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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #180 on: June 14, 2008, 07:36:18 PM »
omg! who who who?.is the person she loves??  :O

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #181 on: June 14, 2008, 08:06:42 PM »
@lollipopgirl: Yeah, I'm thinking of writing more about Papa Ai and Mama Gaki. I hope most, if not all, of your questions will be answered. This was originally just gonna be a one-shot but everyone wants to hear more! Your last sentence is exactly what I was thinking, btw!
Now you have mentioned it, you'll have to write more of Papa Ai and Mama Gaki, otherwise you're just a tease :P
And great minds obviously think alike ;)

That's it, after reading the continuation, to me, it's Gaki crying, Ai comforting and Eri sucks and broke Gaki's heart... That's how ALL fics should be :lol:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #182 on: June 14, 2008, 11:33:24 PM »
^ ouch! ur a true heart TakaGaki pair fan aren't ya!  :lol: me too, but i don't mind a Eri/Risa pairing every now and then. but i saw this story as a Reina/Eri. Eri's the one crying and Reina is holding her.  :cry:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #183 on: June 15, 2008, 04:10:21 AM »
hmmm, who could be the narrator *ponders*

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #184 on: June 15, 2008, 05:00:29 AM »
^ ouch! ur a true heart TakaGaki pair fan aren't ya!  :lol: me too, but i don't mind a Eri/Risa pairing every now and then. but i saw this story as a Reina/Eri. Eri's the one crying and Reina is holding her.  :cry:


Does that mean Gaki broke her heart? :cry:

I'm a diehard TakaGaki fan and also Tanakame (leaning towards KameShige now) so GakiKame ruins all my plans you see :lol:
GakiKame is a sweet pairing though and I approve when Ai is with someone else :P GK, is very innocent together, it is cute, I'll give em that ;)

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #185 on: June 15, 2008, 05:28:32 AM »
^i see it as Shige who broke Eri's heart.... :cry:
yeah i'm much like that too  :oops: not too much fsn of the Kame/Shige pairing unless Reina has someone like Maki  :D

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #186 on: June 15, 2008, 06:23:19 AM »
^ Awww, Reina/Maki! :heart: :wub:
They come before Tanakame for me... I think Rei.Rev.07 (i think that's right) needs to write me more Tanakame so I don't fall into the KameShige trap anymore :P

Sorry strawb3rrykream for taking over your thread with our little chit chat, we still love you :wub:
Please take note of our preferred pairings :lol:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #187 on: June 15, 2008, 06:43:16 AM »
i want to know who is the narrator!!  :OMG:

Ai?? Reina??  :frustrated:

please update soon~~

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (A Promise, Broken - updated 6/14)
« Reply #188 on: June 15, 2008, 07:59:06 AM »
@ Yukari- just use your imagination!   :lol:
ahh Gomen Strawb3rrykream! i didn't even realized ^_^'
hope it gives you ideas for future stories!  XD
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Memo - updated 6/14)
« Reply #189 on: June 15, 2008, 08:07:45 AM »
@ringo-hime, kRisZ and Yukari: Keep reading if you wanna know my take on it but honestly, I began this story with no real pairing in mind.
@ringo-hime: And I've been meaning to tell you that your sig is strangely alluring... :D
@lollipopgirl and shadowolf8: Don't worry, I find your conversation quite interesting. Love you all too! And I have, in fact, taken your pairings into consideration...

Ok, here's my take. (If you don't like it or it's not what you expected, I give you permission to disregard it and go with your imagination!) The original narrator is Reina, holding a crying Kame whose heart was broken by Gaki, who broke up with Kame to get back with Ai-chan. I really just began thinking of these girls in this situation. This next part is a switch of narrators. (In my mind, now Kame is reflecting)
Hope you all still like it.
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Memo

Memo wa sukoshi nagai kedo
Demo saigo made yonde yo nee

Those words play in my head like a CD on repeat.
This song never meant so much to me.
But now I understand…
When I found that note, I knew.
“I love you but…I can’t do this anymore”
“You mean the world to me…but I don’t want to lead you on”
I have the entire thing memorized.
Ironic that I can recite every single word of the one little sheet that ruined me.
Memorii satte yuku kedo
Atarashii kanojo no koto
Watashi no you ni aisanaide
Goodbye, Goodbye, Goodbye

But you never stopped loving her, huh?
She’s not really a new girlfriend.
I try to convince myself that this is for the best…
But it hurts each time.
Memorii
Watashi no memorii
Wakareru no ga tsurai koto
Anata aishite mananda wa

I can’t let it go.
I loved you with my whole self…
The song ends…
But the words continue.
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The lyrics are from Memory ~Seishun no Hikari~ by Momusu, btw.


