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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs <-- this story on hold for now
« Reply #100 on: October 14, 2008, 06:10:01 PM »
um this chapter is kinda short and not much happens truthfully I've already written more then this but I can't decide where to stop and I don't want to make this chapter to long, and as you can see I didn't respond to the comments like I normally do, I'm really sorry, but I've decided to try to respond as I get comments rather then try to answer them all at once since I don't really have the time on the computer I once did (although I figure if I have time to fangirl over Hangry and Angry then I have time to post)...luckily my class got canceled so I'm able to post this...anyways if anyone still likes this story heres an update and expect the other one soon :)



chapter 11 (i think)

Miki Fujimoto has had better mornings.  Mornings that didn’t evolve glaring at the ceiling because of lack of sleep or groaning audibly when you can feel all the aches in your body from rolling around on a hard wood floor all night from fighting and *ahem*…other things…, but last of all, she knew it was a bad morning when she couldn’t even look at herself in the bathroom mirror without cringing and then glaring at the idiot she saw reflected there. 

“Dummy.”  She muttered bitterly at herself as she grabbed her toothbrush and squeezed some cavity fighting goop on it.  “You had to ruin everything, huh?”  She shoved the minty covered bristles into her mouth before she could answer, knowing that any response would just make her angrier, and she needed to avoid the crazy ‘fights with herself in the mirror’ image as much as possible. 

With a sigh she placed the toothbrush back into its holder after she was done brushing.  She somehow managed to get though the rest of her morning routine without thinking too much about how she had ruined things.  Or agonizing over what almost was, like the taste of tender lips, the smell of rain touched skin or the soft sighs that whispered in her ear when her fingers had trialed over sensitive flesh…damn…

She made a subconscious memo to herself that she needed to stay as far away from that Ishikawa as possible, or the temptation would prove to be too difficult to ignore.  Truthfully, she knew exactly what she was doing when she said Yossy’s name.  It was in an effort to stop the madness before it could consume them totally, and Miki knew that there would be no way to stop with sheer willpower alone so she resorted to a mean trick.  It wasn’t the most thought out plan and it made her feel ten inches tall when she realized how much she had hurt the other girl, but she knew the situation had to be controlled.  So here she was, standing alone in her room and moodily shuffling around trying to get ready for the day, knowing she should stay far from her temptation as possible, and yet she couldn’t stop herself from thinking of possible scenarios on what she could say to make things right between them again.

Dressing in some casual white caprices and a red, floral Hawaiian shirt, she made her way down to the breakfast hall with a degree of dread, there was one good thing about there being so many girls in H!P and that’s the fact that if you wanted to avoid someone the crowded room where all the girls eat together was perfect…or so she thought…

When Miki opened the door to the large meal room, she was shocked to see that no one, save the one person she didn’t want to see, was there.  “What the hell?”  Miki declared out loud forgetting that she was supposed to be avoiding Rika right now.  “Where is everyone?”  She asked her rival, and to Miki’s irritation, Rika didn’t bother to acknowledge her.  DAMNIT! Miki Fujimoto would not be ignored!  She marched right over to that girl, yes that very girl who tasted like an angel but had a temper derived from hell itself, and she pointedly knocked on the surface of Rika’s table.  “HelloOo??”

Rika remained stone faced and mechanically continued to put spoon to flakes to mouth and back again without breaking rhythm, hoping that the bane of her existence would just leave her alone.  She was determined to ignore the other girl with every fiber of her being, with every molecule of her body, she would never give in to Miki ever again. 
Miki watched fascinated as Rika continued her weird eating ritual.  “You gotta chew sometime, or you’ll choke.”

Rika snorted obstinately…which caused the food sitting in her mouth to shoot up her nostrils and she began to choke and cough, clutching at her throat while Miki pounded painfully on her back.  She quickly grabbed some napkins and tried to hide the gross display and preserve some dignity.

Miki was laughing insanely.  “told you!”

Rika lost her cool and her vow of silence and yelled angrily.  “What’s your problem?! Can’t you just leave me alone, or better yet why don’t you go bug someone else?“

Miki threw her hands in the air exasperated.  “Yeah! Great! Who?  Incase it’s escaped your notice we’re the only ones in here.  It’s like the twilight zone or something…” 

Rika frowned and looked around the room as if realizing for the first time that it was empty.  “Maybe everyone…slept in…” she murmured quietly.

