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“Leave me like this and we’re through!” her piercing voice echoed in my memories. After that, my whole world faded into darkness.

“Please! Don’t leave me!” her arms wrapped around my waist, I could feel her lips quiver as she rested her head at the nape of my neck. Her fresh hot tears, “Please…” she begged.

I felt anger boil inside of me, and the next thing I knew…. She was there at the bottom of the stairs.

 I was shocked, “that  wasn’t supposed to happen” I thought to myself, my legs were shaking as I make my way down, I wanted to run… but I couldn’t. As I took the last step of the stair, a hand grabbed my ankle.  “Ren-chan…” I kicked off and ran. The dark corridors where never ending. I could feel my cold sweat running down my spine as I ran from corner to corner. Her voice was haunting me, saying my name like a mantra… As I reached my last corner I saw the door. I griped at the knob, but my hand kept slipping, then I heard a voice calling out for me…it was on the other side of the door, “Reina!Reina!” I held unto the door knob, sobbing.

“Reina! Oi. Wake up…” there was a hand slapping my face, “oi, cut it out…you’re crying..” the hand stopped the slapping and caressed my cheeks instead.

“Uhnn..” I groaned as I opened my eyes, the lights were bright.

“You okay? It’s me Sayu, you know the cutest girl in the world. Well, soon to be sexiest.” She smiled at me, placing a light kiss on my forehead

“Sayu? Wh-what are you-“ I got cut off by her sudden death hug.

“Don’t you remember? We spent the night together…” She lightly bit my ear making me blush.

What?! Spent the night? Seriously? Wait…this can’t be happening.

“Hahaha, seriously Reina…you think I’d spend a night with you?” Sayu pinched my nose and got off my bed.

“You evil bunny..” I mumbled, I sat up and rubbed my eyes

“Here you go..” she gave me a glass of water and sat on the carpeted floor as she leaned on the bed frame.

“Wow, thanks. I needed that.” I placed the glass of water on the floor.

“So, you were having that nightmare again?” she asked shyly, as if scared of me.

“Hn. Yea.” I looked at the empty vase sitting on the porch outside my balcony, trying to erase the memories that kept haunting my sleep.

A  minute of silence passed by, “Sayu..” I whispered.

“Yea?” she answered, still focusing on the cartoon show that was hilariously stupid.

“Why…am I always having that dream? Why not our happy moments?” I choked on my own words, as fresh hot tears rolled down my cheeks.

Sayu just kept watching tv, but I know her mind is racing with questions, similar to the ones I asked. I love Sayu, cause even if I was the reason why her bestfriend died.. NO, her first love. As those words echoed im my mind… I could feel my heart ache in pain. But I can’t be like this. Not when she’s around.

“She’s haunting us…” Sayu bit down her lip.

“I can’t stop but hate myself..”  I looked at my scars on my wrist. The scars that carry my pain and sorrow.

“But I don’t think, she’ll like that..she wants you to be strong….” Sayu changed the channel, she didn’t dare look at my face.

“I know…but it’s hard. Too hard for me.. she was all that I needed.” I know my words had hurt her, but she didn’t show even the slightest sign of it.

“When she decided to break up with me…she had a smile on her face, I felt angry. But for a moment as she held my hand and apologized, I saw in her eyes. Then I realized, that…I wasn’t the only one hurt here..she was hurt too….my anger…it vanished just like that..” Sayu had a hoarse voice, she wiped her tears away.

“She loved me..but she loved you more. You were much precious.” She took my wrist and kissed my scars.
“So never hurt yourself anymore….” She let go of me and turned back to her tv.

She left me speechless, she knew more about her. She understood her more. She took care of her more. I felt like a jerk.

“Sayu…I’m sorry.” I know we’ve had this talk for a million times. But now, I know why.

Why it was always that dream..why do we always talk about her death. Why.

Our broken hearts shivered in the dark, missing the same warmth that both of us had once owned. Our souls, won’t just let go of her that easily, even as its beating started to slow down. We never let go, we held on to that little piece of memory that burst our hearts open. The little memory that she gave us, the last time she held me. The last time she told me she loves me. The last time she kissed me. The last time saw her…crying face.

I hugged Sayu from behind, burying my face at the nape of her neck.

“Sayu, I love her so much. But why? Why did I do that to her?” I cried.

“She loves you too, Reina…” Sayu patted my head.

Daisuki yo…” I whispered.

Zutto..” I heard Sayu say as she cried with me, for the first time.

Takahashi Ai.” Our voices blended. The pain, sorrow, sadness. Everything.

Ai..are you watching over us?

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not that way i planned it to be.
but i hope you liked it.  :)
« Last Edit: March 28, 2009, 03:55:05 PM by ringo-hime »

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2009, 11:01:15 PM »
OMG  :shocked
Poor Ai ;__; Why Reina? I know its not Your fault but why? *ReinAi fan*
At first I thought it was Eri... till they said Ai-chan name...
Sayu evil bunny XD
Love it x33

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2009, 12:13:22 AM »
ahhh great one-shot! I love it! :D You did a great job. I thought it was Eri at first and I went "NOOO!" cuz Eri's my favorite and since most fics that have members dying is Eri. lol but it was Ai instead and I like that. It adds a twist. Poor Ai! =( It's so good. I hope you write more some time.

