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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) CHAPTER9!
« Reply #80 on: August 09, 2008, 03:46:46 PM »
An update! an update! hahahahaha :nya:

oh, even though the mountain is a cold place..........for miki and rika, i guess it's steaming hot!  :on_hot: :on_hot: :on_hot: hehe

loving it.........even more! haha

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) CHAPTER9!
« Reply #81 on: August 09, 2008, 09:14:25 PM »
at least someone's conserving water! XD Can't wait for the next update!
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) CHAPTER9!
« Reply #82 on: August 10, 2008, 04:01:40 AM »
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"What do you think Rika and Miki are doing right now?"  Shibata asked her companion, her eyes never leaving her cards.

Aya chuckled. "Maybe they're getting it on…"  She began to make kissy noises.
If they only knew...
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) CHAPTER9!
« Reply #83 on: August 16, 2008, 10:49:44 PM »
Just a little warning, this chapter was a little weird for me cause I was trying to restrain and keep it from being too graphic, so it came out kinda 'watered down' instead.  So I apologize now if its not hot enough...I tried to keep to the formula ---> short, sweet, vague...

strawb3rrykream:  lol, Aya and Shiba-chan's stories should be told by someone who is slightly less perverted then I am. Or it could end up in the prev fic section (which I've just discovered yesterday) instead of here.

tru_harmony: *sticks tru_harmony's lifeless body into a freezer to cool it down*  :mon freeze:  hang in there! only a little more love scene to go..

Grisours:  yup! That's one of the reasons I'm enjoying writing this charmkitty so much even though I'm an Ishiyoshi shipper.  I like how volatile the relationship can be at any given moment.   ;)

sweeety:  I didn't know that settling was over  :mon cry:  I haven't read any fics in a long time, to motivate myself to continue writing this one, cause I know that if I start reading again I'll never update...it hurts sweeety...it really hurts, but I think I'll take a little break once I'm done writing this fic and Yokozano to catch up. About conserving water...lets just say...I'm a very environmentally caring person, heh. :twisted:  btw I wub you too :heart: and what's this about msn?

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Somehow, I think they could actually be like that way around each other
  haha! I'd like to think so!  :kekeke:  and yes I believe that, generally speaking, best friends tend to think alot alike which is why they're so close, that's why I made Aya so playfully perverted.  :grin:

Rhysky: I like the vote of confidence, I do tend to harp on myself a little to much, huh?  :mon sweat: 
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oh no... konkon better dun go up... u will be spoiling it if u saw them on the mountain...   
lol you might be doing this  :banghead:  after the end of the chapter but it won't be because of Konkon...

zay05ohayou: pregnant! That's hilarious! I can see it all now... Everyone's gathered together at Christmas or something and Rika has something urgent to say. Standing she raises her hand and announces, "Everyone...I'm pregnant."  a hush of shock would settle over the room and a moment later Miki would speak up.  "Ahem...I'm pregnant too."  Everyone would be flabbergasted, but not as much as when they found out Tsuji was pregnant sometime back.  Finally someone would have to ask..."but who's the father."  Both girls would blush and not have the courage to say, but it wouldn't matter because everyone would already know the answer anyways..."Uh, why is everyone looking at me." murmurs a nervous looking Yossy.  :lol:

kRisZ:yep: she's right ya know...

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oh, even though the mountain is a cold place..........for miki and rika, i guess it's steaming hot! 
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Ch 10


"Its raining~ Its pouring~" Yossy sang out loudly into the heavy audible droplets falling all around, and thudering against her thick raincoat.  She was singing in an attempt to hide the gripping nervousness that was clutching painfully at her entrails.  She didn't want Konno to know how terrified of the storm she actually was. She wanted always to be a strong person in front of her girlfriend.  Instead it looked like Konno was the one who was unaffected by the heavy, blinding rain and loud angry flashing sky above their heads.  Yossy grit her teeth as a particularly loud clap of thunder tore through the sky above them.  "We almost there yet?"  She yelled to Konno over the storm.

