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The Gatekeeper [CLOSED]
« on: June 06, 2009, 09:38:40 PM »
Title: The Gatekeeper
 
Notes:This is just written for fun. It will go no longer than 10 to 20 chapters. And want to make this anime like as possible.

CHAPTER 1


“Mom, I'm home!”

The sound of my high voice echoes through the large mansion halls and I make my way through the foyer with numerous amounts of shopping bags. Another hard day of clothes shopping and I even got myself some nice shoes and a new phone. You know, all that normal girl stuff that I do. Just what I needed to save myself from boredom. Being in a three story house can get really boring fast. And all my friends I normally spend my evening with had something important to do. My mother didn't want me to travel out of Japan for some reason. She says I'm too spoiled. That is so not true! I don't think having everything you ask for means I'm spoiled. It just means I'm more fortunate than normal kids around here. Besides, what's the point of having your own plane if you can't ride it? I just got it last month. It's all pink and has my name on the tail wing in large letters. It's very nice might I say. My father gave it to me as a gift. He'll give me my own car next week. Why can't my mother be as yielding as my father when I ask for things. It would make me SO much happier! I think it has to do with the fact that she's immune to my cute charms. I hate that. Who could resist me?! Boys can't and I'm sure I can convince a girl to turn gay just for me! That's how confident I am. It upsets me how my mom can just so easily say no to me. But anyway, let's not get into detail as to why my mom didn't allow me to attend a house party in Florida. Which I've never been to by the way! Ugh. I approach the stairs, with my heavy bags in hand. Where the hell are our housemaids? They should be caring this stuff to my room, not me! My mom comes down the hall to greet me at the top of the stairs. I smile politely at her. No need to be angry at her forever, even if my friends will be talking about the party for weeks. I think I can forgive her...for now.

“Welcome home, Sayumi. Do you need help with those bags?”

“Yes please.”

She calls for our maids and in an instant they come scurrying over like little hidden mice from their holes. They take my belongings in. I let out a sigh of relief. My arms were starting to get tired from carrying them. I'm not exactly the strongest girl around here. I tend to keep my girly appearance and mannerisms. I let my servants do all the work. Seems fair to me since we pay them for this stuff anyway. That's how I see it. I walk up the stairs while the maids run to get to my room before me and when I reach the top, my mom pulls me into a quick hug. She pats down my bangs, smiling at me like a proud mother would do to their daughter.

“I see you got a hair cut. I like these bangs on you. It makes you look much more mature for a girl who is soon going to be twenty.”

She lets go of my black hair and I brush down the tips of my long strand of hair on the side of my face. I cut my hair so that it would be a little passed my shoulders and my bangs are no longer separated. At the ends of them there is a long piece of black hair that frames my round face perfectly. I thought it was time for a change. Though nothing drastic. I still am going to keep my jet black hair and I'm still going to continue being cute. I'll prove to my mom that I'm no brat. Hm.

“Go and put your things away. I'll send someone to let you know when dinner is ready.”

I nod and silently obey. I want to go over the things I bought anyway. That means I get to wear them again and see how cute I look in the mirror once more. That's always the fun part. I head over to my room, where my bags are already set neatly to the floor around my bed. I get the first bag and take out a black silk dress. I'm not sure if I'll ever wear this, but I bought in anyway because I liked how it fit me. No problem though, I can just put it in the pile of clothes I've never worn since I've got them. It's not like my parents will care. I put it down to my bed and go through the other bags. I decide to try on my a denim skirt with a soft pink colored long sleeve polyester shirt. I check myself into the full length mirror and smile.

“I look so cute.” I state to my reflection

I twirl and turn left to right in awe with myself. I'm so cute. Oh, yes I am! Just the cutest girl anyone has EVER seen! I stare making a bunch of poses in the mirror, caught up by my dazzling reflection. That's happened to me many times. I see any shinny surface and I'm there to adore myself and make sure my hair is fine and my make-up is still fresh. It isn't an easy thing to remain this beautiful you know. It requires a lot of work. It's a full time job. And can become very stressful. And stress causes many bad things to your skin, like rashes. Gross. So I just do whatever I need to remain calm and happy. Which is why I also go shopping, to relax and treat myself. Down the hall I start to hear yelling just a few rooms from me. Who is that? They're interrupting my alone time. How am I going to admire myself with all this noise? I look behind me and go to the door with my ear pressed to the polished surface of the oak wood. The voices become clearer and my curiosity heightens. Stupid door has to be so thick to hear through it! Well I know it's from my mother's room, we're very close. Are my parents home? I turn back to the rabbit clock ticking with a happy expression at me. No, he doesn't come from work until another two hours. But who else could she be arguing with? My sister maybe?

“Will you just quit bothering me about this father! I've already said no. This is a bad idea.”

Father? She's fighting with...grandpa? But...why? He would never do such a thing to upset a baby. He's always so kind and to himself. He doesn't annoy anyone and he watches after my sister and I. I don't understand. I press my ear harder against the door. My curiosity has reached a new level. It must be something very big for it to get my mother to yell at him.

“Please, you must understand. Now is the time, you see I can't...”

“Not right now father. Do you want the girls to hear you?” My mother asks

They're silence after. What's going on?! What's happening?! I have to knowwww. They can't just keep it a secret. It isn't right! Not fair! My grandpa mumbles a few words then I hear the scraping of his sandles against the carpet. They can NOT do that! They can't argue out in the open like that and stop knowing that I'm listening! Whatever. I step away from the door going back to my mirror. I don't want to try on my clothes again though. My mind is thick with questions on what just went on. What if...we're losing money? That's awful! I can't work like those “normal” people! I would die out in the poor world! I haven't lifted a finger all my life. I have people do everything for me! Even buy stuff for me. I start to take my clothing off, thinking deeply as to what would result this recent event. I'm drawing up with nothing.

“Michishige-san.”

“UWAH!”

I jump up on one leg with a hand to my chest. I stand stiff, petrified. I gain back some control of my emotions and look into the mirror at the sudden voice to my silence. I spin around, angry, seeing who it is. I also remember that I'm starting to undress so I put my shirt back down. My servant before me stares to her hands, embarrassed, seeing that she's come in at the wrong time.

“What is it Koharu? Haven't I told you how I don't like it when you come in here without knocking?” I scold

She looks to the floor and nods. “I-I'm sorry Michishige-san. You must have not heard my knocking.”

I notice the name she's chosen to address me.

“You can just call me Sayumin. I've told you this many times.”

“Uh...I'm sorry but your mother wants me to call you that.”

“Well, when you're around me alone, Sayumin or Sayu is ok.”

She looks at me again and nods with a pinkish tint in her cheeks.

“So what is it that you came to tell me?”

She stands up straight, remembering the reason of her sudden entrance.