“Doubtful, no one had quite the night that we had…” Miki noticed a small flake sticking to the side of Rika’s chin and felt a strange feeling of familiarity swell within her.  The feeling wasn’t far removed from nostalgia.  “You have a…”  Miki whispered in a barely audible voice as she lifted a trembling hand towards the chin of the preoccupied girl staring hard at the entrance, but when that head turned suddenly in her direction she quickly dropped her fingers and hid her hands under the table.  She diverted her gaze from the other girl trying to hide her embarrassment.  “So, uh, where do you think everyone is?”  Miki asked, keeping her tone neutral.

“I don’t know, but I think we should look for them…”  Rika paused midsentence when she suddenly heard a loud grumbling.  “…actually, maybe you should eat first.”  She smiled sheepishly.

Miki nodded enthused.  “Right! Food then searching!  Sounds like a plan, besides it’s not like they’re all gathered together in one place so it should be pretty easy to find someone…”

Meanwhile in a big room all gathered together in one place was the rest of hello pro…

“Uh, Yossy…”  Konno murmured quietly.

“Hm?”

“When you said you were going to gather a few recruits for our mission, I really wasn’t expecting you to bring all of Hello Project…”

“I did good right?” Yossy’s puppy dog eyes were adorable.

“Well, I do appreciate the enthusiasm.”  Konno looked around the room incredulously, amazed at just how many girls managed to cram themselves into this one business conference room.  Most had to resort to lap sitting.  There was a sense of unity in the room as everyone appeared excited about being involved in the mission.  Getting the attention of this large of group would be very difficult, but Konno knew she would have to do so soon, Miki and Rika could be waking anytime now and the last thing they needed was to found out by their targets. 

So taking a deep breath she went ahead and called everyone to pay attention after a few tries she finally got everyone to listen and set about to the laborious task of quickly explaining the plan and assigning everyone a role in it. Surprisingly, despite the packed house the meeting went rather smoothly, it wasn’t long before everyone had a place in the plan.

“One question…” stated Kei

“Okay.” Konno nodded her go ahead.

“Um…all these plans are rather time consuming and take up most of the day, so…uh…aren’t we in Hawaii to do some kind of…something, that’s never quite stated by the author, that’s work related?  Like a concert or whatever…”

Many of the girls nodded all had been wondering the same thing.

“Its called a plot hole, so let’s try to ignore it even though its glaringly obvious.”

  Now  that that was straightened out,  they were ready to find Miki and Rika and execute the first part of the plan.

Unfortunately, the duo found them first.

The door to the large conference room swung open and a slack jawed Miki looked in at the crowded room incredulously.  Over her shoulder she hollered, “I found them!”  Rika soon joined her at the doorway. 

“What’s going on here?”  Rika demanded to no one in particular.

Yossy thinking quickly, threw up her hands and cheered.  “Surprise! Happy birthday, Rika-chan!  Yaaaay!”

Konno quickly placed a restraining hand on Yossy’s arm and shook her head at her.  No one was dumb enough to fall for that…

“Aaa! I’m so happy!”  Rika exclaimed. “…That you guys wanted to gather together and celebrate my birth!”

Miki frowned at her.  “It’s not your birthday.”

“So?  It’s the thought that counts not the minor technicalities.”

Miki poked a finger against Rika’s forehead.  “Don’t be a dummy.” She turned to address the rest of the room.  “Now, why is everyone…”  Miki found she couldn’t finish the sentence as she was pressed to the side since suddenly everyone decided to leave at the same time, all of them were happy and carefree, apparently no one felt explanations were necessary.

Miki was starting to feel really irritated now and directed those emotions to the last two occupants standing in the room.  “How come me and Rika weren’t invited to this little meeting with everyone else?”  She asked Konno and Yossy matter of fact.

Konno and Yossy looked at each other not sure how to answer. Finally Konno was the one to speak, “Uh, well, no one…wanted to wake you, since the two of you had such a…extraneous night.”

“Right,” Added Yossy, “besides it was just a bunch of boring stuff anyways…like, um, microeconomics and the effects of all that radiology coming from your microwave…”

“…radiation…” Konno corrected dourly.

Yossy nodded.  “Yup, that too…”

Rika made a face.  “Well I’m glad I missed it…”

Miki was still suspicious.  “So you guys all gathered together for a…study group?  Riiiight…”

“Come one, Fujimoto, don’t you trust me anymore?”  Yossy asked pitifully.

“Not since you became a liar.”  Miki scoffed, the thought of ‘pookie’ dashed through her mind. 

