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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 12
« Reply #120 on: October 22, 2008, 01:45:43 PM »
Yay! Thanks, Fushigidane!  lookes like your fairly new (at least to me) so WELCOME!  :onioncheer:

Oy, oy...Sweeety your so demanding  XD....*sigh* but apperently threats work really well with me so...heres the next part.  Really short though, not a lot of humor, and left off at a...critical spot...


Chapter 13

As Rika trotted away from Shiba and Eri, she knew she would have to find Miki fast.  Yossy’s supposed date was planned to start within the couple of hours.  Pulling out her cell phone she reluctantly turned it on.  She was surprised to see she had like 20 messages and most of them were from Miki.  She read through them quickly, rolling her eyes and deleting the ones accusing her of being a big baby and acting like a child.  “Sticks and stones…” she murmured.  Going to the last message from Miki, she hit reply and texted ‘Where are you?  I need to tell you something.’ After sending it she was surprised to get a quick response.
‘Raymon’s Aquatic Rentals.’
Rika sighed in resignation.  “Of course…” punching at her phone keys Rika sent out a ‘don’t do anything until I get there’ message.
After a few seconds her phone binged and this time the response was ‘I’ll wait.’


Miki paced back and forth across the old, brittle wooden planks of the entrance way to the rental shop.  Rika’s text of ‘I need to tell you something’ burned in her mind.  After overhearing Aya this morning, Miki had a pretty good idea of what that ‘something’ was and it filled her with turmoil.  On the one hand she didn’t think it was her problem if Rika had ‘feelings’ or whatever towards her and that she should just ignore the other girl, but on the other hand…did she really want to ignore Rika’s feelings?  Would it be fair to except Rika’s feelings when she couldn’t return them…After all she’s after Yossy and she wasn’t going to let Rika complicate things with some kinda confession or whatever, besides could she really withstand Rika’s pitiful expression from her rejection?  No way.  Her heart ached at just the thought.  She made a decision, it would be better to just avoid it altogether.  If Rika tried to talk she would just cut her off or pretend to be busy or whatever else method she could use to avoid the other girl. Better yet…maybe she should leave for the island alone.  She didn’t like the idea of going without her coconspirator, but she just couldn’t handle knowing Rika lov…liked her either. 

Turing on heel she headed inside the shop.

When Rika reached the rental shop she was very surprised that she didn’t see Miki anywhere.  So much for the ‘I’ll wait’ message, this was just great.  Going inside the shop she tried to communicate to the guy behind the counter with her broken English after some trial an error she finally figured out that Miki had already started out a few minutes ago, groaning Rika decided it still wasn’t too late to catch up but she would have to hurry.  As she turned to leave she noticed a pair of loafers that somewhat matched the shoes Yossy was carring earlier.  Turning back around she decided to ask another question.  “Um…shoes…what is?”

He looked at her blankly.  “huh?”

She pointed at the loafers.  “What-no, why shoes?  Why?”

“Those are for dancing, I dance.  Those shoes are for ballroom dancing.”

“balloom?”

“Here.”  The man handed her a flyer after looking over it she knew exactly where Yossy was planning to go tonight with pookie, and it certainly wasn’t to the island!  Rushing out the door she headed over to the jetski rental area where the man said she would be.  She came across Miki pushing a jetski into the water.  “Miki wait!”  she cried running toward the other girl waving happily.

Miki looked over her shoulder and cringed, Rika certainly did look love sick, it was as if the other girl could barely contain her enthusiasm in seeing her.  Rika definitely looked on the verge of confessing her feelings and Miki just wouldn’t be ready to hear something like that, so thinking quickly she decided to ignore the gaily calling girl and pushed her watercraft into the water and hopped on it.  Over her shoulder she looked at the quickly advancing girl and yelled.  “Sorry, Rika, but I just don’t want to hear what you have to say!”  Twisting the handle which gunned the ignition and she took off.

“What’s your problem?!”  Rika cried after her.  Looking around she saw a young Hawaian guy sitting on an idoling jeyski.  She waved timidly at him, and when he noticed her his jaw dropped. 

“Rika Ishikawa?” He cried in a thick hawaian accent.  He pointed at himself.  “I’m a fan.”

Rika smirked.  “How convienate…” she murmured to herself.  Pointing at his craft she asked. “Can I?”

Star struck he got up without complaint.  “Sure, just for a little bit, dad would get pissed if he knew I let you ride for free…”

Not knowing what the guy was saying she walked over to him and waded into the water.  Climbing on to the machine she smiled at him playfully.

He blushed wondering if this could be his big chance at a romantic connection with his idol, trying to act cool he tossed his hair and winked.  “Now, you just wait here while I go get you a life jacket, alright?” 

Rika just nodded, having absolutely no idea what he had asked but waited until the minute his back was turn, before turning the handle and taking off after the direction Miki had taken.

The guy turned and ran after her in a bit of a panic.  “Don’t go without a life jacket its dangerous!”  It was too late though she was already out of ear shot. 

Rika zoomed quickly over the choppy surf, bouncing a little but not slowing down, she knew that she would never catch up to Miki if she didn’t push the jetski to the limit.  Even though it was a pretty rough ride she was too angry to be afraid, why was Miki being so difficult?  All she wanted to do was tell her that Yossy’s date was not on the island. More then that, she found herself wondering why she cared so much.  If she was smart she would forget this wild chase and go pursue Yossy on her own, but for some reason she just didn’t want to.  She was relieved to see that she seemed to be lessening the gap between herself and Miki.

Miki thought for sure that she had successfully left Rika at the beach so decided to bring her craft down to an idol speed.  Resting her forearms on the handles she gazed out across the shimmering tropical waters and looked at the island, a sliver of land lining the horizon illuminated by the slowly sinking sun.  This place truly was a beautiful paradise.  Oddly she didn’t really feel an urgent need to crash Yossy’s romantic date, after all, as irritated as she was about this whole thing, Yossy was still her friend and what kind a friend would barge in at such a romantic time of day? When it was only an hour or so before twilight…not to mention the fact that her heart just wasn’t in it, the only thing she could think was that so where behind her Rika was standing on a beach alone and probably hurt by Miki’s disregard.

Why?  Why did the thought of letting Rika down hurt so much?
“Miiikkiiii!!”

Miki’s head shot up at the sound of her name being called.  “What the?”  She looked around and spotted Rika quickly approaching on a second jetski.  Miki was surprised and truthfully a little ecstatic,  seeing Rika approach caused little bubbles of pleasure to build up inside her.  “Rika.”

“Miki!  I need to tell you something!  Its really important, but I don’t think you’re going to like it, but it needs to be told…”

“Gah!”  Miki quickly turned to face the front again.  The pleasant bubbles dissolved and left in its place was the heavy feeling of dread.  “Why, Rika? Why?  Can’t you just leave things the way they are between us?!”  Miki shot forward seconds before the other girl could reach her.