“Dinner is ready. Your mother wants you down stairs in the dining room.”

“Thank you.” I give her one of my cute smiles

And the pink returns in her face again. She bows her head then makes a hasty exit to the door. She's one strange girl. But she does her job well so I suppose it's ok to have her stick around. I'm not that one who hires the maids or servants around here anyway. My parents do that. I can't even fire one. Unless I have a reason to. Which would be hard to convince my dad, since he's positive each one is good enough to stay around and do their work. I finish undressing, knowing that my mom hates waiting for me to join her for dinner. I don't mind showing up either because I'm quite hungry from the constant walking in the mall all day. It isn't easy when you're walking in flats you know!? I exit my room and hurry up the hall to meet my awaiting family. I push through the red wood double doors and see through the dim lighting that my mother and everyone else is already here, eating at the long rectangular glass table. I wonder what we'll have today? It would be a miracle if my mother cooked this. She never does. She usually has our personal cook do it. She just tells him what she's in the mood for and he makes it. Sometimes she'll ask everyone what we want and she'll tell the cook to make individual dishes, that's about the most she'll do, but cooking she doesn't do at all. I find an empty seat and sit down near my sister who's engrossed either in the meal or her thoughts. I wouldn't be surprised if it isn't the food since my mom has the strangest taste sometimes, but my sister wants to be polite and not say anything. My mom probably won't notice if she doesn't eat it anyway. The second I'm seated, a maid comes over with a plate. The food is still hot, there's steam fuming from the top.

“Thank you Aika.”

She goes away and I pick up the nicely carved fork on my right and poke at the roast chicken on my plate. It seems good. Something I'll be sure to like this time. I cut away at the meat and put it in my mouth. It's tasty. Actually something I enjoy. I go to take another bite. Enjoying the stillness around us. About half way in my meal, I see that my grandfather is glancing at me from across the table. I pick up my head and lock eyes with him. He smiles at me, sweetly, showing the wrinkles around his eyes, making them seem smaller. I smile back, feeling slightly weird-ed out from his strange behavior. I know he likes to see his grandchildren since he's been with us since we were babies, but this is just too much. I pay no mind and continue to eat. I'm nearly done and the clearing of my grandpa's throat gets me to look again. He has on another smile, only this one seems like some type of proud smile. Like he has something amazing to announce. I sit up straight, my ears perked to catch his every word. He has my attention, gladly.

“There's been something I want to show you Sayumi.” He speaks, in his soft, hushed voice “Something VERY important to give you. So be sure to take good care of this, ok?”

I automatically nod, inquisitive to what he has to hand me. He's never sounded so serious in giving me something before. It makes me wonder. I can feel my mom's eyes on me and to my grandfather's, switching back and forth. My grandpa's left hand that I didn't notice was underneath the table, rests next to his dish, with a velvet covered case. My eyes widen. He didn't buy me jewelry did he?! Wow. He's so caring. I always knew I was his favorite granddaughter. I mean, who could NOT find me cute? Pffh.

“Father, don't! We've spoke about this.”

This is what my mom was so worked up over? A piece of jewelry? That's a little stupid don't you think? I have plenty of rings and earrings in my room. She hasn't had a problem with it before. I stare at the indigo blue case, ambitious to the prize inside. It better be a golden bunny necklace. I've been meaning to get that, but I had to leave that time for a birthday party. And everyone knows how much I want it since I've ranted about it for days before. My grandpa ignores my mother's pleas and slides the box towards me. Yeah don't listen to her. Give it to me! I want to see what's inside already. Damn you for being so slow in your actions. Speed it up a little will ya?

“Once you put this on I'll explain how important the necklace is to me and soon to you.”

Oh, yay! It IS a necklace! One extra cute bunny necklace, coming right up! Not as cute as me, of course. I stretch my arm out, about to grab on to it with my fingers, but another hand beats me to it and snatches it, easily out of my grandpa's little wrinkly hands. HUH?! I glare up into my mother's eyes.

“You can't have this.”

“WHAT?!” I scream

My sister jolts beside me. I've screamed so loud you can hear the walls shake. I cross my arms over my chest. Stopping me from getting a pretty gift. That just isn't right! It should be illegal! It's MINE! Grandpa is giving it to ME not to YOU! I glare at her like I've just ate a bunch of lemons. Who does she think she is?! Yeah, so she's my mother, but can she for once stop being so motherly and let me have the damn thing already?!

“Why?!”

“Because I said so.” she snaps back

“Psh, some answer.” I grumble, under my breath

I sulk into my chicken, no longer hungry. She's spoiled my appetite, I hope she's happy! I push my plate away, showing her my displeasure. I get up from my chair without a word and walk out. Now I can't keep my mind off it! I need to know what it looks like. It must be so shinny...oh and expensive. I want it! I walk to the living room to catch up on some dramas since I don't feel like sitting in my room alone with nothing to do. I'll just end up thinking about the necklace some more. I flick on the TV and sit there to keep my mind busy. This is the most thinking I've ever done in one day! My head will start to hurt.

***

Watching dramas got dull real fast after about the second hour so I'm on my way to bed. I walk through the narrow halls all the way to my room and grab the golden handle to enter. That's when I see my mom's room open and she comes out to get ready for bed as well. That's when I get an idea. I feel myself beginning to smirk. My mom took the necklace from me so that means...she must have put it in her room. I can still get it back! Cute AND smart. I amaze myself sometimes. When she enters the bathroom I tip toe, silently to her door and walk in. I'm alone. My dad isn't home still I guess. Whatever. Ok, the necklace, the necklace, where could it be? Come on. My eyes scan the room, carefully hoping I can spot it through the pale yellow light. I squint to try and see better. Where are you little precious box? Show up so I can have you! Found it! I take it from the mini shelf next to my parents' draw. Ha! Can't hide stuff from ME. I'm too smart. He-he. I dash for the door and run to my room. I lock the door and lean against it. Smirking from my victory. There is no stopping me. I'm too fast. I lift the lid to get my first glance to what's in side. Tucked neatly into the black cushion is a thin black leather necklace, with a heart shape green gem, surrounded by white gold. Well this isn't exactly my ideal necklace. Where's the gold chain necklace with the cute little bunny in the middle with a pink bow on it's head? Some gift. I should just throw it away. Or maybe give it to Koharu to keep. I go to close it, then the gem in the center of it glows. Weird. I'm drawn to it's strange glow. It wouldn't hurt to try it on first before just giving it away. I take it out of it's container and walk to my mirror. I set the box on the draw and grab both sides of the necklace with two hands. I stare into the mirror as if in a daze and bring it towards my neck. This isn't such a bad necklace after all. The rough leather touches my skin and in an instant the necklace wraps it's self around my neck as if it has a mind of it's own. The two ends of it lock firmly around me and I let out a gasp in fear. I'm blinded quickly with a flash of bright light and strong wind starts blowing around me, sending my hair everywhere. AH! This is going to mess up my hair! I can't do anything to stop it or to protect my hair because of the light, so I stand there, with my hands over my eyes. Is this all coming from the necklace?! I feel something strong surge though me. That's when the light and the wind stops. I pull my arms down and stare at the heart shaped gem around me. What the HELL just happened?! What is this...a necklace from hell?! I gotta get this thing off me! I thread my fingers through thick hair, to the back of my neck, but when I get there I find that the necklace has no hook to take off. It was just there before?! How can it just go away like that?! I yank my hand away, startled.

