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Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 3: The First Strike]
« on: November 15, 2008, 03:43:13 PM »
I'm back! Isn't it unblelievable?
I apologise for my two month absence! School has been a complete pain in the butt V__V Basically everyone in my class is failing Science because of my teacher >_>
ANYWAYS
That's not important! What's important is this new story!
Hopefully you'll like it and maybe some of my old readers will forgive me for disappearing so suddenly :sweatdrop:
I have refound my old spark for writing and am excited for this new story :)
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Storms Never Hurt The Sky
The Calm Before The Storm



It’s already been three months since me and Eri started dating. Much to both of our relief’s no-one’s found out about us and we’ve not fought. I’m not sure how long things will stay like this though. At some point something’s going to test our relationship. Lately I’ve been thinking about me and Eri’s secret. We’ve not told any of the members yet…
It’d be hard telling them. We’re not allowed to date and everyone might not support two girls – especially their friends/workmates – dating. I kind of doubt it since a lot of the girls seem to be that way as well; all over Hello!Project.
“Gaki-san?”
I blinked at the sound of a very familiar voice.
“…Eri…” I said.
A worried look was plastered all over her face.
“Are you okay?” she asked. She was leaning forward in front of the bed, her hands on her knees. Her hair was up in a bun but her bangs were freely flowing down the side of her face.
“…Sorry. I’m fine. I was just thinking,” I replied.
“Oh? About what?”
She sat down on the bed, her vanilla shampoo scent flooding my senses with sweetness, her body less than a meter away. I turned my position on the bed so that I was facing her.
“Do you think it’s alright like this? You know… not telling the others?”
I saw a flash of understanding in her eyes. A small smile crept onto her lips.
“I guess that I’m not the only one thinking about that.” She paused. “Honestly, I feel kind of guilty. I mean, they’re our friends and they deserve to know but...I’m scared.”
“I know what you mean…”
“…Do you think that we should tell them?” Eri nervously asked.
I gently took her hands in my own and leaned forward, placing my lips on hers. Pulling back a few seconds later, I smiled victoriously at seeing the shy blush that illuminated her face.
“W-What was th-that for?”
“For being so adorable.”
She shyly glanced to the side, purposely avoiding eye-contact.
“Whatever you choose, I’ll stick by you,” I stated. I caught her lips in another sweet kiss.
“Thank-you.”


I was woken up for the umpteenth time that night by Eri tossing around. A frustrated sigh was exhaled.
“Can’t sleep? You’re like a fish out of water,” I asked.
A small squeak of surprise escaped her throat.
“Yeah, sorry… Did I wake you?” the girl apologised.
“Yes,” I confirmed, “But don’t worry, this is only the 56th time,” I teased. Eri let out a weak chuckle.
“What’s wrong?” I asked now fully awake.
“I’ve been thinking about our conversation earlier,” she explained.
“Oh, the one about telling the others?”
I turned onto my side to face her. She ran one hand through her hair, staring straight up at the ceiling.
“Yeah…”
“I still stand by what I said, you know.”
She turned to me.
“Eh?”
“No matter what you choose, I’ll stick by you. And if that means telling the others about us then I will never waver from your side,” I said.
Eri blinked a few times, her eyes sparkling through the darkness of the hotel room.
“Really?”
Really.”
I felt her arms wrap around my waist as she leapt at me. I smiled.
I’m so selfish. You keep doing things for me while I do nothing but take,” she mumbled into my chest.
I stroked her hair.
“That’s not true. You do so much for me; so much more than you can imagine. You love me; that’s more than enough.”
Silence filled the room as we continued to hug.
“Gaki-san?” You’re voice was laced with sleepiness.
“Mmm?”
“I really do love you.”
I felt my heart warm at those words.
“I know, Kame. I know. I love you too.”
I could sense you smiling. Even minutes later after you had fallen asleep, your smile was still there.
“Sweet dreams, Kame.”
I felt myself begin to drift off.
“I really do love you too.”
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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2008, 04:13:25 PM »
 :nya: I enjoyed reading that, although I'm kinda worried about the title. I take it all hells gonna break loose soon, maybe when Eri tells the others...