Yossy frowned, her playfulness gone.  “What’s that supposed to mean…”

“It means the way it sounds, did I stutter? We used to be close, but now you’re always keeping secrets from me…”

“Keeping secrets? Are you kidding me?!  Listen you, do you really think I have to answer to you for what goes on in my life?!  Besides, it’s not me who wants to keep secrets it’s
Kon…!”  Yossy paused when she felt a grip at her elbow, she turned her head to see Konno giving her a pleading look.  “…nspiracies…in the damn government!  They tap our telephones and watch us through our t.v.s, I have a right to be upset… and that’s all I have to say about that!  Now, If you’ll excuse me…” head held high she marched out the door passed a slack jawed Miki.

“What the hell?!”  Miki barked after her.  “Nothing you said made any sense!!”

“Yoshizawa-san has been watching to many late night paranoia movies in her apartment lately, heh heh…”  Konno explained laughing awkwardly.

Rika eyed Konno with interest.  “How would you know what Yossy’ does ‘late night’ in her apartment.”

“Uh…that’s not important, what’s important is that Yoshizawa-san is obviously suffering from…heat exhaustion…so, yeah,  I’m going to go find her and get her a cold compress, we’ll catch up some other time…” before there could be a response she was already out the door.

“Great! I’m even more confused now then when I opened the door!”  Miki turned to Rika. “Can you believe…”

“Don’t talk to me I’m still mad at you.”  Thus stated, an irritated looking Rika walked stiffly away.

“Huh?  Well, that was certainly random…”  Miki shook her head.  “I don’t know what’s going on with everyone, but I’m staying far away from the drinking water.”

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #101 on: October 14, 2008, 08:08:31 PM »
Aw, there was no catfight this time.
Still, it was nice reading an update.
Come back soon with the next installment!

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #102 on: October 14, 2008, 10:21:22 PM »
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Miki Fujimoto has had better mornings. 

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she knew it was a bad morning when she couldn’t even look at herself in the bathroom mirror without cringing and then glaring at the idiot she saw reflected there.

“Dummy.”  She muttered bitterly at herself as she grabbed her toothbrush and squeezed some cavity fighting goop on it.  “You had to ruin everything, huh?”
:(



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She somehow managed to get though the rest of her morning routine without thinking too much about how she had ruined things.  Or agonizing over what almost was, like the taste of tender lips, the smell of rain touched skin or the soft sighs that whispered in her ear when her fingers had trialed over sensitive flesh…damn…

She made a subconscious memo to herself that she needed to stay as far away from that Ishikawa as possible, or the temptation would prove to be too difficult to ignore.  Truthfully, she knew exactly what she was doing when she said Yossy’s name.  It was in an effort to stop the madness before it could consume them totally, and Miki knew that there would be no way to stop with sheer willpower alone so she resorted to a mean trick.
Ohhhhh yeah, looks like Miki's got it pretty bad for Rika after all, and it scared her because she's "supposed" to have it bad for Yossi.



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When Miki opened the door to the large meal room, she was shocked to see that no one, save the one person she didn’t want to see, was there.  “What the hell?”  Miki declared out loud forgetting that she was supposed to be avoiding Rika right now.
Of all the bloody...:doh:



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Rika remained stone faced and mechanically continued to put spoon to flakes to mouth and back again without breaking rhythm, hoping that the bane of her existence would just leave her alone.  She was determined to ignore the other girl with every fiber of her being, with every molecule of her body, she would never give in to Miki ever again.
Oh come on. It's pretty obvious that Rika wants Miki just as much as Miki wants Rika, and at the same time is probably just as scared of what would happen if they did get together again.



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Miki watched fascinated as Rika continued her weird eating ritual.  “You gotta chew sometime, or you’ll choke.”
Yeah, so much for avoiding each other.  :roll:



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“So, uh, where do you think everyone is?”  Miki asked, keeping her tone neutral.

“I don’t know, but I think we should look for them…”  Rika paused midsentence when she suddenly heard a loud grumbling.  “…actually, maybe you should eat first.”  She smiled sheepishly.

Miki nodded enthused.  “Right! Food then searching!  Sounds like a plan, besides it’s not like they’re all gathered together in one place so it should be pretty easy to find someone…”
Watch they probably are. XD



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Meanwhile in a big room all gathered together in one place was the rest of hello pro…
Oh yeah! EVERYONE'S in on it now!
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“Uh, Yossy…”  Konno murmured quietly.

“Hm?”

