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Hero (Chapter 4 - 12/24)
« on: August 19, 2008, 02:58:54 AM »
@kinbari: I'm going to assume you read Waiting then? I hope you liked it. (Wait, were you the anonymous comment?) In my cynical, dark mind, I like it too!
@tru_harmony: Haha, human! :lol: Just found that a little funny! She's built this outer shield to protect herself. :(
@JFC: :wub:
@wings4dreams: I think they'd be able to manage 6 kids, to tell you the truth. They are so right for each other that it just happens without them even trying. I don't like flowers too much so I agree. (Allergies!) Yup, Miki is a fragile soul. I'm gonna say that no one saw. :D
@peti-chan: Miki is a great person. :yep: And Ai knows just what to say....for once. :P Me too!!! :inlove:
@lollipopgirl: First of all, I'm kinda liking us taking over ppl's threads! XD As for fluff, well, there's only a bit of that coming up! It's because Ai has that aura. I can't explain it. There could be TakaMiki, if you think it up in your mind. To me, in H!P, drunk anyone is possible! :muffin:

This story came to me last night. Out of absolutely nowhere. And I'm quite happy with it! Because Miki is :inlove: This is just another one of the ways I like to experiment with "taboo" or not so readily talked about topics and such. It actually started out a bit funny but that went out the window, along with the fluff!!! :lol:
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Hero: Part 1

The front door banging open startled me. It took me a minute to remember where I was. Oh yeah, the suite in the hotel in Osaka. Yocchan and I were sharing it because of our positions in the group. Sometimes being sub-leader has its perks. I sighed and wished Yocchan would refrain from bringing her latest conquests back. I mean, it’s not like I had to watch, the living room and bedrooms being separate, but the noise. Oh, the noise! Drives me up the damn wall!! But I was a little curious as to who it was this time. Considering it was the last night of a summer tour, it could be anyone. Sometimes sharing a room with a sex addict has its perks. I stopped thinking and started listening. But the sounds that were coming from the adjacent room were not normal at all. Well, I did hear Yocchan groaning as usual but there were undertones of sobbing. Like the girl she was doing was crying. Yeah, I didn’t know who’s in there but they shouldn’t be upset like that. And that’s when I heard it. “Yoshizawa-senpai….”, she said, “Please stop” I knew that voice…….oh, god, no!! I shot up from the bed and nearly ran into the closed bedroom door. I threw it open and I saw exactly what I never wanted nor expected to see.

There, on the couch under Yocchan, lay an absolutely terrified looking Kusumi Koharu.

    The poor kid was naked, at least as far as I could see, and she had this look in her eyes. It was a look of pure fear. My heart ached at the sight. Koharu shouldn’t have to go through this. I went over and yelled, “Yocchan, get off of her!” My arms headed towards her fully-clothed form but a slap caused me to unintentionally recoil. No one does that to me. NO ONE. I grabbed her wrist and yanked her off the tiny, quivering body. When I saw the little girl fully, I saw that she still had her pink panties on but that was it. Her skin was red from all of Yocchan’s touches. “Get over by the door”, I shouted at her, turning around to the fuming leader. Koharu was so scared but immediately followed my orders, pulling her knees to her chest and watching the two of us from the corner. Yocchan snarled at me, “What the hell are you doing?!” I stared at her for a second before replying, “Keeping you from making a big mistake” Seconds after I said that, I narrowly dodged a fist flying towards my head. After that, all restraint was ignored as I managed to knock her out with a punch to the face and a kick in the stomach. She crumpled onto the floor, clutching her gut before she stopped moving altogether. Like I said, we were going back to Tokyo tomorrow so who cares what her face looks like? Making sure she was breathing but unconscious, I made my way over to the crying girl.
    “Koharu”, I said softly, putting a hand on her face. She fell forward into my arms, crying harder. “Shh”, I soothed, cradling her and rubbing her back. I put my hands under her arms and managed to get us up in a standing position. I carried her into the bedroom like a baby. All the while, she clung to me, her arms securely around my neck. I laid her down on the bed and she curled up instinctively. It hurt to see her so vulnerable, more so than usual. Sifting through my luggage, I found a T-shirt and a pair of boxer shorts for her to wear. “Here, sweetie”, I weakly smiled, placing the clothes on the bed next to her. She pulled them on slowly, as if every movement brought pain to her body. “I don’t want to make you any more uncomfortable but where did she touch you?”, I asked. I really had no choice, it’s important to know. Koharu just looked at me, her eyes overflowing once again. “Seriously, you need to tell me”, I told her, speaking firmly but not wanting to frighten her anymore. “M-my c-ch-chest”, she whimpered, curling up even tighter. “Not down there?”, I inquired. It really pained me to make her relive it but if Yocchan made it all the way, we’d have even more problems. The frightened child shook her head, turning away as her heavy lids began to droop.
    I scooted onto the bed next to her and held her. “Go to sleep, ok?”, I whispered, rocking her slowly, “You need to rest” Her thin fingers gripped my arm, as if she was scared to sleep. “It’s gonna be ok”, I reassured her, “She won’t hurt you anymore” Eventually, her hold on me loosened until she lay limp in my lap. I hadn’t realized I was crying until a warm teardrop landed on my shirt. I eased her onto the bed, tucking her in snuggly and pressing my lips onto her forehead. “I’m so sorry, Koharu-chan”, I mumbled, stroking her hair before walking into the living room.
    Yocchan still lay on the tan carpet, not moving except for the slow up and down motion that confirmed she was alive. I just watched her, unable to comprehend how this had happened. What the hell could have possessed her to even think about doing that to someone so young? I guess her condition was worse than I thought. I figured it wouldn’t do to leave her laying there so I called the only one who knows what to do about this: Iida Kaori. She was leader when Yocchan was diagnosed, so it was her job to keep her in line. She didn’t tell anyone, I only know because Yocchan herself confessed it to me. Picking my cell phone up from the coffee table, I dialed her number and took a deep breath to prepare myself.

