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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #440 on: June 17, 2008, 01:58:10 AM »
"To not forget that the person I'm in love with isn't just Hicchan... or To-chan... or just Yoshiko or Hito-chan... That I love you for you... I love the whole Yoshizawa Hitomi..."

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"Some people, they get so used to nicknames and that ideal person in that nickname that they forget who the real person behind the name is... like when couples get married and have kids and they get called Mama and Papa all the time... and they call each other Mama and Papa to teach the kids... they forget that they're not just Mama and Papa... they forget who they were and how they love each other before becoming Mama and Papa..."

Mushy mushy ishiyoshi!  XD Maybe you can continue with the mushiness and the conserving part another day :P One is emotional while the other is physical..... :P

'Separation is the beginning of a meeting. Fear not of it.'

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #441 on: June 17, 2008, 06:53:31 AM »
... man... is this cruel or what? tito and i won't be posting for the next few days...

i shall however, amidst studying will think about how the story leads me...

@kata: right (in the serious non-sarcastic tone)

@EVERYONE FOR CONSERVING WATER: ... patience is a virtue... if you stick around long enough, you might get to read it... if it does happen...

@kata (again): .... thanks for that... are you psychic? ... nah... i guess it's in the writing style i'm using now... kinda predicatable and leading, ne? ... i should watch out for that...

@EVERYONE REGARDLESS OFF POLL VOTE: surprises are in store... so hold on, everyone...

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the last for the next few days... tito and I conspired to leave you all to suspense (who is currently in the toilet... not hacking anyone to pieces...)

Shark dialed the Way's number. Damn... long-distance call... this is going to leave a gaping hole in my pocket...

The pone rang. Once... twice... thrice... the Way wasn't answering. What the hell...? Shark didn't know whether she would feel relieved or frustrated. Only the Way and the captain could contact the Third, who is in an undisclosed location. Not even the pair of Eyes knew where she was.

Shark looked at the folder on the table. It was their file on the captain. Almost every detail of the captain's life was on that file. They were not allowed to encode it into the computer database. It was easier to monitor, no hacker can ever worm his way to it, and it was easy to dispose of in case it is necessary. Shark put down the phone and opened the folder. It was thick and held more than two hundred pages and photographs. She picked up one photo and looked at it closer. It was a photo of the captain in high scool: senior year. She was wearing her basketball uniform. That was exactly what she was wearing when she recruited Shark.

"... What on earth do you think are you doing?" an annoyed Hitomi stood in front of the girl who was stalking her.

"I'm on a job..." the girl didn't mind the person confronting her.

Hitomi was amused by this girl who was holding a disposable camera. "I was on to you since day one..."

"What day was that?"

"Monday, two weeks ago..."

"You're mistaken... I've been watching you for two months" Shark answered back nonchalantly. Shark took out photos of Hitomi on a date with Miki. They really had that date two months ago. "You had chicken parmigiana and Fujimoto Miki had steak in bourbon sauce. You left the restaurant about an hour and a half after coming in... and you headed to the Fujimoto residence. Do you want me to elaborate on the details?"

Hitomi was shocked and quite impressed. "... That's not necessary... ... You're good... not a lot of people can spy on me that long undetected... Who do you work for?"

"I am not permitted to  say... but she is no threat to you... just a random fan girl..."

"What agency?"

"I don't have an agency... I do this so I can study..."

"Do you want to work for me?"


Shark looked out the window. That was five years ago... She has graduated from the university through the sponsorship of Yoshizawa PubCom. Everything she had now, she owed to the captain... and the fact that she herself had enough balls to face her then-target.

"What's in it for me?"

"I can get you to the university... you know who I am and what I can do... I need someone with your skill..."

"I have to think about it..."

"Come to the practice tomorrow, early morning... I hope you consider my offer..."


Shark put the photo back into the folder along with the other ones.

In the locker room, the captain and the new Eye were talking. "...I got you into this school... it isn't easy to get here and you know that... do your best in the sport... that is the only way you can stay in this school... I can only do so much to get you in... to keep you in... that's entirely up to you... ... ... ... with your job, I entrust to you my life and all information about me and all information about those before me that are accessible to you."

"Hai..."

"I will call on you for any mission... the Way should have told you about the procedure..."

"Yes, he has..."

