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« Reply #40 on: January 18, 2007, 01:34:48 PM »
yeah I made a mistake, thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it right away.

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« Reply #41 on: January 19, 2007, 01:19:02 AM »
woo~! i'm really liking this fic!! :D it's like a mix of X-men and Sky High XDXD

:yay: for mutant powers!! XDXD

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« Reply #42 on: January 21, 2007, 05:14:44 PM »
Whoa~! This fanfic is awesome! I definately need more of this!
If Helen Keller falls in the woods and no one is around, does she make a sound?

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« Reply #43 on: January 26, 2007, 04:24:22 PM »
Here's another chapter for my fanfic, thanks for all the nice comments, makes writing this all much worth while :).
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Chapter 34 – No Way Out

"Is the army ready?" Overlord asked into the telephone receiver he held.

"Yes sir, I have 1,000 troops, 5 attack helicopters, 10 tanks and 5 artillery guns, on standby and ready to march on your order," Lt. Kage replied, "But sir...is this such a wise idea?"

"My students do not hate humanity enough to wage war on them. This unprovoked attack on mutants by humans will be just the nudge they need to fight," Overlord replied.

"I have no doubt that this will work, but will you be able to control their anger, their rage, afterwards? Some of your students are very powerful mutants and could be potentially dangerous if not kept under control," pondered Lt. Kage.

"If it comes to that, I have a little something that will make them obedient as dogs. But I'd like to avoid that method at all if I could," Overlord said. "Now, not all my students will be present in the compound, I'm going to send out my most prized and gifted students on errands. The ones who are left will be the ones who aren't as strong or talented, and will be acceptable loses for our mutant cause."

"Very well sir," Kage said. "So I have your approval to move out?"

"Yes, send your troops out tomorrow. I want them here by sunset," Overlord ordered. He then hung up, walked over to the window of his private mansion and looked out onto his hundreds of loyal students in the compound yard.

"Soon my pupils, soon we will launch our war against the humans. And after we destroy them, mutants will rule all of Japan."


Early next morning, Fujimoto was awakened by some loud knocking at her door. Fujimoto sat up, yawned, and groggily made her way towards the door, opening it.

"Oh! Angel!" Fujimoto said, surprised to see him this early in the morning. Her hair was a mess, she had no make up on and did not want to be seen like that by her boyfriend. She quickly turned around in an attempt to fix her disheveled state. "What brings you here so early?" Fujimoto said after a short silence, trying to straighten her hair with her fingers. Angel chuckled at her reaction.

"Overlord has another task for us later today," he said. "Once you’re ready, come down to the cafeteria and meet up with the rest of us."

"Oh, ok, I'll be right there." She then closed her door, turned around and breathed a sigh of relief, before heading towards the shower to begin getting ready. Her mind slowly processed what just happened before she realized what Angel just said.

"Another task..." Fujimoto said, still not forgetting the details of the last assignment Overlord sent her on. Hoping it wouldn’t be of the same nature, she concentrated on fixing herself for the day ahead. Pretty soon, she was refreshed and dressed, as she headed down to the cafeteria, where she quickly found her friends, joining them for breakfast.

"So what does he want us for this time?" Fujimoto asked.

"Not all of us..." Deluge replied, looking a bit depressed.

"What?" Fujimoto asked.

"He did not ask me to accompany you," Deluge responded.

"Or me," Syther added.

"Don't worry, it's not like you’re going to miss anything. It's a simple retrieval mission," Angel said.

Deluge nodded her head, but still looked left out, as did Syther.

"So who does he want?" Fujimoto asked.

"He wants you, me, Quake and Flea to head to Osaka today to retrieve supplies for the Brotherhood. It's a long trip, so we won't be back until tomorrow," Angel said. "After breakfast, we'll head out, alright?"

Fujimoto, Flea and Quake all nodded in agreement.

"We can also do a little shopping and sightseeing while we’re there," Angel added, as they smiled brightly and nodded once again.

"Well, I hope you guys have fun. I'll see you tomorrow, but right now, I just want to go back to my room." Deluge said, as she gloomily got up and left the table.

Fujimoto made quick glances at the other guys before quickly getting up from the table, and running after her. Upon nearing her, she asked, "Deluge, what's the matter?"

"Nothing..." Deluge said plainly, continuing to walk away, but Fujimoto grabbed her by the arm, stopping her.

"Come on, something's bothering you."

"...It's just not fair! That you get to go to Osaka and I don't. I have more reason of wanting to go than any of you."

"Oh... Why's that?"

"I have family there, a lot of whom I have not seen since I came to the Brotherhood years ago. But I guess I can also see why Overlord won't let me go. Probably doesn't want to lose me if I become too attached to them while I'm there."

"Oh I see... Maybe we could ask him if he could consider having you accompany us."

"No... No, there will be other chances. You guys just go and have fun." Deluge then continued to walk towards her room, leaving a very worried Fujimoto standing in the corridor alone. Once she was far enough from her, Deluge reached into her pocket and pulled out her wallet, reaching into a hidden sleeve and pulling out a laminated picture of her embracing a younger girl. Both girls in the picture seemed so happy being together, she stopped and leaned against the wall, staring at it for a while, as a tear trickled from her eye and slowly ran down her cheek, dripping onto the photo in her hand.

"I miss you...little sister."


After breakfast, Fujimoto, Quake, Angel and Flea all piled into the big black brotherhood van, bound for Osaka.

"Deluge and Syther looked pretty bummed about not coming," Angel said, the others nodding in agreement.