“Hello?”
“Hey Kaori-san, it happened again”
“Who was it this time?”
“Are you sure you want to know?”
“That bad, huh?”
“Worse than you could imagine. Had to knock Yocchan out. She’s on the floor right now.”
“I’ll be right there”

   About 20 minutes later, I opened the door to find Kaori standing there, decked out in her doctor outfit with her two assistants. “Must you wear that?”, I snickered, gesturing them in. “Shut up”, she mumbled, trying to not to laugh. Oh, did I mention that after she graduated, Kaori has been going to school to become a doctor? Anyway, she checked out Yocchan and sent her assistants to take the woman into the car and drive her back to our private hospital in Tokyo. “So who was it?”, Kaori asked as we sat on the couch. I grabbed her hand and led her to the doorway to the bedroom. Koharu was still sleeping soundly. “No…..Way”, Kaori deadpanned, her eyes widening at the snoozing kid. “I got up just in time to prevent Yocchan from taking her panties off”, I sadly recalled. My companion just shook her head in disbelief and said, “I’ll interview her at the hospital tomorrow. Right now, I gotta call Tsunku”
    She left and I remained in the doorway. Koharu looked so angelic and peaceful. The earlier events had left no marks on her, except for her almost swollen, tear-stained eyes. I cautiously approached the bed and sat down, the mattress creaking slightly. Wincing at the sound, I cursed the noise and quickly lay down. She was facing me, her lips slightly parted as she snored lightly. Honestly, how could Yocchan take advantage of that? I would never forgive myself if I did. Remaining on my side and closing my eyes, I tried to rest my body and mind, both of which were beginning to rebel against me. I was nearly asleep when something warm nuzzled into my chest. My eyes shot open to find Koharu cuddling into me. “Mommy…”, she mumbled, resting her head against my shoulder. My heart cracked as the single word left her mouth. I did the only thing I could do: I wrapped my arm around her.
     The next day went by rapidly. We woke up and I had Ai-chan pack up Koharu’s things and bring them to our room. I told her that the youngest member had a nightmare and was afraid to go back to her own room. We both took showers (separately) and got ready to leave. It was absolutely heart-breaking when Koharu was afraid to go into the living room. I assured her that Yocchan was gone and held her hand as we peeked into the other room. I could feel Koharu’s pulse calm and I made her some toast in our kitchenette. Lifting our bags, we left the room and went to join the rest of Morning Musume (minus our leader) in the lobby. My excuse was that Yocchan wasn’t feeling well and left for Tokyo last night to go to the doctor. Well, I was telling the truth partially. No one questioned my authority but I could feel the strange looks when Koharu glued herself to my side. It seemed like they were all waiting for me to yell at her and shove her away and when I didn’t, everyone looked shocked.
    The ride back was uneventful. But they all continued to stare at me as I sat next to Koharu, who leaned her head on my shoulder when she fell asleep. I ignored them as usual and tried to relax. Once we arrived home, I told the girls they all had the day off because Yocchan was sick. After they left, Koharu and I made our way to the hospital. She was getting a little scared again and we had to stop in the lobby of the Up-Front building so I could get her to calm down a bit. Her hand was basically fastened to mine, but I didn’t mind. Kaori was upstairs already so we went to greet her. “Koharu-chan”, she began as we were settled in her office, “I’m gonna have to ask you some questions about what happened yesterday” The youngest girl looked at me as if to ask permission to do it. I nodded and began to stand up. “Where are you going?”, she asked, looking alarmed. “I’m going to go see how Yocchan is”, I calmly told her, “While Kaori-san interviews you” I knew she wouldn’t want to go see her leader and I knew I couldn’t be there while they talked, as much as I wanted to be. “Be strong”, I whispered into Koharu’s ear and left the room.
    I asked the receptionist where Yocchan’s room was and she pointed me in the right direction. I opened the door and there she was, sitting in the bed. I almost winced at the sight of her, what I did to her. She had a black eye and she looked a bit uncomfortable just sitting. “Hey”, I murmured, giving her a small smile. “Hey”, she replied, that silly grin covering her face as usual. As if nothing ever happened. “So how are you?”, I asked awkwardly, sitting on a chair. “I have this black eye and a few broken ribs”, was the answer, “Thanks to you” Even though the last part was said with a laugh, I felt so remorseful at that moment. Even though Yocchan was totally wrong and it will never be ok to do that, I felt like I had no right to just attack her like that. “I forgive you”, she spoke up, “It’s all my fault and I deserve it all” It was as if she read my mind. “How is she?”, Yocchan asked, forcing me to look at her. “She was afraid to go in the living room at the hotel this morning”, I answered, “She’s been glued to my side the whole day” “Shit”, she moaned, smacking her face into her hands. “But I think she’ll be fine soon”, I tried to reassure her, “But I’m not sure when she’ll warm up to you again” We continued to talk and even laugh a bit. But then Kaori came in and told me Koharu wanted me.
    “Are you ok?”, I asked, shocked to find Koharu sitting in Kaori’s office crying, almost as hard as she was yesterday. I hurried over and hugged her tightly. “What’s wrong, sweetie?”, I whispered into her ear as she rested her head on my shoulder. “I want to forgive Yoshizawa-senpai but I’m scared”, she confessed, wiping away her tears. “I’ll go with you when you’re ready, ok?”, I tried to comfort her but I was a loss of words myself. I wanted everything to be all happy and back to normal but I was, honestly, afraid. I mean, Yocchan almost did that a 13-year-old fellow member. I was quite relieved that Koharu wanted to forgive but I was afraid for her. That something bad would happen and Koharu would never ever want to be near Yocchan again. I mean, she’s one of my closest friends but the way she was last night was unforgettable, but not in a good way. I love her to death but something is just freaking me out. “Um, I think I should go see her now”, Koharu whispered, surprising me slightly. I smiled slowly and held out my hand.
    We took a few deep breaths outside the room and Koharu buried her head in my chest again. “Ready?”, I asked, slinging an arm over her shoulders and leading her into the room. “Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak with you”, I announced, pushing the girl forward a bit. She started to cry and turned back towards me. “Go on”, I mumbled, smiling with my eyes. She walked towards the bed and looked at Yocchan, who was tearing up as well. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, she said in a quiet voice. “Thank you, Koharu-chan”, Yocchan grinned as tears fell from her eyes, “I’m so sorry this happened.” She reached for Koharu’s hands to hold but the younger girl flinched and backed away slightly. Yocchan lowered her own hands and smiled weakly. It was clear that this relationship had a long way to go before it was as back to normal as it could be.

