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Kisetsu (Ch. 3: Winter Wonderland - 2/26)
« on: September 27, 2008, 11:37:18 PM »
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Hey guys!! Yeah, it's me and I'm finally back with something!!! :mon sweat: Gosh, I hope I still have some fans out there. :lol: And yes, I'm still working on Hero and my shorts/one-shots. School is just totally kicking my ass! :mon lol:
So this story is going to be (probably) 4 parts, one for each season. As for the pairing, anyone who knows me and my ships should know. :wriggly: This is also my first story using a beta (thanks Nee-chan! I love you! :tama-heart: ) so hopefully, it's to your liking. I'm starting with summer because it was the first one I wrote and it is based off of the song and PV "Summer Song" by YUI.
Without further ado, read and enjoy! :mon squee:
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Ch. 1 - Summer Song

“It’s summer”, I whispered, thinking of all I could do with school being out. I was still in my classroom, sitting on the teacher’s desk. My headphones hung around my neck, a faint melody playing from them. Blue skies cascaded as far as the eye could see and the sun shone brightly through the window, framing the message on the chalkboard; “Pool Cleaning: Lottery Tournament”, it read. Yup, our class got assigned and we had to draw chopsticks to see who would get to start their vacation early and who would stay back. I looked to the wooden stick in my hand as a light smile grazed my face; maybe she would be there too.

Hopping off the desk, I gathered my school bag and left the previous year of studying and worries behind. My white indoor shoes padded softly down the busy hallways, full of kids making plans and saying goodbye. “Hey, Gaki-san!”, a familiar voice called out to me. I spun around to find Kame-chan running towards me, her pretty hair flowing behind her. She’s one of my best friends and I’m terribly envious of her hair! “Me, Sayumin and Reina are going to the beach, wanna come?”, she grinned that sunny smile of hers. She gestured towards two pigtailed girls standing farther down the hallway. They waved and I returned the gesture. “No, my class has pool cleaning duty”, I replied, giving her a regretful look. “Aw, that sucks. But we’ll hang out this summer, right?”, Eri asked hopefully. I grabbed her hand and squeezed it playfully. We hugged and she ran off to join the other two.

I was expecting to see a bunch of my classmates but when I arrived at the edge of the blue-tiled pool, only one girl stood in it. Takahashi Ai, my best friend. She was holding a broom, her plaid skirt rippling in the light breeze. She had been pushing the water around when I got there but she was now standing still, staring up at the expansion of sky. “Ya-ho!!!”, she yelled, throwing her arms up and turning around to see me standing there, watching her. I couldn’t help but giggle at the blush now covering her face. She turned away, the tiny ponytail on the back of her head swinging. I slipped off my shoes and socks, set my bag down and joined her in the slippery pool.

“Where’s everyone else?”, I inquired, picking up a broom of my own and beginning to shove the water towards the drain. “I sent them home”, she replied. I smiled to myself, thinking how like her it was to let everyone start their summer before her, but before I could say anything back to her, my legs were splashed with cold water. I let out a yelp as the hem of my skirt began to cling to the wetness. Spinning around, I saw Ai-chan laughing her ass off, leaning on her broom for support. “It’s war, Takahashi”, I smirked, picking up the green garden hose and shooting a steady stream of water at her. “Cold!”, she squealed, running away from me. I chased her, nailing her in the back and coaxing another scream from her.

“No fair”, she whined from outside of the pool, pouting cutely, with water dripping down her white dress shirt. “You’re cute like that”, I told her, climbing out and standing next to her, “But your bra’s showing” Gasping in horror, Ai wrapped her arms over her chest protectively. “Relax, you prude”, I giggled, “No one’s here to see it” Her arms dropped down as she yelled at me, “I’m NOT a prude!” I couldn’t help but let my eyes drop down to her wet chest. Damn they were big, nestled snuggly in her subtlety sexy, bubblegum-colored bra. Her spacey-ness paid off for me, as she didn’t even notice my staring.

“I’m not a prude, Gaki”, she moaned, jolting my gaze back up to her face. “Sorry, Ai-chan, but you are”, I smirked. I loved teasing her and she looked so……delicious, just standing there. “I like sex too!”, she whined, grabbing onto my sleeve and pulling on it like a child. “No, you don’t”, I sighed, “You’ve never even kissed anyone!” I felt bad about bringing that up again, seeing her ashamed face blush with embarrassment. I took her hand in mine but she yanked it out and turned away from me. Shit, I thought to myself, I broke the Code of Silence. We had agreed, when we were in elementary school, that certain things we told each other would never be repeated again. It was one of the rules in our friendship that should never, ever be broken. I hung my head in shame, staring sadly at the water drops on my bare feet.

