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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.1: Dusk]
« Reply #20 on: June 27, 2008, 09:21:43 AM »
Ok I haven't read chapter 1 yet but i gotta say how stoked I am that you're writing the vampire one :drool: and how awesome it is to have a nice long story from you again :heart:

Sooooo tempting to read the chapter but my head hurts too much for ur awesomeness, I need to be able to appreciate properly ;)

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.1: Dusk]
« Reply #21 on: June 27, 2008, 09:54:47 AM »
OOoo I like the title!  I can't pronounce the german but I like the sound of counter shine =D

I love the kameshigeness...but of course you probably already know that XD  well I already know whose who from having read the prologue...at least I think I do...but the introduction of seirei is interesting.  I'm going to have to take a guess and conclude that she's Takahashi.  I can see Reina and Gaki both being drawn to Seirei...though Reina's probably more compatible with her if she is indeed Takahashi...both? being eternal and all..but would you really pick RenAi over TakaGaki? hmmm....can't wait to see which pairing you choose.

ah...I forgot to mention how awesome baby vampire Reina is...she's a lot of fun =D

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.1: Dusk]
« Reply #22 on: June 27, 2008, 05:05:28 PM »
yay~
prolly have same things to say like the others.
but lmao, pedo bear n' risa.
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yay cnt wait for Reina to crash the party...

moar vampire~  :wub:

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.1: Dusk]
« Reply #23 on: June 27, 2008, 06:15:44 PM »
 :) i'm liking the story so far  :heart: keep up the nice work!

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.1: Dusk]
« Reply #24 on: June 27, 2008, 06:44:39 PM »
Yay!Vampires :mon bat: And Reina is one of them!(well, no wonder just look at her fangs XD ) Can't wait to find out what is she plotting :lol: I wonder who is Seirei :? Hope it's Takahashi cos she would be a hawt DJ 8) I'm also very curious about the pairings... TakaGaki?ReinAi?a love triangle?or maybe something totally unexpected? :roll:

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.1: Dusk]
« Reply #25 on: June 29, 2008, 09:44:02 PM »
Ok I would be doing comment replies but I'm so darn tired I can't really focus. @_@ It's almost 4 in the morning here.

I'll just answer generally for everyone.

For the Seirei question, well, you'll see. XD She's definitely going to be significant.

I'm also glad that the GakiKameSayu trio seems to be well received! I had fun writing their escapades last chapter (and this chapter as well XD). They're gonna be a lot of fun to mess with. :P

I like all the pairing speculation going on. Although...it's gonna be complicated. That's all I can and will say. :P

Alright, on with the chapter posting and whatnot.

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.1: Dusk]
« Reply #26 on: June 29, 2008, 09:47:09 PM »
Chapter 2 - Break


Sayumi wondered what was worse, doing crazy things while drunk, or not being drunk enough to fail to notice just how crazy things were.

Rhetorical questions aside though, she was really trying her best to get tipsy, but somehow it didn't seem to work. Granted, a certain pair kept snatching up most of the drinks before she could even get to them, but given how much she had managed to down despite that, she wished she could feel more than just a light head and an annoying buzz in her mind.

Damn her alcohol tolerance levels, she couldn't get drunk even if she tried.

Speaking of drunk, her friends were pretty much in a world of their own now. Sayumi sighed and facepalmed as Risa started singing some weird 70s love song in a very offkey way, waving around a glass of that strange fruit punch and gesticulating at some imaginary person only she could see.

And Eri was no better, doing some weird robotic dance movements along to the background music and attracting quite a crowd to watch the usually more reserved (in public) girl show off some fairly slick moves. Well, drunken kind of slick, but it could have been a lot worse. Sayumi had to fend off several guys who had wanted to drag her beloved Eririn off to some dark corner, and a pissed off Sayu is usually a sight to behold.

Not to mention how Risa happened to pack a punch even while tipsy. Sayu never knew that Risa had it in her to smash her glass into a guy's face. Thankfully, that little altercation didn't last long, since Risa stumbled back to them almost immediately and clung on to Eri like a drowning person to a life buoy, while said guy passed out (he was equally drunk, if not more, and the impact sped up his entry to dreamland) right after.

At least, Sayumi reasoned, Risa wasn't completely gone. Somewhat woozy and probably more than a little aggressive, but not falling down drunk like a certain turtle was.

Speaking of turtles, Eri was currently getting awfully touchy feely with everyone in range. Thankfully, said range was currently being limited to Risa, who was still clinging on to Eri for some reason or another, be it her own comfort or for Eri's safety, one couldn't be sure.

Sayu just couldn't decide if she wanted to be jealous or just join in though. She wasn't drunk enough to forget herself yet.

It was amazing how much could happen in the space of two hours, really. Sayumi took another glass of punch, stared at it, then at the cuddling pair next to her.

She drank. Even if she couldn't get drunk that easily, she could very damn well try.