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2008, 05:32:17 PM »
Ack! The title worries me!!!

...But the first chapter was damn adorable. <3 :nya: And I understand 'bout school. It really does take away one's time. :(

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2008, 10:02:55 PM »
GakiKame is cuteness. Foreal, I admit it. :lol: But I'm also a bit afraid of your title. I smell angst. :P

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2008, 12:09:06 AM »
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It’s already been three months since me and Eri started dating. Much to both of our relief’s no-one’s found out about us and we’ve not fought. I’m not sure how long things will stay like this though. At some point something’s going to test our relationship.
Indeed. The important thing though will not be what it is that actually tests them, but how they react and deal with it. :yep:



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I was woken up for the umpteenth time that night by Eri tossing around. A frustrated sigh was exhaled.
“Can’t sleep? You’re like a fish out of water,” I asked.
A small squeak of surprise escaped her throat.
“Yeah, sorry… Did I wake you?” the girl apologised.
“Yes,” I confirmed, “But don’t worry, this is only the 56th time,” I teased. Eri let out a weak chuckle.
:lol:

Risa can probably find some way to "cure" Eri of her restlessness. She could always get her so tired that she just zonks out.  :twisted:



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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 09:37:29 AM »
Lemme guess, this is gonna be about GakiKame having to graduate from MM after the others find out about their relationship? I'm expecting a ton of angst and stuff. I can't wait so make sure you update often okay?

:lol: Nah, I'm kidding. I know school must be CRAZY for you to be missing from the forum so no pressure, just write when you can. Though I mean it about anticipating this :)

Oh right, if you're still interested in the Host Club KameMame fic, I've updated it so feel free to read if you are feeling stressed. Some bean x turtle power always works wonders ne~? :D

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2008, 03:14:45 PM »
kawaii~. hehehe.  :lol:
fluff~  :wub: :wub:
heart warming. haha. cnt wait for the next one~

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #7 on: November 17, 2008, 07:33:52 PM »
woooooooooooooooooooooooooah~~

KonaKaga~~ you're welcome~~ mwehehe~! omgg cant wait for the next chapteer~~

it is always GakiKamee? XDDDD i want some TanaKame~~~:$ XDDDDDDDD

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KEEP IT UP~~

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #8 on: December 07, 2008, 12:20:00 AM »
OMG, is school annoying or what? -.-;
Well, I'm back again, and that's the main thing. :)

@Lolli - I dunno if I could write the story to make it like all hell has broken loose...but I can try! XD
@ShikyoxYaiba - I know! You think "Oh, I'll write the next chapter today," but somehow that time gets eaten away by school work  :(
@strawb3rrykream - XD You little dog!
@JFC - You're just patiently waiting for that "active" chapter, aren't you?  :lol:
@lil_hamz - You'll just have to wait and see how the story goes, I'm not saying! :whistle:
@ringo-hime - Ha, thanks :wub:
@anuskyna - Well, considering that GakiKame is my shining fandom then yes, more GakiKame XD I suppose that I could try and write a TanaKame, but the main reasons I don't are that I'm not really a fan of Reina... and I don't think that I'm very good at writing her... :sweatdrop: Well, there is lots of Reina in this, so look forward to that! :)


