Merry Go Round - Chapter 23 (110615)

[Sukoshi]

HA!  I'm not gonna be had this time!  I'm going to read MGR first!

Ai chan and Gaki san are untied and alone in a shack?! (with a cellphone?!)   What kind of super thugs are these?!    Hope the stupid super thugs get lost in the forest and never come back     and since the thugs have left them alone....to possibly work things out?!  I'm thinking it's closer to scenario 2  (scenario 1 is still not an option!!  )  Some part of me thought that Eri had something to do with this last chapter....(secret scenario 3)

hmm...but maybe she still does....she might just be drinking the guilt away!!   

erm...back to Ai chan and Gaki....what are they doing in the shack?!     That can't be good for Gaki's condition.  Ai chan's gonna end up putting Gaki in the hospital

and Gaki san messaged the license plate number to Eri?!  Strange choice but maybe that was the first contact name she could find on her cell   It would have been faster to send it to Sayu...Looks like she at least checks her phone and everyone else's too

[kawaii beam]

hskgc i t WHA~?! nu!!!!!! GAKI AICHAN! OMG that's like the worst place for gaki to take ur virginity! expecialy in a dirty place like that! D:

on the otherhand...poor eririn! D: and sayu^^; i'd get annoyed too with all of those waiters comming in and out with the worst excuses and i really hope that sayu understands that message! she must help save the leader and subleader! D:

kawaii wants the perv pweez~

gj

[kano-chan]

Oh My Godd!!! What are they doing??? They can't just do it in a place like that! What if the guys come back!?! Mewillkillzallofem!
Please send the pervyness right over!

[Swtme03]

umm...yeah...totally want this perv part 
My mind is running circles around this whole fic   
I anticipate the next chapter so much it's almost crazy~! 

[EriKan]

ai-chan! gaki-san! really.. in a place like that.. 
the story is not complete without gakisan's pov..
want to read it.. onegai 

[LovelyGaki]

I think I'll join in the fun and request for the pervy too.
TakaGaki love

[kano-chan]

Got the chapter~!

**Reads** ---->

The pervy wuz PERVY! Short, but hawt!

Good job!

[Swtme03]

^
uh... 
Ditto 

[EriKan]

read it..

then 
it's short but hot..

and don't worry about your writing coz i love it 

[rndmnwierd]

*brings out a plate of perv cookies* I'm so proud of you Hammies, welcome to the dark side. Short, but oh so sweet and Takagaki to boot, what's not to love. It's good, I like it. I definitely felt the sentiment behind it, too. Hopefully, we could get more of this from you now.

[YumePouk]

OMG I really can't wait to read your next chapter of Merry Go Round
Thank you for the censured part of MGR 22
it's so sweet and smexy 
that was my expressions when I read all the chapter


Yeah TakaGaki are together *the perv part*

I want to know what will happen next and what will they do????!!!!!

[Sukoshi]

Just noticed you send me some "cookies"  (sorry I didn't reply sooner....had no internet) 

Ah... I actually prefer the tamer version...but I'm an odd ball like that   but did you know what it made me want really badly?  M O R E

M G R !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   

(lol sorry, this must be some weird MGR withdrawal part 2  )

[mode107]

That karaoke scene; was it a reference to Sayu's Konusapi account of Eri's "unnecessary sexiness" due to having nothing on but a camisole (and probably panties)?

[rndmnwierd]

^What? I've really gotta start paying more attention to Sayu's radio show, she's always got something interesting to say about the others.

[mode107]

^ Yup! A while ago I read Erien's summary of Konusapi from 09-12-23

Not long ago, Eri and Sayu planned to hang out together but they had a rehearsal that day. Fortunately for them, the rehearsal ended 4 hours before the scheduled time and they had a meal together before going to karaoke. They went to the karaoke not to sing, but to eat and chat. It was humid in the room after some time. Eri took off her clothes out of a sudden, leaving her camisole on. Eri looked very sexy in that and Sayu was worried that a staff might just walk into the room to check if they needed anything so she asked Eri to put on her clothes which Eri refused, reasoning that its dark and no one would be able to see. To Sayu, the darkness added unnecessary sexiness. She managed to convince Eri to put on her (Eri's) rehearsal jersey in the end.

I can totally picture this.

[kRisZ]

She had spent the previous night making love to her girlfriend, a young lady so wonderful and pure that nothing should ever come close. Yet when she closed her eyes, all she could see was somebody else. And when they kissed, her tongue could only taste the strawberry flavoured lip gloss of another.

A hope for TakaGaki 

After all, she had given Eri her word that she was the only one she loved. And that she was the person who gave her existence meaning.

One word... misery

"I can't break my promise."

It's either break the promise and be happy or keep the promise and stay in misery. Kinda hard to decide if it was me

Nonetheless, she couldn't she couldn't bring herself to let Ai go.

Too painful yeah? But can you afford to look at her half-whole? <-- is that a word? 