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2009, 01:36:27 AM »
Awww... ;_; At first I thought it was Eri, too... Until my peripheral vision caught "Ai" when I scrolled down. :sweatdrop: It was a sad twitst... I wish I knew what had happened.

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2009, 02:32:15 AM »
Wow...that was a really good and intresting twist.
Poor Ai. :sob:

Good job Ringo! :D

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #5 on: March 19, 2009, 03:39:23 AM »
:mon wtf: :mon wtf: :mon wtf:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #6 on: March 19, 2009, 01:34:17 PM »
 :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: ahem.... :prayers:




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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2009, 03:46:25 PM »
I thought it was Eri  :grin:

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #8 on: March 19, 2009, 04:21:34 PM »
@ Mikoto. sorry, i just had to. im a RenAI fan too. and i don't wanna kill off Kamei-cham like that. not that i wanna kill Ai. but it has always been Eri!!!  :cry:
@ writer. hehe. watashi mo! i dont wanna kill Eri!!!  :banghead: i'll do my best(?)
@ Shi. ahhh, im kinda working on it. on wat really happened. i shall do my bst.\
@Hotaru. thanks for reading.wish it aint too sad. >;p
@JFC. nyahaha. too shocking? X3
@ ayase. thanks for reading. :D
@ kRisZ. ahaha. i avoid writing about Kamei-cham dying. <-< , i mean why does she always have to dieeeeeee.  :cry:

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #9 on: March 19, 2009, 10:35:22 PM »
@ringo-hime: well I dont want Eri-chan to be kill too ;___; I dont want any of my favorite members to be killed we shall kill Tsunku x33 or maybe not kill any member and we should live happy  :) *LOL*
I will be watching you~ *again LOL*
write soon x3

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2009, 03:37:11 AM »
Wow, count me in on the "I thought it was Eri" XD But I liked it. The end was so touching, when they said her name together~ :wub:

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #11 on: March 20, 2009, 08:11:24 AM »
ah. i was writing last night. though i played left4dead and got hooked.  XD
maybe im gonna finish it this weekend.  :cow:

i think theres gonna be:
Ai POV
Sayu POV
and MAYBE: the scary ver. maybe...

@strawb3rrykream . ah thanks for reading. XD , no more Kamei death! thanks for liking it.

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #12 on: March 20, 2009, 02:02:28 PM »
yay scary version  :muffin: *waits at the corner with some Popsicle, want some?  :grin: *

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #13 on: March 20, 2009, 10:27:47 PM »
The beginning kinda reminded me of Wishing Stairs :P
The story was good...kinda creepy knowing that Ai is haunting them.  :sweatdrop:
 :lol: Thought it was Eri, too (Sayu+Eri =  :inlove:)

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #14 on: March 22, 2009, 03:59:22 AM »
@ Number3. haha. that was my inspi. XD you caught me there! well thanks for liking it!  :twothumbs

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [One shot]
« Reply #15 on: March 22, 2009, 07:29:55 AM »
 :muffin: I was waiting for someone to write a story on that. The movie series was good, although I couldn't go anywhere alone for a month  :sweatdrop:
Anyways, continue writing!  :twothumbs

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« Reply #16 on: March 22, 2009, 10:53:34 AM »
[Ai POV]

“Hey, I have a surprise…” she was holding something behind her.

“This better be worth it Re-,“ before I could even finish my sentence, she showed me tickets for a concert of my favorite band. I jumped for joy and gave her a death hug, “Ren-chan~ you’re the best!!!”.

I was about to say yes, but I remembered that we had choir practice the day of the concert.

“Ren-chan…we have practices on the same day..” I was worried about missing a single practice, I Takahashi Ai never missed a practice. Not unless, it’s me getting sick or something.

“Easy. Let’s ditch it.” She gave me a “DUH” look.

“But! Sensei might get angry at us, remember the last time you ditched practice?” looking at the tickets, I know she had a hard time buying this…tickets we’re sold out yesterday.

I wanted to go, but I can’t miss a practice.

Ren-chan and osam concert…or…Choir practice and boring teacher?

“Ai-chan! Come on! That’s gonna be tomorrow so make up your mind..” Reina sighed sitting beside me, she played with my hair as I was deep in thought to go or not to go.

“Fine, I’ll go.” I made up my mind, I know I’ll be in trouble.

“Yay~Ai-chan I love you!” Reina hugged me, giving me goosbumps.

“Skipping practice?! And I thought you were serious about singing…” Sensei sighed in frustration, gripping on her baton. And any moment , I would feel the stick striking my face.

I closed my eyes and waited. I heard the sound of it hit flesh but I didn’t feel any sting. I peeked, and there Reina stood. Taking the hit for me…

“Sensei, it was my idea, I forced her. Sorry.”  She bowed. I didn’t dare look at sensei, but I heared her sigh and dismissed the meeting.

Reina held my hand and squeezed it, reassuring me that everything’s gonna be fine.

I looked at her, her right cheek was red and a small cut on her lower lip.

