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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 12 (26/08)
« Reply #140 on: September 12, 2009, 02:30:11 AM »
Chapter 12

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"You have GOT to be kidding me!"
 
Throwing her hands up in frustration, Sayumi glared at the small sheets of paper taped onto the doors of both elevators in lobby E.
Lift under maintenance. The management apologizes for any inconveniences caused.
Oh geez that sucks. Don't suppose they have one of those wheelchair lifts that can be attached to run along a regular stairwell? :(



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at this point, Sayumi was much too weary to undertake any additional movement. She just knew that the numbers representing Risa's apartment level had not yet flashed past her eyes.
Geez, Sayu really hoofed it all the way to Risa's to check on her! :O



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"Sayu?"
 
Twirling around when she heard her name being called, Sayumi was astounded to see the identity of the owner of the voice.
 
"What are YOU doing here?"
Aichan, right? :)



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“Did Gaki-san give you the key to her apartment?”
 
“Erm…yeah…I kinda used to drop by quite frequently.”
Well duh...best friends and what not.



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“Is this Gaki-san’s bedroom?”
 
Walking in the direction of one of the doors, Sayumi peered through the crack in between the wall and partially opened door. The scene she saw next made her let out a horrified scream. Startled by the fear evident in her voice, Ai ran over to her straight away.
 
"Oh my god!"
WHAT??? WHAT HAPPENED???

RISAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
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What happened earlier in Risa’s apartment kept replaying itself in Reina’s mind and no matter how hard she tried to block out the heartbreaking confession from her thoughts, those three words persisted in appearing.

“She will only love Ai, Reina will never stand a chance. Never...”
I guess it was too much for her to take? She just had to get out of there. :cry:



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Crawling on her hands and knees to her bag which had been thrown aside haphazardly upon entering her room, Reina dug for the box containing the one item which allowed her to forget about her troubles momentarily. Balancing a single stick between her lips, Reina lit the end of the cigarette with the orange flame atop her lighter. Then sucking in deeply, she leaned her head back against the wall to stare up at the ceiling covered with an array of dancing shadows cast by the street lamp perched outside her window.
 
Reina does not want her.
She will be erased from Reina’s mind.
Niigaki Risa will be no longer mean anything to Reina.
Awwwwwwwwwww...Reina...noooooooooooooooooooo.  :'(



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Her ankle throbbed from overexertion but Sayumi could not sit down even for a moment. She was too worried about Risa's condition. Closing her eyes and lowering her head, she muttered a silent prayer pleading for Risa’s safety. Risa couldn’t die, not when she was so young and still had her whole life ahead of her. On her part, Ai was rooted to her spot as she quietly repeated the following mantra.
 
“You have to pull through. You have to pull through...”
Two different ways of expressing it, but we all know that they're both worrying about her right now.



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“Gaki-san is she…has she?”
 
Fearful of hearing an answer which she could not bear to acknowledge, Sayumi's voice quivered as she dashed to the doctor’s side.
 
“It looks to be a case of Ulcus Pepticum but more tests would have to be carried out to ascertain it.”
WTF, Risa has an ulcer??? :o

Is that why those bottles of pills were in her room? They're her medication?



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“Gastric ulcers develop when the stomach’s lining is injured either by drugs, alcohol, tobacco or caffeine. Has the patient been waking up from acute pain in the night?
 
Unaware about the occurrence of any such episodes, Sayumi glanced at Ai for a reply. Ai's reaction constituting of a blank stare demonstrated that she didn’t know anything about this either.
 
“What about the blood? There was so much of it.”
 
Shuddering at the memory of Risa lying on sheets splattered with the crimson fluid, Sayumi pressed on, afraid that something more serious could be at play.
 
