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Re: Nocturne [File #21]
« Reply #280 on: March 15, 2009, 08:18:16 PM »
Oh boy... I knew you couldn't leave out Reinai in this fic. XD Let's see what you have in store for them.  :twisted: Drunk Reina = Hilarious XD

Hmm.. Yuuka's got her first mission! Hope it goes well. If she survives Mitsi that is.  :lol:

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Re: Nocturne [File #21]
« Reply #281 on: March 15, 2009, 11:47:21 PM »
o.o wow loks like aika's testing out yuuka now huh XD
yay~! now ai-chan's in hawaii~! and she meets up with reina?? XD wow,a drunkan reina's kinda funny.
and what was the message that yuuka sent ai??
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Re: Nocturne [File #21]
« Reply #282 on: March 16, 2009, 07:56:04 AM »
drats I was really looking forward to the Sayu and Ai showdown...must have been really good if it made Ai chan leave the country to clear her mind.

while Ai chan was pondering over having met Reina before...it made me realize that Reina really hasn't been in this story at all until this point...pretty shocking realization.  I wonder how that slipped my mind...I guess when Ai chan's around it's really just too hard to think about anyone else.

liking the fresh addition...can't wait to see what Reina's arc is about!

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Re: Nocturne [File #21]
« Reply #283 on: March 17, 2009, 05:43:36 AM »
File #21

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"Welcome! How may I help you?"

"Ah..." Yuuka stared at the person behind the counter. "Mitsui...san?"

"Eh~ Yuuka-chan! What brings you here alone?" A smiling Mitsui Aika greeted her, putting down the rag on a stool behind her.
Enter...Aika? :O



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"Ah, Nii-sama said to pass this along..." Yuuka walked up to the counter, and Aika took the plain manila envelope wordlessly, casting a sidelong glance at Yuuka.

"So it's your turn huh?" Aika murmured, stepping out from behind the counter and hurrying over to the door, flipping the sign over to 'Closed' and locking it.
Ho boy...Aika's in "the business" as well?

And so this...Aika's final test? Or even...her first solo mission??? :?



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"Seems like a pretty standard mission you've got. Shouldn't be too difficult to hook you up." Aika noted professionally, putting down the file.
Yay! Aika's first mission! :cow:



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"Oneesama's so perfect at everything...I didn't even know how much work she had to do until Niisama started me out on this." Yuuka looked a bit dejected. Aika laughed, walking over and patting Yuuka comfortingly on the shoulder.

"Don't worry about it, everyone has to start somewhere." Aika shrugged. "Takahashi-san has had a lot of practice, so all you really have to do is put in the same kind of effort and you'll reach her level some day."
Aika's right. Aichan hasn't always been this good. It's taken time and patient persistence to get there. As long as Yuuka keeps at it, who knows how far she could go? :)



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Aika grinned.

"Of course, not everyone can look as good as Takahashi-san does doing whatever she does. It seems to be natural talent in that area." Yuuka seemed a bit disappointed about that.
Well, there ARE some things that just come naturally easily (and well) to Aichan. :P  But hey, Yuuka's a cutie pie too. I'm sure she'll be able to find ways to use that to her advantage.



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"Since you're starting out too, you get to be my new guinea pig while Takahashi-san isn't around." A strange glitter sparkled in Aika's eyes, making Yuuka step back nervously.

"Don't worry, I don't bite." Aika grabbed hold of Yuuka's wrist, hauling the wide-eyed girl towards yet another door.

"Hey! Do you do this to Oneesama too!?" Yuuka protested.

"Of course not, I'm not that insane...but then again, she's usually pretty willing to help me out." Aika continued dragging a reluctant Yuuka towards that unidentified door.
Oooooooh, now I'm curious.  Just what is it that Aika is planning on doing?  ;D



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*AICHAN'S VACATION*
Wow...never really pegged her as the vacation type. Though I guess, even Aichan would need a break now and then...especially given the circumstances of what just happened with the Kamei hit. She probably needs to veg...or vent...or both. :?