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The Stirring


I was pleasantly woken by the sound of birds chirping and the soothing morning light pouring in through the gap in the curtains onto the bed. My arms lay out in front of me, empty. My thoughts instantly went to the girl who had been frustrated all through the night. My eyes shot open when I groped about the bed only to be met with sheets. I propped myself onto my arms. I blinked.
“Kame?”
“Na~ni?”
My gaze turned to where the sweet voice, which was equal to that of the birds, had come from. Eri was sitting on a chair leaning her head on her hands.
“Na~ni?” she again asked dragging out the first syllable.
She titled her head and smiled at me, her bangs falling to the side. I couldn’t help smiling back.
“Good-morning,” I greeted.
“Good-morning,” she replied.
“Today’s the day, huh?”
She nodded.
“Nervous?”
She nodded again.
“Turtle got your tongue?” I teased.
She stuck out her tongue.
“Oh, so you’re just slow today?”
“Hey! I am not slow!” she exclaimed.
“Oh? Let’s see!”
I leapt out of the bed and headed for her. She leaped out of the chair and dashed out of my reach. She squealed every now and again through our laughs. For it being so early in the morning we sure were being noisy. After several minutes we both collapsed onto the bed, panting and laughing. Eri turned her head to me.
“S-See… I’m not slow!”
“Ok, ok,” I panted turning my head to hers, “you’re not slow.”
Sunny mornings always seemed to be a good omen for me. We both continued to try and calm our racing hearts but it seemed to be useless. My adrenaline was getting higher and higher the closer our faces drew together. She was so close I swear that I could already feel and taste her lips…
“Oi! Will you two quieten down?! You woke me up from my precious beauty sleep!”
Me and Eri instantly froze at the sudden yelling. I let out a sigh while Eri embarrassedly retracted her face from mine with tomato red cheeks. I sat up as she went to the door. There was another loud bang.
“Hey! Hurry up and open this damn door!”
Eri unlocked the door and opened it to a rather unpleased looking Reina.
“Well it’s about time! What took you so long?! Why were you so noisy?! Any why is your face so red?!” Reina demanded.
Eri sweat dropped. I walked over to help her.
“U-Uhh, one question at a time Reina,” Eri said trying to calm down the grouchy yankii.
Reina grinded her teeth in impatience.
“Oh, good-morning Tanakacchi. I’m surprised to see you here.” I smiled. “Did you come to borrow a cup of sugar?”
A small vein popped on her forehead.
“No…I did not,” Reina replied the irritation clear in her voice. “Anyways! You still need to answer my questions!” she exclaimed pointing a finger at Eri, who instantly stiffened.
I put my hand on her back and gently began to rub her back trying to calm her. My hand seemed to have the opposite affect. Her face went even redder. I smirked to myself.
So that’s how it is,’ I commented to myself with amusement.
“So, why were you being so noisy?” Reina demanded again.
“Kame was just being all PokePokePu,” I said.
Reina blinked a couple of times before letting out an exasperated sigh.
“Whatever.” She looked at Eri. “Why is your face still so red?” she asked.
“E-E-Eh, w-well… u-u-u-umm,” Eri embarrassedly stumbled. Reina raised her eyebrows.
“She’s not feeling too well is all; I think she has the fever. Excuse us, Tanakacchi. Sorry for waking you up. We’ll see you at dance practice later,” I apologised quickly before pulling Eri back and closing the door.
“O-Oi!”
I sat Eri down on the bed. We waited before we finally heard another annoyed sigh and Reina’s footsteps growing distant.
“Honestly,” you could hear her mumble, “those two are complete idiots when they’re together.”
I let out a sigh as I heard her door open then close. I looked at Eri with an amused smile. She let out a small laugh and avoided eye contact.
“R-Reina sure looked an-angry…” she commented in a small voice.
I nodded in agreement, but not really paying attention to the question but more on her face. She finally looked up at me.
“Are you okay?” I asked gently cupping my hands around her face.
“I-I’m fi-fine,” she stammered.
“Oh, then why is your face all red? Maybe you really are ill…” I suggested. I began to lean my face in closer to hers. I saw her shiver and close her eyes.
“Mmm, your head is slightly hot,” I stated after placing our foreheads together.
Her eyes shot open, staring right into my eyes. Several moments of complete silence passed. She blinked and immediately drew away from me.
T-T-Toilet!” she shyly exclaimed before jumping off the bed and locking herself in the bathroom.
I smiled. Sure I love the out-going, silly Eri but I love the shy one just as much.
“Kame, you better not take too long in there! I want to have a shower before practice!”