But this was a start and I was proud of both of them.
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Long, huh?? :cow:

Edit: I changed the word [bgcolor=#090000]rape[/bgcolor] in my story because I was reminded by a kind person that this part of the forum is public. I don't want JPH!P to get in trouble by some non-member.
Thanks for your understanding. :D
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« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2008, 03:14:55 AM »
yossui=nymphomaniac...

koharu?!?!

ftw?!?

hmm...

i wonder wuzguna happen next...

thanks for this part... waiting for the next~~~

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« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2008, 03:24:38 AM »
That was odd...
Yet very interesting to read  :D

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« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2008, 03:51:59 AM »
Wow, that was unusual O_o Not in a bad way though. Actually, I'm pretty interested in where this story will go :yep:
I don't know whether to feel sorry for Yossie or not XD
I wonder if the KoharuXYossie relationship can be repaired... I wonder if Yossie's going to be made to graduate...
I shall be waiting for the update!


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« Reply #4 on: August 19, 2008, 04:11:40 AM »
I'm determiend to stick with this fic since it's the it's the first I've caught from the begininning in a hell of a long time and it's started so well. Glad to see someone who isn't afraid of tackling more "delicate" subjects and I applaud you for that, I'm not really a big fan of lovey dovey stories very much unless they're done really well. This looks like it's gonna be good!

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Like I said, we were going back to Tokyo tomorrow so who cares what her face looks like?

...and that line was awesome. :lol: I always seem to get myself stuck with Miki as a major character so it'll be interesting to see how this is done differently.

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« Reply #5 on: August 19, 2008, 05:21:01 AM »
Hero: Part 1
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Oh yeah, the suite in the hotel in Osaka. Yocchan and I were sharing it because of our positions in the group. Sometimes being sub-leader has its perks.