One thing for sure, she picked a pretty awesome place to have her vacation. :twisted:



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Partly just to get away from Japan for a while, avoid the attention of one Kamei Eri in the meantime. She wasn't sure if she was up to dealing with that girl. Something about her gave Ai the chills, deep down.
Eri's kind of......clingy. Considering how she fell pretty hard for Aichan, and the fact that her dad just died, it shouldn't really be surprising.



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*AICHAN PWNS LOSER SURFER DUDES*
Hey, I said she might need to "vent", didn't I?  :twothumbs



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*REINA AT THE BAR*
WTF??? :shocked:



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She did not immediately step out though, standing in the entrance to let her eyes adjust to the gloom outside before she exited. Off to her left, she saw the men who had grabbed the girl.

"Hey, me first!" One of the guys was saying, pushing another aside. They all seemed slightly drunk as well. Reina was on the ground, all but passed out from the alcohol. Of course, being knocked around a bit while being dragged out also contributed to that.
Oshit.

Aichan, you're not going to just stand by and do nothing, are you???  :shocked



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A tsking sound made some of the guys turn around, even as the one who wanted to go first was undoing his belt. Ai was looking at the men with a derisive expression.

"At least have the decency to bring her to a motel, dude." Ai rolled her eyes, about to turn away and walk off. One of the still partially sober guys stared at her ass.

"Hey, she's hot too..." They tapped the other guy, who was having trouble trying to pull down his pants. Drunkenness definitely affected coordination.

"Let's grab that girl too, yeah..."

Biggest mistake they would ever make.
Well, guys ARE stupid, after all...especially when they're drunk. :sweatdrop:


Damn I wish I had a good seat to see the pummelling that's about to happen.  8)



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"Hmm..." It really wasn't any of her business if the girl got herself raped. She had very little sympathy for people who didn't know how to take care of themselves.
Under other circumstances, I'd actually have the tendency to agree. If you're going to drink yourself stupid, it should be your own fault if something bad happens. But c'mon, she's already beaten up a second set of losers, and Reina IS underage.... :cry:



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Her cellphone beeped.

It was from Yuuka, a cheery message that brought a smile to her face. Her little sister was so adorable. If there was anyone that Ai even gave more than two shits about, Yuuka was probably one of them.

Glancing back at the alleyway where her victims laid strewn about, groaning or knocked out, Ai looked back down at the message, then back up. She sighed and put it away.

"Aw, what the hell..."
NICE TIMING YUUKARIN!!!  :muffin:



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Re: Nocturne [File #21]
« Reply #284 on: March 17, 2009, 09:59:22 AM »
Back! Thanks for all your kind comments. I feel a bit better here.

Comment reply time!


rev2hd: Yuuka's 13 going on 14 here. Yeah, young. XD Wouldn't everyone want to know what Mitsui was going to do in there. Hehe. Reina just can't win lol. And your joke...damn...gangbang much? XDDD THE 10TH PERSON IS THE ONE WHO GETS RAPED. Dude, you're sick. I love it. XD Ai is my fucking hero too. <3

SxY: Yup those guys had it coming. Hehe. I love new arcs. Glad you like the AiEri action. :P

alwaysYou: I intend to let Ai pimp every single one of the Gorokkies. Reina was the last one that hadn't shown up yet. What do you think? Lol.

kRisZ: Yup, in comes the Reina. Hehe. What will happen, I wonder?

Ichigo-chan: Yeah haha, Aika being the weapon lady is fun, no? Glad you're starting to like Yuuka. XD Hehe of course Ai-chan would scope out the hotties. Wouldn't you? :P Annoying guys should always be given a swift kick in the balls if they refuse to go away. Sorry guys. XD Hehe.