"This is the first time we've gone on an errand without us all together," Quake said.

"Well, how about we all get her and Syther something nice from Osaka, a really nice souvenir for the both of them?" Angel suggested.

Just then, the van slowed down and moved to the side of the highway and slowly continued.

"What's up?" Quake asked Angel, who was driving.

"I dunno, looks like some kind of military parade going on," he replied, as the van slowly drove past hundreds of Japanese soldiers, all marching in formation past them. Tanks rolled by occasionally as large black helicopters flew overhead. Everyone looked out the window at all the military troops marching past them, when suddenly Angel stepped on the brake, nearly slamming into a military jeep in front of them.

"Move that van to the side of the road and make way!!" a soldier ordered. Angel obeyed and moved even further to the side of the road. Fujimoto looked out the window and saw a jeepload of army officers glaring at the brotherhood mutants.

Once the jeep was out of the way and the entire military procession had past them, they hurried on.

"I've never seen a military parade that big before," Quake said, relaxing his tense shoulders.

"They're all probably on some kind of military exercise," Flea said, shrugging his shoulders, as the van scurried on its way towards Osaka.


Back at the Mutant Brotherhood compound, Deluge and Syther were having a leisurely stroll through the open yard. Deluge turned her gaze toward the front gates, noticing yet another vanload of brotherhood mutant teenagers leaving the compound.

"There goes another one," Deluge plainly said.

"That makes 16 vans that have left the compound since this morning," Syther said, nodding.

Deluge looked around the compound as the sun began to slowly droop below the western horizon. The brotherhood didn't look as lively or full as it used to, as many other mutants were sent on various errands all over Japan.

"Maybe this has to do with our monthly getaways," Deluge said. "Our next one is only a week away."

Syther cracked a smile, "Yeah! That must be it. A lot of us are leaving, so maybe this will be the biggest party yet. They must all be preparing for it."

Both of them beamed smiles as they imagined the possibilities of the following week. The joy, the exhilaration, the release of pent-up frustrations as euphoria would wash over them. At these thoughts of things to come, their leisurely walk turned into a playful frolic as they headed towards the main building, eagerly awaiting the return of their friends, not knowing that their future was just hiding amongst the trees surrounding the compound, awaiting the command to strike.


In the forest just west of the brotherhood compound, 500 soldiers and 10 tanks, hidden amongst the trees, waited to attack the brotherhood compound.

The commanding officer raised a radio to his lips and whispered, "Is the south side division ready?"

"Yes sir!" a soldier reported, “Artillery guns are in place and ready to open fire on the front gates. All troops ready as well."

"Alright, once you open fire, we will charge in from the west. The helicopters will attack from the north, and the southern troops will charge in from the south. We'll have the place surrounded. Let's begin the attack!"

"Yes sir!” The artillery gunners looked to their commanding officer, waiting tensely for the order to open fire.

The officer turned around and raised his arm, catching the attention of all stationed gunners. He looked about at each of them before lowering his arm, as he yelled "FIRE!!" All at once, the artillery gunners pulled back on their firing mechanisms. Loud booms echoed about as the shots exited the long barrels of the artillery guns and flew towards the brotherhood front gates.


Deluge and Syther both jumped in surprise after hearing a loud bang, as did all the brotherhood mutants still in the compound and the hundreds of soldiers guarding the compound. Everyone looked to the south where the booming noises originated.

Suddenly, several projectiles slammed into the front gates, setting off large explosions, and blowing the front gates apart, along with the surrounding walls. Dozens of guards shrieked in terror as they were blown off the wall and onto the ground several feet away. The shockwave from the explosion forced Deluge and Syther onto the ground. They both quickly sat up and gaped in horror at the destruction. Smoke, rubble and dead bodies lay all over the place. Through the smoke, Deluge cringed away terrified, as she made out the silhouette of hundreds of human soldiers, all charging towards the compound.

"We're under attack!!" One of the guards screamed. "Human soldiers coming from the south!!"

Another loud series of booms were heard coming from the west. Everyone apprehensively turned to the west, just as the stone walls burst and crumbled as tank shells hit them. More guards were flung off the walls and onto the ground.

"Tanks and more soldiers coming from the west!!" another guard yelled.

Overlord then appeared from his large mansion at the back of the compound, standing atop a high balcony. "Prepare to defend the brotherhood compound!!" he bellowed. Deluge and Syther looked at each other, then stood and quickly ran for cover, behind some rubble on the ground. More brotherhood mutants emerged from the surrounding buildings and rallied at the center of the compound, alongside the hundreds of brotherhood human soldiers. As the opposing human soldiers closed in from the west and the south, all denizens of the Brotherhood assembled, prepared to engage.

Deluge and Syther looked at each other, fear and terror evident in their eyes. Deluge then heard a deafening sound behind her. Glancing over her shoulder, she spotted five large military helicopters flying towards the compound.

"Helicopters! To the north!" Deluge yelled. Taking a good look around, she, along with everyone else, realized the full brunt of their current situation. Deluge grabbed and squeezed Syther’s arm tightly, visibly trembling in panic. Despite all the noises bombarding the entire area, Syther clearly heard a weak gasp escape her lips, the words echoing his exact thoughts.

"Oh god...we're trapped in here..."

