaving because Abe's manager caught them. They were probably given the choice of staying together and leaving or breaking up and staying in the project. Maki chose to leave, hoping Abe would do the same but instead, Abe broke it off.

Exactly :bingo: You even guessed the choices that they were given although I didn't mention them :mon misch: You're better than you think you are   XD

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #115 on: June 20, 2008, 03:52:31 AM »
:lol: So I guess that discussion thread is good for some things... it led me to this fic! :lol: I was like... "but I want to read about this (that I'd seen talked about there)" and "I also want to read about this..." and they both happened to be in your story! :P Anyway, lol.

So I have a lot to catch up on with things but... First off I have to say, you've captured traditional KameShige quite well :cow:. Don't see many stories with their portrayal like that, and even I've gotten just angstier lol. I haven't read the side story yet, but will have to soon. Catching up fully with this probably does it for tonight though. :P Also... awwwww Aichan was developing her love for Reina for 4 years?? That's so cute ^____^. I'm not as much the OG fan, but I'm interested to see what effect Maki/Nacchi is going to have on our girls today. Also in how you're going to work in the little other random things you've stuck in there, including the whole Risa/Koha (Lolli, after reading all the comments in this thread tonight, you know your takes on Gakiharu and Gakiyaki should be the same, right? You said it yourself they were the same age ;) lol, I was just struck by how quite differently you viewed them... you're funny ^_^).

So yeah, this is the cutest story and it's been so happy so far I hope it doesn't get too angsty (although I fear that may be an inevitable progression in some ways...). And since I'm just now entering the thread I also have to say your English is awesome. :) Looking forward to more!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #116 on: June 20, 2008, 09:10:21 PM »
And since I'm just now entering the thread I also have to say your English is awesome. :)

Really?I'm so happy XD Although I spend a lot of time on checking mistakes I always worry is everything all right :lol: But I guess I'm doing well  :D

Anyway, I'm really happy you like my story and I must tell you something...although I'm following Berry Beautiful I've never commented there but I promise to change that fact :roll:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 14. First kiss]
« Reply #117 on: June 20, 2008, 09:20:46 PM »
Yep new chap is here! :lol: And I'm sure it again will be like "WTF?" But the next chap will be from Reina's POV so don't worry 8) also don't worry about the new facts cos everything will make clear eventually  :) I wouldn't start anything with intention to leave it behind just like that  :mon determined:


The gift

“Here you are.” Miki walks in to the room and hands me...

“Pink?” I look surprised touching the fluff.

“Is this a problem?” She asks putting away her cup of coffee.

“No, not really.”

She’ll look perfect in this...

“Ai-chan are you drooling?”

“Huh? Ano...” I hastily take a sip of coffe ignoring her comment. She sits against me on her leateher, beige sofa and observes me closely.

“Are you sure you want to give her this?”

“You think it’s a bad idea?...”

I was thinking hard about what to buy her on her 19th birthday, I didn’t want to give her something trivial. Necklaces, pendants or rings she has plenty of these. Things like clothes she’ll probably get from other members. I’m sure no one will give her something like this...It matches her rebel side...I can’t wait to see her face when I’ll hand it to her...

“Well, if you ask me I think it’s an awesome idea...but I’m surprised that you are the one who chooses a gift like this...”

She was so shocked when I explained to her the reason of this unexpected visit. She rubbed her eyes in surprise and asked me three times am I serious...But thankfully she agreed to give it to me...And now she stares at me, waiting for any kind of comment but I just smile mysteriously...

“Seems like I wasn’t appreciating you...”

Yep, that’s right Miki...Maybe if you stayed longer in the band...

“But anyway how did you know that I have...”

“ Yossy is very talkative after she gets drunk...” I cut off answering calmly.

“Right I forgot...”

A petite smile appears on her face and her eyes stuck motionless like she would remember something just now. Suddenly, a quiet squeak resounds and the doors behind me open. A tall man enters the room and, by chance, snaps Miki out of her thought . I quickly put my gift into my purse.