“Vomiting up blood is possible with gastrointestinal bleeding.”
Oh shit, this is BAD! Why didn't Risa say anything?!? :shocked



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Due to the hospital’s strict regulations, Ai could not remain in the A&E department if she wanted to use her cell phone. As a result, she was unable to visit Risa immediately. Exiting the compound to pick up the call, a wave of guiltiness welled up within Ai when she connected the call.
 
“Ai-chan! Have you arrived home? I was so worried when you didn’t send me a text message.”
 
“I’m sorry for not informing you Eri. I was so tired that I fell asleep as soon as I got home.”
 
The words tumbled out of her mouth in a flash and Ai only realized what she had said after Eri had accepted her explanation and ended the call with a chirpy goodbye.
So Aichan just lied to Eri and didn't tell her that she really went to see Risa, and that now she and Sayu are at the hospital with her.



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she had just lied to Eri about her whereabouts. Why had her mind done such a thing? Even though she hated to admit it, Ai had a nagging suspicion that she subconsciously been untrue to Eri all along.
 
“I lied to Eri. I lied to her for Gaki-san.”
Aichan's really got to think about things and figure out what she really wants.




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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 12 (26/08)
« Reply #141 on: September 16, 2009, 02:21:02 PM »
@rndmnwierd: I'm not better, YOU ARE! Risa should be fine. I don't think I'll be killing her off in this fic XD

@adventwriter: Are you rooting more for TakaGaki or AiEri? :P

@SBK: What does shinkokyu~u mean? :? I don't know why I'm feeling bad towards Reina and she doesn't even have it as bad as the other girls :D

@Shiichan: I don't think I'll stop calling you by this name. It somehow just fits? What do I have to do to put your brain back together? :shocked: I can't have it in pieces cuz I wanna read more of your fics.

@Sukoshi-chan:n LOL, don't worry, I won't kill Sayu...I think XD If you do come up with that list I'll definitely be reading it :D

@kRisZ: Did this chapter manage to create an impact for you? I hope it did ;)

@JFC: Yep, Risa was actually taking those pills for the pain. So nope, she wasn't thinking of killing herself :(

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 12 (26/08)
« Reply #142 on: September 22, 2009, 02:12:30 PM »
I took too long on this but it's finally done.

The trailer for Merry go Round!

[noembed]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdLZfvIXE9I[/noembed]
« Last Edit: December 14, 2009, 12:39:20 PM by lil_hamz »

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Re: Merry Go Round - Trailer (22/09)
« Reply #143 on: September 22, 2009, 04:12:11 PM »
^Isn't that song in the background one of those that you took from me? :lol:

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Re: Merry Go Round - Trailer (22/09)
« Reply #144 on: September 22, 2009, 04:29:14 PM »
I like it! Makes me wanna read a new chapter! *hint hint nudge nudge wink wink*

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Re: Merry Go Round - Trailer (22/09)
« Reply #145 on: September 22, 2009, 06:07:27 PM »
cute trailer! and that Yuna itou song really fits the scene....I can't wait for the next chapter... :love:

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Re: Merry Go Round - Trailer (22/09)
« Reply #146 on: September 23, 2009, 04:28:44 AM »
Ooo~  trailer! trailer!   :shy2:

You know I love every video you make and this is no exception  :oops:

I hope you make trailers for your other fics too~ and of course write more Merry Go Round~ ! (hehe I actually made a trailer for one of your fics before...but that's a secret no one knows about...ugh...did I type that out loud??  erm...must use smaller font! *looks away* *shifty eye* *shifty eye*)

motto Merry go Round~ hoshi~  :mon innocent:

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Re: Merry Go Round - Trailer (22/09)
« Reply #147 on: December 04, 2009, 06:39:46 PM »
@Essy: Yup yup. I really like the song :)

@rnd & cogi: I hope it's ok to call you like this. New chapter up! :D

@Sukoshi-chan: I love your trailers even more!! :wub: EHHHH?!?!? You made a trailer for my fic? Can I see? Pretty please? :P

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Merry Go Round
Chapter 13


"You're crazy."