“This isn't...I'm dreaming. It's all a dream. There's no way a necklace as hideous as this is stuck on my neck forever! It has to...come off!”

I grab it harshly and start pulling with all my strength, but nothing.

“Get off me you ugly thing!” I pull it again “Do you have any idea how many outfits you'll clash with?!”

I give up again and dart around my room for something to help me ditch it.

“Scissors, I need scissors.”

I open one of my dressers and find a pair of small scissors. I take them in my right hand, opening them before I direct it to the leather thing. I'll have to be careful so I won't cut myself. I sigh and hold my breath as I bring it in. Before it can reach just an inch a tiny bolt of lighting zaps at my hand, causing me to drop the scissors.

“Ouch!”

I hold my hand and stand there, freaking out.

“There's no way this is a dream. You can't feel pain in dreams!”

What do I do? Mom! Wait no...I can't tell her! Then she'll know I stole this from her room! Oh crap! If I can't take this off how can I hide it from her?! I'm dead either way! I start pulling at it furiously, hoping at one point it'll snap.

“Get...off...of...my neck!” I scream at the top of my lungs

There's a knock on my door and I jump again. I'm on edge. The door opens and I move my hair to try and cover the necklace.

“Michishige-san?” Aika questions

I can hear another pair of footsteps at the door. Koharu is in the door way too, I think. Uh oh.

“Are you ok, Sayu?” Koharu asks “We heard yelling.”

“Uh...I'm fine! Everything is just...perfect! Really, you two don't need to worry.” I assure

“What was the light earlier, Michishige-san?” Aika mentions

I gulp. Crap. How can I think my way out of this one?

“Light? WHAT light? Haha, you both must be more tired than you think.” I let out a nervous giggle

Just go away! My hands shake. Why aren't they leaving?!

“Are you sure?” Koharu whispers

I nod. “Of course! I'm just very tired. If you don't mind I would like to sleep now.”

I stretch my arms upward and fake a yawn, hoping they buy it. Stop standing in my damn doorway!

“Ok, good night Michishige-san.” Aika agrees

The door closes, putting me into darkness again and my two maids walk away. I let out the biggest sigh and bend over exhausted. I'm in so much shit right now! I run a hand through my hair. I eye the necklace, mocking me in the mirror. I glare. How am I going to hide this? I shake my head of any growing worries and get ready for bed. I doubt I'll sleep, but at least it's an excuse for now to not face my parents with this thing on my neck that just won't leave! I lay my head on the pillow and look at my wall, wide awake. Maybe I should go to grandpa and tell him about this? No, he'll never believe me. I don't even believe this! I'll just...keep it a secret. I don't know how, but I will! I give out one last exhale and close my eyes. Yeah...a secret.
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Re: The Gatekeeper
« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2009, 12:14:59 AM »
Oooooooooooh ho hoh ho hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...DEFINITELY interesting. :yep:




Why do I get the feeling that this is going to be something reminiscent of the original Buffy the Vampire Slayer movie? :P

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Re: The Gatekeeper
« Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 02:57:52 PM »
Yay!!! New story  :cow:

Tsk tsk that's what happens when you're sneaky  XD

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Re: The Gatekeeper
« Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 03:53:51 PM »
Dang, another osam fic~ <3
yay.  :shakeit:

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/7)
« Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 04:18:35 PM »
CHAPTER 2

The next morning I was reminded by this stupid thing around my neck that didn't want to come off when I stood in the mirror to do my morning routine. Which requires me looking in the mirror numerous times. It's just something I do to make sure I'm good enough to step out side for the world to see my beauty. But it looks like I won't have any of that because of the stupid choker around me. How am I going to walk around with it since it doesn't want to leave? I have plans today but I just might have to cancel them! I stare at my neck.

“Did I mention that I hate you?”

 ***

“Ok, I'm leaving mom! I'll see you in a few hours, bye!”

“Sayumi, aren't you going to eat breakfast first?”

She hurries out her room and I spin around when I get sight of her.

“Are you wearing a scarf?”

I knew she would say something. Quick, think fast!

“Uh...yes I just had to try this one on after I found it sitting somewhere in my closet.”

I turn around and smile at her. She looks transfixed on it, thinking. I gulp. I don't think she knows. That isn't possible! I made sure I left her room before she even saw me. How can she possibly know I have this piece of crap on me?! She lifts her hand up, aiming for my scarf to pull it down. I step back.

“I have to go, bye!” I shout

I run down the stairs and quickly to the door. I don't look back and run as much as my legs will let me. The door slams shut. I wipe invisible sweat on my forehead and lean into the door.

“That was close.”

“Sayumi?”

I'm flooded with panic again. My hand automatically goes to the scarf, protecting it from being revealed.

“Grandpa! W-what are you doing here?”

“I always come out here in the morning. I'm going to tend to my flowers of course.”

“You don't have to do that you know. We have gardeners.”

He looks down to his gardening tools, put inside a small basket into his hands. He looks back at me.

“It's alright, I enjoy doing some work around here since I have nothing else to do.” His eyes squint at my scarf and a tiny smile comes to his face.

A smile like he knows what I'm hiding. I shake. Another person who knows what happened to me?! Why won't everyone just leave me alone! I go down the stairs, looking for my waiting limo.

“Going somewhere with that? Isn't it a little too hot for a scarf?” He asks, his smile widening.

What do I say? Forget it I'm not going to say anything! I run to the black limo in the drive way and quickly dive inside. I don't know where to go, but a few hours out of this house will be nice. The door closes and the driver gets back into his seat, pulling the car out of the drive way, smoothly. Safe. Until I come back home that is.

 ***

Being that we're in Tokyo I found something to do for hours. And that doesn't just include shopping. I watched a movie, saw this show that was playing, and other things. I even got me something nice to eat. It kept me busy the whole day. The limo pulls into the house and I notice that all the lights are off inside. That's expected since it's late. I'm sure everyone is asleep. Which means I'll be able to sneak into my room without a problem. I get out and stick my keys carefully inside the lock. The lock opens barely without a sound. I look around me in the dark to see if anyone is wandering around, but who would at this hour anyway? Seeing that the coast is clear, I hurry through the foyer up the stairs and easily to my room door. Yes! I open my door and run inside, shutting my door with a slam and lock it. Then I frantically tug at the scarf around my neck. I feel like I'm melting with this thing on me! It's so damn hot!