I cold feel the sweat running down my face as I danced to Shabondama. My hair lashed against my face as I harshly swung side to side, my head bobbing. With a final arm throw, the song ended.
“Good job! You guys are keeping in good shape,” the dance teacher congratulated. “Kusumi-san, I want you to work on facial expressions.” Koharu nodded.
“Niigaki-san, try to control your movements a bit more, you were really into the song but be careful as to not become sloppy. Tanaka-san, watch your feet; you nearly fell.” The teacher smirked. We both smiled embarrassedly. “Michishige-san, put more power into your moves. That goes for Mitsui-san and LinLin as well. JunJun, I want you to work on the same thing as Kusumi-san.”
Both JunJun and Koharu instantly locked eyes and glared at each other. Another competition between the two was going to begin. The teacher held her head in her hand and stared at Eri. I, in turn, looked at Eri.
“And Kamei-san,” the teacher started, “work harder, your movements are all wrong. Are you paying attention to what I’m teaching you?”
Eri held her head low. I scowled at the teacher. Everyone knew that this teacher held a grudge against Eri for some reason. I could feel the hatred just piling up inside of me.
“I’m listening,” Eri weakly replied.
Then do what I tell you to! I am the teacher and YOU are the student. Don’t you dare try and act all cool by going against me!” the teacher harshly yelled. Eri visibly flinched.
“Hai, gomenasai.”
I felt stinging in palms.
“Honestly, you are completely useless,” the teacher sighed. “All right, that’s it for today, make sure you practice, I will accept no mistakes tomorrow.”
Another glare was shot at Eri before the teacher quickly gathered her things and left. I turned to Eri and saw a tear fall from her fringe-covered face. I instantly ran over to her pulled her into my arms.
“What the hell is her problem?!” Reina shouted at no-one in particular. She was obviously just as annoyed as everyone else in the room. I gently began to stroke Eri’s hair as I heard a small sob escape her lips.
“Shh, don’t cry. You did the dance perfectly, so please, don’t cry,” I whispered into her ear.
I felt her arms wrap around me. Sayumi, Reina and Ai walked over to us.
“Don’t cry Eririn, that woman has a serious problem. No matter how many times we dance to any song she always seems to find something that she doesn’t like,” Sayu said.
She hugged Eri from behind. I let go and Eri turned around to hug her best-friend.
“I swear that I’m going to punch her face in,” Reina stated, her jaw clenched.
“Reina, please refrain from doing that,” Ai-chan asked.
“But!”
“No buts. I understand your frustration, but we cannot do anything until Natsu-sensei gets back from the hospital,” Ai-chan explained.
“But can’t we just get someone else?!”
“I’m afraid not, I have already discussed the matter with Tsunku. He says that Rima-sensei just teaches us differently than what we are used to.”
“Screw him! He says ‘different’?! He doesn’t know what the hell he’s talking about!” Reina yelled.
I could feel my annoyance growing but I couldn’t lash out and take my rage out on other members.
“Calm down, Tanakacchi. We’re all just as irked as you, but if there’s nothing that we can do then we will have to put up with it,” I said trying to contain myself.
“How can you say that and be so calm?! Eri’s your friend isn’t she?!”
“I am not calm at all. Of course she’s my friend, she’s one of the most important people to me,” I took a pause, making sure to choose my words carefully, “but loosing my temper isn’t going to help.”
“But you’re not going to do anything! You’re just going to sit back and watch Eri suffer?! Some friend you are!”
I couldn’t hold it back anymore.  My palms burned even more, my fingers digging themselves into the flesh.
“Do you think I enjoy watching this?! Do you think that I want Eri to suffer?! I don’t! I CAN’T STAND IT!” I screamed. Reina glared at me.
“YOU LIAR!”
“STOP IT!”
Both me and Reina froze, and so did everyone one else. I turned to the owner of the voice.
Eri…?” Reina breathed out.
Her watery eyes struck us both.
“Stop fighting you two! Seeing you two fight is more painful!”
I turned my head away. My eyes met with Ai-chan’s. Understanding reflected in both of her eyes. Well, I suppose I should understand as well; I’m the sub-leader, I’m meant to help the problems within the group, not create them. I turned my gaze back to Eri.
“But, Eri-“ Reina began but was cut off.
“Reina,” Eri said softly, “I know that Gaki-san would never hurt me or even try. She’s not like that. I know she isn’t…,” her voice drifted off as her eyes caught mine. I felt my cheeks redden slightly. She had publically addressed me by my first name. That’s when I realised that I had done the same while fighting with Reina. It must have slipped out in my anger.
“She’s really kind and loving. She always puts other first, no matter what it is. She really understands me and helps me. She comforts me and makes me laugh when I’m sad. I couldn’t ask for a better friend.” Eri smiled at me the entire she spoke and I smiled back. I walked over to her and held her in my arms for a few moments. When I turned back around, I could feel the sensation of 7 pairs of eyes burning into me and Eri. This was it. I looked at Reina and I saw confusion in her eyes. As if she was thinking “What is Eri talking about?”.
“What are you talking about, Eri…?” Reina voiced in the silence of the room.
I felt Eri grasp my bloody hand.
“Actually, I, no, we have something to tell everyone,” Eri stated.
I tightened my hold on her hand. A few of the members seemed to have guessed what was about to be said but most remained clueless. I quickly scanned through the faces.
…Was that disgust on Koharu’s face?
I looked at Eri quickly before nodding and taking a deep breath. There’s no going back. I’ve decided. I promised. I opened my mouth and the words tumbled out.
“Me and Eri are dating.”
I swear that I heard my voice echo. I felt my hand become sweaty. I could hear Eri gulp. My knees began to wobble. The tension could be cut with a knife. Looking back at Koharu, I clearly identified the expression on her face. It was definitely disgust. The silence was broken.