"Not yet."  Konno yelled back over her shoulder towards the girl walking behind herself.  Konno felt a stab of guilt at dragging Yossy out in this uncomfortable weather, when usually on rainy days, the two of them would find a secluded spot and cuddle, but tonight all they were doing was walking a muddy, tree lined path into a mountain for just the slim chance that their friends might be trapped up here alone, scared and hungry.  Konno paused to glance over her shoulder at the figure scuffling shakily behind her.  She noticed that despite the cheerful singing Yossy was doing she seemed kind of pale.  Konno paused and waited till Yossy was a little closer so she could place a comforting hand on her shoulder "We'll be there soon…" she reassured.

Yossy nodded.  The singing had finally died on her tongue, it wasn't really helping anyhow.  "Let's just hurry, okay?"

"Okay." Konno hooked an arm through Yossy's and walked with the other girl pressed close to her side.  She didn't know how Miki and Rika were fairing up here or how they'll react when they're rescued, but they'd better be grateful and appreciate what Yossy and she went through to save them.

Meanwhile, back at the thatched huts that were being cloaked in heavy rain, the two trapped girls were anything but alone, scared or hungry…okay, maybe they were hungry, but it certainly wasn't for food…

Both of the girls had managed to slip out of even more clothes and now all that either of them was wearing was their bottoms, Miki's sweat pants and Rika her bikini bottoms.  Rika was still sitting on Miki's lap, but the initial hot burn that had ignited from the explosive first kiss had morphed into something more playful and silly and deeply intoxicating.   

Rika smirked as she captured Miki's face with her hands, and with shoulders arching, pressed her eager, smiling lips to Miki's.  "Since this is probably the one and only time something like this will ever happen between us, you know I'm gonna kiss you a lot, right?"    To accent her words she touched her hovering lips once or twice more to the other girl's.  "I've always liked your lips…" Rika confessed.

Miki quirked an eyebrow at the cute, blushing face above her and grinned.  "You're so juvenile, Rika-chan, you talk of kisses when all I can think about is stealing second base…" Miki's hands slid slowly up from Rika's waist, causing goose bumps of excitement to prickle the other girl's skin as the groping hands found their destination.

Rika's head fell back and she murmured her pleasure as Miki's lips began to make the journey down to join up with the busy hands, but even in the raptures of this tender skinship, Miki's words had left a small nagging question to burn in the back of her mind.  Although she didn't for one second want Miki to use her mouth for any other reason then what it was doing now, she simply had to know, "Miki…?" she gasped out hotly. "Wha…uhnn...uh…what's third base…?"

Miki barely registered that Rika was talking to her.  "Huh?"  She whispered her mouth trailing across sensitive flesh. 

"Mmmm…I…I know what second base is and a home run, but I can't remember what third base is…."

Miki pulled back and looked at Rika incredulously, "…You seriously want to talk about this right now?"

Rika nodded shyly.  "I want to know…"

Miki paused for a moment and then began to smile wickedly at Rika's request and said as casually as possible, "Okay, I guess I can show you..." And before Rika could protest, rolled down to the floor pinning Rika underneath herself, the other girl's legs still wrapped around her waist.  Miki's lips began to taste at Rika's neck and she grinded her hips hard against the sensitive juncture between Rika's thighs, electing a low moan from the half naked girl under her. Then without further ado, she began to glide her lips down Rika's body while at the same time hooking her thumbs into the straps of Rika's bikini bottoms, pulling the damp garment away as she traveled downward. 

Rika's wanton cries and whimpers echoed off the walls of their tiny hut, because as it turns out, third base is awesome…and something to be returned…

…but sometimes good things don't last…

Particularly when someone loses themselves so completely that a small mistake is made.

"Yossy!"  Miki cried out in the heat of passion.  It was an honest accident really…she knew she was with Rika, but the words came out on they're own accord.  Miki was hoping Rika didn't hear but when the other froze up, Miki knew that this was going to end badly.

Rika reared away, sitting on her knees in the space between Miki's thighs, glaring at the nonchalant girl lying naked in front of her.  "What did you call me?!"