“You don't want to come off too?!”

This just isn't my day huh?! It's bad enough I have this choker permanently attached to me, but now this scarf?! I start pulling with all my might at the scarf trying to take it off in one pull. After a few tries the scarf finally comes off and I throw it to the floor. It doesn't travel too far since it's made of thin material. I start rubbing at my neck, trying to wipe the sweat away. I feel so much better. I let out a sigh of relief. Now if only I can take this necklace off too. I touch it with the tip of my finger, tracing my finger over the heart gem.

“Why won't you come off?” I whisper

“Because it doesn't want to.”

“AHHHH!”

The light on my draw clicks on. What is it with people sneaking behind me like that!? It's getting very annoying. I calm down and see the person who's in my room, watching me with a serious expression.

“Grandpa? W-what are you doing here?”

His eyes shift somewhere other than my face. It's hard to see what he's thinking or planning. He's been acting very odd lately ever since yesterday. I stand there, pinned down from his gaze.

“You've put on the necklace.”

I cover it with my hands and turn away.

“N-no I haven't! It...it just...”

At the corner of my eye I can see him smiling again, amused at my reaction and eager to hear my petite excuse. So I give up. He already knows and he isn't seeing things. He saw it around my neck. How can I hide that? Or lie about it? He stands up and I face the front, trying to see what he's going to do.

“Please don't tell mom, grandpa, please?!” I beg “I didn't mean to steal it out of her room. I was just curious! And then...I went to try it on, this light came from it and then the wind started blowing, messing up my hair! And...this might sound weird but after I put it on I can't take it off! It's stuck!”

I breathe after saying this in one long breath. My grandfather just stands there, watching me. No longer a smile on his face. Oh, he's mad at me isn't he? I knew it. I'm sorry! I'm really really sorry! I mean come on I'm even saying the word, and I don't normally say sorry ya know! It's a hard thing for me. I just want this thing off my neck so it won't be fused with me ever again. I've learned my lesson. I swear.

“Hm.”

That's all he can say?! That's all he's going to say?! What type of response is that?! I just admitted my wrong doing and a huge secret and all he can do is make some stupid sound? A little help on getting this off would be nice. He tucks his hands behind his back, still looking to my necklace. His forehead bunches together, meaning that he's thinking once again.

“I see.”

“What's going on grandpa?”

His droopy shaped eyes finally come to look at my face. He remains silent a while longer.

“I've chosen right or rather...guessed correctly.” He says to himself

Is he here in my room to talk to himself? Or is he going to tell me something I don't know?!

“Hello! I need an explanation here!” I shout

“Sayumi, there's something I need to tell you. It involves that necklace.” He pauses

Well I'm listening! My fingers fidget at my sides, tapping against my thighs, skittish to what I'm about to hear.

“Well...what about it already?!”

“Yes, well Sayumi, that necklace has been in this family for years. It was handed down to many people, including my father. Which later was given to me. You see it has great value.”

So he means I can sell this for big bucks?

“How does that help me understand why it won't come off my neck already?!”

He smiles, for a second and goes back into this serious face. His look captivates me to listen on.

“Well that's simple you see, the necklace has powers. It first takes the form of any jewelry depending on the fighter. I shifted into an amulet when I was younger. And the power it has is the kind that will help you fight evil. But not anyone can just wear it. The necklace chooses who gets to wear it and obviously it wants you to be the next fighter in the Michishige household.”
 

Wait a mintue...

“I have to fight evil?! What type of evil?”

“Why, demons of course.”

“WHAT?!”

“Keep your voice down Sayumi. You don't want to wake your mother do you?”

I try to relax, but how can I?! I just have been told I have to fight supernatural beings! There is no way that's true! Demons are just all made up! He's letting his age get to him. I'm not doing that. I CAN'T do it! I start pulling at the necklace again, not caring if it won't move. I just want it off soon. Because of it, it's changing my life! I didn't ask for this thing to wrap around my neck like some type of snake!

“It won't come off.” My grandpa says “Once it has chosen it's new owner, it'll never come off. Until your time is up.”

I stop pulling, looking at my elderly family member in disbelief. So...I'm STUCK like this?! This is bad. So very, very, bad!

“When will it come off?!”

My grandpa shrugs. “It can be years. Only the necklace knows. It tells when your time is up. Until then it'll help you fight the evil spirits that roam around here. Your job is to guard the southern gate from evil. There are others who are to protect the north. Your necklace will assist you to all your needs in battle.” He puts a finger to his chin, pondering. “Though I should probably train you so you'll have a better start with fighting. Or maybe I should teach you magic. No...I think I'll have your servants teach you instead.”

“My...servants?” I raise a brow in his direction

“Every gatekeeper has to have a servant. You will be having two. Come to my room tomorrow morning.”  He heads for the door

“But grandpa, who are my servants?”

As if I don't have enough here at home. What's so special about these two. What are they gonna do, take my coat off for me before I fight? Or hold my shoes. Can't they take this thing off me and fight evil for me instead? That would be a great favor!

“You will know tomorrow. Good night Sayumi.”

He leaves my room and I stand there, trying to let everything sink in. I never wanted this. I didn't ask for it! For once I'm getting something I DON'T want. Why me? Why not my sister?! I can't fight. I can barely run or jump an inch off the ground. What makes this brainless piece of jewelry think I can fend for myself? Let alone for thousands even millions of people?! I can never do that. I'm dead where I stand! But grandpa seems to think I can do it. I get ready for bed again, though I doubt I'll get sleep. All this poor sleep will cause bags on my perfect face! Ahh, stupid necklace, see what you're doing to me?! I get into bed, staring at the ceiling and hoping to catch some sleep. I wonder who my servants are. I sigh and close my eyes, forcing myself to doze off into a troublesome slumber.

 ***

I got up extra early the following morning. I just couldn't wait. I had to know who these people are and I had to know more about my current change of fate. I went through my morning routine, quickly and hurried to my grandpa's room, remembering how I still have the necklace on me. If my mother sees it she'll have the biggest fit ever. It's just best that I try to keep away from her at all times. Until I can find a way to hide the necklace better.  I reach the door with out a problem and go to knock before entering.

“Come in Sayumi. It's open.” My grandfather's voice encourages

I push the door aside and walk inside. My grandpa is standing next to his bird cage, putting in new feed for his pet to enjoy. The small rounded bird tweets happily behind it's bared cage. Flapping down to to the bottom to collect the seeds. He puts the box of bird food down to a table and turns around.

