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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #180 on: March 13, 2010, 06:37:28 AM »
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A dull aching was pounding at the back of my head and it was impeding my train of thought as well as making it hard to focus.
Hmmm

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I gave chase, stumbling a little in the process as a scene of white flashed past my eyes. 
Again, Hmmm

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I can finally let Ai-chan take my place, of staying by your side.
Oh Sayu

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"Don't show so much concern for me Gaki-san. Not when you aren't going to accept my feelings for you."
Can I say duh!  :roll:

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"I'm your senpai! I have a duty to take care of you!"
Go Risa  :onioncheer: let her know who's the boss  :D

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There was only ever Ai in your eyes. Maybe now there was Sayumi too.
Just maybe... lots of things happen because of maybe

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Angered at what I presumed were you throwing down the canister in response to my callous behavior, I hastened my steps and sprinted out of the exit.
Something's wrong!!!  :scared:

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Takahashi Ai will love Eri with all my heart. She will be the only person for me.
Arg  :fainted: One way relationship has a high unsuccessful rate

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"I was scared that if I had died, I would never be able to see you again."
Eri  :lol:

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"I love you, just you."
Why am I not convinced.?.  :D

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I'm finally the only one in your heart.
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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #181 on: March 13, 2010, 10:59:10 AM »
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@Hart: Are you shocked? No one is dead as of now

*sarcastic*sure.........jk  :P
Yeah, I was a little bit surprised. Sorta suspected Aika to be one of the girls to be injured.
Considering Eri's personality in this fic, I knew if Ai was close to where that damn lamp was gonna fall, Eri would definitely protect her. And I was right.  :yep:  And as always, Gaki being the mother of the group, rushes to protect Reina, even though I don't think she deserves it after what happens later on.

Ugh! You gave Gaki a concussion. Or am I wrong?  :?  This is like Black & Blue all over again.
Whatever is happening to Risa, if you weren't gonna kill her then, I KNEW she was gonna be injured severely.

Reina Baka!!!  :angry:  Don't leave her unconscious near the stairs!! You'd better pray that Sayu, one of the Pandas, or Aika will find her. Imagine what would happen if Koharu actually finds her................*shudders* On second thought, never mind.
If those deathsticks you're inhaling don't kill you, an angry bunny or dense monkey in love with an innocent turtle will. Maybe.  :D

Okay, random thoughts: Wouldn't it be really weird and awkward if we find out that LinLin has feelings for Gaki or Ai? And the only sane and reasonable member of the group is Aika? Wait. Actually I think that's a given. With all the drama that has been going on, I think she should be leader.  :lol:

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #182 on: March 13, 2010, 11:12:24 AM »
You is so ebil. Poor Risa, just trying to help Reina at her own expense. Sayu,thinking she's putting Eri in good hands.

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 15 (10-02-19)
« Reply #183 on: March 13, 2010, 11:58:44 PM »
This was so sad and nerve wracking! I was really tense reading it and ERI :( It's so sad about all the unrequited loves :cry:

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Angered at what I presumed were you throwing down the canister in response to my callous behavior, I hastened my steps and sprinted out of the exit.
I wonder if it was actually anger or if Risa did accidentally! At first I thought she might have passed out or something :(

the driver could most probably see what we were doing from the rear view mirror

I wish I was that driver >_> Wonder how he felt XD

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #184 on: March 14, 2010, 12:10:06 AM »
oohh!!! Although 7 out of 9 was hurt....no one died in the accident!!!let's celebrate!!!  :cow: :cow:
But I had a feeling...you're just saving the 'best' for last..ahahaha... anyways... gaah!!!hot session in the cab!!!! (i'm just thinking too much  XD) But I hope the driver, if he ever did see it, would just remain quiet. I mean, it would be such a...uhh..how do you call it? hmm.. my english is leaving at this moment..ahahaha..but it would be such a waste when Ai finally decided to stick with Eri and if that scandal comes out, on has to leave the group or so...anyways....It's been a long time since I read something here... and commented but your fic was one of the first five that I read..ahahahaha..XD

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #185 on: March 24, 2010, 04:57:45 AM »
Hi, I'm your new reader  :)

I enjoyed your story so much  :twothumbs
It very intriguing

I feel bad for Eri  :cry:
Hope Aichan wouldn't hurt her again  :(

I'll waiting for next chapter
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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #186 on: March 29, 2010, 08:15:40 AM »
 :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

Where has this fanfic been all my life!!!!
Or more like.... HOW COME I'M JUST NOW READING THIS??!!!?!?!!?   :mon slapself:

I just finished reading all 16 chapters in one sitting and I'm going crazy!  :frustrated:

Gaki secretly loves Ai,  :shy2:
.... but Eri wins her over.  :err:
Sayu secretly loves Eri,  but since Eri is with Ai, Sayu is devastated and turns to Gaki for comfort and kisses her in front of everyone.  :scared:
Reina gets pissed at Sayu because she secretly loves Gaki  :hehehe: and spills Sayu's love for Eri, hurting Sayu in the process.
Ai blames Gaki for the altercations and Gaki get's sad.  :pleeease: 
Ai later feels guilty about blaming her.
Reina smokes?!!?  :smoke:........ :mon wtf: 
Gaki get's wasted and Reina almost takes advantage of her :on bleed: until Gaki unconsciously confesses her love for Ai in the midst of the intimacy  :mon spit:  Reina leaves.
Sayu calls Gaki.
Gaki doesn't reply.
Sayu get's worried, calls Ai.
Ai subconsciously shows up at Gaki's apartment where she finds Sayu at Gaki's door.
Gaki is face down in a pool of her bloody vomit and is taken to the hospital.  :mon scare: :mon blood:
Ai starts to realize she has feelings for Gaki,  :on woohoo: but isn't really sure if the feelings are true.
Eri doesn't really even acknowledge Sayu's love for her.  :fainted:
There's a tiny crush building between Sayu and Gaki.  :mon scare:
Aika has a little crush on Reina. :shy2: 
Reina confesses her love to Gaki.  :stoned:
Eri realizes the feelings that Ai has towards Gaki, but vows to keep Ai and never let her go.  :imdead:
Eri saves Ai's life, Gaki saves Reina's.
Ai is determined to return the love Eri has shown her back to her. :frustrated:
Gaki tries to address Reina's wounds, but Reina doesn't want to be around her and ends up getting angry. :mon exhaust:
Sayu gives up on Eri and Gaki passes out??!!!

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I'm totally sucked into this story!!  :love:
No wonder everyone's crushing on Gaki!! She's so considerate and caring!! She worries about EVERYONE before herself no matter how sick she is or how awkward the situation is!!
She's so damn loving I'm going insane!!  :mon lovelaff:
How can Aichan NOT see that first?!!
Don't get me wrong. Eri is really REALLY sweet. But Aichan being Gaki's best friend...how could it have not happened  :mon whimper:

I'm totally look forward to the rest of the chapters!  :twothumbs

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #187 on: April 22, 2010, 10:40:02 AM »
@Kuro-san: This chapter made you feel romantic? YATTA~ I'm happy. I never feel as though I could portray that sort of feelings properly.

@Sukoshi-chan: XD What's wrong with Aika being in it? As long as she isn't romantically involved with one of the members. LOL, what's the threat you are planning for me? I wonder if I can risk putting Gaki into a coma to find out.   

@AA: How about I make Gaki slap Ai in the fic? Then we will get our wish of seeing it in the play XD   Shhh, don't give away my plan yet. Although I have not decided how I'm gonna torture her here :P

@BS: Well, the girls were in the RB formation so one of the reasons Risa dived for Reina and not Ai was because she was closer. Of course I'll make her suffer more. It's me remember? XD

@kR: Can I call you this too like AA? There are less letters to type :P EHhh? You aren't convinced that Eri is the only one in Ai's heart? Have you changed your mind after this chapter?

@Hart: Maybe subconsciously I am turning this into B&B cuz I need updates of it so badly. *indirect hint to rnd* :D What's wrong with Koha finding Gaki? And lol at your Aika being leader comment. I totally agree though.

@rnd: Strangely I feel more for Sayu than Risa. I wonder why *scratches head*

@Mkame: I wish I was that cab driver too! And the ticket seller or gift shop staff at Disneyland so I will be able to see Risa :D

@cogi-san: Awww, I'm so happy to know that mine is one of the first 5 fics that you've read. Arigatou!! I think you've just given me an idea of what could happen in the later chapters :)

@Aisacchan: Welcome!! Thanks for reading and liking my fic. I hope you will stay and read more of my stories ;)

@Swtme03: Oh my gosh! A fellow Gaki fan!! *glomps* Where have you been all my life?!?! *is being dramatic* XD That being slapped emoticon is too cute! Reminds me of what I hope to see Risa do to Ai in the Fashionable play. Well, the bean IS supposed to be a meanie in it *winks* I LOVE how you did a mini summary of this story. I think I prefer reading it to one of my own chapters :D

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Merry Go Round
Chapter 17
 
The banging of the door swinging close resonated throughout the stairwell as Reina let it slam shut behind her. In addition to the echoes, the near empty landing was filled with the painful whimpers of one Niigaki Risa. Kneeling on the steps with one hand clinging onto the metal railing running along the stairs and the other pressed up against her temple, she tried to stand up by leaning most of her weight against the cold steel.
 
After Reina had stomped off, the twenty-one year old had intended to return to the dressing room area. However, the sudden blurring of her vision by a dramatic increase in the number of floaters caused her to miss a step. The combination of spots and fragment threads casting shadows on her retina was a phenomenon that Risa had never experienced prior to today.
 
