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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #220 on: April 16, 2008, 02:31:43 AM »
Chapter 76 – Regrets

Miki Fujimoto was standing off to the side of the mutant prison compound, her arms crossed, as she watched Havoc address the recently rescued mutant prisoners.  He was offering them a new life, as well as a chance at revenge against the humans who had imprisoned and caused them much physical and mental pain over the years. This was something Fujimoto expected to happen, and sure enough, it didn’t take much coaxing from Havoc to add a few hundred more mutants to their headmaster’s mutant army. However, even with these reinforcements, Miki felt no excitement. All she felt was worry and sadness for Ishibashi, who may have just lost someone very dear to him.
 
The sound of jet engines roaring overhead snapped her out of her thoughts, as she then turned her gaze to the sky and saw an entire fleet of Brotherhood switchblades de-cloaking, some settling down just outside the prison gates, while others continuously circled the skies above. Havoc then ushered their new recruits towards the waiting switchblades that would take them to the main Brotherhood encampment, where they would join the ranks of the Brotherhood army. However, amidst all the hustle, Fujimoto and her group made no effort to join them just yet. Fujimoto looked off to her right, where the unconscious Ishibashi lay; Doc kneeling beside him. Just as she was nearly finished healing his severe leg wound, Ishibashi suddenly awoke.
 
“Please just lay sti-” started Doc, but Ishibashi paid her no heed as he shoved her out of the way and began to rush towards the storehouse ruins where he last left Goto Maki. Once again, Fujimoto tried to block his reckless charge, but this time without even hesitating, he plowed right through her, leaving her sprawled on the ground as he continued to run full speed.
 
Flea and Syther started to chase after him, but Fujimoto raised her hand, a signal for them to stop. They obeyed and instead quickly rushed over to their leader and helped Fujimoto to her feet.
 
“There’s nothing we can do to stop him…so just let him go,” said Fujimoto. Though she hated the idea, she knew that he was just trying to find out if the girl he loved really died.
 
Ishibashi reached the doors of the storehouse and desperately bashed open the charred doors; the smell of burned flesh, wood and smoke was overpowering. He raised the front of his shirt over his mouth and nose and entered the storehouse. Once inside, he carefully stepped over the charred corpses of the dead mutants who died in the fire.
 
Just as he stepped over another corpse, he heard a metallic click from underneath his foot. His heart began to pound deeply in his chest as he slowly raised his foot and looked down. His heart sank when he saw a silver watch. He bent down, dusted some ashes from around the watch and looked at it. His eyes then slowly looked up and he saw a small, petite blackened skeleton lying next to the watch. He crawled towards it on his hands and knees and stared at the charred skeletal remains. They were the same size as Goto Maki.
 
A tear ran down Ishibashi’s face as he reached out his hand and touched the chin of the skeleton. Placing his hand on the cheek bone of the still warm skull, his sobs echoed loudly as he placed his forehead against the charred skull’s forehead. 
“I’m so sorry Gottsuan…” cried Ishibashi.
 

Fujimoto and her squad were waiting patiently by the side of the mutant prison. A few minutes later, Ishibashi emerged from the smoking storehouse. Miki watched as he glanced at something in his right hand before pocketing it into his prison issue outfit. She then started her way towards Ishibashi. Her squad tried to follow, but Fujimoto held up her hand and shook her head. She then continued on alone towards Ishibashi. Upon reaching him, she felt his grief as Ishibashi continued to stare at the ground sadly.
 
“Taka-san…” she said softly. Ishibashi raised his eyes and looked at Fujimoto, but his expression didn’t change.
 
“Mikitty…” said Ishibashi, as he finally recognizing her.
 
“Yes Taka-san, it’s me.” She then reached out and took his hands in hers.
 
“I just lost Gottsuan…” said Ishibashi, looking down at the ground.
 
“I’m sorry Taka-san, but you still have me,” she replied, tightening her grip around Ishibashi’s. “Listen, we’re about to head back to our encampment. It’s a place filled with our kind…and I want you to come with us.”
 