"Well then, Ogawa Makoto... this is probably the last time I will be calling you that... do your job well..."

"Thank you, captain. I will..."
« Last Edit: June 17, 2008, 07:13:36 AM by tru_harmony »

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #442 on: June 17, 2008, 07:35:50 AM »
wow Makoto...

i love it! She is such a Yossy fangirl *o*

it's sad that you won't update in the next days... u.u

anyway i'll wait ^^U

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #443 on: June 17, 2008, 03:09:05 PM »
So Shark is Makoto? :lol: Being a fangirl explains her loyalty towards Yossie...

Damn, suspense is such an idiot..I hope I can kill it with my hands! You realise how slowly this forum will be without us..  :roll: Come weekend come! Come next week come!

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #444 on: June 17, 2008, 04:51:29 PM »
^yeah, makoto is shark (mako=type of shark) ... btw, the fan girl is mako's previous client...

... yeah... i noticed how not much a lot of updating is going on... i hope i can make it through this week so i can update next week...

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #445 on: June 17, 2008, 05:29:25 PM »
Makoto = the Shark :O yah, never would have guessed. Still hoping 3rd is Reina just so I wont get all my guesses wrong.

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #446 on: June 18, 2008, 07:08:44 AM »
^Chill dear chill *pass nitrogen water or something along that line to tru*  Don't let it affect you girl.. :)

'Separation is the beginning of a meeting. Fear not of it.'

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #447 on: June 18, 2008, 07:11:39 AM »
... *chill* ... thanks... it was bad, tito... really bad...

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #448 on: June 18, 2008, 07:21:35 AM »
ooh poor tru_harmony!!  :O

that guy sucks really!!  :mon mad:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #449 on: June 18, 2008, 01:02:49 PM »
Was he the same idiot who removed his post after he posted some disparaging comments here before?

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #450 on: June 18, 2008, 03:18:34 PM »
@tito: thanks for passing the liquid nitrogen... it has successfully frozen my hand... :lol: and has kept me from picking up the grenade launcher

@Yukari: thanks for the flames... it thawed my hand... but successfully burnt it that i still cannot pick up the grenade launcher...

@kata: i don't know who this idiot is... thank you so much for the concern

@all yo/anything fans who read and appreciate my fic, thanks to you all... i will not stop writing... there are no right and wrong pairings... we all love H!P and that's all that matters

@that person who emailed me: i don't know who you are... i hope you are just a regular guest of this forum and not a user (we owe the existence of this forum to the person you called wota-whore)... we co-exist peacefully here... i also don't know why of all people you chose to spread your message of hate at me but my Charmy-sama's Positive Thinking Philosophy tells me that you are just a disturbed soul... do whatever you want, i won't be reading your emails anymore... so don't bother sending them to me... if you have something to say, bring it here... this is a forum after all...

i dedicate this chapter to you who emailed me... hope you like light ishiyoshi fluff... and more so to the readers who have waited for an update... i'm sorry to keep you guys waiting...

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rika and Hitomi ran up the escalator to the platform as they heard and felt the train arrive. They managed to board the front-most train car-- the one exclusive to women, senior citizens and married couples.

They both stood, bent with their hands on their knees, catching their breath as the train doors slid to a close. It was Hitomi who first caught the steady pace of breath and noticed the suspicious looks of their fellow passengers who were particularly silent. She nudged at Rika who did not take a second to absorb what was going on.

The other passengers looked at Hitomi, like most Filipinos they have encountered earlier, thinking she was a man. The train finally started moving as Rika and Hitomi walked across the aisle. There was only one seat vacant. The two looked at each other and somehow reached the agreement that Rika gets the seat. Hitomi simply stood right in front of Rika, with one hand on a handrail and the other holding Rika's hand.

A guard slowly walked up to them after receiving complaint from a passenger. "Sir, pambabae lang po dito." (This car is for women only.)

Rika quickly answered the guard. "Mag-asawa po kami..." (We're married) She showed the guard their rings. The guard could only scratch his head and throw a glance at the complainant as he walked away from the "married" couple.

Hitomi smiled at Rika. Although she didn't understand a word, the gesture of showing the guard their matching rings told her that it has something to do with them being a couple. The rings were a good idea after all. It has rescued them from awkward moments and judgemental people twice today.

The train moved at a stady pace. It was really like that in the Philippines.