"And you're insane."

The two girls said to each other as they sat in the backseat of a taxi headed for the Niigaki household.

"Why did you insist on getting discharged when you should be getting a thorough check-up instead?"

The taller exclaimed, somewhat annoyed that her repeated advice fell on deaf ears.

"Why take up a bed space when I already know what's wrong? The gastric is an old ailment."

"Oh yeah? Then how come none of the members knew anything about it? Not even Ai-chan."

Folding her arms across her chest, Michishige Sayumi demanded, all the time not taking her eyes off her sub-leader.

"Don't tell Ai-chan about this."

"Why?"

Although Sayumi had expected Risa to make this request, she still wanted to know the reason behind it.

"She has a lot of things to think about. I don't want to burden her more with unimportant issues."

Gazing down at her hands which were placed on her lap, the older girl explained. Her rationalization sounded logical and Sayumi would have believed it if not for a similar incident which took place about forty minutes ago.


~Flashback~

"Baka, baka, baka."

"Why are you singing Onna ni Sachi Are?"

Noticing that her eyes had slowly fluttered open, an anxious Sayumi leaned nearer to peer at the patient lying on the bed.
 
"How are you feeling?"

"I've been better."

Struggling to sit up, Risa accepted the bunny's help as her kouhai fluffed up the pillows and positioned them behind her.

"I can't believe you can still tsukkomi others in this state."

"Well, you were going on and on about Bakas."

Giving her a playful grin, Risa nudged the raven haired beauty who had come to sit on the bed beside her.

"I was referring to how stupid you were. God knows what would have happened if I didn't find you in time."

In the second she made that declaration, Sayumi realized she had forgotten to include Ai in the sentence. Ai had been there the entire time. It wasn't as it she had rescued Risa solely by herself. Just as she was about to amend her previous statement, Risa cut her off with a plead.

"Could you ask the doctor to please release me? I can't stand staying in the hospital."

Despite Sayumi's attempts to alter her decision, Risa stubbornness left Sayumi no choice but to agree. If they continued the dispute over this matter, Risa was most probably going to leave the ward and find the doctor herself. As soon as Sayumi she exited the ward, she was ambushed and yanked to a corner by Ai who had apparently been standing outside all this time.

"How is she?"

"Why don't you go in and find out? I'm sure Gaki-san would be glad to see you."

"Don't tell her I was here? Thanks Sayumi. I'll see you tomorrow."

And with that, Ai scooted off without waiting for a reply. Clearly Sayumi had now been assigned with the task of escorting home. Not that she minded since she had already intended to volunteer her services. There was no way she was leaving someone who had just been admitted into the hospital on her own. What if something happened along the way home?

~End of Flashback~


"Oi Sayumin! Stop dreaming, we're here."

Waving a hand in front of her face, Risa jolted Sayumi from her daydream before fishing out some yen to pay the cab driver.

While the duo waited for the lift, it suddenly occurred to Risa that if she was in her bedroom when she passed out from the pain, how exactly did Sayumi find her? Turning slightly to the right to face her companion, she enquired.

"Ano...Sayumin, how did you get into my house without a key?"

The question startled the limping girl for some moments before she regained her composure. It was a good thing she had managed to not blurt out the first thought that surfaced in her mind.

Ai-chan has your keys baka.

But since she couldn't reveal that fact after Ai's request, Sayumi had to find some way to wiggle out of answering that query truthfully.

"Hey! Why am I insane? Shouldn't you say I'm kind and gentle for accompanying you through the night?"

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"Ai-chan.."

She didn't expect that someone would reach the dance studio as early as she did. Hence when Ai heard her name being called, she whirled around immediately. As soon as she did, she found not only a person staring back at her, but a stalk of flower peeking out of the early arrival's hand. Flabbergasted by the pleasant surprise, Ai could only gape in shock.

"Eri.."