~*~*~

A small hand wiped at the corner of her mouth, a crimson streak staining the worn leather of the glove. The body fell limply to the ground with a dull thud, and bloodstained fangs gleamed crazily in the moonlight. A self-satisfied smirk adorned lips now flush and painted with fresh blood, and a long tongue came out to clean up the remains of her snack.

"That should be enough." Reina muttered as she straightened, taking a box of matches from her boot and striking one of them, the flame bursting alight. She let it fall onto the still corpse, eyes focusing intensely as the baby flame lapped greedily at the clothes.

The dancing fire reflected in her eyes seemed to grow, and her brows knit together into an intense look of concentration. The actual flame dimmed on the body, then flared up in renewed vigor.

In seconds, the corpse was wreathed in flames, and Reina had to step back as the fire intensified beyond normal standards.

The fire was almost cheery, Reina reflected, holding out her hands over the merrily burning body that was slowly being reduced to ashes.

So unlike the flame that had very damn near claimed her own life; at least this one she could manipulate, to some degree. She sincerely hoped she would never run into an efreet ever again. Once had been more than enough.

Once the evidence of her meal had been eliminated, Reina held up her arm to the flickering streetlight as she strolled out of the alley, marveling at how her pale skin now had some semblance of life to it.

She hadn't felt this pleasantly warm in a long time. Almost human. She took a deep breath, an unneeded one, trying to get used to feeling human again.

Trying to pass as one wasn't something she particularly enjoyed doing ever since entering her second life, but it just wouldn't do to freak out a whole house of people. Not unless she was planning to finish them all off...that sounded pretty tempting actually.

Reina burped, and changed her mind. She already had too much for the evening. Reina wasn't sure if she could get fat on drinking blood, but she wasn't about to risk it.

Besides, killing that many people in one place would draw far too much attention, and in her 10 years as a literal leech, she had found out that drawing attention this way made life very inconvenient for her. One close shave with a novice hunter had taught her the virtues of keeping her head down. Those anti-midian weapons had hurt.

Now, where is that damned place?! Reina growled as she stalked around. Admittedly, her sense of direction wasn't the best, either before or after she became a vampire, but she had gotten somewhat better ever since. Having an advanced sense of smell along with phenomenal eyesight tended to help her get her bearings.

However, it still took some time to wander to the right place. Assuming it was the right place. Reina wrinkled her nose. She could smell alcohol, cigarettes, and vomit. Typical college party, as it were. Reina sighed, suddenly less interested. Her acute sense of smell was turning her off the place, even if it was in an upmarket district.

Then again, she wanted to find that powerful person or creature. If someone that strong was setting up in her city, she wanted to know about it. Besides, she had always wanted to find another vampire to talk to.

In the 10 years since her turning, the only strong vampire she had encountered was her own master. She had run into a couple of young punks like herself around, but they hadn't gotten along at all, and Reina had been forced to fight and kill them.

Reina really wanted to find someone who understood her condition. There were still so many other things she didn't know, for lack of a master's guidance.

A familiar scowl worked its way onto her face at that thought. She still hadn't forgiven her master for abandoning her so quickly. Reina was a vindictive sort, and fully planned on giving her irresponsible master a good piece of her mind the next time she saw that woman.

In the midst of her mental ramblings, Reina's feet had started moving of their own volition, leading her to the entrance. Someone had conveniently left the door open, and the sounds of someone retching in the bushes nearby clearly indicated what said person had exited to do. Reina shrugged and slipped in, not above taking opportunities as they came. As she did so, she did her best to try and look human.

Then again, considering how drunk most of the young people in the place were, she could have sprouted claws and bat wings along with her fangs and nobody would have cared or even noticed. Reina briefly wondered if she used to be as crazy as they were back when she was one of them. She decided not to think about it after a moment's consideration though. It was just too depressing to compare things now.

Meandering around the grounds, she kept all her senses open for that power signature she had picked up on earlier. Frustratingly, there was nothing, at least none that she could discern immediately. Could whatever it was have left already? It was a distinct possibility, after all.

Scowling, Reina stared at the few people who were still sober enough to dance...or rather, sober enough not to trip and fall face first on the ground, since whatever it was they were doing, 'dancing' was the furthest thing from it.

Without really thinking about it, Reina continued barging her way around, feeling decidedly grumpy for whatever reason. Perhaps it was the fact that her quarry was lost. Even though she was at a party, her mood had been ruined.

So, even though alcohol had little to no effect on her, she gravitated towards the bar. Well, as long as it wasn't solid food, she could take it. Reina still had bad memories from when her body had spectacularly forced an ejection of solid food after the first time she had attempted to eat something the human way.

She would have made it there without any incident too, but for a certain collision.

"Ouch!"

~*~*~

Sayumi was beginning to feel slightly more than a little buzzed by now. Copious amounts of alcoholic substances did the trick, even if her tolerance for the stuff ran higher than normal. You just had to overload it by piling even more on top of it.