Miki brought her legs up and rested her forearms on her knees.  "Yossy."  She repeated unapologetically.  "What's the problem?"  Miki asked in a bored tone hoping to downplay the quickly growing hostile situation. 

"The problem," Rika responded through gritted teeth.  "Is that I'm not Yossy."

"Oops…"  Then wanting to get back to the lovemaking Miki reached to wrap her arms around Rika's shoulders and pull her close, but the move was blocked by the aggravated girl, who stood up and moved a couple of steps away.

"'Oops?' That's what you have to say for yourself?"  Rika demanded crossing her arms over her chest, blocking her assets from Miki's hungry gaze. 

Miki became irritated at the unintentional censoring and rose to her feet as well, planting her fists on her waist, glaring angrily and somewhat passionately at the pouting brat before her.  "Yeah, so?  What? You've never made a mistake before 'own goal, score for the other team' girl?"

Rika blushed.  "Why would you bring that up?!  It’s a completely different thing!"

"No, it’s the same damn thing!  It's getting a little confused in the throes of ecstasy! Now stop being bitchy and come back here."  Miki held her arms out.

Rika snorted.  "Not likely."  She strode over to the sweat shirt and proceeded to pick it up with the intention of putting it back on, but Miki was there like a shot, grabbing the material and trying to pull it away.

"Okay, okay, sorry!  I didn't mean anything by it! Now do you feel better?"

"Ugh! You don't get it do you?"  Rika grunted pulling on the sweat shirt, resulting in a tug of war between the two of them.  "It's not even that you said a different name, but whose name it was that you said!  You know I love her and now I feel like I betrayed her…I feel dirty…"

Miki stood there stunned, the sweatshirt slipping easily through her weaken fingers.  A strong hurt pierced her heart.  Quietly she whispered, "…so being with me makes you feel dirty…?" For some reason that Miki couldn't understand, her eyes began to fill with tears.  She turned around trying to hide her pitiful expression from the girl that hurt her. 


Rika looked at the other's arched shoulders and trembling form and felt full of remorse.  "I-I didn't mean it like that, I was just…."

"Shut up!"

"What? Why are you…?"

"I said shut up!!"

Rika puffed up angrily.  "Don't tell me to shut up!  You're not the boss of me I can talk if I want to!  Honestly! Look at you! How pathetic! You call me the name of the girl I love in the middle of …frankly….the best sex I've ever had and you don't understand why I'm upset, but I say something that didn't even mean what you think it means and you began to act all pissy!  For petes sake! Stop being such a…a…girl!"

"Oh ho! That's rich, coming from the girliest girl I've ever met!  Heh, yeah right..."  Miki turned around all the hurt was gone after being channeled into anger. Her nudity didn't even seem to bother her as she was so focused on giving Rika a verbal beat down.  She advanced threateningly towards the pink loving girl, who for her part, didn't back down one bit.  Miki stood nose to nose with her.  "…you spoilt, whiny, crybaby!  You think you love Yossy?! Puhlease! That's so laughable, a girl like you wouldn't even know what love is unless you were holding a mirror, you conceited little...and for the record, you aren't all that cute!"

Rika reared back as if slapped. "How dare you?!"  she cried out furiously, grabbing at Miki in anger, Miki tried dodging, but this relsulted in the two of them falling to the ground in a tangle of thrashing arms and legs.  They began wrestling around angrily.  "How could you say something like that?! You don't know me at all!"

"Ha!" Miki hollered grabbing Rika's wrists and rolling the wildcat acting girl underneath herself.  "You're only mad, because I'm so right!"

"Let go of me!"  Rika demanded, when Miki didn't comply Rika was able to pull one of the hands towards her face and bite down on Miki's thumb causing the other to cry out in pain and let go, freeing Rika who scampered away.

"You bit me!"  Miki accused.  "That's it!  You're gonna get it now Ishikawa!"   Miki dived at the stubborn looking girl, her fighting spirit burning hotly within her. 

The two figures wrestled heatedly in the middle of the floor, fists, nails and teeth making contact as they clawed angrily at each other, both ignoring they're state of little to no clothes.  It was about this time that Yossy and Konno found they're way to the hutch, the sounds of the two fighting girls leading them to their destination.

