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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #520 on: July 27, 2009, 04:46:41 AM »
aw~ that made me tear up~ (i_i) i felt for both of them>.<

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #521 on: July 27, 2009, 05:08:46 AM »
Poor Ai-chan for being fussed at. Poor Risa for Ai-chan giving her a reason to worry and fuss. What was Ai-chan doing out so late?

When they finally hugged each other I sighed in relief....I was a bit worried. I also loved the part about tea and their "tea cabinet". Another good story.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #522 on: July 27, 2009, 05:37:18 AM »
Fallin' Out

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*WORRIED RISA*
Awwwwwwwww...so sweet. :oops:



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*TIPSY/FLIRTY AICHAN*
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*RISA'S OUTBURST*
:OMG:

Considering what she specifically ranted about, it's understandable that she'd be upset. Add the fact that she's apparently been keeping these worries to herself, she was sorely in need of a chance to vent. Gotta say as well, Aichan needed to hear it as much as Risa needed to say it. Can't help but get the feeling that with Aichan's humble nature and her habit of being slightly clueless at times, she really didn't realize just how much/how strongly Risa really did feel. As much as Risa's tried her best to be Aichan's rock and support her, she likewise needs that same support and attention from Aichan.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #523 on: July 27, 2009, 06:26:03 AM »
Mama & Papa TakaGaki squibbling. Papa has been a very bad girl  :twisted:


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The couple stood, holding each other tightly, blaming themselves for something they both were equally at fault for.

“Nee, Ai-chan”, Risa said, her voice back to its soft state, “We should go to bed…you must be exhausted.”

But sweet ending  :wub:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #524 on: July 27, 2009, 07:23:57 AM »
That was good, really... normal. I liked it.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #525 on: July 27, 2009, 01:00:44 PM »
Lol at drunk Ai licking Gaki XD And here I was wondering after watching DVD vol.23 if Ai got ever drunk and how she would act while being drunk :? I hope that exactly like in this fic :lol: Gaki had her point being angry with Ai but man...she was scary :shocked Fortunately everthing had a cute, sweet ending :wub:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #526 on: July 28, 2009, 02:13:58 AM »
LOL "Lovin time?" And wow Risa...but that was a nice ending. ^_^

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #527 on: July 31, 2009, 04:05:34 PM »
Fallin' Out

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Risa frowned, and replied, “Okaeri…Ai-chan…do you know what time it is?” The older girl wandered over and plopped herself down, cuddling into Risa and licking her neck. “Lovin time?”, she giggled as she adjusted herself to nibbling on the younger girl’s ear.

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All the while, Ai stared up at her in fear

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“I-I…I’m sorry, Risa-chan…r-really”, Ai whimpered, feeling like more than just a scolded child, “I love you too and it h-hurts to know h-how much I hurt you…” She shook slightly as well, but from fear instead of anger. “

  XD


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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #528 on: October 27, 2009, 04:19:10 AM »
Hmm, I thought this thread deserved a bump since I just went through all 27 pages and read everything you wrote. Also my last comment was pretty crappy. Reading everything all at once made me notice how much more confident you've become in your writing since this thread started and how your style has evolved to the amazing awesomeness of today.
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Though it's still not much, I hope this makes up for my one liner a few posts up.

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #529 on: November 04, 2009, 11:50:19 AM »
Wow, this was intense. The descriptive build up was good. At the part Risa exploded I was shell shocked but I could understand why she let it out.

The ending was good in a way that they managed to wrap it up but it somehow still left me hanging. I want to know what is Ai's take on this.

All in all, I love this fic.

PS: How was your trip to Japan? I miss seeing you around. Come back if you can? *puppy eyes*

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Fallin' Out - updated 7/26)
« Reply #530 on: December 25, 2009, 11:32:56 PM »
I just started to read your writing, so these comments that will be coming from me from now on are about your older pieces until I catch up.

I love how you wrote forgiveness in two different perspectives, it helped bring the "aww" factor even more.

