Author Topic: Inside the Turtle's Shell (One-shot Collection) [Special: Soba ni Iru ne] (Read 68140 times)

JFC · « **Reply #140 on:** March 21, 2009, 05:48:37 AM »

#9. Let Go [Kataomoi no Owari ni]

[9.2] Reflection

They finally realized it!

KonaKaga · « **Reply #141 on:** March 21, 2009, 01:56:47 PM »

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Way to go, GakiKame!

>_<
You posted this like 10 minutes after I shut down my computer!

BUT
Since you write so well and it's GakiKame I forgive you 100000000000 times

I really love your writing style. Keep it up

Haruka · « **Reply #142 on:** March 21, 2009, 08:51:53 PM »

Ahora si ya entrelace los colores xD

Now I know who is who xD...

T_T GakiKame so lovely *o*

ringo-hime · « **Reply #143 on:** March 22, 2009, 04:29:26 AM »

Happy endingggg!!

Gaki-san is so Gaki thinking that Eri-chan is gonna.

osaam!

lil_hamz · « **Reply #144 on:** March 23, 2009, 06:06:57 AM »

Shiichan~~!!! This was...it was.....BEAUTIFUL!!! It really is! *blinks tears away* Gosh....I....*composes self* I.....GAHHHHH *slaps self to think better*

*Ahem* Ok, now I think I'm functioning properly to continue my comment

You know, at the beginning, the story was so sad, so depressing that Eri would be faced with an unrequited love. As much as I hate the object of her affections to be Reina, it somehow fit so well. Then when I realized Risa faced the same problem with Ai, it was such a huge double whammy

I almost couldn't bear to read it anymore thinking that my beloved KameMame would not be lucky enough to be blessed with happiness.

So I stopped reading, deciding to come back again when I wasn't so flushed with emotions. I'm glad I did though cuz the next part dumped a whole bag of emotions on me at once. Fear, anticipation, heartache and more. I was so worried that Eri was going to kill herself, and even more afraid that she had succeeded.

In the final part, I was bowled over by your descriptive writing. Of the sea, the breeze, the coolness of the waves, everything! But most of all, were the feelings felt by the 2 girls. In the end, all I can say is, I'm so thankful and grateful that you wrote this dispute your incredibly crazy studying schedule.

Don't stop writing Shiichan, cuz you make so many people happy with your works.

*looks back at relatively long comment*

Wow, you really affected me. I'm actually tearing

Oops *wipes tears embarassed and sinks lower into chair*

Sukoshi · « **Reply #145 on:** March 27, 2009, 07:51:00 AM »

Hehehe so my faith in you worked out. Thank god you didn't make Eri do something...regrettable! I would have been crushed! But now I'm happy and so relieved =D

Hmm...for most of the story I wasn't fully convinced that Eri really loved Risa. I could so tell that Gaki really loved Eri but kame had me guessing until the very end. Though if I think about it, it's very fitting since the story is about letting go. The last sentence about how the end is always another beginning...I think that was perfect.

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #146 on:** April 25, 2009, 09:08:37 PM »

Egads, I have replying to do... I think I'll just reply to the last section though, since it WAS the end after all...

@JFC Glad to see that you liked it.

@KK Kinda stinks that you couldn't stay up late enough to read it. ^^; But at least you did in the end...right?

@Haruka GakiKame's my favorite.

(I'll read almost any Eri pairing, though. ._.)

@ringo-hime Thanks!

@hammy Oh noes, the tears again! xD Thank you for your comment, though. I don't think I've ever had such a strong reaction to a fic of mine before.

@Sukoshi Thank you! <3 I was having a ton of trouble with the ending, and out of nowhere that popped into my brain. =D

Okay, so I've been inactive for another good month... Um, well. Just wait for about another two-three weeks. After the AP Exams are over, life will relax a bit for me, and I'll have more free time to go through with all of my ideas. :3 As for this next fic, I originally had it planned for Hammy's bday, but that didn't work out so well... So a random gift for Hammy? I know it's terribly short, but I had absolutely zero ideas at the moment... (Maybe I should have held back "Let Go" for you.

) This is definitely NOT my best work, but... I couldn't just leave an idea to rot. :/

***IF ANYONE IS READING MY STUFF TO JUDGE KOUHAKU, I RECOMMEND READING EITHER #8 OR #9***

...*slaps self for self advertising* But that's just a note, because those two really were the peaks of my writing so far. :3 Besides, I am a bit late - voting has already started...