“…I oppose.”
« Last Edit: December 07, 2008, 04:04:01 AM by KonaKaga »


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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #9 on: December 07, 2008, 12:59:57 AM »
:OMG: Stupid dance teacher!! (Eri's actually probably the top dancer (if not Ai-chan) in MM...in my opinion anyway.)

In a way...this almost looks like TanaKameMame. But I can't be too sure yet... And what's with Koharu...? Uh oh... And I'm curious to know who saw it coming and who didn't...

Indeed, school is horrible sometimes. I planned to have a chapter of my stuff posted some time last week, but I never got around to typing it up. (I had it written in a notebook.) I only got to it last night, and that's because it was a Friday night... ¬¬ My next oneshot, luckily, is already half written. I just need to revise and complete it... *sigh*

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #10 on: December 07, 2008, 01:16:46 AM »
Dun Dun DUN! :shock:

I think you'd stand a pretty good chance of writing it like 'all hell broke loose'. You did a mighty fine job with this chapter, which builds up to it right?!

Hmm...I wonder who's opposed to it. Maybe the dance teacher...she could've come back in?!?! Maybe she's like a little kid / high school kid and she's mean to Eri because she wubs her! *whistles* Just joshing with you :lol:

I reckon Koharu wants Eri, but she wasn't the one who spoke. It could be Reina, but I'm gonna put my cards on the table and say it was Ai - because deep down inside, I want it to be Ai :P

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #11 on: December 07, 2008, 03:46:57 AM »
WAT DA- Oh boy! this is getting better and better.
now who opposed?  :w00t:

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #12 on: December 07, 2008, 03:52:46 AM »
OMG  :pleeease: DON'T JUST FRIGGIN' LEAVE IT THERE!!!