The couple was silent. Rika gazed up at her "husband". Hitomi was in deep thought as she looked out the window. Rika felt Hitomi's pulse from her fingertips. Her pulse was constant, it was steady. Rika felt the callouses on Hitomi's fingers. They were obviously products of her violin training. Rika knew her hands were calloused too-- from playing tennis back when she was a student and from doing the laundryby hand for the past 5 years.

Hitomi gave Rika's hand a squeeze as if to get Rika's attention. Rika's hand was rough but it was also soft and warm.

Hitomi looked down at Rika who was still gazing a her. Although Hitomi has been told that she had such beautiful eyes, right now, she believes that she was gazing at the most beautiful eyes in the world. Rika's eyes, she couldn't describe them. They were both dark and bright at the same time. There was depth in that darkness. Who knows what those eyes have seen? How much pain and loneliness? Despite that darkness, her eyes had a sparkle.

She released Rika from her gaze and looked out the window again. The city lights brightened up the night sky. It was beautiful. You couldn't see the pollution, you couldn't see the soot on the buildings. This view was only possible under the night sky-- under the veil of darkness. That's probably why Rika's eyes had that sparkle, hope shone in contrast with the darkness left by despair, fear and uncertainty.

Hitomi felt herself being drawn to look again into her lover's eyes and she saw her own reflection on Rika's pupils. They say the eyes are the windows to the soul. Hitomi hoped that she was the hope that brought sparkle to those beautiful eyes, and the hope in the soul which the eyes served as windows to that keeps Rika going.

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #451 on: June 18, 2008, 03:27:09 PM »
Oh my, the last three paragraphs in particular are beautifully written! :P The husband part is just hilarious..keep the fluff going! :grin:
You posted earlier than me XD I'm still working hard on the next one but I'm only 4/5 done..damn, it was supposed to be filler!
« Last Edit: June 18, 2008, 04:07:00 PM by tito »

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #452 on: June 18, 2008, 04:09:07 PM »
That's probably why Rika's eyes had that sparkle, hope shone in contrast with the darkness left by despair, fear and uncertainty.

Somehow this really gets me  :imdead:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #453 on: June 18, 2008, 05:19:30 PM »
Serious comment: There are stories, be it a book or a movie, that is simply great to read or watch even without the pervy things, and yours is definitely one of those  :)

Not so serious comment: if there will be conserving water in the coming chapters, it would be like  :shakeit: and if there's none it would be like  :muffin: , you're the writer you decide  :yep:


Give the as***le   :love:  and  :shakeit:  and   :otomerika:  Best thing to do, for me, don't mind him/her

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #454 on: June 18, 2008, 05:34:19 PM »
Awww, so sweet.
And to that person whose been harassing tru_harmony, f*** you. :tama-mad: If you don't like what we do here, get out. Simple as that.
Don't worry, tru_harmony, we all love you! :heart: :heart:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #455 on: June 19, 2008, 07:03:50 AM »
@tito: read my fic and update after you've studied... the updates are going to be slow so don't rush...

@kata: please don't die...

@kRisZ: thank you... i will do my best to deliver my story to the fullest... i hope you continue to enjoy my fic.

@strawb3rrykream: ... i love reading the words 'awww' and sweet in the same sentence...

@everyone: thanks, everyone... for your continued support and patronage of this fic... whatever happens, in this thread IshiYoshi will prevail. I'm looking forward to my next update and your comments... as long as they're constructive, be they compliments or criticisms all are welcome...

@you who's no longer welcome here: i hope you've read either the blog entry or my email... i'll be taking that post down... the negativity does not match my style...

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #456 on: June 19, 2008, 08:02:12 AM »
i'll support you too  :cow:

it was a sweet chapter, they always think that Yossy is a man  :mon XD: funny

i like how you describe some situations  :hee:

waiting a update soon~~  :mon thumb:

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #457 on: June 20, 2008, 02:10:59 AM »
@Yukari: thanks! i love getting comments from non-ishiyoshi fans. It gives fresher perspective.

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they always think that Yossy is a man 

i got the idea after showing a picture of yossui (the one with the 'belive me' print) to my friends and bandmates and almost everybody. and they all said that she was guapo (handsome). many of them really thought she was a man.

