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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #120 on: June 21, 2008, 02:12:21 AM »
Of course Miki-sama is the provider of kinky presents! :lol: And it was a suprise that Shouji made an appearence. I can't say it wouldn't look weird to see a musume with a guy. But we definitely have proof it happens. Oh, well. I found Ishiyoshi very cute but I felt bad that Ai-chan had to witness so much from them! :grin: Ah, Nakazawa is officially making Aika part of the H!P family! :wahaha: And the grapefruit was hella good! But Abe...I think I don't hate her so much now that I've heard her side. She really didn't have too much of a choice either. I hope she and Gocchin get back together. So everyone can be happy. I hope Takagaki friendship lives through this and that maybe Gaki starts liking someone else. Because Koharu just isn't working for her. Too immature. Whoa, I think KameShige crossed the line there! But a H!P threesome (maybe foursome) could be hot. :hiakhiakhiak: I hope we get to find out what the present is soon!!!!!! Is is something SILK? :kekeke:
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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #121 on: June 21, 2008, 07:33:56 AM »
kinky presents..LOL.. XD XD

i cnt wait for the next oneee!!  :otomerika:

ShigeKame LOL... poor Reina..  :lol: :lol:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #122 on: June 21, 2008, 08:35:58 AM »
ISHIYOSHIIIIIIIII  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: didn't expect that for some reason. So Rika's denied Yossy in the past and Miki's relationship with Shoji is difficult. Ok, I know many are gonna hate me for this but... I thought ShojiXmiki interaction here was cute, even if it did freak Takahashi out.

Poor Reina :lol: her party was crashed by Nakazawa ^^; and for the record PEDO-Nakazawa is really funny and hormonal  :twisted:.... gaki missing koha, i STILL can't get over that.

Abe... Abe Abe Abe... she's RIGHT ON BIPOLAR!! She okay in the party out of the blue corners Ai and cries her eyes out and then eats grapefruit all cheerily. Gotta say my second fave scene in the story was Naka freaking out over the grapefruit... seeing as banana-flavored liquor  :rofl:

As for my number one fave chapter moments: KAMESHIGE's REINA RAPE ATTEMPT!

Kameshige = :rockon: 

Ai getting turned on = ROLFLMAO!!

I can't wait for Reina's POV... YAY for Yankii-vision chap!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #123 on: June 22, 2008, 10:02:07 AM »

-gives you the famous hardhat to protect you from writer's block-  :heart: :heart: :heart:


Yay!So happy that you decided to comment  :cow: And thanks for the hardhat  hope it will save me from slumps XD

I hope we get to find out what the present is soon!!!!!! Is is something SILK? :kekeke:

An image from SILK stuck in my head and I had to write about it but...I've changed one detail... :twisted:

I also hope Nacchi takes care of Maki soon cause I'm afraid what she might do to Reina... that "joke" of her dumping Ai for her didn't sound quite that light to me... But maybe this story won't be that dramatic. ;)

Well....we will see... :roll:

Ok, I know many are gonna hate me for this but... I thought ShojiXmiki interaction here was cute, even if it did freak Takahashi out.

Really?I was hesitating whether to include him or not but I decided that I couldn't omit some facts  :sweatdrop: Anyway, if someone worries about Miki then don't...she'll be back to her old self 8)


As for my number one fave chapter moments: KAMESHIGE's REINA RAPE ATTEMPT!

Kameshige = :rockon: 

Ai getting turned on = ROLFLMAO!!

I can't wait for Reina's POV... YAY for Yankii-vision chap!

In Reina's POV there will be even more of KameShige :kekeke:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #124 on: June 22, 2008, 11:56:48 AM »
i'm sorry, i can't comment on anything for this chapter then the fact that you add Shoji :angry: :mad: NOT HAPPY! I'm with Ai, it ain't right... But i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the Miki story and the IshiYoshiness too... I'm guessing they're related!?
Oh and Yuko/Aika was funny XD

I'm trusting in you to make me like RenAi a bit more to take away from TakaGaki... although with Cindarella and Prince Gaki, u might have a hard time :P

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #125 on: June 22, 2008, 12:16:29 PM »
Gosh after the musical it will hard even for me to believe in ReinAi  more than into TakaGaki XD (though I still can't get over the fact that Ai-chan is Cinderella and not Prince  :cry: ) I'll have to come up with something very persuasive including the musical events.... :dunno: Anyway, I'll try to do my best but I can't promise you anything :mon sweat:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #126 on: June 22, 2008, 06:40:01 PM »
I'm trusting in you to make me like RenAi a bit more to take away from TakaGaki... although with Cindarella and Prince Gaki, u might have a hard time :P

Why? Are you getting tired of Takagaki? :cry:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #127 on: June 22, 2008, 07:34:24 PM »
^ NO, never! I'm just floating a little too much on TakaGaki love so I'm trying to balance it out a little to come back to earth ;) But don't worry, they will always be my number pairing (even if Yomiki becomes equal with them one day).