Eri had fallen asleep by now, or would that be passed out? While Risa had been mumbling to herself the whole time, as if conducting a persistent conversation with some imaginary friend or other, and Sayu still trying to drown herself in alcohol for reasons unknown to herself.

Deciding that her two friends could take care of themselves for the moment, Sayumi lurched from her seat and wobbled to the nearest bathroom. Or at least, planned to get there. She was rather rudely interrupted by someone barging into her, making her grunt in pain and shake off the worst effects of the alcohol.

"Owie..." She moaned in pain, her head ringing weirdly, partly from the alcohol, and partly from her sixth sense. Then again, she wasn't sure about the latter, since the alcohol probably helped throw her off balance more than just a little. Opening one eye, she peeked at the person who had set off her personal alarm...

...and was surprised to see a much smaller sized girl scowling at her. A small, extremely cute girl. Sayu squealed randomly and threw her arms around the stranger without really thinking about it, and that strange trill of alarm ran through her fuddled senses again.

Alright, so maybe she was a little more drunk than she thought she was.

"Kawaii~" Sayu squealed again, and squeezed more tightly. Dimly, she had a feeling that she should have been more wary of doing something like this, but she was too buzzed to process it properly right now. She would think about it at a later date. Right now she was too busy trying to choke the life out of the person she was pretty close to hugging to death.

Of course, that only applied if that person was not already dead, in any case.

~*~*~

Reina froze when the quite obviously tipsy girl latched onto her like she was a fluffy teddy bear. If Reina had needed to breathe, she would be choking by now, but since she didn't exactly need to, all she felt was a great sense of irritation once the initial shock wore off.

"Leggo!" Reina growled under her breath, the words coming out in a single garbled stream. "Geroff me!"

Right at this moment Reina devoutly wished that she didn't have so many witnesses present, because she would have dearly loved to rip this annoying girl's arms off for getting so friendly with her. Reina needed her personal space, and this person seemed hellbent on invading it at the moment.

Not to mention how this person smelled odd too. It was probably just the alcohol; but Reina couldn't quite shake the feeling that there was something else mixed in too. Reina blinked, her thoughts interrupted when that strange girl tried to kiss her for no reason.

"Oi! Stop it!" She fended off the assault of physical affection, panicking slightly and shoving with a little more force than should be used on a human. That resulted in a nasty fall, and Reina stared blankly when the taller girl burst into tears on cue.

What the hell?! Reina was torn between wanting to help the girl up and get her to stop crying, or just knocking her out to save herself from further trouble. The latter was a far more tempting option at the moment though. Sometimes the young vampire couldn't help but think that unlife was definitely making her a lot less social.

A mere whisper of a chuckle, barely there and so faint that she almost thought she was just imagining it, made her whip around instantly, her hackles raised and fangs half bared. She could feel someone watching her, as opposed to the few people who were merely looking in her direction. She was definitely being observed by someone, or something.

Where! Where is it! Reina growled, eyes shining with a feral gleam as she grew more frustrated, completely ignoring the girl by her feet.

Then she felt it, a surging rush of energy, an overwhelming presence that made her knees buckle simply by making itself known to her. Gritting her teeth stubbornly together, Reina set her shoulders and pushed back with her own aura.

To any onlookers, it would have appeared as if Reina was just frozen in place, an intense frown of concentration on her face. There would be no further outward sign of such a purely supernatural battle of wills.

Reina scowled even harder, since she could just feel the other entity smiling condescendingly at her, even though she was pushing back with all her might. It annoyed her to no end, being taken so lightly. Unthinkingly, her fangs had sunk into her lower lip as she unconsciously bit down, her body starting to shake under the strain.

Don't be so stubborn, child. A sourceless voice seemed to echo in her mind, and Reina, out of habit, threw an insulting retort right back with her mental voice, coupled with swear words and rude gestures she made up on the spot. She could almost feel the other entity sigh, and the hint of gentle amusement in it.

Very well. Look then, and know your place. Reina found her head snapping upwards, as if beyond her own control, and her vision seemed to zoom in on its own accord to meet eye to eye with the master vampire that had been toying with her.

She began to tremble, just a little at first, before it became more pronounced, and she stumbled backwards, sweating profusely as, for the first time in 10 years, she felt true terror grip her heart. So strong...so much power.. The barest of squeaks wavered from her throat, and she fell backwards on her butt, eyes wide.

Now do you understand? Go now, and leave me be. That voice, sounding both youthful and ancient at the same time, was edged with a timeless regret bordering on a sadness so total, it was almost beautiful. It seemed very tired, and almost resigned. Reina found herself staring, uncomprehendingly, as the same gaze that had terrified her so much appeared to draw her in, despite her fear.

So frightening, so powerful, so......beautiful. These thoughts came unbidden to the young vampire, and tears ran red from her eyes. She did not understand why, only that it was beyond her ability to ignore, or even look away.

