Author Topic: Inside the Turtle's Shell (One-shot Collection) [Special: Soba ni Iru ne] (Read 68144 times)

Fenrir · « **Reply #120 on:** February 10, 2009, 05:49:25 PM »

Ahaha!

Scheming TanaKamei is hilarious! Who'd a thought that the little turtle planned this all out.

I bet it was really to get Reina in her room all for herself!!!

Haruka · « **Reply #121 on:** February 16, 2009, 08:10:55 PM »

Tanakame is awesome xDDDDDDDDDD

I like it a lot \ (`A´) / !!!!!!!!!

ringo-hime · « **Reply #122 on:** February 28, 2009, 04:43:50 AM »

Quote from: ShikyoxYaiba on February 04, 2009, 06:10:58 AM

#8. Come Back

BAH. someone beat me. to doing a fic based on that song.

but tis really brilliant!

Quote

I nodded to myself, recognizing the R&B feel to it. But at the same time I grimaced and scoffed (if it’s possible to do both at once); story of my life much. The song probably ripped out my thoughts and used them as lyrics for all I know.

Moi exact thoughts. :3

i heart you~

Lights, Camera, Action!!

, haha. TanaKame kawaii~

and crazy!
Sayu's evilness is contagious!!!

meowz · « **Reply #123 on:** March 01, 2009, 05:15:43 AM »

Sorry I haven't been commenting, but I love your updates (cuz usually there's Kame, and I'm so biased

)
I'm glad you finished Lights, Camera, Action. Its light-hearted and funny, and really nice to see the pieces fit together at the end. (tanakame! there I go again...)
Hope to see more of these, you're really good at writing humor. And I think we've had enough of musumes dying in fics for a while

Speaking of which, #7. Reminiscence almost made me tear

I suspected gakikame right at the toilet part. Nice one there

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #124 on:** March 17, 2009, 12:29:41 AM »

@kream That's what Sayu gets for influencing Eri!

@shadowolf8 Unforutnately, TanaKame's not my top, but they're pretty darn easy to write about.
@stefy Devil! Eri's gotta make an appearance SOMETIME, right?
@hammy Sadly, Sayu's outta loop. Or maybe the soup can be her friend.

@JFC Reina owes Sayu one!

@Sukoshi But doesn't she get enough when she gropes Eri?

@Fenrir Who knows how far ahead Eri thought?
@Haruka TanaKame is somehow really easy to write... Huh. ._.
@ringo Aw, if you wrote a fic based on that song, I'd love to see it.
@meowz Thanks! ^__^ Glad you liked them.

Ooookay... So I've been absent for THE longest time due to school... And I REALLY wanted #9 to be the Alternate View of "Come Back", but Hammy's been begging for a fic, so I'll have to make an interruption. Once again, I would have loved to post a happy fic, but all of my happy fics are currently works in progress... Yes, that means we get a more mellowed out fic. Enjoy the first part of this three-shot. Look for an update very soon.

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #125 on:** March 17, 2009, 12:33:45 AM »

#9. Let Go [Kataomoi no Owari ni]

[9.1] Dawn

[STORY HERE]

TBC...

KonaKaga · « **Reply #126 on:** March 17, 2009, 12:50:14 AM »

Damn you and your excellent writing.
I figure I already yelled at you enough over MSN about Eri...
But still...
Eri~!
She's just going for a walk, right?
Or maybe going to collect something?

I shall be waiting for that update....

Haruka · « **Reply #127 on:** March 17, 2009, 01:58:38 AM »

I have a very bad imagination...

Or maybe I'm just that bad xD

Cause I don't know nothing...

Let me see... yellow? Ai-chan? O_o Green? Gaki-san? have no idea x_x

lonewind · « **Reply #128 on:** March 17, 2009, 02:49:52 AM »

where is Eri going???!?!?!?

mou~~ please continue!! i was all into it and then TBC popped up

can't wait for the next one~~~

JFC · « **Reply #129 on:** March 17, 2009, 03:14:47 AM »

#9. Let Go

[9.1] Dawn

It started out like

...

Then went to

.

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #130 on:** March 17, 2009, 04:01:17 AM »

#9. Let Go [Kataomoi no Owari ni]

[9.2] Awakening

[STORY HERE]

TBC... (Tomorrow...I hope? Next is final part.)

JFC · « **Reply #131 on:** March 17, 2009, 05:57:28 AM »

#9. Let Go

[9.2] Awakening

EHHHHHHHHHHH???

ringo-hime · « **Reply #132 on:** March 17, 2009, 06:06:10 AM »

and i thought it would be happy.

awww. GakiKame is so sweet. both broken hearted and they helped each other

so wats RenAi side of the story?

lonewind · « **Reply #133 on:** March 17, 2009, 08:01:56 AM »

^
i'm with ringo-hime! what's their side of the story? btw that was a FAST update!!!

KonaKaga · « **Reply #134 on:** March 17, 2009, 01:51:44 PM »

Finally got to read the update *yawns and stretches*
AMG
GakiKame love each other but not as much as the other knows!

Ultimate confession time!

You update real fast

I can't wait until you update the final part!

P.S. - You are an excellent writer.

strawb3rrykream · « **Reply #135 on:** March 17, 2009, 02:26:22 PM »

I hope they both are just going for a walk.

I really love your writing though~~~~~~~~~~~

Sukoshi · « **Reply #136 on:** March 18, 2009, 11:54:56 AM »

Crud...*stares at Shiya* I have faith in you that this will end as happily as possible. It may not be true but I'm trying to guilt you into it

thoughts on 9.1
I thought it was Gaki that broke Eri's heart at first.

thoughts on 9.2
ah...I was wrong. but I still thought it was Gaki in the other bed at the start and that she was smelling Ai chan...cause of the detergent

I like how Eri's the perceptive one in this story. She may be perceptive in real life but she's often portrayed as....well pokepoke in most stories, not that I don't love that side of Eri, but that was a nice touch.

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #137 on:** March 21, 2009, 04:02:47 AM »

#9. Let Go [Kataomoi no Owari ni]

[9.3] Reflection

[STORY HERE]

Owari~

strawb3rrykream · « **Reply #138 on:** March 21, 2009, 05:33:42 AM »

Awww, I'm glad it was a happy ending! We need more of those around here.

lonewind · « **Reply #139 on:** March 21, 2009, 05:43:58 AM »

^
MHM i agree,

it was amazing how well u write and express the feelings ^^ a very good fic. I can't wait to read more ^^