“Tadaima.”

“Okairi.” He comes up to Miki and gives her a kiss.

Man and woman in love...That’s how it supposed to be, right? So, why does it look so awkward? Miki with a man? The biggest groper and player in whole H!P left the band for a man? I don’t get it...She told us she loved him but I don’t belive her...However why would she lie?...

“Oh and you must be Takahashi-san. Shouji Tomoharu desu. Hajimemashite.”

“Hai...Hajimemashite.” We exchange polite bows.

He seems to be nice but it doesn’t change the fact that it’s weird to see him with Miki...

“Ok, so I’ll leave you guys alone. I don’t want to bother you.” He winks at Miki and closes the door. I look at her bright smile...similar one she used to give Yossy...

Why do I feel it’s not right for her to act like that towards him?...

“Don’t look at me like this...” She snaps changing her attitude by 180 degrees.

 “Gomenasai.” I look down.

Somehow, I feel sad that she is no longer with us...She could be mean, she could harass us but she would always help you if you asked her for something...You could count on her just like on Yossy...

“Look, it’s more complicated than you think...” She sighs taking bite of a cookie.

“You don’t have to explain...It’s none of my business...” I mumble.

To be honest, I would like to hear an explanation but it’s not like she’ll tell me something...

“Yeah, that’s right.”

Just like I predicted...

“Anyway, how much I owe you?”

“Oh forget it. Let’s say it’s also a gift from me...”

“Thanks.” I smile kindly.

I’m not really angry at her...After all, it’s her life and it’s up to her what she will do with it. Besides, Yossy has forgave her already...

“You know I’m pretty sure that Yocchan has a purple version...”

“Purple?”

It’s great color for her! I need to get it...

“Yeah...So, anyway have fun.” She winks at me, grinning slyly and making me blush.

Oh you don’t have to worry about that...

* * *

I stand in front of Yossy’s doors thinking that maybe I should phone her first and inform her that I’ll come...

Oh well, it’s too late now. I just hope she is at home.

I ring the doorbell and hear some vague noises coming from the inside which change into sound of approaching steps. Finally, the door opens and...

“Rika-chan?”

“Ai-chan?”

“Rika-chan?”

“Ai-chan?”

“What are you doing here?” We ask simultaneously (well, maybe I said it a little bit quicker). She stands before me in a blue, dressing gown with messed up hair without a make up even though is... twelve p.m?! 

“Who is it?!” A scream from inside the house breaks an awkward silence that fell between me and my senpai.

“Ano...It’s Ai-chan!” Rika informs Hitomi still giving me a wary look. I peer behind her back to see what is going on.

“Ai-chan!” She sticks her head out from behind the frame door. “Give me a second.”

“A, gomenasai. Come in.” Rika moves aside and finally I’m able to enter the house.

“Ai-chan what brings you here?” Yossy asks trying to do something with her tousled hair. She also looks pretty messed up in these well-worn jeans and stretched blouse.

“Oh right!  I came for this....” I take out the gift from my purse. “Miki told me you had the purple copy....” I state grinning.

“Yossy...is there something you want to tell me?..” Rika examines the object in my hands.

“Oh...Ano...Miki must have left it here...” She flushes trying to explain herself. “But why you...”

“I want to give it to Reina....She has birthday party today.” I respond innocently ignoring their shocked and surprised expressions.

“Ok...I see...Wait here I’ll go look for it...” I nod and wait for her in the corridor with Rika.

“So... you are with Reina...”

“Mhm...”

And you are with Yossy?... I would like to ask her that...But I don’t know if I’m not reading between the lines...Maybe she just slept over...they are friends after all. Besides, Rika turned down Yossy once...

“I knew something was between you two.” She states proudly. I just smile sheepishly wondering how long it will take Yossy to find...

“I’m back! Here you can have it.”