“Miki!”  Rika yelled after her angrily.  She also gunned the engine and shot forward, now in a high speed chase with the obstinate girl.  “Get back here!  You’re going to listen to what I say whether you like it or not!!!!”

“Never!!!!”  Miki yelled back at the girl racing so close behind her.

“Don’t be an ass!!”

“You’re the ass!!”

“Pigheaded!!!”

“Annoying!!”

“Idiot!!”

“Birdbrain!!!”

“Whaaa!!”   *splash*

“Whaaa?”  Miki frowned that didn’t sound like an insult.  She stopped her jetski and looked behind her, Only to see Rika’s jetski idling forward with no rider.  “Rika?”  Her gaze combed over the rocking, glittery surf, but the other girl wasn’t in sight.  “RIKA!!!”

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #121 on: October 22, 2008, 02:38:28 PM »
How could you stop like that?!?! Just when it was starting to get some tempo... :on voodoo:

I wonder where Yossy and Pookie are actually going. It's gotta be a DRY place, and certainly way to far from the island, I guess.  :P

Oh, well, just make sure to come back soon.  :cow:



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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #122 on: October 23, 2008, 12:52:56 AM »
The chase is so fun.  :on gay: 

WhAAAA~  Why did you have to stop there?!  :on blackhole:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #123 on: October 23, 2008, 07:31:28 AM »
Oh noes! Why did u stoooooop?!  :( Hum..
Hehehe.. anyway... they so have a thing for each other..
It'd be funny if their boat runs out of gas or something and then they get stranded and.. u know..  :D
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #124 on: October 24, 2008, 06:53:38 AM »
Chapter 12

Whoops. Didn't notice this one popped up.
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Miki decided to go to the small convince store located across the street from the hotel

...

Everything was in shambles around her.  Rika wouldn’t talk to her,
Ooooooooo...Miki misses Rika.  :grin:



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Everyone was plotting something and not telling her
Oh, if she only knew. :lol:



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and she still didn’t know who the heck pookie is
Totally forgot about this!
:mon lmao:



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Life sucks sometimes…

“Rika’s in love with Miki?!”

Miki froze mid step, her eyes widening at what she just heard.  She looked over in surprise at the direction of the voice, it looked like Sayumi, Erika, and Aya were walking a few car lanes away from her.
Oh my, what a coincidence that they just happen to be there when Miki's there!  :roll:



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“Only that she thought Miki was beautiful and…um…” Erika shot a worried look back and forth to Aya and Sayumi, she couldn’t think of anything that Rika might like about Miki “…that she’s…”
Think fast Erika, or the jig will be up! :O



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Erika noticed Sayumi’s teeth working her lip and stared hypnotized, the words tumbled from her mouth almost involuntarily.  “…got the most kissable lips.”
Erika looking at Sayu's lips = :drool:



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Aya and Sayumi both made a face, thinking that Erika was certainly lacking in the creativity department.

Miki on the other hand was reeling with certain memories still fresh in her mind…

 …you know I'm gonna kiss you a lot, right?"    To accent her words she touched her hovering lips once or twice more to the other girl's.  "I've always liked your lips…" Rika confessed.
VERY nice how that worked out. :yep:



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“She told Shibata that being with Miki makes her happy, even though she knows that Miki hates her…”

“What?!”  Miki screamed silently at herself.  How could Rika think that?!
Miki = :mon wtf:



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“Yeah, Did you tell her that Rika should confess no matter what and follow her heart?”  Erika asked filled with the romance of it all.
Erika = :wriggly:



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Aya snorted humorlessly at the nonsensical suggestion.  “Hell no! I told her that if she loved Rika at all she would say to that girl not to tell Miki no matter what.  I told her to tell Rika that Miki’s the type that would laugh at her for being so dorky by saying things like ‘I love you’, ‘you complete me’, ‘I want to jump your bones’…”

Miki growled in anger, glaring heatedly at who she had thought was her best friend.  “Aya you b!+(h!”
Aya = :on thumbb:
Miki = :mon mad: 

* JFC ROFLZ at the "jump your bones" part.  ^_^



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she pounded the rear of the car she was squatting next to and inadvertently set of its alarm. “Gah!” she quickly dived behind the next car.

The three conspiring girls all ducked and flinched at the sudden, high pitched girly scream that was emitting from some tough guy’s Hummer.  The all looked around and then at each other in surprise before knowing smiles spread across their faces.
   
“That’s weird,”  Sayumi exclaimed loudly, so the ears of Miki could hear over the racket.  “How that alarm went off and no one is there.”

Erika clasped her hands over her ear.  “Well, whatever the reason we should get out of hear before my head explodes from the noise!”
:on lol:



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“Wait! There’s one more thing I’m supposed to tell you!”

Sayumi and Erika stopped leaving and turned to look at Aya reluntently.  “What?”  They cried in unison.

“Don’t forget that Yossy wants us to get that boat ready for that island!  She says she wants to go on a ‘special trip’ and that she didn’t want anyone bothering her out there.  Here’s the money, you rent the boat, and I’ll let Miki know about the plans, since it looks to me like Yossy’s planning another date!”  a hand clasped over her ear she handed the wad of cash to the other two girls.  “Thanks guys!”
Damn, when it comes to scheming, the H!P girls go BIG!  :w00t:



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“Shibata...”  a curious voice asked from nearby.  “..why did you drag me out here?”

“I needed someone to talk to, Eri, someone who’s objective and can give me unbiased advice.”

Rika turned around and looked at the smattering of foyage and plams behind her, on the other side of the plants was where the voices were coming from, standing she started slowly in their direction.
And now to set Phase 2 of the plan into motion.
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Shibata cast her eyes around to check to see if anyone was listening, which she hope one brooding person in particular was.  At the sight of some slight rustle to the foyage on her right she smiled and looked back at Eri.  “I just heard some terrible news from Aya!  Apparently Miki has said some things about Rika.”

“Bad things?”

Shibata shook her head.  “No, the opposite, Aya thinks that Miki might be falling for Rika!”
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUN! :cow:



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“And just what exactly did Miki say?!”  Rika charged out of the nearby trees and demanded.

Eri nodded.  Yeah that was what she was supposed to ask.
Uh-oh. Probably didn't expect THAT to happen.  :shocked:



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“Oh! Rika-chan!  You…so you heard everything, huh?”

“Of course she had,”  Eri intervened.  “That was part of the plan…OW!”  Eri squatted and rubbed her shin where Shibata had kicked her.
Eri => :bangchair: <= Shiba-chan



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*SHIBA-CHAN CONFESSES PLOT TO RIKA*
Shiba-chan and Eri are gonna be soooooooooooooooooooooooooo fired when the others find out that Rika found out.
:mon scare:



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Rika seemed more then a little stunned at all of what she just heard and in a very small voice asked.   “Did they already do this to Miki?”