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i like how you describe some situations 

thank you... i hope to improve enough so that you guys would like how i describe all situations... i'm lightyears away from that but i'm taking my baby steps...

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i really yell that when i do my updates at home)

Rika and Hitomi treaded the busy sidewalks of Makati back to their home. Hitomi kept an arm over Rika’s shoulders while Rika kept her arm around Hitomi’s waist like a tarsier. There were many people on the streets, some on their way home, others on their way to work. The city of Makati has been developing severe insomnia and lack of sleep these past few years. It wasn’t that late yet, just a few minutes after 7:30.

The two entered the condominium building. The lobby was deserted save for the receptionist, the lone security guard by the door and the janitor who was sweeping the floors. But Hitomi was still cautious. She looked around the lobby as they walked to the elevator queue. After their encounter with her father earlier, she felt that he was going to show up. Her old man didn’t fail her as he entered the doors to the lobby in a jog.

“Hey, Hicchan, wait!”

Hitomi had nowhere to go. The lifts were still on the 7th and 4th floor respectively. She just closed her eyes and pretended not to hear him as she held Rika closer. Rika’s hold around Hitomi’s waist became tighter as if restraining Hitomi from doing anything rash and violent. Although Rika’s touch offered her some calmness the sound of her father’s voice was beckoning to her fury.

Hitomi pulled away from Rika as she turned to face her father. He had a bruise on his cheek from this afternoon’s encounter.

She looked at him squarely to his eyes. “I told you not to call me that nor to ever show yourself to me again. What do you want?”

“Well, Hicchan” Her father was really pushing it. “I just wanted to meet your friend.” He, in mocking-courtesy, bowed at Rika. “Is she living with you here, or is she just keeping you company for the night in Mikitty’s stead?” He was spilling beans from his daughter’s past, expecting a negative reaction from his daughter’s friend. "She's really very pretty... not a bad substitute for Miki, if I may say so myself..." To his surprise and disappointment, he elicited no response from the girl who partially hid behind Hitomi.

“Stop pretending to be nice. What I do and who I’m with is none of your business, old man.” Her heart was racing. To say that Rika was just a substitute for Miki was just cold and cruel. People can never be substituted. "Fujimoto-san is a friend. I don't think you can substitute friends unless they aren't real friends. You should know that."

Rika held on to the hem of Hitomi’s shirt. She closed her eyes and leaned her head on Hitomi’s back, hoping that this would soon be over. Hitomi’s father scared her. Whatever his motives are for showing up, his mere presence always shook up the room wherever they may be.

“Well, we both know Mikitty isn't just a friend... Anyway, I just spoke with her father. He said the she misses you so.”

“I won’t fall for that, old man. We have spoken to each other. She doesn’t miss me at all. Aren’t they tired of this?”

“Well, you know, her family has needs too…”

“She has a high paying job! She doesn’t need me! Her family doesn’t need me! Not anymore!”

“... Oh right... She has Matsuura now... ... … did you hear? Many stockholders from Matsuura motors pulled away their investments since the merger. Could it be because— ”

Hitomi quickly cut him off. “That is a matter only Matsuura-san and I should be talking about. It is still none of your business. Please leave unless you want my fist to land on your other cheek.” Her hand formed a fist. It wasn’t a threat, just a warning. “Leave.”

Jin slowly backed away. “I hope your friend entertains you better than Mikitty did.” He ran out the building, into anonymity with the crowd filling the sidewalks.

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #458 on: June 20, 2008, 04:17:57 AM »
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i really yell that when i do my updates at home)
That's awesome! XD

Man, Hicchan's dad is just an a**!

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Re: Runaway from the Past
« Reply #459 on: June 20, 2008, 06:52:43 AM »
I hope you can write soon what happened between ishiyoshi after her dad left. I really enjoy the way you illustrate the 2 of them. It's as though nothing said/done can affect them because of the mutual trust and love. :D But if Miki can appear more often, that will be wow..Oh well, I just want to see what Miki and Yossi talk about because of their rather peculiar relationship.

Anyway, Jin doesn't sound like someone of high position or all with his childish actions and comments. He just sounds like an asshole beggar! (Nothing against you but I'm against him )

Oh, I almost forgot about the needle. Will that be the fatal object that breaks the bubble?

'Separation is the beginning of a meeting. Fear not of it.'

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