"I'll do better. I'll work harder until you'll fall for me."

Hmmm

As she had fallen to her knees, sobbing heartbreakingly at her fate of being kept apart from the woman she loved.

Ouches

"Stop the car!" 





Ai saw Risa 

Even when our hands were linked, I couldn't feel your love for me.



Eri I love you but please let her go    lol

"I love you Ai-chan. There's no right or wrong when it comes to love. I'll keep on giving you my all, even if you can't return any of it."



Oh please 

It might not be a bad thing if the chest pain, the blacking out or white spots in my vision turned out to be something serious. Maybe if I died, I wouldn't be so tortured by these feelings of anguish whenever you appeared in my thoughts. Coming to this conclusion was the reason I decided against visiting the hospital earlier.

"Would you want to keep me company at a nicotine anonymous meeting?"

lol

"That stupid girl. She was only supposed to learn Japanese and how to sing and dance. Not how to fall in love... with the wrong person."

Even though you are far away...

...I wish you happiness.

I bury my love, deep within my heart.

For you can never know, how I will always love you.

Oh gosh 

“Why didn’t you tell me, Risa-chan...”

Takahashi Ai, in case you have forgotten, you are involved!

Your diary is with me. You can pick it up from my apartment - Ai

Finally  but wait too early to celebrate

Infection seemed to have begun to set in and if things got worse, she might even lose a finger or two.

OMG! The writer is so cruel! 

Let them be selfish for once, and love each other regardless of the people they might hurt in the process.

   

They focused their leery gazes on her taunt midriff, exposed by the winds lifting her top. As well as her tight butt and shapely legs hardly covered by her shorts. But most of all, they drooled at her gorgeous face made even more enticing under the moonlit night.

Squinting from where she stood, she realized to her horror that the person they were currently loading into the vehicle was Ai!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


OMG!!! please don't make those bastard touch them!

Allowing you to pull my tank top over my head, I spread my legs apart to make it easier for you to unzip my denim shorts and tug them down my legs.

AiGaki, wrong place, wrong time but perfect ummm... moment? 

The two final pieces of garments came off when you unclasped my bra and I quickly wriggled out of my panties.

There's a part of it that made me  sorry

“God, when will this end?”

   

[Bamtai]

Hey!
I'm a new reader and I have to say that this story is really amazing! I really like it how you made the relationships between the girls so complicated and yet so clear Can't wait to see how Ai-chan and Gaki will survive and what will happen to poor Eri 
Keep up with the work, you'll make me a happy person 

[dark-atrox]

this story is full of drama 

i was thinking who will end up with who.... though im definitely sure with TakaGaki couple! 

how about the neko-chan then?    or the jun panda? 

oh well, i'll leave it to you, author-san! 

[ShiroiHana]

ah, this fic is making me feel that love is equal with pain 
almost all of the character here is having a painful love life, with the exception of koha, lin, and maybe tsunku...or even the kidnapper...

i feel bad for sayu, because all that she could do is watching from a far for eri. then her line that's saying that she isnt having anyone that loves her

Eririn will never like me. No one will ever love me.

....
i feel bad for eri, because ai doesnt love her, i even doubt that ai is ever love her...she may just blurred the line between friendship and love..but, i feel like i want to shake the turtle head a little so that she could turn her head and found that a certain rabbit is continuously looking at her..
i feel bad for gaki-san because she thought that ai didnt love her even though ai means the world to her yet she cant help but to help ai..in the critical time..
i feel bad for ai because she is an idiot, she said she doesnt want to hurt eri yet she did it, she said she doesnt want to cheat yet she did it,...she is confused and i believe that she didnt mean to hurt anyone..yet no one cant be hurt if the problem has become like this...
i feel bad for reina because gaki-san only has ai in her heart. but i feel bad more because she is smoking...smoking is bad for health...>.<
i feel bad for aika because she knows reina's smoking behavior and having difficulty on thinking how to help her.
i feel bad for jun because like what sayu said, she shouldnt  fall for a wrong person
this fic isnt only a triangle love, lol..it becomes a circle with one love one yet that one person love someone else that love someone else...etc..
oh...one more thing...why are they doing that kind of thing in that sort of place? cant they...um...do it...somewhere that is more suitable and in a more comfortable situation instead...? for god sake, they are currently being kidnapped how if the kidnapper back at that place..? things will be funny if that's really happen >_<

well, for now on, i will wait on how will the story continue with huge curiosity,
ham-san ganbare~ ^o^

[lil_hamz]

Thanks for reading and liking MGR everyone! I'm sorry C23 is taking so long. Things have been somewhat crazy. But I'm working on it. And if things go well, I might have a one-shot up soon.

100000000000 apologies for not replying to comments. I'll try to do it as soon as I can? Gomenasai!

Oh and if anyone has asked for the perv part of C22 and have not gotten it yet, please let me know? I might have overlooked it.

Have a good Xmas and great New Year!