“When you said you were going to gather a few recruits for our mission, I really wasn’t expecting you to bring all of Hello Project…”

“I did good right?” Yossy’s puppy dog eyes were adorable.
Yossi = :mon cute:



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Most had to resort to lap sitting.
This can be cute AND/OR hot, depending on who's sitting on who's lap. ;D



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“One question…” stated Kei

“Okay.” Konno nodded her go ahead.

“Um…all these plans are rather time consuming and take up most of the day, so…uh…aren’t we in Hawaii to do some kind of…something, that’s never quite stated by the author, that’s work related?  Like a concert or whatever…”

Many of the girls nodded all had been wondering the same thing.

“Its called a plot hole, so let’s try to ignore it even though its glaringly obvious.”
wings4dreams = :mon sweat:



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  Now  that that was straightened out,  they were ready to find Miki and Rika and execute the first part of the plan.

Unfortunately, the duo found them first.

The door to the large conference room swung open and a slack jawed Miki looked in at the crowded room incredulously.  Over her shoulder she hollered, “I found them!”  Rika soon joined her at the doorway.

“What’s going on here?”  Rika demanded to no one in particular
Oops.  :O



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Yossy thinking quickly, threw up her hands and cheered.  “Surprise! Happy birthday, Rika-chan!  Yaaaay!”

Konno quickly placed a restraining hand on Yossy’s arm and shook her head at her.  No one was dumb enough to fall for that…

“Aaa! I’m so happy!”  Rika exclaimed. “…That you guys wanted to gather together and celebrate my birth!”

Miki frowned at her.  “It’s not your birthday.”

“So?  It’s the thought that counts not the minor technicalities.”
Yossi =  :on BDay:
Rika =  :wriggly:
Miki = :mon suspect:



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Miki was starting to feel really irritated now and directed those emotions to the last two occupants standing in the room.  “How come me and Rika weren’t invited to this little meeting with everyone else?”  She asked Konno and Yossy matter of fact.

Konno and Yossy looked at each other not sure how to answer. Finally Konno was the one to speak, “Uh, well, no one…wanted to wake you, since the two of you had such a…extraneous night.”
Ooooooooooooooooh...not sure if that's a good thing to say right now.  :-X



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Added Yossy, “besides it was just a bunch of boring stuff anyways…like, um, microeconomics and the effects of all that radiology coming from your microwave…”

“…radiation…” Konno corrected dourly.

Yossy nodded.  “Yup, that too…”
* JFC facepalms.



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“Keeping secrets? Are you kidding me?!  Listen you, do you really think I have to answer to you for what goes on in my life?!  Besides, it’s not me who wants to keep secrets it’s
Kon…!”  Yossy paused when she felt a grip at her elbow, she turned her head to see Konno giving her a pleading look.  “…nspiracies…in the damn government!  They tap our telephones and watch us through our t.v.s, I have a right to be upset… and that’s all I have to say about that!  Now, If you’ll excuse me…” head held high she marched out the door passed a slack jawed Miki.

“What the hell?!”  Miki barked after her.  “Nothing you said made any sense!!”

“Yoshizawa-san has been watching to many late night paranoia movies in her apartment lately, heh heh…”  Konno explained laughing awkwardly.

Rika eyed Konno with interest.  “How would you know what Yossy’ does ‘late night’ in her apartment.”

“Uh…that’s not important, what’s important is that Yoshizawa-san is obviously suffering from…heat exhaustion…so, yeah,  I’m going to go find her and get her a cold compress, we’ll catch up some other time…” before there could be a response she was already out the door.
Oh man, the endless LULZ!
:pig laugh:



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“Great! I’m even more confused now then when I opened the door!”  Miki turned to Rika. “Can you believe…”

“Don’t talk to me I’m still mad at you.”  Thus stated, an irritated looking Rika walked stiffly away.
Aw.
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“Huh?  Well, that was certainly random…”  Miki shook her head.  “I don’t know what’s going on with everyone, but I’m staying far away from the drinking water.”
* JFC wonders how long it'll take before Yuko shows up with a flask. :P
« Last Edit: October 15, 2008, 04:51:38 AM by JFC »

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #103 on: October 15, 2008, 12:39:48 AM »
Yeah~ you're back! 
6969696969696969~  XD

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #104 on: October 15, 2008, 03:29:24 AM »
Ya know, Amarghetta, I'm really glad you like the bickering so much because that happens to be my favorite way of showing affection between pairings   :hee:  the fighting is only taking a small reprieve (wounds gotta heal before the next round  :lol:)

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Now is she unable to take it anymore because her friends are in danger of seriously hurting themselves, or is it because CharMikitty might be getting more Konkon action than she herself has gotten?
:mon lmao: BINGO!!  :mon thumb:   

yeah, Miki and Rika are well on their way to being completely hooked on each other, buuut I kinda want to put them through the ringer first.  After all the only things worth having are the those things that are difficult to achieve  :bingo:


LOL, kata!!!  69 indeed  :twisted:  *blushes*  all my pervy thoughts are back!  *achem* 'memo to self write ishiyoshi smut stat." 