You know if more people wrote Ai/Miki or Gaki/Miki, I wouldn't have to rely on RenAi :lol: *wink wink, nudge nudge*

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #128 on: June 22, 2008, 09:28:23 PM »
^
Good, then. I want you to come back to Earth but don't forget your roots!
Ok, ok, TakaMiki and GakiMiki it is then. I'll try and write some stuff for them.

But of course, peti-chan, we'll still need some RenAi!!! 8)

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #129 on: June 23, 2008, 03:39:40 AM »
^What about a love triangle? :P That sounds cool~

I haven't been commenting much on this because I read here and there all these while and only yesterday had I really read it all at a shot. Strange yet interesting pairings: NacchiXMaki, RenAi, GakixKoharu and AikaxYuko. The first one is just tragic. Those girls need to talk. Oh poor Gocchin. The 2nd one is  :wub: :wub:. Yup, for the other two, I really need to get used to it but it's hilarious. Oh shy Gaki with Koharu. Damn, Junjun and Linlin should stop rambling off in Chinese!
EDIT: I missed out on KameShige - that's funny :cow: :cow: Don't go about raping Reina!
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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #130 on: June 23, 2008, 07:32:02 AM »
Pink, purple, fluffy and plural.  :dunno:

Uhm, I'm thinking it's a pair of padded handcuffs, or cat ears, or maybe slippers...?  :lol:


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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #131 on: June 23, 2008, 07:43:41 AM »
^ I agrees. I think it's ears. Mikitty must have ears nee ^_^. but who knows O.O... only the author. Who needs to update like NAO!

Gosh after the musical it will hard even for me to believe in ReinAi  more than into TakaGaki XD (though I still can't get over the fact that Ai-chan is Cinderella and not Prince  :cry: ) I'll have to come up with something very persuasive including the musical events.... :dunno: Anyway, I'll try to do my best but I can't promise you anything :mon sweat:

I TOTALLY AGREE! I wanted Prince Ai sooo badly!  :angry: she has the hair!!!!! But w/e... i'm happy with prince gaki.

And DONT GIVE UP IN REINAI! I have a soft spot for them :cry:
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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #132 on: June 23, 2008, 11:01:35 AM »

You know if more people wrote Ai/Miki or Gaki/Miki, I wouldn't have to rely on RenAi :lol: *wink wink, nudge nudge*

Miki...Miki...*coughs*three chaps to go*coughs* :mon ignore:

But of course, peti-chan, we'll still need some RenAi!!! 8)

I need them too since they are my two fav members  :roll:

^What about a love triangle? :P That sounds cool~

Yeah, it sounds cool.... :hee: So, who knows....

Pink, purple, fluffy and plural.  :dunno:

Uhm, I'm thinking it's a pair of padded handcuffs, or cat ears, or maybe slippers...?  :lol:

And yet I thought it would be easy to guess :sweatdrop:


I TOTALLY AGREE! I wanted Prince Ai sooo badly!  :angry: she has the hair!!!!! But w/e... i'm happy with prince gaki.

And DONT GIVE UP IN REINAI! I have a soft spot for them :cry:

Exactly!She has the hair!!! She would look awesomely cool(like in that suit from Haromoni :drool:)! :gyaaah: I wonder how it will look Prince with long hair and Cinderella in short XD

And I won't give up on ReinAi ! :mon determined:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #133 on: June 24, 2008, 12:10:08 AM »
Do I want to know the deal with Miki, Yossi, and those "gifts"?

...


Probably not. :P



Man, I'd love to see Aika's face as she tries to fend off Yuko-sama. :lol:



Nacchi being there WAS a bit of a surprise. Really sucks hearing about the ultimatum she and Maki were given and that she thinks Maki would be better off without her. :(



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“Yuu-chan is everything ok?...” Natsumi asks her fellow generation friend approaching her.

...

“No,no,no don’t come any closer!” She waves her hands in panic.

...

I concentrate my gaze at Natsumi’s hand in which she holds peeled yellow fruit.

Don’t tell me she redirected her phobia from bananas to grapefruits?!
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“Ai-chan! ” My girl cries out to me desperately.

Eri is holding Reina’s hands behind her back while Sayu is reaching to her shirt. They both freez as they notice me.