If the usually agile woman hadn't reached out to pull on the railing in time, she would have tumbled backwards and ended up at the bottom of the flight. Although she had managed to stop herself from falling, Risa couldn't prevent her grip on the bottle of antiseptic lotion from loosening and hence dropping to the ground beneath.
 
With trembling hands, the young woman shifted her hands cautiously one over the other in a painstakingly slow process to arrive at the exit before the gradual heaviness in her eyes extended to her head and took over her entire being completely.
 
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The lights in the room were turned low as Ai busied herself with filling up a basin with warm water prior to bringing it to the bed where Eri was resting.
 
"It's okay Ai-chan. you don't have to do this."
 
Disregarding the feeble protest with a wave of her hand, Ai sat down on the soft mattress and proceeded to wring dry a small hand towel. Since it was inconvenient for the turtle to shower due to the fear of wetting her wounds, the ever considerate leader had thought up this idea to clean Eri up so as to make her feel more comfortable.
 
With gentle strokes, the elder wiped carefully at the areas surrounding the cuts and made sure that the crystal clear droplets didn't seep anywhere near the open abrasions. So concentrated on her actions, she didn't notice that the rhythmic motions had lulled the weary girl into slumber. By the time she was done, Eri was deep in dreamland and wholly oblivious to the happenings around her.
 
Replacing the damp cloth onto the edge of the plastic basin, Ai once again transferred her gaze onto her dozing girlfriend. Watching her chest rise and fall with her shallow breathing, how her eyelashes fluttered whenever she shifted in her sleep and the way her tantalizing lips parted ever so slightly, Ai smiled. It was a beam which came from her heart and for the first time since a long while, she felt a genuine warmness spread throughout her body.   
 
You're like an angel, so beautiful and pure.
 
Leaning in closer till their faces were barely inches apart, Ai whispered before planting a tender kiss on those pouty lips.     
 
"I'm so thankful I didn't hurt you more than I already have."
 
The near fatal accident had jolted the young leader to realize the extent of Eri’s importance in her heart. And in this instant, she couldn’t be clearer of her feelings for the injured girl. After the mishap, Ai couldn’t be torn away from her girlfriend even when frantic staff members approached her to clarify what had transpired within those tense moments.
 
Even if Tsunku himself had appeared, Ai wouldn’t have given him the time of day. The oldest Rokkie’s wellbeing took paramount precedence over everything else and not even her concern for Risa could overshadow it. 
 
“I’ve finally figured out my feelings. I can’t lose Gaki-san, but without you, I couldn’t…and I wouldn’t want to live on.”
 
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Jun Jun watched in total awe at the female worker of the restaurant serve up an endless line of various food items. When the final dish was brought to them, the exchange student from China couldn't hold back her astonishment and exclaimed in utter surprise.
 
"Are they having a discount or something? Because this amount of food is just crazy."
 
Rubbing her hands together with anticipation as her eyes shined with delight at the spread of delicious foodstuff, the younger Chinese girl replied with a huge beam on her slightly chubby face.
 
"This is just about enough for the three of us."
 
Before she could enquire more about the identity of the mystery third person, the piercing voice of a certain miracle member preceded her entry into the cozy eatery.
 
"Kusumi-san?!"
 
"Koniichipa~!"
 
Settling comfortably into a chair, Koharu immediately picked up the wooden chopsticks placed on the table in front of her and split them apart.
 
"Itadakimasu!"
 
"Hai, itadakimasu!"
 
Staring with mouth agape at the pair tucking into the food with relish, Jun Jun could only join them in eating. Whatever questions she had about why Koharu had appeared would have to be pushed aside momentarily for now.
 
"Kusumi-san is really the lucky 7 member. If it wasn't because of your Ohastar filming, you could have become pancakes! SQUISH! Just like that!"
 
Making the action of a flattened pancake with her hands, Lin Lin deduced, her chopsticks painting patterns in the air as they never left her fingers during her little charade performance.
 
"I know! It was really lucky for me. Niigaki-san saved Tanaka-san and Kamei-san pushed Takahashi-san aside. But what about me?! I would have been a goner if I had been present since I'm right in the center for Resonant Blue!"
 
Her excessively loud voice rose above all the other patrons and Jun Jun had to fight down the urge to cover her ears with her hands.
 
Argh, why must Lin Lin invite Kusumi-san? I wanted her advice on an important issue. An issue which involved a person I have feelings for.
 
“Does anyone want to go to the washroom?”
 
The sudden question startled Jun Jun and she blinked twice in response. Assuming that the action implied a negative reply, Koharu slid out of her seat after Lin Lin shook her head.
 
“Gosh, finally I can have some peace.”
 
Propping her head up on one hand, Jun Jun heaved a relief sigh to be left alone with her compatriot. Turning to the still Hacchiki, the older took a deep breath before asking.
 