"I passed by the flower shop on the way here. I thought you might like it. Do you?"

The blush on her face was an obvious sign that Eri was feeling very embarrassed about her actions. So much so that she didn't dare look directly into her girlfriend's eyes.

"I love it. Thank you Eri."

Not knowing what to say in reply to Eri's touching gesture, Ai wordlessly pulled her into a tight embrace. As they stood in the middle of the empty dance studio, Ai rested her head on Eri's shoulder to hide the tears that had started to flow down her cheeks.

I must never hurt the pure and innocent you.

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The song of a Korean boy band filled the quiet room as the cell phone laying on the dresser began to vibrate. When she saw the name of the caller appear on the lit up screen, Reina contemplated several seconds about whether she should connect the line.

"Yes Sayu?"

"I'm sincerely inviting you for an all expense trip to DisneySea."

The information took some time to register itself in Reina's mind. When she finally understood the abrupt invitation, she decided to decline it.

"DisneySea? I'm sorry Sayu but that's not really my thing."

"Are you bearing a grudge against me? I didn't mean to go after you like that the last time. I think I'm really insane like what Gaki-san has said."

The mere mention of her name made Reina freeze and she almost dropped the phone she was clasping in her hand.

"I was at fault too."

"So we're good? We Rokkies are still one?"

The hopeful affirmation sounded so desperate that Reina couldn't help but laugh. Proud by nature, she couldn't bring herself to apologize for her own boorish actions. Nevertheless, she couldn't deny the fact that Sayumi was a good friend. Someone too precious to lose over a stupid argument.
  
"Definitely."

"Great! Are you sure you don't wanna come with me? It'll be fun."

Making a last ditch attempt to obtain some company for the entry tickets she already bought for the popular attraction, Sayumi tried once more to convince Reina. Unfortunately, the yankii was adamant to give the trip a miss. She wasn't really into watching parades or buying Mickey Mouse and such related merchandise.

After hanging up the phone with her fellow generation member, Reina flopped backwards onto her bed and tugged the blanket absentmindedly over herself.

"What is it going to take for me to forget her?"
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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #148 on: December 04, 2009, 08:20:16 PM »
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"Don't tell Ai-chan about this."
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"Don't tell her I was here? Thanks Sayumi. I'll see you tomorrow."

The feeling is mutual... :grin:

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"Baka, baka, baka."

"Why are you singing Onna ni Sachi Are?"

some funny punch lines in a dramatic situation.. :mon lmao:

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The song of a Korean boy band filled the quiet room as the cell phone laying on the dresser began to vibrate.
Tohoshinki...forgot the song but Reina likes them... :mon determined:

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"What is it going to take for me to forget her?"
Reina..GANBARE!!!

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #149 on: December 04, 2009, 09:26:04 PM »
Holy crap you updated!! Honestly, I had nearly forgotten about this story, so I'm glad you came back. :lol: :lol:

Ah, the flies are all caught in the tangled web. I wonder which is the spider?
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"Don't tell her I was here? Thanks Sayumi. I'll see you tomorrow."
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I must never hurt the pure and innocent you.
Could it be Ai, torn between two amazing women?

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"Don't tell Ai-chan about this."
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Giving her a playful grin, Risa nudged the raven haired beauty who had come to sit on the bed beside her.
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"What is it going to take for me to forget her?"
Or Risa, who's unwittingly caught between three?

Don't take so long to update next time, dear. I love this story.

Oh, actually, you know what I reread the other day? The Lines Are Blurred. When I read it the first time, way back when, I wasn't a big fan of the gorokkies, so it was refreshing to read it with a new set of eyes, so to speak.

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #150 on: December 05, 2009, 06:08:37 AM »
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"Don't tell Ai-chan about this."

Hmmm


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"How is she?"

"Why don't you go in and find out? I'm sure Gaki-san would be glad to see you."

"Don't tell her I was here? Thanks Sayumi. I'll see you tomorrow."