Fenrir: Yes I love drunk Reina. The girl gets into the best kind of trouble, methinks. Lol. Haha yeah Yuuka has to survive Mitsi first before she can even do anything. Hehe.

kawaii beam: Lol yeah drunken Reina is hilarious. Yuuka probably just sent a normal message to Ai. Yay sister love. XD

Sukoshi: Sorry about the lack of Sayu and Ai? I'm making up for it this chapter anyway, you'll see. Yeah, I was wondering if anyone noticed that there has not been a single mention of Reina in the story thus far. Haha. Yup Ai's a great distraction to work with. XD

JFC: Yup Ai's pretty badass, beating up loser guys. XD Reina's an idiot for getting drunk, but you have to wonder if Ai is actually nice enough to pick her up. Maybe, maybe not. :P You'll find out. New arcs are fun!


Okie dokie. New chapter coming out soon. :D Stay tuned.

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Re: Nocturne [File #21]
« Reply #285 on: March 17, 2009, 09:59:59 AM »
WEDGE!

BOOYA motherf--sorry, I got carried away. D:

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #286 on: March 17, 2009, 10:02:38 AM »
File #22


Tanaka Reina was a very sound sleeper. Anyone who knew her knew that. She could probably sleep through a typhoon and an earthquake, and only be annoyed if the quake somehow managed to shake her off her bed.

Come hell or high water, it was pretty much a bad idea to wake her prematurely. Let sleeping lions lie, or so they say. Or in her case, let sleeping kittens snooze, or risk getting kitty claw in the face.

Reina was sleeping now, very comfortably indeed. The hotel bed was nice and fluffy, the sheets smooth and soft, perfect for cuddling in. Slowly, she was beginning to stir, nose scrunched up in a tiny yawn, before snuffling back facefirst into her pillow.

The feel of the sheets was very soft against her skin, and felt strangely unobstructed by the absence of any material in between. Reina made a sleepy little frown, half turning and stretching lazily in her sleep, eyelids fluttering briefly, not fully ready to open yet.

A soft touch trailed down one side of her face, almost sharply cold against the warmth under the sheets. Reina frowned again, this time cracking open one sleepy eye to regard her surroundings.

"Morning, kitten." Reina snapped back into focus immediately as the hazy image before her solidified into reality. First reaction: she screamed and hid her head under the pillow.

Oh my god this is not happening. Reina repeated to herself mentally. She shifted around, realizing with a sinking feeling that she was completely naked as her mind shifted into full consciousness.

Oh god what happened last night?! Reina was hyperventilating inside, her chest tightening painfully with panic. The bed shifted slightly as the person next to her moved closer, putting one hand on her shoulder.

"Ahhhh! Get away from me, pervert!" Reina shrieked, chucking her pillow blindly at her assailant, who ducked smoothly with an impish grin on her face.

Wait, her face?! All blood drained from Reina's face as she gaped at the person sitting next to her. Clutching the sheets close to her body, Reina struggled to process the fact that she was currently naked in bed with another girl. The splitting headache from her hangover was not helping.

"Who the hell are you?!" Reina blurted out stupidly, trying frantically to figure out what had happened the night before. Vaguely, she recalled someone stripping her of her clothes, but there were too many blank spots in her memory to remember correctly.

"Is this any way to greet someone who saved you from being gang-raped by a bunch of guys?" A lazy smile split the other girl's face, even as the stranger flipped her long hair over one shoulder and settled into a cross-legged position. Belatedly, Reina noticed that aside from the over-large t-shirt that her rescuer (?) was wearing, she was apparently not wearing anything underneath.

Trying valiantly to suppress the rising blush on her face, Reina gripped the sheets around her even more tightly, as if they would miraculously save her from this embarrassing situation.

"Why am I here? Where are my clothes?" Reina was starting to feel mildly better about things. After all, if a girl was the one who picked her up, she shouldn't have been violated or anything like that. Right?