Even though TakaGaki isn't usually my thing, you made it good by writing well. Keep up the good work  :D

Fluff makes me happy   :wub:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Lost In Though - updated 4/11)
« Reply #531 on: April 12, 2010, 06:43:12 AM »
@Sai: I feel kinda bad for scolding Ai-chan too. :lol: She's usually such a good little girl. :P
@kawaii beam: Thank you! And I did have fun. :thumbsup
@adventwriter: Ai-chan was out partying and she got drunk. XD And I love the tea cabinet part too~ :heart:
@JFC: You had the exact idea I was going for. Not that I expected anything less from you~
@badsaints:  XD Yes, Papa was a bad girl. That might be one of the weirdest sentences I've ever written. :lol:
@rndmnwierd: Thank you!
@peti-chan: I like to think of drunk Ai-chan like that. Much less inhibited. :lol:
@Hotaru: I'm glad you liked the ending!
@kRisZ: :lol: :lol:
@rndmnwierd (again): Wow, thank you for taking the time to read everything. And don't apologize for your one-liner comments, I appreciate all comments. :D
@Hammy: Hmm, perhaps I'll do an Ai-chan POV in the future? hehe MAYBE. :P It was a wonderful trip~ And I missed being here SOOO much! *snuggles you* Don't give me those eyes! :lol:
@Kiichan: Oh, Kiichan! You're adorable. :wub: And thank you! :heart:

Yes...yes, it's me.
I am kinda back...after MANY months of hiatus. Things just happened and I got all caught up in school and stuff. But for now, I bring you a little something. I'm trying my hardest to write when I have time but it's hard to get back into it. I've had to stop many times, to prevent myself from ruining a good idea.
But anyway, I bring a small fic for whoever is left, in terms of my "fanbase". :nervous This was posted earlier for Yuuchan's B-day thing, but I never added it here. So I'm sorry if you've already read it before.
Please enjoy! :heart:

Lost In Thought

An expansive watercolor of pinks, blues, and yellows splayed across the sky. It bathed Tokyo in its first light of day, just a hint of what would come at sunrise. Yet the city still slept.

With the exception of one wonky-eyed girl.

Staring at the black cityscape from an apartment balcony, Tanaka Reina couldn’t help but feel a little more at peace. The hustle and bustle of her second hometown hadn’t begun yet, the streets nearly vacant.  A few people on bikes rode down empty alleys but that was the extent of human activity at this hour.

Reina liked this silence, this stillness. She got up nearly every morning to have this time to herself, going back to sleep once the sun began to rise. It’s a good time to think, she reasoned, the tepid air wrapping her in a sort of cozy embrace.

And on those mornings, the 19-year old thought a lot.

She thought about work, something funny that had happened at dance practice or her schedule for the day. Dance practice, an appearance on Utaban, FIVE STARS recording…, she recited in her head, ticking each off on her fingers. A mildly busy day.

She thought about her life, an idol known by all of Japan and beyond. The screaming fans’ voices echoed in her head and brought a grin to her face. Just knowing that there were people out there who appreciated her work made her feel complete and that her job was worth it. It was almost enough to eliminate the pain she felt, the fatigue of her career.

She thought about the woman lying in bed waiting for her, her warm embrace just feet away. Reina had a secret crush on her, even before she joined Morning Musume. She’d previously disguised it as admiration, but it was so much more. The first time they kissed, the small girl pinched herself to make sure she wasn’t dreaming. And the first time they had sex…Reina couldn’t stop herself from crying, much to the concern of her partner. “They’re tears of joy~”, she had sobbed out, “I’m just so happy!”

Although the summer heat was evident even at this hour, the metal banister was a bit cold on her bare arms; the skimpy tank top and boxer shorts ensemble she wore left little to the imagination. She cast her gaze once more over the city, taking in each and every building, before retreating to the bedroom.

Reina closed the sliding glass door quietly. She pulled the curtain back and snuck over to the bed, its other occupant seemingly still asleep. Sliding under the warm covers and curling her body around the other, the younger girl closed her eyes in hopes of catching a few more z’s before work.

But the body next to her had a different idea.

“Where did you go, Reina-chan? I was so lonely~”, the older woman pouted, her voice both teasing and sincere. Reina’s eyes widened, as she stuttered, “H-how did you…” She was cut off by a chuckle and “For a kitty, you aren’t very quiet”. The younger blushed, staring at her girlfriend’s bare back in embarrassment. The smooth, flawless skin was silky under her fingers as she ran them along her lover’s back.

“Really though, where did you go?”, the melodic voice asked, rolling over to face Reina. Her cropped hair was a little messy from sleep, but sexy nonetheless. “I-I just went out to the balcony…to think”, she answered, “I do think, Maki” The younger couldn’t help but feel defensive about her alone time.

“Oh I know you think, Reina-chan~”, Goto Maki drawled, trailing her long fingernail down Reina’s arm, “And I love it when you do, baby…but I’d love it more if you shared what you’re thinking about” The Avex soloist smiled sadly. The sincerity in her eyes, the yearning to understand was painful for Reina. “Um…well, I-I…”, she tried to explain but ended up tongue-tied like usual.

