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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.8: Accel]
« Reply #100 on: September 27, 2008, 07:00:23 PM »
ReinAi.... ReinAi.... I hate it when I read stories that make me root for them. *points at Es-chan* Damn you! Woman!

Okay, after the complaining comes the commenting.

You teased us with Aika >.<... you gave us a a little and just when I wanted more about her... you cut it off  :(. But I wont rank on you to much about it... cause you compensated just nicely with the ReinAi.
 
The Reinai scenes were awesome XD, loved loved LOVED how you introduced Reina. That moment when Reina looked up and becomes just star-struck...*thinks* or should i say Vamp-struck.... *shruggs* w/e.... Anywho, I promise you I could hear the chorus pumping in the background, the crowd just dancing away as Reina and Ai exchanged glances. Good moment Es, good moment *lol*
 
 
The Chase was awesome! But the finale  was epic! Gotta love it when Ai goes all seme and Reina turns all uke... it was JUST *_____________* epic

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Just a bit closer... She pounced. Too late.

"Ow..." Hitting her nose on her pipe wasn't the most glamorous thing she had ever done. She straightened, about to turn around, when she froze again.
HAHAHAHH XD... I can acutally relate to this moment...dont ask how

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Who was the hunter and the hunted?
About time she asked herself that question

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"You're cute, I like you."
Simple reasons work the best ^_^




As for the new guy... I guess I should just sit and wait
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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.8: Accel]
« Reply #101 on: September 29, 2008, 04:03:04 AM »
awesome, great to see u back at writing!!!<3 hope u update this and AA soon! =D

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.8: Accel]
« Reply #102 on: October 09, 2008, 05:33:41 PM »
wow, i love the RenAi interactions

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.8: Accel]
« Reply #103 on: October 09, 2008, 11:28:24 PM »
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And no, you probably don't want to remind her of that either.
for some reason, i had to think of yuko there XDDD

however, the chapter was great... again XD
and there was RenAi <333~  *loves it*

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.8: Accel]
« Reply #104 on: March 14, 2009, 05:38:07 PM »
Ok, I admit I've been gone for a while from this story. :3 Got distracted by Nocturne. Hehe.

But then a certain someone keeps prodding me every now and then for this, so I finally caved and wrote it! Sorry about not replying to the comments, I don't feel quite up to it at the moment. :3

Without further ado, chapter 9. :D

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Chapter 9 - Fugue


"See you after class later!" A cheerful Niigaki Risa waved to her friends as they parted ways, each heading to their own lessons. Shouldering her own pack in one swift motion, Risa turned and started walking towards the buildings on the south side, where her class was.

It was a clear morning, blue sky adorned with wispy decorations that swirled endlessly overhead, carried by the prevailing wind. A pleasant breeze topped things off, making her feel like nothing could go wrong today.

"Yosh, today's another good day!" Risa said to herself, a broad smile on her face as she stepped right along. Along the way, other coursemates waved to her, and she acknowledged them just as brightly. She liked people, and people liked her back. That sunny personality had a lot to do with it, naturally.

Walking past the administration block for her faculty, Risa greeted a lecturer respectfully before moving to take a shortcut towards the classroom she was headed towards. As she passed the glass doors of the administration building, a petite girl scurried out, colliding into her.

"Ah!" Risa was not particularly tall, but it seemed that this girl was even smaller than her, and fragile to boot. In fact, the impact of their collision appeared to have knocked her clear off her feet, and the girl in question was currently sitting on the hard pavement, her glasses on the ground next to her.

"Are you ok?" Risa immediately knelt down, trying to make sure that the stranger was fine. Said stranger had her eyes lidded as if the surroundings were too bright for her, which was a little strange, since it wasn't all that sunny out yet. Her hands scrabbled around for her glasses, which Risa had to pick up and hand over to her, noting as she did so that the lenses were tinted for UV protection.

"Y-yes...thank you..." The girl said a bit hesitantly, peering like a frightened mouse from the bushes at the person she had collided into. Risa simply smiled, offering a hand to the other girl, and they stood up.

"Are you a freshman?" Risa asked, since the girl didn't look particularly old to her, and she would certainly recognize any other students of her own level or higher within the same course.

"Actually, I'm a transfer student..." The smaller girl murmured, looking down as she brushed the dirt off her almost all-white outfit. Her short hair swept forward to hide more of her face as she bowed her head almost shyly.

"Ah, that's unusual. Where are you headed? You look a bit lost." Risa smiled again, trying to bring the shy stranger out of her shell.

"Um, it says here..." The girl pulled out her schedule, pointing at the class in question.

"Ehhh! That's my class!" Risa blurted out, then grinned again. "I guess that makes us classmates, yes?" She stuck her hand out.

"I am Niigaki Risa. Pleased to meet you."

The girl stared at the hand for a moment, then returned the gesture tentatively. Her smile was just as tentative as her actions as she replied.

"My name is Takahashi Ai. I'll be in your care."

~*~*~

"You're older than me? Uso!" Risa exclaimed as they walked out of class together.

"Yes, well, I've been told that I don't look my age..." Ai replied with an enigmatic sort of smile playing on her lips. She clutched her file close to her, her white suede boots clicking on the ground as she walked.

"Eh...so what made you decide to come here? I mean, I don't want to be too forward and all, but..." Risa corrected herself, trying to restrain her enthusiasm a little.

"Well, I decided that I needed a break from my regular lifestyle. School seems like a good way to update myself anyway." Ai replied honestly, flicking a glance at her newfound friend.

"That's unusual." Risa commented, before adding hastily. "Commendable though. Most people just want to get out of school after they get their degree."