"Why the hurry to leave?" Reina blinked and swallowed nervously as the strange girl moved still closer to her, with a distinctly predatory look in her eyes. Reina shifted away, her bare back hitting the wall. No escape.

"We were having so much fun last night too, don't you remember?" A devilish grin was evident on the other girl's face, and Reina paled again, her throat constricting in shock.

Oh my god, I didn't, did I? Fleetingly, broken up images of this girl embracing her and carrying her to bed surfaced in her memory, and she flushed hotly at the skin to skin contact.

"You...you..." Reina was at a loss for words. Opposite her, the girl smirked.

"Maybe this will help you remember?" Swiftly, the girl dove in and captured Reina's lips with her own, Reina's cry of shock only allowing her assailant's tongue entrance into her mouth.

"Mmrgh..." Reina struggled futilely against the weight pinning her against the wall, her fingers scratching and clawing at the shoulders of the other girl. She was about to burst out in tears when she was released quite abruptly, a mischievous grin still on the stranger's face.

"Don't be so scared, you were so much cuter last night." The stranger shrugged again. "It's not really that big a deal."

Reina snapped right about then.

"How dare you say that, you pervert! It is a big deal! How could you just take advantage of someone who's drunk! You immoral, twisted, perverted asshole! I hate you! I hate you!!!"

In the heat of her outburst, Reina had lunged at the other girl, pinning her down and flailing at her with her fists. She was still so busy shaking the other girl that she failed to notice her new position until a sneaky arm snaked around behind her back and pulled her down nose to nose with her companion.

"Now this is a new position for me..." The strange girl purred, darting her tongue out to lick at a startled Reina's lips. "Feisty, aren't you?"

"PERVERT!!!" Reina screamed again, this time really digging in with her nails, all while trying to push away from the girl that held her captive.

"I have a name too, you know." Ignoring the wince of pain that came from Reina's frenzied attack, the girl flipped their positions over smoothly and pinned Reina easily down on the bed.

"You can call me Ai." Reina continued struggling against her, but Ai ignored it and kissed the young girl again, enjoying how Reina continued yelling obscenities at her through that intimate contact.

"Ease up, spitfire. It won't be all that bad." Ai pinned Reina's wrists down on either side of her head, since the constant scratching was getting annoying.

"Besides, I think you owe me for rescuing you from those drunk guys..."

"WHAT'S THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THEM AND YOU! BASTARD!" Reina yelled again, but was silenced with another kiss. Pissed off, the cat-like girl bit down hard on Ai's lip, drawing blood.

Ai let go of Reina's wrists, lifting the back of one hand to wipe at her bloody lip. She still sat firmly on Reina, straddling her such that the younger girl could not get away from her. Licking up the blood, Ai looked down with a new fire in her eyes.

"You know, you're really interesting. I think I like you even more now."

Panicked, Reina tried to cover herself with her arms while trying also to get out from under Ai. Calmly, Ai simply watched impassively for a while, studying Reina like some kind of insect under a microscope. Inexplicably, that gaze made Reina feel even more naked than she already was.

"Stop looking at me like that! Rapist!" Reina growled, trying to twist away from Ai. Suddenly, an iron grip clamped down around her neck, forcing her to look straight at Ai's suddenly darkened eyes. A tremor of fear ran through Reina, making her cower back as Ai leaned in close.

"I don't do rape." Those dark orbs seemed to deepen in intensity, making Reina shudder. "Don't make me cross that line." The grip tightened, and Reina gagged slightly, gasping for air.

Abruptly, Ai released Reina, climbing off her without a second word. Reina shivered and curled up, frightened out of her wits as she stared at Ai.

"Get out."

~*~*~

Sayumi winced as she lifted her textbooks off her desk, following the line of students filtering out of the lecture hall. Her muscles screamed with every step, and she felt hyperaware of the number of marks that a certain someone had left on her.