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“What the hell is her problem?!”
I agree!! What the hell is with that dance teacher?!!? I gripped my table so damn hard while reading that part

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A few of the members seemed to have guessed what was about to be said but most remained clueless.
lol I wish you had said how many of them seemed to know..
Um... I'll guess a few... Michishige and Takahashi? and maybe Junjun? since she's like the same age as Eri and them

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Looking back at Koharu, I clearly identified the expression on her face. It was definitely disgust. The silence was broken.

“…I oppose.”
:OMG:  %$@#$#^@$!@!@%&*  What's wrong with Kusumi?! Why disgust??
Who opposed?!?! Tanakacchi?!??!
and ugh... I'm assuming this is the storm??

Dammiiiiiit!! UPDATE!!!please Don't leave it here!!  :angry1:   reading this has got me so fired up =.="

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #13 on: December 07, 2008, 08:47:44 AM »
Who the hell opposed?? I'm gonna give her a piece of my mind XD

Why does Koharu have a disgusted look? Keep that for JE guys :P Kidding. GakiKame is one of the most beautiful couples.

Okay, that teacher is kinda mean. She didn't have to yell at poor Eri like this. And what's Reina's problem with Gaki? Does she carry a touch for Eri or something? Gahhhh this is too addicting. I hope you manage to update soon.

I agree with SxY about Eri's dancing skills. Except I think she better than Ai *runs to hide from flying rotten tomatos*

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 1: The Calm Before The Storm]
« Reply #14 on: December 07, 2008, 11:41:22 AM »
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“Kame was just being all PokePokePu,” I said.
good one gaki!  the perfect answer to an infinite number of questions XD 

man the teacher seems really insecure!  I want to throw Reina at her XD

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“I swear that I’m going to punch her face in,” Reina stated, her jaw clenched.
“Reina, please refrain from doing that,” Ai-chan asked.
“But!”
“No buts. I understand your frustration, but we cannot do anything until Natsu-sensei gets back from the hospital,” Ai-chan explained.

Yes, Reina go punch her in the face! 
lol...probably unrelated but it would be funny to think the reason Natsu sensei is in the hospital is cause Reina got to attack that time XD

hehe wouldn't it be killer if someone wrote a fic about the dance instructor being chased down by 9 ticked off idols? XD

ah! I think the one opposing is Reina.  She's been the most vocal and the most worried about Eri (sans Risa of course) so logically it should be the furious kitty cat. 

Oo smart readers!  even though you just posted, everyone's already demanding an update~  Don't keep us curious too long! =D

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #15 on: December 07, 2008, 05:19:45 PM »
So adorkable at the beginning~ Pissy Reina is hella funny!!! XD Oshit, substitute dance teacher is a fucking bitch!!! :angry: I noticed that Ai-chan is the only one the teacher didn't complain about...... :lol: Figures, she's too good. Jeez, Kame isn't THAT bad. She's really good, in fact. I feel sorry for her, b/c of the scolding and the fact that she's caught between her friend and her lover. No one should have to choose like that. (On a side note, I like how Ai-chan is so leader-y and mellow. :grin: ) Koharu, disgusted?! *slaps her in the head* I'm thinking the opposing party is either Ai-chan or Reina. But it'll probably be someone else, just for the twist. :lol:

Little d-d-dog??? :P

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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #16 on: December 08, 2008, 07:19:53 AM »
The Stirring
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I was pleasantly woken by the sound of birds chirping and the soothing morning light pouring in through the gap in the curtains onto the bed.
This was just the first sentence and already I was all :wriggly:.



PISSY REINA - I'm hoping that her pissy-ness is just due to frustration at this new dance trainer they have (who, BTW, really DOES appear to have a grudge of some sort against Eri).
:scared:

As for her being clueless to the obvious signs that Risa and Eri were together...:lol:



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Looking back at Koharu, I clearly identified the expression on her face. It was definitely disgust. The silence was broken.