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #105 on: October 15, 2008, 01:57:35 PM »
haha... a confusing miki... she was like trying to know wat's going on around her but then everyone is like ignoring her...  :hiakhiakhiak:

rika was so random... one minute was talking to miki another minute she was still angry with miki and dun wan to talk to her... lol...  :onionwhip:

thanks for the update wings4dreams... one of the fanfic i always lookout for... do update soon... love the way u wrote abt charmkitty... veri nice story... i also looking forward the other fanfic u wrote...  :on GJ:
1st: (^^) Yomiki (^^)
2nd: >< Yomaki ><
3rd: D: Charmikkity :D
4th: (: Ishiyoshi :)

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #106 on: October 16, 2008, 02:56:59 AM »
Glad you like it Rhysky  :whistle:


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how can miki say the wrong name in the middle of it....?

even I couldn't believe it after I wrote it, so I had to justify it.  :sweatdrop:  but at the time I needed something that would make them stop, that was the only thing I could think of that could kill the mood so entirely...

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #107 on: October 16, 2008, 07:01:54 AM »
but at the time I needed something that would make them stop, that was the only thing I could think of that could kill the mood so entirely...

haha... ya... i was actually thinking of rabu rabu stuff already... but then it really quite kill the mood when i saw tat... haha... but then it's a nice scene too though it didnt went all the way there... haha...
1st: (^^) Yomiki (^^)
2nd: >< Yomaki ><
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4th: (: Ishiyoshi :)

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #108 on: October 16, 2008, 10:50:37 AM »
dayum.. Miki said 'Yossy' on purpose?  :O the love is so there..  :P just happened to be at the wrong moment

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 11
« Reply #109 on: October 16, 2008, 06:15:32 PM »
Noooo not the baby pandas!!!  They look cute on the out side but on the inside they're evil! eeeeeevviiiillllllllll!!!!!!  :mon scare: lol no need for yogart bombs, sweeety, I'm trying this new thing in which I make smaller chapters in the hopes I'll be able to update faster (this one was really updated fast because it was already written) b/t/w sorry about your plug, lol.  do you know what I used to do to keep my mom from knowing what i was doing?  I would have two tabs or two windows open so I could quickly switch to the other one if I needed to.  ;)


zay05ohayou, here is the answer to your question from ch10: 1st base is kissing :mon kissy:  :on slopkiss:, 2nd base is groping  :bouncy boobs:  :mon fyeah:, 3rd base is oral   :pepper: :leek: :banana: (no smileys for this one, obviously  :sweatdrop:), and a homerun is going 'all the way'  :hump: :sex:.  So Miki had 'fouled' at thirdbase  :P

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the love is so there..
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it's a nice scene too though it didnt went all the way there...
I knew that if I stopped them before they 'homerunned'  then when they really did do it, it would be more powerful, or at least that's what I'm hoping...


@JFC, haha you caught me....yes this is how I really felt  :mon sweat: when I decided to take the easy way out and just not worry about just why the girls were in Hawaii to start with...b/t/w the way you use smilielys never fails to crack me up  :lol:


just a warning ya'll that now that I'm trying to rush a little more to find time to write you may end up seeing even more spelling and grammar mistakes...but I'm not apologizing any more for it, hopefully by now you guys have come to expect this from me... :gmon hot:

Chapter 12

Miki decided to go to the small convince store located across the street from the hotel, she was presently walking through the parking lot in route to her destination.  she had a feeling she was going to need some strong headache medicine sense she was feeling so restless. Everything was in shambles around her.  Rika wouldn’t talk to her, Everyone was plotting something and not telling her, Rika was being too stubborn about her anger and was avoiding her, and she still didn’t know who the heck pookie is, and now she didn’t even have Rika to help because that girl was too busy holding grudges to be of any use, man…she even fought with Yossy and when does that ever happen? And to make matters worse she couldn’t find Rika anywhere.  Life sucks sometimes…

“Rika’s in love with Miki?!” 