“Kiss me”, I blurted out of nowhere, cursing the words as soon as they left my lips. I had been thinking about saying it but my stupid mouth let it slip. “WHAT?!”, she whirled around, staring at me, that perfect mouth hanging open in disbelief. “You heard me”, I boldly responded as a feeling of confidence entered my veins. I moved in for the kill, approaching her frozen figure. Before she could back away, our lips collided softly. It felt just as I’d hoped, better even. My arms found their place on her hips and hers around my neck. We both pulled our bodies together, intensifying the sensation.

After a few more seconds of pure bliss, my body was begging me to pull away and take a normal breath. So I reluctantly released her with a tiny smack, keeping my arms on her waist. “So?”, I asked timidly, my self-assurance melting away as fast as it had arrived. “It was….wonderful”, she grinned, touching her fingers to her lips, “Now do it again” With that, she pulled my head towards hers and our lips embraced for a second time.

I could tell that this summer was going to be special.

Sometime we’ll be nostalgic for these days, I know it
We can’t rely on a future written in the sand

In these low days, I’ll get back those days, and I’ll see you and we’ll smile
And the summer holiday will begin

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Oh, and if anyone has any ideas for fall, I'd appreciate it because right now, I got nothing. :sweat:
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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #1 on: September 27, 2008, 11:41:32 PM »
YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! TAGAKI!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT! I love this pairing so much. str3k you are my new hero. I cant wait for more.

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #2 on: September 28, 2008, 01:37:33 AM »
... XD That was great. Takagaki is luff.

Fall? I dunno...a park? As cliche as it is... xD If the next season is anything like this, maybe you could start with a pile of leaves and... oh my. I need a tissue. o-o *smacks self for bad thoughts* xD But yes, good luck with the next few seasons.

(School's kicking my own butt...I've had no time to write. :cry:)

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #3 on: September 28, 2008, 03:35:11 AM »
verry good! please keep it up!!^^
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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #4 on: September 28, 2008, 03:44:33 AM »
OHH COOL!>___<
summer!pool!wet!Takahashi!Gaki!teasing! XD
orsm~

cnt wait for fallllll.. >_____<

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“I like sex too!”, she whined, grabbing onto my sleeve and pulling on it like a child. “No, you don’t”, I sighed
lmao. XD

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #5 on: September 28, 2008, 06:48:17 AM »
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As for the pairing, anyone who knows me and my ships should know.


I absolutely squealed when I read this because I KNOW :D

Does this mean 3 more one-shots of TakaGaki or will there be other yummy pairings? I throughly enjoyed this. TakaGaki is always good and the setting of young love during summer is just AWWWWWWWWWWW so sweet :wub:

When you described Ai with her tiny pony-tail I imagined her to have that hairstyle in the 4 billion dollar project HM@ :lol: So CUTE :heart:

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #6 on: September 28, 2008, 11:41:29 AM »
Gosh I've really missed your stories :cry: and I'm so happy that you came up with a new one :w00t:

Yay I love Summer Song! :inlove: and after reading this even more XD

Aww~~TakaGaki so sweet and adorable like always :luvluv2: And wet Ai-chan... :drool: I just love how you mess up with my brain XD

School is just totally kicking my ass! :mon lol:

Yeah I totally know what you mean :banghead: I also can't find time to write but at least I have time to read XD

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #7 on: September 28, 2008, 03:32:44 PM »
oh oh oh NEW FIC, OMG I love it!! Keep writing, love the kiss scene, mwehehe  :luvluv1:

So,,, you like sex Ai... haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~! :hehehe: :ding:

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2008, 07:21:21 PM »
KYAAAAAA~A TAKAGAKI!!!  :heart:

Another great beginning of a surely great story!!!

I'll keep reading XD

Hopefully there will be some TanaKamei too... you remember the promise you made... that when I'm updating you're gonna write some TanaKamei?? Well... I've updated... A LOT  XD

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #9 on: September 29, 2008, 06:00:56 AM »
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she grinned, touching her fingers to her lips, “Now do it again” With that, she pulled my head towards hers and our lips embraced for a second time.
Best...part...EVAR!!! :rockon:

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 1: Summer Song - 9/27)
« Reply #10 on: September 29, 2008, 12:46:19 PM »
My biased GakiKame loving self has to admit that that story was so ADORABLE  :wub:
Looks like the Rokkies have gone out and TakaGaki are having some quality time together.
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“I like sex too!”, she whined, grabbing onto my sleeve and pulling on it like a child.
When I read that my face looked like O_______O
Then I double-taked and had to re-read that line to make sure that I wasn't seeing things!