"Lamentable. Knowledge is important too." Ai opined as they crossed a street.

Risa looked around, which prompted Ai to ask.

"Are you meeting friends? In that case, maybe I should leave..." Ai started, already beginning to move away. Risa quickly grabbed the girl's arm, noting almost absently the slight flinch as she did so. The girl's arm was also more solid than she had expected. Clearly, Ai was not as fragile as she had appeared on first sight.

"Yes, I mean, no!" Risa blundered around trying to find the right words as Ai watched her with some amusement. "I mean, yes I'm meeting friends. But you don't have to go, I would like to introduce you to them. You should make more friends since you're new."

"If it's not too much trouble..." Ai demurred politely, but Risa tugged her along anyway.

"Never too much trouble. Come on!"

~*~*~

"Ah~ She's so cute!" Sayumi squealed the moment Risa introduced Ai to them. Ai 'eeped' and smoothly stepped out of the way of a crushing hug. Risa sighed and rolled her eyes.

"Don't mind her, she's just a little crazy sometimes." Risa explained apologetically, but Ai simply shook her head with a smile.

"It's alright. I've met stranger people." The exact color of her eyes was indistinguishable given the bluish tint on the lenses of her glasses, but they seemed very dark and lively even then as she fixed an appraising look on Sayumi.

"I suppose it can't be helped though..." Ai smiled in that oddly enigmatic way of hers again, as if appreciating some odd joke that only she could perceive.

"Is she your new girlfriend, Gaki-san?" Eri asked innocently, and Risa spluttered helplessly before turning on her turtle friend.

"What are you talking about, Kame!? Don't spout nonsense!" Risa blabbered about, trying to hide the fierce blush that currently adorned her cheeks. Next to her, Ai giggled, tucking her chin lower to hide her laughter.

"She really is cute though...if you don't want her, I'll take her!" Sayumi grinned deviously, sliding over next to Ai and looping their arms together. Ai gave her a bemused sort of look, the taller bunny girl looking down with a bright smile...

...that faded slightly as their eyes met. Sayumi stared at the calm orbs behind blue-tinted lenses, the hairs on the back of her neck rising up inexplicably. Ai only looked back placidly, seeming entirely harmless no matter how one looked at her.

"Ah, maybe I shouldn't steal her from Gaki-san!" Sayumi quickly let go, going back to lean against Eri instead. "What will Eririn do without me~"

Risa sighed dramatically. "Now you see what I have to put up with all the time..."

Ai simply smiled.

~*~*~

"Aren't we both too old for hide and seek?" Reina muttered under her breath as she flattened herself against a brick wall, melting almost seamlessly into shadow.

The city had turned into their playground, the nightscape providing a perfect backdrop for a game of cat and mouse. And for all that Reina physically resembled a cat, she was definitely the hunted in this case.

Or just a kitty given a string to chase... Reina thought just a tad grumpily as she masked her aura , erasing the outward traces to make it more difficult for anyone to detect her.

Not the first night since she had been out doing this; running and hiding, all while trying to chase down the elusive Seirei. She could feel the elder vampire watching her, and as if to add insult to injury, the master vampire would occasionally appear out of nowhere to tag her, before disappearing without a trace again.

It was aggravating, but it was fun. Reina never knew when or where exactly Seirei would appear; some nights, the elder vampire never showed up at all. Yet, Reina could still feel herself being watched, and resolved to prove herself worthy enough for that arrogant vampire to accept her as a pupil.

I wonder how her blood tastes like... Involuntarily, Reina extended her fangs in the equivalent of a drool, an instinctive reaction she could not quite control. She had not desired the blood of another vampire since...since? Reina frowned, sliding along the wall to sneak down the alleyway.

There had been her master. That had been the first vampire blood she had tasted, and the scent was imprinted into her visceral memory. The blood of other vampires that she had encountered in her existence thus far had never interested her; then again, most of them had been weaker than her, and it provoked no reaction from her.

From what little she had managed to observe thus far, strength seemed to be the deciding factor in the vampire world. Reina could understand that. The human world was not so very much different, and it was not quite that long ago that she was human herself. A mere 10 years, unchanging in her present form, but still within a human's lifespan. Not so easy to forget what it was like, at least, not all of it.

A tap on her shoulder, no more than a light touch, and this time Reina's hand shot out before she even thought to turn around, desperate to grab hold of the elusive vampiress that had been stalking her.

Fingers gliding across smooth, pale skin, no more than a fleeting touch. It was like trying to grab hold of smoke or mist. Near impossible...

...unless, of course, the target didn't mind being caught.

A figure clad in full black, like a hunting panther. Sleek and dangerous, silent and deadly. Again, Reina was forced to wonder who was the hunter in this game. She had a sinking feeling that it wasn't herself.

A moment of silence passed, dark eyes fixed on the grip that Reina had just barely managed to secure. Reina stared back defiantly, valiantly trying to disguise her discomfort.

"Ara, you've improved." A fanged smile, mesmerizing in the moonlight. Slender fingers smoothly reversed the loose two-finger hold Reina had on her wrist, turning the tables around easily to trap the younger vampire against a wall.

There really wasn't very much of a difference between their heights, but Reina felt very small in front of a domineering Seirei. Not far from a kitten caught between a tiger's paws, helpless.

She didn't very much like the feeling.

"Didn't your Master ever tell you it's rude to bare your fangs at someone else?" Ai smiled mysteriously, using her free hand to playfully poke at Reina's exposed fangs. Reina yelped and glared malevolently at the elder, pressing her lips together into a thin pout.