Shibata nodded.  “They’re supposed to.  Actually, we were all supposed to do this at the same time, but me and Eri had a hard time finding you so…Miki’s was done awhile ago.”  Shyly she added “Aya said Miki’s was a success.”

Rika groaned.  “That idiot is for sure trying to find ways to get to that Island!  Great!  I’m not supposed to be talking to her and now I’ve got to stop her from doing something stupid…”
Hmmm...if Rika was REALLY angry at Miki, would she be so concerned about her making a fool of herself? Moreover, would she be talking about going to stop her?

This might not be a complete crash and burn after all.   :)



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“What about the fact that Miki thinks you’re in love with her?”  Eri asked curiously.

Rika rolled her eyes.  “Miki wouldn’t care about something like that.  Trust me, I know for a fact that Yossy is the only thing on her mind…”

Shibata’s expression softened at the pain laced though the last part of that sentence, but she decided not to press Rika about what happen.
Ouch.....
Rika = :mon POd:
Shiba-chan = :mon huh2:



Chapter 13
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oing to the last message from Miki, she hit reply and texted ‘Where are you?  I need to tell you something.’ After sending it she was surprised to get a quick response.
‘Raymon’s Aquatic Rentals.’
Rika sighed in resignation.  “Of course…” punching at her phone keys Rika sent out a ‘don’t do anything until I get there’ message.
After a few seconds her phone binged and this time the response was ‘I’ll wait.’
Damn, Miki's totally bought into it.  Thing is though, it's going to be a major blow to Miki if she finds out that she's been duped this way, so Rika can't really tell her what's really going on. So now, what's she going to do to save Miki from utter humiliation without letting her in on the secret scheme?



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When Rika reached the rental shop she was very surprised that she didn’t see Miki anywhere.  So much for the ‘I’ll wait’ message, this was just great.  Going inside the shop she tried to communicate to the guy behind the counter with her broken English after some trial an error she finally figured out that Miki had already started out a few minutes ago, groaning Rika decided it still wasn’t too late to catch up but she would have to hurry.
:doh:



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As she turned to leave she noticed a pair of loafers that somewhat matched the shoes Yossy was carring earlier.  Turning back around she decided to ask another question.  “Um…shoes…what is?”

He looked at her blankly.  “huh?”

She pointed at the loafers.  “What-no, why shoes?  Why?”

“Those are for dancing, I dance.  Those shoes are for ballroom dancing.”

“balloom?”

“Here.”  The man handed her a flyer after looking over it she knew exactly where Yossy was planning to go tonight with pookie, and it certainly wasn’t to the island!
Wait, so Yossi's planning on going ballroom dancing?
:pig huh:



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She came across Miki pushing a jetski into the water.  “Miki wait!”  she cried running toward the other girl waving happily.

Miki looked over her shoulder and cringed, Rika certainly did look love sick, it was as if the other girl could barely contain her enthusiasm in seeing her.  Rika definitely looked on the verge of confessing her feelings and Miki just wouldn’t be ready to hear something like that, so thinking quickly she decided to ignore the gaily calling girl and pushed her watercraft into the water and hopped on it.  Over her shoulder she looked at the quickly advancing girl and yelled.  “Sorry, Rika, but I just don’t want to hear what you have to say!”  Twisting the handle which gunned the ignition and she took off.
Oh crud, Miki's not going to make this easy for Rika.  :P



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Looking around she saw a young Hawaian guy sitting on an idoling jeyski.  She waved timidly at him, and when he noticed her his jaw dropped.

“Rika Ishikawa?” He cried in a thick hawaian accent.  He pointed at himself.  “I’m a fan.”

Rika smirked.  “How convienate…” she murmured to herself.
Being an idol has it's advantages. :rockon:



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Why?  Why did the thought of letting Rika down hurt so much?
“Miiikkiiii!!”

Miki’s head shot up at the sound of her name being called.  “What the?”  She looked around and spotted Rika quickly approaching on a second jetski.  Miki was surprised and truthfully a little ecstatic,  seeing Rika approach caused little bubbles of pleasure to build up inside her.  “Rika.”
Well well well, what do we have here now, eh Miki?  :pimp:



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*JETSKI PURSUIT WITH INSULTS*

“Whaaa!!”   *splash*

“Whaaa?”  Miki frowned that didn’t sound like an insult.  She stopped her jetski and looked behind her, Only to see Rika’s jetski idling forward with no rider.  “Rika?”  Her gaze combed over the rocking, glittery surf, but the other girl wasn’t in sight.  “RIKA!!!”
ONOES!!!
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #125 on: October 25, 2008, 12:43:13 AM »
And this is where Miki and Rika start to have feelings for each other. :inlove: Charmikitty!!!!!!! :heart: Had to get that off my chest. Anyway, I forgot they were in Hawaii!!! And was wondering why Rika was speaking halting English. XD But then I remembered when I read that the Rika fan had a Hawaiian accent. :lol: OH NO~~~~ RIKA~! :shocked:

SAVE HER, MIKI~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :yep:

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #126 on: October 25, 2008, 02:26:46 PM »
 :lol: I so love it

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #127 on: November 05, 2008, 11:53:49 PM »
 :otomerika:yeay..i'm back after more than a year...and this was the first website i turned on...and this was the first fanfic i read....
i mean come on, the handcuff part totally caught my eye  :drool:

anyway, to my new best friend in the whole wide world...u gave me new hope.....Miki + Rika =  :inlove:, two total polar opposites like heaven and hell (i'm sure some1 said this already, sorry if i forgot)

I've spent the last few hours catching up and i was gonna point out how similar it was to Shakespeare, then i read sumwhere u were a fan so i was like "that explains a lot"

although, i hope there's no Don John in this.......but Konkon sure does make a cute Don Pedro (since she is somehow the mastermind)...and Yossie's Hero (coz sumhow you made our beloved leader quite girly here)...correct me if i'm wrong...

BTW, keep it up....i  luv how u could always throw a monkey wrench into any situation.....

spreading the usa-chan love....i mean darkness(thanks to JFC)

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 13
« Reply #128 on: November 07, 2008, 05:41:34 PM »
Okay, I decided to go back to my old way of posting with the slightly longer chapters, so even though it takes a little longer to post, I feel more confident about the chapter.  Athough, mostly I've been too caught up with the US election going on so I haven't been writing much or following the ishyoshi stuff (as much as I usually do anyways).  I'm really lucky I even got a chance to vote, because I litteraly got in there in the last minute to fill out my ballot, so glad they extended the time to 7pm.