Then I was like XD Ai-chan, what are you talking about!?


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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #11 on: October 19, 2008, 08:33:35 PM »
@maverickpanda: *blushes* Thanks!! I'm someone's hero...whoa. Never saw that coming! :lol:
@ShikyoxYaiba: You get a special thank-you, know why? Because you gave me the idea I needed to write this!!! So I dedicate this chapter to you. :heart:
@kawaii beam: Thank you! And I will!!
@ringo-hime: Ai-chan's such a tease!!
@lilhamz: It's all TakaGaki!!! B/C they rule the world. Nuff said. XD Actually, that was the hairstyle I was thinking of too!! :lol: So, great job!!
@peti-chan: *huggles* Aww, thanks for missing me and my work. Summer Song is :heart: I hope you have the time soon b/c I miss your stuff!! (and you :heart: )
@anuskyna: Ohohoho, naughty Ai-chan!! :P
@Kame: Thanks, buddy!! We need to talk soon!!
@JFC: Glad you think so!
@KonaKaga: See? We play off each other. We can make each other at least tolerate other pairings! Just kidding, I'm really starting to like GakiKame, thanks to you. It's Ai-chan babble!! :lol:

Ok, this is dedicated to ShikyoxYaiba as well as Gaki b/c it's her birthday (in Japan) and I love her to death. I'm pressured for time so here we go:
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Ch. 2 - Fall in My Heart

Crispy red leaves crackled under my black boots as I pulled my crimson overcoat tighter around my body to seal out the chilly fall wind. The sun was still shining, reminding me of the summer I spent with my Ai-chan. Yes, MY Ai-chan. My heels clicked on the concrete, carrying me towards our picnic spot. We had plenty of good memories there.

When that tree came into view, I could feel my lips curl up even higher. It was beautiful shades of red, gold and brown now, quite different from its usual emerald green hue. With my excellent vision, I could see the branches where we sat and kissed softly for what seemed like hours. Seated under our beloved plant was Ai-chan, on a pink and white striped blanket. My pace sped up until I was nearly running, keeping a strong grip on my purse.

“Hey, sweetie”, I panted once I arrived at the edge of the fleece picnic cloth. “Hey, babe”, she giggled, welcoming me into her arms once I removed my shoes. Our lips met in our usual greeting, caressing each other lovingly. I mumbled “I missed you”, into her skin, planting a trail of tiny kisses along her jaw line softly. “We just talked this morning”, she replied, cradling my head on her shoulder as our legs intertwined playfully.

I stopped and looked up into those absolutely mesmerizing brown eyes, replying, “So?” She wrapped her arm around my back and pulled me up into a sitting position. “And that’s why I love you”, she whispered into my ear, before nibbling lightly.

We fooled around for while, just kissing and nibbling softly. Before both of us confessed that we were hungry and our stomachs would not allow us to continue. “Oh, I picked up some sweet potatoes on my way here”, I recalled, scrambling to my bag to retrieve the paper bag filled with the delicious vegetable of fall. Ai-chan grabbed her own backpack and opened it to reveal a plethora of items from the convenience store. We spread out our meal and began to eat.

“You have to try this”, Ai-chan told me, holding up a bite of chestnut rice on her chopsticks, tenderly placing it in my open mouth. “That’s so good!”, I cheered, my eyes closing with pleasure. Peeling back the skin of one of the sweet potatoes, I held it up to her. She took a healthy-sized bite and squealed at its fluffy texture and delicate sweetness. We continued to feed each other until most of the food was gone and our tummies were full and happy.

“That was delicious”, Ai-chan grinned, satisfied as she lay in my arms. I simply nodded in agreement, pulling her closer and burying my face in her hair. “Gaki-san?”, she questioned, prompting me to look at her, “Do you love me?” I almost laughed at her, but refrained to avoid any misunderstandings.

Instead, I leaned down towards her, planting the most passionate kiss I could on her lips. “Yes, I love you more than anything in the whole world”, I finally answered, after releasing her from my love hold. “Good because I. Love. You.”, she smiled, kissing me after each word.

The sun was starting to set, a beautiful watercolor painting unfolding before our eyes. Various shades of pink, yellow, orange and red brushed across the expansive canvas of sky, “Let’s go home”, my sweetie murmured, running her finger along my jaw line. I eased her off of me and stood up, looking down at her gorgeous figure. “Some assistance, Cinderella?”, I said in my best Prince voice, holding my hand out for her to take. “Thank you, Prince”, she giggled shyly, as I pulled her up. We both started to laugh, recalling the fairy tale we acted out as kids. We alternated playing the role but secretly, I always loved playing the Prince, because I got to treat Ai-chan like the royal princess that she is.