“Never mind”, the 23-year old grinned, “Let’s just get some sleep, ok?” Any signs of her previous hurt were gone now, replaced with that comforting smile, one that Reina always looked forward to coming home to. She wrapped her arms around the smaller girl and drifted off to sleep.

But Reina couldn’t, not after seeing the expression of pain on Maki’s face.

“Someday…I’ll be able to tell you…”, she whispered, “Someday…”

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Lost In Though - updated 4/11)
« Reply #532 on: April 12, 2010, 08:40:01 AM »
ah Reina and Gomaki  :wub:

so good you came back to write
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Lost In Though - updated 4/11)
« Reply #533 on: April 12, 2010, 01:34:11 PM »
YAY! You're semi back!! Now that that's out of the way.... Comment!


Hey, wait, I remember this and it's still as cute as the first time I read it. Reiki is as awesome as it was four years ago! :rockon:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Lost In Though - updated 4/11)
« Reply #534 on: April 17, 2010, 08:01:22 PM »
Aww~ That was cute~  :wub:

I feel bad for Maki though, I know I hate when I can't know what someone is thinking about. I hope Reina does tell her soon.  :(

Your story makes me wonder if there is something deeper then the everyday things that is going through Reina's head.

Write more, cutie~!  :D

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Romance at its Best - updated 11/11)
« Reply #535 on: July 01, 2010, 04:43:31 PM »
KREAM!!!!!!!!!!  :heart:

Just wanted to say thank you again for that PM. I am definitely going to have to embark on a deeper search for AiMikitty stories (rather than one-shots), but thank you so much for writing these. Reading them made me melt completely  :mon inluv:

I love them all.

Exhilarating:

Wow, that was really quick of Miki  :nervous
I guess she's been into Ai all this time too, huh? How about rather than sharing herself, Miki-sama dump Tomo and get hitched with Ai-chan.  :yep:
But yeah, HOT! (with hints of TakaGaki).  :w00t:

The Fire in Your Eyes

Holy cow, reading about an Ai-chan this aggressive is something I'll probably never get used to!  :bleed eyes:
She's making the Groping Demon seem tame here!!! lol... but I still have to wonder, what drove her over the edge? Ai-chan seems to be a pretty composed person. For her to have let go and actually attacked Miki like that...
But this one really reminds me of OTN1's LOVE X 2 GAM moment of extreme bed play.  :inlove:
I really enjoyed this one! Beri beri sexyyyy  :twothumbs

Out of the Blue:

Awwwww... after all this time, Ai-chan may still have feelings for Miki?
That's really bittersweet >.<
But glad to see Miki-sama still has it in her  :twisted:
What hot mummies they must be!

Not That Girl:

This one's my 2nd fav of your AiMikitty one-shots!  :love:
I can definitely see them in character here (except for the Ai-chan-getting-wasted part of it  XD).
I loved all the exchanges they had here, they were really cute  :heart: But poor, poor Miki, to have to put up with that kind of crap just because it's a part of her character that she has to uphold. <33 Here's to them getting together!  :thumbsup

Romance at its Best:

This one was definitely my favourite!
Domestic AiMikitty! So heartwarming to read!  :wub: I love Miki in this amorous mode, it's just adorable. I can totally picture her being cold and indifferent to everybody else, but completely smitten with her Ai-chan  :heart:

She had just set down the dishes when something heavy attacked her from the back. “AHH!”, her manly scream echoed. “Do you have to do that?”, Miki groaned, “It’s such a mood-killer” But the older girl continued to hug Ai from behind. “Thank you”, she whispered, planting a soft kiss on the younger’s neck before sitting down to eat. Ai blushed lightly, even though a year passed.

 :rofl:

This part totally had me lol'ing like mad  :lol:
Ai-chan's manly scream making a well-earned cameo. Awesome!  :wahaha:

Footsies under the table <333
Miki bringing out the cupcake and singing <333
Loved every bit of this, so damn sweet.  :inlove:

AiMikitty VS. Charmikitty for hottest couple ever, I still can't decide!  :theking

Thanks again Kream, for writing these and for letting me know about them. I'll definitely get around to reading your other stuff too, you seem to have covered a few other of my top pairings!  :oops:

Please write more? ^__________^
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Test of Wills - updated 7/14)
« Reply #536 on: July 15, 2010, 07:33:58 AM »
@kuro: Thanks for the comment!
@rndmnwierd: Now I'm even MORE semi-back! XD Reiki is timeless. :heart:
@Kiichan: There is definitely more to all the girls than we think, I'm sure~
@Beecubed: I'm glad that you loved them! Hmm, AiMiki or Charmikitty...I can't choose! T_T I'll do my best to write more! :thumbsup

OH SNAP!!!
LOOK WHO IS BACK!!!! :shakeit:

I know...it's been forever. So I won't bore you all (if there are any of you left!?) with my boring life. :lol:

This fic is a guilty pleasure pairing of mine~ :heart: I hope you enjoy!
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Test of Wills

“Ow, what the fuck?”, a certain former H!P soloist and Morning Musume leader cursed as a pillow collided with her head. She opened her eyes slowly to find herself on the couch, the smirking face of her girlfriend by her side. “What the hell was that for?”, she grumbled while rubbing the affected area.