Yossy stood in the entryway, looks of horror and joy shifting back and forth across her face.  "…wow…" she breathed.  "Just…wow…"

Konno realized that she was going to have to take control of the situation, seeing as leader Yossy was more likely to find popcorn then to use her authority and stop them.

Disgusted at her girlfriend's inability to do anything but drool, Konno quickly grabbed Yossy's shoulders and turned her around.  "This isn't a scene for a guy's eyes." She berated.

"I'm a girl."  Yossy pouted, but didn't turn back.

With determination Konno walked over to stop them.  "Hey! What's going on here?"  There was no answer from the fighting girls as she approached them.  "Hey!"  She repeated.  "Don't make me go Bruce Lee on you!"  She reached down to grab Rika(who was currently on top)'s shoulder to pull her away but the fighters rolled suddenly taking Konno with them and the poor girl found her self sprawled in the middle of it all.  "Whoa! Stop!"

Yossy stared at the rain, her ears burning at the sounds of the girls rolling around behind her. The panting and grunting and now Konno's soft cries of, 'watch your hands.', 'don't touch me there.', 'Ah! That's a sensitive place!'.  Yossy couldn't take it anymore.  She would have to stop them herself.  Turning determinedly, she walked purposely over to the three girls.  First things first, she grabbed her girlfriend by the arm and yanked her out of there, and Konno looked more then a little traumatized by the whole thing.  Then once she had saved her girl, she walked to the doorway and taking of her rain cap proceeded to fill it with water.  Walking calmly to the bickering girls she unceremoniously tipped the hat spilling the cold rain water all over them.


They both screamed out in surprised at the cold splash, both coming instantly back to reality.

"Ohno! Yossy!"  Rika gasped sitting on her knees and trying to pull her rumpled sweatshirt over them. A blush burning up her cheeks, she reached a hand up to pat at her tussled hair.

Miki seemed uncaring of her appearance or her nudity as she hopped to her feet, a relieved smile plastered on her face.  "Boy, am I happy to see you guys!"  Miki advanced and proceeded to wrap her arms around both of her rescuers pulling them into a close hug.  Konno blushed and patted Miki's back awkwardly while Yossy pinched the bridge of her nose closed.

"I'm glad you guys are okay!" Konno supplied. Then under her breath muttered, "…for the most part…" 

Yossy could only manage to get out a strangled, "…clothes…please…" plea.

Happily, both girls complied, eagerly slipping on the warm dry clothes that had been brought for them and also the rain coats. 

The trip back down the mountain was a solemn affair seeing as there was a thick, heavy tension in the air between the two rescued girls that the pouring rain couldn't seem to wash away.

Yossy and Konno walked arm and arm behind the brooding girls, both wondering exactly what had happened up there…



Once they were back at the hotel they all quietly traveled back to they're rooms, all very exhausted by the physical exhaustion and late hours.

Only Konno was still awake enough to think. She would have to get together early tomarrow with Aya and Shibata, because after what she had seen tonight it looked like their Shakespeare plan was going to be tougher then she had originaly thought.  They would have to get started right away in the wee hours of the morning…because, getting those two bickering girls together was starting to look like a pretty impossible job….




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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #84 on: August 17, 2008, 12:48:14 AM »
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

... that's all i have to say....

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #85 on: August 17, 2008, 03:33:12 AM »
That chapter was awesome!
I want the next one NOW!
Do you hear me! Now...
please?

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #86 on: August 17, 2008, 03:56:44 AM »
Rika and Miki should just face the fact that Yossie isn't available anymore, and should realize they sorta like each other  :lol:
Konkon and Yossie found them in such a awkward situation... But they're really cool with it, and Konno even wants to help them!
Waiting for more Shiba and Aya funny moments, and/or a new chapter!