“Ai-chan...” Reina sobs quietly
:stunned:  Uh-oh....



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“Ano...Reina...” I begin sheepishly not sure if she already got over her shock.

“Nani?”

Good her voice doesn’t sound waverily anymore.

“What presents others gave you?” She takes her head out of my arms and looks at me slightly amused.

“You sooo don’t want to know...”

Seems like not only my gift was so orginal and surprising...
YES WE DO WANNA KNOW!!!
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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 15. The gift]
« Reply #134 on: June 27, 2008, 07:53:06 PM »
Gosh...it's the longest chapter I've written so far and probably the craziest(well after all it's Reina's POV XD ) Hope you will enjoy it and forgive me it ends like that... let say the rest I left to your imagination :P



Unexpected guests

I carefully look around the room.

Food....Check.Drinks....Check.Cake....Check.Music.... Check.

“Yosh!Everything is ready. Eri and Sayu will come soon. Thanks for the help Gaki-san.” I pat her shoulder.

It’s nice of her that she offered to help me with preparing the party.

“You don’t have to thank me. I just laid the table...”

“Well, yeah...but thanks anyway.”

“Seriously, when you were talking about your birthday party I thought it would be something big...”

“Nah...Honestly, I wanted to spend it only with Ai-chan but Eri and Sayu whined about how I lately  didn’t spend much time with them...They said if I didn’t prepare a party and invite them they would prepare a surprise party for me and as I don’t really want to be surprised by them, cause such a surprise could end tragically for me, I agreed to invite them to my house and give them that damn cake, cause obviously it’s all about the cake.” I state calmly like this story would happen everyday to me and I‘d know it by heart. Gaki giggles eating up a chocolate cookie.Good that she is laughing. She was sad before because of Koharu’s absence due to her school work.

Finally, I was able to cheer up someone instead of getting her down more....

“And when Ai-chan will show up?”

“She phoned me she would be late. She has some business to do.” I answer still checking if I didn’t forget about anything.

“Leader’s stuff?”

“I don’t know. She hasn’t told me but probably yes.” I shrug searching for some decent CD that I could play. Eventually, I decide to go with something neutral which everyone knows.

10th anniversary all singles complete...

Ding dong

“Oh, it’s probably Eri and Sayu. Turn on the music.” I point at the CD next to my Hi-Fi and leave Gaki to welcome my guests.

I open the door and to my shock I don’t see Eri and Sayu but...

“Nakazawa-san?!”

What the hell is she doing here?!

“Yo Reina. We’ve heard you’re having a party. So, we’ve decided to drop in.”  She presents me bottles of alcohol in her hands and enters my apartment.

“Ano...but...how did you....” I try to think clearly and comperhend the situation but no matter how I look at this it’s obvious that my small birthday party suddenly grew into a bigger one and probably much more noiser as Yuko begins to sing Morning Coffe at loud...

“Ohayo Reina.” I slowly turn around my head to notice that behind Yuko were hiding other guests with Natsumi at the head of them...

“Abe-san?”

Ok...I can understand why Nakazawa is here...great occasion to get drunk... but Nacchi? How dares she show up herself here after the Gocchin incident?!

“Happy birthday.” She steps inside handing me a small box wrapped in red paper with red ribbon.

What, she thinks this will appease me?

I’m not able to ask her any questions as JunJun and LinLin pops up in front of me and ramble something in chinese...or maybe it’s broken japanese? Anyway, what I’m only able to understand from their babble is happy birthday in...broken english... After them enters Aika also greeting me with happy birthday and finally I can close the door relived that Yuko didn’t bring here whole H!P. But just as I shut the door the doorbell resounds again...

No...don’t tell me there is more of them...

I reluctantly open the door...

“Happy brithday~~!!!”

Kame and Shige...I should have predicted that...Probably, they are responsible for informing my previous guests about the party...Apparently, the word “secret” doesn’t exist in their dictionaries...

“Oh Nakazawa-san is here?” Sayu pretends to be surprised.

“Yeah, she is and Nacchi is here too...and JunJun...and LinLin...and even Aika...” I snap sarcastically. “And you of course, don’t have anything to do with that, huh?” I glare at them.

“Oh come on Reina. It’ll be funnier with them.”

The two of them will make me insane someday...

“Nee, Yuko-san what have you bring today?”

Sayu you little...

I reach out my hand to grab her neck but instead of that I only crush the air in my fist.

Damn you...If only you weren’t my friend...

I slam the door behind them and join my guests in the living room. I plop in the sofa next to Gaki and cross hands at my chest.