Amarghetta:  You guessed right, Yossy and Pookie are far away from that Island, they figured if it worked the first time then...well...it almost worked ;)

sweeety:  You're powers are amazing.  I surrender.  I thought you were only joking about me getting terrerized by cute animals if I didn't update soon enough...but guess what my family brought home one night...a puppy. and guess who's room it's staying in...mine.  and guess who didn't want it but now gets kept up at all hours of the night because its already spoit and wants to be petted and played with constantly...meeeeee!!! Whaaaa!!! here's an update! now make it go away sweeety! make it go awwwaaaayy!!! *cries*

katatsumuri:  writing the chase part was a lot of fun, and yes I evilly stopped at a high tension part, but I honestly didn't know it would take me so long to update ^^;

ya know, kata, after watching the pv a few times (and by 'a few times' I mean a hundred) It's really grown on me.  Not to mention that I think Rika is smokin' hot in it, whoo~


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It'd be funny if their boat runs out of gas or something and then they get stranded and.. u know.. Charmikitty~ 
  oh, I know my friend...*wiggles eyebrows* I know. but not yet...I want to build it just a little more...


JFC:  okay, the eri getting hit over the head by shib-chan is gold!  I laughed so hard when I saw it, it fit relly well.  Its really neat the way you can match the smilieys to the emotions of the charaters, so funny. 
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Damn, Miki's totally bought into it.  Thing is though, it's going to be a major blow to Miki if she finds out that she's been duped this way, so Rika can't really tell her what's really going on. So now, what's she going to do to save Miki from utter humiliation without letting her in on the secret scheme?
yeah, but unfortunately, Rika can't understand how Miki knowing she's been duped will hurt her beyond just the mild embarresment of being tricked.  She doesn't realize how much it meant to Miki that Rika might have those kinds of feelings...

strawb3rrykream: yup, this is where the two start having feelings for each other. lol, I had wondered if throwing in the broken english was too random, but I knew it would be kinda strange for them to be able to speak easily with the natives.

kRisZ:   thanks <33


kazitakato:  I knew you from when I used to be a lurker (yes I was a lurker a very long time before I finally got the courge to start commenting) so its cool seeing you comment on my story. welcome back.  I loved the wonderful mental images you gave me, Yossy as hero and Konno as don pedro, imbracing in their shakespearian clothes...Ah~ so romantic~ (even if Konno's a little shorter, it made the image cuter to me for some reason) and as far a Yossy being the feminine one, yeah I was trying to show Yossy's girlish side as well as her boyish one, it's a hard line to walk...



Chapter 14 (only a few left to go...maybe)

“Rika!!!” Miki cried out again, fear over taking her and filling her with a high level of panic.  A second felt like eternity and Miki couldn’t take the waiting anymore.  Taking off her life vest and tossing it to the side, she decided to throw caution to the wind and go after the other girl personally.  Without hesitation she dived head first into the murky depths full of uncertainty.  Not knowing if she could really find Rika, not knowing if she would ever see that girl again, and certainly not knowing that she would end up diving right on top of the other causing their heads to collide…ouch.

The pain was fleeting as warm feelings of relief poured through her.  Grasping Rika’s arm she helped the disorientated girl surface.  Once they had broken the surface, a red faced, coughing Rika smacked an out of breath Miki on the arm.

“Dummy! You could’ve drowned me just now! What were you thinking diving in like that?”  Rika rubbed her cranium mournfully.

“What!?”  Miki became defensive. “ I totally saved your life!  I should be getting kissed not hit!”

“I was swimming back to the surface just fine before you decided to barge in! Ha! Like I would kiss a girl who won’t even stop to listen to what someone has to say to her!”  Rika grouched.

Miki hit the surface to the water angrily splashing both of the wading girls equally.  She had had enough.  “Fine! What?  What is it?  What did you want to tell me that is soooo important that you would throw yourself into the ocean over it!!?! Huh? Huh?!!”

Rika groaned in exasperation.  “If you would stop pitching a fit like a small child I would tell you!”

Miki clamped her jaw closed too angry to even speak to Rika after the ‘small child’ crack.

Rika took Miki’s silence as a chance to finally tell Miki what she had chased her out here to say.  “Now then, you have been fed some false information by Aya, Shibata told me that Yossy didn’t have a date tonight on the island.  You’re going out there for nothing, she’s not going to be there, you were tricked…get it?  Aya knew you would over hear this morning and made all that stuff up.”

Miki blinked in surprise, not so much about Yossy’s date being a lie, but… “so…all this time…that is what you wanted to tell me…and nothing else…”

Rika nodded sympathetically, her heart went out to the obviously hurt and disappointed expression on Miki’s face.  The obvious pain reflected there made Rika realize just how much Miki cared about Yossy, and adversely…Rika realized…with growing jealousy…just how much she had come to care for Miki, that it hurt so much to see plainly how much Miki cares about the other.  Rika quickly ducked her head to hide her newly discovered feelings, too new and raw for her to really think about right now.  Instead, putting on the most cheerful face she could muster she smiled happily at Miki and suggested the two of them get back onto their Jet Skis.

Miki nodded still rather heartbroken that she wouldn’t be hearing a confession after all.  “Yeah, before we get attacked by sharks.”

Rika paled.  “Sharks…” she whispered.

“Uhn.”  Miki nodded amused at Rika’s half dead expression.

“R-right…” fear caused Rika’s voice to tremble.  She wished Miki hadn’t said anything about sharks, now she kept imagining the gapping jaws of a great white suddenly appearing out of the lapping surface and in one giant chomp, taking her under leaving only a bloody trail.  She cringed as she swam to her jet ski.

Yet, it turns out that getting back on the Jet Skis was easier said than done.  You had to seriously be a dolphin and hop out of the water and land perfectly on top otherwise, no matter which side you tried to climb up the vehicle, it would tip towards you making it impossible to get on.

“This is a nightmare!”  Rika cried out desperately after another failed attempt.  The sun was starting to dip downwards to setting position, casting a strange pre sunset glow across breaking crests of the shifting water.

Miki grit her teeth as she nearly was able to pull herself up from the rear of the vehicle before losing her fight with balance and plopping back in the warm surf.  “Okay,” Miki panted “This is a problem…”  No wonder the shop owner wanted to go through a tutorial with her about driving Jet Skis and staying safe on them, but Miki didn’t see what could be so difficult about turning the handle and going forward so she had declined claiming to be an experienced rider.

Miki looked over at Rika and saw that the other was practically in tears.  “Rika, I’m coming over, just wait a minute.”

“Trust me, I’m not going anywhere.”  Rika replied pitifully.

Once Miki swam over, she held onto the front of Rika’s Jet Ski.  “Okay, you climb onto the back and I’ll hang on the front and try to prevent it from toppling.

Taking a shaky breath, Rika nodded and waited for Miki to give her the go ahead.  Once Miki nodded in her direction she unsteadily tried to climb up.  Placing a knee on one side she slowly began to lift herself and the Jet Ski began to tilt…

“Hurry up!” Miki cried out “if you go slow it’s harder!”

Obeying Rika pulled herself up as fast as possible until she was sitting proudly on the cushioned seat a relieved grin plastered on her face that she directed at a pleased looking Miki.  “Yaay!”  She cheered in a quiet yell, but her happiness was stalled as she realized that Miki was still in the water.  “Um…what about you?”