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #147 on:** April 25, 2009, 09:14:22 PM »

#10. Limit [Tokaikko Junjou]

[STORY HERE]

Owari~ [I leave the ending to your imagination.

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KonaKaga · « **Reply #148 on:** April 25, 2009, 09:20:27 PM »

OMG YAY! GAKIKAME! <3
I don't know why, but you're writing style seems different this time... I like it

I love how you expressed Eri's feelings in this. They go to a whole new level

For some reason my favourite part was:

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Look at me, Risa. Look at what I’m doing. Can’t you see it? I’m not a kid – I know how to love. But why can’t you see what I feel?

You never fail to impress me, Shicchan

JFC · « **Reply #149 on:** April 26, 2009, 06:19:43 AM »

#10. Limit [Tokaikko Junjou]

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“Don’t you get it, Gaki-san?” I pulled our hands out of her pocket, and stepped closer to her stiff figure before whispering the three words I had always wanted to say, pressing my lips against her own.

“I love you.”

* JFC anticipates a massive reaction from Risa.

ayase909 · « **Reply #150 on:** May 03, 2009, 07:54:59 AM »

wah! that is so sweet!........kamei, kawaii!

strawb3rrykream · « **Reply #151 on:** May 03, 2009, 06:59:08 PM »

You had me laughing at the first line!

But it's kinda bittersweet to see how Eri feels like her real feelings are kinda being ignored. But the ending~

KYAA~

I love fluffy romance~~~~

ringo-hime · « **Reply #152 on:** May 09, 2009, 06:16:50 PM »

GakiKame~

Loving how oblivious Risa is. haha. And Kame was trying her best.

And she gots the courage to tell her finally and kiss her~~

lil_hamz · « **Reply #153 on:** May 10, 2009, 10:15:23 AM »

OH my gahhhh...I didn't comment here? *whacks self*

FIrst off, I'm just a wee bit sad that the story wasn't longer. I wanna be able to read KameMame fics for ever and Ever and EVER!

I squealed when I read the Gaki-san taking Eri's hands putting them in her pocket part. Seriously!

And it's nice having Eri liking Risa for a change. It's almost always Eri being the girl everyone likes. Though it's not hard to see why

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #154 on:** May 16, 2009, 03:43:54 AM »

Gaaaah. I'm too lazy to do comment replies, but be assured that I read them all... And thank you everyone.

My AP Exams are over, and I thought I'd have more time, but it turns out that I won't have as much free time as I though I would. I'll have some, but not a lot. It's sufficient to write a little more often, though. My school's just stupid and won't let AP classes do nothing, so we're forced to do projects. -.-;;

Here's the next fic... It's a humor, so please enjoy! (After I edit it before posting of course.)

ShikyoxYaiba · « **Reply #155 on:** May 16, 2009, 03:52:10 AM »

#11. PIN

[STORY HERE]

END

*Loosely based off of the Kindai interview when Eri gave away part of her PIN.
**I wonder how many of you recognized the code as the Konami code? (Cellphone variation of it, I think.)Yes, I'm a geek like that.

***Photo's not mine.

KonaKaga · « **Reply #156 on:** May 16, 2009, 04:04:19 AM »

OMG

This is hilarious

I love how Reina just completely snapped and had a rant

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“…Eri, your shirt is buttoned up all wrong.”

“Eh?” Eri looked down at herself. “Oh no, not again! I swear, buttons are all against me…”

“And your fly is open.”

*thinks about AiEri*
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AiEri is definitely my second fave after GakiKame

Estrea · « **Reply #157 on:** May 16, 2009, 07:17:25 AM »

Can I request a continuation?

AiEri is one of my favorite alternate pairings. Haha.

Good job.

0508 · « **Reply #158 on:** May 16, 2009, 09:52:10 AM »

AiEri!!

There's just never enough of these two. Must also thank you for the humor. I needed that. Everything I've been reading lately has been death, life threatening disease, emo, close to death, and more QQ. (Great stories, but too much angst D:) Ahh, refreshing.

Moar pls. :3

strawb3rrykream · « **Reply #159 on:** May 16, 2009, 03:49:07 PM »

This was an awesome way to start my morning!

Bunny senses=very serious business. LMAO at the cell phone detectives and poor Reina being dragged on Sayu's crazy search. Oshit, she tackled Gaki!!!

I love all the dialog in this, reading it is funny everytime.

The guy is Ai-chan...and Reina gets it...but Sayu doesn't...

OOOOOOOH, AiEri just had some lovin~~

I love Sayu~