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Sometimes sharing a room with a sex addict has its perks.
I wanna hear about these perks. 8)



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There, on the couch under Yocchan, lay an absolutely terrified looking Kusumi Koharu.
Koharu??  HOLY CRAP!!!
:OMG:



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Yocchan snarled at me, “What the hell are you doing?!” I stared at her for a second before replying, “Keeping you from making a big mistake” Seconds after I said that, I narrowly dodged a fist flying towards my head. After that, all restraint was ignored as I managed to knock her out with a punch to the face and a kick in the stomach. She crumpled onto the floor, clutching her gut before she stopped moving altogether.
Yossi's just stupidly drunk, right? She's not fully aware of what she's doing, right?  :cry:



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“I don’t want to make you any more uncomfortable but where did she touch you?”, I asked. I really had no choice, it’s important to know. Koharu just looked at me, her eyes overflowing once again. “Seriously, you need to tell me”, I told her, speaking firmly but not wanting to frighten her anymore. “M-my c-ch-chest”, she whimpered, curling up even tighter. “Not down there?”, I inquired. It really pained me to make her relive it but if Yocchan made it all the way, we’d have even more problems.
Yeah, it's a good thing Miki decided to investigate this time. :O



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Yocchan still lay on the tan carpet, not moving except for the slow up and down motion that confirmed she was alive. I just watched her, unable to comprehend how this had happened. What the hell could have possessed her to even think about doing that to someone so young? I guess her condition was worse than I thought. I figured it wouldn’t do to leave her laying there so I called the only one who knows what to do about this: Iida Kaori. She was leader when Yocchan was diagnosed, so it was her job to keep her in line.
Wait, so in this case, Yossi's being a "sex addict" is NOT just a colloquialism? She's actually got it as a medical/psychological condition? :o



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   About 20 minutes later, I opened the door to find Kaori standing there, decked out in her doctor outfit with her two assistants. “Must you wear that?”, I snickered, gesturing them in. “Shut up”, she mumbled, trying to not to laugh. Oh, did I mention that after she graduated, Kaori has been going to school to become a doctor? Anyway, she checked out Yocchan and sent her assistants to take the woman into the car and drive her back to our private hospital in Tokyo.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DOCTOR KAORI!!! :cow:

* JFC pictures Kaori in the Doctor's outfit from the old H!M skits.

Oh yeah...that's hot. :drool:



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I was nearly asleep when something warm nuzzled into my chest. My eyes shot open to find Koharu cuddling into me. “Mommy…”, she mumbled, resting her head against my shoulder. My heart cracked as the single word left her mouth. I did the only thing I could do: I wrapped my arm around her.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
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*YOSSI-MIKI TALK*
So in her case, it almost sounds like she gets these "horny attacks", and that when they happen, it's almost like she loses control and isn't aware of what she's doing (almost like when someone is so drunk/high they don't remember what they did the previous night). That's gotta suck for Yossi.



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“I want to forgive Yoshizawa-senpai but I’m scared”, she confessed, wiping away her tears. “I’ll go with you when you’re ready, ok?”
I guess Kaori told Koharu about Yossi's condition and explained that she wasn't herself when it happened?



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“Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak with you”, I announced, pushing the girl forward a bit. She started to cry and turned back towards me. “Go on”, I mumbled, smiling with my eyes. She walked towards the bed and looked at Yocchan, who was tearing up as well. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, she said in a quiet voice. “Thank you, Koharu-chan”, Yocchan grinned as tears fell from her eyes, “I’m so sorry this happened.”
Man, Yossi really IS an addict.   :'(

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« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2008, 05:30:24 AM »
@tru_harmony: Not too much of your thing, huh? I was kind of afraid of that. That my readers wouldn't like it that much. But I'm glad you want updates! :mon determined:
@heyyouhiya: I'm happy you thought it was interesting. :mon sweat:
@KonaKaga: I feel like I rushed through it a little but I'm still content with it. Yossy..........about her...........yeah. I don't know either. I wanted her to be remorseful because it's kinda not her fault. But it is at the same time. That....you shall see! *makes funny spooky movement with her fingers*
@redux: I hope you do keep up with it but if not, it's ok. I understand. Thanks, I feel like hitting the sensitive topics makes them perhaps a little easier to understand? Plus I think it's fun to shock ppl! :mon lol: About lovey dovey stories, I like them. But change is nice sometimes.
@JFC: About the perks, huh? :mon dunno: Yeah, I feel bad about Koha. :mon unsure: Miki is really looking out for Koha because she's so damn young and this shit just shouldn't happen. Yup, I looked it up to make sure sex addiction was a real disease-ish thing. That is the exact Doctor Kaori I was thinking of. Yeah, it's hot! :mon bleed2: Poor Yossy, I feel pretty bad making her into this person but.....I can't help it.