"Reina doesn't like you." The young vampire blurted out recklessly, without thinking. She found thought to be well nigh impossible in front of this damnably attractive vampire. That and she was feeling rather on the defensive side, and had to say something to save her pride.

Never mind that she didn't really mean it, or that the person in question could likely crush her with one pinky. Some deep, feral instinct told her that Seirei would not kill her, not for something like this.

She was right. Ai smiled, amused. She had still yet to reveal her true name, or well, her current name, to this young upstart, but she felt little need to. This young one was nothing more than a very enjoyable past time.

"Why do you keep chasing Reina? When are you going to teach Reina anything?" Ai chuckled at the insistent questions from her little toy, pinching the younger vampire on the nose lightly, making her squint and pout even more.

"I'm not chasing you, Reina." She all but purred Reina's name, making the younger shudder in her arms. Their bodies had somehow pressed against each other during the exchange, Ai still maintaining her hold on Reina's wrist against the wall, but otherwise there was little space left separate between the two.

"You are the one who doesn't want to let go." Ai finished, gesturing down with her eyes. Reina followed her gaze, the tip of her ears reddening in embarrassment when she noticed her own free hand wrapped around Ai's waist, pulling the elder close.

"You said..." Reina mumbled in a very small voice, but did not let go of the older vampire. Ai let a fang slip out again as she smirked.

"I promised nothing, kitten..." Reina looked up, slightly offended and even a bit outraged, but was caught by Ai's intense gaze. The elder vampire merely ran one cold hand down Reina's cheek, sliding down to grasp firmly at the young one's chin.

"Ah..." Reina squeaked, feeling suddenly afraid as Ai jerked downwards sharply, forcing her mouth open to expose her fangs to the night. Reina felt very vulnerable as Ai tilted her head to the side, as if studying an interesting specimen.

Why was she letting this arrogant vampire manipulate her? Reina felt her pupils contract angrily, displeased that she, a vampire in her own right, was being toyed with by another. She was strong now; she didn't have to bow to anyone else!

Gathering her strength, Reina was about to break free of the hold when Ai pushed her flat against the wall with enough force to send some dust sprinkling down on them both. Reina's eyes bulged outwards at the impact, reeling slightly from the shock even as Ai leaned in close.

"Don't even think about it." Her voice was a sensuous snarl, more taunting than truly upset. "You're a thousand years too young to pick a fight with me."

Flattening her ears back, Reina hissed defiantly, much like the cats that she resembled. She felt threatened by this dominant presence, although some remnant of good sense within her was begging her aggressive side to just roll over and play dead.

Ai shifted her grip from Reina's chin down to the younger's neck, feeling Reina shudder as her fingers closed around such a vulnerable area. Unconsciously, Ai licked her lips, her fangs showing more prominently as she glowered dangerously.

Reina swallowed nervously, her gaze helplessly drawn towards the revealed fangs with increasing trepidation. Was the elder vampire going to bite her? An unconscious shudder ran through her spine, partly from fear, and partly from...excitement?

What's this? I want her to bite me...? Reina's eyes went slightly wide at the thought. How could that be? What was going on? She did not, could not understand.

Ai merely continued to give her a completely inscrutable look, her hand still locked around Reina's throat. Then she smiled, a strange, dangerous sort of smile.

"There's so much that you don't know..." Her thumb, sliding down a major artery, making Reina swallow nervously again. "You don't understand at all, do you...?"

"Then you teach me." Reina rasped out breathlessly, her pupils already narrowed to slits. Her traitorous hand still clung stubbornly on to the elder vampire, needy for everything that this enigma could offer her.

"I am not your Master." Ai hissed lowly, pressing so close against Reina that their noses were almost touching. "Who do you think you are, trying to attach yourself to me?"

Reina could not answer even if she could have found a decent reply, because the next moment her mouth was engulfed by an overwhelming force, relentlessly plundering its depths and claiming everything within reach as its own.

Reina pawed helplessly at the front of Ai's black jacket, unable to exert any more force beyond that. Ai was an unstoppable force, dominating her every sense and aggressively marking territory. Teeth, tongue and lips clashed like battling armies, except that Reina was barely putting up any more than a token resistance against a vastly superior force.

Her tongue lashed around Ai's fangs, both of them having somehow avoided piercing each other with their fangs during that exchange thus far. Reina broke that unspoken rule though, brazenly using the sharp tips to break the skin of Ai's inner lip in an attempt to regain some control over the situation.

The first waft of blood rushed like a heady shot of the most potent brew she had ever known through all her senses, sending alarm bells ringing through her head in the best way possible. That scant taste made Reina reel; how could anything taste so good? Not even fresh human blood was anything compared to this exquisite taste. She wanted more. No, needed more.

Before she could bite any further, Ai forced her back, using her own fangs to nip warningly at Reina's tongue. The added mix of Reina's own blood only served to inflame the younger vampire, her eyes rapidly turning feral as she clawed wildly at Ai, desperate for more.

The elder vampire held her easily at arm's length, an indecipherable look in her eyes. She seemed displeased, even disturbed, by something. Licking her own lip to clean the blood off, she frowned at the taste of Reina's blood at the tip of her tongue, looking at Reina slightly differently from before.

"You..." Reina snarled at her, still caught up in her instincts. Ai sighed and applied more pressure on Reina's neck, shaking the girl slightly.

"Get a grip on yourself. It's unbecoming for someone of your lineage." Ai commanded. Reina shuddered violently, the fog in her eyes clearing with a start. She continued to stare longingly at Ai though, like a child denied her favorite treat. Her mind started working again though, catching on to Ai's words.

"My...lineage?" Reina seemed confused. "You know...who my Master is?"