“Good morning Sayumi.” He cheers

“Good morning grandpa.” I bow my head, slightly.

“Take a seat.” He motions to the desk in his room. I sit down “I suppose you want to just get to it and know who your servants are, correct?”

I nod.  He smiles, warmly at me.

“Ok. Aika, Koharu, would you come here please?”

Huh? What do THEY have to do with any of this?! I turn my head to the door just as it opens and they both walk in, instantly ready to take orders. They both seem extra serious. I've never seen them like this before. Their eyes flash how determine they are, but determined to what? My grandpa smiles at them, leading them to me with a sincere smile. I'm surrounded by all three of them.

“Sayumi, these are your two servants.”

I nearly have a heart attack.

“WHAT THE HELL?!”
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Re: The Gatekeeper
« Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 04:55:44 PM »
Ooooh! A Sayu fic! A Sayu fic!  :heart:
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Re: The Gatekeeper
« Reply #6 on: June 08, 2009, 05:04:48 AM »
Oh I love Sayu~~ XD She's awesome! And I'm definitely interested in this story. I'd love to see Sayu fight all the uncute evil! :heart: Oh and KohaAika as servants= :lol:

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« Reply #7 on: June 08, 2009, 05:54:41 AM »
CHAPTER 2

I KNEW IT! SAYU THE DEMON SLAYER!!! :rockon:



Aika and Koharu can be like Giles! XD XD XD

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CHAPTER 3

“Are you kidding me?! Grandpa these two can't be my servants!”

My grandpa raises a brow, amused. His hands tucked behind his back again. “And why not?”

“There's no way they can help me! They're way younger than me! I have a better chance fighting by myself.” I state

I stand up, trying to make a point. My grandfather is not shaken. The amusing expression still remains. Is he even listening to me?! I turn from him and to the girls in front of me. I snort. They're too young. There's no way they can fight. Sure Koharu's the tallest one of the three girls, but height doesn't get you to win a fight all the time. You need wits. Skill and experience. I may not have experience in fighting or ok, skills, but I am smart if I don't say so myself. I can gain the rest of the things I lack. I can adapt. How bad can guarding the gate be anyway?

“Sayumi, I can assure you these two are suitable to be your servant. They were trained before you were going to be chosen.” 

I fold my arms and pout. “There's no way they're teaching me anything! I should be teaching them instead!”

“Sayumi this is your duty and you'll need as much help as you can get. These two are perfect. They are staying. They can not leave.”

He's ignoring me! He's ignoring his favorite granddaughter! How can someone do that. Do that to ME Michishige Sayumi, cutest girl ever that gets everything she wants! I don't like my grandpa anymore.  He's making me upset and I hate being upset.

“Now, you'll need to get as much training as you can. Aika and Koharu will help you with that. They're more able-bodied to teach you physically. I'm much too old to do it now.” He lets out a bashful chuckle

“We'll do our very best, Michishige-san.” Aika agrees with him

“You see Sayumi, they can give you information if you face a demon that's much stronger than you are and if they need to be killed in a specific manner. They'll follow you everywhere. You can trust them.”

I watch him start to pace. His head down while he rambles. He's going into story mode again. This is going to be long isn't it? I stand there still with a visible frown.

“Some demons are spirits so you can't attack them physically. Then there are magical demons with a solid form. You must watch out for those. When you kill a demon you have to send their souls back to hell. It is quite easy.”

I sigh. This is going to be long alright. There's no stopping him when he's in that mode. I've tried many times before. It's over when he wants it to be. I hate that. I could be somewhere like a spa relaxing from the wild events two days ago. I could use a massage.

 ***

How can grandpa just bring me into this thing? He never asked if I wanted to be apart of it. He didn't even warn me! And then he just pushes me into this cross fire and expects me to save poor people in need or to fight those scary evil demons! There's no way I'm gonna do that! I'm not agreeing to this one bit. I hate this. And I don't like that I have to do something I don't want. The talk about killing demons went for hours. I'm not sure if it'll be useful. It's just too much to remember or handle. I rest my head on to my knees, sitting on to the stone flooring of the balcony. The sun is setting and the air is growing colder, but it doesn't bother me. I need some fresh air. I can't go anywhere. I'm afraid I'll end up meeting some nasty demon. It'll mess up my fun time. This stupid fate and necklace have bounded me in my own home. It's my retarded curse. I hug my knees and squeeze my hands together in a lock. I'll have to hide this from mom and any one else who wants to be my friend. Only grandpa is to know about this. Well him and my two young servants who I still think aren't fit enough to aid me. But if grandpa is sure about it then I have no choice but to have them stick around. He's quite stern when he wants to be. I fight against another chill from the cold breeze against me.

“Sayu?”

I don't turn around. My direction is faced on the sight in front of me. Which isn't much since the poles making the railing of the balcony block my view, but through the space the poles make I can see a small shaft of light. And the sky is filled with various hues of pink, orange, red, and blue. The curtain to the balcony in my room is pushed back and someone steps through, joining me on the ground. They sit next to me. Their eye contact fixed on me instead of the pretty skylight.

“What is it Koharu?” I snap

She becomes timid, sensing my defensive behavior. I turn to her when the silence is too long. I can't tell if she's thinking or just scared to speak to me. It could be both. She opens her mouth and breathes in shortly.

“It'll be ok.”

She presses her lips together, stopping for only a moment. I watch her, realizing that she had come this way to try and comfort me. I've never had anyone do that to me, not even my mother. My grandfather has before, but I was only a child then. I'm nineteen now and it seems that the older I become the more I get the impression that I'm on my own. No one comes to see if I'm alright. They just assume I am.

“I know how this is hard on you. How you have this huge responsibility on your shoulders, but I know that you can do it.” Her hand is put on my shoulder and she looks at me with a very caring look. “And I promise that as long as I continue to be your servant, I'll do my very best to help you and protect you! I promise Mishichige-san!”

I feel the corners of my mouth turn upward, into a true smile. I've never had anyone said anything remotely close to what Koharu said. I don't know what to do or say. She smiles back at me, meaning every previous word and her emotions towards me are true. She wants to be by my side. She wants to help me and guide me. She may be young but she is willing to risk her life for my own and Aika will do the same. They must be scared just like me. I bet they hate this as much as I do too. They're much more mature about this situation than I am. Ah that may be true, but that's because they were exposed to this stuff before I was. I grew up all my life not even hearing about this necklace until about what...a day ago? Two days ago? I can't remember. They got a head start. I didn't.