Just felt like replying to comments~ So I'm having mixed reviews on this, huh? :mon unsure: Thought I would. I was a little apprehensive in the first place because it is one of my more darkish stories and it's not like too many ppl want to hear about a poor girl almost being raped, right? I'm just not sure what to do now. Kinda lost. But I do appreciate your feedback and it will help me decide how to continue. :mon dunno:
Thank you for your support and I will do my best to write good stories! :gmon sing:

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« Reply #7 on: August 19, 2008, 05:44:14 AM »
Just remember, as long as you're getting responses/comments from others, you're probably doing something right. :)

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« Reply #8 on: August 19, 2008, 05:49:48 AM »
yeah... don't worry if what you write isn't everybody's thing... just write! i may not read it for the pairing-value but with your writing skills, i read that last one for its literary-value...

just write what you feel like... i'm kinda envious of you because you actually pursued that rape thing... i got a bit chicken with that theme... :lol:

GANBARE!!!!

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« Reply #9 on: August 19, 2008, 11:13:51 AM »
Hitorijime
Thanks for the translation strawb3rrykream, the words…they were beautiful *sniff* :farofflook:

Future Fantasy
I had a grin on my face the whole time I was reading this. Gosh, IshiYoshi being together is like the ultimate fantasy come true :omamori:

Not That Girl
You know, the funny thing is, I usually only like Ai-chan with Risa. But somehow, someway, you’re getting through to me with your pairing of Ai and Miki. Now is that good or bad? :hehehe:

Waiting
Am I bad if I want more of such fics :shy2: GAKIKAME~~~~~~~~~~ :luvuluvu:

Hero: Part 1
Am I reading right, Miki is actually….nice? Haha, sorry I was kidding :mon sweat: It’s different and nice to see Miki this way, looking out for the juniors, Koharu especially since the kid almosts worships her. I’m just a little shocked, no make that very shocked to see Yossi doing what she did. But hey, it's all good, I like reading about shocking scenarios and this one definitely shocked me :mon scare: That Kaori bit was funny and rather apt. Great job! :mon thumb:


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« Reply #10 on: August 19, 2008, 12:25:43 PM »
interesting...
Ohh, cnt wait how they would turn out.
feel sorry for koha

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« Reply #11 on: August 19, 2008, 12:32:18 PM »
Dang. That was a surprising but very interesting story. Poor Koha though .. :(

I need to catch up on the other stories i missed. *goes back a 'few' pages* *sigh* this'll take a while. Oh well something good to occupy me.  :D

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« Reply #12 on: August 19, 2008, 12:50:09 PM »
Wha! Yossy was damn creepy in this one :scared: But I feel sorry for her since she is seriously ill :( and poor Koharu-chan... :cry:   
But the best thing about this story is that...Miki is a hero! :cool1: Being such a good, responsible person and taking care of Koharu :inlove: It's so nice to see her acting like that :wub:

Can't wait for the next part XD Great job, keep it up ;)

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« Reply #13 on: August 19, 2008, 02:01:05 PM »
Wahhhh! Yossy how could you!?!?!?!?  :frustrated:  Poor Koharu!  Thank goodness that Miki was there to stop her...the whole time I was reading I kept hoping that things weren't exactly what they appeared to be, but... guess I'll have to wait for the next part...

Miki was awesome though!

udate soon  :D

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« Reply #14 on: August 19, 2008, 03:03:19 PM »
@lollipopgirl: First of all, I'm kinda liking us taking over ppl's threads! XD
I know, that's been hella fun :twisted:

Yup, I looked it up to make sure sex addiction was a real disease-ish thing.
Disorder honey, disorder :P (revenge for correcting me before  :mon blblbl: )

WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTT!!! :w00t:
Holy crap, I love it!
Not coz it's such a sweet story and coz I love what happened to Koha, but coz there is a reason I am a psych stupid and that is coz I absolutely love (for lack of a better word) things like this and find them incredibly interesting. :D

Total props to you for, once again, taking a different controversial path... But poor Yossy, she always ends up being the rapist (or almost one) :(
Miki being all caring :heart: I can so see that! Yeah sure she can be blunt and is a bitch but it's only coz she cares and wants to get her point across... fair enough... but when something threatens one of her girl's, especially a young one like that, WATCH OUT!!! :knee: :kickass:

I really can't wait for more of this, I was smiling the whole time I was reading (no, not coz I'm a psycho) coz I was enjoying it so much... congrats on such a long chapter too  :gmon heartu:
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« Reply #15 on: August 19, 2008, 03:38:53 PM »
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“But it’s so fun to try”

of course  :twisted:


aww Miki cried  :cry:


Yossie almost raped Kuharo.?.  :O



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« Reply #16 on: August 20, 2008, 07:21:08 PM »
@JFC: Domo~
@tru_harmony: I kinda worry myself in the sense that the rape thing doesn't bother me too much. I feel like I should be scared because it could happen to me. But I'm not too worried. :?
@lil_hamz: Nice to see your comments. :heart:
@ringo-hime: I feel sorry for Koha too. :(
@zay05ohayou: Good luck with catching up! :lol:
@peti-chan: Yeah, I love me some hero Miki!!! :w00t:
@wings4dreams: Don't blame Yossy too much. She's sick and kinda can't help it.  :(
@lollipopgirl: THAT'S the word I was looking for!!! :P Yeah, poor Yossy! But she's such a good character for it.
@kRisZ: Sex is :drool: Sorry but Kuharo? :lol:

This one is kinda crappily written. I don't like revising so :P Now we get to see Koha's POV! :)
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Hero: Part 2

That was the scariest night of my life.