“What are they doing here?” I direct my gaze at Kame and Shige in response to Risa’s question.

“Right...I should figure it out...”

Yeah me too...I knew this whole party was a bad idea from the start. I’m so stupid that I let them to take me in like that.

“Kanpai Reina!” Yuko hands me a glass filled with transparent liquid. I look at her pissed off.

Yeah, that’s right, I should get drunk...that way I’ll forget about this damn party.

I take the glass from her and drink it at one gulp. As burning pain overtakes my throat I realize that it wasn’t such a good idea...

“Wow, slow down Reina. You don’t want to get drunk before your girl will show up, do you?” I hiss from the pain covering my mouth.

I hate to admit but she is right...I have to stay sober. After all, the most important guest hasn’t showed up herself yet.

“Ok, let’s give our presents to Reina.” Nakazwa-san clasps her hands and turns down the volume. Everyone gathers around me.

It’s amazing how everybody listen to her. It’s like, she could order them to jump out of the window and they would do it without hesitation...Shame she won’t order them to get out of here...

“So, maybe you first since you’re the oldest.”Natsumi points at Yuko.

Wah, she sure is brave to call her the oldest in public...

“I’ll pretend that I didn’t hear the part about being the oldest since Reina doesn’t want to have a spill of blood on her birthday.” Yuko snaps glaring at Nacchi who just grins.

Wait, Nakazawa-san reminds me of someone now...

“Here you are Reina.” She gives me her present. Although it’s wrapped in paper I can easily tell what it is judging by its shape...

“Oh a bottle of wine...Thanks...” I smile a forced grin.

“But it’s not some kind of cheap, random wine it’s...”

“Ok Yuu-chan I’m sure she appreciates your gift. You don’t have to tell us the whole story of this wine.” Abe-san interferes saving us from being bored to death.

At least she is good at handling with our H!P leader...

“From me you’ve already got the gift, right?”

“Oh..yeah...” I reach to my pocket where I‘ve hidden the small box and unwrap it.

I wonder what she gave me...The best present from her would be Gocchin’s mend heart but I don’t delude myself into thinking that I’ll find it in this box...

“Earrings...”

A pair of silver heart-shaped earrings...How predictable and trivial...

“Thanks they are cute...” Once again I force myself to smile convincingly.

I’ll never wear them...

“Ok, ok now we!” I take the bag from Eri and Sayu and take out a bottle but this time it’s not a bottle of alcohol as it is plastic.Looks like body lotion or something. I read the lable.

“Edible chocolate body lotion.....Ee?!”

Have they completely gone mad to give me something like this?

I flush as everybody in the room start to laugh.

“What?You two like chocolate, right?” Kame pokes my shoulder. I throw the bottle into the bag and put it away.

That’s it, I give up...Ai-chan where are you?!

“Here. That’s from me.”

Gaki...thank god she is here. I don’t have to worry that I’ll get something weird from her.

Without hesitation I take out the gift from the bag.

“Black...night dress...” My face turns crimson red again.It would be ok if it was normal night dress but this one is transparent, short and...

“Wow, it’s damn sexy Reina. Ai-chan will love it.” Yuko giggles taking the present from my hands. I look pleadingly at innocently smiling Gaki.

Why Gaki?Why? Even you against me? You went shopping with Kame and Shige, didn’t you?...I know I’ll look damn cute and sexy in it but they don’t need to know about it...this knowledge is reserved for Ai...You could give it to me earlier and don’t give them a chance to laugh...For sure this is the most embarrassing birthday party in my life...

I reluctantly reach for the LinLin’s and JunJun’s gift but to my relief they gave me a pack of sweets and from Aika I got cute white fluffy teddy bear for which I sincerely thanked her.

“So, since we are finished with presents let’s continue having fun.” Nakazawa-san turns up the volume again and everybody begin to sing and dance.Only I and Gaki still stay at the sofa observing the rest warily.

I wonder when Ai-chan will come...She should be soon...I hope so....cause I don’t know how long I’ll stand this whole circus and hold back myself from getting drunk...Great, Eri is already tipsy and Sayu of course takes this opportunity...Yuko also don’t loaf about, taking sit next to Aika...What next LinLin and JunJun making out on the floor?! Right, don’t bother yourselves turn my apartment into H!P gaybar...I don’t even want to imagine what would happen if Yossy, Maki and Miki were here...However, I invited Gocchin...but she refused politely telling me she would feel awkward among all those couples, meaning me and Ai-chan and Sayu and Eri....I wonder if Maki is the reason of Abe’s unexpected appearance...Nah...That’s stupid if she’d wanted to meet her she would have just gone to her...Simply, she came here to have her eye on Yuko...Even now she observes her closely checking if her hands don’t wander too much around Aika... Nevertheless, her presence still pisses me off…

Knock, knock

I hear a loud knock at the door as in Hyokkori Hyoutan-jima is the spoken part.