"Know her?" Ai smiled enigmatically, finally releasing her chokehold on Reina's neck. The younger vampire rubbed at it, eyeing the elder cautiously. Some part of her still wanted to lunge at the other vampire, but good sense (and survival instinct) kept her from pursuing such a suicidal act.

"I know more than that." Ai did not seem inclined to offer more information, only taking a step back. Reina reached forward, wanting to ask more, but Ai was already out of reach, flashing away in an instant.

Know your place, kitten.

Cheap parting shot! Reina threw the thought back, but that domineering presence was no longer there. Muttering a curse, Reina kicked at the nearest object, sending the crushed, empty can scuttling down the alleyway.

Overhead, the waxing moon shone with a pale luminescence, yet never penetrating far enough down into the dark bowels of the earth. Too many things, lying hidden in shadow.

More than one predator was out there, and not all of them drank blood.

Only the moon knew them all.


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:D I had fun.

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #105 on: March 14, 2009, 06:03:53 PM »
OMG!! I can't believe you updated this. But er...I can't really remember where you last left us hanging. Gotta read through this again. *awaits Hammy Potter opportunity* :P

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #106 on: March 14, 2009, 10:21:10 PM »
Chapter 9 - Fugue

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"Yosh, today's another good day!" Risa said to herself, a broad smile on her face as she stepped right along. Along the way, other coursemates waved to her, and she acknowledged them just as brightly. She liked people, and people liked her back. That sunny personality had a lot to do with it, naturally.
It's hard NOT to like her. :)



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As she passed the glass doors of the administration building, a petite girl scurried out, colliding into her.

"Ah!" Risa was not particularly tall, but it seemed that this girl was even smaller than her, and fragile to boot. In fact, the impact of their collision appeared to have knocked her clear off her feet, and the girl in question was currently sitting on the hard pavement, her glasses on the ground next to her.
Smaller than Risa? :?

One of the Kids?



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"Are you ok?" Risa immediately knelt down, trying to make sure that the stranger was fine. Said stranger had her eyes lidded as if the surroundings were too bright for her, which was a little strange, since it wasn't all that sunny out yet. Her hands scrabbled around for her glasses, which Risa had to pick up and hand over to her, noting as she did so that the lenses were tinted for UV protection.
Oooooooooooooooooooh hello now. UV protection, eh? O_o



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"Actually, I'm a transfer student..." The smaller girl murmured, looking down as she brushed the dirt off her almost all-white outfit. Her short hair swept forward to hide more of her face as she bowed her head almost shyly.

"Ah, that's unusual. Where are you headed? You look a bit lost." Risa smiled again, trying to bring the shy stranger out of her shell.

"Um, it says here..." The girl pulled out her schedule, pointing at the class in question.

"Ehhh! That's my class!" Risa blurted out, then grinned again. "I guess that makes us classmates, yes?" She stuck her hand out.

"I am Niigaki Risa. Pleased to meet you."

The girl stared at the hand for a moment, then returned the gesture tentatively. Her smile was just as tentative as her actions as she replied.

"My name is Takahashi Ai. I'll be in your care."
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH?!??!? Aichan??? :o

But then...given the description of this girl that Risa just bumped into (literally), unless she's putting on an act and their meeting like this was NOT an accident, then she can't possibly be Seirei (especially if Risa doesn't recognize her as such, unless of course she's doing the "Clark Kent" style of disguise).
:mon huh2:



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Most people just want to get out of school after they get their degree."

"Lamentable. Knowledge is important too." Ai opined as they crossed a street.
Indeed it is. :yep:



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"Are you meeting friends? In that case, maybe I should leave..." Ai started, already beginning to move away. Risa quickly grabbed the girl's arm, noting almost absently the slight flinch as she did so. The girl's arm was also more solid than she had expected. Clearly, Ai was not as fragile as she had appeared on first sight.
If Aichan IS putting on an act, and really is Seirei in disguise, then what's her purpose here? Is she "on the hunt" so to speak?



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"Ah~ She's so cute!" Sayumi squealed the moment Risa introduced Ai to them. Ai 'eeped' and smoothly stepped out of the way of a crushing hug. Risa sighed and rolled her eyes.

"Don't mind her, she's just a little crazy sometimes." Risa explained apologetically, but Ai simply shook her head with a smile.
:lol:



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"It's alright. I've met stranger people.
XD



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"She really is cute though...if you don't want her, I'll take her!" Sayumi grinned deviously, sliding over next to Ai and looping their arms together. Ai gave her a bemused sort of look, the taller bunny girl looking down with a bright smile...

...that faded slightly as their eyes met. Sayumi stared at the calm orbs behind blue-tinted lenses, the hairs on the back of her neck rising up inexplicably. Ai only looked back placidly, seeming entirely harmless no matter how one looked at her.
What the... :shocked



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*REINA-SEIREI's HIDE AND SEEK*
So these two DO have a history then?



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"Didn't your Master ever tell you it's rude to bare your fangs at someone else?" Ai smiled mysteriously, using her free hand to playfully poke at Reina's exposed fangs. Reina yelped and glared malevolently at the elder, pressing her lips together into a thin pout.
OSNAP it IS Aichan! Seirei's Aichan!!!

...

Strange that she was able to spend the day with Risa and the others without any of them recognizing her from the party (especially Risa, who, remember, had been "drawn" to her :D).



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*REINAI GETTIN' "CLOSE"*
Yowza...vampire make out session. :O



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"Get a grip on yourself. It's unbecoming for someone of your lineage." Ai commanded.
Her lineage? Is Aichan referring just to the fact that Reina's a fellow vampire, or is there something more about her that we haven't heard of yet?