   I was just in my hotel room, watching a little TV before bed. We were going to home to Tokyo tomorrow so I wanted to chill out before we had to work again. Because in this business, I’ve discovered, you make the best of every free moment you get. But I was getting sleepy. Sometimes I wish I wasn’t the youngest in the group. No one wants to hang out with me because they think I’m not mature enough or whatever. God, sometimes I wish I didn’t even join Morning Musume. “Why?”, I grumbled, clicking the TV off and laying on my face on the bed. I guess I never realized how tired I was because I don’t even remember falling asleep. But I do remember waking up to a loud knocking on the door. “What the heck is that?”, I murmured, dragging my body up from the bed. I stood there for a second, kinda forgetting what I was doing. Now I know why my senpai all drink coffee. I stumbled over to the door, tripping over a pair of shoes and a discarded T-shirt. I squinted into the peep hole and it took a moment for me to confirm who was standing outside.

It was Yoshizawa-san.

   “Um, Yoshizawa-senpai?”, I asked, wondering why the hell my leader was outside of my hotel room at 1:00 AM. “Hey Koha!”, she slurred, swaying slightly on her feet. Uh oh, she was kinda drunk. I had never seen a drunk person in real life before let alone have to deal with one. So I was really confused and a tad bit scared. I felt like something was wrong with this. My “guest” began to “walk” into the room, using the wall as a support. My gut was screaming at me to get her back out, like bad stuff would happen if she was there. But I couldn’t do much, as she was already lying on my bed. “Are you ok?”, I asked timidly, crouching on the floor to look her in the unusually large eyes. She stared back at me and then hiccupped loudly. My face was immersed in the sour scent of beer. Scooting back, I took a couple deep breaths of normal air and said, “I think I need to call Fujimoto-senpai” “No!”, my drunk senior bellowed, throwing her limp arms up for emphasis. “But she can help you”, I tried to convince her as I reached for the phone. But Yoshizawa-san caught my wrist, holding it a little too tight. “Owie…”, I whimpered, looking up at her with tears in my eyes. Her grip loosened but now, her soft hand was rubbing up and down my arm. I was starting to feel uncomfortable, like she wasn’t just stroking my skin to make it hurt less. “Your skin is so soft”, she breathed out, using her nails to tickle my arm almost playfully. I was feeling really scared by now, wondering why Yoshizawa-san was acting so strange.
    All of a sudden, I found myself on her lap. She had her left arm around my waist, holding me firmly on her and her right on my shoulder. “Such a pretty girl”, she huskily whispered into my ear, sending shivers down my spine. The stale smell filled my nostrils again. The hand on my hip made its way under my tank top, running over my stomach. I may be the youngest but I definitely knew where this was going and I didn’t like it one bit. “I don’t think you….”, I tried to protest but her right hand covered my mouth. “Shhhh”, she shushed me as her left hand crawled up my stomach. I squeaked with horror when her fingers circled my breasts. She was pushing on them so hard, it hurt and my tears spilled out. She made a comment about me not being developed yet and I blushed hard. She did something else (I’m not sure what) to my chest and it made me cry out. She let go of my mouth and I turned around to catch a glimpse of her face. Her cheeks were flushed and her lips were slightly open. But what scared me the most was her eyes. They were different, darker somehow. Like there was a fire in them. And when she looked back at me, they flashed with hunger. All I could do was sit there and bite my lip as she fondled my chest. “Maybe you’d be more comfortable in my room”, she said, already lifting me into her arms, wedding-style. I didn’t even try to stop her. I was just too scared.
    All the way up the elevator and down the hallway, I was shaking a little. What was she gonna do to me? I prayed she wouldn’t touch me anymore but I already knew it was futile. We made it back to her and Fujimoto-san’s suite without anyone seeing us. Yoshizawa-san struggled with the door and couldn’t put the key card in. So she handed it to me so I could insert the card while she pushed opened the door. It hit the wall inside with a bang and I jumped in her arms. “Shh”, she soothed, stroking my leg this time as she carried me into the room. The bedroom door was closed so I assumed Fujimoto-san was already sleeping. My mind was racing but it all shut down when she put me on the couch and sat on my hips. My arms were pinned over my head so I couldn’t struggle. I just stared into her unfamiliar eyes and sobbed. Her hands pulled my top off and felt all over my exposed body. Her lips crushed against mine as I lay absolutely paralyzed on the cushy piece of furniture. “You taste so yummy”, my senpai moaned into my mouth. Her hands slipped down until they rested on my hips, trailing along the waistband of my shorts. My eyes widened when I realized she was slowly pulling them down. The terry cloth fabric brushed down my thighs, my knees, my ankles until I couldn’t feel them anymore. Panic took over with my tears falling faster and my cries becoming louder. “Yoshizawa-senpai…”, I whimpered, “Please stop.”
     Suddenly, I heard the bedroom door creak open and Fujimoto-san stood there, with a look of shock on her face. But that quickly turned to anger and she screamed, “Yocchan, get off of her!” But Yoshizawa-san just slapped at her hands. I don’t know exactly what happened but all of a sudden, I was alone on the couch and Fujimoto-san was telling me, “Get over by the door” My body did as I was told and I ended up in the corner. I pulled my legs up to my chest and watched fearfully as they fought. They were yelling and then Yoshizawa-san took a swing at her. Fujimoto-san was quick and dodged it. But then she attacked our leader until she fell on the floor. I kept crying and Fujimoto-san came over to me. Her eyes were soft and sympathetic as she placed her hand on my cheek. “Koharu”, she said and I leaned into her arms, letting go of anything I had been hiding. She shushed me and we rocked back and forth. Somehow, she was able to pick me up and take me to the bedroom. I held on to her neck and buried my face when we passed Yoshizawa-san’s body. I hoped she wasn’t dead. I was put down on the bed and my body automatically curled into a ball. Partially to attempt to cover myself up and partially to try and comfort myself. I watched as Fujimoto-san searched through her bag and brought out some clothes for me. “Here, sweetie”, she said, trying to smile. I could tell tonight’s events shook her up too. I put them on slowly because I still paralyzed with fear. The shirt and shorts were a little big but comfy and soft.