Miki shrugged, dunking herself slightly.  “I’ll just swim back to my…”  Miki stopped mid word when she saw that her jet ski had drifted really far away and it would be quite a swim for the already tired girl to catch it.  “…crap…” she muttered eloquently.

“We can ride together.”  Rika stated.  Not waiting for argument she began to turn around in her seat. 

“Wait!”  Miki cried catching one of the sides as it dipped dangerously.  “You’re going to fall again, dummy!” 

“I got this.”  Rika soothed as she finally planted herself backwards on the gently rocking machine.  “Now swim over...”  She demanded, but was pleased to see Miki was way ahead of her and had already swam to the rear of the jet ski as Rika was turning.  Rika stretched her arms out toward the wading Miki.  “If I pull you up evenly, we should be able to get you up here.”

Miki frowned uncertain as she reached up and grasped Rika’s hands.  “Are you even strong enough to lift me?”

Rika shrugged.  “Probably not, now on the count of three…one…twooo………three!”  Rika reared back and pulled with all her might, as Miki tried to push against the back with her feet and tried to stand.  Unfortunately, her palms proved too slippery and she ended up losing grip and falling back into the water.

She resurfaced wet and angry.  “Forget it! I’m going to start swimming before my jet ski is too far for me to catch.”

“One more time!”  Rika cried.  “I think we were really close, please… Mikitty…”  Rika pouted her lips and raised a finger plaintively.  “Just once more…”

Miki sighed and reneged, reaching out her hands again, so they could try once more.  Seriously who can say no to Rika’s pleading face, plus being called ‘Mikitty’ by the other was kinda cute and caused those little bubbles of pleasure to build up again.
“This time quicker...”  Miki instructed. 

Rika nodded, determination etched across her face.  This time they both counted quietly together.  “One, two, three…”  Rika pulled again and this time Miki angled her body up rather than out as she had the last time and it worked, the back of the vehicle did dip dangerously but she was quick enough to hop up before it could topple, her rapid forward momentum causing her to dive inadvertently into Rika’s waiting arms.

The two hugged each other tightly. both breathing hard from the exhaustion, plus the sensation was rather nice.  Miki smiled freely by Rika’s ear knowing that the other couldn’t possibly see her grinning so happily.

Rika pulled back reluctantly.  “We should leave before it gets dark…”

“I’ll drive.”  Miki exclaimed cheerfully.

“That’s what you think,” Rika scoffed.  “but it’s pretty obvious who’s sitting in front of who.”

Miki grinned.  “Yup, the same person who’s sitting backwards,”  Miki slid her body flush against Rika’s hooking her thighs over the other’s and resting a chin on Rika’s shoulder she was able to sneak her arms around Rika’s waist and grab the handles.  Rika made a small cry a protest, but Miki cut her off.  “there’s no way I’m letting you drive back after what just happened.  I don’t particularly want to end up in the water again.”

“but…”

“No ‘buts’, we need to get back, the sooner we get off the water the better.  I’m a little sick of the ocean right now.”

“Fine!”  Rika grumbled.  “You win. You can drive, but let’s hurry.”  Rika felt heat filling her face and it wasn’t from anger.  Miki’s body so close to her own was overwhelming her senses with barley controlled desire.  To make matters worse, Miki didn’t seem to know what the meaning of ‘hurry’ was and drove at cautious slow pace, which only further her discomfort as the bobbing of the Jet Ski over the waves caused the two of them to bounce together in a rhythm that felt similar to…lovemaking.  Rika pressed her face against the shoulder of Miki’s life vest, chiding herself on the direction her thoughts were taking.  It was so hard to fight the desire to run hands across the smooth thighs of the girl sitting in her lap, the feel of the swimsuit clad Miki rubbing against her damp clothes that she had foolishly warn, was causing her insides to summersault.  To prevent herself from making a move she had to keep reminding herself ‘Miki loves Yossy. Miki loves Yossy…’  She grabbed the back of Miki’s vest and dug her nails deep into the stiff material to keep them from exploring.  Squeezing her eyes tightly shut she kept repeating the mantra to herself ‘Miki loves Yossy. Miki loves Yossy…’

Miki’s heart was beating so loudly in her chest she was sure the other girl must be able to hear it.  Having Rika pressed against her so tightly felt so pleasurable and painful at the same time.  It was a good thing she had the handles of the Jet Ski to hang onto, Miki wasn’t exactly in the habit of saying no to her hands when they wanted something, but with Rika it was different.  After what happened last time in the mountains…Miki never wanted to see that hurt expression on Rika’s face ever again, and until Miki could straighten out her feelings toward Yossy she couldn’t give in to her desire for Rika.  However, she was only human, if that girl touched her even once…

Needless to say once the girls had gotten back to shore, both were impressed at the level of willpower they didn’t even know they had, and Miki got to practice her even more after suppressing the desire to attack the Hawaiian guy who couldn’t seem to take his eye off the front to Rika’s wet clinging shirt.  They were relieved that the owner was pretty easy going and didn't seem that concerned about the left behind Jet Ski and just sent one of he's boys to fatch it, he did however warn that he would be sending them a bill for the other rental.  Miki casualy told him her dad was Tsunku and told the owner to send the bill to him, much to Rika's amusment.

Once they had returned to the hotel and changed into dry clothes Rika told Miki the details of what Shibata had told her, and about her encounter with Yossy and the shoes.

Miki shook her head.  “Ballroom Dancing?  Really?  That doesn’t seem like Yossy’s style…”

Rika shrugged.  “I saw what I saw…”

“Acually…it makes sense,”  Miki murmured.

Rika frowned.  “Why?”

“It’s the last place the two of us would look to find her, its just one more way of insuring we don’t crash on their real date…heh, jokes on them though.  Something as obscure as that will be fairly easy to find, I doubt there are that many places doing ballroom dancing tonight.”

Rika grinned.  “You’re right.  I bet the lobby knows of some nearby dancing places.”

Miki grinned back at her.  “So Rika, up for a little dancing to night?”

Rika wiggled her eyebrows.  “but of course…”  Rika didn’t know what game Yossy and Pookie were playing at, but her and Miki were going to win it.

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 14 is up.
« Reply #129 on: November 08, 2008, 05:17:03 AM »
yeay.....1st to comment.....and sum1 actually remembers me....haha...

just when i thought Rika was going to be another damsel in distress....again another monkey wrench for the unexpected. guess rika & miki had a meeting of the minds of sorts.

i never knew getting on a jetski was pretty hard? and i definitely didn't know you could ride a jetski like that...unorthodox...but VERY interesting.....

Rika + Wet t-shirt = massive lost of blood
Miki + Angry Glare + Rika + Wet T-shirt = hit me more, miki-sama.....

so now...Charmikitty launch a counter-attack...i like....guess that knock in the head made sum sense....