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« Reply #44 on: January 26, 2007, 08:47:29 PM »
Damn that Overlord! Betraying his own kind to initiate a human/mutant war. :x

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« Reply #45 on: January 27, 2007, 12:43:12 AM »
I predict a S.M.A.T. rescue!! And then Overlord shalt be defeated by none other than........NAKAZAWA YUUKO! XD Either her or Ms. Typhoon herself, with another quote from the English lesson thrown in the mix :D

Which reminds me, is it possible to have a summary of the H!P powers? It's somewhat hard to keep track of all the ones revealed so far...Chances are, it's just me being dumb, but I'm sure it'll help greatly :)...That's if you have time to do so, of course! :D

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« Reply #46 on: January 27, 2007, 03:47:18 AM »
I'll write what I remember now, I'll check the rest later.

Morning Musume[/u]:
-Yoshizawa Hitomi:Can turn her skin into metal
-Risa Niigaki:Can control electricity, shoot electric bolts from her hands, make an electric field around herself to shield herself from enemy fire.
-Ai Takahashi:Teleporter, can teleport herself and teleport other people as long as they're touching her.
-Konno Asami:Heat powers, kinda like microwaves, can super heat her body tempterature, or fire heat waves from her hands.
-Makoto Ogawa:Can create magnetic fields and control metal.
-Eri Kamei:Shapeshifter, can change into any animal
-Reina Tanaka:Can heal herself or others
-Sayumi Michishige:Psychic, can read minds, take control of others and make people do or say whatever she wants, but is limited to controling or reading one persons mind at a time.
-Koharu Kusumi:Can phase through objects and pass competely through them, as well as anyone or anything, as long as they're touching her or she's holding onto them.
Miki Fujimoto:Can control the weather and create all kinds of weather elements (tornados, high winds, rain, snow, lightning, etc).

Soloists[/b]:
Kaori Iida:much more powerful Psychic, can control multiple peoples minds and make them do or say whatever she wants, can read thousands of minds at a time, Can also tap into the worlds memory and view events that have already happened in spirit form.
Kei Yasuda:Can turn her skin into stone
Yuko Nakazawa:Can charge objects with kinetic energy, which will explode one she throws them.
Inaba Atsuko:Power undecided, yet to be revealed.
Maeda Yuki:Power undecided, yet to be revealed.
Goto Maki:Power undecided, yet to be revealed.
Mari Yaguchi:super speed, can run and fight at incedibly fast speeds, can even run on water.
Aya Matsuura:Can fire energy beams, of varying styles, from long continuous beams, to small spheres of energy, as well as form energy shields around her body, can also use her energy to fly.

Melon Kinenbi:[/u]
Saito Hitomi:power yet to be revealed.
Murata Megumi:can fire optic blasts from her eyes or powerful beams of concussive energy from her eyes, but due to a head injury caused by Mari Yaguchi, her energy beams are 'on' all the time, forcing her to wear specialized glasses or a special visor to keep her energy beams in check, if she opens her eye without either of them, she'll fire her optic blasts uncontrollably.
Shibata Ayumi:Super human strength, but she's more powerful in her lower body (Legs), but still stronger then any the strongest human man on earth.
Masa Otani:Can change her hair into a weapon, each new hairstyle brings a new weapon she can use.

Country Musume:[/u]
Mai Satoda:Healer, can heal herself and others, but is much more skilled then Reina, and is therefore her teacher, her sempai.
Miuna:Can use the "fighting spirt" of animals and nature to make her stronger, faster and more powerful, she absorbs their energy.
Asami:Power undecided, yet to be revealed.

Berryz Koubou:[/u]No known mutants powers, but help run the S.M.A.T headquarters, now pilots and crew members of the S.M.A.Ts aircraft.

C-ute:[/u]No known mutant powers, also help run S.M.A.T headquarters and are crew members of S.M.A.Ts aircraft.

Coconuts Musume:[/u]
Ayaka:Techno-path, can control technology, can take things apart, put them back together, and built things at super high speed all with her mind.

W:[/u]
Nozomi Tsuji:Can create ice, shoot icicles, freeze objects.
Ai Kago:Can control fire, shot fireballs, shape fire into any object she imagines, is immune to fire, even if she stands in it.

Biyuuden:[/u]
Rika Ishikawa:Can change and control gravity, lowering it or increasing it in a given area.
Erika Miyoshi:power undecided, yet to be revealed.
Yui Okada:power undecided, yet to be revealed.
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That's all I can remember for now, but I'm going to give every girl in Hello Project a power, mius C-ute and Berryz for now. More powers will be revealed as the story progresses, so be patient. :)
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« Reply #47 on: January 27, 2007, 05:52:14 AM »
Quote from: JFC;293972
Damn that Overlord! Betraying his own kind to initiate a human/mutant war. :x
Even Magneto wouldn't do that.

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« Reply #48 on: January 29, 2007, 10:08:20 AM »
Another fic i just read finished. The plot is excellent though reminding me alot of x-men.

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« Reply #49 on: February 04, 2007, 05:45:17 AM »
...update please?
If Helen Keller falls in the woods and no one is around, does she make a sound?

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« Reply #50 on: March 07, 2007, 03:28:37 AM »
*Begging for updates

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« Reply #51 on: March 18, 2007, 09:29:01 PM »
YO! Tyler! Glad to see you here. :D  Mmmm... I wish for an updates please. I'm still interested in your fic you know. It's because I want to put your saved fic files to my finished folder so that this fic could join the rest of your finished past work. I'm still reading some if I want to be inspired to write my own. XD

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« Reply #52 on: March 19, 2007, 02:30:39 AM »
Chapter 35- Fall of a Hero

The helicopters attacking from the north all lined up left to right in a single line and flew towards the brotherhood compound. The gunners looked into their scopes and targeted the large group of mutants and brotherhood soldiers in the center of the compound as they got closer.