Miki froze mid step, her eyes widening at what she just heard.  She looked over in surprise at the direction of the voice, it looked like Sayumi, Erika, and Aya were walking a few car lanes away from her. 

“I’m telling you it’s the truth, Sayu,”  Aya confirmed.  “Rika told Shibata about her feelings for Miki and Shibata told me.”

“I know about how Rika feels as well…”  Erika confided. 

“What? Did Rika tell you something?”  Aya asked.

Miki quickly ducked down and pressed her back against the shiny, grey body of an American suv.  Her heart was beating hard in her chest.  “No way…no way does Rika feel that for me…” she whispered heatedly, scuttling to the rear of the vehicle, she peaked around the side trying to keep the gossiping trio in view.

“Only that she thought Miki was beautiful and…um…” Erika shot a worried look back and forth to Aya and Sayumi, she couldn’t think of anything that Rika might like about Miki “…that she’s…”

Aya’s brow furrowed and her eyes pleaded with Erika to think of something.

Sayumi chewed on her bottom lip worriedly, knowing that whatever Erika said could jeopardize the mission.

Erika noticed Sayumi’s teeth working her lip and stared hypnotized, the words tumbled from her mouth almost involuntarily.  “…got the most kissable lips.”

Aya and Sayumi both made a face, thinking that Erika was certainly lacking in the creativity department.

Miki on the other hand was reeling with certain memories still fresh in her mind…

 …you know I'm gonna kiss you a lot, right?"    To accent her words she touched her hovering lips once or twice more to the other girl's.  "I've always liked your lips…" Rika confessed.

…could Rika have been holding a torch for her?  Could this really be the truth? Miki tried to keep up discreetly, by running hunched over on the other side of the parked cars opposite of the girls talking.  She didn’t want to miss a word of what they were saying.

“Ah yes, that is one thing she likes about Miki…” Aya stated with a slight strain in her voice as she glared pointedly at a sheepish looking Erika.  “She told Shibata that being with Miki makes her happy, even though she knows that Miki hates her…”

“What?!”  Miki screamed silently at herself.  How could Rika think that?!
 
“…she asked Shibata if she should confront Miki about her feelings Shibata didn’t know what to tell her so she asked me…” Aya said.

“What did you tell her to do?”  Sayumi asked as if she just had to know the answer.

“Yeah, Did you tell her that Rika should confess no matter what and follow her heart?”  Erika asked filled with the romance of it all.

Miki chewed her lip anxiously wondering what her best friends advice was.

Aya snorted humorlessly at the nonsensical suggestion.  “Hell no! I told her that if she loved Rika at all she would say to that girl not to tell Miki no matter what.  I told her to tell Rika that Miki’s the type that would laugh at her for being so dorky by saying things like ‘I love you’, ‘you complete me’, ‘I want to jump your bones’…” 

Miki growled in anger, glaring heatedly at who she had thought was her best friend.  “Aya you b!+(h!”  she pounded the rear of the car she was squatting next to and inadvertently set of its alarm. “Gah!” she quickly dived behind the next car.

The three conspiring girls all ducked and flinched at the sudden, high pitched girly scream that was emitting from some tough guy’s Hummer.  The all looked around and then at each other in surprise before knowing smiles spread across their faces. 
   
“That’s weird,”  Sayumi exclaimed loudly, so the ears of Miki could hear over the racket.  “How that alarm went off and no one is there.”

Erika clasped her hands over her ear.  “Well, whatever the reason we should get out of hear before my head explodes from the noise!”

“Wait! There’s one more thing I’m supposed to tell you!”

Sayumi and Erika stopped leaving and turned to look at Aya reluntently.  “What?”  They cried in unison.

“Don’t forget that Yossy wants us to get that boat ready for that island!  She says she wants to go on a ‘special trip’ and that she didn’t want anyone bothering her out there.  Here’s the money, you rent the boat, and I’ll let Miki know about the plans, since it looks to me like Yossy’s planning another date!”  a hand clasped over her ear she handed the wad of cash to the other two girls.  “Thanks guys!”

“Okay! Now lets get out of here!”  Erika demanded and the other two joined her and they quickly left.

Miki waited until she was sure they were leaving before escaping herself and heading towards the hotel lobby, her head was splitting for sure now thanks to the ringing in her ears from the crazy loud car alarm, but her headache was the last worry on her mind.  Yossy planned another date!  This time she and Rika would catch Yossy and Pookie in the act for sure!    And now Rika would have to talk to her again…and maybe tell her something important…Miki grinned.