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"My...lineage?" Reina seemed confused. "You know...who my Master is?"

...

"I know more than that." Ai did not seem inclined to offer more information, only taking a step back. Reina reached forward, wanting to ask more, but Ai was already out of reach, flashing away in an instant.
AW COME ON! DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!
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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #107 on: March 14, 2009, 10:37:50 PM »
ESSY I LOVE YOU.   :muffin:   :inlove:

You also broke my silence of not posting. ^__________^

Don't leave us hanging with Sayu!


... and oh yeah, hi everybody.  In case you're wondering, I'm the one who's been poking Estrea to get the new chapter out already.  Since January, if our chat logs are right.  ;)

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #108 on: March 14, 2009, 10:56:06 PM »
You updated!!! I thought this fic was lost and gone forever. XD

Takagaki... Reinai... Best of both worlds... Can't get any better than that. XD :heart:

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #109 on: March 15, 2009, 03:21:42 AM »
I nearly forgot about this story. :P But I'm oh so glad it's kinda back, at least for the time being. AWWWW, Ai-chan seems so vulnerable when she meets Gaki. :wub: My kind of cutesy raburabu~ Oh? Do Sayu and Ai-chan know each other? :w00t: Mmmm, and then some Reinai. :inlove: Hmm, who is this master and why does Ai-chan know her? Oh and I thought that the line "Reina doesn't like you" was soo kyaaa~~~ :heart: I can just imagine her pouting. :D

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #110 on: March 15, 2009, 02:16:25 PM »
finally u update tis again..XD..

love e renai scene.. :lol: :lol:

AiGaki, RenAi = best..XD

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #111 on: March 16, 2009, 08:25:56 AM »
Whooo!  You updated!  I was just thinking of this story just a couple days ago...so yay yay  :pen_whirl:

ah baby vampire Reina...how I missed you  :wub:

I like how Ai chan made her move into the Risa's world...I'm excited at the thought of what's to come.  It cracked me up a lot when Sayu left Ai chan to Gaki once she felt that Ai chan was dangerous XD  I hope the bunny girl at least gives Gaki a warning.

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"Reina doesn't like you."

awww...isn't that like the sweetest saying ever?  XD  it can melt anyone's heart  :wub:

need more baby vampire Reina~  she's just too adorable  :shy1:


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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #112 on: March 16, 2009, 03:50:10 PM »
an update  :muffin:

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #113 on: March 16, 2009, 07:34:11 PM »
Now I remember what this was about. I went back to read the last few chapters. I'm POSITIVE Sayu realized there was something about Ai that was different from them and she's probably a little freaked. I LOL'ed that Risa took to the new girl aka Ai so quickly. Some things are just written in the stars eh :P

PS: Don't be sad Essy-chan. It will be a brighter day. It might take many days but still, that day will come. If you still feel upset, go bully Stef or something XD

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #114 on: March 17, 2009, 04:46:07 PM »
^ :dunno: me?
Barrrrrrssskett! What am I... both of your punching bag when you guys are emo/depressed or something?!

Saweet chapter btw. Although I forgot what happened in the previous few chapters and I'm lazy to re-read :P Why was Sayu afraid(?) of Ai? Did she sense that Ai was different or something?

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #115 on: March 18, 2009, 11:26:53 AM »
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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #116 on: March 18, 2009, 01:03:46 PM »
I'm back! Yeah, I kind of am alternating between Nocturne and Gegenschein. :3 Hehe.

Comment replies first, then new chapter! :D


lil_hamz: Hehe thought the TakaGaki would make you happy. Yeah, it's cute, isn't it? XD Ehhhhh, I can't believe you just told me to go bully Stef! Are you sure you're ok, Hammy? Lol. :P

JFC: This coming chapter should hint at why Risa and the others didn't recognize Aichan. Just remember that in her 'Seirei' persona, Aichan has a sort of a glamour on, so people don't recognize her easily. :P What is Aichan doing with them I wonder? Hehe. Who knows? I love leaving you guys hanging, you know that. Reina's lineage huh...you'll see in future chapters. :3

kitaoji: Haha you should lurk a little less for this story at least. You and your nagging...lol. But hey, at least now I'm inspired again. あなたのおかげで。 :D

Fenrir: Aww it did seem like I abandoned the story, but never fear! Estrea is here! Ok, that sounded lame. XD Yup, best of both worlds here. :D

Ichigo-chan: Don't worry, I almost forgot the story too. Lol. But not so much that I completely had to redo the plans. XD I have an amazing brain when it comes to fic-memory lol. Why does Aichan know Reina's master indeed...well, who knows? XD Reina pouting = love. :D Stay tuned!

alwaysYou: Yeah I know. Finally a new chapter...and more to come! :D

Sukoshi: Baby vampire Reina is awesome, yes she is. Sayu's always funny, no matter where she appears lol. More baby vampire Reina? More coming up. :3

kRisZ: Yay update~ XD

stefy: Oi, I don't bully you hor. Don't drag me in between you and Hammy. Heh. Ya I know you forgot what happened previously, because you had to ask me on MSN. >_> Luckily I'm nice enough to forgive you. :P I still can't believe you ploughed your way through the chapter just to answer to Hammy's comment. XD Bravo! Well yeah, Sayu's good at sensing things. As for why she can do that, well, that's a secret! XD

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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #117 on: March 18, 2009, 01:10:44 PM »
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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.9: Fugue]
« Reply #118 on: March 18, 2009, 01:13:37 PM »
Chapter 10 - Moto


"Ah...bored..." Eri mumbled as she tried balancing her pen on her nose. Next to her, a bespectacled Sayumi swiftly snatched the pen away from her best friend and tapped her on the side of her head with it.