"Missiles, fire one!" The lead helicopter shouted into his radio, each helicopter then fired a single missile from their launchers and 5 small missiles headed towards the rallied group of brotherhood mutants and soldiers.

Deluge and Syther looked up and their eyes widened with fear as they saw the missiles flying towards them. suddenly the young teacher, Shield, ran infront of the large group of brotherhood mutants and held her hand up towards the incoming missiles and a large blue force field enveloped the entire group, the missiles slammed into the forcefield and exploded, however, none made it through.

"Machine guns fire!!" The lead helicopter pilot shouted, and all the pilots squeezed the triggers on their joysticks and began to open fire with machine guns full blaze as they continued towards the compound, Shields forcefield didn't let up as hundreds of tiny bullets hit her forcefield, the helicopters then stopped firing, and flew over the heads of brotherhood mutants on their first pass. Shield dropped her forcefield, and Syther, enraged, drew his hand back and threw a green cresented sythe at one of the low flying helicopters, the syth hit the back propeller of the helicopter and sliced the tail end off, the damaged helicopter then dropped out of formation, and spiralled towards the ground, then exploded on impact.

All the brotherhood mutants cheered, "Come on!, We can take them!!" Syther shouted. The brotherhood mutants once again cheered and all of them powered up their mutant powers and got ready to fight.

The south division of human soldiers then reached the front gates and began to open fire with their machine guns as they entered the compound, the human brotherhood soliders returning fire. 3 mutants with fire abilities each created a giant fireball, then threw them one after the other, the balls of fire flew towards the charging soldiers. The first fireball then landed in the middle of the charging enemy and exploded, spraying fire all over the place, setting some of the human soldiers on fire. The enemy soldiers who were on fire began to scream and run around, bodies ablaze. the two other fireballs then did the same and took out a few dozen soldiers.

However, more soldiers began to pour into the compound, firing their machine guns, As Deluge ran to take cover, she couldn't help but stare at the terrible beauty of the battle going on. From one side were thousands of tiny glowing bullets firing into the compound, while on her side, were fireballs, strings of electricity, energy beams of all colors of the rainbow flying and exploding all over the place.

It was now mutant against human, the humans relying solely on their guns, machines and firepower, while the mutants used their mutant powers.

Deluge then snapped out of it and got back to fighting, a group of a dozen soldiers were charging towards Deluge, Deluge concentrated and the ground began to shake, a large water pipe then emerged from the ground and broke in half. Deluge then caused a large snake like stream of water to curl around her and then she threw both hands forward and the stream of water flew towards the enemy soldiers, slammed into them and caused them to fly backwards, Deluge ran forward as she kept her hands infront of her, carrying the enemy soldiers towards a large pile of broken pipes. The soldiers then slammed into the pipes and all of them became impaled through the chest, killing all of them.

Deluge breathed hard, as it took alot of concentration and energy to use her powers to that degree. But when she looked over her shoulder, she saw 5 enemy soliders scream angrily, cocked their guns back and take aim at her. Just then a teenage boy ran infront of Deluge and held his right hand up, just as the soldiers began to open fire and a wall of bullets flew towards Deluge and the young boy.

However, all the bullets stopped in mid air just as they were about to hit Deluge and the boy, soon the soldiers guns were empty as a wall hundreds of spinning bullets were still infront of Deluge and the boy, the boy scream angrily then threw his hand forward, the bullets then flew back towards the soliders and slammed into then, killing them, the boy then looked back at Deluge and smiled, then ran off to continue fighting.

"Thanks!!" Deluge shouted at him, Deluge then continued to fight as well, hearing a loud rumbling sound, Deluge looked to her left, as she saw the large armored tanks begin to enter the compound as well. "Oh no, this isn't going to be as easy as the soldiers." Deluge thought to herself, for the tanks were much more armored, had much greater firepower.

The tanks then began to open fire with their enormous turrets, the shells taking out alot of brotherhood mutants and brotherhood soldiers at a time.

Syther looked to his left just as a group of 3 brotherhood mutants were taken out by a tank shell. "NOO!!" Syther screamed, he turned and glared at the tank that killed them, then ran towards it, once he was close enough he drew his hand back and threw a very large green sythe at it, the spinning sythe then slammed into the tank and sliced through the turret, the tank stopped momentarily, then drove forward. But as it did, the turrent came loose and fell off the back of the tank, Syther then drew his hand back once again, then threw an explosive sythe at the tank, it flew into the hole where the turret used to be and exploded. Blowing the tank up.

More tanks began to enter the west end of the compound, hundreds more of enemy soldiers as well, Syther was beginning to feel weak, for he had never used this much of his power, in such a short time span. Neither he, nor any of the other brotherhood mutants would be able to continue fighting at this rate, they'd soon run out of energy and become too weak to fight.

"Too many...There's TOO MANY!!" Syther screamed angrily, the brotherhood mutants were putting up a good fight, but were outnumbered 5 to 1.

Meanwhile back in Osaka, Fujimoto and the others finished their task and had collected 3 duffle bags full of money and 1 duffle bag full of blue pills from a black painted factory with the brotherhoods bright red emblem painted on the side.

"So this is what he wanted us to get." Flea said, as he hauled a large duffle bag back to the van. As they neared the van, Angel could hear the vans radio alarm going off, someone was trying to contact them.