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #87 on: August 17, 2008, 04:01:47 AM »
Oh, the visuals!  :lol:
All that bickering brought a smile to my face, really.  :yep:
Great update!  :muffin:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #88 on: August 17, 2008, 05:33:07 AM »
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lovely update... haha...

how can miki say the wrong name in the middle of it....???  :depressed:

can sense tat CharmKitty going to fall hard on each other...  :tama-bigheart:

looking forward for another update...  :k-inlove:
1st: (^^) Yomiki (^^)
2nd: >< Yomaki ><
3rd: D: Charmikkity :D
4th: (: Ishiyoshi :)

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #89 on: August 17, 2008, 08:57:46 AM »
Damn, that was hot!!!! :twisted: At first. I'm glad Rika's curious!!! :P Shit, Miki!!!!!! :tama-mad: And their fighting is almost like sex!! Poor poor Kon kon!!! XD I wonder what shall happen now? :D
Oh, and I like pervy things!! I am, after all, the "Perv Kouhai"!!! As long as you post it somewhere in addition to the perv (being jailbait sucks!), I will read and most likely enjoy!

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #90 on: August 17, 2008, 01:48:35 PM »
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"Miki…?" she gasped out hotly. "Wha…uhnn...uh…what's third base…?"

Miki barely registered that Rika was talking to her.  "Huh?"  She whispered her mouth trailing across sensitive flesh.

"Mmmm…I…I know what second base is and a home run, but I can't remember what third base is…."

Miki pulled back and looked at Rika incredulously, "…You seriously want to talk about this right now?"

Rika nodded shyly.  "I want to know…"
Hmm.. I want to know too!!!

Oh wait.. so the scene after this was it? What's second and homerun then?  :sweatdrop:

Oh fudge. Just when it was getting to the good stuff sumone had to call Yossie. I had my fingers crossed that Miki just said that because she saw her pop out of nowhere with Konkon. *sigh* There goes the someone getting pregnant idea, not that I'm hoping for one.  :P But it would be good to see Rika and Miki both pregnant and Yossie in the middle holding both of them in her arms.  XD

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"It's not even that you said a different name, but whose name it was that you said!  You know I love her and now I feel like I betrayed her…I feel dirty…"
Heyyyy! Dirty isn't a good word! and if she really does love her she wouldn't have done those HOT things with Miki in the first place.  ;)

I really thought that while they're going at each others necks they'd go blank and start making out again.  :sweatdrop:

Yossie and Konkon to save the day!! They could've waited a few more minutes. I really was hoping for them to get back to making out.  :banghead:


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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #91 on: August 17, 2008, 04:29:06 PM »
one minute, miki and rika were in a "rabu-rabu mode"  :luvluv1: then in an instant, they're already in a "war mode"  :scolding:

hehe.......well for the record! nice update!




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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #92 on: August 18, 2008, 11:08:50 AM »
OH MY FLIPPING GAHHHHHHH!  :mon bleed2: :mon crazyinlove: :mon blood:
The last two chapters have just been so full of hotness it should be illegal... As much as I love YoMiki and TakaGaki, I don't think there is any hotter couple than CharMikitty, especially not after you just wrote what you did :imdead:

Yossy, Yossy, Yossy, always getting in the way even when she isn't there! How could you be so silly Miki, to think, you just put an end to hot sex, how could you  :mon nyah:
Rika is such a baby though XD Sure she said the name of the girl you "love" but you said it yourself, Best... sex... ever! Question for the other while I momentarily stop yelling at your characters: Has Miki ever proclaimed, whether it be privately to herself, that she is in love with Yossy like Rika has?

Back to the yelling at the characters, KONKON! You just made your big tough jock boyfriend girlfriend scared like a little girl just by going out in a smart... Just coz you know the physics, and whatever else, behind thunder and lightning, doesn't mean everyone else does... I don't know whether to be mad at you or high-five you for turning Yossy into a scaredy cat (without using snakes or other similar creatures), thus making the impossible, possible!   :mon evillaff: :mon thumb:

Ok back to the CharMikittym, even the wrestling was daaamn fiiine! :mon crazyinlove: I hope they don't stay mad at each other for long, I want some more action from them... actually I want some cutesy make-up scene  :mon lovelaff:

Btw, I'm sorry to hear about your job, but at least you seem happy about it... As one door closes, another opens :D
Also, as you just discovered the perv fanfic forum, I think I shall take the liberty of telling you to join the tiny amount of writers there and some CharMikitty to it :w00t: *Dies at the thought*  :mon blood: :imdead:
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #93 on: August 18, 2008, 03:50:42 PM »
Question for the other while I momentarily stop yelling at your characters: Has Miki ever proclaimed, whether it be privately to herself, that she is in love with Miki like Rika has?
Do you mean Yossy??? XD

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #94 on: August 18, 2008, 09:02:40 PM »
^ No, I meant Miki... Is she in love with herself like Rika is in love with herself? :P :sweatdrop:

Shut up, I was in a hurry  :mon butt:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #95 on: August 18, 2008, 10:04:57 PM »
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #96 on: August 19, 2008, 03:17:03 AM »
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"Its raining~ Its pouring~" Yossy sang out loudly
THE OLD MAN IS SNORING!
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She was singing in an attempt to hide the gripping nervousness that was clutching painfully at her entrails.  She didn't want Konno to know how terrified of the storm she actually was.
Awwwww...Yossi doesn't like storms?  That's so cute. :love:



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"We almost there yet?"  She yelled to Konno over the storm.

"Not yet."  Konno yelled back over her shoulder towards the girl walking behind herself.
The question NOW is...assuming that they DO find CharMikitty, in what state will they find CharMikitty? ;D



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She didn't know how Miki and Rika were fairing up here or how they'll react when they're rescued, but they'd better be grateful and appreciate what Yossy and she went through to save them.
And what if they're pissy and don't like being...um...."interrupted"?  :roll:



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"Since this is probably the one and only time something like this will ever happen between us, you know I'm gonna kiss you a lot, right?"    To accent her words she touched her hovering lips once or twice more to the other girl's.  "I've always liked your lips…" Rika confessed.
They ARE pretty damn luscious. :drool:

Wait...one and only time?  Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeak. :tama-mad:



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"You're so juvenile, Rika-chan, you talk of kisses when all I can think about is stealing second base…" Miki's hands slid slowly up from Rika's waist, causing goose bumps of excitement to prickle the other girl's skin as the groping hands found their destination.
:jerk:



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"Miki…?" she gasped out hotly. "Wha…uhnn...uh…what's third base…?"

Miki barely registered that Rika was talking to her.  "Huh?"  She whispered her mouth trailing across sensitive flesh.

"Mmmm…I…I know what second base is and a home run, but I can't remember what third base is…."

Miki pulled back and looked at Rika incredulously, "…You seriously want to talk about this right now?"

Rika nodded shyly.  "I want to know…"
IT'S DEMONSTRATION TIME!!!
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…but sometimes good things don't last…

Particularly when someone loses themselves so completely that a small mistake is made.

"Yossy!"  Miki cried out in the heat of passion.  It was an honest accident really…she knew she was with Rika, but the words came out on they're own accord.  Miki was hoping Rika didn't hear but when the other froze up, Miki knew that this was going to end badly.

Rika reared away, sitting on her knees in the space between Miki's thighs, glaring at the nonchalant girl lying naked in front of her.  "What did you call me?!"
Crap....
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What? You've never made a mistake before 'own goal, score for the other team' girl?
Oooooooooooooooooh...not helping here.



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"It's not even that you said a different name, but whose name it was that you said!  You know I love her and now I feel like I betrayed her…I feel dirty…"

Miki stood there stunned, the sweatshirt slipping easily through her weaken fingers.  A strong hurt pierced her heart.  Quietly she whispered, "…so being with me makes you feel dirty…?" For some reason that Miki couldn't understand, her eyes began to fill with tears.  She turned around trying to hide her pitiful expression from the girl that hurt her.
Double crap...
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*CHARMIKITY FIGHT*
They're still nekkid.
:OMG:


Dayum...
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The two figures wrestled heatedly in the middle of the floor, fists, nails and teeth making contact as they clawed angrily at each other, both ignoring they're state of little to no clothes.  It was about this time that Yossy and Konno found they're way to the hutch, the sounds of the two fighting girls leading them to their destination.
:doh:



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Yossy stood in the entryway, looks of horror and joy shifting back and forth across her face.  "…wow…" she breathed.  "Just…wow[/i…"
Don't tell me she's getting turned on by this? XD



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With determination Konno walked over to stop them.  "Hey! What's going on here?"  There was no answer from the fighting girls as she approached them.  "Hey!"  She repeated.  "Don't make me go Bruce Lee on you!"  She reached down to grab Rika(who was currently on top)'s shoulder to pull her away but the fighters rolled suddenly taking Konno with them and the poor girl found her self sprawled in the middle of it all.  "Whoa! Stop!"

Yossy stared at the rain, her ears burning at the sounds of the girls rolling around behind her. The panting and grunting and now Konno's soft cries of, 'watch your hands.', 'don't touch me there.', 'Ah! That's a sensitive place!'.  Yossy couldn't take it anymore.
Now is she unable to take it anymore because her friends are in danger of seriously hurting themselves, or is it because CharMikitty might be getting more Konkon action than she herself has gotten?
 :kekeke:



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"Ohno! Yossy!"  Rika gasped sitting on her knees and trying to pull her rumpled sweatshirt over them. A blush burning up her cheeks, she reached a hand up to pat at her tussled hair.

Miki seemed uncaring of her appearance or her nudity as she hopped to her feet, a relieved smile plastered on her face.  "Boy, am I happy to see you guys!"  Miki advanced and proceeded to wrap her arms around both of her rescuers pulling them into a close hug.  Konno blushed and patted Miki's back awkwardly while Yossy pinched the bridge of her nose closed.

"I'm glad you guys are okay!" Konno supplied. Then under her breath muttered, "…for the most part…"

Yossy could only manage to get out a strangled, "…clothes…please…" plea.
:on lol:

Getting hugged by nekkid Miki? That is SO winz! :cow:



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Once they were back at the hotel they all quietly traveled back to they're rooms, all very exhausted by the physical exhaustion and late hours.

Only Konno was still awake enough to think. She would have to get together early tomarrow with Aya and Shibata, because after what she had seen tonight it looked like their Shakespeare plan was going to be tougher then she had originaly thought.  They would have to get started right away in the wee hours of the morning…because, getting those two bickering girls together was starting to look like a pretty impossible job….
MOAR PLOTTING!!!
 :w00t:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #97 on: August 19, 2008, 02:12:37 PM »
 :muffin: I so love the update   :yep:

lovers quarrel   XD

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #98 on: August 19, 2008, 02:25:51 PM »
awww they fought..... that was a bit slack of both of them... so immature, choosing to hurt back when they are hurt...... If only Miki had just apologised to begin with.....but they'd still be broken up the next day as like Rika said ""Since this is probably the one and only time something like this will ever happen between us,""....but I still felt really sad when it happened... there may have even been tears...but that might've just been cause the second I read this thing up there I freaked out and kicked out and stubbed my toe.... sooo sore.... esp since I was playing soccer and it got real sore from kicking and stuff :'[

 In my head though I keep thinking up alternatives and possibilities for the next chap..... eg., Miki goes to Rika's room to apologise and stuff and sees her crying and gets all soft and stuff....or the other way around or something....or like, Rika goes to return her shirt and finds Miki crying or something and feels sorry and apologises and Miki is the bigger person and forgives her and they reignite that spark within them and make hot but very sweeet rabu rabu.....

I'm still here :D and waiting for the next chapter :D hopefully it will be up soon !
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs (a charmkitty fic) ch 10
« Reply #99 on: August 19, 2008, 02:30:52 PM »
ooh and I just remembered..... dude!

when I started reading reading this chap and just reached the hot shmexy rabu rabu bit my mum was like "Im coming into this room now" and I freaked out and tried to close it but it was taking its time and by the time I would've logged off she'd have been here so what do I do?

 Yank the plug out of the socket XD

you owez mez a nu plug XD jkz, I didn't break it :D
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