“…I oppose.”
First thought: Oh crap. This definitely won't make things easier over the next few days.

Second thought: definitely going to need to find out why Koharu feels the way she does. Is she oppsed to the whole concept generically, as a whole, or are there specific reasons at play here? :?


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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 2: The Stirring]
« Reply #17 on: December 08, 2008, 02:46:17 PM »
@ShikyoxYaiba - Eri is so the top dancer in MM EVER:twisted:
@Lolli - lol "Koharu wants Eri"  :lol:
@ringo-hime -  :) Hopefully this chapter makes it even better!
@KizuRai  - The beginning of your reply made me laugh...in a weird way :-X You'll have to read on and see if your guesses were right... This is only the beginning of the storm, who knows where it may go... :hehehe:
@lil_hamz - That is only one of the universal amount of reasons why I love GakiKame :wub: I think Eri is better than Ai as well... *runs away from Ai-chan fans*
@Sukoshi - lol you win this chapter's award for funniest reply!
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I want to throw Reina at her! XD
:lol:
@littledoggy - I know! That dance teacher sucks! (And I made her up....) Oh, you like your new name? :P I am your master! :twisted:
@JFC - You may find out in the following chapters... :)

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The First Strike


“Me and Eri are dating.”
I swear that I heard my voice echo. I felt my hand become sweaty. I could hear Eri gulp. My knees began to wobble. This tension could be cut with a knife. Looking back at Koharu, I clearly identified the expression on her face. It was definitely disgust. The silence was broken.

“…I oppose.”



“Eh?” I gasped.
That voice. I felt Eri’s grip suddenly strengthen. We both turned our heads to the owner of the objection. I blinked. She shook her head disapprovingly. I blinked again.
“…JunJun…? I questioned in disbelief.
“I oppose,” she repeated, but this time more firmly.
The rejection burned into me. But I was more surprised because of the person it came from. I was expecting either Reina or Koharu to speak up first… but JunJun? Mouth hanging open, I turned to my girlfriend who seemed to be in just as much shock.
“It’s completely wrong. Seeing two girls, even the idea of it, makes me feel sick,” she stated.
She glanced at me and Eri’s linked hands for a mere second and gagged. The rage… it was coming back.
Li Chun!
Everyone snapped their heads to LinLin.
“You are being rude! There is nothing wrong with them dating!”
“It’s gross! This would never be allowed in China!”
We’re not in China anymore!
Both girls glared at each other, neither giving up their argument.
No…’ I begged in my head.
“I’m against it as well,” Koharu said walking over to stand next to JunJun.
Reina walked over to the pair.
“Me too.”
“Well, I’m not,” Sayu protested. She stood next to. We locked gazes.
“Sayu…”
“I don’t care if you’re both girls; love is love, right?”
“Thank-you…,” I whispered. We both smiled to each other.
Looking at Eri, I realised that Mitsui and LinLin had joined with us.
“You guys…” Eri breathed out.
Mitsui and LinLin smiled. At least some of the members accepted us. Staring back at the opposing line, I realised that there was still one more person left to choose a side. I turned my head to Ai-chan.
Please, Ai-chan. Your choice is so important to me,’ I begged in my head.
She looked at me before looking down at the ground. She began to move. I could feel a part of my soul begin to die.
“Ai-chan!” Eri yelled.
“Gomenasai, but I cannot support you two dating,” she said. She stood next to Reina.
“You’re the leader aren’t you?! You’re meant to support our choices, right!?” Eri cried out.
Ai-chan turned her head away. Eri bit her lip. Se looked at the opposing side one more time before dashing out of the room.
“Eri!” I yelled. I began to run after her but stopped as soon as I got to the door. I sadly looked back at Ai-chan one last time.
“I thought that you of all people would support me,” I murmured, before dashing out the door with burning eyes. My best friend had rejected me.