Ai-chan!

I stand up but quickly realize that she probably won’t be happy with such a view...and my high spirit abandons me...I thought that by the time she would come, Eri and Sayu would already get bored and leave, Gaki would leave from her own good will and we would stay alone. However, as I look around the room I have to face the painful reality...They may not go out until the morning...

I come up to the door and although I want to greet her with a smile it seems like there is no use in deciving her...

“What’s wrong?”

“Nothing. Everything is perfect...”

This sarcastic tone won’t help me with convincing her, will it?...

“Perfect?”

Just as I thought...

I decide to show her what is going on since words can’t describe it...

As we walk in to the dark room...Dark?...Who the hell have turned off the lights?! Nakazawa to create more intimate atmosphere, or Sayu from the same reason?...Whatever...I look at stunned Ai-chan and lift her chin in order to close her gaping mouth.Well, it’s a sign that she has understood what I meant before...

“Why they are here?!”

Standard question...

“I would also want to know this!”

“Have you tried the trick with banana?!”

Well, there was a bowl with bananas but she didn’t react in any way...Besides soon after there were no bananas since JunJun ate...no... devoured them.

“It doesn’t work anymore!Come on!”

Shouting like that in the middle of the room is useless so I take her to the kitchen where sounds of “As for one day” don’t reach us, at least not with such a power as in the room.

“Nakazawa bring them. I’m sure Eri and Sayu sold us out.” I’m trying to explain the situation. She is probably as disappointed as I am. Although I know it’s not my fault that they’ve invaded my house, I feel like I’d let her down...“And yet I thought it’d be a peaceful evening...”

Gosh, what can I do to fix this?...If only I knew how to get rid of Yuko...She is the main problem...I could get rid of the rest in a second but Yuko...She would be able to get rid of me although it’s my apartment...

“Hey, cheer up, they will leave eventually...”

Awww, Ai-chan what would I do without you...

Her gentle embrance is enough to put smile back on my face.

“I have a gift for you.”

“Gift?Oh, you shouldn’t have to.You know I’m alright with just being with you...”

But it’s nice that you’ve bought it...What is it?...What is it?...

“Really?So, I’ll keep it for myself.”

Wha...But...I want my present...

“Eto...I mean if you already...”

“Just joking.”

Very funny Ai-chan indeed...I hate when she is playing with me like that...

I take the box from her and open it.

“Ano...”

“I couldn’t decide which color give you so I took both.”

Is she joking again?...And there is two pairs of them? Am I dreaming?...Ai-chan has bought me...

“Fluffy?...And pink...And purple...”

Two pairs of handcuffs?!

“Where did you get these?”

There is only one shop in where you can get those, right? But I hope she hasn’t gone there...

“Yossy and Miki helped me a little bit...”

She gives me a present like that yet she still is able to be so innocent...I’ll never understand her...She can be so shy yet she went to Miki and Yossy to ask them for something like this...

“And you are totally serious with this?”

Maybe she just wanted to make me laugh, in what she succeeded, but to my amazement she nods looking at me with these sparkling eyes.

“You are crazy you know.”

But honestly, I can’t wait to use those handcuffs with you which probably means that I’m as insane as you...

“Of course I am....crazy about you...”

Gah…she will never stop to surprise me....But I love her surprises especially when it means to kiss me passionately all of a sudden...

Unfortunately, I forgot that not only Ai-chan tends to surprise me today...

 “Ano...Sorry to interrupt you guys, but I thought you would like to know that Eri and Sayu went to your bedroom...”

“Shit!” I rush quickly to my bedroom. After the invasion of those two it may become an uninhabitable place...I just hope they are still in theirs clothes...

I burst into my bedroom...just in time...They are already making out on my bed but to my relief still in clothes...

“Hey you two! Get out of here! I didn’t tell you to feel at home, right?”I separate the two of them as my words didn’t have any affect on them. Shige glares at me with her bloodshot eyes.

Gosh she is totally drunk...and Eri too....

“Nani?!”

Hey that’s my line Sayu!

“Don’t you see we are busy?”

Busy?!Gah! The fact that you are drunk doesn’t allow you to shout at me like that!

“Get lost from my bedroom! You can make out in your home!” I snap pointing them the exit .

“Nee, Eri what do you think about...” Sayu crawls up to Kame and whispers something into her ear.