Angel dropped the duffel bag he was carrying and ran towards the van, he then opened the door and answered the radio.

"Yes?" Angel said, a terrified voice then hurridly answered.

"This is the brotherhood compound!, We are under attack!!" the voice said, Angel could hear screaming, explosions, and gunfire going off in the background.

"Oh my god..." Angel said, he then turned to the others, "The brotherhood compound is under attack!, get over here NOW!!"

Fujimoto, Flea and Quakes eyes all shot opened and then all dropped their duffle bags and ran towards the van. They too then heard the gunfire, explosions and screaming going on.

"We're got to get back there, Deluge and Syther are there." Fujimoto despretly cried, the others nodded.

"Ok, ok." Angel said, hanging up the radio, he then climbed into the drivers seat and was about to start the van. "No...no, no, this is too slow, we'll never get there in time."
He then hopped out of the van and ran around to the back doors, he then began to rummage around the van, seemingly looking for something.

"Come on!, we're wasting time here Angel!!" Flea screamed as he paced back and forth.

"Found it!" Angel yelled back, he then pulled out a small black case, opened it and pulled out a pair of goggles and a small breathing apperatus, then handed them to Fujimoto.
"Put this on and quick.", Fujimoto nodded and quickly put them on.

Angel then tore off his trenchcoat and extended large white wings outwards, Fujimoto instinctivly standing inplace infront of him.

"Now, I'm going to fly as fast as I can, which is far too fast for you to breath normally, and far too dangerous for your bare eyes to handle." Angel said as he wrapped his arms around Fujimotos waist. Fujimoto nodded quickly, Angel then flapped his wings very fast and quickly gained altitude, As Fujimoto looked down she saw Quake slammed both hands into the concrete road, the ground shook, then began to break apart in a circle around where he was standing, Flea then stepped beside him and the large piece of rock he and flea were standing on began to levitate off the ground and float in the air, it then tilted forward and began to fly back to Tokyo at an amazing speed.

Angel then began to fly back towards Tokyo as well, Fujimoto was terrified as she looked down at the ground below, it was flying by at what must of been atleast 200 miles an hour. Much much faster then she had flown with angel during their trip into Tokyo. But she couldn't focus on being afraid, as she knew Deluge and Syther must be in trouble. Fujimoto and her fellow brotherhood friends then continued to race back to the compound.

Back at the compound, the fierce fighting continued, Deluge and Syther met up in the middle of the carnage and fought side by side, a large group of 30 soldiers mowed down 2 female students who were running away, Syther screamed angrily, then threw 2 large sythes, one after the other, each exploded in the middle of the group of enemy soldiers and sent them flying.

Both Syther and Deluge were exhausted, their energy levels low and their bodies aching.

"Deluge!!" A voice called out, Deluge looked behind her and saw Boa. "The Children, the mutant children are still inside the school, go inside and protect them, get them away from the compound!!"

"Oh no, the children!" Deluge said, she and Syther then broke off into a run, dodging bullets and tank shell explosions that were going off all around them.

Overlord watched the mayhem from the top balcony of his mansion, he then spotted Deluge and Syther heading towards the school. He, himself then began to head inside and make his way there as well.

Inside the school, Zippo, the kindergarten teacher was leading his group of kindergarten kids through the halls, an enemy solider then rounded the corner. Zippo then set that soldier on fire with his fire abilities, the soldier screamed and ran around while on fire, causing the little children to cry.

"Please don't cry, I had no other choice." Zippo said to his young students, "Now come on, we're almost there."

Zippo then lead his little students into the science room, and began to move desks and other items out of the way, soon he found what he was looking for, a secret emergency hatch, that lead into a secret tunnel system that headed north, away from the compound. As Zippo began to help his students into the open hatch, he heard many footsteps and shouting, slowly growing louder and getting closer, enemy soldiers were on their way.

"Quickly my young pupils, into the hatch, once inside run as fast as you can." Zippo said, "This tunnel will take you away from the compound, to safety."

"Teacher, please come with us." one of the young female students pleaded.

"I'm sorry, but I cannot, I must stay behind to seal this hatch, so they cannot pursue you." Zippo said, he then bent down and gave the young girl a hug. "Good-bye my students, take care."

"This way, at the end of the hall!!" A soldiers voice shouted.

"Now go!, Run fast, RUN!!" Zippo yelled to his students as he pushed the last student down the hatch, closed it and then used his fire abilites to melt the handle and seal the hatch shut.

Zippo then stood up, turned around and faced the soldiers as they quickly took aim at him, Zippo raised both hands and two streams of fire came out of his hands and engulfed two soldiers, the other 4 dodged the stream of fire and began to open fire, bullets hit Zippo as he screamed in pain and fell back, slowly dying.

The soldiers were about to finish Zippo off when a stream of water slammed into the backs of the soldiers and threw them forward, 4 small sythes then flew into the room and decapitated the fallen soldiers.

Deluge and Syther then appeared and saw the fallen schoolteacher,

"Hang in there, we'll help you." Deluge said as she and Syther approached Zippo.

"No no, it's too late." Zippo said, Deluge lowered her head sadly.

"Where are the children?" Syther asked.

"I managed to save the kindergarten children." he said weakly. "But the others..."

"The other children?" Deluge asked, Zippo nodded his head.

"They're in the gym, barricaded in the equipment room. There were too many soldiers for me to reach them, right now they're getting ready to blow the door..." Zippo said.

"We've got to get to them before that happens!" Deluge shouted, Syther nodded.