“Thank you.” I whisper

She nods, her smile still in tact. She gets up, making her way back inside to exit. I hear her footsteps in my room and the sound of my door opening, then closing. And I'm left alone again. I turn back to the front, seeing that night is near. And it has gotten colder. I can see the goosebumps on my skin, slowly surfacing. What am I going to do? I'm no fighter. And I'm not a skillful thinker. I'm not street smart either and I can't rely on my servants to always save me or the necklace. There will be times when I'm alone. Where I'll meet my match and be near death. I'll be defenseless at one point. But if I abandon my fate then people will die and demons will roam free. I still can't get it though. Why me? Sure I'm amazing and the perfect girl all men would want, that's a given. But why this fate? Couldn't it have been someone else?

 ***

“Sayumi.”

Huh? I open my tired eyes just an inch and squint through the dark to make out the figure standing above me. There's three of them.

“Sayumi, come quickly.”

“Grandpa? What is it?”

I sit up and rub the sleep from my eyes. I see that Aika and Koharu are with him as well. I glance to my bunny clock. I frown. Are they crazy?! Training can be another damn time. I need my beauty sleep! I don't care if humanity needs me. If this face isn't perfect then I'm not leaving my house! They can whine all they want.

“Grandpa it's three o'clock in the morning!”

“Change your clothes. You're needed downstairs immediately.” My grandfather demands

I sit at the edge of the bed, alarmed.

“Why, what's wrong?”

“You will see once we get there. Meet us out your room when you're done.”

He takes Aika and Koharu out the door with him and leaves. What is the big deal? And at this time? My grandpa is getting more annoying by the second. I don't waste time however and put on a jacket over my pajamas  with a pair of sneakers. I meet them out in front of my door and they quickly take me out to the back of the mansion. I look around  the backyard to see if I can find what's causing such a disturbance with my grandpa. I can't see a thing so far. Maybe he's becoming paranoid too besides just crazy. They take me further into the yard, all the way to my grandpa's gardening spot. Is this over some stupid flower he's missing? I swear if it is I'm going to kill him! We stop a few feet from the flowers and I still haven't seen anything that's worth getting bitter over.

“Grandpa I don't see why...”

“Look, over there.” He points in front of us

I follow his hand and fall backwards to my butt in fear. I can not believe my eyes. Dear lord!

“WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?!”

“Keep your voice down Michishige-san. It'll hear us.” Aika says

I'm surprised it hasn't already. God it's so ugly! Koharu helps me back up and I pat away any dirt that would have gotten on my butt. I still can't believe this. I watch it half amused, half repulsed.

“What...IS it grandpa?”

“That's a demon Sayumi.”

“This one is so small. And...jiggly.” I comment, watching it intensely. “It's almost like jell-o that's gone terribly wrong.”

The demon is short and stumpy and see through. Like gel or some type of gooey material. It's body jiggles each time it moves. And it's taken a liking to eating and destroying my grandpa's flowers. It lets out a bunch of high pitched cackles and growls. It's so hideous!

“What am I going to do?!” I choke

“You're going to have to kill it Sayumi.”

“EH?!” I jerk my head in his direction “I can't fight that! Do you see how horrible it is?! It's so fat and...and...ugh. I can't even think of any other words!”

They look at me unmoved by my explanation. The chubby jelly monster hears me and lets out a snort of rage, then turns around. Finally noticing me. Oh no. I can't fight this thing. I don't even know how! It's eyes glow red and sharp needle like teeth are shown. It lets out a hiss, warning me.

“What happen to me being trained first!?”

“If this demon isn't stopped it'll continue to ruin my flowers and anything else around this house. This will also make excellent training for you.” My grandpa tells me

“You're just saying that stuff because you're mad that it ate all your flowers!”

The see-through blob snarls and charges towards me, at top speed.

“UWAH!” I start running around like some little girl with the blob jumping after me, close on my trail. “Ahh, grandpa! Do something!”

I look behind me and that thing is STILL chasing me! Why won't it stopppp?! I can't run for long. It'll get me in no time. I'm bad at this physical stuff!

“Stop chasing me you horrendous blob!”

That gets it angry because it starts growling at me constantly. Why aren't they helping me?!

“Sayumi, kill it quickly.” Grandpa yells

“How do I do that?!”

“Use your necklace Michishige-san! Summon a sword.” Aika suggests

“You can do it Sayu!” Koharu cheers

Summon my sword? I can do that? How? Uh...well...here I go.

“S-sword!” I lift my hand in the air expecting it to just fall from the sky and into my hand.

I close my eyes waiting for it to land. Probably even stab my hand since it's falling so high from the sky , tumbling.  There's a flash of light and I stand stiff, waiting. Please don't cut my hand off! The light is bright and blinding but it's quick. Something cold and heavy touches my palm and I close it so that it won't leave my hand. I...did it? I summoned a sword? I bring my arm down to my face and frown.

“This isn't a sword! What am I supposed to do with this knife?!”

So much for my powers. This thing is to small! I don't even know how to use it. Ok, so I don't know how to use a sword either, but still! A sword is better. It's bigger and longer.

“Sayumi, I know you can do it. Now quickly kill it!” My grandpa orders

I stare back at the bouncing blob and it charges at me. I start running again on instinct. I run back and forth while be watched like this is some tennis match. What am I doing? I'm supposed to be fearless and showing that THING who's boss! I got to get it together! It's just a stupid little jell-o thing. With scary eyes and teeth that look like it'll have me for dinner! Stop being so afraid! I stop running, spin around and it then decides to spit out this thick blue goo at my feet.

“Not my shoes! You little piece of shit! I like these sneakers!”

Well...I guess  it isn't really all that bad since I don't wear the same pair of sneakers twice. But this still is so gross! Couldn't grandpa have warned me about this? Damn thing. I'm SO glad I'm going to kill you.

“Sayu, you can worry about your sneakers later! Just kill it already.” Koharu yells at me

She's right. This damn bastard has to die already! No more running around like some little girl. I GOT to do this! With my knife, I wield it high above my head and jab it down. It hits right on the target, which amazes me and sinks into it's cold jell-o like skin. I smile, feeling rather accomplished.

“I did it! I killed him!”

I let go of the knife and stand there, triumph. The thing still makes weird noises and the knife inside him starts to move. What is it doing? I watch in fear. The knife is sinking deeper inside it's stomach until the whole thing is consumed inside it, just floating there. The blade stars to melt inside it. Is he...eating the thing?! How is that possible? Didn't I kill it?!

“EH?!”

The knife quickly starts to disappear, turning into liquid. What do I do. What do I do?! I can't even kill the thing with a little weapon how can I do it with anything else?! I'm scared again. I think running around like a chicken without a head seems like the most solid plan.

“Sayumi! Physical attacks are useless. Use magic.” My grandpa advises.

“Magic? But I don't know any magic!”

He gives me a soft smile, believing in me. Uh...I put my hand out by the side. This is my last try. Here goes nothing.

“Lightening blade!”