Again, hmmm


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I must never hurt the pure and innocent you.

Aww  :(


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"What is it going to take for me to forget her?"

Go to disneysea  :D

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #151 on: December 05, 2009, 10:42:59 AM »
I have a small confession to make.

When I saw mention of a taxi in the opening paragraphs, I had a minor panic attack over whether we were going to have another Hammy moment. Hehe. Look what you have done! I'll never be able to view a taxi in your story normally. lmao

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #152 on: December 05, 2009, 11:16:34 AM »
Hello~ I have a confession to make too... I read this story about a month or 2 back but had yet to comment~ was waiting for the next update to start commenting cause i did not know where to start~~ SO it's starting from now~   :kneelbow:

Forgive me? *Mega Bright Smile!*


Seriously...this story is going to be a big big drama? LOL~

As much as i love TakaGaki~ I was thinking how cute SayuGaki is too... but then again.. there is TanaGaki~.... TakaKame too..... Can i have all??? *Brighter Mega Smile* Did i forgot some1 else? I think there is still Jun and Lin~ but we dunno who they like yet rite?


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"Don't tell her I was here? Thanks Sayumi. I'll see you tomorrow."
- Looks like actually Ai-chan knows Gaki-san more than she shows it to her~

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I must never hurt the pure and innocent you.
- Doing it out of guilt will only worsen things~  :(

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"What is it going to take for me to forget her?"
-> thats the reason why she does not wanna go disney i guess~

What will happens when she finds out that Gaki-san got into the hospital when she left her unattended after all the drinking  :(


LOL~ i suddenly got this image of you.. as the operator of the Merry-Go-Round.. with an evil face.. and upping the speed of the thing to max~ Let's see who is flying out first!



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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #153 on: December 05, 2009, 02:03:56 PM »
Ai has started to realise her feelings for Risa, hasn't she? That Risa is more than just a best friend, that best friends can fall in love :O But she's afraid to affirm her feelings as she's afraid to face the issue and also to hurt Eri :cry: But she's gonna everyone in the end if she won't handle the matter delicately

No matter how she's in pain, Risa cares more for others than herself. Such an angel, is she? :wub: Wonder how Sayumin and Reina gonna take it from there XD

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #154 on: December 10, 2009, 12:17:53 PM »
@Sukoshi-chan: I love your trailers even more!! :wub: EHHHH?!?!? You made a trailer for my fic? Can I see? Pretty please? :P

hehe thank you very much :wub:  chotto hazukashii~  :mon sweat:  Time to dig around for it!  *hours later*
lol originally created June 30, 2008  XD  don't know if I'm allowed to publish it so best pm you XD

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Yay! more Merry Go Round!!!!!  :mon inluv:

hehe I had to think to myself about where we left off in the story....but then the opening paragraph reminded me right away.  Yes...you were half way to killing Gaki san off last chapter...and then you stuffed her in a taxi this chapter!  soo not for the faint at heart!   :mon scare:

This whole don't tell Ai chan, don't tell Risa thing....omg!  Sayu!  If the girl has watched any romantic dramas at all, she'd know that can't be a good thing!  That's what she gets for only watching scary-detective-mystery stuff *shakes head*  :gmon no:

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"Eri.."  I must never hurt the pure and innocent you.

*shakes fist* :grr:   A little late for that don't you think Ai chan?  *mutters something about poor innocent Eri and then looks at Hammy san*  I hope you don't hurt Eri too badly...she needs a happy ending!  I mean you owe her for GA right?   :mon whimper:  (lol the guilt tactic so isn't working, is it?  XD)




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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #155 on: December 12, 2009, 02:57:36 AM »
wow 13 in one sitting lol gomen for not reading it earlier :(

this story has a lot of different pairings and it seems not that hard to follow, its very smooth, but alot of hurt people mentally and physically, i wish that all don't get into a melee
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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 13 (05/12)
« Reply #156 on: February 05, 2010, 01:12:26 PM »
@cogi_yoshi: Isn't it funny that Risa is the Korean fan yet Reina is more into Kpop :D