Which was why she felt the need to be covered up so totally today, in coat and turtleneck, as well as long pants. It would be hard to explain all the bite marks to other people.

It had only been a couple of days since Ai had peremptorily commanded her appearance, and the event had been, well, eventful to say the least.

Sayumi had fully intended to lecture Ai about what she was doing to Gaki-san, but before she could even put in two words, Ai had simply grabbed her and pretty much making short work of her clothes right there in the car. The bunny girl had rarely ever seen Ai so coldly upset about anything at all, even in their previous trysts. It was as if a demon had taken over her entirely, instead of merely possessing her.

It had been much later, when Sayu was still heaving from the unexpected exertion, that Ai had climbed off her, apologized shortly, and told her to go back. Sayu had rarely seen Ai worked up over much of anything, and this behavior had worried her.

She could have just saved herself the trouble by getting dressed and leaving the car, but some deep instinct within her had seen that Ai was brooding over something, and she just couldn't leave that alone.

Ai had not been very responsive to her questions, but seeing that Sayumi would not leave her alone that night, Ai had driven them to some nondescript motel and gotten them a room.

It was not in Ai's nature to talk about herself, much less any of her problems. Sayu instinctively knew that. Instead, she chose to express herself through other means, and Sayu currently bore the remaining marks of how Ai chose to vent her frustration.

It had been much later, in the dark, when she had been close to exhaustion and was curled up against Ai, that the other woman had started to talk, as if to herself.

"I don't like it. I didn't want to know. I shouldn't have to know." Pause. "I'm just a tool. And I have my use-by date."

Silence, then in a low tone. "People are scary. I'm only just doing my job. Just my job. I've never..." Pause. "Never mind. Forget it."

Then quietly, barely more than a whisper.

"Thank you for listening, Sayu."


Sayumi shook her head, squinting against the bright sunlight as she stepped outside. She had sensed a real emotion in Ai's voice there; a deep, dark emotion that disturbed the soul.

Takahashi Ai. Sayumi sighed. What an enigma. She could never tell if the woman was a demon or just another human being with a dark secret. Too many mysteries and contradictions surrounding this one person, like a black hole sucking in everything into the endless void within.

Ai-chan, what are you hiding?

Sayumi could only hope that she had the chance to find out.

~*~*~

"This never happened. I never saw you. We never met. Nothing happened at all."

Ai rolled her eyes, her sunglasses sitting high on her head. Sending an impish wink at Reina, she slapped the younger girl's butt playfully as the younger got off the taxi. She seemed to be completely back to her normal, flirtatious self.

Reina yelped and scowled darkly at her. Ai only blew her a kiss and pulled her sunglasses back down even as Reina slammed the door shut on her.

Turning resolutely away from the cloud of exhaust that the taxi left, Reina stomped up to the hotel where she was staying.

"Tanaka-san! Where have you been?!" The screeching voice of a harpy, better known as the teacher in charge of this school trip, resounded through the large lobby. Reina rolled her eyes as that ugly matron crowded her and bombarded her with questions.

"Just fuck off, old hag." The harpy of a teacher just gaped as Reina flipped her a finger and entered the elevator. It was far too early for lectures.

Right now, all she wanted was a good, long shower.


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And there. Congrats on wedging, dinny. XD
« Last Edit: March 17, 2009, 02:30:04 PM by Estrea »

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #287 on: March 17, 2009, 10:49:11 AM »
-DIBS-

Muahahaha

-coughs- Anyway

REINA ARC!! :cow: :muffin: :theking

Sorry, you know me and Reinai. XD But in chapter 21, gahhh, I would've cried if Reina ended up getting raped :cry: But I did find it funny how she was drunk XD Bad Reina~

As for chapter 22, man...when Reina woke up, that was amazing XD I couldn't stop laughing. But then it got all...rawr :shocked I honestly felt bad for Reina even though something in the back of my head said that Ai wouldn't do it (and thank god she didn't!!)