“Oh stop it, that didn’t hurt”, the aforementioned girlfriend giggled, “You’re just too sensitive these days, aren’t you, Mikitty?” The younger girl laughed again when her statement wasn’t denied.

Frowning, Miki turned her body away from the warm one next to her and instead focused on the movie that had been playing on their TV. Her eyes struggled to concentrate on the white subtitles that graced the bottom of the screen, even though she had no idea what was going on.

She wasn’t going to let her win this time.

A few moments later, an almost-gaudily decorated toenail poked her in the thigh. “Mou, Mikitty~”, her angelic voice sounded pouty as the insistent foot continued to run along her skin.

The older woman wanted nothing more than to grab the beautiful princess who shared the couch with her and ravage her right then and there. But unfortunately, her pride had a tad more self-control, forcing her to ignore her lover. “Not until you say sorry”, was all Miki said before going silent again.

 10 minutes went by and neither of them let up on their quest to break the other. The elder of the pair kept her eyes glued to the TV, willing herself not to give in. She wasn’t actually paying attention to the movie anymore but no one needed to know that.

In contrast, the younger was having a much easier time with this test of wills. She had abandoned the route of appeal and instead settled for the same technique of overlooking the other. Her face remained blank as she too stared at the small screen but inside, she was smirking. It was only a matter of time before one of them cracked…and the younger was sure it wouldn’t be herself.

Standing up from the couch, she slowly walked into the bedroom. Her footsteps were light and casual, as if she wasn’t leaving her girlfriend on the couch alone. She could freely smirk now, and took full advantage of it.

Meanwhile, Miki, on the other hand, was shocked and slightly startled when the younger got up and left her. She didn’t feel abandoned, not at all. But she did feel herself wanting to follow her companion…and possibly push her onto the bed…and rip her clothes off…and…and…

“Get it together!” she scolded herself, holding tightly to one of the small pillows on the couch…the one that she was using. Feeling a tiny bit embarrassed, she brought the soft green thing up to her face and inhaled. “It smells like her…” she mumbled, holding it even closer.

The younger girl watched from around the corner, blushing slightly at the sight. She bit her lip nervously, suddenly wanting to call off this whole ‘game’ they had going, and just go back to snuggling. There really was something about the older girl that got her heart racing and her stomach flip-flopping.

“Mikitty…” she said softly as she slowly returned to the living room. The smaller girl crawled back into her arms, nuzzling Miki’s neck. The aforementioned woman blinked in surprise before holding her lover close.

She leaned down to kiss the shell of her ear and whispered “I knew you’d come around.” Her voice was dripping with that ‘I told you so’ tone and the younger had a moment of blankness.

“OW!!!! God, Risa! You don’t have to hit so hard!!!”


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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Test of Wills - updated 7/14)
« Reply #537 on: July 15, 2010, 07:51:23 AM »
lol something funny and cute, liked the fact of the miki/risa combination
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Test of Wills - updated 7/14)
« Reply #538 on: July 15, 2010, 12:58:34 PM »
FUJIGAKI!!! :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: So wrong, but so right (like Charmikitty, lols, which was who I thought it was at first, until you said the girlfriend was younger)

Is you going to be back for good? :?

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Test of Wills - updated 7/14)
« Reply #539 on: July 15, 2010, 04:11:53 PM »
Ah it's good to see you writing again! Wecome back!  :welcome ^___^ Does this mean you'll be posting more fics now? I sure hope so.

Now to comment about the fic. This one-shot was so cute! I happen to find FujiGaki interesting too. I don't know why. I guess I liked them after reading this FujiGaki fic that I found a while back. And for once, this pairing isn't angsty it's just really cute and happy. It's good to have some fluff around here. I pictured Risa walking over to Miki slowly like in a cutesy way then just suddenly sits into Miki's lap and cuddles with her then nuzzles Miki's neck and it was so cute to image! I had such a cute picture of it! ^__^ I look forward to more of your fics. I enjoy you're writing.  :D

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