The smirk on Shige’s face doesn’t predict any good...

When these two are drunk they are capable of everything...For example, on one party even Miki couldn’t handle the two of them...Well, Fujimoto never really paid attention to who she groped, especially after she got drunk, anyone was good as long as was within her reach...So, one day she ended up between Eri and Sayu which basically meant for Miki...left hand->Sayu, right hand-> Eri...Perfect situation for her...However, she didn’t take into consideration that drunk Eri and Sayu weren’t as passive as they’re while being sober(well, actually Sayu never is passive...).So, for them situation presented as follows…one half of Miki for Kame the other half for Shige....It could lead to splitting our sub-leader into sub and leader parts but fortunately Hitomi intervened and saved her girlfriend...And the best part of this story is that the day after that incident Sayu and Eri stated firmly they had no idea what Miki and Yossy were talking about and they didn’t remembered anything from the previous day...

So, as I’m looking now at these two remembering that incident I can’t help but to think that I’m in huge troubles...

Not aware of what am I doing, I begin to slowly step back...Theirs red glowing eyes pierce my body...I gulp and my breath becomes faster...I swiftly turn around but although they are drunk, they somehow still have a good reflex which means for me...right hand caught by Sayu, left by Eri...And what is worse they are strong enough to throw me at the bed....

Reina! If you quickly don’t come up with something, you are dead!

“Nee, Reina what do you think about threesome?....”Sayu mutters. Her devilish smirk doesn’t come off her face.

Ee?!! Threesome?!! Ano...quickly to the back Reina!

I somehow manage to make a flip backwards and find myself crouching beside the other side of the bed.

“Wow! Sugoi! She is pretty agile, nee Sayu?”

“Yeah, she is...It means we’ll have some quality time with her...”I stare at the two wickedly grinning faces looking down at me from the bed.

This is some freaking nightmare!!!

“Stay away from me or I’ll forget that you’re my friends!”

Honestly, I don’t think using my strength could stop this two...Simply, I don’t stand a chance with them....They are unpredictable in this state...It’s like the alcohol doesn’t affect their physical state but only the mental...

“Mou~But this is the exact problem. It seems like you’ve already forgotten that we’re your friends.”Eri whines leaning her head against Sayu’s.

“Yeah...since you’re with Ai you no longer spend time with us...We feel lonely...Rokkies would always hang out and do everything together....”

What is she talking about?! The fact that we’re friends doesn’t mean we have to do THAT also together! It’s the total opposite! We can’t do that together! It’s not normal for friends to do such things!!!

“You’re drunk, you don’t know what are you saying. If you want that bad to make out here, then fine I won’t stop you, just leave me alone!”

It’s no longer a matter of my clean bedroom…it’s a matter of my....body?...Besides, I’ll make things clear with them after they become sober....

“Oh come on, we won’t hurt you and we promise not to tell Ai....”

“Yeah...we will just make out a little....”

A little?! So, why are you licking your lips like that, Sayumi?!

I feel like a small pupppy cornered by two hungry, wild dogs in a dark alley to which doesn’t matter that I’m one of them...In their eyes I’m just a piece of meat...

That’s it! I won’t stay here any longer!

I jerk towards the door but again I’m too slow and Sayu grabs my hand pushing me onto the bed.This time I’m not able to do anything since Eri subdued me by holding firmly my arms behind my back.

“There, there don’t be so scared....”

“No, no,no! Don’t come any closer Sayumi!”

I turn my face and look pleadingly at Eri expecting her to spare me....

“Remember me?I’m your friend... Reina...”

“Ano...Sayu, she really looks scared maybe we shouldn’t after all…”

Yeah! My Eririn! I knew I could count on you...

“Oh Eri you’re so kind...but have you already forgotten how many times she was mean to us?...”

“Huh?!Mean to you?! Oh just wait till you sober up, then you’ll see how mean I can be to you!Besides, being mean can’t compare to sexual harassment!”

“Yeah, guess you’re right Sayu.”Eri states grinning innocently.

What?! No! Why me?! Ok, normally I hate to ask for help not to mention crying for it in desperation, but this time I have no choice..

“Taskette!!!”

Shit! Damn music! No one will be able to hear me since it’s so loud...And what’s more the song seems to turn on Sayu even more since it’s Egao yes nuudo...

Nonetheless, I continue to shout…that’s the only thing I could do besides struggling which doesn’t seem to help either...

“Taskette Ai-chan!!!” I cry from the top of my lungs as I notice Sayu’s hands slowly drawing nearer my shirt.

Damn! Where are you?!...