“Lin, what if…I mean hypothetically, you fell in love with a girl. Would you confess?”
 
“Uh-huh, you should totally tell Michishige-san how you feel.”
 
The mouthful of water which was in the process of travelling down the tallest member’s throat was hurled back up when she choked and sputtered into her hands, attracting the curious gazes from other patrons in the restaurant.
 
“I- - -I..never said i- -t..it was Michishige-san!”
 
“Geez Jun, I might be young and always hungry. But I know the look of love when I see it. Plus, imitation is the greatest form of adoration. And you’ve been copying her in every aspect.”
 
Staring at Lin Lin with mouth agape in amazement, Jun Jun stuttered.
 
“我的天呀!(Oh my god) Do you think anyone else in the group knows?”
 
“What does it matter as long as they don’t reveal it?”
 
Sinking back into her seat, Jun fanned at her face with her hand. All this was too much to take in the duration of one meal. If what Lin Lin said was true, then the possibility of the other members being aware of how she felt towards her senpai was very real. Would they be supportive of her if she went after the narcissistic bunny?
 
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 "Michishige-san, feel free to tell me which of the shows you want a copy of. I'll burn them for you to take home."
 
Nodding gratefully at the departing figure of her kouhai, Sayumi sat down on the roller chair and scrolled the cursor over the long list of television programs that Aika had recorded onto her PC.
 
After learning about the middle Rokkie missing yet another episode of the show she was currently chasing, the most mature member of the group known by her granny-like voice welcomed her raven haired senpai into her home and gave her free rein to the contents of her PC.
 
Since they had seven whole days of leave from the near accident, Sayumi jumped at the chance to catch up on all the viewing pleasure she had missed out on.   
 
"This, this.....this....oh and this..."
 
Engrossed in the numerous titles displayed on the screen , Sayumi clicked open the hidden window by mistake and her eyes widened in shock when she sped read through the contents of the website. The click of the doorknob announcing Aika's arrival back into her bedroom resulted in the bunny spinning around and staring at the younger with a pair of confused, twin black orbs.
 
"Where did you pick it up from? When did you start to smoke Aika?"
 
The tumbler of ice-cold tea that Aika had obtained upon Sayumi's requests fell from her hands and bounced twice on the carpeted floor before coming to a still laying on its side.
 
Realizing that her poison-tongued senpai had discovered her surfing websites on how to kick the nicotine habit, Aika stuttered an almost incoherent reply in fear.
 
"I....I'm n-ot smo--kin..g. It's no-t..not...m--e..."
 
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Konbawa..
 
Hey there!
 
Whassup

 
"ARGH!!"
 
Snapping the phone shut and pounding her fist into the back of the couch, Reina ran one hand through her hair in annoyance before shaking her head several times in an attempt to be rid of her distraught mood.
 
Why was it so damn hard to craft an innocent sounding text message to her sub-leader? She just wanted to know if the bean had recovered from her injuries and sound her out on whether they were still on good terms.
 
After all the little tantrums that she had been directing at Risa, Reina was somewhat worried that the sensible individual might finally be fed up of her obnoxious ways.
 
Unfortunately, no matter how many times she tried to write the perfect, harmless sounding mobile phone email, she couldn't. The message either sounded fake or glaringly apparent that she was trying too hard.
 
Dissatisfied with how her plan was going, Reina had half a mind to abandon her intention. Just as she was about to switch the device off and plug it into the charger for the night, the gadget rang abruptly and the repetitive melody startled her so much that the expensive cellphone model almost flew out of her hands and would have clattered noisily onto the parquet floor if she hadn't on reflex scrambled to catch it in time.
 
"Moshi-- mo...shi?"
 
In between breathless gasps, Reina greeted into the cellphone, entirely unaware of the identity of the caller. She had forgotten to look at the caller ID before connecting the line. Nevertheless, when the person spoke, the yankii immediately recognized who she was.
 
“I knew you weren't that bright but seriously, this beats everything else!"

The tone that the caller took didn't please the yankii and on instinct, she shot back indignantly.

"No one speaks to Reina like this. What the hell is wrong with you?!"

There was silence on the other end as the sound of light breathing entered the High King member's ears.

"You're right, I was too harsh. Just meet me at the café near your apartment tomorrow evening at 7. You have to turn up, or you will surely regret it.”

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 17 (10-04-22)
« Reply #188 on: April 22, 2010, 10:44:24 AM »
The Sayu part was really interesting XD

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 17 (10-04-22)
« Reply #189 on: April 22, 2010, 01:01:56 PM »
Geez, poor Risa, first the stomach thing and now this? What next? Amnesia?

Maybe I shouldn't give you ideas... Or should I? :twisted:

As for AiEri, on the one hand I'm kinda sad you seem to be straying away from my beloved Takagaki, but at the same time, I do like this pairing and I'm dying to see more TanaGakiShige.