Ishibashi nodded his head, “Alright, I’ll come along…there’s nothing left for me here anymore.” Fujimoto then led him by the arm towards her squad’s switchblade.
 

Meanwhile, inside a small uninhabited island, Yuko Nakazawa wandered through the metallic hallways of the new S.M.A.T. hideout, making her way towards the medical facility. Upon arrival, she pushed her way through the swinging steel doors and met up with Koharu, who quickly stood up and saluted Commander Nakazawa.
 
“What’s the status of our people?” asked Nakazawa.
 
“I was able to free all of our comrades during the raid, but Goto Maki still hasn’t woken up,” Koharu reported.
 
She then stepped aside and Commander Nakazawa looked down at an unconscious Goto Maki. She had on an oxygen mask and was hooked up to a heart monitor. A steady beeping sound echoed around the room, indicating Goto’s pulse rate was stabilized.
 
“I only wish we had one of our medics here. We’d be able to heal her faster then,” sighed Commander Nakazawa.
 
“I don’t think she’s hurt too badly, Commander,” said Koharu. “I’m only glad I made it to her in time before…” trailing off at the end, as her mind drifted back to that all too horrific scene.

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Koharu had just rescued Ayaka Kimura from one of the storehouses inside the mutant prison. She was not sure whether to feel lucky that the prison was under attack by another force, thereby allowing her to phase through the walls undetected, or feel bad that she was only ordered to pull her own people out and not help anyone else. Thanks to the attack, the power supply to the suppression collars was deactivated and there was no danger of them exploding once they left the prison.
 
Ayaka and Koharu then reached the tree line of a nearby forest where Inaba, Maeda, and Tsuji were huddled together, crouched down for camouflage. Koharu then left Ayaka with the others and ran back towards the prison. As she ran, she saw numerous explosions going off, as the roar of jets flying overhead filled the air.
 
“It’s getting a little too hot here,” Koharu thought, so she took her radio off her belt and raised it to her lips.
 
“This is Koharu. We need immediate extraction from the mutant prison.”
 
The radio crackled, and Miyabi’s voice came on. “Roger that, we’re heading there now, ETA five minutes.”
 
“I need to find Goto-san before that and get her out of there.” Koharu thought, as she clipped the radio back onto her belt. Moments later, she reached the walls of the prison, running right through them, and into another storehouse. The scene was chaotic, as mutant prisoners were scrambling around inside the building screaming, trying to get out.
 
Koharu made her way through the crowds, calling Maki’s name over and over. She then spotted her by the front door, pounding on it relentlessly. Quickly, she ran through the crowd and grabbed Maki by the arm. Startled, Maki turned around and was both surprised and relieved to see Koharu.
 
“Koharu, what are you doing here?” Maki asked.
 
“No time to explain, we have to get out of here.”

Goto Maki nodded and began to follow Koharu through the crowd, but someone bumped into her. The force of the blow made her drop Ishibashi’s watch. She broke free from Koharu’s grip and went back to find it.
 
“Goto-san, what are you doing?” shouted Koharu. She then checked her watch and saw that her time was up; the S.M.A.T forces would be at the extraction point any minute.
 
“Just give me a second! I need to find something extremely important,” Maki shouted back, as she dropped to her hands and knees, desperately searching for the watch. A few seconds later, she found and grabbed it and quickly scrambled to her feet.
 
“I got it!” shouted Goto Maki.
 
**BOOM**
 
An extremely loud and powerful explosion rang out, the shockwave throwing all of the mutants off their feet. Others weren’t as lucky, as something crashed right on top of them. Luckily, Koharu’s reflexes made her automatically activate her mutant powers, as all the debris and bodies of falling mutants phased through. Despite all that occurred, she alone remained standing, shielding her face with her arms.
 
Looking to her right, Koharu saw that some sort of aircraft had crashed into the far side of the storehouse roof. Flames began to spread, but even more horrific was that there were mutants trapped underneath the wreckage, screaming for help. Others were on fire as they stumbled around, screaming in pain. All around her were unconscious mutant prisoners, knocked out from the explosion.
 