The whole bit with Sayu and Ai amused me a bit, because I think Ai's irritated because she always got a girl when she wanted one...and now that she can't have one, it (more or less) pisses her off to no end. XD Also, Ai has morals (!!!) she wouldn't do a girl (or anyone?) unwillingly, which is cool O0

-waves Reinai flag- I wanna know what happens next!!
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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #288 on: March 17, 2009, 10:54:16 AM »
ah...the appearance of the wonky little yankii.... :hiakhiakhiak:

Ai-chan......tsk, tsk....still the player even in hawaii..... :dizzy:

im starting to like the tanakamei......but renai...... :glasses: im still easing up with this pair....

but.....er, ai-chan.....open up with sayu a little....... :err: im still hoping she would find comfort to nii nii...... :badluck:


is ai-chan a bipolar, or something?  :wahaha:




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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #289 on: March 17, 2009, 02:14:42 PM »
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"Ahhhh! Get away from me, pervert!" Reina shrieked, chucking her pillow blindly at her assailant, who ducked smoothly with an impish grin on her face.

Belatedly, Reina noticed that aside from the over-large t-shirt that her rescuer (?) was wearing, she was apparently not wearing anything underneath.

"How dare you say that, you pervert! It is a big deal! How could you just take advantage of someone who's drunk! You immoral, twisted, perverted asshole! I hate you! I hate you!!!"

  :lol:   :w00t:   XD


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"This never happened. I never saw you. We never met. Nothing happened at all."

yeah right  XD


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"Thank you for listening, Sayu."

aww, looks like Sayu gained the trust, almost

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #290 on: March 17, 2009, 02:38:21 PM »
I could not control my laughter when reading this. XD Reina...in bed...with Ai-chan... :drool: But the whole "I don't do rape" kinda proves nothing was done, yes? Ack, seems like Sayu got nearly the same treatment as Gaki...but she's taking it much better. :D Maybe she's just used to it all by now. It seems like she's the closest to Ai-chan, the only one the girl can (sort of) confide in. But even she doesn't know what's going on in that little head. OMG Reina's a student on a school trip?!?!?!?! :w00t: The butt slap was :grin:
Glad you're back. :heart:

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #291 on: March 17, 2009, 07:56:54 PM »
Yay update! :heart: I hope things are going better in your life. Just don't disappear on us.  :cry:

XD Reinai interactions are so much fun. The image that I get in my head is a giant lion toying with a little kitten. Teasing yet can crush with one hit when ticked off. o.O *imagines a bloody mess.  Quickly wipes image from brain*

I'm more interested in Ai's little conversation with Sayu. I'm guessing Ai found out something during the Eri arc. Ai knows she's expendable and there isn't much she can do about that, but there's something there. What is Ai-chan hiding...

This is going to bother me all day. XD


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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #292 on: March 17, 2009, 09:35:33 PM »
Did I ever mention how much I love the interaction between Reina and Ai? It's a like a catfight...but better! :D Loved this chapter... Though I can't help but wonder, just what did Ai find out that was related to Kamei-san's murder that ticked her so? Hm... Oh, and poor Sayu. :sweatdrop:

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #293 on: March 17, 2009, 10:33:40 PM »
man that was fast~!
lol reina waking up to ai XD nice~ XD plus it's good to know hat ai won't go THAT far to get what she wants...
plus,good to see that she cant open herself up a tiny bit to sayu.. i wonder what she has never done?
nice to see that reina's still acting all yanki, so early in the morning XD
and WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO MY GAKI-SAN!!!!?!?! XD
keep it upX3
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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #294 on: March 18, 2009, 01:29:48 AM »
Struggling and helpless Reina... :twisted:

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"Feisty, aren't you?"