@rnd: Yup, unfortunately Ai is caught between 2 amazing women. Should she be considered lucky? TLAB was pretty badly written. Not to say I've improved much since then :oops:

@kRisZ: It wasn't Reina who went to Disneysea :P

@Estrea: It's just that a taxi is easier to get involved in an accident than a train XD

@Ame: I never seem to be able to get around to writing about the 8kkies. I really should change that. I would next make the girls fly out of the MGR. Unless they were flying towards me :lol:

@badsaints: No matter what Ai does she's gonna end up hurting people. Damn, that's the worst role to play :cry:

@Sukoshi-chan: Well, Ai is trying her best to make up to Eri. I wonder if it's gonna work :?

@kuro-san: I hope you don't mind me calling you that :) Thanks for reading this and gomen for hurting so many people. I can’t help it.

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Merry Go Round
Chapter 14
 
"I don't get it. YOU invited me, why am I the one paying for everything?"

Grumbling to a beaming Sayumi as she pulled out bills from her purse and counted them before handing the money over to the cashier, Risa sighed when the victorious bunny jerked on her elbow and guided the way out of the theme restaurant.

"The senpai is supposed to pay. It's how things work!"

Not convinced by the weak evidence presented to her, Risa could only roll her eyes helplessly. There was no point arguing with her kouhai. Sayumi could be annoyingly stubborn when she wanted to be and the resigned sub-leader didn't feel up to having a long drawn argument. She'll let it slide...this time. All of a sudden, the beanheaded young woman was reminded of another stubborn lady.

~Flashback~

"But I want to do this!"

Stomping her feet childishly, the older announced, acting like a small whiny child when her actual age was far from one.

"We're already running late. We might miss the last train if we delay any longer."

Checking the time on her watch repeatedly, the more mature of the two explained, trying her best to convince her companion that they shouldn't disrupt their original plan.

"Then you can leave. I'm going up the hill. With or without you!"

And with that, she began her ascend, increasing her strides with a determined pout on her face. There was no way she could leave her on her own. What's more she was climbing some isolated hill in an unfamiliar part of the area. What if she got lost or worse, hurt when night fell? Cursing under her breath at the agency for not providing transport to the various prefectures when Morning Musume had a concert, Risa jogged to catch up with the stalking girl.

"Ai-chan wait up! I'm coming with you."

~End of flashback~

"All that just to watch the sun set."

Mumbling her thoughts out wistfully, Risa completely forgot that she wasn't with a certain monkey-like woman but was with her bunny group mate.

"Gaki-san!"

"Huh?"

Her eyes refocused back on the taller dark haired young lady standing before her who was presently waving her hands in front of her face and it was only then when Risa realized she had been daydreaming.

"Sorry. I got a little distracted."

Noting the sudden awkward atmosphere, Risa bumped Sayumi with her shoulder.

"Didn't you want me to show you the parade? Well, let's go!"

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The line of bright, dazzling floats drove leisurely down the avenue as hordes of tourists and visitors lined up neatly on the two sides in wait of the oncoming visual spectacular in awe. The delightful music, energetic dancing and colorful display enthralled all who were watching the incredible show. Not satisfied with the view she was getting as it was obstructed by several heads complete with bushy hairdos, Risa glanced to her right to see if Sayumi shared her plight. Surely enough, she was bouncing up and down, trying to rise above the annoying heads.

"Come on."

What happened in the moment immediately after was a blur to Sayumi as she allowed her sub-leader to pull her forwards, directly into the path of the oncoming procession.

"Isn't the view from this angle much better?"

I can show you the world
Shining, shimmering, splendid
Tell me, princess, now when did
You last let your heart decide?