I'm not sure if there is even such a weapon. I guess we'll find out. A long strip of white light shines from my hand and I stand there, stunned. It's a real sword?! The glowing stops and I'm faced with a long, slightly curved sword. It's thin and shinny at the blade. Tiny charges of lighting emit from it on all sides, except for the handle. Wow.

“I did it! Grandpa did you see that?! I did it!”

“You can gloat later Sayumi.” He briskly says, his eyes focusing on the demon to the ground

“Right!”

I grip my blade and pick it up then aim. It bounces towards me, ready to attack again. I press my lips together and concentrate. This sword better do something. I throw the weapon down, diagonally. A giant bolt of lighting strikes out, slicing the thing clean in two. It lets out this strange cry and then slowly starts to melt into the dirt. There are no traces left behind, hinting that a demon ever stood here before, except maybe the flowers. But we can always lie and say it was a stray dog. I breath out, slowly.

“I did it. I did it!” I spin around to my friends and grandfather. “I killed it!”

My grandpa comes over and takes me by the arm, bringing me back to the house. Aika and Koharu are close behind. That was scary. My whole body is shaking, uncontrollably.

“How did I do grandpa?”

I can see him smiling, slightly. His dark eyes still in front of him.

“You need a lot of work, but you did what you were told. That is very good Sayumi.” We walk inside to the foyer of the mansion. “You just get some sleep. I'll see you in the morning.”

“Goodnight Sayu.” Koharu said

I smile, letting out a yawn and realize how tired I really am. All this excitement has worn me out. I think I'll sleep my excitement off. Yeah...that's a good idea.

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Re: The Gatekeeper
« Reply #9 on: June 08, 2009, 02:45:45 PM »
CHAPTER 3

“Not my shoes! You little piece of shit! I like these sneakers!”

Well...I guess  it isn't really all that bad since I don't wear the same pair of sneakers twice. But this still is so gross! Couldn't grandpa have warned me about this? Damn thing. I'm SO glad I'm going to kill you.

“Sayu, you can worry about your sneakers later! Just kill it already.” Koharu yells at me


lol..she did like her sneakers... :lol:
is ok sayu..i will buy another pair for you~ :)

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/8)
« Reply #10 on: June 08, 2009, 03:29:55 PM »
That was wicked!!! XD GJ Sayu!!!! It may have took you a while but you finally killed it! :P

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« Reply #11 on: June 08, 2009, 05:54:31 PM »
ICE FLAN!!!  :P
And Sayu killed it!
With her lightning blade!  :w00t:

too osam!

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« Reply #12 on: June 09, 2009, 03:47:12 AM »
CHAPTER 3

Oh fuck, Lightening Blade is awesome! :rockon:

See Sayu? You CAN do it.

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All you need is the proper motivation (like losing your shoes). :P

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« Reply #13 on: June 09, 2009, 01:48:48 PM »
CHAPTER 4

I woke up to my cell phone going off on to my nightstand. Just what I don't need for this morning. Why won't my friends leave me alone for today! I pull the sheets back and pick up my phone. I read the screen before answering.

“What is it Aki?!”

“Sayu, have you forgotten the shopping we're supposed to do today?”

I lie in bed, trying to remember what she just claimed. I can't think of anything. I'm too tired to think and my mind is still fresh with that giant puddle pudding monster that was out to eat me. I hope to never see that hideous thing's face again. I run a hand down my face to try and shake the sleep from me.

“Hello, Sayu, are you listening?” Aki snaps “Don't tell me you've forgotten our day out. You're supposed to help me pick shoes for the party I'm going to in two days.”

“Oh right, I remember now!” I sit up, glancing at the time next to me.

We can still go out. It's still early. I'll just have to be ready in about an hour and run out of the house before my mom seems me. I can do it. I get out of bed.

“I'll see you at my house in an hour and a half.”

“Ok great. See you then.”

Aki hangs up and I put my phone down. I'll need to find an outfit that will blend well with this stupid necklace. This thing is becoming my hugest enemy. Too bad I can't kill it rather than those nasty demons. I would be doing myself a favor if I could do such a thing. I better get ready.

 ***

“Oh there you are Sayumi.”

Oh crap...it's mom! I stand tense.

“Are you going somewhere?”

“Yeah I'm going shoe shopping.” I reply

“Oh ok. Hey, did you see what happened to the backyard?”

Damn it! Don't ask me anything! I know nothing! NOTHING!

“No, I-I haven't seen it.”

“Well something went and ruined your grandfather's flowers. It also damaged the rest if the yard. Do you know who did it?”

“Uh....a dog?”

“Hmm...it's possible. Well I'm going to get the gardener to fix the grass. I'm sure your grandfather will take care of the flowers.”

She walks away and I breathe out, relaxed. I'm safe.

“Sayumi, good morning. Sleep well?”

Or maybe I'm not. I turn around, facing my grandpa. He smiles at me. Aika and Koharu are behind him. These three won't leave me alone will they?! What do they want from me this time?  I put my hands on my waist, furious.

“Is there something you need grandpa?” I sneer

“I think today is the perfect time for training. Now if you would be so kind as to follow me.” He says

Are you kidding me?! No. Absolutely not!

“I can't do it today! I have somewhere to be!”

“Sayu, the training will help you learn to control your powers.” Koharu cuts in

“Look, I just can't. Alright? I'm doing something with a friend. We'll do this another time. Ok, bye!”

I run away down the stairs before they can tell me anything else to try and give me a guilt trip. I'm only staying out for a few hours. I don't see the big deal. I open the front door to the foyer and see the limo out front waiting for me. I smile. Yes, no training for Sayu today! I win! The driver opens the door and I get inside. Aki sits at the end of the limo welcoming me.

“Hi, Aki!”

I've never been so happy to see her. And I'm normally not. The car drives away from my house and I sit back into the seats.

“Hey that's a nice necklace. Where did you get it?” Aki goes out to touch it

A tiny bolt of lighting zaps at her fingers.

“Ow! Did it just shock me?!”

“Huh? That's no possible. I didn't see anything.” I lie

What is wrong with this thing?! Is it attacking everything? Gratefully, Aki isn't all that bright and easily believes me. So I don't have to worry explaining myself anymore. She's so slow.

 ***

“Sayu?”

I turn around to my friend. Great, I was daydreaming this whole time and about the same thing. Last night's attack. I though this day out would help, but it makes it worse! I've come to realize that I did such a HORRIBLE job. It's embarrassing. I still can't believe the necklace still chose me after the way I fought that demon in the backyard. Can't it see I'm not cut out for this stuff?! Not to mention it's cutting back my shopping time with my friends. I had to run out of the house today just to go shoe shopping with Aki. But even though I left I still keep thinking about last night and more importantly, what my future has in store for me. There's so many questions and fears, one of them being...what if I die? That's a scary thought all alone by it's self! I don't want to think about it anymore. I toss Aki a fake smile and look at her.