I could swear this isn't the first time I saw this word this week. Might have been something that came out of my own mouth...or rather, through a conversation of clicking of keys. :D I wonder...
ReinAi tension never ceases to amuse me...especially when you have such lol reactions coming from a freaked out Reina. That girl's got an impressive attitude. I would applaud her for the quick entrance and exit she made at the end there. Every girl in this story is...let's make a new term here: Ai whipped.

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Sending an impish wink at Reina, she slapped the younger girl's butt playfully as the younger got off the taxi. She seemed to be completely back to her normal, flirtatious self.

Reina yelped and scowled darkly at her.
Lol! *Fist bump for Ai*

Ai is but a pawn to a much bigger force that we can't see. And I guess she might have gotten a glimpse of it? I could go about wildly speculating that Ai might end up running away from a job later or something because she felt her life was threatened or something going horribly wrong. Feel free to shut me up if I'm talking too much, BTW. Not that I know anything, but I do tend to blab about whatever's on my mind. D:
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"People are scary. I'm only just doing my job. Just my job. I've never..."
So many ideas on how to end this sentence. Some more amusing than others lol.

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Dude, you're sick. I love it. XD
I know. :D



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So YOU'RE dinny. :P
Yet another one of life's mysteries is solved. :lol:

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But the whole "I don't do rape" kinda proves nothing was done, yes?
Personally, I think the only thing it proves is that no rape took place. Reina was piss drunk. Any form of consent could have taken place, especially with Ai's ability to being rather...convincing. Also, it's not rape if you yell "SURPRISE!" first. :pimp:



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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #295 on: March 18, 2009, 02:16:14 AM »
I'm loving the beginning of the Reina saga. I can only imagine what the next Reinai encounter will be like :twisted:

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #296 on: March 18, 2009, 04:42:25 AM »
Reina!  :theking now i can't wait for their next meeting.  XD

Ai and Sayu moment ... sweet. so is Sayu gonna spy on Ai?  :O hihih.

Reina is so badass.  :twothumbs

cant wait for teh next chappie!  :wub:

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #297 on: March 18, 2009, 08:40:25 AM »
Ah I'm glad you are back with an update...I hope this is a sign that things are a better now.

love Reina's encounter with Ai chan.  I'm sure the kitty cat isn't going to do any over drinking any time soon....or actually...I can see this leading to Reina being a pub, drinking away, cause she's ticked off over what happened with Ai chan.

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"I don't do rape." Those dark orbs seemed to deepen in intensity, making Reina shudder. "Don't make me cross that line." The grip tightened, and Reina gagged slightly, gasping for air.

This makes me think of the incident with Risa again.  Of course, she did give Risa a choice but the out come was just as bad.  I wonder if Ai chan ever realized that she did cross a line that time.  Or perhaps she learned a little something from that encounter.... In any case...I still consider Ai chan's divide between right and wrong to be razor thin.

so looks like Sayu's showdown with Ai chan wasn't much of a showdown at all....poor thing couldn't even get a couple of sentence in.  but from what I gathered this meeting took their relationship to a new level.  Ai chan actually opening up a little was surprising....as well as Sayu hoping to know more about Ai. 

The more I read, the more I see Ai chan feeling guilty over Eri.  I wonder if it's because she feels she somehow turned Eri into someone much like herself...or perhaps a different kind of monster. 

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #298 on: March 20, 2009, 02:49:14 AM »
File #22

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Reina was sleeping now, very comfortably indeed. The hotel bed was nice and fluffy, the sheets smooth and soft, perfect for cuddling in. Slowly, she was beginning to stir, nose scrunched up in a tiny yawn, before snuffling back facefirst into her pillow.