In the chaos that surrounded her, Koharu wanted to help them all but remembered that she didn’t have time and had orders to save her own people first. She instinctively rushed over to where she last saw Goto Maki. Spotting her lying unconscious on the ground, Koharu mustered up all of her strength and picked Maki up and began to drag her towards the back of the storehouse. They both then phased through the wall and out into the open to safety.
 
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Koharu then snapped back to reality and looked over at Commander Nakazawa.
 
“I just wish I could have done more to save the others trapped in that building,” Koharu sadly muttered.
 
“I know Koharu, but we didn’t count on another force being there while we were,” Nakazawa replied.
 
Just then a soft moan disturbed the air. Startled, Commander Nakazawa and Koharu looked down at Maki as they saw her eyelids twitch slightly then open.
 
“Glad to see that you’re finally awake.” Commander Nakazawa spoke out first.
 
“W-W-Where…?” Goto asked, still disorientated from the explosion.
 
Nakazawa chuckled, “Don’t worry, you just rest up, and we’ll explain everything later.”
 
Goto nodded and blinked a few times, getting used to the lighting, when a familiar voice spoke up.

“How is she?”
 
Goto turned her head and saw Mika Todd step up next to Commander Nakazawa.
 
“Mi…Mika?” Goto whispered softly, as her eyelids suddenly felt heavy.
 
“Yes, it’s me,” Mika replied. “Now, just go to sleep. You need some rest.”
 
Goto nodded, closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep, the steady sound of her heart monitor beeping in the background.
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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #221 on: April 16, 2008, 04:09:03 AM »
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Miki Fujimoto was standing off to the side of the mutant prison compound, her arms crossed, as she watched Havoc address the recently rescued mutant prisoners.  He was offering them a new life, as well as a chance at revenge against the humans who had imprisoned and caused them much physical and mental pain over the years. This was something Fujimoto expected to happen, and sure enough, it didn’t take much coaxing from Havoc to add a few hundred more mutants to their headmaster’s mutant army.
In other words, Overlord's army just got a few hundred more sacrificial lambs it could send out.  :thumbdown:




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Ishibashi suddenly awoke.
 
“Please just lay sti-” started Doc, but Ishibashi paid her no heed as he shoved her out of the way and began to rush towards the storehouse ruins where he last left Goto Maki. Once again, Fujimoto tried to block his reckless charge, but this time without even hesitating, he plowed right through her, leaving her sprawled on the ground as he continued to run full speed.
 
Flea and Syther started to chase after him, but Fujimoto raised her hand, a signal for them to stop. They obeyed and instead quickly rushed over to their leader and helped Fujimoto to her feet.
 
“There’s nothing we can do to stop him…so just let him go,” said Fujimoto.
It's natural instinct, human or mutant. Regardless of what anyone tells you, it's never quite "real" until you've seen the proof yourself.




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Fujimoto and her squad were waiting patiently by the side of the mutant prison. A few minutes later, Ishibashi emerged from the smoking storehouse. Miki watched as he glanced at something in his right hand before pocketing it into his prison issue outfit. She then started her way towards Ishibashi. Her squad tried to follow, but Fujimoto held up her hand and shook her head. She then continued on alone towards Ishibashi. Upon reaching him, she felt his grief as Ishibashi continued to stare at the ground sadly.
 
...
 
“I just lost Gottsuan…” said Ishibashi, looking down at the ground.
 
“I’m sorry Taka-san, but you still have me,” she replied, tightening her grip around Ishibashi’s. “Listen, we’re about to head back to our encampment. It’s a place filled with our kind…and I want you to come with us.”
 
Ishibashi nodded his head, “Alright, I’ll come along…there’s nothing left for me here anymore.” Fujimoto then led him by the arm towards her squad’s switchblade.
Crap. Taka-san alone will be a force to be reckoned with if he joins Overlord's cause. But then, when he sees what Overlord's trying to do, will he honestly go along with it? If they have to face the S.M.A.T. forces...will he fight them?




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Meanwhile, inside a small uninhabited island, Yuko Nakazawa wandered through the metallic hallways of the new S.M.A.T. hideout, making her way towards the medical facility. Upon arrival, she pushed her way through the swinging steel doors and met up with Koharu, who quickly stood up and saluted Commander Nakazawa.
 