“Ai-chan!”

At last...Eri and Sayu stiffens...I look at Ai and feel how my eyes are filling up with tears...

My Ai-chan...but…why is she looking at me like she would enjoy this whole view? Stop biting your lip and gazing at me with these dreamy eyes! I don’t need now the wicked version of Takahashi! I need the caring, responsible one!

“Ai-chan...” I whisper.

“Nee, Leader want to join us?...”

What?! No! Please, tell them you don’t want to! Please~!

“Leave her alone.You are drunk and she is your friend and moreover my girlfriend.”

Aw, Ai-chan~…So strong, so confident, so firm...I love you Leader-sama~~

Eri finally loosens her grip and Sayu moves back.

“Gomenasai~.”

“Don’t apologize to me but to Reina.”

Tears run down my cheeks...She is so concerned about me....My rescuer

“Goemenasai Reina~.” Eri and Sayu bow in regret.

Yeah,yeah...Just get lost already...

I reach for the pillow and hug it strongly, trying to stop the trembling of my body.

“Yuu-chan come for us...”

And be quick Yuko...before they’ll change their minds...

“It’s alright. Nakazawa will take them in a while.”

Yeah, calm down Reina…your brave Leader is here...

“Ai-chan...never leave me alone with those two...when they are drunk...” I murmur sheepishly ashamed that I’m acting like the biggest coward...But fortunately, Ai-chan is the best medicine for my trauma and eventually I settle down as she tenderly strokes my head.

“Ano...Reina...” She asks quietly.

“Nani?”

“What presents others gave you?”

Presents?Oh…she means that stuff others gave me...

“You sooo don’t want to know...” I respond giggling.

“Oh come on show me.” She pokes my shoulder playfully.

Everything returns to normal...We’re alone, it’s quiet and peaceful, just like I wanted it to be...

“Ok wait here.” I go to the living room and pick up bags with presents.

“From who you want to see first?” I ask walking into the bedroom and hanging bags in the air.

“It doesn’t matter.”She says and takes one of the bags from my hand.

“Oh, it’s from Yuko-san, right?” She closely looks at the bottle of alcohol turning it in her hands.

Not hard to guess, huh?...

“Hmm...French wine...87 year...very expensive...”

“Excuse me?Ok, honestly, how long you and Nakazawa-san were together?”

Since when she is such a wine expert?...

“What?! No. I’ve read about it in some magazine. It’s a popular label.”

Yeah right...

“Nevermind. And what you have here?” She points at the second bag…red with white bunnies.

“Oh that’s...”

Too late...before I’m able to explain her and save her from the shock she takes out the brown bottle.

“Chocolate...What?!” She squeals and laughs.

Right...very funny…

“From...” She deliberately avoids their names scared of bringing back memories.

“Yeah...” I admit reluctantly.

“Ano...but it’s...empty?” She shakes the open bottle up and down but there’s no sign of chocolate syrup in it....

“So, apparently they gave me an empty bottle...”

“Maybe they had two bottles and gave you the wrong one...” Ai-chan is stubbornly trying to get out even a drop of chocolate from the bottle by squeezing and shaking it.

Geez…I like chocolate too but come on...

“Yeah maybe...”

I don’t really care but at least they gave us a reason to laugh.

“Shame...” She eventually gives up and throws the bottle behind her.

Guess she is too frustrated to think about the bin now...But wait a minute...Shame?

“Does this mean I’m already that bad that you need stimulants?...” I ask teasingly, jump out of the bed, pick up the empty bottle and throw it in to the bin.

“Reina! That’s not what I mean!” She squeals and turns red as I again face her on the bed.

“So, what did you mean, huh?” I grin slyly leaning closer to her.

“That...You know...It could be fun...”

Fun?! She said fun?!Oh please… Is there some kind of manual instruction to this girl?Or some kind of dictionary that translates from Takahashi’s language to ours?First handcuffs, now this…Who is she anyway? Sweet, innocent angel, responsible, professional leader or wicked perv?...Well, I think she is...amazing...

“Want to see the present from Gaki?” She nods bearing her teeth in an anticipation grin.

“Tah-dah.”I swing the black piece of material before her eyes. From expression on her face I assume that she’s already imagining a certain image...

I take the opportunity of her mouth being wide open and sneak mine tongue there which immediately snaps her out from daydreaming.

“Wait for me here.” I wink at her and leave to change into my new nightdress.

After few minutes, I’m back in my whole sexy majesty leaning against the frame door and swinging handcuffs with my index fingers.

Perfect entrance Reina...

Ai-chan gazes at me not able to speak a word.