Lol at Lin Lin's nonchalance at Jun's feelings and actually, that whole scene in general.

Oh no, will Aika spill the beans on Reina?

And speaking of the yankii, who called her?! Miki? Yossui? And what will she do when she finds out Gaki passed out? Guilty because she wasn't there to help her? Argh, I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 17 (10-04-22)
« Reply #190 on: April 22, 2010, 01:22:51 PM »
Chilli Banana Apple Strawberry CD Tissue Paper Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!!!! <- learnt this from somewhere  ;)

I think i have forgotten to comment on Chapter 16! o.O!

XD Forgiven?

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You didn't reply my second statement. Instead something fell from above and landed a few centimeters away from my feet. The contents of the bottle spilled out when the container burst open upon impact and splashed the creamy ointment in various directions.
- LOL~ I love this part the best actually.. didn't expect our well tamed.. motherly Risa to just throw the bottle out.. :P But then again.. being in that situation..I guess the limit was off chart already~ XD

I guess your story consist of the different kind of love~ haha

Ai - Got a gf but unsure of the love since her best friend was in love with her 2.. best friend and love line is just too blur :P

Risa - Unrequited Love (as always the case..poor Risa.. lol)

Reina - Want all or nothing.. stubborn (In a way)..protects herself.. Self destructive! lol~

Sayu - Direct opposite of Reina~ Looking from far is just enough type~

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"I'm so thankful I didn't hurt you more than I already have."
I guess we are all thankful too~ XD

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“我的天呀!(Oh my god) Do you think anyone else in the group knows?”

Lol.. this is very random~ BUT~ usually... I or most.. says "OH MY GOD" and the rest in chinese instead XD

I was hoping the call is from Risaaaa... but i i'm going with Sayu~ Sounds more likely... Please let them make up already~ :P

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #191 on: April 22, 2010, 03:53:30 PM »
@BS: Of course I'll make her suffer more. It's me remember? XD
OMG how on earth did I forget? :lol:

@rnd: Strangely I feel more for Sayu than Risa. I wonder why *scratches head*
Cause Sayu is hawt? Heehee Hammy gonna slap me one of these days XD


Gaki-san fainted! :shocked Gah! Stupid Reina! She and her stupid yankii pride! I do hope nothing serious will happen to the brat (aka going blind, lose her memory or contract a terminal disease :lol: What? I mean you are the writer :P) But oh shit! Sayu found out about Reina's smoking habit :O

Ooohhh Ai taking care of Eri :wub: Somehow that's so sweet. There won't be any more drama for the AiEri couple, right? *being hopeful here*
 
Whahaha Jun has a not-so-secret crush on Sayu :lol: That scene between the pandas is so cute XD

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 17 (10-04-22)
« Reply #192 on: April 24, 2010, 07:44:31 PM »
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Can I call you this too like AA? There are less letters to type :P
Oh please, go ahead  :)  You can even shorten it... like k or R :D I won't mind  :D

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and not even her concern for Risa could overshadow it. 
Hmmm

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“I’ve finally figured out my feelings. I can’t lose Gaki-san, but without you, I couldn’t…and I wouldn’t want to live on.”
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“Gosh, finally I can have some peace.”
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Unfortunately, no matter how many times she tried to write the perfect, harmless sounding mobile phone email, she couldn't. The message either sounded fake or glaringly apparent that she was trying too hard.
In times like this, can't help but feel sorry for the phone  :D

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"You're right, I was too harsh. Just meet me at the café near your apartment tomorrow evening at 7. You have to turn up, or you will surely regret it.”
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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #193 on: April 25, 2010, 12:23:11 PM »
Ahhhhh poor Gaki-san. I hope she's ok :cry:

AiEri scene is :heart: :heart: :heart: That so sweet from Aichan :wub:

As for JunLin part, it's amusing and I feel Koharu kinda left out XD
So Junjun also thrown in to the merry go round circle :twisted:
 
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Realizing that her poison-tongued senpai had discovered her surfing websites on how to kick the nicotine habit, Aika stuttered an almost incoherent reply in fear.
 
"I....I'm n-ot smo--kin..g. It's no-t..not...m--e..."
I feel sorry for Aika XD Will Sayu know about Reina smoking habit :?