SHALLL WE DANCE?

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 14 is up.
« Reply #130 on: November 08, 2008, 06:27:46 AM »
Yayay~~~ :heart:

Miki and Rika are so cute!!! I love their teamwork! As well as the way they are restraining themselves from jumping each others' bones. :wub: But the last line is my favorite!!! Charmikitty~~~~~ :heart:

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« Reply #131 on: November 08, 2008, 11:53:34 PM »
Never been on a Jetski before, wouldn't know how tough it would be to get back on, but you write pretty good for me to have the rough idea. You always manage to make things look funny despite them being in a life threatening situation and OUCH~ I'm surprised they don't see universe when their heads collide. LOL
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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 14 is up.
« Reply #132 on: November 09, 2008, 10:12:46 AM »
I think I won't get tired of saying I SO LOVE IT! update sooner  :grin: onegai

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« Reply #133 on: November 10, 2008, 03:09:56 AM »
Hellz yeaaaaaaah!
An update!!!

Don't have time to comment now, but I'm saving this anyway. ;)

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« Reply #134 on: November 10, 2008, 02:06:10 PM »
Ooooh yay an update! :luvluv1: Nice chapter, can wait for more XD ^^;

Oh lol, *can't T__T" XDD
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« Reply #135 on: November 14, 2008, 06:09:28 AM »
Ah, yes the true horror of riding jetski's, the events in the last chapter were based on an experience that actually happened to me.  the first time I ever fell off a jekski I didn't know how to get back on.  I was so scared because I was far from shore and I just couldn't seem to figure out, luckily my older cousin saw me out in the ocean and came to check on me.  The secret to getting back on is to lift yourself from the back, using both feet at the same time, and hanging onto the front of the seat and not the handle that's on the rear...just wanted to share that with you guys.

kazitakato:
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again another monkey wrench for the unexpected.
*wings shifts though the large box of monkey wrenches by her desk*  well I gotta do something with them... :D

strawb3rrykream : well that's because no matter how much they bicker they still make a really great team.   :wub:

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OUCH~ I'm surprised they don't see universe when their heads collide
  lol, if they did see the universal all they would discover is what Rika has suspected for years, the world really does revolve around her  :P

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Meanwhile Rika doesn't even want Yoshi anymore. She's only doing it to help Miki
  oooo~ its like a forshadowing...very perceptive...b/t/w hope the pandas feel better...

kRisZ: and I never get tired of hearing it~   :heart:

Amarghetta: Aw, even though you didn't have time you still left me a comment...that's so sweet   :heart:

Fushigidane: lol, no worries. I still know what you meant  ;) 

Chapter 15

As it turns out Miki was right and there was only one place nearby that was sponsoring dancing tonight, it was an upscale place just a block from the hotel.  There was a problem though, the dance was couples only and you had to be dressed up in 1950’s big band attire to attend.  It was a little to late to get clothes like that seeing as how all the rental shops would be closed by now, so Miki made the suggestion that they should just head over and see if there is a way to sneak in.

Once they got to the place it was pretty obvious it would be nearly impossible to break in.  There were several people going in and a bouncer at the door making sure everyone was a couple and in dress code.

“What’s with the security?”  Miki muttered angrily.  “This isn’t a New York City club…”

Rika shrugged and was a little memorized at all the beautifully dressed people trying to enter, she suddenly grabbed Miki’s arm.  “Wait!  Isn’t that Ai-chan and Nigaki?”

Miki couldn’t believe it but sure enough Ai-chan dressed as a guy was accompanied by Risa who was dressed as a girl.  “The hell…?”  Miki muttered.  She watched as the two of them approached the bouncer, he gave them a once over and quirked an eyebrow, but nevertheless gestured them inside.  Miki patted Rika’s shoulder and pointed, “Let’s go though that alleyway, since we can’t go in the front, maybe we can find an employee entrance in the back or something.”

Rika nodded.  “Sounds good.” 

The two headed over to the side of the building, but what they saw made them pause.  There, leaning against the wall was a couple in the throes of passion.  Bodies pressed close together, hands exploring, and lips eagerly tasting each other.  That alone wasn’t shocking but the fact that it was someone they knew…

“Ayumi!?”  Rika gasped, recognizing her best friend right away, even in the suit and tie she was wearing.

The two kissers parted and looked at the interrupters in surprise. 

“Oh, Rika…”  Shibata stated awkwardly.  “So you made it, huh?”

Rika gaped wordlessly not sure what to say…Shibata and Aya…really?

Miki gave Aya a half lidded glare.  “More friendship tongue?”

“Miki…” Aya ran the pad of her thumb across her lips, removing the excess moisture there.  “What are you doing here…I thought you were going to the island to stop Yossy’s date…”  Unbeknownst to the soloist, Shibata winced behind her.  Aparently Aya had yet to be told about Shibata blabbing to Rika.

Miki grew angry and charged her friend grabbing Aya’s shoulders and pushing her back against the wall.  “How could you Aya?!”  Miki asked with venom laced in her voice.  “How could you play with my emotions like that?!”

“Miki wait!”  Shibata ran over and grabbed the raging girls arm hoping to calm her.  “Calm down and we’ll explain everything, alright?” 

“Back off, Ayumi!  This is between me and the backstabber!”  Miki jerked her arm and effectively shoved Shibata away, a little too roughly, and she ended up toppling, luckily Rika was there to catch her.

“Miki!”  Rika gasped out horrified. 

Watching Shibata almost kiss the concrete, it was Aya’s turn to be angry.  She shoved at Miki’s shoulders making the other back off.  “How dare you lash out at me for your own problems!!”

“Are you kidding me?! It is your fault!  I believed you, Aya!”  Miki’s face became tortured.  “I really believed you…”  Miki whimpered weakly.  “I really thought that Rika…about me…”  Miki winced.  “I thought you were my friend.”

“I am you friend!  That’s why I did it!”

Miki shook her head, her eyes squeezed shut.  “No…friends don’t do things that will break their friend’s heart.”

Silence filled the alley, the only sound being the people passing, out of sight, by the opening of the alley.

Aya knew it was time to lay the cards on the table.  “The only one causing you anguish is you.  If you want her, you need to tell her,” Aya peaked out the corner of her eye to glance at Rika who was hugging Ayumi and looking very nervous about what was happening between the two best friends.  “Truthfully, my game this morning shouldn’t have even affected you, but because you haven’t been honest about your feelings, we were able to take advantage of you.  I’m sorry that you got hurt Tan, but you needed to be shaken…”

“Shaken…”  Miki thought about how it felt when Rika had disappeared into the ocean and Miki thought she was not going to come back up, and how it hurt to realize that Rika didn’t like her after all.  “…is that what you call it?  Well, let me tell you something…the next time you feel like playing cupid and interfering in my life…don’t…”  Miki’s hands fell from Aya’s shoulders, it appeared that the worse part of her anger had dissipated and in it’s place was a great sadness.