Risa didn't wait for Sayumi to reply and she tugged her along again, this time in between two rumbling floats. One had Cinderella and her prince dancing gracefully on it while the other featured Snow White and the 7 dwarfs.

Although the float starring Aladdin had not yet arrived, Sayumi could hear its familiar tune wafting in from the distance. Tightening her grip on Sayumi's hand, Risa began weaving in and out of the numerous dancers in the parade. Many of whom had bewildered expressions on their faces at seeing a pair of young women running in between the moving floats.

I can open your eyes
Take you wonder by wonder
Over, sideways and under
On a magic carpet ride

As though their actions coincided with the song lyrics, they ducked under the low hanging portion of a random float. These magnificent twirling creations with their vibrant colors and intricate designs were fully worthy of being called wonders and being able to see them at such close range was something Sayumi never imagined herself to be doing.

Amazingly, none of the theme park’s workers caught up with them nor did anyone reprimand their behavior throughout their unbelievable experience.

A whole new world
A new fantastic point of view
No one to tell us no
Or where to go
Or say we're only dreaming

As she felt the wind blow through her hair, Sayumi smiled at sensing the millions of stars sprinkled across the night sky. Then she did something she thought she’ll never do outside of karaoke bars. She sang.

“A whole new world
A dazzling place I never knew
But when I'm way up here
It's crystal clear
that now I'm in a whole new world with… you.”

Hearing Sayumi sing so boldly, the normally level headed second oldest member of Hello! Project's flagship group joined in enthusiastically.

“Now I'm in a whole new world with you.
Unbelievable sights
Indescribable feeling
Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling
Through an endless diamond sky

When they were at the end of the line, Risa turned backwards with her hand still linked to Sayumi's. Grinning at her for a moment, she proceeded to climb on the last float, dragging the stunned younger with her.

"Gaki-san! This isn't allowed!"

Not wavering in her climb, Risa only stopped when she reached the top of the beautifully decorated craft. Spreading her free hand outwards, she motioned for Sayumi to look.

A whole new world
Don't you dare close your eyes
A hundred thousand things to see
Hold your breath - it gets better
I'm like a shooting star
I've come so far
I can't go back to where I used to be
A whole new world
Every turn a surprise
With new horizons to pursue
Every moment red-letter
I'll chase them anywhere
There's time to spare
Let me share this whole new world with you

Turning to face Risa, Sayumi snaked her arm around her college’s waist and leaned in until their bodies fitted perfectly against each other’s contours.

"A whole new world
That's where we'll be
A thrilling chase
A wondrous place
For you and me."

Sayumi finished the song on her own and when she was sure a pair of brown eyes was gazing back at her, she took the initiative to plant a kiss on those plush, enticing lips.

“Thank you for tonight Gaki-san. I‘ll never forget this.”

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*bump*

The noise created was soft. Nevertheless, Reina managed to pick up the faint thud. Pausing in the midst of packing her make-up pouch, she replaced the small bag on the spot where she had first retrieved it. Proceeding to creep quietly towards the source of the sound and then placing one hand on the handle, the yankii swung it open in one swift move.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?"

The crouching figure trembled when she heard the tremendous bellow. If there was a moment in time when she wished she could turn invisible, this was it.

"Tanaka-san...I'm searching... for my contact lens!"

"You don't wear contact lens."

Mentally smacking herself on the forehead, a habit that one of her seniors was prone to exhibiting, Aika gulped. Her current situation was definitely not good. She had been caught red handed and it appeared that she would have no way of getting out of it unless she spoke the truth. Why in the world had she not come up with a better excuse beforehand?

"Tanaka-san...I...I...Niigaki-san...."

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"Ai-chan! Thank you!"

Her eyes sparkled and shone with happiness whilst Eri clasped her hands together, gazing fondly at the arrangement laid out on the table. In spite of the candles attached to a gleaming candlestick holder placed on a fancy tablecloth, wine glasses and polished cutlery, the food prepared was simple. It was neither steak nor foie gras.