Reina did not know how she managed it, but her body appeared to be following the commands of an unknown power as she somehow stumbled out of that place, driven as if by the force of that voice that had ordered her to leave. She did not know how long she spent in that state, half dreaming and half awake, stumbling like some restless ghoul along the street.

When she finally regained her senses, she was practically halfway across town. Sinking to her knees, staring up at the full moon above, Reina wept again, not tears of sorrow, but tears of joy. She had finally found something worth chasing after.

I won't give up. I won't let you scare me away. Just you wait.

She swore at the night, the same bullheaded determination that drove her every action rearing its head within her again. She stood, clenching her fist so tightly it almost drew blood from her palm as her nails dug in, her irises bleeding to an unholy crimson in the faint light.

Just you wait.

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And done. Tired....@_@

Enjoy.
« Last Edit: June 29, 2008, 09:56:53 PM by Estrea »

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #27 on: June 29, 2008, 10:31:09 PM »
Ok, well, I find drunk ppl quite interesting so I enjoyed this immensely. :lol: that Sayu has a high tolerance for alcohol. I guess she could be the type. But Eri and Gaki... XD Poor Eri gets hit on while Gaki takes care of the problem herself! That's cool. And Eri becoming touchy is great! I think Gaki likes it, for the record.
Whoa, so Reina burns the bodies of her victims, huh? Well, that's smart. And she nearly died from a fire when she was a human? That's interesting. And she also almost got killed by a vampire hunter or something? Well, this just gets better and better! I'm starting to get the idea that that Seirei might be a vampire. Sayu and Reina encounter =  :lol: And I'm also thinking that Sayu has some kind of vampire sensing power. I really have no idea about vampire related things so I'm just guessing.
But I'm having fun reading! :D

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #28 on: June 29, 2008, 10:43:15 PM »
Seeing the girls drunk is funny, but it's kinda surprising that Sayu has that much of a tolerance for alcohol. Surprising, but it could be true, lol. And she has some sort of sixth sense, can't forget that. She also got to meet Reina in this chapter, I'm guessing they will meet in the future too. Reina's an interesting sort of character, she gets excited by challenges... It's obvious that her next challenge is to meet that powerful being she found. I'm guessing that's Seirei?
looking forward to the next chapter!  :yep:

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #29 on: June 30, 2008, 12:20:00 PM »
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A small, extremely cute girl. Sayu squealed randomly and threw her arms around the stranger without really thinking about it, and that strange trill of alarm ran through her fuddled senses again.

loool alcohol starts to get effective XD!
so the tolerance wasn't as high as she though, huh  :P?

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"Kawaii~" Sayu squealed again, and squeezed more tightly. Dimly, she had a feeling that she should have been more wary of doing something like this, but she was too buzzed to process it properly right now. She would think about it at a later date. Right now she was too busy trying to choke the life out of the person she was pretty close to hugging to death.

I LOVE this part XDDD!

for the rest, i think that the person is seirei   :) i hope it is XD or is there a character we don't know yet  :? ?

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #30 on: June 30, 2008, 12:26:35 PM »
I wonder whether Reina will have any impressions of Sayu or is she too taken away by the woman ( I suppose it is Seirei)  :D Oh well, if everyone was drunk in there, Reina could have just suck everyone's blood. I wonder what Seirei is up to. I wonder what will happen next.

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #31 on: June 30, 2008, 12:58:07 PM »
Wow someone made a huge impression on Reina  :O And she made a huge impression on Sayu XD Her attempt to steal Reina's kiss was my fav part :roll: I can't wait what will happen next when girls will sober up  :lol:

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #32 on: June 30, 2008, 01:29:33 PM »
i love the 'voice' XD
and Sayu Reina encounter.
now i cnt wait.

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #33 on: June 30, 2008, 01:55:16 PM »
Vampire Reina?  :wub: Loved how you threw in Reina's bad sense of direction, but compensated with her heightened sense of smell and hearing, and of course her ability to sense things.

Sayu with a high alcohol tolerance cracked me up  XD Though she's really started feeling her mass drinking from the looks of things now. I love how she immediately latched on to Reina and tried to kiss her!  :lol:

Regarding Reina's master... it wouldn't happen to be Miki would it? I duno... when I read the word "irresponsible" Miki just came to mind for some reason. Or it could just be the Miki fangirl in me  :sweatdrop:

I'm in the same boat as those who have commented before me about the other vampire being Seirei. I'm eager to find out just who Seirei is! I have feeling about who it might be, but I guess at this point it could really turn out to anyone so I'll just wait for updates!

