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Offline Grisours

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #20 on: June 17, 2008, 07:33:55 PM »
Now I think I understand the whole switching thing. And if it is between Miki and Gaki, it's going to be extremely funny. Gaki's so innocent, while Miki... well...  :roll:
I can already imagine the scene when Gaki enters Ai's house  :lol:
keep it up!

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #21 on: June 18, 2008, 12:33:14 AM »
 :lol: i'm really like this fic!! please continue! :D

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #22 on: June 18, 2008, 03:46:09 AM »
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"My beautiful eyebrows"

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'Don't you dare touch my Ai-chan! '

lol- those parts were hilllarious and well timed; I just pictured em' in my head- such a fitting moment. Can't wait for the next update!

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #23 on: June 18, 2008, 04:44:37 AM »
I gave up on this fic a long time ago~ I thought you would never update this but I'm glad to see you did!!! 

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #24 on: June 18, 2008, 07:41:24 AM »
mauajajajjajajajja  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

it's so funny!! poor gaki!!  :mon XD: my eyebrows!! mauajajja

could miki be groping aichan?  :mon evillaff:

i want a update~~

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #25 on: June 18, 2008, 10:19:58 AM »
Gaki and Miki switched bodies? XD

First question: what will happen to Ai then? :shock: Can't wait to find out this... :hee:

Second and third...How did that happen?And why Miki and Gaki? :mon dunno: Very intriguing...

Great work keep it up! :mon thumb:

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #26 on: June 19, 2008, 01:17:49 AM »
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"Tan, are you ok?"

Noticing how panicked the other one looked, Aya turned to her, putting a hand on her lover's shoulder.
Tan? But that's Aya's pet name for Miki. :O

...


So...Aya thinks that she's with Miki right now?



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Still, it didn't explain the situation at all. Going through the happenings again and again resulted with the same conclusion- There was no explanation. No alcohol or a "libido-gone-wild" incident. Hell, she didn't even see Matsuura-san in quite a while. So why did she.. How did they…
 Risa's brain was stuck in an infinite loop, trying to figure out what the happened.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH SNAP! [bgcolor=#000000]SOMEHOW RISA AND MIKI SWITCHED BODIES!!![/bgcolor]
:mon wtf:


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After watching her for a few seconds, Aya decided to try and wake up the other one.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH?!?!!!?? THE...OTHER...ONE?!?!?
:stunned:

She meant "Tan" when she said that, right? 'Cuz if not....dayum... :twisted:



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She wetted her hands, letting the water stream over her bare hands. After a few minutes she lifted her hands to her face and rubbed it. Finally, though quite reluctantly, Risa opened her eyes to see a perplexed reflection looking at her within the mirror .


"My beautiful eyebrows"


Hearing her lover's scream, Aya dashed to the toilet. She found the other one lying on the floor, mumbling to herself while constantly rubbing her eyebrows.
:on lol:



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The whole situation didn't make sense at all- one moment she was at Ai's place and the other…

'Wait a minute' Risa held on to the thought that popped to her head. 'If I'm here at Matsuura-san's place then it means…'

Risa's eyes widened as this conclusion registered in her mind.
OHSNAP!!! Risa had better hope that they haven't woken up yet, because as much as she loves Aya, you know that Miki wouldn't turn down an opportunity to grope!
:wahaha:

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #27 on: June 19, 2008, 01:56:33 AM »
I liked this chapter :lol: it was hilarious, the eyebrow scene = LMAO!!!

I've made a decision... you officially won the "WTF" pairing award.

You just CAN'T beat Gaki-in-Miki's-bodyX Aya... you just CAN'T!! Hmmmmmmmm....I need to find you a crown now *goes to look for one*

On another note... Kan I haz nuu chapter nao plz .... I reeeeeeaaaaaaaalllllllly wanna know what's going on Miki-in-Gaki's-bodyXAi
Rika <3 So funneh

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #28 on: June 20, 2008, 12:24:47 PM »
 :w00t: thanks for the comments minna  ^^

strawb3rrykream: well if it wasn't clear in this chapter.. i'll guess it'll be clearer at the next one .. or else read the comments below.. they kinda answer that.
About possesive Gaki . we know we all love that  XD
 mads : same answer as i did for berry above ya.. I liked the emoticons for Risa and Miki.. i think it pictures it pretty well.
ringo-hime : what happened to them.. that's what Risa also want to know .. hehe ..
tru_harmony : hmm let's say that Aichan will be very confused about "Gaki"'s behaviour.  :roll:
takagakifan : I like this cospiracy.. we'll see.. we'll see
Lolli : Yay Lolli i'm glad you've commented  :) .. prince Gaki  go save your dear Aichan.
Grisours: yeah i'm having fun writing it ^^
shadowolf8: why thank you.. and i will at least i'll try to update more often  :sweatdrop:
meowchi : Risa sure loves her eyebrows and her Aichan  :yep:
Ai.love : sorry for that.. but i never gave up on it.. i had my reasons ..  :-\
Yukari : LOL i'm glad you've enjoyed it ^^
peti-chan :first answer: hmm well you'll find out about that next chapter
second and third: don't we all want to know that...
JFC: I always liked your long comments
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She meant "Tan" when she said that, right? 'Cuz if not....dayum...

yeah she did mean Tan in here ...
poets  :  :oops: you made me blush ... I'll realy try to update as soon as possible  :P

hmm that was kinda long... OK back to work .. 


 





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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #29 on: August 04, 2008, 07:29:04 PM »
eh???! where's the update???




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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #30 on: August 04, 2008, 08:46:47 PM »
OMG, I can't believe I haven't commented on this before... I have read it, but it must have been when I was in a lurker mood :sweatdrop:
I am sooo sorry  :mon innocent:
I really can't wait for an update either... This fic is very different and coz of it, really intriguing!
Like others have said, I think Ayaya will really benefit from the new Miki's soft side and Ai will surely enjoy the friskiness of her new Gaki-san :twisted: But, it should also make the 'real' Miki and Gaki appreciate their partners more... Imagine not being able to touch your lover but yet are still able to watch your real body touch her :( Especially in Gaki's case seeing it's Miki's wandering hands :lol:

Oh and Ai/Miki in Gaki's body is just waaaaay to hot to express in words :drool: :mon blood:

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Re: Switched....chapter 2[sorry for the wait]
« Reply #31 on: January 14, 2009, 11:41:21 PM »
I want another chap T_T


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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