    “I don’t want to make you any more uncomfortable but where did she touch you?”, Fujimoto-san asked me. I looked at her, my face dampening with tears again. I didn’t want to remember where she touched me. I just want to move on with my life, to forget this ever happened. “Seriously, you need to tell me”, she said in her professional sub-leader voice. “M-my c-ch-chest”, I stuttered. “Not down there?”, she confirmed, seeming quite relieved. I shook my head and turned onto my side. That feeling of pure exhaustion was coming back. The bed was like lying on a cloud but not as good as when Fujimoto-san crawled onto the bed next to me and wrapped her arms around me. She rocked me to sleep, whispering to me as I held on to her. She made me feel safe but I was still afraid to go to sleep. But my body took over, forcing my eyes to close. The last thing I heard was, “She won’t hurt you anymore.”
     When I woke up, Fujimoto-san had her arm around me. I smiled because I had honestly never seen her so affectionate and nice. I watched her until she woke up. She called Takahashi-san on the hotel phone and told her to pack up my belongings. We showered, dressed and prepared to leave. But as we were going into the living room, I stopped short, freezing on the spot. I couldn’t go in there. I just couldn’t. “She’s gone, I promise”, Fujimoto-san assured me kindly, taking my hand. We took a brief look around the corner, confirming Yoshizawa-san was no longer in the room. I felt relieved and happily sat on a stool in their kitchen. Yeah, their suite had a kitchen!! So Fujimoto-san made me some toast for breakfast. It was delicious!
     I felt happy and comfortable with Fujimoto-san, until we got to the lobby. Everyone else was staring at us, wondering why we were together and Yoshizawa-san wasn’t there. I started feeling all nervous again, even though a death glare was cast over all the other members. Once we got in the van, I felt a little more relaxed. Enough to fall asleep again. Fujimoto-san gave everyone the rest of the day off back in Tokyo. But us two headed to the Up-Front building, to the hospital. I was told Iida-senpai had to interview me about last night. I wasn’t looking forward to it at all. In fact, the closer we got, the tighter my hand gripped my senior’s. I was breathing rapidly and the lump in my throat grew larger. We were in the lobby when I was yanked towards the wall and Fujimoto-san looked me in the eyes. “It’ll be ok”, she told me, “I promise” She always knows how to make me calm down. Once we got upstairs, we met Iida-san in her office. “Koharu-chan”, she said to me kindly, “I’m gonna have to ask you some questions about what happened yesterday” Her eyes were twinkling but at the same time, a cloud of seriousness enveloped us, as well as spreading throughout the whole room. I nodded, after looking to my guardian for permission. But when she stood up, I panicked. “Where are you going?”, I whimpered. She told me she was going to see Yoshizawa-san, someone I was definitely not ready to see. I reluctantly let her leave, wishing she’d change her mind.
     Iida-san gave me a warm smile before pulling out a piece of paper and handing it to me, along with a pen. It was a survey-type thing, asking me a lot about what had occurred. Was I sexually active? No. Did it feel good when she touched me? NO! Once I finished it, she confirmed the answers with me. Then the serious talking began. “I’m not sure whether you know or not, but you aren’t the first person that Yossy assaulted”, she told me, adjusting her glasses. I was horrified and it must have shown on my face. “No, no, it’s not what you think”, she was quick to correct me, “Yossy has a disorder in which she cannot control her libido” “It is quite rare and alcohol increases her chances of an attack”, Iida-san said in a rather melancholic voice, “She’s been fairly good for a while but the amount of alcohol she consumed yesterday made it impossible for her to control herself” I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. Other girls went through the same thing I had? I fiddled with the hem of my T-shirt, not sure how to respond. “You were lucky though”, she continued, “You weren’t penetrated” I was now VERY uncomfortable with this conversation. “So in conclusion, Yossy wasn’t aware of what she was doing and I am very very sorry that this happened to you” I managed to smile gratefully before my other emotions pushed it out of the way. Iida-san came over to me and hugged me. “Fujimoto-senpai”, I mumbled, wishing she was the one holding me. “Pardon?”, she asked, pulling away so she could hear me better. “I want Fujimoto-senpai”, I blubbered out, my mouth not quite cooperating.
     5 minutes later, my hero entered the room, heading straight for me. “What’s wrong, sweetie?”, she asked, as I shrunk into her arms. I told her what I wanted to do and her response was nothing short of what I expected. “I’ll go with you when you’re ready, ok?”, she whispered, fighting back tears. We sat silently, until I murmured, “Um, I think I should go see her now” But once we were outside the door, I started having doubts. Panic set in and I wanted to go home. “Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak to you”, Fujimoto-san announced, telling me we were already in the room. Crying, I tried to turn around but she told me to just do it. Approaching the bed, I saw the damage that had been done. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, I cried, feeling sick. Yoshizawa-san apologized as well and was crying too, which was as rare as Fujimoto-san’s kindness towards me used to be. I was feeling a bit better, until her hands came towards me. Those same hands that touched me in bad places and ripped my clothes off. I couldn’t let that happen again. I backed away, fear in my eyes. She stopped and smiled weakly. I wanted to let her back into my life. I really did, but I was so afraid. Afraid that those hands would do worse things and being alone with her could mean more torture.

