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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #160 on: June 13, 2008, 12:50:58 AM »
@everyone: I was thinking about some mama and papa time too so here it is!!!

This is a rare two-update-in-one-day!!!!

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Alone Time (Continuation of Just Fine)

“And we both just need some time to finish all this work”, Ai finished as she and Risa stood in front of the 7 Morning Musume members. They were all sitting on the floor of Ai’s apartment and stared at their leader and sub-leader blankly. “Ok, we’re putting Kame and Sayu in charge and you’re all going out today!”, Risa shouted. “YAY!”, they all cheered.
    “Nee, Gaki, what’s the real reason?”, Eri asked as they prepared to leave. “Me and Ai-chan wanna….you know”, Risa blushed as she whispered into Eri’s ear. “You guys wanna what?”, she looked at the sub-leader blankly. “We wanna have sex, ok?”, she snapped. Kame looked at her and turned a deep shade of pink. “What’s wrong, Kamei-san?”, asked Lin Lin, concerned at the sudden change in her senpai’s skin tone. “Nothing at all”, Kamei croaked out, her voice a few octaves higher than usual. She and Sayumi corralled everyone and got them out the door.
    “Well, they’re finally gone”, Risa said as she walked into the bedroom. She took one look at the bed and her jaw dropped. There lay Ai, wearing a set of sexy black lingerie. “Good, then we can finally have fun”, the leader said and grinned seductively at her girl. Risa took the hint and pounced onto Ai’s hips.
    The pair made out for a while, simply touching each other playfully. But soon the touches became more deliberate and wanting. Ai couldn’t wait any longer and nearly tore Risa’s top off. Her red polka-dotted bra soon followed. Ai’s lacy black bra was flung across the room and landed near the partially-open door. They played around for a while longer, but both girls couldn’t hold off. Two pairs of panties landed on the floor, abandoned and no longer needed.
     A while later, they lay on the bed, sweating and panting. “That was….so worth it”, Ai gasped as she took Risa’s hand in her, lacing their fingers together. “I love you, Papa”, Risa grinned as she cuddled into Ai’s body. “Love you too, Mama”, the older truthfully said, putting her hand around her love’s waist and pulled them together until they were spooning. The warmth from their bodies radiating between their bare skin.
    Meanwhile, the rest of the members entered the living room. Eri started towards the bedroom, looking for the lovebirds. She was about to open the door when something on the floor caught her eye. It was black….. She took a closer look and discovered it was a bra. She didn’t know whose it was and frankly didn’t want to know. She shut the door and returned to the living room, ignoring all the stares at her flushed face.

Risa and Ai heard (and saw a bit of) the whole thing and could barely control their laughter.
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I hope you guys like it!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #161 on: June 13, 2008, 04:39:52 AM »
nice!!  :lol: :lol:
LOL @ Eri. :shakeit:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #162 on: June 13, 2008, 05:15:41 AM »
 :lol: i love it!!! poor Eri!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #163 on: June 13, 2008, 05:48:14 AM »
“Nee, Gaki, what’s the real reason?”, Eri asked as they prepared to leave. “Me and Ai-chan wanna….you know”, Risa blushed as she whispered into Eri’s ear. “You guys wanna what?”, she looked at the sub-leader blankly. “We wanna have sex, ok?”, she snapped. Kame looked at her and turned a deep shade of pink. “What’s wrong, Kamei-san?”, asked Lin Lin, concerned at the sudden change in her senpai’s skin tone. “Nothing at all”, Kamei croaked out, her voice a few octaves higher than usual. She and Sayumi corralled everyone and got them out the door.
Meanwhile, the rest of the members entered the living room. Eri started towards the bedroom, looking for the lovebirds. She was about to open the door when something on the floor caught her eye. It was black….. She took a closer look and discovered it was a bra. She didn’t know whose it was and frankly didn’t want to know. She shut the door and returned to the living room, ignoring all the stares at her flushed face.