"Eririn, at least try reading your texts!" The first year student scolded. Eri pulled a face and laid her chin on the stack of thick books, pouting like a petulant child.

Opposite them, Niigaki Risa backed up her kouhai's assessment of the situation.

"I know you have a test next week, so at least pretend to study, Kame." Risa had her own books open in front of her, a pencil in one hand making notes in the margins. Eri sulked, sticking her tongue out at the older girl.

"Maa...it's just a philosophy test... I can go in, write a whole bunch of nonsense, and still pass~" Eri yawned breezily and rested her head on her arms, on top of her books.

"I give up. She's right." Risa massaged her own temples. "She does always manage a pass in her classes somehow..." The literature student scowled down at her own meticulous notes.

"If only it were as easy for me..."

Sayumi grinned, tapping on her calculator as she went through a few more practice questions.

"Fret not, Gaki-san. I feel your pain~" Sayumi paused in her work, puzzling over the equation.

"You made a mistake here." A quiet voice pointed out, her own pen falling on where she had spotted the error in Sayu's calculations. Sayumi stared at it, exclaiming out loud.

"Ah! You're right!" She erased the section and redid it. "Yay now it comes out right! Thanks!"

"You're welcome." Ai smiled a bit shyly back, bowing her head down to return to her own work. Risa grinned at the girl next to her.

"Ai-chan is really smart!" Ai shook her head.

"No no, I just spent more time studying, that's all..." Her smile was tentative as she looked up at Risa. Sayumi had paused in her work, looking between the two of them with a speculative look in her eyes. Next to her, Eri smiled vaguely, having instantly fallen asleep just now.

"You two are really cute together~" Sayumi teased her two seniors. The pair both blushed, Risa more obviously than Ai, who simply 'eeped' and looked down, letting her fringe hide her eyes.

"W-what are you talking about? There's nothing going on at all! Don't talk nonsense!" Risa blabbered, almost dropping her pencil in her agitation. Sayumi giggled.

"I said nothing, Gaki-san~ What are you so excited for?" The little devil teased. Risa suppressed her instinctive reaction and just put down her pencil, pushing away from the table with a screech.

"I'm going to get some coffee. Do you guys want anything?"

Sayumi also put down her pen, taking a glance around the study area of the library. There were a fair number of other students scattered around, their books and notes all over the place. Then she glanced at Eri next to her, who appeared to be mumbling in her sleep again.

"I'll go with you Gaki-san." Sayumi took off her reading glasses and placed them on top of her notes, shooting a quick glance at Ai, who only stared back innocently.

"I'll be fine here. And I don't need a drink." Ai smiled reassuringly up at Risa, who flushed lightly at the look and quickly nodded, stepping past her and joining Sayumi on the other side.

"Nngh...Sayu...coffee..." Eri mumbled more loudly this time, lifting one hand to wave at the departing girl. Sayumi simply turned around and ruffled Eri's hair affectionately. Eri tilted her head upwards and gave her a vague sort of smile, squinting cutely upwards like a child.

"I'll be right back, Eririn." Sayu patted Eri indulgently and trotted after Risa, who was already waiting for her a little ahead. Ai watched them go with a smile.

"Kamei-san?" One lazy eye popped open to regard Ai with amazing clarity.

"Mm?" Ai also put down her pen, resting her cheek on the palm of her hand.

"That's a very nice necklace you have there. Where did you get it from?"

Eri blinked sleepily as she stretched, then drew the necklace out from inside her clothes to look at it. It seemed a bit dulled by age, more an antique than a real accessory. Eri shrugged, rubbing at the indented surface.

"Mama gave it to me. I never take it off, not even in the shower." She grinned and put it back. "I guess you could call it a lucky charm." The amulet slipped back smoothly, out of sight once more.

"More importantly though, how did you see it? I'm sure I never took it out before."

Ai masked her discomfort with a cough. "I could see the chain around your neck. It had an interesting design that I thought I recognized..."

Eri did not comment any further, although she yawned again. Ai smiled disarmingly at the younger girl, quickly changing the subject. One glance at the book that Eri had been conveniently using as a pillow gave her an easy opening.

"So, do you think the Cartesian theater is essentially an infinite loop of awareness that reinforces the whole premise of circular reasoning?"

Eri brightened up at the question, suddenly appearing more awake and alert than she had been moments ago. Straightening in her chair, she leaned forward, eyes bright and lively.

"Well you see, I think that..."

~*~*~

"Gaki-san."

"Yes, Sayumin?"

The two girls stood in front of the vending machine, the taller Sayumi scuffing her feet around as she hummed about something. Risa said nothing, raising an eyebrow as she waited for her junior to respond.

"Be careful with Takahashi." The warning left her mouth before she could find a way to moderate it, and Sayumi glanced quickly at Risa to gauge the response.

As she expected, Risa only laughed with some confusion.

"Why? Ai-chan is such a nice person." Sayumi sighed.

"Well...don't you think she's a little...weird? Like, isn't there something off about her?" Sayumi trusted her instincts, and her instincts warned her that Takahashi was not merely a normal person. Never mind that the woman appeared to be harmless most of the time. There was just something not right about her.

Risa shook her head. "You're just imagining things, Sayumin. Ai-chan's just a bit shy, that's all."

Sayumi bit her lip, unable to explain just why she had a gut feeling that their new friend was not all that she appeared to be. At least, the foxy devil reasoned, Takahashi did not have any malicious intentions...for now. First sign of any malevolent intent though, Sayumi would be out of there in an instant, friends in tow.

"If you say so, Gaki-san. Just...just be careful, alright?"