Great the purple version is even better...but wait a minute...What’s up with those two? Giggling all of a sudden...

I blink in disbelief as Yossy grabs Rika from behind and snuggles her face into her neck, not paying attention to my presence.

I cough hoping it’ll bring them back to earth.

“Oh right, you don’t know yet since well...we decided about that yesterday...Ano...we go out with each other...” Hitomi grins leaning her chin on Rika’s shoulder.

Ee?...But how...? Rika has...It doesn’t make any sense....

What’s more the vuden member begins to kiss my ex-leader....

Ok, maybe it isn’t as awkward as seeing Miki kissing that guy but still it’s surprising...

“Haven’t you turned her down?” I blurt out.

“It was a long time ago, nee?”

Hey! You were suppose to answer me not smiling charmingly at Yossy putting your hands under her shirt and...Geez...

“Whatever...”I mutter and leave them alone to let them have their fun.

So, the Prince and the Princess eventually end up together, huh?...And they lived happily ever and after...

* * *

I get off the elevator and quiet music reaches my ears. It becomes louder as I’m approaching Reina’s door...It’s...Hyokkori Hyoutan-jima?!

What is going on there?

Driven by my curiosity, I bring my ear closer to the door. I hear giggles, squeales, talks...To sum up.... a lot is happening out there...

Wait, hasn’t she said that she invited only Eri, Sayu and Gaki? I’m sure they wouldn’t make so much noise. Well, I won’t find out what is going on unless I come in...

I knock but somehow it doesn’t work or I used not enough strentgh...I knock again this time with my fists and this time... it worked. Reina opens the door and greets me with...”I’m-fed-up-please-kill-me” look on her face.

“What’s wrong?” I ask confused by this not welcoming expression.

“Nothing. Everything is perfect...” She says with ironic grin on her face.

“Perfect?” She takes my hand and pulls me into the dark room where everyone are already enjoying themselves...And immediately I understand what  she has meant by her previous look...Sayu gropes tipsy Eri in the corner...Nakazawa is picking up...Aika?! God, she has found another victim....Gaki is calmly sitting on the sofa, sipping juice, checking something in her phone...Next to her sits...Abe-san?! And what she is doing here?...JunJun and LinLin  are shouting something in chinese, grinning and running around the room...Guess, they are already drunk...

Reina closes my dropped jaw...

I’m trying to comprehend the whole situation but it’s useless...

“Why they are here?!” I shout as the music is at full volume.

“I would also want to know this!”

“Have you tried the trick with banana?!”

At least we would get rid of the demon...

“It doesn’t work anymore!”

Right I forgot...After she found a banana flavoured liquor she healed her banana phobia...

“Come on!” Reina takes me to the kitchen where is a little bit quieter.

“Nakazawa bring them. I’m sure Eri and Sayu sold us out. And yet I thought it would be a peaceful evening...” She sighs leaning against the table, crossing her arms.

No good, she shouldn’t be sad on her birthday...

“Hey, cheer up, they will leave eventually...” I tug her shirt drawing her closer to me. She reluctantly admits I’m right with a small, cute smile.

“I have a gift for you.”

“Gift?Oh, you shouldn’t have to.You know I’m alright with just being with you...”

“Really?So, I’ll keep it for myself.”

“Eto...I mean if you already...”

“Just joking.” I giggle.

She is so sweet... I know she loves getting presents but won’t admit to that.

I reach to my pocket and hand her a pink box with red ribbon.

“Ano...” She opens the box.

Just as I expected...How I love to surprise her...

“I couldn’t decide which color give you so I took both.”

“Fluffy?...And pink...And purple...”She looks at me rising her eyebrows in disbelief and cracks up laughing.

“Where did you get these?”

“Yossy and Miki helped me a little bit...” I try to hide my shyness and act cooly but I end up blushing and rubbing nervously the back of my head.