The feel of the sheets was very soft against her skin, and felt strangely unobstructed by the absence of any material in between. Reina made a sleepy little frown, half turning and stretching lazily in her sleep, eyelids fluttering briefly, not fully ready to open yet.
Wait a sec...Aichan stripped her nekkid before putting her to bed? :O



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*REINA FULLY WAKES UP*
Well, now she knows why one should NOT get all piss-drunk like she did the previous night. That way, you don't wake up nekkid in bed with a girl you don't remember. :yep:



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"Is this any way to greet someone who saved you from being gang-raped by a bunch of guys?" A lazy smile split the other girl's face, even as the stranger flipped her long hair over one shoulder and settled into a cross-legged position. Belatedly, Reina noticed that aside from the over-large t-shirt that her rescuer (?) was wearing, she was apparently not wearing anything underneath.
Na-na-na-na-na-naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....
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Oh my god, I didn't, did I? Fleetingly, broken up images of this girl embracing her and carrying her to bed surfaced in her memory, and she flushed hotly at the skin to skin contact.

"You...you..." Reina was at a loss for words. Opposite her, the girl smirked.

"Maybe this will help you remember?" Swiftly, the girl dove in and captured Reina's lips with her own, Reina's cry of shock only allowing her assailant's tongue entrance into her mouth.
Now, considering Reina had passed out by the time Aichan would have brought her indoors, it could be that the latter is simply teasing Reina and having a little fun watching her freak out. Then again, we don't know if Reina came to, during that time, either.  :pimp:



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"You can call me Ai." Reina continued struggling against her, but Ai ignored it and kissed the young girl again, enjoying how Reina continued yelling obscenities at her through that intimate contact.
Cursing WHILE in the middle of making out? That's a new one...I think.  :grin:



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"Stop looking at me like that! Rapist!" Reina growled, trying to twist away from Ai. Suddenly, an iron grip clamped down around her neck, forcing her to look straight at Ai's suddenly darkened eyes. A tremor of fear ran through Reina, making her cower back as Ai leaned in close.

"I don't do rape." Those dark orbs seemed to deepen in intensity, making Reina shudder. "Don't make me cross that line." The grip tightened, and Reina gagged slightly, gasping for air.

Abruptly, Ai released Reina, climbing off her without a second word. Reina shivered and curled up, frightened out of her wits as she stared at Ai.

"Get out."
Uh-oh... :shocked

Aichan's fun went a little bit too far. She has to remember that willing partners are a LOT different from UN-willing ones.



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Sayumi winced as she lifted her textbooks off her desk, following the line of students filtering out of the lecture hall. Her muscles screamed with every step, and she felt hyperaware of the number of marks that a certain someone had left on her.
Like I said...having a WILLING partner makes a huge difference.



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It had been much later, when Sayu was still heaving from the unexpected exertion, that Ai had climbed off her, apologized shortly, and told her to go back. Sayu had rarely seen Ai worked up over much of anything, and this behavior had worried her.
Aichan's not used to getting "one-upped" by anyone the way that Otosuke had done. She didn't know how to deal/cope with that feeling, and thus she lashed out...big time.



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*AICHAN'S TALK TO SAYU*
Whoa...that's the most vulnerable any of us have seen her. It's like she's let her guard down...for once...for real.



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"Tanaka-san! Where have you been?!" The screeching voice of a harpy, better known as the teacher in charge of this school trip, resounded through the large lobby. Reina rolled her eyes as that ugly matron crowded her and bombarded her with questions.

"Just fuck off, old hag." The harpy of a teacher just gaped as Reina flipped her a finger and entered the elevator. It was far too early for lectures.
Teachers in charge of school trips have a lot, and I mean a LOT, on their shoulders. Considering that Reina's been MIA for what's probably the past 8-12 hours or so, her flipping out isn't that surprising to me.  O0

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Re: Nocturne [File #22]
« Reply #299 on: March 20, 2009, 06:51:21 AM »
I gotta come clean here. I have not read this update properly yet. I only saw the words, Reina, Sayu and shower. I don't even know if they have anything to do with each other XD I will read this though... in time. I'm happy to see you writing so much though. Now go write that story I wanna read. I'm gonna bug you no end :D

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