“What’s the status of our people?” asked Nakazawa.
 
“I was able to free all of our comrades during the raid, but Goto Maki still hasn’t woken up,” Koharu reported.
Eh? :O

...

EH??? :o

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EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!?!? :OMG:

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She's alive? :cry:



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She then stepped aside and Commander Nakazawa looked down at an unconscious Goto Maki. She had on an oxygen mask and was hooked up to a heart monitor. A steady beeping sound echoed around the room, indicating Goto’s pulse rate was stabilized.
SHE'S ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVE!!!
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Koharu had just rescued Ayaka Kimura from one of the storehouses inside the mutant prison.

...

Thanks to the attack, the power supply to the suppression collars was deactivated and there was no danger of them exploding once they left the prison.
OF COURSE!!!  :w00t:




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In the chaos that surrounded her, Koharu wanted to help them all but remembered that she didn’t have time and had orders to save her own people first. She instinctively rushed over to where she last saw Goto Maki. Spotting her lying unconscious on the ground, Koharu mustered up all of her strength and picked Maki up and began to drag her towards the back of the storehouse. They both then phased through the wall and out into the open to safety.
Oh, Maki must have dropped the watch during the explosion that happened when the aircraft crashed into the building.

...

Having to leave the others behind must undoubtedly have been hard on Koharu. No one should have to bear that type of burden.  :(




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“Glad to see that you’re finally awake.” Commander Nakazawa spoke out first.
 
“W-W-Where…?” Goto asked, still disorientated from the explosion.
 
Nakazawa chuckled, “Don’t worry, you just rest up, and we’ll explain everything later.”
 
Goto nodded and blinked a few times, getting used to the lighting, when a familiar voice spoke up.

“How is she?”
 
Goto turned her head and saw Mika Todd step up next to Commander Nakazawa.
 
“Mi…Mika?” Goto whispered softly, as her eyelids suddenly felt heavy.
 
“Yes, it’s me,” Mika replied. “Now, just go to sleep. You need some rest.”
 
Goto nodded, closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep, the steady sound of her heart monitor beeping in the background.
Mika's a healer, right? It's been 76 chapters so I'm a little fuzzy. :P



Maki had better get well. For sure there's at least 2 people on "the other side" that will undoubtedly be surprised, and happy to see that she's alive. :yep:

*cough cough* FORESHADOWING *cough cough*

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #222 on: April 16, 2008, 06:51:06 AM »
Wow, GREAT chapter. I'm so happy that Gocchin's still alive!!  :muffin:

Eh, since when was Mika in there? I don't remember her being in there... XD
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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #223 on: April 16, 2008, 02:23:37 PM »
Hehehe...good memory. ^^ This is the first time Mika Todd appears in the story. So her abilities (if ever) have yet to be seen.  :otomerika:

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #224 on: April 16, 2008, 07:08:33 PM »
I wonder how mutant relations are in the rest of the world since Mika left the U.S. and went to Japan.

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #225 on: April 16, 2008, 09:12:58 PM »
Good point...we never even thought of what was happening outside Japan... but wouldn't that complicate the story even more?  XD

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #226 on: April 17, 2008, 02:49:39 AM »
^ Probably. If he tried tackling it all, Tyler would end up writing something longer than the LOTR Trilogy. XD

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #227 on: April 17, 2008, 10:20:37 PM »
And you all know that if I had time and effort, I probably would tackle that issue...but not right now, let's just stick to the story and Japan :D

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« Reply #228 on: April 18, 2008, 12:02:24 AM »
ehehehe....~ right~ :muffin:

BTW, JFC, your reaction to when the storehouse burst into flames in Chapter 75 was priceless. :lol: As well as when Maki was discovered alive yet unconscious in the medical facility.  :twisted: ;)

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #229 on: April 18, 2008, 03:33:48 AM »
^ We aim to please. :D

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #230 on: April 19, 2008, 06:57:36 AM »
Before I continue, I just want to send out a great big THANK YOU!! to everyone who has read the fanfic to this part...I origionally intended for this story to be as long as my others and finish around 10, 15 or at MOST 20 chapters....but it turned out to be longer then that by ALOT!!. I can tell you now, the chances of this chapter being over 100 chapters is VERY high.