“And you are totally serious with this?” I nod enthusiasticlly in respond to her question.

“You are crazy you know.” I roll my eyes at her.

“Of course I am...crazy about you...”I prove this with my kiss...Surely, it wouldn’t end with only one kiss and we would proceed with proving our feelings for each other if...someone didn’t enter the kitchen...

“Ano...Sorry to interrupt you guys, but I thought you would like to know that Eri and Sayu went to your bedroom...” Nacchi explains herself timidly.

“Shit!” Reina jerks pushing senpai out of her way.

Hope she’ll be in time casue if not...another shock awaits her...

“Gomenasai. Seems like I picked the wrong moment.” I flush looking down.

Yeah, you did...but I won’t tell you that since you’re my senpai.

So, I just shake my head in denaial.

She giggles and takes place next to me.

“You probably wonder why I’m here, huh?” She directs her gaze at me like she would be accusing me of something.

Though I’m not sure if she wants me to deny her words or confirm. Well, of course I wonder why. After what she has done to Reina’s friend is rather awkward to see her here not to mention that it’s a little bit insolent to show up here just like that...But I can’t tell her this...

“I’m here cause....I thought I would meet Maki here...”

To meet Maki? She came to Reina’s birthday party hoping Gocchin would be here?...I don’t get this...

“But if you want to meet Maki...”

“Then why don’t you just go to her?” She cuts off.

Maybe I shouldn’t be asking...However it’s not Miki...I won’t end this conversation by  saying: “You don’t have to explain. It’s none of my buissnes”... It’s an opposite situation...I feel that she wants me to ask her questions....She wants me to listen to her...It’s like a confession...

“Cause I’m a coward Ai-chan...I wanted to meet her on the neutral ground, not fullly facing her...Just to make sure she’s alright...”

Alright?...How she is suppose to be alright after what you have done to her?...

“To be caught in such a stupid way...Why he had to come in that moment?...”She looks at me with these blurry eyes like expecting me to say something.

Fate can be cruel...First, it gives us years of happiness and then, in one second, it turns our life into hell...Now I also feel down...

“He gave us an ulitmatum...Or we stop it, and they would make sure about that or we’re fired and finished in this buisness...I still remember her piercing gaze...Although she didn’t say a word it felt as if she would shout to me...take my hand and leave with me!...why don’t you tell them you’ll leave with me?!...” Tears run down her cheeks.It’s like she has just moved back in time and reexperienced the whole situation again but from outside observator’s point of view. She looks so miserable that I myself want to join her in crying.

“You all think that I’m a monster leaving her like that...but what good would meet her with me? She is young and talented...It’s better for her to leave Upfront since they didn’t fully appreciated her...She will be a great singer and forget about me eventually...”

I’ve never thought about this like that...Gocchin’s solo career is incomparably bigger than Nacchi’s. She was second after Aya and she had everything to be greater than the greatest idol of HP….But if Natsumi left with her it would be the end of everything for both of them...Perhaps, Gocchin didn’t take this into consideration and felt betrayed by her which turned out not to be true...She did it cause she wanted to protect her, she didn’t want to bring her troubles cause...

“I really love her Ai-chan...I really do love her...” Her face is soaked with tears. She falls into my arms and we slide down to the floor.

“Nacchi...” I whisper, feeling salty drops falling down my cheeks.

I was wrong about her…She’d never told anyone cause she hoped that if no one had known it would last forever...

“Ai-chan...” She lifts her wet eyes to meet my face. “Don’t make the same mistake as I did...”

Wha?...What does she mean? To be more careful?...

“It’s ok now when you are both young and in the same band but…don’t be fooled by that...” I look confused at her serious face.

Why is she telling this to me? I don’t undersatnd...She doesn’t mean that...

“Ai-chan! Is it ok to make out like that with Nacchi on your girlfriend’s birthday party?” Nakazawa opens the door of the kitchen and glares at us with her bloodshot eyes.