muaujajajajajja  :rofl:

poor eri  :mon XD:

mama and papa  :mon bleed2: they are sweet and hot

and yep, i like it... a lot  :mon lol:

i read the previous update too xD and it's so hilarious  :mon XD:... and tanakamei XD

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #164 on: June 13, 2008, 06:53:44 AM »
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So THAT'S why Aichan cut her hair short! She wanted to be sure she got to be "papa"!  :lol:



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Alone Time (Continuation of Just Fine)
Firstly....:hump: :drool: :twisted: :jerk:


Secondly, aw poor Eri, now she's going to have that mental picture stuck in her head! XD   :shakeit:







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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #165 on: June 13, 2008, 07:31:35 AM »
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So THAT'S why Aichan cut her hair short! She wanted to be sure she got to be "papa"!  :lol:

 :on lol:


    There lay Ai, wearing a set of sexy black lingerie. “Good, then we can finally have fun”, the leader said and grinned seductively at her girl.

Nice.... :mon bleed2:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #166 on: June 13, 2008, 08:08:10 AM »
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Nee, Gaki, what’s the real reason?”, Eri asked as they prepared to leave. “Me and Ai-chan wanna….you know”, Risa blushed as she whispered into Eri’s ear. “You guys wanna what?”, she looked at the sub-leader blankly. “We wanna have sex, ok?”, she snapped. Kame looked at her and turned a deep shade of pink. “What’s wrong, Kamei-san?”, asked Lin Lin, concerned at the sudden change in her senpai’s skin tone. “Nothing at all”, Kamei croaked out, her voice a few octaves higher than usual. She and Sayumi corralled everyone and got them out the door.

LOL, didn't know Gaki could be so blunt, messing with Eri's mind like that  :lol:

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A while later, they lay on the bed, sweating and panting. “That was….so worth it”, Ai gasped as she took Risa’s hand in her, lacing their fingers together. “I love you, Papa”, Risa grinned as she cuddled into Ai’s body. “Love you too, Mama”, the older truthfully said, putting her hand around her love’s waist and pulled them together until they were spooning. The warmth from their bodies radiating between their bare skin.


awww...  :wub:
for some reason i had a mental image of Aichan smoking a cigarette in the bed holding Risa  :shocked:

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I hope you guys like it!

I know i did  :roll:   :twisted:


« Last Edit: June 13, 2008, 02:20:21 PM by AmberSan »

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #167 on: June 13, 2008, 09:43:57 AM »
Time for me to comment, kinda late for the previous two fics but it's still okay right? *crosses fingers*

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*sobs* Why.... Poor Yossi. At least she has Rika there for her :cry:

Just an addict
Have I told you how much I love your titles? You come up with the best ones, and I especially love the last line :)

Just Fine
TakaGaki as parents? Now that's a nice thought :D I keep thinking they would be rather cute handling kids too.

Alone time
Ehhhhhh~~~~ Poor Eri, that was awkward :lol: Nice story though. TakaGaki action is always good action :lol:
« Last Edit: June 13, 2008, 09:47:13 AM by lil_hamz »

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #168 on: June 13, 2008, 05:45:25 PM »
poor Eri  XD

and the mama and papa thing is simply Yay!  :muffin:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Alone Time - updated 6/12)
« Reply #169 on: June 13, 2008, 07:32:40 PM »
poor Eri huh... walking in on your "papa" or "mama" = trauma :drool: opps wrong emoticon i mean :cry:...
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Eff it "mama" & "papa" needed some lurvin :mon thumb:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #170 on: June 14, 2008, 12:53:45 AM »
Thanks for all the comments! I'm happy everyone was pleased with mama and papa time! :hee: I feel bad, I'm always abusing Eri!  :kneelbow: I think I'll write a nice something about her soon. :glasses: Today was my last day of school so hopefully, I can update more often!
@lil_hamz: Of course, it's not too late! Take whatever time you need. My titles....I never thought they were that good! But thanks, that gives me confidence in my title choices. I always try REALLY hard to make good ones so I'm glad you like them!