And one more thing, this story is totally NOT my own, I often talk with Sakura_momusu on MSN Messenger and we collaberate and share ideas, information, story plots, new mutant powers. Before I posted, he usually suggests parts of my story that could use correcting, and he fixes it. And the story becomes that much better. So this fan fic would be 50% mine and 50% Sakura Momusu's.
I write, He gives Ideas, looks over and fixes up the rough spots, sends it back to me, THEN I post.

So before you thank me anymore, thank Sakura as well, It's my story, as much as it is his.
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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #231 on: April 20, 2008, 07:44:48 AM »
Lol...I'm flattened...erm...flattered~  :P

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #232 on: August 08, 2008, 01:53:12 AM »
Chapter 77 - Invention
 
Nakazawa and Koharu were walking through the metal corridors of the new S.M.A.T hideout. Compared to their old HQ back in Tokyo, this place was much more advanced; this even more reinforced when a small five-foot tall robot on wheels whizzed by the two of them.
 
"It feels like we stepped into some sort of futuristic time zone, doesn’t it Commander??" Koharu pondered.
 
Nakazawa nodded as she panned her gaze around the corridors. Eventually, they reached their destination, as two large 20-foot high, electronic sliding doors loomed before them. The doors slid open, as they entered into an enormous hangar, approximately as wide and as long as two football fields.
 
All around the hanger were dozens of robots, ranging from a five to an impressive ten-foot tall variety, all tending to the three S.M.A.T’s aircraft, while others buzzed around the hangar, carrying gear, tools and other instruments.
 
To the far left, about half a dozen robots were repairing Risako’s badly damaged S.M.A.T aircraft. Ayaka was helping as well, instructing the robots what to do.
 
Nakazawa panned her neck around, in awe over the breathtaking sight of their new hanger. The entire place was constructed of high-grade metallic walls and ceilings, with so many gadgets, gizmos, weapons and tools that she thought she’d only see in Sci-fi movies. However, she knew that these were no dream or illusion. Somehow, she knew that everything in the hanger worked perfectly.
 
Nakazawa then looked to the left and smiled at the sight of Miyabi and Risako playing with one of the robots. They played with it like how children would play with a dog.
 
Miyabi reached out her hand, "Shake hands, shake hands!" she giggled.
 
The tiny robot reached out one of its tiny appendages as Miyabi took its hand in hers and shook hands with the tiny robot. This caused both of the girls to break into hysterical laughter.
 
Beaming at the sight, Nakazawa and Koharu then heard a loud hiss, followed by mechanical whirling as the large main hanger doors opened, announcing the arrival of two individuals. Goto Maki was on her feet once again, though she still seemed a bit wobbly, as Mika Todd was supporting her on her shoulder.
 
Nakazawa and Koharu made their way towards the two arrivals. Upon approach, Goto Maki made an attempt to salute Nakazawa, but her hand trembled and felt heavy. Nakazawa shook her head.
 
"No need for that, save your energy," said Nakazawa, smiling.
 
Goto Maki returned her smile, then looked over at Koharu and smiled once again as she waved her over. Koharu nodded and walked towards Maki, who reached out and gave her a big, warm hug, which she too returned.
 
"I have you to thank for saving my life... I thought for sure I was a goner in that cell," Maki said, breaking the embrace
 
Koharu nodded, "So did I, after that jet crashed into the store house we were in."
 
Maki then had a worried look on her face as she recalled something. "The watch, did you find the watch I had?"
 
"Watch?" Koharu quickly thought back but couldn’t remember seeing any watch. "No, I’m sorry. I don’t remember seeing any watch."
 
Maki grabbed Koharu’s shoulders. "Please, try to remember, do you know what happened to it," Maki pleaded, shaking Koharu.
 
Nakazawa rushed forward and broke the two up, "She just said she didn’t know anything." said Nakazawa, raising her voice.
 