Slowing down to catch my breath, I finally found Eri. She was huddled away in the janitor’s closet.
“Kame…”
I walked into the closet and closed the door after making sure that it would open again. Her head was buried into her knees, arms covering her face. I sat down next to her. The only noise that filled the small space was that of Eri’s sad sobs.
“Kame-“
How could she?” she asked,” how could any of them? I thought that Morning Musume was a family that would support each other through anything.”
I stared at the cracked wall. I gathered my thoughts.
“…She’s doing what’s best for the group,” I said in a hushed voice.
Her head shot up, her blood-shot eyes staring at me in disbelief.
“Gaki-san…what are you saying?”
“She just wants what’s for the best interest of the group…”
“She completely rejected us!”
“I know…I know…”
I began to raise my head when it was suddenly jerked to the side by a powerful slap. I slowly raised a hand to my burning cheek. I looked at Eri. That was the first time that she ever hit me.
“Ai-chan isn’t the only one who rejected us!” she sobbed.
“…”
“More of the members rejected us rather than accepted!”
She stopped to take several breaths.
“It’s so hard to breathe…” she said, “my heart burns.”
I threw my arms around her.
Gomenasai,” I apologised, “gomenasai, gomenasai, gomenasai.”
I shook my head, rubbing my face into her shirt, tears flowing.
“I couldn’t do anything!”
“It’s ok.”
No, it’s not!
“Gaki-san, there was nothing you could have done, it’s not your fault. I chose this; I should be the one apologising.”
“No! It’s not your fault.”
“Risa…”
“I couldn’t protect you from the pain,” I croaked. I felt her arms wrap around me.
“You always protect me. You’re the one who’s always getting hurt,” she said. “I’m sorry.”
We both looked at each other’s tear-stained faces. We let out weak laughs.
“We both look like train wrecks,” she teased.
I nodded in agreement. We smiled at each other before slowly locking lips. It tasted salty from all of the tears but the sweetness of her innocence was much greater. We separated lips for a second before rejoining them. We finally separated after a couple of minutes.
“Eri,” I said, “I can get through this if I’m with you and only you. So, please, don’t leave me…
“I felt Eri press her lips onto mine.
“I would never even think of it.”
We kissed again. Suddenly the door opened.
“Eri? Niigaki-san? Where ar-“ Sayu stopped mid-sentence.
Me and Eri broke apart. A huge grin crept onto her face.
“Uhuhu, let me guess; Eri’s fetish?


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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 3: The First Strike]
« Reply #18 on: December 08, 2008, 03:16:38 PM »
:OMG: AICHAN JUNIUN HOW COULD YOU?! *wails* Aichan because it's Aichan, I understand... But I thought Junjun may have accepted it since she seems fairly close to Eri. Although at the same time that gives a basis to oppose...

Gah. T__T Poor Eri and Risa. ...Way to break the mood, Sayu. XD Im glad that she supports Eri though. :)

EDIT: There we go...now I have an actual computer to type on. XD  I was commenting by iTouch earlier. Now I can talk more...

I just noticed that this kinda reminds me of the whole prop 8 thing that went on a little while ago (elections, politics, blah blah). Basically if gay marriage is allowed or not in CA. But anyway, the main point is that the younger people supported gays/gay marriage and the adults (who're more traditional) didn't.  And look at the situation... We've got Linlin, Mittsi, and Sayu on one side and Ai-chan, Junjun, Reina, and Koharu on the other. Young vs. Old. ('Cept Koharu isn't that old.) Gah, class is over. Bye~
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Re: Storms Never Hurt The Sky [Chapter 3: The First Strike]
« Reply #19 on: December 08, 2008, 04:18:05 PM »
OHH YEA! :D

osam! lotsa people object it!!!..nyahaha..

LOL Eri's fetish! XD  :P XD

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