I will do my best to forgive, but it will be hard to forget.
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I like to think of my slightly scattered writing as the way a 13-year-old Koharu would be thinking after this happens to her. :D
« Last Edit: August 24, 2008, 06:01:45 PM by strawb3rrykream »

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« Reply #17 on: August 20, 2008, 08:58:51 PM »
... woah... i wonder who yossui's other victims were...

bad yossui...

hmm... i guess miki is the hero?

rape is scary... hope it never happens to me...

thanks for that update... waiting for the next...

EDIT: DID YOSSUI DO THIS TO RIKA-CHAN TOO?!?!? (i know my curiosity sound scary... but i want to know...)
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« Reply #18 on: August 20, 2008, 11:33:52 PM »
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“Um, Yoshizawa-senpai?”, I asked, wondering why the hell my leader was outside of my hotel room at 1:00 AM. “Hey Koha!”, she slurred, swaying slightly on her feet. Uh oh, she was kinda drunk.
Aaaaaah, so she WAS drunk.


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“Maybe you’d be more comfortable in my room”, she said, already lifting me into her arms, wedding-style. I didn’t even try to stop her. I was just too scared.
In a way, Koharu actually did the right thing by not resisting here. By letting Yossi take her back to her and Miki's room, she put herself closer (physically) to help. It was also fortunate that Miki was still up. If they had stayed in Koharu's room, there's no way of knowing if the members in the rooms next to hers would have woken up and been able to stop it.




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“Yocchan, Koharu-chan wants to speak to you”, Fujimoto-san announced, telling me we were already in the room. Crying, I tried to turn around but she told me to just do it. Approaching the bed, I saw the damage that had been done. “I forgive you for last night, senpai”, I cried, feeling sick. Yoshizawa-san apologized as well and was crying too, which was as rare as Fujimoto-san’s kindness towards me used to be.
Hopefully Koharu honestly believes that Yossi's sincere in her guilt over what she tried to do.  But yeah, for Koharu, her image of Yossi has been totally shattered (like hero-worship being destroyed).



As morbid as it sounds, I'm wondering now, who else has Yossi done this to, and how did they handle/are they handling it?

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« Reply #19 on: August 21, 2008, 02:59:14 AM »
Okay, Yossy, no more fire juice you for you! :pig refuse: Look what you almost did...hopefully she learned the error of her ways. 

It was interesting to read this from koharu's Pov I think the story was more powerful that way cause you see things from the victim's eyes. 
 

and as the others were saying...has Yossy done this to anyone else?!? :O

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