Risa nodded as they walked back to the study area, to the sight of an intense discussion between Ai and Eri. The two girls appeared to be debating some kind of obscure topic, if the jargon thrown around was any indication.

"Well, at least they're getting along..." Risa managed to comment after a moment of gaping at the completely alien concepts being shuttled back and forth between two nimble minds. Sayumi blinked at the excited expression on Eri's face, feeling a weird stab of jealousy at the sight.

"Hmph, definitely suspicious..." She mumbled to herself, glaring at the back of Ai's head. Stomping over, she planted herself right next to Eri, putting the can of coffee in front of her best friend.

"Ah, thanks Sayu!" Was all the acknowledgment she received, since Eri went right back to her discussion with Ai. Sayumi pouted, and shot a dark look at the radiant Ai.

Now I really don't like her...

And then Ai caught her gaze, and then inexplicably, winked knowingly without so much as a change in expression. Sayu swallowed and looked back down at her hands under the table. They were shaking, and Sayu felt a frisson of fear run through her again.

Does she know...?

Ai only smiled to herself as she continued in animated discussion with an equally enthusiastic Eri.

This was turning out to be a good night after all.

~*~*~

Reina was hungry.

And a hungry Reina was never a good thing. Especially not now, when she was a big, scary vampire. Okay, minus the big. But still a scary vampire.

Sulking from her favorite rooftop, Reina scowled downwards at the city. That annoying vampire, Seirei, had always kept her running around like some kitten chasing a string, and that had left very little time for real hunting.

Then again, she didn't really need all that much blood to survive. She did not have to eat 3 times a day like humans did. Draining one or two adults completely dry could last her for about a month or so. Anything more than that could be considered as a snack.

Vampires are opportunistic feeders. The words of her Master came back to her, in that whirlwind lecture she had gotten on the basics of survival when she had first awoken. Reina would never turn down an easy meal, and would take someone down randomly just because she felt like it.

We follow our desires. Licking her fangs speculatively, Reina dropped off the roof, hurtling down with startling speed, but landing cat-like on her feet with nary a sound. She had picked up that trick early on after being on the run from a hunter.

To hell with Seirei's demented hide-and-seek game. Reina wanted to feed on fresh blood, and she would have it regardless. Besides, she deserved a little reward for improving in that little game as well. Damn her (not)mentor for only teasing her with that sham of a kiss.

The memory of Seirei's blood on her tongue only made Reina's fangs itch almost painfully. Shaking herself, Reina tried to push that thought away, instead focusing on finding a handy meal right now.

Let's see, I think I'll pick a girl tonight...

Vanishing into shadow, Reina began stalking the night for suitable prey.

~*~*~

"Ah~ We studied later than expected!" Eri yawned at the end of her sentence, stretching lazily as she walked in step beside Sayumi.

"Oh please Kame, you didn't study at all." Risa retorted smartly, giving the turtle girl a playful whack on the shoulder. Eri screwed up her face in mock pain and pretended to bawl.

"Sayu!!! Gaki-san is so mean!" Eri clung to her best friend dramatically. Sayumi only laughed and hugged Eri with her free arm. On the other end, next to Risa, Ai giggled as well, her books stuffed in a large carry-bag.

"Ah, the street lamps are out..." Sayumi commented as they walked into a dark stretch of street leading to the station. Eri looked around nervously, clearly unnerved. Risa smiled and patted her on the arm.

"Don't worry Kame, ghosts can't touch you." Eri looked hopefully back at Risa.

"Really?" Next to her, Sayumi nodded, but continued on in a scary voice.

"But there's always things like vampires, werewolves..."

"Kyaa! Sayu! Don't say it!" Eri whined loudly, clinging to Risa this time. Sayumi grinned and looped her arm around Eri's own.

"Don't worry Eririn, we'll protect you. Ne, Gaki-san?" Risa laughed and nodded.

Ai was oddly quiet next to them, or perhaps not. Any ordinary person would feel left out by that sort of conversation between long-time friends. Risa noticed the silence on her left, so she looked over at Ai with some concern.

"Are you alright, Ai-chan?"

"Mm..." Ai was looking at a patch of darkness off to one side, and Risa could dimly see that it led off into a dark alley. Peculiarly, Ai seemed to be looking down that almost completely obscured alley as if she was looking for something.

Before Risa could ask anything though, Ai turned back to them with a small smile.

"We should hurry, it's not safe in the dark."

Eri agreed vigorously, so they picked up the pace. Within a few more minutes, they were out into the light again, the electrical brightness comforting after the extended shadows. The station was just within sight, right ahead.

Ai was rummaging around in her bag as they neared the station. Just before they entered it, she stopped. Risa turned around questioningly, and Ai looked up sheepishly.

"I think I forgot something back on campus. I'll head back and get it now."

"It's not safe to walk alone in the dark, I'll go with you." Risa volunteered immediately, but Ai shook her head, already stepping backwards.

"No, really, it's fine. It's getting late so you guys should get home quickly. See you tomorrow!"

Before anyone else could stop her, Ai had already turned around and started jogging back in the direction of the campus. Risa had one hand reached out, as if to stop her, but Ai vanished quickly into that inky stretch, out of the sound of her voice.

"Come on Gaki-san, I'm sure she can take care of herself." Sayumi reached over to pull on Risa's sleeve. Reluctantly, Risa turned back around, joining her friends at the entrance of the station as they entered.

Turning back around one last time, she murmured a quick prayer of safety for Ai's sake, before being dragged past the entryway by her juniors.

Be safe, Ai-chan.

~*~*~

"Reina, come out."