“Ren-chan! You’re bleeding!” I reached for my pocket, but there was no hanky. I started to panic.

“Hey, relax. It’s not a big deal.” Reina licked her lip, she grinned at me and the blood came back.

“Here, let me do it for you…” I leaned in and sucked at her lower lip, I didn’t know why I did it. I just did. I wanted to. I needed to.

My first kiss, bloody. It felt so right. She wrapped my arms around her neck as she used me as her support. I know, her legs felt like it became all jelly. Cause mine is..right now.
 
 Amazingly I am still able to hold her up.

After that, I walked her to the school’s dorm. My mom won’t let me stay at the dorm. I hate her, I would’ve been roommate with Ren-chan. I pouted for not being able to room with her but smiled at the thought of us rooming together.

“So..it’s almost you’re birthday.” She smiled at me as we arrived the main gate.

“Yea?” I looked at the sky, daydreaming.

“What do you want?” she too looked at the sky, wondering.

“You. You’re the only one I need.” I looked at her, with my fullest sincerity.

She looked and I met her confused orbs, as if telling me to explain. There’s no need for explanations. She’s the only one I need and want. Without her I’m nothing. I know it’s cliché, but there’s nothing I can do about it.

“Ahehehe.” She laughed looking away.

She’s so cute, trying to hide that little blush on her cheeks.

*Cellphone rings*

“Ka-san?” Pause, “Hai..” Nods, “Yes, I’m coming” frown, “ Fine, love you too..bye.” I pocketed my phone and looked back at Ren-chan.

“Another ‘Family’ dinner?” she smirked, I nodded, she ruffled my hair.

“Oh well, I’ll just text you when I get real bored..maybe call you.” I smiled and planted a small kiss on her cheek.

“Bye.” She waved at me. I walked to the highway and took a cab. I can’t wait till tomorrow, another day with Reina.

The next day was a breeze, met up with Reina, ate lunch together and finally….Choir practice.

“Ai! I have good news for you!” Sayu ran towards me with her mega-watt smile.

“Uhm, what is it?” I raised an eyebrow, I was curious to what good news she brought.

“You got the part!” she squealed locking me around her arms.

“Sayu…I can’t breathe..” I weezed out.

“AH, gomen ne.. I’m just happy for you.” She let go of me and kissed my cheek.

Opps. Somehow, even if we already broke up. She never fails to make my stomach flip whenever she does that. She’s so cute, like a little sister.

“You’re so cute Sayu..” I pinched her silky white cheeks.

“I know that~” she winked and went back to her group of friends.

“Thanks..for everything.”I smiled at her, as she happily talk to her friends.

So the usual practice went on. But something was off, oohhh! Ren-chan! She seems really down.

I wonder why.

“Ren-chan..you ok?” she shook my hand off from her shoulder.

“It’s nothing I just feel a little sick…” she took her stuffand proceeded to our locker room.

“Well, want me to escourt you to the clinic?” I offered as I fixed my messy locker.

“No.” her reply was fast.

“Are..you sure? I mean, it’s just..I really..” I was lost in my thought, I don’t know what to say to her.

No! Don’t you understand? I said NO!” she screamed at me, clutching her bag real tight, as if trying to stop herself from punching the big mirror on the wall.

I looked at her, her face red from anger and eyes puffy from…crying? Is she really ok? Did anything happen? Family? Friends? Boyfriend? Why is she crying?

“Reina..I..” before I could even finish my sentence she ran off. And that was the last time I ever saw her face, before our story came to an end. But I can’t accept it. What did I do wrong? Why did she leave me? I promised myself to love her forever, and she knows that. But why?

We’ll be together forever.

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crap-0. i wish this is good enough.

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [NOT so One shot-tie] (Ai POV Update)
« Reply #17 on: March 22, 2009, 02:13:26 PM »
aww the beginning was so cute. But the end made me worry! Is there going to be another part where we get to see what's up with Reina? This is turning out great. I don't think it's crappy. =) It makes me want to know more about what's going on or going to happen. Keep it up.

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [NOT so One shot-tie] (Ai POV Update)
« Reply #18 on: March 22, 2009, 04:47:35 PM »
LOL at naughty Reina getting Ai-chan to cut choir. XD And willing to take a hit for her~~ :inlove: But now, what's wrong?!?! :(

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Re: Are You Watching Over Us? [NOT so One shot-tie] (Ai POV Update)
« Reply #19 on: March 23, 2009, 06:24:35 AM »
Awww Reina taking that hit for Ai. It was sweet and very Reina. Nope, I'm not advertising her PB here XD

A Reina-Sayu-Ai triangle eh?? :huhuh This is so amazing on so many levels. I can't wait to see what happened between them. Looks like Reina will have a difficult choice to make. I mean before Ai actually...dies...*breathes out*

The Ai POV was great, I can't wait for Sayu's but the one that keeps me in suspense the most is the SCARY version. I bet we'll find out everything from that update. And princess, this was good enough. It was definitely good enough. Arigatou gozaimasu for writing again. I missed reading your works.

Now if only SBK will start writing again too. Then it'll be perfect :)

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