"...I’m sorry, but you have no idea how important that watch was. It belonged to Ishibashi; he gave it to me for safekeeping...he...he might not even know that I’m still alive if I left it behind," said Goto Maki.
 
"Oh dear...I see why you were so worried then," said Koharu. "He might think you didn’t survive that explosion."
 
Goto Maki nodded and sighed, as her eyes looked up towards the ceiling, then around the vast hanger, finally realizing a burning question in her mind. "So...what is this place?" she asked.
 
Mika stepped forward, "I said I’d explain later, and now that we’re all here I’ll tell you."
 
"Ayaka and I have been keeping in constant contact, all throughout the formation of the S.M.A.T forces. She had told me about all the great things you girls have done for us mutants, particularly how you were coming close to changing the whole stereotype of how all mutants are dangerous, and had won over the trust of many people. Unfortunately, I did not have that courage when I discovered my own mutant abilities a couple of years ago. I was so afraid of what others might think of my new abilities that I left H!P and headed to America, under the whole pretense that I was going there to study music. However, I went there just to isolate myself, so I could have time to come to terms with what I was. Ayaka and I kept in contact with each other the whole time though. It was a very big surprise to find out how many of you were mutants just like me. If I had known, I might not have left. At that time, I thought I was the only mutant monster in the whole world.
 
A couple of days ago, I got an urgent message from Ayaka, which told me about the whole situation between you and Japan’s police and military. Upon hearing the news, I immediately departed for Japan on my personal jet. During the flight, I was watching the news as well, and heard of the order to arrest all H!P girls. Since I used to be one, I knew that it was far too dangerous to actually land in Japan. So I had my crew set down on a small island about 100 km east of Japan. At that point, I immediately began construction on this island. Thanks to the help of my army of robot inventions, who worked tirelessly 24 hours a day, we’ve completed this new, extremely high-tech headquarters for you and your S.M.A.T forces."
 
Koharu and Nakazawa nodded, "Um...so how many robots do you have here?" Koharu asked.
 
Mika placed her hand against her chin and thought, "Hmm...I’d say about 1,000, give or take a couple hundred."
 
"Impressive!" exclaimed Nakazawa, "And just how did you come to have that many?" Mika smiled then looked towards Ayaka, who noticed her and waved back, a monkey wrench in hand, and her face covered in grease and oil as she continued to work on Risako’s aircraft.
 
"Like Ayaka, I am a techno-path," said Mika, "Except my abilities are far more advanced. I can create some of the most complex inventions with mere thought alone. Here, watch."
 
Mika took a few steps back to a clear area. She then extended her right hand outwards, closing her eyes, and began to wave it in a circular motion. A large, oval-shaped beam of light began to form in front of Mika’s hand, growing steadily. To the girls’ amazement, a small 5-foot tall robot emerged from the light and began to pan its small robotic head around the room, before rolling off towards Ayaka.
 
"Wow...I think that’s quite possibly the coolest mutant ability I have ever seen!!" said Koharu.
 
"I have yet to find any limit to the type or size of invention I could create," said Mika, "But, I do tend to get slight headaches after I create larger inventions with my mind. They might get worse if I created more, so I’ve never forced myself to continue if I was tired. Instead, my robot companions also built other robots to help speed up the construction of our new hideout. We have everything we could possibly need to stay here for over 20 years if we needed-"
 
Suddenly, Koharu’s stomach growled loudly, interrupting Mika and causing all of the girls to break into laughter.
 
"Uh...so, does this place have a cafeteria?" asked Koharu, her cheeks turning bright red.
 
Mika chuckled, "Of course, follow me. That’s most likely where everyone else is." Mika then led the rest of the girls towards the lower levels of the S.M.A.T’s island base.