Rika was still angry that afternoon as she sat at a picnic table under a cabana that perched on the edge of the beach.  She sat on the far side so she could gaze out at the ocean, her chin resting in her hands.  No matter how she looked at it Miki was totally out of line up there on the mountain.  How could she?  How could she!? How could she possible call out someone else’s name in the middle of it like that, she had heard of people doing  such things but to do it to Ishikawa Rika was unforgivable!  Her pride just couldn’t except it!

“Shibata...”  a curious voice asked from nearby.  “..why did you drag me out here?”

“I needed someone to talk to, Eri, someone who’s objective and can give me unbiased advice.”

Rika turned around and looked at the smattering of foyage and plams behind her, on the other side of the plants was where the voices were coming from, standing she started slowly in their direction.

“What is it?”  Eri asked. 

Shibata cast her eyes around to check to see if anyone was listening, which she hope one brooding person in particular was.  At the sight of some slight rustle to the foyage on her right she smiled and looked back at Eri.  “I just heard some terrible news from Aya!  Apparently Miki has said some things about Rika.”

“Bad things?”

Shibata shook her head.  “No, the opposite, Aya thinks that Miki might be falling for Rika!”

Eri’s eyes widened and she froze. 

Shibata frown when it looked like Eri had stopped communicating with her and was now contacting her alien friends, she waved a hand over the others eyes.  “Hello?”

“Get out of here.”  Eri finally responded, she gave Shibata an apologetic look.  Apparently she had forgotten what she was supposed to say.

Shibata gave Eri a wary look before continuing slowly.  “its true, I heard it from Aya herself.  Why would Aya lie about something so serious?”

Eri opened her mouth to say something but then closed it again.  She had a feeling there was something she was supposed to ask now…but what?   Shibata must of gone off script somewhere,  she couldn’t recognize her cue…
“And just what exactly did Miki say?!”  Rika charged out of the nearby trees and demanded.

Eri nodded.  Yeah that was what she was supposed to ask.

Shibata stared slack jawed at her friend and was at a loss of words…maybe she didn’t remember the story correctly, but aren’t the love interests supposed to stay hidden?  Figures that Rika would opt for the direct approach… “Oh! Rika-chan!  You…so you heard everything, huh?”

“Of course she had,”  Eri intervened.  “That was part of the plan…OW!”  Eri squatted and rubbed her shin where Shibata had kicked her.

“Plan?”  Rika looked down at Eri and then up at her best friend.  Her eyes were full of hurt.  “Shiba-chan…you, were plotting aginst me…I thought you were my friend, someone I could trust.”

Shibata felt like a heel, suddenly she realized that Rika was right.  She was looking at all of this as some sort of fun game, but instead she was just playing with the emotions of her closest friend.  What if Rika had believed the lie about Miki being in love with her?  When she found out the truth wouldn’t that be super painful?  It was time to put her alliance where it really mattered.  “I’m sorry, Rika, I guess I wasn’t being too thoughtful towards you…”

Rika placed a hand on Shibata’s shoulder.  “What’s going on?”

Taking a deep breath Shibata told Rika about the plan and how everyone conspired to hook her and Miki up by saying they had feelings for each other, although she left out the part about Konno being pookie she still felt like it was Konno and Yossy secret to tell.  She was going to leave it at that but Eri decided to throw in her two cents and told Rika about how they had plan to trick her into thinking Yossy was going on a secret ‘island retreat date’ as well. 
Rika seemed more then a little stunned at all of what she just heard and in a very small voice asked.   “Did they already do this to Miki?” 

Shibata nodded.  “They’re supposed to.  Actually, we were all supposed to do this at the same time, but me and Eri had a hard time finding you so…Miki’s was done awhile ago.”  Shyly she added “Aya said Miki’s was a success.”

Rika groaned.  “That idiot is for sure trying to find ways to get to that Island!  Great!  I’m not supposed to be talking to her and now I’ve got to stop her from doing something stupid…”

“What about the fact that Miki thinks you’re in love with her?”  Eri asked curiously.

Rika rolled her eyes.  “Miki wouldn’t care about something like that.  Trust me, I know for a fact that Yossy is the only thing on her mind…”

Shibata’s expression softened at the pain laced though the last part of that sentence, but she decided not to press Rika about what happen.  She figured Rika would tell her when she was ready.  “Okay then, good luck on trying to talk a determined Miki out of anything,”  she laughed playfully trying to lightened the mood.  “So I guess this means I’m going to be your mole, huh?”

Rika grinned.  “Obviously.”