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #34 on: July 01, 2008, 01:21:06 AM »
ah goosefish has a good point on the master being miki...I didn't think of that!  My guess was Nakazawa...  I'm still bent on Seirei being Ai chan though...just cause she has to show up somewhere right? :mon cute:  (lol look what the suspense has done to me!)

my favourite part from chapter 2 has to be the bunny hug of death XD  I always think to myself if I ran into Reina in yanki mode in a dark ally...what would I do ?  Would I hug her or would I run?  lol I guess I now know what Sayu would do XD

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #35 on: July 02, 2008, 01:02:39 AM »
First vampires, and now ifrits too? :lol:


Looks like Reina's been looking for a mentor figure as her own sire (who, BTW now is appanrently a woman for some reason) abandoned her.

Going to be interesting to see what it was that Reina sensed from Sayu. :yep:

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #36 on: July 04, 2008, 03:49:30 AM »
Mk so I finally got around to reading this and I must sat it is brilliant
I love Sayu in this story XD shes so freaking hilarious and evil of course hahaha
Plus just the way you write keeps me captivated =]

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #37 on: July 05, 2008, 10:54:27 PM »
Oh, I'm very interested as to where this story is going to go. LOL Reina's cranky.
Hmm, I wonder who this master is...
Maybe this other vampire Maki O_o

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And Eri was no better, doing some weird robotic dance movements along to the background music and attracting quite a crowd to watch the usually more reserved (in public) girl show off some fairly slick moves. Well, drunken kind of slick, but it could have been a lot worse.
Lol Eri does the robot XD
Eri= :mon taichi: :mon roll:
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Not to mention how Risa happened to pack a punch even while tipsy. Sayu never knew that Risa had it in her to smash her glass into a guy's face. Thankfully, that little altercation didn't last long, since Risa stumbled back to them almost immediately and clung on to Eri like a drowning person to a life buoy, while said guy passed out (he was equally drunk, if not more, and the impact sped up his entry to dreamland) right after.
Wow, go Risa, but she seems to be having some trouble standing X]
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Speaking of turtles, Eri was currently getting awfully touchy feely with everyone in range. Thankfully, said range was currently being limited to Risa, who was still clinging on to Eri for some reason or another, be it her own comfort or for Eri's safety, one couldn't be sure.
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Sayu just couldn't decide if she wanted to be jealous or just join in though. She wasn't drunk enough to forget herself yet.
Jealous. Obviously :P
Sayu= :mon whine:
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She drank. Even if she couldn't get drunk that easily, she could very damn well try.
Drowning all of your jealously in alcohol Sayu?

Hilarious how she tried to kiss Reina XD I can't wait for the update!

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Re: [Fic of the Month!] / Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #38 on: July 06, 2008, 04:29:39 PM »
^Thanks! :D

Many thanks to those 5 people who voted for me. XD Hope I won't disappoint anyone with this fic!

Ok the chapter's almost done, but I need to add some more to it and edit before I can post. I'll do comment replies first though. ^^


SBK: Can I call you Ichigo-chan too? XD Anyway, yes, drunk people are incredibly entertaining. If I could get away with it I would add more drunk scenes, but I don't want to throw in too many random things to detract from the plot. As for Reina's history, well, she's a survivor. And Seirei? You'll get a formal introduction to her in the coming chapter. About Sayu though, well, you'll see. XD It's something to keep in mind for the future. Glad you're enjoying yourself!

Grisours: I rather enjoyed writing Reina. She's a fun character. Oh yes, her propensity to get into trouble will rear its ugly head in her current quest. Finding something super strong when it doesn't want to see you is generally not a good idea. XDD Oh well.

yanki07: I believe this chapter will answer several questions for you. Well, not that it wasn't obvious before, but at least you'll know for sure now!

tito: Lol. Yeah Reina could have just drained everyone, but she was a little on the full side. Besides, it's just way too suspicious if a whole house of people mysteriously go missing or is burned down. Reina's a little reckless, but she's not completely stupid. :P

peti-chan: I enjoyed letting Sayu try to kiss Reina. >D It was amusing when the idea first came to me, and I don't regret putting it in. You'll get to see what happens in the morning, although there really isn't anything earthshaking I guess. XD They can't be hyper ALL the time. ^^;

ringo-hime: Sorry to keep you waiting then! Haha. I'll be even busier this week, so updates might be slow too.

goosefish: Nice long comment. <3 Yes, Vampire Reina is fun! I just had to poke fun at her sense of direction, or lack thereof. Reina's master won't be making an appearance for a while though, but I hope people will like it when she finally does appear. XD Everyone wants to know who the vampire is, and it will finally be revealed in the next chapter!  Haha.

Sukoshi: Hehe I liked the bunny hug of death too. It was just so...Sayu. Frankly, if I saw vampire!Reina in a dark alley, I'll freak out. Whether I run towards her or run away depends entirely on how I feel at that point. XD

JFC: Well at least you caught on to the Sayu thing. :P She's mostly normal, but well, just mostly. XD There are all manners of supernatural creatures around, vampires are just one of the merry group. As for the reference to a vampire's Master, its just a blanket term for both male and female ones. Nothing to it. XD

heyyouhiya: Thanks for commenting! Yes, evil Sayu is wonderful. I intend to keep her that way. :P Hope to see you reading and commenting often! ^_^

KonaKaga: Hi there! Glad you enjoyed the drunk trio parts. I like to make people laugh. ^_^ There won't be as much to laugh about (I think) in the next chapter, but I'll try to work in as much humor as I possibly can whenever the opportunity presents itself. Hope to see you around often!