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 16 (10-03-13)
« Reply #194 on: April 27, 2010, 01:12:21 AM »

@Swtme03: Oh my gosh! A fellow Gaki fan!! *glomps* Where have you been all my life?!?! *is being dramatic* XD That being slapped emoticon is too cute! Reminds me of what I hope to see Risa do to Ai in the Fashionable play. Well, the bean IS supposed to be a meanie in it *winks* I LOVE how you did a mini summary of this story. I think I prefer reading it to one of my own chapters :D


*glomps back* I've been here, waiting for you and your awesome writing  :roll: Even tho you were here first  XD

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That being slapped emoticon is too cute! Reminds me of what I hope to see Risa do to Ai in the Fashionable play. Well, the bean IS supposed to be a meanie in it *winks*

REALLY looking forward to seeing the meanie Gaki in the play :inlove: I'm also curious about the outfits, since it is called Fashinable. Wanna see Gaki in more fedoras :inlove:

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I LOVE how you did a mini summary of this story. I think I prefer reading it to one of my own chapters :D

lol I'm glad you liked it  :)

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OMG!! Did Gaki make it back to the dressing room okay??? Or is she still in the stairwell????!! SOMEONE SAVE HER!!  :panic:

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“I’ve finally figured out my feelings. I can’t lose Gaki-san, but without you, I couldn’t…and I wouldn’t want to live on.”

AICHAN!!!  :on thumbb: DON'T YOU DARE GIVE UP YOUR FEELINGS ON GAKI!!! YOU BETTER GET TO THAT STAIRWELL AND SAVE HER RIGHT NOW!!

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“Uh-huh, you should totally tell Michishige-san how you feel.”

Alright LinLin!!  :on woohoo: You tell her exactly how it is. I agree 137%!!
Go tell her right now, JunJun!! Maybe it'll make her feel better that there's someone there who wants to make her happy.  :)

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Realizing that her poison-tongued senpai had discovered her surfing websites on how to kick the nicotine habit, Aika stuttered an almost incoherent reply in fear.
 
"I....I'm n-ot smo--kin..g. It's no-t..not...m--e..."

Oh god! I almost freaked cuz I believed for a few seconds that Aika smoked too!!  :shocked
But then I remembered about Reina  XD

Speaking of Reina, who the freak called her!??! I had a couple of people in mind, but then I started thinking of a bunch of other people it could be and I ended up confusing myself so I just gave up on guessing  :roll:
BUT I NEED SOME ANSWERS!!!
I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!  :frustrated:
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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 17 (10-04-22)
« Reply #195 on: May 04, 2010, 01:06:49 PM »
Poor Jun, LinLin saw right through you, wonder if anyone else in the group knows?

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 17 (10-04-22)
« Reply #196 on: May 09, 2010, 11:57:50 AM »
lol thanks for reminding me of the threat....I recently found this shop that has a giant freezer section dedicated to nattou.  I thought of it and you during the last chapter *does evil villain anime laugh* ho ho ho  :wahaha:
now before you tell me that you like nattou, keep in mind that by the time it gets to you, it will be unfresh...not that I would tell you it's unfresh....in fact I shall say no more  :mon evillaff:

*beware of mystery packages from an unidentified sender*   :ding:

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I can’t lose Gaki-san, but without you, I couldn’t…and I wouldn’t want to live on.”

Eeeeeeeek Risa passed out and Ai chan's getting all scary thinking
You really are gonna leave Gaki san there for a week aren't you?! XD
*starts sweating*  :sweat:

and she still better not be in a coma!  I don't want to have to start calculating shipping costs!

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"Where did you pick it up from? When did you start to smoke Aika?"

lol Sayu thinks Aika's all smokey smokey?  that's a good one XD

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The tumbler of ice-cold tea that Aika had obtained upon Sayumi's requests fell from her hands and bounced twice on the carpeted floor before coming to a still laying on its side

lol you are so nice to the 8th gen.  Reina gets a bottle shattered on her but Aika's carpet doesn't even get wet XD

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"No one speaks to Reina like this. What the hell is wrong with you?!"

Hmm...I think it's Sayu calling at the end but my guesses have been so far off today  :depressed:

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 18 (10-07-25)
« Reply #197 on: July 25, 2010, 01:09:28 PM »
Is it shocking that I updated this fic? :lol:  I really wanna complete it. I hope I can *crossed fingers*
PS: I'm working on the replies to comments XD

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Merry Go Round
Chapter 18


It was past 7 pm in the evening and one would expect a quaint cafe in a part of town to be packed with office workers looking to settle their dinner. Nevertheless, it wasn't crowded in the establishment and Reina could immediately see the person she had come to meet. It wasn't difficult spotting someone with long ebony hair in a country where dyed brown hair was a popular option. Weaving her way through the cluster of tables and chairs, the scrawny individual slammed her bag down on the table and flopped into her seat, crossing her legs in a huff.

"What is it you want? And if Reina isn't convinced by the purpose of this meeting, Reina is leaving!"

Her statement was straight to the point and it was clear the proud female was anything but pleased by the prospect of their impending dialogue.

"First off, I think I should apologize for the earlier phone call. I admit I was rather harsh."

Sensing that her fellow Rokkie hadn't let down her guard from her obvious unfriendly body language, Sayumi heaved a sigh before speaking again.

"The reason I asked you out is to discuss your smoking problem."

Hearing that a third person knew about the addiction she had tried so hard to hide, a flabbergasted Reina exclaimed in disbelief.