“Did you hear me?”

My brows go up in confusion. Damn, I was so lost in thought, I didn't hear a single word. Now I'll have to listen to her ranting or scolding me to pay attention more often. I'm really not in the mood for that. She gives me a disappointing glare.

“I said I'm going into this shop. I saw a cute pair of shoes I want to try on. You can look around too. We'll meet back here in about an hour.”

“Ok, no problem.” I agree

She smiles, happy with my quick response and we break apart. She walks into the small shop and I squeeze my way through the crowd to find a store to enter. It's crowded today more than usual. I push my way through the crowd while at the same time trying to find a store to settle in. These poor people need to get out of my way! Can't they see I have something important to do?! There is a pair of earrings calling my name!

“Hey! Come back here!”

I turn around behind me, but it's too late to move. A man running at top speed jams right into me, sending me falling to the ground with my purse scattered out of my hand. The cop chasing him, zips by ignoring the fact that the person he is pursuing knocked me over. I stare at them and get to my feet, cleaning my skirt and jacket. Idiots! If they messed up my jacket I will kill them! Now where is my purse? I look around the floor for the small thing, but it's kind of hard to do that with people walk everywhere like rats trying to get somewhere.

“Damn you people. Move so I can find my purse!”

They don't even care what I say. They just keep walking. How rude! Where is my purse. Through the legs that walk around me I can see my purse set off to the side near an alley entrance. I rush to get to it before someone else does. I bend down and meet hands with someone else who went to pick it up at the same time as me. I pull my hand back and look up to see who this stranger is. I meet eyes with a beautiful girl. Her eyes are soft and welcoming and her smile is sweet and loving. I stand there, lost. Wow...she's...pretty. The color of her eyes are honey brown and she has such nice plush lips. Did I just think that? She takes my purse and points it in my direction. She tucks a piece of wavy brown hair behind her ear.

“I think this belongs to you.”

Even her voice sounds beautiful. I feel my knees shake. My face turns hot. I gulp and grab my purse. She lets it go when she sees my grip on the accessory is firm. I take it and put it on to my side, my eyes still on her. Who is this person? The intense stare in her light brown eyes have me nailed to the ground. She puts a hand to my arm and I feel like I'm about to melt. What is wrong with me?! It's just some stupid town girl that probably came out to buy the pair of earrings I'm about to get! And did I just let a poor person touch me?! I quickly give her a once over. She doesn't look poor. Her clothes are cute. Maybe she's middle class? Her clothes are decent and fashionable. She has some nice shoes. Her hair is put into a lose ponytail. And...she's into nail art. Nice.

“You took quite a fall. Are you ok?”

My face gets really hot again. Am I getting heat stroke? I take a step back, breaking the contact she put on me with her hand just resting on my upper arm. This is so embarrassing. For once someone has left me speechless by just their appearance. Usually I'M the one doing that to all the boys that approach me. How can she do that to me? Who IS this girl? I feel that...I should know her. That I have some type of bond or history with her? That last bit is impossible. I have no memory whatsoever being around her. But then again I can't even remember what I had for breakfast this morning since I'm always in a rush to go somewhere. She flashes me another cute smile and I feel myself about to swoon. This is strange. Her eyes shift to my neck. She must be looking at my necklace. I put a hand to the gem, grazing it with the tips of my fingers. The look she's giving, it's as if she's seen it before. Or she knows what it really is. That can't be right. Only my grandpa knows about this. How can she know about it if she's never seen my necklace or had it before? Her eyes focus back on to me and I'm pinned down again with that stare. It's stern yet...alluring.

“That's a very nice necklace.” Her hand goes out to touch it

She can't do that. It'll shock her! “Wait don't,”

She runs her finger along the leather and to the gem. It didn't shock her? How is that possible? I guess it only shoots lighting out when it's going to be ripped off? I'm just glad it decided to be nice. Or else I would have to explain the reason why it just zapped her. I don't think I can work around that with her. She's much smarter than Aki. Her finger touches my bare skin. I gasps.

“Where did you get it?”

“Uh...my grandfather gave it to me.” I stutter

What am I doing? I shouldn't be telling her these things. She's a stranger! What if she's a demon out to get me?! Well she makes one discreet and charming demon. Wait...what?

“It looks very old. Yet it's in very good condition.”

“Yeah, my grandpa took good care of it before he gave it to me.”

She glances down to the watch on her wrist and back at me. “Well, I hate to cut this short, but I've gotta go. Maybe I'll see you another time.”

I'm too lost to speak another word. She waves a friendly goodbye and dashes off. I watch her slowly disappear into the packed crowd, until I can't see her confident walk or her bouncy wavy hair, taunting me. Damn it. I didn't get her name! Now I'll never be able to see her again, but she sounds so sure that we will. Now I can't stop thinking about HER instead of this damn crap around my neck. She's a nobody! But if she is...then why do I want to see her again so badly?

“Sayu! Hello are you with me!?”

I turn my head around, startled. Aki looks at me, angrier than ever. The hour's over? I notice the bags in her hands. I guess she made an easy decision. That's rare. She's usually longer.

“You've been doing this a lot. Maybe you shouldn't have went shopping today.”

She hates how the attention is never on her. I swear...why is she my friend again? Besides the fact that she's rich. I really don't think there is any other reason. I won't go shopping with her again. Ever!

“Are you ready to go?” I ask

“Yeah.”

We start walking down the block to where the limo is waiting. I didn't get those cute earrings today, but I did find something much better. I doubt I'll see her again though. Now if only I can keep my mind off her.

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/9)
« Reply #14 on: June 09, 2009, 02:00:24 PM »
who is that girl???
i guess she is someone who
wants to steal the necklace....
becareful sayu!!

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/9)
« Reply #15 on: June 10, 2009, 02:46:01 AM »
CHAPTER 4

Enter: the mysterious babe. :twothumbs


I'm betting that it's either Aichan or Eri. :D

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/9)
« Reply #16 on: June 10, 2009, 03:08:19 AM »
Plush lips + nail art = GAKI-SAN!!! GakiShige...? :o Interesting...

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/9)
« Reply #17 on: June 11, 2009, 11:49:24 AM »
*Sends more GakiShige beams* (~ò_ó)~~~~~~

Forgive me TakaGaki!

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/9)
« Reply #18 on: June 11, 2009, 07:16:56 PM »
I loved Sayu freaking out when she encountered her mom. :lol: Hmmm, new girl, huh? I'm thinking Gaki~ It was the nail art. :D

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Re: The Gatekeeper(UPDATE 6/9)
« Reply #19 on: June 14, 2009, 04:29:58 PM »
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