Rika felt an ache rise painfully in her chest, Miki looked so pitiful.  Even though it hurt and even though it went against what she wanted for herself.  Rika knew what she had to do.  Striding forward she grabbed Miki’s arm and yanked her around.  “Don’t give up, Miki!  Yossy’s still in there, you still have a chance!”

Miki blinked at her.  “What?”

Tears sprang into Rika’s eyes.  “I can see now how much you really love her…and…I’m going to help you get her.  You just need to talk to her! Tell her everything! Tell her how you feel!  If she doesn’t except you then…she’s a fool!”

Miki’s own eyes filled with tears.  “Rika…”

“Hate to burst your bubble, Rika-chan,”  Murmured Shibata.  “but it’ll be pretty hard to get your hands on any suits this late in the evening, every place is already closed.”

Rika smirked and stalked purposely toward her friend with cat like grace.  “Gee, if only I could run into someone who’s about my size and height…”  Rika reached out and plucked off Shibata’s hat, placing it on her own head.  “…but where oh where can I find someone like that?”

Ayumi chuckled ruefully.  “Alright already, you don’t have to spell things out for me.”  She began to puck at the buttons on her coat releasing them.

Miki gave Aya a pointed look and let her gaze drift over Aya’s dress. 

Aya sighed and began to pull off her own clothes.  “This is so dumb,” She muttered as striped to her underwear and handed Miki her dress and receiving Miki’s clothes in return.  “I can’t believe you’re going to still play at going after Yossy.”

“I have to know,” Miki murmured back.  “I have to know if I still love her.”

“You’re an idiot.”

“Probably am.”

Rika walked over wearing the suit, her eyes focused on her hands trying to fasten the tie.  “You ready, Miki?”  She asked obviously preoccupied.

“Hm…Ready to get this over with.” Miki stated as she walked over and gently pushed Rika’s hands out of the way to skillfully fasten the tie herself.

Miki and Rika had no trouble getting past the guard in their new outfits and soon where inside the crowded high end dance club and they were amazed at just how many of the project girls were there. 

“Isn’t that Yuko and Kei?”  Rika asked pointing over to a couple standing next to the punch bowl. 

“Is she doing what I think she’s doing…” Miki muttered exasperated as she watched the H!P leader pour something into the punch bowl before taking a swig from the tin flask herself.  Kei-chan was watching the dancers and seemed oblivious at what her ‘date’ was up to.

Rika turned her attention to scanning the room and trying to spot Yossy, the problem was that there were just too many suits in there and none looked like Yocchan.  “I don’t see her.”  Rika muttered.

Miki’s eyes also scanned the room and she too couldn’t see any sign of Yossy in any of the suits, “Damn.  This is going to be harder than I thought.”

“We need to get down on the dance floor, maybe we can spot her if we’re closer to the crowd.”  Rika grabbed Miki’s hand and began to walk toward the stairs that would lead down to the dancers.


Konno leaned on the railing lining the small veranda of the dance club.  It was nice feeling the cool evening air whip though her hair and over her heated skin. The upbeat dancing had been a lot of fun, although she ended up dancing with everyone but Yossy, since she was still trying to keep the relationship a secret.   It was so dark out and the sky glittered with amazing views of the night sky, plus the moon was so brilliant and casted shimmery reflections over the gently swaying surf…it was all so beautiful, and quiet, it was nice being out here alone…well…she glanced over at Yossy who was leaning on the railing next to her…almost alone.  Yossy had dragged her out here, complaining that she was sick of watching Konno dance with the other girls and not with her.  She smiled affectionately at the girl standing next to her.

Yossy seemed to sense the attention, because she turned as well to meet Konno’s gaze.  Smirking happily, Yossy leaned casually on an elbow, and reached out a hand to tilt the hat a bit, preferring the off-centered look.  “Were you embarrassed at being the guy?”  Yossy asked playfully.

Konno shook her head grinning, “No, were you embarrassed at being the girl?”

Yossy slowly shook her head but crumpled dejectedly “Yes…” she bemoaned. 

Konno laughed and moved closer slipping an arm around Yossy’s waist.  “Would it help if I said you look great in that dress?”

Yossy peeked at Konno from the corner of her eye.  “maybe…” she pouted.

“Oy, oy, fishing for compliments, eh?”  Konno teased.  Standing on her tiptoes she was just able to land a feather light kiss next to Yossy’s ear and staying in that position she murmured, “You…”  another kiss.  “…look absolutely…” this next kiss was on Yossy’s cheek.  “…a.ma.zing…” her last kiss pressing against the corner of Yossy’s mouth.

Yossy let out a shuddery breath and turned to take those lips and explore them.  She pulled Konno into her arms, drawling her in for a consuming kiss that she quickly deepened.

Konno melted willingly into Yossy’s arms, she mind swimming in bliss and her surroundings melting into oblivion. 

Yossy wasn’t quite so oblivious and was on a bit of a mission, carefully and slowly she let her hand drift downward from Konno’s back to her hip, and then she pushed her hand under Konno’s coat.  Once her hand had reached the rough edge of Konno’s belt, she began to gather the material of the white tucked in shirt to gently start to pull it out.  Soon a small little hole of separation was created and Yossy was able to slip her fingers inside, marveling at the warm, smooth skin under her fingertips.  Her hand roamed upward, untucking the shirt as it went.

Konno jerked and gasped against Yossy’s mouth when she felt the other girl’s fingers drift acroww her ribs.  She tensed and backed away slightly, her cheeks flaming.

Yossy watched Konno’s reaction with trepidation and wondered if she had gone too far.  She began to retract her hand, but started in surprise when Konno suddenly grasped her wrist keeping the hand from retreating.  Yossy looked questioningly down at her girlfriend who was currently looking over her shoulder toward the glass door that led back inside to the dance floor.

Once Konno felt satisfied that there didn’t appear to be anyone showing signs of walking in on them, she maneuvered backwards through the shadows into the corner, where the wall met the end of the railing.  Then looking up shyly at Yossy, she released the other girl’s wrist and angled her head to invite another kiss.

Yossy was quick on the uptake and was more than happy to except the invitation.  Her mouth met Konno’s hungrily and her hand returned to its slow upward crawl, enjoying the sensation of Konno’s muscles dancing underneath her fingertips as they roamed toward their destination.  Yossy moved her mouth to kiss Konno’s cheek and trail soothing kisses along her jaw, wanting to reassure the girl trembling in her arms.  She heard Konno whimper as her fingers made contact with the lacy material of the younger girl’s bra.  She began to gently nibble on Konno’s ear as she moved those fingers over the curve of Konno’s chest, trailing lightly over the sensitive tightening bud hidden underneath the small barrier of cloth.

“Yossy…” Konno whispered heatedly, her fingernails digging into Yossy’s shoulders as fluttery sparks of pleasure pierced though her stomach.