Silence, then a shadow moved, separating from the darkness around it. Reina slithered, ghost-like, to Ai's side, circling like a vulture as she took in Ai's altered appearance.

"Reina almost didn't recognize you, Ai-chan." The name rolled off the young vampire's tongue like an insult, or a taunt, even. "Reina almost thought you were human just now."

Ai exhaled, dropping all pretense of her human act. No more breathing, her skin paled back to its natural shade, and that illusion of temperature faded away. Suddenly, the cute human girl seemed very much more inhuman, even unearthly.

"Reina likes you like this much better." The young vampire grinned, coming almost daringly close to Ai's neck, her fangs extending hungrily at the tempting prize just within reach.

Before she could even blink, Reina found herself slammed against the wall again, the impact rocking her vision. Ai looked imperiously at her, releasing her fingers from Reina's neck and letting her hand slide down to the center of Reina's chest.

"Don't push your luck." Ai drew her finger around Reina's chest, leaving the younger vampire unable to move, despite the fact that all that was pinning her was just that one finger.

"Leave those girls alone, they're mine." Her eyes glowed dangerously in the dark, and Reina nodded fearfully, keeping her own eyes down. Without a word, Ai released Reina, and the young vampire massaged her front tentatively, eying the elder vampire warily.

"So, are we playing again tonight?" Reina asked cautiously. Ai actually smiled at the question.

"We'll see." She laid one cool hand on Reina's cheek, stroking the soft skin and making the young one close her eyes, practically purring in delight at the contact.

"Run along now." She leaned in close, whispering into Reina's ear.

"I'll catch you later."

Grinning savagely, Reina moved quickly to obey. Ai watched her go, a mysterious smile on her lips.

"You sure like your fledglings frisky eh, old friend..."

And then she too disappeared into the night, leaving no trace that either of them had ever been there.

~*~*~

"I'm home!"

"Welcome back."

Risa blinked at the male voice echoing the greeting, before a genuine smile lit up her face.

"Father! You're back!" Haphazardly shoving her shoes aside, Risa bounded into the apartment and all but flung herself into her father's strong arms.

Niigaki Soujirou patted his daughter's head fondly, even as his wife watched on with a relieved smile. Risa's smile remained steady as she separated from the embrace, at least, until she noticed the bandage on her father's arm.

"Eh, what's that? How did you get hurt?" Fussing over her father, the little family of three settled down around the table. Soujirou simply shrugged off his injury.

"Just a scratch, Risa-chan. It's late now, we can catch up tomorrow. Why don't you go to bed first?"

Risa looked at the bandage doubtfully, but recognized a command when she heard one. Nodding, she bid her parents goodnight before disappearing back into her room. Soujirou made sure that his daughter was settling down inside her room before turning back to his concerned wife with a pained grimace.

"What happened, dear?" Soujirou looked up at Emiko, who was slowly unwrapping the makeshift bandage around his arm.

"Ran into a little unexpected trouble after I finished with business." He winced as the bandage came off, revealing what looked like claw marks.

"This is...!" Emiko sounded a bit strained. Soujirou smiled a bit grimly.

"Just a scratch. Just be glad it's not a bite, or else I wouldn't have come back at all."

Emiko looked worriedly at him, but her husband merely began treating the wound with skill born out of expertise. After a moment of hesitation, she began helping him clean the wound, bandaging it back up.

"Will you go after it?" She asked finally, after the bandage was secure. Soujirou paused.

"No, I don't think so." Emiko looked surprised. Soujirou patted his wounded arm.

"It wasn't rabid. In fact, I think it was just looking for something. I just had the misfortune of getting in its way." Shrugging, he took his hand off his arm.

"Seemed uncommonly intelligent for a wolf man, that one. I think I'll just let it be, since it let me go." Soujirou smiled reassuringly at his wife, patting her on the hand.

"Don't worry, everything's gonna be alright. I promise."


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There. Another decently long chapter. ^_^

Hope it meets with expectations. :3
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Re: Gegenschein [Ch.10: Moto]
« Reply #119 on: March 18, 2009, 02:01:45 PM »
Yippie! Glad to see you writing more of this story again! :D And you definitely have been thinking about it!

More about GakiKameShige... What is Ai's interest in them I wonder? :? She definitely seems to have a variety of interests, from baby vampire Reina to those three. XD And we also find out Risa's dad is... a werewolf hunter? Are they the only things he hunts, I wonder? (Speaking of which, I wonder if that "uncommonly intelligent" wolf will make an appearance? XD) Along with Sayu's... whatever capabilities she has (such as her sensing something's up with Ai), I wonder if Ai really is observant and sensitive enough to notice something's perhaps a bit unusual about them. And XD at the sleepy philosophical genius Eri. XD I could totally see her just randomly rambling on about something obscure that only she understands... Nice for her to find someone else to talk with I guess, eh? :)

Poor Reina. She can't have cute college girl tonight, but I suppose she'll find something. Cute highschool girl maybe? XD Ok I'm naughty. >.> It'd be funny to see some other random H!Pers come up as momentary victims, though I know you wouldn't wanna lower yourself to that. :lol:

Oh, and I mentioned perhaps something special about Risa and Sayu we've seen, but there's of course Eri too with her mother and that necklace... which Ai obviously noticed. I somehow have the feeling it wasn't random chance that brought those three together to be friends. :) Just that might fascinate Ai enough. Then again, how did she notice them to begin with? From the party? If so, that's quite a bit of effort she went in to planning her new disguise and all. ;)

Keep it up! ^_^ <3

Oh, and lastly, the chapter title, is that pointing to the Japanese 元 character? If so, there's something deeper in here I'm not noticing maybe. :P But definitely interesting still...

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