Eri pointed at her nose.  “oo, can I be a mole too?”

Rika and Shibata looked at each other warily, but ultimately decided that even if Eri wouldn’t be much help to them she probably wouldn’t hurt to have on their team either.  Besides she had heard everything anyways so was in on it by default.  “Okay, you can be a mole too.”  Rika acknowledged gracefully.

Eri smiled pleasantly.  “Good, I never get the chance to be devious, looking forward to backstabbing for the sake of our cause…”

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #110 on: October 16, 2008, 06:36:40 PM »
YAY UR BACK and updating frequently too!!!

CHARMIKITTY LIVES :cow:

YAY Rika's going to save Miki!!!!!!!
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #111 on: October 17, 2008, 01:57:19 AM »
I like the contrast, where Rika's gung-ho  :otomerika: while Miki's sneakish.

It's good to be writing again ne:P

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #112 on: October 17, 2008, 02:25:18 AM »
Kyaaaaaaah!!! You updated again! *dances*
I've been stalking this thread non-stop, just because I'm intrigued about it.
Again, there was no catfight, but hopefully there'll be a big one soon.


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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #113 on: October 17, 2008, 05:30:14 AM »
Yes I'm back, takagakifan :)  And I am going to try to update more, but with my schedule its hard to say... I'm hoping the shorter chapters will help....
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YAY Rika's going to save Miki!!!!!!!
  or will she...perhaps next chapter we'll find out just who saves who....kekeke but that's all I'm saying... :mon evil:


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I like the contrast, where Rika's gung-ho   while Miki's sneakish.
That's because I wanted to give Rika a little more credit and have her be on top of things rather then Miki for once...Truthfully, Kata, I think its too good to be writing again, I've been writing stories like crazy...when I should be doing this :on study: lol its okay to be just a 'B' student right?   

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #114 on: October 17, 2008, 07:44:10 AM »
I love that plot! I thought Rika actually told Shiba-chan about it..  n here i was going. 'Damn Rika's finally admitted it..' Sure am hoping Rika makes the moves.. Conquer Miki!  Is this another stranded event happening to unfold?  :O
Charmikitty rules!  :otomerika:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #115 on: October 17, 2008, 03:59:16 PM »
now I want the next chapter so badly  :w00t:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #116 on: October 17, 2008, 04:58:28 PM »
okay, sweeety and krisz I promise to get the next chapter out asap, but it won't quite be as quick as this newest post was but I'm gonna try to get it done before the end of the week..

so keep the pandas away, because my little sister will see one and want to keep it and then Mom will say 'are you going to take care of it?'  and Kassi will say yes and then mom will say okay and thats how we have 3 cats a dog a rat and a bearded dragon (that I have to take care of and pay for)  see?  baby pandas are evil right?

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #117 on: October 18, 2008, 01:15:20 AM »
Uwaaa~ *spins around happily in spinny office chair* You've updated twice in one week!! Yeah, baby!!!
Loved ch.11! Miki's such a cutie! But Rika with corn flakes on her face is so...hilarious!! :lol: Whoa, can't believe Kon Kon and Yossy are employing all of H!P to get Rika and Miki together!!! XD This has got to be good..... :twisted:

Ah, ch. 12 was pretty great too. Miki's such a snoop too! :P She's gonna fall for it!!!! :kekeke: Eri!!! So awesome!! Love how Shiba-chan went off the script so she didn't know what to say. Yikes, this is not gonna turn out well with Rika knowing....at least not in the right direction.

Can't wait for more! :mon star:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #118 on: October 18, 2008, 05:49:06 AM »
yay! i was like.....baka no mikitty!  :kekeke:

hmm....rika-chan....is she going to pretend that she's really inlove with tan? or she's already inlove? haha :hehehe:




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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #119 on: October 18, 2008, 01:12:00 PM »
You called it, strawb3rrykream, oh yeah Miki's diffinintely going to fall for it~ 

haha...its nice that all of hp is involved that way I can throw in random girls and not have to worry about it being too weird or suprising.... ;)  Although... :mon huh2: I'm not really sure I'll be able to use them all...

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hmm....rika-chan....is she going to pretend that she's really inlove with tan? or she's already inlove?
  oOo~ interesting idea...having Rika pretend to be in love and get her way... lol it raises fun senerios in my mind, but I think the second part of your statment is in play here...

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one minute, miki and rika were in a "rabu-rabu mode"   then in an instant, they're already in a "war mode"
  what can I say, ayase909, that's the way of the charmkitty  ;)

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