Yossy didn’t stop the gentle sucking of Konno’s ear lobe as she cupped the heavy swell of breast in her hand, squeezing over the bra and quickly growing tired of the lacy barrier.  Hooking her thumb into the bottom part of the material, she began to lift it upward.

“Ya see, kids?  That’s how a pro gets it done, nibble the ear and she’ll let you put your hands anywhere...”

Yossy groaned at the intrusive voice while Konno pulled away horrified.  Yossy turned to glare at Yui who was standing a few feet away flanked by blushing Koharu and Eri.  Koharu was watching the events unfolding with upmost attention while Eri quietly excused herself and made a hasty exit back to the dance floor. The others were unconcerned with her departure and didn’t even seem to notice she had left.

“Seriously,” Yossy glowered at the interloper.  “You have the worst timing.”

The busty girl smirked tauntingly, her eyes moving back and forth from Yossy to Konno and back again. “So your victim this time is Konno, eh?  Weird, and here I thought you had given up your playgirl ways a long time ago…” 

 “Yui did you actually have a purpose to come out here, or did you just want to look for a fight.”  Yossy interrupted, not wanting to be reminded of what her past was like.

“Weeell, I had come to tell Konno that the targets have just walked in the door, but now,”  Yui sashayed forward and plucked playfully at Yossy’s shoulder strap.  “I just want to take a number.”

Yossy pushed Yui’s hand away.  “I have changed my ways.”  Yossy stated.  “I don’t play around anymore.  I’ m exclusive…”  She hooked an arm around Konno’s shoulder pulling her close.  “…We’re exclusive.”

“No way…”  Whispered Koharu.

Yui quirked an eyebrow at the blushing Konno looking to her for verification, “Is this the truth?”

Konno had been trying to keep her relationship with Yossy a secret, but seeing Yui put the moves on Yossy, really pissed her off.  Wrapping her arms around Yossy’s waist possessively, she gave Yui a piercing glare.  “Yes, and now that you know, I’d appreciate it if you kept your hands to yourself.”

Yui smiled and raised her hands placatingly, “okay, okay, I surrender.”

Konno looked up to see that Yossy was grinning down at her with such happiness.  “What?” 

“Its just…this is the first time I’ve seen your jealous face and…it’s cute.”  Yossy said pleasantly.  “So now that the cat is out of the bag, does this mean we can finally tell everyone what’s going on between us?”

Konno looked over at Yui who was hanging on every word.  “Well I guess it can’t be helped, Aya and Shibata are one thing, but if the worst gossiper…”

“Rika-chan.”  Yui reminded.

“…second worst gossiper In all of H!P knows than soon everyone will.”

“And I know too!” Koharu chimed in pointlessly.  She was promptly ignored.

Meanwhile, back inside Eri walked through the throng of people determinedly.  She was on a mission to find Rika as soon as possible.  It was time to prove to her sempai that she was a useful asset as a mole.  Nothing could distract her from this important task…wait…is that punch?  Correction, she would have some punch first and then find Rika and tell her about Yossy and Konno.  She noticed the buffet table on the far end of the room and changed her plans again.  Okay, punch, cheese, and then Rika…Oh yeah, Kamei Eri is totally on top of things.

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 15
« Reply #136 on: November 14, 2008, 07:15:28 AM »
First we have Miki and Rika, then Ai and Risa, then Aya and Shibata, followed with Kei and Yuuko, and Yossi and Konno who were joined by Yui, Eri and Koharu. Woo~ this really is a party.  :muffin:

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“Ya see, kids?  That’s how a pro gets it done, nibble the ear and she’ll let you put your hands anywhere...”
and couldn't be more surprised to see it's Yui talking.  :lol:

Everyone's pretty much their (perceived) character and I love it, especially our cute turtle. Rika... then punch first... okay punch, cheese, and then Rika...  XD

Maybe it's just me, I still can't picture Yossi with Konno. Reading Yossi with anyone else (even Koharu or Mitsui) would have otherwise make it a 'hot' chapter for me. 

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 15
« Reply #137 on: November 14, 2008, 07:42:47 AM »
aww... I love Konkon....
but seeing her with... anyone XD gets me a little annoyed (because I don't want anyone to ruin her innocence) :P
however I think those two are really cute together ^^;

now............ since Eri got in.. that means there is a possible Tanakame?
either that or KameShige...
or.... the couple was said I just don't remember o.O"

and woo~ Takagaki~ however if it was the other way around (switched roles) it would end up like Cinderella XD
In my opinion, I prefer manly Niigaki, but most people prefer Takahashi to be seme

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“More friendship tongue?”
that made me laugh so damn hard XD seems Miki still remembers

Party party woo~

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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs chapter 14 is up.
« Reply #138 on: November 14, 2008, 07:57:36 AM »
Meanwhile, back inside Eri walked through the throng of people determinedly.  She was on a mission to find Rika as soon as possible.  It was time to prove to her sempai that she was a useful asset as a mole.  Nothing could distract her from this important task…wait…is that punch?  Correction, she would have some punch first and then find Rika and tell her about Yossy and Konno.  She noticed the buffet table on the far end of the room and changed her plans again.  Okay, punch, cheese, and then Rika…Oh yeah, Kamei Eri is totally on top of things.


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Re: Whip cream and Handcuffs ch 15
« Reply #139 on: November 14, 2008, 08:13:12 AM »
I lovez me the Yossy/Konkon pairing, I've said it before and I'll say it again, it's such the popular jock and shy nerd dynamic from so many chick flicks :mon inluv: Which is why I want an update of their side story dammit missy *crosses arms and sticks out bottom lip in a pout* And their scene was mighty hot... Totally surprised KonKon let her go that far but I guess one can't resist the sauveness of Mr Moonlight, even when "his" wearing a dress XD

Tiny TakaGaki appearance :w00t: YAY :otomerika: Prince Gaki is hot and all but I certianly prefer the papa/mama with Ai-chan as papa, I think she's prefer it too :lol: Plus Risa in a 50s gown and Ai-chan in a  suit, OMG :drool: It's All singles concert Mr Moonlight all over again :mon blood: As tiny as their appearance was I could so right an essay on that small section... I is an insane TakaGaki fan XD

No Rika, Miki wasn't upset coz being tricked about Yossy's date, it was coz of you YOUUUUU~! bloody hell that girl is so clueless XD Miki was cute then though, so vulnerable, awww! :heart:

Wait a sec... stop the press... Did Charmikitty just leave Aya/Shiba in the alleyway they were previously make out in, with nothing but their underwear on? Ok now I sooo badly want a hidden camera in that alley :twisted:

Btw, thanks for the tip on how to get back on a jetski, could certainly come in handy one day, if I remember it at least :P
And sorry about not commenting more, you usually post an update when I'm on and read them right away but I've been reverting back to my lurking ways :oops:

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