“Come with me or I‘ll tell Reina about everything.”

“Nakazawa-san!” I shout at her as she drags me out of the kitchen.

Gah! She always chooses the worst moment for her appearance. She thinks that since she is the oldest she can do whatever she wants...

Of course I don’t have enough strenght to resist her so I’m back into the noisy room.

But as soon as she lets go of me and begins to seductively sing to our poor Aika, I quickly turn around to get back to the kitchen. But to my surprise Nacchi stands just before me, smiling and handing me...a grapefruit?

“Want some?”

What the...?And they say that I’m weird. But being in a deep depression one minute and cheerfully eating a grapefruit next is perfectly normal, right?

“Wah! Stay away from me!” Yuko jumps onto the sofa like she would just notice a mouse on the floor or something. But she isn’t that drunk to see white mice…and she isn’t pointing at the floor...She points at…Nacchi?...Has she completely gone mad?

“Yuu-chan is everything ok?...” Natsumi asks her fellow generation friend approaching her.

I think  it never was ok in the first place...

“No,no,no don’t come any closer!” She waves her hands in panic.

What has she drunk?Why is she reacting like that to Abe-san?

I observe closely Nacchi but there is nothing to be afraid of. It’s just the same cute Nacchi she knows then why...Wait...

I concentrate my gaze at Natsumi’s hand in which she holds peeled yellow fruit.

Don’t tell me she redirected her phobia from bananas to grapefruits?!

Before I begin to reconsider how stupid and impossible my theory is I take the fruit from Nacchi’s hand and decide to check this experimetally...

“Want some?” Smiling cheerfully I reach out my hand to the terrified leader of HP.

“AHHH!!!”

Everyone in the room watch stunned as Yuko runs out of the appartment throwing her hands into the air…

So after all I was right....But it’s even worse than it was with bananas or maybe it was because she was drunk?...Well, anyway I finally was able to get rid of her...

“Ano...I’d better go after her before someone will see her and she’ll end up in a hospital for mentally ill...” Nacchi proposes still staring at the door through which Yuko left the room seconds ago.

“Yeah better go...” I giggle taking piece of the sour-bitter fruit.

To think that once I was in love with that person...

“I also have to leave...My dad came to pick me up.”Aika puts on her jacket probably relived that it’s all over and she won’t meet Nakazawa quickly again.

Hope her dad didn’t have a close meeting with our “grapefruit phobic”.

“Wait Mistui. I’ll leave with you.” Gaki quickly grabs her stuff and hastily puts on her coat.

“Already leaving?” I thought she would stay and we could talk a bit since she looked pretty down when I came, so I wanted to ask if everthing is alright.

“Yep.You probably want to stay alone with Reina and I don’t want to bother you.” She puts her hand on my shoulder.

“Gaki-san...” I wonder if she really is ok with that...Lately, we haven’t spent much time together. I don’t want her to feel like I would be neglecting our friendship.

“Don’t worry about me. I’m a bit sad cause Koharu-chan couldn’t come as she has an important exam at school tomorrow, but I’ll be fine you know me.” She winks at me smiling warmly.

Guess, she is right.. Well, at least I hope so...

I give her a goodbye hug and exchange knowing smiles.

After the two of them LinLin and JunJun come up to me. They babble something in chinese . I just nod repeating “hai” pretending  that I understand them. But the only word that I’m able to figure out is “Reina”...They probably want me to give her theirs regards...

“Ok.Come you two. We’re coming back to home...” Risa takes them with her and I’m left alone in the room humming Egao Yes Nuudo..

“Anata dakedo watashi emio suzuni tsuyoku shiteyo taskette...”

Wait… there is no taskette in the lyrics...Oh well, I must have made a slip of the toung...

“Anata dakedo taskette...”

Huh?It’s not in the song...

I turn down the volume.

“Taskette Ai-chan!!!!”

Reina?! Crap I forgot about Eri and Sayu!