Okie dokie. Now you guys can wait another half hour while I finish up the chapter. Muahahaha.

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Re: [Fic of the Month!] / Gegenschein [Ch.2: Break]
« Reply #39 on: July 06, 2008, 04:59:13 PM »
Day


"Ooooh..." A suffering groan came from one of two lumps in the room. A messy head poked out from under one of the covers, wincing at the blast of sunshine that greeted her bloodshot eyes, and immediately withdrew with a strangled shriek. Sunlight was bad! Bad!

"Sayu? Are you finally awake?" An annoyingly chipper voice called from just outside the door, and Risa poked her head in, nudging the door open with her shoulder as she came in with two glasses of water and a bottle of aspirin.

Sayumi muttered something unintelligible from under her blanket cocoon, scrunching into a tiny ball and pulling the cloth further into herself. Risa chuckled, setting down the tray on her table, before taking one of the glasses and a couple of tablets to kneel by the Sayumi-shaped lump of blankets.

"Sayumin, I know you have a terrible hangover and the room probably looks like it's spinning to you right now, but you need to drink some water." Risa coaxed gently. "It'll make you feel better, I promise." She tentatively shook what she gauged was Sayumi's shoulder, trying to get a response from her.

"Mmprgh...Gaki-san I hate you!" Sayumi slurred from underneath the covers, jerking away from her senior. Risa blinked, confused. "What?"

"Why are you so bloody CHEERFUL in the blasted morning?!" A very displeased Sayumi poked her head out with a growl, her eyes reduced to mere slits to guard against the glare of sunshine. Risa couldn't help but laugh at the disgruntled look on Sayumi's face.

"Serves you right for binging on drinks the way you did yesterday." Risa said disapprovingly. "At least I knew to stop after I started feeling dizzy."

Sayumi grunted and blindly took the offered water and tablets, gulping the latter down before chugging the rest of the water. "Ugh. Don't remind me." She rubbed at her bloodshot eyes. "Why didn't you stop me?"

"Stop you? I had my hands full with Eri." Risa looked over at the prone form on the other side of the room. The turtle girl had not stirred since they had dumped her in the corner last night. "Will she be alright?"

Sayumi crawled over, carefully lifting part of the blankets from Eri and smoothing back the messy fringe from her best friend's eyes. With the practiced ease of someone who has been doing it for at least half her life, she peeled back one of Eri's eyelids and took a quick look before tenderly placing the covers back over the sleeping girl. Eri had not so much as twitched during the examination, and only snuffled a little after Sayumi moved away carefully.

"She's alright, knocked out as usual." Sayu appeared to be mostly back to normal as the effects of the aspirin started to make itself felt. She massaged her temples and leaned back on the pile of blankets that had been covering her earlier.

"Augh. Why did I drink so much?" She groused. "I don't even remember what happened last night."

"I don't really remember either, but that might be a blessing in disguise." Risa commented, flopping down next to the youngest of the trio. "Should we wake Eri up for some water and aspirin too?"

"Nah." Sayumi said after a moment's thought. "Let her sleep it off. She'll be fine after, oh, 14 hours of sleep." She laughed wryly. "Just have a pitcher of water ready for when she does wake up though." Risa grinned back and nodded, trusting the younger girl's judgment. After all, Sayumi had known Eri for far longer than she had.

The pair sat in companionable silence for a minute or so, Risa relaxing in the lazy atmosphere while Sayumi was just battling her persistent headache. After she had forced the worst of the pain down, the younger turned to Risa.

"So how did we get back here?" She looked around. "Where is here?"

"My house." Risa grinned sheepishly. "I called my parents for help since I couldn't lug both of you at the same time. And I didn't think that either of your parents would be thrilled to see you guys in this state."

Sayumi stared at her for a moment, then snickered. "Eririn's parents might have flipped out, but obviously you've never met my family." She paused, thinking, before she shuddered. "On second thoughts, it's a good thing you didn't tell them." She closed her eyes. "I don't enjoy being dipped headfirst into a vat of cold water."

Now it was Risa's turn to stare. "Say WHAT?!" Sayumi grinned mischievously, opening one eye.

"I come by my peculiarities honestly, Gaki-san~" Sayu cooed as she grabbed at Risa's cheeks and pulled hard again, forcing an unnatural smile to appear on Risa's face. The older sighed and rolled her eyes.

"Maybe I should have just left you with the headache, you were quieter with it..."

"Aww but you love me~"

"Keep on doing that and I will change my mind about that."