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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #233 on: August 08, 2008, 02:22:49 AM »
Heheheh...I finally see an update to this thread. ^^ *waits for JFC's "real time" comments*  :love: XD

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #234 on: August 08, 2008, 05:41:38 PM »
Oh dear.  Having a weekend and seen that nobody is in front of the computer made me stumble an ancient scripture that I haven't read for a long time and I even manage to post earlier than JFC.  :lol: :lol:

Hi there folks. It's been a while. Wow. seeing these story again made me realize that I missed 3 to 4 chapter I think? But I manage to finished it. I'm happy to see that the girls are alright and wow. Mika's a Tech path. Yep. I think that power was cool in deed. BTW. Any thoughts of Erika and Yui's Powers?  I thought I could see them used it when I read. hehehehehe.
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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #235 on: August 09, 2008, 07:38:45 PM »
AHAHAHAHAHA!

I've been reading and re-reading the fanfic for a few weeks now.

I was getting sad. Thought you wouldn't be continuing.

It sorta killed me.

But you aren't/haven't! HUZZAH!


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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #236 on: August 13, 2008, 09:59:26 AM »
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Nakazawa and Koharu were walking through the metal corridors of the new S.M.A.T hideout. Compared to their old HQ back in Tokyo, this place was much more advanced; this even more reinforced when a small five-foot tall robot on wheels whizzed by the two of them.
New hideout? Already? Damn that was fast.



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To the far left, about half a dozen robots were repairing Risako’s badly damaged S.M.A.T aircraft. Ayaka was helping as well, instructing the robots what to do.
Ah of course. With Ayaka's abilities, she could have dozens of robots doing all the work 'round the clock.



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Maki then had a worried look on her face as she recalled something. "The watch, did you find the watch I had?"
 
"Watch?" Koharu quickly thought back but couldn’t remember seeing any watch. "No, I’m sorry. I don’t remember seeing any watch."
 
Maki grabbed Koharu’s shoulders. "Please, try to remember, do you know what happened to it," Maki pleaded, shaking Koharu.
 
Nakazawa rushed forward and broke the two up, "She just said she didn’t know anything." said Nakazawa, raising her voice.
 
"...I’m sorry, but you have no idea how important that watch was. It belonged to Ishibashi; he gave it to me for safekeeping...he...he might not even know that I’m still alive if I left it behind," said Goto Maki.
 
"Oh dear...I see why you were so worried then," said Koharu. "He might think you didn’t survive that explosion."
Maki knows how hard Taka-san and the others would take it if she died. Makes sense that she'd want to let them know that she's okay.



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*MIKA'S STORY*
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...I see. 



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Koharu and Nakazawa nodded, "Um...so how many robots do you have here?" Koharu asked.
 
Mika placed her hand against her chin and thought, "Hmm...I’d say about 1,000, give or take a couple hundred."
 
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"Like Ayaka, I am a techno-path," said Mika, "Except my abilities are far more advanced. I can create some of the most complex inventions with mere thought alone.
Holy crap! :o SUGOI!

That explains how she got her "private jet". :P



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"Wow...I think that’s quite possibly the coolest mutant ability I have ever seen!!" said Koharu.
Oh yeah. Quite possibly so. :yep:



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Suddenly, Koharu’s stomach growled loudly, interrupting Mika and causing all of the girls to break into laughter.
 
"Uh...so, does this place have a cafeteria?" asked Koharu, her cheeks turning bright red.
 
Mika chuckled, "Of course, follow me. That’s most likely where everyone else is."
XD




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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #237 on: August 15, 2008, 09:03:36 PM »
i love the story so much.. i hope you update again soon :)

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #238 on: August 16, 2008, 09:12:59 AM »
I myself as the author might have to re-read the entire fanfic from the very start to remember how the entire story goes. It's been so long since I started this fanfic that I almost forget how the entire story goes. :oops: :oops: :oops:

If you can believe...I started this fanfic back in OCT/2005  :O :O :O :O :shocked: :shocked: :shocked:
It's been nearly 3 years since I first started this fanfic...yeah, there once was a time when I used to shuffle out 1 or 2 chapters per day, each and every day.

So many things have changed since then that my love of writing has kind of slowed down. But Don't worry, this fanfic will get done. When I find inspiration to write again.

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Re: Mutant Musume!!
« Reply #239 on: August 16, 2008, 10:58:16 PM »
It's all good dude. Better to take your time and recharge yourself than it is to continue just for the sake of continuing.

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