"What the heck is this? Let's spill Reina's little secret week?!"

"What do you mean? Who else besides Aika knows about this?"

Realizing that it wasn't Risa who revealed her dependency on the nicotine stick like how she had previously thought, Reina's eyes widened and she slumped back into her chair in defeat.

"It wasn't...it wasn't Gaki-san who told you?"

Staring back at Reina in amazement, Sayumi shook her head, visibly shell-shocked. Exactly how many people in the group had already heard about this?

"Gaki-san knows?"

Resting her elbows on the table and dropping her head into them, Reina began to explain her predicament. When she had finished telling her story, the teaspoon that the bunny had used to stir her cup of tea slid from her fingers and clattered within the porcelain crockery.

"You slapped Gaki-san?? I can't believe so many things happened and you didn't tell me!"

"It's not like you announced your feelings for Eri. Reina discovered it on her own." 

Glaring at one another with neither person willing to back down, the two shot each other deadly looks until they both burst out laughing at the same time.

"We are really similar aren't we? Falling for someone who doesn't even know we exist in that way."

"Yeah..."

Agreeing to Sayumi's statement, Reina lifted her own cup and took a sip of the cool beverage to quench her thirst after speaking for such a lengthy duration.

"Why don't we hook up? I think we would make quite a pair."

The surprisingly remark caught Reina off guard and she choked on her drink, coughing violently into her hand. Accepting the paper napkin that her companion passed over, she dabbed at her mouth for a few seconds, not daring to look up into the bunny's eyes. It was only when she detected the melodious laughter of the other did she realize that the startling invitation was meant as a joke.

"In the end, the most innocent of us 3 is Reina. I would never have guessed..."

With a self deprecating smile on her face, the younger affirmed the observation.

"Reina is a fool when it comes to love."

Pausing in her speech, she rewound their previous conversation in her mind until the bit where Sayumi suggested they become a couple.

"Wait a sec, does this mean, you and Gaki-san are no longer..."

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The events in the past week kept swirling within Sayumi's mind and she couldn't help but think back to these issues, unable to believe that so many things had happened to their tightly knit group within a few months.

Ai and Eri were together, Risa and herself had fallen out of love before even getting the chance to begin a relationship with the person they felt something for. Reina had a smoking addiction and she not only confessed to Risa, but even slapped her.

"Wow...just wow..."

She didn't realize she had been talking to herself until someone's voice jolted her out of her reverie.

"What's so fascinating that you have to keep wow-ing?"

Jerking her head up in surprise when she heard the sudden question, Sayumi's jaw dropped when she saw and recognized the face of the person standing below her apartment building.

"Jun Jun? What are you doing here?"

Not replying her senpai immediately, the Chinese girl pondered her next move for a few seconds. Should she or shouldn't she come clean about what has been bugging her all this time? The revelation would undoubtedly come as a shock to Sayumi and she wondered what the kawaii girl's reaction would be.

"I have a problem and I was hoping you could help me with it."

Studying her face intently, Sayumi couldn't read her expression. Since she was the senior despite her younger age, Sayumi felt obliged to hear Jun Jun out and see if there was some way she could provide assistance. The night was chilly and it was getting late. Hence the variety idol offered her residence as the venue for their discussion.

"Why don't we go to my place? We can sit down and talk this out."

"I was hoping you would say that. The truth is, I've had this feeling ever since I entered Morning Musume."

Not exactly sure how she should respond to this statement, Sayumi cast the taller a sideways glance as they stepped side by side into the elevator that would bring them to her apartment.

"You could just give me a call. Instead of having to come all the way down."

"Some things have to be said face to face."

Her tone of voice was somewhat peculiar and Sayumi felt an unexplainable sense of dread when she thought about what Jun Jun might have to say. They continued their travel in the lift in an uncomfortable silence until the sudden action by the foreigner caused Sayumi to jump and her heart to stop beating. Jun Jun had placed a death grip on her upper arm and pulled her close.

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It wasn't clear what time in the day it was as the curtains were still drawn shut and the world outside was drenched in a solemn gray. The weather these few mornings had been unpredictable, scorching warm some days and bizarrely cold the next.

Inside a lavish apartment located in Tokyo city, two females lay side by side on the queen size bed in the master bedroom. One of them was still soundly asleep, or so the other thought. With her right arm beneath her partner such that it wound around her shoulders and came to rest on her abdomen. Her chin rested on the snoozing girl and she kissed at the top of her head gently, breathing in the sweet scent of her shampoo and taking in the natural freshness of her being.

However, the tears streaming from the corners of the elder's eyes marred this blissful image and she quaked ever so slightly from the effort of keeping her weeping quiet. She had spent the previous night making love to her girlfriend, a young lady so wonderful and pure that nothing should ever come close. Yet when she closed her eyes, all she could see was somebody else. And when they kissed, her tongue could only taste the strawberry flavoured lip gloss of another.