Victim of Reina’s unquestionable charm...

“Ano...the handcuffs....”

“Yeah, that’s right, you gave them to me remember?...Thought you were going to use it on me?...” She nods sincerely.

“No way...it’s my birthday after all...”

I take her left hand and handcuff it with the purple version and the right one with the pink...both hands above her head to the arms of the bed.

Yosh! Reina takes the complete control!

“Ano...one question Reina...”

“Don’t worry I’m not into s-m…I won’t hurt you...” I grin poking her cute nose.

“But I didn’t want to ask if I was going to become a victim of your dark instincts....I’m just curious how are you going to undress me since I’m handcuffed like this?...”She struggles her hands showing me that the handcuffs are really strong and even police wouldn’t be ashamed of them if…they didn’t have these fluffy pads...

She’s right. How I’m gonna take her shirt off? I have to unhandcuff her, take off the shirt and handcuff again but...she could take the opportunity and handcuff me instead...She can be damn sly when she wants...And assuming that this was her plan from the beginning I can’t risk...Let see...What should I do?...Hmmm....I know!

“Ai-chan...On scale from one to ten...How much do you like this shirt?” I ask playfully tugging the material, checking how strong it is...

“Hmm...Seven maybe eight? But why do you ask?”

Honestly, even if she’d said 10 it wouldn’t have held me back from carrying out my plan...Simply, she’s in a situation in which she can’t control any of my actions...So…I violently tug the shirt and it quickly gives in to my strength revealing Ai-chan’s body as she smirks mischievously at me...

Is it just me or does she really like when I act this way?...Sometimes I wish I could read her mind...Well, for now her body language must be enough for me to guess what she thinks and judging by this, it seems like her thoughts aren’t much different from mine...

« Last Edit: June 28, 2008, 09:08:06 AM by peti-chan »

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 16. Unexpected guests]
« Reply #135 on: June 27, 2008, 08:47:12 PM »
GREAT UPDATE!!!!!
Aw, Gaki-san is such a sweetie. She probably could use something to take her mind off of that kid! Nakazawa and everyone showing up was hella good! Love how Reina is a little mad at Abe still, for breaking Gocchin's heart. Hell, I'm mad at her, but less than before. Love the presents, too! Wine, eh. But alcohol is alcohol. Earrings, :lol:. Mm, chocolate body lotion.... :drool: That's hot! But it's even better that it was empty! That dress sounds pretty hot too! Gaki-san is coolness. Nice to know that the pandas and Aika are still good little girls. (But Aika probably isn't after spending the party with Yuko!) Yay, handcuffs! Gotta have them! And drunk KameShige is craziness! I can't believe they got Miki-sama! Poor Reina seemed really scared! I guess it's natural when your best friends try and have their way with you! When Reina ripped off the shirt, I was like :w00t: I think Ai-chan likes it kinky! XD
The only thing is that Nakazawa's first name is Yuko (Yuuko) not Youko. Just had to get that off my chest! Sorry to be getting all editor.

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 16. Unexpected guests]
« Reply #136 on: June 27, 2008, 09:10:32 PM »
Wow, I... don't know what to think of that chapter. XD

Fun...

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 16. Unexpected guests]
« Reply #137 on: June 28, 2008, 01:20:48 AM »
Yeah, it sounds like a gaybar and that's fun... :wub: The last RenAi part was just :inlove: hot!

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 16. Unexpected guests]
« Reply #138 on: June 28, 2008, 04:27:50 AM »
Omgsh.. What a kinky birthday party!  XD and the chocolate lotion bottle is empty!  I was looking forward to them using it..  :lol:

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Re: RenAi Revolution[Chapter 16. Unexpected guests]
« Reply #139 on: June 28, 2008, 05:42:04 AM »
"H!P gaybar" :lol:  Ahhh Reina (aka peti-chan), you come up with the best things to say/think XD
Looks like KameShige and I think a like :twisted: Except when I gave my best friend chocolate body lotion it wasn't empty and she also proceeded to tell me details after she used it :cry:

Awww Nacchi, you gotta get it together urself and go after Gocchin, don't just hope to run into her :(

I love all the drunk moments :D XD Someone should write a whole series (short or long) of the adventures of the H!P parties :w00t: ... I can never ever get enough of the girls when they are all drunk and gropey... Drunk KameShige and Miki = like the hottest thing I can imagine right now :drool:

Oh and the Yossy saving her girlfriend Miki, was that something we are meant to remember for later seeing now the girlfriend is Rika and Miki has her stupid man... As a YoMiki fan I am sooo intrigued now ;)

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