~*~*~

A heavy oak-paneled door swung ponderously shut, cutting off sterile white walls from the warmer interior of the room it guarded. There was a barely audible click as the door closed with surprising gentleness, and soft soled shoes ghosted across the mat, pausing by the shoe cupboard as small hands removed her footwear and deposited them within the built in closet that melded almost seamlessly with the wall.

Bare feet now crossed a highly polished floor, the grained pattern of seasoned wood matching with the muted wallpaper on either side of the narrow corridor that opened into a wider room, sparsely but tastefully furnished with a mix of old and new; the traditional homey air that resembled something out of a 17th century European manor harboring 21st century technology and amenities.

It was to that corner that the person padded towards, a darkened screen blinking to life with a move of the mouse, and the tiny owner of the apartment pulled out the chair for herself before ignoring it totally and moving over to the closed and blinded window next to her work station. A single light touch opened the blinds up a fraction, sending rays of piercing sunshine into the previously darkened room.

She blinked at the bright glare, her eyes adjusting in an instant to the influx of light into her domain. The peculiar thing about night vision was that it carried over to the day as well. Shadows had never been quite the same ever since, so it kinda screwed with her depth perception at times.

Turning, she squinted through the shadows created by the light, once again amused by how she could just see through them as if they were not there to begin with.

Settling back into the easy chair in front of her computer, Seirei smiled as the warm sunshine fell on her at regular intervals; segregated, naturally, by the blinds in the way.

She had always been a peculiar example of her...species? Not only did she have no fear of the day, she rather enjoyed the sun as well --- in controlled doses, of course. She still didn't tan very well, and sunburn still hurt her as it would any ordinary human.

Her lips twitched into an involuntary smile as she speedily checked her email, widening into a heartfelt one as she clicked on one of the new messages she had received in her absence.

The convenient thing about the 21st century and all its technological gimmicks was that it enabled her to keep in contact with the one person that mattered to her for the last half eon or so. Pure white teeth flashed in an even, gleaming row as she grinned at the message, complete with pictures and amusing anecdotes, from her child who was at present about halfway across the globe from her, and having a lot of fun making things and people explode, as it were.

There was another mail, with the heading To DJ Seirei, and she couldn't help but smile a little more at her own little joke. The name was highly ironic, considering her circumstances. For she was neither alive, divine, nor devoted to authority, in all readings of the name.

Naturally, it was as much an alias as the many identities she had assumed over the countless centuries. At present though, considering she was in Japan, her current identity had had to have a regular Japanese-sounding name too. As luck would have it, it hadn't been too difficult to use a variant of her true name for her current alias. These little consistencies helped keep her sane in an ever changing world.

Immortality was a difficult burden to bear, after all.

Takahashi Ai, yes, that's my name now. And so it had been for the last 2 to 3 years. With a little luck she would be able to keep this particular identity for another 10 to 15 years or so before having to move on. A perpetually youthful appearance had both pros and cons to it, unfortunately.

Ai tapped thoughtfully on the table as she went through her mail and checked the web for news, scanning with inhuman speed through the pages. One of the upsides of her condition, as she liked to put it. She rather enjoyed making quirky little jokes about her immortality that would not be obvious to the average human, and amused herself thus. It was a little lame at times, but every little bit helped.

Laughter helped her put herself into perspective. Without a sense of humor, she would possibly have gone mad a thousand years ago.

The days were always so long, but Ai had since found a way to deal with it. She had to, because if madness hadn't gotten her, boredom would have. Reading was always a nice way to pass the time, and she liked to keep up on news happening around the world. It paid to be up to date with current affairs, even if she were no longer human. At least she always knew where else she could relocate to in a hurry should the need ever arise.

Despite being a vampire, Ai was basically as non-violent as conditions would allow. She had not killed a single normal human being for decades, the last time being that unfortunate incident up in the old Soviet Union when she had been rather rudely awakened from a 20 year nap.

Ai was a reasonable creature when awake, less so when still groggy and in the grip of her bestial instincts. It had been a bloodbath of spectacular proportions, she recalled, and found herself licking her lips at the memory.

What was she thinking?! Slightly aghast by her own behavior, she snapped her jaws shut and pushed up and away from her seat, stalking quickly over to her secret stash, her fingers working out the unlocking sequence to the hidden safe. She reached in and grabbed a bottle, slamming the safe shut and relocking it before sweeping past the counter and grabbing a goblet, pouring the red liquid into it before lifting it to her lips.

The rich taste calmed her, as did the hint of expensive scotch mixed into her favorite beverage. Her only source of nourishment now, considering her current status. Retiring to a chair by another window, she placed the bottle on the little round table next to her, but not before refilling her goblet again.

Ai sipped distantly, her mind, as always, starting to wander. She had an iron grip on her bloodlust, so much so that she had not fed directly from a living human ever since that unfortunate incident on the killing fields of Crimea. She had other ways of procuring fresh blood as and when she needed it, and then again she never needed as much blood nowadays.