Anyway, this next fic/maybe poem-ish thing was written with no particular pairing in mind. I like to think of it as narrator Ai-chan with Risa or narrator Reina with Eri. I'll leave it to your imagination.
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In Her Eyes

Her eyes, those beautiful orbs of emotion.
Filled to the brim with shiny tears.
Overflowing onto her skin, streaking it with remnants of pain.
I try to wipe them away with my fingers but they drip faster than I can eliminate them
Seeing her like this rips me apart.
To see into her mind, to read her like any fashion magazine.
The feelings bubble to the surface and I look away.
I pull her to my chest so I don’t have to stare into those portals.
The tears stream onto my shirt, my body.
The warm drops cascade from her eyes and I can’t stop them.
I am powerless to ending her suffering.
To be weak, I always say, is to fail.
I have failed her.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #171 on: June 14, 2008, 01:10:36 AM »
 :cry: why did she fail her?? it was very nicely written!  :heart:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #172 on: June 14, 2008, 06:04:15 AM »
why is she crying?  :mon scare:

and the other girl felt useless  :mon cry:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #173 on: June 14, 2008, 06:55:37 AM »
I miss a few entries :doh:...so here goes nothing
Just an Addict:
Takagaki=  :w00t:
"My name is Takahashi Ai and I am addicted to Niigaki Risa." =  :farofflook:


Just Fine:
That's so cute!

Alone Time:
Lol....I feel bad for Eri
 :twisted: Takagaki

In Her Eyes:
Wonder why she was crying  :dunno:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #174 on: June 14, 2008, 07:47:16 AM »
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I'm loving you so much right now... TakaGaki FTW!  :cow:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #175 on: June 14, 2008, 08:19:36 AM »
@ In Her Eyes :  :cry: :cry: why was she crying?..and why did she fail?.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #176 on: June 14, 2008, 08:49:13 AM »

To be weak, I always say, is to fail.
I have failed her.

Somehow this line makes me think about Reina as the narrator and Eri crying girl  :cry: :cry:


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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #177 on: June 14, 2008, 09:01:29 AM »
I'm guessing that the narrator is holding the girl she is describing in her arms? As for why she has failed her...maybe she can't reciprocate her feelings? A question I've been wanting to ask, how do you come up with so many ideas for these fics so quickly? Man, you have great creative juices.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (In Her Eyes - updated 6/13)
« Reply #178 on: June 14, 2008, 10:52:50 AM »
TakaGaki as parents is so adorable, I want... MORE MORE!!! ENCORE ENCORE!!!

In Her Eyes just leaves sooo many questions, you gonna have to write more for that one to just to answer them :D
Obviously I read it as TakaGaki, but if the 'failing' was a bad thing, I will switch to TanaKame :lol:
I kinda just think she feels like she failed her coz she can't make it better and hasn't protected her from whatever it is that made her cry, awww!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #179 on: June 14, 2008, 07:28:51 PM »
@most ppl: The reason she's crying...well, you'll find out :D
@Amarghetta: Aw, thanks for the love! :heart:
@peti-chan: Yeah, I felt that way too after I wrote it. That's why I thought of Reina/Kame.
@lil_hamz: About my creative juices, well, I feel like I write very cliche stories. But my ideas come from everywhere. Could be a song I'm listening to, a picture or just something that pops into my head.
@lollipopgirl: Yeah, I'm thinking of writing more about Papa Ai and Mama Gaki. I hope most, if not all, of your questions will be answered. This was originally just gonna be a one-shot but everyone wants to hear more! Your last sentence is exactly what I was thinking, btw!

Here's the continuation!
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A Promise, Broken

That promise, that vow we made so many years ago…
Broken, shattered, thrown to the wind.
“Nee, don’t let me fall in love foolishly, ok?”, her melodic voice echoes in my mind.
“I promise”, I grinned and we linked pinkies to seal the deal.
But I let it happen.
I let her fall.
It seemed promising at first…
But that’s no excuse.
Her light sobbing brings me back to the present.
Her fingers grip my shirt and hold on for dear life.
My weakness and inadequacy let this happen.
I broke my promise and this is my punishment.

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