I burst into Reina’s bedroom.

“Ai-chan! ” My girl cries out to me desperately.

Eri is holding Reina’s hands behind her back while Sayu is reaching to her shirt. They both freez as they notice me.

“Ai-chan...” Reina sobs quietly.

She looks so...desperate, harmless and innocent right now...She gazes at me with her hazy eyes, blushing slightly and breathing rapidly...I feel strangely turned on by this whole view...

“Nee, Leader want to join us?” Eri smirks leaning her head against Reina’s.

Crap! She read through me...I shouldn’t be staring like that when my girlfriend is obviously being harassed by those two...

“Leave her alone.You are drunk and she is your friend and moreover my girlfriend.” I try to sound threateningly. They look at each other, nod and realese her.

“Gomenasai~.” They both bow their heads in shame.

I know they would never do that if they were sober but it’s terrifying how they change after alcohol. And thanks to who all that happened? Of course thanks to Yankee queen...

“Don’t apologize to me but to Reina.”

“Goemenasai Reina~.” She nods at them sobbing and trembling.

Gosh, what have they done to her?...I don’t want to think what would happen if I came in few minutes later.

They leave the room not even swaying…. Are they really drunk?...

“Yuu-chan come for us...” I hear as Sayu whines to her cellphone in the corridor.

We made a deal with Yuko once. She can bring alcohol and even get drunk everyone but then…she must take care of them and safely escort to their houses. It was Kaori-san’s and Nacchi’s idea to make such a deal in order to preserve stories like “Drunk Morning Musume members seen on the streets”.And since Nakazawa-san maintained that there is no party without alcohol she had to agree.

I sit down next to Reina as she squeezes tightly her pillow.

“It’s alright. Nakazawa will take them in a while.” I stroke her head placing it on my chest.

“Ai-chan…never leave me alone with those two…when they are drunk...” She mumbles quietly.

Poor Reina… she has no chances against those two...I also wouldn’t have alone....No matter how tough she is and how harsh she can be, she would never hurt them even in self-defence...The only thing she could do was to cry for help...I must seriously take consequences for Eri’s and Sayu’s actions. They overdid this time....

“Ano...Reina...” I begin sheepishly not sure if she already got over her shock.

“Nani?”

Good her voice doesn’t sound waverily anymore.

“What presents others gave you?” She takes her head out of my arms and looks at me slightly amused.

“You sooo don’t want to know...”

Seems like not only my gift was so orginal and surprising...
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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #118 on: June 20, 2008, 09:39:22 PM »
I feel so bad for not commenting on your previous chapters (or wedging between your comment replies and the update of the story itself...) so here I am <333

This chapter was adorable! Well, in it's own twisted way, roffle. It's nice to know that Aichan gets along great with her seniors and is nice to her juniors~ Yay~

Though I do wonder what it is that Aichan got her for a present xD. A part of my mind tells me that it's fuzzy handcuffs but another part of my mind says that it's probably something trivial xDDD!

-gives you the famous hardhat to protect you from writer's block-  :heart: :heart: :heart:

I look forward to your future chapters~!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #119 on: June 20, 2008, 10:51:26 PM »
LoL, judging by Ai and Reina in the past I bet it's like cat ears or something. :lol: I wonder what the others gave her too... as well as what Eri and Sayu were doing to poor Reina :O. From the description I can only imagine they were going to tickle her to death, but her reaction was a little extreme for that so... lol. With KameShige in this story it could have really been nearly anything on any extreme, although if it was to one I'd think Ai would be a little bit more upset with them too. :lol:

Yuko hitting on Aika is just wrong :P, and I hope everything is all right with Risa and Koharu. I also hope Nacchi takes care of Maki soon cause I'm afraid what she might do to Reina... that "joke" of her dumping Ai for her didn't sound quite that light to me... But maybe this story won't be that dramatic. ;) Yay for the update!  :cow:

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