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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Memo - updated 6/14)
« Reply #190 on: June 15, 2008, 08:23:19 AM »
mmm could it be Eri? risa left her and go with Takitty again

or it could be Reina... and eri left her

i think so...  :mon cry:
« Last Edit: June 15, 2008, 08:25:49 AM by Yukari »

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Memo - updated 6/14)
« Reply #191 on: June 15, 2008, 09:18:24 AM »
Ok, here's my take. (If you don't like it or it's not what you expected, I give you permission to disregard it and go with your imagination!) The original narrator is Reina, holding a crying Kame whose heart was broken by Gaki, who broke up with Kame to get back with Ai-chan.
Ahhh, I can live with it like :D
still get my TakaGaki and how you wrote Gaki's letter, at least she is still sweet about it :cry:
Poor Eri though, I'm sure Reina will once again want to punch Gaki and throw icecubes at her to make it better for Kame-chan  :P

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Memo - updated 6/14)
« Reply #192 on: June 15, 2008, 10:12:14 AM »
@strawb3rrykream > i love it too..XD
@ lollipopgirl > LOL i remember that! XD

damn it damn it damn it....
why did Gaki leave Kamei! how could she...
the hell..Ai is too hot to resist..

what?..so uh.. eri left Reina?..dang..what?!!!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Memo - updated 6/14)
« Reply #193 on: June 15, 2008, 03:17:04 PM »
A Promise, Broken

After reading this and the previous part again, now I'm thinking KameShige. No idea why something just tells me it's them :D

Memo

To me this is definitely Reina narrating at first. But the 2nd person, I'm inclined to think it's Sayu? Weird huh but I find these 2 quite a cute pair.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Memo - updated 6/14)
« Reply #194 on: June 16, 2008, 10:56:47 AM »
You used Memory Seishun like I in my story XD It's one of my fav Momusu songs :D I always listen to it when I write something sad  :(

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (One Sunday Morning - updated 6/16)
« Reply #195 on: June 16, 2008, 07:24:29 PM »
@Yukari: I'm liking where you're taking things.
@lollipopgirl: Gaki's just a sweety, she can't help it! :hee: And I think we need to keep Reina and Gaki far away from each other! I love that story, btw!
@ringohime: When I wrote Memo, it's supposed to be from Kame's point of view. She is reflecting on the way Gaki broke it off with her, through a note. And because she was feeling so bad, she went to Reina. The first 2 stories (In Her Eyes and A Promise, Broken) are from Reina's point of view. They are about how Reina feels like she failed Kame because they made a promise. That Reina would never let Kame fall in love foolishly. But she feels like she broke it by letting her fall in love with Gaki. If that makes any sense at all, that's what I'm thinking.
@lil_hamz: I think both Kameshige and Tanashige are cute pairs! In fact, I'm really not very picky. I think I like most pairings. Just depends on my mood. :kekeke:
@peti-chan: Yup, it really is a great song! I think I began liking it when I heard the Ayaya/Gocchin version on Hello Pro Hour. Then I heard Reina's version and it became a forever favorite! And you used it well in your story! Which, btw, I want some updates! I need Renai!!!! I'm glad I'm finally understanding. I think I comment right after I finish, rather than than thinking about it!

Well, I'd like to continue this, to finish it off. But I cannot think of anything! So I think I'll put it off until I can write something decent. So here's something new! Because I wanna show that I appreciate and love Kame-chan, this is for her!
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One Sunday Morning

   It was a Sunday morning, the sun shining over the city of Tokyo. It shone through the windows of a small apartment’s lavender curtains. Its rays warmed the bodies of one couple, Kamei Eri and Tanaka Reina.
   The older girl, her arms splayed over her lover’s bare chest, stirred from her slumber. Her head rested on Reina’s shoulder and her body curled with the curves. Her eyes popped open, feasting in the smooth, pale skin before her. She carefully lifted her head and used one of her arms to wipe the hint of drool off her chin. She was still in awe at the beautiful girl laying in her grasp.
   Reina was perfect, in Eri’s eyes. The true goddess. Her small body was a temple to be worshipped. Her naked chest was enough to make Eri’s cheeks flush. They reminded her of the night before. All the touching and stroking was heaven. But today was her favorite part of their adventures, the morning after. A time for admiring what you have and to never forget it.
   But Reina’s assets were making Eri too hot. Too turned on. And it was just too early for that. She cautiously pulled the blankets up higher and over the both of them. She settled her arms back over her girl and snuggled back into dreamland.
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Damn, this one is short too! Really, really short!!

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (One Sunday Morning - updated 6/16)
« Reply #196 on: June 16, 2008, 11:34:24 PM »
 :( i agree it was too short!! but i loved it!!!
 :heart: TanaKame one of my favorite couples!!!  :wub: can't wait for more
(or a little continuation of this one  :twisted:)

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (One Sunday Morning - updated 6/16)
« Reply #197 on: June 17, 2008, 01:30:45 PM »
We had lots of TakaGaki love and now we're having TanaKame, huh? :mon misch: So...since it's Sunday Morning will we get Saturday Night? XD  :twisted:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (One Sunday Morning - updated 6/16)
« Reply #198 on: June 17, 2008, 02:43:20 PM »
and thanks for explaining that..  :sweatdrop:

too short indeed..but was good!  :lol:

so shes turned on HUH?.. :O  :twisted: :twisted:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (One Sunday Morning - updated 6/16)
« Reply #199 on: June 17, 2008, 03:54:55 PM »
awwww  :wub: TanaKame..
 

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