I brought her hand up to my mouth and kissed it gently, making her blush brightly. “C’mon, let go so I can pack up”, she mock scolded me, but didn’t make a move to detach her hand from mine. Pouting, I reluctantly let go and stepped back so she could pack up. I always end up watching her, when she cleans, when she sings, when she sleeps. It still blows my mind at how exquisitely gorgeous she is. How absolutely perfect she is.

But today, I could see how tired she was. Her elegant eyelids were drooping a bit and her smooth, milky skin was slightly weary. I wrung my hands in apprehension, wanting to help ease her fatigue and stress. “Honey, are you ready?”, she asked, looking at me with an ever-cheerful smile, as if everything is perfectly fine in the world. I couldn’t help but let my concern fly away in the balmy breeze that surrounded us.

Then I got a great idea.

I turned away from the one I love and bent over slightly. “Hop on”, I animated, gesturing for her to get on my back. After a few seconds of nothing, I felt her place her slender hands on my shoulder and leap onto me. I grabbed onto her warm thighs to keep her in place, relishing the feeling of her body on mine. “Giddy up”, she whispered into my ear before giving it an intimate swipe of her tongue.

An excited chill ran down my spine before I ran as fast as I could. “WHOOO~”, she screamed, tightening her grip with excitement. Towards the station we sprinted, ignoring the stares coming from fellow park-goers.

Life is good.

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #12 on: October 19, 2008, 08:52:17 PM »
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An excited chill ran down my spine before I ran as fast as I could. “WHOOO~”, she screamed, tightening her grip with excitement. Towards the station we sprinted, ignoring the stares coming from fellow park-goers.

Love this part hahaha,

really good chapter ^^

Keep it up~~ ^^

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #13 on: October 19, 2008, 10:37:40 PM »
* JFC needs yet another dentist.

;D

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #14 on: October 19, 2008, 11:26:42 PM »
AWWWWWWWWWW. *melts from the cuteness* I'm glad I could help. This chapter was majorly...gah. *joins JFC @ dentist's*

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #15 on: October 20, 2008, 12:29:57 AM »
kawaii~! so cute! plz plz plz!! continue~!
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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #16 on: October 20, 2008, 07:43:36 AM »
awwww~ it's so sweet ^^ love your ideas, makes me love and appreciate all the seasons again ^^ looking forward to your next season, Winter~ my favorite season ^^

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #17 on: October 20, 2008, 11:01:52 PM »
YAAAAAAAAAY AN UPDATE!!!

Oh god... you made me melt... this was so damn cute!!!  :luvluv2:

The way you're writing is amazing! You have great way with words

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!!

Oh... and yes, we really need to talk soon!!!!

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #18 on: October 21, 2008, 06:49:47 AM »
Risa carrying Ai on her back is so Korean drama style :D But I like it. In fact I can totally picture them running down the street with Ai flailing her arms above her as she yells happily. Risa has a contented smile on her face as she looks up at the most beautiful girl in the world to her. Passerbys stop in their tracks and watch the girls with amused expressions. Awwww what a wonderful image :wub: After reading your fics, I always like TakaGaki a little more than I already do :heart:

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Re: Kisetsu (Ch. 2: Fall in My Heart - 10/19)
« Reply #19 on: October 21, 2008, 08:29:35 AM »
Awww, you were always so excited about this chapter, 'twas so cute :heart:

I can't believe no one has commented on my fave part yet! I am ashamed people, ashamed I say! :angry:
So for the third or fourth time I will reiterate the awesomeness of:
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The sun was starting to set, a beautiful watercolor painting unfolding before our eyes. Various shades of pink, yellow, orange and red brushed across the expansive canvas of sky, “Let’s go home”, my sweetie murmured, running her finger along my jaw line. I eased her off of me and stood up, looking down at her gorgeous figure. “Some assistance, Cinderella?”, I said in my best Prince voice, holding my hand out for her to take. “Thank you, Prince”, she giggled shyly, as I pulled her up. We both started to laugh, recalling the fairy tale we acted out as kids. We alternated playing the role but secretly, I always loved playing the Prince, because I got to treat Ai-chan like the royal princess that she is.

I have read that part so many times now and I will never get sick of it! Even though they aren't MM members in this, having that part makes it feel like they were completely made for each other and the roles of Prince Gaki and Cinderella :mon inluv:
I hope Ai became the Prince on Risa's b'day and treated her beloved like a queen... at least she didn't forget what day it was, that's something :P

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Oh & the piggyback ride makes me think of 'Twilight' except with less fangs (unfortunately) and stuff XD

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