"Please go now, Save...them...from...." Zippos head then fell back, he was dead.

"Come on Deluge, he's dead, we have to get moving." Syther said, tugging Deluge away by the arm as she looked back at the brave schoolteacher who had just sacrificed himself to save his beloved school children.

Only a small handful of brotherhood mutants remained as the fighting continued, the human army just had the superior firepower and larger force. The brotherhoods compound was destroyed and many of it's mutant residents were dead or dying, the human army still very strong.

Back in the school, Deluge and Syther had reached the gym doors. Deluge then placed her hand against the door. And ever so carefully, pushed the door open and peered inside. She saw 50 soldiers standing in the gymnasium, wiring explosives to the equipment room door, soon they would blow the door open and kill the remaining mutant school children.

"These humans are so ruthless!" growled Syther, Deluge nodded.

Deluge then looked around and saw 2 water fountains outside the gym, she quickly ran towards then and examined them.

"Syther!" Deluge called out, Syther quickly apporached her, "Cut the two water taps off with one of your sythes." Syther nodded and created a tiny sythe at the end of one of his index finger, which he then flicked at the fountain taps, slicing them off.

Water began to pour out of the broken taps, Deluge gathered as much as she could and it began to curl around her body in a figure 8 form, getting larger and larger till it was twice size of her body.

"Ok, ready?" Deluge asked as she moved towards the door, Syther nodded and kicked the doors open, surprising the soldiers. Deluge then brought her hands over her head and all the water flowed upwards, she then threw her hands forward and all the water flew towards the soldiers like a giant wave crashing into the beach, the wave slammed into them and engulfed the soldiers. Deluge then gathered all the water into a giant sphere, with the soldiers trapped in the middle, the soldiers kicking and thrashing about inside, Deluge waited until the soldiers stopped moving and thrashing about, before releasing the sphere and letting all the water spill all over the floor.

"Ok, let's get the kids and get out of here." Deluge said, Syther nodded and ran towards the door. Both he and deluge then began to frantically pound on the door.

"Open up!" Deluge commanded "It's Deluge and Syther, we're with the mutant brotherhood!"

"Are the bad men gone?" A child voiced out

"Yes, they're gone, now open up, we have to get you to safety!" Deluge shouted, the door opened and 10 small children exited the equipment room and met up with Deluge and Syther.

"Thank goodness your all safe!" Deluge said as she hugged some of the school children.

"AHH!" one of the kids screamed, "look out!", Deluge and Syther quickly turned around and saw an enemy soldier who had not drowned get up and pick up his assault rifle and take aim at the group of kids. Syther quickly stood up and ran infront of the group, while drawing his hand back, the soldier then pulled the trigger and began to open fire, just as Syther threw his hand forward, throwing a sythe at the soldier.

The sythe sliced the soldier in half, The soldier stood still for a moment, then his body split into two and fell to the floor.

"Syther!" Deluge cried out, quickly running towards Syther as he staggered around, 2 bullets hit him in the right shoulder and one in the gut, he was bleeding severly.

"Don't worry about me, just get the kids out of here." Syther said weakly, Deluge shook her head.

"No, too many have died" Deluge said as she tore the sleeves of her shirt off and wrapped then tightly around Sythers shoulder, "and I am not going to lose anyone else!!", Deluge then supported Syther on her shoulder as she guided the school kids to a nearby emergency hatch.

Just as they reached the hatch, Syther passed out from blood lose, his body going limp.

"Damn it Syther, don't you die on me!" Deluge screamed, using all her strength to support his weight.

Just then Overlord appeared in the doorway behind the group.

"Overlord!" Deluge said happily, "I'm glad your here, please help us, we have to get the children to safety."

However, 2 human soldiers appeared on either side of him, Deluges eyes growing wide in disbelief. Overlord then nodded his head at to the soldiers and they opened fire, mowing down the schoolchildren in a hail of gunfire.

"NO!, You bastard!" Deluge said as she let go of Syther and ran towards Overlord, a single gunshot then rang out as Overlord shot her in the stomach with a handgun. Deluge stopped, looked down at her wound, then back at Overlord, Overlord smiled slightly then pulled the trigger again, this time Deluge fell back and hit the ground.

Deluge lifted her head and looked sadly at Overlord as he approached her, then loomed over her fallen body.

"Why?" Deluge asked, Overlord squatted down next to her.

"It was necessary." Overlord said plainly, "This attack on our compound by humans will be just the nudge we need to launch a full scale war against the mutants."

Deluge shook her head, still not understanding him.

"But we trusted you, I trusted you...you were like a father to me when you took me in." Deluge said.

"And that's why it was such a hard choice to pick you to sacrifice for our cause." Overlord said, taking a handkerchief out of his pocket and wiping away some blood that was on Deluges lips.

"But you see, you were the only logical choice, your respected, well loved and admired by everyone. Imagine the amount of rage and hatred that will generate from the surviving brotherhood mutants, towards the human race." Overlord said "Mutants powers also increase dramatically when used with hatred and rage, Once the others arrive back and see our haven destroyed by humans, they will be even more powerful then they've ever been."

Deluge glared up at him and tried to use the last of her energy to attack him with her mutant powers, however Overlord grabbed her by the wrist. His hand then began to glow a bright yellow and Deluge felt really strange, almost like she was being drained of all her energy. Soon Overlord released his grip from her wrist, upon doing so, Deluge tried once again to attack him, but could not summon water to her.

"What did you do to me?" Deluge asked, unable to use her mutant powers.