One of the benefits of advanced age, she conceded wryly. As long as she wasn't gravely injured, she didn't need as much fresh blood to sustain and regenerate herself.

The modern world could be tiring to keep up with, but it did have many fascinating developments in the area of human knowledge. Even though some of those developments made it awfully difficult to get away with certain things the way she could in less advanced eras. Law enforcement was far more efficient nowadays than it was about a hundred or so years ago, and making up identities was conversely both more and less easy at the same time.

Technology... Ai noted philosophically as she cast her eye on her still active Mac computer in the corner. She had had the foresight of enrolling for classes back when the computer was still a mass of metal and plastic, with cables the size of her arm and occupying a rather large room in its entirety.

Now the average computer was present almost everywhere, and was much smaller and faster than its lumbering behemoth of a predecessor. Ai sighed and finished up the last of her blood wine.

The world is changing so fast... She mused as she got up to rinse out her goblet, replacing the items where they belonged. She could only hope to keep up with the times, or risk being left behind as a mere anachronism of a bygone era and destroyed, as so many other things had been.

Maybe I should go back for classes. I haven't gone to school in a while... Ai considered that as she settled back in front of her terminal. Her mind swung from one subject to another as she clicked on the latest news for the city she was currently living in, frowning at one of the headlines.

Multiple Missing, Police Investigate. Involuntarily, she recalled that young upstart she met the night before. Cocky and confident, that much she had sensed from the fledgling. She had smelled the blood on the wind earlier that evening, and had no illusions about what had occurred. The missing people would not be found, she concluded. Not alive, anyway.

She could only hope that the kid had had the foresight of disposing of the bodies carefully. Dry corpses tended to draw too much unnecessary attention from all the wrong places. Ai was not afraid of the police though. She knew all the loopholes in most criminal codes, no thanks to a short stint as a law aide 2 identities ago. And she had also been a forensics investigator in yet another lifetime, so she knew exactly how to avoid detection.

No, she was concerned about the hunters. Ai did not particularly like tangling with them, even if she knew she could handle the situation most of the time. She understood their zeal to exterminate non-human creatures that threatened mankind, and supported it to some degree. It made her life easier if they helped to get rid of the troublesome low-level trash. It saved her the trouble of doing it herself.

For an Ancient like her, peace and stability were greatly valued. It was easier on her nerves. Young upstarts that wanted only to revel in blood and violence threatened that stability, and she had no wish to see the world ripped apart by a war between her kind and the humans. Humans slaughtered each other well enough on the slightest pretext; she didn't need her food source decimated in the senseless conflict that would result from her kind's exposure.

It was to avoid the hunters that she had relocated to this small city. It had a very low level of supernatural energy, and an insignificant population of non-humans mingled with the humans. Ai had chosen this place since it was less likely that the hunters would come to a place where there was little to no supernatural trouble. Peace and quiet was so very important to her, and she would be really upset if someone disturbed that balance.

She frowned at the screen again, minimizing the window as she stood, pacing around for a bit, thinking. This young upstart could be a problem. Briefly, she considered eliminating her before the hunters noticed anything strange and decided to investigate.

However, Ai was practical, not cruel. She could be ruthless when the situation called for it, but she would not destroy another needlessly. She had sensed the child's movements in the city from time to time, and despite the lack of finesse in hiding her aura, the fledgling wasn't completely incompetent. Rough around the edges and way too cocky and impudent for her own good perhaps, but not a mindless creature. Probably desperately in need of guidance, but Ai had no interest in a baby vampire. The young one would learn in time, on its own; or perish just as many other unnamed fledglings had in the course of time.

With a sigh, she pulled up the blinds by the window, letting the sunlight filter in, unfettered. It washed over her pale, immortal, undead form, and she could almost feel warm in the sun's embrace. Almost.

She did not breathe, her heart did not beat, and she could barely feel any compassion anymore. What little humanity she had left, save for this unaging shell. Yet she was human once, a long time ago, and the sun felt good on her skin, banishing the darkness from her.

Shaking her head, she retreated from the window, back into the cool shadows. She could not let the past entrap her, however much she clung on to it. It grounded her, but it could also swallow her whole. Grimly, she stared off into the distance, thinking of the young one she had encountered, wondering how much the child knew of the burdens of eternity.

We learn, or we die. Someone had told her that, once, at a time when the world was still young and fresh as she herself was. We adapt, even if we do not change.

For the other way lies madness, and destruction. She closed her eyes, trying not to think.

As always, the world spun on, it always has done. And always will.

For even as civilizations rise and empires fall, the world goes on.
Time goes on, and We remain, insignificant spectators to its march.


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No Reina, unfortunately. Hey, it's morning, she's sleeping. XD

And the not-so-mysterious vampire has been revealed. It's a bit of a heavy chapter, even though it's not long. Hopefully it answers a few questions.

Enjoy.
« Last Edit: July 06, 2008, 05:46:25 PM by Estrea »

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