Why can't I stop wanting her? Why can't I stop feeling this way?

Unwittingly tightening her hold of the woman in her arms, Ai forced herself to block out every thought of her best friend from her mind. As long as she kept reminding herself that Risa didn't belong to her, she would eventually forget the feelings of affection that drove her insane whenever she noticed her with the middle Rokkie. She had to. After all, she had given Eri her word that she was the only one she loved. And that she was the person who gave her existence meaning.

I can't be so selfish to want her for myself. I already have Eri.

"I can't break my promise."

Mumbling these words to herself repeatedly, Ai slowly fell into a fitful sleep. Exhausted from staying up the entire night, she was too tired to realize that the turtle wasn't that deep in slumber and she was very much aware of the torment she was going through alone. Digging her nails further into her palms to prevent herself from sobbing audibly, Eri was overwhelmed by a stinging pain piercing her chest.

I've given you my body and my soul. Yet you've shut me out of your heart. Why can't you love me like how I love you?

Wriggling around in Ai's embrace such that she was now able to stare at the face of the woman she loved so deeply, Eri inched closer to Ai and kissed her softly on the cheek. But even in her state of rest, it was unmistakable that Ai had her reservations. It hurt Eri to see Ai in such agony and she wanted so much to be able to take away that pain. Nonetheless, she couldn't she couldn't bring herself to let Ai go.

"I'll do better. I'll work harder until you'll fall for me."

Tucking a strand of hair behind Ai's ear, Eri leaned in and nibbled tenderly.

"I'll die if I had to give you up."

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"Stop chasing me!"

"No way. I'm catching you no matter what!"

Risa had been walking down the quiet stretch of road from her home towards the nearest hospital when the joyous shrieks of children playing in the park caught her attention. Halting to stand by the edge of the playground, the twenty-two year old watched mesmerized at the pair of little girls running around the merry go round.

One was wearing shorts and the other was dressed in a frilly frock. As she observed their outfits and the manner by which she played, a memory emerged in her head and caused a small smile to tug at her lips.

~Flashback~

"Ai-chan! Stop chasing me!"

She was beginning to feel breathless from the amount of running they had been doing since arriving at the playground near Ai's home in Fukui.

"Haha, no way! This is payback for splashing me with water at the river earlier."

This was the first time Risa had been invited to go play at Ai's hometown and they had spent every minute laughing from the moment they stepped off the train from Tokyo. The elder had brought her guest to all the places she loved to roam as a child and these included the river where her sister lost her shoe, the tasty restaurant which sold her favorite Sauce Katsu and also the playground near her middle school where she spent most of her days after class.

"I can't run anymore Ai-chan."

"Then don't. Let me catch you. I won't let you go when I do."

Hearing those words made her freeze and stop in her tracks which allowed Ai to tackle her easily. The older laughed easily as they both fell to the sandy ground, with Risa becoming silent.

"It feels nice like this. Doesn't it?"

It sounded like an innocent question and it probably was when she said it. But to Risa, it held far too much meaning. Being caught in Ai's embrace, to feel her warm and comforting arms wrapped around her body made her flush. She was glad that Ai was hugging her from behind, or else the Fukui native would surely see that she was blushing. And if asked for the reason, she wouldn't be able to answer her. What could she say? That she had liked her for years? With it being the kind of affection which transcended normal friendship?

"Don't come so close to me Ai-chan. It makes it harder to not like you."

When she didn't loosen her hold around her waist, Risa rested her hands on the arms cuddling her and closed her eyes, relishing this moment where time seemed to stop. She wouldn't always have the opportunity to be held by Ai like this. For the future star of Morning Musume would one day meet a person who would sweep her off her feet and fall in love. And the bean was certain, that this person, would never be her.

~End of Flashback~

The sun had began to set, coloring the evening sky with a brilliant orangey glow. The mothers of the kids had come to pick them up, returning the park to it's original tranquil state. Maybe it was due to the storm brewing in the distance resulting in the park to be void of any other activity. Whatever the cause, Risa was glad she was alone. As she had fallen to her knees, sobbing heartbreakingly at her fate of being kept apart from the woman she loved.

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 18 (100725)
« Reply #198 on: July 25, 2010, 02:13:46 PM »
 :pleeease:  So much pain in this one! :imdead: Augh, I can't take the waiting for more chapters!

Do I sense a hint of Tanashige there? Maybe a bit of a beginning or something. And I guess Risa was okay after all? Since she's walking under her own power or is she actually in a coma and dreaming it all? And don't even get me started on poor Ai and ominous Eri!

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Re: Merry Go Round - Chapter 18 (100725)
« Reply #199 on: July 25, 2010, 10:23:31 PM »
Well more like relieved that you updated the fic  :lol:

rndmy hit it on the head on what I felt, just a lot of pain in this chapter

good job :thumbsup
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