"Is this what you wanted to do?" Overlord asked, opening the palm of his hand, some water that was on the ground then rose up and formed a sphere of water in his hand.

"You stole my powers!" Deluge growled angrily

Overlord nodded and tossed away the sphere of water,

"And what of the other?" one of the soldier asked, pointing at Syther who was still unconsious.

"We'll leave one alive, a witness to the devistation and destruction caused by the human race." Overlord said, Overlord then stood up and looked down at the helpless figure of Deluge.

"Farewell Deluge, you and the other brave brotherhood mutants killed today, have just saved the mutant race." Overlord said, taking out his handgun once again and cocking it back, then aimed it down at Deluge.

"But you promised us...you promised to take care of us, you promised to save us." Deluge said sadly, a tear flowing down her cheek.

"I know Deluge...I know." Overlord said, he then pulled the trigger back once more, the last gunshot of the attack on the mutant brotherhood compound rang out louder and echoed longer then anyother.

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« Reply #53 on: March 19, 2007, 02:31:49 AM »
Chapter 36- Accension

Overlord holstered his gun, took off his belt, gun and holster included and handed it over to one of the soldiers.

"What now sir?" One of the soliders asked, Overlord began to tear his shirt apart, and rubbed some dirt on his face, chest and hands.

"Now, I want you to make it look like we put up a goodfight." Overlord said, he then braced himself. "So go ahead, hit me with all you've got."

The two soldiers looked at eachother, "I mean it, I want you to punch me, kick me and just rough me up.", One soldier took a deep breath, nodded and threw a punch at Overlord, which hit him hard in the face. Overlord spit out some blood and looked back at the soldier.

"Is that all you've got?" asked Overlord, the two soldiers then let loose on Overlord and began to punch and kick him, Once Overlord fell to the ground, they then began to beat him with their rifle butts.

After a while, Overlord was badly beaten,  he had 2 black eyes and many injuries to his face and body. He then screamed loudly and held out his hand, one of the soldiers began to rise off the ground, kicking and screaming, the other fell back and shook in horror as Overlord crushed the soldier with his powers of Telekinesis, he then stood up and glared at the other soldier.

"Don't look so surprised, I never said I wouldn't attack you back." Overlord said evilly, he then opened him palm and held it out towards the soldier, a red ball of energy began to form in the center of his palm and grow larger.

"But sir!" The soldier cried out, overlord then fired a beam of red energy at the soldier, which disintigrated him.

Overlord then reached down to his waist and grabbed a radio, he then raised it to his lips and spoke, "Commander Kage."

"Yes sir?" Commander Kage responded.

"You've done well, now I want you and your men to quickly pull back and head back to your hometown base. I'm sure by now, my other pupils will be on their way back to the brotherhood Compound. I want you out and far away from here, before they get back."

"Yes sir!." Commander Kage responded, he then began to loudly blow a shrill whistle 2 times, and the human troops began to leave the destroyed brotherhood compound and head back to their base.

"Sir..." said Commander Kage.

"Yes?" Overlord responded.

"What about my men." asked Commander Kage, "We have done as you asked, will we be safe from this mutant vs human war?"

"You have served us well, So you do not need to be concerned about your well being, I give you my word, I will...take very good care of you and your men." said Overlord, an evil grin spreading across his face.

"Thank you sir, when the war starts, we are always on your side." said Commander Kage, before shutting off the radio and heading back to his homebase with the rest of his quickly retreating army.

Overlord then sat and waited the return of his remaining pupils.

Meanwhile, Angel, Fujimoto, Flea and Quake were still on their way back to the mutant brotherhood. On the horizon, they could see 5 very large, wide colums of thick black smoke rising skywards in the distance.

"Please don't tell me that's our home..." Fujimoto prayed, as she held on tight to Angel.

But her worst fears were realized as they got closer and closer to the compound. The smoke was infact coming from their home, many of the buildings inside the compound were destroyed and still on fire. Scattered about the compound, were the bodies of dozens of Brotherhood mutants, as well as hundreds of dead human soldiers, 3 destroyed tanks and one downed army helicopter.

"Oh no...." said Fujimoto, Angel then quickly landed and let go of Fujimoto, Flea and Quake quickly set down next to them.

Everyone took a few shaky steps inside the compound, then dropped to their knees in the center of the compound and began to cry heavily as they looked around at their destroyed home, and saw the dead bodies of their fellow mutants.

Just then they heard a loud rumble, and all of their eyes shot to the right, and in the entrance to the school, they saw Overlord, supporting an unconcious Syther on his shoulder.

"Overlord!" Angel cried out, he and everyone else began to run over to him

"What happened here?" asked Fujimoto as they neared Overlord, all of them stood infront of Overlord as he laid down Syther.

"Master, your hurt." Said Angel, "Please, let me heal you!", Angel then began to move his hands towards Overlord, but Overlord swatted them away with his hand.

"No!" roared Overlord, "I do not want to be heal, I want to keep these injuries as a reminder of how cruel humanity can be."

Angel nodded, "But, please heal Syther, he's badly injured." said Overlord.

Angel quickly ran over to Syther and began checking him over.

 "Yes sir!, I'll heal him right away." Angel, then placed his hands on Sythers chest, a glowing white light surrounded Angels hands as he began to heal Syther, Soon Sythers wounds were all closed up and healed, his eyes then began to open slowly.

"what happened?" asked Syther, as Angel helped him sit up, they all remained quiet as Overlord then began to explain.