"Ummm, it's delicious!"

"It's only omelette fried rice Eri."

Ai’s original intention was to prepare a delicious meal for her deserving girlfriend who never complained when the twenty-three year old didn't have time to accompany her. Unfortunately, while she was cooking dinner, a past memory surfaced in her mind.

~Flashback~

“When are you going to teach me how to make your famous omelette rice?”

It was a lazy Saturday afternoon, one of the rare times when both leaders of the group had a day off.

“What about right now?”

“Now?”

Shifting slightly in her horizontal position of lounging next to Ai on the sofa, Risa cracked open one eye, looking up at the owner of the apartment who was currently returning her glance.

“Yes now. Get up you lazy butt!”

Rolling off the couch, Ai took the opportunity to smack Risa’s behind before pulling a mischievous face at the somewhat confused figure.

“Last one into the kitchen does the dishes!”

~End of flashback~

“Did I say something amusing?”

“Wh--at?”

“You were smiling.”

Realizing that she had allowed her thoughts to drift away from her date with Eri, Ai apologized. Her admission of guilt comprising much more than what she let on.

“I‘m really, really sorry.”

From her position across Eri at the table they were seated at, Ai stared, taking in every detail of her partner’s face. She should be thankful someone as good as Eri would want to be with her. How could she think of another woman in her presence? Especially when Risa was a good friend to both of them. None of them would emerge unscathed should she mess up this complicated state of affairs.

Before she agreed to enter a relationship with Eri, Ai never anticipated that the dynamics of Morning Musume would change so drastically. Risa no longer hung out with her and was often seen with Sayumi. She missed her. She wanted to see Risa’s smile again, to feel her breath on her skin when she stood too close and smell the sweet scent of her hair or perfume. Even Reina was acting strangely in the recent days. What was wrong with everyone?

Shaking her head to clear the chaos that had erupted inside her head, Ai sighed. There was no point is seeking the answer behind her yearning for Risa. Eri was the one she was with now and she would not, could not hurt her. Pursing her lips into a thin line, Ai declared with surprising resolve.

“Move in with me Eri. Let‘s live together.”

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 14 (10-02-05)
« Reply #157 on: February 05, 2010, 06:37:42 PM »
o__o A-Ai-chan!? That's not such a smart move, yah!? If...if something happens, this'll just be MORE heartbreaking for little Eri! D: Oh Eri... I wish she'd actually do something in this fic. :sweatdrop:

Aww at GakiShige and Ooooooh shit Aika, having Reina get you CAN'T be a good thing. @__@

Hoorah for updates! Imma try to write today too. No school, no homework... XD (Well, minus driver's ed, which I have to power through...)

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 14 (10-02-05)
« Reply #158 on: February 05, 2010, 07:49:46 PM »
As sson as I read the first line I knew it was the song,  :lol: yeah that makes a hwole lot of sense :rofl:

the Ai/Eri part though is rather chilling, but it has been a great story so far keep it up
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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 14 (10-02-05)
« Reply #159 on: February 06, 2010, 05:07:43 AM »
:D

*melts*

Indeed.... GakiShige is a Whole New World  ;)

Been such a long time since i listen to this song again... Makes me wanna head down right to the CD store to grab a piece of those Disney Classic Collections. >.<

The whole sneaking around the parade thing is just so dreamy and exciting! Reminds me some sort of a very romantic Korean-feel setting..XD I shall try that someday with someone... :)

A very lost bunny being pulled along in the dancing crowd  by a cute rebellious bean...hmmmM~ XD

I guess the bunny never knew her usual responsible sub-leader had that in her.. but i think it's great to derail from the serious life once in awhile to do something really crazy plus with someone that hesitates and tries to stop you, the more you feel like getting into trouble! XD  Anyway.. It will be something to laugh about later on~

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