"The humans...somehow they found out about our mutant haven and...attacked us." said Overlord, "They came at us with everything they had, artillery, tanks, helicopters, hundreds of soldiers...we did not stand a chance."

"How did you survive?" asked Flea.

"It was not easy, once we realized we did not stand much of a chance out in the open, the few of us who survived, rallied inside the school, that's where we made our last stand."
Overlord explained.

"Overlord..." said Quake, Overlord looked over at him.

"Where is Deluge?" asked Quake, his voice cracking in sadness and fear, "Is she safe...please tell me she's alright."

Overlord closed his eyes, and lowered his head down towards the ground.

"I'm sorry Quake, but I regret to tell you that...she died in the attack."

Those words froze Quake, Fujimoto, Flea, Syther and Angels hearts, all were too shocked to say anything for a few moments.

"No...you mean she didn't survive!" cried Syther, Overlord shook her head.

"She put up a very valiant fight, But in the end...she did not make it." said Overlord sadly, Syther shook his head, got up and ran back inside the school, the others quickly followed him. Soon they arrived to where Deluges body lay, next to the school children she tried to save.

Quake ran to her body and knelt beside her, her then grabbed her hand and began to sob loudly, Fujimoto and Flea slowly walked next to him, knelt down with him and rested their heads against his shoulders.

"I'm so sorry Quake..." said Fujimoto, "I know how much she ment to you."

Angel continued to stand in the doorway, too shocked and horrified to do or say anything.

"The humans...they were so merciless in their attack!" Angel suddely cried out, "They did not spare anyone....men...women...they even slaughtered innocent children!!."

Angel began to shake in rage, as he turned around and began to leave the school building, Fujimoto, flea, Syther and Overlord followed him. Angel burst through the schools doors and rushed outside, still shaking in extreme anger.

"I won't....let them...get away with this!!!" growled Angel, meanwhile dark black storm clouds began to roll in from all directions, circling clockwise above Angel. Everyone tilted their heads up skywards, as the bright white flashes of lightning began to fill the sky, accompanied by loud claps of thunder. Angel stood inplace, his fists clenched tightly together as he contined to breath heavily, growling loudly as well.

"What's going on?" asked Fujimoto, "It's not me who's creating this storm.."

"I don't know...but what's happening to Angel!" cried Flea, as he pointed towards Angel, Angels blond hair began to stand on end as he continued to breath deeply and growl in rage. dozens of more large bolts of lightning began to fill the sky, thunder echoed loudly.

The sky now look like an enormous strob light as dozens of lightning flashes per second filled the sky. Everyone continued to stare at Angel, rocks and dirt began to levitate off the ground all around Angel as he continued to become more and more enraged. They could see that he was changing, His wings spread out widely, and began to change back and forth between his normal Angellic white wings, to Arch Angels dark bat wings, his hair also quickly changing from Angels blonde hair to Arch Angels black hair.

Suddenly Angel through his head back and screamed at the top of his lungs in rage, 10 large lightning bolts decended from the sky and hit the ground in a circle pattern, around where Angel was standing, everyone looked away as the lightning striking the ground gave off a blinding flash of white light.

When they finally looked back at where Angel was standing, their mouths dropped open in deep shock. Angel was no longer there, nor was Arch Angel, an entirely new Mutant was standing before them.

This new mutant was completely different from both Arch Angel and Angel, this new mutant had long, blond spiked hair that stood on end with black tips, his muscles were much larger and more defined then either Angel or Arch Angel. He was about a foot taller then Angel or Arch Angel. His wings were much larger, longer and were black in color, And looked alot like Ravens or Crows wings. When the new Mutant turned around, he had neither blue eyes like Angel or Red eyes like Arch Angel, instead, his eyes were an emerald green, he also had a yellow light radiating around his body.

"Who...who are you?" asked Fujimoto, The new Mutant looked down at Fujimoto, a serious expression on his face.

"My name is Seraph." said the new Mutant, what shocked everyone the most was that he spoke with not one voice, but two at the same time. They could hear alittle of Angels voice and alittle of Archangels as well.

"Seraph..." Fujimoto replied back, she was both shocked beyond belief and alittle scared of this new mutant.

"What happened to Angel?" asked Flea, feeling scared for his friend.

"I think that is Angel...and Arch Angel." Syther said, "I don't know how, but they seemed to of somehow fused and become what we see now..."

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« Reply #54 on: March 19, 2007, 02:45:46 AM »
:yay: updates !!!

i was expecting Syther to overhear the conversation between Overlord and Deluge and eventually leak the secret out... but alas it didn't happen :(

Wow Seraph..

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« Reply #55 on: March 19, 2007, 03:20:40 AM »
^That would of greatly decreased the length of my fanfic, by about 20 chapters :P., if Syther overheard the conversation.

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« Reply #56 on: March 19, 2007, 03:52:56 AM »
^ Haha would have :lol:

Anyway great to see you updating your fic again :tfr9a7wg:

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« Reply #57 on: March 19, 2007, 06:00:52 AM »
I say again...damn that Overlord! :x


20 chapters? Holy fuck :o

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« Reply #58 on: March 19, 2007, 03:02:15 PM »
Why must the good and misunderstood die in the name of evil?

(Cause thats how we want it!)

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« Reply #59 on: March 19, 2007, 10:05:05 PM »
Ehhh!?? That was a fast response. I was surprised you post that quickly that I haven't read it yet. Darn!! If I should known. Don't worry. once I got my butt out of the office, I surely know what to do when I got home. See you later. XD

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